#tkorat rewrite

[jojo-ker06]

@your-ne1ghbor

When you said that Draft Magnus was similar to WoaS!Magnifico, I coulden't resist drawing this✨️:

Also, I love how our Magnifico's swapped personalities by accident lol

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I drew WoaS!Magnifico in his early early early draft version and updated the outfit. You can really tell that he has changed as a character ALOT.

Hope you like it and again, happy TKORAT anniversary!🎀✨️

[your-ne1ghbor]

I think this comic strip really tells the state of the wishes of Rosas.

Btw the Stars sometimes HAVE to not tell the other stars about certain things in order to protect them from the dangers of the human realm, even if those said stars don't really understand why.

Oh, and none of them told star boy what happened a century ago where a star helped hurt thousands of people. Either because they are to prideful to admit a star did something wrong or because they don't want to bring attention to it so that other stars don't become afraid when it comes to guiding the user's.

I think I am getting there in terms of how the magic system works, but I do know how the wishes play into the magic system! Which is pretty nice tbh 😭

And yes im leaning into the: Star Boy = monster territory. I just think that concept is intresting itself since it can literally be interpreted in so many ways <3

I love traumatizing both of them 💕😝

Even of it makes me cry myself to sleep🧍

[oh-shtars]

OMFG YESSSSSS 😭💖✨

@signed-sapphire @your-ne1ghbor @oh-shtars

I managed to solve a problem I had with my animation application and I wanted to try it again, so the @dangerousflowerpanda drawing gave me a lot of motivation and I made this little animatic :D

[spectator-zee]

Hey there! I saw you've been starting to expand your own rewrite so I'd thought of a few questions or you! Now I'm not fully versed in your Wish AU, but I'm genuinely curious. So here we go:

How did you come up with the idea of your rewrite? Was it from watching the Disney movie or other people's rewrites?

How does SFTS!Asha interact with other Wish AU Ashas?

Same as #2, but with Apollo and the other Starboys. 😂

How long does your storyline go on?

Uhhhh.... Any Angst, I'm still new to it. 😅

How many songs are you including in your rewrite? Do they include A Wish Worth Making, or This is the Thanks I Get or perhaps an original song?

Is there a Flazino in your rewrite?

When can we expect the first chapter?

Are all 7 Teens included in SFTS, or is it reduced? Or are they just wiped from existence? 😂

Out of questions, but I want to give you a hug:

Good luck on your stuff! 😎

1. How did you come up with the idea of your rewrite? Was it from watching the Disney movie or other people's rewrites?

I got inspiration from both my mutuals, the movie, some tropes i love from watching different anime and reading multiple Webtoons.

So my little wish au was born. It was initially was just going to be my little secret, just drawing my own version of Asha and Starboy and writing down some ideas for the AU whenever I have ideas for it, but when @signed-sapphire tagged me to recreate my Asha and Starboy on this picrew they found, well-

I was forced to reveal my two kiddos 🤧

(Just kidding Saph ily platonically-)

ANYWAYS-

Lots of stuff changed compared to the first draft too.

I actually had two other wish AUs before the current one i have right now.

One is a sort of villain AU of Asha and Starboy, where i named that Starboy Alzir. (I can't remember why i named that guy like that tho)

And one where Asha is the thought to be dead princess of Rosas turned vigilante of some sorts, also with a Starboy (also named Orion). The guy was WAY less traumatized than the current Orion, Good for him!

2. How does SFTS!Asha interact with other Wish AU Ashas?

The Kingdom of Roses and Thorns 🥀(by @your-ne1ghbor) My Asha enjoys spending time with Neighbor's TKoRaT!Asha, they would probably talk about hobbies and what they do to alleviate boredom when confined inside a castle. Though my Asha mostly focused on her job of doing paperwork and castle finances and whatever the heck a princess's job is inside the castle idk. Imagine Navier from Remarried Empress, i definitely got inspired by her a lot when it comes to my Asha.

The Fallen Star 🌠 by @signed-sapphire She would probably not get along with Saph's Asha very much, she'd also try to reel TFS!Asha back whenever she's being rude to someone.

I feel there would be a scenario where TFS!Asha would be ranting to my Asha about the TFS!Seven teens for not appreciating their perfect and benevolent princess and my Asha would just be looking at paperwork and be like-

"Mhm" "Yes, that must be awfully tragic"

My Asha would NOT be listening at all LOL

Reach for the Stars 🌌 @oh-shtars At this point she's not surprised that there's an AU where she's a servant instead. She'd also be kinda akward towards her. since most of the castle staff in my AU knows of her existence but hasn't seen her personally or thinks she's intimidating/standoffish and she'd try her best to not "scare" RFTS!Asha.

Aled Wish au 🏙️ by @uva124 They'd bond over coffee and overworking maybe?

The Kingdom of Wishes 🌟 by @annymation She'd ask advice on how to draw other people, as she only knows how to draw herself, her surroundings and some animals.

Wish Granted @rascalentertainments She can't tell if WG!Asha doesn't like her or not because of her sarcasm. Though she thinks that WG!Asha probably already doesn't like her due to her being adopted by the Royal couple.

The Wishing Kingdom 🏰 @chillwildwave She'd relate on to her not being good at magic and both of their Magnificos berating them for not being good at it, she'd try to teach some of the spells she learned by herself to TWK!Asha tho.

The Assistant and the Star 📚 @tumblingdownthefoxden If she ever hears about TaatS! Asha was being stalked, she would have been pretty pissed and if she had the authority, she would have had them arrested and served prison time or community service.

Cause..im pretty sure that STALKING SOMEONE THAT IS THE KING'S APPRENTICE ARE PROBABLY GROUNDS TO SOME PUNISHMENT AT LEAST

3. Same as #2, but with Apollo and the other Starboys.

The Kingdom of Roses and Thorns 🥀 With Neighbor's TKoRaT! Star, Orion sees him as his first Starboy friend, his homie, his first partner in crime! Whenever he wants to hang out with someone (that isn't Asha), he goes to find him first...and drags him along with his shenanigans

The Fallen Star 🌠 With Saph's Cielo, he now has a pranking buddy! (Besides TKoRaT!Star of course) He does get concerned that he trusts so easily towards strangers. But good thing he's a living lie detector and he'll look out for any bad guy that wanna take advantage of him....aaand cue him shooting an arrow at TFS!Mag. Sorry Saph-

Reach for the Stars 🌌 Sueño my boy, Orion would play music for him whenever he sees Sueno is upset or uncomfortable to calm his nerves. When he heard about how he got imprisoned by Magnifico and got his magic drained for years...well, let's just say he had a violent reaction and RFTS!Magnifico is going to be a pincushion once Orion gets his hands on him--

Aled Wish au 🏙️ Wish Uva's Haedus, he had to do a double take cause he can sense that Haedus is pretty powerful. But after getting over that, he thinks that he's really cool to hang out with. Orion would also love Naos and Nembus, he'd try to teach them how to perform spells that they can do even with weak magic.

