#loriana barchok

[annoying--moth]

So was it ever confirmed that Loriana has red hair or did we all just collectively agree on that as a fandom

[air-of-the-waterfall]

Please tell me any headcanons you have of the arc of the scythe I would love to hear them

Take a cat for your troubles too 🌷

*squeals in excitement and picks up the cat* Okay!!

I think when Jeri and Greyson live on Kwajalein, they love to do outdoor activities together like riding jet skis and exploring caves, mostly because Jeri loves to be outside and Greyson finds everything exciting when they're together.

Pretty much everyone has a lot of siblings/a big family in the AOAS world because people live so long, but I think Jeri actually keeps in touch with all of them. Greyson is both honoured and intimidated when Jeri invites him to meet everyone. Jeri has wonderful parents and they welcome Greyson with open arms, which makes Greyson cry because he's never had love and support from human parents. The Thunderhead watches this and is thrilled for him but also ever so slightly bitter.

Jeri has pierced ears, and Greyson got several in his ears as an unsavory. Greyson acts out a bit after The Toll, coping with his trauma and trying to find that sense of individuality and recklessness again, and Jeri is happy to encourage him.

The Thunderhead has quite the imagination and sometimes runs simulations where it gets to do simple things like run around in the grass and swim in the ocean. When it borrowed Jeri, before it went to see Greyson it spent a minute looking around, touching random objects, taking in the experience, looking at its cameras and in the mirror.

The Cirri all talked to each other nonstop in the backbrain before splitting up and boarding the ships; I think they shared their excitements and fears and bickered and gossiped, and they teased the Thunderhead about its obvious feelings for Greyson while it acted long-suffering and told them to cut it out, which only made them laugh.

Munira would be so into BookTok if she were around today. Loriana would like soft fluffy romance novels, and Munira is a "knife against the throat books" kind of girl.

Scythe Faraday probably has a tattoo somewhere other than the scythe emblem one. Maybe something from his younger days, something for Marie.

There's definitely more that won't come to mind at the moment

[thetonethetollandthethunder]

I can’t believe it’s confirmed in Gleanings that Scythe Morrison and Loriana became a couple and had a baby together

Oh shit fr? I do not remember that sudbjsjs, to be fair I read through the book pretty quickly so I could look through the scythe tag again, I’ll have to check it again when I continue my analysis of it

We were truely robbed of Lesbian Loriana tbh

But like, I don’t know how to feel abt the pairing bc they didn’t really have too much chemistry in the toll, honestly (from what i remember) Sister Astrid and him had more chemistry imo, just feels weird, also Morrison is too pathetic to have a wife imo

[sketzi]

did anyone else think loriana was a lesbian? i think wanted to believe she liked girls so bad that i blocked her relationship with morrison completely.

then when i read gleanings, i was wondering why tf she had a husband 😭😭

[strategicundersee]

every day I remember the cirrus short story in gleanings is, in fact, a cursed day.

GOD DAMMIT SHUSTERMAN WHY

[cactus-cactus-cactus]

ROUND 2

And the races are off! Sadly, we are saying goodbye to Brother McCloud, Scythe Chomsky, the Iterations, Scythe Volta, Jenny Terranova, Scythe Brahms, Scythe Alighieri (good riddance), Loriana Barchok, Munira Atrushi, Audra Hilliard, Scythe Tenkamenin, Ezra van Otterloo, Sister Astrid, Curate Mendoza, and Scythe Constantine. We will miss you dearly (except for you Alighieri). Please remember to follow #aoasexyman23 for regular updates when polls come out!

Now, onto the next round!

Xenocrates/Traxler

Cirrus/Jeri

Morrison/Purity

Citra/Greyson

Goddard/Beyoncé

Rand/Possuelo

The Thunderhead/Faraday

Curie/Rowan

And contestants, please remember the forgotten 11th scythe commandment: thou shalt be a tumblr sexyman!

[phroggyjam]

"I love you"

Citra: Same here, now get lost

Marie: No thanks

Faraday: My apologies

Greyson: ... but why me?

Jeri: thx.

Rowan: Yeah but I like Citra

Tyger: *bites lip*

Rand: Too bad, b*tch

Goodard: *was hugging his very sharp bed*

Munira: *very very blushes* Wait wha- y- huh- but-

Loriana: *giggles* We could get along well

Cirrus: Actually, no.

Thunderhead: Ah the limitations of the biological brain

Astrid: WE WERE CHOSEN BY THE TONE TOLL AND THUNDER

[fingerskiez]

You guys seemed to like my previous post with Citra and Rowan on picrew, so I made more characters!!

please give credits to the picrew artist if you repost!

