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Impressions
Pairing: Will Miller x Reader
Notes: Idk y'all my brain spit this out. I havenât written Will in, likeâŚ..100 years?
Rating: Mature - mostly for language
Warnings: Canon-typical violence, angst, fluff. Not beta-read.
Length: 7.5K
Summary: Your first two impressions that you get of Will Miller are pretty stellar. That said, they don't actually involve meeting the guy.
The day you do, well. That's another story.
GIF by charllehunnam
Your first impression of Will Miller is technically...Good.
It's from Benny, is the thing.
You hear the sweet and the sour, the grumbling when Benny is training at the gym alone in the morningsâ"He's a hard ass, but he means well."
It's said with a little smile, with sibling love and familiarity that tells you that Ben and Will have told each other to go fuck themselves just as much as they've said that they're proud of one another.
Your second impression of Will comes from Terry.
Terrence Owen McLowery is your best friend, your informal trainee, and is currently ranked in the Middleweight division, just a few spots behind Ben Miller (but gaining, and fast). He's one of the few openly gay boxers in your area and in his division, something that he might get more hate for if he couldn't kick the shit out of anyone slagging his name off behind his back.
Terry gets to as many matches as he possibly can, even when he's not fighting in them. You try to join him as often as you can, but there are times when you just can't swing it. He likes to scope out the competition.
"I'm gonna be in there, kickin' their ass one day," He tells you, "I should clock their weaknesses now, not then."
He spends more time ringside than he does in the ring for the sake of observation. And he's seen the Miller brothers at fight after fight.
"You oughta see 'im," Terry says, a dreamy look in his eyesâand you don't know if he's talking about Ben or Will, but you kinda figure it's both. Look, you've met Ben, you wouldn't be surprised if good genes ran in the family.
"He's real level-headed, ringside, even when Benâs in a jam," Terry adds, and you realize that he's talking about Will, "Kinda like you, but without the taunting."
You roll your eyes a little bit, "You told me the taunting makes you try harder."
"Hmph."
"And I told you a real coach wouldn't do that,â You tack on.
Terry doesn't hmph at that one. He doesn't like it when you point out that you're not a professional coach. You taught him the basics a long time ago, back when the two of you needed to have one another's backs on the playgroundâand you keep him honest when he's training up now. But Terry needs a coach that'll actually help him in the ring, not do what you do. And sure, you don't do the worst job, but Terry could go further with a professional.
--
Your first two impressions that you get of Will Miller are pretty stellar. That said, they don't actually involve meeting the guy.
The day you do, well. That's another story.
--
Youâre at the gym early. Terry is supposed to be there, too, but he took a late shift at work and couldnât drag himself out of bed. You donât blame himâa body needs rest if youâre going to put it through its paces. Youâre striding past the ring at the center of the gym when you spot Ben sparring with another contender in the middleweight division. You spot an error, one that Terry makes frequently himself, and call out,
âPick up your right shoulder, Miller!âÂ
The advice incurs a nod from Benâand a glare from a golden-headed man standing ringside. Something in his cool gaze chastens you, and you hurry on toward the class you signed up for.Â
--
âWhat was with that guy?â You ask Ben later as youâre stretching.Â
âWhat guy?â
âBlonde, beardedâŚGlaring?â You remind him. Benâs eyebrows shoot up.
âYou mean Will?â
âThat was Will?â You ask in a hushed whisper.Â
âYeah. Glaring?â
âHe looked like he was trying to melt me with his laser vision.âÂ
It makes Bennyâs laugh boom in the gym, and you glance around to see if youâve attracted any attention. Sure enough, Willâs not too far off, his arms folded across his chest as he speaks to someone. His gaze darts between Ben and you, and his eyes narrow.Â
âAaaand there it is again,â You mutter, drawing your legs back from the stretch.Â
--Â
âHey,â You hear. You frown, turning back to the source, and find Will striding toward you. Youâre about to offer your hand, to introduce yourselfâin relation to Ben, or Terry, somethingâbut he speaks again before you can get a word out:
âBenâs got a fight coming up. He doesnât need any glove bunnies distracting him.âÂ
Your mouth was opened to speak, but now your jaw drops, a scoff of indignation flying out.Â
âGlove bunnies?â You repeat, stunned. Will waves you off.Â
âWhatever Ben does in his own time is none of my business, but when heâs here, and when heâs in the ring, he needs to be focused.âÂ
Will doesnât let you get in another word before heâs turning and walking away. You watch him go, stunned. Asshole. Asshole. As you turn to head into the locker room, you remember Ben telling you that heâs a hard ass, but he means well.Â
Well-meaning or not, Will Miller is a dick.Â
--
âThereâs a man outside whoâs looking for you,â You hear.
You glance up from your laptop, brows raised at your coworker. It couldnât be Terry; heâd call or text you, not ask for you. And it canât beâŚActually, you canât think of any other guy that would come looking for you at work.Â
âDid you tell him I was in here?â
âI said I wasnât sure anyone by that name worked here and that Iâd check,â Molly relays. You nod a little bit, muttering, âSolid,â before adding, âHe say who he is?âÂ
âWill Miller?â
You freeze, then, hands hovering over your keyboard. What the hell is Miller doing there? And how does he know where you work?
âOkay,â You nod, âOkay, tell him Iâll be out in a...A minute.âÂ
âSure.â Molly starts to drift away from you before she turns, half-jogging back to your desk.Â
âHe is so hot,â She hisses. You can't help your grudging smile.Â
âYes, he is.âÂ
Asshole or not, you can agree that Will Miller is annoyingly, startlingly attractive.Â
--
The man that meets you outside is a far cry from the one who accosted you at the gym just a week ago. In a well-fitting polo and a pair of khakis, he looks more like a suburban dad than a hardened drillmaster. You stop just a few feet from the door to your office, arms folded tightly over your chest. He clears his throat, approaching you slowly and stopping just a couple of steps from you.Â
âBen had a fight this weekend,â He says. Him starting that way makes your stomach swoop with fear. You immediately worry that somethingâs gone wrong, that Ben is badly hurt. But Will goes on:Â
âHe kept his right shoulder up. That little tip saved his ass a few times.âÂ
Your brows raise. You didnât expect him to admit it, even if it did help.Â
âI saw Terry, too,â Will adds, âAnd realized precisely how and where I fucked up when he showed me a picture of you.â
Will doesn't look like he's trying to melt you with his heat vision anymore. In fact, he looks...Genuinely remorseful.
âI see,â You nod a little.Â
Will pushes a sigh out through his nose.Â
âIâm sorry for approaching the situation the way I did. And for calling you a, uhââ
âGlove bunny?â
He winces with the reminder. âYeah. I didnât have all of the facts. Even if I had, it was still the wrong way to approach the situation, and I apologize.âÂ
You take a moment to drink in his face again, as if youâre seeing it for the first time. His blue eyes are soft where they were icy, and the once-harsh press of his lips is replaced with a regretful, almost contemplative pout. And then you nod a touch.
âI appreciate and accept your apology.âÂ
Something akin to relief seems to wash over him, and he holds his hand out.Â
âIâm Will, by the way.âÂ
âWill?â You repeat, screwing your face up in mock confusion, âWill...Will...That certainly sounds familiar.â
A smile tugs his lips up just a touch as he pumps your hand up and down.Â
âI train Ben Miller. I'm his brother,â He adds.Â
âOh, that Will. Right, of course.âÂ
You let his hand drop and folded your arms across your chest.Â
âBlank slate,â You add softly.Â
Willâs brows jump.Â
âCompletely?â
âWell, Ben says youâre a hard ass and Terry thinks youâre dreamy, but Iâll try not to let their impressions color mine.âÂ
âPretty mixed reviews.â
âMhm.âÂ
The two of you exchange curious smiles before you nod over your shoulder.Â
âIâve gotta get back to work."
âOf course.â
âSee you around, Miller.âÂ
--
âSeriously, Terrence!â You call out as Terry spars with one of the other gym members, âIs this prep or are you trying to waltz him into tapping out?âÂ
Terry groans, reeling away from his sparring partner.Â
âGod, youâre a bitch,â He grunts as he walks toward you, bending over for his water.Â
âAnd youâre a dumbass, Billy Elliot. Get back in there.âÂ
âHeâs holding his breath,â You hear. You turn back to see Will Miller coming closer.
âWhen he punches,â He clarifies.Â
âYou can tell him,â You offer before you whistle sharply, stopping Terry from stepping more deeply into the ring. You nod toward Will and listen as he offers his tip. Terry takes his time listening, nodding, leaning against the ropes.
â...Think you got it?â You ask.
âLoud and clear,â Terry agrees before turning back to his sparring partner.
You glance over at Will, nodding your chin up. âThanks."