The Kingdom of Wishes 🌟 He'd be in awe over Aster's cool cape and question how the heck did he manage to defeat his Magnifico. He'd also applaud that Aster was ready to square up against his Magnifico too, i still remember the swords he made out of stardust, even though it didn't hurt Magnifico, it was still one of my favorite moments.

Wish Granted 💫 WG!Star!!!! i love this little bundle of Joy, Orion would have a bit of a hard time keeping up with Star's energy at first though. He'd also be pretty protective as Star doesn't seem to recognize how dangerous his royal couple is.

The Wishing Kingdom 🏰 I remember wave mentioning that Antares has a tendency to lie a lot. Due to a past experience, Orion manifested the ability to tell when someone is lying. Whenever Antares lies about something, Orion...would not call him out on it, in public at least. He'd first yank him somewhere private and ask if he's okay and that he's here if Antares needs someone to talk with.

The Assistant and the Star 📚 He can heavily relate with having healing powers yet not being able to save people who they needed to protect. (I love Altan's backstory btw) On a less angsty note, They'd bond over being the only Starboys having fluffy fur on their outfits. Orion would start a "Starboys with Fluffy fur on their outfits" club, only with two members at the moment :')

4. How long does your storyline go on?

In universe it would either be a few months or a year at most.

Cause I feel like it would be like an anime/cartoon(??) series with episodes in it to show dynamics of side characters with one another, or Asha and Orion shenanigans, The Royal couple shenanigans, even an episode dedicated to Asha's owl and Amaya's cat just having beef with each other. Asha and Orion needs time to establish trust with one another over time. Gain allies to stand against the King and Queen, Make the people doubt about the Royal couple, Arc where Asha gets to explore outside the castle walls!, Asha having her first public appearance, episode showing what happened to Rosas' previous King and second prince, Orion backstory, 7 teens POV, all that fun stuff.

(Disclaimer: I am NOT writing all that- I have NO writing experience whatsoever, my au is just a fun little concept that i would just either draw out or share little fun facts about whenever inspiration strikes)

5. Uhhhh.... Any Angst, I'm still new to it. 😅

Magnifico gifted Asha a crown made of thorny vines for her birthday, she still wears despite it being hurting because it's the only crown she has. And to remind herself that a princess's job is a heavy/painful burden.

6. How many songs are you including in your rewrite? Do they include A Wish Worth Making, or This is the Thanks I Get or perhaps an original song?

I don't really plan on Writing this au, it's more like a fun concept that i would share fun facts of or draw occasionally. But if there would be music in it, it would include most of the Songs that are already in the movie except:

• I'm a star • This is the thanks i get • Knowing what i know now

and i would replace them with songs like:

• Wouldn't you like

(Because i freaking LOVE Epic the Musical okay? and Orion would be the type to sing a happy tune with some sinister lyrics sometimes lol)

Here, Orion makes an offer of partnership between him and Asha, he'd be her ally in the quest of preventing Magnifico and Amaya's plans, he also sings some of their crimes during the song too

"She can turn you into an animal that would end up on a plate! "She can all but make you fall in love, like you're on your hundredth date! "He can turn into a monster! And he'll grind you to the bone" "They have all the ways to haunt ya, if you take them all alone!"

He sings these crimes that they they have done in a catchy tune so Asha won't get too spooked but he makes sure that she understands that those two are definitely dangerous and you should be very cautious around them. Because they have definitely done these acts, and would definitely do it again to any person who would oppose them.

• They're only Human

Here the Royal couple sings a duet, looking down on the people that are so far beneath them. Also I'd imagine them singing the Annapantsu and Caleb Hyles Cover instead of the OG version (I still love the og tho)

Not entirely sure what rebellion song I would replace "Knowing what I know now" though

And if there would be an Original song, it would be a song about Asha singing/comforting Orion because he's having a mental breakdown. Singing to him along the lines of- "Deep breaths" "Count with me" "And Repeat"

Idk I'm not a songwriter

And it would be named something like- "Don't blame yourself" or "Things that weren't your fault"

And at some point, Orion would sing this back to her, like a reprise of sorts when she's the one who needs comforting

p.s. I just realized that "Here comes a thought" from Steven Universe would be a perfect alternative instead oh my god-

7. Is there a Flazino in your rewrite?

Oh yeah he exists, Asha gave him a raise once, surprised that he didn't quit being Magnifico's magic apprentice since all the previous ones quit and was never seen again (She's secretly investigating where they are as she caught wind of their families being worried sick about them). Flazino didn't know why his salary increased and who did it, cause it's definitely not Magnifico or Amaya, but he's grateful to that person.

He also goes around Rosas to help with his magic, as he's one of the only people in the kingdom authorized to use magic. (Being Magnifico's apprentice and all)

8. When can we expect the first chapter?

I'm not really a writer, so i actually plan to show some happenings in my au with drawings once motivation strikes once in a while, or if some people asks me about stuff about my au cause i don't really talk about stuff unless someone asks me about it

9. Are all 7 Teens included in SFTS, or is it reduced? Or are they just wiped from existence? 😂

They exist! They help their parents who work at the castle, like an internship of sorts so they would take their places once they have come of age. (This might change in the future who knows)

10. Out of questions, but I want to give you a hug

❤️❤️❤️HUG!! ヾ(≧ ▽ ≦)ゝ❤️❤️❤️

[jojo-ker06]

HAPPY TKORAT ANNIVERSARY @your-ne1ghbor 🥳🎉

As a present I've made you these 4 traumatized plushies!✨️

I hope you like them and that I did your characters justice✨️ It was really fun drawing them🎀

[your-ne1ghbor]

God damn it

my birthday is in 2 days FUCK-

UHHH

QUICK

DISTRACTION SHOT

[chillwildwave]

FfshahahahagacagssacsxSaAAzsZxgOMG I absolutely love this, this is truly amazing, I can’t explain how much Asha and Antares look so good in your style, thank you so much!

Eeeee I'm finally done with this :D

It took longer than I thought and I'm sorry if I got any details wrong. I tried my best lol but I think they all look amazing :>

Kingdom of wishes: @annymation @uva124 @emillyverse

The fallen star: @signed-sapphire

The kingdom of roses and thorns: @your-ne1ghbor

Reach for the stars: @oh-shtars

Rewrite the stars: @gracebethartacc

The wishing kingdom: @chillwildwave

[your-ne1ghbor]

"This Wish" Re-write

(This song for my rewrite: The Kingdom of Roses and Thorns)

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Hello guys!!

First Rewrite of them all, and before I go into the rewrite, I need to state my problems with the song before I get into it.

So the sections will be like this:

My problems with the song

My goals/thoughts on the song

The actual rewrite

Now with this out of the way, lets get into how this song failed to be a "I want song." If you want to watch another video on the problems with the song in more detail, I suggest you watch this video:

Now lets get started!

