#when like i said originally it often sounds MUCH BETTER than going for a really formal poetic high fantasy or oldtimey kind of vibe yknow
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the best way to write is however ur little heart desires obviously but personally subjectively pettily i think that most of the time people would be better off just writing how they talk
#generally. the way u talk will sound correct in a way that sentences u write down and consciously try to make Correct or Fancy will not#the more complex and poetic u try to get with it the less good ur words r gonna sound#theyre gonna be Off bc u are not used to speaking that way and the grammar doesnt come naturally to u#also generally like. elevated language and whatever is like. theres a time and place? and when ur just getting started#its really hard to tell when is an appropriate time or place#protip tho the correct place is generally not an ao3 summary u wanna be plain as hell there#itll sound better and itll grab my attention personally which is obv your main concern always all the time#obv im speaking from a very particular perspective and experiences vary based on this n that#nd like.. grammars made up yknow. if ur words sound weird to me bc the grammars off that doesnt make the writing BAD#but in the exact same vein tho just bc the way u talk isnt grammatically perfect doesnt mean thats a BAD way to write at all!#far from it!#and i feel like thats a big part of why ppl dont just write how they talk is theyre like. well i dont talk correct i talk casual#and like sure but whats wrong with casual in writing? u can still convey a hell of a lot w casual#nd maybe its harder to convey what u want or to strike the right tone writing that way nd that's fair but like#dismissing that sort of writing style out of hand on the basis it isnt proper writing is so silly#when like i said originally it often sounds MUCH BETTER than going for a really formal poetic high fantasy or oldtimey kind of vibe yknow#anyway. end yell
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Dirty Laundry
Male Reader x Anna
Tags: 22k, smut, cheating, oral, roleplay, creampie
The story is not ours, we alternate the original story to match our desired settings.
Another shift was finally over, and now I was filthy and hungry from all the dirty boxes that I had lifted. I used to clock out exhausted from all the strenuous work, but lately Iâve been feeling moreâworn out.
Iâd been working for a couple years to get me through college, as the early morning hours coordinated well with my classes. Being in the midst of summer break however, my schedule was more flexible, so I headed straight home.
I was greeted by a bright sunny, 'Good morning!' the moment I stepped into the apartment, bouncing my way from down the hall. It was my roommate Anna, who was often just waking up when I came home from work.
Anna was an ex-girlfriend, but after too many fights and a hundred petty differences, I was thrilled to call her âjust a friendâ, and somehow, my roommate.
As the lease ran out on my previous place, I was desperate for a quick renter to help with expenses. Anna happened to be searching as well, and suggested we split a place together seeing as how we both had steady partners. It seemed ridiculous at the time, but the fact that we were otherwise attached was the only reason we had even considered it.
Anna was definitely a great friend though, and we got along better when we werenât emotionally involved; I had to figure there was a chance we could make it work. We each assured our significant other the arrangement would be totally platonic, despite our history, and that we just needed a good living solution for a while.
My girlfriend Minji, who lived and worked outside of town, was hardly thrilled in the slightest. The girls knew each other from school, and didnât really see eye to eye. Minji actually warned me if I ever hooked up with Anna while we were living together, sheâd have me hunted down. She wasnât joking.
But with that said, we moved in.
It actually worked out well as we got settled. Anna worked in the afternoon and went out with her friends or boyfriend after work. I would hit the bed early in the evening and was up early in the morning. The only time we even saw each other was on the weekends, or early on summer mornings.
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âWhat smells so good?â I called down the hall.
âIâm making breakfast,â Anna shouted back, âIâm glad you came home.â
âWell Iâm starving, thanks for cooking!â
I set my things down in the hall and considered a quick shower. I was excessively grungy, and Iâd typically hop right in after walking through the door.
âYouâre welcome, and itâs almost ready so donât shower,â she said.
I walked into the living room and sat on the couch, flipping on the small TV and rambling through some channels.
Anna padded out in her bare feet and a long baggy T-shirt, flopping down next to me on the couch. âSo how was work?â she asked, looking clean and fresh, especially compared to me. Her long brown hair was damp and smelled like flowers. She pulled her bare legs up underneath her and looked at me for a reply.
âSame as usual,â I sighed. âJimin asked if I wanted to jam with him this weekend, so I think Iâm heading over there tonight.â
âSounds cool,â she said, âWhat does he play?â
âI hear he has a pretty impressive drum kit,â I said, getting excited thinking about playing it again.
âYouâre kidding, thatâs amazing!â she said, placing a hand on my leg with her eyes wide.
I felt a little awkward as her hand stayed on my leg for longer than it seems. I didnât think much of it really; Anna was just a touchy person. That was how she talked to people, and I was well aware of it.
I glanced down at her hand, which she moved a little to let me know she realized it was there. My eyes also registered the fact she wasnât wearing much under her shirt, as her bare leg kept going as it crossed underneath her body.
Anna was hardly self-conscious and could be pretty casual around the apartment. She would often take advantage of having a roommate she knew had seen her in all her glory, and would forget certain civilities sheâd typically have in place for anyone else. In the mornings she knew it was just us, a couple of good friends who could hang out in whatever they happened to be comfortable in.
âIâll need to grab some new strings and fix my car if Iâm going to play with them this weekend,â I said, trying to keep my eyes to myself.
Working at the warehouse store was like an intense exercise every day, so my blood was warmed and my skin was sensitive to every input. The strange combination of her soft hand on my thigh and the sight of her smooth bare legs started getting to me.
âWhere are you going then?â Anna asked, completely unaware of my racing mind, âto play I mean.â
âHe lives on campus,â I half gulped, âjust down from fraternity row. They soundproofed the walls in the basement so we should be able to get pretty loud.â
She rolled her eyes at that one. Anna wasnât a fan of rock music, and constantly mocked my tastes. Not that I didnât give it right back. Our little conversations always gave us gentle reminders of why we were just friends, and never fared well as a couple.
She finally withdrew her hand and crossed her arms next to me and looked at the TV.
âThe breakfast should be just about done,â Anna said with a hint of pride to her voice, âI sure hope youâre hungryâŚâ
I looked down at myself and shuddered at how much dirtier I got with all the sweating and lifting we did at work. I was amazed again at the stunning contrast of Annaâs clean shirt and smooth legs right up next to my grunginess. Glancing down, I noticed something else.
Once Anna had folded her arms, the lowest edge of her shirt rode up and I could see more of her hip, like, all of it, and it was completely bare! Now I had to wonder if she was sitting next to me without anything on under there. The thought really got to me because, even for her, that was a little much.
She kept talking but I stopped listening. My jeans were getting tight and I felt my throat drying up. I knew Iâd seen it all from her a thousand times, but there was something about the morning sun and my sore muscles that made it that much more sensual.
I was sure she thought nothing of it. I mean, I know she was well aware she was sitting next to me in just a T-shirt, but to her it didnât mean anything. Anna was just padding around our place like it was home.
I felt bad for noticing and thinking it was sexy of her to sit around with no underwear on. My girlfriend Minji was gorgeous, but definitely not as open about her assets as Anna had always been. I started to smile on the inside, thinking I was pretty lucky to have such a carefree spirit for a roommate, and one who even cooked breakfast.
The timer rang over the oven, to which she placed her hand on my thigh again to boost herself up. I followed her with my eyes, and the shirt fell quickly into place, covering everything I thought I had seen.
I tried desperately to get her near-nakedness out of my head by staring at the television, but I couldnât do it. I was feeling strange and inappropriate, wanting to hit the shower to get my mind off of her, but it was too late.
âOh, youâre going to like this,â Anna sang from the kitchen. âCome take a look!â
I hopped up easily, like one does after an extensive workout, and strode into the kitchen. I felt ten feet tall as I stood next to her petite form, she waved her hand over the shallow pan of molten food, wafting enchanting smells in my direction.
There was definitely bacon, eggs, maybe some hash browns and something else I couldnât quite place buried in that dish of pure succulence. It was a breakfast buffet in a single pan, I was so hungry I could have kissed her for joy.
Anna put a couple cooling stands on the kitchen table and leaned over to set down the steaming pan. As she did, the neck of her shirt dropped silently away and my eyes wandered in without thinking. Sure enough, she wasnât wearing a stitch of god damn clothing under there, her breasts hung naked off her chest, and a little tuft of curly fur was peeking up just beyond them, barely visible from deep inside that damn teasing shirt.
It was gone in a flash as she straightened and turned toward the oven, but man, my heart was racing.
My fingers shook as I picked up a spatula and started cutting sections from the dish as Anna brought us some clean plates and forks.
âWow this smells insane,â I honestly groaned in admiration of her cooking prowess, while simultaneously trying to keep my mind off some of her other admirable qualities.
âThanks!â she beamed as she sat down across from me, watching as I dished us both a plate, âyou know how to make a girl feel appreciated.â
She stared at my hands as I pulled the succulent concoction from the pan. The mystery ingredient was definitely cheese, and it stretched from the pan to the plate like a rubbery web.
I pushed a piping plateful across the table to her and began a sizeable portion for myself. Once my plate was towering with food, Anna smiled a satisfied grin and took her first bite. I knew she liked it when I filled my plate; it meant I was really looking forward to her homemade cooking.
I sat down and started immediately digging in.
âMmmm, this is incrwdbw!â I mumbled across a mouth full of delicious food just before I swallowed. âWhere did you learn to make this?â I asked, pulling another heaping forkful into my ravenous maw.
âMom used to feed everyone before swing choir practice,â she said as she swallowed a more human-sized bite. âWeâd all meet around six and eat this same breakfast dish before heading out in the morning.â
âSounds like a good memory,â I said honestly, wiping some cheese from my chin with a napkin.
âA great memory, actually,â she beamed, half in remembrance and half proud of recreating another one of her motherâs fine dishes.
âShe really knew how to cook, didnât she?â I asked, poised to down another fork full of deliciousness.
âShe was the best,â Anna replied with a positive light to her voice, âIâm so happy I get to cook for us every once in a while. Minho doesnât really appreciate it that much.â
Annaâs boyfriend was an okay guy and he was actually a decent looking guy. He would come to our place only on rare occasions. Since Anna worked near where he works, they would often stay out, and as a result I rarely saw them together. Maybe he didnât feel comfortable coming over with me around, or maybe they just enjoyed going out all the time.
âYou know he can come over any time,â I said, swallowing another mouthful of nourishment, âIâm happy to find other places to keep myself amused if you need some time together here.â
âI know, and youâve always been great about that,â she said, âheâs just never keen on the idea of coming over. He never says why⌠or at least he has a good reason every time it comes up.â
âSorry, I didnât mean to bring it up,â I tried to change the subject, âI for one â count myself lucky to be the primary recipient of your fantabulous cheffery!â Anna chuckled at that and we made small talk as we ate, drinking coffee as we did.
After we finished, I rose with my empty plate and contemplated filling it again; I felt like I could eat forever. I left it alone though and grabbed the pan, bringing it to the counter to cool before packing it away.
âThank you for cleaning up,â she said over her cup of coffee. I turned to look, and from the side her shirt had pulled up casually around her waist again, like a T-shirt normally does. The way it was sitting on her legs made it very apparent she was indeed bottomless, sitting there with her bare butt right on the chair. She wasnât looking at me, just sipping at her coffee and staring ahead.
I wanted to capture that moment, as it was pretty dirty in my own head. I knew she appreciated my tact about her casual demeanour, so I played it off as if it were the most normal meal weâd ever shared.
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We definitely shared a lot over the years, and as we got older, our tastes drifted and our goals and dreams became canyons apart. Even though I always had a soft spot in my heart for Anna, I knew it would never work out for us in the long run.
She loved action and change, moving with the pace of the world. Nothing stayed in her mindâs eye for very long before she was off to the next shiny thing. She had always been that way, and it drove me crazy.
Me on the other hand, could rarely find something that even sparked my interest, but once I did, Iâd dive into it head first. I loved to read, exploring ideas and subjects thoroughly when I found something fascinating. Anna was one of those fascinating subjects â once, and I knew everything about her. What her favorite musical number was, or who her favorite authors were.
We both realized we would never work together, but I had also been her go-to for sex between relationships as well. I rarely had a steady girl during those times, but I always welcomed her into my bed when a friendly visit turned intimate.
Sex with Anna always seemed to begin as a subtle game during our relationship and afterward. For example, she would stop by to discuss something âimportant��; then eventually she would have to show me the new bra she had purchased, or something just as signaling. She would casually lift her shirt to show off her bulging cups, and I would softly touch along their surface, appreciating the fine âquality of fabricâ.
âIt feels like itâd be very comfortable in there,â I would say, âthe material is so smooth.â
âThis is definitely the best one I own,â Anna would say, trying to keep on subject, âI mean you canât even see my nipples through this one.â She would press her finger right there and push in a couple times, rubbing in a small circle where her nipple would be. Then she would drop her hand and wait expectantly for me to see what she meant.
âNo, you sure canât,â Iâd say with my finger pressing in, âAre they hard?â
âA little I think,â sheâd reply, âI guess I havenât really tested them that far.â
So then Iâd tease her nipple through the soft pad and pinch it a couple times to see if I could put it through the paces. I took my time with it, making sure I was really giving it the old boy scout try, while Anna just sat and watched my fingers press and pinch and squeeze and rub against her encapsulated breast.
âI still donât see any nipple through there,â I would say after a time, âeither this is one sturdy bra, or itâs not even hard.â
âOh itâs hard,â she would reply, âsee?â and with that she would pull her cup down and show me the knotted red nose on the face of her lovely naked breast. I would of course reach up and test it for hardness by tweaking it a little and looking intently while I did.
âWow, I see what you mean,â Iâd say and start to toy with it a little more softly in my fingers. As I concentrated on the bare button, she would pull the other cup down to show me how both her nipples were actually hard. I would pay equal attention to both, tweaking and pinching her stiff buds in appreciation.
When she stopped talking altogether and just breathed under my petting hands, I would slowly lean in and take a sweet nipple into my mouth. I wouldnât lick it, I wouldnât suck on it, Iâd just leave her tender tip inside my mouth as I caressed the soft sexy skin around it with my hands.
At this point Anna would reach back and undo her bra completely, making some excuse for it like, âit even releases nicely without snapping back.â Not even she cared about that.
âMmmm,â is all I would say around her wet nipple, sucking as much of her naked tit into my mouth as I could possibly fit.
At that point we were definitely going to be having sex, and very quickly she would just pull me up for a long sensuous kiss while we worked on shedding our clothes.
Sex with Anna was always fantastic, and I think she liked having it as often as any man. Her tastes were a little risquĂŠ, but not overly kinky. She liked to play games in the bedroom, and I always found it to be highly stimulating to say the least. She would willingly trade oral favors, and always had an orgasm during our little trysts, sometimes many.
I could continually depend on memories of our encounters to get me erect if I needed something hot to think about on a solitary bout. Having living together with Anna was a constant reminder of these times for sure, but we had also spent so many periods of being strictly friends with zero benefits, it was easy to see her as just a great friend as well.
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I couldnât help but wonder this morning whether she was just being extremely casual or if she was seeing what I would do if she let it hang out a little in front of me. Probably the former; it was more than likely I was just worked up.
âOkay, now I really need to take a shower,â I said.
âYes you do,â she said, âI havenât seen you looking that dirty in a long time.â She sipped her coffee while looking me in the eye and winked.
Now she was toying with me. I had to get out of there before I did something stupid, like saying what came out of my mouth nextâŚ
âYeah, I keep forgetting how dirty youâve seen me get,â I said as I walked out of the kitchen and headed down the hall. I knew for a fact I would get a snappy reply, and her predictable nature shone through like a beacon as I heard her call after me.
âI seem to recall you having a thing for getting pretty dirty for a while there.â
âYou know me well Anna!â I called back as I closed my bedroom door firmly. I chuckled to myself. I really liked the playful banter we always shared. Too bad it always had to end up in some kind of crazy dramatic bullshit whenever we got together.
I put on some music and started to peel the thin layers of grimy work clothes off my body. It felt so good to be free of them after a long sweaty morning of lifting dirty boxes. I grabbed a clean towel from the dresser and headed out to the bathroom.
I hurried past Annaâs room in my underwear, as I noticed she was back in there again. She was across the room digging through a pile of clothes on her closet floor. She was bent at the waist with her feet apart, and as I walked by, I swear I saw her full naked butt sticking out.
I stopped dead in my tracks past her door and leaned my head back to see around the frame again.
Whoa⌠that was intense! Her creamy calves and thighs were full length on display as her shirt was covering none of it. I could almost see her lips between her bare ass cheeks, and as I looked harder, I noticed her shirt had actually slipped to her shoulders, her pale naked breasts hanging free and upside down.
She was clearly searching for something and I dared not linger, staring at my platonic roommate in all her exposed glory. I made my way quickly to the bathroom and closed the door behind me.
Holy shit, that was something else, Again I knew I had seen this girl a thousand ways, but that wasnât one of them. I couldnât get the image out of my head.
I climbed in and started the water running. The vision of Anna bent at the waist was burned in my mind, and I started getting hard; very, very hard. I wanted badly to take care of it right away, but I just couldnât do that with her right across the hall.
It quickly occurred to me that since my bedroom door was closed, it also made a distinct noise when I popped it open. It also occurred to me that even though Anna looked to be very concentrated on her task of digging for clothes, she must have been keenly aware she was basically bent over nude as my door popped open, right?
Is she wanted me to see her like that? She might have even set it up to be in that compromising position as I walked by, hoping, no⌠knowing I would catch her.
It wasnât looking good for me. I knew how weak willed I got around women, and so did she. What I wasnât sure of was whether she was just playing or if she was seriously trying to get with me.
I thought about it while I showered and came up with a quick idea to find out.
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âHey An, can I borrow you for a second?â I called out from the running shower.
I heard the door open and saw a blurry head through the smoked glass door appear. âWhat is it? Iâm trying to get my laundry together,â she told me.
âWell, you donât have to do this, but I could use a little help.â
She entered the bathroom and closed the door behind her.
âOkay, well what is it?â Anna said simply.
âItâs kind of weird. I totally wouldnât ask if I could think of anything else,â
âYou can ask me anything, I donât mind. Do you need help with your hard-on or something,â she teased.
âHa, you wish!â I teased back, âI just need you to scrub my back really hard with this loofa. After working out so much in the dense heat every day, my back is drying up and itâs driving me crazy. I have no way to get to it. I know itâs weird and all, and you can wait until Iâm out of the shower if you want.â
âDonât be dumb,â she replied, âYou need some good soap and probably an exfoliating scrub for that. Hold on.â
I listened intently as she started digging around in one of the overflowing drawers of her beauty supplies.
âWhat are you doing?â I asked, trying to sound annoyed.
âI told you I need my exfoliating scrub,â she replied.
âI donât need any of your lady potions, I just need a good chunk of tree bark or something.â
âHa ha Mr. Funny Guy,â she snorted, âthis isnât a potion, itâs a scrub thatâs full of emulsifiers for removing dead skin.â
âWhat the hell is even emulsifier?â
âJeez, itâs like liquid soap with sand in it. Itâll really scrape at your back,â she said in a huff.
âOh, that sounds okay,â I said, âShould I just sit on the edge so you can foliate my back?â
âEx-foliate.â
âWhatever.â
I turned off the water and cautiously slid the door open. Anna was standing there with a shiny white tube of something in her hand. She waved it at me and gave me a âWell?â look. I opened the door wider and kept my body behind the protective cover of the glass, laying a wash cloth over the sharp door track.
âGood idea,â Anna said, âhand me your loofa.â
I reached my hand out with the spongy ball, and then turned around and sat on the edge of the tub with my back facing out.
âWow, you really do need this donât you? Poor guy,â she said as she inspected my exposed back with her light touch. She dragged her fingers up and down my rough and peeling skin, which had honestly been driving me insane.
âYou arenât going to be looking at anything else are you,â I asked with a wry twist.
âJust your back,â she quipped at me, âand anything else you might leave hanging out.â
âThatâs what I was afraid of,â I shot back.
I heard the sink turn on behind me and the water splashing around. Then Anna returned with a wet loofa dripping down my back.
âLet me get some of this on you first,â she said, completely business-like.
I felt the first squeeze of cream drip out onto my upper back and then she spread it around, working its way down to my lower back. It was thick and felt like peanut butter.
âThere, that should be plenty, now this might hurt a little,â she warned and started dragging the scratchy cream around on my back, starting between my shoulders. It was very abrasive, and the way she moved the loofa I could tell she was adept at using this type of product effectively on dry skin.
At one point I felt a hand resting on my lower back while the loofa in her other hand worked its magic.
âHowâs that, does it hurt?â Anna asked.
âNot really, but I can definitely tell itâs working,â I said, trying to keep my balance on the edge of the tub.
âWell, this should really peel that junk off of there for you,â she added putting her back into it.
âThanks for doing this,â I said.
âOh please,â she said as she pushed downward using two hands now, âItâs nothing, now lean forward a little.â
I leaned over and felt her hands rubbing the lotion around on my back without the loofa now.
âThis should sit for a minute before we scrub it out,â she mentioned, and then she chirped, âOh shit!â
âWhat?â
âI got it all over my shirt,â she said.
âWell rinse it out,â I suggested.
âNo, Iâd have to take my shirt off,â she feigned, âand I would be topless.â
âWhy, arenât you wearing a bra?â I slyly asked.
âWell, if you must know⌠Iâm not.â
âWhat!? Well, I donât think you should be in here like that. In fact, maybe you should just leave; Iâll take care of it.â
âPlease, like Iâm that much of a prude I wouldnât pull my boobs out in front of you,â she proudly stated, âThereâs nothing here you havenât seen before.â
âTrue. Go ahead then, I donât mind.â
âWell, thereâs something else,â she muttered.
âThere is?â
âYes...â
âWell?â
âIâm actually only wearing this shirt,â she said matter-of-factly.
âWhat!? So youâre naked under there?â
âItâs just that Iâm out of clean everything and Iâm getting ready to do the laundry just now,â she quickly explained.
âWell, I guess that is a little much,â I resolved, âthatâs okay An, Iâll take it from here.â
âWhat if you promised not to look,â she suggested.
âI could do that, I guess,â I said, âThis is just between us then? I wouldnât want your boyfriend getting all pissed that his girlfriend was giving me a naked back scrub.â
âPlease,â she retorted, âHe gets hugs and shoulder rubs and who knows what else from the groupies that are always climbing all over him. I wouldnât care if he did find out. What about M-i-n-j-i?â she sang her name out like a child.
âMinji is Minji I guess. Iâm not sure whatâs going on there,â I revealed honestly, âI mean Iâve been giving it a try, but Iâm not really expecting much.â While I was talking, I heard what sounded like a piece of clothing coming off.
âAn?â
âWhat.â
âAre you naked?â
âYes~,â she replied with a familiar hint of playfulness to her voice, ânow donât get all excited, this is strictly business and just between friends.â
Yeah right. I knew better, and her dander was definitely up at this turn of events. I stayed leaned over looking at my feet in the tub while I heard her rinsing out her shirt in the sink. When she was done, she came back and rubbed her hands into the lotion on my back.
âOh, thatâs definitely working, just a little more,â she said as she placed a hand on my shoulder. âSo not expecting much huh? That doesnât sound promising.â
âI know, and it seemed so good at first,â I said, trying to keep my mind away from the fact that Anna was standing behind me, completely nude.
