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Salty and Sweet (2/?)
No, I do not know how long each “chapter” will be. I don’t have a plan, so it’s whatever feels right or like a cliffhanger. Not putting too much pressure on myself is the way to go, or my brain will just go lol nope. Go me! If I get my AO3 invite and stuff then I might try arranging it there…
Caleb rushed to his brother’s room. It couldn’t be true… Jonathan hadn’t… No… It couldn’t be… It wouldn’t be fair…
Caleb had hated it when his brother had joined a Wolf Guard pack. It was possibly the worst idea that Jonathan had ever had, which was saying a lot. A Wolf Guard pack… As Crown Prince, Jonathan had had invitations to any pack in the kingdom, and he had to pick one that was actually dangerous. Of course he had…
It wasn’t a surprise. Jonathan had always felt suffocated in the Royal Court, which was only partly due to his nature. A wolf born to run free and all that poetic shit. The Wolf Guard Track sends their members across the continent. It was the perfect kind of pack for a young, reckless wolf.
Still… joining the type of pack that guides people through mystical forests and over treacherous mountain paths is a big jump to make from living in a castle. It’s not like the world was peace free, no matter what the kingdoms would have you believe.
And now look where that got Jonathan. Caleb skidded to a halt outside a door painted to look like the night sky. He wasn’t sure he could do this…
Nevertheless, he pushed the door inward. He couldn’t be a coward, and Jonathan needed him.
#jump backwards in time#what is organization#i think it builds suspense#story#fantasy#wip#oc#really short#whoops#like me#salty and sweet
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We moved on from Buck being the one to meet Kim at the station too fast. Way too fast.
Because hey, what would you do if the dead wife or a doppelgänger dead wife of your best friend-partner-almost love of your life showed up at your place of work with brownies? Would you ignore the date you scheduled in favor of driving over to your best friend’s place to knock urgently on his back door because you’re so afraid that something is happening to him. And you know that something is happening because the doppelgänger of his dead wife just showed up to the firehouse with brownies like it was just another Monday. You think you might have to push him to talk, but it feels more like your best friend was just waiting for someone to see him, and he is just as dumbfounded as you, and maybe even as scared for himself as you are for him. So you tell him that he needs to break it off with the doppelgänger of his dead wife, but you know that it’s more complicated than that, your best friend’s feelings, even though you trust him to do the right thing and end it with her. But you’re still not through the shock of seeing the doppelgänger of your best friend’s dead wife standing in the fire station, heart beating, lungs expanding, and so you think that maybe your best friend is still in shock too, and you don’t want to push too hard at his grief-wound. So you leave it for now, and you don’t come back to it until it blows up in your face, and your best friend’s face, and his son’s face too.
So yeah, I’d say that Buck probably has a lot of regrets too about the Kim situation. He’s a fixer, no matter how hard he tries, and they lost the kid both of them love more than anything over the situation. You can’t tell me that Buck hasn’t been screaming crying throwing up about it since May. Fuck that.
It doesn’t matter that we don’t get characters’ inner thoughts (usually) on this show. Buck met Kim, and he talked about it with Eddie twice. That’s crazy. That’s certifiably insane. It’s been six months. The midseason finale is tomorrow. There is no excuse for Eddie and Christopher still not speaking. This is no excuse for Buck and Eddie still never discussing Kim or at least Chris leaving. These characters are not meant to be this horrifically repressed. It is strange. It is out of character. Kim showed up for about four episodes and disappeared into the ether. I want to know what the hell is going on with this storyline.
