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wrote a synopsis for a novel last night and today i’m gonna work on expanding that into an outline :3
#rambles#i work best with outlines i think#i need the structure#i stg a start a new wip every few days but whatever. i’m having fun#i would like to actually finish one of them at some point#but that’s okay#i think the initial planning and development stages are my favorite. when it comes to the actual writing part….i get overwhelmed#and i second guess myself and my ability to write well#but i should really try to stop worrying about writing well. and just write !!!!#bc i can always go back and change things#anyway#hi !! if you’re reading this i hope you’re having a good day 🫵🏻
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Julia deserves some cringe core color pallet love too! 🧡
( ft. a matching-toned green Andrew. )
This was made with @little-miss-orange-eyes in mind, I hope that's okay!!
#the coffin of andy and leyley#tcoaal sprite edits#tcoaal aus#I also changed her eye color to suit the url because I thought it was a cute concept with the outline color I chose.#but this is just my interpretation and if op would like to see this with the natural color instead I can post those separately!#or if you'd like to see all of her sprites in this style for your response posts let me know!!#separating their outlines in the black was a mess. I've redone Julia's hand several times and I think that's the best I'm gonna get it.#I started working on these last night but just finished them this morning.
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i think planes are magic because there's something about being trapped in a metal tube in the sky with no wifi that consistently forces me to make progress in writing
#i did not write today but i cleaned up the outline for alpenglow into a muuuuch more workable story#so! that's good!#my original mistake is i think i had too many like. wishy introspective scenes which are fun and all#but ultimately difficult for me to work off of as an isolated scene?#i work best when my characters can actually like. bounce off each other or bounce off something in the plot/setting#and now i've shaped alpenglow to have more external influences/reasons to bring in characters#anyway. thousands of words of my works have been written on planes LOL#i once wrote like 6k on my phone on one flight in 2022
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This Horror Which Bleeds [ read on A03 ]
He'd known, realistically, that Lilith was gone, and that she'd no intention of coming back. The knowledge didn't make Lucifer anymore prepared to find her mark engraved on the Radio Demon's soul.
Charlie asks her father to check in with Alastor after the hotel's reconstruction. In the process, Lucifer makes a discovery, and things get worse before they get better.
#radioapple#appleradio#Lucifer Morningstar#Alastor#Hazbin Hotel Alastor#Hazbin Hotel Lucifer#This fandom missed the opportunity to call this ship 'radiostar' truly#Anyway I meant to make and post this AGES ago when I first released the fic back in February#But I travelled to the USA for my best friend's wedding and then was busy writing other fics when I came back/getting back to work#In the interim I have been FLOORED by everyone's response to it? Like?#15+ years of writing fanfiction and I have never in my life gotten such a response so thank you SO SO MUCH everyone!#Please accept this little moodboard that I made for it#And by popular demand I WILL be continuing this fic. I think I finally have a little outline for at least another chapter or two!#(Or three or four or etc.)#my fics
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Every time I talk to a DB fan who doesn't know or doesn't agree that the whole franchise is an adventure comedy first and an action series second I feel insane but then I find an old Toriyama interview,
You made some comedic scenes where you have minor villains Pilaf & co. appear; how did you come up with a balance between laughs and fierce battles? Do you pay attention to the difference between comedy and battle in making a work “entertaining”?
I believe that, when you combine comedy and serious battles, both of them might come alive even more. As for me personally, though, I much prefer drawing dumb jokes to battle scenes.
as a bonus, every time I'm like 'idk I didn't really like most of the DBZ movies prior to Yo Son Goku and Friends Return and BotG,' and get the 'whAAaaT they're so gOOD' (from my brother, tbh askdjs) but they all seemed really Action-Drama and About the Fight Scenes and I'm like 'meh kinda boring tbh' I get to gaze upon,
In the latest movie, Toriyama-san, you participated in the production from the scriptwriting stage for the first time. What is the reason for that? Was there anything you noticed in coming face-to-face with the work after so long?
I was told about a project for Dragon Ball in its first animated film in a long while, and I read the story outline; while the beings “Beerus, God of Destruction” and “Super Saiyan God” (which goes above Super Saiyan) were interesting, the themes were heavy, and I felt that the world was a bit different from Dragon Ball. Rather than telling them about this or that problematic spot, I thought it would be faster if I just wrote it out concretely, and while I had intended just to give them a model―”for example”―my hand wouldn’t stop, and ultimately, I ended up writing almost everything, including the dialogue. I am reflecting on the fact that I did something terribly rude to the scriptwriter.
