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chat did i eat or what
it's js lines atm but i'm procrastinating so ❤️
#PLEASE TELL ME IF I NEED IMPROVEMENT#also yes i did use several images underneath him#i think i would cry if i had to use JUST my finger and not at least a little tracing of like the eyes or something#stranger things#mike wheeler#byler#mike wheeler s5#mike wheeler fanart#st5#stranger things 5#byler tumblr#wdym i'm using this as an excuse to put off the little comic i said i'd make?🥰 wdym???🥰🥰
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Come closer. I promise he is absolutely not malicious, or deceptive, or sinister, in any way possible! He is just an ordinary narrator, for an ordinary game! Come on, you wouldn't want to let a silly old writer waiting, hm?
#the stanley parable#tsp narrator#the narrator#tsp#i hope those colors look nice together!!#please also do tell me if the alt needs improving!
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Repaint of one of my earliest paintings. Thought it'd be a fun excercise to see what I'd do differently (and what i'd keep!)
#inverloch#art#digital art#webcomics#comics#digital painting#fantasy art#art redraw#art improvement#artist improvement#please tell me I don't need to point out which one is the old one#it's the second one
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it must get boring as hell doing continuous repetitive genos like dust does. he probably constantly questions how his human can keep on going and like not get bored (me too tho ngl because what type of person is out there that's trying to minmax every single undertale geno route interaction???) so i say he changes things up during his own process for a variety of reasons
sometimes when he's feeling REALLY apathetic he might just view everyone as stats and precoded scripts and lines and he just goes about the geno as if he was a player playing a video game (this is incredibly hypocritical because he's acting like the player but also this is dust sans we're talking about. pinnacle of hypocrisy. he'd deny any sort of human like actions because he's not the human and what he's doing is for the greater good). also its kinda fucked because it just means that there's been so many resets that he doesn't view his friends and family as simply people that he's taking the lives of but more as just npcs and numbers. but yk of course he moves on from that episode (and refuses to acknowledge the fact that he was acting very much so like the human. nope nope nope)
or maybe whenever he feels really really really shitty about himself he just lets the human kill him sometimes. he purposely interacts with other monsters before he kills them so he has to hear them beg for mercy. he just lets himself wallow in as much guilt and pain and misery as possible because its really really addicting to be sad and upset and feel bad. and dust is never like "hey i should stop doing this because its getting in the way of be killing the human" because he knows damn well it ISNT. he's still gonna be on that him vs. human grind no matter what even if he spends a few resets fucking around and being miserable and the humans always gonna reset anyways. ALWAYS
even if he's not at lvl 20 or something but still above the human in lv then maybe he'd kill them. but then that also means that there'd still be some monsters left because he nor the human maxed out their stats. so then that's just more suffering for dust (because i really think he'd like to make himself suffer because he feels so much guilt for what he did. his suffering is self inflicted and he knows that and still does it. good for him) because he has to walk around the underground knowing that there are some people hiding in corner or something watching him and scared that he's gonna kill them because thats what he did to everyone else. some nicer monsters might go up to him and try to talk to him but dust doesn't have the chill welcoming friendly vibe sans does anymore so it's just creepy and awkward. angrier monsters might try and yell or fight him and dust just sits there and takes it because theyr totally right. to them it might just look like he killed monsters just for shits and giggles one day and theres no way for him to explain the resets without people just forgetting it in the first place so theres not much he can do except accept the suffering. what in the mental masochism
#i'm in love with dust sans did i mention this. did i forget to tell you. well im telling you now#I LOVS DUST!!!! I LOVE YOH DUST SANS I LOVE YIU!!!! I LOVE HIM!!!!!!! he's soooo fucking awesomerahhhhggggg......#so real so real so real so real he's so me he's so me#dust deciding to stay in misery because being sad and upset is easier than having to put in effort to improve is so fucking real GOD#literally every post on my followed tags tab is all killer. all killer. all colorkiller. everything is killer#where the HELL is the dust content. horror content??? i am getting upset here where are the dust and horror posters#if nobody's gonna do it I WILL. i'm the hero that i need. the hero that nobody fucking wanted at all#listen i strive for an equal amount of mtt content if theyre not equal it makes me sad. so i will be the equalizer#horror post also upcoming soon be ready for that drop#i've been playing hi3 so much lately ehehehe. :3. i am in love with the story#god i love fandoms so much..... i love utmv i love hi3 i love uhhh im not in any others but GOD i love making cool content and creativity#dusttale human HAS to have the absolute most undertale brainrot for the game to fucking break and for sans to go rouge#HOW MANY GENOCIDE RUNS IS ENOUGH BEFORE YOU GIVE UP DUDE. CMON MAN YOURE HURTING DUST SANS HERE!!!!!#dust sans#murder time trio#bad sans gang#bad sanses#nightmare's gang#utmv#sans au#tricule rant#it's 3 am someone save my sleep schedule please please please#i ended up going to sleep at 5 am. kill me now. average murder time trio sleep time (they would have terrible sleep schedules)
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just read an interview where emerald fennell says saltburn is "gothic" and like..........no, it's not. it simply Is Not That.