#give me answers right fucking now or you’ll see me on the news tomorrow night#this has gone on too long#this is BEYOND dysfunctional and it’s actually going to stress me out if we don’t get answers tomorrow night#it was bad enough that the show moved on from Kim psychotically showing up DRESSED AS SHANNON#this storyline is too big too stressful too character deep to be ignored this long#WHAT IS HAPPENING#Eddie diaz#christopher diaz#chris diaz#evan buckley#kim 911#911#9-1-1#911 abc#9-1-1 abc#there’s building tension and then there’s a suspension of disbelief#because NOT MY EDDIE DIAZ#it’s seriously gotten ridiculous#why is this the ONLY significant storyline that carried over across the seasons to still be going#get the Diazes in therapy and give Eddie his baby back#NOWWWW#tbh this post started as something different but I think my buck message and my give Eddie his baby back message both got across well enough#so fuck it#GIVE EDDIE HIS BABY BACK#LET BUDDIE TALK ABOUT KIM AND CHRISTOPHER#buddie#Buddiepher#buckley diaz family
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okay this is on my mind in regards to the comic i just saw, but Zayne, Xavier, and Rafayel had to be CERTAIN that MC was gonna be safe, because what do you mean you let this girl go into the N109 zone, and even assisted her in getting in there?? like despite all the dark rumors we heard these men literally did not do much to persuade her or try to stop her otherwise. i know there was the whole “linkcon city won’t be safe for the next few days” that we all saw and discussed, but obviously with the story update we got absolutely nothing out of that. and despite how premature the romantic aspect of the relationships with each of them might be, I don’t think they’d willingly let her walk into somewhere too dangerous unless they had an absolute certainty that she was going to be safe and protected. and now that makes me wonder if they know about Sylus and his link to her. Because what other certainty do they have to go off of?
#I hope this made sense like I just woke up and im rambling now as I think about this#but it just doesn’t make sense to me#and not to mention the tension build up infold did with that goodnight linkon city and then just gave us nothing#like man I expected DRAMA AND SUSPENSE#lads#love and deepspace#lnds#l&ds#lads sylus#sylus#love and deepspace sylus#lads rafayel#lads zayne#lads xavier
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I do have to say I'm a touch disappointed with the killer/reveal in S4. Marshall was the most obvious suspect but him being the only killer (despite the fact that Sazz was snooping around a building conspiracy) feels so...dull? Marshall is easily the most pathetic killer in the entire series (and this is coming from someone who haaaated last season's killers) and I ended the finale going "that's it?".
#The entire season had the level of suspense and build up that s1 had#Which is what makes me both mad and makes me forgive the writers a little#They kinda peaked with Jan and then I think their...ig style of writing killers became very noticeable#Not to mention Sazz was a beloved character and to have her be sniped by just sime guy is lowkey sad lol#Honestly the season was super solid though I enjoyed it 100% more than season 2 and 3#Omitb#Omitb spoilers#Only murders hulu#Omitb 4x10#only murders in the building#Omitb season 4#sazz pataki#Skai rambles
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I know some things are for effect and not to be taken too seriously, but Fuuta takes 14 running strides when he attacks Es -- the interrogation room must be huge????
#milgram#maybe they do take place in the courtroom after all...#(genuinely i just think its for effect -- hearing him run and yell and build up suspense for a sec)#but its fun to seriously sometimes lol#rose rambles
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Asuka is a tragic figure, a figure of mystery, a wild card, all because the only thing she wants in life is peace and quiet for herself and to feel in control- yet her secret heritage that may be hidden from her for her own protection and the reality that life is unpredictable and will go on with or without you keep ruining that delusion, that vision of how the world is meant to work to her, and she suffers regardless of what she wants, what she does, and how little she understands anything
She was born into a family preaching peace and balance and order while being a creature of violence, and puts a dozen mental locks and excuses over this truth to justify giving into her impulse for fighting by pretending she's justice when she does it
She keeps trying to build a place of safety but she's using sand and life is a wave that destroys, yet she stubbornly persists rather than give up, not drowned to the point of self centered suicidal loathing like Jin- there's contrast, where Jin is cloaked in death Asuka stubbornly clings to life and humanity as a normal person in a terrifying world
She's not a fucking narrative clone for Jun's own purpose, Asuka's purpose must be determined by Asuka herself
