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i really hope silent protaganists aren't a returning trend that are going to be a thing in a bunch of games for a while. It puts me off playing. I really dislike it. It feels incredibly lifeless when next to fully voiced npcs (if no one is voiced, it literally doesn't matter). Leaves cutscenes feeling flat and shitty and conversations feeling one sided.
#its entirely a personal preference thing and when games are varied its great and doesn't register to me#but when it's a bunch of games all in a row doing one thing it's less great#if i otherwise enjoy a game it wont put me off entirely#but it makes me like things a lot more#its only a problem if its a trend#if its just a few games here and there it doesn't matter#and it really only bothers me in certain games - the ones where creating your character is a part of them -#which just so happens to be the ones most likely to silence the protag#i like options#and actual voice options - not the like jrpg pick your grunt sound or repeated dialog line sound style ones - are part of that#would be good if they included the option to be silent tho if a player wanted to have their character be selectively mute or unable to spea#honestly why saints row games continue to be some of my favorites#all the voice options#(although the third and iv were lackluster comparative to 2 and now 2022 because they replaced good options#with that bland white american man voice
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Protag game night:
Who'll get their egos destroyed to smithereens and who will be the one to destroy everyone in Mario kart
Daisuke:
DO YOU WANT A SLAUGHTER TO HAPPEN IN THIS PLACE IF WE PUT EVERYONE AGAINST EACH OTHER ON A GAME LIKE THESE?! 💢💢💢
Takuya: Geez Dai, it's just a game. It's not like we will be fighting each other in the end, besides... I CAN'T EVOLVE INTO A DIGIMON FOR AGES, I WAS FORBIDDEN, SO STFU AND LET PLAY THE FRIGGIN GAME, YOU WORRYHART! 💢💢💢
Tagiru: I guess... we should play something that might not end up in a dimensional war or something...
Takato: Like a card game?
OG Taichi: As long as it's not UNO, nobody will die tonight.
Hiro/Haru/R-Taichi: [agree with the ol' Taichi in a nod]
Takato: 😐 [← He meant Digica]
Tagiru: ... What's wrong with UNO...?
Masaru: Have you ever played UNO in your life...?
Tagiru: Uhh... No? Is it that bad?
OG Taichi: Think about a game which had the equivalent of a Blue Shell hitting you one mile before you reach the goal line when you're at 1st.
Tagiru: Uh... W-what...
Taiki: Games are fun, but the best ones are definitely the most challenging ones, especially the ones in which you have to come up with a strategy to win.
Takuya: AND I'M THE ONE WHO LIKES TO CAUSE CHAOS FOR FUN?! LOOK WHAT TAIKI JUST SAID, FOLKS!! AM I THE ASSHOLE HERE?!
Daisuke: Takki... Yeah, you're right. Kudou really has a hidden side nobody but Tagiru and I know.
R-Taichi/Haru: Huh??
Hiro: ... Does it mean the ranking will get updated? [← He's hopeful]
OG Taichi: Nah, Taiki already is ranking high. Wait, who was the top 1 again?
[Everyone glances at the old Taichi]
~awkward silence~
Daisuke: I think it's... Hiro, yeah Hiro.
Tagiru: Wasn't Tai-- [Takuya covers his mouth asap]
Takato: [whispers on Tagiru's ear] You wouldn't like to see his reaction if he discovers WHO is the number one in that list. And if you tell him... You might not sleep tonight. So keep your mouth shut about it.
Tagiru: [Nods in silence]
※ in the end they all decided to watch Lilo & Stitch and call it a day.
The End.
#legend xros wars au#motomiya daisuke#matsuda takato#akashi tagiru#No Tagirus or Daisukes or even Takuyas were harmed in the making of this post.
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Thoughts on all of these:
False Protag Dies First: So ... DRV3? Unless you mean Makoto is the first victim, which ... hm, how would the protag swap work
MC Kyoko, Sidekick Makoto: Could be fun, though there's a reason why Watson is the POV character in Sherlock Holmes stories. Also can't help thinking each trial in a Kyoko-starring THH would last three-and-a-half minutes
Mukuro Being Herself: I've been working on-off (mostly off) on a THH rewrite with Sayaka as protag and working with Mukuro was a big part of the fun. I do wonder if, again, this would retread some of what was done in DRV3
Mastermind Alter Ego: Now THAT is a spicy meatball. Not a bad idea for an update in this age of AI. Chihiro fans would be pissed, but as long as it can avoid any Silence of the Lambs stuff re: the villain's gender identity, I say let em cook
Different Killers and Victims: This would need to be part of any remake, but a revamped THH would need more to it than just that. Major shake-ups in character dynamics, probably different motives, plus a new mastermind
Killing Game Show: The whole global broadcast thing is a twist in THH that gains major prominence in (again!) DRV3. But making audience participation part of the story from the jump would make for a very different story! Despite my initial reservations (Danganronpa is already a game show of teen murder!), this idea might have the most potential. Also, Monokuma as Mister Beast lmaooo
The Gritty RebootTM: Aw, but Danganronpa is so funny! That said, it's jarring for these teens to witness extremely violent and tragic deaths, then resume their antics the next day with usually no residual angst. Hiyoko memorializes Mahiru, Taka goes beyond grief for Mondo, a few V3 kids try to commune with Angie ... not much else! The games can't be too real about their trauma, but this change would benefit the story and characters ... Am I still on topic?
Choose Your Own Adventure: This is by far the most popular one (as of this writing) for a reason. Alternate versions of THH usually see fans picking their preferred survivors anyway. This could be a fun way of realizing that, and one that happens to fall in line with the original vision of the game
Change of Scenery: Someone with more knowledge of Japanese history should take over for this one. That said ... how about WWII-era Japan Danganronpa 👀
More Traditional Gameplay: So ... 3D puzzle RPG? Mascot platformer? Kart racer? Pretty vague option here. I do like the idea of more Another Episode titles that flesh out the overall story in varying genres, though that idea's more for spin-offs than a THH retelling
Customizable Makoto: Changing a character's traits and backstory sounds like ... replacing Makoto with an OC. Sounds fine enough, could make for some fun changes in character relationships (Leon hitting on a female Makoto) and other elements (changing the intelligence score changes the difficulty setting). Just saying that that this wouldn't be Makoto
Make It Spooky: We've already got a psychic (maybe two!), an AI that's more like a ghost, whatever the hell Kiyondo is, and a portrayal of DID so unrealistic it might as well be fantasy. That's only the stuff from THH proper - remember Komaru's ghost possession? There's a foundation here.
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*BBC narrator impression begins*
Oh dear. It appears that Rooster Teeth Productions have cocked up Miss Blake Belladonna's fairy tale allusion upon wrapping up the story arc with her Beast.
We now turn to the well-informed pair of siblings, Owl and Luke, for their conclusions on how the allusion to Belle even fits any longer.
*BBC narrator impression ends*
The hell happened to Blake and her supposed to being Belle? Sure, in the original Beauty and The Beast novel, Beast's real name was Adam. Duh.
But let's take off our "Fuck RT" caps for one second for a more in-depth analysis. Does her Belle allusion really even fit anymore?
nerd fixation on beauty and the beast goes into overdrive.
did it ever really fit? belle in most iterations wasn’t a freedom fighter, she wasn’t part of an oppressed class, hell in most reading & a love for books & adventure wasn’t a defining trait of belle’s. it was her kindness, contrasted to the spite & greediness of her sisters, who wanted only monetary things from their merchant father. hell, even with the development of blake in volume 4 where we find out she’s basically the princess of menagerie; that contrasts the original belle as she was a merchants daughter turned peasant after he lost his wares at sea, who’s sisters abused her & made her clean & do work in order to try and buy their home back. the only time she’s ever really applied to a “belle” allusion is reading with disney’s iteration of belle, & every other rwby allusion in that team takes from the original tale, not any other more modern iteration. also i don’t know where you heard the beast’s name being adam in the original tale from but from what i’ve researched, he was only ever referred to as la beté & adam was a name given purely for the disney version.
now, the most defining traits of blake in the show are her drive for justice, her determination, her courage, being defined as a faunus, but isn’t above despising or hating those who are prejudicial & pick on those who are smaller than them. taking all of those into account, she honestly fits esmeralda better than any other fairytale protagonist, or quasi protag in this case. so many of esmeralda’s lines in the movie feel like they could’ve come straight from early volume blake, so much of their defining characteristics match up far better than blake & belle. like some of these lines?
you mistreat this poor boy the same way you mistreat my people.
[ silence ! ] justice !
what do they have against people who are different?
you saw what he did out there. letting the crowd torture that poor boy? i thought if just one person could stand up to him then...
you speak of justice, yet you are cruel to those most in need of your help !
i don’t see any. [ see what? ] monster lines. not a single one. now, you look at me. do you think i'm evil?
LITERALLY THE ENTIRETY OF GOD HELP THE OUTCASTS !!
blake being esmeralda is the one time i would endorse rooster teeth taking inspiration from the disney iteration instead of the actual source material as there is a lot of anti romani sentiment in the novel that disney managed to make less egregious [ by having esmeralda actually be romani instead of a french girl who was stolen by them & was a sex worker. ] it also keeps in with her french theme & doesn’t allow for any vagueness around what her potential coding could be; blake can be poc & french, many roma are.
blake being esmeralda also lends to some actual poc representation on screen without falling into the oofness of making blake black / poc with her current mother’s name meaning a slur. the belladonnas could still exist in the storyline if wished, just don’t have them be blake’s parents. blake could finally count for some very rare romani / gypsy rep that we don’t see in media often, let alone animated media; & with her being nonsexualized most of the time & her defining traits being her righteousness & her compassion & drive for justice, she wouldn’t fall into the stereotypical traps of a sexualized gypsy.
also fun fact, red is an unlucky colour in romani / most gypsy cultures; which could be a cute nod to adam being unlucky for her & their cause.
so yes, this is my blake should’ve been based on esmeralda propaganda post ♥
#rwby#blake belladonna#owl.txt#answered#me & luke are two mean gypsies#banging our pots & pans outside of rt's hq at 3am#CLOWNS#Anonymous
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HELLO SOME OF YOU GUYS LIKED MISFITS AND SOME OF YOU GUYS LIKED GRADE 11 (i posted about that musical draft thingy back in march and um yea there have been a lot of changes fjxjf) AND GUESS WHAT DUDES I HAVE MORE MUSICAL CONCEPT SHITS TO RAMBLE ABOUT BECAUSE MY BRAIN IS WAY TOO HYPERACTIVE FOR MY OWN GOOD SO SIT BACK, RELAX AND ENJOY THIS CLUSTERFUCK
@ari-is-anxious have fun with this and i wish you the best of luck in trying to comprehend this-
+ Kasaysayan (which means History) - this is the 2nd musical concept thingy i made (the first one being Misfits) and yea i started thinking of this went I was 14. I kinda wanted it to tell a story of like the entirety of philippine history as narrated by students and i wanted to kinda emphasize how history has many faces and how many different factors essentially blur our perspective of what we view as the past. I also wanted to like draw parallels between what our ancestors have experienced and what we currently experience esp when it comes to sociopolitical and economic stuffs and I wanted to like correct a lot of misconceptions about ph history and provide more insight and info about ph's past (i.e how centuries of colonialism have affected our current culture and overall social mindset esp in regards to our want for validation from foreigners aka the whole #PinoyPride thing; how even though activism and revolution is like the main reason on as to why the Philippines even exists, it continues to be demonized here; the ideologies of some of our revolutionary heroes and presidents and why some of them are dicks; etc etc). Also I wanted to showcase like um PH music, art, and dance and how that has progressed and also regressed throughout the years (*shakes fist at colonizers*) and um YEA YOU CAN SEE WHY I EVENTUALLY AND RATHER QUICKLY DISCONTINUED THIS TJCJSJF THIS IS *NOT* DOABLE AT ALL THSJFHF it could work as a concept album and a one-time performance BUT NOT LIKE A LEGIT PRODUCTION SO YEA FOR NOW IT WILL STAY IN THE DRAFT FOLDER FJXNSJF but yea this idea then led to the next two ideas woo
+ Noli/Fili - started wanting to make this at the start of quarantine so like um march 2020 heck i even made a wholeass word doc for this fjdjdv so it's basically a ph-rock-rap-based musical adaptation of Jose Rizal's Noli Me Tangere (Touch Me Not) and El Filibusterismo (The Filibuster) (yes these two novels are like tne national novels here since rizal is our national here and yea these were originally written in Spanish) but the protagonist of El Fili (Simoun) takes charge of telling Noli's story in Act 1 while Noli's protag (Crisostomo Ibarra) takes charge of telling Fili's story in Act 2. Those two books have very different tones and those two characters have um VERY DIFFERENT world views so i thought it would be interesting to tell one's story through the eyes of someone different and yet also the same to provide a lot more insight on how the events in the novels affected these two protags (there is a Good Reason for this and um Filipinos who studied this in 9th and 10th grade know what i'm talking about fhshf if u wanna um know what i'm talking about and don't wanna read the novels (they are very long) i suggest looking up El Filibusterismo and um yea check out Simoun fjsjf). Like for example, there would be times that Noli's narrator (Simoun) (whose general demeanor is like um a lot more cunning and cynical and a lot more resentful of the events that have happened compared to Fili's narrator) would directly question the Noli protag's (Ibarra) actions while Fili's narrator (Ibarra) (he is a lot more um hopeful and peaceful compared to Simoun) often questions how Fili's protag (Simoun) turned into well um a very cynical and cunning person with a taste for revenge (I am trying my hardest to NOT spoil the novels here gjdjf) and yea because the story is set in Spanish Colonial times here, i wanna focus more on the sociopolitical aspects and problems in the novels and how those still remain relevant here, hence the ph-rock-rap-based music. Also I would like to point out that the curriculum here barely like goes into depth about the subject matter of the novels (esp the sociopolitcal parts) and how said subject matter shaped the characters here and HOW EVERY SINGLE THING IN THIS DAMN NOVEL IS STILL RELEVANT,,,so um basically the curriculum is currently missing the entire point of the novels since Rizal wrote these two with the intent to provide socioecononic and political commentary on the pure shit that many of the Filipinos experienced under Spanish colonial rule,,,SO THIS THINGY IS BASICALLY MY MIDDLE FINGER TO THE CURRICULUM AND ESSENTIALLY MY ATTEMPT TO SHOW MORE OF THE NOVELS COMPARED TO WHAT HAS BEEN TAUGHT TO US FJJSJFV this is gonna be a nightmare to write tho cause wow those novels are jampacked
+ Patron - if this ever becomes a thing, I will consider it the greatest thing i'll ever write gjcjdbc I REALLY WANT THIS TO BE A THINGY AAAA so the plot is barebones atm but it's basically about journalism and activism here in the Philippines (and how both can get you killed fjjsjf i'm not kidding these two can legit get you killed wah redtagging sucks shit and the anti terror law can suck even more shit) and how the youth are expected to be purveyors of the country's advancement and improvement despite the fact that our voices are oftentimes dismissed and even permanently silenced when what we say goes against what those in power want us to say,,,those this is basically Misfit's spiritual successor fjxjdjf both of those musicals share similar themes fjxns so yea expect me ranting about a lot of political stuff here and a lot of talking about the ideologies of past and present politics and revolutions and how those affect the masses and how the masses can shape them in return. There will also be talk on how journalism's role in shaping society and how proper dissemination of information and lack thereof can affect people's mindsets aND HOW JOURNALISM IS OFTENTIMES MANIPULATED TO MANIPULATE PEOPLE'S MINDSETS (STUDENT JOURNALIST AND ASPIRING PROFESSIONAL JOURNALIST'S RANTS GO BRRRRR YEA I HAVE A LOT TO RANT ABOUT).
Oh and also this musical is heavily inspired by both the noli and el fili novels and by spring awakening (Everything I Write Will Be Inspired By Spring Awakening dbjxd) in a sense that Act 1's active protagonist (who then becomes Act 2's passive protag) is named Elias and is based on both Elias from Rizal's novels and on Melchior Gabor (which is funny cause rizal's elias is NOTHING LIKE MELCHIOR GABOR SO UM LOOK IT'S GONNA BE HARD TO EXPLAIN JUST UM YEA IT'S MESSY) while the passive protagonist (who becomes the active protag by the end of act 1 and throughout the entire 2nd act) is named Cris Ibarra and is based on Moritz Stiefel and Rizal's Ibarra (more specifically um Rizal's Ibarra's growth into a very different character throughout the events of the two novels).
