#Shorter is sometimes better
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Embracing Shorter Experiences
So one of the things that I really wanted to do this year was make a concerted effort to try and clear off a lot of the games from my backlog. This has included a lot of older and more classic games, and let me tell you, one thing that I've noticed when going through several classic and older game collections, is that these older games, even earler 3D games, respected the player's time so, so much more.
Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with a longer experience now and then. I love binging older anime that had upwards of near a hundred episodes. I have played a lot of modern RPGs that require something like 60+ hours to just see the end of the main quest. That's not me bragging, I just want to lay down that I have no trouble with longer experiences, but sometimes, it's so easy to get burnt out on them. I can't count how many games I've just dropped because it just took so long to get anywhere or move the game forward that I just sort of drifted away and didn't pick it up again. It wasn't out of rage quitting or anything, it was just taking so long and I wanted to do something else. For someone like me, who prefers to only focus on one or two games at a time at most, it can be real annoying to get a new game, get hooked on it, play it for several dozen hours, and then just drift away from it despite enjoying it and wanting to finish it.
It isn't like all modern games are like this either, there are Ā plenty of games, and even plenty of genres that essentially keep their playtimes fairly succinct and to the point. I can't recall the last time a platformer required me to spend an inordinant amount of time performing busywork in order to make progress. By the same token, it isn't like every older or retro game was good about respecting a player's time. Old-school dragon quest (Dragon Warrior in America) practically invented the concept of level grinding. If you actually look at a guide or a walkthrough for the original DQ, it's a remarkably short game, but it's runtime is padded out by the necessity to grind out both gold to afford better equipment and experience to level up to get strong enough to actually make progress to the next part of the game.
But I am thinking more of games that aren't necessarily shorter but always feel like you're making constant progress towards your goal. A lot of modern open world games break this rule because so much of what you're doing doesn't feel directly connected to your quest, it's just a load of busywork. And yes, while it does technically make you stronger in some ways, perhaps giving you access to more materials or better weapons, or filling out your map, or whatever it is that the side quests do, so much of it feels like a chore. That's what I mean by not respecting your time. When a game is so thick with story, it can also feel like it's wasting your time as well. That's the issue I had with Persona 5. I did enjoy the game, it was a lot of fun to play, but I ended up dropping the game on two separate occasions because it felt like it was taking forever to make progressā¦ and that's a game that has a time limit, and a definitive end! Time marches forward in that game whether you want it to or not and I still felt like it took control and agency away from me often enough that I sort of zoned out and stopped enjoying it, needing something a bit more fast paced. In the moment, I could have fun with it, but longer stints of playing it really burned me out on it.
A game that respects a person's time isn't necessarily short, but it is one that feels like you aren't being held back by its design. Chrono Trigger is an RPG that I think pulls this off flawlessly. It's not a long game by RPG standards, roughly 15-20 hours or so, but you are constantly moving fowrard, constantly getting things done and moving the story forwards. It doesn't feel like the game's pacing ever slows down or takes control or agency from the player for extended periods of time.
Or how about a more modern game that I feel is good about this: Hades. Hades is a very, very long game if you want to see or do absolutely everything in it. Even getting through the main storyline takes several dozen successful runs at the very least, and that's not counting all of the side content and side stories and hidden dialogue you get even when you fail a run. It's a game that constantly feels like it's moving its plot and its characters forward, even when you aren't managing to successfully finish a run, and I think that's wonderful.
I bring all this up because, thankfully, shorter experiences are coming back, at least in the indie field. We've seen some attempts at AAA publishers to make shorter experiences that are still satisfying; Tango Gameworks' Hi-Fi Rush is an excellent, linear rhythm beat-em-up that is just long enough to be a great time without overstaying its welcome and making you feel like the experience is being dragged out, for example. But the indie space is where things like this really shine. Larger game developers, even since the shift to 3D it feels like, have constantly been pushing forward to make bigger, more cinematic spectacles, longer experiences that really push the technology they're on to its fullest degrees, and yet many of the games being put out don't feel nearly as fun or as satisfying to play because they feel bloated. Sometimes, a short experience is the best one.
I think most of us never asked for games to get bigger. It's impressive, to be sure, but it was never meant to be a regular thing. I don't want to read a book that's over 1000 pages unless it is a really, really damn good book. I don't want to watch a movie that's over four hours (or even two hours really) unless I feel as though my time is going to be well spent. I typically will drop a show, no matter how long running it is, no matter how much someone insists that it gets better two season in, if I can't be swayed into watching it after three or so episodes, I'm not going watch further.