you can't have a man fuck a grave and be like "ooh just like wuthering heights! this is gothic" because guillermo del toro and i are both going to fight you
#like......come on. saltburn spoilers ahead.#horror of love doesn't work because the narrative never decides if he did all this for Felix or for Saltburn#if he killed felix With His Hands in the Heat of the Moment maybe you have an argument. but not with poison in a preplanned murder#if the love was for saltburn then we should have gotten another gothic theme - the house as a character#the house as a character doesn't work because it simply isn't#i don't think we ever learned the actual layout of the house and it never was The Other in any scene#the walls aren't even the colors of his eyes!!!#horror of grief doesn't work because he's never out of control#he doesn't kill the others because he's out of his mind with grief. he was Always Gonna Do That.#and also your protagonist isn't an anti-hero because there is literally no point that you're rooting for him#ms fennell please tell me what you think gothic means#anyway what saltburn needed was - more homoeroticism more blood and more of him being a little sex freak#that probably still wouldn't have made it Gothic but it would have been an improved film
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randomly thinking about this now but, watching Matt Rhodes complete his Tellurion saga several years ago (it's a visual novel with no dialogue. all show no tell) and now reading the game informer article and seeing some of the stuff he said about the 'little details' in the lighthouse etc, just got me thinking... and i'm kind of excited
#dragon age#anyway i think that project massively improved his storytelling skills via art/item placement#i like the way he shows things in the visual novel#i dont know how to describe it#like please mr rhodes tell me they let you go wild with the show vs tell#ok I NEED TO GO TOUCH GRASS I CANNOT KEEP OBSESSING OVER THIS
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i genuinely need to be put down like a dog i cant do this anymore man holy shit
#yall dont know the meaning of terminally online til u meet me#i hate myself so much its not even funny i am the most miserable worthless scum#my sleep schedule is 7am to 3pm all i do all day is rot on the couch and sometimes draw if i have a drop of motivation#depression is completely kicking my ass and im not even fighting back i give up what the fuck man#theres not even a point for me to keep trying i just want to stop feeling such deep despair 24/7 please#i dont want to die i just want the pain to stop so i can peacefullylive out the rest of this year before i turn 18 and its all over for good#but i cant even have that! im just gonna suffer the whole time thanks great#i wish i could just get better and fix all of this but i cant its not working we dont have the money to#actually get me the help i need to make it work. i just have to figure it out or die#i just wanna go back to ***** ** *** i just want to stop being lonely and useless#i dont know why im posting this shit to tumblr. its so stupid i should just be journaling or something#probably because im worthless selfish scum. idfk.#the last 6 months have been a complete blur. just rotting on the couch or in bed occasionally seeing friends once every other month or so#ive already wasted half of being 17 abd im probably gonna waste the rest too. ill do nothing of worth before i die.#even my art is ugly and horrible and not worth leaving behind. people tell me to work to improve it but i dont have the time left#ill never create any of the things i wanted to create ill never be a good artist im just going to die exactly like this#an absolutely terrible person.#the only people i can talk about the things that make me a terrible person with are people who are terrible in even worse ways#no one can comfort me except them because theyre the only people who know what ive done and actually do see it as less than absolute evil#because they know absolute evil because it is them. but i actually don’t believe that i think theyre bad but could be good#idk what im saying anymore#someone shoot me#please im not kidding#just make it stop#tw vent#tw sui#delete later
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This is my OC Blu. :3 He's one of my faves but no pressure at all to draw him.