ALSOOO there is this one concept that made me really REAALLY want to make Patron an actual thingy and that is the existence of um Shadows in the show. Inspired by the voices in Deaf West Speing Awakening, these Shadows can always be found lurking on stage alongside their respective characters like um if Elias is in a scene, his shadow can also be found on stage somewhere. I kinda want them to like represent the characters' innermost thoughts and the other parts of themselves the characters' would like to hide through how the Shadows act on stage and um yea choreography gjsjf Patron is porbably gonna be very dance heavy so um yea it's a bit hard to explain so i'll just point to Alex Boniello and Daniel Durant's Moritz fjxjjf i kinda want it to be like that. The Shadows would be part of the show's ensemble and um yea lots of dancing and prop moving woo also at times they would be singing for the character they are assigned to like um while Elias would be in the middle of doing something on stage, his Shadow would be the one singing in his stead and when his Shadow sings, that's when the character becomes the most vulnerable to the audience because the Shadows often expose their characters' thoughts and worries to the audience that the characters themselves wouldn't really express. So like um the Shadows address the audience a lot gjxjsjd except for one aka Ibarra's Shadow. Instead of addressing the audience, Ibarra's shadow addresses IBARRA directly, often questioning Ibarra's actions (especially their hesitance in Act 1). ig ibarra's shadow is rather representative of what Ibarra would turn into in Act 2 when they take over as the Active protag. But um Ibarra's shadow still questions Ibarra frequently esp in regards to their risky actions so um yea Ibarra's shadow is kinda like the Fates the hadestown wherein they serve to sow doubt but over here Ibarra's shadow is meant to symbolize how insecure they feel in regards to their decisions which well, as the protag, make and break the show. Also um yea the rest of the characters' shadows also start addressing their characters more while the characters themselves start addressing the audience more so woo switcheroo! Also the dynamic that the characters have with each other is similar to the dynamics between the kids in Spring Awakening wherein they are just kids (well in this cause young adults aged 18-20) trying to figure out life in general and all that so woo
(also I would like to note that I really want Ibarra's role to be open to all genders in order to like make a statement that anyone can grow into the character Ibarra becomes throughout Patron but rn hmm i'm still thinking about how that will play out especially given that I kinda wanted Patron's Ibarra to have two love interests here aka Elias and Clara (kiiiiinda based on Maria Clara aka Ibarra's actual love interest from Rizal's novels but um YEA THERE ARE A LOT OF DEVIATIONS GJXSF) but tbh i'm still figuring out a way to make Clara have a much larger role here in terms of pushing the plot cause rn the Elias and Ibarra dynamic have an advantage since um active-passive protagonist switcheroo so I'm kinda thinking of a way to make Clara a secret 3rd protag that is both an active and a passive one? I dunno fjsjd honestly i'm still trying to figure out what Maria Clara represents in the novels cause I know for certain that Rizal did not write her to be a mere demure love interest so um yea WORK IN PROGRESS AND UM ALL IN ALL IBARRA CAN BE PLAYED BY ANY AND ALL GENDERS AND IBARRA IS PANSEXUAL BECAUSE I FUCKING WANT THEM TO BE GJSJJF)
+ Grade 12 - OKI SO LIKE I'VE POSTED ABOUT THIS BEFORE BACK IN MARCH BUT UM I'VE CHANGED SOME STUFF GJXJJD so anyways Grade 12 is well um designed to be a campy-please-don't-take-this-seriously-this-is-just-for-laughs-and-gags musical about 12th graders (i changed the grade to raise the stakes) that makes fun of Filipino TV tropes esp when related to teenagers while also providing a lit more insight on ad to what teenagers go through on a daily basis in terms of trying to grow into the person they want themselves to be while also trying to change to adapt to a world that more often that not goes against them. So yea it's not as heavy as the other musicals, heck I designed this after Preston Max Allen's Carrie 2 musical (dude check it out it has jenny rose baker and it's gold) so woo funsies but i also like this to mean something. Oh and also this is basically me ranting about Everything Wrong In The Philippine Education System (how it more often than not is really detrimental to the students' personal wellbeings through constant overwork and disregard of physical, mental and emotional health issues, its accessibility issues esp the issues experiences by those of the poorer sectors, the um very outdated info at times, how the system perpetuates classism and a shit ton of very detrimental social hierarchy bullshits esp through the implementation of the star sections (speaking as someone who's been in the "lower" sections and has also been in the star sections, I HAVE A LOT TO RANT ABOUT THIS ONE OH BOY FUN FACT I WANTED TO MAKE AN ACADEMIC PAPER ON THIS BUT MY 10TH GRADE TEACHER WOULDN'T LET ME) etc etc) plot is mainly barebones atm but um yea here are some of the updates to the characters: Kyla (formerly named Kate), Noel and Ella haven't changed that much but um I've decided to give the Halos Lagi Nalang number to Kyla and Max (nonbinary student that serves as a foil to Kyla in which Max is constantly being denied opportunities that they want while Kyla constantly refuses opportunities that Max wants; also yea i'll be talking about stories that trans and nonbinary students have experienced in both of my high schools through Max cause i really wanna bring attention to how the trans and nonbinary community is really being shat on despite the um sliiight improvement in the way schools treat the (cisgender) members of the lgbtq+ community; also they are just as ambitious as Ella (i envision her to be like um Draft Eva + Riley jfhdf) um yea major plot pusher woo I'd compare them to Draft Eva + Reese but um I Sincerely And Solemnly Promise To Not Screw Them Over In Act 2 fjjxfj) instead because they will be the ones with queerness being a much bigger factor to their individual plotlines compared to Noel and Ella.
The other main characters are um Marco (typical jock dude who's actually one of the more philosophical and introspective characters in the show; i want to like um highlight the whole sports scholarships debacle, how stereotypes can affect how people are treated in real life and also touch on the machismo culture that's um really being enforced here esp with him being an athlete and all; also he's really good friends with Max and through that friendship he learns that him slightly questioning his sexuality is a good thing so yea), Ruben & Lexi (i don't have that much planned for them atm because woo barebones plot but i do imagine them to be initially framed as the more antagonistic characters and have that like stereotype be taken apart as the show goes on esp considering that both are in the "lower sections" and are um more prone to stereotyping) aND A NARRATOR CHARACTER HMMM WHERE HAVE WE SEEN THIS BEFORE GJXJD oki but this Narrator (can be played by any gender as long as the actor IS VERY FUNNY LIKE COMEDIC TIMING IS A *MUST*) is based on the Narrator in PMA's Carrie 2 but I also want the narrator to be like um more crucial to the plot as the story progresses esp as they interact with both the audience and the characters a lot more so like um it's a bit hard to describe their exact role here because um BAREBONES PLOT FJXJD but altho they can't directly affect the story they are telling (cause so far my plan for them is like um they were a former classmate of 7/8 of the characters here but unfortunately they died due to a car accident), they can and do indeed influence the characters in it and all of the characters (except Kyla) know who they are (especially Ruben) so um yea. Also the solo I have planned for them is called Live On (which is um yea a spin off of Move On fjxjd) and through them, I plan to explore the tragedy of unexpected deaths and what happens to those left behind (this will be based on observations and accounts from many of my former schoolmates) and how many have yet to move on and how they choose to live on despite of that because they know that's what their former classmate, schoolmate, and loved on would've wanted.
SO OBVIOUSLY I OWE GRADE 12 TO SIR PRESTON MAX ALLEN GJXJFJD THANK YOU PMA FOR ONCE AGAIN INFLUENCING MY WORK WOO
+ Concepts - oki so this is the only musical so far that i wanna write solely in English nfjsj so this is inspired by Fun Home in which there are like versions of characters in different ages right? Over here there are 2 versions of 6 characters: the 17-18 year old ones, and the 27-28 year old ones. Through them, this musical will explore two main things: (1) the sad and depressing reality of having to give up one's artistic dreams and passions for the sake of practicality and (2) choosing to take a leap of faith and try to grasp on to whatever chances one may have left to live a life that means more than just making ends meet. Act 1 has the teenagers focus on Point 2 while the adults focus on Point 1; Act 2 has the teenagers focus on Point 1 while the adults end up focusing on Act 2. Once again, um barebones plot with even more barebones characters (heck i dont even have NAMES for them gnxnd) but i think it'll be pretty cool to elaborate upon the shitty circumstances here in the ph when it comes to artistic pursuits and how most of the kids I know are terrified of growing up because they don't want to give up dreaming even though that they know that they have to wake up. I also think it'll be cool to point out thay even though that yea situations like these suck, it'll never ever be too late to pick up the pieces and try again cause at the end of the day, life only ends when you say it will end: there will always be chances, you just need to be gutsy enough to grasp them. Also um yea I originally planned to post like a shit ton of poems this month that would basically be the lyrics of the songs that would go into this musical bUT I'M LAZY SO I'M THROWING AWAY THE POSTING SCHEDULE FJXJSJD anyways here r 2 of the poems/songs that i wanna make for this:
+ In 10 Years - a duet between one of the teenagers and their adult counterpart which is um basically the teen singing their optimistic yet really in-depth and mature perspective on chasing Point 2 while the adult sings about Point 1, wishing that they could tell their teen self about how disappointed they will be; i imagine this to be um kinda like the first version of Dear Theodosia but um more intense maybe fjdjf
+ Run - a duet between two teens who are best friends where one girl tries to convince the other to run and play with her in the nearby playground AND YES THIS DUET IS VERY FUCKING GAY JDJSJDF this was um originally part of Grade 12 tbh and it was supposed to be sung by Lexi and it was supposed to be about a 9th grade event that i personally was a part of where um 9th grade student researchers at a research seminar at a different freaking university took over the elementary students' playground when the seminar finished (I SHALL TREASURE THAT MEMORY FOREVER) and um yea it was basically about holding on to your childhood while you still can...aND THEN I UNINTENTIONALLY MADE IT GAY JFJSJSF Lexi is still getting that song about the research seminar event tho but um it won't be Run cause Run basically turned into a song that's not only about holding on to what's left of your childhood but also to the people you treasure that you know you have to leave behind sooner or later and um yea the girl that the one girl tries to convince to go to the playground agrees to that and then boom go duet stylized after 21 and Alone Now + I Don't Care by freaking preston max allen once again woo (i promise that this won't be plagiarism gndnd) (also altho the two girls have to go their separate ways by their graduation, they eventually meet again at the end of act 2 so woo hopeful ending for the sapphics
OKI THAT'S ALL FOR TODAY FHXHSHD THIS IS WAY TOO FUCKING LONG OF A RAMBLE GOOD GOD AAAAA SO UM IF ANYONE ELSE MADE IT TO THE END, I ONCE AGAIN WILL SEND YOU A SHIT TON OF CARBONARA-
#ari i'm so sorry but this is like...so unbelievably long and convoluted tjxjs GOODLUCK#AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS TJXJSF#so moral of the story is: my brain is too hyperactive for my own good#God help me#also God help those who are gonna try to read this fjxjs#so woo more musical concept rambles aaa#move on tw#move on#ask to tag#izzy's rambles and shit
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Reader helps Nagito in his plan to expose the traitor
Came up with this one on my own, just something for you guys to see my style of writing for if you want to request :)
Category: Angst Imagine
Specifics: GN!reader, obviously takes place in chapter 5, reader is Ultimate Actor
Warnings: Gore, swearing
I legit finished this but forgot to save and had to rewrite it all over again-
Nagito had told his lie of planning on blowing the island up. You, of course, saw through his bullshit, there was no way he had more than one bomb from the Ocagon. And he had just used it. So when you had stopped him walking away from the restaurant and confronted him, he let himself take his chances.
The boy had decided to confide in you after a minimal amount of convincing. There was no use in lying to you, especially when his time to execute his plan was limited. He told you what he knew. Absolutely all of it.
He told you how you were all Remnants of Despair, the 78th class’ killing game, Hajime’s “identity crisis”, about Junko Enoshima, everything. He even shared the fact that you had your left eye replaced with Junko’s while some other classmates, including himself, had other body parts.
While his claims were unbelievable at first, you could tell he wasn’t lying. He took you to his cottage and showed you the book he had received in the Octagon and he got some sort of poison. It was insane, yet it explained so much: Mikan’s behavior, Hajime being talentless, the swirls in Nagito’s and Mikan’s eyes when they got despaired, and so much more.
However, with this explanation, you had also gotten a hope/despair rant of how you all deserved to die for being Remnants. And for the first time, you actually agreed with his ideas. This part seemed to shock him slightly before he chuckled and explained what had to happen.
Whilst everyone else was on a wild goose chase for the bombs, the two of you got to work. You were told of the traps he already set up the night prior. He had you tie a spear above him, tie his legs and arm, and finally, made sure no one could hear him through the duct tape. You weren’t completely aware of why he needed that last point, but you guessed you would find out soon.
When leaving the warehouse to “meet up” with the others, his last words before you left had sent chills down your spine;
“Just make sure no one can hear me screaming, Y/n..”
——————
You had finally met up with your classmates just after they left the plushie factory where Nagito set his video message. You discreetly led them to the warehouse, using your talent as a shield of sorts. The domino fire trap had been set off, then they found the grenades in the break room, all according to plan. You made sure to stay back and not throw any of the grenades in case you screwed it up and took the poisoned one.
Once the fire died down, you had entered the next phase of this plan, the part you had to complete alone. You carefully led the group to Nagito’s body, not having to act as the shock of his self-mutilation took over you. Quickly shaking the nerves off best you could, you focused on the rest of the plan. Before you knew it, everyone was in the trial grounds being led by your lies.
That is, until a certain protagonist decides to call you out.
“Y/n, you don’t usually speak up so much during trials,” the boy gulped a bit and suspiciously looked to you. “Especially since you weren’t there until after we found the video.”
“I just want to help as much as possible,” you bit the inside of your lip nervously, “and like I said, I was in my cottage the whole time to avoid being blown up.”
“Then how did you know to lead us outside of the warehouse?”
Shit, shit, shit...
“I-I..” You had to think fast. So you did the only thing you could think of. Besides, all they had to do was vote incorrectly, right?
Lowering your gaze, you let your voice take on a dark tone, forcing a visible smile to tug at your lips.
“Because I killled Nagito.”
The room went dead silent for a moment. It was almost amusing. But you had to finish this plan out.
“I think we can start the votes now Monokuma, I killed Nagito-”
“No that’s wrong!”
Hajime’s voice rang out like an annoying alarm. You looked towards him and raised a brow for an explanation.
“Y/n, I don’t think you killed Nagito. I think you’re covering for something.” Hajime was getting closer to the truth, but thankfully your classmates were short tempered at this.
“What the fuck do you mean?! They already confessed!”
“Buddy, they already said they did it!”
“Hajime, they have just confessed their crime!”
“I don’t get the fuss, just start the voting!”
Their voices tangled together, most ready to start the vote. Unfortunately for you, Hajime apparently had backup.
“Y/n, if you did kill Nagito,” Chiaki’s voice had silenced the others, “then please give an explanation of what exactly you did.” You felt your chest tighten but remained calm on the outside.
Taking a breath in, you relaxed and focused on using your talent to complete your mission.
“When Nagito told us he’d blow up the whole island, I could tell he was lying, so I went to confront him. I knew there was no way he’d get a bomb large enough to take out the whole island. At least, not without any of us knowing beforehand. Plus he already used a bomb, and there was no way he had a second.”
You stated with a truth as you always did before delving into your lies, carefully weaving the two together. You were ready for this rebuttal battle.
“He refused to tell me anything, so I dragged him to the warehouse and tied him up. There, I tortured him to tell me the truth. When that didn’t work, I threatened a painful death.”
The thoughts of having to commit the actions you were describing caused you to pause for just a moment before continuing your faulty explanation.
“He began to mock me, saying I wouldn’t do such a thing. I decided to prove him wrong. I stole the key to his cottage off him and forced him to hold the spear above him. To keep him from screaming for help, I covered his mouth in tape.”
You felt yourself grip your trial stand just a bit tighter.
“I took the poison from his room and placed it in a granade for later. From there, I had set up the rest of the traps like Hajime said. All I had to do then was lead you all along and throw the grenade with the poison into the room-”
“I’ll cut through those words!”
Ignoring the odd word choice Hajime had been using in every trial, you turned to him, annoyed and nervous.
“Y/n, you’re the only one who didn’t throw a grenade,” the ahoged boy pointed out.
“Hey wait a sec- Hajime’s right!” Kazuichi joined in, “You were standing behind us the whole time!”
“So why the fuck are you lying to us?!” Fuyuhiko swore.
“They’re acting a bit like Nagito in the first trial..” Sonia was quiet but you still heard her.
“Do you know who the culprit is or not?!” Akane shouted from across from you.
Now you knew you were in deep shit. If you couldn’t keep the culprit’s identity safe, you would’ve failed. You would’ve failed to keep the world safe from the remaining Remnants.
After a few moments, you had your next course of action planned out. You lifted your head once more and smiled sickingly sweet. You were going to follow what Sonia had said.
You were going to play Nagito.
“Heheh..” Keeping the same dark but nonchalant tone as he always did, you continued, “Yes and no, Akane..”
“What do you mean, Y/n?” The plain boy seemed confused as ever.
“Well you’re the smart one Hajime, so I’ll give you one hint that should pull this together for you..”
The group had gone silent once again, awaiting your words.
“He used our talents to find a certain someone.”
Your head tilted to the side in false glee. Hajime had gone into his own mind for a minute, processing your claim. Once he figured what you meant by that statement, he turned to the group in shock.
“You’re telling us, that Nagito set this up?” He almost looked scared to say such a thing.
“Indeed I am,” You gave a crazed look, “I’m sure you know who the culprit is now, Hajime, don’t you?” The boy gulped once more.
“It’s the traitor.” Hajime looked down, “He was trying to kill the traitor.” At that, you erupted into Nagito’s signature laugh.
“Not quite, Dating-Sim-Protag.” You let out one more chuckle at your teasing. “It wasn’t the traitor he wanted to kill. It was everyone but the traitor!”
You continued your cackle. Having to laugh in his way made you feel guilty for your actions and words. You were hurting everyone. But what had to be done had to be done.
“They’re messing with us like Nagito did!” Kazuichi seemed more freaked out than everyone, as per usual. “Just tell us who the traitor is!”
“Not so fast, Kazuichi,” Chiaki once again calmed down the commotion, “I think Y/n isn’t lying. Nagito wanted the traitor to kill him and be the blackened, right?”
