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Things I've learned writing much longer long!fic that I wish I had known when I started:
Outlines are nice, but do not communicate how long something will take to write (i.e. "travel to Waterdeep" -> turned into 8k+ words)
Always note the random bits of dialogue somewhere, do not trust yourself to remember (I began an extra section for dialogue that needed to happen)
Having goals per chapter is nice, but sometimes you have to acknowledge that the story will take you in another direction (why I'm thinking I need to split or redefine these last few chapters)
Since I went pretty deep into "mystery" territory, this is more mystery-specific: if you have a lot of moving parts, you will need to reread your fic on the regular to make sure you didn't forget anything (not saying that your character wouldn't forget it, but, as the writer, I don't want to forget it)
Anyway, this is all helping me for my next fic(s), but figured I'd write it down somewhere in case it helps anyone else?
#fanfic#fic writing#my advice i guess#probably wont work for everyone#but it certainly works for my brain
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why are you and your drawings so cool 😭🙏
afdsasdfasg thank you !! irl ppl would laugh at me being called cool lol - Have a ghoap as thanks <33
#ask#chloe-is-slightly-epic#ghostsoap#doodle#i'm trying to get better at letting myself be a bit more open online#a bit more uncool if you will#im an anxious perfectionist so a lot of art and posts end up in drafts forever#like this sketch i drew..... 4 months ago#hope you all wont mind if I start posting a bit more#unfinished work like sketches or fic snippets#Im constantly making stuff and writing but I just dont post#womp womp anxiety#so yeah decidedly uncool but im happy you like my art :')#btw if youve ever sent an ask or asked a question that i've never answered... yeah its probably in my drafts because i got stuck on somethi#and then forgor#and now its been so long that it feels weird to reply#sorry!! I super appreciate everyone who take the time to write
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If you were to like redesign Magneto's classic outfit in a way that both suits the character and your own tastes, how would you redesign it?
uhhhh errrmmmmm i dont know i really couldnt improve upon perfection but i have still tried for you my friend !!!
#xmen#xmen comics#magneto#erik lehnsherr#max eisenhardt#erik magnus lensherr#like ig fc erik there too but only if you squint Generally Speaking this aint about him#snap sketches#i thought this was gonna be a quick thing but then As I Do i sat and thought about it for too long#and for what. my end result isn't that different from the beginning !! tragic .#out of these i think. it MAY be obvious i like the far right one#once i remembered I Do In Fact love megaman i locked in cause everytime i draw Classic Magneto all i think of is megaman#cant even make a magnetman joke that mfer already exists and he from my FAVORITE classic megaman title tyvm#anyway. should i explain my reasoning now. man i guess i can try#i couldnt tho is the thing- at least for the first set i really was just ickin around and seeing what i Might like#evidently it was nothing LMAO i told yall i cant improve perfection ... so i just. Smash Bros'd his classic look#With some tearing on the cape cause i said so ............#at most- with the furthermost right bit- i just wanted to emphasize a feeling of 'power' hence the chunkier boots + gloves#with the first look i tried that angle with showing some arm skin buuuuttt i dont like it ...#i think the sleeveless look really only works if the outfit's black idk i cant explain it#overall the first design i tried just feels too sleek for my liking if i wanted to go for a 'power' approach#i like the 'M' i did with the legs at least. i really wanted to incorporate an M in case it wasnt clear but alas ...#tbh i might steal the boots/gloves/underwear design from myself when i draw classic magneto regularly. SHRUG we'll see#as for now i am very sleepy and i have class in the morning and i want to do some work Before Class#very cool but very sad i dont have my third class today :( its my fave class :( at least i get more time to work#and the more work i get done the more time i get to draw the sillies !!! epic ...#anyways. good night everyone !!!!!!! talk to yall tomorrow ..... probably ... or later ig technically... i should sleep earlier <- wont
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I've decided to do myself what the cowards at Aston won't. Behold.
#GAAAAAAHHHH REALLY HAPPY WITH THESE#GRRRRR I WANNA EAT HIM#not to pat myself on my own back too much but god he looks so fucking hot#woof woof woof man why isnt aston fernando miami 2004 redux not real :(((#only exists in art form :) teehee#ty for everyone who voted in my poll for this even if you didnt know it was for this!#apologies for not picking the most voted one. however...i didnt wanna draw it LOL#theres smth sexier to me about him wearing the unbuttoned shirt OKAY#was pretty fun to design the aston version of the shirt! lmk what you think#also small gripe: it sucks ive put all this work in and its probably gonna end up getting less than the poll i spent less than 10 mins on#idc that much abt notes but ugh the fact that lower effort notes tend to do better sucks :(#unless you wanna make this post more popular than the poll- be my guest :)#anyways god i though renault fernando was hot in these outfits and i obv still do but ggrrrrrr old man fernando when i get you#as i said yesterday. if he wont do well on track he might as well do well off track. so here i am. objectifying him#f1#formula 1#fernando alonso#2024 miami gp#f1 fanart#formula 1 fanart#catie.art.