âI could tell she was no good for you...â she stopped, quickly correcting herself, âI mean â what I meant was, she doesnât deserve someone like you.â
I could feel her leaning a little closer, with her hand still on my shoulder. Something, a bare hip perhaps was up against my back. She started rubbing my shoulder and stammering on.
âYou need someone who will be there for you a hundred percent,â she was absentmindedly stroking my neck now. âIf I didnât know better, I would say youâve already moved on, in your head at least.â
âThat could be,â I agreed, âIâm just never sure in these situations. I just seem to get caught up for too long.â
She let go of my shoulder and moved back to the sink to add some water to the loofa. When she came back, I felt the water dripping down my back and onto the washcloth under.
âI know you do,â Anna said as she started scrubbing my back again with both hands, âYou seem to be unable to have an uncomfortable conversation when you need to. You just have to level with Minji about where the relationship is going; seriously.â
Her vertical scrubbing turned into quick swirling circles on my back.
âI know, thereâs just never a good time,â I confessed, âweâre always around other people. When weâre finally alone Iâm too exhausted from having been up so early that I have just enough energy to, wellâŚâ
âHave sex?â she blurted out, âI know what you do, I can hear you two going at it in there.â One of her hands left the loofa and rubbed my bare skin on its own while she continued to drag this out. My back was clearly exfoliated by now.
âYou can?â I asked, âSorry about that.â
âDonât be sorry,â she said, âWeâre roommates, that how it goes sometimes. Just turn up your music a little louder next time.â
My face burned and I chuckled, âOkay, Iâll try to remember.â
Then Anna was done with my back and said, âThat should do it. Now stand up while I rinse this out. I need soap in here next to get that scrub off.â
She turned to the sink behind her and I took that opportunity to get my naked body behind the screen. My erection wasnât full or anything, but I still wanted to keep this game going. It was kind of fun to see how far we could push it.
âOkay, youâre going to have to rinse this,â she said, âThe sink isnât getting the lotion out.â
I turned the water back on and put my hand outside the door for the loofa. She placed it in my hand and I could see the cloudy silhouette of her naked body behind the glass. I ran the loofa under the stream of water and turned the dial head to massage. That was working, but also spraying water out the open sliding door.
âHey!â she started, âYouâre getting me all wet out here.â
âSorry,â I said over the sound of the water as I finished.
âNow put some body wash on there and hand it back,â she said.
I squirted a good amount of wash onto the loofa and worked it into a frothy lather. I held it in front of the open door, but inside the shower.
âPerfect,â Anna said grabbing the soapy implement from my hand, âNow back over to me so I can reach.â
Tentatively I turned to face away from the door and backed over to it, knowing full well that she could see my naked butt as plain as day now. I decided to stay a bit into the shower so she would need to reach for it.
She quickly began to soap up my back and remove the thick lotion without saying a word.
âAh,â she said frustrated, âthe waterâs spraying all over the floor, back up would you?â
I took a step back to the door and then she started really soaping up my entire back. It felt so good and she was so gentle. Her soft hands roamed all over my back and started getting most of my sides and then easing gently down my back. Shivers ran up my arms. The smooth soapy strokes were getting to me and I could feel myself getting harder underneath the spray of the showerhead.
She soaped my back and set both hands on my hips for a moment.
âAre you finished back there,â I asked, seemingly impatient, âIâm standing here naked you know.â
âSo am I,â she came back, âin case youâve forgotten.â
âOh, I havenât forgottenâ I replied, âI am well aware that weâre both totally naked in here now. Can I rinse off?â
âYep, all done,â she said handing the loofa around my waist, âthat wasnât so hard was it?â
âI wouldnât say that,â I said, turning to the side to rinse off my back, showing clearly the erection she had caused with her soapy lathering.
âWhoa!â she announced, âyouâve got a hard-on!â
âNo kidding, you were really soaping me up back there,â I said through the water spray with my eyes closed. I knew if I stood in the spray, it would allow her plenty of time to get a good look at my mostly erect cock.
âOh, uh sorry about that,â she said, still lingering naked in front of the open door to the shower, âI didnât realize it was having that⌠effect.â
âThatâs okay, Iâll just take care of it myself once youâre gone. Thanks again!â
âEw, all over the shower?â she acted very offended.
âNo, not all over the shower,â I retorted from under the spray, âI just cum in my hands, and then I run it through my hair for extra lotion.â
âYeah right,â she said, knowing I was teasing her, âI donât think so.â
I peered quickly over at her and her eyes were glued to my cock, making it swell even more. Her eyes widened slightly. I peeked at her shapely breasts and bushy cleft through my watery squinted eyes. That wasnât helping.
âSo, tell me something An,â I said in a conversational tone.
âWhat?â
âWhy are you checking out my cock?â I asked, looking her right in the eye.
âWhat?â she caught herself and stammered, âI wasnât checking it out, I mean I didnât mean to look, I was just⌠well you were standing there and IâŚâ
âHaha, itâs okay,â I smiled and let my eyes wander unapologetically over her entire bare body. âI kind of like it. I mean, youâve seen it all before too.â
âO-of course,â she said diverting her eyes and turning quickly to the face the sink. She caught my gaze again in the mirror however, and I let her see me look down to admire her naked ass in front of me.
âI know weâre playing with fire here,â I continued, âand I didnât mean for it to get all weird. I just want you to know something.â
She turned back around to face me; I think her nipples were as tight as Iâd ever seen them. âWhat?â
âThis remains just between us, right?â I asked.
âOf course,â she replied, âwhat is it?â
âI want you to know that you can look whenever you want to,â I said seriously, âAny time weâre alone and you want to see, just let me know.â At that I turned to face her, my hard cock standing straight out in front of me. âIs that too much for you?â
âW-what?â she stammered off-guardedly, glancing from my eyes to my cock and back. I definitely got her at her own game, if she had been playing one anyway.
âI mean it,â I continued, âYou just say, âlet me see itâ, and itâs out; just like this,â I said looking down. She looked at my wet cock again and there was a faint grinding of gears going on in her head. She looked up quickly.
âOkay, thatâs just weird,â she said as she snapped out of it, putting her hands on her hips, âIâm going now, and leaving you with your hard-on, to do⌠whatever. Jeez!â
With that she grabbed her T-shirt from the sink and opened the bathroom door, stomping out of the steamy room.
I smiled wide to myself as I knew I got her, and also that she would absolutely bring it up again. That was the game, and she wouldnât be able to let it go. Her mind would busily work on a plan for whatever reason. There was never any logic to her mind games, which is why our relationship never worked. I was too logical, and her little games only worked with me in the bedroom.
I finished washing up and didnât feel the need to jerk myself off, I was too proud of my work. I dried off and strolled naked out of the bathroom with my towel over my shoulder to my room. Anna was nowhere to be seen, so I just closed the door and got dressed for the day.
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I hadnât seen Anna again that morning, and I assumed she was doing laundry as a way of avoiding me. I created an awkward rift between us and I knew it. I was okay with that, because I also knew she was very good at confronting an awkward situation once she knew how she would handle it. I couldnât imagine what sheâd come up with, but I did know she would escalate things rather than downplay them. What I didnât know was why I even wanted that.
I headed out with my six-string in hand to the guitar shop and then to Jiminâs house to play some music, drink some beers and see where the weekend took us. I ended up having a great time with the guys, and crashed on their couch overnight on Friday. We played music all day on Saturday and got pretty loaded Saturday night. Having no desire to wake up in the same clothes again on Sunday, I grabbed a cab and made my way home.
I unlocked the apartment door to the sound of music and the smell of lemons. I knew immediately Anna was home and in cleaning mode. This was common on a Saturday night, as Minho would be working until about 1:00am.
I stumbled in feeling fairly inebriated and set my guitar case by the door.
âHi,â I heard Anna call from the kitchen, âhow was Jiminâs?â
âHey,â I replied, rounding the corner to see her scrubbing the kitchen sink in her typical cleaning overalls and a hot pink T-shirt. âIt was cool; those guys really know how to play. Who knew my classical training would actually come in handy one day?â
Anna was looking back at me occasionally over her shoulder while she continued to scrub. She dropped her sponge after a minute and rinsed her hands in the sink as I continued.
âIn fact, I think we found a great style, combining Jiminâs technical drumming with my heavy riff⌠riffing⌠making, nessâŚâ
âYouâre drunk,â she said with a sly smirk as she looked me over, noticing the obvious impairment of my mental and motor skills.
âTrue,â I said, knowing she was well aware I would often stumble in as such on a Saturday night while she cleaned. It was getting to be a bit of a ritual. âWhat do we have to eat?â
She wiped her wet hands on a towel and opened the fridge, leaning inside. I liked her work overalls because they had holes in places that allowed me to see bits of skin peeking out. Even though it was mostly leg, there was something about it I found intriguing.
âI suppose you could make a sandwich,â she said, digging around in one of the drawers, âwe have everything you need.â
A sandwich sounded perfect in my current state, and I walked up behind her and peered into the fridge over her shoulder.
âThat shounds great,â I sort of slurred out, realizing I did as soon as it came out.
âJeez youâre wasted,â she said as she stood up and turned to face me. Her nose came to about my chin as I looked down at her. I knew she had no sense of personal space, so her close proximity didnât faze me as she looked up.
âI know,â I said, âIâm so ashamed.â I put my head down in mock despair.
âYeah right,â she said with a gleam in her eye. I knew she loved having a position of power in a situation; and with me on the cusp of being actually drunk, she knew she could have fun with me. âMake your sandwich,â she said reaching up and tapping a row of dainty fingers against my cheek.
She stepped aside and picked up her cleaning gear again as I reached in and started gathering ingredients. I filled my arms, which in my current state was a struggle, and I thought I had it under control until a squeezable jar of mayo slipped from the bottom and crashed to the clean floor.
âShit!â I exclaimed as I brought the rest of the foodstuff to the adjacent counter, stepping over the bottle.
âYou fool,â Anna said as she came back by me to retrieve the fallen condiment from her freshly cleaned floor. âYouâre lucky it didnât break. Here.â She handed me the bottle and I thanked her sheepishly as I turned in my daze to fabricate of some semblance of a sandwich. I could feel her eyeing my every move, watching to see if Iâd even be able to build one in my stupor.
âYou better let me do it,â she said as she saw me struggling just to get the twist tie off of the bread bag. âI canât even imagine what youâd end up with if I let you go wild in my clean kitchen with all this stuff.â
She held out her hand and I placed the bread in it, stepping to one side to watch her easily pull out a couple slices.
âThanks An,â I said, blushing at my inability to function at simple tasks.
âThatâs okayâŚâ she said, âI donât mind taking a break from cleaning our kitchen to make you a sandwich. Letâs just say you owe me one.â
âOf course, Iâll clean the next time,â I offered as a way to make myself useful sometime in the future. It was all I had.
âI like cleaning,â she replied, spreading the mayo across the face of the crusty white bread, âwhat else you got?â
I couldnât really think straight, so I just went with, âI dunno, what do you want?â
She was silent for a moment, and then softly said, âLet me see it.â
âHuh?â
âLet me see it, you know,â she looked up into my eyes and then down to the front of my jeans. âYou told me to just say the word, and now I am. Let me see it.â
I couldnât believe she was using this night to get back at me so quickly. She had me mentally on my heels and I could hardly form a complete sentence. I must have looked like a deer caught in her headlights because she set the knife on the counter and turned right toward me, putting her hands on her hips.
âI mean it,â she said with the mischievous gleam sheâd often get in her eyes, âLet me see it and Iâll finish your sandwich. Youâre the one who put it out there, and I know you werenât drunk when you said it. Let me see it.â
I was caught in my own web. I had been trying to get her to flinch in the bathroom the day before, and it worked. I really didnât expect her to come back at me with my own teasing game and call me out in the kitchen the first chance she got.
She stared at me.
Fortunately, my inhibitions were down from the beers so I shrugged my shoulders and reached for my zipper. Annaâs eyes were on my hands, her raised eyebrows framing an expectant look as if she was waiting for me to get out money I owed her.
My pants were undone and my boxers were all that remained between her keen eyes and my naked cock. I knew I couldnât get out of showing her, and it was a little different than when I did it in the bathroom. In there she was naked as well, and I had a hard-on which helped me to look more⌠notable. Now it was just my drunken cock on its own, for whatever end.
âWell?â she said, âI know you donât need help here, Letâs see it.â She knew she had me, and I knew it too. I pulled the front of my boxers down and there it was. I wasnât completely flaccid, thankfully, and my cock emerged as Annaâs eyes widened.
âAh, there it is,â she said as she stood and stared at my stuff for few long seconds. âI have to admit, I thought you were full of shit yesterday, but you did it.â She pulled her eyes away, turned, and just continued with my sandwich. I stood there with my right thumb pulling my boxers down and my cock out for no real reason. I figured I did what I said I would, so I covered back up.
Anna started piling on cold cuts and said, âMinho is working extra late for whatever the thing theyâre doing, so Iâm hanging here tonight, is that cool?â Her eyes were on the sandwich.
âSounds good to me,â I managed, zipping up my fly. âI donât know how much longer Iâll be of much company but we can hang out if you want.â
âEither way, Iâm going to finish cleaning before I do anything,â she said as she folded the bread over, finishing the sandwich. âHere you go.â
She turned and handed me the plate with the scrumptious looking sustenance atop it. I took it from her and she kept my gaze.
âThank you for showing me,â she said politely, âyou have a very nice cock.â
âOh, uh, thanks,â I started, not sure what to say, and off my game completely, âany time.â
Any time? Did I just say that? I took my sandwich and sat down to eat while Anna continued tidying up in the kitchen. I watched her ass stretch against the thin overalls as she bent over to clean the cupboard doors under the counter. I was admiring the bits of thigh peeking out as always and my brain seemed to be fixated on her body as I ate.
She looked back, seeming to catch me staring at her and asked âHow is it?â
âHow is what?â
âThe sandwich dummy,â she chuckled, âwhat did you think I meant?â
âFantastic!â I blurted out, steamrolling right over her question, âIâve never tasted anything so good.â
She smiled knowingly at me and turned around again to finish her work.
Eventually I finished eating and Anna had cleaned her way into the next room. I put my plate in the dishwasher and wandered into the living room where Anna was dusting. I stood there wondering if should sit; I couldnât very well help, and she seemed to sense this and looked at me.
âAre you going to watch something?â she asked, carefully wiping the top of a lamp with a dirty cloth.
âIâm not sure,â I said, slightly swaying in place. âI feel like I should be helping.â
âDonât be ridiculous,â she said, âYou would do more harm than good. Besides, I like cleaning. Itâs my Zen time, and you donât have to feel guilty about letting me do it. Why donât you go get comfortable and Iâll be done in here in a minute.â
It was a great suggestion and I nodded, turning my heel and making my way down the narrow corridor to my room. As I passed Annaâs room, I noticed that there was a pair of her panties on the floor right inside the door. This was quite typical, as oddly enough her bedroom always seemed to be the messiest room in the house, but it caused my mind to flash back to the image of her bending over and digging through her laundry. I started getting aroused again, and moved quickly into my room to escape the reminder.
Knowing Anna was busy, I didnât close the door and just unbuttoned my shirt and pants, looking for my sweat shorts. I couldnât find them so I just grabbed a T-shirt and threw it on. She had already seen my dick tonight; I should be fine in my boxers I figured.
I wandered back out and Anna was just finishing her dusting and putting away her things. She looked up at me, gave me a once over, and said, âPerfect, Iâll be back in a minute.â
With that she hoisted her cleaning products carrier up and made her way to the kitchen closet to tuck it away. I sat on the couch and found the remote on the gleaming coffee table. I was pretty lucky to actually live with someone who enjoyed cooking and cleaning. I would never ask her to do any of these things of course, being perfectly capable myself⌠well, sober anyway.
She walked past and down the hall to her room, and I flipped through the channel guide to see what was on. I found some documentary, and put it on to be funny, although it turned out to be quite interesting.
When Anna came out, she still wore the same pink shirt with short socks, and I couldnât tell what else. It was probably either just her underwear or nothing again, as all I could see was leg to the hem of the long shirt which came to about mid-thigh.
âWhat the hell are you watching?â she said, sitting on the couch near me but comfortably distant. I was happy for the space as my cock started to harden as I pictured her naked again and smelled her sweet perfume settling over me.
âJust a documentary,â I said, trying not to stare at her bare legs. She reached over and flipped off the main lamp, and the TV lit up the darkened room.
âGive me that,â she said, holding out her hand. I handed her the remote with a smile, and her eyes met mine. They had a hint of mischief to them and she glanced down to my boxers. I looked down to see they were starting to tent and leaving little to the imagination.
I looked back up and she was already aiming the remote at the cable box and flipping through the channels. After a minute she finally stopped on an old movie and said, âOh, here we go. Let me see it.â
âSure, we can watch this,â I said, and then, âwait, what?â
âYou heard me,â she said looking me in the eye as she set down the remote. âYou said any time. Let me see it.â The look in her eyes was challenging.
I knew right then that I was paying dearly for my mistaken cockiness in the bathroom. I really didnât think she would even take me up on my teasing offer, let alone rub my nose in it.
âFine,â I gave in, having little resolve left anyway. I found the open front of my boxers and reached in, finding my naked cock in a semi-erect state. I pulled it through the opening and lay it out in my lap for her to see. âHowâs that?â
âVery nice,â she said, eyeing up my growing cock. I was getting more aroused than I had hoped. âYou seem to be kind of excited.â
I looked at my bulging cock, âIt would seem so. Have you seen it now?â
âI donât know,â she said with the sly and teasing tone I knew so well. âYou could put him away, but Iâll probably just ask you again, so why donât you just leave him out for a while to save us the trouble?â
Now she was playing with fire. She wanted to me just sit there and watch TV with her, my bare cock lying out the whole time!
âAre you serious right now?â I asked incredulously.
âDead serious,â she looked me in the eye with a challenging stare.
âIâll take my chances,â I muscled up my last remaining nerve and tucked my member back inside my shorts.
âFine by me,â she said and looked back at the screen. We sat there for a while as the movie played, and honestly, I couldnât have cared a wit about it. It was some black and white romance thing from the 50âs, and I just never got those. I watched it though, waiting nervously for what I knew was sure to come.
âIâll let you change the channel if you show me again,â she said out of the blue after about ten minutes. I couldnât believe she was being so bold, and I was the one who had opened this door, all because I saw her bent over with her ass sticking out.
âJesus An, whatâs with you tonight?â I had to ask.
âShow me, I donât need to explain myself. If I want to see your cock you have to show me, so letâs see it.â
I was in deep shit now, and I could only respond by lifting my ass up and sliding my boxers down my hips and to my ankles. âThere, happy?â I retorted as she openly turned to stare at my nude lower half.
âI guess,â she said simply. âNice cock. Do you still stand behind what you said in the bathroom?â
Thanks to the sandwich I was able to think about that one. It was a little thrilling to be sitting there with my cock out around her. I knew that neither of us could breathe a word of this to anyone, but we were also adults. âI do.â
âIâm glad,â she said and handed me the remote, glancing down to my cock again. I took the controller and started to surf channels, stopping on a movie I knew we would both enjoy, and it had just started.
âOh, thatâs a good one,â she said, turning back to the screen. We watched for a few minutes, and then I saw her look at my lap again. She saw me notice and smiled sweetly. She was really getting off having my cock next to her to look at. My bulge had subsided, and I was a little happy for that, but not for long.
She must have noticed too, because she leaned back on the couch and pulled up a knee to her chest, allowing her t-shirt hem to drop down her thigh, exposing nothing but bare skin all the way to her naked ass cheek.
Fuck.
She had been sitting there again with a completely bare ass, and I had only just caught up when I dropped my boxers. The thought traveled instantly to my manhood and I felt it begin to inflate at a furious rate.
The little vixen! I saw her smirk and peek to the side to see if her little show had the intended effect, and of course it did. Now she really let me have it.
âHoly shit, are you getting hard right now??â
Damn you Anna. I pretended not to hear, or that I had no comment, and she continued to push me.
âWhatâs getting into you? I mean this movie isnât that exciting, is it?â
âDid you just realize that Iâm not wearing anything under here again? Is that it?â she added.
She knew it was. âMy god, youâre totally hard, look at you! You really like knowing my pants are off donât you? Youâre so bad!â
âMe?â I finally said, âYou were the one wearing almost nothing on Friday morning when I came home, and now?â I should have kept my fool mouth shut.
âIs that it? Is that what this was all about? Did I turn you on running around with just a shirt on in my own place? What were you thinking about my tits while you ate my home cooked breakfast?â
I was a little too annihilated to come up with a coherent response.
âYou were!â a look of shock and accusation crossed her face as I looked away. âYou canât hide it! Is that why you called me into the bathroom? Did I get you all worked up?â
âYou didnât have to stay, or take your shirt off you know,â I was able to construct an intelligible sentence out of somewhere. My mind was still aware I was in hot shit.
âYou liked that though, didnât you? Did you get a good look?â
I didnât want to fight with her sitting there with our pants off, so I tried to turn the tables. âShow me.â
âWhat!?â
âYou heard me. Show me.â
âOh no, you donât get to say that. Only I do. That was your idea,â she squinted, her challenging eyes on me.
âI never said it was just for me to say, and itâs only fair. Iâve shown you, and now Iâm totally out here. Donât think you can handle the tension? Come on Anna⌠just show me.â
A slow and silent resolve crossed her face.
âFine, just a peek,â was all she said, leaning back and dropping her foot to the floor. From there her legs slowly crept apart, the shirt still covering any view between her legs.
âI canât see anything.â
She spread her legs wider, one of them touching my own as it moved. Her shirt crept higher until I could just see her curly little hairs and the protruding lips of her⌠pussy.
âMmm, good girl,â I murmured in a cocky tone, and Anna instantly snapped her legs together.
I definitely recognized the telltale puffiness between her legs in my momentary glimpse, the shine of the television lighting her up. Iâd seen Anna in this highly aroused state so many times. I knew how stimulating everything was to her once the heavy weight of arousal set in.
âOh, youâre wearing panties,â l said, knowing full well she wasnât, âI thought you werenât.â
âIâm not, you dummy,â she said, her playful look telling me everything I needed to know. I sat silent for a minute, waiting patiently for her next move.
Slowly Anna parted her legs again, and the empty space between her bare thighs began to grow. This time she reached down and raised the edge of her shirt, clearly showing me her private fur in the process. She gently tilted her hips so her swollen lips puckered out clearly from underneath again.
âSee,â she snorted, with as much of an act as she could muster. I knew her heat was rising. She loved the fact that my naked cock was right next to her and pumped full of steam. I was sure she knew sheâd have me pull it out again, even while she was in her room changing. Her pussy was probably already soaking wet while she decided to come out in just a shirt.
Oh you horny little minx.
âOh my god,â I said softly, âyouâre serious.â She let me stare between her legs for a minute, looking down there herself. âLook at that beautiful pussy,â I said, knowing compliments would keep it out a bit longer.
âDonât get any ideas mister,â she said, keeping her eyes fixed on her own distended labia.
âLike what?â I asked with a hint of drawing her out in my voice.
âLike whatever ideas your hard-on is having there,â with that she turned her head and stared right at it. I looked at my cock and it was long and quivering with excitement.