“Y/n,” Hajime kept his gaze towards the floor, “did you really know where the poison was?”
“In the grenades? Yes.” You felt this as your chance to come clean, convinced they couldn’t find the traitor. “Which one, however? I had no clue.”
“Then how would the traitor have known which one it was in?” Sonia was so close to getting it, but Hajime sealed their deal.
“They didn’t, Nagito used his luck.”
“Correct.” You decided to drop the Nagito facade, deeming it unnecessary now. Your face instead fell solemn.
“Why the hell did you help him, Y/n?!” Fuyuhiko’s voice called out.
“I’m sorry, I really am,” You let yourself speak the truth, “but it was what had to happen for the world to be safe. Safe from-”
“Ah, ah, ahhhh!!” Monokuma jumped in, “We wouldn’t want spoilers, now would we!”
You grit your teeth, feeling even more horrible that you couldn’t explain your actions. Although there would be no need to once the vote had started.
“Just..” Your voice fell weak, “..know all but one of us deserve painful deaths. And we’re about to get those as I assume the traitor wouldn’t reveal themselves.”
The room was completely silent. Even Monomi kept her usual whimpering to herself. Monokuma probably would’ve jumped up again if it weren’t for said traitor speaking up.
“I killed him.”
Chiaki’s voice made your head snap up. She must be lying right? No, there’s no way she’d help you and Nagito.. right?
“Chiaki what are you talking about?” Your voice trembled, knowing you won’t know if she’s helping you or everyone else until after the vote.
“I’m the traitor.” She smiled sadly, “Hajime, you want to do your usual run down of the case?”
Hajime’s face was in complete shock along with the rest of us. He quickly shook himself out and nodded. You could tell he didn’t want to vote on his (what you assumed to be) girlfriend. Nevertheless, he gave the story of it all.
“Here’s everything that happened: The person who actually arranged this incident was... the victim, Nagito Komeada. He kept a specific item inside his cottage that he needed for his plan. Monokuma's Special Poison, which he brought with him from the Octagon.
“Using the gloves and gas mask that he got from he military base... Nagito swapped the contents of a fire grenade he took from the Plushie Factory break room with that poison. When he did that, a specific item was left as evidence: the blue aluminum seal on the grenade.
“With that, Nagito finished making the poisoned fire grenade, took it with him to the factory... and put it back with the rest of the grenades in the break room.
“The next morning, Nagito appeared before us and declared that he hid a bomb somewhere... However, one of us wasn’t fooled. That person was Y/n L/n. Through some sort of convincing, Nagito had told them his plan and the two of them got to work.
“While we were looking for the bomb, that's when Nagito and Y/n headed over to the goods warehouse. In order to set up a fire, the two arranged the Monokuma panels in a line going from the door... to the curtain, and placed an oil lighter in front of it. From there, Nagito set his insane plan in motion.
“First, he hung the spear that he took from Nezumi Castle from the ceiling girder by its cord... then he had Y/n tie his arms and legs at the back of the warehouse with rope. However, they burnt off the rope on his right arm beforehand.
“In doing so, they made sure that only his right hand was free while his remaining arm and legs were tied up... As he gripped the tip of the rope hanging over the ceiling girder with his left hand... He laid down face-up, just beneath the dangling spear.
“But this was just the beginning of Nagito's plan, and then...he did something no one could've predicted. First, he covered his mouth with duct tape, and after making sure he was unable to scream... He made Y/n leave and stabbed himself with the knife multiple times in his left arm and in both of his thighs.
“Finally... He propped the knife on the plushie, and slammed his right hand onto the blade! He didn't just want us to think he was tied up, he also wanted us to think he's been tortured... Through all this, Nagito never let go of the spear. His plan still wasn't over...In fact, it was just about to begin.
“Meanwhile, we finally arrived at the plushie factory and found Nagito's message... After seeing his message, we instantly made our way to the warehouse, Y/n leading us there even though they had shown up after we left... But that was part of Nagito's plan. We opened the door to the warehouse, which inadvertently started the Monokuma panel domino effect...
“The panels fell, one after another, until they reached the lighter, tipped it over, and ignited the curtain. Shocked by the sudden fire, we rushed to the factory's break room to obtain some fire extinguishing grenades.
“We then aimed for the fire's origin point, which was the curtain, and unloaded the entire supply. It never occurred to us that one of those grenades was the poisoned grenade that Nagito had prepared... But because Y/n knew it was there, they made a crucial mistake in Nagito’s plan and their later lies... they didn’t throw a grenade.
“The poison sank to the floor, instantly vaporizing due to the intense heat, and spread everywhere... The poison gas quickly drifted to the curtain at the back of the warehouse, where Nagito was. Also, Monokuma's poison has a unique quality in which it becomes heavier than air when vaporized. That poison gas completely surrounded the area where Nagito lay face-up on the floor.
“There, Nagito inhaled the poison, and if it didn't instantly kill him, he certainly lost consciousness... Which caused him to let go of the rope in his left hand, and the falling spear plunged into his stomach.
“But even then, his plan wasn’t completely over as his accomplice, Y/n, had to lie in order to voting wrong. Unfortunately for Y/n, the traitor did something they couldn’t expect... the traitor revealed themself.
“This is all the information related to Nagito's plan. His true intention was to set one of us up as the killer... At the time, we didn’t know who the killer was... Because the killer wasn't aware they killed someone. Try as we might, if the traitor hadn’t revealed herself as Chiaki Nanami, the Ultimate Gamer, we could not reach that truth... That was Nagito's trap.”
You could feel yourself shake as the rest of the trial went on. You didn’t trust your voice to not get all shaky if you attempted to speak. Instead, you simply listened as arguments were made on Chiaki really being the traitor. As well as the insults occasionally thrown your way.
Soon, though, the guilt of failing Nagito and the world settled in as Monokuma declared that Chiaki was indeed the traitor, and possibly worse, correctly voted as the blackened.
———————
As soon as Chiaki’s execution had ended, you made your way out of the trail room and to your own cottage. You didn’t want to end up tied in the warehouse like they did with Nagito in the restaurant so many weeks ago. So when there was knocking at your door, you didn’t answer it.
The knocking continued, but you stayed in your curled up position on the bed. When the knocking finally ended, you sighed in relief, that is, until you heard Hajime’s voice.
“Y/n.. please come out and eat.. you haven’t had anything since this morning..”
That certainly wasn’t what you had expected to hear. You expected scolding, anger, anything other than concern. Hearing a sigh from outside the door, you decided to slip out for just a moment.
When you did open the door, you saw Hajime as he was about to turn and leave. His form seemed stressed, like he’d definitely been crying.
“You aren’t gonna tie me up, are you?” You tried to joke, but your voice was hoarse, your own crying to blame. Even so, Hajime let out a tired chuckle.
“No, I did have to stop Kazuichi and Akane from trying though..” He scratched the back of his neck. A small, breathy laugh of your own forcing it’s way out of you.
“Why aren’t you siding with them?” You looked downward towards your shoes. “I mean I did quite literally act as Nagito and try to get us all killed..” At that, you felt a hand on your shoulder, forcing your gaze back to Hajime.
“If your reason behind doing that was good enough for Monokuma to stop you from revealing it, I think it’s justified.” He gave a weak, but reassuring smile, “The others agreed with me once I pointed that out.”
“Let me guess,” you attempted to lighten the mood once more, “Sonia agreed with you so Kazuichi just magically changed his mind and Akane was forced to join?” The two of you shared a small laugh as he pulled his hand away and to his side. There was a short, awkward silence that followed before Hajime spoke again.
“Just.. please help us figure out what’s going on. With the information you now have, you may not be able to directly tell us, but you can help so much more.”
You felt yourself nod, slightly ashamed. “In that case, there’s something I need to show you and the others. I can go get it-”
“Let’s wait till you get something to eat, okay?”
Hajime, no, everyone was really willing to give you a second chance after you essentially killed two classmates? You couldn’t believe it. But it was the truth. A small smile made it’s way to your mouth and you nodded once more, this time more assured. This made Hajime smile in return.
“Now how about we go eat something before Akane gets to it all, Y/n?”
#fuyuhiko kuzuryuu#akane owari#sonia nevermind#kazuichi souda#chiaki nanami#hajime hinata#danganronpa#danganronpa imagines#dr2#dr imagines#dr2 imagines#danganronpa fuyuhiko#danganronpa akane#danganronpa sonia#danganronpa chiaki#danganronpa hajime#danganronpa kazuichi#nagito komaeda#danganronpa nagito
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Me vi obligada a rebloguear porque se perdieron estos fanfics, dios mio, me odio.
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BingJiu
The Yearning of Bamboo Spring by tomyam
A few months before the Immortal Alliance Conference, Shen Qingqiu was forced to bring along Luo Binghe to investigate a case of a demonic cultivator harvesting a mysterious plant. Things took a turn when Shen Qingqiu was struck with the flower generally used as an aphrodisiac. Luo Binghe had a gigantic fat crush with his cold, pretty Shizun, and was very happy to fuck- no, to cure his Shizun. But Shen Qingqiu was impregnated by his half-demon disciple… who also happened to be a Heavenly Demon?! Shen Qingqiu did not sign up for this shit!
Kitsune no Yometori by Gaby007
As he's busy wondering how to engineer his scum Shizun's downfall, Luo Binghe accidentally learns something extremely interesting about Shen Qingqiu and immediately pounces on the opportunity to drag the lofty Peak Lord by utterly destroying everything he believed about his very being. Of course, the ascendant Junshang gaining an Empress worthy of him is nothing but a coincidence. Truly.
How to Train Your Shen Qingqiu by tenmei_kj
Capitulo 47
What the protagonist of a stallion novel wants, he will get. Never did Shen Qingqiu expect the protagonist's golden halo to extend to dimension-hopping! And when the original Luo Binghe invades their dimension once more, he asks the impossible of the transmigrated Shizun. 'How to make a lovable Shen Qingqiu? WHICH PART OF SHEN QINGQIU LOOKS LOVABLE TO YOU?? PROTAG YOU MUST BE BLIND! SYSTEM FIX THIS BUG AAAAAAAAAHHHHH'
Moshang
The View From Here by ritualist
The first clue Shang Qinghua has about his problem is that he wakes up feeling comfortable.
an agreeable offer by tagteamme
Shang Qinghua gets snowed in at the office. With a dead phone and no way to get home, his best option for the night is the one presented by a rather prickly boss.
“How are you getting home?” Mobei Jun asks, and Shang Qinghua shrugs.
“Walking?” He suggests, and Mobei Jun narrows his eyes. “Well, no, it's too far and there are no cars nearby. So I was thinking I’ll just stay at a hotel…”
Shang Qinghua trails off as he is met with silence. Mobei Jun simply stares at him, his icy blue gaze pinning Shang Qinghua to the spot. Shang Qinghua thinks he can see an idea percolate behind the man’s eyes, but it is most likely a trick of the light. After all, what could he—
“I live a ten minute walk away,” Mobei Jun states more than says. “It may just be easier to stay the night at my place.”
what we get to hold by mossdunce
The thing is, after everything that has happened between them, Shang Qinghua remembers the softness. The sighed breath of his own name. There have been kisses pressed into his skin in a way that meant he was wanted, if only for a little while. In the morning, Mobei-jun rolled away and took the heat of that want with him, leaving only the raw ache of an intimacy, skinned.
Or; Shang Qinghua finds himself in love, and knows he is not loved back.
Just you and me...and your friend by preciousbunnynoiz
Toxic AF QPR Cumplane.
They are unhealthily enmeshed together and can't and won't let go of the other.
Mobei and Binghe just want to go on ONE date with their boyfriend without their roommate coming along
It isn't going well. But Mobei and Binghe are not quitters.
How to Train Your Shen Qingqiu by tenmei_kj
Capitulo 47
What the protagonist of a stallion novel wants, he will get. Never did Shen Qingqiu expect the protagonist's golden halo to extend to dimension-hopping! And when the original Luo Binghe invades their dimension once more, he asks the impossible of the transmigrated Shizun. 'How to make a lovable Shen Qingqiu? WHICH PART OF SHEN QINGQIU LOOKS LOVABLE TO YOU?? PROTAG YOU MUST BE BLIND! SYSTEM FIX THIS BUG AAAAAAAAAHHHHH'
BINGQIU
Like Real People Do by adspexi
When the Sun-Dew Mushroom Seed goes wrong, Shen Qingqiu's soul is called back to his body - in Huan Hua Palace, where Luo Binghe has been working diligently to find a way to restore his shizun's life. The method he found isn't one Shen Qingqiu expected.
LiuQiu?
Would you dual cultivate with me? by FakeAlice
Liu Qingge doesn't know what dual cultivation is.
TEEN WOLF
The Unquiet Grave by Dexterous_Sinistrous
“Don’t cry,” the figure’s voice stated in what was meant to be a gentle tone as he calmly wiped Stiles’ tears away. “We’ll be together again soon, Marcello.”
After returning home to Beacon Hills, Stiles finds himself being stalked by a vampire who has mistaken him for its dearly departed lover of yore. Terrified out of his mind, Stiles turns to the pack for help—even if it does feel awkward asking for help from his Alpha slash ex.
Hunger For Your Touch by WhoNatural
“I got you, my dad, a gorgeous home... a freaking cat... Guess I’m just waiting for the other shoe to drop.”
It does.
The Hope of Empty Men by Paintedsmile
While Stiles is trying to cope with everything he did under the control of the Nogitsune, Malia is quick to insinuate herself into his life and declares herself his ‘mate’. That would have been great if he’d actually been, y’know, interested, instead of trying to hold on to his sanity with both hands. His guilt combined with the fact that she has no idea about concepts such as ‘consent’, Stiles soon finds himself drowning. Will anyone reach him in time?
I Can Picture It After All These Days by crossroadswrite
Parte 2 de una serie, leer la anterior otra vez, por favor.
Derek’s not nervous. He’s done this a thousand times.
He just has to knock on the door, greet Stiles and somehow try to convince him to take his sorry ass back so they can date and live happily ever after.
Derek shifts a little on the porch, shaking out his arm like he’s loosening his muscles for a fight.
He can do this. He can totally do this.
Fanfics que están horriblemente abandonados en mi celular.
Necesito ayuda psicológica por muchos motivos, pero por ahora limpiemos las pestañas del navegador de mi celular.
Parte 1, porque joder, es demasiado, ¿Qué he hecho?
MERLIN
Groundwork by Footloose
Merlin's secret is no longer a secret and Excalibur struggles with the knowledge that they had a sorcerer among them all along. But the mission against the NWO won't wait, and Merlin and Arthur must soldier on.
Ashes, Embers, Flames by unpossible
Capítulo 2
Merlin sees him across a crowded living room and promptly spills his beer down the back of the couch and over some hapless stranger’s neck.
The Bond That Can't Be Broken by psychicdreams
Capitulo 7, caramba que me faltaba poco, un capitulo.
Morgana knew that she could enchant Gwen to make it appear as if she betrayed Arthur, but there was a good chance that wouldn't stop her from eventually becoming queen. For that she had to enchant Arthur, and she knew just the spell that would do it.
However, the consequences of her actions would have great repercussions later she did not realize.
The Truth Always Comes to Light by AliceTheBrave
“What did you do now Merlin?”
“Got cursed.”
Merlin slumped into the room and fell onto the bench of the table across from Gaius, laying his head dramatically on a book of something or other Arthur didn’t bother to look too closely at.
“Cursed.” Gaius echoed, unimpressed.
“Cursed.” Merlin sighed back, like some kind of weepy maiden.
“He can’t lie,” Arthur supplied, walking further into the room and standing behind Merlin, pushing his head off the book roughly. Merlin squawked and glared at him before shaking his head and turning back to Gaius.
"It gets worse."
Emrys the Really, Truly Terrible by lindenwaverly
"“Emrys,” said Gaius, raising the Eyebrow of Disappointment and flicking his gaze to where Merlin stood behind Arthur’s chair. “That is who you wish to have as your court sorcerer.”
Arthur nodded gravely, every eye in the council meeting upon him. “Camelot is dangerously close to division even now that sorcery is legal. We need someone who will unite us all, and I cannot settle for less. I’ll send riders out at first light chasing rumours and follow up any promising leads we have myself.”
He looked so beautiful when he said it, every inch the king, with the sunlight through the windows turning him gold. His voice had taken on that richness that sometimes infused Arthur’s words – that for the good of the kingdom voice, that let it be so voice, the voice that Merlin had come to understand meant another brick laid on the road to Albion.
Unfortunately, that voice had been co-opted for a fucking farce."
Or - In which magic is legal and Merlin is still lying for reasons that are absolutely, totally 100% valid and have nothing to do with his love for Arthur
At Arm's Length by sirencalls
“This is Emrys, the most powerful sorcerer who will ever walk the earth. It is our deepest honor to be able to offer his hand to your son.”
“Merlin?” Arthur asks, looking across the hall. Merlin looks the palest and the smallest Arthur has ever seen him. He looks like a scared animal that knows it’s about to be trapped, and that’s when it clicks for Arthur that no part of this is a joke. None of it. “Merlin, what are they talking about?”
TEEN WOLF
Regular Joe by tugela54
(Me quedé en el Capítulo 5)
Meet a mysterious, drop-dead gorgeous stranger (that has a peculiar yet endearing infatuation with wolves) have the best sex of your life, and then fall in love with him. That is what you do on your summer vacation in the idyllic Florida keys… Right?