OH HE’S SUCH A GUY
#lemon man's art#I fucked up the lines in so many ways but u generally really like the first one#described#described art#please tell me how to improve the id if needed!!
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i hate that feeling when i'm writing w/ a new mutual or a mutual that I haven't written with much and don't know what's too long of a reply that's gonna scare them off
so ig this is my way of saying to the dash: if you're not intimidated by long replies sometimes PLEASE let me know directly bc this vibe literally results in me deleting and rewriting replies to people multiple times when the first few were probably just fine to send and i'm instead overthinking how much content i'm putting in it when that particular mutual would've just gone with the flow--
#out of character ✧ ❝ be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter & those who matter don't mind. ❞#there's a few people i know for sure are cool w/ it that i do write with regularly#and most of them time they'll either end up matching the length or it'll be this vibe of varied lengths#but they also sometimes do the word vomit length replies and we both vibe over the fact that SOMETIMES IT HAPPENS#but like. i'm dead serious. please tell me directly. bc sometimes i worry i scare people away#by thinking they're obligated to write as long or as detailed as I am???#&& that's not the case at all! write what you think is necessary & i'm proud if you learn something from my writing to improve your own#but don't feel like you're OBLIGATED to. communication is key & i love when someone's like#“hey just lmk if i need to add/clarify anything” after they reply#bc then it opens the line of communication where i'm either going to ask questions or make sure I'M reading it right#OR it's gonna result in me squealing over said reply to you as i read it bc i'm excited
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i love reading things set in countries that i'm knowledgeable and/or have been to because i can point out really minor errors in fanfiction. i think the average american does not know that in england (and apparently some of asia! which i only just found out) there are switches on power outlets so you can just turn it off instead of unplugging it. like 9 times out of 10 that won't come up but on the off chance it does i'm like ohoho. this clown has never been to england...! my favorite part though is watching americans (specifically americans because i swear to god people who speak english as a second language and/or are from any other country have some idea of what it's like to have an accent / personally know people who have accents? idk) try to write british accents like it is REALLY funny. i literally only lived their for five years and i never picked up a full accent myself (certain words and tones i did but they're mostly gone after living in the states again for a few years) but between living there and having a ridiculous amount of family there & visiting them often (like once a year if im lucky) i like KNOW what british accents sound like. i think some americans genuinely dont even know theres more than one or two english accents i think some people think there's like posh english and chav english and nothing else. maybe scottish accent gets thrown in there if they remember the uk is not in fact just england. i would bet real money they've never heard a welsh accent. anyway my point is it's really funny watching people who don't know as much as i do write this stuff. like i see it and i understand how doctors read this and go Oh that is so medically inaccurate. i get them now. anyway i dont remember what my point here was but please know if you are attempting to write a british accent. reddit and youtube are your best friends if you don't have a british friend you can ask and also rest assured even if you do ONE google search. it will not be the worst attempt ive seen guaranteed