[wednesday-died]

[natequarter]

"Things have... changed... since you got here," Loriana said.

"For the better, I hope," Faraday said. "Tell me, did Scythe Curie win her bid to become High Blade of Midmerica?"

Agent Barchok pursed her lips again. "I think you'd better sit down," she said.

[...]

Faraday seemed overwhelmed with grief as he tended to the dead Nimbus agents. Munira had yet to know the reason, so she just assumed it was his way.

oh... he's grieving for marie 😭

[jam-is-my-food]

THE HONORABLE MUNIRA ATRUSHI: A TALE OF WHAT FOLLOWED

read on ao3

“It would have been nice to know Honorable Scythe Bathsheba. But I’m much happier knowing the honorable Munira Atrushi.”

She forces her mouth into a smile, in the moment. An attempt at forgiveness.

But how honorable is she really, the girl who wasn’t chosen, the girl who has been left behind again and again? The librarian, the researcher, the companion, the listener; Munira can’t remember an age when her life didn’t belong in some form to others. How honorable can the so-called honorable Munira Atrushi really stay as the worlds move past her, time after time after time?

The Library of Alexandria is darker than she remembers, now. Years on the Kwajalein Atoll with the girl and world of sunlight have dulled everything else. But Loriana is gone now, and there are no more scythes. Munira needs to rebuild.

Even if she doesn’t want to.

Even if, for once in her life, all she wants is to destroy.

The Library of Alexandria is too small.

Sometimes she wonders if she should have gotten on one of those ships.

a post-the toll munira atrushi corruption fic, coming soon!! (also available on wattpad for some reason idk but go glance over if you wanna see the pretty cover)

[annoying--moth]

I feel like if aoas was an anime/manga Loriana would have big Minori vibes

[i-love-side-characters]

What did you think of the end of The Toll?

!!! TOLL SPOILERS !!! PROCEED WITH CAUTION !!!

Scythe Cult:  @honorablescythecurie @honorablescythefaraday @palli-x @book-limerence @lochscinders @a-lonely-tatertot @shellyseashell

bored? send me serotonin please <3

Okay now lets get a couple things out of the way. I haven’t read Toll in a little bit, and it’s taking forever to come from the library. Also, yes I did have it downloaded before, but I kept rereading Faraday’s journal entry when he find out Curie is dead. I know, I’m trash for them but honestly let me have this #curiedeservedbetter2021 #faradaydeservedbetter2021 #curadayforlife

Now that we’ve established that I’m just lonely and so I cling onto healthy (ish) fictional couples for my source of love, let’s proceed.

Things I remember:

 - Rowan and Citra go zoomy zoom into spacey space, but Citra’s deadish because Goddard pulled some shit and so Rowan’s going to wait a couple hundred years for her to wake up

 - Total hottie Ayn Rand shanked Goddard which is honestly a power move you go girl

 - Faraday and Munira unleashed the failsafe, which basically infected a whole bunch of people and now Scythes just kill the infected people so that there’s no suffering

 - Jeri!!! and Greyson!!! Babeys!!! Smol Beans!!! My genderfluid babey with my weird Jesus man it’s a match made by the Thunderhead (because it literally is)

 - Rowan and Citra (who renounced her Scythehood) are going to start a new colony on some random ass planet

Things I don’t remember:

 - Whatever happen with Cirrus

 - Whatever happen with Joel the Jobe Man

 - Whatever happen with Loriana and Munira who are totally in love Shusterman said Sapphic rights 

Okay Akki stfu lets move on:

Okay. I didn’t really like it. I did like Rowan’s sarcasm, but the ending fell a little flat. Compared to the other books’ endings, I didn’t really think it measured up. It was just a bit bland. Here’s why.

The end goal:

Let’s just work our way through the series to show why The Toll just didn’t really work for me.

Scythe - Book 1:

Goal/Climax:

The goal/climax of the book was clear. Citra and Rowan are fighting for the ring. Only one can get it, and the winner has to glean the other. 

The ending:

Citra wins the ring, and is ordained. Instead of actually killing (gleaning) Rowan, she slyly grants him immunity by punching him so that his blood’s DNA would transfer to the database and no Scythe could kill him.  We also got a confession scene where they tell each other they love the other. It ends with Rowan finding out that Faraday did not self-glean.

Why it works:

It is tense. We are watching the two main characters have to either kill the other or be killed. Neither want to. It is clear from their actions throughout that they harbour feelings for each other. This is a high stakes situation. And it flows nicely. We don’t have any unnecessary dialogue/scenes. We don’t have a dumb solution to the problem where a bunch of unnecessary events happen like a character death/romantic scene. They do tell the other that they love them, but the moment is quick and is not the focus of the moment. The focus is on the actual ordainment ceremony and the challenge. The solution directly addresses the main conflict of the book.

