#which i will draw the details of at a later point like when i actually get there
Explore tagged Tumblr posts
Text
-> The Paper Art Post <-
Let's make some Wild Life ep.3 snails together!
First of all, I make a sketch (usually it's already the size I want the final thing to be, because I'm a very lazy person).
At the point where everything is apparent enough to have a clear vision in mind, I go to my paper scrap drawer and think of what colors and textures I want to use (although sometimes I initially start from the color palette).
Here they are! But don't get too attached, we're gonna destroy them later >:)
And while we're on it, let's talk a bit about textures!
Textures are like candy for our eyes. They are an easy way to trick your brain into thinking that something is more detailed than it actually is, hence it adds interest and makes the whole piece fun to look at.
However, this is also why it's important not to overuse them â it's easy to get lost in the details and accidentally make your piece difficult to perceive as a whole.
You can make textured paper yourself using literally anything you can come up with: paint a sheet of paper with gouache or tempera, make swirls and gradients with watercolor or inc, scribble with colored pencils, make prints with various objects (I enjoy making prints of crumpled paper tissues soaked in ink), etc etc. Packaging film or candy wrapping also can be cool.
My only advice is be careful if you use gouache: some colors can make your fingers messy even after completely drying, so that has to be kept in mind to avoid accidentally leaving a dirty fingerprint somewhere you didn't plan for it to be.
For the tools I recommend using not only scissors, but a modeling knife/scalpel and an awl as well. Modeling knife makes cutting small things much easier, and awl comes in handy when you want to transfer a detail on paper but don't want to use pencil.
For gluing stuff I use gluestick, rubber glue and double-sided tape.
Now the fun part!
You can add details with colored pencils and markers â
As you can see, the process is pretty simple: I cut the piece I need from the sketch and transfer it to colored paper.
When it comes to assembling pieces, you can carefully cut them so that everything fits together like a puzzle, or simply glue them on top of eachother.
Keep the scraps (unless they're objectively tiny, of course)! You never know when you'll want just that amount of just that color or texture. It's also much more practical to cut new details from the side of the sheet from which you have already cut, rather than start from different edge every time you need a piece of that color.
Don't rush to glue things down! Along the way you might want to move something a bit or put one piece under another, and with quickly gluing everything it won't be possible. I like to work in big parts, making every object or character in the picture first and then, after putting them on their places and fumbling around, gradually assemble everything like lego.
Here are two parts of the picture (Bdubs' snail + Tango&Etho's snails) and a piece of red film I want to put on the background in some places. All that's left is to assemble everything by carefully gluing it on to my sketchbook page :)
You also can elevate certain parts of your artwork to create depth and areas of interest, using puffy tape or Đż-shaped / [-shaped piece of paper and glue. It looks really cool, but I usually don't do that because it's inconvenient for me to store & I like to keep everything in the sketchbooks.
TA-DAAA, we're done! The best thing about this technique is that you don't have to be good at actually drawing to make something that looks interesting!
Hope this post was useful and you've got inspired to try paper art for yourself! (And if you did â send me your art in ask box or replies, I'll be very glad to see it :] )
42 notes
¡
View notes
Text
So, about Douman's beheading scene in Abe no Seimei Monogatari...
#fgo#fate grand order#Ashiya Douman#decapitation#gore#ask to tag#half fate half abe no seimei monogatari fanart?#i was into it LOL so i had to draw before getting back to my planned art#i knew hakudou brings seimei back from the dead and then he kills him i did not realize he would be bound#they. they specify takate kote for his arms#which i will draw the details of at a later point like when i actually get there#i was looking ahead because of annotation in the scene where seimei comes back drunk and douman is going to kill him#went with a look closer to pre exile cause he's still in the capital at the time#sometimes you gotta draw your fav's really hot beheading scene. yeah
22 notes
¡
View notes
Text
FYI artists and writers: some info regarding tumblr's new "third-party sharing" (aka selling your content to OpenAI and Midjourney)
You may have already seen the post by @staff regarding third-party sharing and how to opt out. You may have also already seen various news articles discussing the matter.
But here's a little further clarity re some questions I had, and you may too. Caveat: Not all of this is on official tumblr pages, so it's possible things may change.
(1) "I heard they already have access to my data and it doesn't really matter if I opt out"
From the 404 article:
A new FAQ section we reviewed is titled âWhat happens when you opt out?â states âIf you opt out from the start, we will block crawlers from accessing your content by adding your site on a disallowed list. If you change your mind later, we also plan to update any partners about people who newly opt-out and ask that their content be removed from past sources and future training.â
So please, go click that opt-out button.
(2) Some future user: "I've been away from tumblr for months, and I just heard about all this. I didn't opt out before, so does it make a difference anymore?"
Another internal document shows that, on February 23, an employee asked in a staff-only thread, âDo we have assurances that if a user opts out of their data being shared with third parties that our existing data partners will be notified of such a change and remove their data?â Andrew Spittle, Automatticâs head of AI replied: âWe will notify existing partners on a regular basis about anyone who's opted out since the last time we provided a list. I want this to be an ongoing process where we regularly advocate for past content to be excluded based on current preferences. We will ask that content be deleted and removed from any future training runs. I believe partners will honor this based on our conversations with them to this point. I don't think they gain much overall by retaining it.â
It should make a difference! Go click that button.
(3) "I opted out, but my art posts have been reblogged by so many people, and I don't know if they all opted out. What does that mean for my stuff?"
This answer is actually on the support page for the toggle:
This option will prevent your blog's content, even when reblogged, from being shared with our licensed network of content and research partners, including those that train AI models.
And some further clarification by the COO and a product manager:
zingring: A couple people from work have reached out to let me know that yes, it applies to reblogs of "don't scrape" content. If you opt out, your content is opted out, even in reblog form. cyle: yep, for reblogs, we're taking it so far as "if anybody in the reblog trail has opted out, all of the content in that reblog will be opted out", when a reblog could be scraped/shared.
So not only your reblogged posts, but anyone who contributed in a reblog (such as posts where someone has been inspired to draw fanart of the OP) will presumably be protected by your opt-out. (A good reason to opt out even if you yourself are not a creator.)
Furthermore, if you the OP were offline and didn't know about the opt-out, if someone contributed to a reblog and they are opted out, then your original work is also protected. (Which makes it very tempting to contribute "scrapeable content" now whenever I reblog from an abandoned/disused blog...)
(4) "What about deleted blogs? They can't opt out!"
I was told by someone (not official) that he read "deleted blogs are all opted-out by default". However, he didn't recall the source, and I can't find it, so I can't guarantee that info. If I get more details - like if/when tumblr puts up that FAQ as reported in the 404 article - I will add it here as soon as I can.
Edit, tumblr has updated their help page for the option to opt-out of third-party sharing! It now states:
The content which will not be shared with our licensed network of content and research partners, including those that train AI models, includes: ⢠Posts and reblogs of posts from blogs who have enabled the "Prevent third-party sharing" option. ⢠Posts and reblogs of posts from deleted blogs. ⢠Posts and reblogs of posts from password-protected blogs. ⢠Posts and reblogs of posts from explicit blogs. ⢠Posts and reblogs of posts from suspended/deactivated blogs. ⢠Private posts. ⢠Drafts. ⢠Messages. ⢠Asks and submissions which have not been publicly posted. ⢠Post+ subscriber-only posts. ⢠Explicit posts.
So no need to worry about your old deleted blogs that still have reblogs floating around. *\o/*
But for your existing blogs, please use the opt out option. And a reminder of how to opt out, under the cut:
The opt-out toggle is in Blog Settings, and please note you need to do it for each one of your blogs / sideblogs.
On dashboard, the toggle is at https://www.tumblr.com/settings/blog/blogname [replace "blogname" as applicable] down by Visibility:
For mobile, you need the most recent update of the app. (Android version 33.4.1.100, iOs version 33.4.) Then go to your blog tab (the little person icon), and then the gear icon for Settings, then click Visibility.
Again, if you have a sideblog, go back to the blog tab, switch to it, and go to settings again. Repeat as necessary.
If you do not have access to the newest version of the app for whatever reason, you can also log into tumblr in your mobile browser. Same URL as per desktop above, same location.
Note you do not need to change settings in both desktop and the app, just one is fine.
I hope this helps!
#tumblr#[tumblr]#third party sharing#openai#midjourney#chatgpt#ai art#ai#fyi#psa#anti-FUD#artists on tumblr#writers on tumblr#illustrators on tumblr#tumblr update#oh tumblr#hellsite (derogatory)#âopt outâ no longer looks like a word#but still#opt out my friends#please#also if you want to leave tumblr i don't blame you but please remember to hit that opt-out button before you go
4K notes
¡
View notes
Text
Dungeon Meshi episode 21, being heavily dialogue-driven, was pretty straightforward animation-wise and let Ryoko Kui's stunning art speak for itself for the most part, but that doesn't mean that there aren't still some GENERALLY-INSIGNIFICANT-DETAILS-TO-SCRUTINIZE-AT-ARGUABLY-UNNECESSARY-LENGTH.
There was a strong emphasis on hands in this episode, particularly the second half, starting with this cut of Laios resting his on the Minotaur's snout.
The animators have taken this simple little panel (on the right) from the manga (btw, people who know more about this than I do, is there a name for this type of panel, which in film would be called an "insert shot"?)
and turned it into this highly detailed tracking shot that heightens the emotional impact of this moment for Laios. It feels very similar to the shot of Kabru bringing a piece of fish to his mouth that introduced him to the series!
The theme comes up again when Laios does a little bit of blair-witching in the corner after being rejected by house-kitty-pilled Izutsumi,
and once again a few seconds later with this added close-up of Marcille's hand when she tries to read the magical aura of the area.
This one clearly makes heavy use of reference footage, to the point that it almost looks rotoscoped until you notice little details like this line that warps unrealistically at the heel of her palm.
But with smooth, realistic motion like this, little details like that are much less important than the overall feeling of authentic shape and movement. This can be seen in a lot of Masaaki Yuasa's work, which often favors consistent motion and more frames over super polished individual drawings. Here's a thematically appropriate cut from Ping Pong for example:
(This one might actually be rotoscoped, I'm not sure)
If you pause on any individual frame, the lines look wobbly and inconsistent, but it comes together as a whole to create something that feels authentic - real.
The heavy detail in the hand anatomy and the way the skin wrinkles around the knuckles in these cuts feels like a hard departure from Studio TRIGGER's signature heavy stylization, but these realistic cuts have popped up here and there since the start of this show, and I think they fit Dungeon Meshi really well! It can be jarring go straight from wacky bombastic cartoonsmanship to realism, but while it is a show about the hungriest hungriest himbo and his family of weirdos, it's also simultaneously a show about anatomy, ecology, and the horrors of the human mindbrain.
This was expanded from an excerpt from this video where I break down the whole episode, so if you want to continue wallowing in the sludge with me, consider checking out the video!
Thanks for reading.
youtube
#I feel like whenever I take an excerpt from my video scripts to turn into a post on here it ends up more fleshed out and over all better#because I have more time to think about it but also because I know some people on youtube will get mad if I talk about hands for 10 min XD#dungeon meshi#animation analysis#laios touden#marcille donato#mini essay#youtube#video#original#Youtube
659 notes
¡
View notes
Text
SHIGARAKI VS. YUBEL: HOW TO SAVE YOUR VILLAIN
The failure of Deku to save Shigaraki isnât just a tragic conclusion for Shigarakiâs arc, itâs also My Hero Academia failing as a story. When I say the story failed, I mean the story has failed to answer any of the questions it asked its audience. Itâs themes, character arcs, everything that communicates the meaning of the story to the audience is no longer clear.Â
Saving Shigaraki was the central goal of not only the story itself, but the main character Deku. By failing in its goal you canât call this a good ending. In order to illustrate why this goal of saving the villain is so important to both Dekuâs character and the central idea of MHA, Iâm going to provide a positive example in Yu-Gi-Oh GX were the main character Judai successfully saves their villain. One of these stories fails, and the other succeeds. I will illustrate why under the cut.Â
BROKEN THEMES = BROKEN STORY
When artists draw they have to consider things like perspective, anatomy, shading, light, coloring. Drawing has rules, and itâs hard to produce good art without knowing these rules beforehand. If I draw something that has bad anatomy, you can criticize me for that.Â
Writing has rules, just like drawing. The rules of storytelling are important because writing is an act of communication. You can write whatever you want, just like how you can draw whatever you want, but if you break the rules the audience wonât understand what you are trying to communicate.Â
When I refer to MHA as a broken story, I am referring to the fact that it has broken the rules of storytelling. As this youtuber explains.
âI guess we should first define what broke and broken even means in this context. Has the story turned into an unintelligible mess? Not really. Value judgements aside, the narrative is still functional and fulfills the criteria of being a story. So how can a story that still functions be broken? Maybe to you it cannot. But to me a story that is still functional isnât enough. What I mean when I say MHA is broken is that itâs lost something crucial. A codifying style of structure, pacing and payoff that until a certain point was the core of its identity.âÂ
I could launch into a long-winded explanation of what themes are, but for the sake of simplicity I like to define themes in terms of âAsk, and answer.â The author asks a question to the audience, and then by the end of the story provides an answer. The audience is also invited to come up with their own answer which prompts them to think about the story on a deeper level. The question both MHA and GX are asking both its main characters and the audience is âCan you save the villain?â with the additional complicated question of âShould you save the villain?â This post will detail how both stories go about answering those two questions, and more importantly why those answers matter for the story.Â
With Great Power⌠You know the rest.Â
My Hero Academia and Yu-Gi-Oh Gx are actually similar stories once you get past their superficial differences. MHA is a story with way better worldbuilding, compared to a society where everything revolves around the trading card game, and people go to school to be better at a trading card game.Â
However, if you get past that. They are both bildungsroman, stories about the main characters growing up into adults. They both have an academy setting where the goal is for the main character to graduate and enter the adult world. They are both shonen manga. GX is the sequel of Yu-Gi-Oh a manga that ran in Shonen Jump the exact same magazine as MHA. The biggest point of comparison is their main characters, who both start out as young and naive who are driven by their admiration of heroes. Deku is a fan of All Might who wants to become a hero despite not having a quirk, because he loves All might who saves everyone with a smile. Judaiâs entire deck archetype revolves around âElemental Heroesâ and later âNeo-Spaciansâ who are all based on popular sentai heroes like ultraman.Â
The central arc for both characters is to grow up. Growing up for both of them not only requires figuring out what kind of adult they want to be, but also what kind of hero they want to be.Â
Now Iâm going to drastically oversimplify what a character arc is.Â
A character arc first starts out with the character being wrong. Being wrong is essential because if the character is right from the beginning, then thereâs no point in telling the story. A character often holds the wrong idea about the world, or has some sort of flaw that hinders their growth. The narrative then needs to challenge them on that flaw. It usually sets up some kind of goal or win condition. That flaw gets in the way of a character âwinningâ or achieving their goal, so they need to fix that flaw first. If their ideals are wrong, then they need to think about what the right ideals are. If theyâre too childish, they need to grow up. If they have unhealthy behaviors or coping mechanisms, they need to unlearn it and require better ones. Otherwise, that flaw will keep sabotaging them until the end.Â
Iâm borrowing the word âwin conditionâ from class1akids here because itâs an incredibly appropriate terminology. Midoriya needs to do âxâ in order to win, otherwise this victory doesnât feel earned. The âxâ in this case is usually character development. As I said before, a story where the main character hasnât changed from beginning to end feels pointless. Especially in Dekuâs case, he was already a brave, strong hero who would charge right into battle and defeat the bad guys in chapter one, so him defeating Shigaraki in a fist fight doesnât represent a change.Â
The story sets up not only âWhat does the hero need to do to win?â but also âHow does the hero need to change in order to win?â A character either meets these requirements before the end of the story, or they donât and usually this results in a negative ending.Â
MHA in its first half quite clearly set up both the final conflict of saving the villains, and also that saving the villains is its âwin conditions.â The hero shouldn't be allowed to win without first fixing this flaw.
From this panel onward the central question Deku is forced to answer shifts from âAm I strong enough to defeat ShigarakIâ to âCan I save Shigaraki?â However, much earlier than that All Might goes on to basically set up the win conditions of what makes the ultimate hero as someone who âSaves by winning, and wins by saving.â
All might: You can become the ultimate heroes. Ones who save by winning, and win by saving.
