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decided to redraw and improve this silly thing i did two years ago
here's the two compared like damn the colors on the first what was that đ

#my style has drastically changed specially in the past year so it's nice to see such a big difference and sctually feel proud of myself#i can't stop drawing them this is becoming a problem#wenclair fanart#im also doing some prompts for wenclairtober but i'll probably do another post for those once i have a few more#i'll be posting them on tw tho!#they're mostly just going to be b&w sketches i really don't have time for more#wenclair#enid sinclair#wednesday addams#wednesday x enid#wednesday netflix#evgarart
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Tim swears Phantom couldâve been a Titan. Maybe he should be, at this point. They have enough in common to justify it.
âJeez,â Phantom groans. Abruptly, he drops the levitation and hits the roof without sound. He stretches out on his back like a cat, sore muscles straining in a way Red Robin deeply relates to. âFighting the living sucks. At least with ghosts I can swing as hard as I need. Already dead means they get back up! But mortals? Way too squishy.â
Red Robin huffs in agreement. âYeah,â he says. After a momentâs consideration, he lies down, too.âItâs a hundred times harder than people realize. Batmanâs always going on about perfect control in training. About how to have it, you gotta be twice as skilled as the other guy. Even without your super-strength, I worry sometimes.â
âHow do you do it?â Phantom asks. In a move only achievable to those without bones, or perhaps Dick Grayson, he twists himself over. Gloved hands cup his cheeks. His legs kick back and forth, like theyâre gossiping at a slumber party. âI mean. You said you train, so obviously thereâs the physical âhow.â But how do you keep your emotions nonlethal? How do you keep yourself in check, make sure youâre pulling back?â
âI mean,â says Red Robin. âMurder is illegal, so.â
Phantom sighs. âYeah. Maybe itâs easier for you.â
⌠Hm. Maybe Red Robin should redo Phantomâs risk assessment.
Before he can raise too high an eyebrow (though even moving that muscle smarts, ow), Phantom elaborates.
âEcto-based entities have trouble with their emotions,â he explains. âItâs easy to get lost in an Obsession, or a big feeling like grief. The rest of the world⌠it bleeds away. Helps to have another emotional anchor to keep it at bay. I use fear.â
âFear?â Red Robin glanced over.
âSometimes sheer stubbornness,â Phantom admits. âBut a lot of it is fear.â
With a considering frown, he drops his head atop his arms. Exhaustion, regret, reluctance play out on his face. For someone the Bats know next to nothing about, Phantomâs body language is an open book.
âI saw, like, an alternate future version of myself once where I become evil and try to take over the world? So now I gotta be good to keep that from happening. The fear of that future keeps the pressure on me. Makes me focus up. Yâknow?â
Tim sits up. âSeriously?â
Phantom nods. âUh-huh. Kinda bizarre, I knowââ
âWhat the hell,â says Tim. Three consecutive days together and a concussion must loosen his lips, because holy shit, no way. âDude! Me too!â
âHuh? Seriously?â says Phantom.
âYeah! I totally saw myself turn evil. Like, Batman but with guns. Guns Batman. I had to fight him and everything. He tried to kill my friends and erase my memory to make sure I couldnât un-invent him by going back to change the past?â
âOh my god.â
âWhat?â
âOh my god, me too!â
happy wips wednesday!
#they get on like a house on fire after this convo#danny totally gets to meet the titans#do you guys ever think about titans tomorrow#dcxdp#dpxdc#kipwrite#kipsnip#danny fenton#tim drake#prompt#dead tired ship#<- âup to interpretation really#honestly not much of a wip tho this was just a warm up#but warm up wednesday doesnt sound as good
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Creating Fear in Your Characters: A Writers Guide
Creating authentic emotions is vital for immersive storytelling, which is why I decided to make this series on how to write different emotions. After exploring rage, and sadness it's now time to delve into fear!
Fear is a powerful emotion that can manifest in various ways, from subtle apprehension to paralyzing terror. Here's a guide on how to write fear effectively, covering different aspects of your characters' behavior and reactions.
Facial Expressions
Fear often manifests first in facial expressions, conveying the initial shock or unease. Describe these expressions to immerse readers in your character's emotional state:
Widened Eyes and Dilated Pupils: Show the eyes widening in response to a sudden threat, with dilated pupils indicating heightened alertness.
Tense Jaw and Clenched Teeth: Mention the clenching of jaw muscles or teeth, signaling internalized stress or anxiety.
