#oks-MC

[oneknightstand-if]

MC, Too Pure for The World, Asks Local Incubus if They're Hungry

Meanwhile Adrian having a conniption fit in the background. I'm currenting editing/polishing the latter half of Chapter 2-3. Once that's done the next major update for the Beta should be rolling out.

[rinriya]

My MC: /tries to flirt with Adrian/ Adrian: /runs away/ My MC: /starts flirting with others because apparently one-sided crush is a painful thing/ Adrian:

My MC: ?????? Boiiii what do you want???

In another option, this is how Merlin behaves lol guys, calm down

We're saving the world here, what in the name of The Bachelor are you doing?

[fruitpi3-14]

I drew fan art of the characters in @oneknightstand-if 's IF! I tried to portray the motorhome gang in an anime-esque style... I hope I was able to do them justice!

The character in the foreground is my MC, Aria "Ari" Lee, named for her penchant for bursting into song at the most random times. With her magic stat of 40 and sweetness stat of 241 (as of Ch2-3), she's ready to take on the apocalypse!

Alternate ver:

Flat colours + sketch:

[plantyberry]

Planti's OKS musings: Imposter MC

So, I feel a bit weird doing that, but I have to start from somewhere, so here we go! Please take note that the data in this post comes from the game and code from the Public beta build (currently up to Chapter 2-2)

Welcome to Planti's OKS musings! yaaaaaaaay

For now I will focus on the MC's Imposter Secret, seeing as this will be the one thing to bite them in the butt later on if not handled correctly (looking at you here, Liar/Serial killer), this time featuring my observations on the Imposter, my personal favorite due to it being the most 'normal' one of the bunch as well as the potential hilarity of there being two imposters in this van if you add in the saboteur.

Chapter 1, Secret Pick:

Right off the bat, the Imposter Secret possesses some slight flavor text for the Amnesiac and Accident MCs due to their especially nonexistent/painful pasts and memories that they wish to escape. Picking the Imposter Secret gives +5 to the 'social' score, which is fitting seeing as, according to the narration, it was pulled off using exclusively the MC's social abilities and maintained that way.

Breaking down the choices and what they apparently give (since I remember the writer mentionning that they were lying somewhere, no doubt in part to obscure who the other Imposter here is) Here is what we have!

As far as I can tell, only the first two waves of questions have a mechanical impact.

Impactful choice 1:

-I don't even know what I'd been thinking : Bold -2 -I immediately knew exactly what I had to do : Bold +2 -I never intended this. It just sort of... happened : Bold -2, Sweet +2 -It was only meant for a short term lark in the beginning : N/A

Impactful choice 2:

-It's not as if I'm hurting anyone : Optimist +1, Sweet +1, Bold -1 -It's not as if it's possible to steal from the dead : Sass -1, Sweet -1, Bold -1 -It's not as if [The Original] ghost's haunting the world because of this : Optimist -1, Sass +1, Bold -1 -No excuses here. In the end, I wanted to be [Them] and so I became [Them] : Optimist -2, Sweet -2, Bold +5

Additionally, and rather tellingly at that, There are two further direct background interactions with this secret. If one picked the Amnesia Childhood and/or the News Reporter Job, both Lorelei and Gwyneth gain +1/+2 on their sus score.

Now, let us look at that particular data point from another angle: This doesn't trigger if the MC has an abused, abandoned, or accident (now that I think about it, all the childhoods come with an 'a', funny coincidence) childhood and/or stays clear of working as a reporter as an imposter.

This is relevant because of several things:

First, in the Amnesiac background, it is mentionned that there was a national/international media campaign when Amnesiac MC was first found and some more perceptive characters may very well suspect something. However, I find it odd that Cassandra, the literal police detective, isn't the one gaining the sus score here, meaning that even though this point could be a weighting factor, it isnt the determinant one.

Second, the fact that this only triggers in the Amnesiac MC's path as far as childhood goes means the forgotten past of the MC themselves is going to be a 'tell' of their Imposter secret for Lorelei and Gwyneth. Seeing as a bit of code diving gives us that delightful tidbit (set ensorceled true) when we look at the amnesia childhood is also quite interesting, considering Lorelei and Gwyneth aren't, in fact, supposed to be the most magic-sensitive characters.