Therefore the story has set itâs criteria for what kind of hero Deku needs to become. If he wins without saving, then heâs failed to become what the series has set up as the Ultimate Hero.Â
Shigaraki and Yubel arenât just narrative obstacles, or boss monsters to be killed like in a video game. They are narrative challenges, which means that the character canât grow in any way if they donât answer the challenge presented by the characters. They are villains who actively resist being saved, to provide a challenge for two heroes who define their heroism by saving others. The challenge they pose adds a third question to the story and the main characters.Â
"Can I save the villain?"
"Should I save the villain?"
"If I don't save the villain, then can I really call myself a hero?"
In other words the decision they make in saving, or not saving their final antagonist defines what kind of hero they are. In Dekuâs case itâs even more critical he defines what hero he wants to be because the MHA is also a generational story, and several of the kids are asked to prove how exactly this generation of heroes is going to surpass the last one. The kids growing physically stronger than the last generation isnât a satisfactory answer, Deku getting strong enough to punch Shigaraki hard is not a satisfactory answer, because we are reading a story and not watching a boxing match.Â
Iâm going to focus on the last two questions though for a moment. Many people who argue against saving villains like Shigaraki argue he is a mass murderer and therefore isnât worthy of salvation. However, the act of saving Shigaraki isnât a reflection of Shigaraki himself, but rather the kind of hero Deku wants to be. It all boils down to Spiderman. In the opening issue of Spiderman, teenage Peter Parker is bitten by a radioactive spider and suddenly gains super strength, the ability to stick to walls along with other powers. However, being a teenager he uses these powers selfishly at first. He doesnât feel the obligation to use his powers for other people, and therefore when he sees a robbery happening right in front of him he lets the robber go. However, because he lets the robber go, the robber then attempts to hijack a car and kills his Uncle Ben in the process. If Spiderman had stopped the robber then he might have prevented that from happening. He had the power to stop the robber, but he didnât feel responsible or obligated to save other people. As a result Uncle Ben dies. Itâs not enough to have power, tiâs how you use that power that reflects who you are, therefore: âwith great power comes great responsibility.âÂ
The choice to save Shigaraki actually has little to do with whether or not Shigaraki is redeemable, but rather how Deku chooses to use his power, and what he thinks he is responsible for reflects who Deku is as a person. Deku himself also clearly outlines how he wants to use his power, that One for All is a power for saving, and not killing.Â
How he uses his power reflects Dekuâs ideal in saving others, and therefore if he doesnt use his power to save, then heâs failed to live up to his ideals. It's not whether it's morally right to save a murderer like Shigaraki, but rather the way Deku wants to choose to use his power. It's about whether he feels the responsibility to save others.
Judai explores an incredibly similar arc to Deku. They are basically both asked what kind of responsibilities a hero is supposed to have, which is also a metaphor for growing up to handle the responsibilities of adulthood. As both characters start out with incredibly naive and childish ideas about what a hero is. Therefore realizing what a hero is responsible for is key to them growing as a character. However, Judai is different from Deku. In some ways heâs more like Bakugo. Judai is a prodigy whoâs naturally good at dueling. He doesnât duel to save others, but rather because duels are fun and heâs good at it. Heâs very much like Bakugo, who admired All Might as a hero just as much as Deku did, but admired the fact that he was strong and always won rather than he saved others.Â
However, I would say both Deku and Judai are questioning what a hero is responsible for. They are both asking if they have the responsibility to use their power to save others. If they have to fight for other people, just because they have power. His first big challenge as a character comes from Edo Phoenix, who calls out Judai for not thinking through what it means to be a hero, and what responsibilities heroes carry. Judai duels because he thinks itâs fun. He will show up to duel to help his friends, but thatâs because heâs the most powerful person in the group. Even then itâs because he finds fighting strong opponents to be enjoyable. Bakugo will beat up a villain, but for him itâs more about winning then if the action will save someone or not.Â
Judai is more often than not pushed into the role of being a hero, he doesnât play the hero because heâs a particularly selfless person, and heâll often avoid responsibility if not forced. He has power but no sense of responsibility and the narrative calls them out as a problem.Â
Edo: Can you even fathom that, Judai?
For Judai, he canât understand the responsibility of being a hero. For Deku, he idealizes heroes so much he canât understand that there are people out there the heroes have failed to save. These two callouts towards Deku and Judai are discussing similar because theyâre both discussing where a heroâs responsibilities lie. Is a hero responsible for saving everyone? Is someone strong like Judai responsible for using their strength to help other people?Â
Judaiâs arc continues into the third season where heâs not shown to just be naive but ignorant. Heâs not just childish, he actively resists growing up because he doesnât want to take on adult responsibilities.Â
THe same way that Deku just decides not to think about whether or not All Might failed to save people in the panels above. However, in Judai's case he's actively called out for his choice to remain ignorant.
Satou: Now, which one is at fault? Judai: Isnât it the guy who saw it, but didnât pick it up. Satou: Not quite. If one is aware of the trash that fell, it may be picked up someday. But there is no possibility fo the unaware one ever picking it up. Judai-kun you are the foolish one unaware of the trash that has fallen. Judai: Are you calling me out for how I am? Satou: Your behavior towards me was atrocious. The worst was attending class only for credit, even if you were there you only slept. Judai: Yeah, I know. I was all bad, but it wasnât that big a- Satou: It is important. You see, one by one, the students inspired by your attitude were losing their motivation. Now if you were a mediocre duelist, then this would not be an issue. Satou: However, you are the same hero who defeated the three mythic demons. Every single student in the academy admires you. You should have been a model for this academy. Judai: Me, a role model? Are you kidding? I just do whatever I feel like doing. Satou: Great power comes with great responsibility. Yet, as you remain unaware of that, youâve spread your lethargy and self-indulgence.Â
seems like a minor issue, but look how Judai responds to the accusations. âI just do whatever I feel like doing.â Satou is arguing that Judai should pay attention to the influence he has on others because of his power, because how he chooses to use that power affects others. However, Judai chooses to actively not look at the consequences of his actions because he doesnât want to take on that level of responsibility, and therefore heâs looking away from the trash.Â
While it seems like it doesnât matter in Satouâs specific example, not thinking of the consequences, or how you use your power can have unexpected consequences. Spiderman doesnât feel like itâs his responsibility to stop a bank robber, and that bank robber shoots his uncle. You could still argue itâs not Spidermanâs responsibility to stop every crime in the world, and I guess no one owes anyone anything from that point of view - but Spiderman failing to act responsibility had the consequence of directly hurting someone else.Â
Spiderman has to live with that consequence because it was his own Uncle that was hurt. This is where we really reach the duality of Judai.Â
In GX, Judai is, symbolically speaking, The Fool of the Tarot Deck, the Novice Alchemist â a person brimming with infinite potential, yet one who is also supremely ignorant, who walks forward with his eyes closed and often unknowingly causes harm in his great ignorance. In this, he is very much the embodiment of the faults we most commonly associate with teenagers â selfishness, recklessness, shallowness, a lack of dedication or empathy when itâs most needed. Like most people, he has good traits that work to balance out some of the above, but his narrative path through GX ends up being that of the flawed hero undone by his faults â and then that of the atoner, the repentant sinner. In his case, the mistakes of his teenage years are the catalyst for his growth from a boy into a man burdened with duty and purpose. Judai is someone with infinite potential, with great power, but also ignorant on how he should use that power, and that makes him an incredibly flawed hero who needs to learn how that power should be used.Â
Deku similarly exists in a society where heroes deliberately turn a blind eye to the suffering of a certain type of victim. Shigarakiâs speech heavily resmebles Satouâs speech about garbage on the side of the road.Â
Shigarali: "For generations you pretended not to see those you coudln't protect and swept their pain under the rug. It's tainted everything you've built."
Deku shares Judaiâs ignorance, because heâs not only a part of a system that doesnât even see trash on the side of the road, but he also worships heroes so much that heâs incapable of criticizing them. If Deku saw the flaws of heroes, but at first didnât have the courage to speak out, but eventually gained the courage that would be one thing. However, if he doesnât see the flaws of heroes, then the problem will never be fixed.Â
There are also consequences for both Judai and Deku failing to use their powers responsibly. These consequences take the form of the villains who came about because of all of societyâs ignorance to the suffering of victims (Shigaraki) and because of the main characterâs ignorance to their suffering (Yubel). Shigaraki and Yubel are also explicitly victims that the heroes failed to save, turned into villains who are active threats to the heroes.Â
Should I save the villain?
The answer is yes, because the decision to save is reflective of the kind of hero each character wants to be. Each story clearly sets up that Deku and Judai arenât punisher style heroes who shoot their villains, they are being set up as heroes who save. Deku needs to âsave by winning.â As for Judai, a big deal is made of Judaiâs admiration for another character Johan who represents a more idealistic kind of hero. Johan unlike Judai is someone who duels with a purpose, something Judai outright says he admires because heâs empty in comparison.Â
Judai: Johan what have you been dueling for? See, itâs about fun for me⌠Well, for the surprise and happiness too. I guess I do do it for the fun. Sorry, I guess I put you on the spot by asking out of nowhere. Johan: Whatâs this about Judai? Judai: Itâs nothing. Johan: I suppose there is one goal I have. Johan: Even if someone doesnât have the power to see spirits, they can still form a bond with a spirit. Thatâs why I do it for people like him. [...] Johan: I'll fight for everyone who believes in me, and I'll do it with my Duel Monsters. Judai: I'm jealous you've got feelings like those in you.
Becoming a hero who uses their power to help others isnât just a goal the story sets for Judai, itâs a goal that Judai sets for himself because of his admiration for Johan. Johan represents the idealistic hero Judai wants to be, but is also held back from because of his personality flaws. Johan represents the kind of heroic ideal that Deku is aspiring to be.Â
Johanâs ultimate goal isnât punishing the wicked, but to use his power to save others.Â
Johan: Judai, it was my dream to save everyone through my dueling!
The story sets up the idea that itâs not enough for Judai to simply be strong, heâs also challenged to become a savior who uses his power to help others like Johan. Deku needs to âsave by winningâ and Judai needs to âSave everyone through his dueling.â However, Johan also adds another condition to what saving means. His idea of saving isnât to defeat a villain, but rather his dream is to help connect spirits and humans together, even if there are humans who canât see spirits. Johan doesnât save people with the power of physical force, but rather the power of human connection.Â
Should I save the villain?
Here the answer is "Yes",  because wants to become more like Johan someone who uses their power to help others not just for themselves. Then we reach the third question
If I don't save the villain, can I really call myself a hero?
It once again comes to power and responsibility. Heroes have great power, and they are responsible in how they use that power, if they use it irresponsibly then there are consequences. Shigaraki wants to destroy hero society, because the heroes irresponsibly use their power to turn a blind eye to everyoneâs suffering.Â
People suffer when heroes fail to live up to their responsibilities. The entire conflict of season 3 is created by Judai failing to save Yubel. If Judai had helped Yubel when they most needed it, instead of abandoning them, then Yubel would never have been twisted by the light of destruction, would never have attempted to teleport the school to another dimension, would never have attacked all of JUdaiâs friends.Â
These consequences matter. Deku can turn his eyes away from Shigarakiâs suffering, but letâs say a hero failed to stop a robbery, or rather he didnât even try, and because of that his mom was shot and died in the street. Would Deku consider the man who failed to stop a bank robbery a hero? When Spiderman let a bank robber go instead of trying to stop him, was he being a hero in that moment? Both the stories and the characters themselves have defined heroes as people who use their powers to save others, therefore if Judai and Yubel fail to save their villains then they canât be called heroes by the storyâs own definition. Now letâs finally return to the question of "Can I save the villain?"
Was there ever someone you couldnât save?
m going to start with Yu-Gi-Oh Gx as a positive example of how to save your villain. Gx works for two reasons. One, itâs established from the start that Yubel isnât beyond salvation, and two, it makes it so Judai canât win without saving Yubel. The conflict of the story does not end until Judai makes the decision to save Yubel. In some ways the writing is even stronger because Judai is directly responsible for the pain and suffering that Yubel went through that turned them into a villain in the first place. Yubel isnât just a victim, theyâre specifically Judaiâs victim.Â
Yubel is a duel spirit who is also essentially Judaiâs childhood friend. A duel spirit just like the kind that Johan wants to save. During their childhood Yubel got too overprotective of Judai, and started to curse his friends for making him cry or upsetting him in any way. Until everyone Judaiâs age started avoiding him and Judai became all alone with only Yubel for company. Judaiâs decision was to abandon Yubel at that time. He took the yubel card and shot them into space, hoping that being bathed in space rays will somehow âfixâ what was wrong with them. I know thatâs silly but just go with it. Judai abandoning Yubel had the unintended consequence of Yubel being subjected to the light of destruction, a corrupting light that subjected Yubel to years of pain. This pain literally takes the form of Yubel burning alive.
Yubel connected to his dreams called out for Judai every night, only for Judaiâs parents to give him surgery that repressed his memories of Yubel causing him to forget them entirely. Yubel then spent the next ten years alone in space, continuously subjected to painful torture, with their cries for help being ignored.Â
"I was suffering even as you came to forget about me..."
Yubel is then met with the question of how can Judai treat them this way if they loved him so much? As from Yubelâs perspective, theyâve only ever tried to protect Judai, only for Judai to not only throw them away, but subject them to painful torture and ignore their cries for help. Judai effectively moves on with his life, goes to duel academy, makes friends while Yubel is left to suffer in silence all but forgotten. This is where Judaiâs ignorance has serious plot consequences.Â
Itâs not just the pain that Yubel endured that made them snap. Itâs that their pain went ignored.Â
Yubel holds out the faint hope that Judai will answer their calls fro help until they finally burn up upon re-entry into earthâs orbit. At which point theyâre left as nothing more than a single hand crawling on the ground. Yubel who cannot fathom why Judai would cause them so much pain, and then forget about them, convinces themselves that Judai must be causing them pain, BECAUSE he loves them.
But you see, I couldn't possibly forget about you in the time that I've suffered...
Judai is allowed to move on with his life, to make friends, to spend the next ten years doing so while Yubel is subjected to ten years of agony. When they finally escape their painful torment, they see all the friends Judai has made while theyâre left alone and forgotten. However, Yubelâs goal isnât revenge. Rather, itâs to make Judai share and recognize their pain. WHich is why I said itâs not the fact that they were made to suffer, but their suffering is ignored. Yubelâs entire philosophy revolves around the idea that sharing pain is an expression of love, and that they and Judai share their love for each other by hurting each other.Â
"That's why I sought to fill all those linked to you, your world, with both sadness and anguish..."
For Yubel, making all of Judaiâs friends suffer and Judai themselves suffer is a way of making them and Judai equals again. They want to show âtheir loveâ for Judai, but itâs more about forcing Judai to recognize the pain heâs caused them by forcing him through the same pain. Yubelâs philosophy of sharing pain is actually a twisted form of empathy.Â
Theyâre not entirely wrong either, that even people who love each other can cause each other pain, and that if one person is suffering alone in a relationship or the suffering is one-sided then thereâs something wrong with that relationship.Â
Yubel: I get it now⌠You werenât in love, with Echo. Yubel: No.. you may have loved her just enough to clear the conditions in palace for you to control Exodia, but the you didnât truly love each other. Yubel: You were only unfairly hurting her, while you stayed unharmed. You wouldnât suffer. You wouldnât suffer. You wouldnât be in pain. Amon: What are you getting at? Yubel: Iâve been hurt! Iâve suffered! Iâve been in pain. Thatâs why Iâm making JUdai feel the same things I did!Â
Yubelâs twisted theory of love, is a pretty thinly veiled cry for empathy.
They break out into tears when talking to Amon about the way theyâve hurt and suffered. They clearly state upfront that their goal is for Judai to recognize their love. One of the first things they say to Judai is a plea for Judai to remember them.
Yubel is presented as a very human character suffering through a lot of pain throughout their entire villai arc, they break down into tears multiple times, they cry out in agony, they're visibly suffering and you see their mental walls begin to break down when Judai denies them any empathy.
