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[81scorp]

Constructive criticism: Raya and Wish (2023)

Ah yes, Raya and the last Dragon and Wish... and a bonus

Raya and the last Dragon

Taking place in the fictional country of Kumandra, based on Southeast Asian culture, the movie follows the warrior princess Raya as she seek the fabled last dragon to save her father and the land of Kumandra from evil spirits that are known as Druun.

Critics gave the film positive reviews; some critics praised the imagery and depth but criticized the limited Southeast Asian representation.

The movie is very good on a technical level, Visually impressive, fun characters and the story is good... until the third act.

It`s message doesn`t really fit into it`s narrative. It tries to fit a square shaped peg into a round hole.

If I could wish upon a star that I could travel back in time and do some changes to the script I would like to make one small change.

Namaari giving her "This is just as much your fault" speech and Raya acting as if she`s right

The biggest downside in this scene is Raya`s reaction to what Namaari says, looking at her own reflection in her sword as if to say: "My god, what have I become?"

How I would do it: Raya and Namaari fight. Raya gets the upperhand, disarms Namaari and is about to strike the final blow... but then she looks at what`s happening around them, the city is falling apart, killing Namaari is not gonna solve this. She drops her sword.

Raya: "My original plan was to steal the gem. It was Sisu who convinced me to talk to you. She believed in you. And for a moment... so did I."

Then she leaves to save what still can be saved of the people of Fang.

Namaari looks at her own reflection in one of her twin swords and has a "My god, what have I become?" moment.

I guess I could stop here, but I want to change one more scene.

Raya giving her gem piece to Namaari

In the scene where they are all in the pit trying to fight the druuns with their gem pieces and Raya realizes that they have to put the pieces together, it would be better if Namaari gave her piece to Raya before she gives her piece to Namaari.

Namaari would then step backwards and let the Druun take her. The others would then give their pieces to Raya, stand next to Namaari and be turned to stone. Raya tries to put the gem back together, nothing happens, she places herself between Namaari and the others (Tong, Boun, Little Noi and the Ongis), puts a hand on Tong`s arm and a hand on Namaari`s shoulder as if to form a bridge between the two. (Symbolism!)

Then the dragongem starts working, everyone gets unstoned, the dragons return, Kumandra is united and everyone`s happy.

The end.

Yes, I know. Raya needed to learn how to trust, but Namaari needed to show that she could be trusted.

Wish (2023)

Disney (the company that owns your childhood) was turning 100 years old and decided to give itself a big pat on the back by making an animated movie that would celebrate it`s legacy.

The film received mixed reviews, with praise directed towards the vocal performances, the animation and references to the wider Disney canon, but criticism levelled at the plotting, songs, and screenplay.

People were disappointed in Wish because it was supposed to be a milestone, the movie made to celebrate that the Disney animation studio has been around for 100 years! It just couldn`t live up to the hype. But if you take all the hype and great expectations out of the equation and just view it, not as this BIG thing it was intended to be, but just as the movie it is, it`s... just OK.

Later when the art book of the movie came out and people saw what could have been, many youtubers decided to do what I have been doing since 2015, and do a little constructive criticism of their own. With so many rewrites of Wish popping up on the internet and my own history of playing script doctor, it only seems logical that I too throw my hat in the ring and submit my own Wish rewrite.

So... if I had a fairy godmother who could Bibbidi-Bobbidi-Boo me back in time to when this movie was written, this is what I would change.

People willingly giving their wishes to Magnifico

It would have been better if Magnifico took peoples wishes from them without their knowledge. It would have made him a better villain. He could take peoples wishes when they are asleep.

Asha

I`d dial down her quirkiness a little. Personalitywise she could be an ambitious overachiever, a mix between Hermoine and Tiana, with an adorkable side.

Valentino

Does everything he says have to be something comical? I like jokes but not all of them landed. It was like his funniness was mandated. Dial down the number of jokes.

Some of the songs

It`s not that the songs are bad per se, some of them just don`t fit into the scenes where they are used, like "At all cost".

They should either have :

A: Given Julia Michaels more time and let her be more involved in the production. (Howard Ashman was very involved in the making of The Little Mermaid.)

or

B: Hired people experienced in musicals. Maybe the people who wrote the songs for Wicked, Hadestown or Hazbin Hotel?