#tekken#Jin is born of two worlds Jun walks between two worlds Asuka is at the crossroads of two worlds#Jin is broken by it Jun traded part of her humanity to reconcile it and now Asuka has to accept it yet persist- she is always persisting#that's her strength that no matter what she's always still herself#'For being so very Y o u' as Lili told her bc she sees it#she's an interesting character BECAUSE she's not Jun and she's not Jin and she's not aligned with them entirely#stop waiting for her to be something she's not#also i think it's GOOD she doesn't know everything or everyone in her family bc that builds mystery and suspense#it gives everything a tension in the background for when the normalcy charade will be broken by the bigger family drama catching up w her#what's happening to the Mishimas should be something no one is dragged into yet the one family member who's the least connected#is going to run out of time at some point and get hit by that trauma anyway and she doesn't even Know it's coming for her eventually#isn't it fucked up. how everything catches up with you in the end#and you won't even understand it until it's too late ie. her involvement in T8 global war now#also a character that wants peace and order but actively pursues violence ensuring she will never truly have those things bc of her nature#AND she's already been traumatized by T5 Feng and T6 Jin that just makes her retreat to seeking comfort in detachment- in the familiar#which only prolongs her avoiding the world outside what she can control- and then Lili won't let her live in ignorance not to punish her#but bc she wants to help her bc the Mishimas have already put their claws in Lili- they won't catch Asuka off guard#what is it with people sanitizing the messiness and humanity characters represent in favor of 'If they just acted logically the way I want#then they'd solve the entire story 1 2 3 and we'll have everything wrapped up easy' THAT'S NOT A STORY THAT'S A MATH EQUATION#FEEL SOMETHING INSTEAD OF ALWAYS NEEDING TO SOUND SMART AND HAVE PERFECT ANSWERS YOU STUPID FUCKS#IN TRYING TO MAKE EVERYTHING HAVE A PERFECT SOLUTION YOU'VE LOST SIGHT OF WHAT'S IN THE TEXT#AND ALSO ASUKA BEING VIOLENT BUT STILL CARING ABOUT PEOPLE AND DOING GOOD DESPITE IT#and AsuLili is about two similar people who've been traumatized finding safety in each other once they put down the trauma responses#this is all in line with T8's tagline of Face Your Fate btw this is literally what was always coming finding you & you face it
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My first commission is officially over, I should open a champagne but I don't drink so this will have to do
#I'm so happy but at the same time like#I just cannot believe this is real#I'm trying to build suspense#so I wont be telling you all the details of the commission and comissioner yet#but I just gotta say#love you babs#is a strange feeling to actually have someone who think what you do is worthy of their money and time#is a great feeling#but I suffer from the impostor syndrom#so is also very weird#(note I do not suffer from the impostor syndrom I'm just both dramatic and self-deprecating)#so this is giving a turn#so I will end it up here#again love you babs#and you know what?#love all of you in the bob's burger's fandom#I wouldn't be here withouth you#I'm getting emotional here#I love you all#and love Bob too#oh! and Gene#definitely love Gene#good night#(it's night time here)
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please ship spoilers for endgame i cant take the suspense!!!!!
you know, if i was really mean i'd lie and say it was mariko/kabuto endgame, but that's a ship that's too bonkers to seriously acknowledge, and is not a possibility lmao. maybe if it was closer to april fools
ok so i'll give the bare bones of it, but trust that there's more to say as we get there. the tags don't go up until the final chapters. i also don't know that i want ppl reading too much into it in the sense that tcba isn't abt romance, so much as it is abt relationships driving the character motivations. but i also don't want anyone to stress abt it? basically, i'll say this part and ask ppl to hold other questions til the end since the things i really want to say, i want to say with the context of the story behind me. we're not far off from the end either, guys.
obviously, skip if you don't wanna know yet
(sasumari qpr, hakumari long-distance. she has two hands, yo.)
#i'm the weirdo who likes spoilers so i get where ppl are coming from but i do like a build in suspense as well?#in short i think execution is everything#pls give me the chance to sell it properly#tcba#internet user demands answers#and YOU get a rose 🌹#i can write an entire essay on endgame and plan to. once we get to the end lol#(if you want to send further asks abt this you're welcome to but i shan't publish them yet)
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The daily life of Irwin and Connie Dermokaites. They're very sweet. I feel like Connie might be more affectionate since she converted to the Path of Animism, but that could just be me reading into it too much.
Head Researcher Brennan can't stop researching even when she's off the clock. I want to know what Impid horns are made of, too, Brennan.
We had a very exciting event today: a Space Battle! There were chunks of spaceship and steel slag falling down for the better half of a day. Not too much fire, which was good. The worst fire was down in the bottom-left corner of the map, where we never go anyway.
There were a few escape pods, too, with very interesting people inside. We did our best to rescue as many as we could- The Path of Animism believes in charity, after all.