Hide by dr_girlfriend
(Me quedé en el capitulo 3)
Stiles has been rejected so many times that it doesn't really surprise him when it happens again. Hurts, yeah, because dammit — he'd thought Derek was the one. Heartbreak sucks, and he's not so sure he's going to get over it this time.
You only live once... or twice by WonderWolf
“Anything,” Derek’s eyes are determined, boring into Stiles’. Stiles huffs a laugh, “Careful there, big guy. Don’t want to be promising anything to every necromancer you meet. Some might ask for your soul or someth—” “I’ll give you my soul to bring her back,” Derek says, his voice steady and strong with resolve, “if that’s what you want.” Stiles’ mouth gapes open for a moment before his brain kicks into gear and he stutters out, “N-no, I don’t ask for that. I only ask for money.” (Or the one in which Stiles is a necromancer who needs help stopping a rogue alpha and Derek is the solution, but at what cost?)
it's free (and always will be) by kellifer_fic, maichan808 (maichan)
Stiles starts looking around, like there's someone who'll rescue him from this painfully awkward situation and Derek can't blame him. All he can think is this is some kind of elaborate prank Laura is playing on him after she'd found his pile of Fangboy back copies last month. Or, the one where Derek has to marry a human to save Clawbook and it turns out to be Stiles. He's completely doomed.
Nothing Short of Perfect by GotTheSilver
In which Derek and Stiles are made aware of their potential and have to make a choice about what their relationship will be. “Let me get this straight,” his dad says. “You’re telling me a witch told Derek and yourself that you could be destined to be together and now Derek will be going to college with you?” Stiles shrugs, resting his hands on his legs to stop himself from fidgeting. “That’s about it, yep.”
You can't dodge Stiles Stilinski by stilinskisparkle
“And this is it?” he points at the first girl. “I saw you in first period, you barely bothered to catch any of the balls you were tossed. I’m pretty sure you spent more time on your cell.” The girl rolls her eyes, and looks completely unashamed of the fact she had her phone out in class. Derek knows Finstock would have stepped on it. “And you,” he points at the second girl, taller and with eyes that meet Derek’s coolly. “You can’t throw anything worth half a damn. And what are you,” he points at the boy, trying not to look him in the eye, and failing. “A hundred and fifty pounds wet?” The boy smirks at him, and Derek looks resolutely away. He’s now desperately trying not to picture him wet. "I can't work with this."
For Love is Not Ours to Command by weathervaanes
Where Derek's skills at thinking on his feet mean that he and Stiles have to act. For the sake of Stiles' dad, of course, for the sake of the pack. No personal interest interference at all, whatsoever. Right. -0- “Why does my dad say that you and your boyfriend are a bad influence on me?” “What?” “Yeah, what boyfriend? Dude, you are not allowed to not tell me crap like this. You didn't think I'd like be a douchebag or something. Right?” “No, wait, what? I have no boyfriend.” “He says you were with him at the police station.” Stiles blinks. “Uhm. Oh shit.”
Scrubbing Bubbles by MargaretKire
(Capítulo 8)
Stiles thought it would be easy doing janitorial work for an office. At first, it really was. The job only took a few hours in the evenings and it helped pay for rent and college. Sure, Hale Industries took up an entire floor in one of the downtown financial buildings, but the place was new and easy to care for. He didn’t even have to spend much time cleaning the huge corner office, because the trash was nearly always empty and the office itself was spotless, like no one used it. It was basically the perfect college job. At least, until the boss started staying late.
The Accidental Hale Brood by Julibean19
“I know, I just…” Derek trailed off, rubbing his forehead with both hands, frustrated that the right words weren’t coming to him.
“What?” Stiles asked honestly, pulling on one of Derek’s wrists until he could see his expression again.
Derek’s heart pounded in his chest so loud he figured even Stiles could hear it. He inhaled deeply and let the air out slowly through his nose, trying to keep his voice even. “When we take them places, and spend time with them, and make them smile… it feels like…”
“It feels like they’re yours,” Stiles finished for him, licking his lips before snagging the bottom one between his teeth.
“No,” Derek said, taking Stiles by surprise. “It feels like they’re ours.”
“Oh,” Stiles said simply, mouth still slightly open while he contemplated Derek’s words.
Or, the one in which Stiles and Derek have been BCPD partners for years when they are assigned Halloween duty and run into a couple of kids from the orphanage. One fake marriage and two real adoptions later, they somehow become a family.
Better Than Dead by heartsdesire456
When Stiles is gravely injured, the only way to save him is for Derek to turn him. However, Derek never did learn exactly what certain bites meant and, without this knowledge, he accidentally claims Stiles as his mate. Alpha werewolves mate forever. However... Betas don't.
You'll Be Mine and I'll Be Yours by tearsandholdme
(Capitulo 14)
“Oh my god!” Stiles hissed, his back colliding with the door. “Oh my god! I slept with my boss, oh my god. I'm a walking cliché!” It was supposed to be a one night stand. No complications, no feelings, no baggage. But then a missed doctor's appointment in his childhood comes back to haunt him and Stiles is left with a lot more than one very good night.
Special Delivery (subway edition) by FiannlyPhoebe
“You’re what?” Stiles yells. Derek jerks the phone away from his ear and waits a few beats before putting it back. “I’m adopting the baby I found on the subway last month,” he repeats.
Adding You to My Future by Nimpalous
“So, I'm Stiles.” he smiled warmly once he had put his unannounced patient down on the exam table. “I will poke and prod you a little bit to check for internal injuries, those that I can’t see because they're inside you, and some of it might hurt but it will pass, I promise. I will tell you everything I'm about to do and why I'm doing it so just stay calm and this will go like a breeze, okay?” Now, Stiles wasn’t stupid in any way, shape or form, he knew a were when he saw one… although he had obviously never seen a werecat before, and definitely not one as young as this one.
3 Idiots and a Baby by WithMyTeeth (Ylith)
Literalmente, solo me faltó el último capitulo. Es que soy estúpida.
One little abandoned Were-baby changes everything.
Bundle of Accidental Joy by tearsandholdme
Capitulo 20, carajo dos capítulos, me faltaron dos capitulos ahhhhh
Stiles is just trying to live a simple life. Have a job, pay his rent, and survive enough to eat his next meal. But then he's fired from his job, watches a mother abandon her baby, tries to stop her and picks the baby up, and now everyone thinks the baby is his. Even his very handsome and moody boss, Derek Hale, who forces the responsibility onto him at the cost of keeping his job or else.
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Au of the 1956 film Bundle of Joy
HARRY POTTER
Draco Black and the Prisoner of Nurmengard by starbrigid
Ya se terminó y yo me quedé en el 6 capitulo 27 carajo.
WHORE. BLOOD TRAITOR. MURDERER. I will accept no restitution but your life. Those are the words Theo sent Draco, once Draco Malfoy and now Draco Black. The words Draco will never tell anyone that Theo sent. As Draco enters into that fatal sixth year, those are the words that hang over him as he tries to protect his friends, his new family, his godfather. As he tries to protect the boy he loves from the boy he once loved, whose life he ruined with one curse. But Draco has another word now: Dantanian. The key to his wand, to his blood, to the past, to three mirrors, and to his aunt waiting to take her own forfeit from him. The pursuit of Dantanian will take Draco beyond his own past, to truths too horrifying to accept, and acts too evil to speak. To the Prisoner of Nurmengard.
Still Waters Run Deep by MissDrarryDawn
The Ministry bullies Harry into chaperoning Draco through their last Hogwarts year, because after going through trials and Azkaban, Draco's magic has become unstable and dangerous. To make sure Harry can monitor Draco successfully, they give him a magical device to help him, as well as strict orders for them to always stay close together. Harry thinks it's going to be fine, that he can put up with it, but then he gets way more than he bargained for.
Fairy Tale Princes and Other Nightmares by Elfflame
Capitulo 4
Draco has been having an increasing number of strange dreams about Harry Potter, growing more disturbing with each one.
Glassy Eyes by jrml210
Draco had just wanted to become stronger. He hadn't asked to fall in love. Or get his heart broken. Or become kidnapped. But hey, as a muggle had once said - The course of true love never did run smooth.
Best Laid Plans by PalenDrome (nerdherderette)
Draco picks at the hem of his robe. "I had a plan. I was going to woo Harry with my dashing charm and some earth-shattering sex. We’d fall madly in love, spend a year or two being sickeningly domestic, then get married and start a family."
Pansy hides a smile. “One out of five’s not bad.” Or the one where a magical isle, a secret wish, and Harry bloody Potter take Draco’s plan and upends it on its head.
I Knew I Loved You Before I Met You by Ladderofyears
All Draco wanted was to carry his beloved husband's baby. It had been a journey of years, of tearful nights and smiling while he was breaking inside.
It was finally happening though. They've tried for so long.
They're having a child.
Draco Malfoy and the Letter from the Future by DracoWillHearAboutThis
All he wanted was a way out. A way to do it all over again, and to erase his mistakes. He stared at the crackling blue flames so hard they imprinted in his vision.
At age eleven, Draco receives a letter from the future, which will make him change the path he has set out upon and lead him into a life he'd never dared to imagine.
Doing it Right by starsailorwrites
When Draco finds a time turner that will take him back to his younger body, he promises to himself that he'll be able to fix things. And who can possibly help him more than Harry Potter, the Boy Who Lived himself?
Everything That Happens (Is From Now On) by Lynds
Capitulo 4
When Harry Potter goes to bed on his eighteenth birthday, he learns he's inherited yet more special powers. He can travel into the past. And being Harry Potter, what else would he do with this new information but try to save the world even more?
Second Chances by Lorixjake
Capitulo 14
Ben Kenobi dies on board the Death Star. Instead of becoming one with the Force, he meets his old Master and is given the opportunity to go back in time to try and prevent Anakin's fall. Can he save his best friend or is he doomed to watch it all happen a second time?
no other cloud compares to you by ectocosme
Capitulo 27
Divine beasts sometimes fall in love with humans. Half-divine beast most often than not. Dragons always. Wei Wuxian visits Cloud Recesses when he receives the first 'hail' of who will become his mate. At least, he is determined for them to become mates. But life does not flow as the river, it is a meandering stream easily disturbed.
SVSSS
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Linaje by Say
Capitulo 7
Shang Qinghua pensó que llevaría una vida idílica y sin preocupaciones una vez que Mobei Jun y él se comprometieron.
¡Error!
¡Ser el futuro consorte del Reino del Norte solo le trajo más problemas!
Entre Linguang Jun acechando y buscando la forma de arruinarles todo, un ritual como respuesta y una sorpresa en camino, ¡Shang Qinghua no podría estar más estresado!
[NEW EXTRAS UPDATED!!] The Subtle Art of Trying to F*ck by firesandpixies
Shang Qinghua has been harbouring a crush on his ex-roommate and current boss, Mobei-Jun, for the past eight years. He has tried every method in the book short of standing in front of Mobei-Jun stark naked with a banner that says “Would you like to fuck?”, but Mobei-Jun remains oblivious to his very homosexual feelings. Having enough of an unrequited love, Shang Qinghua decides to give up on his CEO and revive his lacklustre acting career instead. But why does it seem the more Shang Qinghua tries to distance himself from Mobei-Jun, the clingier that man becomes!? Mobei-Jun aren’t you the CEO of a talent agency!? Why are you appearing on the set of every show I’m on!? Why are you rejecting every screenplay with kissing scenes in them!? What are you posting on your Weibo!? In short:
Entertainment Industry AU whereby Mobei-Jun is an acclaimed actor and CEO of a talent management company, and Shang Qinghua is a C-tier actor too busy trying to seduce said CEO to build his career.
under a wicked star by tagteamme
Caught unaware, Mobei Jun is kidnapped for leverage.
On the eighth day, Mobei Jun is broken out of his trance by the sound of something being tossed into his pit. It’s a lot lighter than what they throw food down in. He realizes that today, he is not tied down.
When he moves off the bed, he does not need the canopy post to support his weight as he stands up. The object on the floor glints in the firelight, and Mobei Jun crouches to pick it up. His face is immoving; slowly, he turns the An Ding peak lord crown in his hand, looking at the blood-soaked metal through the light.
Courting of the Consort by lanbanli
"Wait, was he technically being proposed to twice in one day? And worst of all this guy was kinda, sorta doing a better job at it. In some people’s opinion, were you to ask, he thought. Probably."
Shang Qinghua and Mobei Jun's relationship is ready to move onto the next stage, but suddenly someone new appears with an offer of his own.
A Place to Belong by Meekhayl
SQH never would have thought he would living plottwist and tropes. But here he was having a god in his apartment claiming they had been lovers while SQH does not remember a thing.
Fall back in love, solving godly political drama, self issues and several near death experiences. SQH living the bad novel take. It has a happy end though.
Warning: this is just a draft, which the author did liked too much to let it rot, but still hates it. Depressive story from a depressive author that yeets it out to have it out. Warning: It's gonna be painful to read one or the other way
BingQiu
"That happened. But it could be worse." - Shen Yuan after messing everything up 2k19 by Shireyaki
Shen Yuan finds himself transmigrated into a wonderfully fresh new life! Right next to his brother... who's going to die a miserable death! With the entire kingdom! Well, it's his moment to nope outta there - or at least help his brother out a bit...okay, yes he really needs to help his brother out here.
Time after Time by JustAWanderingBabbit
Sometimes you just have to keep trying until you get it right. Luo Binghe isn't sure if this counts.
Brunch Warfare by The Feels Whale (miscellea)
Shen Qingqiu was not unfamiliar with the concept of pain. It raised him, almost every corner of his life was filled with it. He has long since grown numb, unable to feel it anymore.
That doesn't mean he likes it.
So when he woke up in his bamboo hut on Cang Qiong, with his limbs still apparently attached. He sets out to create a new life, one where he wouldn't do. Anything.
Brunch went south about two steps away from the front entrance of Shen Yuan’s favorite cafe; a place with free wifi, big squishy chairs, custom mimosa pitchers, and an endless avocado toast special. He arrived bright and early with his computer bag under one arm and the intention of staking out one of the solo tables in back for the rest of the morning until he’d finished his current editing project.
The project in question was the latest offering from Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky after he broke out from webnovels, so endless mimosas and carbohydrates would be necessary for Shen Yuan to make it through with his sanity and blood pressure intact. Shang Qinghua was late on his most recent draft, but the earliest chapters had been finalized so he could get started on that at least.
However, his phone pinged just as he reached the entrance, and Shen Yuan made the fatal mistake of pausing to check the message.
Shen Jiu: Too late now, but brace yourself. We’re inside. Qi-ge set us both up.
Or: that one where Shen Yuan lost his break up, but Luo Binghe is about to kill it on the rebound.
Tea, Life, and C Points by Narci
Sin shipps, jaja creo. Pero lo pondré aqui porque Shen Yuan es el prota.
{Connecting…}
{Connection established! Host Shen Yuan is now bound to the role of Shen Yuan, Scum Villain Shen Qingqiu’s younger brother!}
{Activation Phras-}
Shen Yuan is unconscious before he can hear the rest.
BingJiu
Scum Villain's Retirement by anlee
Shen Qingqiu was not unfamiliar with the concept of pain. It raised him, almost every corner of his life was filled with it. He has long since grown numb, unable to feel it anymore.
That doesn't mean he likes it.
So when he woke up in his bamboo hut on Cang Qiong, with his limbs still apparently attached. He sets out to create a new life, one where he wouldn't do. Anything.
Scums Will Always Be Scums by pricklybuns
Capitulo 2
When Shen QingQiu got a second chance to relive his life, he planned to make things different but things didn't turn out as he expected.
Only in a Dream by cannon_fodder
“Why are you here?” Shen Qingqiu asked. Luo Binghe looked up and smiled. “Is this Sect Master not allowed to visit his shidi?”
After returning from that other world, the one with a kind and loving Shen Qingqiu, Luo Binghe decides to pay a visit to his own Shen Qingqiu while wearing the face of a dead man.
Luo Binghe will get what he wants from Shen Qingqiu.
One way or another.
acquiesce by brawlite
After seeing the gentle and loving Shen Qingqiu of the other world, Luo Binghe returns to his own with a hunger that can only be satisfied by one thing: a Shizun of his very own.
the darkest little paradise by Chesra
After Shen Qingqiu sacrifices his own eyes for the Sect Master, he leaves Cang Qiong Mountain to escape any further scrutiny. Along the way, he inadvertently picks up traveling companions - first a small, headstrong boy, and then a kind, obliging man - as he attempts to leave his past behind.
Unbeknownst to him, his new companion is much more familiar with who he really is than he would expect.
(or, a bingjiu yi city arc au)
FANFICS ELIMINADOS QUE NO VOLVERAN Y QUE JAMÁS PODRÉ LEER PORQUE CARAMBA NO LOS LEÍ CUANDO PUDE PORQUEEEE
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You've been visited by the random OC question fairy! :D ~☆
What is the strongest emotion your character has ever felt? What event caused that? How would they react if that happened again?
