June of Doom Day 23
"You're doing great." / Trembling / Gaslighting / Rules
Prompts List | Event Masterpost
Hero x Villain Masterpost | <- Previous Part | Next Part ->
Fandom: Original Work
Words: 1300
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CW: captivity whump, concussion, blood, swearing, gaslighting, shouting, referenced torture, referenced abuse, helplessness, superpower whump, torture
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Villain didn’t struggle against Shapeshifter. Not only because it would be useless to do so, but also because every time the thought of fighting back crossed their mind, they remembered Leader’s warning. Even without Sound Gun around to wave their weapon threateningly, Villain didn’t doubt that Leader would make good on their words.
The worst part was that they didn’t know what would be considered struggling.
Or what Leader would do to Hero should Villain somehow break the rule.
For now, though, they were alone in a cell, the walls, floor, and ceiling blindingly white and sterile. Blood still ran down the side of their head from where Leader had struck them, and although the headache had subsided slightly, the lights and brightness of the cell hurt their eyes, and every time they tried to stand, the entire room seemed to tilt and spin.
They slumped against the wall, eyes closed, trying to control their breathing and remain calm despite the panic rising in their throat. They’d never felt so helpless before.
Villain’s eyes flew open as the cell door opened without warning, despite the spike of pain from the light. “Where are they?!” they demanded when Leader stepped inside. Alone.
Leader smirked, closing the cell door. “Oh… are we worried about our little friend? They’re unhurt. For now. And as long as you cooperate, it will stay that way. Am I making myself clear?”
“Fuck. You.” Villain spat.
“Ah, a fighter, are we?” Leader mused, folding their arms, an infuriatingly smug expression on their face. “I suppose that’s to be expected. You do keep remarkable control over your territory, despite not having any powers to speak of.”
Villain barked a harsh laugh, ignoring how the sudden movement made the relentless hammering in their head throb faster. “You don’t know anything if you think powers are necessary to protect the innocent.”
“I suppose you are correct about that,” Leader acknowledged. They slowly began to remove their gloves. “However… you misunderstand your situation. The only reason you’ve kept your territory for so long is not through any skill of your own.”
“I understand the situation perfectly fucking well,” Villain snapped, hands curling into fists, “it’s not my fault your people are just so damn incompetent.”
Leader did not respond immediately as they finished removing their gloves, sliding them into a pocket. They casually inspected their fingernails. “Have you ever considered,” they finally said, “that ‘my people’ were simply going easy on you?”
Villain rolled their eyes and involuntarily winced as they accidentally glanced into the light overhead, its brightness temporarily blinding them and causing their retinas to feel as though they’d been stabbed with sharp needles. “Sure. I suppose I have wondered why you only ever sent them in ones or twos. Mostly Hero, for some reason. And then I hear on the news that I’ve been branded as their nemesis. Public attention, then?”
“Correct!” Leader exclaimed. Villain flinched at their tone, sounding somehow both jovial and spiteful. “You’re doing great.”
Villain glowered at the false praise, but Leader continued on. “You were never a threat. Not really. Sure, you had good aim with your little guns, but they really are no match for superpowers, now, are they? Of course not. You were supposed to be baby’s first nemesis, Hero’s first victory against evil in the city.”
“And then Hero wanted out.”
Their eyes still weren’t working properly, but they could see enough to catch the dramatic change in Leader’s expression. Where before it was casually neutral as if commenting on the weather, now it was cold, calculating. Threatening. “‘And then Hero wanted out.’” They repeated mockingly. “The weakling. The coward. I had to teach them a lesson, of course. This line of work is like no other, and the expectations are like no other. They just didn’t understand, yet.”
“You tortured them!” Villain shouted, voice trembling with anger. “I’ve seen their injuries, tended to most of them myself! The extent of their wounds… nobody does things like that in the name of discipline! I’ve been called a villain for years, but if anyone’s the true villain, it’s you. You who perpetuate this cycle of hurt, of violence, who allow your team to harm desperate people who are forced to break the law to survive.
“You want to know why I chose to do what I do? Because someone has to protect them from people like you.”
Leader watched their tirade coldly, expression unchanging. “That was quite the speech,” they finally said, a hint of amusement in their voice. “How long have you been waiting to say that? Did you give that little monologue to Hero while you tended to their injuries?”
