#thats happened..... a lot....... for this chapter.........
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[Disgruntled sigh]
#spazzcat barks#delete later#there is so much unused writing in this chapter its actually driving me nuts#[loud sigh]#this happens because when i write i dont wanna delete stuff i dont like in case i can reuse it#so instead ill cut what i dont like and add it to the bottom of the document#so i can recycle it later#thats happened..... a lot....... for this chapter.........#[in case its hard to tell#the little naviagtor is 2/3 of the way down the page#which means 1/3 of the total word count right now is just the mangled bits i dont like#in chapter 47
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HII ok so would anyone believe me if i said i'm like 17 pages into my Moominvalley S4 rewrite......
yeah so! here are some fake storyboards i've come up with for a few of the episodes i have plotted out! right now, i've only got about half the episodes with a rough plot, but i've written a crap ton of analysis for each character arc, episode, and overall narrative and how they could be improved, especially since i felt really... unsatisfied with the final season? it didn't feel like a satisfying conclusion to the characters nor story as a whole (due to a lottt of problems, but i think i've rambled about them for too long lol), so i plan to rewrite that fourth season through a mix of art and writing to attempt to give this show the impactful ending it deserves :]
#my goal is to fix some of the writing issues in the show while highlighting the stuff this season does well#because there is stuff it does very well! (aunt jane and complicated family dynamics)#it just happens to have...a lot of problems with pacing and setup/payoffs and emotional tone#the ultimate goal would be to write out a full 13 chapter fanfic but. who knows when thats gonna happen lmao#in the meantime take some of my fake storyboards! i really like these two episodes i have drafted out so far#moominvalley#moominvalley season 4#moomins#moomintroll#moominmamma#snorkmaiden#snufkin#sniff moomin#little my#veves ultra cool art
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Damn, Spam, did the cake taste that bad? - bad joke. Sorry you're havin' a rough day. We're here if you need to talk, or if you just need a distraction.
#his mascara streaks lmfao sighhh#that is THE FIRST TIME of 61 ASKS he has said thank you. by the way.#yeah the 60th ask was him bawling his eyes out what about it#wooo 40 till 100#god /pos#you guys have done really well and have been really kind to him so I think its finally deserved#[you've got mail!]#spamton#spamton g spamton#deltarune#deltarune spamton#deltarune chapter 2#this is probably so bizarre to people just starting to follow ygm#like i cant imagine what its like to happen upon some of the gnarlier ones#in the 'your tags' tab LMAOO LIKE DAMN#sometimes i forget how many people follow me (not including those who dont follow my blog but follow ygm) and liikkke... yowie.. and then i#forget because i cant really comprehend that#i always forget about that to be honest im just being silly and i never realize how many people choose to stick along huh wuh#THERES LIKE 700 PEOPLE WHAT THATS SO MANY#like as a big number i cant conceptualize that in like#visually. in a crowd. so i cant really fully understand how many that is.#but thats a lot i know that much. hiiii. 700 bugs. 700 insects crawling around in here!!!#me when i ramble in the tags accidentally aha#your treat
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rough draft screenshot from page 59
good ol demise and hylia fight (changed her horn design slightly so it makes a little more sense and is easier to draw)
#ganondoodles#zelda#art#wip#i mean .. the entire story is realyl demise and hylia fight#in varying degrees and types of fight#and well#story#dw theres calm chapters too#but alot of their entire conflict is a very physical conflict#and i feel like thats also a reason why these chapters keep getting so long#...tho also bc the way i do comics is just#lots of big panels and everythign needs to be clear bc i need everyone to be able to read what is happening#.....and i like taking it slow#as in theres also alot of panels where no one talks OR fights#anyway#approaching the chapter end at last#im confident i can at least start posting the fully rendered pages this year still#..................its been taking me so long..........#still going though :D
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hey guys. i'm not the only one who hears the lyrics to this song and thinks snowgrave kris and noelle right
#deltarune#kris dreemurr#noelle holiday#kriselle#i guess. i ship them but not really in snowgrave since i feel like that goes against a point it tries to make lol#but ya i see this from kris' pov. its 'im your man' by mitski#i feel like this touches on the commentary in the subtext of snowgrave about cisheteronormativity in video games#and how in the world of deltarune which for its inhabitants is indeed real. us asserting ourselves onto another person through a person#within that world just to satisfy our loneliness. especially a cishet mans loneliness. is kinda messed up#especially when its through 'manipulation' that the girl these people go through in the game world already has trouble standing up for#herself. and with that manipulation she is convinced that shes become stronger and more assertive#yet its only caused more and more problems#if that makes sense idk#so this is kris basically apologizing to noelle for everything thats happened on a snowgrave route. to me.#blaming theirself for things going this way#also it makes me think about snowgrave in the context of future chapters and noelle being the angel#and kris possibly having to face her in battle idk lol#anyway ya that was a lot. those are my thoughts
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what did you think of the fabric of civilization? im always on the hunt for cool textile history books!!
