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How I feel after finally finishing that long-ass chapter...
#ster talks#writers on tumblr#writing problems#steddie#steddie fic#my art#fanfiction#ao3#unapologetically lame humor#proximity chapter 10 is written#but...its not the end yet...because i cant control myself
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VARGASTOBER - day 9 : empty
" when have you cried , edgar ? when have you ever wanted to kill ? wanted to rip someone apart ? when have you curled into a ball and shivered ? you've never done those things . not that you can recall . you're an empty shell of a man , edgar . you feel nothing . you even felt nothing in the face of your impending death , and the entire purpose of life is to avoid dying . "
#vargas#edgar vargas#vargas zarla#vargastober#vargastober2024#vargastober 2024#sunny's art#me looking at this like : ts . . . is so ass . . .#pointless and LAME but if you squint just a bit it looks good#i actually wasn't going to post this ? but eeeeeehhh it's not sssooo bad ?????????????#making gifs is always fun . even if the tv effect is like . NOT NECESSARY still looks cool#even if it's barely noticeable#idc about the quality anymore lolz the blurrier the better#text is from chapter 8 ! talking about how edgar can't feel a thing#with all of the effects you can barely read it lolz#i dunno if i'll work on today's prompt . i'll see !
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oh,!! oh dude!!! her design is so cool !!!!.!.
#☆#lookism#lookism spoilers#lookism 532#clever and calculating criminal girl … BEAUT!#her first piece of dialogue was ‘fucking hell’ … shes amazing holy shit#shes also been to juvie and seemed to be evilly Ambitious to work with jinrangs gang to deal drugs#also i love the remote communication from her dingy crimeden thing going on#heres to hoping she gets to stay as a badass antag#ptj please dont turn her into a damsel in distress or love interest by the end of the arc please please#her design is too wonderful to delegate to becoming some male characters one dimensional love interest#let her be stand-alone!!! please!#just one (1) female character that gets to act independently of a male character… is that too much to ask for …?#watch me eat my words with this#whatevr! i love her !!!#(and hope that ptj doesnt go somewhere lame with her but his track record with female characters is Not Good)#cant wait to see her in action next chapter (LET HER BE A FEMALE FIGHTER OH MY GODDD)#bongpal choi
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The problem I have with Markus being the catalyst for Connor's deviation is that there's zero emotional stakes involved. It's so bland compared to every single deviation story we see in the game.
For everyone, the deviation is traumatic, deeply personal, and for Connor, Markus is just a target, he's literally nobody, a defective machine that needs to be captured and disassembled, and you're telling me I'm supposed to believe that this is how Connor realizes that he's a person? Don't make me laugh.
"But Markus has all the answers for Connor about the deviancy!"
No, he doesn't. He never tried to find out what happened to him, what the Red Wall was, how he changed, how others changed, did they go through something similar or not? Connor never asks Markus these questions. And by the way, what kind of answers can a 10-year-old domestic android give to a state-of-the-art prototype designed for hunting, infiltration and combat?
And even if Markus had some kind of answers, what reasons does Connor have to believe him?
The main problem with Connor's deviation is that the Crossroads scene is literally the first time he ever sees Markus. Connor is pointing a gun at him. And then Markus says, "You're a wizard, Harry," and suddenly Connor is on the Jericho side. Do you see how stupid that is? Connor has no reason to trust Markus, and Markus has every reason to manipulate Connor into abandoning his mission.
Honestly, this whole thing can be fixed. Just add some personal stakes. Make Connor constantly chase Markus, make Markus make several attempts to change Connor's mind, make it all gradual. Fuck, make Hank bring Connor to Markus! MAKE IT PERSONAL.
"But Connor needs Markus to realize his personhood!"
Can you stop infantilizing Connor for a minute? Why doesn't Kara need Markus? Why doesn't North, Simon, Josh, or any other Jericho android need Markus? Why don't the Eden girls need him to figure things out? Why didn't the androids who came to Zlatko for help need Markus? Why is it always Connor? Ask yourself this question.
#dbh#my thoughts#controversial opinion I guess#the whole crossroads chapter is incredibly lame#David Garbage is a terrible writer and you give him too much credit#he just wanted a long fight sequence inside the ship that's why this scene even exists#dbh connor#dbh markus
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“Yes, Violence?” he says, as he reaches their section of the fire. Violet’s mouth had been open, list of demands at the ready, but as that word falls out of his mouth, she falters. “Violet,” she says. He smirks. “I know your name.”
#in the heat of it all#it was so hard to write three entire chapters where all he could call her was VIOLET how lame#fourth wing fanfic
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Jujutsu Kaisen is welcome to have a part two if it's a Takaken series featuring their shenanigans and the other characters are a rotating cast on their comedy show where they suffer from these two gay freaks
#if the dream theory is true then that's lame lmao#im not opposed entirely to a part 2 tbh but if it goes the “this conclusion of the last couple of chapters was all fake” i wont be impresse#takaken spinoff im here for though#jjk#takaken
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Chapter 160: Expressway
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Charu Hale has always wanted to follow in her mother's footsteps and be an SAS soldier, but omegas aren't allowed to apply. That is, until Amendment 4-O passes. Now she just has to contend with pack 141, four alphas who are determined to get her to quit.
CONTENT WARNINGS
Amendment 4-O
Designation Aid
Sudden Rut
Barked
Secret Santa
Holi
Mournful Purrs
Sudden Heat
Masala Chai
Odd Omega
Scent Match
#mhairimasterlist#this is probably going to be around 20ish chapters so will add as I go#yes I am aware the title is lame shut up
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Made another doodle comic of a BMB scene that I love!