Oh, hey, this person looks fun. I hear people called Gracie are the coolest ever! :3
Here are all the survivors we rescued! We only just had enough hospital beds for everyone. They're a fun bunch. I wonder if any of them will stick around when they've recovered? I hope so. That would be fun.
I love the nicknames "Hot Minute" and "Grump". Rimworld nicknames can be so intriguing sometimes. I mean, I can imagine why someone would be nicknamed "Grump", but how do you end up being named "Hot Minute"??
Oh, and of course, Gracie is a name I'm particularly attached to for no reason involving any personal biases.
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#rimworld#gracie plays#The Animist Alliance#art#my art#traditional art#rimworld art#unpolished art#Irwin and Connie are very cute#But she keeps distracting him while he's working#It's frustrating and endearing at the same time#I think Impid horns are made of magic#That's the easiest explanation without me having to research too much about how horns and antlers and other such things work#The Space Battle event is one of my favourites#It has just the right amount of suspense#“Will ship pieces crash into my buildings?”#“Will my colony catch fire?”#“Hey that space battle survivor has my name!!”#“How many more people are going to fall out of the sky??”#“Do I have enough hospital beds to deal with this?”#“Eva dammit get out of the way of the- aaaand she got hit with a ship chunk. Nice work Eva.”#Just what I needed as I near the end of this playthrough#Potential new colonists#Huzzah!#At least they should all be fun to draw#Have a fantabulous day everyone!! <3 <3
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I'm still so mad that August Kitko was such a mid book and like I would go do far as to say maybe it was bad but it's likely it just wasn't for me.
And then I read Hell Followed With Us and realize hey now... there's a lot of similarities between these two books and wow i am enjoying this other book way more. I almost want to dig into that and figure out why. Can you ever dislike something so much you want to take a scalpel to it and dissect it to find the bloody heart? Yeah that's what I'm feeling with August Kitko... it kinda sucks but I need to know why it makes me so mad.
#cat rambles#both books are about queer people at the end of the world#both are written by trans authors and yet the queerness is handled so differently#i just.... hell followed with us manages to really get into the world building and it feels alive despite most of hunanity being dead#akatmfs just... it feels so surface level and the more i think about thst book the more pissed off i get#i really wanted to like it SO BADLY AND YET I AM JUST SEETHING#i did finish akatmfs and i was just disaappinted at the ending#there are moments in hell followed with us that made me shriek out loud like OH SHIT ya know???#i like it when authors do interesting things with their medium#andrew joseph white does that so well with the spirit bears its teeth and with hell followed with us#ann leckie also does this well just with how she writes the characters and differing perspectives#akatmfs just.... even with two main characters it just doesnt do anything interesting with that#LIKE FUCK okay#chapter 1 is from gus's pov which is good! then chapter 2 is all from ardent's persepctive iirc#thats cool!!! i like different povs but then it just starts changing pov in the middle of yhe chapter and that just.... okay i guess#i thought you were setting up this cool rhing IT COULD HAVE BEEN SO COOL#theres a part where gus gets kocked the fuck out#imagine if instead of having thet dull ass conversation with Infinite the chapter was just kike a single line of him passed out and then we#snap back to ardent#THAT WOULD BE THRILLING#THAT WOULD BE SUSPENSEFUL BC WE DONT KNOW WHATLL HAPPEN TO GUS#but no we get thus dumb ass concersation between gus and infinite that i just disnt care for#i read it all and god i just rolled my eyes becasue of course the book reveals the mystery of where the Vanguards cane from so fast#maybe i just gotta write an essay about this idk#i have thoughts
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my niche interest is currently mocking the mediocre film that is twisters, but the fact helen hunt is still with us and still acting and they didn't bother to bring her back even for a cameo is the type of sexism hollywood gets away with year after year after year after year after year after year after year after year after year after year after year
#twisters spoilers#dude the way i would be mortified to be a cast member of this film#the plot was mediocre and clearly written by a mediocre white man / the chemistry was non-existent / the suspense did not build at any poin#(hollywood really just thinks female characters in summer blockbusters are irrelevant)#(and the film papers over its glaring sexism by giving the female lead the big hero moment and it's hollow)#(the og film is beautiful because it's a screwball romantic comedy with the found family trope dialled up to the extreme)#where was the romance? the comedy? the found family?#and casting the two blandest white actors as leads was a whole choice
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i promise you this will be the first and only time you'll hear me say that i prefer the straight ship over the gay one.