Villain gritted their teeth but did not respond to the dig. They hadn’t meant to say all of that initially, but they’d just… snapped. Remembered when they’d found Hero bleeding out in that alleyway, pursued by Teleporter. Remembered when they’d taken out the bullet, stitched up their wounds, bandaged what they could. Remembered how Hero never had a full night’s sleep, not really. Remembered the really bad nights, when they’d wake up crying, screaming for Leader to stop, and Villain could do nothing but hold them as they sobbed.
The words had just poured out. All the hatred they’d amassed, from years fighting them indirectly and from the weeks with Hero, all of it culminated in such a way that they couldn’t be face to face with them, alone, and just stay silent.
“Staying silent now, are we?”
Villain did not reply.
Leader rubbed their fingers together absently. “Did you know Hero can hear us from their cell?”
Villain blinked. They did not, but what did that have to do with—?
Leader was suddenly directly in front of them, having somehow crossed the short distance between them the moment their eyes were closed. Villain tried to flinch back, but there was nowhere to go. A hint of anticipation simmered in Leader’s eyes as they reached out, slowly, agonizingly, and placed their hand on Villain’s cheek, just below the cut on their temple.
It was a simple gesture. Shouldn’t have done anything. But looks could be deceiving.
The sensation was faint, at first. Barely noticeable underneath the throbbing of Villain’s head and the aching behind their eyes. But it grew. And it grew quickly.
It was like a hundred thousand needles piercing their flesh.
As if the blood flow had been temporarily cut off from their face and was just now flooding back.
Stabbing and cutting and jabbing and tearing into their nerves, into their bones, into their very soul.
Spreading out from the source, Leader’s touch, and reaching every inch of their being.
Someone was screaming.
No, not someone.
They were screaming.
Leader’s eyes locked with theirs, their face a mask of grim determination.
They weren’t going to stop.
All other sensation was gone—drowned out, overwhelmed.
And yet, inexplicably, it continued to grow.
Each imaginary needle grew longer, sharper as the seconds ticked by.
“Do you understand now, just how helpless you are?”
No powers, no weapons, no allies.
“How minuscule you are, compared to me?”
Leader suddenly withdrew, stepping away and pulling their gloves back on. Villain’s breathing came in gasps, their entire body shaking and trembling, the incredible, awful pain dissipating into thin air.
As if it had never existed in the first place.
“You are nothing,” Leader said coldly, “As insignificant as a mite. It’s terrible how you’ve deluded yourself into thinking you could possibly stand a chance against people like me. You couldn’t even save yourself.”
Villain squeezed their eyes shut, becoming aware of the tears dripping down their cheeks as the cell door slammed shut behind Leader. Somewhere, far away, faint shouts echoed.
I’m so sorry, Hero.
They’re right.
I can’t save you.
Can’t even save myself.
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A Comparison of Kudos Over Time on AO3 on Two Fics
I'm a big numbers nerd, and one thing I like to do is to track how many kudos each of my fics get per day, via the daily emails ao3 sends. For my two fics in the Six of Crows Fandom, I've been fully tracking them since posting. Today, I went through and updated the spreadsheet where I collect and graph all of this data (although the emails aren't perfect, they are very helpful for being able to deal with the data later).
First, here are the graphs for both the kudos over time and the kudos gathered each day for my multi-chaptered, fairly popular fic:
So there's a few interesting thing to note here. There's an obvious spike in kudos when a new chapter is posted, likely from the fic being bumped back up to the top of the search results. The bump from finally being finished lasted two days (with the second day actually being slightly higher than the date I actually posted the final chapter). This double bump probably comes from readers who only read complete fics, but could not finish the 40k word fic in one day. Additionally, the kudos have slowly tapered off since the final chapter has been posted, but they seemed to have roughly stabilized with 1-7 kudos per day. Additionally, the fic has received kudo every day, except for when ao3 went dark, and that might be an error with the email system going down.
And now for the one shot that was less popular:
These graphs are also not surprising, although perhaps disappointing from an author's perspective. There was one large spike when the fic was posted, which quickly trailed off. There are no additional kudos bumps from posting new chapters, and there are far fewer new kudos each day. This fic was also posted after the multi-chapter fic was finished posting and it was posted for an event, but it trailed off faster. This could also be because it was much shorter (1.4k vs 40k words), or that that subjects were less interesting to readers in this fandom.
I am going to start posting the sequel to the long fic this weekend, so I look forward to charting that as well. I also may at some point compare guest vs registered users kudos, as I have all of that data as well, but I'm not sure what to do with that yet. And if you made it this far or have any thoughts, please let me know!
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