#ooooo this is a really interesting reading of that scene
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Spoilers for Disney Channel’s Zombies movies I guess? Also discussions of zombie/monster related gore
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Okay this is so out of left field from what I post but I came home from work and my sister was watching the newest Zombies movie from Disney Channel and I just kind of…sighed wistfully? Because the concept of that series is so interesting to me and it has legit lore but what gets me is that there’s like…no leaning into the horror, really. I grew up on Disney’s Monstober Halloween specials, and they didn’t skimp on the kid-friendly gore. I remember one Halloween episode of ANTFarm (MUTANTFarm, which heh, mutant, ironic) where one of the kids is a zombie and his arm pops off in a fun but very bloodless, kid-friendly practical effect.
Disney, they’re zombies. Literally people transformed by a half-fantasy half-sci-fi virus into brain-eating, rotten nightmare monsters. Like? I know the people of Seabrook feared them because HELLO, they freaking ate people, but like…random pasty handsome man Zed isn’t scary in the least. Expose his teeth, give him jaundiced eyes, SOMETHING.
Also Addison’s wasted potential with her hair (clearly intended to be an allegory for disability or some other difference) getting hand-waved into “ooooo magic meteor powers” feels…kind of like a slap in the face to be honest. It isn’t compelling from the jump, and since Seabrook is literally fucking segregated from Zombie Town (which like…dude. It’s called “Zombie Town”? I’m sure you can extrapolate what the irl equivalent of that would be in the context of this very obvious racism metaphor), she comes off like the clueless white girl who wants to fight prejudice but can’t see past her own privilege.
Like??? The zombie bands. That’s so interesting. They…suppress the virus? They’re basically a built in rabies vaccine. So if they’re zombies who were born that way because apparently this virus is also hereditary, that means that they’re undead. They are rotting. You telling me when Zed has his Z-Band messed with and he hulks out, the sheer force of his strength doesn’t rip through his flesh like paper? I don’t know if you know this, but decaying flesh isn’t like,,,attached to anything anymore. It sloughs off. You punch something with a zombie arm and you’re gonna de-glove your hand.
Finally, I like…really hate the other monster designs. Like a lot. A lot of them just don’t work without HEAVY practical makeup or CGI. Now I don’t think they’re all bad, the werewolves are dripped out as hell, but…cmon. It’s Disney. It’s not like they didn’t have the budget for some cool masks or facial prosthetics. If my memory serves, all the werewolves do is…have fangs and claws and glowy eyes. Give me a scene where their faces shift into snouts, or where the moon causes a painful transformation, even with minimal makeup! It doesn’t have to be An American Werewolf in London, but I’m not joking when I say I think these designs as werewolves are worse than the live action Clawdeen Wolf from the Monster High movie. They’re cool! But they don’t read as effective werewolves to me.
I couldn’t give less of a damn about the aliens and their designs, that movie was boring in concept to me so I didn’t watch it. The new one seems a bit more interesting, with their vampires and day-walkers, and their designs are fun, if very obvious. I think that Miss Blondie Daywalker and her dark-haired vampire bf are a little too on the nose of a parallel to Zed and Addison, but I digress. (I haven’t finished the movie, don’t sue me, I will watch all of these so I’m not talking out of my ass I PROMISE—)
Tl;dr — The Zombies franchise has too much cool lore and potential for you to not make it at least a little spookier, Disney. I CRAVE BLOOD!
#virgo speaks#virgos mad ramblings#zombies#disney zombies#zed necrodopolis#addison wells#z o m b i e s#disney channel
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just read your maddie/caitlyn fic and ohhhh????my?? god??? life changing. i know you said you probably won’t write for them/arcane ever again (ooooo 🌀🌀🌀 you wanna write more maddie/cait fic so bad) but id love to know if you have any headcanons for their relationship dynamics 💕
hey omg thank you so much for reading !!! do i have headcanons…… oh my friend. you doubt me
(i'm gonna keep these sfw but if people want specific nsfw ones i couldddd be persuaded. speaking of which, this is the fic in question)
first of all i wanna start off with this. if you think they were ever “in a relationship” or “girlfriends” you are making your first mistake. here we have a woman who has just lost her mother and the real love of her life within a week, and then immediately she is handed more power than she even truly knows what to do with, try as she might to make it seem like she has it under control. she’s grieving and heartbroken but she doesn’t have time to manage anything because she has a war to deal with. and then we have her subordinate, her coworker. imagine you are a girl with a raging hard on for power who has just witnessed a very hot officer ascend to leader of her house and your commander. she’s also in such a vulnerable position that it would be impossible not to offer her your shoulder to cry on. caitlyn is not herself, maddie is a horny twenty year old lesbian. i don’t believe that maddie was a traitor from the beginning, but i do think she was being remarkably selfish and did not care that caitlyn was using her. furthermore, i think she was into that part of it.
more under the cut!
THAT BEING SAID! there is nothing wholesome about what was going on between the two of them. maddie’s smart, and she feeds cait all the praise and validation she needs to create a bandaid on her heart, and caitlyn takes it all in because nobody else is around to take care of her. at a point where she has never felt more unloved, here is a girl willing to smother her. fine.
i do think that the deleted scene where maddie approaches caitlyn at a bar and has a heart to heart with her did happen. i think that’s how it started. i think they shot the shit and had a few too many drinks and caitlyn invited maddie home with her, and it startled her the next morning when she realized she didn’t feel any regret about it, only a dull sort of. well. that happened. it was kind of cathartic? i actually think she had a spring in her step following the first time, which pissed her off because it meant for sure that this probably wasn’t going to be a one time thing. and it wasn’t.
maddie loves it. she sees it as being useful and helpful, but she also folds so easily for a girl who will boss her around. she’s a follower to her core: when someone’s in charge, she has to be the best for them (i.e. gold star sticker — good job, maddie!)
maddie lovesss getting to stay the night at cait’s. her sheets are soft and always clean, there’s no risk of being interrupted or overheard, and she will take every opportunity to use her fancy shower (and maybe— no, definitely— all of her expensive products. you can’t convince me that she isn’t secretly having everything showers with cait’s stuff)
maddie is an abhorrent bed sharer— blanket stealer, toss and turner, the works. the only way cait is able to get under the covers fully is if she snuggles up to maddie, which maddie occasionally (unwisely) mistakes as genuine affection. its not, really. (although, cait will sometimes relish in the comfort a little more than she should, too. but she’s more aware of herself)
i wish i had a clear answer on how i think maddie switched sides, but it’s so difficult to sort out in my head because i do think season 2’s writing is really flawed in a lot of ways (not an unpopular opinion), one of those being maddie’s whole character. i think ambessa manipulated her though, i don’t think maddie turned on cait on her own. if anyone has thoughts on this i’d be interested to hear them!
#asks#I LOVE TOXIC YURI!!!!#this was so fun i would be open to talking more about them on here#maddiecait#arcane#maddie nolen#caitlyn kiramman#arcane season 2#arcane season 2 spoilers#also yeah i will say also like. first and foremost i have been watching arcane because its new and exciting and i dont think im really like#a permanent resident in the fandom#but like im not sick of it quite yet#so yknow. im having fun while it lasts <3
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😁 Hehehe I'm glad you like the memes!! I haven't actually written any full fics for these two unfortunately, but I have made a couple aus! 👀
Got one where the Substitute succeeds in skinning Ryan in season 5, but Ryan manages to wish for the Professor back before the Substitute can finish him off. That one's super fun, has the Professor finding Ryan's body in a back room and having to get help from someone else to wish Ryan back to life (along with just dealing with the Substitute who's currently pretending to be Ryan)
And another au where Ryan gets turned into a puppet accidentally due to genie shenanigans (specifically a puppet similar to what the Professor looks like, not necessarily a puppet that looks like human Ryan.) That one's much fluffier and very silly 😁 (My friend @digital-dumbass actually wrote a fic about it semi-recently which was super fun!)