Magnifico needing a book to be evil

The biggest problem this movie has is that it couldn`t decide if Magnifico should be a redeemable, three dimensional antagonist or a classic Disney Villain, so it did both and the results were underwhelming.

I would have made him a twist villain, but instead of waiting for the third act I would reveal it near the end of the first. He would be a charismatic leader, great at fooling people that he has their best interests at heart. In the end, his paranoia would get the better of him.

To Starboy or not to Starboy, that is the question.

At first I wasn`t gonna bother with the whole Starboy thing since it`s not really an issue. The movie`s biggest problem lies in how they wrote King Magnifico. However, a while ago I saw a video on youtube by ColeyDoesThings who talked about what the movie could have been if they had gone the Starboy route, and she made some compelling arguments. So for this rewrite I`ve decided to go with the Starboy idea.

Starboy`s personality could be a lot like Aladdin, a little bit like Peter Pan with a pinch of Ariel. (Why Ariel? Because similar to her, he wants to be where the people are, he wants to see, wants to see 'em dancin'. You know, all that stuff.) He would be a bit of a contrast to Asha.

I did not change Star becase I thought it was necessary, but because I thought it sounded interesting.

I would also make Hal and Bazeema gay and have them kiss eachother in the end.

Plot

Asha prepares to interview for the job of Magnifico's apprentice on the day of her grandfather Sabino's 100th birthday.

When Asha is around, her mother and Saba put on a happy face for her, when she leaves they become a bit apathetic. This is something that many people in Rosas over the age of 18 (who have had their wishes taken) do.

She leads tourists through the town as she sings about what an amazing place it is and what an awesome king they have in "Welcome to Rosas". She rehearses for her job interview with her friends,

There are three wishes that the king refuses to grant:

Wishes about killing people.

Wishes about making someone fall in in love with someone else.

Wishes about bringing people back from the dead.

If you wish to become a magician you`ll have to become the king`s apprentice (and you don`t have to be 18.)

Queen Amaya shows up and takes Asha to Magnifico. At first it goes a little shaky because she`s nervous but then it goes well and Magnifico thinks she is worthy to be his apprentice.

They sing a duet, but not "At all cost". It is a song about optimism and ambition, about what a great student/mentor team they`ll make. The chorus could go:

Magnifico: "With you as my student!"

Asha: "With you as my guide!"

Both: "Great things will happen with you by my side!"

Something like that.

The interview is over and Asha leaves Magnifico`s study.

She is excited. She gets to work with the king! The most awesome king in the world! She does a dorky little victory dance. Valentino shows up, he snuck into the castle with her. Asha starts chasing him, she doesn`t want him to break something expensive, she really wants this job!

Valentino sneaks in through a door to a big (and probably forbidden) room and knocks down an ancient scroll. Asha picks up the scroll to put it back where it was, then she notices the title: How to remove someone`s wish.

Remove? The king grants wishes, he doesn`t take them!

She tries to convince herself not to read it, it`s not meant for her eyes, it`s classified, but her curiosity gets the better of her. She reads in the scroll that the spell should not be used on people under the age of 18. The individual who has had their wish removed becomes docile and free of aspirations, and in some rare cases, even lethargic (just like Simon). They will feel like something is missing from their life but are not able to put their finger on what.

She refuses to believe this. This can`t be true! Magnifico wouldn`t do something like this! He`s a good king!... Right? There are magical orbs of light floating in the ceiling, she takes a ladder and climbs up so that she can get a better look at them. One of the orbs shows a woman that wishes she could fly, another a woman who wishes to sail the seas, another a man who wishes to climb a muntain, and one of the orbs shows... her Saba! It is true, the king takes peoples wishes from them!

She climbs down, puts the scroll back and leaves the room quietly with Valentino under her arm.

She`s about to leave the castle through the main gate when Magnifico shows up. He tells her that there will be a wish-granting ceremony later that evening and he wants her to be present. Asha is nervous, but not a "OMG! I`m meeting my hero!" kind of nervous, but a "Hope he doesn`t figure out that I went into a forbidden room and saw things I shouldn`t have seen" kind of nervous. He seems not to notice, but at soon as Asha leaves the room we see that he did.