Furrowed Brow and Raised Eyebrows: Describe the furrowing of the forehead and raised eyebrows, revealing worry or confusion.
Quivering Lips or Lip Biting: Note subtle lip movements like quivering or biting, reflecting nervousness or fear.
Frozen or Stiff Facial Muscles: Highlight moments of fear-induced immobility, where facial muscles become tense and rigid.
Body Language and Gestures
Fear can also be expressed through body language and gestures, showcasing your character's instinctual responses to danger or threat:
Backing Away or Recoiling: Describe your character instinctively moving backward or recoiling from the source of fear, signaling a desire to retreat.
Raised Shoulders and Tensed Posture: Show how fear causes the shoulders to rise and the body to tense up, indicating readiness for fight or flight.
Trembling Hands or Shaking Limbs: Mention the trembling of hands or shaking of limbs, reflecting nervousness or anxiety.
Covering Vulnerable Areas: Describe your character instinctively covering vulnerable areas like their neck or torso, symbolizing a protective gesture.
Fidgeting or Restlessness: Note any fidgeting or restlessness, such as tapping feet or wringing hands, as signs of inner turmoil and fear.
Vocal Cues and Dialogue
Fear can alter vocal cues and dialogue, affecting how your character speaks and communicates their emotions:
Quavering Voice or Shaky Speech: Describe the voice quivering or becoming shaky, indicating nervousness or fear.
Rapid Breathing and Gasping: Mention rapid breathing or gasping for air, showcasing the physical impact of fear on the respiratory system.
Stammering or Hesitant Speech: Note any stammering or hesitant speech patterns, reflecting the character's struggle to articulate their thoughts coherently.
Sudden Silence or Lack of Verbal Response: Show moments of sudden silence or the inability to respond verbally, highlighting the overwhelming nature of fear.
Repetitive Phrases or Vocalizations: Describe repetitive phrases or vocalizations, such as muttering prayers or chanting reassurances, as coping mechanisms in fearful situations.
Reactions and Physical Responses
Fear triggers various physical responses in your characters, showcasing the body's instinctual reactions to perceived threats:
Increased Heart Rate and Sweating: Mention the character's heart rate increasing and sweating profusely, reflecting heightened physiological arousal.
Dilated Pupils and Heightened Senses: Describe dilated pupils and heightened sensory perception, as the character's senses become more attuned to potential dangers.
Muscle Tension and Rigidity: Note muscle tension and rigidity, as the body prepares for action or defense in response to fear.
Nausea or Stomach Churning: Show how fear can lead to feelings of nausea or stomach churning, as the body's stress response impacts digestive functions.
Fight, Flight, or Freeze Response: Highlight the character's instinctual response to fear, whether it's a readiness to fight, a desire to flee, or a state of frozen immobility.
Types of Fear and Emotional Depth
Different types of fear can evoke varying emotional responses in your characters, adding depth to their portrayal and the narrative:
Startle Fear: Describe the sudden, reflexive fear triggered by unexpected events or loud noises, leading to a quick, intense reaction.
Apprehensive Fear: Show the lingering sense of unease or dread that accompanies anticipated threats or impending danger, heightening tension over time.
Terror: Depict the overwhelming, paralyzing fear that arises from extreme danger or horrifying experiences, impacting the character's ability to think or act rationally.
Phobias: Explore specific phobias that trigger irrational and intense fear responses, shaping how your character navigates their environment and interactions.
Trauma-Induced Fear: Address fear resulting from past traumas or experiences, influencing the character's behavior and emotional resilience in present situations.