If you're ever interested in hearing more about either of these aus I'd be more than happy to yap at you about them! 👀 Sorry I don't have any actual fics to offer you though, I haven't written a full fic for anything in a hot minute 😔
Also, one of my absolute favorite scenes of them would have to be the constellation scene from Season 5, which is still one of the most romantic things I've ever seen. (WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU MADE RYAN ONE OF THE FIRST CONSTELLATIONS EVER CREATED, THAT'S ROMANTIC AS FUCK)
THESE AUs ARE SO SO GOOD 👀👀👀 I've always been interested in scenarios exploring what would have happened if the Substitute had succeeded, and one where the Professor is back, but Ryan isn't is aBSOLUTELY HEARTBREAKING AUGH :'( The Professor was just starting to finally get over their feelings of resentment, and yet he couldn't amend it in time. Plus dealing with a homocidal clone of yourself pretending to be your dead best friend is tERRIFYING O.o I've always believed S5 has the potential to be psychological horror, and the AU sounds like it taps into that. I'm eating it up!!!
OOOOO I'VE READ THAT FIC!!! IT WAS REALLY CUTE!! (Fic link if anyone else reading this wants to read it tee hee) I also love the idea of a puppetified Ryan. I've been meaning to write a fic exploring that, but my writing motivation has been beaten up o+< I did make a design for Puppet!Ryan though! (Alongside Human!Professor tee hee). I really like the idea of involving genie shenanigans for the AU, that's very silly.
I would LOVE to hear more about the AUs!! And it's alright if you haven't made a fic in a while ^^ I'd still like to read your ideas regardless! Also holy moly I just realized Professor and the dinoparents made the first constellations in the PH universe. Oh my god give me a minute I'm gonna aheemheeeeeeemmmmmm.
#THE FAMILY EVER WAUGHHHHHHHH :''( THEY NAMED THE STARS AFTER WHAT THEY LOVE!!!#ALSO YEAH YOU'RE RIGHT OH MY GOSH#fellas is it gay to make one of the first constellations ever your bestie... and then just reminisce about him for a while...#the professor#ryan bergara#puppet history#transformationloveb#chris p fried answers#asks#long post
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SGATGK getting 'er done.👍
TLDR: some neato historical/fantasy drawing references, I like character design would be neat if someone paid me to do that someday, I have to trick myself into being motivated to finish anything like one tricks a dog into taking their meds by putting it in the wet food, tales passed down for centuries are cool.
Why did I do this? : Because I'm obsessed with art books and design bibles and it's what made me want to study animation in the first place. Portfolio pieces like this, this and this were always something I wanted to do, I think they are so inspiring.
Unfortunately you like have to put in a lot of effort to get something like this done, and as I have learned from a semi-failed attempt to do this with Hadestown it is very easy to get too precious about the art and restart 80 times and essentially never get anything done. I'm out here chanting "finished not perfect" to myself in the mirror like a mantra maybe one day it will seep into my bones and I will fully embrace it. Full disclosure, one of the circumstances that led to me actually finishing this is that I have way too much free time on my hands atm, like I don't think I would have gotten this done (or gotten it done in a timely manner) if I was also balancing full time work, but I was tryinggg to squeeze some lemons out of a less than ideal situation. Second thing, on top of trying to do this for 4 years with Hadestown, I alsooo initially tried to do this with the musical Camelot/ the Arthur/Lancelot/Guinevere love triangle part of the Arthurian legends but found I was once again too obsessed with the thing, and getting too precious about the art to get anything substantial done. I did get these Guinevere runaway bride drawings done though. Phillipa Soo high cheekbones Guinevere will always be important to me!!
So I switched gears and chose an Arthurian legend I liked well enough, but not so much I would sike myself out of getting it done and went with Sir Gawain and the Green Knight. It's also a story that adheres to a pretty traditional fable structure. A young guy goes on a quest, he experiences trials in threes, he comes back a little changed having learned a life lesson, etc. Also designing The Green Knight comes with a fun 'cool' factor that I like. The Arthurian discord server run by queer-ragnelle on tumblr is full of really nice, and wayyyy more knowledgeable people who pointed me in the direction of Simon Armitage's translations of the poem so that's what I read to get started. Another great resource I liked was Queer as Fact's podcast episode on the story. Something that I found really interesting was that they discussed Gawain's kissing game with the Bertilak's being something that brought on both queer positive and queerness as a sort of cautionary tale that was encouraged to be turned away from interpretations*. Interesting that you could take away two opposite readings from the same text, but also really framed the experience of staying with the Bertilaks as something that is otherworldly and treading into unknown territory for Gawain.
*I wanna add that 1. just because I acknowledge the two conflicting interpretations doesn't mean that I think one cancels out the other's validity 2. Just because I acknowledge it doesn't mean that it's one that I like or agree with. Obviously these stories are so old we can't ask the author what intent they were writing with so we'll never get 'the right answer', all we really have is interpretation. So like why not interpret something positive out of it, especially if you can back it up with the text.
I got pretty tired of using Google images for research, and actually went to the library for most of my drawing reference. This was also good because it got me out of the house yay! It made me feel like those movie behind the scenes featurettes I love, where people go on their little research trips, like OoooO I'm making the fake movie in my brain!! I unfortunately never wrote down the titles of these books I was using but there were some great illustrated book of clothing worn throughout history. I wanted to keep Gawain, and the design of Camelot fairly close to something historical.
I loved this book especially because all the art was so colourful. I think a lot of people have this idea that medieval costuming should be dull/dark colours but I definitely didn't want to go in that direction. I love bright colours!
I really took inspiration from this illustration I found for Gawain, even though people typically associate medieval knights with full plate armour, in the story Gawain is going on a lengthy journey to find the green chapel, then accept his beheading so I actually felt something lighter like this chainmail outfit with robe on top was the way to go to make him feel mobile. Also Gawain really lays on the self deprecating sauce thick when he volunteers himself up to participate in the Green Knight's game, claiming he is of no great importance, he's just a little guy, it's not a big risk if he gets hurt. (that's not a direct quote. That just the vibe) So I also snuck in the small detail that his clothing is a little oversized, not quite arranged straight, but he grows into it by the end of the tale :3
I also used designing Gawain as the chance to lock down what artstyle I wanted to move forward with. My brain told me 'oohhh storybook!' but go into a bookstore and give it a peruse and you will quickly find there is a wide array of storybook artstyles. So that was not specific enough. I tried simplifying my art style, I liked Cartoon Saloon's stuff (good catch everyone who commented on it's influence in the post's tags) but felt it was a little too simplified and stylized for what I wanted to do. The big lightbulb moment for me was when I found this art by an-old-lady on tumblr. I really like how this artist's work is pretty stylized but sticks close to recognizable human proportions. So I put this one my inspiration board, while still trying to keep it distinctly mine. not really my call to say if I succeeded at this or not lol
But yes Cartoon Saloon's influence is still there, especially with backgrounds,
and I also really loved looking towards the art of Sleeping Beauty. Really amazing use of colour in this art, also the way they simplify nature into easy to read shapes, then pack in all the detail there is something I loved.
me doing my best to harness that Disney concept art power
(Side note one books I can name from all this research is this one because I would like to own it some day. Fantastic resource for not only showing the classic art and architecture they are taking reference from, but how you can apply that to something a lot more cartoony and simplified. Seriously the side by side comparisons of medieval book artwork next to their Sleeping Beauty storybook scenes are masterclass mwah)
From there something I really wanted to drive home was this contrast between Gawain's world and Lord Bertilak/Green Knight's world. The Green Knight comes with lengthy descriptions about his odd (but hot *wink*) appearance, and there is definitely an aura that something unknown has entered King Arthur's court. While I tried to find inspiration for Gawain's armour from old artwork, Green Knight's outfit I was looking more to fantasy influences like Lord of the Rings, House of the Dragon, Renaissance Faire costumes, etc.