#muffin mumbles#idek what the definitive worst one ive seen is#but ive seen some baaaaad ones#favorite example though is in the fucking jjba dub.#like thats not even a fan / indie project thats a real professional thing people were paid to do?!?! and the accents. are fucking TERRIBLE#please im begging you. you dont need to hire famous american voice actors for this. just go to any pub in the whole of england#and i can guarantee youd get better results accent-wise.#speedwagon's accent is easily the worst in part 1 like if you want examples lemme know cause i have some. its so bad. its really bad#but also so so funny#joseph in part 2 is. MARGINALLY better than most of the part 1 cast#not good. far from it. but an improvement#anyway hearing speedwagon say anything especially in part 1 (hes calmer in part 2 and he sounds better (not good. better)#like hes better in part 2 but not by much and only sometjmes.)#hearing this painfully obvious attempt at an american doing a cockney(?) (cant even tell for sure) accent complete with misused slang.#is SO fucking funny#like i showed me mom and she said it was worse than dick van dyke in mary poppins and shes not even wrong#and the slang isnt even like. irs not even super uncommon slang and i dont think its used wrong technically (iirc) but it just sounds so#painfully unnatural. please i am begging them to just hire british people next time. i promise you there are british voice actors#that being said i am still incredibly sad they just gave everyone american accents from part 3 onwards because i miss the awful accents#i miss them dearly.#the main benefit to this imo is that now joseph joestar despite living in england for the first almost twenty years of his life#just got this full blown american accent after living in new york. like i know he did not pick that up naturally#i KNOW dude watched stupid fuckinf tv shows to practice his accent. i know he sounded like a cartoon mobster and suzie q was like jojo.#please for the love of god. you cannot start talking like this. go back to being british#alas he did not listen. but he did drop the mobster thing (sadly.)#anyway this is really unrelated but if joseph was not old as fuck when it started airing i think he wouldve gotten a kick outta seinfeld.#like if the years lined up that wouldve been his main show to practice his american accent to the point people are like hey you kinda sound#like jerry seinfeld. and hes like hah i wonder how that happened!#hes a massive fucking loser is what im saying. hes like my weirdo great uncle joseph joestar#anyway. got really off topic. thank you for watching remember to SMASH that like button
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My least favorite teacher thing is when they grade you one point away from 100%, and provide zero feedback. She came into my home (my inbox) , slapped me in the face(gave me a 49/50), then flipped me off and left (didn’t provide feedback)
#peaches posts#like PLEASE#TELL ME WHAT I CAN DO TO DO BETTER#LET ME FIX MY MISTAKES#I AM HUMAN ARENT I? DONT I NEED KNOWLEDGE OF MY WRONGDOINGS TO IMPROVE?#POPOSTUROUS#UNFOUNDED#I AM PLAGUED BY THIS MORTAL COIL AND YOU DO NOT AID ME
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i don't care what any says i need to see why these people are bookmarking my worst fic out there-
i feel a sudden urge to finish all of my fics
#vent in tags#ao3 please i need to see what all these people think of me PLEASE#i seek others apporval please let me feed into that#me watching every fanfic i've spent my motivation on and been proud of get buried by the fic in which i made watson pregnant like#:(#it's not even fluffy yaoi it's people arguing and angry and sad and-#it's not even aob why are you all here#i fucking hate that smut scene it was so bad#eh-#i guess it means i'm improving#can you tell i JUST NOW discovered stats#writing#ao3#ao3 fanfic#sigh i'll go finish it
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ok i’m actually mad abt how little continuity dndads has rn like why are we doing memory stuff if we haven’t checked to make it consistent w what we’ve already said has happened ????
and also why are they seemingly determined to character assassinate ALL of the characters from s1???? up to and including the already dead ones?????
and ALSO what is even the plot anymore i feel like the world building has been so inconsistent and loosey-goosey and like that’s okay when it isn’t relevant to the plot but in this season where it IS relevant to the plot like. what are we doing???? who can or can’t travel between dimensions???? what are the limitations????
i’m just confused and annoyed i want it to be a fun show with a story that you can follow again but lately it’s been just a mess. still fun ofc because all five of them are just fun to listen to but like. i have not been able to make any sense of what the fuck is going on for like a solid 4 episodes now and i’m just disheartened about it. it’s gone off the rails but not in a hehehaha funny fun way.