Yubel is actually incredibly clear and straightforward about their desire to be saved by Judai. However, Judai doesnât lift a single finger to help Yubel the entire arc, even though they themselves admit they are directly responsible for Yubelâs suffering but they helped create who they are today.Â
Judai plunges into a different dimension and gives up everything to save someone, but itâs Johan, not Yubel they try to save. You have Johan, the perfect friend, and perfect victim that Judai gets obsessed over and will not stop at anything to save, and then you have Yubel, the imperfect victim that is actively harming Judai and all of his friends that Judai chooses to ignore. The whole season Judai only focuses on saving the perfect victim Johan, and this is clearly shown to be a flaw. Judai doesnât just ignore Yubel to save Johan, he also ignores every single one of his friends.Â
Judai only caring about saving Johan, and deliberately ignoring and abandoning the friends who came with him to help, essentially abandoning them the way he did Yubel leads to another consequence. After he abandons them they get captured, rounded up, and actually die and become human sacrifices.Â
Losing his friends, causes Judai to snap. Judai becomes the supreme king and decides power is all that matters; he starts killing duel spirits en masse in order to forge the super polymerization card. Which means being left alone, suffering alone, being abandoned by everyone causes Judai to snap the exact same way that Yubel did.Â
In fact Judai is only saved from his darkest moment, because two of his friends sacrifice their lives, trying to get through to him and appeal to his humanity. At that point Judaiâs friends could have just chosen to put him down like a mad dog, to punish him for the amount of people heâs killed, but instead they try to save him because of their friendship.Â
I just want to save my friend. That is all.
By the time Judai is facing Yubel in their final fight, Judai doesnât have the moral highground against Yubel in any way whatsoever. Theyâve both lashed out because of the pain they endured and killed countless people in the process of lashing out. The only real difference between them is that Judai is lucky. He had friends to support him at his lowest point, while Yubel didnât. Does Judai learn from Jimâs example, and go out of their way to save Yubel the same way they were saved because Yubel is still a friend? Nope, Judai tries to kill Yubel at this point.Â
I made a lot of friends... And they all taught me something⌠real love is wide enough, large enough and deep enough to fill the universe. Your so-called love is only a conceited delusion.
Like, Judai, sweetie baby honey darling. How was Yubel supposed to make friends when they were floating in the empty void of space?
Judai hasnât learned, they are still ignorant, and still turn a blind eye to Yubelâs suffering. After all if his love is wide enough, large enough,and deep enough to fill the universe then why donât thy have any room in their heart whatsoever for empathizing with Yubel?
Judai making friends while Yubel was trapped in space doesnât make Judai a better person than Yubel, it makes Judai lucky. Judai doesnât even appreciate that luck, because he treats his friends like garbage. Itâs not about whether Yubel is worthy of salvation, because Judai is a mass murderer and his friends still went to great lengths to save them anyway. Itâs that Judai doesnât want to empathize with Yubel, because they still want to remain ignorant and irresponsible. Judai wants to continue playing hero, with a very black and white definition of what a hero is. By this point Judaiâs killed lots of people, but if he makes Yubel the villain in the situation, he can keep playing hero. He doesnât have to look at himself and what heâs done, because blaming everything that happened on Yubel and then putting Yubel down like a mad dog allows Judai to absolve his own guilt. Judai practically ignores Yubelâs cries for help, even when Yubel spells it out for them.
I couldn't have lived with the heartache unless I felt that I was being loved...
At this point Yubel themselves acknowledges that their love was just a delusion. That it was a coping mechanism, because they couldnât live with all the pain otherwise. WIthout it they would have just died, which makes Judai unmoved. The implication here is that Judai thinks yes, Yubel should have just died in that crater. It would have been easier for Yubel to die a perfect victim, then for Yubel to crawl out of that crater and go on to hurt other people. While that may be true the same can be said for Judai - it would have been better if Judai died rather than become the Supreme King. His friends could have put him down like a mad dog, you could have even called that justice - but they didnât. Judai making no attempt to save Yubel isnât because he thinks itâs morally wrong to save someone whoâs killed as many people as Yubel has, or because he thinks he canât forgive Yubel, itâs because Judai is taking the easy way out. Johan is a nice, easy victim to save, because heâs Judaiâs perfect boyfriend, while Yubel is a complex victim that requires Judai to understand their suffering. Even the act of saving Johan isnât about Johan himself, itâs about the fact that Judai feels guilt over Johanâs disappearance. What Judai wants isnât really to save a friend, but to stop feeling guilty over that friend. Judai isnât just disgusted by Yubelâs actions towards his friend, he also wants to avoid the guilt he feels over causing all of Yubelâs suffering, because it requires acknowledging the complex reality that he is both victim and perpretrator in this case, just as Yubel is both victim and perpetrator.Â
So how can an arc where Judai doesnât try to save Yubel until the last possible minute, be better than an arc where Deku makes it his goal for the final act of the manga to save the crying boy in Shigaraki?Â
Itâs because the story does not let Judai get away with his continual refusal to empathize with Yubel. Yubelâs entire character revolves around empathy, in the form of sharing pain. As a duel monster, Yubelâs effect is that they are a 0/0 attack monster who is immune to all damage, but when you attack them they deal all the damage back to you. Which means that Yubel will respond to all the pain they feel, by causing you just as much pain in return. Yubel is not a character who can be defeated in a fight, or a duel. In fact theyâre the only Yu-Gi-Oh villain who never loses a duel once. The most Judai can do is duel them to a draw, and they draw three times. Yubel wins against everyone else who challenges them. In a way Yubel is like Shigaraki, the ultimate, unkillable enemy that canât be done away with violence. Judaiâs refusal to empathize with Yubel or attempt communication also makes them worse, every time Yubel is hurt they escalate. THe more Judai hurts them, the more they will hurt in return, itâs a cycle that will never be broken simply by killing Yubel, because Yubel is unkillable.Â
Not only that but the story has gone to great lengths to show that saving Yubel is the correct course of action. If Judai doesnât save Yubel, heâs basically spitting on the selflessness Jim showed in saving him. In fact if he doesnât save Yubel, Judai is contradicting his own words on what makes a good friend. Sho once asks Judai after witnessing his brother change, what he should do if a person you lov ehas changed into an entirely different person. What if they're a person you don't even recognize any more? A person you donât even necessarily like anymore?Â
That's why if it were me. I'd probably just be looking after him until the very end, even if I didn't like him. I'd do it cause I think it'd prove that I care about him.
Judai doesn't even say that Sho is obligated to save his brother or morally redeem him, just that he has to keep looking at him instead of turning away or ignoring him.
Judai is being a bad friend, by his own definition. By choosing to deliberately look away from Yubel, Judaiâs not living up to his advice for Sho for how you treat people you care about.Â
Which is why the resolution for Judai and Yubelâs arc is so important, because itâs done by Judai finally acknowledging Yubelâs pain, and promising to watch over them from now on, words that are followed by the action of physically fusing their souls together so theyâll never be alone again. Judai doesnât just say pretty words about how they wonât ignore the crying child inside of Yubel, but instead he makes a sacrifice to save Yubel at risk to themselves to show their words are backed up by actions. Judai says Yubel will never be alone again, and then he commits.Â
"And even if that means I won't exist anymore... I don't care."
Judai has resolved his character arc by this action, because Judai is finally taking on responsibility and that responsibility is watching over Yubel, so the two of them can atone together. Judai even says himself this isnât an act of sacrifice on his part, but rather him finally accepting adult responsibilities.Â
Judai: I wouldn't sacrifice myself for you guys. I'm just going on a journey to grow from a kid into a man.
Judai needed to save Yubel to complete his character arc and grow as a person. If Judai hadnât saved Yubel, he would have still remained an ignorant child. By learning not to turn a blind eye to Yubelâs pain, and also smacking sacrifices and physically doing something to atone for the way they ignored Yubel up until this point theyâve not only saved Yubel theyâve also done something to address their wrongs. This also continues into the fourth season where Judaiâs personal growth results in him learning what kind of hero he wants to be as in Season 4 in order to atone for the spirits that Judai slaughtered, he decides to leave his friends behind and walk the earth with Yubel helping spirits and humans get along with each other. In fact Judaiâs final speech as a character isnât even about how strong he is as a hero, but how weak he is as a person.
And I put my friends through some rough times. Form that, I figured a few things out... all I can do is believe in them.
The lesson Judai learned is because heâs weak, he needs to empathize and believe in other people the same way that his friends once believed in him when he was at his lowest point. Judaiâs not the strongest hero, heâs the weakest one, but that gives him the ability to empathize with people who were lost just like he was, and guide them back from the darkness.Â
The story of how Deku became the worst hero.
Iâm going to say this right now it might turn out next week that Shigaraki is just fine, and heâll use the overhaul quirk to reconstruct his body. However, even if that happens Deku has completely failed at his goal of saving Shigaraki for the reasons Iâll illustrate below. In theory, Dekuâs arc of saving Shigaraki, and therefore winning by saving should be much easier for the story to accomplish and also much less frustrating to watch. After all, Shigaraki has been around since the beginning of the manga, heâs literally the first villain that Deku faces. Heâs also the first villain that Deku talks to, where he brings up the idea that there were some people All Might failed to save. Thereâs also many intentional parallels between the two characters, the entire manga is about their parallel journeys of becoming the next generation hero and the next generation villain. Shigaraki even directly quotes the line at one point that all he wanted was for someone in his house to tell him he could still be a hero, the same line Deku said in the first chapter was that he wanted his mom to tell him to be a hero instead of apoalogizing to him for being quirkless.Â
Not only is the setup for Shigaraki and Deku made obvious (Deku can redeem Shigaraki by telling him that he can still be a hero too), but Deku himself states out loud that he wants to save the crying child inside of Shigaraki.Â
Judai runs away from Yubel the whole time, whereas Deku is running towards Shigaraki and actively makes it his goal to understand Shigaraki and continue to see him as a human being rather than a villain. The story also makes it clear that saving Shigaraki is necessary to saving hero society as a whole. After all Yubel is just Judaiâs victim. Whereas Shigaraki is the victim of all of society. Heâs the crying child who was ignored. The cycle wonât be broken if heroes continue choosing to ignore people like Shigaraki, because more victims will grow up to replace him.Â
Shigaraki: Everything I've witnessed, this whole system you've built has always rejected me. Now I'm ready to reject it. That's why I destroy. That's why I took this power formyself? Simple enough, yeah? I don't care if you don't understand. That's what makes us heroes and villains.
Shigaraki rejects the world because the world continues to reject him. THe solution to this problem is not rejecting Shigaraki, because Shigaraki wonât go away, the system will just continue to reject people like Shigaraki. As long as heroes and villains donât understand each other, theyâll keep being forced to fight and the conflict wonât end, because hero society is what engineers itâs own villains.
clear as day by the story itself. If the objective of saving Shigaraki is clear, then how exactly did the story fail in this objective? What went wrong? In this case itâs a failure of framing, and breaking the rules of âshow donât tell.â Stories are all about actions and consequences. When a character makes a certain action in a story, the way other characters around them, the world, and whatever consequences that action frames that action in a certain light. It provides context for how we are supposed to interpret that character in that moment.Â
For example, when a character does something wrong and another character directly confronts them over what they did wrong, that frames them as in the wrong. The story is criticizing the character for what they did wrong. Context is everything in a story. Stories are just ideas, so they require framing and context to communicate those ideas for the audience. Certain character attributes can be strengths or flaws depending on the context. My go to example is that if you put Othello in Hamlet, the conflict would be resolved in five seconds because Othelloâs straightforward personality and determination would have him kill Hamletâs uncle without questioning things. Whereas, Hamlet constantly questioning and second guessing himself would lead to the worst ending possible. However, if you put Hamlet in Othello, then Hamlet wouldnât fall prey to Iagoâs manipulations, because Othello doubts and questions everything so he wouldnât believe Iago the way Othello did.Â
Hamletâs contemplative and introverted nature can be a strength in one situation, and a flaw in another. Othelloâs tendency to act without thinking things through can be a strength in one situation, and a flaw in another. Context matters, because context tells you how youâre supposed to interpret a certain characters actions, and therefore tells you more about that character. This is why people repeat âShow donât tellâ as the golden rule of storytelling, itâs one thing to say something about a character, itâs another to us the characters actions in the story itself to show them something about the character.Â
Whatâs even worse then breaking the rules of show donât tell however, is telling the audience one thing, and then going onto show in the narrative something completely different. In that case the narrative becomes muddled and confusing to read. If I the narrator say âHamlet is someone who overthinks everythingâ and then in the story Hamlet walks up to his uncle and kills him with no hesitation, then the narrator is straight up unreliable. It becomes impossible to tell as an author what message Iâm trying to get across about these characters, because Iâm telling you one thing and showing another.Â
This is why the writing fails in the second half of My Hero Academia because we are constantly told one thing, but then the story shows something entirely different and sometimes even contradictory to the thing we are being told.Â
Judai is a much worse hero than Deku, he always runs away from Yubel, and weâre never directly told that heâs supposed to save Yubel either. However, the narrative is incredibly consistent. Judaiâs behavior of running away is consistent with his character. All the other character call Judai selfish for abandoning his friends (and theyâre not even talking about Yubel). Judai is never painted in any positive light for his actions, therefore we as the audience understand Judaiâs behavior is wrong and he needs to fix it. The narrative makes it clear that Judai needs to grow up, and Judai is never rewarded for his refusal to grow up, heâs ruthlessly chewed out, not by his enemies but also by his own friends. However, the narrative isnât merciless on him either. Season 3 of GX is dark, but itâs not grimdark. Even when Judai loses his way, heâs still shown love and compassion by those same friends who go to great lengths for his sake. The narrative criticize Judai but it never insists that heâs beyond redemption and needs to be put down like a mad dog.Â
The message is very clear, that not only does Judai need to grow up, but he also deserves the chance to grow and change, which is why he should give Yubel a similar chance. In comparison the story sets out this clear narrative arc for Deku of understanding Shigaraki, but it never challenges him for failing to understand Shigaraki. If you listen to what the narrative says, how other characters describe Deku, and what Deku himself says and only read it on a surface level then yes, Dekuâs goal is to save Shigaraki. If you analyze actions however, he is in effect just like Judai he never takes any meaningful action or steps towards Shigaraki, nor does he think of what saving Shigaraki might look like or entail.Â
The story describes Deku as someone who is possessed by a drive to save others that eclipses all common understanding, but does the story give us any examples of that behavior?
Judai is characterized as a selfish, irresponsible child, and the story gives us countless examples of his immaturity and how it hurts others. Does the story of MHA do the same for Deku's purported virtues? Letâs run through Dekuâs actions, step by step, the actions themselves and how they are framed in order to find any evidence that Deku possesses this drive to save others. Does Deku reflect at all on the question of:
Can Shigaraki be Saved?
Deku leaves on a journey to try to understand villains. When he makes a perfunctory attempt to understand and empathize with Muscle, and Muscle replies that some people are just evil does Deku keep trying to reach his heart? Nope, he just punches him.Â
Well, if heâs failed in his goal of understanding a villain then does the story call him out on his failure? Does Deku face any sort of narrative consequence for that failure? Is he framed negatively for failing to understand Muscle, the same way that Judai is framed for abandoning Yubel? Nope. Deku doesnât express any frustration at all over is inability to reason with Muscle. Thereâs also no negative consequence for Deku just choosing to punch muscle, it turns out that there was no reasoning with Muscle and some people are just bad eggs so Deku was right. Itâs okay for characters to fail, but if a character fails and itâs not framed by the story as a failure then the writing itself as failed. Why even bother to include this scene in the first place if it doesnât advance Dekuâs character in any way? This scene in spite of showing Deku failing to understand someone actively paints Deku in a positive light, because of how much stronger he is ow that he can OHKO a guy that gave him trouble all the way back in the camp arc.
This scene doesnât tell anything about Deku as a character, it just makes him look cool. In fact thatâs precisely the problem, Deku isnât adequately challenged as a character, because heâs never allowed to fail. Even when he does obviously fail at the things the narrative set out for him to do, heâs never challenged on those failures, because the priority isnât to make Deku grow, itâs to make Deku look good. As I said before, Judai is the hero because heâs the weakest. Deku is the hero because heâs the strongest. Well, next a big flaw on Dekuâs part is that he worshippd the same heroes that were making the world corrupt. Heroes like Endeavor who created people like Dabi. So, does Deku take action to either criticize the older generation of heroes, or separate himself from them in order to try to be better than them? Nope, he teams up with them. Not only that, Deku canât do something as simple as tell Gran Torino out loud about his plans to save Shigaraki. If Deku feels that Shigaraki is worthy of salvation then he should at least try to make an argument here about his ideal of saving others.