âWhat, this hard-on?â I asked softly, wrapping my fingers around it and slowly pumping it up and down next to her.
Her mouth stopped working for a second as she watched me blatantly holding and stroking my naked cock in the bright glow of light. Her eyes were hooded and she seemed mesmerized by my movements.
Anna just watched in silence with her legs open, until her words finally appeared, âWhat are you doing?â
I didnât answer, I just kept looking between her legs and slowly moving my cock up and down my erect shaft in the dim light.
âI canât help it,â I finally whispered, âIâm too hard.â
She seemed to snap out of it, and slowly pulled her thighs back together until they touched in front of her. Her shirt was still up however, and the curly hairs between her legs formed a little brown shrub in the middle of her deep crevice.
âWell help it,â she said quietly and somewhat begrudgingly.
âFine,â I said, and slowly backed my hand away. My bare hardness pulsed with anticipation and excitement, lightly swaying of its own accord in my pants less lap. She could hardly force herself to look away, but did so and crossed her legs, folding her arms under her obviously unencumbered breasts. Her pointy nipples were so hard that a mere t-shirt was hardly a challenge for their aggressive prodding.
I knew better than to make any additional comments or take further action, as just my throbbing cock out next to her was surely driving her deeper into her own perverted fantasies. What we were doing was completely wrong, and against everything we swore to when we agreed to be roommates. We hadnât crossed any physical lines, except maybe for the naked back scrubbing in the shower⌠shit.
We were already way over the line. Even my own cock knew how close it was to being submerged in the slippery pocket between Annaâs legs.
I had to focus on the screen and forget about the blatant innuendo pulsing in both of our laps. We were horny, that was certain. I should have gotten up and walked away, but the tension was delicious. I loved that we were sitting together, bottomless, unable to act on what we both had in mind.
We sat in an uncomfortable silence for a while as the movie played, untilâŚ
âGod I wish we were single,â I admitted truthfully, but the fact remained⌠we werenât.
âWhyâs that,â she said with a curt but playful edge to her voice, âdo you want to fuck me or something?â
I had to groan at her words, as she knew I loved hearing her say it out loud. I grabbed on my cock again and started squeezing it.
âStop that,â she commanded.
âI canât,â
âI just wanted to see it, not watch you fondle it,â she said, uncrossing her arms and pulling the hem of her t-shirt lower on her legs. âIf I thought youâd be uncontrollable about this I would have gone to bed.â
âSorry,â I said, stopping my motions and loosening my grip. The next move, I decided, was hers, and it took a while. After about couple of minutes, she finally looked at my cock again and I watched her eyes tracing it up and down.
âGod⌠that looks so nice.â She said.
âIt does?â
âFuck. Of course it does!â she said as if I was crazy, âwhy else would I have you keep pulling it out? I miss what we had, a lot. No one else can compare, and for whatever reason sex was always great with us. Why do you think I kept coming back?â
âAn easy lay?â
âOkay, thatâs true, but it was more than that.â
She turned her body to face me, her arm and shoulder against the back of the couch.
âI always felt like I found my perfect fit with you,â she continued, looking me straight in the eye, âand everyone else gets compared, well⌠to this!â She gestured toward my protruding cock.
âBut even though I would love to feel what we had again, I know it would only make things worse,â she admitted. âI was getting better, forgetting about what we had, but having you around all the time in such a personal environment⌠well, maybe it wasnât such a great idea.â
âWe both knew our torrid history An,â I said, turning to face her as well and letting my appendage lay where it may, âthe odds were never in our favor.â
âI know,â she said, placing her hand on my arm, âand I think I liked it that way. I think I liked fantasizing about you more than I wanted to actually do anything about it, although right now Iâm not so sure.â
Her eyes burned into mine with a fiery lust that made me want to push her backwards and let our bodies do what they were fully prepared to do.
âI know what you mean,â I said instead, trying to keep my ever-loving cool.
âAre you saying you fantasized about me!?â she asked with a playful twinkle.
âI donât think Iâve ever stopped,â I admitted. âI know you too well. Weâve been together too many ways.â
Her eyes darted back and forth between mine. âWhat do you think about?â
I knew this was trouble. I was inebriated and logic was not my friend, and any fantasy I laid out could surely come back to bite me. Unfortunately, I was too turned on to care.
âSometimes I think about the time we went to the park,â I revealed, âand how you wore those same overalls as tonight, a t-shirt and nothing else.â Her mouth twisted into a wicked grin.
âYou had your hands in my pants the entire day,â she laughed, âI thought they were going to kick us out of there! Then, back in the hotel room, I bet his new girlfriend had no idea the kind of sex filled night she was in for when she agreed to come along.â
I laughed at that. âI tried to be sneaky, but youâre just too loud.â
She blushed and looked down, her gaze settling on my cock again. It was suddenly silent in the room as she stared at it.
âGosh I want you so bad right now,â she said.
âYouâd love that, wouldnât you?â I asked, knowing her twisted mind and the way it worked.
She looked up at me. âYes.â
âMy cock⌠sliding in⌠filling that empty space between your legs.â
All of our bedroom games came rushing back. I had forgotten them, forgotten how crazy in lust they made us, but in that instant it all came back.
âYou asshole,â she whispered, not even close to being angry. The air was excruciatingly heavy with sexual tension and our breathing started to deepen.
âTake your shirt off,â I said, knowing she would. We both took ours off at the same time and sat together on the couch, the blue glow of the television reflecting across our newly bared skin.
âI love your tits,â I said in honest appreciation of them again, âbut you really shouldnât be showing them to me.â
âYou asked for it,â she replied, grabbing a handful of her breast and lifting its weight up to me, her twisted bud aimed right between my eyes. My cock swelled, wishing we would just get it over with already.
âGod, I want to taste you so badly right now,â I said, practically drooling down my chin over the sight of her bare breasts.
âYou canât,â she said, staring deep into my soul with her heat filled gaze, âI have a boyfriend.â
âDonât remind me,â I said, turning directly toward her on the couch. We sat face to face, our bodies naked and exposed to each other in the flickering darkness.
âTell me An⌠does he eat your pussy? I mean⌠the way you really like it?â
The heat in the room was insane as my question caused Annaâs legs to slowly part and her free hand to slide lower on her bare body, down to her unfolding sex. I watched her fingers spread her wet lips apart and find her clit, massaging it with slow deliberate circles. I almost bit off my tongue as I watched her touch herself in front of me.
âThis pussy?â she teased as my eyes climbed between her legs and tried to get inside for a closer look.
âHe tries, but no one really enjoys the taste of me as much as you did. Do you still remember?â
Fuck. Of course, I did. I was practically smelling it again with the heat she was giving off.
âYou know how much I love⌠used to love, your pussy,â I corrected myself, âand I used to keep loving it until you had to push me off, remember?â
Anna moaned out loud this time, her fingers digging harder into her swollen lips, rubbing larger circles between her spreading legs. I looked into her ravenous stare and recognized a raw need.
âYou want me to eat your pussy right now, donât you?â I asked, âYou want me to suck your little clit and push my tongue in there. Should I? Should I actually suck you off right here, An? Suck your wet pussy in my mouth until you explode all over our living room?â
We were back to our old games again, and as she leaned back on the couch; her naked body splayed before me with her legs wide open.
âGod damn you,â Anna moaned. Her fingers were frantically masturbating her pussy with one hand and tugging a taut nipple with the other. âYouâre really turning me on.â
âI can see that,â I said, staring at her blurring hand making swirly finger paintings across her pussy. âYou used to like it when Iâd watch you masturbate, didnât you?â
âFuck.â
âAn, we canât.â
âI know,â Anna groaned, pushing her body backwards to the other end of the couch and sitting up, her hand not exactly done wading through the rushing river between her legs.
âYouâre evil, talking to me like that,â she said breathlessly, âyour girlfriend probably wouldnât like you talking about eating my pussy you know.â A smile crept across her face.
âNo, she wouldnât,â The realization of this fact having zero impact on the lust coursing through my body.
âDoes she suck your cock,â Anna asked.
âNot like you did,â I admitted. âYour boyfriend must be a pretty lucky guy.â
âHe is,â she said with a smirk, âbut he definitely doesnât react as well as you always did to having his dick in my mouth.â
Fuck. I remember how well Anna could keep me raging for hours while she toyed with my dick.
âYou always knew how to keep me harder than I ever thought was possible.â
I leaned back and pushed my erection upward, I ran a finger up and down the side of my cock, watching her eyes follow my lazy touch.
âYou should really put that away,â she said without a hint of seriousness in her voice as her eyes devoured in it.
âI might be tempted to put it in my mouth. What would your girlfriend say about that? Can she take you all the way like I can? Can she choke on your cock and still keep it buried while you cum down her throat?â
Definitely not. I was practically crying with the memory and realization.
âYou better stop talking about sucking my cock,â I said with exasperation as I started stroking it in front of her leering gaze. âI might ask you to do it again, just for old timeâs sake.â
I rose to a knee and pointed my dripping rod in her reclined direction.
âI wouldnât do it,â she said with her hand mashing her pussy around, âI have a boyfriend.â
âSo you keep saying,â I responded, âbut you havenât stopped playing with your pussy since you stripped naked in front of me.â
âTrue,â Anna said, making sure I saw her slowly ease two long fingers deep into herself. I stared in amazement. âMmmm, god Iâm soakedâ
I love the way she tortured me.
âI bet you could get your whole cock in here in one⌠long⌠push. Would you like that?â
âMore than anything,â I admitted, wondering how we had let ourselves get to this point.
âWell keep it together,â she said, pulling her fingers out and sucking them into her mouth one at a time, âweâre roommates now. No fucking.â
âHow about sucking?â I asked hopefully.
âNo sucking; and definitely no touching. Weâre taken!â
âDamn,â I said, sitting back down on the couch and staring at her gorgeous body again. My mind was conflicted. We could probably get ourselves off with some mutual masturbation or something, but I didnât think either of us wanted to end the night with an embarrassing mess on the couch, having to slink off to our separate rooms. I had to think.
âOkay, how about we cuddle?â
âNice try, no touching.â Anna said, she seemed adamant all of the sudden.
âWhat if I just wanted to look?â
âLook all you want,â she replied, âWhy? Do you like my body or something?â
âI love your beautiful body,â I said truthfully. âYour legs are smooth, and your hips are perfect.â I started leaning in her direction on the couch, closely inspecting the pale skin of her leg, careful not to touch.
âEasy there,â she warned, âno touching. My boyfriend doesnât like me to lay with naked men you know.â
âI bet, but I can see why naked men would want to lay with you though. Your thighs are mouthwatering.â I said as I moved my head closer between her legs, my breath warming her inner thigh. âAnna, You smell like a flower,â I said, inching even closer, âand you look like a goddess with your legs open like this.â
As I pushed in closer, I could feel the heat coming from between her legs, and the permeating scent of her undeniable arousal was spinning my mind.
âDonât get any ideas,â Anna warned, my mouth inching closer to her enchanting pool of liquid honey, âyou shouldnât have your face so close to my ugh⌠myâŚâ
âPussy?â
âYes.â
âWhy not?â
âBecause itâs not yours,â she said, unconvincingly.
âNot mine to what?â
âNot yours toâŚâ
âLick?â
âYes.â
âSuck?â
âYou asshole.â
âNot mine to ravish until your body explodes from the soul splitting orgasm, I rip from your dripping wet cunt?â
Her hands flew up and pulled my head forcefully between her legs.
The next thing I knew my face was buried deep between the wide rubbery lips of my Annaâs wet soaking pussy. She couldnât help herself. I knew for a fact she had to have it, and that I was the one who could give it to her the way she truly needed it. I plunged in face first with abandon.
Instantly she was gasping and writhing on my tongue, whimpering under the insistent pussy eating her body so desperately craved. I pushed a couple fingers inside and fucked her wet hole while I pulled her rigid clit into my mouth. I had forgotten how rapidly her arousal would build. I felt her orgasm coming already, so I pulled my fingers out and wrapped both arms around her thighs, locking my mouth over her twitching sex. And thenâŚ
âAnhh fuckâŚâ She came, harder than I ever remembered.
For a good few minutes, she gasped for breath and clutched my head. She shook in convulsions and bucked her jerking pussy into my mouth. For a good few minutes, she came, unleashing every ounce of orgasmic energy sheâd stored inside, squeezing the feeling right out of my head.
When it finally subsided, she lay back exhausted. I lifted my reddened face from between her strong thighs and watched her lovely tits heaving up and down.
âTell me, does your boyfriend do that for you,â I mustered, trying to get a rise out of her again.
âNot... even... close,â she managed with a smile, struggling to drag her body up on the couch.
âWell, I guess you needed it then,â I said, rubbing my hands up between her thighs and back down. I sat back toward the opposite end of the couch to admire her splayed and panting body.
Suddenly, Anna was sitting up and quickly moving my way. I watched as her lips approached mine and hit with a force of passion I hadnât experienced in forever. Our tongues burst from our mouths and tried to out-wrestle each other. I knew my face was covered in her essence, but that had never stopped her before. We kissed and made out passionately. I felt her hands running up and down my body, and I did the same to hers.
We were naked on our couch, consuming each otherâs mouths. I felt her delicate fingers wrapping around cock, and she broke off our kiss, relishing in the tactile feel of it.
âGod, I missed this,â she moaned as she started pulling the skin up and down my erection. The feeling was immediate, and I remembered how well she did even that, it was so natural. Anna knew my cock like no one did, and was reminding me of just how well as our hot tongues snaked together, again.
After a few minutes of manual ministrations, she pulled back.
âI hope your girlfriend doesnât mind Iâm sucking your cock tonight,â she lowly whispered as she kept stroking me. Her tongue reached out and licked my upper lip... my cheek... and my ear, her voice whispering through my veins.
âIâm going to suck your cock. Iâm going to lick your balls. Iâm going to push you so far down my throat that Iâm about to cum again just thinking about it.â
I moaned as her tongue pushed into my ear and drove a sensation through my body, I never knew I missed so badly. I was going to cum myself if she kept lusting into my ear like that and milking my throbbing cock in her hand.
âDoes she drag her tits all over you the way you like it,â Anna asked in the most seductive voice I ever remembered coming from her.
âFuck no,â I swore under my breath, feeling the tender touch of her aroused buds tantalizing my bare skin. Up and down her nipples drew lazy lines of lust onto me, dragging across my bare skin. Her milky tits dragged down my chest, and before I knew it my platonic roommateâs hot breath was cascading over my cock.
âOhh this is going too far. You have a boyfriend.â
Anna shook her head, staring at my pulsing hardness. âYouâre the one who pulled it out,â she whispered, âreminding me how I used to like to kiss it.â
With that she lightly pressed her soft lips to the skin of my cock.
âHow much I liked to lick it,â to which she dragged her tongue from the base of my twitching cock to the very tip, pushing shivers up my sides.
âHow I much I liked to run my mouth along it, like this...â
I groaned as her lips parted and covered the underside of my cock. Annaâs mouth was so soft and tender, and when she stared sliding it up and down my length, I groaned outward into our living room. She slurped her way to the tip and suckled on the head for a minute, keeping me in her mouth as she nursed on it. She worked her way down to my balls, and took one and then the other in her mouth, and started the whole thing again. She wasnât even sucking me.
Anna sat up a little and looked me in the eye.
âDoes she let you cum in her mouth?â
I slowly shook my head, to which she rolled her eyes in exasperation.
âWould you like to cum in mine?â
I nodded, and slowly brought my hand up to her head and gently pulled it down. She simultaneously lifted my cock upright and wetly engulfed my entire cock into her warm and delicious opening. Her lips slid down my length like a tight ring, and my cock kept sliding in. I remembered how deep her mouth went, how my cock would keep going further than I ever thought possible. In I went, and once I eased past her loosened throat muscles I bottomed out, her lower lip nudging my balls. Oh my fucking god.
It was the most pleasure Iâd had in forever, and the building intensity of the night instantly caught up with me. All at once my body flipped a release button and my ejaculating muscles started pumping hard, filling my body with the most intoxicating chemicals nature ever invented. Gush after glorious gush of pent-up seed erupted from the end of my buried cock and into the sweet and bottomless mouth of a naked Anna, right on our couch.
Fuck.
My body shook and shuddered, and she kept her head still, draining every drop of cum that leak from my creamy cock like it was nothing.
After the mind-blowing rush of my orgasm, she slowly pulled off of me, a loud pop and an inhale of breath sounding off like a clap. Her breathing was ragged, but her smile was one of pride. She came back up to me and laid her soft body on top of mine and we kissed again. This was nothing new, and the fresh cum in her mouth was barely noticeable as we shared a passionate embrace.
âWhat did you just do?â I asked incredulously.
âI sucked your cock,â Anna replied in a hungry whisper, âI swallowed your cum. I got you so horny you shot off in my mouth in like buckets!â
I smiled wide with the most satisfaction I had felt in many months.
âThat you did.â I said.
I gently held Annaâs body again as she lay across me, her soft breasts piled on my chest. The round bare cheek beyond the small of her back was a familiar landscape for my fingers to graze.
âWhat are we doing?â Anna asked quietly, her nose brushing against my cheek.
âNot getting caught?â I ventured, saying what was surely on our minds.
âYes, but why?â She laid her head next to mine. âWhy is it so right between us?â
Her fingers twirled my hair and I felt her breath against my neck. âI am so comfortable here, just like this, with you.â
âWeâve been over it a million times,â I began, âand we just donât work this well in the real world. Weâre polar opposites... who happen to be really awesome in bed.â
âDonât remind me,â she softly whispered.
We lay with each other in the darkish room, naked across our couch. My mind played movies of all the great times weâd had. Weekends weâd spent locked in a room and fucking our brains out until we were sore. Days we spent apart, resulting in some of the most passionate and aggressive sex I could remember ever having.
We both considered sex a core part of who we were. Finding someone who shared this intense constant desire and who was also compatible for the long run seemed impossible. For a while we were happy to just seek each other out as a distraction from the sometimes-painful real world. Sex was a blanket, and wrapping each other in it was something we both needed, maybe on a deeply emotional level.
My thoughts were bringing back so many memories; vivid, naked, fucking each other memories and I felt my cock start to harden again. She felt the movement and pushed against it.
âYou realize weâre probably going to do this, right?â I said.
âI know,â she said, almost inaudibly. âI just want to feel you against me for a while longer.â
Anna wrapped my head in her arm and started softly kissing my neck. Her lips were barely touching my skin, but the connection was immense. I sighed out a long breath of air and squeezed her tightly. The soft, wet tip of her tongue dragged along my neck and traveled slowly upwards to my jawline.
Her every contact point with my body suddenly drove a rush of passion into me, jutting my growing cock between us. She felt my surge and dragged a knee up my stomach and moved the same foot over the edge of the couch. My fingers rounded her smooth cheeks and dove between them, finding the familiar damp pool I was dying to plunge my cock into again.
I rubbed around her pussy as she pushed her thigh against my erection, saying into my neck, âI think I wanted you ever since you asked me to move in.â
I thought about this for a minute, and admitted to myself that my noble intentions were never far from the hidden truth.
âI honestly loved the idea of being able to see you every day,â I said, pushing a long finger into her moist tunnel. âI think having you around was good for my sex life. You reminded me of great sex, and I took that to bed with me.â
âMe too,â Anna said, âand I canât help loving you like this,â she moaned and started grinding her thigh harder into my cock, her mouth sucking on my neck.
âI still love you An,â I responded, knowing it was the truth, and as painful as it was for all involved, it was the fucking truth.
âI love you too,â she said almost desperately, âI always long for what we had, no matter where we are or who weâre with.â
Her hips started tilting around, grinding on my finger inside of her. I whispered into her ear, âweâre actually going to do it again, arenât we?â
âYeah, and Iâve been ready,â she returned into my ear, âI want this. Please, do it before I change my mind. Fuck me,â Her panting was getting intense. âI mean it.â Anna lifted herself up on all fours above me, staring into my longing face. Her beautiful tits were hanging, and I could see my cock sticking up, waiting for the inevitable plunge.
And it was so natural that neither of us looked or aimed or anything. Her hips descended and I felt my cock easing right into Annaâs warm and glorious fit.
It was a mind-blowing instant of sexual interconnectedness and blissful wonder as my cock buried itself as deeply inside Annaâs hollow cunt as itâs ever been. We both exhaled immensely, and in that very instant, we were back.
Her mouth hung open as I bottomed out, and the look on her face was one of pure passion. Iâm sure mine was no different as I ran my hands up her thighs and around her back, grabbing that sexy woman as tightly as I could.
We pushed against each other in a frantic connection of sex and lust. It was an idyllic rift in time as our souls became singular again. Neither of us could back away, and we started shifting our lower bodies in subtle circles of intimate connection. My cock was deep, and her pussy captured me so completely that I was content to simply exist inside of her.
Back and forth we ground into the other. I heard her gasp, so I slowly sat us up on the couch. She clung to me like a lost puppy, and her body was shaking from the pleasure.
Then I realized Anna was actually crying, right into my shoulder; tiny little sobs that had me confused and worried.
âAnna? What is it?â I gently asked, pushing back the hair from around her ear and wiping a tear from her cheek.
âYou...â she sniffed, âfeel so amazing. I just... forgot how intense it really was...â
âI know,â I soothed, âI feel the same way. Letâs just enjoy this as much as we can while we have it again... okay?â
That seemed to cheer her up a little as she nodded her head.
âItâs not over yet,â I breathed, reaching my cock into her and then pulling out a small amount, âfar from it.â
Anna smiled and looked right into my eyes, her tear-stained lashes blinking quickly. âI do love you, you know, and I always...â with that she squeezed her inner muscles around my nestled shaft, âalways, will!â
âI love you too,â I said and grabbing her butt, âand now weâre going to make this night worth every minute of regret we might face afterwards.â
With that Anna leaned back and onto the couch, pulling me with her and reaching down to grab my ass cheeks and squeeze them.
âSo then fuck me already,â she said so matter-of-factly that I had no choice but to pull my cock almost completely free from her warm embrace, and then slam it back home with enough force.
âOh god⌠Ahhâ she yelled, louder than I ever remember her being, which was saying something.
I put my forehead against hers and locked in my stomach muscles, allowing my hips to start taking long delicious strokes in and out of her body. Every push and pull was luxurious and familiar and daring all at the same time. I knew just how she liked it. I knew what got her body and her mind really excited. She knew the same about me as well, which is why she pulled my face down and pushed her tongue in my ear.
The warm sensation had a direct line to the muscles in control of my blazing erection, and I started to really pump it into her with passion.
Her lusty voice in my wet ear sounded better than I ever remembered, âOh, yeah, fuck, oh fuck, thatâs it, mmmm, thatâs it, fuck me, oh shit. OhhhâŚâ her voice trailed off into grunts of pleasure as she hugged me tighter.
My cock was sliding in and out of her like an oiled piston, and the liquid noises of sex were squelching out into the room. I realized I was quickly building up a new head of orgasmic steam, so I eased back into a more casual pace. Every bit of her scrumptious pussy was sliding across every inch of my solid cock as we connected through long slippery strokes of sex.
Eventually Anna loosened her grip and held me still, stopping our movements but holding my cock deep inside. Her eyes were wild. She was hungry, and right in the middle of a juicy meal.
