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#poorly drawn mdzs#mdzs#wei wuxian#lan wangji#tulu xuanwu#Something about changing the action sequence to something gentle is hilarious to me.#The lesson here is “Be nice to turtles. They are gentle creatures. And many are very endangered.”#don't get me wrong here; I love this scene a lot. LWJ's string technique is one of my favoyrite things.#We do get a fair amount of LWJ fighting but I always loved how the theme of strings comes into play.#There is actually a lot to unpack with LWJ being associate with 'strings'.#The musicianship: Of dedication and rigor in one's practice.#The tension between following along a path or composing your own way forwards (playing what has been written vs composing)#A string is a tightly coiled/taunt entity; The same tension that makes it sing so beautifully can be it's downfall if pushed too hard.#And as a non-musical string - something that binds. Be it to his sect and family or how he binds his fate to WWX -#LWJ cannot exist without his binds. It is not something which ties him down though. It keeps him together.#And he himself *is* a bind. He 'ties wwx down' in ways that are initially negatively viewed ('come to gusu' - feels like: come be trapped)#But later it is shown how (despite being introduced as a free spirit) WWX truly wants to be bound to something and someone.#Marriage is a bind he wants. He wants to be tied and grounded by LWJ.#It's starting to sound like innuendo. Let's call his fondness for being literally tied up smart thematic writing.#Finally. Sex scenes that are important to the plot and characters
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what is up with me and fictional guys who are generally well liked in universe, no matter how much of a red flag they actually are, with their goddamn tits and flamboyance
#first leander and now oleander#instantly went i need this man so badly when i finally got around to his routes#they have such different flavors tho#like with leander i'd want to give in because of that sense of extreme relief he provides the mc was just written SO WELL UGHHH#and with oleander it's so very much a game and it's so very fun and that mc seems to have their head screwed on a lil more tightly#absolutely no offense ofc i adore both of these vn's a lot#and i find the name similarity somewhat amusing#anyway. :3#obscura vn#obscura oleander#touchstarved game#touchstarved leander
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Gelphie Femslash February Day 1: Shiz Era
#gelphie#gelphiefemslashfeb#elphaba thropp#galinda upland#glinda upland#wicked#wicked musical#jennifer dinoia#kara lindsay#misc scenes#damn the contrast between everyone running away from elphaba at first and then glinda becoming real touchy with her is really stark here#kinda adds a whole new layer to elphaba holding her so tightly during that little hug#i'm fine.#screams and cries and throws up#there is a touch starved elphaba fic waiting to be written lana i hope you're reading this
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I'm still just.... So normal about his page.
Ford trusted Bill enough that he consentually rewired his brain and allowed Bill to mess with his cognitive functions.
Also- the only reason Stanley even got pulled into this is because Bill threatened Ford with this later!!! Like- I genuinely do not think that Ford understood the connotations of what he was allowing Bill to be able to do until this moment:
The only reason Ford ended up reaching out to Stanley and subsequently falling through the portal after their argument is because Bill scared him so badly that he felt he had no other choice. Because he had suddenly realized just how big of a mistake he had actually made and just how much of himself he'd given over to Bill.
Bill is the one who ended up dragging the man who would end up killing him into the narrative and he had no idea for 30 years.
#im so normal about this#im so normal about how tightly written this is#im so normal about Bill manipulating Ford into giving him more power over him than he realizes#gravity falls#billford
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Do u have 90s Anime OVA reccomendations?
The Little Witch Academia OVA is my favorite thing to come out of Trigger. FLCL, obviously. I liked Gunsmith Cats a lot. Birdy the Mighty has stellar character animation and a fun body-swapping premise that avoids being creepy. If you like stories that take place in the Pacific Islands, I'd recommend this really obscure OVA, From a Distant Ocean Came Coo, about a young boy finding a baby plesiosaur. Sonic the Hedgehog OVA is a classic. I need to watch the Patlabor films. While technically not an OVA, the anthology film project Memories is absolutely stellar; Magnetic Rose is one of the best sci-fi horror flicks out there.
#i need to watch golden boy and gunbuster and angel's egg too#lots to watch#ask me#anon#i love ovas because they're not burdened by any source material#so they're often tightly directed and written miniseries or movies with a great premise#and they're always bitesized so i can sit down and finish one in a single go. i don't have to dedicate weeks working through a series
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doing a tdp rewatch and this show just is That Good like I got into fandom after S4, came in Loving S4 (uh oh), and then I spent the last 2 years hearing so many complaints about the show and how it handles things and my story analysis ass always playing defense because i see How the show is working and eventually getting worn down into like yeah idk it's got flaws I guess but I still love it
and now im like
it's perfect actually and any complaint about it is irrelevant to me. It's doing exactly what it's supposed to and doing it well. Fuck yall for making me feel like garbage about it. Especially my brother who will never read this post and didn't make it past S2 because he decided before he even watched that he wasn't going to like it.
