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Lost and Alone (Initial rewrite for the opening, when Jacwyn first finds himself in the Fae Wyldes. Feedback is welcome)
The world is strange sometimes, one minute a young man is running from home, determined to prove himself and make his way in the world, the next the world becomes a swirl of chaos. Screaming voices surround them, guards rushing to and fro ordering everyone to get behind them or run, and then with a shadow looming over him, the world silent save for the moaning of the dying the world suddenly becomes a swirl of colors.
One moment Jacwyn Silverquill was the youngest child and only son to the Archmage of High Eternus, born to wealth and prestige and the next he was fleeing to the East in search of adventure and a means of making a man of himself only to run afoul of bandits and an unknown mage less than a day's ride from the city's walls. Now he slowly opened his eyes to see the world around him, he'd expected a wagon, maybe a cage and shackles, he'd expected to awaken as a captive, instead what he found was an idylic glade in the middle of an unknown forest.
He carefully stood, checking himself for injuries, making sure he still had everything, and while he didn't have his travel bag that he'd taken with him when he'd fled the city meaning he'd lost his papers of identification and his money, he still had his clothes a pocket knife and was unharmed except for a few minor cuts and bruises.
"How did- where am I?"
The last thing he remembered was a shadowy silhouete standing over him on the road, a caravan in flames and glowing eyes looking down upon him, but none of that explained this. He took a deep breath and shook his head, deciding his first step should be to check his surroundings, first for a road. If he could find a road, then that meant he could find civilization. From there he could try to find some guards, tell them what happened, and maybe regain his lost property. If he couldn't find the road, then his next step would be to find food, water, and shelter. After all, if he couldn't find the road then that meant he had no clue where he was, and there was no telling how long he'd be out here for.
So it was with that in mind that he set out, slowly and carefully exploring around his clearing. In his exploration he learned a few things, this forest was old, trees stretching far above, the tops reaching beyond his sight as they extended up towards the sky, he learned too that if there was a road nearby then he wasn't going to find it. The only light under the trees came from bioluminescent foiliage, mushrooms and strange plants that grew despite the stiff competition for sunlight and water that the environement created, yet despite the thick canopy and the impenitrable foiliage, he never found himself wanting for a path. Wherever he walked it was as if the forest cleared a way for him. He was never at risk of stepping through bushes, having to go around thorn patches, it was as though the forest was aware of him and was actively allowing him to explore through it.
With the realization that he was well and truly lost in an unknown forest Jacwyn was forced to scavenge for food, luckily, he always was an attentive student. He knew most of the beneficial and safe herbs to eat within Elven lands, and while many of the plants he found were alien to him he was able to find enough food to tide himself over for the day. Water was far easier, the glade he found himself in contained a freshwater spring, and he had enough magic at least to cast the spell Prestidigitation, one of the few that he could. With the water and the simple cantrip he was able to light a small campfire for warmth and remain hydrated. After several hours of exploration and foraging, Jacwyn sat under the shade of the canopy, looking out to the forest around him, the world around him slowly darkening.
"Well, I guess this is kind of what I wanted. A grand adventure, away from my family. I guess I'd just hoped it would be more on my own terms."
He looked up to the canopy, glimpsing the sky as it changed colors with the setting Sun and as he did, he wondered if he'd made the right choice in leaving home. Was he going to be ok, would he ever find his way back to civilization, had anyone even noticed that he was gone yet? It was with these questions running through his mind that Jacwyn shook his head and laid down, sticking close to the fire for warmth, and praying to whatever gods might be listening that no creatures would find him in the night.