WOAH WAIT THATS SO COOL I DIDNT EXPECT SOMETHING LIKE THIS
hi omg!! that’s such a good question ahh, i’m gonna answer using the protag of my monster harem, which is snow!! this answer is gonna explain a lil bit of the story which is perfect because i’ve been meaning to explain the story for a while now B)
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snow and her father (who just kinda goes by “carver”) live in this kinda run down little townhouse in the middle of a busy street where he spends most of his time down in the basement working on his newest inventions, seeing as he’s an aspiring scientist/inventor and is currently working on what he thinks will be his magnum opus, a portal to another dimension. snow goes to a local high school, which is filled to the brim with rich and snobby kids, she’s one of the only few that lives off of minimum-wage (even less actually, because her father is paid by commission and she has to hold a part time job or two to help pay the bills). now carver, after years of work, has finally finished the portal — snow is incredibly excited because she’s so proud and supportive of her dad and she wants to be there for him during his testing of the portal, so the two of them take the day off right after it’s finished and snow watches eagerly as her dad, with much excitement, turns the portal on. at first, nothing happens and the two are incredibly disappointed, but mere moments later the machine springs to life and begins sucking everything in the room into it — including snow, but not before carver tries desperately to hang onto her to keep her safe. after snow is sucked in, the portal collapses, and a very distressed carver is left there to mourn the loss of his only daughter, who was the light of his life in painful silence.
SNOW ISNT ACTUALLY DEAD NO WORRIES!! she wakes up in the monster world with a bleeding head surrounded by her dad’s papers and 7 confused and very odd looking girls, and then that’s where the chaos starts B)
with backstory now out of the way, i’d imagine the initial separation from her father would be absolutely devastating to her — she’d probably be inconsolable for the first little while, terrified of this strange new planet and these wacky lookin people and panicking over how she’s gonna get back to her own world. during the story, she grows closer individually and as a group with the monster girls, and her feelings of fear and grief gradually fade away as she feels safer and safer with the group. if it ever happened again, there would probably be absolutely no fear in mind — she’d get to see her friends again, and she knows that she won’t end up hurt or worse as she’s been in their world before and has adapted to their culture.
basically all the negative emotions she feels in the initial landing are all caused by fear and lack of understanding about what happened and where she landed, as well as the uncertainty about whether or not she’d ever see her father again!
they get reunited in the end dw, neani is the real mvp of the story n makes a portal back to her world for the school science fair B)
#thank u for the ask it was so fun to write about ahh!!#monster harem is just an amalgamation of different tropes and popular media plots huh#it’s fun tho i like it#it basically just started out as fanservice for myself but i’m invested in my own story and characters now i love them sm#esp trixie....punk wife#y’all will be seeing so much art of her istg#liz peeps™#random-oc-questions-fairy#ghoul school™
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Please god do you have recommendations on the best series to watch
Some of my personal recomendations that I can list from the top of my head, I will be writing a lot of text below so hold onto your horses.
My Life- NatalieFirexx
Still running to this day and in its 12th season. So amazing to see the growth over the years. The first seasons are so funny in a sense of knowing a little Christian emo kid made them, but later seasons have developed into such an interesting story with beautiful visuals, incredible cinematography and relationships that you end up caring about so deeply. Every season has a new storyline to follow and it's always so wild remembering all that's happened in its 10 year run and thinking up what else is to come. Though season 12 is said to be it's final season and I look forward to seeing what Natalie has in store for us after the finale.
The story of My Life follows the Andrews family and their friends in everyday shenanigans, you know, the usual: teen pregnancy, kidnapping, vampires, murder, identity theft, angels, ghosts, hacked kids and love.
(There's also a My Life Abridged voice acting series of season 1 currently in the works, now at episode 5)
Smooth Criminal - SaltPepperSims1408
I always have fun rewatching this. Its only 2 seasons long and once again, a sims series that evolved over it's run. Following Abby as her life goes from normal (if you can call your illegal scientist parents experimenting on criminals in your basement normal) to having visions of her parent's test subject's past and joining his gang where hes the leader and battles a disease that gives him 10x the strength and intelligence of a regular human being. Catch is, this genetic disease is rare and makes you go insane. Most people with it end up insane by 30.
A series with a lot of guns, a badass female main protag, death, once again, teen pregnancy (which will be a common sims series theme), fun dream/vision sequences and in my opinion has a great sense of humour.
SaltPepperSims1408 also has a highly recommended voice over series (though incomplete) titled Apokalypsis, a group of young adults/teens trying to survive in an apocalypse.
CINDER - GrayLeeStudios
Based on the book CINDER by Marissa Meyer. Cinder is a beautifully made voice over series, great visuals, wonderfully told it's story, though it is incomplete at 5 episodes, each running 10-18 minutes. Loosely based on the original Cinderella story but in a futuristic Beijing, adding robots, a colonization on the moon and a deadly plague that has affected the Emperor.
The protagonist is the mechanic, Lihn Cinder. Despite how well known her work as a mechanic is, she is looked down on for being a cyborg and is presented for plague research where she and Prince Kai become closer.
Y O U T H - 1998sims
YOUTH is a retelling of Youth, also a sims series by the same creator that reached its second season before discontinuing. Already a series that dealt with real life issues and involved a lot of representation in its characters. YOUTH is a different experience with all new characters, even more representation and everyone still feeling real in a way where their identities don't define them but are in NO WAY erased at all, like they're real people. When comparing the two series you can see the similar storyline but now its so much fresher and with new characters, their decisions in these situations change. Follows the story of multiple characters in their teen years and learning to deal with being a teen or in some cases having to make adult decisions despite that. Currently up to episode 5 but there is still so much more to come.
1998sims is also the creator behind Avoiding Fate, Its Complicated (currently not available online) and the most iconic series that I HIGHLY suggest you watch; My Sims 2 Emo Teen Pregnancy Kidnapping Story
SOUP - SimFilm
This sims 3 voice over series is brand new, as of this month, with one episode released but I'm already in love with it. It has this deadpan sense of humour I can get behind and I'm really looking forward to seeing where it goes. It appears the episodes will be short and sweet but I really don't mind at all.
Our protagonist, Harris Gold, alphabetizes his life's misfortunes like a can of alphabet soup.
I quote "looks pretty decent on the outside, but when you open the can, you'll simply want to kill yourself"
The filming is wonderful, I love the voice actors and how well they play their roles, the story so far is fun and silly but deals with really strong issues other teenagers might have experienced growing up. Kind of like laughing the pain away and I adore it.
Raison D'etre - Cornymio
I haven't watched a lot of sims 4 machinima if im to be honest (since life to death stories are so rampant on YouTube at the moment and I'd rather just avoid them) but this series was very well made. Only 2 episodes but the voice acting is amazing, the sims custom animations are wonderful and at times the sims can be almost perfectly lip synced to the voices. Has an indie film vibe that I adore, very calming and I adore the camera work. This is a revamp of the creators old Sims 3 series by the same title.
Reine Reynolds enrols herself into a new school, here we meet a variety of students who are all relatable in one way or another with different relationships amongst themselves. A nice watch and won't take long to get through.
Marry Me! - Tickled007
This is actually a companion piece to Marry You by Maot Productions. Marry You has more episodes and progressed it's story much further but personal preference I like Marry Me!'s characters and humour better. Not a fault to the creators though, since I believe they wrote both stories together and I do still recommend you go watch Marry You as well, just my personal taste. I also watched this very recently which is probably why it's on my mind rn.
Marry Me! Is a 2 episode long (so far) voice over series that's quite high energy, it's about a loud "bitch" fashion designer called Serafie and a "pushover" called Carmion. Two opposites that somehow cross paths and after a money hiccup, Seraphie demands that Carmion marry her. I love how silly it is, very kdrama inspired. If you can get past the overused swooping sfx in episode one (which drove me insane but will go away in episode 2) I think it's super enjoyable.
Tickled007 is also the creator of Passcode Unknown, Too Popular and And... Obvious.
I feel it unfair not to mention Maot Productions other creations either since they were also a big part of the Marry Me! Marry You project. They created Sense Me Not!, Corrupted Souls, Cruel Temptation and Retribution
Other simmers and their series that I highly recommend but realise this ask is going to get extremely long
EkolarasMagnum
Their series tend to have this grungy highschool feel to them but I get behind it. They're known for their more interesting sims style, some people love it, some people hate it but it shouldn't get in the way of the interesting stories. I used to adore their work so much as a teenager!
- Advocated
- Strangers
- Volatile
PumpkinsAtTheDisco
Made a variety of sims series based on books (before these same books were made into films) such as the Hunger Games. This creator is incredibly talented from filming, writing to composing their own music. You can really see their improvement over the years too. I love their work.
- The Hunger Games
- Miss Peregrines Home For Peculiar Children
- Dimension 17
- Post Icarus
- Harry Potter and the Cursed Child
StarsToShinex
Their concepts are fun and they have good voice actors. Their filming and editing is nice but their work does have an anime feel if that's more your taste.
- Spotlight
- My guardian
- My guardian- the next chapter
- Seeking Faith
- The last day
MajesticFilms
Their aesthetics are lovely, they make a lot of visually pleasing machinima. I admire their editing.
- Paper Boats
- Arsonist's Lullaby
- Sounds of Silence
- Machinima playlist
ViNtAgELovv11
Still works on videos now and I adore their work, been around for 10 years and only continuing to improve. I believe their most known series wou lkd have to be wasteland but please check out their newer works too!
- Scum City
- Wasteland
- Wonderland
- Runaway
- ROADS
There are so much more and i might make a pt.2 or something along those lines one day since this ask is getting long. But I also have a list of simmers and series on my navigation page if you want to search through some more works.
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3, 8, 11, 19, 22? (for t he fanfic meme!)
Thank you friend! (Sorry for the long silence guys, I’m in the last month before my wedding and shit is Real. But it’s all for a very happy occasion X3 Just bear with me a bit longer.)
3. What is the best fandom you’ve ever been involved in?
Oh, NBC Hannibal, hands down. I’m sorry, not trying to be mean to other fandoms, but the Hannibal fandom has legit spoiled me For Life. Not only are all the people you meet nice (and that’s true for every fandom I’ve ever been in for the most part), but the content is NOBEL PRIZE worthy, the meta is ASTRONOMICAL, the fan vids and gifs are gorgeous, the content creators are generous, gracious, and actively involved with the fandom. Just... I hate to use the word, but the level of discourse in the Hannibal fandom is truly a cut above. I’ve never seen meta like I’ve seen Hannibal meta, not even in the LOTR or Untamed fandoms, it sates a deep and precious desire in my soul. I fucking love the show and I fucking love the fandom, bless every last little cannibal heart <3
8. How did you get involved in your latest fandom?
My wife had mentioned that her brother was starting to play this game, Yakuza 0. I had heard of it before but knew nothing about it. Her brother is a game designer though and has very good taste so if he was enjoying it, it was probably good. Still, I wasn’t particularly interested until my wife started telling me about it. How there were these two protags, a young man trying to clear his name and beat the odds and another young man with an impossible responsibility. And no matter how bad things were for the first young man, and they were Bad, things were somehow, always, 10 times worse for the second young man. Sounded like a pretty good story to me.
But I still didn’t get into it until I cam home from work one night and my wife was watching probably the fifth fight with Kuze. She wanted to stop since I had come home and she knew I wasn’t into it. But I didn’t want to make her stop so I sat and watched for awhile, because it was very pretty and the graphics were very smooth. And since we were neck deep in plot, she backtracked for me to Kiryu meeting Tachibana and then... him. The manager of the Grand. Oh brother, sister, I ain’t got words for my reaction to that.
So yeah, that’s approximately how it happened and then I just slammed through the rest of the games with her and here we are : |
11. Who is your current OTP?
Oh man, Yakuza’s got a lot of good ships. But mmmmmmm. There is but one king.
19. Is there a ship which you wished you could get behind, but you just don’t feel them?
Always! There’s always a couple ships in every fandom I’m in that are popular and I can see why, but I’m just not feeling them.
Daigo/Ryuji is the big one. I know it’s very popular, but I’m just not feeling it. I’m not quite sold on the whole rival thing, but then I don’t like how “rivals” are written 99% of the time. There’s a lot of cute Majima/Nishitani content on my dash right now, very sweet, and I get ti, but definitely not my ship. Hmmm, there are probably others, but those are probably the big ones for this fandom.
I go back and forth on Kiryu/Nishikiyama. I like it a lot as a past history thing, an aborted relationship, something they tried that didn’t quite pan out, or maybe something they wanted to try and never did. Especially because I think Nishiki definitely did have confused feelings on his side, or at least was willing to entertain romantic notions. His attachment and hero worship of Kiryu often skews that way. Not sure about Kiryu’s side. I mostly think he thinks of himself too much as a big brother to Nishiki, too responsible for him, to view him as a possible partner. But I think that background history would be a really cool thing to influence Kiryu’s take on later possible relationships. So I dunno, I go real back and forth.
22. Is there anything you regret writing?
Oh, woof, probably. If you look deep on my AO3 account, there’s some Sherlock shit. So, there’s a scarlet letter for that. I’ve written some trash for Doctor Who, I’ve written some good stuff too, but I’ve written some trash.
You have to understand, I’ve been writing fanfic since I was 12. That’s 15 years I’ve been writing, more than half my life. So sure, I’m embarrassed of the shit I started out with and that’s why I don’t have links back to my FF.net account. That was a different me from a very different time and not at all a reflection of who I am or my capabilities now. However. Those gave me a great deal of joy to write while I was writing them and I was quite proud of them at the time. I do not wish to do them a disservice or my past self a disservice by calling them bad. They’re not bad, they were the best I could do at the time and I was right for posting them. I try not to look back and cringe because that’s not fair to past me. I was doing my best and they made me happy. I’m still doing my best and it makes me happy. So really, how can I scoff or judge?
I do sometimes worry about all my unfinished works. If you’ve been following me for awhile, you’re probably well aware that I don’t finish shit all the time. And I know I have disappointed many with my inconsistency there and I do genuinely feel bad about that. I’m trying to do better and am very proud of myself to have completed two major works (major for me anyway) during the pandemic. That’s a great deal of progress for me and I’m proud of that. I’m trying to form good writing habits and expectations and not do injury to myself or readers with poor writing habits.
We all have regrets man but I think I can say that I work very hard at not having writing regrets and mostly I have been successful c:
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Unexpected Reunions
ayyyyyy, another Scintillam chapter! This time, we introduce another of our protags, who happens to be a uh... old friend of Leona’s. whom she bumps into again in one of ur typical fantasy towns after a few months apart ASDFLKJN oh yeah, and we also finally get to learn the name of the continent they’re on, so there’s that too-
hope y’all enjoy reading ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ
The road was long, most were. Magna Terra was not exactly a small continent. There were often miles upon miles between towns. So much space spanning the entirety of the continent, and most of it was empty. There were only so many people who lived there, they only needed so much of the space. They would expand their towns at times, yes, but rarely would they need to go out and make new ones. Though, it would probably make travel easier if they did. A few of the more industrious cities, however, name the Iron City and the Bronze City, have started to make an effort to make such things easier, by placing little checkpoints and resting stops for stagecoaches and carriages along the main roads and trade routes. Though that project was still in its very early stages. And carriages were generally not available to the general public yet, as most of your average people had little reason to travel so far.
For adventurers however, who traveled near and far for a living, it was a colossal pain the ass.
Leona bemoaned not having the funds for the stagecoach to the next town. She would have, if she were travelling alone, but carrying Great Beasts incurred a rather exorbitant extra fee depending on the size of them. Which... was sort of understandable, given that one person and a Great Wolf would leave no room for other passengers, but she still felt cheated. At least she had Artemis to carry her some of the distance, but both of them would have preferred at least a short rest for their weary legs. They had left the Great Forests behind them hours ago, and had stepped out into the Great Plains, the most open natural expanse in the land. The sun shined brightly down on the ocean of grass, while the winds stirring the expansive greenery, not a tree in front of them for miles. But the nearest town was thankfully within reach. Maybe not within sight, but within reach. They would ideally reach it before they both passed out from exhaustion. The human was much closer to that point than her animal companion. Great Beasts typically had amazing stamina. Their pace was slow, but steady. Better to keep up a slow pace and get to the destination later than to try and rush there and risk passing out before you can get there. The exhausted knight started to perk up a bit as the first roof came into view over the horizon.
"Oh thank whatever gods are listening, there's Springford..." She said, sounding as tired as she felt. "Oooooh I can't wait to get into a real fucking bed, good gods..." She leaned over, and gave her great steed a big hug, burying her face in her fur. "... not that you aren't comfy, Arte, but... just... bed..."
The wolf just gave a little huff. It wasn't obvious if it was one of agreement, but if one knew about her track record of breaking beds she tried to sleep on, they could probably make a guess. She was still just as eager for some rest, though.
As the two started getting closer to the town, it was easy to tell that it wasn't exactly a big town. It was barely big enough to be considered a town, honestly. It was small, and they could see it in its entirety from the little hill they were coming down from. Most of the buildings were houses, there were some shops and a single inn on the edges of the town, all of wooden construction, with some of the bigger buildings having stone foundations, and one could see a few farms not far, fenced roads leading back and forth between them. A sign on one of the crossroads leading up to the town pointed to the east, with the sign reading "lake". That was probably where they got most of their their water, and most likely some fish. There was also a well in the town square, as well. It reminded the knight of her old childhood village, to be quite honest. The only things missing were the trees in every direction and the old runestones. ... she missed that old village... She missed a lot of things. But, for now, they were at their stop. The Outlands were another week's journey from here, so they had to rest, resupply, and gear up while they could. They would stay for a day or two... or three.
The duo approached the inn first, of course. It was a sizable building, and it had a fair bit more stone construction than most of the other buildings, but it was still primarily wood. A sign over the door, swaying and creaking gently in the wind, read "The Mossy Stone Inn". Not the most creative name, but they had seen worse. Leona stepped down from Artemis' back, and gave her a few pats on the head and scratches behind the ear. "You stay out here, I'll get us set up, yeah?" She gave her a little smooch on the nose, prompting the wolf to let out a sneeze. "Be right back."