Now hereâs the thing, if Deku hadnât directly looked at the camera and told us he wanted to save Shgiaraki, would we be able to deduce his intentions from his actions? If you took away all of Dekuâs internal monologue, and just showed him punching Muscular and saying nothing when Gran Torino says he may have no choice but to kill Shigaraki would anything about Dekuâs actions indicate that he wants to save Shigaraki? Let me use avatar the last airbender as a positive example for a moment. People say that Aangâs desire to spare Ozaiâs life comes out of left field, but like if you analyze Aang as a character down to their bending, and the way they react in situations they always prefer de-escalation, or taking a third option as opposed to confronting things head on. Itâs literally why Toph says Aang has trouble learning earth bending, because as an airbender, he always tries to look for some other way to solve the problem, instead of a direct confrontation with force. As early as season one, Aang tells Zuko someone who has tried to kill him several times that he was friends with someone from the fire nation one hundred years ago and in a different situation they could be friends. Aangâs desire to save the Firelord may not have been told to us until the last possible minute, but Aangâs aversion to violence has always been a part of his character from the beginning. However, Deku never shows any similar aversion to violence. Thereâs basically no example where he ever tries to de-escalate a situation, or he avoids a conflict by seeking a third option.Â
Anyway, letâs move onto the next example. In the confrontation where Lady Nagant fights Deku, when Deku learns the fact that the heroes were employing government hitmen to attack people for uhh⌠exercising free speech does Deku give any reaction to this information? When Lady Nagant says that Deku is only going to bring back the status quo, does he show her any meaningful evidence that he wonât do that.
Dekuâs response is because the world is so grey, he needs to extend a helping hand to others. Which you know what thay could be a response. Deku saying that his response to the corruption of the hero world is that he now understands that society led some people down the wrong path, so his way of addressing the wrongs of that society is lending a helping hand to as many people as possible even people he used to think was irredeemable.Â
I will give Deku the benefit of the doubt, I think this is an acceptable answer. I canât save everyone, but thatâs not going to stop me from trying to save as many people as possible and maybe I can save people who were this societyâs victims on the way too. However, does Deku demonstrate his resolve to extend a helping hand in any meaningful way.Â
Deku is met with an armless, insane Overhaul whoâs begging for someone to help heal his father figure in the Yakuza from his coma. This isnât like Muscular who insists that thereâs no helping him, Deku is met face by face with someone asking him for help. Dekuâs gotta extend a helping arm whenever he can, because he knows some people were abandoned and led astray by this society⌠Unless that person is someone he doesnât like personally. At which point he only helps them on a conditional basis. We are told Deku will save anyone and everyone, but Deku is met face to face with an armless man who is begging for help and Dekuâs does nothing to help him. Dekuâs not criticized for refusing to help overhaul either, itâs never brought up again. When Deku begins to experience a mental breakdown because of all the people heâs trying to help in the Dark Deku arc, we are told this is the result of Deku trying to save everyone, but we do not see Deku attempting to save a single villain after Muscular and Nagant.Â
He exhausts himself beating up villains that AFO sends after him, and only helping innocent civilians. Which would be fine if this arc were about how Deku is running away from his real responsibilities the same way that Judai was running, but thatâs not what weâre being told. We are told that this is all part of an arc of Deku learning to understand villains and be a hero.
Deku is asked âCan you save Shigaraki?â by the story, but Deku never at any point has to deliberate on that question. Judai doesnât deliberate on that question either, but him choosing not to think about things and stay ignorant is the point.Â
Itâs actually fine to make Deku stagnate as a character. Itâs fine to have him take the easy way out by just punching villains and giving up on them after one conversation. Itâs fine for him to be empathetic to other peopleâs suffering, or even self-righteous. Itâs fine for him to be ignorant.Â
He could be all of those things if it was a part of a narrative teaching him to unlearn his behavior. In fact the narrative might have been better if Deku started out by saying he didnât want to save Shigaraki, that there was no choice but to kill him, because then at least his actions would be consistent with his words. Then his lack of empathy and his tendency to resort to violently beating up villains instead of avoiding violence would be character flaws he could work on. Deku however, is presented to us as this empathic hero who is always willing to give others a second chance though he never actually sticks his neck out in order to do so. Continuing on with our slow crawl through MHA, one of Dekuâs friends is revealed as the traitor. Deku has a heartwarming scene fo saying that Aoyama can still be a hero, but look at his actions. He lets the adults in the room physically tie Aoyama in a straightjacket and imprison him, for the crime of⌠doing bad things while he was in a hostage situation. Apparently, if a bank teller helps the bank robber by giving them money when the robber has a gun to his head, the swat team should just snipe the bank teller. Not only does he not defend Aoyama against the adults, or stand up for him, or tell the adults theyâre wrong to treat Aoyama a clear cut victim who had a gun to his head and was bing held hostage like heâs a villain - he also lets the adults use Aoyama an innocent victim as bait in order to lure out AFO. Deku tells Aoyama he can still be a hero, but he doesnât defend Aoyama as a victim of being taken hostage, nor does he stop the adults from further taking advantage of him and throwing him right into danger. Some people are just led the wrong way thatâs why they need to be extended a helping hand, but fuck Aoyama I guess. He needs to earn the right to be sympathized with by physically putting his life in danger.Â
Deku canât even go out of his way to save a friend who heâs known for the better part of a year, when that friend is a complex victim forced to do bad things.Â
Then Deku and Uraraka have a conversation where they both, kind of ruminate on the idea that maybe the villains are human beings who are worthy of sympathy.
In fact Uraraka is actively trying to dehumanize Toga by looking at the destroyed city, so she won't have to think of Togaas a person.
The language here is also a major fault of this arc. It focuses far too hard on âforgivenessâ over and over again. As I said before, saving Shigaraki isnât about Shigaraki at all, itâs about Deku, and how he wants to use his power as a hero. Deku has even stated himself that he doesnât believe that OFA is a power that should be used for killing people. So why does whether Toga or Shigaraki are forgivable or not even matter? Itâs the same with Deku refusing Overhaul any sympathy. If heâs so morally opposed to abusers, then why does he work with Endeavor and defend him at every visible opportunity, even in front of his victims? Whether or not Deku can forgive Shigaraki doesnât matter, because Deku is not the moral arbitrator or right and wrong. In fact Deku doesnât even have any morals, so how is this a moral debate? Is there any point where Deku gives a clear definition of what he thinks right and wrong is? Does he quot Immanuel Kant to the audience?Â
Batman doesnât kill people, not because he thinks that every last person on earth can be saved, but because Bruce Wayne an incredibly rich white man thinks that maybe he shouldnât have the authority to decide who lives and who dies. When Bruce doesnât kill the joker, it doesnât mean he thinks the Jokers actions are forgivable, itâs because Bruce thinks itâs not his place to determine whether someone has the right to live.Â
The whole conflict that MHA presents us is that heroes pick and choose who to save, and only save the ones they deem as innocent. So, how does Deku saying repeatedly they canât forgive Shigaraki contribute to that theme in any way? In fact by focusing on forgiveness, rather than whether or not he personally has the right to pick and choose who lives and who dies Deku is ignoring the elephant in the room. The question isnât about whether Shigarakiâs redeemable or if his deeds should ever be forgiven. The question is whether Deku has the right to decide who gets saved and who doesnât.Â
We are told that Deku as a character is someone who wants to save everyone no matter what, so Deku shouldnât be focusing on whether or not Shigaraki is worthy of forgiveness, he should be making an idealistic argument like Xavier does in this panel. Why doesnât Deku talk out loud with Uraraka on how he believes his power is for saving others, and not killing? If heâs meant to represent some idealistic hero, then why doesnât he even talk about his ideals? Why donât I as the reader know what those ideals are?
I think Xavierâs ideals of forcing the X-men to provide a good example to the mutant community, in order to try to earn the respect of other human beings is wrong, but at least he has ideals. He tries to inspire the other people around him to live up to those ideals. The story can criticize him for his ideals and point out how theyâre wrong, while it can also uplift parts of his idelogy like where he believes there are no evil mutants. Deku has a chance to do the same to Uraraka, to tell her clearly, âI donât think we as heroes have the right to pick and choose who we helpâŚ?â but he waffles. Not only does he waffle, but this moment is meant to be read as an indication that both Deku and Uraraka are sympathetic individuals who want to save their villains. They are supposed to look good and idealistic here and they donât. For Deku it just seems like a repeat of his behavior with Overhaul. The only villains that are worthy of sympathy, are the ones that he personally decides are forgivable.Â
The story isnât about whether or not itâs moral to save someone whoâs killed as many as Shigaraki has. The story never seriously discusses any sort of complex morality or moral philosophy. Once again to bring up avatar, yes you can argue Aang sparing the life of a war crimminal is bad, but Aang mentions on multiple occasions that he wants to retain the cultural values of the airbending people. Aang has a morality, a consistent morality, it might not be a morality you personally agree with but at least he has one. Deku hates abusers, unless heâs next to Endeavor then he thinks abusers should be given the chance to atone. Deku doesnât believe that One for All is a power for killing, but he never stands up to any of the adults who are blatantly trying to kill Shigaraki, he doesnât even express out loud to Uraraka that he doesnât think heroes have the right to decide who lives and who dies. In fact heâs given the perfect opportunity to, when Hawks kills a villain and itâs broadcast live on the news in font of everyone, but Deku never has anything to say about that. The reason Deku and Uraraka both put such an emphasis on âforgivingâ their villains has nothing to do with the story itself. Itâs because the author Horikoshi, is afraid that some people will misinterpret his story as saying that he actually thinks that saving a villain like Shigaraki means that he condones mass murder, so he has to have the characters talk about not forgiving Shigaraki.Â
Judai doesnât have any consistent morals either, but once again thatâs the point and something the story relentlessly calls him out on.
Cobra: Fortune would never smile on a fool like you who fights while prattling on about enjoying duels. Cobra: You are certainly a talented duelist. But you have one fatal flaw. Judai: A fatal flaw? Cobra: Yes, your duels are superficial. Someone who fights with nothing on his shoulders, cannot recover once he loses his enjoyment. What a duelist carries on his shoulders will become the power that supports him when he's up against the wall! Cobra: But you have nothing like that! Those who go through life without anything like that cannot possibly seize victory. Cobra: But I know that nothing I say will resonate with you... because you have nothing to lose but the match. Judai: I... Cobra: Afraid aren't you? Right now, you have nothing to support you.Â
Judaiâs regularly called out for his superficiality. Judai is only a hero because heâs strong and wins fight, he doesnât feel any responsibility towards other people, and in fact he loathes having to feel responsible for others. Judai isnât just naive, he deliberately chooses to remain ignorant. Since heâs ignorant of his own faults, he makes awful decisions when it comes time for him to lead, and his friends die because of choices he made. We are told that Deku doesnât want to remain ignorant, that he wants to understand villains, but Dekuâs actual actions are him continuing to ignore societyâs ills and the suffering of victims. In fact if you take away Dekuâs internal monologue and the narration, Dekuâs actions almost exactly mirror Judaiâs.
Deku is just as superficial as Judai, and he also doesn't want to spend any time thinking about what kind of hero he wants to be, but the narrative never punishes him for it.
Judai is asked what burdens he has to bear and he has to meaningfull answer that question, Deku is allowed to get away with not having to think about anything. Deku remains superficial. Both Judai and Deku spend the entire arc running away from their villain rather than confronting them in any meaningful way. They both never express out loud any sympathy for their villain, or try to empathize. THey both never step down from the role of hero, and only confront their villain as a hero, because they donât want to think about themselves as complicit or in the wrong. Shigaraki and Dekuâs final confrontation mirrors Judai and Yubelâs but without the same clear framing. THe entire time Yubel is trying to get Judai to empathize with them, and Judai only responds with physical violence, because they donât want to stop being the hero and because they canât see Yubel as anything other than the villain. As soon as Deku arrives on the battlefield (by the way everyone else and their mom pointed this out, but Deku who doesnât think OFA is a power for killing, is completely okay with a plan called the âSky coffin planâ where every other hero was clearly trying to murder Shigaraki).
When Deku arrives he asks if Shigaraki is still in there, but he doesnât do anything to try to reach Shigaraki, he jumps right to punching him. In fact he never tries anything besides punching him as hard as possible. How is punching Shigaraki with the force of a thousand suns saving him exactly? How is that different from how he tried to defeat Shigaraki the last war arc, before he saw the image of the crying child that made him want to try a different approach in saving Shigaraki? In Judaiâs final fight with Yubel, itâs made explicitly clear that Judai is not trying to save Yubel, and thatâs a fault on his part. In fact Judai gives the traditional âI have friends, and you donâtâ speech to Yubel but itâs a subversion of how that speech is usually used. Usually that speech is used to show that the protagonist won because of they valued friendship,while the villain treated their friends poorly and only cared about power. However, itâs ironic in this case because Judai got all of his friends killed. Judai treats his friends like garbage. This speech isnât used to show that Judai is winning because he values his friends more than Yubel does, it shows that Judai is a hypocrite, playing the hero in this situation where they are just as bad as Yubel. Judaiâs not morally superior, heâs just lucky that he has good friends. Friends that were willing to save him. The only connection Yubel has to anyone else, Yubelâs only friend is Judai and Judai is a shit friend.Â
In fact, Mirio tries to give a version of the âYou donât have any friendsâ speech to Shigarkai, only for Shigaraki to get mad and tell Mirio that he does have friends and people he wants to protect.Â
This fact is also something that is blatantly ignored by Deku, even though Mirio tells him about it⌠even though we are told that Deku is trying his best to see the humanity in Shigaraki.Â
Judai blatantly admits theyâre trying to kill Yubel. Which makes them a worse person, but a better character than Deku, because their actions are clearly framed by the narrative and consistent.Â
On the other hand we are told that Deku doesnât want to kill Shigaraki, and yet everything Deku does makes it look like heâs just trying to kill Shigaraki and put him out of its misery. If we didnât have Deku stating out loud that he wants to save Shigaraki and wants to see him as a human, thereâd be nothing in his actions to indicate that heâs trying to avoid killing Shigaraki. Deku says he canât pretend he didnât see Shigaraki crying, but like, does he ever hesitate to punch Shigaraki, does he ever think that causing Shigaraki more harm is wrong when heâs already suffered so much? Deku says that Shigaraki is a person but does he treat him like a person? Does he try to talk to him like a person? To use avatar again, Aang does talk to Zuko pretty early on. Deku doesnât even give the classic âWe could have been friends under different circumstancesâ speech. When Shigaraki resists Dekuâs attempts to see him as a person or emapthize with him, Dekuâs response is to just resort to punching harder.Â
Which is in effect the same thing Judai does to Yubel, just kill them as a villain so they donât hurt anybody else, but framed in an entirely different light. Judai is shown to be ruthless, and cold in his attempt to only settle the conflict with Yubel by violently putting them down. On the other hand weâre being told that Deku is compassionate and empathic while he punches Shigaraki with the force of a thousand suns.Â
Thereâs another eerie similarity between both of these final confrontations. At the climax of the confrontation, both Judai and Deku have a psychic vision where they see events from Yubel and Shigarakiâs childhood. This vision is supposed to help both characters understand the good in the villain theyâre facing.
Letâs see the contents of this vision and how the visions change each character. Judai is shown a vision of his past life where Yubel sacrifices their entire body, and even their humanity to go through painful surgery to turn into an ugly dragon, all for the sake of protecting Judai in a previous life.Â
Judai is then forced to witness the good side of Yubel theyâve been ignoring all along to paint them as a villain. Yubel is simultaneously extremely selfish and willing to hurt people Judai cares about, but theyâre also extremely selfless and will do anything to protect Judai and have made great sacrifices in the past for Judaiâs sake. Deku gives lip service to not ignoring the humanity in Shigaraki, but Judai is literally forced to acknowledge the humanity in Yubel. Not only that, but Judai changes his behavior immediately after learning this new information. After seing the sacrifice that Yubel made for him in the past, Judai responds with a sacrifice of his own. A sacrifice that perfectly mirrors the sacrifice that Yubel once made for him. Yubel gave up their humanity for Judai, so Judai fuses his spirit to Yubelâs, becoming a human / spirit hybrid so Yubel no longer has to be alone.Â
Judai also doesnât just fuse their soul with Yubelâs in order to stop Yubel from destroying everything, itâs because both of them at this point need to atone together, and Judai is fulfilling his responsibility of watching over his friend until the end to prove that you care about them - as he said to Sho. Judaiâs also fulfilling Johanâs dream of helping repair the bonds between spirits and humans, by reconciling with Yubel and repairing their bond. Itâs also Judai atoning for his previous behavior of abandoning Yubel, by choosing to stay alongside them as they both atone together. Deku does sacrifice OFA during the fight against Shigaraki, but their sacrifice isnât to help Shigaraki, but rather doing psychic damage to Shigaraki by using OFA is the only way to defeat them. He transfers OFA in order to break Shigarakiâs brain so heâll stop reissting and Deku can beat him down. Judai fuses their soul together with Yubel out of empathy and a responsibility they feel to help their friend fater abandoning them, Deku transfers One for All to Shigaraki in order to hurt him and make him easier to punch. It's funny that Deku doesn't travel to Shigaraki's mind to learn more about him, but instead with the specific intent of harming him.