My Problem with the Song

So there are many problems with the song, and I'll break down every lyric since I can.

And I am not a professional song writer, I am just pointing out stuff that sounds off to me personally.

So for context...

At this point in the film, she is broken that the people of Rosas won't get all of their desires fulfilled. Mind you, as in all of my other rants on this stupid movie, Magnifico, the antagonist, can't AND SHOULDN'T grant all the wishes because there are obviously dangerous people who ask for dangerous things or people's desires are too vague to be granted. It is a valid reasoning to not grant them all because why should he? They can potentially cause harm to the people who gave up their wish or even the people of Rosas.

Back to Asha here, she ran out of the house after Sabino said he didn't want to hear his wish from her, which makes her angry and run out of the house. She is in tears then suddenly breaks into song.

That is were I have my first nick-pick, although it is slightly minor. She shouldn't suddenly break out into song unless she calms down afterwards. Where she is at this point of the song, she should have some strain in her voice since she legit was just crying a second ago.

Now we get our first line:

"Isn't truth supposed to set you free?"

This flows nicely with the music in the song and it does establish a good question...but they answer it with:

"Well, why do I feel so weighed down by it?"

Although you can say that the truth she is holding is "weighing her down," it breaks the rhythm that was set in the first lyric by cramming in a lot of words. How it should be, as a example:

"Then why am I so weighed down by it?

Its not a good example, since there is still strain and breaks rhythm still, but the strain isn't so bad as cramming in so many words into one line. Lyrics need to flow nicely with the music, and if you can't do that, then fix the lyrics until it sounds right.

The next lyrics I don't have a problem with:

"If I could show them everything I've seen Open their eyes to all the lies then Would they change their minds like I did?"

I still would say that there is still strain since it is cramming in more words than it needs to. But as I said, I don't have a big problem with it, minus that nick pick.

"But when I speak, they tell me, "Sit down" But how can I when I've already started runnin'?"

Okay, my next problem, which will be very noticeable in the next lyrics, is the use of But, Then, And. Its fine to have them in songs, including at the begining, but it should not be the driving force of the song or aka, BE USED SO MUCH. You can still use the words, just use it sparingly. Also, there is a lot of "slang" words, like the one right here: "runnin". In medival times, they would not say it like that. They would most likely say running, than runnin. And they don't know slang soooooo BE MORE ACURATEEEEEEE

"Oh, this is where we've been But it's not where we belong And I may be young, but I know I'm not wrong"

One thing I wanna say, is that she should basically say "oh everything I knew was wrong" instead of saying "I am not wrong". She just sounds like a hypocrite. Like, she firmly believes that her morals are right, rather than trying to look at Magnifico's perspective and try to understand him, which mind you, she does not do at all throughout the entire movie. Also, just remove And for the last lyric, it does not need to be there. It sounds better when it just says: I may be young, but I know I'm not wrong. Idk why it is there, when it didn't need to be there in the first place.

"So I look up at the stars to guide me And throw caution to every warning sign"

Some AI mess there, am I right? Alright, so she is throwing cation at the wind, or in her terms, she is being cautious at every warning sign, which is basically what warning signs do. They warn bystanders to ensure their safety and take the next steps carefully. Sooo what is she throwing cation at? The wind? This is legit so confusing like why would you have this in your song? If it doesn't make sense logically or even character wise, just don't have it in there, and try again and make it something else.

"If knowing what it could be is what drives me Then let me be the first to stand in line"

Sooo...what is it? Please tell us! We wanna know Wish Asha :3

"So I make this wish To have something more for us than this So I make this wish To have something more for us than this"

Thats...not what I meant.

So we all know this is a "I want song". So she should be saying what she wants, but what she wants is so vague. What do you want? Power? Freeing the wishes? Star Boy? Wait thats my wish woops This lyric is very vague. You can change it to: "I want something more for us than this", which sounds a lot better, and given the context to whatever you are writing, it can work. I dont have a problem with other people having this lyric in their songs, but for her character, shouldn't she say something that she wants?

"Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah-ah More than this, oh-ah-ah-ah"

Hahah...VERY POPPY.

Its nice though, so I better give credit to where it is due.

"I never knew I needed room to grow"

Idk what to say here, it just sounds off, since she sounds like a idiot. Of course there will be room to grow, but I guess it was used for the viewer to relate to her more? Idk man...

" Yeah, I did what I was told when someone told me "no" "

Me fr tbh

"Now I've got all of this freedom in my bones But I've still got the lid on, so it doesn't overflow"

Again, you don't need to use slang words in your song, especially so when your character would not know these terms well. If your character is set in a specific era, miminize the slangs at least. I don't have a problem with it, I just dont want it to be overused.

" 'Cause I've got reservations and hesitations On where I should even begin"

I like this lyric! Just remove 'cause and it would flow nicely.

"I'm past dipping my toes in But I'm not, no, I'm not past diving in"

ehhhh...I have mixed feelings on this one....I know it is a medaphor, but she didn't need to repeat herself? I'm just saying...

"If I could just be pointed in any given direction On where to go and what to do"

The fact these lyrics that mimics Lin-Manuel Miranda sound better than the entire song is beyond me. I genuinely like this line! And it is weird feeling that way since I normally dread listening to it. But I guess putting my head in a new perspective and actually putting thought into the lyrics probably changed my opinion lol. Doesn't change my opinion on the song though.

"My legs are shaking, but my head's held high The way you always taught me to"

This is actually a really good line since it sounds heartbreaking. Putting it through her perspective, her father died when she was 12, and she is 17 in the film, I'd still imagine that she is, although trying not to show it, still grieving the loss of her father, and you can say she somewhat breaks here. Its really good and I really like it!

If only that we knew more of her father to understand her perspective more, other than he liked star gazing, but hey, what do I know?

She is somewhat saying the same thing from the pervious lyrics, so I'll speed run this:

"So I look up at the stars to guide me And throw caution to every warning sign"

Again, change it please. No need for it here.

'I'm sure there will be challenges that find me But I can take them on one at a time"

OG Asha: Very confident of herself

My version of Asha: What is confidence?

"So I make this wish To have something more for us than this So I make this wish To have something more for us than this"

god I know this is a pop song, BUT STOP REPEATING YOURSELF PLEASEEE

'Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah (so I make this wish) Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah-ah (to have something more) More than this, oh, ah-ah-ah"

Something funny was that when I first listened to the song, I thought that the chorus was saying "Don't make this wish to have something more". It might be just me though.

'So I make this wish To have something more for us than this"

So here is my last nick-pick. Why does she end on a solemn note? It doesn't fit at all, and breaks the way the song is played. Asha should have ended on a high note, like her voice is "reaching for the stars".

(HA SEE WHAT I DID THERE?)

It also flows nicely with the instrumentals when it ends on a high note, so I don't know why she ends it on a sad note. It doesn't make sense, especially for her character.