âSure,â Will smiles before walking away. Benâs not too far away, working at a punching bag. You watch Will for a long moment before turning back to Terry in the ring. Terry ducks out of the way of an oncoming jab, and finds time to shoot you a wink before he turns back to his sparring partner.Â
--
âTerryââÂ
âCome onââÂ
âI canât tonight, Iâve got an early meeting tomorrow!âÂ
âJust a few rounds! Come with me, see Ben in actionâand see what I mean about Will ring-side.â
âYou just want me to go because you think youâll be much less conspicuous drooling over them if Iâm there.âÂ
âMaybe.â
âAnd for the record, youâd be just as conspicuous.â
âWe donât know that.â
âYes we do.âÂ
âCome with meeee," He whines. "If youâre not there, Iâll curse out a redneck bigot and Iâll get in trouble for beating him up in the parking lot.âÂ
âWell then you and the Millers can tag team.âÂ
Terry groans loudly, tipping his head back. âDonât. Donât even think about putting âMillerâ and âtag teamâ in the same sentence. My mind just went to about eight filthy places.âÂ
âJust eight?â
âAlright, nine.â
âTerry. Sweetheart. Angel. Not tonight.âÂ
âFour rounds.âÂ
âNo.âÂ
âTwo rounds.âÂ
âTerryââ
âBenâll probably take âem down in one.âÂ
âIâm sure heâd love that you have so much faith in his skill, but weâll have to get through the matches before his, and thatâll already be way late.âÂ
âI wonât make you come to the gym with me tomorrow.âÂ
âProbably because you wonât make it to the gym tomorrow.â Â
âThatâs not the point.âÂ
--
You didnât always love the atmosphere around the fight. You used to hate the screaming, the overpriced beer, the rednecks. It used to make you wary, going with Terry. People knew him. It's not secret that he's gay. He used to catch more shit for it before he bulked up and started fighting. Even after he had, the slurs hadnât stopped. It used to raise your hacklesâbut Terryâs got more of a handle on how he approaches those incidents, and heâs made a lot of friends that frequent the ring, both as spectators, and in the Middleweight division.
You wouldnât say that you like going to fights now, but you donât find it as daunting as you used to. Now, the atmosphere is excitingâit zips through you like lightning; it makes your fingers tingle, and your heart pound.Â
âHere,â Terry calls out, pressing a beer into your hand.Â
âI told you Iâve got work tomorrow!âÂ
âI got two for myself, youâre just holding that one for me.âÂ
âBullshit,â You laugh, looking up at the ring as the bell sounds.Â
By the time the first two fights are down, you know you should leave. Itâs late, and itâs only going to get laterâyouâve had three beers, and Terryâs coming back with another one.Â
âTerry, I really shouldnâtââ
âBenâs coming down the hall,â He half-yells into your ear, and you have to stop yourself from muttering, âFucking finally,â when it bubbles up in you. You push it down with a gulp of beer, glancing back and trying to catch sight of the Millers. You see Bennyâs chestnut hair; Willâs bright head bobs into view just moments later. You and Terry begin to cheer almost on instinct as they come more fully into viewâas Benny heads into the ring, and Will rounds the corner. Will looks around, and his eyes catch on you and Terry. He raises his hand to give Terry a pat on the shoulder, and meets your eyes dead-on.Â
Itâs a half-second, thatâs all, but it seems to last for far longer. If anyone asked you what happened in that half-second, youâd tell them that you nodded to himâyou know that for sure, because he nods, too. Youâre not sure if itâs the beer, or the crackling of the air around you, but your skin feels hot. You donât even know if youâre smiling. But Willâs gaze holds on yours for a long time, even as he walks on. When he finally looks away, you can feel your heart thudding in the vicinity of your throat.Â
Terry leans over, his shoulder nudging yours as he speaks into your ear:
âDistracted much?âÂ
â...What?â You manage, tipping your head back toward him as you watch Benny climb into the ring.
âUh-huh.âÂ
When you glance up at Terry, you find him grinning smugly, and you reach out, shoving his shoulder as you grumble, âShut up.â As the bell sounds, you yell out, âLetâs go!â and vaguely register Willâs yell of, âItâs time to work!âÂ
--
Ben is a hunter in the ring.
You canât help but compare the way he fights with the way Terry fights. Terry prefers to hold back, to let his opponent dance around and tire themselves out. Terry is a slow-burn; Benny is a wildfire. Will is as much wind to guide his brother as he throws gasoline on Bennyâs flame, honing his path and stoking his focus on the rare occasions that Benny takes a hard hit or seems to flounder.Â
You plan to only stay for a couple of rounds, but before you know it, youâre cheering Benny as his opponent is knocked down, and stays down. The ref takes hold of Bennyâs wrist, holding it up as he proclaims him the winner, and you and Terry crow with excitement. As the crowd begins to flowâas Benny is led out to be checked over by the ring doctorâyou turn to Terry, ready to insist again that you have to leave. But you feel a hand land on your shoulder, and turn your head to see Will leaning in. He gets close between you and Terry, and asks over the hum of the crowd, âWhat are you guys doing now?âÂ
--
You should be more concerned about the fact that tomorrow morning (well, later this morning) is going to be absolute hell for you. You should be concerned about the fact that when you get home, whenever you get home, youâre probably going to need to have a couple of pieces of toast and a few glasses of water. Your head is buzzing with the beers you had at the fight, and now with the two that youâve had at the bar. But the zipwire-tense feeling that had ripped through you is ebbing as you watch Benny return from the bar with a massive basket of fries and a fresh round of beers.
Oh, man. Youâre really gonna regret this tomorrow.Â
You push the thought away as you reach out, taking up a precariously full beer and leaning back in your seat.Â
âSurprised youâve got such a sedate after party,â Terry comments as he takes one of the beers.Â
âFewer glove bunnies than I expected,â You add, eyes sliding to Willâs, where he sits across from you. He appears to bite back a smile, eyes dipping to the table. Bennyâs eyes dart between the two of you, brow furrowing, and you give a small, reassuring shake of your head.Â
âI have a question,â Benny declares, leaning against the table.Â
âHas it got anything to do with that swelling cheek?â Terry asks, waving a finger toward Bennyâs face.Â
âNo,â Benny huffs, âI know how all about that. Howâd you two meet?â He asks. You glance at Terry, arching a brow as he turns to you with a grin.Â
âSchool,â Is your short answer.Â
âI moved in around, likeâŚFifth grade-ish?â Terryâs brow furrows.Â
âIt wasnât fifth-grade-ish, it was fifth grade,â You correct.Â
âI wasnât the most social kid, and that caught me a lot of shit. I got picked on, and this one,â Terry pushes his shoulder against yours, and you sway with it, bobbing back and forth, âTaught me how to keep from getting my ass kicked on the way home.âÂ
âSeriously?â Ben asks. You shrug a little.Â
âIt started with short-cuts to get him home, but when other kids caught on, things got a bit moreâŚPhysical.âÂ
âDid you already know how to fight?â Will asks.Â
âI wouldnât say that. I knew how to swing a fist, I didnât really know how to fight. We both learned to, though, because weâŚHad to.â
âSheâs been stuck with me ever since,â Terry sighs dramatically. You roll your eyes, turning a fond smile up at him.Â
âHeâs like my taller, irritating younger brother,â You add.
âI know all about that,â Will pipes up, and you canât help but turn a laugh at him.Â
âSo what about you two, how did you two meet?â You tease, waving your finger between them.Â
âOh, man,â Ben mutters.Â
âWell I came home one day and my mom said, âWe have a surprise for youâ,â Will says, âAnd then six months later, this dick shows up.âÂ
âAnd heâs been stuck with me ever since,â Ben smiles, glancing at Will. You reach out, plucking up a couple of the fries and dipping them in ketchup.Â
âDid you guys get along growing up?âÂ
âWe donât even get along now,â Ben teases. Will chuckles, shaking his head.Â
âNot always. We butt heads as kids, and we do sometimes now, butâŚWe get our shit done.âÂ
âHeâs a hardass,â Ben cuts in.
âAnd heâs a dumbass.â
You grin. âSo you complement each other is what Iâm hearing.âÂ
--Â Â
âHavenât seen you in a couple of days.âÂ
Youâre taking a long pull from your water bottle, fighting the dryness in your throat when you hear Will.Â
âWhat can I say,â You manage as you lower it. âI only just recovered from going out with yâall the other night.âÂ
Will chuckles, leaning against the pillar beside you as you wipe down your treadmill.Â
âDidnât mean to tire you out.âÂ
âIâm out of practice. Terry hasnât had a fight in a couple of months, so I donât stay up that late anymore.âÂ
âNo?â
âNope. Iâm in bed at 9:30 and I like it.âÂ
You take up your water bottle, and the two of you start drifting away from the treadmills.
âWhy hasnât Terry been in the ring?â Will plies.Â
âHis rotator cuffâs kinda fucked up. Heâs been taking it easyâWell. As easy as he's willing to take it. He has a check-in with his doctor in a couple of weeks.âÂ
âThat must be driving him nuts.âÂ
âOh, heâs losing it. Heâs trying to go to as many fights as he can, though.â
âIâve seen him at a few latelyâBesides, Bennyâs, you know. I was wondering why you didnât go with him.âÂ
You stop at the door to the womenâs locker room and turn around to face him.Â
âBed. 9:30,â You reiterate.