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Sweet Dreams <3
#my art#pokemon#galarian ponyta#digital art#hiiii everyone hello please look at my darling angel Amalthea. shes my partner pokemon in pokednd <3#most of our pokemon went missing so Mia (my character) took our remaining pokemon to get their pictures taken in case they go missing#i did in fact draw all three of them. am going to work on doing digital versions of the other two#its all of our partner pokemons :3 ponyta. impidimp. and mankey <3#the sketches i did for the other two are so fun i cant wait to draw them#impidimp's made my cousins all laugh so hard they almost cried#this session was so fun and we also talked afterwards about pokemon we may want on our teams in the future#and honestly my potential line up for Mia feels so good#her next pokemon she gets is very possibly going to be a bewear. absolutely out of left field choice but it works so beautifully#im also thinking good options for her would be breloom. grumpig. wyrdeer. maybe mimikyu.#grumpig and breloom are honestly the top of the list. they suit her so beautifully#wyrdeer is also really good. mimikyu would be up to roleplay#mimikyu and bewear would both play into her animal handling skill#mimikyu would also end up disguised as a sylveon#probably play that as mimikyu wanting to fit in with Mia's team since she's really nice to it and it wants her to be its trainer#bewear on the other hand would 1. work well aesthetically for her and 2. would be fantastic roleplay material what with it being a giant#aggro bear and mia is just this gentle giant who is so fucking good with pokemon so its like well.#the nice girl wants me to be nice so i wont kill you because i like her. she gives me snacks and pets me and treats me well
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#genuinely i didnt do this on purpose i was just very tired when i went to draw yesterday and did pose practice instead of new comic#but then i see franz kafka trending this morning and i remembered this hellsite has the most arbitrary holidays i love it#dr draws#danganronpa#dr#ndrv3#drv3#kokichi ouma#ouma kokichi#kokichi oma#oma kokichi#glittersart#TAPP AU#if you want it doesnt have to be#but i am working on an ask about how everyone is holding up post-sim#mostly in writing if thats alright bc im not positive yet how to draw out the story i want to tell#and therein is a small headcanon that kokichi kinda. for several reasons has a bit more intense a time than most of his classmates#and sometimes he Needs to sleep at arbitrary times during the school day. if he wont do it voluntarily he'll just kinda faint-#- which is especially frustrating for him because the lack of control and his inherent distrust of most people fuel his paranoia-#- and over time he designates a couple of Probably Secure places around campus that he can sleep if his dorm is too far.#ive started setting it up (itll take a lot of drawing to explain it all) but one of them is the animal shed#i do want to try actively to write about Students Who Aren't Kokichi but this all did start bc im kinda fixated atm#actually i think kokichi has been in all of the comics so far. like at least appeared#which will probably continue to be true as kokichis brand of pranking#('i put a kick-me sign on kaitos back and when saihara sees it theyll have an excuse to talk. all according to plan.')-caliber#is a nice device to crash characters into eachother like bumper cars
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no light no light is so beckory coded
(song analysis 2: electric boogaloo)
like look at these lyrics
no light no light in your bright blue eyes can be interpreted as tony dying, feeling betrayed, or being injured
you cant choose what stays and what fades away i believe this is about tony losing his father to prison, yes, but also gregory over his lack of control during the events of ggy, especially concerning his memory
and id do anything to make you stay i think both of them would want to stay with each other, gregory with trying to keep tony's memories so he doesnt forget him, and tony s he can solve the mystery (and also cos hs gay)
you want a revelation, some kind of resolution how tony always wants answers to things, and he wants to know everything there is about ggy even after its happened and he's met up with gregory
but its a conversation i just cant have tonight is like tony asking him about ggy, but gregory dismissing it or ignoring it because of the shared trauma they have, and he wants to try move past it despite tonys insistence
in your place were a thousand other faces this would go with gregory and his inability to remember the exact faces of tony (and ellis), and all of the counsellors and everyone ggy encountered during the time he used his body
