#dw theres calm chapters too
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good ol demise and hylia fight (changed her horn design slightly so it makes a little more sense and is easier to draw)
#ganondoodles#zelda#art#wip#i mean .. the entire story is realyl demise and hylia fight#in varying degrees and types of fight#and well#story#dw theres calm chapters too#but alot of their entire conflict is a very physical conflict#and i feel like thats also a reason why these chapters keep getting so long#...tho also bc the way i do comics is just#lots of big panels and everythign needs to be clear bc i need everyone to be able to read what is happening#.....and i like taking it slow#as in theres also alot of panels where no one talks OR fights#anyway#approaching the chapter end at last#im confident i can at least start posting the fully rendered pages this year still#..................its been taking me so long..........#still going though :D
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A potential rewrite of âBeauty and the Feastsâ
@pumpkinpaperweight mentioned this in her âNo Nuance Novemberâ hot takes post and it reminded me of how Iâve completely rewritten this in my head.Â
 Now, I feel that I have to say that I liked the IDEA of this chapter. That it was supposed to be a calm chapter amid the what the fuckness that was QFG. A pause in the ever confusing narrative to allow both the readers and characters to catch up on whatâs happened so far if you will. However, I hate the execution of it. So much in fact that I have completely forgotten what happens in canon so heres an outline of what Iâve decided happens in my head instead :D
Ok I haTED how Lancelot has just died (in a pretty traumatic way too) and the gangs just kinda move on and forget about him except for that split second scene w. Guinevere - it's a total disservice to his character and the bond he was beginning to build back up with Tedros
SO how bout instead both Lancelot and tedros survive the attack by the snakeÂ
That way we get a scene of happy reunions - Agatha with tedros & Lancelot (of whom she presumably hasnât seen since the coronation as well) -and so we have a genuinely happy(ish) scene that isnât punctured by tedros losing another parental figure yet again
Theyâre all in a good mood and want to celebrate etc
Lancelot and Tedros have this moment where theyâre talking about their last fight with the snakeÂ
Lancelot says all this stuff about how proud of Tedros he is (but in his own special, unique Lancelot way which means he never uses those exact words)
Agatha and Lancelot reunion!!! He says how he's missed the lass and makes some kind of joke about tedros being an ass about how he ignored her those 6 months - they laugh. tedros doesn't. He gives her one of his giant bear hugs (lancelot would give great hugs prove me wrong)Â
Rhian comes up to Lancelot being all âyouâre my hero đ© â âilysmâ etc etc
being the the only character with a braincell Lance just kinda stares at him like âuhhh⊠aight thanks manâ - hes a little sus of this weird lil red head but will obviously take the compliment because he deserves it
Lance is then all like âahh you kids should celebrate this winâ or some other bullshit like that and they do
 but before everyone dissolves to get ready tedros and lance share one final moment where they share astrong handshake and lock eyes then hug because fuck it, why not? It would be a quick hug but I want them to hug in their final moment together dammit
Agatha wears that red dress soman wrote in and tedros wears a crisp black shirt with a chest slit ;) - (idk exactly what he wore during this scene but I do remember thinking that it was horribly ugly and that MY tedros would never wear that so here, have this very basic description of mens wear)
Instead of going to beauty and the feasts they go to Maid Marions arrow (because I say so and for reasons I canât really explain I just hate that gd restaurant) -Â (it also just seems like the inside of Somans mind and I think that is a very scary place to be rn)
Anyway, theyâre all having a hullabaloo of a time - everyones drinking and celebrating - ofc Lancelot, robin hood and his merry men are all there tooÂ
At one point tedros convinces agatha to dance - she begrudgingly agrees - itâs an unconventional dance with a lot of fast spins and movements - theyâre both laughing, she tells him to slow down. he does not. they continue :)
Meanwhile Sophie still offers Rhian to take her on a date they also go to Maid Marions arrow as well because again I say so - they have their date, sophie is smitten, rhians plan is workingÂ
I also hate the idea of dot being drugged (poor babe didnât deserve that) and so instead they gave lance the keys to the cell seeing as heâs the only reliable adut in a 50mile radiusÂ
Instead Dot is dancing with beatrix, reena and some other evergirls while Hestadil are still having their cute marshmallow moment together outsideÂ
tagatha are still having a great time on their first (???) date - they decide to go back to their private treehouse a bit earlier than everyone else and ill just leave what happens after that to you shall I? ;)
ANYWAYS as theyâre leaving robin notes how much they remind him of Arthur and that hot lady who hung out together that night before Arthurs weddingÂ
Lance is just like â????? tfâ because it couldnât have been Gwen given they were probably together that night - but robin fucks off before he could press him on it any further so lance just kinda leaves it for the morningâŠÂ
He also notices Rhian briefly leave and since he already found the lad to be a bit sus before, he follows him to overhear Rhian speaking to Kei about the plans and is just like SHITE and goes to tell the rest of the gang that Rhian is weird as fuckÂ
BUT then the snake appears⊠and lance, kei and snake boy disaper into the forest while rhian heads back to the bar to keep up his facade (i know this bit doesnât really make sense because how the fuck is the snake there without the key that lance is yet to give them⊠idk man just humour me ok)
Everyone has a great rest of night and just assume lance went to bed early since hes old⊠but instead they wake to find Lancelot dead - his throat slashed, blood everywhere and heâs pinned against a tree and its just not a pretty sightÂ
The snake has written a message on his chest in blood saying âyour faultâ - obvioulsy for our good olâ friend teddyÂ
Meanwhile, Tagatha is just sleeping in bed, when theres a knock - its the coven trying to break the news of Lancelots deathÂ
Tedros freaks the fuck out and runs to cradle Lancelotâs dead body - Agatha's right behind him and ready to cradle tedros while he cries his heart out with everyone standing around watchingÂ
They have a funeral (idk why but I just picture a Viking type one with them sending him off on the lake at sunset - its all very aesthetic dw)Â
after that, everyone starts to leave to get shit ready for the journey to Camelot but tedros is left just still sitting there with Agatha for a lil bit longerÂ
They then very slowly get up and make their way for the boat to head back to Camelot
#sge#The School for Good and Evil#school for good and evil#my posts#my aus#sir lancelot#rewrite#was this a mistae?#idk#i only edited the bits where I said daddy lance#itâs like nearly midnight so#I take 0 responsibility for everything I have said#enjoy this brain explosion of words :D#I just believe in lance supremacy ok
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