Verbs and Adjectives for Writing Fear
Here's a list of verbs and adjectives to help you convey fear effectively in your writing:
Verbs: tremble, cower, gasp, quiver, shrink, freeze, recoil, sweat, pant, gulp, shudder
Adjectives: terrified, anxious, alarmed, horrified, shaken, jittery, panicked, petrified
#quillology with haya#hayatheauthor#haya's book blog#haya blogs#writers on tumblr#writer community#writing fear#writer tools#scary stories#writer blog#writer stuff#writer wednesday#writer tips#creative writing#writing emotion#writers of tumblr#writerscommunity#writeblr#writing community#writer spotlight#writer things#writing prompt#writing tools#writing stuff#writing#writing life#writing inspo#writing help#writing advice
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day 2: please be gentle âĄ
(femslashfeb prompt list)
#minifemslashfeb2024#ace attorney#trujinxie#trucy wright#jinxie tenma#WEIRD GIRL NOT-WEDNESDAY!!#they're sooo wacky and goofy. please interact more#ok why did I say 'evil prompts' and I'm still drawing fluff#I am so squishy and weak and I love happiness and joy#I'LL DO SOME EVIL ONES LATER THIS MONTH#I loove jinxie I loove trucy this is just self-indulgent for me#I know you trujinxie enjoyers are out there though!! rise up!!#OH BTW THERE'S SOME MORE STUFF IN THE TAG NOW#PLEASE CHECK OUT MINIFEMSLASHFEB2024#WE GOT SOMEEEE SAPPHICS EVERYBODY
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ITS DINLUKE WEEK!!1!
This an old au idea I had with my friend keylime about Luke and Leia going to â¨political parties⨠to gain alliesďżź for the New Republic! Of course dinluke shenanigans occur, we canât have politics and daddy issues the WHOLE time đâ
June 11th prompt: The Senate Deals with DinLuke Shenanigans (@dinlukeweek)
#I KNOW ITS WEDNESDAY IM SORRY#Sorry Iâm so late I literally lost track of time đ#Iâve been doing physics for 2 weeks straight!!!#Iâll get the other prompts done I prommy#I might just be a few days behind đ#gah! pls forgive!#dinluke week 2023#dinluke#art#fanart#digital art#fan art#star wars#din dijarn#Luke Skywalker#Leia Organa#sw#star wars fanart#dinluke au
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@haguenauisforlovers: Day 1 -> Prompt: Unspoken
JOE LIEBGOTT and DAVID WEBSTER EP 9 The Last Patrol | Band of Brothers
#switch up so insane even ramirez was speechless#happy webgott valentine's week and webgott wednesday to all who will celebrate <3#the color prompts were really killing me bc damn i need bright colors BUT I REALLY DID TRY TO DO RUST IN THERE I PROMMY#haguenauisforlovers#webgottvday#band of brothers#joe liebgott#david webster#hbo war#webgott
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On Wednesdays, they wear pink.
@summer-of-bad-batch's Post Credit Prompt: Pink
#the bad batch#post credits prompts#summerofbadbatch2024#tbb wrecker#tbb tech#tbb crosshair#pink#on wednesdays we wear pink#star wars#digital art#october 2024#clone#not to scale#pink armor#i like this#crosshair has gold shoes because he's *extra*#sw art#sw tbb
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Wedding Bell Wednesdays! Send "đ" if your muse would marry mine!
If you can't see the emoji, send "BELLS!"
#inbox meme#roleplay meme#ask meme#rp inbox meme#ask prompt#askbox meme#rp prompt#roleplay prompts#roleplay memes#character meme#character prompt#icebreaker meme#wedding meme#wedding prompt#romance meme#romance prompt#tumblr rp#tumblr roleplay#askbox games#ask box#catchameme prompts#emoji prompt#emoji meme#wednesday meme#askbox prompt#inbox prompt#inbox#inbox call#rp inbox prompts#inbox memes
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Favorite AU
Enid: Hi, Iâm Enid! Enid Sinclair! Whatâs your name?
Wednesday: âŚ
Enid: *unfazed* Do you like playing hide n seek? Itâs my favorite game. Except, I donât like playing it with my brothers, cause they get really rough playing it and theyâre all lots bigger than me.
Wednesday: âŚ
Enid: *still unfazed* You look like youâre fun to play hide n seek with! Here, Iâll count first since youâre shy. *covers her eyes* One! Two! ThreeâŚ
Wednesday: ⌠*walks off and hides*
*Two Minutes Later*
Enid: I FOUND YOU!
Wednesday: *scowling* Howâd you find me? My hiding spot was perfect.
Enid: *gasps* You CAN talk! Your voice sounds so pretty!
Wednesday: *scowling, but blushing* You didnât answer my question.
Enid: *giggles* Iâm a werewolf, silly! I sniffed you out!
Wednesday: ⌠Intriguing⌠itâs my turn now. You hide.
Enid: OKAY! MAKE SURE TO COUNT TO TWENTY!
The girls continue to play hide n seek for hours, neither getting bored as they both find better and better hiding spots. Wednesday, for the very first time in her young life, finds fun and excitement in something other than the pain of others. Enidâs happy and excited to find someone who actually wants to be her friend and isnât scared off when learning sheâs a werewolf.