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Doey and Yanarby
This new chapter made me cry a little 😭
#digital art#artists on tumblr#doddle#art#digital fanart#digital drawing#comissions open#digital artist#poppy playtime#poppy playtime chapter four#doey the doughman#yarnaby#poppy playtime doey
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real dialogue from the game
#deltarune#deltarune chapter 2#kris dreemurr#utdr#noelle holiday#Legitimatley almost mistyped it as noelle homoday and this is not a joke. my mouth dropped open a little#comics#goomyart#kinda feels webtoonish when i format it like this lole
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morning glory
#my art#jujutsu kaisen#jjk#yuji itadori#itadori yuuji#fanart#jjk fanart#jujutsu kaisen fanart#jjk spoilers#jjk manga spoilers#jjk leaks#yuuji#i cant even bring myself 2 b salty about No Megu part 4546768 bc oh my GOD#YUUJI RLY OUT HERE LOOKIN LIKE FALLEN ANGEL ALEXANDER CABANEL 1847 GEGE AKUTAMI THE ARTIST U ARE#we're so blessed we're so lucky this panel is ART i ran 2 open csp the moment i saw it#SO many s tier yuuji panels this chapter tbh but this. i dont think ill ever b over it#god im giddy im fangirling a little bit looking at it#i don't talk enough abt how Good of an artist gege is his expressions r masterful#it's incredible how much emotion he packs into stares n glances n gazes#and ESPECIALLY with yuuji there is so much weight and emotion and intensity in his eyes in every gd panel#king legend visionary etc etc etc does this man EVER turn it off ????#i honestly dont think i did the original panel justice its That good his gaze is That chilling#but i certainly tried my best :'> sampled colours directly from th fallen angel painting itself n it made the blues pop rly well#anyway if im sukuna im crawling back 2 him hands and knees give him back his boyfriend hes not here 2 play anymore FGHFGJSD
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Once again, you can be an English major. a seasoned journalist. an established author. a famed literary critic...and you will still scratch your head over the junk that makes it big. Public opinion has no worth. Just write what you want.
"But I don't want to share something that isn't perfect" why not? everyone else does.
#that goes quadruple infinity for fanfic writers btw#cannot think of a more open market than writing fanfic#you just pour your heart out onto the interwebs#some 12yo says “this is cringe”#you block'em and post the next chapter#and pretty soon eight ppl are sobbing in your comments and keysmashing from the glory of your angsty crackfic#including the 12yo who has their nose in the proverbial corner for being cringe#think of lit critics as 12yos writing “this is cringe” and they are much easier to ignore
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“When I first heard it, from a dog trainer who knew her behavioral science, it was a stunning moment. I remember where I was standing, what block of Brooklyn’s streets. It was like holding a piece of polished obsidian in the hand, feeling its weight and irreducibility. And its fathomless blackness. Punishment is reinforcing to the punisher. Of course. It fit the science, and it also fit the hidden memories stored in a deeply buried, rusty lockbox inside me. The people who walked down the street arbitrarily compressing their dogs’ tracheas, to which the poor beasts could only submit in uncomprehending misery; the parents who slapped their crying toddlers for the crime of being tired or hungry: These were not aberrantly malevolent villains. They were not doing what they did because they thought it was right, or even because it worked very well. They were simply caught in the same feedback loop in which all behavior is made. Their spasms of delivering small torments relieved their frustration and gave the impression of momentum toward a solution. Most potently, it immediately stopped the behavior. No matter that the effect probably won’t last: the reinforcer—the silence or the cessation of the annoyance—was exquisitely timed. Now. Boy does that feel good.”
— Melissa Holbrook Pierson, The Secret History of Kindness (2015)
#dog books#this chapter was very sad reading#when you become aware of punishment#and its use and its prevalence#it's hard not to despair#again this is why positive reinforcement feels like absolution#maybe now my eyes are open I can make up for what I did#what I did because it's what everyone does#because it's more acceptable to punish than to do anything else#I've been having so many thoughts about punishment and society and justice#this book was very validating#another great validating moment in my jumbled thoughts#was listening to the You're Wrong About episode on justice#with Amanda Knox#it helped to ease the despair a little
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you can't hide... not from him...
omgg the game is already out!! and this character is ABSOLUTELY gold i love him so much!!!
#poppy playtime#poppy playtime 4#harley sawyer#poppy playtime chapter 4#poppy playtime fanart#poppy playtime art#ppt 4#ppt#digital art#fanart#illustration#artists on tumblr#art#artist on tumblr#comic art#comic artstyle#commissions open#art commissions#open commissions#antagonist
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What makes a great story? Lessons from judging the Amazon Kindle Storyteller Award 2023
Holy allsorts, I’ve been judging this prestigious prize! It’s an interesting assignment to read a bunch of books and not have to fix them. So I’m writing this post in celebration, to consider exactly what a good storyteller does. Actually, you already know what a good storyteller does. They gobble your hours and insist you stay for one more scene, even if you’re past your bedtime or about to…

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#Amazon Kindle Storyteller Award 2023#beginnings#editing#first pages#genre fiction#handling the reader#how to write an amazing story#literary fiction#opening chapters#pacing#playing fair with the reader#Plot#storytelling
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Pain is a great motivator…
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—Full Series—
Meanwhile Toriel:

(Loud noises don't wake her up usually.)