She pushed the doors open and stepped inside, chainmail clinking against iron plate meshing with wood creaking as she strode to the bar. She quickly got herself seated, giving the bartender a small glance, prompting him to come over.
"What can I getcha?" He said, his voice mild, if a bit gravely.
"Is the innkeeper... uh, in?"
"Oh, she's out of town, I'm taking care of the inn stuff right now."
"Ah, okay." She gave a small sigh, before reaching into her pockets. "You got an empty room...?"
"A couple, actually." He replied, giving a welcoming little smile.
She glanced around for a moment, before letting out another sigh, and drawing her gaze back to the bartender. "... do you take Great Wolves?"
There was a bit of a silence, as he stared at her, then at the stairs leading up to the rooms, and then back to her. Eventually, an answer came. "... how big's it?"
She pointed at the window behind her, where the animal in question was clearly visible.
He just let out a sigh. "... s'long as it doesn't break anythin', it can come in."
"I promise she'll be on her best behavior."
He grabbed a glass, and poured a bit of... what was probably rum into it, before sliding it over to a patron at the far end of the counter. "Thirty gold per night."
"... that's a little steep isn't it...?"
"We charge extra for animals."
"... that's fair. I guess." She gave one last sigh, and stepped back out of the inn. She gave a glare behind her as the door shut. "... who doesn't charge extra for animals..." She took the wolf by her snout for a moment, gently pulling her head down to eye level. "Okay Arte, you need to be on your best behavior, okay? If you break anything, I'm gonna get in trouble." A small grimace came across her face. "... so, no sleeping on the bed."
Artemis just nodded. She knew the drill by now. She was a smart wolf.
"Okay, good girl..." She let out a tired huff. "Lets go take a fucking nap..."
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The girls stayed in their room for a good few hours, enough that the afternoon had nearly passed, and the sun was beginning to set over the fields. It wasn't the comfiest bed she had ever slept in, but it was better than another night camping. As much as she felt at home camping in the woods, a warm bed, clean sheets, and soft blankets were still greatly appreciated every once in a while. The Great Wolf couldn't really share the sentiment, as the forests were quite literally her home, she did seem to prefer the warmth of an inn after long treks like this. Leona pushed herself out of her bed, giving a sleepy glance around the room as she tried to finish waking up from her nap. She let out a big yawn, running a hand through her messy bedhead. Her eyes eventually fell on the door. "... need to... get some food n'... water... n' other shit for the rest of the trip, before this fuckin'... inn... bleeds me fuckin' dry..." She mumbled, taking a moment to step into the bathroom and splash a little bit of water on her face. Just needed to wake herself up a bit more. Her companion was still sleeping soundly on the floor. She would leave her be for now. If either of them got into any trouble, the other would be able to tell. Benefits of the special little bond they shared. She stepped out of the room, dressed a little more casually than when she came in. Just a normal brown cotton shirt, some baggy pants, and a pair of boots. The bartender gave her a small glance as she came down the stairs.
"... look like you just crawled outta bed." He observed, currently cleaning a glass.
"I did." She replied, giving him a tired glare. She just stepped out into the town, wincing as the setting sun beating down harshly on her tired eyes. She started to glance around the town, looking for a sign or... something that would point her in the direction of the nearest shop. As she did though, her gaze caught something... unusual, on the roof of the inn. There was a person sitting on top of the roof. Writing in a journal. She squinted at them from the ground, trying to get a better look at them. Something in her clicked as she looked at them. "... 's that who I think it is...?" She mumbled, before going around the back of the inn. There weren't necessarily stairs up there, but apparently whoever was up there brought a ladder. Helpful. She slowly climbed up, one hand over the other, and, once she found her balance on the roof, walked over to the front of the roof where the other person was. She sat down next to them, legs dangling over the side, and gave them a small tap on the shoulder. It made them jump, and let out a little squeak, nearly fumbling their journal over the edge in their surprise.
"... is that you, Velda?" The knight asked, her expression showing hints of confusion, and pleasant surprise.
"... Leona...?" She replied, quietly, shakily setting down her journal. She was quite pale, and had an athletic, lithe build, black hair mostly tied up in a blue bandanna covering most of her head, her bangs spilling out the front, and a braided ponytail coming out the back. She had a small pair of glasses on her face, covering eyes that were a deep blue, and... strangely slitted. She fidgeted with the bottom of her tunic, which was blue and embroidered with white silk in so many intricate patterns, mostly flowers, with her sleeves tied up just above her elbows. Black gloves went up to her shoulders. She also had a pair of tall, knee height brown boots, and black shorts that ended just above her knees. She had a quiver at her hip, and a lovingly carved bow over her shoulder.
"Yeah!" She took the other girls hand, and gave a wide smile. "Oh man, Velda, it's been so long! How've you been???"
Velda shrank a bit under Leaon's enthusiasm. "O-oh, y'know... a-around." She said, her tone quiet and sheepish.
Without another moment's hesitation, she wrapped her arms around her in a great big embrace, making the other look, and feel, rather small and... twig-like, compared to her knightly build. She tensed up in the hug, but didn't make any moves to actually dissuade her from continuing. After a moment, she released her, and gave her a good look over. "You look great! Where'd you get those clothes? They look pretty, and... eeeellllvish...?"
"Y-yeah, they're elvish clothes." She replied, starting to straighten out said clothes, now that they were a bit ruffled from the hug. "It's. Very comfortable."
"I bet!" She let out a sigh, and leaned back onto the roof, setting her hands behind her head. She briefly patted the roof, inviting the other to lay down as well. She did so, after a moment. "How've you been?"
"Okay. You?"
"Could be better, just got done with the week long walk here from Rosevale, gonna make the next week long walk to Crystalbarrow..."
"... that's a lot of walking."
She gave a little laugh. "... and you still don't do a lot of talking."
"... I'm sorry..." She mumbled, meekly. “I-I haven’t talked to anybody in a... a-a bit...”
"N-no! It's fine! You talk however much or however little you need to!" Silence settled for a moment, the sounds of the townsfolk going about their evenings being the only things breaking it. Even the wind had quieted down to a whisper. The knight was the first to officially break it, of course. "... so was I right? Are you an elf?"
The answer didn't come for a few moments, but it did come. "... no." She took a slow, deep breath, and let out an equally deep sigh. "Checked with the elven scholars a few weeks ago, and there's... no records of any kind of elf that's really. Like me. A-and they said that I don't have the... the same kind of... spark... as an elf... so I... c-can't be one..." She slowly took the bandanna from her head, letting her hair flow out, and her... rather pointed ears show. "So... back to square one." She gave another sigh, before glancing over at the other. "... at least they gave me these clothes... that was nice of them..."
"I'm sure you'll figure it out, V."
"... yeah..."
Silence fell over the roof again. Leona's eyes turned towards the sky, while Velda's were fixed firmly on her own fidgeting hands. Surprisingly, the archer was the one to break the silence this time.
"... h-hey, Leona...?"
"... hm?"
She opened her mouth to speak, showing of the little fangs that lined it, but it took a few moments for anything to come out. "... are... a-are we still... g-good...?"
There wasn't an answer, at first. She took her eyes off the sky, and turned them to the other. She fidgeted and shrank her her gaze, but she returned it, anxious as it may be. Then she gave a soft smile, slowly wrapped an arm around her shoulders, and gently pulled her closer. "... yeah..." She said, her tone soft. Content. "... I think we're good..."
The archer was tense at first, of course, but she quickly loosened up a bit, and curled up closer to the knight. She wrapped her arms around her, and the other pulled her closer with her other free arm in return. "... I'm sorry I didn't go with you before..."
"It's okay... you had your own stuff to deal with."
"... I'm... I'm uh... actually headed to the Outlands, and... C-crystalbarrow is uh... a-actually on the way to where I'm headed..."
"Oh? Where you going?"
"... a-a cave, that uh... I've heard. M-might. Have some stuff that could help me find the information I'm looking for."
"I see... we'll, I'm just heading to Crystalbarrow to talk to an old friend of my dad's. I can go with you into this cave, if you want."
"... thank you..."
"Hey, it's no problem."
The two laid there on the roof, eyes on the darkening skies, or each other. It had been quite a while since they were like this. So close. Together. After a moment, Leona decided to speak up again. "Hey, I uh... I got a room in this inn. Only one bed, but... it's. Uh. Got room." She started to blush more and more as she went on. "And I'm sure you can get in the window, with your ladder."
"... you wanna cheat the innkeeper by sneaking me into your room instead of paying for another person?"
"He's the one cheating me with his prices." She retorted, giving a huff. "And I don't wanna cheat anybody, I just want to spend the night with you, and... um. Y'know."
"...?"
"You know."
"Mmmmmm...?"
"I-I just want you in my b-bed with me, okay? I... I haven't seen you in. M-months. I missed you. Okay?"
Velda considered her words for a moment, a sly little smile on her face, but no less blush. "... I think that sounds nice..."
The two smiled, and the knight scooped the archer up in her arms, giving her a little smooch on the cheek, and... started to. Scooch towards the edge???
"I- wh- Leona what are you doing???"
"Uuuuuh, getting down...?"
"You're going to break your fucking legs, take the ladder you maniac-"
"It's not that tall!"
"LADDER."
"Okay! Fine! Jeez!" With a disgruntled huff, she stood up, girl still firmly in her arms, and started to walk back towards the ladder. Why she thought it would be a good idea to jump from the roof of the inn was anybody's guess. Probably a heat of the moment thing. She set her down when they were by the ladder, and she climbed down to the bottom, while her new guest climbed through the window into her room. She probably would have climbed in with her, but the window was just a smidgen to small for her. She didn't want to get stuck. That would be really awkward. She made her way back to her room rather quickly, not even bothering giving the innkeeper the time of day as she passed by again. By the time she got back, her new guest was busy petting Artemis, who had evidently woken up while she was gone.
"-you are! You're the best girl Arte, yes you are!" She said, in a baby-talk voice, giving her all sorts of pets and scritches. Artemis was clearly not amused by the baby-talk, but she was letting her have her fun.
She just gave a small laugh at the sight. "I see you and Arte still get along great."
"Yeah! I-I'm glad we do! Arte's the only... the only animal wh-who uh... y'know... likes me..."
She gave a sigh in response to the last statement, and nodded. Yeah, for whatever reason, Velda was just... never big with animals. They usually avoided her altogether, some even growled at her, even if they were perfectly tame. The only ones that really liked her were Great Beasts. They assumed it was because of her... weird spark.
She stood up after a moment, giving the wolf one more little pat as she did, and flopped right onto the bed. "This is a nice room."
"Yeah, not worth thirty gold a night though."
Her expression shifted to a shocked grimace. "Oh- really? Thirty gold??? I mean, it might be worth... like, fifty silver a night, but thirty gold??? Jeez..."
"Yyyyyyyep."
"I suddenly no longer feel guilt for sneaking in here." She said, with a smirk.
"Good." She replied, with a little chuckle. She stepped over to the bed, and laid down next to the other. There we go.
"... it's been a bit since we've been in a bed together, huh..." She had a certain... tone, to her voice.
"Yeah, it really has..." She didn't seem to notice the others. Tone. Or pretended she didn't.
"... soooooo..." She slid closer, getting her slender arms around the knight. Her knight. "What were you thinkin' when you said you wanted me in your bed...?"
"I j-just wanted to. Y'know. Cuddle, V."
"Suuuuurrrrrrrre..."
"Why does your head need to be in the gutter."
"I think a better question is, why isn't yours~? It’s pretty fun in the gutter~"
Before another word could be spoken, Leona just. Quickly rolled right off the side of the bed and into the floor with a dull thud. Well then. "Ow- fuck-"
Velda snickered as she sat up and looked at her from the edge of the bed, sprawled out on the floor. Eventually she burst into a little fit of giggles, taking a moment to rein it in so she could speak again. "C-calm down Le, I'm just fucking with you."
"pLEASE DON'T WORD IT LIKE THAT-"
She just started to snicker again. "C-c'mon Leona, like you said when we first got together, what is a girlfriend if not someone to tease mercilessly~?"
“I never teased you that hard-” She let out a small groan as she started to sit up, face still red as a beet. "Why do you gotta be like this?"
"... only with you, Le." She said, smiling. And blushing. "Only got the nerve to be like this with you. Because I'm comfortable around you. I've known you for... ever. And. I love you."
"... I love you too, V."
"Now!" She flopped back onto her back, rolled over to the side of the bed she was on before, and patted it. "Get back up here, and we can catch up. I'm sure we've both been up to a lot since we last talked... and I promise I won't make you throw yourself from the bed again."
"You better not." With a sigh, she got to her feet, and back onto the bed. There wasn't a whole lot of room. But there was enough for the two of them. "... gonna get you back for that..."
"Sure you w-will...”
“... sooooo... you first, what've you been up to? Besides the elf thing?"
"... well..."
#Valerie Writes#Scintillam#Leona#Artemis#jus as a heads up; in case y'all have been wondering from the last chapter; i don't put the name of any like#newly introduced characters in their introduction chapter#unless it's someone i have talked about before introducing them; like leona or caecus#so!#next appearances of the last couple of new protags will be properly tagged#i dunno; i jus feel like it helps preserve the surprise asdlfkjn#anyway! this was fun...#hope y'all enjoy reading :0#n' reblogs are appreciated; if u did-
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characters 4 and 20, and questions 6, 9, 4, and 20 for the both of them? thanks bro. (puts on my tony the tiger fursuit and waits patiently on the couch)
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Okay, character 4 is Avery (and what a coincidence he would be part of the 420 joke ewe)
Introduction: So, Avery is a part of the same story as Jax, except he is a second generation character. He was adopted when he was 13 by Michael and Zenn (which I haven’t talked about them before now oops lol) Avery is writer, but he hasn’t been much for it lately as he’s been going through his rebellious phase with two of his siblings and two friends. Smoking, theft, vandalism, all that kinda stuff. (He’s 16 for whatever events will be happening in gen2)
Question 6: What was your oc’s relationship with their parents like? If they didn’t have any parents/didn’t know them, who in their life was the closest to a parent to them? Ah so his biological mother is dead and he doesn’t remember her. His bio father is a piece of garbage and is in prison currently. Avery doesn’t even really regard him as a father anymore, so I’ll talk about his relationship with Michael and Zenn (and Logan, who’s a father figure to him as well) Avery’s relationship with his parents are good overall. Maybe he has an unhealthy view of them because he’s not used to being cared for by an adult. He relies heavily on their attention to feel like he’s loved. Michael and Zenn of course do what they can for Avery, but they can’t let him get away with the illegal shit he does. Plus, they have three other kids they are raising as well as other responsibilities. Zenn is a lot more relaxed about rules and consequences than Michael is, but this doesn’t make him the favorite parent. Actually, Avery’s favorite parent (figure) is Logan. (Logan is Michael and Zenn’s boyfriend that stays with them sometimes.) Avery appreciates Logan’s sense of humor and interests. I also imagine that his schedule isn’t as busy when he stays with them, so he’s able to spend more time with Avery as a result. Most importantly, Logan has a carefree approach to life and Avery strives to be like him.
Question 9: How easily does your oc make friends? Do they have difficulty talking to new people? Why? I’d say not very easily. Before he was adopted, Michael and Zenn’s youngest kid (Razi) was his best friend. Before him, he had a hard time connecting with other kids. Neither of them can really explain why they became friends in the first place. It just made sense to them both. I think after he’s adopted, he has an easier time making friends with people, but he chooses not to be very social. He would rather keep a smaller group of closely trusted people he can be gay do crimes with. He doesn’t admit that he has a hard time talking to new people, but his energies and body language can be a little off putting to some.
Question 4: How does your oc fare in the dark? Are they scared? Do they trip over things really easily or navigate like they have night vision? (Or do they have night vision?) Avery prefers night over day. He honestly wishes it could be night all the time. Unless there’s a soft light coming from the corner of the room he’s in, he’s not really scared of the dark. He also navigates the dark pretty easily (and quietly) when he needs to.
Question 20: What is your oc’s personal hygiene like? Is it important to them? What is their daily routine for this like? oof Avery almost never washes his hair. He will only shower every three days, or every other day if he feels he needs it. His hygiene isn’t that important to him, and he will do the bare minimum to stay clean. He also doesn’t have a routine.
Character 20 is Renato! (oh boy)
Introduction: Renato (Ren) is for a different project. He’s technically one of the antagonists (but he’s poor innocent babey D: ) He has been reincarnated with the two protagonists, and every life they’ve ever had, one of the protagonists killed him and the other protag. In their last life, the murdering soul broke the cycle. So in this life, the main antag wants to set the cycle back where it was. To do this, she’s using Ren. I haven’t quite decided if there is a reward or blackmail involved yet, but it’s gonna be one of those. Also, prior to this, Ren was friends with the protags. He got into the medical field because his parents pushed him to, but he’s finding that he really doesn’t enjoy it. He likes collecting books and animal skulls, usually displaying them with flowers.
Question 6: What was your oc’s relationship with their parents like? If they didn’t have any parents/didn’t know them, who in their life was the closest to a parent to them? Honestly? As he got older, his relationship with them got worse. They aren’t very considerate of Ren’s desires and personal goals. They try to force on him what they want his life to be instead of what Ren would like. He was willing to listen to whatever they had to say when he was in high school, but after getting out of college he realized he need to put some distance between them if he wanted to be happy. He still respects them and appreciates what they’ve done for him in his life, but he knows he can never be close to them like he was. He also wishes to have their approval for his change in future plans, but knows that won’t happen.