When you look up medieval fashion you get a lot of reference for these crazy cool headpieces
Lots of head coverings too for women (lots of it done for modesty reasons. Also a little bit for hygiene reasons) so I kept that consistent with the women of Camelot
Also even though a lot of medieval media associates the revealed shoulders and the sleeves with interesting cutouts with woman's fashion at the time, a lot of actual historical imagery I was finding has a full coverage layer underneath known as the kirtle (mostly for hygiene purposes......though I'm sure modesty is also a factor)
( Alicent where is your underlayer?? Cringe.)
But for Lady Bertilak I went full medieval fantasy and whipped out those sleeves that I always associate with princesses and gave her long flowing hair. Also interestingly I remember the story once emphasising her ~flirtatiously~ revealed shoulders. I wonder if that was a fashion choice still made back then, or if this is fantasy detailing, sort of like how the trash doctor drama TV show Doctor Odyssey will have doctors doing work on patients in full cocktail party attire a decision that is not based on any sort of reality but maybe hundreds of years from now if the media is preserved humans might assume that was how the doctors of our day dressed. HM!
Lord Bertilak actually gave me a hard time with his look. I went in really only knowing I wanted to give him that Hozier inspired bun hairstyle. My reasoning being that like Lord Bertilak loves going hunting he's a kind of man of the woods.....but he's also supposed to be this hot Lord who is making Gawain question if he wants to join a very unchristian open marriage and when I think of man of the woods but make it glam I think of this dude
but other than that I had no ideas on how to approach this 'same shape as the Green Knight but make him more warm and approachable' look I was trying to achieve, so I just made lots of sketches that got trashed pretty quickly. Also at the time I didn't know what colour scheme I wanted for these two yet, only that I wanted green as an accent colour to hint at his true identity (also because plot relevant green girdle) but not the MAIN COLOUR of their colour scheme. So anyways that's how you get this funny drawing of Lord Bertilak looking very Curious George's Yellow Guy vibes.
Then it hit me in the most unexpected of places....
You're probably wondering "hey there is literally a fantasy historical King Arthur musical you are OBSESSED WITH why are you not turning to that for inspiration?" or maybe "why would you reference House of the Dragon earlier but not the much more famous Game of Thrones?" and the answer there is as cool as those costumes are they are taking a LOT of inspiration from modern runway fashion and that just wasn't the vibe I was looking for. But then one day as I played the Camelot bootleg as comfort background noise (normal behaviour) I found inspiration from THE UNDERRATED FASHION ICON SIR PELLINORE!
I just really loved the long sleeveless drapery situation he had going on. I added the fur along the neckline for Lord Bertie though to make him more top heavy (like his Green Knight counterpart) and as a nod to hunting. but yes big props to Pellinore. ty king!
The contrasting shape language I used in the character design then informed all the extra prop details surrounding these characters.
But to keep things consistent I tried to keep some similar design principles for costumes. They like drapery. They like big sleeve moments. Bold colours. Girdles to break up dress forms. Tunics that generally fall close to knees in length.
I think the coolest bit of research I did was I visited a church in my city and got some good pictures as reference for the green chapel. In the poem the green chapel really ends up being a grass mound but that's not really an impressive drawing to put in your portfolio so I got the idea to have a chapel so old that nature has overtaken it and there's a structure in this hill. The church is open to just look through for free without attending a mass, it's a bit of a tourist destination for good reason it's really well kept, I'd been telling myself to go check it out for years of living here now but this project was what got me to finally do it.

I sketched some random object in there (this can be helpful even if you don't draw these things in your actual project just because it fills up your design bank in your brain) I also wish I took this picture but they had what looked like one of those office water coolers but it was labelled 'Holy Water' and I just thought that was funny. Sorry just wanted to share.
and I am HORRIBLE at drawing backgrounds, I really hate doing it, I find placing the horizon line/ vanishing points incredibly hard to do, so if you are like me but you wanna push yourself TAKE YOUR OWN PICTURES OF PLACES. AND TRACE OVER THEM. THEN ADD WHATEVER CHANGES NEEDED. IT'S NOT CHEATING I PROMISE. YOU CAN LITERALLY DO ANYTHING YOU WANT EVER IT IS NOT THE SAME AS PLAGIARIZING OR TRACING ANOTHER PERSON'S ART AND IT WILL SAVE YOU HEARTACHE. HIGHLY RECOMMEND.

Anyways this has been my incredibly long advertisement for your local library, your local tourist spots, cool art books, cool cartoons, The Green Knight poem, the kirtle, to try your best to make the art you wanna make because it will fill your heart with joy. Don't be precious about your art in a design project, just sketch like your life is ending in the next couple of hours, it's cool if you draw something like this
There's definitely stuff I wish I had drawn, more props, something more to indicate Lord Bertilak's hunts (I also suck at drawing animals oop) and maybe those things will be drawn in the future, but I am happy to call this done for the time being :)
Did you get this far? Well thanks. ilu 🫶🏼
#yeah this is long...but I added lots of pictures???? :'DD#sgatgk#(also seeeecret Guinevere art heehheheheheh)#if you answered “interested” on my poll a couple days ago.....I hope this was actually interesting lol
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as someone who read the "days of rage" script, how much does spence's character hinge on his attractiveness or sexuality, and do you think his character would have worked if they got an actor, who isn't very attractive, or as charming as mike?
I've been seeing a lot of people talk about how hot mike was in the show (not just bc of the few pics we have of the show, or his nude scene, which apparently gagged people who only knew him from deh prior lmao), and I want to know what you think
ooooo that's a really interesting question. so i do think that part of spence's character's appeal is based on writing. PART of it. spence is written as a yearner. he very clearly has feelings for jenny, and that's presented in a sympathetic way where as the audience. we're SUPPOSED to root for him and cheer for him to get the girl in the end. peggy's also down bad for spence, so being attractive IS a part of spence's character. that being said, i don't think that spence would've worked as well if someone other than mike were in the role. or at least someone who does yearning well because as we've seen from a lot of mike's projects (challengers, bbm, tacs, iciwid, the grief of others, arguably wss) he's a great yearner. but mike really does just have such a special charming quality to him that i think is unique to him, and i'm not sure how his character would've come across if someone else played him.
now THAT being said, i'm always going to think that mike will elevate any role he's in. he brings something so special to each of his characters that i think part of the success of his characters lies in how he plays them and not necessarily in the character's writing. whenever i think about art donaldson, would i have loved him so much if say, chris evans had played him???? probably not. would riff have become such a fan fave post-wss 2021 if it weren't for mike??? i'm biased, but trying to be as objective as i can be, i really don't think so. mike's characters have historically wound up becoming the fave male character of a project. looking at wss (though that one's not too hard considering who the male lead is 💀) and panic specifically. even when it comes to challengers, art is generally the more widely popular character overall. within the fandom, i don't think that's necessarily true, but as far as numbers go, i think art's the more popular one. and i do think that has to do with mike's performance.
so this is a very long-winded way of saying, i think spence's appeal is kind of both how the character's written but also based on mike's charm and attractiveness. i'd say it's like...40% character writing and 60% mike lol so yeah! that's my long yappy way of saying all of that 😭
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Also Ryuki is a severely underdeveloped character. Not as in "he's one dimensional and all of the actions he take are flat and there's no texture to his arc" but "he has not been developed alongside his companions." In the first game Date was just familiar with Mizuki, Renju and Shoko but he develops a complex relationship with everyone else in the main cast over the course of the game outside of the case. On the other hand, Mizuki in AINI has pre-established ties with basically everyone in the main cast right off the bat. Kizuna, Iris and Mame are her close friends, Shoma is her classmates, she like Gen bc she likes going to Brahman, etc.
I could not tell you anything about Ryuki's dynamic with anyone (aside from Tama, which is incredibly good but due to the nature of her existence she can't actually interact with anyone else to give him more ties). Everyone either treats him politely as an acquaintance, or they're annoyed with him for pushing at their secrets because he's investigating the case. By the time you've gone through the Mizuki route, it feels like no one gives a shit about him.