So those are my problems with the lyrics. Sooo, why does it suck mainly?

Well she sounded selfish in context, especially when I watched the first time and on recent re-watch. It doesn't even help much when I barely know anything about her and what her goals and wants are, minus the "I want something more." But what more does she want? Power? Wishes? Stars? It doesn't make sense. She should at least state what she wants or her have a solemn moment of thinking: wait, I know what I want! Before she ends on her high note, it being what she really wants.

It also doesn't help when the song is just another copy of "God Help the Outcasts" from Hunchback of Notre Dome, but done worse. And something that really pissed me off, was when the writers said that "All disney princesses have something that THEY want and never a selfless want." (not accurate to what they said btw) And I was VERY pissed off when they said that, since it felt like a personal insult to Hunchback of Notre Dome, a movie I have HIGH respect for, for what it did and accoplished, and is one of my fav disney movies. They really insulted Esmeralda like that. HOW DARE YOU.

I'm done talking about the lyrics, legit I'm done. Lets move on to how I would rewrite the song:

How I would rewrite the song

Okay first of all, we need to give Asha a better goal/wish than wanting something more, since it doesn't specify anything.

So what I would do, is her say what she wants.

Plus, the song doesn't have her process what just happened. So I want it to fix it to where she reflects as she puts on a newer perspective on the "truth's" they were told.

And I uhh..CHANGE THE INSTUMENTALS. I dont mind it in the final product, but the demo sounded SO MUCH BETTER and so much NICER, so change it to the demo hehe.

For context for my version of Asha, she is the adopted daughter of Amaya and Magnifico. You may think that it would be more difficult with a character that is in royalty that is supposed and should be siding with her people instead of her corrupted parents, but I dove into how that would work in my other rant here.

So Asha, in my version, is very less confident in herself. She also believes that the people are wrong for thinking the way they do about her parents (some of them think that way mind you). So when she finds out what her parents do to their wishes, her world view is legit crushed by this new revelation, and now she just...doesn't know what to do. Most of the people of Rosas hate her since she is "royalty". And she cant turn to her caretakers since they will tell her to just ignore it and move on. She is alone in a sense. She also knows very little about her real parent's, just knowing that her father used the stars for guidance and drove mad because of it. So with that perspective, she would try and reach for the stars (IK I KEEP REFRENCING THIS AU HELP) for help. She also normally does things alone, so it is more difficult for her to ask for help, even when she needs it.

Also, before she breaks into song, Valentino is there to comfort her as she process what happened to the wishes. She is crying with this new revelation, but Valentino wants to be there for her since he wants to make sure she is happy :3

Before we get into the actual song rewrite, I need to say this:

I AM NOT A PROFFESIONAL SONG WRITER. I just mainly did this for fun and fixed the things that mainly bugged me and to fit the context for my version of Asha. Plus, there is no right or wrong way for fixing the song! Just make it the way you want it to be percived by others, and have fun with it!

Ok, now with that out of the way, Lets get into the song!

This Wish (The Kingdom Of Roses and Thorns Ver.)

(Play this in the background when you read the song :3)

And no, there is no spodify version of the song, which sucks-

Asha: Purple

Stars: Yellow

My Notes: Bold

Wasn’t truth supposed to set them free?

Why am I so weighed down by it?

This task that's right in front of me

To open their eyes, to all their lies

And then change their minds like I did

So what she is saying here is basically the same as the original, with slight changes. She now feels more pressured with the truth she now knows, and is very hesitant to actually say anything that would demine her caretaker's reputation. After all, "they took her in when no one else did" so why should she go against them? They don't deserve it now do they? I also wanted this to have more weight, like how the line started with "Why am I so weighed down by it" and she states what she is weighed down by. And what she means by "set them free" she thought that learning the truth of why the people of Rosas are miserable would make her change how she sees them view them, or to prove them wrong. And oh boy, she was wrong. I also wanna say that not everyone in Rosas thinks this way towards the royals. They are more fearful and more prone to do whatever they want. They also are like the king and queen, ignoring the problems and move on, but this time, if they cause problems, they can get in trouble.

If I speak, they’ll tell me to “sit down”

If I speak, they’ll tell me to “just turn away”

This is how her parent's pass the problems the kingdom has. Ignore it, forget it, and move on. She was taught that way. And this also can be applied to how she was treated when she was younger. There is also a tone of fustration here since you can say she is still treated like this, like her voice of thoughts are just downplayed by some silly manipulation from her parents or that the citizens don't want to hear what she has to say since she is "royalty".

But the truth that we were told

Was not what we had thought

And all the teachings we were all taught

Was just all…wrong

This is mainly her processing what she was taught in a new perspective.

If I look up at the stars to guide me

Won't they force me back in line?

Although I don’t know how I should start this

I should at least try or no one will

She knows very little about her parents, other that one was a philosopher, both "abandoned her at the kingdom's doors", and that their way of thinking was wrong. Here, with the truths she knows, she is now wondering if her parent's ideologies were right, and if everything she knew from what her adoptive parent's told her, was wrong. She is here taking account for what she knew of what her biological parents did, and trying it for herself. I feel like some parts are a bit awkward and I wanna fix it I just don't know how yet. She is also slightly overthinking hehe. Plus no one in Rosas looks up at the sky to dream or wish anymore, hense why she says "I should at least try or no one will."

So I make this wish

For their dreams of hope and bliss…

No, I just want this wish

To be something more for us than this

For starters, this was pretty fun to write! Second, this is her holding back on what she really wants. You'll see what she wants at the end of the song, but here, she just thinks that saying it from her head would work, instead of saying it from the heart.

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah (We hear your wish)

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah-ah (So why are you holding back?)

More than this, oh-ah-ah-ah

Bet you weren't expecting the starts to talk to her quietly. No, she can't hear them, they're too far away, except for us ofc. And no, Aster/Star is not asking this, almost all of the wishing stars interested in helping her is questioning why she is holding back on her wish. And yes, I thought adding the chorus from the end should be here also so it would flow nicely with the music. It is also to fix the complaint: "where is the chorus coming from", so now it is coming from the stars and not in the air.

I was told that life was grand and fine

We all did what we were told when they told us no

But with the lies and false hopes, we were told

Should I just turn away?

When everything is at stake?

I feel like this is her flaw right her. She is backing out on the situation and wants to turn away, even though it will only make everything worse if she doesn't do anything about it. I also want to fix the upper part of the lyrics to imply what she means by false hopes and lies so the audience knows what she is talking about, I just donno how to execute it right now.

I just got reverations and hesitations

On where I should even begin

If I make this wish there will be

More at stake than there ever will

If I could be pointed in any given direction

On where to go and what to do

“Keep your head down and just turn away”

But I just can’t ignore this now

This isn't her overcoming her flaw btw, she just realizes that if she backs out, nothing will get better, and nothing will change. She is also quoting her parents there, where she wants to help her citizens, but they just tell her to turn away and ignore it. Plus, if she asks for help, she could loose everything: her caretakers, her friends, a roof over her head. All just for trying to do the right thing.