i enjoyed it! as someone with little to no prior interest/knowledge on the subject it felt like a good & pretty exhaustive overview for a layperson, def made me appreciate the role of textiles in human history a lot more :)
#admittedly my enjoyment varied a LOT between the chapters#(the ones on thread or dye? very cool. the one on trading? had me zoning out constantly)#but thats prolly bound to happen with a subject that touches on so many disciplines and aspects of life
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A fun example of jay being a violent guy, it’s a skybound clip (hoping this link sends) https://x.com/legotim82/status/1813002886730682705?s=46&t=gUEBy-jzuRkP_f6TD5QNig Jay just went for the kill in this, he straight up forgot the sword seals them away. Makes sense why he would go for the kill in order to defend Kaida. He’s just a bit of a violent lad
I was just thinking about this topic about "Evil Jay" and the things he can do when I got this ask hjsvkh
yeaah I agreed if Kaida's life is in danger, the guy goes completely crazy, no doubt (although Kaida is much worse in that regard if Jay's life is in danger but that conversation for another day-)
Now I don't think Jay is an inherently violent person who enjoys doing those things or can do them with a cold, calculating mind, that's not Jay. He's the type of person who makes bad/violent decisions in the heat of the moment, in the middle of a fight where adrenaline and his own impusivity lead him to not really think about morals and stuff. I will always say this, but if you compare him to the rest of the team, he is the most morally questionable, that's why I don't understand when people say he's a pacifist. At least in this AU, one of his biggest problems is that he really does bad things, feels terribly guilty, justifies himself not having to think about it, and then makes those same decisions again the first chance he gets.
It's funny because I've recently seen this discourse recently about whether or not it's realistic for Jay to be a villain or do bad things. But we have already seen him in DR be deliberately negligent with the lives of the people his department relocates. And that EVEN if he didn't see the point in arresting Zane&Bonzle he was still going to do it. Idk there you have a guy with doubts and uncertainty doing bad and negligent things because he doesn't really want to reason about another alternative or why they are wrong. Obviously we won't get an "Evil megalomanic Jay" but a Jay who does those things in the name of obedience because that's how indifferent he has become.
#I think Jay is more likely to do “bad things” as long as he doesn't see the consequences of his actions#with how things work in his department#like. haha funny. cloud people in the underworld but also#prob a lot of people end up in a place they shouldn't#and that's not incompetence on Jay's part. It's simply indifference#It's just a job for him he doesn't really stop to reason what happens when his employees make a mistake#(He's not that irresponsible in this AU as a manager but that's only because as a father he doesn't want to lose his job either)#I don't know how to explain it exactly in words but sometimes I imagine him in this AU as Jesse in BB#but thats just me#dad jay au#The next chapter of LP is actually quite about this
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21 pages of my book edited!! wooo!!!
#os: entrails of the animals#im on the last draft edits before i shift to looking for a publisher#unfortunately its a lot of Big changes so its taking so much brainpower augh#mostly bc i wrote the first book with thr idea that it Could be standalone but could also be a trilogy if it got a good reception#but then i decided to just commit to it beinf a trilogy bc thats what i wanted the most#so now im fixing worldbuilding AND having to seed in all of my foreshadowing for the next two books#bc im a bitch who LIVES for as much subtle foreshadowing as i can possibly manage in a story#i think at the end of the day as much work as this is going to take#its going to be worth it ya know?#it takes this from 'the story i happen to tell first' to ' the story i WANT to tell first'#but augh all of these goddamn changes i gotta make#small enough ones that i have to comb the entire story paragraph by paragraph#instead of just redoing certain chapters#and having no energy thanks to my seizure meds#BUT BY GOD IM GETTING THIS SHIT DONE. I WILL HAVE IT PUBLISHED!!!
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A weird thing about reading ATB is definitely how relatable Tobio's "power" is as an epileptic person. Like just this description is like yeah that's exactly what its like when a seizure is coming on (and since auditory hallucinations are part of my seizures I can interpolate that from Tobio "communicating" with others)
What I kind of like about it is that sometimes Tobio will experience one of these "communications" and within seconds go back to what he was doing, basically unbothered. Which is sometimes just what seizures look like (and sometimes they don't even 'look' like anything and go completely unnoticed!) I'm sure they aren't deliberately going for epilepsy when writing this narrative but even so seeing a character experience relatively muted and unobtrusive "seizures" is kind of nice for a change
#atom the beginning#tobio tenma#I know that this is leading up to the looming horrible dread of what will happen to tobio later and is probably going to become worse#so like its probably going to become more dramatized in further chapters#but its still nice to see Tobio just go back to normal during one of these episodes while everyone around him is panicking#and hes just like im fine! :) bc thats how it usually is for me#a lot of it is people around me freaking out or getting super worried and meanwhile I am fine lol#but yeah definitely not a 1 to 1 because tobio is probably actively doing horrible damage to himself stop that child
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obsessed the ever-present but never quite articulated question that seems to permeate cat's asos chapters: would she have been a better ruler of riverrun than edmure?