(Day 7, Prompt 7 of Wenclair-Tober. WENCLAIR CHILDHOOD AU!! I can never get enough of this AU, itâs so sweet and adorable. This is also set before Neroâs death btw, so Wednesday isnât closed off to her emotions at this point. I might make a bonus to this one, I just love it so much!)
#wenclairtober#wenclair#wednesday x enid#wednesday addams#enid sinclair#enid x wednesday#wenclair prompts#writing prompts#october writing challenge#wednesday netflix#wednesday series#my writing
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Hearts will dream again Lungs will breathe in Wash away the sins It's where it begins Feet won't fail you now Arms won't let you down Wash away the sins It's where it begins
#wincest wednesday#fulfilling the prompt for the server i'm in#but its thursday#Under The Water by AURORA#samdean#wincest#sketch#the epic love story of sam and dean#supernatural#supernatural fanart#đ
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Dp x Addams Family
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Danny is a young ghost. Even after time had passed and he, along with his friends, were adults, he was still a young ghost. Halfa, really. By all formal accounts, he is to be crowned king of the infinite realms. When he's older, at least. By then, everyone would have passed and moved onto the realms anyway.
Instead, he is tasked with aiding various beings and denizens get to where they need to be. Move on, most of the time. When he is old enough, he will be crowned king, and the original beings holding the job he's tasked with will come back to work.
Danny: Better than doing Clockworks job so he can have a vacation, I guess.
âââ
This is where the Addams Family comes in. You see, he'd been alerted of a spirit he needed to help.
Danny: Why are the ghosts in this area complaining about a 'terrifying new but not new gho-'
Sam and Tucker: Just do your job, Danny, we have a game night scheduled, remember?
The whole thing was strange. The ghost, an Addams apparently, had simply been bored. Bored. So, here he was, escorting them back to their dimension so they could get back to their grave. Though, the stories were interesting. Opening a portal, he listens to them cackle before diving back into their grave. Shrugging, he turns to leave.
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It had been a wonderful night. Dark, stormy, and even a slightly ominous, foreboding feeling throughout the day. The couple, Morticia and Gomez Addams, had been taking a night walk at the family graveyard. Of course, when the air shifted, they paused.
Watching in curiosity as the temperature dropped. A rip in time and space appeared, as if something was clawing its way out of between the seams of reality. A boy with hair white as fresh snow not yet tainted by blood, eyes glowing an eerie green that made you feel as if you were being pulled into a realm unknown appeared. Of course, their attention was taken by another being appearing behind the boy.... Ah. It seems one of their cousin was out and about. Their cousin cackles, and oh, isn't that a familiar haunting sound. They witness them dive back into their grave as their cackles fade.
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Danny, about to turn and leave, pauses. Sensing a living (At least it feels like it, geeze, is this what other ghosts feel about him and other halflas?) Being he turns. Blank faced as he looked at the two humans (?) That definitely witnessed him guiding their (probably) family member back to their grave.
"..."
"..."
"They got bored."
Was all he said before he went back into the realms. Portal disappearing after him. He doesn't think much of the encounter. Leaving to have a game night with his friends.
Only, it's not the only encounter. Turns out, he meets an Addams quite a bit as time passing. Alive (debatable, but he won't question it) and Dead. Before he knows it, he's been integrated into the kooky little family. It probably doesn't help he brought Jazz to meet them once, and she ended up tormenting a few people with the Addams. (On accident, they swear!)
Either way, when he gets summoned by the family, all he does is sleepily blink as Grandmama Addams drags him into the kitchen to try recipes she's been trying out with ectoplasm. He was tired after a particularly long shift, so the observants could screw off if they didn't like him taking a small break. Besides, he can't let this food go to waste!
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#the addams family#grandmama addams#morticia addams#gomez addams#wednesday addams#pugsley addams#uncle fester#dp#danny phantom prompt#danny phantom#dp x addams family#dpxaddamsfamily#dpxaddams family#jazz fenton#the addams family shenanigans#ghost king danny#soon to be ghost king danny#danny is too tired for this#ghost addams shenanigans#jazz and the varius addams ghosts swear they didn't mean to commit arson on government property#on purpose#probably#maybe#okay it was on purpose#but can you blame them?#no#no you cannot
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Weems: For our new anti-terror-safety class, you will defuse a fake bomb as a partner exercise. You have to be in sync on this.