And I think the easiest and most interesting way to fix this is by having people Not Really Like Ryuki. Like in the past they're still polite enough, but in the present they're all kind of giving him the cold shoulder. People either blame him for the explosion, or they feel bad for him but he's just too much to handle and they're aware of their own lack of capability to help and just try to stay out of it.
This would also complicate the twist in a fun way because 1) You can have an odd kind of sticking point between scenes in Ryuki's route where the previous time you talked to someone they were very nice and then suddenly they switch to being cold and vice versa. Ryuki's naturally nervous disposition works for this because you can have him massively beating himself up and you're like "oh it's just Ryuki being Ryuki, probably reading into things too much" but ooooo it's actually the weird timeline shit and
2) You can actually have Mizuki have a relationship with him because she uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Blames Him For Her Dad's Death and toy around with how Bibi has similar feelings for different reason. Aiba can be trying to push Mizuki to be a little bit more understanding of Ryuki because since she was with Date when they were first hanging out she has past sympathy towards him and also gets how complicated depression is since Date canonically used to have depression so severe he'd get so drunk he'd pass out at Marble (wow like Ryuki). The fact that Mizuki doesn't have stronger feelings about Ryuki after her third parent died on his investigation is fucking wild, let alone it's strange that your dual protagonists don't have more emotions about the other than that "they exist."
Make Ryuki feel guilty about how he fucked up Mizuki and Aiba's lives! He already feels bad about "killing" Date, but why doesn't he actually care about the effect that had on others? Or, alternatively, swing in the other direction! Make him so absorbed in his own feelings of loss that Mizuki gets upset at him for wallowing in self-pity when she's the one that lost the center of her support system! Make him a hard character to stomach in the second route! Just do something so he doesn't feel entirely self contained.
#ai nirvana initiative#aini spoilers#long post#also Ryuki should sacrifice himself for bibi or mizuki in the final battle instead of date if we're gonna do that
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OKAY! I’m sleepy and tried as fuck, it’s 1 am and I feel like I’m about to slip off into the best damn sleep ever. But for some damn reason I decided NOW was the very best time for me to come and rant my heart out about your fic.
forgive me. This might be long.
AGGHHHDBDUSBSJAHIH AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHH-
Sorry. Had to get that out of me. It’s my knee jerk reaction to before, during, and after reading you fic.
now onto the- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHH-
oh! Guess I had a little more in me! Ok now I seem- AGHHHH- to be- AGHHU- a little - Hxjdsisjsi- better???
BUT GOSH ALL THE THUNDER ANGST IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVED IT AND MY POOR LITTLE PATHETIC WET CAT LITERALLY
ok on to the specifics!!
first of all. I like how you make this a whole ass overall arc about Clawdeen and Toralei getting together, Toralei dealing with her plan and her feelings. And also hee super horrible mom RATerina! While also sprinkling in some absolutely god damn DELECTABLE thunder angst scenes. Oh I ate those up so ravishingly. They were so nice and angst and the most tasty words alive!
But yeah. The opening contrast of how Lighting is a norm to Monsters. And lots of times needed and wanted, compared to Thunder. Which is something Toralei fears more than anything. It’s just such a nice highlight. Cause really. Just like Cleo had her fear of the dark. It’s an unusual fear for monsters. These are stuff Humans are afraid of. And that’s probably something that gets under Toralei’s skin as well. Because Monsters don’t fear the dark or storms. They thrive in it. So when she, a definite monster, has this fear of a species she’s been trained to despise, it’s probably just this extra level of overwhelming humiliation and shame. And it really sets the tone nicely opening up!
I loved the first flashback, how it really shows the early signs of brainwashing and toxic ideologies her Mom had ingrained into her. Toralei loves power and thrives on it. It’s an unknowing coping mechanism. But at a young age she isn’t shown that it’s okay not to be in charge, and that others can be royalty too. Thag others can be in charge as well. That she’s not better than others. She was never taught that and it’s sad to read it through a child’s eyes.
and It’s so weird to see the dynamic Toralei and Lagooona have. Not friends. And more like. Hostages. Lagoona is somewhat of a hostage in her own room. Having her most personal thing used against her- where have we seen this before OH YEAH! FROM Raterina!!!
to think Toralei has inherited some of her mothers abusive traits is terrifying. For she truly is just an abused little girl who never got the love she deserved.
And oh. Oh my dear little heart. How it shriveled at reading the part where her mom yells and rants at her for hours until she is sobbing and crying hysterically for hours on end. My poor sweet girl who just wanted a hug got nothing but hate instead.
and OH. my head as poor little Toralei who wanted to be all grown up. Left alone in the house and realizing she left her guitar outside. Poor little kitten clinging to a branch and crying for all she’s worth as she thinks she’s gonna die. And what’s worse is she’d rather risk that imminent death and fear instead of going inside and risking her mothers wrath. god that sounds like a trauma inducing fear if I’d heard of any.
Ooooo the first Clawdeen and Toralei scene. Very interesting. Tantalizing. Fun how Toralei finds her adorable but excuses it like everyone does. It’s odd to see her try and manipulate her. But also it’s just. So easy to see at the same time. Hee wirh her British accent and feline smirk. Sharp claws and predatory eyes. So complex
Damn Raterina really was pulling the strings to Toraleis entire childhood. It’s gross in a way. Like she’s nothing but a puppet to her. A plaything she can control what happens too.
Also odd. Toralei says she doesn’t actually have anything against Lagoona. But it’s rather the fate of species. Is this something her mother has said? Or something that people assume from her that she eventually went ‘Oh, uh. Guess I have to hate her then?’ Too.
OH MY BABY. MY SWEET SWEET GIRL. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH DONT CRY AND SHUFFER AND FUEBUFSNAIFHSUS (I love it. Hurt me more!)
Lol. Not her having a journal that said ‘diary’ in giant fancy letters that she can’t find a way to cover up. That’s such a mood. Why do companies even put diary on the front. It’s obviously embarrassing.
still rolling in my bed over the thunder angst. Poor kitty huddled up in a ball and crying and shaking and-
ok. I’m really trying not to loose myself in the angst here!
”that’s insensitive to mer-folk”
ok BESTIE THAT WAS ACTUALLY SO FUCKING FUNNY. idk y but I found that so hilarious.
Toralei giving draculaura a compliment then immediately insulting her lack of appreciation for the compliment is such a mood and a her thing idk what to do.
LOL ‘how to lure in a wolf and date her’. Throw the saddest fucking party in existence and fully lean into how much of a pathetic wet cat I am, and desperately try to ignore how deeply this all plays into my everlasting trauma from my mother!!!!
No but Raterina never celebrating Toraleis birthday 😩
Toralei the DRAMA. the one woman act. Turning up the pathetic wet cat levels to extreme today.
Aww little Frankie just wants to help but was definitely shoved into high school way before they were ready and honestly that’s so much trauma in itself cause they’re parents literally created them and the first thing they do is send them away to literally live out their life. Like- um. WHAT. The abandonment and rejection they must subtly feel. Like. Wow.
uh anyway this is about toralei.
Toralei. The drama. Who decides to have along ass gay fake romance with Clawdeen to get the necklace instead of just snatching it from her while she sleeps is such a gay mood I can’t.
it’s like ‘On one hand. I could sneak into her room and jsur steal it away? I’m a werecat I’m agile and silent! No one would hear or see me. It’s foolproof. And I have the necklace to give to my mom and win her love!….. OR I COULD DATE CLAWDEEN AND HAVE A SLOWBURN GAY ROMANCE AND BE GAY AND POSTPONE THE MISSION AND MAKE IT TAKE AS LONG AS FUCKING POSSIBLE!
oooo I’ll go with the second one! Definitely a smart decision!