âWell I know that now.â Will tucks his hands into his pockets, smiling. âI wanted to ask: Do you think you could see it in yourself to duck your bedtime again?âÂ
âDepends on what for.âÂ
âThereâs a fight down in Fernsworth this weekend. Thereâs a new kid on the bill, heâs apparently pretty vicious.âÂ
âOh yeah? When this weekend?âÂ
âFriday.âÂ
You consider, lips pursing, and Will chuckles at your expression.
âWhat is it?â He asks.
âTerryâs got work that night.âÂ
âSoâs Ben.âÂ
Your gut swoops in surprise, a brow lifting and falling quickly, but Willâs face remains as calm as ever.
âSo?â Will presses. If you were reading into it, youâd think he was batting his pretty eyelashes. Before you can overthink it, you hold your hand out and order: âPhone.â
Will rifles into his pocket and pulls it out, passing it over. You add yourself as a contact, your heart thudding in your chest, ears going hot as you double-check that itâs right. You pass it back to Will, meeting his eyes again. âYou can send me all the details.â
âDonât feel like talking to me anymore?â
âI have to go to work, Miller,â You laugh, taking a couple of steps back. âText meâAnd keep an eye out for those glove bunnies.âÂ
âAlways.âÂ
You get one last look at Will, at his sweet, amused smile, and you turn, heading in to take a shower (and maybe to silently scream into your hands, a little).Â
--Â Â
You donât dress up, and you do not tell Terry where youâre going, or with whom. Itâs been bad enough that he clocked your swell of interest when youâd gone out with all of them, and worse still that heâs encouraged it. Youâd been pressing your hands down onto the tops of his shoes, ensuring that his feet stayed flat as he worked on his core.
âAt leastâfuck him,â Terry had insisted as heâd come up from reps of crunches. âDo youâhave any ideaâwhatâd Iâd do tuhâPhewâHave those prettyâblue eyes pointed at meâlike that?âÂ
Youâd raised your brow, casting a wary eye about to ensure that neither of the Miller brothers were anywhere nearby before youâd insisted, âNothing is going to happen between me and Will.âÂ
âWhyâthe hellânot?â Terry gasped, finishing out his reps. He groaned, sweeping his hand across his sweating brow before planting both hands on the mat behind himself. âHeâs leaps and bounds better than the other assholes you used to fuck with.âÂ
Like it or not, you knew Terry was right.
For your rough and real first impression, Will is actually kinda sweet. You still donât know him all that well, and maybe tonight could change that. But you insist to yourself that youâre not going out to flirt with Will, youâre going to see this new fighter (Charlie âShredderâ Klein: 5â9, 194 pounds, rookie, southpaw) and gather some info for when, inevitably, Terry winds up fighting the guy. You dressâŚComfortably, in one of your nicer pairs of jeans and one of your favorite tops. You feel cute, and you feel cute for you. If Will thinks that youâre cute in the outfit, wellâŚThatâs just a bonus.Â
You donât think he would tell you, though. Will Miller seems like the type to keep his cards close to his chest.Â
The ride down to the venue is filled with polite small talk. The feeling in the cab of his truck is almost like the same nervous air of a first date. Your stomach is twisting like a nest of garter snakes; your skin is hot with nerves; you rub your sweaty palms nervously against your jeans. The two of you stick close together at the fightâthough you don't exactly have an alternative; the venue is packed. Now and again, if you get nudged too roughly by someone else, or pushed one way or another, Will cuts a sharp, warning look at them over your head at the perpetrator. The third or so time it happens, you reach out, resting a hand on his arm.
âDonât worry about them,â You say into his ear, cutting over the noise, âThe fightâs in the ring, not with these dickheads.âÂ
Willâs lips twitch with a smile as he leans in to speak into your ear in turn. He says, âItâll be here if theyâre not careful,â But you almost donât catch it. Youâre too focused on everything elseâon the press of his warm and firm body against your side; on the way his hand rests on your lower back; on the whisper of his beard against your cheek; on the brush of his lips and breath against the shell of your ear, and the way his voice seems to drown out the clamor of the spectators around you. It makes your heart tick up in your chest, a shiver tripping down your spine and stopping right where his hand sits.Â
When your mind catches up with what heâs said, you laugh, nudging his hip with yours.
âEyes on the prize, Miller,â You urge.
âThey are,â He answers without missing a beat. It makes your stomach flip, and for a moment, you canât bring yourself to look away. You finally force yourself to, and to clap as the announcer brings in the first contender, looking around to try and catch a glimpse of themâand not to overthink the way that Willâs hand is still resting on your back.Â
--Â Â
âWeak spots?â Will asks. You consider for a moment, running your finger along the side of your beer bottle. The buzz from the fight is wearing off, and the bar that you've gone to is far more quiet compared to the venue.
âHe doesnât go inâŚWith a plan,â You say after a moment.
âHis coach was calling plays.â
âYeah, but Klein wasnât listening. I mean when you tell Ben to back the fuck off or get away from the ropes, he backs the fuck off or gets away from the ropes, because in that moment, you see things in a way that he doesnât. He trusts you to steer him. Kleinâs coach can yell whatever he wants, but itâs not heard. Kleinâs in the fight, heâs on the inside, he thinks he knows best, and thatâŚThat got him fucked up tonight. Might not always get him fucked up, but todayâs outcome, you know. Not so much.âÂ
âStrong indictment.âÂ
âYou asked me what I thought.â
âAnd I got it. I appreciate that.âÂ
You raise your brows at Willâs calm, honest expression.
âWhat about you?â You ask, nodding to him, âWhat do you think his weak spots are?âÂ
âHeâs a brawler, not a fighter. He likes to go in for littleâŚsquirrely swiping matches. He wants excitement, not wins.âÂ
You shake your head at the assessment. âThat just spells trouble for our boys.âÂ
âLess trouble if we go in with a plan.â
âIâll drink to that.â
The two of you lightly clink your beers together, sharing a smile before you take sips.
âIâm surprised you came tonight,â Will admits as he sets his bottle down.Â
âReally?"
âLittle bit.âÂ
âWhy?âÂ
âWe didnât exactly have the nicest start.âÂ
âNo, we didnât, butâŚI donât know, I thought we were on a more level field now.â
âI think we are.â
The two of you watch one another for a long moment, considering, and before you can say anything, Will adds: âIâm glad you came with me.âÂ
âYeah? Didnât wanna brave the hillbilly circus alone?âÂ
âI have before and itâs never fun.âÂ
âIt wasnât so bad tonight.âÂ
âI had good company.â
You smile a little bit, eyes sweeping Willâs face as flattery wells in your stomach.
â...You knew Terry had work tonight, didnât you,â You accuse softly. Will shrugs a shoulder, raising his bottle to his lips again. You canât help your flattered smile, and you force yourself to keep your eyes on him.
âBen mightâve mentioned it,â Will finally concedes.Â
âInteresting.âÂ
âIs it?â
âI think so.âÂ
âGood interesting or bad interesting?â
âI'm still sitting here, arenât I?âÂ
Willâs smile widens, and your stomach flutters. âYou couldâve just asked me out,â You add in a mutter.
âWell, now I know that for next time.âÂ
Next time. Your face goes hot; the beer in your stomach feels like itâs bubbling.Â
âYes you do,â You agree, nodding a little.
âWhen I do,â Will adds, leaning against the table, sending another burst through your chest at his use of âwhenâ where you'd expected 'if', âYou alright with it being this sort of thing?â
âWhat, a fight and a beer? Hell yeahâLong as itâs before 9:30.âÂ
Will laughs, tugging his sleeve back and glancing at his watch.Â
âYou have any idea what time it is?âÂ
âNo, and I do not wanna know.âÂ
--Â
You fold your across your chest, eyeing Terryâs form as he pounds the punching bag in front of himself.Â
âHow are you feeling?â You ask as he leans away from the bag, swiping at the sweat dripping down his face.Â
ââBout what?â He asks a little blandly between pants.Â
âThe fight.âÂ
âYou asking me because I got a fight, or does it have to do with who Iâm going up against?âÂ
You purse your lips, eyes sweeping the gym for any sign of either of the Miller brothers. Finding neither, you answer, âBoth?âÂ
Terry chuckles, turning back to the bag.
âIâm not gonna go easy on Benny just âcause heâs a friend, and he ainât gonna take it easy on me, eitherââ
âI knowââ
âI mean, we always knew this was gonna happen��â
âI know! I know, oh my god, I get it.âÂ
âIâm just sayinâ,â Terry mutters, punching viciously at the bag again.
âIâd be a bad coach not to ask, you know half of the fightâs in your head. And speaking of bad coach,â You add, âYou found anyone else yet?âÂ
Terry casts you an irritated look out of the corner of his eye.