#venting a bit and it has been years across several platforms and you know what. i dont care abt microscopic bs#and i genuinely do think its well crafted and tightly written and handles its characters themes and world perfectly
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where did we get the idea that twelve’s era is poorly written? aside from a few outliers (which are still fun episodes for the most part), his episodes stand pretty well
#doctor who#dw#dr who#12th doctor#twelfth doctor#both series 8 and series 10 are super tightly written#some people just hate fun#peter capaldi is insanely talented as the doctor#genuinely when rewatching series 8 i was like ‘i don’t understand why people said this was poorly written’#there are bad episodes *cough* kill the moon *cough* but not bad in the sense it’s full of awful writing
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think its interesting how milsiril quit the canaries out of disgust, shuros mom seemed to become a recluse (conjecture) bc of her moral character leading to her inability to stomach the going ons of the household, shuro reacting to all this by trying to interact w his retainers as little as possible and like the system keeps running without them like a meatgrinder. Like the only ppl who benefit from their choice to not participate in these systems is themselves, their own comfort, rather than their objections leading to any meaningful change for the ppl most harmed by these systems. Also interesting that these three are also high high up on the hierarchy. I think it relates to how laios left home early out of disgust on how ppl treated falin-this action did not actually seem to help her situation much and just left her alone to deal w the ostracization. And it's not until the end Laios aknowledges that falin's not the only person who gets targeted bc of her magic and resolves to become a leader to create a world where ppl like her can live safely. The systems these characters live in are unpalatable, but to not engage in it at all is irresponsible, bc they are characters born into power. It's going to be ugly, difficult work, but that is what it means to be in the cycle of life. Also ties into marcille wanting to create a safe dungeon when it is impossible . And ties into arbitrariness of when disgust is triggered and how it leads to ppl not engaging in the very important parts of life whether it is w eating, shitting, or the bad parts of society.
#dungeon meshi spoilers#very very on theme and tightly written#also side note but im pretty sure milsiril is written to be autistic. the length of her dislike list her dislike of socialization#her kinda unconventional teaching methods
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it is kinda funny to me when ppl say things in the vein of “jazz is perfect to represent rouge because of it’s chaotic nature”, cause like sure, okay, i can understand why you’d say that, but that’s the kinda thing you say when you have not listened to any jazz at all.
jazz can seem chaotic, sure, but it seems odd to me to define the whole umbrella of jazz as chaotic when you absolutely have not listened to actually chaotic sounding jazz subgenres like bebop. i just generally extremely dislike the descriptor of “chaotic” for jazz because i think it’s fundamentally untrue, there is absolutely logic and order in jazz, it’s built upon a rich tradition. jazz can be complex, frantic, energetic, and is often improvisational, but i don’t think it’s chaotic.
also i think that suits rouge far better than actual chaos, cause rouge is absolutely a complex and logical person, she just acts first and foremost on her desires
#it’s also funny to say that about rouge’s themes specifically cause while i can’t know 100%#they’re very probably super tightly written and produced#definitionally not chaotic#it just has samba influenced percussion lines it’s fine it’s okay#<- spoken like i’m calming a spooked horse#rambles#music posting#it is insane to me to say rouge’s jazz is chaotic and not say the same for shadow’s digital hardcore/electro-industrial/whatever the fuck#like between those two the jazz is absolutely not my first pick for ‘chaotic’#be real.#idk maybe i’m just getting caught up on a semantic difference but it rubs me the wrong way#i’m not trying to vague anything specific i’ve just seen this sort of thing said about a lot of jazz in non-jazz circles
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played thru slay the princess again with the pristine cut update. many thoughts. extremely many thoughts.
#i had a very confused understanding of this game on first go through - extremely affecting but#very confused and messied by my interpretations and assumptions#after 10 hours of poking around i have a much more solid (if still nascent) understanding of what this#game is doing and#holy god and shit and also fuck this is such excellent art#i finished it tonight again and had ro just get up and stim around the room for a while to try and#evacuate the overwhelming excitement of seeing such a well constructed beautifully presented tightly written#complex creative profound varied cohesive unique curious compassionate fun GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD fucking game#i need go eat my computer#some of the stuff here made me have visceral and extremely interesting reactions i now need to sit with#this is the sort of game that lives in you for ever#thank you. thank you#this is the shit i am alive for#slay the princess#mine
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Best part of this scene hands down was Max like, "We live in the most densely populated city in Thailand it is very possible someone else got him sick, Pisaeng," and Pisaeng staring him dead in the face like, "rewatch the montage jackass we have three friends and we only invite y'all over once a year so yes, it was me"
#be my favorite#max be my favorite#does he have a tag#i wish we knew his full name#pisaeng jirawarakul#it's just such a tightly written script they couldn't waste a line and i love waa for going 'that wasn't just a choice for the montage'#'they really are smitten hermits who venture outside only to get treatment for illnesses or to attend weddings'#i love you be my favorite#kawi x pisaeng
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maybe meaningless, maybe of note: know that odd bit in rogue where the duchess lost a shoe, but it never actually comes to anything - no cinderella princess/duchess-bird-identification plot element or whatever, it just happens?