Time is a precious commodity, something that I've grown far more aware of as I've gotten older, and so choosing where to spend it is far more important to me. I am someone who often laments when I don't see to the end of something, I always feel bad when I cannot or do not finish a game or a movie or a show or a book, but at the same time, if its length is causing me to feel like I'm just not making progress or that I could be moving on to something else, then I consider that a bit of a failing with the media in general. I want to see the ending, and that's why I've grown a lot more fond of things that actually have endings now, something I can play for around ten to twenty hours, see the ending, feel satisfied, digest what I felt about it, and then move on without guilt. Same with a movie or a show.
This is another rambly post, I admit, but I'd like to know how other people feel about the generalized length of something. Not in how it relates to how much you pay for something, I've never felt that equating length to worth is a good metric, but in how it makes you feel. What does something very long have to do to keep you invested in it, make it feel like it's worth your time to continue on with it, even when it starts to approach 40, 50, 60 hours and beyond?
#Shorter is sometimes better#Not everything has to go on forever#let something lie if it's done#short#long
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some Sandor doodles because I love this man dearly and wish him the best.
Tormund was right, he does have very sad eyes.
also with quite a few of my designs/personifications for characters i kinda just tend to pick and choose things from the source materials (the show and the books) and go from there. Like the bookās description of Sandor was actually when he was younger, and actual time frame he Yk. Aged. Since heās 35 years old in the show. (At the end heād be about 40-42 I think)
but anyways
dog helm sketch/personal interpretation.
#sandor clegane#artists on tumblr#small artist#digital art#a song of ice and fire#game of thrones#maea rambles sometimes#a shorter post#art dump#got#game of thrones fanart#fanart#fanfiction#concept art#Maeaās personal interpretations of characters bc she literally has nothing else better to do#the sequel
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āput me on a pedestal and iāll only disappoint you
tell me iām exceptional, and i promise to exploit you
gimme all your money, and iāll make some origami honey!
i think youāre a joke!!! ā¦but i donāt find you very
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More tagr art!!! Assorted stuff this time! Featuring some cute chibi stuff. Some solo gazās, a lil uhhh. Comic of an altercation.. and a very belated Halloween pic I started drawing last Halloween and didnt finish lol. Also featuring lyrics from pedestrian at best cuz that song rllly rlly fits my ver of tak lol.
#invader zim#gaz membrane#invader tak#tagr#iz tak#iz gaz#tak#doodles#there toxic yuri!!! theyāre all over the place!!! tak is tsundere insane alien who fueled by revenge itās gonna be rough!#I think. there relationship would slowly grow and develop as gaz is helping tak w all her injuries#but I think theyād end up having a true true falling out sometime after take fully healed and gets her ship back.#and theyād be split up for a few years maybe? idk how long Iād want it to be. but! yeah.#absence makes the heart grow fonder and makes u realize how fucking stupid u are#and eventually theyād reunite and shit would be better lol#I donāt want them to be at each others throats forever thatād suck lol#theyre just definitely are moments where there at each others throats in the beginning#but they r also moments.. where they both feel true belonging and acceptance. like they never have beforeā¦ and it blows there lil mindsā¦#I also dO want gaz to go into space at some point w tak cuz thatād be fucking awesome#after they reunite again they can go explore the universe a bit#these r all very half baked ideas btw and also my brains mush cuz ive been drawing all day#so please excuse if said ideas suck. also please excuse all the typos lol#I might change my mind on the them separating idkā¦ or maybe make it a shorter amount of timeā¦ idk!! I havent thought thru all this shit lol#itās not like Iām gonna write a story or actually make a comic Iām just drawing random fanart#I donāt need to have all these thoughts all solidified lol
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Sometimes I ramble while answering questions cause I'm actually writing down my thought process lmao
#About Cyan#I hope it's not too confusing#when I already have an answer I try to make it short#but when I don't know for certain writing down what I'm thinking helps me think better#Sometimes I think about going back and rewriting it in a shorter way but idk#Actually I have rewritten huge answers to make them shorter cause I got too side tracked
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Even though Iāve gone into how Electra being a rich celebrity is aā¦ really tragic contrast to irl US electric lines, I actually do think it can be a compelling direction. Especially if you go all in on basing them on MJ/Prince (though I know less about the latter).