âAre you really talkinâ about this right now?â
â...Okay, letting it go,â You sigh before tacking on, âAnd youâre holding your breath again.âÂ
âI was about to say the same thing,â You hear from behind you. You turn to see Will just a few steps away. You smile almost involuntarily. You havenât seen Will since your not-quite date, but youâve thought about him and texted with him plenty.
âShouldnât you be mindinâ your own fighter, Miller?â Terry asks, straightening up and raising his hands to stop the swinging bag.
âDonât worry, McLowery. The second he needs minding, Iâll be on it.â Will takes a few steps back from you both, shooting you a wink before he turns away. Your stomach twists, and you carefully smooth your smile away before turning to face Terry again.Â
âAlright, câmon,â You wave him toward the bag again, âLetâs go, we got half an hour and then we gotta get going. I canât be late for work again.âÂ
--Â
Itâs odd, finding yourself on the opposite side of the ring as Will. As nervous as you areâfor the way your body feels like itâs buzzing, a tingle in your fingertipsâyou know that the boysâll take this seriously. It was going to happen sooner or later; you just didnât think it would be so soon. You hope that they come out of the ring with their friendships (and their bones) intact.
You shift from foot to foot, drawing a shaky breath in through your nose as Ben and Terry begin to circle up. Your eye catches on Willâs for just a moment. You trade nods, then turn your eyes back to your respective fighters. Itâs a heady moment. The room seems to quiet around you for a moment as Ben and Terry approach one another, each with one fist out and one by their cheeks. You hardly blink as they get closer and closerâ
--
âI almost had you.âÂ
Itâs a gravely mutter, the first thing that Terryâs said since leaving the ring. Heâs got a fat lip, and his right cheek is going to make it look like heâs part chipmunk in the morning. Itâs a moment before Ben offers a grumbled, â...Almost.â Then, âDidnât, though.âÂ
Terry takes a swipe at his head. Ben ducks it, raising his arm to push at Terryâs shoulder. You shake your head, leaning against the bar and watching them teasingly grapple.Â
âYou think theyâd be too tired to do that by now,â You comment, shaking your head.Â
âAdrenalineâs probably still pushinâ em. Theyâll crash later.âÂ
The both of you are speaking a little more softly than usual; you had yelled your heads off at the match, and you're not sure about Will, but your throat feels so fricking raw. You nod, smile widening as the guys scrap a little more.Â
âHeyâAlright, alright,â You finally raise your voice as they knock back into a stool. âIf your sorry asses get us thrown out, you're paying.âÂ
âDrinks are on me, anyway,â Benny turns to give you a grin, teeth bright beneath the shiner developing on his right eye. Still, itâs a relief to see the boys settle. You shift on your stool and lean back against the bar, twisting your seat back and forth.Â
âHow are you feelinâ?âÂ
You glance over at Will, brow furrowing in confusion at the question.Â
âI didnât just go five rounds with those numbskulls,â You point out, nodding toward them.Â
âI know. You seemedâŚTense.âÂ
âI was worried about âem.âÂ
âTerry?âÂ
âBoth of them.âÂ
Will nods, eyes sweeping across your face before he glances around to the guys.Â
âTheyâre doing alright.âÂ
âI know. IâmâIâm calming down, I justâŚâ You trail off, shaking your head. âSo many of Terryâs other friends in the ring are in different divisions. This is the first friend heâs, like, fought-fought.âÂ
âHe did alright.âÂ
âNo, I know. Nothing too broken. And Benâs fine, too, so. Like I said,â You raise your hands in a slight pushing motion. âCalming down.âÂ
Will smiles, taking a step closer and sliding his arm around your middle, bracketing you against the bar. Your stomach flips at the closeness, at the weight and warmth of his arm.Â
âGlad to hear it.âÂ
âYouâve just been completely chill the whole time?âÂ
Will shrugs. âI trusted the guys to handle it. They handled it.âÂ
âAlrightâŚKnowitall,â You mutter. You smile as Will takes a step closer. He seems to glance toward the guys again before he lowers his head, pressing a kiss to your shoulder. Your stomach bursts with butterflies, and you gently lower your head, resting it against his. You turn your head as you hear the bartenderâs, âHere you go,â behind you. The two of you straighten up, turning to the bar fully and reaching for your beers.Â
âSo,â Will clears his throat, âYou busy this Friday?âÂ
You smile, trailing your finger along the side of your glass.Â
âIs there another southpaw you wanna get a look at?âÂ
âNope, just dinner. I thought maybe I could cook at your placeâthat way I wonât interfere with your bedtime.âÂ
You canât help your grin, or the slight tip of your head as he crowds close again.
âThat is so considerate of you, Miller.âÂ
âI do what I can.âÂ
--Â
You try to chip in for the groceries, but Will wonât hear of it. He wonât even tell you what heâs making.Â
âYou know that I can probably mentally tally up whatever it is you bring and, like, Venmo you that amount, right?â You ask. Itâs a little huffed as it leaves you, your gaze and focus on the swinging punching bag in front of you. When Will doesnât answer, you glance over, and do a double take at the sight of him.
Heâs watching you with a warm, sweet look, his hands tucked in his pocket as he slouches against the wall beside you. You raise your hands to steady the bag and keep it from swinging and hitting you in the face, stomach fluttering at the way this man is looking at youâlike youâre dolled up and wearing a goddamn ballgown, and not sweating in the middle of a gym.Â
âBesides, what if I have an allergy or something?â You add.Â
âIâve already run the ingredients by someone.âÂ
You frown. âWho?âÂ
Will doesnât answer, just shrugs and holds his gaze steadily on yours. You narrow your eyes slightly, turning to look around the gym. Terryâs not too far offâand heâs pointedly keeping his focus on anything but you.Â
â...Terrence,â You call out.Â
âBusy!â He yells back, plucking his water bottle and phone and hurrying to another machine. You roll your eyes, turning back to Will with a mutter of, âSpy.âÂ
His smile widens.
âI can be there by six, that alright?â He asks, pushes off of the wall.Â
âUh-huh.âÂ
âIf I see any kind of calculator when Iâm cookingâŚâ
âOh, you wonât. Iâm like a phone ninja.âÂ
Will chuckles, leaning in and murmuring, âSee you tonight.âÂ
The closeness of his murmur and his breath brushing against your sweat-slicked skin sends goosebumps skittering down your arms.Â
--Â
Your plan to stealthily tally everything up disappears as Will unpacks the groceries. You blink, stunned, before you pick up a jar of sauce, turning it around in your hands.Â
âAre you fricking kidding me?âÂ
Will doesnât answer. He just backs off, an amused smile on his lips and his hand on his hip as you reach into the grocery bag and rifle through it before reeling back, screeching, âYou took off all of the labels?!âÂ
âYou thought I was just gonna let you look through everything and tally up how much this cost me?â He turns and reaches into the bag again, continuing to unpack. âAmateur hour.âÂ
You bite your lip, watching in silence for a few moments as you think. What sort of 3-D dating chess is this man playing?Â
âYou areâŚFrighteningly tactful, Miller.âÂ
His smile widens, and he seems to duck his head to unearth something from the bulging grocery bag, but you can see the creeping flush of flattering rising up in his cheeks.Â
âI can still guestimate, you know,â You warn.Â
He stops then, bracing his hands on the counter.
âWould you just let me do something nice for you?â His brows raise, his lips on the edge of pursing in disappointment. Youâre stunned into silence as he adds, âNothing has to be owed. I justâŚI just wanna make you dinner.âÂ
You pause before you nod a little. Willâs brows raise further, and you nod again, watching as he turns back toward the bag. You hesitate before nervously sidling up beside him, pressing yourself against his side and eyeing his steady hands.Â
âCan I at least help?â You ask. Glancing at him, you find Willâs annoyance smoothed away, replaced with a somewhat serene consideration. He nods, concedes: âA little.âÂ
--Â Â
Will designates you two things to chop (red and green peppers), and one thing to stir (vegetable stir fry). He keeps his back to you as he adds seasonings to your chicken (âItâs a secret recipe,â He insists before he shoos you away from the counter. All you get a glimpse of is the garlic salt).
You donât know exactly what he puts on it, but when you take your first bite, itâs perfectly moist, and damn delicious. You donât even bother to hide your groan, or the way you close your eyes to just savorâand try to work out one or two of the spices. You get hits of chili. Chili andâŚCumin? Little pops of cuminâ
âIâm not telling you,â Willâs mirthful warning floats across the table to you. Your smile widens, shaking your head and opening your eyes.Â
âNo idea what youâre talking about, Miller.â
âUh-huh.âÂ
âIs this your secret recipe?âÂ
âMy momâs.âÂ
âDid she make it a lot growing up?"