AND NO POOR BABY NOT MORE PAIN AND ANGST AND YES I FUCKING LOVE IT ITS SO DELICIOUS AND JUICY AND RAW AND ANGSTY AND FONDUFNSUD CLAWDEEN IMMEDIATELY HUGGING HER AND TELLING HER ITS GONNA BE OK AND MY HEART IS BLEEDING EVERYWHERE
NO MORE TRAUMA WITH RATERINA. RHAT BITCH.
KSKSKDKS OOOOOO TORALEI YOU GAYYYY. WE ALL SEEEE ITT.
the vulnerability of fears 🥹. The little heart to heart is so precious. The exact moment toralei kinda screws up her plan by falling in love with Clawdeen
DAMN MEOWLODY AND PURRSEPHONY SO SUPPORTIVE AND MEAN AND BRUTAL AT RHE SAME TIME. like on one hand they’re being good people. But on the other GUYS TORALEI IS JUST A BAY GAY. A PATHETIC WET CAT. SHE DOESTN KNOW ANY BETTER BE KIND TO HER.
THE CONFESSION. BE STILL MY HEART.
AND YEAH THEIR ALL GAY AND HAPPY AND-
OH FUCK HERE COMES RATERINA. TIME FOR MORE AMAZING ANGST
NOOO NOT TORALEI IMMEDIATELY SHIFTING TO THE MEAN COLD TRAUMA PERSONA SHES BESN FORCED TO BE BY HER SUPER MEAN MOTHER.
oh man how angry I felt when Raterina greeted her by roughly grabbing her chin and telling her she looked like shit basically. Like THE ANGER
nooo more trauma. Her mom sucks ass.
Aw Toralei just wants to protect Clawdeen .
NO. NOT A THUNDERSTORM. NOT AT THE WORST POSSIBLE TIMING SHOWINB THE MOST HUMILIATING VULNERABILITY IN FRONT OF SOMEONE WHO WILL EXPLOIT IT MERCILESSLY AND MAKE THEM FEEL PATHETIC ABOUT IT! (Not me reacting as if I didn’t prompt that exact thing)
NOOOOO SHUT UP RATERINA.
YEAH GET OVER THEIR AND DEFEND YOUR GIRLFRIEND
SOMEONE GIVE TORALEI A FUCKING HUG
WHOOOOO LETS GO DRACULAURA.
LETS GO BLOODGOOD. SLAY BITCH
YES KICK HER ASS OUT!
Love how Frankie and Draculaura know to leave them alone. Almost as if they know Toralei showing this much vulnerability must already be mortifying for her. Especially with her mom calling her pathetic for it.
HDBSUDNS CLAWDEEN BEING SO SWEET AND TORALEI ADMITTING HER ORIGINAL INTENTIONS THROUGH THE TEARS AND FEAR. THIS WAS ACTUALLY SUCH AN EMOTIONAL RAW SCENE AND PROBABLY MY FAVORITE ONE BESIDES THE RATERINA THUNFER CONFRONTATION.
legitimately I love how she admits it. Cause she doesn’t want to keep anything away from her now. Cause she loves her so much and she’s getting love and comfort she’s so unfamiliar with and her mom truly just sucks ass and gosh. And how Clawdeen knew but had so much faith in her. Probably the first one to every trust and have faith in her. Loving her nevertheless. Finding the good in her.
YES. THEM ENDING WITH SNUGGLES AND COMFORT THROUGH THE STORM. THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING!
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH LAVANDER. THANK YIU SO GOD DAMN MCUH FOR WRITING THIS THIS IS TRULY A WORK OF ART. THIS REVIEW LITERALLY TOOK ME AN HOUR IT IS NOW TWO AM IM TIRED AS SHIT. BUT I HOPE YOU LIKED THIS. IM SO SORRY ITS SO LONG!
NUHBGYVFT AND THE WINNER FOR THE LONGEST NON-BEE MOVIE ASK EVER SENT GOES TO-
But also. AHhhhhhh thank you so much this is like legit my favorite ask ever, I love when people give me their scene-by-scene thoughts on my fics, tysm <3
For anyone who hasn't read it, the fic in question is There's Always a Storm!
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Hi Pia,
Behind-the-scenes-fic-ask, number 21 and falling falling stars please ❤️
21. What is something you didn't expect people to notice or gravitate towards in this fic?
Ooooo, okay, actually quite a few things!
So the biggest one is that I just never expected to have Dr Gary be anything more than an extremely minor character that Efnisien mostly reflected on. I never planned to write whole sessions, and the first one was only a section of a chapter rather than a whole chapter, because I thought readers would hate it.
I actually really hate reading a lot of fictional therapy sessions, especially when that's not the focus of the fic. Most fictional therapy sessions read like 'therapist is narrating pop psychology and telling this character everything they want to hear and they're subbing in for a kind parental figure' at best.
There are exceptions to that, but for the most part, I find that boring - it feels like a kind of writing that is not quite lazy, but a bit 'there are other more interesting ways to share this.' Therapists don't feel like real people in those circumstances, with their own motives, thoughts, intentions and drives. They feel like an extended part of the character's brain, or they feel like an empty function.
But Dr Gary was like, was a hit. I was getting a lot of asks about him, a lot of interest about him in the comments, and in the first few chapters, me and my beta actually kind of shipped him and Efnisien together before he met Arden (that's how we ended up with Underline the Black lol).
So yeah, that's the biggest one!!! And that one is a pretty big one. :D
Otherwise, I was also surprised by (but maybe shouldn't have been) how many Kadek/Efnisien shippers there are and Kadek/Efnisien/Arden shippers. I was like...hmm...how can I put this - Kadek has darker brown skin, and in those cases some readers don't really go for that chemistry. He's also 20~ years older than Efnisien, though he doesn't act like it, lol. Like, I personally shipped them even though I wasn't going to write them into the main story, but I was very reserved/aware that people might not want that. Especially with how confrontational and sometimes even mean Kadek can be.
Honestly that was like, probably the nicest surprise. It wasn't that I expected people to be awful, often I try and go in with fairly open expectations, it was more like I was prepared for people to not feel/see what I was feeling/seeing about a character. And I was okay with that, because he's a side character. But we got way, way more scenes with Kadek because of how people responded to him.
This story really couldn't have been what it became without the readers! The best part about not planning a story is I can follow the kind of momentum of readers. I don't believe in caving to fanservicey stuff, but I do believe in 'oh you're open to this? I can give you more of this!' or 'oh you like him!!! Yay!! I do too! Let's experiment with a whole therapy session chapter and see how y'all feel about it.'
:D That's my favourite part of writing, honestly. I actually kind of feel bad for the people who don't read fics as they go like this, and just read it all when it's completed at the end. Because they miss this kind of alive creation of this ongoing story, and they miss being a part of it. And obviously they also miss the agony of waiting for chapters, but as someone who reads WIPs myself, idk there's something very cool about seeing something come to life - especially like, if say early on you are like 'I love this character so much' and then a bunch of other people say it, and then the author is like 'well this character can make the story stronger so good news everyone, I'm putting him in more because you all love him so much.'
That's... like... *chef's kiss*
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From this meme!
#asks and answers#memey goodness#falling falling stars#dr gary konowalous#kadek setiawan#initially kadek was quite a lazy character for me in that#he was very loosely based on a good friend of mine#and then it was like oh let's...#let's really do this#efnisien would never have gotten that piano as a gift from kadek#if it wasn't for y'all and i appreciate that
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Under the cut, read at your own risk, spoilers in the read out
Episode 1: Cinderella
Rating: 6.5/10
Not impressed with this, to be honest. Kind of tired of 'Ooooo we made it DARK and EDGY'. Mostly because I am not sure of the reasons for Kiyoko to do anything she does?? Like it just seems arbitrary, and maybe that's the point. Way to easily predicted for the plot and there's not much in the way of twists, but the animation is, of course, wonderful. Not sure where we are in the setting, and I would've liked a more cat and mouse game of wits here, but it suffices.