#*and this is icarly!#only murders in the building#omitb#mabel mora#oscar torres#moscar#no hate to cara delevingne i don't follow her at all but....#her character in the show really gave me some sus vibes#ik they cleared her of any suspension in the case of bunny's death but i still felt very unsettled by her#anyway i love selena kissing girls but i just think they are way cuter and deserved a better chance
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everyfuckingtime I solve a problem in my GP outline I come up with 5 more
#gp txt#uguguguguguh#I think I am definitely making progress#and like. figuring out the problems is part of the process#but like. yeesh#so fucking many problems#it's just. the whole thing needs a fair amount of restructuring to give things the adequate amount of lead up suspense building etc#if my story and it's suspense and plot twists aren't perfectly satisfying I am going to walk into the river s2g
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one thing i really appreciate about lost is how characters become better people, like, noticeably with the desire to be a better person, and yet they're still so capable of making grievous mistakes and being incredibly wrong. see: richard's season 6 nihilism into believing in jacob again after hurley acts as a conduit for isabella to him and yet still thinking they need to blow up the plane. jack returning to the island because now he knows that the island has a purpose for him and thinking that purpose is to stop their plane from ever crashing. sawyer thinking that they had to diffuse the bomb in the sub to stop it from exploding when jack (correctly) understood that the mib was incapable of facilitating their deaths that he wanted sawyer to make that decision to cause them to kill each other. like. it goes to show that you can be a better person and still be capable of making mistakes you end up regretting later. you are still human and you are not perfect and no matter how much you search for the truth, you won't always have the right answers. but it's always worth trying anyway.
#lost blogging#i have sooo many thoughts about season 6 i forgot how much i like it lol#I think one and two are good for building suspense#three and four are good at weeding out the people who aren't into lost for what it wants to be (a lore based sci-fi show)#and then in seasons five and six we REALLY get into the weeds of what lost is about#and i love them so much
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oh sorry in advance for my really strong opinions about how to seed a bracket
#mod felix#ancient woman thunderdome 2023#someone in the survey was like 'put people of equal popularity against each other' i'm so sorry but i do not agree#like you can't do that in round one because then you knock out someone who really should make it to a later round#and then also if there's an upset it's that much more exciting#like it's for the drama. you have easy matches in round one so you can build up suspense for the hard matches later.#i'm basically going to seed based on how many times someone was suggested#i'm not sure i think it'll make that much difference anyway though considering
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having watched the third episode of lockwood and co, i’m not quite as thrilled about it. i don’t really like how they fit the whole plot of the screaming staircase into just three episodes. Honestly, i don’t really like in general super long episodes. but here especially, they cut a lot of the more mundane things, of lucy, lockwood, & george building their friendship and showing more of their characters. They also cut a few of the less important cases, like lucy’s first with lockwood, with the motorcyclist. and while those kinds of moments weren’t super important to the plot, it helped to get a feel for both the world(not every case is dramatic and dangerous, this is a normal job) and the characters(lockwood’s growing respect for lucy, her Talent).
And i think this could come back to bite the writers when they introduce Holly, because lockwood being so casual with her so quickly was in contrast to him being formal with lucy for longer. if we don’t see those weeks with that awkwardness and formality, there won’t be that contrast.
#lockwood and co#also the speed that they found the source in combe carey call annoyed me#cause it really didn't show us *how* haunted the place was#it showed us a few little things but it really didn't build any suspense#maybe that's just me knowing what will happen but it felt very fast#it was just bam! red room. bam! screaming staircase(which didn't even scream!) bam! all done#while in the books there was a lot of time of them seeing little things. really showing how the ghosts piled up#and the moments of them drinking tea and joking about monk haircuts. that ties back to how they need some fluff and character building#having lucy's narration helped too i think#no matter how good an actor is you can't read their mind. actually being in their head communicates anxiety way better#this is very rambly#lots of words to say ''how did everything happen so fast let them BREATHE god''
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