âIn the summer, mostly, for barbecues and stuff.âÂ
âTastes pretty good from the oven.âÂ
He grunts, nodding. âBetter on the grill,â He admits, âWith a little char on it.âÂ
âMm, noted. Are you and your mom close?âÂ
Will quirks a brow as he reaches for his drink, and you realize that youâve been bombarding him with questions. Before you can apologize, he offers:Â
âPretty close. I try to see her at least once a week. It used to be more, but she said I was smothering her.âÂ
You smile, chuckling.Â
âThatâs kinda precious.âÂ
Will shrugs a touch, pushing his veggies around his plate.Â
âMy dad passed a coupleâa years ago and I think coming around as much as I used to mightâve helped, but momâs got her own life, you know. Sheâs got a book clubâŚSheâs apparently a bingo assassin.âÂ
âReally?â
âOh yeah. Some people think sheâs cheating.âÂ
â...Is she?â You tease.Â
âI wouldnât put it past her. What she lacks in subtlety, she makes up for in sneakiness.âÂ
âIs that where you and Ben get it?âÂ
He chuckles, ducking his head and poking at the food on his plate.Â
âSome of it, maybe.âÂ
âAnd the rest?âÂ
âTraining.âÂ
âDo you think Ben would agree?"
âDo you always ask this many questions?âÂ
You lean back, poking at your food in turn and fighting the embarrassed churning in your stomach.Â
âNot always,â You mumble. You hear Will huff a soft laugh, and smile as he reaches across the table to take hold of your hand.
"I don't mind," He insists, thumb sweeping along the side of your hand. "Long as I get to ask a few, too."
--
"This was nice," You offer, almost woefully trailing Will to the front door. You've wanted to make a move since he put you to work in your kitchenâyou've been thinking about it as the two of you were at your sink, doing the dishes; since you were sitting on your couch, talking about work, and the gym, and who Ben and Terry are facing next. You've been so close so consistentlyâarm to arm, hip to hip, knee to knee. The tiny touches have made you crave more, and Will's sweet smiles have made you do whatever you can think of to seek them out.
When he'd told you that he ought to get going, that he was meeting Ben in the gym at five the next morning, you were pretty sure that he was telling the truthâbut you were already mourning the loss of the moment, and his warmth in your apartment.
"It was...Once you stopped pestering me about paying," He teases as he pulled on his jacket. You rolled your eyes.
"Well, how about I bring a bunch of labeless groceries over to your place, make you dinner, and see how you like it."
"I think I'd like it a lot," He insists, straightening his collar. "How's next week?"
And it's so swift and so smooth that you're certain you look more than a little gobsmacked. But you nod.
"Yeah. I can do next week."
"Friday?"
"Sure."
"Okay." He opens your door. "It's a date."
Just like thatâso easy and open, and such a far cry to the first time he spoke to you at the gym.
"Good," You agree, leaning against the wall by your front door. "Let me know when you get home."
"I will." He leans in, and your breath catches in your throat as he presses a kiss to the corner of your mouth. You bite your lip at the gentle prickle of his beard against your skin, eyelids fluttering as Will stays close. He raises his hand, gently sweeping his thumb against your lower lip and tugging it from your teeth.
"Don't do that," He shakes his head. "Don't bite your lip."
"Why?" You mumble, leaning into the flirty urge that's rising in you. "There someone else that's supposed to do it for me?"
Will breathes out a groan, resting his temple gently against yours.
"I'm trying to be good," He warns. You sweep your tongue across your lower lip, letting the tip graze his thumb, and grinning as he swallows thickly.
"This feels good to me." You reach up, cupping his cheek.
"You realize if we do this, you'll be up past 9:30?"
"I'm willing to risk it."
You think for a moment that he'll draw away, that he'll call itâ
Your stomach drops as he pulls away and you hear the door shut, but grin as he crowds up against you, lips pressing warmly to yours. You sigh, looping your arm around your shoulders and keeping you close. His hands slide over your hips, drawing you into his chest. You slide your hand up, gently teasing your nails against the nape of his neck.
"Remind me to apologize to Ben the next time I see him," You mumble.
"Why's that?"
"You're going to be very late tomorrow morning."
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Beta Reader Checklist! (Suggestions)
Beta reading is highly, highly subjective, so take this whole post with a massive grain of salt. IMO, in short, more feedback is always safer than less feedback, unless the author states otherwise.
Like, if they ask you to do a final read through for any lingering issues, you can speed-read your way through the manuscript for general vibes and enjoyability. If this is the first round of edits and beta reads, the more you can give them, even if you think you're over-reaching, the better.
Thank you to all my betas thus far, absolutely no shade meant with this post. Everybody's got different expectations. This is meant to help anyone who's unsure about the task before them.
So I'm going to use some snippets from my seasoned beta reader's feedback from my upcoming novella for the variety of commentary you can give.
Positive vibes/reader reaction
Even if the manuscript is a hot mess, sending back a beta read with 0 good things to say is going to demoralize the author. Even if all you can say is "this is a cool concept that can benefit from a better execution," letting the author know that they've written something salvagable helps, especially if you can do it in the first few paragraphs.
Grammar and Syntax
You are not a line editor and should not be expected to line edit someone's first draft (and this beta got the ~7th draft). However, if you do see something while reading, there's no reason that you can't leave a suggestion.
Fun commentary
We authors like to know that the reader is connecting with the story. These comments tells me absolutely nothing helpful about bettering the manuscript, but they're human responses from a human reader and it's just nice to see. Beta readers are casual, you should be allowed to stay stuff like this.
Developmental edits
Beta readers generally come before the big expensive editor (if you ever hire one at all) which means the goal is more big picture, developmental commentary over splitting hairs about punctuation. This comment got me to add about half a paragraph's worth of extra narrative to expand upon, because I liked the suggestion.
Continuity and reader comprehension
This novella happens to be about a niche subject that not every layman reader will understand, so I have to find the line between overexplaining to those who know, and underexplaining to those who don't, without reading like a textbook. The top line I ended up leaving as I didn't think the risk of confusion was worth the added technical detail. The bottom line was a continuity error that I did have to fix.
Repetition and style
I'm an author who will always look for ways to lower my word count. Sometimes cutting a random line is better for the narrative than doubling down and trying to justify it with extra details. In this case, I over-used a motif, and happily saved myself 7 words.
Potential for extra detail
If you struggle with lengthening your word count, you can ask your betas to focus on where the narrative is thin and can benefit for more immersion and backstory. This beta leaves me comments everywhere suggesting places for extra sensory details, as I write very lean narratives with little fluff, and my consistency with sensory details varies widely.
All told, over 21k words of story, this beta left me exactly 100 comments, and a couple quick line edits within the text itself. It shows me, at the very least, that she was engaged with the story. The only time she doesn't leave me comments is when a scene is so intense that she forgets to make one.
The Reader Report
The reader report is a separate document from the manuscript copy that compiles and condenses the beta's thoughts into a much shorter format so the author doesn't have to scroll up and down constantly for a big picture takeaway. It also expands upon any commentary the beta had, but didn't want to put in a single tag within the narrative and is typically written after most of the manuscript has been read for overall thoughts.
This beta in particular knows what I like, which is breaking down the report by chapter (or parts in this case). The only thing missing from her delivery is a final conclusion that will answer the three big questions:
Did she like it?
Would she buy it?
Would she recommend it?
But it was also done in a rush and in her email she said I made her cry so I count that as a yes for all 3.
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I did not implement every suggestion from her, but I did acknowledge where other readers might feel the same and weighed the pros of trying to satisfy everything vs maintaining my clear vision.
The benefit of the beta process, if you work with multiple betas, is having more than one reader's opinion, and why I don't think anyone should pay ridiculous fees for a developmental editor. My betas all had different opinions on this manuscript, and I can treat their feedback like a scatterplot, deciding on revisions with an average throughline.
At the end of the day, you write for yourself, not to please any one beta reader. They're suggestions, not rules, and even if your beta tells you they hate it, you at least learn who your target audience isn't, and what naysayers wouldn't like.
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genuine question: why is genesis so low on ur topsters?
also, if you can: could i hear why hawaii: part ii is rated 3.5 on ur rateyourmusic? (as opposed to like. anything higher)
(p. s. your music inspires me to be the sincerest version of myself, and for that i thank you. the impact you've had on my life is unforgettable.)
genesis isn't rated low. my number one album of all time is genesis' "the lamb lies down on broadway", for about 16 years running. my topster is organized by relative colour, it's not perfect but it just looks nice!