Episode 2: Little Red Riding Hood
Rating: 9/10
Fantastic version of Little Red Riding Hood, with a Cyberpunk flavor. I love the blurred lines of virtual versus reality and Gray was just straight up evil, but the twists were great in this, and the gore was the right amount of enough. I really enjoyed it, even if there weren't any animals.
Episode 3: Hansel & Gretel
Rating: 6/10
I agree with another consensus that this would've been better as it's own thing, but the space stuff was cool, I loved that the station was shaped like a cake, and in full CLAMP style... Hansel & Gretel aren't two people, but one and we stan a Genderfluid Ruler (I really don't know how else to read the scenes with Gretel and Hansel realizing they're one, not two. Or at least I think Hansel is Bigender but that might be me. Why imagine a female twin of yourself otherwise? *knocks on egg*)
Episode 4: The Elves & The Shoemaker
Rating: 4/10
Thematically, interesting to do it with a novel, but it loses its way, meanders through the meaning and everything is kind of lost. We never find out about the 'elves' helping the writer or why and half the stuff added is just nonsense. I wish it could've been stronger when talking about the themes of a novelist who's lost his drive, though.
Episode 5: The Town Musicians of Breman
Rating: 7/10. Could have been stronger with a bit more backstory to Roba and Neko, and I would've preferred Rooster be the one to take on the final brother. It was fine, though I think there was a waste of some character designs for characters who barely have any dialogue and die right away
Episode 6: The Pied Piper of Hamelin
Rating: 2/10
Honestly, the worst one. It's just Footloose, but with a creepy teacher. I really didn't like anyone in the story at all.
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What are your Stranger Things 2024 predictions? Not like "What do you think will happen in ST?" NO. I'm talking: What do you think will be leaked this year? What drama do you think will take place? What rumors do you think will end up being true? What promo do you think we will get? Any scandals? Will the show/actors win awards? If so what awards or acors? I want hot tea predictions.
Sincerely, Prediction anon
ohohoho okay, now that's actually a good question
we'll definitely get some official table read content really soon, which the official twt account has confirmed. it's just kind of likely imo that we'll get those sometime this year because filming is already supposed to start in january if the most recent leaks are true
what's basically guaranteed to start with filming is softcore production teasers by the cast right off the bat. so basic, "back to shooting" instagram posts/stories, generally being on a set, getting make up done, hanging out with co-actors, and so on. we might also see some costuming/hair there, but it might also take a few months before we see concrete looks. also possible that we'll see a costume early on but then it never ends up being in the show because the picture was from fitting and the look didn't make the cut
but none of that will be too wild imo. i mean, i want to see the costuming but that's probably going to be all we'll really get, especially as 2024 starts
and in usual production fashion we'll probably also get typical teasers of things we already know will be relevant for s5 just to remind people of what's going on with the show, like "ooo Vecna ooooo". classic still shooting promo like that. but probably nothing really plot revealing
but that's all really basic. the thing i could see be the most interesting about official teasers in the early months of filming is getting a glimpse of the vibe s5 will have. like if we see more military props in a picture, how does the UD look, if someone posts a pic of like a destroyed house and so on
but yk, official teasers will hold back a lot. they'll get more interesting later on for sure but that's also where it's kind of hard to predict what they'll go for. like how they started with their evil grandfather clock teaser for s4. honestly i could see them continue that since they didn't actually answer any questions about the grandfather clock... i can also see them lean more into the "Hawkins will fall" line of s4. they emphasized it so much in the show and even in all the s4 trailers only for s4 to only be the set up for it. so in my opinion they'll go there again fr this time, now that they finally finished the build up to it (s4) and got to payoff (s5)
the most interesting will for sure be the unofficial leaks but those will also be the messiest. because pictures are always without context and text "leaks" are almost always fake, or at the very least (like, only 1% of leaks isn't fake honestly) missing context and facts
similar to how there were "photo leaks" pre s4, that had people going crazy but gave away nothing. like the byler cabin leak pic for example that i think had people think that would be a confession scene? only for it to end up being the s4 cliffhanger spores leadup and some people ended up being disappointed
and something like that will happen again for sure, 100%. like getting two characters in a leak photo and people make up their own theory on what will happen in that scene. and then it's something entirely different in s5 and those people will be mad. lmao. could happen with byler, mleven, something platonic. basically anytime we'll get a bts leak i'm guaranteeing there will be people who think it tells them what happens in s5 and it will be unbearable to wait an entire year with people around who are convinced they managed to predict an entire plot point by a still image of two actors looking at each other where we don't even know if they're in or out of character. it will happen and it's one of the worst parts of any movie/show fandom during production imo (not speculating about possibilities the pics give us tho, speculating is fun)
also the text leaks will be insane (bad). like usual, we'll get more and more as filming goes on, and all of them minus two credible sources will have the "i know someone who works on the show trust me" backing. so we'll get at leat 20 versions of "mleven is endgame and has two kids <333333", maybe 10ish versions of it with byler endgame. and that also goes for the supernatural plot. someone will say Vecna dies, someone says orderly Henry shows up and stabs El, the upside down starts spinning in circles, there's a dragon, no there's a demogoron but it's two stories tall, the school gets blown up, Steve trips and dies from hitting his nose on the ground etc. it'll be the wild west basically. also i'm expecting multiple "this character dies" leaks too, going into s5 the entire cast will be dead essentially. (most likely for this are probably Will. duh. reddit seems to Really want that guy dead. El -> sacrifices her for everyone else's sake. and Mike, which i unironically think is going to come from a) mleven hardcore believers who'll say he sacrifices himself for El b) "byler shippers" who actually only like Will and think he's too good for Mike, and c) people who just hate Mike and pick him for their "x character dies" leak since they'd like that, and we'll be left to guess which of these the original leaker is)
basically, March-ish to s5 release will be hell on earth because you'll have the people who have no experience with show production periods fall for every "leak" and be in a constant "we won" "we lost" cycle. not fun. unless your dash is normal which i'm recommending you take care of before you get the first people crying over a "my cousin who does the lights says he saw Matt Duffer say they'll kill El :((((((" leak on your dash, lmao
and tbh that'll definitely get worse once we actually get semi reliable leaks like we had for s4. because some things always end up being the opposite of what the leakers make it sound like. either due to lack of info on their part or personal bias. like how there was a leak about about the s4 sbp scene "mike confesses his love to el", and then we got.... that monologue, which was the opposite of the "cute" moment the leak described and made everyone and their mom hate the ship
funniest leak in that regard imo would honestly be a "scene of Mike and El talking about their feelings for each other <3" and then it ends up being a breakup. is that likely?.... honestly i can see that, that's exactly the way that would end up being telephoned to us in a leak😭
also i'm expecting the UD lore to get SO confusing next year. because someone will "leak" something that's entirely nonsensical. like "demodogs die when you shine a light on them", but then it ends up turning out the "light" is a blowtorch in s5 and we won't know until it releases
tbh what i'm most excited about leak wise is, yeah sure a) the costuming/outfits. that's always interesting and leaks will be the place we'll see the most of that. but more so b) actor combinations in different shooting locations. which will absolutely fan the s5 plot speculation flames. like with how there were set leaks during s4 about Steve/Robin/Max/Dustin at family video and so on (i think that's the department we're going to get the craziest theories from as well. like for example, if we got leaks of Jamie ever shooting out of studio with other actors, that would open the floodgates to speculation. honestly kind of want that. let him show up in some vision, or put his ass out in the open in the UD, i want people go crazy over speculating about the s5 vecna interactions. and same obviously goes for the relationship department, bc bts leaks usually tend to spoil either season group ups or at least a shared scene between characters. and i want to know the s5 group ups SO bad)
and tbh, i don't really know/care what the actors will do. i can only see them get awards post s5 in 2025 unless they're doing other projects on the side. same for scandal wise, i'm Assuming there won't be anything (said with a raised eyebrow and a frown), given that they all act normal, especially given they'll be busy actively filming and being instructed on promo posts etc
so my predictions would generally be:
regular socmed actor promo, mostly about bts of the actors hanging out (non work things), some costuming bts etc
i think they'll probably lean into the "hawkins will fall" slogan of s4, and i can see them carry the grandfather clock motif on as well when they start more official promo/teasers
also reminders of things that will be important in s5 semi frequently as well. like "remember when will went to the UD" and "remember how Steve and Jonathan both have feelings for Nancy" and so on
with the filming being exclusively in atlanta again i can also see set leaks getting more interesting again than they were for s4. like how they covered the irl trailer park with vines for the s4 UD. especially with things like the giant downtown replica set for s5 there's a lot of potential for us to see Something happen there. i can see them deck that prop out for the UD, or make it a "destroyed" version of downtown. etc
and obviously a shit ton of things that are baseless or straight up lies. a million mleven is canon vs byler is real ross duffer told me leaks. a shitton of leaks of A interacts with B and then it never happens. all the classic "source? i made it up" leaks that spring up around popular shows. hell on earth. i'm excited btw
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ooooo I'll jump on the nana crossover idea! What are your thoughts about it?