you know where else someone loses a shoe?
susan right at the end of the dalek invasion of earth.
*shrugs*
maybe nothing and just generalised cinderella theme both times, or maybe they were given a ‘subtle susan reference’ quota to fill.
#not useful on its own#but if i know it you might as well#and if you’ve not read the 10k+ rogue essay#that thing seemed to be written#extremely tightly
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the nancy boy thing is just so fucking insane because like. they broke from the spelling of this name to do it but also incorporated it into the spelling of his name with n for nancy (possibly showing how he associates it with himself). but the license plate could have been any letter and that letter could have been any word and they chose b for boy. they could have cut to the license plate from any letter in dennis and they chose n for nancy. and we already know the way dennis spells out his name/words in this scene is very important metaphorically they showed us with that alternate D.E.N.N.I.S. system he gives us so.....they did that on purpose and drew attention to it
#after days of reflection (i went outside) im still a dtamhd defender but specifically for the writing#i think whether it works or not is another question but im there are so many little details and intentions and it is so fascinating to me!!#it brings out the writer nerd in me its made me push myself in my own writing#imo this episode is very tightly written when it comes to all these little details#and i dont think they would do all That with nancy boy for just no reason? it doesnt make sense from a writers pov#esp when the scene establishes the importance of dennis spelling things out#on a literal level hes trying to reach/connect to the person on the other side of the line. to be understood. and i think on an even more#internal level he's doing it to simplify + process whats happening and what he's feeling within himself#anyway still trying to have a little tumblr break but im sooo autistic about this one bit in particular
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hello!! I'm not sure what's inspiring me to send this message, but I just wanted to tell you that a friend of mine (who has no previous knowledge/interest of mass effect) has heard me talk abt your stories enough that she wants to read them. I just sent over the link to the Opus series today, and I guess I just wanted you to know that your impact has spread beyond strictly fandom. I've sent a message before abt binding Fugue into a book for my personal collection, but I really just wanted you to know that the people in my life have heard abt my passion and love for your writing. I've even gotten two of my other friends to play Mass Effect bc of it!!!
Your writing has changed my life, as well as other's, and more than anything, I just want you to know that. The heart and care you've put into your works have not gone unnoticed, and I eagerly spread my love for your skill to whoever listens <3 your voice matters, your love matters, your stories matter, and, above all, YOU matter!! thank you for bringing such a wonderful, amazing, thoughtful story to life. I literally cannot overstate this enough-- you have changed lives with the stories you've written. you have impacted people. you have inspired people. and that includes me!! I truly hope you never stop writing bc you're so incredibly talented!
thank you for everything. every minute spent writing, every line edited, every ounce of effort you've put forth into the world. it hasn't gone unnoticed or unappreciated. <3
What an INCREDIBLE message to get. I'm speechless. This is pretty much every writer's dream.
Thank you so, so, so much for taking the time to tell me this. It means more than you will ever know.
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
#swaps replies#prodoriya#i am hugging you very gently but tightly with your consent#how writing is written#opus!verse
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reading through the second gahoole book and remembering why i hated it as a kid
#so much happens in the first book and it's pretty tightly written/plotted but in this one...#70 pages in and it's just a bunch of meandering and#weird religious subtext??????????? what is this. narnia
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literally staring at the ceiling thinking abt howl’s moving castle even tho i’ve read it ONE THOUSAND TIMES
#i’ve read it once a year since like 2008#literally the greatest book ever written#the bit where sophie realizes howl knows she’s under a spell and he goes ‘there was a time when it felt like everyone was telling me’#and it’s this whole revelation that he’s been trying to help her secretly the whole time… and you’re like wow#as much as howl pretends to be an asshole he’s really kind despite his lack of heart#and through this all sophie is SO PISSED OFF even though she’s in love with him because she’s in denial and she’s jealous#but she’s kind too! she accepts howl wants angorian and is like well for him i’ll save her…#and her spell only fading when she heals howl because she knows he loves her!! and she lets the old lady magic go!!!!#after clinging to it so tightly to protect herself from pain….#oh my god#howls moving castle
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