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when it comes to talking about music, what i like and like about it, almost 100% of the time i NEVER want to discourage people, talk down to artists, or claim my opinion as fact. the only time i will actively talk down about art is if it's purposefully harmful (see artists like: Tom Macdonald, etc).
with that said, music by miracle musical - and by extension tally hall - often does this thing where there are a handful of really impressive, well written songs that just blow me away. but then the rest of the album outside of those handful of songs are either just ok/catchy or don't interest me very much. the tally hall gang's highs are very high, and equally their lows are just sort of pace-killers for the albums.
it's dynamics like these that prevent me from liking some of my other albums for similar problems! i think albums like queen of misfits and glitter are bogged down by an absurd amount of boring filler that could have just been left out or reworked to be more interesting, it makes it hard to ever listen to those albums front to back. ironically i don't feel that way about fairytails, my 40-song long ass album, almost everything in it still feels rather purposeful to me. i listen to my own music a lot, and once i've finished a project i tend to try and listen to it and enjoy it from an audience perspective rather than an artist one.
while i'm on the topic, i don't necessarily agree with even rating hawaii pt. ii 3.5 because in the past few years i've completely lost interest in the idea of weighing albums by arbitrary scores. nowadays i like to just give 4-5's to albums i like and then ignore anything else. it doesn't really make sense to me to assign a number score to something with good faith, other than to show that score to other people. interfacing with art is not a black and white process. despite the so-called 3.5/5.0 score i gave hawaii pt. ii whenever that was, the reality is that record has influenced me and i've enjoyed it. honestly that's what matters the most. we can sit here and talk album dynamics, technicalities, compositional proficiency, lyric profundity, and """""consistency"""""" (which is a word music critics love to throw around without actually realizing what the fuck they're talking about) all day, but what matters the most is:
Did you like the music? (Yes/No)
Did it inspire you in some way? (Yes/No) [Optional]
Does it seek to do harm? (Yes/No)
Do you respect the efforts and goals of the artist? (Yes/No) [Should always be the inverse of Question 3; i.e; if you answer No to 3, then you should answer Yes to 4]
honestly if you answer yes, yes, no, yes, then it's a good album. i really don't care. not every piece of art has to push the envelope to new heights and be the most innovative thing in the world - i mean wouldn't that be extremely fatiguing and overwhelming? everyone wants to be a critic and tear down shit that doesn't click with them within the first viewing/listen these days, i don't know why, it's probably an ego thing, bred by the echo chambers in the corners of the internet. but a lot of music criticism can be COMPLETELY discarded in favour of "this just isn't for me", and a lot of people go leaps and bounds, doing mental gymnastics over internal compensations, to just avoid saying the dreaded phrase of "this just isn't for me".
trust me, i'm someone who has immense experience with tearing other people down to compensate for my internal insecurities, it happens extremely often which is why a lot of art criticism makes ZERO fucking sense. it's never about making meaningful commentary about anything, it's always just trying to justify in the format of a dissertation - the subjective experience of "this just isn't for me".
so. do i like hawaii pt. ii? yep. is it a perfect album? no. why did i rate it 3.5? probably because at the time i wanted someone somewhere to perceive me as Very Articulated and Well Educated In The Realm of Discussing Art In Front of Other People, in Order to Appear Superior in Intellect and Refined in Taste, Because I'm Insecure Just Like Everyone Else.
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takamimami Celebrates 100 Followers!!
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What better way to celebrate a milestone than with these three goofballs?!
Seriously though, I want to thank everyone who has liked, followed, reblogged, and interacted with any of my works I've posted on this blog. Let me start off by actually introducing myself:
Hi! My name is Tia/Angel/Princess/any pet name you want to call me :3 - I am a 27-year-old loser who shamelessly obsesses over people I will never meet. I pride myself in trying to be an open book, so I am always open to chatting about anything from anime, video games, music, books - but I need to come with my own CW because I am unhinged 87% of the time (srynotsry). I once saw this post that said something like 'Create pieces that you are the target audience for' and that is 100% my motto when it comes to writing, so the fact that anyone enjoys what I create is amazing bc it means I'm not as crazy or alone as I once thought I was <3 (ew that was oddly sappy). This blog is technically a side blog where I post my writings, so if you really wanna be friends, consider following/interacting with me on my main page @limitlesstildil
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RULES:
The rules are pretty easy: submit an ask here and choose a prompt from the lists below, and then let me know which of our lovely captains you want me to write about for you!! ALL WILL BE WRITTEN AS X READER FICS - SO PLEASE SPECIFY IF YOU PREFER F!READER, M!READER, OR G/N!READER!!
Be mindful of what prompt you are choosing - Smut prompts will be NSFW - Fluff Prompts will be SFW - and Angst will be SFW unless you request otherwise :3 NOTE: you can select choose for me to write a prompt for all three captains, but the blurbs will be smaller (5-600 words each) than if you just choose one of them. Single character pieces will be roughly 1.5k words - give or take (and also depending on my self control :3) ALSO: please feel free to include any ideas/pet names/headcanons you would like me to include/lean into - I want to personalize them for whoever is asking as much as possible so do not hold back when it comes to letting me know what you're in the mood for :3 HAPPY REQUESTING <3
PROMPT LIST:
SMUT đ
âDonât act innocent when we both know where your mouth was two minutes ago.â
âWe should probably leave, before we start a scandal.â
âMy tongue still remembers the way you taste.â
âJealousy seems to be a great motivator for you.â
âI could make you feel better.â
âI know I should care about the reason why youâre naked in my bed, but I will just enjoy it for a moment.â
âYour hand feels so much better than mine.â
âYour moans will wake everyone up and Iâm oddly fine with that.â
âYour eyes are already saying yes, now I just need your mouth to tell me the same.â
âHow about we get really dirty before we shower, so that itâs actually worth the effort?â
âOh, youâre such a tease!â
âHmm, is that a threat or a promise?â
âI want to ruin you.â
Our bodies fit so well together.â
âMake me shut up then.â
FLUFFđŹ
âHow come you always end up under my blanket?â
âHave I told you I love you today?â
âI would like my good morning kiss now.â
âYou getting so flustered is one of the cutest things Iâve ever seen.â
âI think I know what that smile means.â
âYou give the best hugs.â
âYouâre enough for me.â
âWait, we have a few more minutes.â
âYouâre just the cutest.â âYouâre the only one who is allowed to say that.â
âDo you think they will like it?â
âSweet of you to think of me.â âI always think of you.â
âYou make me a better person.â
âEverything alright?â âI just missed you.â
âI wouldnât want to be here with anyone else.â
âCome on. Letâs go home.â
ANGSTđĽ
âI shouldnât have left.â
"Please don't talk about yourself like that."
âNo, this canât be real!â
âWe tried our best.â
âPlease, let me in.â
âCanât you understand why that hurts me?â
âI asked you not do this, but you did it anyway.â
âDonât touch me!â
âIâve always been alone.â
âIt hurts, but Iâll live.â
âPlease, tell me you're ok.â
âSleep doesnât come that easy without you.â
âI donât really care anymore.â
âNo, Iâm actually not ok.â
âYou just canât help it, can you?â
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Obviously Iâve been queerbaited before, like, a genuinely incalculable number of times, and maybe thinking Buddie might actually go canon is a âfool me sixteen times, shame on meâ scenario, but I think one big thing thatâs keeping my hope alive is this thought: If you genuinely believe that Buddie isnât going to go canon, 100% zero possibility and absolutely no intention of trying... Then you also have to believe the people who create the show weâre all fans of are purposefully cruel dicks.Â
Because we have SEEN what it looks like when the showrunner of 911 knows there is no possibility of it happening, has no plans of it, and is generally trying to avoid accusations of queerbaiting.
It looks like S5 & S6. Little bits here and there, the odd important scene to throw breadcrumbs⌠but a lot of keeping the two characters apart, being circumspect in interviews, PR shut downs on the actors, etc. The show has proven they are capable and willing to exactly that!
So indulge me, and imagine for a second. They had the conversation with the new network, and the execs told them they wanted to continue with the status quo, to write as if Buddie is never going to go canon, BUT were willing to bend so far as to make one of them queer, to keep the fans happy.
What would that look like?
I don't know, call me foolish.... But I think it would look like keeping the same dynamic from The Drought Seasons. Having them be friends and important to each other but still fairly disconnected, not having as much screen-time, etc, It would look like having Buckâs coming out arc be a SEPARATE, individual narrative. If they just wanted to write Tommy and Buck, and that's it, they could have done things differently.
There are just so many conceivable ways they could have written Buckâs coming out arc, to almost completely separate it from Eddie and have it be made clear, in no uncertain terms, that Buck is bi but that doesnât mean he cares about Eddie like that, that Eddie is a hetero McHetero.
Buckâs coming out arc could have included him being jealous because heâs suddenly faced with Tommy in the flesh and is insecure about how he was technically âTommyâs replacementâ at the 911, with Eddie not relevant to it at all, or have Maddie and Chimney be the ones to interrupt The Date, or literally any other scenario that didnât make it all about Eddie.Â
They could have had one short scene where Eddie and Buck talk about it, and then the rest would be like, Buck talking to Hen about being queer, Buck interacting just with Tommy and getting to know him, Buck doing a research binge about bisexuality and info-dumping at an inappropriate time during a call, etc etc etc.
Thatâs how you tell that story and only be writing it for the proverbial âgeneral audienceâ.