Thunderhead - Book 2:

Goal/Climax:

Goddard and Citra (now Anastasia) are presenting their arguments as to who will win the inquest. The inquest was called because Anastasia and Curie needed time to gain more votes in favour of Curie for the position of High Blade. 

The ending:

Anastasia and Curie win the inquest, and Goddard must complete a full new apprenticeship in order to train his new body. Goddard, however, has tricks up his sleeve. He had made a plan prior to the events on Endura to cripple the Grandslayers tower. The plan changes, but works to his favour and destroys the entire island. Curie, in a desperate attempt to save Rowan and Citra, locks them in an airtight chamber that will preserve them so they can be revived. With this sacrifice, Curie is forced to self glean.

“She thrust her blade inward, directly into her heart. She fell to the ground only seconds before the sea would wash over her, but she knew death would wash over her faster. And the blade hurt far less than she imagined it would, which made her smile. She was good. Very, very good.”

-Thunderhead, page 499

Why it works:

*violently screams in my head* I’m good don’t worry

It is a logical ending. If Curie and Anastasia had won the inquest and survived Endura, there would be no need for a third book, unless Shusterman had decided to write a book about Curie being High Blade and Goddard sulking in the shadows and plotting to kill her. That wouldn’t work because I don’t think there is any possible way Curie wouldn’t catch Goddard in two seconds because she’s a boss.

Many people say that Curie should have gotten Rowan to lock her and Anastasia in the vault instead of him. Rowan would have died for Anastasia, it makes sense, but that takes away from the very essence of Curie’s character. She is a truly Honourable Scythe. She knows that Anastasia loves him, and she cares deeply about Anastasia. Letting herself survive would have been completely out of character. She also knows that Anastasia is the future of the Scythedom. While it would be a great help if Curie didn’t die, as well as sparing us emotional trauma, it doesn’t make sense for her character.

This ending also directly “solved” the issue in the book. While the villain won, it was a satisfying ending. Curie is dead, that was a very smart move, because obviously Goddard wouldn’t survive two seconds if she was there. It gave us a good reason for the Thunderhead to disappear.

 *violently screams again* Curie died, yeah, no, I’m okay

The Toll - Book 3: *note that some details may be wrong

Goal/Climax:

Faraday, Rowan, Jeri, Munira, Loriana, Anastasia, Greyson, and Cirrus need to figure out what to with the frozen Tonists, all unknowing that Scythes Goddard and Rand are heading towards the island. They still need to beat him in order to make sure that the non-Scythe population won’t be subject to bias/malice/aforethought/Goddard’s ego. 

The ending:

Rowan, and Citra, who renounced her Scythehood, travel to another planet that can support life with the frozen Tonists, as well as 42 other ships carrying Tonists. Cirrus is copied into 42 different versions in order to save humanity. After being offered Citra’s old ring, Munira (I believe) returns to the Library of Alexandria. Faraday follows through with the failsafe and gleans only the suffering. Greyson and Jeri stay together on the island, and become romantically involved. Scythe Rand is the one who eventually kills Goddard.

Why it DOESN’T work:

Okay, there’s a lot to unpack here. I’m just going to go character by character and by the plot.

1. Plot - It just doesn’t make sense. The hero’s solution doesn’t in any way stop Goddard, who is the main villain. We’ve led up to this for a very long time, and Rand is the one who gleans him. If I’m correct, The main characters don’t interact with Goddard for nearly the entire book, save Rowan. The solution, to save humanity by colonizing other planets would, without Rand’s interference, let Goddard wreak his havoc on the world. Only Scythe Faraday and Morrison could truly challenge him, and even then Faraday is old and hasn’t kept his abilities refined, and Morrison is young and inexperienced and wears a denim robe.

2. Rand and Goddard’s Arcs - Rand is the one who kills Goddard. I think that this was a very interesting move, and one that made a lot of sense. Goddard has treated her terribly, it would satisfy her arc of turning against him, as well as giving her a redemption arc that would also avenge Tyger’s death. I think that this is actually a really good arc, were it not for the fact that Citra and Goddard never fought/interacted with each other. If there had been a fight, and Rand had killed him then, that would have been better and would have better satisfied the actual conflict in the book.

3. Rowan and Citra’s Arcs - In terms of Citra’s arc, I think it was emotionally impactful to have her renounce her Scythehood. But Rowan didn’t have as much of a part to play in this book as he could have had. Citra and Goddard also never interacted, which would have been very interesting since he was the direct cause of her mentor and canon mother figure’s death. It would have been an interesting scene that could have played out really well. Based on Discord texts from a conversation I had, I know an reminded that the last two pages of The Toll were incredibly impactful and beautiful. I don’t have much to say about Rowan since I don’t remember much of his role.