Anna spoke, softly, ââŚfrom behind.â
I smiled as I remembered how she liked it that way. I slipped my wet cock out of her, and backed slightly away. She slid off the couch and put her knees on the floor, bending her naked figure over the cushion.
I admired her bare ass in front of me, again. It was so familiar; so right. A thousand memories came rushing back as I instinctively ran my hands over her naked butt and up her spine as I moved in close.
I bent over her body with my wet cock wedged upright in the crack of her ass cheeks and started whispering in her ear.
âThis is how you really like it, isnât it Anna?â
A slight whimper emerged, and she moved her ass against me in earnest, but I wasnât about to slip into her just yet.
âDo you remember how far I can reach from back here?â
âYou know I do,â she softly replied.
âTell me something you think about with me around,â I teased, easing back from her ear, and rubbing her shoulders and neck, âsomething hot.â
âDonât...â Anna pleaded.
âItâs okay An,â I soothed, âjust tell me one thing you fantasized about. Itâs only going to turn the heat up.â
A long silence appeared, and I slowly eased the underside of my cock up and down her crevice as I patiently waited for her inevitable reply.
âFine,â she started, lifting herself up onto her elbows, âSometimes... I imagine myself cleaning⌠God this is embarrassing.â
âJust tell me.â
âI-Iâm cleaning, and Iâm... naked,â she revealed. âAnd then you come home unexpectedly, maybe youâve been drinking, and you sit down and just watch me cleaning in the nude. Youâre staring at my body and telling me how good of a job Iâm doing, how you appreciate how clean I keep our place.â
This was incredible, and now I was logging every word into a fantasy file I could use later as well. I reached around and started toying with one her tight nipples.
âMmm, thatâs nice,â she moaned, humping her bare cheeks against me. âI keep looking over and your eyes are always on me, on my body, staring at me. Then, while Iâm cleaning a counter, or bent over in some way, you come close and start touching me, softly, even though I ask you to stop. You donât. You touch my breast, you cup my ass, you stroke my neck; your hands are all over me.â
I groaned to myself and rubbed my hands over her body to match the story, feeling every sensational inch of her bare form under my fingers.
âOh god, you really know how to play this,â Anna said, and then she continued. âYou start asking me why Iâm naked, and if I was just trying to get you excited. I would insist that I just liked to clean in the nude in my own apartment, and that I should be able to if I wanted. But inside I knew it would drive you crazy, and that you wouldnât be able to resist.â
Anna started sliding her bare ass up and down the length of my nestled cock as she continued.
âYou would touch me and tell me to keep cleaning. I wouldnât notice, but at some point, youâd pull out your cock, and I would feel it against me, hard...â
I took that moment to reenact her tale, pushing the head of my cock down between her cheeks.
âI would act shocked and offended, but youâd push into me...â
Which now I did.
âOH god! Just like... that,â she moaned as my cock ran home, âthatâs so much better than I imagined!â
My cock slid into her, and I pulled on her shoulders to help get it in deep. I leaned over again and started talking into her ear as I softly began to fuck her from behind.
âIs this what you wanted? Hmm? Parading around in the nude. Did you think I wouldnât react?â
I kept sliding my cock in and out of her love tunnel, bringing loud moans and sighs.
âDid you think I would just sit and watch your sexy body bouncing around our apartment in the nude and not want to touch it... to taste it... to have it!? How dare you tease me like that? Now youâre getting what you really wanted, arenât you?â
I grabbed her hair playfully, âArenât you?â
âYESâ she moaned, pushing her ass back against my thrusts and hanging her head down low as I released her hair.
âAnd now your roommate, your ex-boyfriend, is actually fucking you! Heâs finally fucking you after all this time, and you were secretly hoping it would come to this, werenât you?â
âYes!â she squealed as her torso dropped and her head turned to the side.
I grabbed her wide hips and started bouncing my body off of hers in a forceful fuck to last us a lifetime... or another long time anyway.
âYou really need to be fucked like this, donât you Anna?â I asked with heat and passion in my voice.
âMmm... mmm... mmm,â is all she could manage. I kept the aggression level high, because I knew she liked it, and I pushed her head softly into the couch.
âAm I deep enough?â I started, âcan you feel it all the way, my cock, fucking you? Is it good enough? I could fuck you like this every day you know. Youâd love that, wouldnât you? A live-in fuck partner to really give your hot pussy the hard attention it desperately needs.â
Her heavy gasps of air were answering my questions on her behalf.
I decided in the moment to take it a step further. âFrom now on I want you to be ready for my cock in the morning. Keep this little tight pussy neat and clean for me, Iâll be checking it first thing. I want your body smooth and smelling nice. I want to know you will be clean and soft when I come home dirty and hard.â
âOh my godâŚâ Anna moaned in a torrent of sexual frenzy as I pounded her cunt. While I wasnât serious with my suggestions, and I was sure she knew I was just heating us up, there was an edge of real desire to it for both of us. I released her head and smoothed her hair as I slid in and out of her slick grip.
âStart looking forward to a nice hard cock in the morning. Wonât that be nice, a pussy filling fuck to start your day?â
I continued to thrust and shake her ass cheeks. âI like your new look by the way, one big shirt with nothing underneath. How hot did it make you, knowing you were practically naked next to me in the morning?â
âIt felt... mmm... naughtier than I... thought it would,â she managed as I continued my vaginal assault.
âI bet it did,â I continued, âso naughty that you needed to let me see your whole body bent over in your room with your bare ass sticking out.â
âOh shit,â she moaned as our thighs smacked together, âI donât know why... I did that.â
âBecause you wanted this,â I said, happily fucking her from behind on the floor of our living room. âHow did you feel when I called you in to watch me shower?â
âExcited,â she admitted a little too quickly.
âI know you did, and now itâs out, isnât it? Youâve been secretly lusting for my cock, and now youâre getting it.â
I glided into her a few more times and then slowly withdrew my long slippery cock from her body. She put her head down and started to catch her breath. I sat on the floor and turned over, my head between her quivering thighs. I pulled her dripping bush right into my mouth.
She raised her body up and kneeled over me, holding the couch for support. I could see the undersides of her breasts, and couldnât help but reach up and squeeze one as I found her stiff clit with my mouth and sucked it right in.
âOh F-F-FUCK!â she yelled as my tongue immediately began wearing the finish off of her hot button. I sucked her clit and pinched her nipple, sending her body into a shaking fit. I looked up and into her eyes, just in time to see them roll back as she started to shudder.
I knew one or two orgasms would never be enough, and I was almost positive she wasnât getting this kind of attention from her boyfriend. She needed it on a physical and emotional level, and I was finally giving to it her again.
Her moans became screams as she pushed her pussy into my face, sliding it around, building up another sand castle of cum for me to kick over. Her hips began pushing my head into the couch, and she ground her wet soaking pussy against my face like I was some kind of humping pole. I grabbed the clenched cheeks of her ass and held on for the ride as her body began to shudder.
Then she came... as quickly as the screaming started, it disappeared, and she quietly shook and came all over my juice slathered face.
I finally sensed the full weight of release wash over her, and a trail of her cum dripped down my chin as I held her up. A huge smile grew across her face and she whispered down at me, âYou fucker. I havenât felt one of those in a long time.â
Anna leaned down and actually licked my cheek. Then she pushed her tongue deep in my mouth and we kissed for a minute until she broke off and said, âIâve taught you well.â
âThat you have,â I agreed, and watched as she spun around, her hand going for my cock. I felt her small fingers grabbing me tight, and then she leaned forward, her mouth slurping my meat like a melting popsicle. I felt her mouth softly sliding up and down my length.
We used to love to sixty-nine, so I slid down and pulled her legs over me again, diving my face between her legs. The sounds of sucking and smacking, moaning and devouring were over the top as we frantically ate each other out. Her legs started shaking as another climax was about to rain down on me. I wanted to cum so badly, but I also wanted to fuck her again.
I stopped eating her pussy, and pushed her off.
âDamn it,â Anna whined, âI was so close.â
âWhat, again!?â I asked in mock surprise.
âYes, again, and I now I might need to borrow that tongue of yours to lick my poor pussy to sleep every night.â
A ravenous hunger boiled from my brain and I pushed her back onto the floor. I climbed between her legs and licked a long line from her soaking flame and all the way up to the side of her neck. By the time I got there, my cock was already pressing through her open folds and tunneling deep inside her pussy again.
âOh, fucking fuck,â Anna wailed as I bottomed her out, my lips on her neck driving her insane. Just as quickly though, I backed out again, retracing the same liquid line down her splayed body and started another oral assault. This time I was held in place as her legs crossed behind my head and her cunt pushed up and down my face. She was ready, and I held on tight as I worked her.
This time the ungodly screaming arose, and as she flew over the edge, her ranting was perverse, even insane.
âOhhh, Gooaahhddd, ahh Fuck!! mmm, fuck, Eat It! yeah, Eat my pussy, You Fuck! Itâs, oh, my, fucking... nhhhh,â
I was simply holding on for dear life as she went through some kind of transcendental experience. It would have been almost scary, if it hadnât been exactly what I was going for.
Anna came so hard I almost felt sorry for her; it was intense. Her body convulsed and she could hardly gasp for air as the orgasm ripped through her soul and all over my face. As she finally settled dow, I felt the grip loosen on my head, and her hands unwrapped themselves from my hair. Her breathing was hard and a little raspy.
âThat...â she breathlessly began, âwas what I have been missing. How could you do that to me?â
I climbed up next to her on the floor and said, âI just remembered how you always liked it.â
The smile plastered on her face turned to a look of wonder as she shook her head, and then a sly smiled unfolded from her pretty face.
âAnd now I remember what you always wanted.â
I honestly had no idea what she was talking about, until the very instant she pushed me away and sprang to her feet, running naked down the hall.
A hungry smile immediately found my face, and I jumped to my feet and ran after her, my erection so hard from my dirty thoughts that it barely moved as I did.
I rounded the corner toward the light from her room, greeted by a soft glow from her reading lamp beside her unmade bed. On the floor beside the bed was the most luscious and hungering sight my mind could have imagined.
Anna was on her elbows and knees, climbing under her bed. Her bare ass was up and fully facing me, and she was saying something from underneath.
âOh good, can you help me find my phone? I think it dropped on the floor somewhere.â
Just her pale ass was sticking out, and her pussy was practically begging me closer. I walked up slowly behind her and got to my knees, reaching out to stroke the soft skin of her naked ass.
âCan you see anyth... hey, what are you doing? Help me look!â she snapped.
I let my fingers roam her glorious backside as I lightly found her dripping hole. I started to rub it around and push my fingers over her clit.
âHey! Stop it!! Donât touch me like th...â her muffled voice trailed off as two of my fingers plunged into her wet orifice.
Anna groaned and then said a muffled, âKnock it off, and let me out of here, donât even think about it!â
It was too good, and she was really playing it up for me. I pulled my fingers out and grabbed my raging cock, eying her gorgeous bottoms-up.
âThank you, now help me out of... hey! what are you!? no!â
I watched as the head of my cock push her juicy lips aside and ease inside, her tunnel providing quite a resistance. I sank my cock all the way into Annaâs upturned ass, her wet pussy licking the entire length of it along the way.
âYou fucking bastard,â she yelled from under the bed, âhow could you do this to me?â
I started working my cock in and out of the disembodied ass on legs in front of me, making sure I was listening for our old safe word.
The moans from under the bed were soft but growing. Annaâs luscious rump was milking my cock as I pumped her harder. I had to wonder if she had actually fantasized about this very thing.
After the thrill of taking advantage of her compromising position wore off, I slowed my pace and tentatively pulled out of her. Anna weaseled her butt back and forth, squirming out from under the bed. As soon as her head was free, she sat up on her knees and the look on her face was one of pure lust and playfulness.
I suddenly felt her full naked body weight slamming into me, throwing me to the floor. My head landed in a pile of her dirty clothes, and I looked up to see her face appear in my view, âDonât you ever! fuck me like that again!â she warned, pushing off of me and jumping to her feet. I watched her naked form quickly disappear out the door.
I smiled wide as I remembered our games, and loved how easily we were picking back up with them.
I jumped up and happily bounded out of the room, wondering where my sexy naked roommate had vanished to. I instantly saw her across the hall in the brightly lit bathroom, and I slowly walked in.
Anna was leaning over the sink with her face in the mirror, applying some kind of lip something as I often saw her do, except this time she was completely naked.
âWhat are you doing in here?â she asked my reflection in the mirror, âcanât you see Iâm busy?â
âSorry, you left the door open and I really have to go,â I played along.
âFine, but sit down,â she said looking back at her own pink lips, âI donât want to hear it while Iâm having some girl time.â
I walked to the commode and sat down, knowing I was unable to actually use it in my hardened state. I looked over at Anna next to me; her wonderfully perky breasts were slightly swaying with her subtle movements and her twisted nipples looked thrilled to be part of our game.
âWhat are you looking at?â she asked without turning her gaze to me, âdo I need to wear a robe or something in my own house?â
âNo, sorry,â I replied, lifting my eyes to her mouth, âI was just watching what you were doing.â
âWhy, do you have a thing for lipstick or something?â she teased, âYou can have it when Iâm done.â
âVery funny,â I said as I stood, pressing the handle and rushing water into the clean bowl. I walked up behind her and said âI just need to wash my hands.â
âBe my guest,â she said quickly, âbut Iâm not moving. I was here first.â With that she widened her stance and took up the entire front of the sink.
âFine,â I resolved and moved in behind her. The first thing to touch as I moved in close was my cock against the top of her ass.
âHey buddy,â she warned, âwatch your cock.â
âWell, itâs not like Iâve got a lot of room here,â I playfully whined, âdonât mind my reach.â I wrapped my arms around either side of her and pushed forward, our bodies in full naked contact as I leaned forward to reach the water.
âWell, this is awkward,â Anna said to her own reflection in the mirror, âhurry up.â
I pushed the handle on the faucet and got my hands a little wet. I leaned over for the soap and dropped a gold puddle into my palm as I pushed the top. I rubbed my hands together in front of Annaâs naked waist, enjoying the feel of her entire body against mine.
As my hands foamed up, I lightly clapped them together, launching clumps of suds into the air, some in her direction.
âHey!â she cried, âwatch it! Youâre getting soap on my boobs.â She could hardly keep her grin contained as she feigned offense and stood up straight to show me the mess in the mirror.
âOops, hold on,â I said, watching my hands in the mirror lightly touching the spots of bubbles on her breasts, leaving many more sudsy dabs in their wake. As I looked at her naked reflection, I could see large clumps of bubbles all over her chest. She just watched as I tried wiping them away, but the more I tried the soapier her bare tits were getting.
I tried to keep up the act, but soon I was soaping them up with purpose, sliding my fingers around the smooth skin, rubbing across her nipples, grabbing her slippery globes tight and squeezing them together. I was getting extremely aroused, and my cock strained against her back.
âAbout done?â she asked, hands on her hips now as if she was just waiting for me to finish fondling her chest.
âAlmost,â I huffed into her ear. I pushed my soapy hands down her body and pulled us back. Bending my knees, I dragged the tip of my cock down the naked backside of my roommate. With almost no effort I pushed forward and submerged my entire cock into her dripping tunnel, and watched her face in the mirror as it slid all the way in.
âOhh fuck...â she moaned as I pushed in, adding an exasperated, âWhat are you doing?â
âIâm just washing my hands,â I replied as I moved my hands back up to her slippery tits and held them in the mirror while I humped my bare cock in and out of her pussy.
âOh GOD!!â she belted out as I pushed in deep, âAre you fucking me? We... mmm, we talked about this. No fucking!â She was looking at me in the mirror and grabbing the side of the sink as I continued pushing and pulling my cock in and out of her.
âOops,â I said, âare we fucking?â My thighs smacked against hers more loudly.
I watched Anna drop her head down to enjoy our little romp for a time, and then she pushed me back with her hips, quickly stepping forward and escaping my insertion. She spun around and pushed me back against the wall next to us, getting right up in my face. She grabbed my chin and stared right into my eyes.
âWell just watch yourself mister,â she said with a commanding tone, grabbing hold of my wet dick, âdonât let this big cock come between us.â With that she started stroking me hard, her fingers slipping easily up and down my lubricated shaft, pumping me faster than I was expecting... and making her point.
I looked into her eyes and enjoyed her hand masturbating my cock between our bellies. Her soapy breasts were barely touching my chest, and her nipples kissed my flesh. I was in blissful heaven, and was seriously about to erupt when she stepped back, releasing my cock and grabbing the towel hanging on a hook next to me.
She quickly wiped the soap from her chest and handed me the towel, saying simply, âThe lipstickâs all yours,â and walked out into the hall, bare-assed and smiling. I quickly turned to rinse the soap from my hands and wiped them with the towel, hanging it back on the hook.
I turned off the bathroom light and the entire place suddenly dropped into darkness. There was no light from the direction of her room, or from the living room. Figuring she must have turned off the TV, I felt my way through the dark and down the hall into the main room.
âThe powerâs out,â I heard Anna say from near the front window. I looked in that direction and could just make out her silhouette against the dim lights shining in from outside. I slowly approached. Being naked in my own dark apartment was nothing strange, but knowing Anna was in there with me, just as undressed, waiting for me to fuck her again, was the most thrilling sense of erotic anticipation I could remember.
âI canât find a candle or flashlight,â she continued, âso Iâm just standing by the window until it comes back on.â
I walked up quietly behind her and saw that she was looking out the window. I put a hand on her shoulder and ran my fingers down her bare back and over her ass.
âYouâre naked,â I said softly, stroking her flesh with a tender touch.
âI know. I was about to jump in the shower when it went dark. Donât.â She pushed my hand away, and brushed against my erection in the process. She stopped.
âAre you...?â she turned toward me and ran her hand up my body, âOh my god. So weâre...â
âBoth naked here in the dark,â I finished, âWeâre in for a big surprise if the lights come back on.â
She backed away from me in tentative hesitation and paused for a moment before saying, âWhy, youâve seen me naked before.â
âI know, but itâs different now,â I said, âweâre not supposed to see each other... you know, like this.â
âWell... I canât see anything,â she breathed in a husky whisper, her body mere inches from mine, âcan you?â
âDefinitely not,â my voice shook a little. We stood face to face, drinking in the thick anticipation and allure of the moment.
We inched closer, and I felt the softest touch folding slowly around my excited manhood. I exhaled heavily.
âWhatâs wrong,â her voice asked tenderly.
âSomethingâs touching me,â I said. Loving this a little too much.
âReally? What does it feel like?â
âLike a soft hand, on my... ohhh yeah,â I whispered, feeling the grip tightening and moving up and down.
âThatâs so strange,â she said with a smile in her voice, âdo you think we have ghosts?â
âIf we do, they really... hhhhh, like me,â I said, as another touch moved in to softly cradle my balls. I closed my eyes, not that it made much difference in the dark, and suddenly a warm wetness wrapped around the head of my cock, moving quickly downward along it like a wet mouth sucking my cock. âHoooly shit!â
The unexpected pitch-black sensation took me by surprise, and I nearly lost it. I felt her throat open and my cock slipped inside for a second, and then she pulled completely off, leaving my cock to balance wet and alone in the dark. I opened my eyes and saw Annaâs dark figure outlined in front of me again.
âSomething... really likes me,â I said, unsteady on my own legs.
âWell keep it to yourself,â she said, âyour moaning is making me uncomfortable.â
I stepped to the side and softly put my hand out, feeling for some bare skin and finding it. Knowing her body well I traced my way down her side and around the front of her thigh, feeling it open for me.
My fingers brushed past her small pubic hair and I didnât need any light to know how turned on she was. My fingers pushed across her excited clit, and I felt her body reacting to my touch.
âYou okay?â I asked with a grin.
âI-I see what you mean,â she breathed heavily; âIâm feeling a little... felt.â
I reached around in the dark and grabbed a handful of her bare tit flesh, squeezing it gently in my fingers.
âJust let it happen,â I whispered in her ear, âwe donât want to upset any spirits.â I worked a couple fingers in between her legs and started slipping them into her.
âOhâŚâ she moaned, leaning on the window sill, âsomethingâs... pushing into me!â
âSeriously?â I asked as I plunged between her lips, âWhat does it feel like?â
âHhhh... ohhh⌠a hand,â she moaned, âfingers, reaching!â
âDoes it hurt?â
âNo, itâs...â she paused, âstrangely thrilling.â
I felt her hips grinding around on my hand, pulling me deeper.
âIt sounds really good,â I admitted hearing her heavy breathing and sultry moans, âIâm getting pretty turned on here. You sure youâre, okay?â
âHey~â
âYes?â
âIâm afraid.â
âOf what?â
âThat something in here is going to actually fuck me, and I wonât be able to stop it,â she breathed as I twisted my fingers around inside her burning bush.
âWhat should we do?â I asked, keeping the game alive.
âI hate to... hhhh, ask,â she breathed.
âYou want me to put it in?â I offered, now brushing my cock along her bare back.
âWould you? Just to be safe?â
I slid my fingers out of her wet pool, and bending my legs I let my cock find her juicy hole. I eased it all the way in, and she groaned as I entered and stood breathless against the window... impaled.
âLike this?â I asked, holding my cock still inside of her. âDo you think anything else could fit in here?â
âDefinitely... not,â she said softly, tilting her hips and edging my cock around inside her. I ran my hands up her naked sides and weighed her bare breasts in my palms. The feeling of her soft thighs against mine as I cupped her bosom caused me to involuntarily push in a little deeper.
ââŚno fucking,â she whispered, obviously using every ounce of her fiber to keep from encouraging me.
âIâm not sure I can help it,â I pleaded, âyou feel so amazing.â
âBut I have a boyfriend,â Anna said, pushing her hips back to keep my cock fully seated.
âMy body doesnât know that,â I said, pinching her bare nipples and pushing in so deep I could feel myself bottom out. I was awash in the soft feelings of her insides thoroughly soaking my dick, and I could tell our little game was about to break.
âIâm just going to, adjust myself,â I whispered, slowly easing my length out about an inch, and then pushing it back in, âlike... this.â
âOh god,â she breathed, âyou canât do that...â
âWhy not?â
âIt feels like sex.â
âItâs not sex,â I assured her, pulling slowly out until just the head of my cock hovered inside the entrance to her tunnel âThis is sex.â
With that I pushed my hips forward and thrust a series of deep plunges into her, sliding easily in and out. Slap, slap, slap, slap...
âOh oh st t t top!â she managed as her thighs loudly smacked against mine. I pushed in all the way in and held it there, hugging her body tightly below me and finding her ear in the dark.
âFeel the difference?â I whispered.
âYou asshole,â she whimpered, âyou have to stop.â
âDidnât you like that?â I asked.
âI...â she started and then stopped.
I finished her words, âYou loved it.â
âFuck you.â
âMy pleasure,â I said as I proceeded to intentionally slide my cock in and out of Annaâs pussy in the dark like I owed it a favor. My long and sensual strokes were slow but rhythmic. I knew our game had ended as I heard her groan out a familiar sound, one of pure ecstasy, and she began to match my deep plunges thrust for thrust with her hips. It was fantastic. This was no simple fuck; this was hot, deep, lubricated intercourse between two experienced sexual beings.
After a few sublime minutes of pitch-black communion with Anna, I eased my twitching cock out of her for the... fourth?... time that night. I turned her around and felt for her face, sucking the inside of her soft mouth into mine. Our bodies came together as we smashed my sloppy cock between us like a sandwich. The heat in the room was unbearable as we both were practically out of our minds with lust.