#d speaks#dndads#dndads spoilers#srry i just needed to vent like. what is happening what is happening ???? i’m so confused i don’t LIKE being constantly confused#and also i am getting so so sick of this ‘everything has to be grimdarksad no one gets a happy ending’ bs#it’s just annoying it’s pessimistic and i think there’s a line between being a comedy that deals with deep and serious issues and then just#being a bummer downer that has jokes in it. like it’s so pessimistic and none of the root issues are being solved or even fully fleshed out#and the constant indecision about the backstories of all these characters (the kiddads & the og dads) is SO frustrating#i know that there’s a degree of that to be expected just as is natural for improv#but also you’ve gotta have SOME consistency please i’m begging#i’m relistening to s1 rn and i’m in the later episodes and it’s just like. i miss when they had clear arcs#and yeah back before they character assassinated every single kiddad !!!!#also freddie and anthony specifically and their takes on glenn this episode. what the fuck was that#are you trying to tell me that everyone who said in s1 that glenn didn’t change and didn’t have any arc was RIGHT??????#because you spent a LOT of time talking about how silly that opinion was just to now turn and around and be like yeah glenn is reverted#back to who he was in e1 !!!! like cmon. what the hell
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I play D&D sometimes with my brother and/or his friends on his discord server and good god it’s so hard being the only bitch out here who plays D&D for the roleplay
#when I play Dungeons & Dragons I am first and foremost a character actress and comedienne#somebody please come play with me in this space#tell a story with me what is a story without characters????#yes and me at all#ask me any questions about my character dear god please#we have no NPC connections or motivations to help within the world besides gold#the DM said we’d be doing some quick downtime last session and I was so excited because yay finally some rp#IT WAS A TABLE#IT WAS A TABLE OF OPTIONS#we didn’t even rp the options we chose#I scrambled at the end there to tack on a scene asking why everyone’s characters were adventuring just to get people thinking at least a bit#about any of it#AND WE MOVED ON AFTER AN ANSWER FROM EVERYONE BUT MY CHARACTER#I am Forlorn#some d&d is better than no d&d but man#I need to run an improv class as part of my session zeros for my games because they were so shocked when I just ran with their comments#this is part of why I like DMing so much then it is me forcing my players to sit through the d&d experience tailored to my tastes#(which also incidentally includes most of the campaign being reactive to player input & backstories/motivations directly tied to the plot)#I am going to miss my normal group so fucking much#I’m not ready to be a widowed DM#spilling the Tea#d&d
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well since atsv releases digitally today i thought i'd draw something for it
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh this really did NOT turn out as well as i had hoped it would at all somewhere along the way something went wrong and the ends result is something that i'm really not proud of, especially compared to my previous works i'll leave it here but i don't really like it
#background did turn out fire tho i'll reuse it#across the spiderverse#spiderverse#spiderverse fanart#gwen stacy#spider gwen#artists on tumblr#tell me what i could improve upon in the comments or tags please i need it
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Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros is literal hot garbage and I will die on this hill.
#like it’s literally one of the worst constructed/written books I have ever encountered#how on earth could Yarros be married to a 20+ year military vet and yet still not even understand the most basic military concepts#it’s honestly astounding how brain dead her characters are#the way she writes makes it abundantly obvious that she thinks her readers are a bunch of idiots#who need every single story theme and element hand fed to them#the introduction of Varrish was just utter bullshit#she could have painted ‘VILLAIN’ on his forehead and it would’ve been less obvious#please tell us again how smart your main character is while she proceeds to do the dumbest shit I’ve ever seen#‘oh why won’t xaden trust me with rebellion secrets even though I basically announce my suspicions of the empire at every turn?’#idk violet maybe it’s bc you won’t do the mind training they’ve been telling you to do#so you’re constantly vulnerable to the mindreader YOU KNOW PERSONALLY#maybe that’s why no one tells you anything???#also holy shit her being like ‘I have to be careful and not let the empire know I’m questioning my duties’#and then immediately crashing into a scribe meeting to request more red flag reading??#like??? was she kicked in the head???#also the dragons stating multiple times that humans are basically like ants to them and they don’t care if they live or die#but simultaneously having to somehow be subserveant to the military????#bitch why weren’t you all enslaved by the dragons#this is such nonsense#also her prose is ass#come back when you can tell the difference between parse and parcel Rebecca#yeah a lot of my complaints are iron flame related#but that’s just bc it really hit home how bad this all is with the second book#net zero improvement#way to fail downwards Rebecca#ALSO!! what evil empire would conscript their enemies children into the one branch of their military where they get DRAGONS and SUPERPOWERS#like what??!!#in what world#what military would be so afraid of a new rebellion that they conscript the people with deep emotional ties to the old rebellion???#if real militaries worked this way there would be no more war bc we’d all be dead
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