i was disappearing in plain sight this is gregory living at the pizzaplex - he’s missing, but in plain sight, as the pizzaplex is a big and crowded place, so if any of his friends were to go there, theyd have a chance of noticing him
would you leave me if id told you what ive done? it kinda goes for both of them, but mainly gregory - when he'd remember the actions ggy took, he'd obviously feel guilty and would think everyone would leave him because he was dangerous. i think this also applies for tony, but only after he realises how much of a jerk he's been - gregory wouldnt remember everything, so if tony told him, he'd be afraid of his reaction
#i should do more of these i love doing these#the english nerd in my brain is taking over#i have a whole playlist to go through so i wont run out of songs anytime soon#should i make a tag for this?#probably#song analysis#fnaf beckory#beckory#also is the formatting better?#i wanna make it easily readable to everyone#so i hope it works!!#fnaf ggy#ggy#tony becker#fnaf tony
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I want an excuse to draw more toons. rubs my hands together like a fly anyways, not-subtle-point is that if you guys have any toon npcs that you really like (or just want to see) send them to me and I might produce a little doodle of them in return
#clemramble#can be from any server and ranging from any popularity idc#^ can also be ones ive drawn before#i'll probably be busy until friday so i wont get to work on them until the weekned or when i have free time#im also just kind of curious which toon is everyones favorite. you see im collecting data#if i dont get any responses ill be sad. dont make me go sad. i will green and DIE ((JOKING. NO FORCE#toons of the world... DRAW!#not maintagging this. whoever sees it sees it
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dinosaur au. what else do you want me to say
for anyone who's interested the bachelor is Deinonychus antirrhopus, haruspex is Parasaurolophus walkeri, and changeling is Pachycephalosaurus wyomingensis
#pathologic#digital#clara pathologic#artemy burakh#daniil dankovsky#everyone please be nice these were so much fun also ive been working on them for like a month#if anyone wants to talk dinosaur au my asks/dms are open lol i have ideas for a few other characters but definitely not all#also i do have regular patho art on the way probably. but not before more dinosaurs#ALSO also if anyone @s me about the scale I KNOW. I KNOW. you try fitting these three on the page with realistic proportions#my own fault tbh. but i wasnt in control when the idea came to me... one moment just walking to class next moment bam. dinos#and the rest is history!!#whatever. im setting this to post sometime monday so i wont have to take the plunge myself. cya#art
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been on an oc redesign kick. this is incomprehensible to anyone but me and like 2 other people probably. hi tim if ur reading this
#im not entirely happy with kaori still but im glad i got everyone's different ears down finally. AND THEIR HAIR. god their hair#im really reallyyyy pleased with dallas though hes so cutie#moor's edge#<- oc tag for these freaks#june and vera are both trans in the way that yea they probably have something going w their genders but theyre at work so they dont care rn#can call them he or she respectively but they wont correct u if u call them anything else#character design#illustration#ocs#sketches#my art#2024#i always feel a bit dumb posting oc stuff cause its like. who cares. but then i remember this blog is just meant to be an archive for me#i also feel like kaori has more going on than just being bi but she hasnt been in my mind's rock tumbler long enough to figure that out#ill let her cook for a bit longer#none of my guys are cishet though thats all i know
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I think I get the appeal of making all these Kieran aus because MAN is there a lot of potential
#like i was listening to ready as ill ever be for some nostalgia#and then my brain being filled with the hyperfixation#hit me with the poison chain au or possessed kieran aus everyone’s been making#like it would work so well#honestly makes me want to try and mess with my own take on the au#probably wont but man it would be fun#pokemon kieran#rival kieran#trainer kieran#pokemon au#it would be so fun actually
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gave my landlord his cheques and straight up told him i took 96 dollars off to cover the vooerdraft fees i was charged when he deposited all three at once without telling me and he seemed confused but didnt fight me so....