âMy room...â is all I said after painfully pulling us apart.
âNow.â she agreed, pulling me quickly in that direction. I followed her lead in the dark, and we bumped our naked bodies along the wall in a hurry to get there. Once inside, I found the plug to a small string of lights, which washed the room in enough dim light to see the naked girl sprawling across my bed like a seductress.
We squinted at the light, but her eyes were on my body, crawling up and down, a look of hot lust burned onto her face.
âCome here,â she said curling a finger at me.
I crawled over her body, staring into her eyes with the awareness we were lovers once again. For a brief window in time, we let ourselves go to enjoy the familiar fruits of our bodies and minds.
Our lips met again and this time it was gentle, inviting, almost intoxicating as the soft wetness of our mouths settled into a playful erotic dance. Her legs were wide and drew me in with a tractor beam of passion and warmth, of excitement and playfulness; of lust... and love.
I stopped kissing her for a moment and looked deeply into her eyes, she read my thoughts immediately.
âI know that look,â Anna said, running her fingers through my hair. âWe just canât.â
I didnât answer because I knew she was right. I knew the logic involved. I knew the pain weâd repeatedly felt. I knew the way our personalities worked against us at every turn when we were together.
I - Didnât - Fucking - Care.
âI know...â I conceded as always, saying the words but feeling the twinge of remorse behind them.
âWeâre so good at this,â she said, reaching between her legs and guiding my throbbing ache into her warm intensive care. She hugged me tightly to her chest as I sank it in once again, breathing heavy air into my ear. âOhhh, Yes, thatâs it, you feel so good... mmm.â
I felt her nipples pushing into me as my hips worked the action between us. I wanted to hold back and make it all last forever, but her body was too sensual, too lustful... too perfect.
I started moving faster, making her squeal with delight at my increased vigor. The bed started shifting beneath us as the sounds and smells of sex were broadcast throughout the cozy room.
I was up on my hands again, watching her body take me, her soft tits wobbling on her chest. Her mouth was open and her eyes bore into mine, urging me on. Our frantic sex was gaining steam as her legs hugged me tightly and tried to help me fuck her, like really fuck her with everything I had.
I started to get wild, and words just poured out of my mouth, like we should have known they would.
âDo you like my cock in there, An?â I was in a mental trance and everything felt familiar again, like knowing how much of a turn on her name was. âDo you like a good fuck?â Her head nodded and her eyes were eating mine alive. âDoes it make your pussy wet to feel my cock fucking you so hard?â
âYes,â she softly moaned, âkeep fucking me... oh god daddy, fuck me!â
And there it was.
I had all but forgotten, but it came out of her just like that, mere moments before a shocked look spread across her face. Adorable. I slowed for just a second and grinned wickedly into her eyes as they darted with fear.
âYou like daddyâs cock, donât you baby?â I growled at her, just the way she liked it. âYouâre so good for your daddy, a good girl with a wet pussy, arenât you?â
The conflict on her face was apparent, but short lived. Quickly she reached up and pulled me down to her, our bodies frantically fucking again. Her tongue went in my ear and out the end of my juiced-up cock as it pumped into her.
âOh god daddy, give it to me,â she moaned into my soul, âmake love to me, please. I need you. Can you feel how wet youâre making me?â
I was struggling to hang on, it was all too intense. I felt my passion reaching a peak with our most personal and private game playing out after all this time. I had no choice but to settle the hell down...
âHold on baby,â I said as I slowly pulled out of her against the strain of her legs trying to keep me in place.
âNo,â she said, âdonât go!â Still, I pulled away and rolled over, lying next to her. I was breathing heavy and sweating.
âIâm exhausted,â I sigh, âlet me get some rest?â I closed my eyes with my arm over my face, knowing my aim to get her on top was immediately received.
Anna climbed over and straddled me, quickly descending her hot pussy over my soaking cock and picking up right where we left off.
âMmmm, what are you doing hon?â I moaned as she swallowed my cock with her body in the most desperate way possible.
âI need you daddy,â she said as her butt started to bounce her soft pussy up and down the length of me as she lay on top of me, âI have to feel you... inside me... fucking me... daddy,â she whispered in my ear.
With a surge of passion, she sat herself upright, my cock fully seated inside of her. Watching her sitting above me I admired her perky breasts as she stared into my eyes. I reached up and took a handful of each. She looked down at me with a mischievous smirk, and then something else settled onto her face. . .
âDaddy...â she started to say, slowly grinding her pelvis into my pubic bone and swirling my cock around inside of her. No more words came however as she placed her palms flat on my chest and pushed against me, shifting her hips and stirring her insides with my deeply reaching cock. Her rocking became pushing, and her pushing became sliding. Soon she was lying against me again, quickly and frantically fucking my brains out.
Our bodies slapped together as our moans devolved into grunts. I felt Annaâs hot breath in my ear again, and her words this time were some of the most wonderful utterances my soul could ever have dreamed.
âDaddy, oh... this is so good, and... god, youâre so incredible. I love your big cock inside of me, Mmmm. Youâre everything to me, and anything youâre not... mmmm... tough shit. Ohhhhhh gggod, keep fucking me daddy⌠yessss. This has to be, the last time... uh huh, keep going... the last time we, fuck around on other people, okay?â
I barely started to reply.
âShhhh,â she continued as her pussy slid up and down my deep erection, ââŚmmmm, let me finish... This is the last time, because from now on, there are no other people Daddy, ahh... thatâs right... because, I want to be yours again. I want us to be together, forever this time... ohhhh... you like that, Daddy? Itâs okay. Tell me.â
âI fucking love it,â my voice burst out as my cock thrust into her bouncing body. I had hold of her hips and was pulling her back down to me each time she pulled away.
Finally, I slowed our bodies down to an easy pace and looked hard into her eyes. âAnd I love you, Anna. I really doâ I lifted my hands and held her face in them as our bodies slowed. âWhat the hell have we been doing all this time?â I had to know.
She didnât answer at first, and just looked into my eyes as we stopped, our souls keeping the sultry flames connecting us alive. Then she told me, and it made perfect sense.
âMaking sure.â
Oh, I was sure. I was absolutely sure there wasnât another person on the planet that could come close to the connection I felt with this human being. I wanted nothing more in that very moment than to follow her to the ends of the world and throw everything I called my own into oblivion.
I was hers. Annaâs... and I had never been happier.
âAnd youâre sure?â I asked tentatively.
âIâve never been more sure of anything in my life,â she said, her words falling out between panting breaths. âI love you more right now than I thought was possible.â
I pushed deeply into her body, this time to form a concrete joining of our souls. She pushed back and I instantly felt every other time we had merged together wash over me as if they had all just happened in an instant. We locked together in a quiet, emotional embrace.
Annaâs soft body was an extension of mine in that moment in time. We started to hug tightly in our coupled position, twitching slightly from the emotional and physical reception.
Our bodies started to ignite again, but without any physical movement. It was a strange feeling, like we were fucking, frozen in time.
She looked at me and I felt her pussy start to tremble around my cock. Then it twitched again, and I felt a rumble in my body. Her arms began to shake, and her mouth opened in an expression of deep pleasure. It was so beautiful and enchanting that I felt a wave of passion extend my cock into her further.
Her eyes widened in disbelief, as her legs began to join the chorus. I held on to her tightly and just throbbed inside of her, feeling every pulse of pleasure that was building around it. Her chest began to twitch, and she sucked in a deep breath, clinging to my body and digging her nails into my skin.
âOOOOOOHHHH...â she shuddered with a shaky moan, and I looked up at her face, which she had pushed forward in a grimace of intense concentration, and I knew Anna was about to burst.
The wall of energy that slammed into her body caused every muscle of hers to clench, gripping me tightly beneath her and jerking us both with her sudden heaves. I held on tightly and just let her come around me with everything she had, feeling her pussy convulsing and twitching on my cock, drinking in the waves of pressure and release washing over us.
Without warning the feel of her throbbing contractions and her intense climax caused my cock to swell and vibrate. The feel of her liquid release washing over me and the erotic spectacle of her orgasm was enough to start my own.
âBreed me, daddyâŚâ Anna said.
That was enough to set me off, a wave of thrilling exhilaration rushed through my nervous system, throbbing out a wave of cum deep into her body as my muscles grabbed her tightly. My creamy jets lurched into Annaâs delicious cunt as her inner walls milked my erupting cock of each electric burst. They kept pumping out of me, pulse after pulse, for what seemed like an eternity...
It was immediately the most intense sexual feeling I had ever experienced, and there hadnât been any movement; only our tight naked connection and our newly ignited passion and love for the other. We lay there panting, both of us with looks of disbelief and sheer wonder on our faces.
âWhat the hell... was that?â she asked finally, her body sweating and still snugly wrapped around my own.
âThe best sex weâve ever had?â I offered slowly, feeling my cock finally letting go of the firm pressure it had been holding all night.
Her heavy breathing was coming down and she lifted her body up onto her arms to look into my eyes, a satisfied grin and something else across her face.
âBy far the best sex weâve ever had,â she agreed and paused, her gaze drinking in my soul for a moment.
âI think we should give it another go.â
âReally?â I exasperated, unable to actually move my body another inch, âI think I might need the night to recover.â
Anna smiled and rolled her eyes, âNot that dummy... Us.â
There was no question, no hesitation in my mind. Our subconscious minds kept bringing us together over the years for what we finally came to realize. We couldnât stay apart, for worse or for better...
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adam's wings
this is the adam smut i was talking about... it was originally gonna come after a mini fic but i couldn't figure out how to end the fic so yall can have this smut
all you need to know is adam's had a massive crush on the reader (fem!reader) for like 5+ years and in the last extermination her wings get got (poor you)
I'll publish the fic eventually but enjoy this man being pathetic and a switch (also i hardly write male smut so i hope it's good :))
Life without your wings was something you were just going to have to get used to. It was awful, for the most part, and when it wasnât it was tolerable. Instead of flying, you and Lute walked in the mornings⌠you had to use stairs, and you had to ask for help getting things that were too high â of course, Adam liked when you asked him to get things. It boosted his already massive ego now that you were spending more time together.Â
Instead of a yearly lunch and dinner after extermination with casual work conversation in between, you had lunch once a week and found yourselves talking often.Â
Like today; you werenât expecting anyone, but Adam brought it upon himself to come to your apartment. He appeared on your balcony, knocking on the glass doors impatiently until you opened them, confused.Â
âOh, itâs just you.â
âYou could sound a little happier, dude,â he scoffed as he held out a bag. âI brought you food.â
âSorry knocking at my window freaked me out, dude.â You rolled your eyes as you took the bag. âAre we having lunch together?â
Your excited face made him frown and you quickly understood that no, you were not having lunch because he was always busy doing the job you used to help with.Â
âHey, donât look so down, angel.â He leaned down to kiss your cheek. âIf youâre still up, Iâll stop by for dinner.â
âJust wake me upââ
âNo can do, sugar tits,â you rolled your eyes at the nickname. âDoc says you still need rest.â
âUgh! Fuck the doctor!â You tossed the food on your coffee table, making him yell âhey!â âSorry.â
âI used my piss break to get you that!â
âI said sorry! Iâm sorry. Thank you for the food.â He huffed, looking at the discarded bag. âDonât be a baby.â
âYouâve been in such a fucking mood, babe.â He brought his hands to your hips, pulling you up against him. âWhat happened? You were doing fine withoutâŚâ His hands traveled to your lower back, then further up, making you wince. âHave you been resting?â
âDonât baby me. I donât need rest â I need my fucking wings backââ
âSh, sh, sh,â he cooed, head lowering to your neck. âWatch your fucking mouth.â The cool mouth of his mask grazed your skin as his fingers traced down the line of your spine, making you inhale sharply and arch toward him. He took that opportunity to hold you tighter. âI can make you feel better, angel⌠Do you want me to?â His lips pressed against your neck, much more tender than he wouldâve liked, but he didnât mind having to ease in.Â
âHow much longer is your break?â
âEnded five minutes ago, but who gives a shit?â He laughed as his kisses on your neck became more forceful. âIâll tell them you needed my help⌠that you begged me to stay⌠Iâll say I couldnât fucking resist youâŚâ He licked a stripe up your neck, making you shudder. âI just had to help⌠Itâs the angelic thing to doââ
âAdam.â
âYeah, baby?â He was biting down on your neck.Â
âBedroom,â was all you had to say for him to suck the darkest fucking hickey onto your skin.Â
âFuck yeah, baby!â Before you could turn away from him, he lifted you up and took you to your room, setting you on the bed before you pulled him on top of you. You got his mask off as quickly as possible, accidentally leaving the horns, but you didn't care.Â
âYou look kinda sexy with horns,â you said as you pulled him down and pressed your lips to his.Â
âKinda?â He laughed into the kiss.
âMmm⌠Really sexy.â He groaned when your hands caressed the horns, gripping them and forcing his head at the angle you wanted. âYeah. I could get used to this.âÂ
âDonât get cocky,â he warned, eagerly pushing his hips up against yours and shoving his tongue in your mouth with so much haste you had to pull back.Â
âI donât want a quickie todayââ you started, speaking against his forceful lips.Â
âYeah, sure, angel, whatever you want,â he impatiently got his mouth back on yours, hands pulling you against him harshly.
âStay with me today⌠You can work from home, right?â
âYeah, yeah, Iâll come up with something. Just shut up.â But then he paused. âHome?â He asked. âWith you?â
It was times like these where you remembered heâd been crushing on you for at least five years. You laughed. âFigure of speech, darlingââ
âOh, right, right.â He was quick to get his mouth back on yours.Â
âButâŚâ You tried to speak between kisses. âI wouldnât mind â you â coming home â to me every night â like thisââ
âYouâre making me hard as fuck. Stop talking.â You did as he asked, but reached your hand down to grope him. Before you could, he grabbed your hand and shook his head. âNot yet,â he said quickly before bringing his mouth back to your neck to suck bruises on to.Â
But you wanted to touch him, and as your half-lidded eyes looked at what you could touch, your hands reached for his golden wings. Your fingertips stroked the tops of them, feeling just how delicate they were. They were soft, fragile, and utterly beautiful. Your hands traveled down to the base of them, fingers tracing around the feathers with gentle pressure.Â
Adam froze on top of you, cutting off his kisses with a strained moan as he shuddered, hips jerking and eyes fluttering. âF-ah-fuck, oh my⌠fuck,â he whined as you continued your gentle touches to his wings. His hands gripped you harder, hard enough to bruise, but you didnât care when you had his head buried in the crook of your neck as he whined in your ear, hips thrusting up against nothing to try and get some kind of relief. âBaby⌠your gonna â fuck â you gotta stop â itâs â ah, fuck.â He was trying to push your hips down so he could at least grind against you as you tortured him like this, but he couldnât pull himself together enough to get it right.Â
âShh, baby, I got you⌠You like that?â He sunk his teeth into your shoulder when you spoke, moaning against you. âLet me help,â you laughed, stopping momentarily to get his and your robes off.Â
He couldnât even give you foreplay if he wanted to right now. He just needed to be inside you.Â
Thatâs exactly what you let him do. You got both your undergarments off as he lazily kissed your shoulder and reached down, guiding him between your legs. You inhaled, moaning when he pushed his cock inside of you, filling you up and making his hips twitch with how wet and ready you were for him. Your legs went around his waist as he rocked his hips and your hands went back to his back.Â
As soon as you touched his wings again, his hips were snapping against yours and he was muttering incoherently, âfuck, baby.â âNeeda be inside you.â âSo good.â âWant you even more.â âDonât stop.â
When you started whining in his ear as he buried himself inside you just to grind against you, massaging that soft spot just above your cervix and making your cunt tighten around him, he completely lost it. He didnât hold back on his loud moaning, desperate licking, or harsh biting for anything. He left your neck, shoulders, and collarbones a discolored mess as his hands found your breasts and groped. He pinched your nipples, rolling and twisting harsh enough to get you arching into him, but gentle enough to make sure he didnât hurt you.Â
âYouâre all mine,â he panted into your neck, kissing up to your cheek in an effort to find your lips. âNo one else can have you⌠You canât â ah â you canât let anyone else touch you. Iâd have to fucking kill them,â that, he said clear as day, making you moan his name. âNo oneâs ever gonna hurt my angel again⌠Never.â Finally, his mouth found yours and his rough kisses had you gasping for breath as if heâd just threatened you and not the entire world outside of this room.Â
His hips didnât stop, but the more you felt up his wings, the sloppier he got. âFuck,â he groaned, voice hoarse. âNeed more of you.â He brought one hand by your head, pushing himself up and getting your dangerously pleasuring hands away from his wings as his other hand went between you and pulled your hips up. He pulled his hips back before thrusting into you, making your eyes roll back as you turned to the side to bury your face in your pillow. âThere it is.â He held you in place, hitting that same spot with each thrust and making you tighten around him. âThat's it⌠That's my girl.âÂ
You fisted the sheets, moaning loudly into your pillow. Adam grabbed you by the neck, using his fingers to turn your head toward him. âLet me hear you,â he said, voice still whiny from the way you were touching him and making your stomach flutter. âYouâve been feeling me up this whole fucking time, itâs time for my reward, yeah?â You nodded, never breaking eye contact, and he smiled. âGood fucking girl.â
His hand went down to your hips, resting on your lower stomach and pressing down to make you groan. His thumb moved to your clit, pressing down to feel you pulse against him. He laughed. âI knew you fucking needed me. Little attitudeâs all fucking gone now, huh?â He circled his thumb, thrusting into you at the same excruciatingly slow pace. âThought youâd have me like this, didnât you, angel? All fucking pathetic.â
âFuck youââ You whined, trying to sound mad and failing â how heâd completely flipped the situation was beyond you, but you didnât care when you felt like this. Of course, that wouldnât stop you from running your mouth. (Or getting him back later).
âShut up and take it, bitchâ oh! Shit, that was kinda mean. Fuck, sorry babe.â He leaned down, kissing you quick and making you laugh as your hands reached up to his face to keep kissing him. âI didnât mean that.â But when you kept laughing, he quickly told you to, âshut up,â again, then, âyou sound really fucking pretty, so donât actually.â
âAdam,â you warned, hand reaching down toward his wings. âYouâre the one that needs to shut upââ
âNo fucking way.â He grabbed your hands and pinned them above your head, picking his pace back up and making the bed knock against the wall with how rough he was being. âYou and your pretty little hands are dangerous, angel⌠Gotta put you back in your place.â He brought his hand to the back of your thigh, pushing it up by your side to get even deeper.Â
That and so he could watch your cunt taking him. His gaze alone made your legs shake, your moaning picking back up. He got the hint, pushing himself deeper and grinding against you until you were so tight around him that he could hardly move.
But he did anyway, fucking into you harder and faster as his hands held your squirming hips still. He moaned at the way you tightened around him, your hands pushing at his hips to get him to stop overstimulating you as you came, but that did nothing but turn him on as you moaned his name like a fucking prayer, back arching and hips writhing on the sheets as your hands settled to grip his wrists and your eyes shut in pure bliss.Â
âShh, baby, I got you,â he mocked your words from earlier, making your eyes screw shut as you tightened around him again. That made him shudder, his hips twitching as he thrusted sharply, his orgasm filling you up and dripping out of you as his eyes shut and hands moved to grip yours, pinning them to the bed.Â
He pulled out slowly, watching his cum spill out of you with a cocky smile. âFuck, you look good like this,â he said, hands squeezing yours. âHowâs it feel having theââ
âIf you say anything about your âfirst dick,â Iâll kill you,â you said breathlessly, cutting him off before he could start and making him roll his eyes. âBut⌠it feels really fucking goodââ âThatâs my fucking girl!â
#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel x reader#hazbin hotel headcanon#hazbin adam#hazbin hotel heaven#hazbin hotel adam#adam hazbin hotel#adam x reader#hazbin hotel x you#hazbin hotel x y/n#adam smut#hazbin smut#hazbin blurb#hazbin imagine#hazbin drabble
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I've been running this writing experiment lately to cut out phrases like "I felt" in my fiction writing. Like I was looking at a sentence in a draft that said, "he felt as if character's eyes were pinning him in place." And then I was like, "well, does he think that or is it true? As a result of this person watching him, he's froze. It's not like a thing, it is that thing."
Oh and "almost"! I'm always going, "He felt almost relieved that it hadn't happened." Well, did he feel better that it didn't happen or didn't he? Or "somewhat", I'm always going, "she felt somewhat perturbed."
And like none of that is wrong, to be clear. I don't know if it'd improve your writing, I don't even know if it'll improve my writing, but I use this sentence structure all the time so every viewpoint is from a voice that thinks about what it thinks, hedges its statements, and offers the same ability for wry little jokes formatted in the exact same way. And I have a lot of writing like that and I think (!) that they're good, but read as a whole, I'm like, "god, they all sound the same." Like there's one melody that I write songs to, so even with different lyrics, it's almost (!) the same song. Something I've been struggling with in regards to my writing and why I've felt so blocked is how boring I found writing my usual way. I'd read something and enjoy the individual parts of it, but then I'd step back and I didn't like the whole. And I got good at this enough at seeing that I didn't like it to do it in real time as I was writing, which as you can imagine didn't improve the process of writing because now I was bored AND dejected about being bored.
There's this sentence-level structure fact that I use unconsciously. A pattern I find easy is short sentence, short sentence, short sentence, long sentence. So I write that. "He [verbed]. He [verbed]. Then he [verbed]. As he [verbed] to his [consequence], he [verbed] that [noun] was [statement of condition]." Which could work, it often does make for a nice rhythm, but it's something I reach for often because it's easier for me.
Just last sentence, I originally typed, "I find it easier for me." But if what I mean is "using this pattern is less effort than another pattern," then it's easier for me. One voice is hedging its bets and the other asserting. Either is fine! But they're different! And, again, GOD you would not believe how many words I've cut out of this paragraph as I write it. I'm so chatty. I love using twelve words when six will do. And that gives my writing a specific tone to my ear.
So if I am bored of that tone, why not try using just the six words? Why be understated? Why be afraid of stronger opinions? So right now with my fiction, I'm experimenting with cutting out as many self-reflective words as I can. Sometime you do need to draw attention to the face that this is the character's interpretation, but like you definitely don't need to do it as much as I naturally want to do it. You don't need to always go out of your way to allow the possibility that the narrative voice is wrong. During editing, I trim the weaker ones (I originally typed, "what I consider the weaker ones" Is that more accurate?). But I think them being there in the first place shifts my language which shifts my character's which shifts my plot. It's sentence structure all the way down!!
(this barely applies to my writing on here, btw. i try to do good but yknow this is a tumblr blog. i'm not trying to get a lit mag to accept it.)
Anyway blah blah (chatty!) the point is I've been trying to write in a way opposite of my interests. Something that doesn't take itself too seriously, that emphasizes EMOTION and ACTION instead of minimizing it, and that clips through scenes at a good pace. Doing this been amazingly fun. I've been having such a good time doing it. I am writing so much because I really enjoy doing it. The process of writing is so fun again.
This post is about two things. One is my new mood stabilizer and therapy day camp. The other is about the benefit of pretending to be MXTX.