I will look up at the stars to guide me

With nothing to hold me back this time

I know there will be challenges that'll find me

But I will take them on, one at a time

This is her now up for the challenge of making change, though, I would want her voice to be a little fearful, since she is going against everything her parents stood for.

 I will make this wish

For their dreams of hope and bliss…

 I will make this wish

I want something more for us than this!

Its similar to the previous one. Just that she is now saying "I want this:" in a sense. She still is holding back though.

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah (To make this wish)

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah-ah (you need to take the risk)

More than this, oh, ah-ah-ah

The stars are telling her to actually take the risk of actually wishing for something rather than holding back on it. Their chorus is more quieter, since they heard her voice, just that, she is still holding back, which is making the stars feel like they can't help her situation until she actually wishes for real, so they start turning away ... except for one.

(speaking) More than this…

I would like the instruments to pause here, to take a breather if you will. Asha also says this here, since she realizes she isn't being honest with what she truly wants. So instead of saying what is on her mind, she is saying from her heart, which is how stars actually come down to help. Your wish has to be from the heart, not the mind, or something you think you want. They aren't genies. Asha throughout the song is just backing out and hense more hesitant until now. She is also looking at the stars at this point to wish upon! Can you guess who?

So I make this wish

I want their dreams to have…a…CHANCE

(It ends with a high note btw) And here she is saying what she really wants. It is still a selfless act, and she isn't saying for all the dreams to be granted, no, she wants the people to have a chance of pursuing their dreams before it is too late. I might change it later since it is somewhat awkward, but I think it is a nice note to end off for now.

Conclusion

(sketch version from my last post lol)

So yeah thats how I would write the song!

None of this is perfect, and this is also my first time actually writing out lyrics for a song, so their is bound to be some flaws.

I also accept all criticism since I would like to improve this song for a little something :3

Anyways, thanks for reading! Hope you guys have a great day, or night!

[your-ne1ghbor]

What would be funny is if Asha had her Cinderella moment and had secret rat friends

Don’t let Maggy see them though or else Asha gets another level of grief she can’t fully deal with because she’s convinced herself that it’s for her own good

oh she would! I can imagine Asha making all sort of rodent friends all over the castle when she was little

However...😀

God my art is break dancing over me help 💀

Sadly, Charo would not allow it unfortunately ����🐀

I actually have a fun spin on their cat that I don't see many people taking advantage of sooooooo

Ahem.

CHARO = EELS

Skedadles 🏃💨

[your-ne1ghbor]

A cut scene from my Wish rewrite (FW: dead bodies) (Long Post)

Sooo I have written out an old draft of the story from Disney's Wish that was just called "Wish Rewrite" (how original). In that original story, I was just making up the story as I went along, but only stopped because of my modivation being in the drain plus the story didn't feel like something personal from me, so I scrapped the whole thing and stared from scratch.

I do not regret doing this, this allowed me to explore the characters and world building more than just head diving into rewritten territory without putting much thought into it. But....

The was always this one scene that I keep looking back on. For now, it is cut from the TKoRaT AU, but I might reconcider it, just might update or fix the scene so it would make sense, since it just didn't when I kept thinking about this particular scene, including with context. Or maybe still have that idea, but in a different context.

To give some insider to the very old draft of my story, Asha was a princess ofc and still the adopted daughter of the king and queen. Their meeting was very different from what we have now, where Asha was an orphan and ran away, only to bump into Magnifico and he took her in. Meanwhile, from what you guys know, Amaya claimed to "found her at the kingdom's doorsteps" (nahh they killed her parents). Maggy and Amaya were also VERY different from the current versions of them. It sorta reminds me of @annymation's Maggy and Amaya in a way. Anyways, the magic and the people were different too, where Maggy put on a "mAgIc" spell that made the kingdom look all happy, sort of like a mist to hide what is really going on in the kingdom. Like from the Percy Jackson novels. Idk like I said, sorta made it up as I went along. The story stopped around when Asha and Amaya have a conversation about Asha's current state on learning magic and it kinda ended there. PLus, the old story DID NOT have maggy building the kingdom himself, rather, it was passed down to him from generations.

But ofc, I always think ahead of these stories and concidered what the ending fight to be like or at least one of the fights between them. And during the one of the fights...well.....let me lay it out for you the best I can:

It is a 2v2: Asha and Star verses Maggy and Amaya. Maggy and Amaya got the upper hand on star and drained half of their powers. Star, legit unable to keep most of himself together, him and Asha retreat to somewhere in the dungens to hide and think of a new plan. They hid in a secluded room that Asha never knew was there before.

The room was cold, and barren. With a very faint smell that smelt like rot (we learn what that is in just a second). Star even mentions reconizing a sense of stars being here, but also not. Asha, using the wand that was given to her from Star, illuminates the room ...buttttttttttttttt......

Expecting to find like it being a armory or some sort of rest room for the soldiers guarding the dungens, they instead find bodies.

Bodies of all of the missing people that would have been illuded to from early on, where when people question the king and queen, they are never to be seen again. This is where they end up. Leaving the bodies in a room, to be later on forgotten about. It wasn't just dead bodies of all the recently missing people, it is a room of dead stars. The dead stars are hanging from the ceiling, somewhat like a trophey room of what they captured and killed. This is kinda the reason why the kingdom was passed down from generations, they are dead stars from long ago, slaughtered by the early kings and queens of Rosas. This was basically a hit of reality for Star, for this made them realize why the Stars dont go to earth to grant wishes anymore. They get taken advantage of, only to be murdered later and then forgotten about.

You can kind of see why I cut this. Not only does it not make sense to me personally, it kinda breaks the story. Why are there no guards guarding that room? Why do the kings and queens have a room filled with dead people when they can easily just toss the bodies into the ocean or smth? WHY DOES ASHA NOT KNOW THIS WHEN SHE HAS BEEN LIVING AT THE CASTLE FOR 11 YEARS???? (she was 6 when they found her) Did Maggy and Amaya murdered stars before? Have they captured one? Is that why they were so presistant on catching star? To have him as some sort of trophey? It just didn't make sense....but it also just drives home the point that Amaya and Magnifico aren't to be trusted AT ALL. It also does up the stakes: If Asha and Star fail to beat Maggy and Amaya, they will end up in this room to only be forgotten about later on.

But as of the current state if my AU, this just doesn't work. Maggy and Amaya do not have a room filled with dead bodies. Why the fuck would they want all of the dead heretics be staying in the kingdom doors when they can just burn the bodies, toss them into the ocean/river, ect? Plus, Maggy built his kingdom, not had it passed down for generations. There wouldn't be any dead stars hanged up like a trophey. But just because it is cut, does not mean I can change it.