Once he's inside Shigaraki's mind, he doesn't take time to reflect on how Shigaraki used to stand up for bullied kids, or how he wants to be a hero to villains because no one else will stick up for the outcasts in society. No, he only care about Shigaraki when he takes the form of a child crying for help.
In the aftermath of the psychic vision Dekuâs behavior doesnât change towards Shigaraki in any way either. You could say he sacrificed his own arms in order to try to comfort Shigaraki within the depths of his own mind - but thatâs not a real sacrifice either because his arms immediately come back. When Judai learns about the sacrifice that Yubel made in a previous life towards him, he stops seeing Yubel as an enemy and finds a way to resolve things peacefully between them. When Deku lanterns that Shigarakiâs a victim of All for One, and that his entire life was a lie, when he sees Shigarakiâs suffering first hand does his beavior twoards Shigaraki change in any way?Â
When he sees Afo has taken over Shigarakiâs body again, does he try to shout for Shigaraki, to tell Shigaraki to fight from the inside, to reassure Shigaraki that heâs still in there that thereâs still good in him? Nope. He just punches Shigaraki some more.
What Deku needed to tell Shigaraki is so obviously set up by the narrative too. Shigaraki wanted just one person in that house to tell him he could be a hero. Deku wanted his mother to tell him he could be a hero if he was quirkless. Deku sees that Shigaraki started out as a boy who wanted to be a hero, and who was manipulated into being a villain but does he try to appeal to the boy inside of Shigaraki by telling him he can still be a hero? Does he now see the good in Shigaraki? Nope, he just tries to kill him by punching him really hard.Â
I purposefully chose the images for the banner of this post, because it shows how differently MHA and GX treated its villains in the end. Yubel is embraced by Judai in the end, Shigaraki evaporates into dust.
"Judai, now that our souls have become one we will never be separated again. I have now been filled with your love and power. Let us fight together, against the wave of light leading this universe to destruction!"
Shigaraki could so easily have been given the love and empathy that Yubel was shown, but instead their life ends with no show of empathy from Deku, and with them dying believing that their long life of tragedy meant nothing in the end. Shigaraki realizes he's a crying kid, but he's never comforted.
Shigaraki: I only stole my body back from Master, and I didn't destroy anything. "In the end, I was just as you said... A crying kid, huh?"
Yubel is embraced and comforted, Shigaraki disintegrates into nothing.
One of these stories is apparently an optimistic story about heroes saving people, but it ends with the lifelong victim being killed in the most nihilistic manner possible, never receiving comfort, and never achieving anything with his long life.
The other story is a silly anime about card games, shows that when people are alone and suffering they can lash out and do terrible things. That all people are weak especially when they're alone, but the solution isn't to abandon them, or condemn them for their faults, but to believe in them and help uplift them the same way that Judai decides to uplift Yubel so they can atone together.
Which is why Deku gets an F in being a hero. Go directly to summer school. Do not pass Go. Do not collect $100.Â
#mha meta#ygo meta#mha 423#bnha 423#mha 423 spoilers#bnha 423 spoilers#izuku midoriya#deku#shigaraki tomura#tenko shimura#judai yuki#yubel#soulshipping#yu gi oh gx#yu gi oh
705 notes
¡
View notes
Text
single mom x price; PART 2
AO3 VERSION
part one || part three || part four
âPlease. Be good, alright?â
You look down at your son. He holds his bear close to his chest; defensive, as you senseâyou almost sigh at this view. Heâs in a bad moment. The moment where he needs no one, but his mom and the cuddles that you normally would give him, if the nanny wouldnât be on her way.
And itâs his favorite nanny.
Youâre reluctant to let him stay in the house, considering not only his humor, but the earlier tantrum that he gave you. Something between âyouâre the worst mother everââwhich only gives you an eye roll, but itâs a potential theme for a cry session later onâand âi donât want anyone else but youâ.
Normally, youâd call your mother that loves him to the core, but given that sheâs in Hawaii, not really reachable for you and possibly not in the mood to listen to your problems. She only wants to do it when sheâs bored, and if she can give you her âgolden adviceâ without a chance of being cut off by you putting a phone away because she crossed a line.
Which happened too many times in the past, since she just absolutely adored engaging in your life. Reminding you every time that you are responsible for the position you found yourself in and the only thing that could possibly save you is listening to her. Marrying the man that she gets to pick.
Because the mother knows best, as she always says.
The irony of beefing with your son is irritating for you too; especially that you need a nanny for an hour, maybe a little more because you need to go to the town meeting. You could skip it, sure, but itâs like skipping an opportunity; and who knows what will happen. Maybe youâll get around doing something that will bring money, if they will talk about the spring festival.
Last year you got yourself quite a deal, so the thought is exciting enough for you.
The possibility of meeting John is thrilling, too, even if you donât want to admit it directly. Everything about this man is electric, enticing enough for you to barely be able to think around him. Something is tingling in your chest, when you think about it. Heâs acclimatizing well enough in town too, as you learnedâand the town meeting is a good chance to see with whom heâs close.
Animal in a zoo, it would be a good comparison, even if it seems cruel for some reason because John is anything but it.
You get to leave the house after five minutes of talking with your nanny. Sheâs like an angel, considering that she convinced you to leave, telling you that sheâs gonna do alright with your son and his tantrums arenât really the worst thing that happened in her career.
Which, oddly enough, you believe, without even knowing the details.
You sit in the second row at the meeting. Arms crossed, maybe a little defensive, but youâre not opposed to talking with people that sit near you. They show you photos, talk about their family, ask kindly about yours, until someone mentions a husband when you tell them about a situation from days ago.
Normally, youâd probably make a snarky remark about their comment, saying something how rude it is to point to someone that they need a man, when your point isnât missing someone to help you around.
Thatâs normally, if your ears wouldnât catch that voice. The voice thatâs hard to forget even if youâd desperately try to do it. Deep, drawing attention to the owner immediately, like a moth to a flame because the desire to look is impossible to resist. Everyone knows that the appearance does the magic, but if the voice is attractive, most likely is the one who has it.
And thatâs exactly John Price.
You observe him only with a corner of your eye, assured that if youâre gonna glance at him once then heâs gonna know where you are. Itâs like the seventh sense of his, probably acquired after his job, at least you think thatâs the case.
You donât need that. What you actually want, need, is a small dose of mystery that you currently have without him knowing youâre here.
Maybe thatâs not fair, but you donât care.
He talks mostly with guys from the local workshop; they vigorously explain something to him and he nods. Listens, then responds in such a different mannerism that they represent. Calmer, more stoic, yet it canât be mistaken with indifference. Heâs just⌠thinking type, you assume. The one who calculates before taking any action.
Wise man, so to speak.
Besides the boring stuff at the community meeting, thereâs just one thing that could potentially interest you inâcompetition for the best garden in town. It has everyone gossiping there and there in a deep hope, or strategies what to do to earn a win; mostly those successful, straight out of family movie moms, ideal moms who are doing everything for their families. Chit-chatter about flowers, techniques and stuff disrupts everything enough to make a meeting come to an end. Thereâs no point in continuing, when no one listens.
You arenât even considering the competition, but it gets you enough to think of renovating your garden. Forgotten long ago, as it needed too much work when you had a small kid; right now, when your son is six, thereâs way more opportunities for you to actually try to tend it. Who knows, maybe spring is the best time for that.
âSo. Gonna snatch that first place reward?â You almost jump, when you feel a hand on your hip. Light touch, but waking you up from your thoughts enough to acknowledge how tender it is. Allowing you to back off easily, if youâd feel like itâs too much.
But you know who this is. And you somehow know that itâs not too much.
âI wish,â you laugh dryly, looking finally at John. He arches an eyebrow, then proceeds to walk back to back with you, no hesitation in his moves whatsoever. âNot really a gardener. Besides, knowing how my garden looks right now⌠Not really a chance, no.â
Thereâs a second of silence. âCould help you with that,â he says, fixing his shirt; you give him a quick glance. His outfit isn't really different from the other times. Simple flannel, worn out jeans, combat boots and this well-known, plastered smile into his lips. Charming and dangerous, you think. âI have time, if you really want it.â
You clear your throat, conflicted. Do you really care that much about possibly winning a contest? Maybe Johnâs help would really do wonders, considering that he already helped a lot of people in the neighborhood; with success that didnât take much time, as you know.
Kind, nice, doesnât want anything else in return; could work for you for free. Youâre 99% sure that you would bake him a pie or something anyway, but the thought you wouldnât have trouble with payment is nice enough.
âMaybe. I need to think about it.â He raises his eyebrow, but doesnât say anything. Instead, he just nods his head in an understanding manner.
âWeâll exchange numbers, then. Itâll be easier,â John announces, giving you his phone. You look at him, dumbstruckâit wasnât exactly your plan to do this.
âI donâtâ Well, I donât think itâs necessaryââ
He barks a laugh, shaking his head. âNonsense. Come on.â Price smiles; like an angel, truly. Angel in a disguise of a tempting devil because you enter your number into his contacts, even if you wanted to keep it as a secret a little bit more. âWasnât so hard, was it? Didnât think Iâm some kind of a creep, did you?â
Your face flushes with pure red, when he implies that. âNo! No. Iâm just⌠I donât use a phone often,â you croak. White lie that don't really need much explanation from you.
âThat right,â he muses, possibly amused with your hurried talk. âIâll call you in a few, then.â
He sticks to his promise, as you learn over the next few days.
The thing is: you donât pick up.
Itâs not like you do it on purpose. At least, thatâs what you tell yourself when you see a few missed calls on the phone, the moment you come back from the grocery store. Or, when youâre out in the garden with your kid, planning how itâs gonna change in the future because youâre just taken-aback by how bad it looks. Like itâs not your garden.
Maybe the problem is your lack of courage to call him, too. It would take one click and youâd be done with the task, but somehow, you canât bring yourself to it. Mixed feelings and the âI can take care of anythingâ mindset doesnât help you much.
It feels like a reminder to call back, when you see John outside. Heâs in the middle of a discussion with some teenagers that were screaming earlier, disrupting the precious night silence. You thank him in mind that you donât have to do itâas you got up from bed only for thisâyou just observe everything behind your window, wrapped in a fluffy robe. You canât miss the drama, even if it means that youâll lose a few minutes of your sleep.
Your humor gets better automatically, as you even laugh at how disappointed they seem, going straight up to their homes.
And then, you cross gazes with him.
Thereâs a faint smile from John. He raises his hand, greeting you, so you do the same. However, the difference in moves is clear. John does it slowly, you almost rush to do it and disappear into your bedroom, so he wonât get an idea that youâre up for a talk.
Because youâre not. Youâre too tired to do that, to talk with a man that makes a pretty mess in your head every time youâre around him. And, youâre way too ashamed to do that when he called you multiple times and you havenât answered even a single one of it.
Some part of you wants to give in and text him right after you see him, but you let this idea flow by. Youâre gonna text him at the right moment, you think. The middle of the day, or when youâre gonna see that he works over something, so he wonât be able to read it right away.
You forget about your declaration soon enough. Way too caught up with balancing between home, work and school, you donât quite realize that the longer youâll extend the whole thing, the longer it will be over your head.
On Monday, youâre reminded. At first, you donât really acknowledge it, too irritated that you canât move your car because someone decided to park behind you, blocking your way. The only thing that keeps you from screaming is your son that does not really care whatâs going on. He just sits in the back, playing with his toys, unbothered.
The realization of whose car it is, overwhelms you completely in one moment. You know whose car it is. Itâs hard not to, really, when you think about it: thereâs only one pick up truck around. The neighborhood is full with families that preferâmost definitelyâa car more efficient, a car that has more seats because thatâs the only way everyone will fit and ride for football games and all that shit.
The thought you have to ask him out of all people, gives you a migraine.
Itâs an awkward thought; the way you have to say something. You havenât returned any of his calls, treating him like some one night stand (even if it wasnât the case because you never slept together), and now you want him to move his car. Theoretically speaking, he should do it without even thinking twice.
You canât help but wonder though, if heâs even gonna acknowledge your plea, given you ignored the shit out of him.
Rude, you think. Youâre rude and you did nothing about the calls. About the proposition. You totally ignored John Price, and now youâre embarrassed because you have to ask him something. Maybe if youâd think of calling him back, you wouldnât even be stressed about this situation. Quick text to him, and there he is, moving his car.
In another lifetime, though. In this, you have to do something else.
After you tell your kid youâre gonna be back in a second, you decide to test your luck and jog into his house, just a few meters away, knocking with a whole monologue in your head. How you need him to move your car because your kid needs to go to school. How you need it to go to the grocery store, you even think of giving him an excuse that you need to go to your mom, even if itâs a straight up lie.
You donât have to wait long. Door swings open a few seconds later and you can see John, a little bit sleepy and confusedâpossibly because no one normally wants to see someone at seven in the morning.
He speaks before you have a chance to do it. âSo eager to apologize, eh?â
It takes you a few seconds before you stare into his eyes, instead of his chest. âExcuse me?â You blink several times. Itâs not like you didnât understand what he said, itâs just his body that you pay too much attention to. He has no shirt on himself, his sweats low on his hips. Tempting.
You do not look lower than that, for the sake of your sanity. No time for fantasiesâand it seems like he knows what youâre thinking, as he smirks with that annoying smugness that he has.
âYou havenât returned my calls,â he says, voice low. Might be the consequence of just waking up, but you think of it as seductive. Youâre not gonna rub it into his face though, when he literally has the upper hand in this situation. Wouldnât be smart. âThought youâre here âcause of it.â
You clear your throat. Heâs not wrong, but heâs not right either. âYeah. Weâll talk about this later, but could youââ
âWhy?â John tilts his head. It doesnât help your case in any way. âWe have time, you came here early. Might as wellââ
âThereâs⌠a lot going on,â you blurt out, interrupting. You donât really know if he believes you or not, but he certainly is interested in why. So, before he has the chance to say that, you speak up again, "And you have to move your car first.â
âA lot? You know that I offered to help if somethingâs too much, right?â
You forget how to breathe for a minute. His tone is hard, a sheer contrast to playful John that was here just a minute ago. Not quite scary, since it doesnât even sound like a threat, but it is a reminder. Urgent one. âI know, butâ"
âNone of that. If you need something, you call me.â
âRight now, I need you to fix your car.â Comes out a little bit aggressive. It has Price raising an eyebrow.
âMy car seems perfectly good, why would I do that?" John leans against the door frame, looking down at you. You're pretty sure you've never felt smaller than you do now.
Using his advantage to intimidate you is smart. Something that heâs gonna do, if youâre gonna show him that youâre weak for it.
You cough. Trying to be civil here is a necessity, you think. Especially if you actively ignored him before. "Thing is, you blocked my car," you try to explainâcalmly, before you run away from him; you even point at your red Mazda, a late birthday gift from your grandfather. "I have to⌠drive my son to his school."
"I did?" he raises his eyebrow. For a minute, his eyes are off you, attention on the parking lot, trying to search for the problem. Then, he looks at you again. "Mm. Seems perfectly fine to me, love.â
Love. He does it to annoy you, thatâs the only reason why heâs so unfazed. Or, heâs trying to achieve something different, but for now, you canât think straight when this manâhalf naked man, to be exactâblocks your carâs way, looking good.
Too good.