Later that evening there`s a wish-granting ceremony, a woman gets her wish granted, the people cheer for Magnifico and Asha sits there next to the queen, stiff and nervous.

Later that night: Asha tries to tell her family the truth about Magnifico, but they don`t believe her. Distraught, Asha runs away and makes her own wish on a star as she sings "This wish". (Not a bad song, but it could have used better lyrics in some places.)

Starboy appears and surprises Asha who smacks him with her sketch-book. (Meet-cute!)

Magnifico senses Starboy's arrival and sees it as a threat to his power.

Starboy doesn`t really grant wishes per se. He`s only as helpful as giving the means, but it’s up to the wishmaker to put the work in order to have their wish fulfilled.

Starboy's magic brings the forest to life, giving voices to the animals, plants and Valentino. They sing "I`m a star", but with better lyrics. (No "we're all shareholders" or "Get that through your system. Solar!") Asha, Valentino, and Starboy embark on a mission to recover Sabino's wish. She wants to save all the wishes, but if she can only save one she`ll have to focus on Sabino`s.

Tension rises in Rosas, Magnifico makes a public appearence and promises a great reward for any information relating to the strange light phenomenon. This makes Simon react. The residents of Rosas begin questioning his rule for the first time. Magnifico gets uncomfortable, leaves and sings "This is the thanks I get" (But sinister, not upbeat, and no "I let you live here fo free and I don't even charge you rent"). Asha and Starboy takes not only Sabino`s wish but a few other wishes as well and uses Starboy`s cape as a sack.

Asha returns Sabino's wish and he is overjoyed to have his memories back and sings "A wish worth making", playing his lute. They get ready to take the sack with the other wishes and return them to their rightful owners when King Magnifico bursts into the family's home. He has been informed by a mole that Asha was responsible for Starboy's arrival. He crushes Sakina's wish as punishment, rendering her overcome with grief. Starboy tries to defend her and is spotted by Magnifico, who vows to capture him. Asha and her family flee with Starboy. Sakina can barely stand after what Magnifico did to her wish, so Starboy uses his magic to give her the strength to walk. In all the chaos they unfortunately leave the other wishes in their home, Magnifico takes them as his own. Sabino and Sakima hide somewhere safe while Asha goes back to Rosas to free the rest of the wishes.

Later, in Magnifico`s study: Simon enters and feels bad for selling out his friend, King Magnifico tells him that what he did was necessary for the safety of the kingdom and that Asha won`t be hurt. He turns Simon into a knight, not in a public wish-granting ceremony though, but right there in his study.

Later, a brainwashed Simon is walking the streets with the company of other knights, searching for Asha and the rest of her friends. Asha sees him and looks for a place to hide. She finds her friends` hideout, not because of Valentino`s butt, but because of his sense of smell. She rallies the rest of her friends, Queen Amaya shows up and joins them.

Asha and her friends start making a plan.

Later, in King Magnifico`s secret lab: King Magnifico has made a staff, Amaya shows up and tells him what Asha and her friends are planning.

Gasp! Queen Amaya is a villain! (Dun dun dunn!)

She and Magnifico sing an evil duet villain song which is kinda similar to "With you by my side".

Asha`s friends infiltrate Magnifico's study to open up the ceiling and free the wishes while Asha plans to distract Magnifico. She and Starboy hides in the woods, she is nervous, Starboy tries to comfort her, so they talk a little. The talking leads to feelings being revealed which leads to singing. They sing "At all costs" and dance a romantic dance, first on the surface of a lake, then high up in the sky. (Thanks to Starboy`s magic.) Starboy gives Asha a magic wand to use as he leaves to help her friends, he then notices that he is getting weaker. Magnifico arrives, he and Asha fights. Magnifico turns out to be Simon disguised with an illusion and he breaks Asha`s wand, Asha finds a way to knock him out using the environment to her advantage.

Her friends almost free the wishes but are betrayed by Queen Amaya. Starboy tries to stop her but she pulls out a dagger and threatens to kill one of Asha`s friends, Magnifico shows up and zaps Starboy with magical chains that he can`t break free from.

Asha returns to the city, is caught by Magnifico, finds Starboy in magical chains and finds out that Queen Amaya was just a mole. Magnifico darkens the sky with clouds so that the people won`t be able to wish on stars.