#mxtx#w.#b.#the thing about writing scum villain is that you have to write a character so is SO CONFIDENTLY wrong.#sqq needs to be as sure of that he is wrong to the degree with which he is actually wrong#i've used more exclamation points in the last month than i have perhaps in my life. i might in fact have too many exclamation points#but turns out that shit's fun as hell#it's word confetti
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Crossdresser!Yn AU:
Loki: Sooo...
CD!Yn, while looking at a game: What?
Loki, putting an arm around her shoulder: Isn't it fun how we get along so well? We should go and eat dinner when this is over-
Noa, entering the room: You think that?
Loki, jumping away when he hears Noa's voice: Mister Noa, sir! I was just keeping an eye on your adopted son, who I otherwise don't know!
Noa, eyeing Loki suspiciously: Really?
Loki: Y-yeah!
CD!Yn:..
CD!Yn: Adopted what?
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CD!Yn, while eating past: You were right! It tastes much better with the original tomato sauce than the store bought one!
Lorenzo, smiling proudly: I know it does! We should definitely meet up a lot more often and try the different recipes I- Oh, we can make dates out of it!
CD!Yn, nodding along: Sounds good-
Snuffy: What are you kids doing?
Lorenzo: Nothing much
CD!Yn: Lorenzo and I are planning dates.
Lorenzo, noticing Snuffy's lips twitch: Are you alright?
Snuffy: Of course! I will join you guys on these dates as well. Is that alright?
CD!Yn: Fine with me. And you, Lorenzo?
Lorenzo, looks at Snuffy's warning glare:...
Lorenzo: ...Sure...
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Chris: What a nice day-
Charles: Come on!! Please! Just one!!
CD!Yn: I don't know... I think you should save that for your partner-
Chris, while eavesdropping: Huh?
Charles: But I want you! Please! I even brushed my teeth for this!
CD!Yn: The way you said it makes it sound like you usually don't brush them-
Charles: Please just one kiss! Please!
Chris:?!
CD!Yn: Fine-
Chris, slamming the door open: Kids, let's go and practice!!
Charles, grumbling: You are not one of our coaches!
Chris: True, that's why I will bring you back to Loki and you, Yn to Noa! Far away from each other.
Charles: What?! No!
CD!Yn, oblivious: Ok
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Lavinho: Otoya. No.
Otoya: Come on! Yn and I always cuddled while we slept!
Lavinho, while pointing at the sleeping girl: Shush. No, you will not cuddle him while I am around.
Otoya: You act like I can't be trusted
Lavinho: Nothing personal, kid. I don't trust any of you around Yn. Now, be quiet. The poor boy is all tired from his previous game
Otoya: Fine... Can I at least kiss him when he wakes up?
Lavinho:???
Lavinho: No. Leave him alone.
Tag:
@someprettyname
#bllk#blue lock anime#blue lock manga#blue lock#blue lock x reader#bllk x reader#blue lock scenarios#crossdressing#noel noa#bllk noa#julian loki#bllk loki#marc snuffy#bllk snuffy#don lorenzo#chris prince#charles chevalier#lavinho#otoya eita#bllk lavinho#bllk otoya
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TR boys when you use their first name for the first time.
gender neutral reader
Includes : Mikey, Mitsuya, Inui, and Hanma.
Note : Implied NSFW, a little angsty on Inuiâs.
Tell me if you want me to do others !!
Manjiro Sano
Mikey had been your boyfriend for around a year before you decided to try to use his first name. You usually used pet names or just calling him Mikey, but you really wanted to know what heâd think.
âMikey~â You called out, as your boyfriend stayed on your chest, cuddling deeper into your body.
âMikey, we have to get up. The gang will be waiting on us soon..â
He continued to ignore you, his eyes closed and a small smile on his face. Light breathing and the sound of birds outside filled the room.
Finally, you gathered enough courage.
âM..Manjiro..â You said quietly, a slight heat rushing to your face. The heat became even greater when his head sprung up at you, his gaze directly on your eyes.
âWhat did you just say?â
That tone. Was he mad at the random drop of his government name?
âU-Uh.. Manjiro..â You kept your confidence even though it was starting to falter.
âSay it again.â He demanded, his tone and face stone cold.
âManjiroâ
Suddenly a big smile showed on his face, and he started to kiss all over yours.
âCall me that from now on, yeah?â He smiled again, continuing his ministrations.
âManjiro! That ticklesâ You giggled, extremely happy at how this turned out.
Mitsuya Takashi
It wasnât long before you decided to call Mitsuya by his first name. It just kinda slipped out because of how much Hakkai would say it. Besides that, He just has such a pretty first name.
âLuna, Mana, Iâm home!â
âTaka-nii!â
âNii-chan!â
They yelled, running down the stairs.
âYou brought Y/n-nee too! Yay!â Luna smiled, as both sisters hugged onto your legs.
âHi my loves, how was school?â
You and the girls got into random conversations about the day, smiling and laughing.
Mitsuya started dinner, while softly smiling at the sight. He adored the way you got along with his sisters. It only pushed the attraction he already had for you.
After a while of talking with his sisters, you told them you were going to help him with dinner, and left them to play.
âHi Loveâ He smiled when you walked towards him.
âNeed any help, Takashi?â
Suddenly he froze, the knife he was using to cut vegetables dropped beside him, luckily not hitting anything.
âW-What?â
âDid I say something wrong? Was it too early to call you that..?â Anxiety started to creep into your mind like a wildfire. Everything in you telling you to apologize and say Mitsuya instead.
âN-No!â He turned around, and grabbed your hands. A smile present on his face. âCould you repeat that..?â
âDo you need any help, Mitsuya..?â
He frowned, âThatâs not what you said..â
You swallowed the lump in your throat and tried again.
âTakashi..â
Suddenly one of his hands left yours and he hid his face behind it.
His ears shined red and he smiled brightly.
âYes, I would love your help.. Please call me that more.â
âO-Okay!â You smiled brightly, happy he was okay with it.
âMy name has never sounded better than it did when you said it..â
Inui Seishu
Inui had been your best friend since he originally joined Toman. Both him and Koko leaned towards you more than anyone else from the first division.
You had always thought Inui was so pretty, which Kokonoi noticed fairly quickly. He teased you about it often before you two got together.
You didnât like calling Inui the same name as everyone else, which is where the thought of using his first name came from.
One night, you were hanging out with him in the old bike shop Inui stayed at. Usually Koko would be here too, but he had something going on he said he âhad to deal withâ.
âAre you hungry? I brought some food from the store..â
âYeah I am, Thank you Seishu.â
He froze, The bag in his hand dropping to the floor. Suddenly you regretted this decision greatly. Especially when you noticed tears underlining his eyes.
âInui! Iâm sorry!â You rushed over to him, wiping his tears, a worried expression on your face.
He just stared at you, before pulling you into his arms and sobbing into your shoulder.
âIâm so sorry Inui.. I didnât mean to hurt you..â
âNo..â He cleared his throat, âPlease call me that again..â
âAre you sure?? Uh.. Iâm sorry, Seishu.â
His sobs got harder for a bit longer, as you held him tightly.
âDo you know.. how long Iâve waited to hear that name..?â
âWhat are you talking about..?â
âIâve waited so long.. for someone to see me as just me.. Seishu..â
He sniffled again into your shoulder, before leaning back and holding your face with so much care, as if you could break at any second.
âIâve always seen you as you, Seishuâ
His eyes teared up again, and he smiled, before bringing you into a kiss beyond anything youâve felt before. He put his all into that kiss.
That night he showed you exactly how much you meant to him. How much he loved you.
Hanma Shuji
Hanma and you started as a fling that just stayed to each other. There wasnât any stated commitment, yet neither of you went to anyone else.
You thought about saying his name so many times, but never got the courage to. Until you were at a party with the Toman members.
The bar was filled with people, most tipsy and on the dance floor while Rindou Haitani played music for the whole crowd.
Hanma has never entertained anyone else, so you never felt the need to get possessive or jealous ever. Until this party.
âYouâre Hanma right?â The girl slurred, âWow. You really are as handsome as people say, Reaper.â
âThanks.â He replied, before going back to his conversation with Kazutora.
âAre you here alone? I could show you a good time tonight, if youâd like~â She flirted, slowly getting closer to him before you walked up.
Placing yourself on Hanmaâs lap, You smiled and kissed his cheek.
âHi Shuji~ I missed you. Oh? Who is this?â You asked nicely, while smirking at the girl.
âJust some random girl. Says she can give me a good time. You believe that, doll?â He smirked.
âOh! By all means try, But remember who heâs coming back to after, okay?â I smiled her way, as she scoffed and walked off.
He places a few sloppy kisses along your neck before smiling up at you.
âWas that jealousy, Doll? That side of you was.. extremely hot..â
âWhat can I say, Youâve been mine for a while.â You smiled, placing a slow kiss on his lips.
âUgh. Get a fucking room.â Kazutora scoffed.
Suddenly you were picked up as Hanma stood, âOh donât worry, we willâ He smirked as he walked away from Kazutora.
âOh and doll?â
âYes?â
âBe sure to call me Shuji for the rest of the night~â
#hanma shuuji x you#hanma headcanons#mikey#tokyo revengers#tokyo revengers oneshot#manjiro x y/n#manjirosano#mitsuya takashi#mitsuya x reader#tokrev#inui seishu#inui x reader#sano manjiro x reader
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Your Favorite Body - Matias Asbrink
As usual, canât guarantee 100% accuracy on this.
On a night in Achroite when snow fell like petalsâ
Emma: It's so interesting you'll be able to walk through the forest without any light even though it's night.
Matias: Yeah, it's a phenomenon called snowglow. It's when moonlight reflects off a bed of snow and scatters, making its surroundings brighter. After your eyes adjust to it, the snow will look like it has a faint glow and you'll be treated to a splendid, magical scene.
Emma: Hehe, I'm really looking forward to it! Thank you so much for arranging this!
Matias: You're a dear friend and I've been looking forward to seeing it with you.
A few days ago, we had talked about the "beauty of the forest at night", which led to me going out with Prince Matias.
It was still early, so we stopped at a cafe. As we were chatting, Prince Matias suddenly stared at me intently from across the table.
Matias: By the way, do you have clothes for the cold? The forest's cold at night. You'll need to wear more clothes than usual.
Emma: Yes, I have enough. I brought extra layers and also brought the gloves and scarf that you gave me.
Matias: Well that's a relief. Still, just to be safe, let's warm up here.
Prince Matias smiled and sipped his coffee.
I went to grab my cup too whenâ
Emma: Woah!
The metal cup was hotter than I expected and I pulled my hand back.
The cup ended up flying toward Prince Matias, its contents spilling out...
Emma: P-prince Matias! Are you okay?
Matias: Yeah, I'm fine. How about you?
Emma: I'm fine...I'm so sorry about that!
I rushed over to Prince Matias' side and wiped his coat and shirt with a linen cloth.
(This is bad, it's not coming off at all. And he's pretty wet...)
I didn't give up though, and grabbed his shirt. Snow shadow-colored eyes shifted from side to side.
Matias: ...
Emma: It's hot too. Did you get burned?
Matias: Like I said before, I'm fine. I only got a little wet, it's no problem. [to himself] I never imagined that a fantasy of mine from back when I was a student would come true.
Emma: Hm? I'm glad you didn't get hurt. I'm so sorry for the stain. Please let me give you a replacement next time.
Matias: There's no need. I'm pretty good at cleaning stains since it's something I had to do often while I was a student. However, it won't be good to go into the forest like this.
(That's true. He'll freeze right away with wet clothes)
Emma: Then let's cancel our outing today.
(It's unfortunate, but it's better than Prince Matias catching a cold)
Matias: No, I'd rather not. I knowâ
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After leaving the cafe, Prince Matias took me to a nearby inn.
Matias: If I air them out in a warm room, they'll dry faster. We still have some time. Let's stay here for a while. This inn's a favorite of mine.
Matias sounded pretty cheerful and didn't blame me at all.
(He's so nice)
My chest warmed at the thought as I headed toward the back of the room.
Emma: I'll light the lamps.
Matias: No, hold on...I'll light this candle.
(This candle?)
Prince Matias picked up a candle from a shelf nearby and lit it with a sense of familiarity.
The room was immediately bathed in a warm light and the intricate decorations on the candle holders stood out.
Emma: ...Amazing.
Matias: Do you like it?
Emma: Yes, it's reeeally lovely! I was looking forward to seeing the snowglow, but this is a magical scene too...thank you for bringing me here.
Matias: Yeah. Even thought part of our original plan, I'm glad I got to see this with you.
His snow shadow-colored eyes narrowed slowly with his calm smile.
His soft smile was so captivating that I forgot how to breathe.
(I'm not sure why...but my heart's suddenly beating really fast)
While I was trying to calm my heart down, Prince Matias reached up to his shirtâ
Emma: ...Prince Matias!
Matias: Hm, what's wrong?
(I was just about to faint from how charming his expression was, and now he's stripping!)
Flustered, I turned away, but that didn't calm me down.
Matias: Miss Emma, what's wrong?
Emma: ...You suddenly started taking your clothes off and it surprised me...
Matias: I have to take them off if I want them to dry.
Matias spoke calmly, oblivious to my internal panicking.
Matias: Like I said back at the cafe, my clothes would often get dirty while I was a student. When you put mischievous boys together, chaos happens...
(...I get it now. This is something Prince Matias is used to)
(And doing this is fine for him since we're friends, despite being of different genders)
I took deep breaths to calm my heart...
Matias: Miss Emma, are you okay?
He appeared from behind me and I jolted in surprise.
Emma: I-I-I-I'm fine! So...
(This is bad. If Prince Matias keeps getting closer while radiating all that charm, I'm going to...)
I backed away hastily and ended up stumbling back onto the bed.
Emma: Ah...
Matias: ...You're not fine at all. There's obviously something wrong with you.
Prince Matias got on the bed and sat beside me.
While I looked at his worried, snow shadow-colored eyes, a long hand instantly reached toward me.
A large palm touched my forehead and Prince Matias' furrowed his brows.
Matias: You do feel a bit hot. Shall I light more lamps?
Though I was thankful for his concern, I disagreed.
(...I'm definitely blushing. I can't let him see me like this)
Emma: Please don't...Um, just leave them as is...
The way I said those words was like I was imploring him and Prince Matias stared at me.
Matias [to himself]: It's like my fantasies with my consort have become a reality.
(I was dizzy and couldn't think straight)
(...I can't avoid this anymore. I'm already at my limit. I have to be honest with him...)
Making up my mind, I looked into his snow shadow-colored eyes and opened my mouth.
Emma: I'm embarrassed! ...You're just too alluring right now...
Matias: Alluring?
Emma: Yes...My heart was already racing from how sexy you are, and then when you started undressing, I couldn't look at you anymore...
Prince Matias looked stunned and dipped his head slightly with a serious look.
Matias: ...I-I see. I...wasn't being considerate. Sorry. I'm aware that you're not like my schoolmates, but...
Emma: No, I'm sorry I can't act normally.
Matias: Miss Emma, please don't apologize. It's my fault for being inconsiderate. Besides, you're far tooâ
Emma: Far too...?
Matias: ...Nevermind, it's nothing. In any case, the fault's mine. ...(<_<)
(I can't tell since it's dark, but is Prince Matias feeling a little embarrassed?)
Matias: I'm not sure why, but...when I'm with you, I experience these feelings that I don't with other women.
Emma: ...I might be the same. And not just today, but when I'm with you, I sometimes get these strange feelings... Ah, do you hate it when people think about you like this?
Matias: When you say strange feeling, do you mean a "distasteful" feeling?
Emma: N-no!
Matias: Then it's okay. I don't mind if you think of me like that. Rather...
Prince Matias cut himself off and smiled happily.
That smile was filled with so much more allure than I had ever experienced before.
(My heart's pounding too fast for me to think about anything else)
(And yet it's odd how comforting it is)
For the time being, in this candlelit dream-like room, I stared at Prince Matias and forgot about everything else.
I'm never sure if I should translate č˛éŚ as charming, alluring, or sexy
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DIABOLIK LOVERS Eternal Blood Animate Tokuten CD â˝ Vol. 1 & 2 ăťA Certain Day at the Mukami Household
Original title: ăăćĽăŽçĄçĽĺŽś Voiced by Sakurai Takahiro (Ruki), Suzuki Tatsuhisa (Yuma) English translation by @otomehonyaku Click here for the audio (as always, BIG thank you to @karleksmumskladdkaka!)
âââ シ ・ďžâ: *.â˝ .* :âďž. âââ
This CD was very generous with the fan service, to say the least... I can safely say it's one of my new absolute favourites! The cooing, the teasing, the brotherly banter, Ruki's tired dad energy near the end, and both Ruki and Yuma fawning over you? _:(´ŕ˝`ă â ): I hope you have as much fun listening and reading along as I had translating it!
Please do not reuse or post my translations elsewhere or translate my work into other languages without my permission.
âââ シ ・ďžâ: *.â˝ .* :âďž. âââ
00:00 [The scene starts with Ruki quietly reading in his room.]
Ruki: What a lovely day it is today. A pleasant breeze is coming in from the window, and time is passing ever so slowly... There couldnât be a more perfect time to read.
[Ruki turns a page.]
Ruki: I see. Thereâs much more to this book than I thought. I only bought it on a whim to pass the time, but⌠itâs actually not bad at all.
[Ruki turns another page and continues reading. The sound of rushed footsteps comes from the hallway.]
Ruki: Oh. Those footsteps⌠Is that Yuma?
[Ruki snaps his book shut with a sigh.]
Ruki: If heâs heading this way, he probably wants something from me. Iâd hoped to spend a quiet day alone, but it seems like Iâll have to let that goâŚ
[Yuma bursts into the room.]
Yuma: Hey! Thisâs bad, Ruki!
Ruki: Do not run in the hallway. Knock. Wait before I answer until I open the door. How many times do I have to tell you all of this?
Yuma: Thereâs somethinâ much more important that I need you to take a look at. You got time, right?
Ruki: What happened? You came all this way to disturb my reading, so at least tell me why.
Yuma: Youâll know the reason when you just come to the garden ân look at it.
Ruki: At what?Â
[The scene shifts to the Mukami mansion's vegetable garden.]
Ruki: Ah⌠What on Earth is this? Hey, you. You were here together with Yuma, right? Explain the situation.
[You try to explain, but youâre so worked up that you keep stumbling over your words.]
Ruki: I shouldnât have asked you. I canât have a conversation with you when you can't even string together a sentence.
Yuma: Well⌠you know how most of the veggies in the garden are pretty much ripe for the pickinâ right now? She was pickinâ them for me, and then she suddenly called out that she saw somethinâ underneath the dirt. So, I got curious and dug it up, and it was⌠this.
[Yuma pats the box next to him.]
Ruki: This box? It looks like a coffin. You could lock up a full-sized human in there.
02:04 Yuma: Haha. You ainât wrong. Like you said, it might be a coffin. Might be a vampire inside that was buried while he was sleepinâ or somethin'.
[You definitely donât like the idea of that.]
Yuma: What, you scared somethingâs gonna jump out at you? Youâd better fight like hell. Heh.
[You ask him what he would do if something were to jump out at you.]
Yuma: Huh? Iâm just gonna stand by ân watch, of course. I ainât cominâ to your rescue for free.
[Yuma comes closer.]
Yuma: If you want me to save ya, you got somethinâ to give me in return, right? That sweet stuff thatâs flowinâ in your veins⌠Make me an offer and I might give it some thought.
Ruki: Yuma. Thatâs enough.
Yuma: Yeah, yeah, got it.
[Ruki steps closer to the box.]
Ruki: Hmm⌠The lid of the box seems to have a lock on it, but itâs in really bad condition. It looks like it would open easily.
Yuma: So? Letâs take a look inside.
Ruki: Hold on, Yuma. Donât do anything reckless. Havenât you read any literature on these kinds of things?
Yuma: Literature?
Ruki: These kinds of boxes are often traps. Iâve read about them in books. For example, there was one case in which a box washed up on a seashore. A man opened the box and smoke poured out, which gathered into the shape of an old man. Itâs likely some kind of curse.
Yuma: Those kinds of curses exist?
Ruki: And then there are also these boxes of various sizes, collectively called tsuzura. Youâre pressured to choose a single box, and if you choose the biggest one, thereâs a trap inside: a monster jumps out of it. There are innumerable examples.
04:01 Yuma: Really? Thatâs some scary shit.
[You tell them those are probably made-up stories.]
Ruki: Oh? Do you really think theyâre mere myths, Livestock? Iâll let you open the box, then.
[You immediately backpedal and try to run away, but Ruki catches you.]
Ruki: Oh, no. Donât think you can run away now.
[You tell him you donât want to do it.]
Ruki: Youâre the one who said theyâre myths. This is an order from your master. Hurry up and open it. If a monster really were to jump out, youâd have nowhere to run. It could easily tear you to pieces. I wonder what happens when it sinks its teeth into this pale skin of yoursâŚ
[Rukiâs hands palm your bare skin. You get flustered and try to move away.]
Ruki: Whatâs wrong? Did you already imagine it just by me touching you? Ah⌠So you actually prefer pain over pleasure.
[Ruki pulls you closer.]
Ruki: Donât lie to me. Youâre eagerly awaiting it, arenât you? Your body seems to be trembling in delight, actually. Show me that expression of yours properly.
[Ruki grabs your chin and forces you to look at him.]
Ruki: Oh. I see the colour has completely drained from your face. Fear is not such a bad look on you. Well, thenâdo as your master tells you and open that lid.
[You tell him youâre scared and repeat that you really donât want to.]
Ruki: Thatâs precisely why Iâm making you do it, of course.
[Youâre on the verge of tears.]
Ruki: Heh. You look miserable when youâre about to burst into tears. Itâs quite enjoyable. However, you seem to be misunderstanding something. Iâm not doing this to punish you. Itâs your reward for helping Yuma.Â
[Ruki pulls you even closer while you struggle.]
06:03 Ruki: To have your will completely ignored, your body pinned down until you have no choice but to obey⌠you actually get off on such wretched situations, donât you? Iâll make you humiliate yourself. Now, how about you wag your little tail in delight and do as I say?
[You violently shake your head.]
Ruki: Good grief⌠You really donât know when to give up, do you? You still have no intention of obeying?
Yuma: Youâve really gotten more stubborn since you started livinâ with us. Or, well, you were prolly already stubborn from the get-go.
Ruki: Livestock who donât follow orders donât do themselves any favours in terms of charm. Ah. Letâs do this on different terms, then. If you open the lid, Iâll make you your favourite for dinner.
[That piques your interest. You immediately say youâll do it.]
Yuma: That makes you agree straight away?!
Ruki: Ah⌠Iâve clearly been using the wrong methods to discipline you. Itâs like Iâve got one more Kou or Yuma in my householdâŚ
Yuma: What do Kou ân I gotta do with that? Well, fine by me, though. Besides, this lidâs pretty heavy. You sure you can lift it with those tiny arms?
[You try to lift the lid but fail miserably.]
Yuma: It ainât movinâ at all. Are you even tryinâ? Put some more effort into it or Rukiâs just gonna yell at you.
[The lid still doesnât budge despite your best efforts.]
Yuma: I thought you said youâd do it yourself. How pathetic.
[You give up.]
Yuma: Youâre so hopeless it ainât even funny. Hey, Ruki. Itâll take all day if we leave this to her.
Ruki: It certainly seems that way. It canât be helped, I suppose. Lend her a hand.