âI canât move in any way. Youâre⌠too close.â
âToo close? Could say this soonerââ
ââtoo close with your car, I mean,â you add, weakly. Price has you stepping on your tiptoes, so careful with picking your words. Precise what you mean because if youâre not gonna do it, he could take advantage and change the meaning.
He chuckles, his smile widening. If heâd be anyone else, youâd think that is a predator move. âMakinâ you all nervous and stressed. Why? Am I this scary, love?â
Again. Again this pet name.
âJustâ Can you, please, move your car?â you ask, massaging your temples. He makes you weak in the knees and irritated at the same time; you donât even acknowledge the steps forward that he makes.
He gets your attention the moment he tips your chin up. This feeling itself is making your stomach jump; skin sizzles with that specific need, deep in your heart that you rather not admit, but it is there. It is there, and John makes it difficult not to melt into a puddle in his hands. Ridiculously warm hands on your skin, to add.
The comfort he brings wraps around you tight like a blanket in particularly cold mornings. Important, needed even, especially in fragile moments. You almost forgot how it feels.
âWhat car is it? Red mazda?â He breaks eye contact with you for a second to glance once again at the parking lot.
âYeah.â
He locks his eyes with you again. âOh, honey. Should say that soonerâ
Thereâs a storm happening inside your head; a strange type of deja vu falls on you like a tsunami wave; unexpected and cruel in some way. Did you not tell him what car is it? That's why he acted funny, so cocky, not taking you seriously? Youâre sure you pointed in the right direction, even if you didnât tell him what car it was. He looked here.
Or maybe he didn't? Why would he lie, though? You might as well be tired, you think. Itâs not easy to be a single mom, to balance everything out.
Right?
Storm inside your head makes you ignore the warm feeling in your stomach, when John guides you to the parking lot with his big hand on the small of your back.
âI'm sorry.â
"It's okay. Nothing, really," you gulp. "You're new here, so you might not know my car."
Even if youâre sure you pointed him the direction of it.
âCould know better,â he hums, caressing your clothed skin. Tenderly, afraid to break you in any means. âSo, so sorry. Really. And look, now because of me you have to put up with being late. Came home later than usual⌠If I saw all of that, Iâd find a different spot.â
You smile a little, pleased with his explanation. Thereâs nothing wrong in your mind about this situation, nothing that could indicate that heâs lying. Even if heâs a little too close for comfort, you think itâs because thatâs who he is.
He moves his car quickly, while you talk to your kid; he almost didnât notice your disappearance, too interested in his toys. Even if you want desperately to listen, your brain is too occupied with the previous situation, with Price looking so good without a shirt.
Your son tells you about the âdramaâ between the elephant and monkey when John comes back into the picture, right before you are about to reverse.
âEverythinâ good now? Nothing else to take care of?â
âEverythingâs alright.â You give him another smile. âThank you, John.â
âNo problem.â He glances at your kid, then, back at you. âWeâll have to talk later. About the garden.â
âYeah. Yeah, weâll have to.â
#captain john price x reader#john price x reader#cod x reader#x reader#call of duty fanfic#john price x you#captain price x reader#captain price x you#john price x y/n#john price imagines#price x reader#price x you#single mom reader
465 notes
¡
View notes
Text
Echo asking for Reg Manuals early on in his deployment with the Batch wanting desperately for normality. Only to find out that his shitty little brothers cannot care for anything. ever.
Hunter sheepishly hands his over and Echo just stares at it, watches the drool drip from a bite mark in the cover and goes "What the fuck did you do to it." and Hunter mumbles "I was hungry."
Never asking Hunter for anything again, then.
Wrecker looks at Echo like he grew another head and yells: "TECH, WHA'S A REG MANUAL?" which gives Echo all he needs, really. His disappointment turns to "what the SHIT" when Tech oh so calmly points to the very much ruined and indented copy of the Reg Manual that is currently the ONLY thing holding up Wrecker's bunk leg.
The brawler laughs while explaining how THAT happened while Echo tries to figure out why they didn't just.... fix the leg.......
Crosshair doesn't even say anything, just points across to where his is pinned to the wall, blaster bolts shot through the book as it's open on a diagram of a trooper. It was MEANT to display armour, but Crosshair wanted to practice for mess fights.
Echo simply sighs. Because of course he would do that.
Tech, thank the MAKER, hands Echo his Reg Manual and it's completely and utterly pristine. Echo nearly cried with joy, and Tech very expertly dodges his bone-crushing hug of thanks. He just asked for it back later.
Echo plops down in his hammock, ready to kick back and take a much needed trip down memory lane...
....only to find Tech's neat scribe COVERING the pages.
It's fine, Echo swears as he tries to read past it. Just, it's a bit hard when Tech's made so many damn corrections, pointing out errors Echo had seen himself so many times, his writing so lovely and so well tucked to the margins that Echo mistakes it for the actual text.
The deeper he goes, the bigger the notes, and on the blank pages at the front and back, Echo notices the rest of the batch scribbled and drew for each other, obviously following Tech's strict guide to not writing on the actual pages themselves.
It's.. kind of cute, actually.
Its sweet, just how much personality Echo can see in the few messy hearts Wrecker dotted along the sides, or the small reminders Hunter jotted down, for himself and for Tech. The stickman with the crosshair shooting another, goggled stickman doesn't go unnoticed, either, but the date indicates that its been years since that drawing.
At the very end, Echo's forgotten to be so upset at how defiled his usual precious Regs are, instead finding himself smiling at the drawings he found, hidden between pages. To be fair, its mostly plants, diagrams- but Echo can see Tech's handiwork in the messy drawings of Hunter, Crosshair, and Wrecker. They're younger, but it's them.
Tech didn't sign the drawing, but the attention to detail makes it rather obvious who was responsible. Echo smiles, tucking the page back lovingly to its spot, and returning the Regs with care.
Tech doesn't mention it. Echo doesn't, either. He borrows it some more, and mourns its loss when Kamino disappears.
#uh anyways they make me weep#sw the bad batch#tbb tech#tbb crosshair#tbb wrecker#tbb hunter#tbb echo#i love echo learning about his brothers through watching them... its kinda sweet
158 notes
¡
View notes
Text
It's a Mobility Aid...Not a Fucking Prop!!!
I guess it's just my brand at this point to go mia for a few weeks, then come back with a rant about some new, mildly infuriating realization I've had.
This particular realization is one that's kind of been buzzing in the back of my head as something that was kind of off, but I couldn't quite put my finger on what it was until now. The 'aha' moment came when I was looking for pictures of Kaz Brekker to add to my collection of stickers on my binder for school. As I scrolled through, I began to notice a frustrating trend in the fan art...
Kaz Brekker, a canonically disabled character, who uses a cane to walk is consistently being drawn holding his cane as if it's just a prop, or a weapon, rather than what it actually is A GODDAMN MOBILITY AID!!!!
And before you start with 'but he hits people with it' I'm going to stop you right there. Yes, he does use it as a weapon sometimes, and it's even described in canon as being designed with the intention of using it as a club if needed, but it's still a cane. It is still a mobility aid that he needs TO WALK, and when you treat it like nothing more than a prop or a weapon, you erase a very important aspect of who Kaz is as a character, and honestly, as a cane user with chronic pain myself, it feels almost violent to see how often it happens.
Whenever I see art of Kaz standing with his cane in his hands like a billy club, or holding it across one or both shoulders, all I can think about is how much pain he would be in to hold a position like that without using the cane for support. At numerous points in the books during Kaz's pov chapters, we get several very detail descriptions of what it feels like for him on a daily basis as a result of his chronic pain. We also get several instances of how it feels when he has his cane taken from him, when he uses it to fight, or when he's disguised and doesn't want to give himself away. We see the toll it takes on his body to do this, and he always pays for it later.
Kaz does not swagger around Ketterdam with his cane over his shoulder, occasionally taking a swing at rival gang members. If this is the image you have in your head of him, please, I beg you to get rid of that image. Kaz is DISABLED. He has severe chronic pain and walks with a heavy limp and that cane is making contact with the ground on every step. Based on the kind of injury he had, I would imagine that his injured leg might even be a bit shorter than the other, which would possibly be evident in a visible lack of symmetry in the height of his shoulders. And that's just one possible way it could affect his body beyond just his leg that would be outwardly visible.
There are many more, but the point is that injuries like the one Kaz experienced can affect the entire body even with the best care and therapy, and Kaz didn't have any of that. I'm not asking you to be a medical expert just to draw fanart, but I am begging you think about things like this and at the very least, PLEASE draw the mobility aid being used as a mobility aid, not a prop. Stop erasing and sanitizing what little representation we have. If you think it makes him 'look more badass' or whatever to have his cane over his shoulder, I kind of don't really care.
P.S. And don't use the tv show as a reference because Freddy Carter is yet another example of a non disabled actor playing a disabled character.
#ellen's ableism rants#ellen writes#kaz brekker#disabled characters#disability representation#disability#six of crows#chronic pain#cane user#mobility aid#mobility aid user#characters with mobility aids#fanart#kaz brekker fanart
84 notes
¡
View notes
Text
the Spirited Away theatrical adaptation
today I went with @birdfriender to see the stage production of Spirited Away, produced by Toho, currently on tour in London.
and like. holy shit??
you might say how the hell could you adapt a film like spirited away to stage. the answer is: incredibly inventive stagecraft, puppetry, costumes and especially choreography.
I was completely blown away by how this play flowed across the stage. set transitions were masked with lighting to direct attention, with the descending screen, with the rotating central platform that managed to function as nearly every part of the bathhouse. stairs, rotating bridges, creative use of size to indicate perspective (like the tiny train that circles the stage), and just the way the crew would move the props with a flourish -
but also the puppetry, like man! the way characters like Kamaji, Yubaba's giant head (used only at moments of intense emotion), and No Face would be operated by entire teams of puppeteers - it was extraordinary. the puppetry director was Toby OliĂŠ who's worked on a million different things including War Horse and you can really see them applying all these tricks accumulated over the years...
the show is remarkably faithful to the film; a few scenes are slightly abridged but every sequence I remembered was there and deliver with style. where it does need to pause and breathe, like in the famous train scene, it does. and like... it is fascinating to see an adaptation from animation to theatre. seeing how Mone Kamishiraishi (Chihiro) would stumble and bumb into walls just as she would under the pen of Shinya Ohira. or how a memorable sequence in the film could be represented symbolically: a collapsing pipe as a string of segments pulled on a string, a flower garden by dancers in flower outfits.
some of my fave sequences involved wooden panels carried by dancers, choreographed so the characters would weave between them, or they'd rotate to represent elevators on different floors. it was also fascinating to see how they'd symbolically represent things it would be impossible to stage, often representing fluids with fabric sheets. a transformation could be shown with actors swapping places with a flourish. at other times, it feels like stage magic tricks are in use, like a flash of light drawing your attention to a rope that was there all along. sometimes the puppeteers will be on stage, wearing simple beige outfits that mark them as not being 'present' as they manipulate the soot sprites and frogs and so on.
they also made effective, sparing use of a large projector screen, which descended at certain points, primarily for the driving scene at the beginning and the train scene. this actually didn't use scenes from the movie, but more of a soft, painterly style applied over... probably animated video? hard to say with the blurring, could be live footage. it reminded me of the use of similar screens in the later YoRHa plays, although it was a minor element here.
we weren't allowed to take photos (i took this one during the final bow anyway) and I would have been too busy watching to take them anyway, but this teaser shows briefly a number of the coolest setups. still, it's so much more when you see the whole thing flowing along without interruption.
youtube
and it was very interesting to me looking at this kind of show - big stage, directly homaging an animated film - from the eyes of someone who knows a lot more about film and animation than I do about theatre.
compared to film, you simply do not have closeups; the closest thing is when the puppeteers bring out the segments of Yubaba's giant floating head, but this is used sparingly. so everything is basically a long shot. however, because the acuity of a human eye is much greater than that of a camera, even from near the back of the theatre you can make out a lot of details that you wouldn't be able to make out with an equivalent camera shot. this allows compositions where there is loads going on at stage at once, with the eye being drawn to different areas by lighting and movement.
I do feel like there are definitely things to learn for animators from this kind of stage choreography. so many times I thought like, wow, that's so clever. like how chihiro riding haku was shown by splitting the dragon puppet into segments and putting her on the shoulders of one of the puppeteers.
and everything was done with such style too. if something shuffles off stage, you know it will be done with a wiggle and a flourish. small things but they add so much.
presumably because this seems like an incredibly involved show, there are multiple performers for each major character: four Chihiros, and three Hakus, Yubabas, Kamajis and so on. I'm not sure the exact lineup tonight beyond Chihiro. the exception is Kaonashi (No Face), who is played only by Hikaru Yamano, who gives an incredible performance, sidling and flexing around the stage in all sorts of strange ways that really get across the character's whole deal despite literally performing under a white mask and concealing robe. it's kinda amazing.
another fantastic casting is fundoshi dancer Yuya Igarashi as Kashira (the stack of three big heads that serve Yubaba, and speak only in wordless grunts). he basically has his real head as one of the three, and he has two more heads on his hands, and moves them around in incredibly energetic and funny ways. it's a brilliant way to interpret this, somehow feeling perfectly appropriate to have a buff guy in a red loincloth moving them around.
Yubaba's actress tonight would have been either Mari Natsuki or Hitomi Harukaze; either way she did an incredible job, it was really cool seeing a more human-proportioned version of the character and she brought a lot of energy and authority to the role.
the whole cast did a fucking amazing job honestly. I wish I knew more about theatre acting so I could comment more specifically on the tricks they were doing, but you definitely felt Chihiro's emotions
the production is in Japanese; English subtitles were shown on two screens on either side of the stage. the translation was on the 'honorifics included' end of that scale, but absolutely clear and idiomatic. the format worked - it was generally not hard to follow the action and glance at the subtitles, even though they were further away than they would be in film - and it definitely filled the theatre. I really hope this leads to more Japanese theatrical productions going on tour like this. wish i'd been able to see the Totoro one a few months ago.
definitely this kind of theatre must depend on a fairly obscene budget of the kind that only comes to biiiiig properties like, say, an adaptation of a beloved Studio Ghibli movie (one family turned up in cosplay) - there's a lot to be said for less extravagant staging. at the same time... this really was something.
i gotta go to the theatre more
157 notes
¡
View notes
Text
The Timelines in 4 Minutes
Since the Olympics are finally over, and I have three episodes of 4 Minutes to go on, I thought I would spend some time trying to figure out the timelines.
I'm someone who figures out what I want to say by writing it out, so this post will most likely be me "thinking out loud" and drawing conclusions as I go, and then, at the end, I'll have a clearer view of the timelines (hopefully).
(This is most likely going to be one long-ass post, so beware.)
Let's start with some initial notes before I dive into the fun stuff.
The contents of this post may be influenced by some of my theories (pre-premiere theories, episode 1, episode 2, episode 3), and I might come up with new ones as I write this post (they will be highlighted in purple so possible readers of this mammoth post can choose to ignore them if they want, lol), but my focus is primarily on the timelines themselves and, perhaps, on the passing of time throughout the episodes as well.
As I start this post, I believe there are 3 timelines (which are subject to change as I continue to write):
The present timeline, which is what starts off both the 1st and the 2nd episodes (these are events from the future from our current vantage point).
The 4-minute timeline, which is where Great changes things (I've previously called this the OOBE timeline, since I believe Great is having an out-of-body experience and is "reliving" his past).
Then there's a possible third timeline (I've previously thought it might've been the real past, which showed us events that actually happened in the past paralleled with the 4-minute timeline) but I'm most unsure about this one, so I'll just call it the 3rd timeline until my thoughts are more clear about it.
Now... Where the hell do I start?
Time
It might be a good idea to start with the clues that there are different timelines at play and then dive deeper into the episodes to figure out what's happening.
Besides the obvious clues that Great is sent back in time when he has his moments of the 4-minute phenomenon (4MP), there are other clues that different timelines are at play.
The first clue shows up in the Korn and Tonkla scene from the 1st episode and all the way through to the scene where Korn drops Great off at his place after their family dinner.
This is where I'll be crazy about the details (but I'm a hundred percent sure they matter, especially since this whole show is about time), but if we look at Korn's watch when he arrives at Tonkla's place, it says 7:15-ish pm.
Later, when Tonkla wants a second round, it says 8:55 pm.
Then they get interrupted because Korn's dad wants him home for dinner. They have their family dinner, and then, when Korn drops Great off at his condo after dinner, Korn's watch says 7:15-ish while the clock on Great's phone says 07:13.