Akira "It was bad so I fixed it, oops" Toriyama, Absolute Legend
#I saw someone on Reddit say Toyotarou's Super was “sloppy bad fanfiction” and “WHAt was Toriyama thinking” as if Toriyama didn't write#the outlines and personally approve reject and give notes to Toyotarou the entire time aklsjdaljk#Like baby tell me you've never read the manga without telling me kljsajdka#Tell me you've Never Read Toriyama's Writing Even One Time without telling me#god i can't imagine what the original botg was going to be if Beerus' name was Virus#Toriyama looked at a Goku Saves the Day script and went “What if Goku loses immediately and needs Everyone's Help in order to even compete”#“What if this movie was about Vegeta and how much he's grown actually. What if Dragon Ball was idk... like...fun and meaningful”#“What if Goku gets his ass beat right away and can't win this fight even WITH help What if the best he can do is just Be Entertaining”#I hope you are enjoying your afterlife mr t i love your choices so so so much#Like my ABSOLUTE respect to the directors and board artists and animators and actors and crew who do amazing work in those films#but 90% of toei's producers and staff writers can meet me in the pit tbqfh#like granted it's been a long time but I feel like I enjoyed the REALLY old ones like Tree of Might and Worlds Strongest??#But Broly was SUCH a huge turn off and the future trunks movie was kind of my last straw for caring about any of the EU stuff askldj#gen the only part of the anime I like at all anymore are some of the unhinged choices the dub cast makes because you can tell#that they're having fun when they're not spending six hours screaming into a mic and that is extremely valuable to me
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powder keg (full under the cut)

#wip success story!!#for a bit there i expected it to be a wip failure but i think we turned it around boys#arcane#arcane jinx#isn't it kinda cool how vi and powder don't. have last names. do vander or silco have last names#this thing has 49 layers and 1 of them is completely unrelated#approximately 8 of them are lineart#so it took 40 layers to color this.......#most of them are hidden too it's cuz i am so indecisive and afraid of messing stuff up so i just duplicate the layers and keep going#this is not a great art philosophy but it is what it is#eyestrain#my eyes got fucking STRAINED while working on this#but i love bright colors </3#the evidence of duplicating layers is in one of my shading layers called Layer5-1-2-1-1-1-1-1-2-2-1 or something like that#i went into overdrive lowkey bc i was like this Has to be finished before arc 3 (uhh very mild act 3/trailer spoilers to follow ig)#bc i Know her look changes and god knows i was NOT gonna erase those braids i painstakingly outlined (over a year ago)#it's the principle of the thing. i basically redrew half of it anyways but only because i could not stand it if i did not#i was already feeling like euhhhhhhhhhh abt the whole composition bc when i originally drew it it was kinda half based#around her league personality#so working on it now felt like it was just. Quite ooc for our current moment in the canon timeline#well. whatever. i think she looks cool enough. character notwithstanding. i just hope she is happy after saturday </3#jinx#jinx league of legends#felt like i should tag that on bc the personality thing lol.... lol#i just went through the jinx tag and reblogged a whole stream of super sentimental and super angsty jinx stuff#and now i am posting what i post best. moderately cool poses and mildly affective expressions :)#my art
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#usually even on breaks I try to be writing or drafting or outlining like all the time#like I just usually want to keep going to do stuff all the time so I keep it up#but this break I’ve like barely written more than 3k#i really think I burnt myself out a little w writing this last year#I think changing jobs and like other stuff going on like between all of that and all of the adjustments I went through#like pushing through and writing between it all#I think I burnt my brain up a little 😭 like all I want to do is sleep and read but hopefully in January I’ll feel more up to it all#like I miss h and the best way for me to work it out is through writing soooooo#other#mine.
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Sometimes being a writer means re outlining your novel [internal screaming]
#naareblogs talks#GOOOOSHHH#I realized there are certain scenes I TRULY LIKE#but the in-between is... yeah#not do interesting to write nor to read much#I think re outlining id the best choice#re writing chapter 3 3 times already actually helped me go: dude is isn't working xd#GOOOOOOOSHHHHHH#writers
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gonna treat this site more like a blog and give updates on my writings because i noticed that if i get so much as one 'this sounds interesting' or 'cant wait to read' my brain short-circuits and spits out words in an hour that wouldve taken me a week to write otherwise
and with that, welcome to my wip rants :)
because i havent come up with better titles they are called The Ring (second coming fic) and Only Human (Crowley has lost his memories fic) lol and the former is mostly done, it only needs some editing but im saving that till after my exams because i know it's gonna be time-consuming. The latter however is still in full plotting mode and today i outlined all of chapter 8 (except for the flashbacks lol im ignoring the flashbacks) which i think is very nice :)
#did i work on the outline instead of studying? maybe but life's too short to not be completely consumed by good omens :)#yes yes i know going back to studying now :(#also im gonna make tags for these two wips cause why not lol#The Ring#Only Human#i think the updates will be mostly about only human cause im not sure if i'll continue with the ring but we'll see hahah#it's just im not really liking it so far#also i really need a beta reader lol but i also cant handle criticism so maybe not the best idea lol#but ahhh i need someone to tell me what's wrong with it😭#ramble gamble
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Hi! If you’re still doing the Send Me A Fic prompt I was wondering about Just Pretend
Have a great day!
hiiii!