I tend to picture them as a new model on trial/press tour and thatās why they have their crew following them around and celebrity status. Akin to the demonstration tour an ICE 1 trainset went on in the early 90s. Being shuttled around and in the spotlight since an early age in a āchild starā sort of setup (akin to MJ) givesā¦ a really tragic but interesting reason for why theyād still be relatively childish as an adult. Itās why Electra being pretty socially lost and having issues with boundaries and a near-endless need/capacity for physical affection has always stuck in my head.
The way Amtrak got strategic, bordering on conniving, in their attempts at freight service to break even over the years also nicely parallels how MJ was VERY strategic in his attempts at āgaming the systemā to achieve crossover success and mainstream fame (such as crossing over to rock channels to appeal to white audiences). This video explains the history of why and how Amtrak did freight services better than I could:
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And then thereās also the thread of how ugly tabloid media coverage of MJ got, only for posthumous info to shed a VERY different light on things like his wildly varied appearance (he had multiple medical issues like lupus and vitiligo that he tried to hide). Iāve already gone into how the NEC gets made fun of for what a mess it can be, when itās due to very deep seated physical issues.
I know far less about Prince but someone described him as āchallenging- in multiple ways, for better and worseā which I really love as a characterization for Electra. Being externally ādifficultā to deal with and argumentative due to stress and the kind of circumstances they live and work in, but also being someone whoāll openly challenge supposed norms and speak up. Like āelectrification canāt handle X, itās too delicate for Yā ābullshit, hereās how WE did it in the 30s and Europe regularly does now, itās all a matter of long term lack of investmentā
I think the link of them both being notably conspiratorial is another interesting trait to give Electra. I think they definitely believe GM killed the trolleys and border on being paranoid about the government/railroads plotting against them and wanting them to fail, whichā¦ is honestly just true in a lot of ways.
This has been another TED Talk on how Electra is accidentally VERY interesting with real life/historical context. Honestly, I think going the MJ/Prince direction is a really great mix of being fun to watch and recognizable if you donāt know the language, but also full of potential to be a much deeper character.
#stex electra#starlight express#no comment on the accusations- that situation is a mess and SUPER complicated#i just think his story is interesting and thereās a lot of take inspiration from with electra#i really should write electra fanfic sometime i just hasnāt gotten off the ground#but with my growing interest in reflecting real railroad history electra becomes a character who works better in written form#as a bonus i like to make electra somewhat to very small because of those two. Prince was TINY (5ā2 or so) and MJ was 5ā9#nowhere near as skinny as them but definitely finer-boned with notably small wrists even if otherwise beefy#(Partly because thatās how a lot of the shorter electra actors are. itās really noticeable when you closely at pics of mykal out of costum
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do u ever just look at ur own posts and think ādamn i kinda ateā
#also good morningggg !#rereading my stuff is either super cringe or lovely cuz sometimes i rly cook#however i hate all my oneshots#EXCEPT FOR āOKAY BETā#but everything else is trash#iām better at writing shorter stuff šæšæ
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Anime good :) (Patreon)
#Doodles#MP100#Shigeo Kagayama#Reigen Arataka#Ritsu Kageyama#Forgive the anglicized name order lol#MP100 was another one of my breakfast anime! Admittedly I did not Just watch it during breakfast tho lol#It was too good ahhhh I kept finding my thoughts returning to it throughout the day!#I probably ended up watching an additional episode or so per day over however long it took haha - drastically cut down the number of days!#The lead ups to the finales especially got me - there was no way I could for the whole next day to see them through!#Plus getting to see those beautiful EPs gosh <3 What could be better than some absolutely stunning animation ā„#I was quite impressed the whole way through :D The cast was great and the animation was beautiful and fluid and impressive#And the technical ability that went into the painted animation! Gosh!!#But most of all - of course - it's just a good solid story <3 Of course it's beautifully expressed but it's just - good down to its bones#I love a story like that :) Mob is such a wonderful character and he's surrounded by good people ā„ It made my heart happy to see#He's loved and he loves <3 That's my very favourite!#Unsurprisingly to me I was most enamoured by the brother relationship who could've seen that coming lol me? Siblings? Pfsh āŖ#Ritsu's a sweet boy as well <3 I cried at him crying from Mob not even considering forgiving him because there was never anything to forgive#Not me shorter older sibling feeling exactly the same way hhghghh I'm fine ;;#Reigen is such a fun deadbeat supportive adoptive dad haha āŖ He's hard to pin down! Loved his redemption arc(s) :)#Flawed individuals my beloved <3#Such an enjoyable cast and set of circumstances! I might actually have to give OPM a proper go sometime soon if this is the writing quality
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I keep getting promotion for ExposureCraft and they have all been some version of āI miss old Minecraft. Since 2020 every server has just been lore streams with way too much content to catch up on! What ever happened to just playing Minecraft with friends? So Iām joining this new server with lots of mods and a life system gimmick that Iāll be streaming!ā
Like Iām sorry?? But youāve missed your own point! Many of those āloreā servers started as just playing Minecraft with friends and turned into something more because of a system on the server. And itās way too much content to catch up on because itās nothing but long ass streams that not everyone can catch live or have the time to go back and watch a vod of. You also mention missing āoldā Minecraft but here yall are adding 40 something mods onto the server and adding a life system. Usually if people are talking about missing āoldā Minecraft they mean vanilla Minecraft with maybe 1 or 2 mods.