Asha (to Magnifico): "I believed in you! I thought you were a good king!"

Magnifico: "I`m not a good king. I`m a GREAT king!"

All hope seems lost, Asha starts to sing the reprise to "This wish", her friends and the people of Rosas join her and their singing makes Starboy strong enough to break free from his chains. The breaking of the chains creates a shockwave that knocks Asha, Amaya and Magnifico off the tower. Starboy, still weakened, only has enough strength to save one of them, so he saves Asha.

With Magnifico defeated, his spell powers down as a new day dawns over the kingdom, with the citizens, Asha's mother included, are able to get their wishes back, afterwards, Asha is soon confronted by a regretful Simon, who understands if she doesn`t want to forgive him, but she does as she understands why he did it.

Starboy keeps getting weaker and has to go back, he gives Asha a new wand and the two of them say good bye. She wonders if she`ll ever see him again, he tells her that he`ll be the second star to the right.

With urging from her friends, Asha promises to help others earn their wishes as a Fairy Godmother, aiding everyone in making their dreams come true.

Post-credit scene: One year later: Asha is walking to the wishing tree in her fairy godmother outfit. She walks past a grave stone. Sabino is sitting in the tree playing "When you wish upon a star" on his lute. A tear rolls down Asha`s cheek. After Sabino has played the song he disappears as if he was a ghost. We see that the grave stone that Asha walked past earlier was Sabino`s. She wipes away her tear, looks up at the second star to the right, takes out her wand and teleports to some place where she might be needed.

And that`s how I would do it. Not great but hopefully not bad.

I cut "Knowing what I know now" because it was getting a little tight between songs. It would be hard to fit that song, Magnifico and Amaya`s villain song and "At all costs" so close to each other, while still maintaining a good narrative flow.

At first I wasn`t gonna turn Queen Amaya evil because I couldn`t come up with enough evil stuff for her to do (that I could fit into the plot without making it worse). But then I made her a villain because it would make things harder for Asha and her friends, which would make the movie more interesting.

But like I said before, the movie`s biggest problem is not that the Queen wasn`t evil, but that the writers couldn`t pick a lane when deciding if they wanted to make Magnifico a three-dimensional antagonist or a classic Disney Villain.

And now... a Bonus

One more thing about Frozen 2

Turning Kristoff`s Lost in the woods into a cheesy 1980s rock ballad musicvideo

I was gonna have this in my Frozen 2 CC but forgot and didn`t remember until after I published it. Since I don`t wanna go back and edit it I`ll write it here.

This scene is admittedly entertaining and if you don`t care about tone as long as it`s entertaining it`s fine.

But funny songs works better for funny characters and what Kristoff is singing about feels sincere, which clashes with how the song is executed.

The 1980s rock sound: Lose it.

The visuals: Have Kristoff walking around in the woods, seeing things that, to him, looks like Anna: a pile of rocks, a pile of leaves, a cloud in the sky. Stuff like that.

Probably an unpopular opinion.

It is of course very easy for me to write these because I have the luxury of hindsight. And unlike the filmmakers I didn`t have a movie studio full of corporate suits breathing down my neck, focus grouping the movie to death, forcing in unnecessary changes and pressuring me to get it made before a deadline.

Why do I write these?

For several reasons. I`m nitpicky. Sometimes the movies I criticize aren`t bad, I just like my own ideas better. Sometimes the movies I critize are bad. I care about good storytelling and it`s a fun excerize in creativity and script doctoring.

But also because I have a lot of of free time.

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Other movies on my Constructive Criticism list that you can look forward to

Supergirl (1984) Jonah Hex (2010) Dragonball evolution The Spirit (2008) The Dark Knight trilogy

And as usual: English is not my first language, so if my writing doesn`t seem to flow naturally, you know why.