I have been overthinking how things would work in the kingdom, especially concidering that the people are really empty without their wish, and get even more depressed after their wish is crushed. Soooo wouldn't drive them to do..........yk??? I dont wanna mention it since ik there might be sensitive people reading this, buttttt you get what I'm saying right???????

Idk Im just overthinking man. Might use this idea, might not.

But this was at a state and I still want it too, it was going to fall under the horror aspects of the story or still have it be unsettling to read. Although this would have driven that point home, it should make sense, and it didn't. Thats why I cut it for now. And it might say that way since I don't really see the use of needing this when we have a bitch that literally thinks they are doing the right thing, that ends up hurting the people around them and already has a pretty scary design if shot correctly and I am still figuring out the story and overthinking EVERYTHING 💀💀

BUt hey what do I know? The story is still in the works as Im driving myself insane over the fucking magic system and characters and worldbuilding AHHHHHHHH

Anyways, this is just a random tangent. Plus, wanted to spill some beans of this old old story for some reason idk man-🧍‍♂️

[oh-shtars]

LMAOOOO

Thank you Neighbour! I appreciate the fanart so much!!! 🥺🥺💖✨

Hold on, let me break this down:

1. Arseholes with trauma~ ✨✨ What a lovely bonding moment for both of them.

2. We appreciate a short king, don’t we fellas? (Please say yes because TKoRaT!Mag will have my head if you disagree)

3. I wholeheartedly agree with the Mags just disliking mice in general. That would be funny. 🤣 (Actually, I’m pretty sure that’s one of the only reasons RFTS!Mag is still keeping the royal cat, Espino, around. That, and Amaya wanted to keep him.)

4. Neighbour, I’m sorry to say that RFTS!Mag just has an automatic dislike to any version of Magnifico who’s adopted Asha as his daughter. Just ask TFS!Mag.

My guy would question TKoRaT!Magnifico’s choice of taking Asha in as much as he would question her crush on Starboy. (Buuuuuut, I suppose he’ll let him pass because they both share a taste for star blood.)

5.

(They just give off the vibe that they’d do this.)

6. I find it funny that out of all the magic you could’ve given RFTS!Mag, you chose the one thing that could trigger his PTSD.

RFTS!Magnifico watched his home village get burnt down and destroyed as a child btw. I meaaaan, fire wouldn’t entirely stop him from strangling anyone in his way. He’d just rather not go near it if given the option.

RFTS Magnifico and TKoRaT Magnifico meet

(OKAY I FINALLY GOT THE AU NAME RIGHT @oh-shtars 😭)

Also my headcannon is that every Magnifico recardinated just actively hates mice because of Mickey Mouse lmaoo

Oh yeah, and our star homies are at it again, but both are just collectively horrified of the Maggy verse hahah-

Idk what power set their magnifico has, so thats why I just gave him fire powers for fun lol

And yes, my Magg hates fire and just loves vines

Also sorry if the design isn't accurate, I tried to make it as accurate as possible to the refrence design xd

Also incase if you couldn't read what they were saying...:

TKoRaT Star: This is not gonna end well for us..

RFTS Star: Nodding

RFTS Maggy: Heh Short

TKoRaT Maggy: SHUSH

RFTS Maggy: Your daughter has terrible taste- (they both found out that Asha likes Star Boy smh)

TKoRaT Maggy: I KNWOOOOWW 💀💀dies

AND YES.

My Maggy is short. Idk I just think it would be sort of funny if Maggy was although tall, he isn't as tall as Amaya or the other versions of himself, just being slightly smaller.

Anyways, imma burn my eyes again as I watch Wish for like...I think this is actually the 20th time, but I legit just lost track sm

[your-ne1ghbor]

Hiii it’s me again. I have questions for the anniversary! Or should I say wishiversary? Buckle up.

1. How did you pick TKORAT as its name?

2. What inspired Bonzai?

3. How has Asha changed throughout your rewrite?

4. Favorite character to write/draw?

5. How many changes has your Star gone through?

Okay that’s it! Byeee

Hi again! ( 👹I see what you did there 👹)

AND IM BACK FROM SCHOOL I CAN NOW FINISH UPLOADING MY STUFF!!!

Ooo and what interesting questions!

1. How did you pick TKORAT as its name?

There really isnt much behind it. I was just thinking about the rose isignia and how normally there are thorns on roses. Also since I was thinking of the term like how a rose seems beautiful on the outside, but are nasty (aka the thorns).

HOWEVER, there was another term that I have recently heard that fits pretty well. Where very pleasant thing, event, or situation can have a bad or unpleasant side.

Though I was also not thinking of the meaning very much at the time, and I thought Rosas....Roses....Roses has Thorns- AH-HA I got it! The Kingdom of Roses and Thorns. 👹

2. What inspired Bonzai?

Numero Uno: Opossums needs more representation. Plus its a character that feels unlikely for a princess to have (besides Cinderella bc yk the mice hehe)

Numero Dos: ...I didn't like Valentino in the movie lowkey...and I like goats however cannon Valentino is not the exception.

Also because they're a bit more easy to draw. However, I was between:

Ferrat, Great Eared Nightjar, and a normal house cat.

But the opossum just stook out to me sooo yeah :3

For color pallet though, it was on a image of a opossum I saw a while back and it really felt Asha coded lmao

3. How has Asha changed throughout your rewrite?

I feel like she hasn't changed much, however her situation definitely has-

PLUSSS she has another added thing that I personally added that does reflect off one of the main villains. (Then again it was my intention for the heroes to somewhat reflect the villains, not a lot but enough for people to see :3)

And I then remembered that I DIDN'T come up with funny shinanigans with Asha as a apprentice! And that itself is a sin done by me..BECAUSE IT IS SO FUNNY-

Like imagine restocking potions and then you go to see the king, then you see this Man on the floor:

How the royal couple literally not snapping until a star to reappear is insane (though ik why it happened much later to that moment)

4. Favorite character to write/draw?

Okay....its Magnus and Agatha-

I hate to admit it but I really enjoy writing/drawing their dynamic. And it is so much fun to see the irony in their characters. Cause believe it or not, they started off-

*gets abducted by the spoiler police*

I still find enjoyment in Star's relationship with Asha, even if I kinda alr had figured it out :3

As Epic! Hermes would say:

I LOVE YOU DARLING!!!! ❤️❤️

5. How many changes has your Star gone through?

Lets see...he went from "I want to prove the stars wrong!" to...

....

yeah that pretty much sums up everything

However where I am at with his character is quite dependant on how the Fallen Stars work in my AU. So when I figure out that aspect, he might change slightly.

But his personality largely stayed the same lol. They're a really silly guy. The only thing that changed was his outfit. I didn't drastically change their hair lol

ONe thing that did change was how the stars functioned. And they are still a mix bag of emotions.

On one hand they are nomadic...I think?

On the other hand...they're assholes.

Idk man its a huge lore thing that I gotta figure out sigh...