Like just they way the creators are promoting ExposureCraft like they are better than other servers in the past few years when they are doing the exact same thing servers have been doing for the past couple of years rubs me the wrong way. I also looked up the vods for it and the shortest one I found was just under 3 hours long at 2:56, with the longest being almost 10 hours long and the average being 6 1/2 hours.
Just the way the creators have been promoting and talking about ExposureCraft puts me off watching it despite there being several creators on it that I love watching.
#just the acting like theyāre better and doing something different#when they arenāt#it just gives a bad feeling#exposure craft#mcyt#just why must servers be nothing but streams now#I get making shorter videos is a hassle sometimes with editing#but not everyone can do streams
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actually it's so sad that criston cole is overly hated but at the same time who cares. and same with alicole. she doesn't love you and never will but you love her and the thought of her keeps you going through the battlefields. many such cases in life
#arguably alicole could have been better executed but their affair being so short is also soooo good. sometimes the shorter the sweeter it is#sorry i cant get out of my head him holding onto the tiny piece of cloth she gave him & smelling it to be remembered of how holding her felt
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Everytime I face a new character limit on a website that didn't have them before/used to have really long ones... AUGHHhhh the modern social media world was not made for people like me (lovers of details, rambling, elaboration, thorough explanation, and nuance)
#twitter and other short form shit and everything being a Phone App On Small Screen instead of a Proper#Computer Website i feel like has just ruined the format of literally everything for me. Thoughts just keep getting more and more condensed#with detail and nuance taken away. everything over simplified into only the basics. blah blah blah. I've already probably rambled about thi#all before but it's just SO frustrating. I literally just CAN NOT talk that way!!! even if I try!!! I took multiple advanced placement#english & language arts classes in school and I literally never made below an A on any assignment EVER except for ESSAYS#where I would legit get almost failing grades just because I cannt express myself concisely. I took an english placement test thats made to#like evaluate your competency in a subject and out of the 102 multiple choice questions I only missed TWO of them. almost a perfect#score. But for the 5 open response questions (about articulating thoughts succinctly) I did not get a single one of them lol#I only got partial credit on 3. It's like I OBVIOUSLY understand the material and I know how Words Work and how to analyze and interpret#meaning and etc. etc. But it's just when I have to express myself CLEANLY I can't. It's always ''well you have very good points and you#get around to the idea eventually and I think it's very insightful - but it just needs to be shorter/the side tangent needs to be removed/#etc.'' I've always wondered if it has something to do with being on the schizophrenia spectrum and how that can cause disorganized#speech sometimes hmm..ANYWAY.. But I just naturally express myself in a very particular way which is lengthy and I can't rea#ly seem to control it. So it's basically like just.. being gradually pushed out of every place that won't accomodate people with different#ways of like perceiving and expressing or etc. Everything cannot ALWAYS be 100% 'Short and Snappy and To The Point' or a quippy one#liner or the Bare Minimum of information being provided or etc. Some peoples brains just do not work like that!!!!! Sorry I operate#in detail and elaboration lol. ANYWAY.. I still sometimes use random ''dating sites'' like OKCupid to look for platonic friends since#I never leave the house so it's hard for me to just meet friends naturally. And I just realized today that they added a RIDICULOUSLY small#character limit to their messaging system (2000 words?? augh). And also took away answer explanations (when you answer a compatibility#question you used to have a space to give detail and explain why you answered the way you did) and removed a few other features and it's ju#t like.. how the fuck is any of this actually helpful in terms of judging compatibility? take away ALL nuance and anyting that actually#is meant to tell you anything about a person? Bumble's character limits for your profile description are even more fucking insane and so#is every other disgustingly minimalistic place I've seen like.. OKC used