[moon-spirit-yue]

Virana: raise your hand if you’ve felt attacked by Namaari

Raya: *raises her hand*

Sisu: *raises her hand*

Boun: *raises his hand*

Noi: *raises her hand*

The ongis: *raises their hands*

Tong: *raises his hand*

Benja: *raises his hand*

Atitaya: *raises her hand*

Namaari: *raises her hand*

[444namesplus]

Aati Aeknaktà Aennastu Afan Affes Ahen Ahoer Ahordè Akni Alonol Alrè Alsar Altontan Ami Ammi Amosnem Anar Anber Andi Anen Anerteras Ani Annes Annà Ansoptà Anà Aonsà Apartò Aren Arensen Aretam Arnu Aru Asadu Aser Asi Asti Asu Ati Atrotol Bakti Behu Belatonnè Dahu Dantansel Dees Dei Delmamati Deraonander Desahalhi Detaltè Doalrò Domenterdò Donsi Donà Doten Doti Eal Edan Eder Edà Efsi Elhahofen Elmeti Elmi Elà Emeren Emesos Emru Emtoesheos Eneri Engesi Ennados Ennentas Ennosom Entar Enti Entu Epti Epè Erantahu Erhu Ernasamfon Erreri Ersà Ertatani Ertonnaosnà Ertu Esden Esesenu Esheemes Eshel Esi Esri Esrostan Estanhoes Estor Estu Esò Etesaelu Etesè Ethon Etteleran Etè Fatni Fefà Foes Fonener Gadu Garlà Gesi Goten Goti Haektos Hafetes Hagelnaden Halsanè Hani Hanonor Hasem Hasu Hatai Hatonnatu Hean Heen Heer Hefi Hehà Helenu Henes Henti Henu Herahi Hernem Heron Heseator Hetetar Heti Hodà Hoeni Hoer Hoi Honar Honetarò Hoshi Hotam Hotos Kesden Ketesi Ladeos Laral Leeestedà Lenal Lenti Lenà Letortoni Loldos Makni Maltar Meher Menannas Menar Merhi Metemerreti Moelri Naam Nafi Nalnalal Namasè Narasu Narnenu Narseselsar Narsò Nasi Natesasu Neam Nebevè Neekdar Neen Nefi Negarraneni Negatu Negu Nehanò Nehasos Nelhesà Neltas Nemos Nemu Nenan Nenanenu Nenfà Nennetu Nenornan Nensahefanem Nenteloru Nenà Neon Neonenti Neran Nerar Neron Neshu Nesi Nesoon Nester Nesu Netesaten Neti Nettassem Neè Nofà Nohes Noi Nonahu Noni Noorà Norsò Noson Nosopnas Nosos Noteren Notersò Nou Oan Oeti Ohasau Okri Olfi Olnà Oltetaleskos Omlà Omsepnotes Onar Ongi Onhò Oni Onoshi Onsel Onserò Onteltetetan Ontà Oprà Ornastu Ornos Orru Orsi Osdon Osematen Oshelen Osi Otal Oteser Ottà Patetoras Pestes Petehoatas Pohon Raan Raerentò Rai Ranenmersanhi Rarer Rarnan Ratadà Real Relenees Reltò Remè Renedoernu Renenani Renesatemni Renhonnomsi Renti Reor Rerti Resi Resnon Restu Resà Reti Roaneahà Rodes Rogedanorler Rohanenhenen Romhè Rontenò Ropoel Rorer Rotam Rotesaan Rotos Rototen Saheer Salanhom Saltel Sarar Sartedotan Sasnanni Sates Sedefdestal Sehotas Selen Selhas Seltean Selu Semeer Semrodi Senetò Senon Senu Sersi Serteasnar Sessarnesti Sessol Sestethi Sesteà Setaos Seè Sofeni Sofnesen Soham Sohari Soltotenè Solu Somassanu Sonas Sonbes Sonharani Soni Sonletà Sorsamehu Soteltenru Taaneesni Taem Taes Tahas Tahè Takden Takes Taldenlà Talehà Talen Talhosos Talnu Tami Tanarresetu Tanartan Tanen Tanesefran Tanreobu Tansehà Tansotoen Tansè Taol Tari Tarà Tatartal Tatesel Tatetai Tateter Tati Tatos Tatu Tatà Tau Teanasner Teannemsehè Teatesnos Tedu Teel Teemai Teer Tees Tefes Teganò Tehossi Temnon Temsal Tenedi Tener Teneru Tengu Tengò Tenhenau Tennasas Tenni Tenronu Tensarohu Tentan Tenò Teolhu Teparpebu Terhetolà Tersaaton Tersal Terti Terà Teserò Tesetai Teshi Testasnonnotu Testi Tesu Tesè Tetaetu Tetenei Tetepnò Teteu Tetorahafi Tetà Teè Toalom Todà Toi Tokenanral Tolaes Toli Toni Tonmà Topti Torarnu Tororatu Torò Tosam Tosar Tosas Tosersan Tostetos Toti Totrà Tottos Totà Tovopemessè