My favorite scene: the last scene of chapter 3, when shit starts to hit the fan
My favorite chapter: chapter 4! andrew's perspective tends to be the hardest but most rewarding for me to write, and while the majority of the chapter was a struggle (see below), i ended up being proud of the final product
Hardest scene to write: andrew and kevin's discussion in the snow that takes up like half of chapter 4. i had to approach it in chunks: outline the conversation points/turns, then write the actual dialogue in bullets, and then go back in to add the actions and scene blocking. it was a process. that scene alone took me longer to write than all of chapter 1 did lmao
Favorite character to write in the fic: ANDREW. his brain is so intriguing to me. him having to balance atonement vs his refusal to let kevin forgive him was such fun to parse out
Favorite dynamic to write in the fic: all of the major platonic dynamics -- kevin and katelyn and aaron; andrew and renee; neil and matt and dan (steph orionauriga enjoying writing platonic relationships the most??? fork found in kitchen)
Why I chose that title: i'd been listening to a lot of bad omens while brainstorming/outlining and thought the song was very fitting of the fic's themes :)
A fun fact about the fic: a big reason for the perspective symmetry (kev ch 1 - andrew ch 2 - neil 3 - andrew 4 - kev 5) was so i wouldn't have to write more neil pov than necessary because his is SO hard for me
i hope you have a great day too! <3
fic ask game
#ty for asking!!#bonus fun fact: the foxes scheming to stay away to give kandreil space to figure shit out was not in my outline#and then when i was almost done i was like. 'i wrote that the snow had stopped? colorado probably has good/fast snow removal?#why wouldn't they be there by now? UNLESS.....actually yeah they would absolutely do that'#answered#steph writes#not gonna lie i HATED this fic for a while#but after rereading some of it i think i was being too harsh#it still surprises me that it's my most read fic since i don't think it's my best work but still
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The first draft is done and it's fucking...19K. And now I have to rewrite...all of it. Yay...
#sass talks about her writing#no but this fic really needs a second draft#i literally copied the outline and it looks so clunky#this second draft will hopefully make it flow better#hopefully we won't need a third draft#but some of my best mafia au fics was rewritten three times...#and i think this fic is REALLY good#so it might need three drafts#i hope not tho#because it's so long#but also i might take a break from working on it and work on another fic so that i don't hate it while i'm working on it
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i have a proposed revision for the pc port
#this is so shoddily edited because i was scrapping it together for a joke while half-asleep. put those guys in the elysium#but that said... i do genuinely think this could've had#the best chance at recreating the effect they were seeking from the ds; to keep monologue on-screen + allude to future twists thru color#for which i must add#999 spoilers#anyway. ace has the outline/examination cursor color junpei is using bc he had originally created the 'game'#the grey monologue would probably be a bit muted but still lean toward a purple/blue for akane#which would realistically be more apt for longer descriptions; with junpei's personal thoughts maybe having a slight indent#or even being associated w his name as is; like the options implicitly are in color (darker red)#it's not a traditional visual novel format of course; but it'd still work well...! to me...!!!#alas. i haven't practiced modding of this scale. maybe one day...#jestersvaguely#ze posting
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I’ve kind of lost my writing mojo over the summer (I have still been thinking about my characters and considering things of course but I couldn’t seem to get anything written down), but this evening I was feeling like “eh I could write” and then say down for over an hour and wrote a good half (probably more honestly) pf a scene that has been languishing as a five word idea in my extremely rough outline for literally months
Thank you, writing fairies, for smiling upon me today
#writing#I’m so glad I was able to write again#I was working on a scene with Ashling#and I’m going to be honest I kind of don’t love how I’ve done this story#it feels like he has two separate unrelated character arcs rather than it going together nicely#I’ve written a lot of scenes closer to the end but have no idea how to start the story or introduce characters#I think the fact that this story has changed so much over the past few years of it being an idea really shows#and I don’t know Ashling feels kind of like a very inconsistent character#I mean it makes sense I guess and I’m justifying it as the fact that he’s deliberately putting on a persona around a lot of people#but I don’t know it still bugs me#but I feel like I did a pretty good job with descriptions and supplying background info in this scene#which I normally struggle with#and of course I had to overdescribe clothing#it’s plot relevant okay#maybe it will be better once I work more on the early parts of the story so I can put the whole thing in one document and edit it#I must remember that this is only a first draft#and admittedly writing all the scenes randomly with only half an outline done may not have been the best idea
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Writing got easier when I just embraced the fact that I'm a true pantser tbh. An outline just wastes my time because I end up deviating from them anyway (the 'outline' I have in my head seems to work better, just like - a vague beginning, middle and end, with details filled out when I'm actually drafting).