#i don't know that there's an answer given to us in the text but imo cat's relationship to edmure and inheritance is sooo core to the themes-#of gender in her chapters#this is something i think ab a lot and definitely will be elaborating on#obviously thats not what happened. i dont think its a question thats meant to be answered as much as something that hangs over her character#in and outsidr of the narrative#catelyn stark#edmure tully#house tully#a storm of swords#my posts#thea reads asoiaf
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chapter 162 page 18
#beastars#melon beastars#beastars melon#melon#chapter 162#what always gets me is that she lets him do this#she lets her son kill her#like there is absolutely no doubt that she abused him#she loved his papa so much something broke in her when he left and instead of learning to cope like a normal person she...#i have sympathy for a woman who clearly needed a lot of help and in the absence of that ended up abusing her child#but thats about where it ends#she deserved to die for what she did as much as she deserved to be helped#anyway unrelated to melomama sometimes i think about what happened to him after this#like chances are they wouldve tried to find the next of kin to dump him on#but considering how hybrids are viewed by society and how isolated melomama is AND how hard he was to track down by the police#chances are he just got lost in the foster system#having a fully fledged PhD by 23/24 is fuckin INSANE btw he wouldve had to skip grades n get into college courses by 12 at the latest#which means btw on pretty much all his legal documentation hes probably JUST marked as a gazelle#lol. melon. i think about him every day
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Summary: Emmet and Ingo go to work
Had to split this into two chapters, but that simply means more fic to read
#submas#subway boss ingo#subway boss emmet#god were getting to the end now#honestly the last like 4 chapters are 80% fluff#which is deserved after everything thats happened to them#and was a lot of fun to write#i just need to actually finish the last chapter and well be good#anyways#hope you enjoy!
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I'm curious, wat are some of your gonta headcanons?
Here's three random ones for you since you didn't give a theme:
Gonta writes mainly in hiragana/katakana because he didn't go through the school system when lost (obviously) so never learnt most kanji. The kanji he does know are the most common/basic ones and also any kanji that has to do with entomology
Despite being very big and strong, Gonta is surprisingly very good with fine-detail work. He's very good with his hands and very gentle- I mean, he has to be to work with insects whether theyre alive or being pinned.
Gonta's favourite flavours of icecream are either fruit flavoured ones or vanilla. He doesn't like more bitter flavours like chocolate in general. He's also a fan of spicy food, but has a very low spice tolerance.
#pluto answers#hehe thanks for the random ask!!#I think about the kanji thing a lot#Especially with those moments in the game that imply gonta might be illiterate#(specifically when he mentions getting bored of complex fiction)#(or in chapter 2 when he says he tried to read but couldn't understand the monokuma file)#I have no proof of it obviously because I can't speak japanese#but considering how many books he has in his lab. and how one of the things you do in ftes with him is read in the library#I just think its localization weirdness#because how do you localize to english being able to read but you get stuck often on kanji you dont know#especially with the monokuma file thats what im thinking happened#anyways. sorry for rambling here GHDJSFS
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my fic: so here are 7 logistical holes you still need to write solutions for/yourself out of me: how about i add 100 more words to the internal monologue of yaz losing her mind instead
#i will never be a good writer bc i really just Do Not Care#whomst the fuck cares about the logistics#well the reader sometimes#its the scaffolding to make them able to care about the emotions#however as this is fanfic#whomst cares. not me#damn only 24k i realy thought i must be at 30 by now#okay what do i still need to fix#..........okay a lot. a lot do i need to fix#also have one (1) chapter title#wasnt gonna do chapter titles but then i came up with one so now maybe i have to come up with 8 others#or just do one chapter title#we'll see#whichever happens first; coming up with 8 more titles or finishing this fic#time to Focus#<- thats a what do they call it affirmation??#or maybe a magic spell
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Getting out of a writing slump feels quite similar to rising from your coffin like a vampire. Which I am btw
#sophie speaks#wrote almost 500 words for www today which isnt a lot but im proud of myself#i just needa like. hack my brain or whatever i can do it#tbf next chapter is not coming for a while because april beat me up very bad#i was sick for the entire month and i had other stuff happen that exhausted me completely ut was horrendous#so next chapter has only 2k of it written and its all the easy parts#i like. gotta come to terms with my own disability being... disabling#like yeah man it does that#but i wrote 800 words today in total and hones thats more than i couldve hoped for#and we be staying optimistic!!
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preparing for afternoon classes.... check out my short king
#look i know lysandre is just fucking tall in general BUT STEVEN LOOKS SO FUNNY IN COMPARISON TO HIM HES SO 🤏🤏🤏🤏🤏#HE'S EVEN SHORTER THAN ALAIN BUT THAT'S PROBABLY BECAUSE OF HIS DEWDROP SHAPED HAIR#I FEEL LIKE I TALKED WBT THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOTTTTT#STILL. HEHEE SHORT KING#im genuinely so excited to meet him in xyz iirc? im making good progress watching xy#aside from that episode where jessie crushes on him since thats his first xy debut i think#but i mean excited to see steven just. APPEAR there and talk n shit and EHEHEHEHEE#remember that gif i shared where he was just throwing a PokeBall... i never saw that scene before and i went crazy#theres a lot thats gonna happen in the end and HES gonna be there EEEEEEEE SO EXCITED#i think I'm already reaching the xyz chapters#steven stone.rom
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