[your-ne1ghbor]

Hiiiiii, Happy upcoming TKORAT anniversary ✨️✨️✨️✨️

You mentioned that there were fairies in your rewrite. I don't know if you have shown it already or talked about this, but what do the fairies look like?

OMG YESS I CAN FINALLY TALK ABOUT THEM

(prepare for a longgg worldbuilding yapping session)

Well for starters, they do not look like the fairies in the TinkerBell series, as much as I love the series in general (the one with the pirate was my favorite one)

More so they look like the pixies from Harry Potter, mixed in with some elemental feel and "wtf is in my garbage" type of thing.

Something to note is that these guys look the way they are because from where they come from is somewhat unnatural (giant bug ahh eyes). Also I have to say this is a very old version I did of the fairies back when I was beginning my world building for the au. So this is somewhat inaccurate but also isn't? I might have to design a actual sheet sooner or later since they would probably appear often.

(Plus is was back when I was reworking the backstory of Magnus and Agatha lmao)

They're born from the left over star dust that "falling stars" occasionally drop when they pass through earth combined with a child's first laughter (as in the original series of Tinkerbell but I'm not entirely sure if that part will be kept in).

Because Fallen Star's true forms are more so "eldritch", I felt like it makes more sense if fairies that are pretty much a close descendant of them to exhibit weird and unnatural features. What makes it even funnier is that their life goal is to prank anyone until their light gives out.

Although they are a nuance to society, aka pranking you by making your crops to eat each other, harass you for a hour, locking doors, pulling your hair, stealing your things (especially shiny things), they are quite beneficial.

For starters, they can be harvested of their stardust (which kills them, but also squishing them like a bug also works too) to make certain potions or elixirs (depending on how many you harvested). This is quite important in the medical field for healing potions can heal internalized wounds that magic cannot reach (magic healing can only heal external wounds not internal ones). Not only that, anywhere they live, life around them often flourishes no matter how much destruction they would like to cause (since as they fly they just drop some star dust on the way. Like .0000001 milliliter of star dust lol...probably sigh)

Something that is more so dangerous about them is a whole group of them. If you wander to long in a forest and fall into a Fairy Coven, good luck surviving. Its practically like the Saw series for anyone who dares/accidently enters one.

Information on these creatures to anyone in my au is pretty well documented due to how many there is, especially how to deal with them, like placing Fairy trappers near your crops since they somewhat act like fly trappers, but for fairies for example. Plus where fairy covens are and how to avoid them. There isn't much information though on the fairy covens since so few actually do survive them. Agatha often has Asha, as apart of the apprentice ship, has Asha having to wander into the nearby forest (or maybe it is a garden idk yet) to either grab fairies or other potion related ingredients for restocking purposes, so she would often run into them...which is a annoying thing to encounter.

(Which is why she keeps ALL JEWELRY FOR ONLY WHEN SHE IS INSIDE, SHE AINT LETTING THEM TRY TO RIP THEM OFF WHEN DOING APPRENTICE DUTIES)

Also for more reference for how they act, take Tinkerbell when she is angry, but up it to 11, on steroids, and make her high. Then you get whatever is going on with the fairies here.

Although for appearance and how they are born is something I'm not entirely sure on, I am most defiantly set on how they work within the world they are set in and the purpose they serve for other people, for better or for worse.

I'm SO SORRY THAT THIS IS LONG-

I really can go on long rants when it comes to worldbuilding, characters, or story in my au since it is something I quite enjoy to draw/jot down/talk about.

Anyways huhuhjm yeah thats the fairy lore in my au. AVOID THEM AT ALL COSTS-/j

The true reason people came to Rosas...they hate fairies:

Fairies are a thing, Dragons are a thing, sirens are a thing. Like those are the main 3 that will stay cannon (just that population wise, Fairies are more higher as dragons and sirens are fairly uncommon which btw fairies do tend to avoid them unless they have something they want. Fairies also avoid Rosas since Agatha uses them for potion making quite often soo better not stay where you can be killed yk?)

Though the reason why is kinda spoilery ish lol

[your-ne1ghbor]

Hey! Here I come with ✨asks✨

There’s a lot here sorry 😭 And if you’ve already answered some of these, just pass them

Why did you choose to remove Amaya’s eye? Does she wear an eyepatch?

Why is Mag specifically afraid of fire?

Are they going to get villain transformations?

Are we going to learn more about the royal couple’s backstories in the actual story?

How are you going to show your story? (Writing, blurbs, comic, animatic, etc.)

How many songs are you planning to show?

Star’s backstory?

Design dump on the main four! Symbolism?

What are you going to do with Valentino? Is he important in the story?

Who gave Val to Asha?

How does Valentino act with the royal cat?

What deleted scenes specifically inspired your story?

How would Asha react knowing you created her backstory?

Asha meeting canon!Asha. Would she die again

Is cursing allowed in your AU?

What are the seven teens’ roles?

What about Sabino?

If Mag had the chance to get rid of Asha, would he? Without Amaya getting mad at him? (Since she was the one that brought Asha in)

Do the royal couple have similar goals in the story? (Like how @annymation’s royal couple are both in love and villainous, versus @oh-shtars’ royal couple is literally titled Grand Despair)

Will “A Kingdom of Thorns and Roses” name ever be mentioned in the story?

Draw Mag dressed as Megamind >:3 (or meeting him or treating to him, idrc)

Canon!Amaya reacting to TkoRaT!Amaya

What dementor-like monster is shown in your past drawings? Will we see other ones?

Where did they spawn from?

Will there be other realms in your story? Like a Star realm or a cursed realm

Would you consider this a “Disney movie” or more of an AU? Like, could it be made by Disney? (minus a few things like queer representation or cursing)

How can stars die? Can their physical bodies die but their “spirits” remain? (I know you cut this aspect but will it reappear?)

Are there any aspects of other rewrites you want to incorporate in yours?

Why did Maggy and Amaya name the kingdom “Rosas”?

Who discovered wish magic?

Who taught Asha how to make flower crowns?

Are you scrapping any songs?

Adding any new ones?

Adding any new characters? (Like how I’m adding Evangeline)

Are Asha’s parents important to the story?

A little self-indulgent, but some TFS doodles? :3

I hope you enjoy these questions! <3

yoo I finally got internet now let's get to these questions

Ooo you really cooked with these questions @wings-of-sapphire✨️✨️

The eye originally was a way to explore how I can make her more scary, but then it kinda stuck with the overall design so yeah lol. And no, she doesn't wear an eyepatch. I mean, an eyepatch is cool and all, but just an empty eye socket is more terrifying and disturbing to look at for me and works with the overall tragedy of her character.

Mag is more afraid of Star's than fire. But...

He couldn't do anything except watch as a star destroyed his home in flames.

When it comes to fire though, he is more nervous or afraid when it is used to destroy things. If it is used to light up a room or cook food, he doesn't really mind since the intentions aren't bad.