#ended up looking at the 'wip idea' doc i made for oneshot ideas#and the one im writing rn just. went off the path of the 'outline'#oh well!#camus muses#writing stuff#some of my best works are just. thinks that spring out of the void anyway#im gonna embrace that
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reblogs off bc i dont want to start Conversations based on other peoples posts but re the whole "who is in control you or the character" question, i find it SO interesting because it's by letting myself discovery write that I (for me personally disclaimer) found the perfect balance between intuition and intention. which to preface "intution" is the easiest way to describe how the inside of my writers brain feels bc often i just get vivid characters/stories/images/scenes with little control at first and i have to figure out what they mean. anyway discovery writing is what works for my brain to make intentional decisions because i need to be amidst a draft to get the Story Cogs working, whenever i try to outline before a draft it's always been just throwing things at a wall bc it feels too far away, but because im also using the discovery element to do that it's like. that's where i think the whole i feel like my characters reveal themselves to me comes from. because im always discovering small bits about them even if i've written them for years just but because discovery writing is also what prompts me to be intentional about writing as i write something it's like both are happening at the same time. so the whole "who's in control" it's like...i don't think control is the right word for me at all because its not Me or the Character it's me trying to understand the character to understand + then write my intentions. like neither me or the character are in the drivers seat because there's no car we are in the middle of the story forest and at first i won't know what it means at all except that it is a Story. and my character will start going one way and sometimes i'll follow and pay attention to where they're taking me to figure out if this is the right path/where to go next. and sometimes i'll figure out how to read the compass first and realise i need to drag their ass in another direction
#anyway i just thought this was interesting because i used to think i needed to outline to be intentional/in control of my story#but outlines are too distant for me to feel like im in control so thats why theyre more organisational than creative for me#whilst we're infodumping on process i also dont like the whole are characters Like Real People or just Story Tools#like yes my characters are tools for the story just like how the story is a tool for demonstrating my characters#like again i dont think its one or the other for me#but i treat them as very 'real' (which this can be another tangent in itself) and intuitive is the best way to describe how i process them#but that doesnt mean there isnt intention and control you know#like the reason i describe my characters and stories as 'real' to me is simply bc they are very vivid in my brain#and that vividness often expands the bounds of the story#i want to go on the 'real' tangent the weight of that word one day#i think this makes sense if u know that for me i rarely get 'ideas' i get images#and characters/relationships#and i have to figure out what that means as a story#also no i dont think you need 'intuition' bc thats just the word i use for myself but i do think you need to understand#how intention works w your writing process and what it means for you to be intentional and what helps you be intentional#and sometimes that will be not considering any form of 'intuition' at all#beloved writeblrs i think i need to launch the dallonwrites substack i cant be doing these tag essays anymore!! i need to expand!!! someone#give me a podcast
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Really, I think the best way to have gone with the 2000s X-Men series was to continue what that first one did and focus the first trilogy on Rogue, let Wolverine have his trilogy and then Mystique the prequel trilogy.
Rogue in the comics has Mystique as an adoptive mother and in the movie, Logan plays a sort of first friend, almost father type figure so it'd essentially be a family story. Maybe even sprinkle in Nightcrawler as Mystique's real child.
Let's make Rogue lose her early memories before her human family before she realizes she has her powers and continues the movie off like normal but now having Wolverine to play off of in the amnesia department. The second movie can even stay similar since Nightcrawler is already introduced and we get to see a team up with Mystique which leads her curious to Rogue and Nightcrawler sort of trying to stay away because he lived with her as a mother. Third movie can really play on the reveal and deal more in the relationship stuff, deciding once and for all whether Mystique is hero or villain. I like end of it all, Wolverine leaves and this is where his trilogy is.
Leave the 2000s trilogy Magneto as the villain, Wolverine really just got popular to that degree because of Hugh Jackman so I don't really know what villains you want to set up other than Stryker, it kind of makes sense to have Origins just so you can set that up as well as the amnesia. The second movie can continue where the third X-Men ended and show him trying to find new purpose (idk I didn't really care for The Wolverine) then Logan can be that redemption with X-23 and him really becoming her dad.
The prequel trilogy would be cool to make it opposed to the 2000s one, where we saw big bad Magneto but this one, we see the humans be the bad guys and sort of justifies Magneto's reasoning in the originals. One of my main qualms with those prequels was his character and their constant drive to make him the lead. We already got a little origin in The Last Stand, just leave that and start the first movie off where Mystique and Magneto part ways. Then Mystique can be her own bad guy and maybe reunite with him in the final one after abandoning Rogue, showing the dawn of the X-Men that they wanted so badly to do.
#x-men#outline#for the trilogies#how i think it would've worked best#tweaking things a bit#x-men movies#rogue#mystique
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