[findurfuture]

In Raya and the Last Dragon Disney Plus; Noi (voiced by Thalia Tran) is a supporting character. She was an orphan though she was adopted by a trio of mischievous creatures known as Ongis. Despite being a baby Noi is intelligent so her adopted family makes their living as con artists alongside Noi. To restore the Dragon Gem, Noi joins Raya’s team. To create the Noi version of the outfit you will have to start with purple striped leggings along with a purple long-sleeved shirt. Over the layer, a light purple bodysuit and a pink belt give a precise look. Finally, to create three tiny buns on Noi’s head, use small pink hair ties. Collect all the accessories of the Noi costume from Raya and the Last Dragon for Halloween and cosplay.

[mirabelmadrigal10182004]

Raya and the Last Dragon [Equestria Girls style]

Cast:

Rainbow Dash as Raya

Trixie Lulamoon as Sisu (as a pony and human form)

Twilight Sparkle (Sci-Twi) as Namaari

Scootaloo as Boun

Tank the Tortoise as Tuk Tuk

Pinkie Pie as Noi

Fluttershy, Apple Bloom, and Sweetie Belle as Ongis

Applejack as Tong

Sunset Shimmer as Chief Benja

Rarity as Virana

[giuliano-jiulian]

Circa l'anno scorso nel 2022

Ho conosciuto uno ( che conoscevo su discord ds tre anni)

Dal vivo , che ci parlavo ongi mille mai su discord e tipo tre anni che lo conoscevo

Questo diceva che mi amava ma non nera così perché era un vittimista #calimero

Voleva solo essere ascoltato

E poi mi tartassava di messaggi , io non provavo niente per lui , non mi interessava diceva di amarmi ma non era così perché se era veramente amore queste cose non le avrebbe fatte innanzitutto

Disse che dovevo venire da lui c'è proprio pure pretesa che dovevo andare da lui va bene andiamo da sto tizio

Praticamente siccome lui è la sua famiglia sono omofobi e trans fobici lui mi aveva chiesto questo Diego Actis Grosso si chiamava o si chiama

PRETENDEVA CHE IO MI VESTISSI DA DONNA PER COMPIACERE LUI E IL PADRE E PURE LA MADRE S STO PUNTO Dovevo PIACERE COSÌ? Col cazzo mi sono vestito come volevo perché nessuno mi dice cosa devo fare ho ricevuto vari insulti dal padre Di nome Cesare Actis Grosso dicendomi che io ero un clown 🤡 parole sue " smettila di fare finta di essere uomo non lo sei mio figlio non esce con noi per colpa tua" quando io non dicevo un cazzo e dero in ospedale

Glia tipo leccato il culo dl figlio 🤣🤣

La madre Danila Rondin voleva che io rimanevo la nella campagna per fare compagnia al figlio senza cervello

Diego Actis Grosso 🤡 🤣 ma quante cazzate sparava già che nel giugno_luglio

Pesavo che io ero in cinto non può essere perché uno predo delle medicine e avevo già una problematica

Poi questo anno pure che ho la malattia che ho e più già la problematica che ho che non potrò mai avere figli tanto non li voglio preferisco operarmi per Diventare uomo dl 100% più tosto che creare delle persone così veramente io basito

Che poi ci siamo mollati perché io non lo ho mai amato lui voleva solo fare sesso

🤦🏻🤦🏻 il sesso non ne amore!

E quindi lo mollato circa quest' anno perché lui era così stupido da non capire che già lo avevo lasciato l'anno scorso

E che mi frequentavo con una ragazza

l'anno scorso nel 2022 tra fine giugno e inizio luglio che a preteso che io ci andassi e ci sono andato ma mi sono vestito come volevo io da uomo!!