3. Maggy will 100% get a villain transformation, including Amaya as well. It's kind of like boss stages. So basically, they will have a total of 3 transformations, the last one being something scary (haven't thought about the designs yet for the final transformations)

4. The beginning song or replacement song called Home is the founding of Rosas and the actual downfall would be shown since Star Boy didn't know what happened since the stars didn't tell him why Mag is the way he is basically. So yes, 100%.

5. A mixture of all of them. I do want to write it out, but rn I just don't know how to execute it.

6. I'm not sure. It's debatable since I've been focusing more on the worldbuilding than on the songs. Plus, I am no song writer, I suck at writing songs. Even if I get an idea for one (for the replacement song "Welcome to Rosas" is a good example of that [Its called Home]), it's just execution for me.

7. Heh heh that's for a separate post but here is somewhat a glimpse:

(That's mag btw, I'm just messing with his design again 💀💀)

8. I had finished Asha's design, just need to add some minor details. Plus, the other 3 is still me messing with the designs. However, I can show you some of my ideas:

Maggy's is somewhat gonna look like this:

Ofc with more sharper edges and thorny design.

For Amaya, I'm still not sure outfit wise lol.

9. Valentino will actually serve as a guide through the castle and of Rosas to Star and the 7 friends. Idk I just think a goat helping a star with directions is a funny and fun premise. Plus, Star Boy is terrible with directions 😭

10. Idk he just appeared one day and Asha was like: imma keep you. I probably will add more to both of them, but I'm not sure how they met at the moment.

11. They are silly. Aka, they are close friends. Just that Charo gets a little annoyed by Valentino haha.

12. The scene where Asha and Star escapes from Amaya, and the villain couple deleted scene and the wishing tree deleted scenes.

13. She wouldn't care. She probs be like: No shit? Until she realizes how much I do her dirty and she will collapse emotionally.

14. TKORAT Asha would moreover be nervous around her ad Cannon Asha would probably dislike her

15. Yes lol

16. tbh idk yet, I haven't really put much thought into their characters yet since I wanna focus on the main 4 and worldbuilding before I come to the 7 friends since I personally don't know at the moment. All I know is that Dahlia and Gabo are most likely will be siblings since I loved their semi bickering in the OG film.

17. Dead.

18. Mag will only take that action if she becomes a threat to him or the kingdom.

19. They have similar goals in the story, yes. They both want to make sure that everyone will never dream again. They both lost everything because someone wished on a star, or hense had a goal to pursue, and it caused an entire kingdom to fall. Why should they let a dream go Rouge again? They would at least be doing everyone a service by making sure the problem doesn't become a bigger problem later on.

20. The title is so long that idk how I will incorporate it in the story. But if I do, you guys will probably read it 🧍

21.

Megamind has a point Maggy 🤷

22.

TKORAT Amaya wouldn't like how Cannon Amaya literally didn't do anything or even tried anything to prevent her husband from going down the path he did in wish. So yes, TKORAT Amaya pretty much hates her.

23. I don't necessarily have the drawings with me except for this one:

But moreover, another one I have, that I am still designing for "the River of Lost Souls" is probably the closest thing to it. I have more, I just don't have it on me rn 😭

24. Hell, for the River of Lost Souls. And the pic I showed above is from my Oc, Axe's species. Or basically coming from the ground I guess. Plus another one I wanted to show was an old design I had for Axr hehe

25. The Star realm does exist in my au, so does hell, and I'm debating a monster realm, but rn it is cut for it kind of complicates things heheh.

26. I have thought of this before, and I see it more as it's own thing that can be futher explored in other interpretations like shows, pre-quals, ect. It's more AU than Disney to me at the moment.

27. You have to get them out of their disguise form in order to cause any sort of long lasting injuries. Other than that, dark magic is literally the only way to hurt them. And it has to be in their star form. Their disguise form are like a shell for their true form. That's why it is better to have them in their most vulnerable state in order to do any sort of damage to the Stars.

28. I was inspired by a ton of AUs, and a lot of them did rub off from me, like The Wishing Kingdom, Fallen Star, and Reach for the Stars aus.

29. When they founded the kingdom, the whole place was covered in so many roses and flowers. They also dubed it Rosas not only because of the roses founded on the island, but it has a calming name that isn't threatening to people. It sounds...peaceful.

30.

31. Her parents. No not her adoptive parents, her biological parents taught her :3

32. I am a Star is removed. I fucking hate that song with every fiber in my being. This is the Thanks "We" Get would be rewritten to fit the context of Mag and Amaya.

33. I want a song between Mag and Star. It would be focusing on how much of a monster Star could be and "will" be. Plus the song called Home (that I still dunno how to execute 😭)

34. Quite a bit, but the few would be Maggy's Star, or the Blue Star, the star that destroyed Rosas, Aster, and some creatures that makes the worldbuilding whole.

35. Not sure at the moment. I would imagine it as a lingering effect on most of the people in Rosas.

36.

(I had no refrence for Asha when I drew her when I was camping lol 💀)

Anyways thank you for the questions! I had a lot of fun answering them! Hopefully this gave you guys some more info on my AU!

Gonna go through my inbox, so now I will bid you adue 💕

[oh-shtars]

Sueño loved the flower crowns too!

(Lmao, look at these two both being accidental flirts. The other starboys don’t understand how this works or how neither RFTS!Asha nor Sueño noticed at all. ESPECIALLY Cielo. Poor guy can’t see why the other stars are having better luck than him. Lol.)

Btw, AHHHHH ALED!!! NEIGHBOUR!!! THESE ART ARE SOOO CUTE AND BEAUTIFULLL!!! 💖✨💖

If there’s another thing that RFTS! and TKoRaT! Asha have in common, it’s rolling their eyes at the other two.

FS, RFTS, TKoRaT Ashas meet :3

@uva124 @oh-shtars @wings-of-sapphire I drew your Asha's again because their designs are adorable

Ayyyy TKoRaT Asha is getting some confidence.. I also think she is getting more comfy with the other Ashas too which is good, cause last time it overwhelmed her lol

Also idk what Uva's AU is called, and idk if I got the outfit right either so sorry if I got it wrong :')

I personally thing that FS! Asha probs wouldn't want people to remove her crown but hey what do I know?🤷‍♀️

For RFTS Asha, I think she would make something for Sueño after all he has been through, he deserves a break. Maybe he'll like the flower crown a lot but hey who knows :3

Same goes for Hedus, he needs a flower crown.

TKoRaT Asha loves making flower crowns as a kid and just wanted to share it with the other AUs. Something she did with her parents before they died lmao

Oh the stars?

Yeah they're probably messing around with Magnifico and Amaya again.

What a bunch of Menaces.

[cielos-pintados]

Tomas:

Happy Valentines Day guys! Here is a small doodle of Young Maggy and Agatha together

(Also listen to "For the Dancing and the Dreaming", I feel like it screams Maggy x Agatha lol)