Wednesday: Why would anyone want to defuse a bomb?
Enid: Focus, Wednesday. I think I got this. On the count of three, we will each cut our grey wires. One, two-
Wednesday: Wait, wait, wait. Grey wire? I only have green, red and yellow.
Enid: Thatâs weird. I have light grey, medium grey and dark grey.
Wednesday: Enid, are you colour blind?
Enid: Oh, yeah. I forgot about that.
Wednesday: Is that the reason you are dressed like that?
Enid: What do you mean? We are dressed the same.
Wednesday: Enid, my dear, my heart, my soul, my love. Donât you ever say such a mean thing to me ever again. That was totally uncalled for.
#why is it an anti terror safety class you ask?#bc i needed it for the prompt and iâm tired#i canât think of anything else#besides#isnât this the american way of education anyway?#wednesday#wednesday addams#enid sinclair#wenclair#wednesday netflix#wednesday series#wednesday 2022#wednesday x enid#enid x wednesday#incorrect wenclair
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You two have the most unhealthy, tangled-up, crazy thing Iâve ever seen.
for @wincestwednesdays week three: reputation
#spnedit#samdeanedit#supernatural#wincest#wincest wednesday#there ain't no me if there ain't no you#*#ok so i had to scrap the original set i made for this prompt but#im glad tbh because i like this more lol#*fav#you and me
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The Writer's Guide to Authentic Wounds and Fatalities
Writing fatal injuries in a story requires a delicate balance between realism and narrative impact. The portrayal of these life-altering events can evoke strong emotions in readers and shape the trajectory of your characters' journeys. In this blog, I will explore the intricacies of depicting fatal injuries in a manner that feels authentic, engaging, and respectful to the gravity of such circumstances. By understanding the nuances of fatal injuries, you will be equipped to craft compelling narratives that resonate with your readers.
Writing Fatal Injuries
When it comes to writing fatal injuries, it is crucial to approach the subject with care and accuracy. Fatal injuries carry immense consequences for your characters and can shape the trajectory of your story. By delving into the intricacies of portraying fatal injuries authentically, you can ensure that the gravity and impact of such events are effectively conveyed to your readers.
Choosing the right injuries for your story
Selecting the appropriate fatal injuries for your narrative involves considering various factors. Ask yourself: What purpose does this injury serve within the story? How does it affect the characters and the overall plot? Conduct thorough research to identify injuries that align with your story's context and resonate with the emotional journey of your characters.
For example, in a historical drama, you may research common fatal injuries during a particular era, such as battlefield injuries, diseases, or accidents prevalent at the time. In a crime thriller, you might explore the portrayal of fatal gunshot wounds or traumatic injuries resulting from violent encounters. By aligning the injuries with the context and themes of your story, you create a more immersive and believable experience for your readers.
Researching the mechanics of fatal injuries
To portray fatal injuries convincingly, it is essential to delve into the mechanics behind them. Understand the specific anatomical structures and systems involved, as well as the forces or mechanisms that can lead to fatal outcomes. Explore medical resources, consult experts if possible, and gather insights into the physiological and psychological implications of such injuries.
For instance, if your character suffers a fatal stab wound, research the anatomy involved, the potential organs affected, and the potential consequences such as internal bleeding or organ failure. By understanding the specific details and implications of the injury, you can describe the physical and emotional toll it takes on the character with greater accuracy and depth.
Depicting the immediate aftermath
When writing about fatal injuries, vividly describe the immediate aftermath to capture the intense emotions and physical realities. Consider the sensory details, the shock and disbelief experienced by characters, and the chaotic environment that often surrounds such events. Balancing realism with the needs of your story, create a scene that immerses readers and evokes empathy.
For example, if a character experiences a fatal car accident, you can depict the chaos at the scene, the character's disorientation, and the reactions of witnesses. Emphasize the sensory details such as the sound of screeching tires or the smell of burning rubber, creating a visceral experience for your readers.
Emotional and dramatic impact on the narrative
The impact of fatal injuries extends beyond the immediate moment. Explore the ripple effects on other characters, relationships, and the overall plot. Delve into the emotional responses, grief, guilt, anger, or determination that arises in the aftermath of loss. Utilize these emotional arcs to deepen character development and drive the narrative forward.