to be superior BECAUSE it allowed for a TON of detail. like back i#2016 or something there was SO much data you could look at. long form question answers. personality trait summaries. etc. Now you have#SOO little to judge off of when evaluating compatibiility it's like. You'd have better luck just throwing a dart in a crowded street and#talking to whoever it hits. Why are people so fucking allergic to reading anything longer than 3 words and providing DETAILS!! It just seem#harder and harder to find any place to meet platonic friends where you have any amount of actual data to go off of and it isnt basically#just random 'speed dating' set up shit. AARGH. &I know 'oh just join a club& meet ppl irl' 1. erm..covid. 2.I mostly want to meet ppl#in places I'd like to move so I already know ppl when I get there. You kind of HAVE to do that online. bc I am not there yet.. WISHING for#Complexity.Com where ppl can upload full 900 page psychological files of themselves. MINIMUM profile character limit 30k words lol
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You're too tall. That's p mean of you, you should shrink maybe- the kind thing to do.
[The user sending this is a tiny 5ft goblino]
hah. short.
(/j ily goblin <3)
#stfu mars āŖ#look man sometimes i do not want to be tall. i feel weird abt my appearance n it sucks big time.#but other times i use my tallness to reach stuff for my slightly shorter friends or ppl w shorter arms n its like 'oh. this was the point.'#and then i feel a little better abt it. the only part i like abt it is being able to help people ig.
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Wow me, drawing Jersey? Craazzzyyyyy
Anyway, I had an original design for this type of look on the Ipad, ended up not looking at it once since I apparently have memory. Kinda glad I didn't since I could go just by memory and figure it out as I went along ya know. (ps, for those who don't normally read tags just like, please do, i put so many lil things in there lolz)
Okay SO, I have this lil headcanon, nothin big, that Jersey didn't used to wear shorts until like 2000 or something, maybe a bit before then. This is because he has some scars on his legs, just from over the years, and wearing shorts not only shows those but also make it easier for him to get scrapes and such.
He was fine wearing shorts around NY, Del, and Rhode, occasionally Mass as well if he happened to be around at the time. He couldn't wear them around anyone else for a long time, some scars had Memories(tm) attached to them, some good most bad, so he just never wore shorts.
He's gotten a lot more comfortable wearing them around the other states over the years, mainly because of Covid where Mass unfortunately wouldn't let him keep wearing the same two pairs of pants. So he's fine now, if still a lil uncomfortable around some states (the west mainly), you just won't see him wearing them until it's the first day over 60 in state.
Anyway I love NJ but this isn't surprising, I live here. I am NOT a simp for this bitch, he's my state, I have to like him, 'sides who else would I attach to? Pennsylvania? Florida? Or god forbid NEW YORK!? Absolutely not, that's sacrilegious that is.
#welcome to the table#wttt#wttt new jersey#wttsh new jersey#also#jersey with a bun#how we feelin bout it#i personally love it#like i love the idea that his hair is shorter underneath#like maybe from an undercut thats just outgrown?#also also the headband he's using is one of SJs#although they are more like communal headbands#since yorkie connie and a few other northers āborrowā them#i feel like this pic was taken sometime during the summer#either at the shore or a roller rink#i feel like jersey would drag the group out all the time during the summer#the group being york connie penn rhode florida loui cali new mex north dakota and occasionally texas and kentucky#florida and loui only join because of cali#connie because there needs to be one āresponsibleā adult to supervise (he isnt much better but is trusted)#nd because jersey is very persuasive (he really isnt but nd caves quickly)#texas mainly joins when food is involved or its a rodeo#and kentucky would just more but sigh horses#honestly more states would join but they either learned their lesson (cough The Action Park Incidents(tm) cough)#or jersey never thought to ask them because the poor boy has self esteem problems since apparently NJ is one of the most disliked states#still sad about the btw cause NJ is so nice but also please stay away we dont want you here#anyway he thinks that most states dont like him so he only invites those that he knows dont hate him#so most of OG13 plus florida and loui
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"Arrests require cause."