Yuma: Gotcha. Letâs see⌠Iâll give you a hand, so at least put some effort into it, alright? If you canât open that lid, Iâll sink my fangs into you so deep youâre gonna beg for mercy. Makes it a bit more thrilling, right? Really, though. You keep yapping about the lid being heavy, but how heavyâs it really?
[Yuma gives a little push and the lid gives right away.]
08:24 Yuma: Huh? The fuck? It ainât even that heavy. You really are useless. You shoulda been able to lift it lickety-split, Sow. Iâve given you a head start, so you do the rest. Iâll let go, so donât drop the lid, alright?
[Yuma lets go and you immediately almost drop the lid.]
Yuma: Câmon, hold it up a little higher, Sow! Are you really puttinâ all your strength into it? You look like an idiot. Makes me wanna laugh. If you donât put in the effort like itâs the last thing youâll ever do, weâll start from scratch again. Jeez⌠Iâll teach you how itâs done.
[Yuma puts a hand on your lower back, which startles you.]
Yuma: Here, right here. Focus your strength in your lower back when you brace yourself. What, you ticklish?Â
[You shake your head.]
Yuma: Ah, I see, I see. So youâre just weak? Besides, you canât really fight back when you got your hands full. Even if I were to do thisâŚ
[Yuma puts his hands on you again.]
Yuma: Hehe. Thatâs a great reaction. Doesnât matter how tough a position youâre in, you still love it, dontcha? Youâre workinâ so hard so hold up that lid, but I wonder whatâll happen if I do it againâŚ
[You unconsciously brace yourself.]
Yuma: Youâre shiverinâ like a little rabbit. Ah, come to think of it, thereâs a lilâ somethinâ on your clothesâŚ
[Yuma puts his hands on your waist and squeezes. You almost drop the lid.]
Yuma: Haha! Donât let go so easily. Are your sides really that weak? Besides, I think you know already, but if you let go, you lose. Hm⌠You donât wanna get punished, do ya? Better fix that attitude ân please your owner. Brace yourself ân take it. Câmon, câmon!
[Yuma tickles and gropes you until you finally break and drop the lid.]
10:24 Yuma: Ah, for shame. Now the lidâs closed again. Timeâs come for this useless little piggyâs punishment.
[Yuma grabs you from behind and pulls you against him. Your arms are trapped behind you.]
Yuma: Well, you canât run away when Iâve got you from behind like this. Your chestâs completely unprotected. Should we punish you right here, right now? Câmon, Ruki. Join in on the fun.
Ruki: Good grief. What are you playing around for? However⌠You didnât follow your masterâs orders. This indeed calls for punishment.
[Ruki walks over to you. You turn your head to the side in embarrassment.]
Ruki: Are you trying to seduce me, exposing your neck to me like that? You really lack discipline.
[Ruki trails his fingers along your neck, causing you to shiver.]
Ruki: Heh. Youâre already losing control of your body just from a little touch of my fingers. Did you fail on purpose because you actually want to be punished? Normally, I wouldâve sunk my fangs into you right away, but I think Iâll keep you in suspense today.
[Ruki trails his fingers along your skin againâyour cheek and your ear this time.]
Ruki: Your cheek, your ear⌠Where would you like me to bite you?
[You tremble.]
Ruki: Whatâs wrong? Youâre already trembling from my fingers tracing your skin⌠Does it excite you that much?
[You deny it.]
Yuma: You can deny it all you want, but you donât sound very convincing. Youâre just covered in weak spots, right? I bet youâll cry out nicely when I touch your back. Letâs seeâŚ
[Yuma caresses your back and your voice slips.]
12:00 Yuma: Haha. What was that shameless sound just now? Thatâs all it takes to turn you on? What a lewd lil' thing you are.
[You struggle.]
Yuma: For fuck's sake... Whatâre you actinâ all innocent for when youâre clearly begginâ to be touched?
Ruki: Are you writhing like that because you want it so badly it hurts, then? Youâre out of luck, thoughâIâll drag it out. You wonât learn discipline if you always get what you want right away, after all. I'll caress you slowly, deliberately, until youâre absolutely flushed with heat...
[You quietly protest, but like Yuma said, you donât sound convincing at all.]
Yuma: Nah, youâre actually way into this, ainât you? If you want our fangs, beg for it.
Ruki: Where would you like me to bite you? Tell me. I can't promise that Iâll honour your wishes, though.
[You struggle against them with all your might, kicking and screaming.]
Yuma: Hey, calm downâ
[You accidentally kick the coffin in your efforts to get away.]
Yuma & Ruki: Huh?
Yuma: Oh, dammit. Now part of the lidâs broken because you were kickinâ so hard.
Ruki: The coffin itself has deteriorated quite a bit, too. That said, your kicking did most of the damage. Yuma. Let her go. Her punishment is on hold for now. We canât have her destroy that coffin before we confirm whatâs inside.
Yuma: Well, whatever.
[Yuma lets you go and your knees immediately give out.]
Yuma: Haha. Whatâre you sittinâ down for? Didya really feel that good? Well, weâll take our sweet time with you when we continue later. I mean, you wanna see whatâs inside the coffin too, right?
[You get up again.]
Ruki: Yuma, can you open it up?
Yuma: Yeah, hold onâ
[Yuma opens the lid of the coffin all the way.]
Yuma & Ruki: Oh?Â
Yuma: The hellâs this?
Ruki: They look like kimono (1) and combs from a long time agoâŚÂ
Yuma: Thereâs a whole bunch of stuff that I donât really recognise, tooâŚ
Ruki: I see. It seems weâve unearthed a time capsule.
14:08 Yuma: A time⌠capsule? Whatâs that?
Ruki: People put various things from their time in a box and bury it. Usually, theyâre unearthed after a long time, when someone wants to reminisce.
Yuma: Whyâs it buried here in the garden?
Ruki: I donât know what happened on this land before the Mukami mansion was built. However, whoever buried this box clearly put a lot of thought into it.
Yuma: Huh. So whatâre we gonna do with it?
[You suggest burying it again to preserve its contents.]
Ruki: Easy for you to say, considering you were kicking it earlier. However, I have no objections to that idea. Letâs put it back in the ground.
Yuma: Even though we went through all that trouble to dig it up?
Ruki: We have no need for it.Â
Yuma: Well, thatâs true. Letâs bury it somewhere where it wonât interfere with my garden. I donât really get it, though. Whatâs fun about preservinâ the past?
Ruki: I wonder. Itâs a human endeavour first and foremost, though. It has little to do with us.
[You shift on your feet.]
Yuma: Huh? Whatâs up?
[You tell him you understand.]
Yuma: Understand what?
[You explain.]
Yuma: The feelinâ of wantinâ to cherish your memories?
Ruki: Heh. Memories are worthless. Itâs truly something for shallow humans to want to convey memories from their own time period to later generations. Do not think thereâs any worth in doing that.
[You disagree. Youâve made nice memories with the Mukami family, after all.]
Ruki: What?
Yuma: Haha. Well said. So, even though you havenât had it easy since you started livinâ with us, you still made some good memories?
[You nod.]
Yuma: Heh. Isnât that âcause weâve trained (2) you to think that? Well, I do kinda get what youâre sayinâ. Everyoneâs got at least some precious memories, after all. Right, Ruki?Â
16:08 Ruki: Heh. Still, I donât understand the need to bury them where theyâll never see the light of day.
Yuma: Yeah, Iâm with you on that.
[You try to convince them, butâŚ]
Yuma: Nah, itâs alright. Besides, you gotta help me bury this thing again. And after that, weâve still got harvestinâ to do!
[Youâre surprised.]
Ruki: Heh. You unearthed it, so itâs only logical that you have to help burying it again. Youâd better work up a sweat while youâre at it.
Yuma: Hey, Ruki. Youâre already here anyway, so lend us a hand too, will ya? With the harvestinâ and all.
Ruki: What? Youâre seriously asking me that?
Yuma: Youâre makinâ her her favourite for dinner, right? We wonât make it in time for dinner if you donât harvest the necessary veggies yourself.
Ruki: Tch. Thatâs not something I should need to dirty my hands for. Hey. Harvest whatever youâd like to eat yourself.
Yuma: Câmon, Ruki. Put in the work for once. Youâll be covered in mould eventually if you keep readinâ so much.
Ruki: You might want to consider that weâre vampires. Do you seriously think there are other vampires who think itâs healthy to work outside on days when the sunâs this bright?
Yuma: I like it, so thatâs all that matters! You think so too, right?
Ruki: For fuckâs sake... I wonât do it. I refuse!
Yuma: Itâs alright, itâs alright! Hurry ân câmere!
Ruki: You two do it!
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Besides the obvious traditional Japanese clothing, the word kimono literally means âthings to wearâ and can also be understood as âclothesâ more generally. I think the latter may also apply here.
調ćďźăĄăăăăăďźrefers to the training of animals.
#like honestly. translator is DECEASED this CD was so fucking hot even though there was no bloodsucking involved augh#diabolik lovers#dialovers#diabolik lovers translation#diahell#diabolik lovers translations#otomehonyaku#my translations#mukami ruki#ruki mukami#mukami yuma#mukami yuuma#yuuma mukami#yuma mukami#eternal blood#diabolik lovers eternal blood#diabolik lovers drama cd#diabolik lovers drama cds
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hers a billfold wip as a treat i changed his face bc i have free will
The art is to encourage you to read my silly little insanity (you should totally do it btw)
I'm dyslexic so sorry if anything is spelled grotesquely wrong lol autocorrect sometimes has no idea what iâm trying to spell
Starting with my head cannon because every thing will make more sense with it (or it wont that's entirely up to you) Imma try my best to make this enjoyable
So I head cannon both bill and ford as aspec this is important for the rest trust (I'm Aroace myself so some of my words are based of of experience ) being aroace doesn't mean you can't have a toxic one-sided relationship with a triangle
(most of this is pretty vanilla but I still wanna talk about it)
I believe it started of as a one-sided relationship on fords part (wow shocker) but it wasn't really love because he's ace it was more of infatuation (this stems from the fact he is a science boy and like ooo demon triangle thing) mistaken for love (I'm pretty sure this is common among aroace people or I just had an original experience) and maybe bill had just a little bit of the same feeling but instead of infatuation it was just pure obsession and when they had there little âtragic break upâ and bill finally came to realize his obsession and it consumed him (idk i think that how abusive obsession is) and he realized he canât live with out ford (i man he can but unhealthy obsession) and thus bills one sided relationship with ford where he just tries to get his puppet back but canât figure out why he needs him so bad so he comes to the (subconscious) cuncultion there in love (because of course thatâs the reasonable decision) and then you all know what comes after
I think bill has major will wood music vibes so I have nominated three songs of his for bill ford (cuz I'm genuinely going insane over them)
This is for fun and based off my head cannons
All of my discussions are made purely of the vibes the song gives me and how cool than animation in my head looks so take everything you know about these will wood songs and throw it out the window cuz none of that is relevant :3
i saw someone say âWill Wood songs can really be interpreted in different ways, and most of them seem like wisps of similar thought rather than a concrete narrative, so you're always a little bit right and wrong when you take a guess.â and i think you should keep that in mined
(I'm gonna embarrass myself so hard (â ââ˘âĎââ˘â â) )
I'm not gonna elaborate much but just trust me ok I put it kind of in chronological order
fords one sided relationship with bill: ...well, better than the alternative
Ok so this one is the least perfect out of all of them cuz it only half what I want (obviously this song is a stretch but hear me out) It's mostly for the like the last half of the song (remember what I said about throwing out the meaning for get that i lied) this song about the struggle ls of growing up and is a heartfelt plea to be understood and accepted for who we are (which obviously ford was a wired kid) and this kinda ties into the one-sided infatuation because it also is about the romanticism of nostalgic love, and the pressure of society telling you to find someone and "settle down" as we get older (witch yk aroace canât really do that) so heâs grasping at the fact that he is enamored with this demon he just summoned (because science) so he can come up with this narrative in his head of how he is in love and can finally fit at least one of the societal boxes (idk it sounds like something to me probly ooc but I'm having fun)
bills one sided relationship with ford: ÂĄAikido!
obsession with someone and how people often use coping mechanisms such as drugs to help with their feelings of uncertainty and helplessness. (yes this is copied not fully of a site this is tumblr not an english assignment) it also explores the idea that love and obsession can often manifest in neurotic and even pathological behavior.(oooo oooo look iâm so smart like staring the apocalyps) iâm not this cool this whole thing started with the first like whit h is âI apologize for playing with your eyes But Iâm obsessed with youâ witch reminded me of how bill used for as a puppet and then yk fords whole world came crashing down (this one explained its self more i have to do less mental gymnastics) and heâs like im sooo sorry i canât live with out you
there whole relationship from the deal to the end of bill: Misanthrapologist ("In case I make it,"
Outtake)
ok this one is the one that mostly made of vibes because the song is about an unhappy codependent relationship through metaphors of christianity, nihilism, outer space, and mozart (witch only really encompasses a portion of the relationship) the song stars with âI wanna meet your make Shake him by his ensanguined damask lapel Holler "Look what you've done Gave this planet a sun And made a man to wonder if he's more than the sum of his cells"â which makes me personally think of obviously the deal fore made with bill and how bill stroked his ego all the way through there partnership um you can see where i goes from here just go listen to the song
ok this oneâs off topic and only for my imaginary animation but the line âSo how could I stand a chance, let alone dance With the way you sweep me off these two left feet?â just like imagine this with me itâs bill (human probably cuz i donât work with the triangle) and young ford in the minedskape thing and its bill dipping ford and when it goes down it switches to bill and fort in bills pyramid thing with ford chained up do you see the vision ok Iâm done now (´°̼̼̼̼̼̼̼̼Ď°̼̼̼̼̼̼̼̼ď˝)
#bilford#art#art artist#artists on tumblr#small artist#original art#original#fanart#yaoi#gravity falls bill#grunkle ford#gravity falls stanford#gravity falls fanart#gravity falls#bill cipher#human bill design#bill ci the triangle guy#bill cipher art#billford#billford fanart#rant post#headcanon#young ford pines#digital drawing#didgitalillustration#long post#essay
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Dragon age the Veilguard: The Good, The Bad, The Ugly
Don't expect too much there, I'm just writing my own subjective, non-organized, badly written critic of the game. Spoilers ahead, so be warned!
The Good is the good stuff, The Bad is the bad stuff that aren't too jarring or that don't threaten the whole setting so much so it's okay to just ignore them, and The Ugly is the bad stuff that DO make me want to fucking die and explode.
The Good:
-It's beautiful. Not a fan of a lot of design choices but it's obviously well made. The landscapes are very pretty.
-The character creator. It's always funny to me when I see some dudebros complaining about it as if they're not purposefully making ugly characters. It has quite a lot of option, nice skin details, scars, tattoos and all.
-I really like the combat. I still think DAO is the superior system but I'm much more happy with a true action rpg than whatever Inquisition was trying to do.
-I'm going to be more objective there and say the maps are better than Inquisition. THAT BEING SAID I love the Hinterlands so I still prefer Inquisiton's bloated open world lmao.
-There's a lot of nice details all around! Neve's metallic prothesis walking sound, the decorations all around, tears in character's eyes, ect.
-Solas. Can't believe I'm saying it as I didn't like him much in DAI and I don't like Solavellan but DATV made me like him very much. He's much more morally grey and less uwu wet cat and I'm here for that. Excellent voice acting of course.
-Mythal. Again, I love whatever Solas and Mythal have going on. It's toxic, it's passionate, it's one sided, and Mythal is a very interesting character IMO.
-Felassan. Again, such a cool and compelling character.
-A lot of NPCs were very cool. Antoine who's singlehandly saving the French's reputation, Evka, The Viper, Strife, Viago, Teia, etc. They're cool and rather compelling.
-I did enjoy a lot of the companion's personal quests. Davrin and Bellara especially as they felt more in line with Dragon Age in general.
-For a game where the Bad Guys are Comically Evil... Johanna Hezenkoss fits the bill and yet she's a delight.
-There's really cool codex entries. Irelin's letter about mourning Arlathan for example. Antoine's letter to Evka should he ever be Called.
-Ghilahn'ain's design.
-I liked the living Blight! OK the darkspawns were ugly af but I still really enjoyed the idea.
-I actually liked the puzzles lmao? I'm sorry but I usually find puzzles fucking annoying in that type of game so I'd rather have something easy and fun than scratching my head in a rpg.
-I was glad to see Valta again!
The Bad: (vaguely in order of importance)
-Unpopular opinion but Assan and Manfred felt forced af. Yeah I got it, they're cute... Now can we go back on uh, the apocalypse.
-The music is boring. Fuck man Inquisition and Origins musics make me cry, but Veilguard's main them... Exists.
-I would prefer the companion to be stationary and being able to talk to them whenever want. They tried something but it didn't deliver.
-The fuck is Inky wearing.
-The fuck is Isabela wearing, but racist edition. Oh well. At least it's an easy fix with a mod.
-The companions have potential but they often lack something. I wish we got more than Lucanis liking coffee. Also, some characters concept from the art book felt so much more interesting. The only character I REALLY was interested in was Davrin because he feels very dragon age-y. A Dalish Grey Warden! That's interesting!
-The Lore seems alright and coherent with the serie so far, but it was just lore drops after lore drops, with no time for reactions, and your companions being sometimes waaaaay too chill about it.
-The overall sanitazing of the world while the grim stuff still somehow being there regarding Tevinter. It's very close to be in the Ugly category but because it's supposed to be there, I'm encline to believe it's still canon and not a retcon, and just a poor presentation. Where are the slaves? We see some of course, and some stuff were legitimately jarring... But because we're confined in docktowns, we don't get to see the ruling magisters and slavers. Docktowns almost seem... Nice. But it doesnt stop there. The Lords of Fortune not stealing artifacts because they respect cultures. The Crows being patriotic vigilantes. Lucanis being a mage killer but only for evil tevene magisters.
-I understand the impossibility to be Evil as you're recruited by Varric and he wouldn't have recruited the local serial killer that drowns kitties for fun. But... You should be able to be aggressive, stern, serious and all. You should be able to play a no-nonsense character who is authoritative and assertive while still following the plot.
-Again, I understand the companions being healthier than whatever DA2 crew had going on (love them tho) but it should have been more like Inquisition. People working together and forcing themselves to make it work for the sake of the world YET fighting and disagreeing on plenty of subjects. And Rook should be able to tell the companion to stfu sometimes. To tell Taash that they're an ass. To tell Emmerich you don't give a shit about his magic and that Manfred is fucking weird and shouldn't exist. To tell Bellara to stop whining.
-On the same note, the companions are all WAY too nice. One their own they're alright, but none of them have some true flaws/secrets/dark past/opposing convictions or whatever. Davrin and Lucanis are almost the only one who are arguing and fighting a bit but it's very tame. We never hear them arguing over politics, religion, or even ways of doing things (except for food lol. why is this game so much about food). If you take Inquisition for example, the companions are ALL working together in the face of a Ancient Evil threatening Thedas. Yet, they still argue about plenty of things. Solas and Iron Bull about the Qun. Vivienne and Solas about the existence of Circles. Varric and Cassandra's fighting is ruthless even when it's about nothing important. Try to show your pride as a Dalish to Sera and she won't take it well. Tell Cassandra that you don't give a shit about the Chantry and she'll disapprove. And still, these persons managed to work together. The excuse of "They put their differences aside because of the current threat" doesn't hold. The companions don't necessarily need DA2's level of animosity between them, but they don't need to all be best friends forever second one. Bellara could be suspicious of Neve for the sole reason of her being a Tevinter Mage. Lucanis too ("Mage Killer"!!!), but because he doesn't trust magic at all. Davrin and Bellara could argue about what it means to be Dalish to them, or argue about their faith!! EVERYONE Should be more worried about Lucanis being an abomination, damn it!
-I understand the Crows we see are not the one experiencing the worst of the organisation since they're highranking members but c'mon... It should be acknowledged at least.
-Some of the dialogues are fucking awful especially at the begining. They repeat themselves so much. The scene with "Nooo Rook you need to help us resolve our problems otherwise we will be too weak to fight the gods!! Rook, do my personal quests or I'll be too sad to fight!!". Harding's "Awkwaaaard". Bellara's quirky uwu manic pixie girl vibes at the begining.
The Ugly:
-Anything related to the elves. For a game centered on elven gods... We get so much yet nothing. Why are they all more or less cool about their "Gods" being real and evil? No one freaking out about having Elgarnan's vallaslin on their face? No crisis of faith? No elves joining them, really? Not a single one? No dalish celebrating their return before realizing the awful truth? No city elves or elven slaves fleeing to them because they have nothing to lose anyway? That's unrealistic. I can understand the Veil Jumpers already knowing the truth, it's more or less explained in the books anyway, but there's no way it's commonly accepted among all dalish clans. Speaking of dalish clans, were are they? And Briala ? Didn't she also control the Eluvian? What about city elves in general? And elven slaves? There's just nothing. The elven pantheon wasn't some myths for the Dalish. It was a religion. Their religion. Damn, imagine Christians learning Jesus is coming back BUT he's in fact very evil and is launching nuclear weapons everywhere? And their only reaction is "Oh no, we have to stop Jesus :(" ? I'm taking the christian example but you could say that about pretty much every religion.
-Where are Fen'harel agents? A few lines and one or two NPC mentioning Solas parting ways with them or even making the Veil Jumpers the ex-agents left behind would have been SO much more interesting than whatever they justified in the AMA. I can't believe they didn't even put A CODEX ENTRY explaining their absence in game. That's lazy af.
-No repercussion on the elves AT ALL? Seriously, realistically speaking, what is the future for the elves at the end of DATV? "Their" Gods almost destroyed the world, "Their" Gods killed countless, "Their" Gods created the Blight, "Their" Gods that many dalish still worshipped only a few years ago. What do you mean humans aren't going to declare open season on them? Like OF COURSE I don't want that to happen, and I'm hoping that idk, they'll found their own country in a reclaimed Arlathan, or that the instability in the south allows some of them to grab positions of power but don't tell me the humans aren't going to feel so fucking justify in their hatred, especially towards the Dalish who never converted to the Chantry. The fact that the endgame doesn't mention ANYTHING about it is jarring. Bioware ffs drop a book or whatever soon I need answers. I need hope. The game is treating the racism against Elves as... Some prejudices humans soooometimes have against them and not... centuries of systematic oppression, genocide, cultural erasure. The City Elf origins, Chevaliers killing Alienage elves for funsies, Celene burning down a whole Alienage, the genocide of dalish clans anyone? All of this is stuff that happened like... Between 8 and 20 years ago. It's not ancient history.
-Blighting Ferelden Beyond Repair, the Venatori Coup in Orlais and Kirkwall's evacuation was mean. Of cours the South is dealing with the blight and a shitload of problem but the "we lost Denerim. And Redcliff. And anything really. Idk if there's survivors. But if there is they'll starve anyway. xoxo the Inky." was just mean spirited I'm sorry. Same as above, Bioware. I fucking need hope for the South. Anything really. They could have stopped as "Yo there's a big Blight in the south and it sucks, Denerim is struggling and we lost villages and all" and that would have been FINE. No need to go scorched earth damnit.