Parte che lui era venuto a trovarmi quando era in ospedale Ad Ottobre che non ne stato Richiesto i fiori non richiesti mi ha portato dei dolci che non sono stati richiesti per due giorni a dicembre del 2022 lui ha preteso di essere ospitato e noi l'abbiamo ospitato a confine che stasse una due settimane lui invece è stato un mese lo abbiamo buttato fuori di casa a gennaio del 2023 !

Ho pagato io il suo volo di ritorno e speravo che mi tornasse i miei 22 euro essendo che io quest'anno e ci sono salito a luglio e ci sono stato una settimana perché non volevo stare di più me costato 300€ che non mi a tornato !

Dicendo che lavorava quando stava a giocare dalla mattina alla notte andava a letto alle 2 da telegram lo vedevo

A come lo so vedevo le sue ore di gioco...

...questi soldi non sono stati tornati

Io mi passo un ora sui siti di lavoro

Lui passava le ore a giocare...

E il padre Cesare Actis Grosso a scritto sia a me a mia madre quando già avevo preso il biglietto e partivo il giorno stesso sapete cosa ? che non dovevo venire perché lui voleva che il figlio stava con una donna vera

E che restituiva lui i soldi ma io ero già partito ma questo 300€ non me li a dati né quelli del anno scorso che erano 200€ ne quelli di ora dei bugiardi 🤣🤣

Li ho bloccati e ho chiesto di farlo pure a mio padre e a mia madre

Perché tutta la famiglia anche sua nonna nessuno si salva un pinguino di persone disagiate che volevano che stavo lì da loro quando io sono MALATO!

Ho finito

[wlovat]

so i purchased the graphic novel and… i’m currently losing my mind over this frame

[princessrayaofheart]

This artwork is made by madaoba, in partnership with Disney Plus officiaI, in celebration of Asian American Native Hawaiian Pacific Islander Heritage Month (which happens on the month of May every year). Full credits go to the artist madaoba. I do not own this artwork

The art looks really nice

[mintyisdrawing]

Running on raindrops.

This scene is so magical and beautiful! The soundtrack also made it 100 times better.

[useyernamesteven]

Okay ya'll. It's time to talk, about this

Credit to @makiema

And by this i mean

this

And I know most of ya'll got distracted by Namaari, being all cute and awkward. I mean I did as well. But I just noticed

Look at Boun (my precious baby boi). Look at the way he's smiling up at Namaari. Noi does as well, before she grabs for Boun. Like it really wasn't just Raya and Sisu who accepted Namaari into their group. The others were starting to too.

Like after the events of the movie, I imagine Namaari still feels guilty about what she did, and that she shouldn't be included in stuff. And Raya's just like "yeah, no. too bad. you're stuck with us now." And it literally becomes a game of who can drag Namaari into as many random family outings as possible.

I want Boun trying to teach Namaari how to cook and dance at the same time. I want Noi and the Ongis playing tag/keep away with Namaari's jewelry or swords. I want Tong insisting he show Namaari how to fight a mountain lion with just your bear hands. I want Raya to make jackfruit jerky and waiting to see how long it takes before Namaari tells her she needs to be stopped.

And eventually Namaari realizes that, despite still being the heir to Fang, these are her people and that she couldn't be happier.

They're like a little odds and ends family. And I just want the gang being weird little dorks together so badly.

[rayawaifu]

some of my favorite shots in “raya and the last dragon”

[teabeeart]

rayaari based off this edit https://www.instagram.com/reel/CNPFvsLlysE/ 

[eevachu]

Got some gay raymaari mail: a matching Raya pin for the Namaari I got a while ago. It came with the collector’s box for the rest of the set, but dunno if I’ll get the rest of the pins.

[ftvs-cm45]

1 year from today, Raya & the Last Dragon was released.

Meet the main characters of Disney's early 2021 animated film.

[mirabelmadrigal10182004]

Raya and the Last Dragon [Crossover]

This is the last year of Disney's Raya and the Last Dragon.

Cast:

Mirabel Madrigal as Raya

Isabela Madrigal as Sisu

Pepa Madrigal as Namaari

Antonio Madrigal as Boun

Major (Cinderella) as Tuk Tuk

Camilo Madrigal, Huey, Dewey, and Louie as Noi and the Ongis

Félix Madrigal as Tong

Abuela Alma Madrigal as Chief Benja

Bruno Madrigal as Virana

Agustín, Julieta, Luisa, and Dolores Madrigal as Pengu, Amba, Pranee, and Jagan

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This originally was longer but the second half is just pure sin so I split it into two. If people like this, I might post the second half???