Question 9: How easily does your oc make friends? Do they have difficulty talking to new people? Why? Ren is really awkward. When people get close to him, they find that the uncomfortable silences and random, jumpy conversations were worth it because he’s actually a really sweet person. He can talk to new people as long as they stick to whatever script he has made up in his brain. The second a person strays from the script, it takes him a lot longer to think of answers to questions, or ways to continue the conversation. He was an only child, and his only friend (one of the protags, Elodie) he didn’t meet until high school. Also, his father was very critical of Ren expressing himself in colorful ways when he was younger. This kinda stifled his spirit and made him feel unsure and lost in social situations.
Question 4: How does your oc fare in the dark? Are they scared? Do they trip over things really easily or navigate like they have night vision? (Or do they have night vision?) He gets nervous if he’s alone in the dark outside. This doesn’t really start happening until he meets Tambra (the antag), that bitch shows up out of nowhere and scares the shit out of him every timeas for navigating in the dark, he’s not that great at it. He lets his eyes adjust a little when it’s dark, but he still manages to trip over things
Question 20: What is your oc’s personal hygiene like? Is it important to them? What is their daily routine for this like? His hygiene isn’t like, super important to him. He will shower everyday, brush his teeth once a day, comb/style his hair, but he doesn’t go overboard with it. He will also skip showering a day if he’s too exhausted from the day before. Also, he stays in the shower a long ass time.
#omg anon i can't believe we have matching fursuits!!!#thanks for the ask!#long post#oc#oc ask#hnmp gen2#lmoaj
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50 QUESTION BOOK TAG FOR WORLD BOOK DAY
By me, Jess. I made this for world book day but then got depressed and didn’t post it on time lmao but here ya go kids be warned though it’s a long one. Also the numbers thing got fucked up and I couldn’t fix it. I got a lot of these questions from other tags I’ve seen and google so if something sounds familiar... that’s why.
Who or what sparked your love of literature?
Aw my parents fueled my book habit when I was a kid and took me to the bookstore all the time and since then all my teachers have always encouraged me and made me love books even more than I thought possible.
Do you have an ‘odd’ book habit? (page sniffing/never leaving the house with a book)
It’s true that I never go anywhere without a book. I got one in my backpack or purse or reading on my phone but it’s always there.
Do you have a book that you think has changed your life? How?
A lot of books and series have made significant impacts on my life (like I can’t picture elementary school without Percy Jackson being in my life) but like as a person I can’t think of any one book that has changed who I am. It’s been a team effort.
Which book have you reread most frequently?
I think I reread Hush Hush every year lmao idk why
You can meet any author and ask one question. What author would you chose and what question would you ask?
I’d want to meet Shakespeare and ask him if all his characters really were just that gay or if we’re all reading too much into it.
Best book published this year so far?
It’s only March but The Gilded Wolves by Roshani Chokshi
Imagine you’ve started a book and don’t like it. Do you see the experience through to the bitter end, or are you able to talk away from it mid story?
I used to always finish what I started but now that I’m in college and have a mountain of a TBR I’ll just stop.
What book is top of your wish list/TBR pile?
Uhh A Winter’s Promise by Christelle Dabos is on top rn
Favourite place to read?
My bed. Boring but a classic.
If you buy books, do you lend them out? Ever had a bad experience?
Of course. No all my friends respect my stuff and return them promptly.
What fictional character do you ship yourself with?
So many but I think Gansey and I from The Raven Cycle would make the best couple.
Weirdest thing you’ve used as a bookmark
I use whatever near me so I might have done something weirder but lately I’ve been using tissues because I have a tissue box by my bed and never real bookmarks. But I’ve used graded homework, a toy car, a crayon, earbuds, etc.
Favorite quality/qualities in a protagonist and antagonist
Wow this is s hard okay for protag I am a sucker for like stubborn, smartass with a martyr complex. Sad but true. Antags I love a good morally grey character or anti-villain. Tragic backstory but smart as hell. The worst (the best). Characters like the Darkling from The Grisha Trilogy, and Warner from the first Shatter Me book (I know he’s a good guy NOW but back then we all thought he was a sadistic and sexy villain).
Favorite genre and favorite book from that genre.
YA Urban Fantasy babyyy and that’d be City of Bones by Cassandra Clare or Lady Midnight by Cassandra Clare:)
Best/worst movie adaptation in your eyes
Best: Harry Potter and The Hunger Games | Worst: Percy Jackson
Do you prefer reading your own books, or library books?
My own.
How do you choose your next book to read?
Literally whatever I’m feeling like at the moment.
Your favorite word.
I love many words but I have a soft spot for “lively” and “lilt”.
Book that got you hooked on reading/how you got hooked.
I’ve always been obsessed with reading but The Peter and the Starcatchers Series was like my shift from nicotine to heroine.
Opinion on dog-earing, margin writing, ect.
I only write in the margins of books I have to read for class/textbooks. And that’s for studying and active reading purposes. For any other situation: no.
Top 5 immediate to read in no order
A Winter’s Promise by Christelle Dabos
A Very Large Expanse of Sea by Tahereh Mafi
Crazy Rich Asians by Kevin Kwan
The Wicker King by K. Ancrum
A Darker Shade of Magic by V.E Schwab
Most underrated book you’ve read
Definitely The Foxhole Court/ All for the Game series. Fairly small fanbase for some of THE most amazing books I’ve ever read. And the memes will have you in stitches.
What is the first book that catches your eye when you look at your bookshelf?
Fangirl by Rainbow Rowell because of the exceedingly bright cover/spine haha
How do you arrange your books on your shelves?
LOL I do not have a system at all. I keep series and authors together and that’s it. Everything is placed where there is room.
You have the power to change a book’s ending. Which ending would you change and what would you make happen instead?
I’d change the end to Allegiant and SPOILERS SPOILERS not make Tris fucking die over her shitty ass brother. I know why she did it but like Veronica girl wyd with that. And I’d want the entirety of Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins to be rewritten into a book that just focused on the domestic life of Finnick and Annie and no one dies.
Favourite book cover?
This is SO HARD. Either The Unbecoming of Mara Dyer by Michelle Hodkin or Ignite Me by Tahereh Mafi
Which book from your childhood has had the most impact on you?
My entire personality was shaped by the Maxmimum Ride series by James Patterson. For better and worse.
When reading, what do you value most: writing style, characters, plot, world building, pacing, etc?
Characters. I think all of those things are essential and as I read more and more, the pickier I get, but I find myself leaning towards being a fan of a book when I become obsessed with the characters. Like hey!! New friends!!! For my brain!!!
Do you prefer buying books or borrowing them from a library/friend?
Buying them even though I shouldn’t. It’s a real problem.
What books/sequels that are being published this year are you most excited for?
SO MANY OH MY GOD
Okay some of these already came out because it’s March right now but I’ll include them anyways.
SEQUELS/ SPIN-OFFS AND SHIT
The Wicked King by Holly Black; King of Scars by Leigh Bardugo; Dream by Natalia Jaster; Chain of Gold by Cassandra Clare; The Red Scrolls of Magic by Cassandra Clare; Capturing the Devil by Kerri Maniscalco, Call Down the Hawk by Maggie Stiefvater; Defy Me by Tahereh Mafi; The Shaw Confessions #3 by Michelle Hodkin
FIRST BOOKS
The Binding by Bridget Collins; Wicked Saints by Emily A. Duncan; The Gilded Wolves by Roshani Chokshi; A Curse So Dark and Lonely by Brigid Kemmerer; Romanov by Nadine Brandes; The Infinite Noise by Lauren Shippen; The Beautiful by Renee Ahdieh
Which fictional character would you want as a sidekick?
Percy Jackson because he’s my firstborn son and one of my favourite characters of all time. He is talented, smart, hilarious, an amazing friend, and the sweetest of boys (when he isn’t the sassiest of boys).
How many books have you read so far this year?
Only 15 I am so behind :(
What’s been your favourite read so far this year?
Oh man. Gotta be Crooked Kingdom by Leigh Bardugo :)
You’re stuck on an island with a suitcase big enough to hold five books. What books are they?
I probably shouldn’t cheat and say How to Build a Boat huh
City of Bones by Cassandra Clare
Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte
The King’s Men by Nora Sakovic
Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo
The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan
If you had to go out to dinner with any character who would it be and why? What would you talk about?
Will Herondale and we’d talk about books
Is there a book you have such a hatred for that you would throw it off of the highest tower knowing that the last copy of it will be destroyed so that not another living soul can read it or would you rather keep it and give it to someone else who might actually enjoy it?
The Scarlet Letter by Nathaniel Hawthorne or After by Anna Todd
Do you believe books make nice decoration?
I mean. I think they should be read before used as decor but I love showing off my books so I guess both. But I don’t believe in buying books for the purpose of decoration instead of reference or reading lol
Do you listen to music when you read? Or do you need complete silence?
I need silence or low amount of white noise. I used to read and listen to Taylor Swift when I was a kid but I can’t do it anymore.
Do you have a favorite book? If not are you in the group that believes there are too many great books out there to just choose one?
I tell people it’s City of Bones by Cassandra Clare but in all honesty no I don’t have a favourite.
Do you sleep with books under your pillow.
Nope
Do you go to the library or do you have a book buying addiction or are you one of those lucky people who is able to do both?
I do both. Mostly bookstore though.
Own any book inspired clothing?
Yes. Several items :)
Have you ever read a book in another language?
I read Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone, Tristan and Isolde, and Beauty and the Beast in French. And parts of Les Mis.
Strangest book you’ve ever read?
John Dies at the End by David Wong. Still not sure exactly what was going on.
Favourite type of non-fiction?
Memoirs babey
Favourite non-fiction?
Unbroken by Laura Hillenbrand
Favourite subject to read about?
History
Favourite book you’ve read in school?
Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte
Favourite work of Shakespeare?
Hamlet
Character you’d love as a mom or dad or guardian?
Hmm Sally Jackson, The Women of 300 Fox Way, or Tessa and Will (they totally count because The Last Hours Series)
I tag literally whoever wants to do this and @fangirl-daydreamer97 @acleeds12 @iviisastrawberry @221bdoom @bicycles-bees-bisexuals @betterthanapit @dippindots126 @vlctorvale
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What do you think would have happened if the killer and victim in each murder was reversed (how the double murders work is up to you)?
Had to think for a bit for this one
DR1
Chapter 1: In this one it would just be the case that Sayaka’s plan worked out and she managed to kill Leon. She might have even succeeded with it and could have blamed everything on Makoto, but she had no idea that Kyoko is a detective and quickly solved it, since her plan wasn’t that good. The cast would have been harsh towards her, since she was the first to kill, had full on planned it and also tried to blame her only friend. The only one who would have been on her side is Makoto himself
Chapter 2: I don’t think that Chihiro would have killed Mondo to keep his secret hidden and out of a jealous moment of rage. However it could happen out of an argument, where Mondo instead of killing Chihiro just flips out and looses it. When going too far with his words, Chihiro lost himself for a moment and killed Mondo on the heat of the moment (Just like Mondo did) Chihiro would have been too shaken to cover up the crime and probably just ran, however Byakuya came in and changed the sceneThe reason why Chihiro probably didn’t come clear was out of fear of dying, unlike Mondo who wanted to protect Chihiro’s secret
Chapter 3: I think Hifumi would be the killer in this one, where he is so sure that Taka is the one who stole Alter Ego. Celest was probably still planning and hid the laptop, but before she could move, Hifumi lost it and bashed Taka’s head in. He still had his whole plan set up with pinning it on Hiro, however without the confusion part. Celeste, who was keeping watch on them and saw everything, now had a problem because one the first killer would be allowed to leave if there were two, so she had to either kill Hifumi who was searching for Alter Ego or come up with another plan. However to avoid that her plan gets stopped, she decides to take care of Hifumi. First it worked, since the other was quite loyal to her. Until he found out that she had Alter Ego and realised what was going on, so he used his hammers and based Celeste‘s head in as well, before pretending to be attacked as well by justice hammer 1 and barely surviving
DR2:
Chapter 1: This one was hard since Imposter is such a pacifist, so I had to change them a bit. Nagito probably chose Imposter to let them in on his plan since they were trying so hard to keep everyone together. This led them to panic about the fact that the others were apparently so open about killing and they didn’t want to die themselves. So they jumped the gun and decided to kill Nagito first to get away from it all. However to their misfortune something went wrong and Teruteru ended there were Nagito was supposed to be and ended up being killed
Chapter 2: Fuyuhiko was probably still the one to finish the game and find out that Mahiru was involved in the murder of his younger sister. However he didn’t talk with Peko about it, since he wants to keep her out of the Yakuza business, and so he sends the filed to Mahiru with an invite to a private talk about it. However Mahiru completely misunderstands this and is sure that this is a trap to kill her in revenge, since Fuyu isn’t really the nicest person and also a Yakuza known for killing people. So she tries to trick him and get rid of him way before the meetingHowever Peko, who noticed that something was wrong with Fuyu, keeps a watch on him from the distance, which is a thing that Mahiru notices and they end up in a fight. Let’s say that due to the fact that Peko was about to meet the other girls to go to the beach, she is only in her bikini and doesn’t have her sword with her (because having it makes no sense), which leads to her being without a weapon unlike Mahiru who has the bat. However since this wasn’t her plan at all to kill Peko, she tries to then quickly pin it onto Fuyu who had no idea what happened only further down
Chapter 3: For this one let’s take Hiyoko, who is the one to remember everything due to the despair disease. However she was able to hide it just like Mikan was. First she sneaked into the hospital when she knew that no one was there and tricked Ibuki and took her to the Titty Typhoon to strangle her. However what she didn’t anticipate was that Mikan wasn’t able to sleep with worry over Nagito and decided to check up on him again, and while she was downstairs anyway she then checked the other rooms. To only notice in horror that Ibuki was missing, so she quickly began looking for her which led to her walking in as Hiyoko just killed Ibuki, who then also killed MikanWhen found out later on, everyone thought she lost it due to grief over Mahiru, however Hiyoko just laughs and tells them that she simply wanted to kill them because it was fun and that Mikan was just a nice bonus. She would then haunt the others for nothing everything they have forgotten, before happily going to her execution and leaving them all behind with only more questions to plague them
Chapter 4: Discussed here
Chapter 5: For AI Chiaki to end up as the one being killed, it could have two reasons. Nagito tried to kill everyone at once but ended up only killing Chiaki or Chiaki tricked Nagito into killing her. Since chap5 is always the one to be the most twisted, I would go with the latter. So let’s say that the Junko AI/virus was able to go into Chiaki’s code and make her want to kill for “the greater cause” and not see reasonable. So instead of trying to save everyone, she tries to get rid of Nagito who was threatening to kill them all. However since she can’t kill, she needed to trick him into doing it. Her plan wouldn’t rely on luck that much, but with way more logic to make sure that Nagito it the one to kill her by accidentWhen revealed everyone would loose it that she of all people would go to such lengths just to kill Nagito by torturing herself and making him kill her. Nagito however would totally loose it since he was planning on saving Chiaki, whom he had now killed
DRV3
Chapter 1: With them it’s quite easy. Since both tried to get the mastermind, let’s say that Rantaro has set a trap to get them. However Kaede was there too fast, while Shuichi was looking for help. When they got there, they only found Kaede on the floor. Rantaro would have come forth during the trial, but he tried to find the mastermind till he knew he couldn’t keep on going(Also imagine a DR game where the protag is the first victim. Just the moment where you run with them into a room and instead of a transition there is black with a bit of text and before you know it, you are in the POV of someone else who also runs inside and you see the protag dead on the floor. Now that would be a shock)
Chapter 2: Seriously, I can’t think of anything that would make Ryoma kill Kirumi...
Chapter 3: As I often say, I would have loved to see Angie as a blackened who got so delusional with her student council that she would kill to keep peace. So when Tenko tried to stop her and her student council from oppressing the students, she killed her. Korekiyo then genuinely wanted to try out the seance to talk to Tenko (no serial killer story here) and ask her who it was. However Angie didn’t like it one bit and so she let them do it after an explanation and used her knowledge about the crawling space to get into the room. She then followed Kiyo’s voice and during the last verse, killed him silently before following the salt back to the crawling space and escaping. Since she waited for Kiyo to end his chanting it took the others a bit longer to realise the silence from him and then find their way to light the candles to see what is going on, giving Angie enough time
Chapter 4: In this Kokichi’s and Gonta’s plan failed and Miu ended up killing Gonta instead of Kokichi. While Kokichi knows everything after seeing it, the whole tria would be about “one word against the other” where the others would need to decide if they trusted Miu or Kokichi more as they prove who is telling the truth
Chapter 5: The same plan as before, however when Kokichi is about to give Kaito the antidote, Kaito refuses since he knows he won’t make it long enough due to his afwul health. So Kokichi takes on the role of survivor of them two and kills Kaito, before he tries to end the killing game before he bleeds to death from all the wounds he suffered from Maki and making her a blackened as well
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All right, so I’ve had a couple of people come to me asking if I can beta for them, which is one part terrifying to one part flattering, and I’ve had several conversations this week with followers about writing stuff. And about writing improvement.
I think I have some Thoughts.