-The lack of worldstate choices. C'mon. I understand not having a lot of them but a list of 6-10 easy questions would have been nice. Who's Divine? Who's ruling in the South? Who drank from the Well of Sorrow? It wouldn't have asked much work to just personalize a few sentences to adjust that. Also, saying they only kept 3 choices so they could really mean something... Liar. The only thing that really has an impact is did u date solas or not. Which fine, of course it matters! But all the other romances, the inquisition disbanded or not, stopping solas or not had NO IMPACT whatsoever.
-Where the fuck is Fenris. Idgaf Inquisition had Leliana when she could die in DAO, so bring Fenris in the Shadow Dragon. He needs to be there.
-The Antaam is such a fucking racist trope I can't believe they did it. Yeah, let make them growl like damn animals.
-Speaking of Qunari, even Taash is... Urgh. Why do you mean they sniff people. Also, their whole storyline on their gender identity was badly written. That scene with Isabela... No. That's not how you apologize. You misgender someone by mistake? Say sorry, correct yourself, move on. That's it.
-Dwarves had cool moments in the game but dang, we really, REALLY needed more of it. So many revelation about them, and while some of them were very well written, it doesn't have enough impact.
-The absence of reactions and dialogues related to your race is jarring. Can't believe I'm begging the game for racial slurs but here we are. EVERYONE in Origins commented on you playing an Elf. A non-human Inquisitor faced struggles as the Herald. Why is Qunari Rook able to roam freely in Minrathous without a SINGLE comment on their race? Same for the elves, to a lesser degree since at least they are not a rare occurence in Tevinter. Can't believe dwarves get so little reaction for all the big reveals. Can't believe elves barely get to react to ELVEN GODS destroying the world or Bellara's guilt about it.
-WHERE'S THE CHANTRY. WHERE. DAMN IT. Even if it's not the focus of the game, I'd expect to still see its influence. Man I'm almost wishing Harding was more of a Chantry Girl.
-Morrigan's whole storyline is an insult to her character.
#aaaaand that's it for me#I needed to write it down#It's a mess but yeah#dragon age#dragon age the veilguard#datv#datv critical#dragon age critical#dragon age the veilguard critical#datv spoilers
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"Batman: Caped Crusader" review
Binge-watched this show, and I wanted to be one of many people to share my thoughts on this--plus I was spurred on by getting a wish of mine granted from the show. Make sure to check out the show if you can!
The animation is beautiful--I know this is a weird comparison, but soemthing about the animation reminds me of 2010s Scooby Doo animated films, and I kind of adore that.
The voice acting was...fine--I can't tell if it was poor performances or poor direction; Hamish's Bruce Wayne sounds too raspy/rugged some of the time, like he's still playing Batman, and many of the other actors felt like they were just reading lines rather than performing lines, not enough emotion. IDK if they're more used to live-action work, but voice-acting is a different ballgame, since your voice is all you have to convey the character. A lot of performances fell flat for me, but it wasn't 100% unbearable, just underwhelming. I have some people I'd recommend instead (both familiar to the role and otherwise), but I don't wanna start anything.
LOVED Harley (but not her costume)--Jamie Chung had one of the better performances in the group, and I really LOVED the angle they did for Harley; I feel like the media often flanderizes her as the goofy crazy chick, so seeing her actually utilize her psychology skills (like I've been asking for!) is so satisfying. That said, the outfit has GOT TO GO. Gold and black is gorgeous, but it ples in comparison to her black and red look. And a weird nit-pick; when I first saw the stills, I was under the impression she was wearing a carnival-esque mask rather than face paint, and I find that idea a lot creepier. I wish we'd gotten more of Harley's antics--and even seeing her get close to Bruce in the way she did with Barbara and Renee--before revealing her as a big bad to the public. And I appreciate that she isn't 100% evil; she is doing what she believes is a noble cause, just doing it in an illegal and unethical way. I needed a backstory!
Not enough Batman--Maybe it's just me, but it definitely felt like there were some episodes where Bruce and Batman were supporting characters and more focus was on the GCPD. While I don't mind it too much, I enjoy superhero shows for the superheroes, not the heroes; this is why I had a love/hate relationship with "Gotham."
Batman (and Bruce) isn't quite likeable enough--In earlier incarnations, Batman was more kind and caring before becoming more emotionally closed off with time, but here he's that way from the get-go. Not to mention that Bruce Wayne puts on a facade around everyone, even people he trusts (he probably did that anyway; I can't remember), and his session with Harleen really frustrated me because I don't expect his walls to come down immediately, I don't expect them to be this high this early. I wanted him to be a bit warmer and transparent, rather than curt and cold like he's usually seen in the show. I feel like this is an issue often seen in comics, too; people prioritize Batman's "coolness" and thus push his feelings to the wayside.
Using underrated and familiar villains--I'm sure the real experts are gonna chew me out for this one, but as someone who got into comics in the 2010s and didn't catch up on the acclaimed 90s series, it was fun to see villains I loved and villains I didn't know; one of the best things a popular property can do is use underrated characters, since it helps the show feel original and fresh (thus why "Teen Titans" is so enjoyable; the whole franchise is underrated).
Too modern for the 1940s--I can't put my fingers on it exactly, but the vibes feel too modern; I assume the 1940s was for aesthetics, but since everything else feels updated (from the way people talk to Harley and Renee seemingly being open about their feelings for each other), I don't think it was a wise choice to have it both ways. I see no reason not to have it in modern-day, but I suppose you'd have to get more creative with technology.
Barbara and the Robins--First off, I should've gambled with someone that Jason would be a redhead; I'd have made SO MUCH money. Secondly, I'm not crazy about how all four kids are orphans; If I recall correctly, both Carrie and Stephanie's parents were alive when they joined the Batfamily. In any case, I'm confused on why Barbara is significantly older than them when they're all supposed to be within the same age bracket (I think; someone has told me otherwise since posting this, so I could be wrong). Not to mention, a part of me worries that because of the quartet's young ages and Barbara getting so much screentime as a lawyer, we won't get any of them as Robins or Batgirls unless something drastic happens, and/or we get a time jump.
Overall, I think my biggest gripes are the voice acting and how Batman/Bruce Wayne is written. That said, I enjoyed the show overall. IDK why HBO Max dropped it. Hopefully season 2 will introduce Poison Ivy, Catman, Tim Drake, Ghostmaker, and Gardener, since the finale already showed us a certain someone who IS coming to Gotham.
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So I have a thought about that prophecy that HotD is using to justify the Targaryen invasion of Westeros. Obviously, this isn't entirely their fault since George R.R. Martin is the one who came up with it and has said a similar thing in different interviews . Yes, the books make Rhaenerya more vengeful and thirsty for blood, but it also does not make the Greens sympathetic at all and views them as one dimensional villians. George also had the Starks and the Blackwoods side with the Blacks, so I think it's clear which side we were "supposed" to root for, if any, but I digress. Anyway, into my theory.
Time and time again, we hear that Targaryens are the closest thing to gods because they have superior blood that "controls" the dragons. That they are dragons. We hear this within the books, within HotD, even in Game of Thrones. But really, they are no better than anyone else, GOT even had Dany say this outright in the last season when she says that without their dragons, they weren't great at all. Your argument might be well they could control them thats what they mean." But really, no, they couldn't. I'm not even just talking about when Aemond accidentally killed Luke. In one of the earlier seasons, Dany's dragon literally burned a child alive, and she didn't even know until much later. Does that sound like control to you? Neither Luke nor Aemond had control in that fight. Their animals, their instincts, took over despite what their riders wanted. You could say that "oh well, Aemond is only HALF Targaryen, that's why we need to keep the blood pure with superior Targaryen blood," in which case, refer to my earlier point about Dany.
Unlike some people, I like this change of Luke's death being an accident. It shows that the Targaryen's aren't gods, or infallible after all. As I said, Game of Thrones even shows this to us.
So that's why I think they are going in a similar direction with the whole "prophecy" BS. We hear multiple times within the original series that prophecies are never direct and often misinterpreted. This is made even clearer when Melisandre misinterprets the "Prince Who Was Promised" multiple times. This, combined with the fact that GRRM is heavily involved with HotD, and the fact that they've already shown that Targaryen's aren't immune or gods after, leads me to believe they are going in a similar direction as the idea that they can "control" the dragons. See my previous point.
It could likely be a criticism of the Targaryen hubris, and the fact that they think they have "superior" or "pure" blood makes them better than everyone else. Or that they are justified on starting multiple wars that lead to immeasurable amounts of death and destruction. As Ser Barristan said about the Mad King, "the mad king gave his enemies what he thought they deserved, and each time it made him feel more powerful and right."
Targaryen's are their own worst enemy, and they will tear each other apart over "who deserves it more" or "who has the purest blood" and is "more Targaryen." The prophecy is just an excuse to hold up their own superiority and god complex, despite the fact that no one wanted them to rule in the first place. Even George R.R. Martin says that holding the realm together with dragons is ficle and bound to break.
#anti targaryen#anti targ restoration#anti-targaryen#anti house targaryen#anti targ stans#anti targaryen fans#anti targcest#house of the dragon#hotd#hotd season 2#hot take#hotd discourse#anti dany#anti daenerys#anti daenerys cult#anti daenerys fans#anti daenerys targaryen#anti valyria#targaryens are their own worst enemy#suck it#they will destroy themselves to try and prove who is better#more like who is more incompetent#most targs are
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Do you have any criticisms in regards to the official English translation of TWST?
I have many. So many.
Firstly is the unnecessary changes, mostly with Trey's UM and the name of magical shift.
See, the main thing is, a lot of people say "Paint the Roses" sounds way better than "Doodle Suit", which is goofy, and also works as an Alice in Wondeland reference The thing is, though, I'm pretty sure Doodle Suit is supposed to be a goofy name. It's a teenager naming his UM at about 16 or younger (before canon time), of course it'll be goofy. And on top of that, it is a reference! "Suit" is likely a reference to card suits!
The reason I find this change unnecessary is because you can't even say it was a translation complication, not only are the UM names and certain other words written in English in the JP game iirc, but after getting twst myself I CHECKED and they didn't even bother to RERECORD THE LINES. I can still hear Trey say, "Doodle Suit." I'm English when talking about his UM, but the text box says, "Paint the Roses"
The same applies to magical shift, which was changed to "spelldrive." Characters still say "magishift. " It's just such a useless bunch or changes to way too many names and stuff cause it was already right there in English.
Another issue I have with character names or event names that aren't said in English being different than the names fans have translated is that they often sound a lot worse or a bit weird than original. Like Baul and Baur. I think Baul sounds way better, but this overall could just be some fans not having a completely accurate translation? But tbh we have a lot of bilingual speakers who also talk about the strange differences.
My MAIN NUMBER 1 ISSUE IS THE CENSORSHIP
I'm still so mad that they removed that scene of Cater saying he would absolutely date Vil and that they altered lines from one character to another that could be interpreted as romantic or flirty (only to then, in some cases, ramp up the flirt vibes, ironically).
It's just so disingenuous and was definitely not a mistake.
And of course, iirc, replacing describing Vil as "beautiful" with "handsome" instead because we don't want to give the character whose whole thing is defying gender roles a feminine description, no, that's ridiculous/s
Then there's Azul's backstory. As someone who's only access to twst's story was through translations, both because Eng hadn't released and I'm in the wrong country, it was really icky to see how they watered down the things Azul's bullies said to him.
I just... they were calling him a fat, slow, ugly, and stupid octopus, among other terrible things, and then we got to twst Eng where it's just "silly octotwerp" ?????
Like they were either trying to make it kid friendly (even though this is NOT a kids' game) or they didn't want to put emphasis on the fact that Azul was bullied for his weight. If you ask me, in the official Eng translations, it's actually a bit harder to pick up on the fact that that's part of why Azul was bullied and hates his old self so much.
It's something that really frustrates me, because it makes Azul come across more as a bit of a spoiled kid who got lightly teased and held a ridiculous grudge over it (even if octotwerp is still a bit mean) rather than a deeply traumatised teen who's body image and mental state was badly effected by the severity of the bullying he received. He's constantly bringing up calories, Floyd mentioned he barely eats, etc.
I'm sure this can apply to a lot of other chapters, especially Book 4 with Jamil and Kalim, but I'd like to rewatch YouTube translations and then go through twst Eng before I talk about them
Anyway, rant over now fjffj
#quinn quips#trey Clover#cater diamond#heartslabyul#azul ashengrotto#octavinelle#vil schoenheit#pomefiore#twisted wonderland
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Hey, I'm microwavesofconfusion, the one who was planning on confronting the guy from D&D club. I both phrased my first comment poorly and planned poorly. I'm sorry to anyone who took offense from my behavior.
I kind of rationalized confronting him as something that would put me in the right. I originally joined D&D club to have fun playing D&D and because a lot of my friends were in it, but when I found out that he was in it, it kind of ruined a lot of the club for me. I still have fun when I'm playing in groups without him, and sometimes when I'm in groups with him, but whenever he's DMing, I (and other people, including those not in the know) have a terrible time. My school's D&D club has roughly 40 people, but only 20-25 of us sit at lunch together. I used to not sit with them (I used to sit with the band group until we broke up over an argument, but that's another story) but when a lot of my friends graduated, I began sitting with both D&D tables more often. I am genuinely friends with these people, and I love my friends very much. (I don't think that came across well in my comments). The thing is, the guy did some terrible things last year, worse things two years ago, and someone told me that he's doing those things more covertly now. Most of his friends are freshmen and sophomores (with juniors and seniors being reluctant to talk to him) because they don't know what he did. I tried talking to one of my friends about all of the stuff he did, and she sounded like she believed me, but then she invited him (well, via their mutual best friend) to the art honors society party, and she's still on good terms with him because she's never seen anything from him firsthand.
I decided that subtly dropping hints that he wasn't great until people thought about it and came to realize on their own that he wasn't a good person was the way to go, because if I try to tell people, it will become a "he said, she said" sort of thing, and people will rise to defend him. So, rather than say that he told a girl that he wanted to sexually assault her, or try to write down some of his racist jokes (which people defend anyway), I just say stuff like "isn't it weird that his girlfriend is so quiet around him" or "I didn't like how he yelled at us during the one-shot" to get people thinking. While I kind of am turning people against him, it's not empty lies. Everything I'm saying is true, and people can dismiss it as easily as they dismiss other people who tell him to stop making homophobic jokes.
It's not really a matter of whether I like him, I just think that people shouldn't be looking up to him as some sort of role model when he still does shady shit (skipping class to hang out alone in the welding room with someone else's partner is shady, whether it's cheating or not). My methods weren't great, and maybe there's a better way to go about it, but I just don't like how he's starting up again.
He did get punished for the stuff he did two years ago. He got suspended for something around the same time that he got in trouble for peeking in the girl's dressing room while the actors were changing, and he isn't a peeping Tom anymore, but he still convinces underclassmen to skip class to hang out with him, and he still sends people (who aren't his girlfriend) lewd texts, and he still discusses BDSM with anyone who has ears, but idk. How do the people of tumblr think I should have handled this situation?
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I have delved into the art of âMemesâ today, something that I do not normally do but a medium that I believe best suits todayâs conundrum.
Today I present to you a really quite peculiar kind of phenomenon that I havenât seen talked about very much, something that I have come to call âJewish-deadnamingâ or âJew-namingâ which is a kind of really odd tactic employed by certain members of the far-right against Jewish people that Iâve noticed bares a most striking similarity to the trans concept of âDead-namingâ wherein a far-right figure or otherwise ignorant individual will use the birth name of an otherwise passing individual as a sort of âGotchaâ that reveals said individualâs perceived inferiority.
In this meme I use the historical figure I have seen this tactic applied to the most, the Bolshevik and (ex)Soviet leader Leon Trotsky, or as his birth name reads, Lev Davidovich Bronstein as an example. The right-wing (Especially on the internet) really love to bring up Trotskyâs birth name, when you read their comments and posts thereâs almost always a kind heir of smug superiority, as if theyâre revealing some kind of âBig secret.â This I can only imagine, is most likely due to Trotsky not only being Jewish, but also being connected to the Bolshevik army and in-turn the communists, which plays very well into the Neo-Nazi conspiracy of âCultural Marxismâ which directly evolved from the âCultural Bolshevismâ conspiracy coined by the original Nazis proper. And the fact that Trotsky changed his name to a more Russian âLess Jewish/ethnic minority-soundingâ one (Which I may add has been done by many people, not Just Jews, throughout history with a variety of languages and reasons) could and has been interpreted by antisemites to be a nefarious way of âHiding in plain sightâ and so spreading around Trotskyâs birth name becomes a sort of âHonourableâ thing to do in the minds of the far-right, as a sort of means of âExposingâ the Jew for who he really is and in-turn exposing a âLarger conspiracy.â
As a trans girl myself I really canât help but notice just how similar this is to deadnaming, in that the process of âJew-namingâ is done with a sort of venom that you donât really see as often as say, referring to Lenin as âVladimir Ulyanovâ for historical purposes, most of the time when Iâve seen people going out of their way to Jew-name Trotsky, itâs very explicitly to denote his Jewishness that would otherwise be âHidingâ behind his Russified chosen name. And of course, Jews changing their names historically to âFit inâ better with the society they wish to be a part of goes beyond Trotsky, and maybe you have seen other examples of this? But for me, I see it the most with Trotsky, Iâm thinking for the reasons stated above.
Sorry this one is a bit of a dark one today folks, if I can tell you a secret: This whole Jew-naming thing doesnât particularly bother me personally too much, I find it to be more of a chronically-online curiosity than anything else, thereâs definitely things that bother more than this these days haha. But, I wanted to share my observations with you all anyhow, as I do find it all quite batty.
But anyways, that will be all for today, be well!
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Rewriting Danganronpa Characters: Gundham Tanaka
Hey folks! Welcome to another Character Rewrite Post and this time, we'll be going with my least favorite Danganronpa 2 Character. That being.....
Gundham Tanaka.
Yeah, sorry about it. I mean, I do see his strong points but...I just wish that he could have been better. Like....a lot. So, I will try my best to rewrite his character for the better, while respecting the original intent behind the character itself. As always, this is just my opinion and you can feel free to agree and disagree.
Well, with that out of the way, let us begin.
Personality:
His general demeanor will be the same, but I will tone down his hamminess. This Gundham will be a lot more quiet and appear more menacing, occasionally making grunts. They sound animalistic at times, which should showcase how he seems more at ease with his animals than with other people.
However, he is never really mean to anyone. Just very distant and when he does talk to other people, he speaks in his overlord-persona, with a polite tone. He does occasionally drop some menacing words into his speech, but it is less out of being mean and more for other reasons. Reasons I will discuss later on.
As in game, his "Muhahahahaha I am so evil lol" persona is a facade. In reality, Gundham is quite shy, socially awkward and pretty anxious in general. He does speak more normally in his true persona, with some tidbits of his overlord speech remaining. Why that's the case, will be addressed soon.
Appearance:
I really liked the hair design for Gundham in DR 3 and therefore, I shall give him that hairstyle. His overall oufit has a bit of darker texture than in canon and he is also wearing a bag that has a creepy design of sorts, with magic symbols on it. But ultimately this bag contains nothing, but food items for his hamsters and also some medicine for said animals, in case they get sick.
He also wears a mask, covering his mouth. This is supposed to make him look more menacing and off-putting, with the mask having a dark red color scheme. His eye on the left does no longer have red contacts, but instead a black one. This gives him a black eye with a white dot in the middle and depending on his mood, it would flash in various colors.
His built will be somewhat muscular and toned, because I do think he did have to exercise in order to tame certain animals that were difficult, like certain kinds of dog-breeds, eagles and whatnot. His hand without the bandage part, has a few bite marks. From his devas that is.
Past:
Well then, here I did a little revamp about his past. I understood the original message behind it, in the canon version, but feel it could be more fleshed out of sorts. So...here's my idea.
Like in canon, Gundham was born in a wedlock relationship. He came to be in a one-night stand by accident and he was born about several months later. And Gundham's childhood was...difficult.
His mother was very loving and patient towards him, often checking on him and seeing how he was doing. She devoted most of her time to work several jobs, to keep the house and themselves afloat. Gundam's dad was the opposite. While he was not physically abusive towards him, he was very neglectful. He himself was quite well-off and yet would only visit his son at least 2 times a year, because he was too busy with being in different countries and living the high-life. And if he did show up, it was solely for a fun time with Gundham's mom and not the boy himself.
His mom never broke up with him officially, because of his charms and the fact that he'd occasionally send her money. Gundham did see what a monster his dad was, when he once heard him brag about doing something.....monstrous to another woman. But at the time, Gundham was too scared to tell his mom, out of fear what his dad would do them and because he didn't want to break his mom's heart. Because he loved her that much.
Like in canon, his mom's cooking was quite...bad. But not in the sense that the meal didn't taste bad, but because the food she bought had a tendency to....not be good. This caused Gundham a lot of health problems and he never told her, because he didn't want to upset her. Unfortunately, he often missed schools, due to his health problems. And at the same time, he also learned from a convo of his parents, how he came to be.
This caused his self-image to drop and he began to view himself as a monster, something inhuman. Someone who will only hurt those, he comes the closest too and he thinks he is a burden. Due to this, he tried his best to distance himself from others, bit by bit.
He took on his "Evil overlord" persona, to drive others away. And to lift up his self-confidence and to not feel miserable all the time. For this, he studied tons of mythical books, to make his act sound more believable.
Now, why did he become an animal breeder? Well, it began when he was at the hospital. When he lied there in the bed, he noticed a hamster being all lost and confused. Gundham took care of him. He learned from the staff that the hamster belonged to an elderly patient, who suffered from dementia and passed away. Gundham took him in and named him Cham-P. He then discovered his love for animals and began to take care more of them.
As the years went by, Gundham started a blog to document his experiences with animals and at the same time, use the ads on the side to give his mom a bit of extra money. He acted more natural around his mom and said mom is still alive, before he went to Hope's Peak.
Relationship with Sonia
Now....the original game didn't really show the relationship between those two, in detail. So...let me give it a shot.
Sonia did buy into his act, but not because she liked bad boys or anything. She found his interest and knowledge of mythical and dark topics fascinating and found someone, she could connected too. She did try to open himself up to her a few times and Gundham, after hesitating, did open up to her.
Gundham at first tried to push Sonia away, but the fact that she didn't seem scared of him, made him feel more at ease. He struggled to open up to her though, out of fear that she would abandon him and then later realised, that the two were similar. Sonia wanted to be seen as normal, while Gundham wanted to be seen as dangerous. This allowed the two to confide in others and to overall, feel better about themselves.
Their relationship can be seen, as either platonic or romantic. Your choice, really.
Other Notes:
-He loves fantasy novels
-He is vegan.
-Something he can't stand in movies, is if animals get visibly injured.
-Adding to that, when an animal does get hurt by someone, Gundham would threaten to hurt said someone. Very much.
-Thanks to his dad, he has a very low opinion on those, who hit on women just because they are pretty.
-He despises zoophilia with a passion.
-His room has tons of animal plushies.
-While he can tame most of his animals, he has a hard time doing that with cats of all things, noting that they have a mind of their own.
-His favorite subject in school was biology and his least favorite, was Drama Class. The reason being is that he has stage fright.
And that's it! I hope you enjoyed this little rewrite of mine. Please LIKE and REBLOG for more posts. It helps out a lot and I wish you a good day.
Byeonara! :D
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