Slip of the Tongue

Raya wouldn’t say she was going soft on Namaari whenever they sparred, but every hit packed less of a punch than the week before. Bruises get fainter and her knuckles are no longer sore the next day from repeated blows.

Their weapons often neglected in favour of hand-to-hand combat despite them both preferring the former option. If you ask Raya, she’ll tell you it is because they need to improve their skills in hand-to-hand in case they lose their weapons in an actual fight.

But when she’s alone in her room, she’ll stand on her balcony and think about how she could feel Namaari’s breath on her neck as she blocks a punch or how her eyes so naturally fall to the Fang Princess’ lips when she’s panting from exhaustion.

She’s addicted to the feeling of being so close to Namaari she can see the beads of sweat trickle down her neck antagonisingly slow until it dissipates below her shirt, making Raya ache to be able to follow it all the way.

She won’t say the words that bounce around her heart, not even to herself. Raya knows she needs to get a grip and pull herself together, they’ve worked so hard on becoming friends. She cannot ruin it now by wanting more. Besides, If Namaari has noticed her lingering stares and hesistant blows, she hasn’t said anything. She can totally be close to Namaari without wanting to leave bite marks instead of bruises (that’s what she tells herself anyway)

 

“Focus dep la, it’s no fun beating you if you aren’t trying.”

 

Namaari’s almost impatient tone fills the training room as Raya shakes herself out of her head.

They circle each other like prey, neither one landing more than a few punches and kicks. Namaari grabs Raya’s leg mid-kick and throws her a few steps backwards, Raya crashing her fist into Namaari’s jaw on the way, bringing them both down to the floor. Namaari almost pauses when she realises she’s on top of Raya, their bodies completely flush with only her arms lifting her head up. Raya can feel her heartbeat banging against her chest, entirely sure Namaari can feel it too. Her entire skin burns at the close contact until she cannot take being so close anymore, rolling to the side pushing Namaari off as they both climb to their feet.

“Can’t pin me down that easily, Princess Undercut”

Raya has to focus, she can’t let herself get that close again. Her will power to not kiss the Fang Warrior almost faltered, she cannot ruin it now. They throw punches once more but Raya is beginning to pant, too focused on blocking any attack to give out her own. Unfortunately, Namaari notices. Conscious that they have less than an hour before they’re expected elsewhere, she works out a plan unable to help the smug grin forming. She aims a punch at Raya’s hip, preparing to launch as she watches the smaller girl bend her body down to block the lower punch. She walked right into the trap.

Before the Heart Princess even had time to realise what she’d done, Namaari moves her hand upwards and grabs Raya’s neck, putting pressure slightly on either side with her fingers . She forces Raya’s head up to face her, shock evident in her eyes as she looks up at Namaari.

 

“Looks like I win, Dep la”

 

Namaari says in a whisper, her breath brushing against Raya’s ear as she pushes her into the wall less than a foot behind them and pins her there by the hips with her own. She’s too busy waiting for the Heart Princess to make a snarky comment or attempt an escape, she doesn’t notice the way Raya’s eyes flutter shut or how her head tilts ever so slightly back. The snarky comment never came. In fact, what she did instead took Namaari completely by surprise…

 

Raya moaned.

 

Namaari dropped her hand in shock, moving back to look at the girl in front of her. Raya’s lips were parted slightly and her lower lip was between her teeth. Had she heard what she thought she had? Her thoughts answered however as less than a second later Raya’s brain seemingly caught up with what happened as her eyes snapped open and her hand slapped against her mouth. Their eyes were locked together, mirroring each others shock. Raya had moaned. Because of her.

Namaari couldn’t use her voice. She wanted so desperately to say something, anything, hell even ask her to do it again but when she finally managed to open her mouth, Raya beat her to it.

 

“I am so sorry Namaari I - fuck”

 

Before Namaari could respond, the girl had already ran out the room, leaving her frozen in place, wondering what just happened, and why she so desperately wanted to hear it again.