Look, in my opinion, I'm quite often a terrible writer. I’m self-taught, I’ve picked up some bad habits, and my grammar is... um. Let’s just ignore my grammar. I need to refresh several things. (Where the hell does a semi-colon go in a list? Please. Help. Also, I need someone to surgically extract about half my adverbs.)
But I see so many people ripping into new ficwriters with that old-school LJ "sporking" mindset and crying "MARY SUE!!!" and... honestly?
That's not criticism, that's... shiticism. Excuse my French.
Yes, sometimes someone has a bit of an ego on them, especially if they’re new to a skill. That might grate on you. Fair enough. But if they’re not hurting anyone or forcing you to read, ripping into a new writer teaches them nothing except to shut up and be afraid. If someone's actually willing to learn and put the effort in and this matters to them, why crap on something they've put their heart into? Especially if one doesn't have to read it or pay for it.
I see so many self-conscious ficwriters who either don't dare write anything or define themselves entirely by "Look! I'm so much better than those self-insert/Sue/[whatever's out of vogue now] writers!" and... that doesn't always teach you to get out of negative patterns. Often it just inculcates you into different negative patterns, and a crab-bucket mentality where you and your feedbackers are so busy panicking and dragging each other down you don't get anything written.
I'll be honest, overpowered OCs are usually not my cup of tea as a reader. But I'm not going to wander in and tear someone's fic apart, and if someone comes to me for help, I am certainly not going to take that trust and hurt them with it. I see a lot of nicely done OCs because of being in RPG fandoms. I love watching people build protags with distinct voices and backstories they've put a lot of heart into. And statistically, yeah, sometimes you get stuff old-school fandom would call Sue-ish, but I don't think a beginner story where someone feels out the ropes and is proud of themselves for writing is going to ruin my day or destroy the world. Why bother being a jerk about it? And how does that ever teach someone to write?
Five times now, from different followers, I’ve heard things like, "A commenter tore my story apart, and I still remember it, and I cried but it was such good constructive criticism." And it might just have been a bad day, but if someone made you cry? That’s... probably not constructive criticism.
If people had treated me when I started drawing the way a lot of people treat new writers in fandom -
Actually, no, scratch that. Some people in real life did treat me like that when I picked up a pencil. That meant I put it down again pretty fast as a kid and didn't even try to draw until adulthood, when I was scared stiff and fought the impulse to hide everything I was working on. And I didn’t start again because of tough love, I started because people encouraged me.
Everyone goes, "Those poor kids!" but I don't really care if a writer's six or sixty, the principle of "be a decent teacher" applies.
Silencing is not teaching. If someone’s left scared and despairing and stops writing, you have taught them nothing. You’ve failed.
Random anecdote:
When I was looking at going semi-pro (long time ago, and bluntly put, I wasn’t brave enough at that point), I used to be on a writing forum. They prided themselves on their merciless criticism and their “I’m just being honest!”
And you know what happened? Crab bucket.
No-one ever tried to get anything published or optioned, no-one ever went to go and try and find an agent, because they were all too busy tearing each other's stuff down to feel better. They might have had some good points, once, but it got buried in the echo chamber and the self-importance.
I went in expecting pros to be brutal, to have to gird myself all the time. And they... weren't. Because I'd learned to write partly in crab buckets. And the pros, the real pros, know well enough not to do that. Because they’ve got less to prove, and a lot of them are readers themselves, or were fans themselves once. They want new stuff in the field, not to scare someone off writing forever, because then they'll have no new colleagues and nothing to read.
The worst that'll happen is the slush pile, and that just means hearing nothing or a form letter. (Very few pub houses do bit-by-bit critique rejection letters these days, and if they do, the good side of it is you've caught an editor or an intern's attention and they cared enough to go through it. And they may remember your name next time.) I got rejected by Clarkesworld. And I had the shakes sending my stuff in, but when I got the rejection? It actually... didn't hurt. Because I was so proud of myself for even trying and being brave enough to do it, and hell, getting seen by a slush pile intern in the same magazine that published Alastair Reynolds and Neil Gaiman. Because it was proof I'd tried and once I'd done the big scary thing, I could do all the smaller magazines and the anon stuff.
"Tearing someone's fic apart" is not criticism, it's fuckwittedness, and if someone knows how to be a decent beta, they don’t do it. A good reader recognises their own bias and realises that they’re coming in with subjective thoughts and skewed views of their own, and doesn’t represent themself as the only authority.
If you’re here for actual writing advice and not just a rant (I am so sorry), here’s some advice I’ve given a couple of mutuals. This is what works for me, and it might not work for everyone else. I tried?
I had to stop associating feedback/concrit with personal validation, because that made writing an emotionally fraught activity rather than something safe. So I never have friends beta read or edit my work, because I want a professional boundary or a common goal there. I let myself make mistakes and grin at "This is awesome!" comments with fic, because it's a practice ground where I'm just doing my best, rather than trying to ask for money with it or make a career out of it. It lets me relax. I definitely don't mind concrit and rather like it; it's not the thing itself, it's having a pseudonymous boundary. For that reason, I still don't have friends beta read me. Strangers, fine, friends, no.
A lot of people tell me "bloody hell you're prolific." Well, that one's partly unemployment, can't lie. But before that, when I was working and studying... Learning to write aimlessly changed everything. Doesn't have to be big, doesn't have to be your next novel or a completed short story. I drabbled, focused on 4/500-word snippets and just capturing a mood/place/concept or building the start of a character, whatever took my fancy. Hell, for six months I took phrases I'd read on billboards as daily prompts. Basically, the aim is to start associating writing with fun and relaxation rather than pressure, and to get into the habit of sitting and doing it.
I tend to write longhand (for original, not for fic; it's how I keep the mental lines drawn). That sounds like a helluva lot of work, I know, but it also lets you see your progress so it's not just some... theoretical thing in cyberspace that you can’t quantify. (God, now I sound like I'm from 1995.)
I still am absolute shite at outlining when it's for fic. I'm too relaxed, but I try my best. What got me learning to do it for original and completely changed my process was Scrivener. (Also very good for essays!)
Relatedly, the final thing that made me get into a consistent writing habit was NaNoWriMo. It forced me into it because bluntly, I really wanted half-price Scrivener. And it never wore off. Three years later, I'm here. You might be too busy, too ill or too tired for it, and just not be into it, and that's OK, but a challenge like that can be fun.
If concrit and idea exchange are important to you, it may seriously be worth looking into writing groups, in real life and online. Absolutewrite, for instance, is very publishing-focused and a really good group.
And, most importantly of all:
Don’t give up. It gets easier.
#tru talks#writing#trulycertain talks bollocks#fanfiction#a little kindness can go a long way#i blame watching a lot of sam johnson on youtube#and thinking 'there needs to be more of that sort of thing for writing rather than singing'
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Crowbar Nurse Chapter 7 — An Unstoppable Hellish Army (of up to 10 People) Pops up out of Nowhere
“—Sera, hold on. There’s something weird.”
Our silly conversation ended abruptly when Kiryū raised his palm up, halting me in my tracks.
“The hell is going on there?” “Ah, that’s…”
I squinted into the distance. Ahead of us in the street was a crowd of people.
A crowd of people? Or was it a crowd of zombies?
There was a middle-aged man waiting around three zombies that were standing up straight with very good posture. It’s seemingly as if the man was just waiting to be attacked.
The only real movement was his breathing. Other than that, the man didn’t look like he is even trying to get away from the zombies. That’s a very curious situation.
“Hmm… it’s shocking how they are all just standing up so stiffly… maybe the three zombies are scripted to attack the NPC and correspondingly, the NPC is scripted to be attacked by them?” “Say what?” “In this game, there are often times where you can save people who are being attacked by zombies… they call them ‘survivors’.”
I pointed over to the four of them.
“The middle-aged man should be one of the survivors. He’s always scripted to be attacked around there… but I’ve never seen them just standing up straight like that. Maybe it’s a bug.” “Or maybe we just haven’t triggered them yet.”
“You know how we’re backtracking through the stage? Well, I’d wager that the zombies are scripted to attack when the protagonist gets close enough when going the correct way.” “Oh, I see, that makes sense.” “I’m not 100% on it, but it sounds reasonable, right?” “No, I’m confident you’re right.”
I had the feeling that Kiryū is someone who speaks almost too carefully as I shouldered my rifle.
“… well, that works to our advantage. Let’s do it.” “Hey, don’t go killing every zombie you see.” “But I’d like to save him.”
My bullets quickly found their way to the zombies and we walk up to the middle-aged man.
“… I’m guessing he’s thanking us in English.” “That’s right, as the official language of Confi City is English. This is exactly how they say thanks in the game as well… he’s a bona fide survivor.”
I ran around the NPC and then walked away from him with a satisfied smile on my face. The middle-aged man maintained a small distance as he followed me around. He would sometimes roll his neck or look around frightened at his surroundings with fright, but otherwise, he was generally emotionless.
… just like how they are in the game.
The man kept a blank face as he followed us around. When I picked up a broken off chunk of concrete off the street and handed it to him, he looked a bit more stern and brave as he wielded it a weapon.
“—Alright, we’re in business! That’s step one to raising an unstoppable army from hell!” “Wha—?!”
Kiryū was bewildered by what I had said.
“This regular everyday normal geezer… is our unstoppable army from hell…?” “…” “…”
We stood there in mutual silence.
“… sh-shut up! I told you it’s step one!”
I scrambled to quip back before falling back into silence.
“When you rescue NPCs in this game, they’ll follow the protagonist around. Give them a weapon and they’ll help you fight too!” We’ll rescue more and more of these survivors to build ourselves an unstoppable army. It’s all part of the plan!” “Man, you sure about this? The dude looks like he’s never even gotten in a fistfight before.”
Kiryū spoke as he pointed at the man. He’s right in that the middle-aged man is scrawny and doesn’t look like he’d be good in combat.
“The more we fight, the more we’ll level up. We’ll be fine. You get only a maximum of five followers in the game, but we’ll be so much stronger even with just five extra people… we’ll be an unstoppable hellish army….”
I pondered on my plan to raise an unstoppable hellish army to which Kiryū had nothing he could say but to simply mutually make eye contact with the old man. —but eventually, Kiryū’s eyes opened wide as he snapped his fingers.
“… I’ve got it.” “Huh?” “We can the soldiers in our ‘unstoppable hellish army’ as item boxes.” “What do you mean?”
I blankly blinked at Kiryū and he flashes a grin at me.
“I’ve got pockets of my own, but… look at them—they’ve got side and rear pockets too. We can stuff their pockets with herbs too and use them as walking inventory space, right?” “Oh, no…”
In other words, his plan is to pack items in the survivors’ pockets much like how Kiryū’s doing it right now. It looks so lame, I couldn’t stop myself from voicing my displeasure. However, Kiryū didn’t seem to care for my opinion and was already cramming herbs in the NPC’s pockets already, dirt and all.
“No matter how you slice it, that’s just too cruel…” “The end justifies the means, right? … besides, how much longer do you want to hold your phone in your hand?”
He points at the NPC with recently-filled pockets.
“You’ve got no pocket, right? Just stick it in any of his.” “What if he dies and disappears? I don’t want to put my phone on his body.”
I gripped my phone tightly as I shook my head at which Kiryū shrugged his shoulders.
“Alright, then pass me your phone; I’ve got an empty pocket.” “Thank you. If anything happens, could you please toss it back to me?” “Of course.”
We walked and talked at the same time and found yet more NPCs just standing around waiting to be triggered. There was a sickly pale white lady, a bad-tempered middle-aged white man, a lanky nerdy-looking white man… most of the characters in this game are white.
“… they get killed off pretty quickly, but let’s name our devils so we can tell who’s who. Let’s see… from the left, we have Bezos, Gates, Jobs, Buffett, and Zuckerberg.” “You’re really hoping for ‘eat the rich’ to happen literally, huh?”
Only a little ways more until we reach the Vital Watch. There weren’t any periods of awkward silence… or more accurately, we made sure to keep making small talk. Not that it was a bad thing though. This way, it was easier to distract ourselves from the fact that we’re inside a horror world… we were doing quite well in that regard.
—That’s right. We were merely distracting ourselves. Even in this bizarro world, it was important we stayed human and grounded.
On the way, we saved quite a few more people standing still. We gave them metal pipes, hammers, and other objects found on the ground so that we could fight and gain more experience. Everything was going smoothly.
“It looks like we can’t have more than 10 people in our squad…”
The NPC gave their thanks before continuing to stand up straight. I couldn’t help but feel a little disheartened.
“Probably because you and I are both considered as player characters and each of us can have five followers.” “Speaking of which, where’s the actual protagonist to this game?”
I scanned my surroundings as I asked my question to no one in particular.
“I wonder if we’ll meet at the starting point…”
We kept moving and came across a strange watch laying conspicuously on the ground.
“Oh, there’s our Vital Watch.” “Why’s it just sitting there in the middle of the road?” “Good question. It’s always just lying here in the game, but I’ve never really wondered why.”
I bent over to pick up it up.
“We don’t have much time to play with it, so let’s just keep it safe for now. We should hurry onwards.”
I strapped the Vital Watch to my forearm, just before the elbow.
“… why are you putting it on such a weird place?” “Huh? Because it’s more hygienic? Otherwise, it’ll get so dirty.” “Huh?” “Huh?!”
… though health professionals and engineers may disagree on where to wear a timepiece, at least we were successful in retrieving the Vital Watch.
It was no easy task, but we’ve finally made it to the beginning of the game. We were at a parking lot with spots for eight cars. Concrete walls surrounded us with burning cars and toppled trucks. There were also two zombies which were supposed to attack the protagonist… but maybe because they haven’t been triggered yet, they stood rigidly upright as well. Then I found something big. There was someone else standing upright… or it’d be more accurate to say he was standing in an odd pose—it was the protagonist of this game.
“Gah, look! It’s Nick! That’s Nick over there!”
I screamed out loud as I rushed over to the middle of the parking lot. Every one of the devils in our unstoppable army from hell clobbered the zombies with their weapons.
“Oh, I’ve seen Nick at the game show. So, he’s the protag, eh?” “What’s wrong with him…? He’s standing there like his character just got dropped into a level editor.” “You’re right… he’s just A-posing there.”
Kiryū corrected me with a more technical, detailed term.
“What… what should we do? We’ve got to get Nick out of here.”
Pushing and pulling did nothing to awaken him.
“Come with me if you want to live.”
Kiryū said with a smug look on his face.
“Wow, okay…” “You know, like Arnold Schwarzenegger as the Terminator? Hey, those were great movies.” “I mean, sure, but it sure dates you.”
Nick didn’t react at all to Kiryū’s one-liner, for better or for worse. I tried dragging him by the arm again. It was an odd sensation, so smooth and weightless. Nick didn’t seem like a human being… but rather an object.
“Well, we can just leave him here, can’t we? It might be safer if he stayed put so he won’t trigger any event flags.”
Kiryū shrugged as he spoke.
“Umm, would that mean that we won’t have to fight any bosses? That sounds too nice to be true…” “Iunno. Since we were able to get these survivors to follow us around, that would make us the protagonists… it might be possible that we’ll trigger the flags and we’ll have to fight the bosses like in the actual game.”
What he meant was that we’ll have to find out ourselves. I nodded along to him… until I remembered something he said.
“That reminds me, Kiryū. I’ve brought you here to the start of the game. What did you mean by breaking out of the game?” “Oh, that’s right. I was watching a video about bug testing and I was just thinking… if we keep our chins up and look for them, I’m sure we’ll come across some.” “Look for them?” “Yeah.”
He walked over to the far end of the parking lot… and before I knew it, he jumped head-first into the wall.
“Ow! That hurts!” “I would imagine so! What are you doing?!”
Kiryū squatted down clutching his head.
“I was hoping to find a buggy spot in the physics engine…” “What do you mean?” “Like clipping through walls and such.”
He might have hurt his head, but he was still able to thoroughly explain what he meant.
“In some buggy spots of a game, you can jump over and over again into the wall and slowly go deeper inside it. Then, eventually…” “You go out of bounds…”
I didn’t know you could do that.
“Now that you mention it, I’ve written about bugs in this game on my personal walkthrough blog… but I don’t want you to hurt yourself trying to find them either…” “…” “Kiryū, I think you’re an incredible person, but perhaps… you’re incredibly dumb.” “… shuddup…”
I let him stew for a moment, but then suddenly, there was a loud scream outside of the parking lot.
“Wha… what was that?!”
We both looked behind us…
Oh, no, no, no, no…!
Our unstoppable hellish army (all 10 of its members) were being attacked by a swarm of special zombies!
■Doom
A retro PC shooter, Doom is considered a classic by most people in their 30s and 40s in the West. For years, Doom was considered to be the game that defined the first-person shooter genre. Players control the protagonist—a brawny man slightly younger than middle age—and his arsenal of guns to single-mindedly blast away hordes of monsters from Hell (sometimes depicted as an army from Hell). Some may find this novel to be grotesque with its merciless depictions of gore, but it was for that exact reason why Doom was an incredible success in its day. The gibs and gore won the hearts of kids and the kids-at-heart. With over 10 million copies sold across every conceivable platform, this game is also famous for being ported to everything from cell phones to calculators. It has even seen theatrical releases and novel adaptations. In its day, Doom was notorious for the amount of gore, as unrealistic as it may be. It was perhaps the first video game to have such a great controversy over its graphic depictions of violence. Still, Doom is a game cherished by many and players continue to modify and add to the game—early versions of which were labeled “Doom clones”. Doom leaves behind a great legacy, both technical and historical.
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