Okay first, taste!!!!
And to be honest, I find Nana soooooooooo much better written than a lot of the popular animangas like naruto. I love how the female characters are fleshed out and have actual flaws, the relationship dynamics, the reality of how toxic some relationships can be, and the dialogue?? *chef’s kiss* Like seriously, the plot may not be adventurous or mysterious, but the characters are so interesting? And don’t get me started on the heartbreak!! Nana x Hachi is my overall favorite ship, but I do like Nana x Ren and I’m still not digesting that Nobu x Hachi breakup 😭😭😭😭
And again, I really love how flawed the female characters are! My problem with female characters in most animes, including the new anime out rn, is that a lot of female characters are very one dimensional. Like before it used to be the damsel in distress/love interest trope, and now its characters whose only trait is being a ‘badass’ yet they’re still getting their asses kicked in major fights and get saved by the male hero. So an anime like Nana, where the female characters are filled with depth AND are the main characters, is so refreshing, especially for someone who doesn’t really read shoujo that much either.
Like for example, a character like Nana is pretty popular in other medias cause theyre usually that tough, cold female character, with a secret heart of gold. The mysterious types who always have their guards up until the end and their character flaw tends to be “traumatized or grew up in a terrible environment so now she’s all introverted and snarky to most people” (like raven from teen titans and artemis from young justice. love them, but kinda tired of how most ppl think all well written female characters must be written like them). But what makes Nana unique for me is that she’s selfish, insecure, and controlling.
Same with hachi. Another character trope popular in manga. The sweet, naive girly girl who tends to be the one dimensional primary love interest/damsel in distress for the main hero (orihime from bleach and hinata from naruto). While Hachi is very naive and is prone to falling in love very quick (more like the idea of falling in love), I love how she isn’t written to be 100% all sweet and sugar and nice girl who’s saving herself for marriage with her one true love (that one guy she likes in high school). She’s shallow, self-centered, and emotionally dependent on her love interests, junko, and nana.
Bonus points to womanhood being a main theme here, especially with two female characters who are the opposites of each other in their personality, fashion, background, etc.
I love to think about one of the homra guys, maybe someone like chitose, gets everyone hooked on nana lol. Like he probably overheard a lot of his f*ck buddies and random girls on the streets keep talking about some nana show, so he looks it up and at first loses interest when he realizes its shoujo, but then gets a little curious and wants to know what the hype is (and he lowkey finds the girls hot). So he brings it up to the other guys when they’re all chilling in the bar one day and obviously a lot of them are like, “fuck no, we’re not watching that girly shit” but then totsuka gets interested and he manages to get everyone to sit around the tv and watch the show lol (except for anna since totsuka did some research and found out that there are implied sexual scenes and mature topics). At first, the guys are annoyed at being forced to watch the show (a good chunk of them glaring at Chitose for bringing the topic up), but then suddenly they’re all incredibly invested by like ep 3. A lot of the boys probably talk about which Nana is better or more of their type at first, but then they all probably start shipping the two Nanas and god damn just f*cking kiss her already!!! Not gonna lie tho, I do think some of them are gonna hate on Hachi for leaving Nobu :/ They’re definitely going to sympathize with Nobu, but I just know some of them (Chitose) are probably gonna be like ‘thats what happens when you’re a simp’ 🙄 Overall, I do think most of them will be extremely sad/depressed once they reach the end of the show, not realizing how much this show and its characters impacted them lol
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the imagery was also so visceral with those stories! i mean, ariel's feet feeling like she was walking on knives? oh, that was always such a brutal description of things... yeah, revisiting things from your childhood with your current mind was always pretty fun to do.
i'm not all too sure to be honest? i know they have things about the original concept for frozen out there, including concept designs and things of the like, so we'd probably be able to find it if we were to look for it? Let It Go being a villain song originally always surprised me, if i were being honest.
sometimes, the best stories come from you just fucking around! i enjoy it when men are a little expressive with the way they dress. honestly, i feel like it can make some really good dynamics if people were a little more brave?
a fantasy series would be really fun, yeah... we'd have to give credit to Beth, it's because of my conversation with her that I even had the idea to ask about the fairytales thing. As for a world... well, that is another interesting question. we could do just about anything... and, yeah, i agree. making ocs with friends was always super fun for me. i miss it, if I'm being honest.
i mean, i have an OC based off of a fairytale, mine was just based off sleeping beauty. she was really fun to make... so maybe i'll see where the Snow Queen can take me? - Minori
Oooo, yes! I do love it when authors use very striking imagery in their stories. It's one of the main things that draws me in as a reader. Honestly, its the whole reason I started reading Miss Fisher! My grandmother read me a snippet and I was in awe at the sheer imagery. It felt like the words were like dancing together to make a scene in my head,,,,, it was so stunning.
It shocked me too, but knowing the other roles Elsa's VA has played, I could totally see her playing a villain if she truly wanted to. The lady has an insane range! I kinda wish there was a recording of it like there is for "Snuff the Light" from Emperor's New Groove.
I absolutely agree! Sometimes you need to be ready to step out of the box! It's honestly the only way you can learn sometimes if you wanna figure out how to write a wider range of characters. Plus, fashion! Its so fun to play with!!
Ocs with friends go together like, well, any duo really. I know I don't talk about my oc worlds on here much, but if you've seen one you like you're more than welcome to concept an oc/be silly with me any time. That or we can just make some from scratch. You gotta enrich your sillies!
Ooooo sleeping beauty oc,,,, god I love when people make those,,, they're always so pretty and cool. I think the snow queen can be the same as well! I'm excited to see what you do!
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Today’s Webtoon. Episode 5.
That little shit starts everything but overreacts the second someone refuses to let him hit her.
I would not be letting Bland PD talk to me like that. No. I’m not going to let someone try to hit me then complain about their hands hitting when I stop them.
I love the senior artist defending nurse artist. He’s right, but he’s taking the moment to defend because Bland PD is being a dick.
“No one is good at anything from the start.”
I’ve never had a problem with the way anyone eats in any drama I’ve ever seen—until now. Man does villain make me dislike food just watching him eat for three seconds. Which I guess is the point to that mini scene.
He better just be playing that guy…
Tf is that bike 🤨I can’t take interview buddy’s thoughts seriously while he’s on it. He can’t have taken that guys deal while intending to go through with helping him. I want to say it will look like he did but really intended to sabotage the saboteur.
lol nurse artist’s circles look like someone’s doodles after being cursed by a ghost.
I have pens like that! I love them.
I bet he ends up drawing a perfect circle by the time he’s done.
Uhh that’s a LOT of feedback all at once for a new artist to take in.
Bland guy is really pmo.