For instance, the loss of a loved one due to a fatal illness might lead to grief and strained relationships among the remaining family members. The emotional journey of a character grappling with guilt and seeking redemption after causing a fatal accident can become a central theme in your story. By delving into these emotional arcs and their consequences, you add depth and resonance to your narrative.
Writing Minor Injuries
While fatal injuries may capture our attention with their dramatic impact, it is equally important to pay attention to the portrayal of minor injuries in your writing. Minor injuries, though less severe, can still significantly affect your characters and contribute to the authenticity of your story. In this section, we will explore the art of depicting minor injuries, ensuring that they are not overlooked or trivialized. By delving into the nuances of minor injuries, you can add depth and realism to your characters' experiences.
Types of minor injuries to consider
When crafting your story, it is essential to consider a range of minor injuries that can occur. These injuries can include cuts, bruises, sprains, minor burns, or even minor fractures. Each type of injury carries its own unique characteristics, associated pain levels, and recovery processes. By understanding these distinctions, you can create accurate and believable depictions that resonate with your readers.
For example, a character who sustains a cut on their hand may experience sharp pain, the sight of blood, and the need for immediate first aid. On the other hand, a character with a sprained ankle may struggle with mobility, experience swelling, and require rest and care for a few days. By paying attention to these specific details, you can enhance the realism of your storytelling.
Conveying pain and discomfort
When writing about minor injuries, it is important to effectively convey the pain and discomfort experienced by your characters. Consider describing the sensation of pain, the throbbing or stinging feeling, and how it affects their daily activities or interactions. Showcasing the emotional impact of pain, such as frustration, irritation, or vulnerability, can deepen the readers' connection to the character's experience.
For instance, if a character suffers from a sprained wrist, you can describe the dull ache that persists, making simple tasks like typing or holding objects challenging. By capturing these small but significant moments, you immerse readers in the character's struggle and create a more realistic portrayal.
Balancing realism with narrative pace
While it is important to depict minor injuries realistically, it is also crucial to strike a balance with the overall pace and momentum of your story. Consider the significance of the injury within the larger context of your narrative. Some injuries may require more detailed attention and impact the plot, while others may serve as background elements. Adjust the level of detail and focus accordingly, ensuring that the portrayal of minor injuries aligns with the narrative's flow.
For example, a small cut on a character's finger may not require an extensive description unless it becomes infected or triggers an unexpected consequence. By aligning the portrayal of minor injuries with their narrative relevance, you maintain a consistent pace while still acknowledging their impact on your characters' lives.
Writing Bloodshed And Realistic Blood Loss
When writing about wounds and injuries, it is essential to consider the amount of blood loss your characters may experience. Realistic portrayal of bloodshed can enhance the authenticity of your scenes and immerse readers in the gravity of the situation. In this section, we will explore the factors influencing blood loss and techniques for accurately depicting it in your writing.
Understanding blood loss and its impact on the body
To authentically portray blood loss, it's crucial to have a basic understanding of how the human body responds to injury. Research the circulatory system and the role of blood in transporting oxygen and nutrients throughout the body. Consider the different types of blood vessels and their potential for bleeding when injured. This knowledge will help you create realistic scenarios and determine the appropriate level of blood loss for specific injuries.
Factors influencing blood loss in different injury scenarios
The amount of blood loss can vary depending on the severity and location of the injury. Factors such as the size of blood vessels, the rate of bleeding, and the body's ability to clot play a significant role. For example, a deep laceration in an artery will result in more substantial blood loss compared to a superficial cut on the skin. Consider these factors when describing injuries and their resulting bloodshed.
Techniques for accurately portraying blood loss in writing
There are several techniques you can use to convey the realistic impact of blood loss in your writing. Describing the color, consistency, and flow of blood can provide vivid imagery. You can also include physical symptoms such as dizziness, weakness, or fainting that may accompany significant blood loss. Additionally, consider the emotional response of your characters and how they react to the sight of blood or their own injuries.
By incorporating these techniques, you can create scenes that evoke a visceral response in readers and enhance the authenticity of your writing.
Bruises: Colors, Progression, and Pain
Bruises are a common result of injuries, and understanding how they form, change in color, and cause discomfort can greatly enhance the realism of your writing. By accurately describing bruises, you can bring depth to your characters' injuries and portray their healing process convincingly.
Understanding the stages and colors of bruises
Bruises go through distinct stages of color as they heal. Initially, they may appear red or purple due to the broken blood vessels beneath the skin. Over time, the color changes to blue, green, yellow, and eventually fades to a brown or yellowish hue. Understanding this color progression can help you accurately describe the age of a bruise and the healing process.