Bitch *you* let her instigate martial law! Through your power! What did you think that meant?!
That's literally the purpose of putting martial law in place. To be able to let the government do whatever police and military shit to its people without cause. It removes the rights of the civilians because it views those civilians as the enemy of The People.
You let hating Jinx make you forget what words mean, Caitlyn. I get it, grief does terrible things to a person, and Ambessa is a very compelling public speaker, but like. She said out loud: "Let's do Martial Law."
#arcane season 2#i mean i guess it makes sense why she immediately regrets it#like I get being caught up in Ambessa's energy because she is comanding and hot and can work a room real good#mel did learn from the best (and can do it in her own way probably better but that's a different conversation)#but like the reality of what all of that means probably did hit Caitlyn like a wall of... police brutality#and like... grief is an exhausting emotion. it's honestly a terrible motivator. some people can hold it and calcify it into something#but like... Caitlyn started the series like 'i hate the corruption in the police force' so like... she doesn't seem made for calcification#she and jayce are painfully similar in a lot of ways... she just didn't have a whole season of following the last person to talk to her#but they are kind of naive topsiders which makes them... vulnerable to manipulation#they definitely needed more scenes together especially since they're supposed to be friends...#i feel like while it wouldn't have 'served the plot' scenes of jayce and caitlyn being... like. together as friends would have been good#i miss longer shows for the way they had like... character connections and building that just... existed beyond the implication#like. man. sometimes it is necessary to just like. chill with people. see their casual relationships develop#this has been a fully unnecessary tag tangent thank you for joining me#i hate the idea of actual content of shows becoming 'filler' when like... it's just cost cutting#that's the show. that's the stuff that informs the meaning and the themes and the characters and entertainment#that's why i want to watch and enjoy the thing#stop making it shorter and bingeable and then cancelling it before it gets started aaaaa#okay sorry tangent over
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the urge to have very short hair and very long hair at the same time
#ughh#I'm letting my hair grow long now#but sometimes i do miss my shorter hair#but i generally look better with longer hair ig#and it's been too long since I've had long hair#rina yaps
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i did okay i guess
#so i got a b in the other exam#it might have been a more difficult one because one person in my friend group in that course actually failed it#unfortunately i can't see the average on this exam but i might have done fairly well#i can't really complain when others failed the exam#at least i almost got full points on the quiz but the writing part let me down a bit#it's just a bit anoying because so many of the grammar mistakes were actually typos š©š¤¦āāļø like i know how to write these words correctly#but i type so fast on the computer sometimes the letters of a word get switched up and i don't notice it oof š„²#and i didn't have time to proofread it otherwise i might have noticed#altough i'm just a bit oblivious to my own mistakes if i had to read someone elses text i would notice surely#i also forgot a few commas or put them in the wrong place never were not my strong suit altough i got better with it#this might also have to do with ranting here on tumblr too much lmao š
i'm getting into the habit of typing too fast haha#just a bit unnecessary but i still have the 2nd exam and homework also accounts for something#an a is still possible#i keep thinking about what if only i got 2 more points on the quiz and another 2 on the writing task (if only i made less silly mistakes) š„²#just missed an a by 3.5 points#but i have to believe i will do even better on the 2nd and get enough points for an a overall#i will bother my professor with sending him many practice writing texts before the next exam and also try simulate the time restrictions#because otherwise i can write so well if i have time to think how to correct and improve my texts but i need to be able to find mistakes#also in shorter amounts of time
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you would think editing an 126 page script down to 120 pages would be easy. youd be wrong but i wouldnt blame you for thinking it
#'just delete the unimportant scenes' all the scenes are important sadly.#i have like a week to do this im so fucked#im gonna try soo hard to cut it down but sometime next week im gonna have to do a 'whats the point of this scene' table... which i WILL hat#because sometimes a scene is just there to be a scene#sometimes its there to make sure the story isnt going too damn fast#and theres not much other reason ...#ugh#idk i feel like maybe i could actually replace some of the scenes i have with other scenes if that makes sense#shorter scenes but better for the passage of time maybe#actually thats a good idea. note to self: delete that one boring ass scene and replace it with a less boring shorter one
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