Gwyneth I can handwave by saying that she's extremely social-specced and could detect that something's off where Cassandra couldn't, but Lorelei doesn't have this excuse, and her behavior of her being extremely prepared/already on the run (apparently there's a 'reason' she'll be one of the later catches?) on top of the very specific requirements for the sus triggers mean that she is the likelier one of the two to have actually known MC in the past.

Chapter 1-5-2:

Most of the flavor text involving the Imposter secret revolves around them taking advantage of situations or doesn't bear any mechanical effects that I can anticipate, except maybe this one:

-For the Smoking-addicted MC who went back to their apartment, it is revealed that the possess another, premium, lighter with what seems to be (unless I'm misreading the narration here) their 'Original' name written on it, the one they had every since they woke up in the desert with amnesia, which is likely to have some rather interesting in light of the Gwyneth/Lorelei possible situation going on.

Chapter 1-6:

Merlin, if they are who they say they are, almost certainly knows the character uses a fake name if a non-mute Imposter MC introduces themselves, though it seems his sus counter only rises when MC deliberately gives them a pseudonym instead. Seeing as they only seem to care about past names and Arthur, they are unlikely to cause trouble unless more people raise up objections (Looking at Gwyneth and lorelei here)

Chapter 2-2:

Imposter secret comes back to bite you in the butt! This time with those two options during the talk about your addiction:

-"Well actually..." I launch into a long retelling of my life story : Adrian Sus +1 If Amnesiac, Imposter and Merlin doesn't know who your past self is: Merlin Sus +1 If Abandoned, Imposter and Merlin doesn't know who your past self is: Merlin Sus +1

-I hand over a thick printed booklet of my life story that I carry around for times just like this. Adrian Sus +1

The reasons for this are fairly obvious, Adrian almost certainly looked into the MC's past, and the discrepancies are beginning to pop up. Beign an imposter is a secret that only really holds as long as people don't know enough about MC to be able to call them out on their lie. The more info MC gives, the weaker their secrecy becomes, as Adrian oh-so-suspiciously put it 'keep it simple' (so says the one most likely to be a fellow imposter secret holder). As for Merlin, the Amnesia incident reeks of magic interference, and the Abandoned one is also pretty suspicious, but seeing as those only trigger suspicion when MC is an Imposter mean that Merlin possesses some level of awareness of the nature of MC's lie.

It's the little things, but considering Book 1 lasts, what, two weeks? Those little things may very well begin to pile up.

The last thing is the TV incident in the shop if MC decides to go there early. If they are an imposter, the TV will show the 'real' owner of the name MC has lived with, which is pretty damning insofar that this means the demons are aware of MC's secret and in turn, so would the Saboteur, which is something they will definitely use against them.

Final thoughts:

As far as secrets go, by itself Imposter seems fairly benign. It looks pretty easy to at least mitigate the negative side effects by revealing your Camelot identity to Merlin and Arthur and having a good relationship with Adrian, and just not being a complete jerk as well as keeping the work on that high social, since this is likely to be the relevant stat checked when the secret is out.

A big thanks to @oneknightstand-if for creating this Interactive fiction that I can theorize my little heart out over. I can't wait to be completely wrong about all of it when more stuff comes out in the public beta!

[oneknightstand-if]

MC The Name Thief

Another of the rarer scenes to trigger for all of the five people who decided to steal Adrian's surname for their pseudonym.

Chapter 2-2 is finally pretty much done at this point with the conclusion of Route 4. I should be hopefully posting the schedule for the Open/Closed Beta sometime this week after I finish fixing the typos and bugs reported in the old chapters.

[rinriya]

I can't help but giggle But seriously… ALREADY 100%? How??? lolololol

[oneknightstand-if]

Platonic MC Fails to Create a Harem

It'll be a while before you can naturally trigger this variation of the confession scene with Adrian in the Free Time Hub since it requires shacking up with Merlin and Cassandra and Gwen at the same time.

Alas, so dies the anime harem dream.

[oneknightstand-if]

ok but playing with a MC who sees Adrian as a friend is so funny like oh yeah this is my good friend adrian, our meeting was incredibly normal and he buys an entire stock of my favorite drink exact brand every 2 months and carries 3 bottles around at every moment for me. Isn't that so nice? He's also weirdly knowledgable about Every Single Subject and when we got into the weirdest experience of our lives it felt like he knew everything already. How comforting! My friend :)

Meanwhile Adrian's POV:

This is my friend ${MC} ${Surname} who just showed up in Death Valley desert one day. No memories and no one who recognizes them. They think they're being hunted by werewolves which is probably why they periodically disappear for a few days at a time (pay no attention to any dead bodies turning up then -- oh god, why are there so many knives here?!).