For example, a fresh bruise might be vivid purple, indicating recent trauma, while a fading bruise may have a yellowish tinge, suggesting that healing has begun. By incorporating these color details, you can add realism to your characters' injuries and track the passage of time within your narrative.
Depicting the progression of bruises over time
As bruises heal, they often change in appearance and size. Initially, a bruise may be small and localized, but it can gradually spread and become more extensive. Describing this progression can provide a sense of the healing process and the passage of time within your story.
For instance, a character who sustains a significant blow to the face may develop a bruise that starts as a small spot near the eye but expands to cover a larger area over the next few days. By accurately portraying the progression of bruises, you enhance the authenticity of your characters' injuries and their recovery.
Conveying the pain and sensitivity associated with bruises
Bruises can be painful, sensitive to touch, and affect a character's movement and daily activities. Describing the pain and discomfort experienced by your characters can create empathy and immerse readers in their physical ordeals.
Consider conveying the tenderness of a bruise when pressure is applied, the throbbing sensation, or the limitation of movement due to the pain.
Remember The Side Effects
Injuries, whether minor or severe, often come with a range of side effects that can significantly impact your characters' lives. These side effects can extend beyond the physical realm and encompass emotional, psychological, and social aspects.
Physical side effects
Injuries can have profound physical side effects that go beyond the immediate pain and discomfort. Consider the potential consequences such as limited mobility, impaired coordination, chronic pain, or the need for assistive devices like crutches or braces. Describing these physical side effects can add depth to your characters' struggles and provide a realistic portrayal of their healing journey.
For example, a character who sustains a leg injury may experience difficulty walking, require physical therapy, or have long-term complications that affect their day-to-day activities. By addressing these physical side effects, you create a more nuanced depiction of the aftermath of injuries.
Emotional and psychological side effects
Injuries can have a profound emotional and psychological impact on characters. They may experience fear, anxiety, trauma, or a loss of confidence. Consider how the injury affects their self-image, relationships, or mental well-being. Explore the emotional journey your characters undergo as they navigate the aftermath of their injuries.
For instance, a character who survives a near-fatal accident may develop post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD) and struggle with recurring nightmares or panic attacks. By incorporating these emotional and psychological side effects, you can deepen the complexity of your characters and their responses to traumatic experiences.
Social implications and changes
Injuries can also lead to significant social changes for your characters. They may face challenges in their personal relationships, encounter stigma or discrimination, or experience changes in their roles or identities. Explore how the injury affects their interactions with others and their sense of belonging in the world.
For example, a character who sustains a facial injury may encounter judgment or stares from others, leading to self-consciousness or isolation. By addressing the social implications and changes resulting from injuries, you can create multi-dimensional characters and explore the impact of their injuries on their social dynamics.
By incorporating these various side effects into your writing, you bring depth and authenticity to your characters' experiences and showcase the wide-ranging impact of injuries.
Conclusion
Writing authentic wounds and fatalities requires attention to detail and a deep understanding of the physical, emotional, and psychological aspects involved. By following the guidelines and exploring the subheadings discussed in this guide, you can create compelling and realistic portrayals of injuries in your writing.
Remember to conduct thorough research on the specific injuries you want to depict, understanding their mechanics, symptoms, and potential outcomes. Consider the immediate and long-term effects on your characters, both physically and emotionally. Incorporate sensory details to immerse readers in the experience, describing the pain, bloodshed, colors of bruises, and the progression of healing.
Additionally, don't forget to address the side effects that injuries can have on your characters' lives. Explore the physical limitations, emotional struggles, and social implications that arise from their injuries. By delving into these aspects, you can create well-rounded characters and compelling narratives that resonate with readers.
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This was after the hug, Fadelâs tears, the slow dance, the I have fallen for you, the kiss. Fadel had made up his mind. He would take what he could getâStyleâs smell, the shape of his mouth, the taste of his skinâone last time. He knew it was over, could feel it seething between his lungs, the anger a quiet whir in the back of his head. He looked into Styleâs eyes for a moment after they broke apart, and he thought of collapsing the facade, of grabbing his shoulders and shaking a confession out of those beautiful, lying lips. But Style simply looked back, smiling, unwavering, clueless. Did you really think I would not find out?