#for those that missed it he went away for 3 months and came back and deposited 3 months of rent cheques without telling me he was back so#i got crazy over drafted cause i didnt have the money in that account at that exact moment he deposited them#and absolutely everyone i talked to abut it said yeah just give him the cheques but subtract that money and if he wont take it then dont#give him anything#and hopefully it works but i will probably be anxious about this the rest of the day at least alittle bit
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i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i am fucking losing my mind cover letters are so fucking annoying and time consuming and a waste of my energy to create a self sales pitch wherein i pretend to want to suck a companies dick more than Ive ever wanted anything in the world when all i actually want is to just be able to live my life without worrying that im always a purchase away from maybe overdrawing my account and i want to help make this world a better place and it should not be this hard to do that but most jobs are antithetical to the second goal and yet still not a guarantee of avoiding the first but alas we are all still expected to beg them to be hired and i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i shouldnt have to beg you to hire me i hate it here i hate it here i hate it here
#‘here’ being the capitalistic nightmare that is the current global society#but also ‘here’ as in the capitalistic republic us of a#and ‘here’ as in my brain#trifold in meaning#all burning in hate#anti capitalism#capitalism#applying for jobs#cover letter#cover letters#i have to write 7 cover letters for 7 different positions to apply to#and tailor each to the role and company#and yea maybe it wont take everyone long to do that#but its been taking me 3 fucking days to wven get started on 1#and i actually LIKE these job listinga#i DO feel passionate about the work#but the stress of applications and the knowledge that probably no one will even read these letters sours me#but the stress someone WILL read the letter sours me more and makes me overthink it#and so i overthink until im runnin go out of time and then i apply with a shittily written one cause i ryshed the real writing#and i rarely get hired#any job i have been hired for i did not have to submit a cover letter#cover letters are a pre-emptive punishment and i fucking hate it
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i would take their poison
Sketch + Line Art for those Clicking Under the Cut(tm) (archival purposes honestly)
#moshi monsters#sweet tooth moshi monsters#experimentation i am COG AWFUL at digital dear goodness i was playing with coloring and transparency and all those fun digital doodads.#next time i probably wont have black outline or i'll do it differently. or i'll try well. not doing this. it sure was a process im#i'm an amateur everyone who masically only doodles. does the sketch look better than the final. kinda! but thats okay because im learning#and y'know what. sometimes in life you just need to draw faves no consequences#for how saturated a character they are i kinda feel like i pastelled things too muc and trapped myself with my convoluted layer setup but m#it was looking WEIRD with everything at full force#maybe the sparkles look dumb maybe the hair looks dumb and out of place and why i kinda made the lollipop a little funky too#uhh. first digital piece posted... ever?#the arm is SO fucky i am not that was. thats not what perspective is spam#yes this is what i spent a good chunk of today doing after i started working on coloring it and then. decided to go for it.#cooolrs a little inaccurate on the horns and such but man one of the biggest art things was like#i dont have to have everything at their perfect hex codes all the time. this would look way worse if i just. used their standard colors#yeah this is. instead of looking like its forward and to the right it kinda just looks like they have a Bigger hypno-lolly#especialy becase. i did not bother on the gloves and platforms i the sparkles work with 2 kinda sorta but you know#im practicing! i'm learning! i'll get better and learn how to do things more effectively!#anyway. sweet toof#though hey their arm looks even more fucked in the line art and sketch SO#note to future self have a Consistent Line Art Size so that if you feel like the line art looks like shit during coloring you dont have to#gamble on what size it was while changing it#sketch lollipop looks better i should have kept it small. but its fine. we'll get em next time boys (tm)#yes i know my gif post was so fancy and then the drawing is just THIS
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I honestly can't remember if I said anything here about Couple's Goodluck Charm lqg?
When he's a disciple he gets a crush on, like, two of his shixiongs who are pining over each other and ends up having a fling with both of them before they start dating each other. They end up in a committed relationship and lowkey cite dating lqg as their inciting incident.
Later he ends up dating an established couple known from breaking up and getting back together and after they dated him they end up stabilizing and getting married.
They say lqg was their good luck charm and he gets kind of a reputation.
Now anyone who wants good luck in their relationship try to catch lqg's eye bc him being interested in you is seen as a blessing!
When he starts hanging around yqy everyone thinks the Era of good luck Liu Qingge will end bc obviously yqy is a catch and they'll actually end up together but then yqy brings home sj. Everyone can tell yqy is obsessed with sj, so now everyone thinks lqg's good luck extends to finding your soulmate in general even if you aren't currently in a relationship. AND then sj and lqg become RIVALS and the yqy & sj ships crashes and burns so lqg's reputation evolves once more
So it goes: if lqg is interested in you as a couple then you're guaranteed good fortune in your relationship. If you're single then you will have terrible luck.