But they didn't. They purposefully reversed direction. They chose for Buckâs coming out arc to... highlight his nigh-feral jealousy over Eddie forming a homosocial bond with another guy, having said guy repeat with genuine surprise and shock that it was him and not Eddie that Buck was interested in, have Eddie interrupt their date, have Buck be more worried about lying to Eddie than the fact that heâs queer at all, have Maddie say what she did to Buck about telling Eddie in specifically ambiguous termsâŚ
In a season that also included the Fire Extinguisher Incident, and Buck saying he âwishes he could helpâ with Eddieâs sexual frustration, and a big increase in social media engagement, and having Buck being Eddieâs rock in the last few episodes while he had a bizarrely platonic affair with his dead wife's dopplegangerâŚ
If they did that while KNOWING the plan was actually for Buck/Tommy endgame and Eddie riding off in the sunset with a hot female firefighter who has a cool motorcycle or whatever the fuck, or them both dying in a freak car-washing accident, orâŚ.
If they GENUINELY planned that? If the entire Buck jealousy plotline was intended to be nothing more than a deliberate queerbait-and-switch? Then theyâre fucking assholes, sorry. They would have to know full well exactly what they were doing, how many peopleâs hopes and emotional investment they were toying with... If they were actually planning to keep dragging it along for seasons more of baiting and dangling things in front of us, while knowing categorically that they had no plans to deliver? That would be genuinely GOD TIER levels of specific, intentional queerbaiting.
Which could be the case! I won't deny that. Shows have done it before, plenty of times. Tim et al could be callous bastards deliberately instructing the actors to wink it up in interviews and share suggestive Tiktoks, and writing Buckâs coming out arc as being entirely focused around Eddie and throwing out hints... All while laughing behind Buddie fans' backs about our gullibility, how weâre keeping the show trending on the force of our delusions, etc. Maybe that's it! Maybe they just genuinely enjoying fucking with people. Or maybe they were just shitty enough writers that they didn't know what they were doing, and it was all a total accident, somehow, the proverbial monkeys pounding at keyboards and accidentally spelling out B U D D I...
But you know what? Call it naive, but I prefer to think theyâre not huge assholes, or hugely incompetent.
That there might actually be a point to all this, somewhere down the line.
I guess we'll find out.
#911 abc#buddie#911 show#buck x eddie#help i accidentally word vomited#i didn't mean to get this emotionally invested in#a procedural soap opera on network television#but it's just so fascinating i want to poke it with a stick#i might be wrong but you know what? i think it'll be interesting to see what happens#gonna tag this#anti-bucktommy#just to be on the same side and not upset anyone#but I'm genuinely just looking at the narrative and the PR choices as they exist
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(CURRENT THIS REFERENCE IS BASED ON THE MYTH. I WILL UPDATE IT ONCE THE MYTH IS OVER.)
Written by meeee!!
Name: Evren Nevermore!!
Alter of: Daisy Bell!!!
Role: Protector!
Alt Names: The Void, The Skybox!!
Special Titles: The Prophet.
Username: lappelduvide!! Itâs a pun. Hehe.
Nicknames: Little Raven, Prophet, Caesar, Brutus, Julius.
Age: 17!!
Pronouns: Any Pronouns!!
Sexuality: eh whatever.
Gender: eh whatever.
Species: Technically, I am the same species as Daisy but like- I am a void. What is a void? Great question!! I dunno cause I kinda made it up Im going to be so for real.
Disorders: I have the same disorders as Daisy.
Physical Disabilities: I have the same disabilities as Daisy.
Religion: Daisyism, obviously.
Job: My main job is to like, protect Daisy obviously, but also to keep track of the domain and make sure everything is like chill and stable and stuff.
Lives in: I live in the Skybox/Void.
Languages: I can speak any language basically. I mean Iâm literally a computer I can just google translate everything it ainât that hard-
Height: 6ft!!
Accent: Otherwordly, No Discernible Origin.
Voice Claim: Amethyst from Steven Universe.
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Spirit Level: Acceptance baby.
Powers: I have the same powers as Daisy. I just tend to focus on like reality bending stuff, wind and sky stuff, prophecy is a big one, yknow that kinda thing.
Weaknesses: I have the same weaknesses as Daisy.
Strings Form: Myyy strings are white cause we gotta MATCH obviously.
Soul: Mycena Lazulina!!

Weapons: Windforce Sword!!!
Alignment: I am chaotic neutral.
Text Color: Blueee!
Main Animal: Ravens!
Main Hobbies: I donât really have time for hobbies with all the work I gotta do.
Favorite Food: Apples. I donât really eat so.. not much else..
Favorite Flower: Lily of the Valleys!!! Theyâre pretty. Also theyâre the fancy flowers you get in animal crossing.
Scent: Blueberries.
Handedness: Ambidextrous.
Blood Color: Good luck stabbing me to find out. Itâs probably red though.
Awareness: Oh I am very aware.
Birthday: Same as Daisy, December 20th.
Theme:
Battle Theme:
Playlist:
Fun Facts: She knows all, She sees all, She speaks all.
Special Interests: Greek Mythology, Philosophy, History!!
Stims: Playing with clouds, flying around, spinning!!
Stimboard: [???]
Moodboard: [???]
Fashion Board: [???]
Comfort Objects: Im not a child. I donât have any.
Hereâs the part you really want to know yeah? WHAT ARE EVRENS OPINIONS ON YOU PEOPLE.
Family:
Cosmo. I feel absolutely no feelings towards this man I think he is stupid and he calls me little raven which IS RUDE. (0%)
Kriston. âŚheâs my dad⌠can we STOP TALKING ABOUT IT NOW. (100%)
The Cranes. They all seem like decent people. I havenât met most of them.. but they keep Daisy safe and protected.. and thatâs all that matters to me. (100%)
Jessa. SHE MIGHT BE MY MOM I DONT KNOW WHY ARE YOU ASKING ME SO MANY QUESTIONS GOD. (100%)
Ebro4. I go back and forth on him. I think he is a good man but he often gets.. blinded by more than his blindfold.. (30%g
Zailyn. I respect her a lot. She has done a lot of good for Daisy and protects her well. I canât really complain about her really. (50%)
Friends:
Grat. I like Grat!! Heâs a very silly demon. I have fun playing with him. :) (50%)
Zan. Zan is neat, I find her to be pretty funny. (50%)
Alice. Alice is funny, me and her often play together. She loves flying on my clouds with me. (50%)
Star. Star is neat!! I really enjoy them.. They are kinda like my personal hype squad. (50%)
Mouse. I respect her. I havenât really interacted with her much directly due to our paths never really aligning. (50%)
Sleuth. Clockhead is funny. I like that.. he takes care of us though.. he- doesnât have to do that.. (90%)
Romance: Aculia. Her system included in this of course. I.. really.. love her.. I- trust her wholeheartedly.. I would die for her.. (100%)
Therapist: Jonah Francois. Jonah is alright. I have no issues with him, I just am a little bit antsy when I have to bear my neck for someone.. (80%)
Enemies: Enemies is a bit of a strong word. This is more âpeople I disagree with on a fundamental level spiritually and emotionallyâ
Camilla. Okay maybe I have one enemy fuck this bitch I hope she dies in a fire. (0%)
Radio. I cannot forgive him for what he has done to Daisy. I fundamentally disagree with everything he stands for. Chaos above all else is meaningless. (0%)
Venus. If he truly thinks he can contain and control me then he is more of an idiot than I thought. (0%)
Emily. I understand why she did it, but I donât know if I can forgive her for it. (0%)
Brief Personality: [wip]
Brief Backstory: [wip]
#Youtube#angel posting#OC#ocs#my art#OC reference#original character reference#original character#Evren
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'Jax is an NPC'
Hm... ... ...
No.
It's a good theory, don't get me wrong, I see the evidence, I see where you're coming from.
But it's not a theory I agree with. Let me explain.
Caine's line "But if I start losing track of who's a human and who's an NPC who knows what could happen" is very vague as is. This could mean a whole lot of things.
I said this in another post of one of my own theories. I think it's possible that Caine could've killed a human player and his trauma of that was showing.
We know A.I's can shed traumatic emotions. Look at Gummigoo.
Now, yes, Caine couldn't 100% kill a human. Otherwise he would delete the abstractions. And it seems like human players abstract when they die and that's the only way they CAN die.
So therefore Caine having killed a human player should be thrown out as a possibility.
BUT. Hear me out.
Abstractions are shown to be able to glitch several in game objects because of their abstraction. And we actually do NOT see if all the abstractions look exactly the same as Kaufmo's abstraction.
They could very well not.
Going to biblical text, Caine was the first murderer and received a permanent consequence.
Could a permanent consequence be, idk, failing at your programmed job over and over again and be forced to watch these humans abstract and perish forever?
Especially if because of the human player death's abstraction glitch, is WHY the other human players cannot leave the game!
If you look at Pomni's room in one shot, there's a couple of blocks that are stacked from top to bottom 'ABXEL'.
Could it be that the human player Caine killed was named Abel?
But there is also the other possibility that somehow, there is an NPC among the circus. So let me explain my thought on that possibility.
I don't think it's possible.
I think Caine would've noticed, especially if he immediately recognized GummiGoo wasn't supposed to be there.