(Great already has issues with time, which I believe is the effect of him having a cardiac arrest at 11:00 in the present, but the time anomaly in this particular sequence is different than Great seeing 11:00 and counting when he's alone.)
This whole sequence is meant to be the same day Great hit Manee with his car. All of them (even the dad and Great's mom) are wearing the same clothes they wore when introduced throughout that very same day. Yet, the times on the visible watches and clocks tell us something strange is going on.
(Could this just be me overanalyzing the watches and clocks? Sure. But the interesting thing is that the time is still consistent in the sequence with Korn and Tonkla. It would make sense that they talk, then fuck, and then lie there butt ass naked and cuddling for a total of 1 h 40 min. And, again, considering this show is about time, I trust that the creators have been meticulous about those details, even if it means changing the time on the watches and clocks for every new take if needed.)
Considering what I wrote above, I might start calling the 3rd timeline Tonkla's timeline, because I feel like it revolves around him.
Either way, I will focus on the 4-minute timeline and the third one in particular because I don't see a possible 4th one right now (I might by the end of this post, though, lol).
The question is, then, how we can determine which scenes belong to which timelines. I will get to that further below, because first...
Letâs look at some more details Iâve noticed.
Blurry Edges
One of those details is the dreamy, blurry edges (I'm sure there's a technical term for this, but I have no idea what that might be, I'm just guessing that they're adding it in post-production, but don't quote me on that). Much of the show has a dreamy feel overall, but I'm talking about the blurry edges in particular.
I've noticed blurry edges in the following scenes:
When Great feels iffy in the elevator (ep 1)
I'm pretty sure there's some of it happening in the scene when Tyme is treating Manee, both in the ER and in the OR during the surgery (ep 1)
At the family dinner when Great's mom tells him he should go see Manee at the hospital (ep 1)
When Great feels iffy at the hospital before his second 4MP (ep 1)
When Great is sitting in Title's car talking about where View is (ep 2)
I'm not sure about this one since it's hard to tell because it's dark, but it might be used in the scene where Title beats the shit out of Dome (ep 2)
When Great brings Dome into the hospital (ep 2)
When Korn is having a meeting with Fasai and her dad (ep 2)
When Great feels iffy and has his fourth 4MP at the basketball court (ep 3)
When Win reads through Tonkla's brother's social media posts and comments, which is a memory of him doing it (ep 3)
And I'm pretty sure we're getting more of this since there were scenes in the trailer that had those blurry edges as well, for example:
The pattern I'm seeing with these scenes (if we exclude the first scene in the elevator, Korn's meeting with Fasai, and Win's memories, the latter might've had blurry edges just because it was his memory, btw) is that each scene has something to do with Great's 4MP, before the rewind and/or after the rewind.
(Perhaps the reason for the blurry edges showing up in Korn's scene is because he's the possible third character that's having an OOBE. And if this theory is true, there's a possibility that there's yet another timeline/reality/perspective present that entwines with both Tonkla's and Great's timelines.)
There are also the tilting camera shots (mostly showing up in scenes with Great), which I might get into next week as I continue to build on this post.
But, what does all this with the blurry edges mean?
I have no fucking clue.
Perhaps it's just meant to show that things aren't what they seem. Perhaps it's meant to show which characters are experiencing OOBEs (Great, Tyme, and possibly Korn)? Perhaps it's meant to show moments that are affected by Great changing them through his 4MP? Again, I have no fucking clue, yet (but it might start to get clearer as we get more episodes).
So, moving on...
Different Realities/Parallel Worlds/POVs?
There is another aspect to this whole timelines discussion I'm having with myself that I want to bring up. And that's the clues I've found that support the possibility of different realities/parallel worlds/different point-of-views. I'm not sure what to call them, yet.
So, let's dive into the moments I'm referring to and try and figure it out.
The second time Great experiences his 4MP, he goes to the ER's front desk and we're shown the nurse's actual desk where there's a clock that we're supposed to focus on because it's telling us that time will do weird shit again.
The moment Great has been sent back in time (after being in Manee's room), he's standing in the same position, looking down at the clock on the desk, and realizes it's happened again (just like when he hit Manee). However, this time, the things on the desk are different.
The time on the clock is the same, but the mirror is in a different position, 75 has turned to 74 (I'm not sure what these numbers mean), 77F has turned to 76F (which I'm guessing are Fahrenheit degrees), and the pink, blue, and yellow papers are lying on top of the folder the second time around.
If Great was sent back in time to the exact moment he was in before he went to Manee's room, the things on the desk would've been in the same place, right? So, he might not even have been sent back to the reality he was in before this 4MP happened.
Another clue is the sunrise and the sunset artworks on the wall at the hospital. We often see them by the entryway:
Then, in the 2nd episode, it looks like at least the right one is hanging outside Manee's room (which we've seen isn't anywhere near the front desk since Great had to walk around a bend to get to her room in the first episode).
Could they have more than one of those artworks in the hospital? Sure. So, take this with a grain of salt.
(Btw, I find those artworks so fascinating because sunrises are usually cooler (more blueish) while sunsets are usually warmer (more red/orangeish). But from our perspective, looking at them straight on, the warmer artwork has the sun setting in the west while the cooler artwork has the sun rising in the east. And, since the eye in left-to-right reading cultures often automatically goes from left to right, it's interesting that the sunset comes first and then the sunrise. Perhaps it's to show that the world is turned upside down now that Great is having these weird experiences. Or perhaps it's to show that the time between the sunset and sunrise will be important for Great and Tyme since Great watches Tyme pass those artworks (from sunset to sunrise) the first time he has visions of them having sex. But, I digress...)
Another set of clues is in the scene with Great and Tyme sitting on the bleachers by the basketball court and Great has another 4MP in the third episode.
The first time we see this wide shot, there are 5 people (excluding Great and Tyme):
4 of them are wearing white shirts (one with a darker cardigan), and they sit on Great's side. One wears a blue shirt and sits on Tyme's side. This is where Great asks Tyme why he didn't call before coming to the University.
As they continue to talk (and the camera shot is closer to them), you can see the top of the head of a girl walking towards the bleachers. There's also another person walking by, waving, but he's walking right past them rather than towards the bleachers.
Then, as Great thanks Tyme for the Thai tea and gets up to leave, we get this wide shot. The only difference here is that the girl who walked towards the bleachers is now sitting next to her friend. That seems logical, right?
But, then Great has his rewind, and he comes back to the moment where Tyme reminds Great to get his wound treated. Great tells Tyme about his precognition and Tyme tells Great that he will consult with one of his doctor friends. Then, as Tyme stands up to leave, we get this wide shot:
The two girls at the bottom left are in the same position but the girls two steps above and to the far left are different, the boy and the girl next to them are new, and the boy with the white shirt to the right is the same boy that sat on Great's side previously.
Coincidence?
Well... After Tyme tells Great that he can call him Tyme rather than Doctor, and Great says that they should grab something to eat after he gets his wound treated, we get this shot:
Now we're back to the original two girls to the left, there are new boys wearing black on the bottom left, and the boy in blue is back again. That's a lot of moving around in such a short time.
The only things that stay consistent in all of the shots are the bags (except for one of them) and bottles.
So, what's going on? Is this another one of those things that happened at the hospital where Great was sent back to a reality where things were different from the reality he was in before the 4MP?
Is the show giving us different perspectives? For example, Great's perspective before his 4MP, Tyme's perspective when he says he'll talk to Den, and Great's perspective again when Tyme has left? That could work for the hospital example as well since it was from Greatâs perspective before the 4MP but turned into Tymeâs after the 4MP as he asked the nurse at the front desk who the guy that bumped into him was.
Or is the show just underlining how strange everything is during the 4-minute timeline (and Great's possible OOBE)?
Well, the latter might not be it because clues like this don't just show up when Great is around.
In the first episode when Korn comes to Tonkla's place, Tonkla's laptop shows he has something blue and yellow on his screen:
Then the screen is black as if it's been turned off:
Later, when it cuts to them lying naked on the sofa, it's just white:
Also, notice how the small spotlight behind the desk is positioned differently and pointing in another direction on the desk than in the first image above.
Could it be that Tonkla simply used the laptop and moved the lamp between them having sex and lying there? Sure. Again, if we look at Korn's watch from the beginning of this whole sequence (7:15-ish pm) to when Tonkla wants a second round (8:55 pm), we know he had 1 h 40 min to rearrange things and do stuff on that laptop.
But, you know, unless the house is on fire, who would move from that spot on top their sugar daddy who is lying there deliciously naked? And especially to do some stuff on a laptop? Fuck technology (the not-so-good kind of fuck) and fuck your sugar daddy instead (the deliciously bad kind of fuck). We all know Tonkla wants to. But, I digress...
Take this detail with a grain of salt if you want to (or a whole fistful). For me, though, this shows that there's a possibility that changes and inconsistencies like this aren't just happening around Great. And (to my crazy mind, at least), that it might be two timelines showing up throughout this particular sequence between Korn and Tonkla.
24 Hour vs AM/PM Clock Settings
And on the topic of inconsistencies... Another thing I want to point out is the inconsistencies with the digital clocks when it comes to them being 24-hour clocks or set to the am/pm thing.
The hospital seems to have a 24-hour setting in some cases:
But not in others:
This could be in the morning, of course, and the darkness outside Manee's window might just be because of the thunder/lightning storm (but I still think it's night rather than morning).
And then we also have Great (who, to be fair, has a special relationship to time in this show), who sees 11:00/11:02 both in the morning and at night:
And the am/pm thing is on his phone when Korn drops him off:
Even though his phone seems to have the 24-hour setting:
More than once:
But, again, Great clearly has issues with time and clocks/watches. So, this might just be a way to show how confusing it is to him.
But, what if it isn't? What if it's an indication that several realities are entwining? (Okay, I feel like I'm going with the term "realities" when it comes to this.)
My Timelines So Far
So, what are my conclusions after watching the first 3 episodes?
At this point, I think there are 3 timelines:
The present timeline.
The 4-minute timeline.
The real past/Tonkla's timeline (which is meant to show us the real past events that happened, most of it from Tonkla's perspective).
Having Tonkla's timeline be the real past is possible considering the inconsistencies in time during the Korn and Tonkla scene and then the Korn and Great scene in the 1st episode.
And before someone says this doesn't make sense because of all the missed calls Korn has (if anyone is still reading this, lol)... Well, that's because Korn exists in both timelines and the scene when he looks at the missed calls in that bathroom in the 3rd episode:
Could be the 4-minute timeline rather than Tonkla's timeline (the real past). That could make sense because all we've seen of Tonkla since Korn told him off over the phone is him waiting by his phone for Korn to call.
We never saw Tonkla call Korn again after being told off.
On the flip side, if Korn is in the real past when he looks at those missed calls in episode 3, it would make sense that when he wants to call Tonkla while he's waiting for Great at the bar (in the 4-minute timeline), the icons on the top right of his phone are different from the phone he looked at in the bathroom:
(Am I getting too crazy about this? Yes. Do I care? No, because it's fun.)
Could he be using different phones? Yes. Could those icons change depending on where he is and what settings he's using? Sure (I'm not familiar with Samsung phones so I have no idea what most of those icons mean). But it could also mean that we're seeing Korn in different timelines in these two scenes, which makes it possible for Tonkla's timeline to show us the real past.
(I personally prefer the option that the scene with Korn looking at the missed calls is from Tonkla's timeline (the real past) while Korn almost calling Tonkla in the bar, and then smiling at his phone as he's going to the bathroom, is from the 4-minute timeline where Tonkla's brother (who I believe is Dome) hasn't been killed.)
Also, I think showing us the real past is a smart way to show us what leads up to Tonkla beating the shit out of someone.
(I believe that scene is from the real timeline, and whoever he's beating with that rock, might have an effect on the things that are happening right now. I'm not sure what kind of effect, though. Perhaps it's a possible third person experiencing an OOBE and "living" in the 4-minute timeline. Perhaps Great is going through this OOBE to prevent that murder from happening after he wakes up (if he ever does). I'm not sure at this point.)
So, that's where I'm at with the timelines after 3 episodes.
And, when it comes to the inconsistencies in certain scenes, the easy answer is that they are just meant to show that this whole 4-minute timeline is an inconsistent mess of (what I believe to be) Great's OOBE.
But, I would personally find it more interesting if these inconsistencies (like all the people around Great and Tyme changing in that scene at the basketball court) are evidence that there is more than one character experiencing an OOBE and that the inconsistencies shown are there because the characters have different perspectives of the events happening.
Now, I had planned to make a flowchart of the scenes in each episode divided into the three different timelines I've written about above. But, I want to get this post out before the 4th episode drops tomorrow, and I just don't have time to make the flowchart before that (or enough images left in this post to fit something like a flowchart in it before I hit the pesky limit). So I'll wait with that chart until next week instead (when I'll continue to build on this post in a reblog).
Waiting to create and post the flowchart until after the new episode tomorrow also gives me another episode to nerd out about. It's a win-win for me.
96 notes
¡
View notes
Text
ive been sitting on this concept for Lil Cheese for a few months now trying to chew out how i wanted to approach it; im really happy with how she turned out. :)
The idea being that back when Pinkie absorbed all of the chaos magic at the end of the series, it had some lingering effects despite her being drained of it. Also in the MLP game for Lil Cheese it says "this future filly will have inherited twice the chaotic party energy of any average pony" which like,,, YES Cheese and Pinkie lmao,,,, BUT WHAT IF...... đł went with the name Mascarpone Pie, she goes by Marcy for short. :^) COUGH Marcy Pie. I don't think she'd ever get a cutie mark, which they think is weird at first but it makes sense later when she kinda ages into a draconequus. she doesn't reach her full draconequus form until after adulthood, but as a kid she'd have these weird inexplicable bursts of chaos magic that for a while, ponies would assume was natural given the filly's parents. shed be an awkward lanky teen who starts growing horns, thats kinda when everyone's like oooooooh............. i think shed actually be a pretty goofy and happy kid but uh.... in tf fashion i wanted to draw expressions of distress at her gradually changing appearance. i dont think she'd be immortal either, but her lifespan is very long. eventually she'd figure out how to disguise herself as a normal-looking pony but by that point everyone's pretty aware and normal about how she looks. minor detail, but i bet she'd snort when she laughs lol. if it matters her draconequus bits are: reindeer, rabbit, bee, giraffe, and dolphin.
#i just wanted to do something different with Lil Cheese theyre so BORING to me lol#not that theres anything wrong with that but U___U squandered a hasbro baby character yknow#My Art#Lil Cheese#Mascarpone Pie#Cheese Sandwich#Pinkie Pie#Earth Pony#Pony#Draconequus#My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic#MLP: FiM#this design was so fun to make fr
180 notes
¡
View notes
Note
As someone who's doing their own daily-character for now, I've been thinking a little about how you draw everyday. Namely your simple artstyle and cell-shading, which probably helps when it comes to working on drawings like the one about Operation Havier.
Which leads me to ask this one question- do you ever make a prompt list, or do you just go straight into drawing whatever you feel like drawing? This is coming from my own curiosity since I'm planning to make prompt lists for myself next year.
Putting it under a cut because I like to ramble but don't want to spam my account
However, yes, I do have a list where I write down ideas if they come to me! Though on most days I work on a whim anyway, as I often procrastinate until like midnight (don't do this I just barely have any real afternoons anymore) which doesn't leave me with much time to actually work on them.
Sorry if I come off point laterâ but first off, I don't draw every day and allow myself to skip a lot!! Important detail
I mean, I COULD try to do them quickly as I designed this art style in a way so it would specifically be one I could work with fast, but I want to like... actually put time into the ideas that I'm excited about. It's nice to look over it anyway when you lack inspiration though, nor will you always remember everything you've planned on doing
(By the way, it's worth to note that while following a schedule is nice, you should totally take breaks, as any artist needs)
Hell, don't think you need to colour them even, my friends have accounts too and they allow themselves to post sketches and small doodles etc which is objectively the smart thing to do
You're gonna make ugly art at one point and it's fine to allow yourself to, if your main goal is to make art daily then just a 10 minutes sketch is all you can ask for already
54 notes
¡
View notes
Note
Hi!! Wanted to send smth in for fluffy Friday :3
Could you write a thing for hobie with an artist S/o painting on hobieâs back and just having a chill time together while doing so đĽş?