People are already intimidated by him bc he's gaining such a bold reputation as Bai zhan's succeeding disciple, and now with the Relationship Lore people never approach him interested in Him
He cements a few more relationships throughout his time as a disciple and Peak Lord (probably a few more disciples, Mqf & WQW, maybe, when they become peak lords) and ruins a few others incidentally so his reputation grows into like a folk tale that everyone passes on to each other
So of course lqg's crush is seen as very Ominous and Foreboding for sqq and when lbh pops up everyone is like. Whoop. Lqg Curse strikes again.
Funnily enough, when bingqiu happens and friendly interaction with demons become more common, when lqg's Lore is shared the demons flip the omens. Lqg fighting lbh for five years read as being interested and now lbh is off living his happiest life. Lqg tried removing sqh's head from his shoulders and now mbj has a devoted life partner. Obviously Liu qingge fighting you/being interested in you in the demon way is a blessing of good fortune
Anyways, when lbh hears that dating lqg as a third means your relationship will last forever, OF COURSE he tries to get that extra bit of assurance :>
(I think... moshang also want a piece of lqg's relationship luck. It becomes bingqiu and moshang competing over Liu Qingge)
#misc#it's actuallynreally angsty though bc#hah no one actually wants a committed relationship with lqg#he's honestly tried to make it Work with everyone he's dated#but increasingly people are just phoning it in with him#after getting wqw & mqf together he stops dating#lowkey bc seeing two people he liked move on together without him#hes kind of over trying haha#his crush on sqq is also probably so slow and awkward bc he is Aware of his badluck reputation#and doesnt want to lose sqq as a friend after trying and failing to date him :>#so bingqiu and moshang flirting with him#increasingly seemingly earnestly kind of charms him#(bc theyre competing they get really into courting him#so it comes off pretty genuine to lqg)#so even if bingqiu or moshang develop honest feelings for him#it will come out that they were trying to cash in on the lqg goodluck which wont be fun for anyone but me! :)#i guess... interspersed with this are demons whonwant to fight lqg but thats normal haba
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i wanna know more about kyer and alisia, their designs are super cool and the stuff u said about them in tags sounds super interesting!!
AA PEOPLE BEING INTERESTED IN MY OCS
so. they're both major characters in this RPG I would really like to make someday called The Mission Of Imperium.
Basically everyone is aware of the 4th wall, Players are seen as an entity that must be summoned when the world is faced with a dilemma that ordinary heroes cannot solve.
however, Players need a vessel.
in this particular story, Kyer is The Intended Vessel. they were chosen for this role because they tend to be a pushover and thus would be easy for the Player to control.
Alisia has been Kyer's best friend since childhood, and planned to go with them and basically be the Game's deuteragonist while Kyer would be the protagonist. she doesn't trust the Player, nor does she particularly like the idea of Kyer being possessed, but she is willing to let this happen and support their decision to act as a vessel.
however, when the player tries to inhabit Kyer's body, it is revealed that they are actually unable to act as a vessel. having the Player inhabiting them causes a lot of pain and could lead to death (that the Player would not be able to respawn them from) within less than an hour if the Player is not removed from their body.
Because of this, the Player ends up switching vessels last minute, causing Alisia to become the Player's vessel. she hates this, but for the fate of the world and the fact that she seems to be doing just fine as a vessel, she ends up becoming the Game's protagonist.
aside from the main conflict of "go defeat evil and save the world", this story centers a lot around the Player being able to make whatever choices they want regardless of what Alisia and Kyer want. and boy do I have plans regarding that
#there is also the whole question of “why did the pushover not work as a vessel but the one who is actively fighting the possession is fine”#but the answer to that question is spoilers#and so are the plans#the player can wingman these two tho. the player has the freedom of making them kiss#and yeah sure there ARE happy endings but the bad ones? OUGH. MY PLANS. DOOMED BY THE PLOT.#also these guys exist purely bc I randomly had the idea of “a game where you can't control the player character sometimes” which.#deltarune has already done that with the whole kris putting theur soul in a cage thing but this is different because#imagine if you were being possessed by some entity with completely unknown intentions and everyone around you KNEW about this and was not#only completely fine with that but actually encouraging it like. “yeah you're possessed! this is a good thing!!” but the entity possessing#you has already tried to do horrible things and you dont know if you'll be able to stop them next time. and it wont let you tell people. an#even if you could tell people they'd have more faith in the entity than you and say something like “it knows what it's doing just relax”#poor Alisia is probably the most doomed by the plot out of all the characters depending on what the player decides to do#anyways yea i still have a lot of stuff to figure out about the whole story such as every single character other than these two but#yippee i like thinking about these two#the mission of imperium#tmoi
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