4. Jeri, Greyson, Loriana, and Munira’s Arcs - I paired these four together since their doings aren’t very solid after the books. Jeri and Greyson are canonically together, which I think was a great move by Shusterman. Having a main character in a healthy relationship with a canon LGBTQ+ character was incredibly impactful for me, and it satisfied Greyson’s thoughts about how he doesn’t care if Jeri is a boy or a girl, he just loves them. Loriana didn’t have as much of an arc, but Munira did have a small one. Her refusal of the Scythe’s ring let her dispense of her hatred for Scythes and their system, and let her let go of her bitter feelings about not being ordained. 

5. Cirrus’ Arc? - I do not remember enough to speak about Cirrus’ role in the books.

6. Faraday’s Arc - This is probably the one I have the most to say about. I am sorry in advance. Faraday is an emotional character. He has cried canonically twice as far as I can remember, once when he gleaned a child, and the other when he found out Scythe Curie and Anastasia had died on Endura. He is also openly disgusted with Scythe Goddard and his practices, which is why I supremely dislike his arc. It would have been so interesting to see how he would have reacted if Scythe Goddard and the heroes had interacted during the end scene of The Toll. We know he is an Honourable Scythe, like Curie, and upholds the Scythe Commandments, especially after his punishment over his breaking of the 9th commandment “Thou shalt have no spouse nor spawn.” It would have been so. interesting. to see whether Faraday would snap and attack Goddard, if he would try and talk to him, how he would react. Like with Anastasia, he would have been interacting with Curie’s murderer. The potential of that moment! Don’t forget that Faraday is definitely still in love with Curie, based on his elevated heart rate in Thunderhead, and his journal entry in The Toll. I think it would have been so interesting to see him confront her killer.

Summary:

Okay that was much longer than I intended, and I have more thoughts, but it’s 2:40 am and I haven’t slept in a while. So my summary. I liked The Toll. It was a solid book, that had funny moments, jaw dropping moments, heartfelt moments, and emotionally impactful scenes. It was a solid book.

I don’t think it compared as much to the other two, especially Thunderhead. The ending fell a little flat and didn’t carry the arcs as well as I would have liked, but honestly, I still reread it. Shusterman really managed to pull at your emotions.

Because I just beat up on the book for the last couple paragraphs, let me tell you some of my favourite parts of the book.

1. Literally any scene with Possuelo and Anastasia that dynamic was so good and him calling her “meu anjo” literally made my heart do a little happy dance the father-daughter dynamic was what we needed. It also offered a nice levity to tough scenes.

2. The Rowan-Anastasia Reunion. They ran towards each other and knocked each other off their feet. Ohhhh my god, they ran towards each other and knocked each other off their feet! That was so cute, and as someone who was a strong supporter of platonic Rowan & Anastasia, I honestly loved it.

3. Faraday-Anastasia Reunion. Him dropping to his knees in front her her, her initial confusion as to who he was, and the “perhaps the greatest of all Scythes was kneeling in front of her” part killed me. Their reunion was so well written and heart-wrenching.

4. Anastasia Cries about Curie’s Death. I feel like WatchMojo right now. Anyways, the way her emotions break after trying to repress her sadness over her mentor’s sacrifice for her.

5. Rowan’s sarcasm. Beauty. What a power move to sass the guy who’s going to set you on fire in front of 3000 people.

6. Scythe Constantine and Rand. What a dynamic I wasn’t ready for. Rand’s cool comebacks with Constantine’s sly personality just made for the most amazing dialogue opportunities. 

Thank you anon!

[thetonethetollandthethunder]

Scythe pride hcs :)

Greyson; Pansexual, Demiboy

Jerico: Genderfluid (canon but yk), Omnisexual

Anastasia and Rowan: T4T and bisexual (I do think Rowan is Ace as well :))

Munira and Loriana: Lesbians

Tyger: Transgender (transmasc)

Faraday and Curie: Bi-Curious at the very least

Goddard: That man is a homosexual he radiates gay man energy and I don’t know why

Rand: Pansexual, possibly nonbinary

And I think that’s it for now

[queenof-hell]

Citra: My boyfriend is too tall for me to kiss him on the lips. What should I do?

Jeri: Punch him in the stomach. Then, when he doubles over in pain, kiss him.

Munira: Tackle him.

Greyson: Dump him.

Loriana: Kick him in the shin.

Rowan: NO TO ALL OF THOSE. JUST ASK ME TO LEAN DOWN.

[strategicundersee]

so. i posted it.