Thank you for the adorable prompt!! đŤśđŤś Hope u like it!
Pairing: Hobie Brown x gn! Reader/ Spider-Punk x gn! Reader
Tags: no use of Y/N, no specific physical description of the reader, suggestive content, cw food mention, FLUFF.
Ęâ ¡â á´Ľâ ¡â Ę
You find out that Hobie's ticklish with the first brush stroke of your paintbrush on his skin. He squirms faintly with his toned back muscles moving subtly, but you take notice because of your current position on his back. The paint is cool when it hits his skin, but you grant him reprieve from the cold with your warm hands.
You're straddling his waist, your legs sit comfortably on his sides, mindful of your weight that he insists he can handle because of his enhanced abilities. But your instincts make you lift yourself up slightly above him, every time you do this he reaches for your thighs blindly, bringing you back down on his waist with a disapproving grunt and a quiet and stern âlovieâ
âYou're ticklishâ you coo whilst your hands expertly paint individual blades of grass on the small of his back. Your fluffy pajama pants doesn't help, with every move from you, it tickles him more.
âNuh uhâ Hobieâs voice is muffled by the pillow, if not for the slight tickle he would've fallen asleep from the start. With you on top and gently painting on his back, your hands gliding along his skin, he thinks he's in heaven.
You take a clean brush, bringing it to sweep it across his nape. He shudders, proving your point. Laughing, you bend down to kiss him right over where you tickled him as an apology. An apology he accepts wholeheartedly.
âYâknow, when I accepted to be your canvas I expected to be pampered not tickled to deathâ
âSo dramatic,â you whisper, blowing air into his ear that earns you a flick on your forehead that may or may not have made his shoulder ache a bit. âAfter, I promiseâ Hobie hums at the prospect of you actually pampering him after.
Giggling, you continue to finish your work of art. Painting delicate daisies all over the bottom of his back. You're careful this time, trying extra hard not to tickle him.
âCan I guess now?â Hobie cranes his neck to look over his shoulder, silently wishing he was bit by a radioactive owl instead just so he can look at you fully. That would be a terrifying sight though, straight out of a horror movie.
You put some details on Hobie's iconic leather vest. Streaks of silver dance on his skin. âYou ask like you haven't been doing that for the past hourâ
Hobie ignores your quip with him squeezing your thigh. âI feel like you're drawing triangles, pizza?â
He isn't completely wrong, you are painting triangles for the spikes on his vest. âPizza? Are you that hungry, babe?â
âStarvingâ
âOkay, let's finish this later then.â You rub at his arms comfortingly.
âNo, finish it, love. I can feel that you're almost doneâ
âHow'd you know?â You lean down once again to face him.
Hobie's cheek is smooshed on the pillow, his lips puckered, a sight so adorable you just want to smooch him right there and then. You pat yourself on the back for not indulging yourself, a feat in itself.
âI can always tell when you're about to finishâ he smirks at his own joke.
You guffaw, âjust for that I'm gonna take my timeâ lifting yourself up, Hobie chases after you, trying his best to reach for your lips. But alas, thanks to his bones he couldn't reach you in time.
He gives up, flopping back down on the pillows with a muffled âalmostâ After a few more added details, you finally finish it in record time.
âAnd done!â You lift yourself off his back to his dismay. Patting his butt, Hobie gently eases himself off the bed, careful not to ruin your art.
He has pillow creases left on his skin which you gladly rub away with your thumb. âYou wanna see?â your eyes twinkle.
âPlease, lovieâ
Leading him towards the floor length mirror, you turn him around to face you instead of the mirror, to which he happily lets you manhandle him with a lopsided grin on his lips.
âTadaa!â You gesture around his back, shyness rearing its head, tucking your hands over your chest as you feel heat on your cheeks.
Hobie looks over his shoulder, he doesn't feel so hungry anymore. You've painted a pretty picture to say the least, it's a masterpiece, definitely your best work. It's a scenic landscape of you and Hobie on a sunny field, sitting on a picnic cloth, smiling as Hobie plays his guitar complete with tiny musical notes floating around. The grass is painted with tiny flowers that makes him want to reach down and pluck some for you to put in your hair.
He realizes you're waiting for his reaction, eyes searching his face. Hobie grabs you by your waist, twirling you around the bedroom whilst he beams at your laughing form. You laugh loudly as he squeezes the life out of you.
âIt's so fuckin' gorgeous! You're so fuckin' good!â Hobie places the biggest messiest kiss on your lips. He pulls away with a loud smacking of your lips then he decides immediately to kiss you once again on every surface of your face. âSo fuckin' perfect!â
âYou're eating my face!â
âBecause âm hungry!â
You think he really loves your little painting.
#request done#hobie brown x reader#spider punk x reader#the kr8tor's creations#hobie brown#spider punk#x reader#spider man across the spider verse#atsv fanfiction#atsv fanfic#atsv x reader#atsv hobie#fluffy fridays#hobie brown x gn!reader#hobie brown x you#spider punk x you#spider punk x gn! reader#hobie fluff#hobie x reader#fanfic#cw food mention
359 notes
¡
View notes
Text
I visited the WGA library to read Yellowjackets scripts and wanted to share some of my findings! (Pt. 3)
Here are my notes for 1x04! Quotation marks indicate direct lines from the script, whereas everything else is me paraphrasing.
Note: You can find an early version of 1x04 on Script Slug, but this must have been a very early version because many things are different. The notes I have here are not on that version of the script, rather they are on the final version of the script that ended up being used for the episode, so there will just be some new details and deleted scenes but no major plot differences between the script here and what we saw in the episode.
1x04 âBear Downâ
A lot of this is going to be about Nat because this is kind of her episode!
â˘During Natâs plane crash nightmare in the opening scene, the script says that Adult Nat briefly appears in the seat next to her father before being replaced by Teen Nat again. I thought this was interesting, I wonder what the writers are trying to say by having a flash of Adult Nat here, does it contribute to the whole âWeâve been here for yearsâ line when Nat dies? A representation of how Nat is essentially stuck in this place even 25 years later?
But also, the dream is Teen Natâs dream, not Adult Natâs, so is this would mean the dream is prophetic in a sense because Nat is seeing her future self for a moment. Maybe thatâs why they cut it out? Or was it just because Juliette wasnât available for such a small scene?
â˘Also in the dream sequence, the rifle Nat sees on her lap is noted by the script to be the same one she eventually uses to hunt in the wilderness. Another prophetic piece to Natâs dream.
All of that combined with Natâs dadâs line of âItâs been waiting for usâ shows that, even though Nat is the biggest skeptic in the wilderness, she is one of the first people the wilderness speaks to and gives prophetic visions to.
â˘Nat is said to be 14 years-old when her father dies. The script says she and Kevyn are 14 in that scene and the year is specified as 1993. I have always wondered how old she was supposed to be in that scene!
(But itâs worth noting that they might have aged her up a year in the final product because, in the script, the cassette she pops into her boom box when her and Kevyn enter her room is the album Where You Been by Dinosaur Jr., which came out in 1993. However, in the actual episode, Nat puts in the song âFeel the Painâ by Dinosaur Jr. instead, which came out in 1994. So this scene might actually be in 1994 in the final product despite what the script says.)
â˘Teen Kevyn Tan is absolutely hopelessly in love with Nat in the flashback scene. Heâs described as âclearly nervous to be in the bedroom of his crushâ and starts coloring his nails with Sharpie just to distract himself from his anxiety.
Then Nat pats the bed for him to sit next to her and Kevyn is âthrumming with hormones and anxiety.â When Nat takes Kevynâs hand to start painting his nails, we get this description:
âFor Kevyn, her gentle touch, her careful attentionâŚheâs in heaven. And simultaneously deep inside the hell of his own desire. Should he kiss her? Would she hate that?â
Nat is described as âobliviousâ to Kevynâs feelings in this moment.
I think these descriptions help us understand how much Kevyn idealizes Natalie in his head. He has this unrealistic, romanticized view of her even 25 years later when they meet again as adults. He likes the idea of her, but when he actually sees her trauma (and sees her as an actual person) he distances himself.
â˘There are someâŚinteresting descriptions of Shauna and Adam getting freaky in the script. This girl is scratching him hard enough to draw blood, choking him, putting her fingers in his mouth, etc. This shows how Shauna is using Adam to relive the adrenaline she felt in the wilderness.
â˘When Travis points the gun at Nat, the rest of the girls scatter and run away in fear, but Nat stays perfectly still, staring him down.
â˘While Taissa is talking to Diane about her political campaign and Diane asks her what âreally happened out there,â Tai hears wolves howling in the distance. Poor Tai is more traumatized by Vanâs wolf attack than Van is.
â˘When Kevyn and Nat meet for dinner as adults, they reminisce about breaking into the chem lab at school and stealing equipment to make bongs. My fun little headcanon is that Nat got caught during this incident and the principal put her on the soccer team to set her on the right path.
â˘Also in this scene, Kevyn notes that he last saw Nat âtwenty-two years ago,â which means he and Nat were in contact for a year or two after the rescue. Iâm thinking Nat probably stayed in Wiskayok for a year after they were rescued and just decided to cut all ties at some point and leave town, ghosting everyone she knew there.
Thereâs this line as well:
âKevyn: You were my best friend and you justâŚ
You fucking ghosted me.â
â˘Thereâs another deleted scene (which they did film and we actually got to briefly see it in the trailer for the episode but they took it out of the final product for some reason!) where Adult Nat is looking in the mirror after her date with Kevyn, having mixed feelings about her grief over Travis and her new feelings for Kevyn, and she sees her Teen self behind her in the mirror imitating her movements. A little trauma regression moment and Iâm not sure why it was cut. Iâm just salty because I love when Sophie Thatcher and Juliette Lewis are in a room together. But hereâs a photo of it:
â˘Thereâs an interesting part where Shauna finds Javiâs journal and looks through it. The journal has a bunch of drawings in it (wildlife sketches, comic book characters, etc.) that are described as really good; Javiâs talent as an artist is emphasized by the script.
I think this some subtle proof that the writers initially intended for Adam to be Adult Javi, with the obvious nod to the artist talent and I feel like the scripts for these early episodes highlight the closeness between Javi and Shauna in the wilderness more. The writers did confirm that they originally wanted Javi to be Adam, so I think you can see some details that support that in the scripts.
â˘Before Nat pulls the trigger on her dad, she feels âyears of humiliation and thwarted rageâ and she automatically âstiffensâ when he steps towards her. Just a reminder of how much this man traumatized her!
â˘When Shauna butchers the deer for the first time, she is described as feeling a âthrill sheâs never felt before.â This goes back to her sexual relationship with Adam in the adult timeline, that adrenaline from her role as the butcher that she misses and is trying to recreate.
â˘When Shauna returns home from her antics with Adam, Jeff asks, âHow was book club?â and Shauna immediately vomits all over the floorđŤ˘
#yellowjackets#natalie scatorccio#shauna shipman#misty quigley#taissa turner#van palmer#travis martinez#yj#Yellowjackets scripts
59 notes
¡
View notes
Note
Also, the detail of Houhua!SQH checking out the expensive earrings because the color reminded him of MBJ is heartbreaking. Kinda hope MBJ got isekai'd w/ him
I ACTUALLY THOUGHT ABOUT IF MBJ HAD GOTTEN ISEKAI'D WITH HIM AND I KIND OF REALLY WANT HIM TO BE!! I think it'd be normal reincarnation for him, he doesn't remember their past life, which just makes things more painful for Houhua actually.
Houhua is falling over himself trying to see if he remembers him but is getting nothing !! Sorry Houhua <3
I think he'd be from another village and they wouldn't bump into each other till way later down the line. Im thinking specifically like. Him reincarnating into the same clan as Haku actually. Don't they have some sort of bloodline limit that revolves around ice? I need that. Desperately.
Maybe in a parallel to SVSSS, MBJ here wants to become Kiri's Kage? Idk how thatd work, but like putting that on the table. But like him being a rogue nin, possibly not knowing that Haku survived the culling of their clan (omg he finally has a family he can have an actual positive relationship with! He just,, needs to find him first)
Houhua is straight up ready to drop everything he's been working at in Konoha to go to his kings side but MBJ does not remember his ass and would not know how to appreciate it correctly
I want them to meet and like, obviously MBJ is warry of this Konoha shinobi, but Houhua is incredibly uncharacteristically eager to help him out (which alarms and confuses whatever teammates hes with at the time) and ends up going out of his way to help him somehow
MBJ is left thinking he's a fucking idiot, real Konoha "friendship is magic" breed, and is incredibly confused by the kindness he was shown by him but kind of ends up chalking it up to just. "fucking konoha weirdos and their reputation for being soft"
(Meanwhile Houhua's teammates are giving him HELLA side eye rn, who are you and what happened to their cowardly, Uchiha "we must always choose our own interests over others, especially outside the village walls" Houhua)
(,,,they absoloutley think Houhua has a hopeless crush on the nukenin. Nothing Houhua does or says from this point on will change this assumption.)
(To be fair, they aren't,,, wrong?)
Some time later one of his teammates gives Houhua a cut out of MBJ from a bingo book, meaning it as a joke to tease Houhua, and the cut out ends up meaning much more to Houhua than anyone might have guessed.
(Even later, when they met again, Houhua ends up dropping the little picture where MBJ sees and MBJ is deeply confused by it)
Anyways what would MBJ go by here? I changed SQH's name to better fit the setting plus to draw a clear line between Shang Quinghua and Uchiha Houhua
Tbh I feel like just "Jun" works pretty well? I feel like it's also similar enough Haku's short n sweet name to be able to squint and wave a vague hand at them being related, like, on a surface level, idk, does that make sense?
ANYWHO YEAH !!! Houhua and Jun my beloveds <3
#birds fic talk#birds asks#naruto#svsss#shang quinghua#mobei jun#scum villain self saving system#moshang
52 notes
¡
View notes
Text
some Oswald doodles from the other day!
Iâll have to collect my thoughts on how I want to go about the s2 Arkham plotline another time. But itâs pretty much same idea, with Strange conditioning Oswald to have an aversion to violence. HOWEVER. It is not using that stupid machine. Iâm just gonna lean into the Clockwork Orange angle, which Iâm fairly sure is what this plotline was always meant to reference. Being sat and forced and watch violent imagery and films, but unlike how they go about it in Clockwork Orange I think Iâm gonna stick with shocks rather than drug induced nausea. That could be subject to change though, I need to do more research on the effectiveness of specific aversion therapies.
ALSO another detail that is changed with this arc is that Galavan is very much still around and involved! Oswald was admitted on ATTEMPTED charges. This entire program of ârehabilitationâ with prisoners is going to be apart of Galavanâs mayoral campaign, something about being able to eradicate crime in Gotham. This gives reason for the entire experiment to take place, because the shit with Strange like,,, making monsters in the basement? Gone. That plotline is gone, sorry! To me that whole plotline is when the show started to go downhill. He is still very unethical and does MENTAL experiments and such purely for fun, but this version is just a littleeee more grounded than the show and other iterations. Oswald is essentially the face of the program, being paraded and such by Galavan for his campaign once sheâs âcuredâ, and then subsequently tossed away with no aid. From that point itâs fairly similar to the show when she was in that weird state. Still a tad different though since the entire step family arc is also cut. Iâll have to get into that another time.
One last detail! The drawing at the bottom of her being nauseous is from her post-Arkham era before the breakdown. In this version, Ed does end up letting him actually stay for a bit rather than immediately kick her out (he DOES kick her out later on for being distracting to his work. That whole thing is something Iâll also get into another time). Little thing about her design I find neat there is that of course his hair is more tamed and whatnot, trying to be less crazy. But itâs also more masculine. I NEVER really draw Oswald with squared sideburns, when I think of her hair I think of triangles and such. But Iâm leaning into the idea that Gotham is about 20 years stuck in the past, and asylums werenât all that great for trans people. Itâs fucked up but it is a part of the whole âtreatmentâ and reintroduction to society as a functioning, âNORMALâ member of it. That means sheâs got to look the part! No more pesky makeup and crazy hair (this does in fact make her mental breakdown haircut when he does eventually snap sooo important).
#gotham#nygmobblepot#oswald cobblepot#the penguin#gothambutnotreally#plot#au#gotham au#hugo strange#edward nygma#writing#the riddler
191 notes
¡
View notes