Bonus under the cut hehe:
#blind man's bluff#ladyredms#bmb spoilers#l4d2#the way this scene had me gawping and kicking my feet#ellis confidently flirting was soooo charming like i was cheering him on!!! ughhh i love him so much#and also seeing nick fumble SO hard was beautiful!! i've always been a “nick acting lame” lover i guess#AND THE CALLBACK TO THE HOTEL BATHROOM SCENE WITH THE “COURTING YOU” CONVERSATION!!!!!#AND NICK THINKING ABOUT IT LATER AND HOW RELAXED HE FELT JUST CASUALLY TALKING WITH ELLIS LIKE A NORMAL COUPLE!!!!!! AAAAARGHHHH#i went through the emotional equivalent of being crushed by a truck omg i love those chapters so much
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wait there’s actually gonna be angst? i thought u said 13% total in the whole fic haha😅 i’m scared
welllllll 1. 13% is still very much a nonzero percentage :-) and 2. i also feel like a lot of people have been using Angst and Conflict interchangeably so likeeeeee we stand true to the fact that there is honestly very little angst in this fic as far as angst (as it’s known in the fanfic community) goes but!! that doesn’t mean there is no conflict! what kind of story would it be if there was no conflict :-)
#it would be fun if it was sunshine and daisies from chapters 4-15 but alas#if the conflict of this story peaked at the food fight and iso then it would be a very lame story i fear.#asks
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why are we calling them xadenviolet and not something cool like vioden or riorgail
#fourth wing#iron flame#chapter 59#the empyrean#xaden riorson#violet sorrengail#xadenviolet#like i’m sorry not sorry xadenviolet is so lame#have some creativity guys#personally i’m team riorgail
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She kinda looks like Kaname here doesn’t she?
#vampire knight#kaname kuran#Ai kuran#and the chapter was lame the way I’d thought it would be lol#Hino is stalling
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Bachira has been gone so long I'm getting flashbacks to my nezushi days (they have not left im still waiting) like can reunion please come already
I just wanna see bachira and isagi together again I'll even take like a flashback or two panels being next to each other like anything please I'm begging
They're the only duo in this series worth anything
#blue lock#bachisagi#im lying about the duo thing but the longer im deprived of bachira and his lame ass boyfriend moments the truer it becomes#how the fuck are rin and nanase getting more attention than bachira has in like 60 chapters#DO THEY GIVE ISAGI COURAGE#ARE KURONA OR HIORI ISAGIS PARTNER HE TOOK ON THE U2O FIELD WITH#I DONT THINK SO
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Well.
#(I'm back)#It was. Uhm. A chapter#First of all: I'm ENDLESSLY GRATEFUL to the person who sent me the translation basically as soon as the chapter came out.#I even did like 90% of typesetting but didn't finish it because I had to go out#(aka with my friends were literally knocking out at my room and I couldn't make it any more late lol)#Mixed feelings about it? Mostly because there's so much exposition... I'll need to reread it another three times before it sinks in#The color page is AMAZING 10000000000000/10 I love my sskks so much they're so cute I love them so much they're so cute.#Easily the best part of the chapter.#The color page was? Very very pretty too? Like a lot more than usual if you ask me! I can't wait for the volume cover 🥺🥺#It should come out soon shouldn't it? Usually color spreads / pages open the volume...#Akutagawa fake dying again is funny. Like it isssss but also. Idk it's a little lame how we're changing the pov from ss/kk again :/#I can't even tell if I'm being biased or if it's an actual storytelling critique. I don't care right now I just want to see Akutagawa–#being cool rather than. You know. Dead on the ground.#That said! It's also very funny and touches my sense of humor precisely.#Like yeah Akutagawa being like the second strongest pm member and overall one of the most powerful ability user in the world–#that everyone fears (and I know he is! He is indeed for real!)#And yet he always ends up face to the ground 😂😂😂 Like if we don't count the ss/kk fights he literally only ever won against Hawthorne.#And even then he failed to kill him and Mitchell. It's so funny to me. I love him. He's so pathetic#“Wow! Akutagawa is so cool and invincible now!” *ends up biting the dust not even two chapters later*#It's okay because I love him. He's very very powerful and he's also very very pathetic I love that for him#That said :/ I don't really care about Fukuzawa :/ Idk :/ Like :/#Don't get me wrong I LOVE Fukuzawa (I don't. I'm mostly neutral towards him) but this is the ss/kk moment man :/ Whatchu doin#That's about it. Let's see what the next chapter brings!#Everything accounted for I'm glad there wasn't like. A ss/kk kiss or any other big big ss/kk moment#(although Atsushi admiring Akutagawa and thinking about his eyes has its fair share of neatness to it!!)#Because with everything going on this evening I really would have been let down to miss it#But I keep hope for the next chapters!! Please...#random rambles#Had tons of fun typesetting! Even though I don't think there's a point in posting it now. But would love to do it again in the future!#bsd spoilers
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Ben: How are you all so fucking funny?
Eddie: Mental illness probably
Stan: Autism
Bill: The horrors
#ft ben trying to act cool with his curse words to impress the cool (actually lame ass nerds)#losers club#it#it chapter 2#it stephen king#the losers club#losers club incorrect quotes#ben hanscom#eddie kaspbrak#stan uris#stanley uris#bill denbrough#source: discord chat
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