And now they've got a habit of spinning their head around 360 degrees while saying Satan is coming for us all... but I'm sure everything is perfectly normal over here.

Note to self: Don't let ${MC} start talking about 'perfectly normal' since that tends to make them froth at the mouth.

[oneknightstand-if]

It's Toweling Time!

Since the public beta has finally been updated, I can post a slightly more spoilery screengrab now. From a scene that most people probably won't be seeing since it requires a couple different prerequisites to trigger this variation.

[oneknightstand-if]

Tsundere MC Building Their Harem

Meanwhile, Acrophobe MC is having a great time in this particular date location! From Percy's section of the upcoming Free Time Hub.

[oneknightstand-if]

So What's a Little Cthulhu Summoning Amongst Friends?

MC acting very reasonably and responsibly during their part of the first multi-user spell attempt. Obviously, only good can come from this.

The first half of Chapter 2-3 has been completed and is available on the Greater Circle tier of my Patreon. Not including the addition to Merlin's Guide, it's an additional 41,000+ with code (~33,000 words without code).

[oneknightstand-if]

How many types of MCs we can play with?

You know, I know I already replied to a similar Ask like this before but I can't find it (and it doesn't seem to be in the oks-MC tag either). I even have the pic I used to illustrate it before... and here it is!

Four billion different personalities. The eight (4 opposing pairs) on the main stats menu. The ability to be two-faced where all your outer actions conflict with your inner thoughts.

The Cloudcuckoolander, the one in complete denial, the one who's ç̸͉̖͕̮̰̽͒̾͂ō̴̡̓̏͝r̵͔͓͛̇̕r̷̦̪̗̿̋͝ͅu̴̧̻̯̠̭̇̔̈p̵̘̝͓͎͎͑͜t̷͉̻̍̓̔̊̐̾e̶̡̽̉͆̈́̈́ḑ̸̞̝̍͊̓̕, cautious(up to the point of paranoia) or reckless or a complete scaredy cat, a knight in shining armor or someone who knocks people down so the the hellhound will eat them, a complete pottymouth or pure as driven snow or someone who refuses to speak at all.

Someone who's completely apathetic, someone who's so willful they can drive back the demons. A vengeance-crazed serial killer, a meta fourth wall breaker, a chuuni who thinks they're a fae (no wait, they actually are!), someone who's self identity is so cracked that they're an imposter.

Wrath who needs a chill pull. Greed the Adrenaline Junkie. Sloth who just can't help wasting time. Lust who has severe commitment issues.

The eight different careers also tend to split off into their own scenes as well. That's not even mentioning Camelot MC who has stats and personality complete different from Harbinger MC.

There's 1800+ variables and the first chapter is 600,000+ words for a reason. So basically...

[oneknightstand-if]

Two truths and one lie about the game/plot/characters !

Gawain is one of the love interests.

There's more than one entity in the MC's head.

Merlin isn't actually Merlin.

[oneknightstand-if]

Hi, hello! Which combination of background options would you say work best flavor text and storytelling-wise? I'm assuming something like: accident - serial killer, amnesia - meta player, abused - fae, orphan - imposter?

Considering the effort I've been putting into all the flavor text variations, they should all work well enough storytelling wise, I hope!

Otherwise, these are how the childhoods and secrets were originally conceived before I broke them all up into their own separate things.

Abandoned -> Changeling

Abuse -> Imposter

Accident -> Serial Killer

Amnesia -> Lying about Amnesia

[oneknightstand-if]

Cinnamon Roll MC on Star-Watching Date with Adrian... meanwhile the heavens be trolling

Variation Three of the first 'date' with Adrian available in the Free Time Hub, which you won't be able to trigger for... a while. After all, the Free Time in Chapter 2 takes place inside a warehouse during the day!

But well, it's there waiting in the code.

This is also a quick heads-up, the Alpha Build on the Greater Circle tier of my Patreon has updated to include Adrian's part of the Free Time Hub.

[oneknightstand-if]

We need to reverse stalk Adrian