Artist note: I’m so proud of this :))) I know it’s a lot of dialogue and reading, but dialogue is grueling work for me. I’m glad with the art and for the amount of pages I made in such a relatively short time span -w- page 5 was super fun to work on. A lot of blood, sweat, and hours here... :) The backgrounds were a big bore tbh, but I finished them! Yippie!
#CHARA WTF DO YOU MEAN “COMPUTER”????#lol i hope you guys dont hate me for what im doing in the next update.#IS THAT A MAC OS???#Yes......owo''#Kris and the Gang are LITTLE now. I've pixelated them and turned them into little game characters!#FINALLY!!#I never thought I would be going so far in the story to explain WHY Kris pulls out their SOUL and opens Darkfountains even when they killed#Berdly in Chapter 2. Pain can make people do horrible things.#Uhhhhhhhhh anyways. :3 I hope you liked it! I made this post a little too long for my liking and didnt get it out when i wanted too-#but thats okay! As long as people enjoy it :)#bread#art#deltarune chara timeline#deltarune chara timeline comic#seriously though#long post#man am I glad I switched over to the limited color palet! It helps me feel alot more relaxed uwu#This is....way over 16 hours of work q-q#chara#asriel#susie#kris#asriel dreemurr#kris dreemurr#kris deltarune#susie deltarune#deltarune#comic#my art
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My piece for @klapollo-minibang from the first chapter of my partner @smolgirlowo's awesome fic, Breaking up Is Hard to (Un)Do, linked here! The first chapter is up so go check it out :]] (plsplspls you will enjoy it so much)
I'll be posting more pieces accompanying the next chapters in the following weeks ^^
#klapollo#klavier gavin#apollo justice#ace attorney#klapollomb24#guys i rlly need yall to read her fic pls it's SO GOOD i swear#every time i open a chapter for reference i end up reading half or even the whole thing#sen's art
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everyone BOARD THE TRAIN
#a hat in time#conductor#hat kid#fanart#my art#digital art#while subcon forest is awesome as an open level/hub#battle of the birds is overall my favorite chapter in the whole game#i dont mind it being pretty linear#and train rush is the most fun#this is so old btw lmao
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yarnaby!!! yarnaby my beloved!!! seeing him actually in game is so cool !!! funny rainbow puppy with a scary mouth you bring me so much joy
#poppy playtime#poppy playtime chapter 4#poppy playtime chapter four#yarnaby#no because the design is so cool!!#idk what it is about the vertically opening creepy maw#scratches my brain#ykwim#i wish i had money to get the yarnaby plushie
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Internal conflicts
#digital art#artists on tumblr#doddle#art#digital fanart#digital drawing#comissions open#digital artist#poppy playtime doey#poppy playtime chapter four#poppy playtime comic#poppy playtime#doey the doughman
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End of the new update (colorized)
#twisted wonderland#twst#twst spoilers#twst chapter 7#twisted wonderland spoilers#twst idia#idia shroud#twst malleus#malleus draconia#flump!#Idia shroud open the door or I’m going to throw rocks into your windows
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Soft and squishy, like marshmallows in hot chocolate~
Commissioned Doey art! 💛 (Anyone want a Doey commission too? OwO)
#doey the doughman#poppy playtime doey#doey fanart#doey ppt#justice for doey#doey#poppy playtime#poppy playtime fanart#poppy playtime fandom#poppy playtime chapter 4#poppy playtime 4#poppy playtime chapter four#fanart#mob entertainment#commission#commission art#commissions open#art commissions#commissions are open
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Papercraft commission of Sheena and Zelos from Tales of Symphonia! This one was quite elaborate with all the flying costume elements, cards and lightning magic, as well as interesting facial expressions and poses; I had SUCH a blast putting on the game soundtrack and getting down to work!
#tales of symphonia#sheena fujibayashi#zelos wilder#papercraft#papercutting#paper art#traditional art#my art#when I'm commissioned for fanart I try to research the series/game/etc. to get a better feel for the characters#like reading the opening chapters of a book or watching the first few episodes of a show#for this one I did an additional step:#looked up early 2000s AMVs on YouTube#NOBODY can communicate RABID LOVE for a ship the way AMV makers armed with intense pop ballads do and I STAND BY THAT STATEMENT#how better to understand the PASSION??
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