I respect FL’s new girly artist for really working through all that feedback then asking for specifics. 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 Being vague is so unhelpful (FL is still learning though!) specifics can help someone understand so they know how to fix things.
🥺 I’m glad her mom knew to stop and saw how she just needed her support. I would love to see the mom become the biggest cheerleader for her.
Oopsy. She shouldn’t have made that promise but I love his determination.
😳 oooh shit. 😬 that bordered on almost “rude” But I think it came out just this side of encouraging and is probably what the veteran assistant needed to hear.
Interview buddy has a knack for reading people. That will come in handy.
But people need to watch out for veteran assistant. He looks like he’s about to snap.
Nurse artist reminds me of my niece. They don’t look anything alike other then they both have cute faces. But I think it’s the hoodie that reminds me of her.
Ooooo… that’s interesting! Face blindness perhaps? Something else… I forget what it’s called?
I love the way they are helping him with expressions. And I love how hard he’s working to improve.
Dude… I REALLY don’t but trust bland guy. Tf is he doing?
FL’s mom is the greatest. I love how she covers for her. 🥰
I wonder if that opponent faked the injury, wasn’t actually hurt other than something minor, or if she went in with an injury to get hurt enough to justify quitting. I feel like those are the options that would work in a story/drama
Bland PD needs some ointment for that burn from Glasses. 🤣😂
I get why she waited so long to tell her dad. But I’m glad she is standing up for herself.
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Thoughs on Avengers: EMH
S1:E1 Iron Man Is Born
(Under a read more because I spoke a lot)
I do very much enjoy the lines for Tony they have the snarky, cocky yet also self sacrificing behaviors down to a T. Found it really funny how he was speeding on the highway too/zooming into the garage. Pepper didn't move at all when he was coming full speed at her, which means this is a common occurance/she trusts Tony and his driving skills to know she is in no danger of him not stopping fully. Rhodey also wasn't worried about Tony speeding, which I think sets up Tony's character very well as seemingly doing reckless things but the people around him trust him to have the skill to back it up.
Very interesting how they kept mentioning how Tony Stark used to work for/with Shield and as a weapons manufacturer (and also as a prison designer apparently??). I'm looking forward to see if they go more in depth as to how he got into that/why he left it.
The fight scenes are a little ridiculous but that's kinda to be expected I think from a superhero show.
Hmmm not quite the biggest fan of how they've portrayed Hill, as she's supposed to be Fury's right hand man, but they literally introduce her with Fury insulting her for relaying information about something she has no control over?? And they made her be an audience stand in it seems, where she learns new things about the world with the audience that Fury already knows about. (Which doesn't make sense for someone in her position to be so unaware/not on the same page as Fury) I'm getting the feeling this is going to be many female characters being shafted in favor of male ones, which again i should be expecting given when this came out/the target audience.
I'm very impressed with the amount of abuse this iron suit/Tony can deal with tbh. Water, fire, drills, blunt force, plasma blasts/electro pulses or some shit.
(Also the setup of Tony being on his own and not accepting help/not having a team to back him up and suffering for it ooooo I am so looking forward to the pay off of getting the whole Avengers team together)
The confrontation of Tony vs Shield is also very very interesting. Everyone's using his tech whether he wants them to or not, and im also 👀 to see what comes of that in the future. (Again it pits Hill and Fury against each other though and I don't quite like it)
Very non subtle world building infodump about the prison. How did no one check these guys before they came to the super secret prison that holds the imprisoned leader of their group??? Seems like a policy oversight ngl.
And seems normal humans are also immune to long term effects of blunt force trauma. Kudos to the people of this universe though they clearly needed that evolutionary trait.
Anyway! Solid introduction episode, I'm already very endeared towards Tony (to no one's suprise) and I will keep rooting for justice for Hill she deserves better. I am def hooked to see how they resolved the plot lines set up in this episode. See yall next time!!
#marvel#earth's mightiest heroes#earths mightiest heroes#avengers emh#tony stark#maria hill#nick fury#long post#my post#liveblogging
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She walks with Gregor and the kids, being completely silent and nearly falling asleep while standing—but she only kinda snaps back I reality when she sees them point out Roy, and nearly pulls them back when they almost run into oncoming traffic, but Gregor does that before she can. Sunny gains a mildly offended look when Evermore goes 'Oh, great..' while looking down at the kids, but follows the kids when Gregor dismisses them, and she also does it just to be sure Roy doesn't do anything.
Sunny immediately starts glaring at Roy the second they walk up to him, and when he tries beating them up the first time, she kinda gets in front of them so he can't—and is relieved when Robert and Ross pull Roy back. She really doesn't think they need to apologize to Roy, and is very irritated over the thought, but she wants to get it over with so she let's the kids apologize after explaining what they came for. Robert and Ross say they don't need to apologize, Roy is a dick about it though obviously, blah blah blah, Sunny watches the whole scene in silence until Roy tries to go up and beat them—but Sunny just kinda pushes him away and at least tries to block the few hits he manages to land on them. She puts the kids behind her again, saying 'What the hell?!' once he's done. And she only gets more angry when he refuses to apologize, but she keeps her anger in and just goes back with the kids to where Gregor is.
When they go back to Gregor, Sunny explains what happened while helping the kids put their proper masks back on—and is still pissed so she resorts to having angry daydreams. She hears they're going to the Hospital though, and thinks she could possibly visit Patty since she hasn't seen her in a bit, so on the way there she probably asks off screen if she can go see her and Gregor probably says yes lmao. Sunny also probably realizes that they wronged Patty somehow, so after scolding the kids a bit, she decides she'll let it go as long as they apologize—which they're going to.
(Stopping so ya can read—it'd be kinda interesting to imagine how Roy would react if he knew all the shit that happens to her on a annual basis lmao/j)
Ooooo
Uh oh Sunny bout to experience the Horrors of her possessed aunt!
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✨️ out of the comments youve received on your fics, what are two or three of your favorites?
just two or three???? ive got a lot of lovely comments since i began posting so i just cant choose !!! but i especially love when people comment things like my fic was Exactly what they wanted to read for x characters/ship or when they say it made their day or when they say they hadnt read fics in forever and they decided to open mine and theyre glad they did bc they loved it.... ofc all comments make me always very happy but situations like those bring me a special kind of joy i cant describe.... also i love when people get unhinged on the comments of my fics like aldjkdkdkdk i just Love reading it. i wasnt going to post pics but i spent some time reading all the comments ive ever got and got nostalgic so shoutout to these two people who commented on All the chapters of one of my fics their comments always gave me LIFE



🥳 why did you start writing fanfic?
i already liked writing in general way before writing fics! ive always loved reading since i was a little kid so at some point i just got interested in try working on my own stories and write them down as well! tbh appart from a couple of really short stories i never finished (or really got very long into) anything of what i started writing and now that i think abt it maybe that was bc i started with very high goals and expectatives. and then i got into reading fics and after a year or so of just reading them one day i was like wait i Can write my own stories abt my blorbos too! and i remember i was so excited bc i could write my fave characters in the exact situations i wanted them to be and it also turned out to be So much easier than trying to write original stories bc fics just give you so much more freedom and you dont have to worry abt coming up with characters or places bc theyre already there !! i remember the day i started writing my first fic and i was so happy and excited all the time it was really fun and im so glad i gave it a try bc its now a great hobby of mine <3
🎨 if someone were to make fanart of your work, what fic or scene would you hope to see?
ooooo i think that would be my killugon dancing au "false steps". theres only so much i can do describing them dancing with my words so it would surely be so nice to actually see art of them dancing and wearing their dancing clothes or costumes......
i also wanna say my ritsumao 5+1 fic bc i love that fic and think it would be so cute like im imagining a big picture with a little drawing of each of the six scenes and 🥺
#ask#mutuals 💜#id also say my enstars bb fic for the last one but it already has very cute art i cant wait for you to see it!!!#thank you so much the ask raeyyyy <33333#ask game
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