They were to spend the night in Fadelâs room. Style was tired. He went quiet at times in the nightâa part of him Fadel was sure no one else knew. It was as if he gave out his spark in constant bouts, leaving little to himself in the final hours of the day. The loudest people can be the loneliest, Fadel thought, fleetingly.
âFadel,â Style whispered. He was sitting on the foot of Fadelâs bed, the smile, though tired, reaching his eyes. His hair was wet. He had just showered, and was in grey sweats and a black band tshirt that Fadel swore wasnât cropped a few weeks back. Style raised both arms up, asking for a hug, asking Fadel to kill the space between them. âWhy are you so far?â
Fadel didnât say anything. He watched Style; the droplets lining his neck, one by one, pooling in the milky collarbones; those wild pretty brows that were surprisingly relaxed, not challenging him like they always did. He looked so good, so harmless. Fadel wanted to jump out of his own fucking skin. He walked, measured, towards him. Styleâs shoulders perked up, a light in his face. He wrapped his arms around Fadelâs neck when Fadel bowed to let him, and they held each otherâs eyes. Fadel stayed there. Say it. Say something. His mind was a jumble. Why wonât you say anything? But Style sat there, expectant. Fadel tightened his brows and quickly, like reflex, grabbed Styleâs jaw. Maybe heâd scare a confession out of him, he thought. Maybe thatâll get him to explain himself, to swear to Fadel that Bison was wrong and that he didnât betray him, that he wasnât lying when he said he loved and wanted him. Fadelâs fingers left white prints where they pushed the skin. But Style stayed as he was, trusting. Fadel searched his face, searched for a silver of a clue, but found none. It pissed him off. Why was Styleâs guard down? Why was he so fucking calm? Why wasnât he afraid, still smiling, still ready to give his body, down to the bone, to Fadel? Fadel dug his nails into the skin, knuckles white, and Style titled his head ever so slightly to kiss the part of Fadelâs hand he could reach. âI miss you,â he said. âI was so worried that your shop was closed. I thought I was going insane.â
Fadel didnât understand this. He didnât know how to react. He was angry. He wanted him. He wanted him so much. He wanted to say goodbye. He didnât want to kill him. He didnât want to let go. He didnât want this to end.
âWhy?â He said, a breath.
It was Styleâs turn to frown. He looked confused. âWhat?â
Fadel snapped out of it. Immediately. His fingers relaxed around Styleâs jaw. He took a breath, grounded himself. âNothing.â An exhale. âCome here.â
The kiss was slow, deep. Fadel couldnât close his eyes. He kissed him, watched when he could. It felt wrong, but he needed to do this, one final time.
Style slipped out of his shirt. It came off beautifully, his hair crowned with a shimmer. He looked up in quiet excitement at Fadel, who was standing now, taking his own shirt and pants off.
Style pushed himself to lie on the bed then wrapped his arms around Fadelâs back as Fadel climbed over him. They looked at each other. It was never like this between them. Fadel was suddenly aware of it all. Of the sounds their bodies were making against his sheets. Of the difference between them, in size and mannerism, the pace of their breaths, how Styleâs gentle thrill was getting the better of him, how Fadelâs limbs were stiffening up in response, his trust in Style completely shattered.
Style raised his head up and kissed him again. Fadel tasted peppermint, fruit candy and sweetness. He wanted this. He wanted lifetimes of this.
âFadel,â Style whispered against his mouth and stroked the back of his neck. âDid you think about me while you were goneââ
Fadel slipped his tongue in to shut him up. He didnât want to admit the answer. I did. Every night.
They kissed, again, and again, shed off the rest of their clothes. It was different this time, the silence a creature in its own right. Fadel kissed Styleâs body carefully. He left no part untouched. Styleâs breaths came in quiet moans as he held onto Fadel tightly, always following his gaze, always trying to show him it felt good. And it did. It felt so fucking good, like fire, like martyrdom. But Fadel avoided Styleâs eyes when he was inside, his face turned as he moved, slowly, carefully, awkwardly. His heart hurt. It shouldnât be like this. It was never like this. He kissed Styleâs neck when it became unbearable. And Style kissed him back, wherever he could, his jaw, his chin, his cheek, holding on tighter with each motion. Why? Fadelâs tears burned.
âFadel,â Style closed his eyes and whispered as his head fell back. He bit hard onto his lips. Fadel went deeper, and watched, detached. âFadel.â
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