If one of the circus folks were an NPC, their figure would've appeared with the others in the backrooms.
Now, there is the possibility that it was placed somewhere else, that place is huge after all. So take that with a grain of salt.
I'm not completely eliminating the 'Jax is an NPC' theory.
I get the evidence. He's constantly breaking the fourth wall. But I think that more so has to do with what Iâm about to say.
He has keys to people's rooms. I get that one. That is definitely sus as hell and I'm not denying it is sus.
He also âlacks human physics.â
So does everyone else in the cast. Pomni can stretch her body out like Elastagirl. Ragatha has stuffing instead of blood. Kinger has his own glitchy moments. Gangle has two faces. Zoobles body can fall apart.
Iâm just saying. These are not human physics either. So Jax being able to keep in place whenever he wants being only a Jax thing is not too far fetched compared to all these other examples.
But I also think, and this is my opinion, that he's much more compelling as a character as a sociopathic human player that is beyond saving and MENTALLY cannot be humanized again.
What I mean by that is that while he is TECHNICALLY a human player, MENTALLY, he is so detached from his humanity and moral code often associated with humanity that he acts more NPC-like as a side effect.
Jax is not designed to be a morally grey character. He is written to be the least moral of the entire show.
It would be SO EASY to excuse those moral wrongdoings as 'well they were never human to begin with'.
But I think that's the lazy way out, and I think this show is smarter than that.
Because here is the thing, there ARE some really REALLY terrible humans. Evil humans in fact.
WHY they're so terrible varies, but that doesn't make them less terrible.
And yes while some terrible people can get redeemed if they themselves can, this is NOT absolute. There are people that are just plain beyond saving. So beyond saving that they ditch their moral code, a code drilled into the human mind, that they SEEM inhuman to humans who can't relate.
This is a very real psychological thing.
With how many morally grey characters get thrown around as compelling these days, Jax NOT being written that way and instead being written as the morally worst would naturally make people go 'he must not be human'.
In psychology, behavior like that doesn't physically inhumanize them, but it MENTALLY does, they behave in a set of rules so different from the normal that it's corrupt to the normal.
So I think he is a human player like the others. But his MENTALITY is not, so he ACTS NPC-like as a side effect to that mental loss.
Not every human is morally grey and get cozy redemption arcs. There are some truly awful people in the world with no redeemable qualities whatsoever. I like that he represents that. I like that there's a character on this show that acts as that huge wake-up call of 'Yeah some people just plain suck and you shouldn't have to deal with them.'
But while I don't think Jax being an NPC would be the best route to take. That is just my opinion and I am not the one writing the show. If that IS the route they are taking, I am fine with that so long as it is written with proper care. I could definitely be reading this wrong.
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Today I'm more than usually annoyed with a pop science article, so I'm going to talk about reading these sorts of articles, why you should always be skeptical of claims in them, and some of the ways you can tell the article's author didn't understand what they were reading and told you the wrong thing.
I clicked on an article in Eating Well about low bone density and dementia, because my mother has both. There's not a lot we can do for her now, but I am a curious person. I know Eating Well isn't great at science interpretation and communication, so I'm anticipating that I'm going to need to read the original study already, going in. (How do I know Eating Well isn't a great source usually? Well, I have read it before, and it has some really clear biases if you read a few articles that aren't science communication, and so you get to know a source over time like that. Regardless of how, I'm already suspicious they're not going to do a great job.)
The article is talking about research that shows low bone density may be predictive of dementia risk. It is written by a journalist and reviewed by a dietician. Now, I don't know what review the dietician did, but she did a bad job, and also, so did the journalist, because THE FIRST red flag that goes up is pretty quick: the math is very, very clearly wrong.
This says there are 3651 participants, and that over 11 years, 688 of them developed dementia. This is 18.8% and the article calls it 19%. That's fair! Not a red flag so far, just rounding. Then it says that of the 1211 people with lowest bone density at the start, 90 people (7.4%) developed dementia, and of the 1211 with highest bone density, only 57 (4.7%) did.
This IS a red flag. It's a GIANT red flag. This red flag can be seen from SPACE by anyone who knows how percentages work.
Here's how: You have 3651 people. 1211 of them are in the low bone density group, 1211 of them are in the high bone density group, leaving 1249 people. You have 688 total dementia cases, but your high and low groups account for only 147 of them, leaving 541 cases for that middle group. That's a LOT of cases. That middle tertile, just eyeballing it, has to have about 40% of its people with dementia -- that makes low bone density look like it predicts LOWER dementia risk relative to the middle group.
I can write out the equations for you two ways:
3651 - 1211 - 1211 = 1249 688 - 90 - 57 = 541 541/1249 = 0.433 0.433(100) = 43.3%
Because I am someone who does a fair amount of stats for a living, though, what I noticed was pretty much this equation:
0.074(1211) + x(1249) + 0.047(1211) = 0.19(3651) and I knew immediately that x had to be MUCH bigger than it should, which indeed the math bears out: x(1249) = 0.19(3651) - 0.074(1211) - 0.047(1211) x(1249) = 694 - 90 - 57 x = 547/1249 = 0.438 0.438(100) = 43.8%
That 694 is because the authors rounded 18.8 to 19 earlier, not because I can't math. So, due to rounding, you get slightly different answers -- but BOTH of them point to something SERIOUSLY WRONG with the reporting. What is actually going on in that middle tertile? Where do these numbers come from? Well, lucky us, they mention the name of an author, a journal, and a date. Always be wary of pop sci articles that don't give you a way to track down the original, but giving you that way to track things down doesn't mean they aren't still doing a crummy job with their reporting, as we see here.
The original paper is Association of Bone Mineral Density and Dementia: The Rotterdam Study, published March 2023 in Neurology. This is a pretty technical article with a fair amount of math and things in parens etc. etc. and tables and lots of measurements. The table captions are often not the greatest, which makes it a bit harder to read and interpret. For example, in Table 1, items are listed as number(number) and this can be any of:
count (percent) -- this one's usually labeled in the table itself
mean (standard deviation)
median (interquartile range) -- these last two are NOT labeled in the table, so we don't know which set of numbers is which.
Great. Thanks guys. Assuming what's called a "normal distribution" mean (SD) and median (IQR) numbers will be similar, but they're not the same and I'm irritated they're conflated but OK. Soldiering on!
The original study looked at several different measures of bone density, and found only ONE of them to show predictive ability for dementia: the density of the femoral neck. This means that for their article, Eating Well should have looked at the results for femoral neck bone density, which we find in Table 2:
You have the actual numbers for 5 years, 10 years, and study end, as well as the hazard risk (HR) for each bone density tertile, with the highest tertile set as the standard. Numbers in the HR column have 1 as a reference point -- lower than 1 is lower risk than the highest tertile, and higher than 1 is higher risk.
The first thing I noticed is that neither 57 nor 90 occur in the femoral neck section at ALL. Those numbers from the Eating Well article are just not there. I also notice that the other numbers don't align even one little bit -- the number of total cases of dementia is different, for example. I do notice that the column with the 10 year followup has numbers in it close to 57 and 90 (49, 67, 86, totaled to 202) and that the overall numbers for the total study are much higher -- 201, 236, 229. Interesting.
At this point, I just straight-up search the paper for "90", and I find it in Table 2....in the total bone density section, which the paper's authors have said is NOT the section that showed possible predictive results. I search for "57", and also find that in total bone density, and also....wow the EW author straight up failed to read. This is actually worse than I thought.
Read across, these are the 5 year followup numbers (first 2 columns - count and HR), 10 year (middle 2 columns), and total followup numbers (last 2 columns).
We see our friends 57 and 90 in the 10 year columns. 90 is, as described in the EW article, in the lowest bone density tertile, but 57 is NOT in the highest bone density tertile. It's in the middle tertile. The actual number for the highest tertile is 68. Additionally, the total cases for 10 years is nowhere near that 688 number -- it's 215. We only get total case numbers close to 688 when we look at the study end numbers: it's 686, in this particular group. If we look at the study end case numbers for highest, middle, and lowest tertiles, we see WHY this particular measure can't be used to predict anything: they are 227 (highest), 227 (middle), and 232 (lowest) -- not significantly different from each other.
We can also see here that this group of people -- people who had total bone density measurements -- is not 3651, but 3633, which is listed across the bottom row. The overall STUDY had 3651, but not all of them had total bone density recorded.
Now we know that the author of the EW article did all of the following:
read the wrong part of Table 2
mixed up middle and high tertile results
reported 10 year results mixed with total followup results (this resulted in the weird math that alerted me something was very very wrong in the first place).
and the person who was supposed to review the article didn't have even the basic math skills to catch the problem -- which she absolutely should have, as a registered dietician. For giggles, I looked up program requirements for a BS in Dietetics. Programs require things like statistics and precalc -- not math heavy, but the math that alerted me to this problem is VERY basic statistical knowledge, like the kind they teach in 6th grade level statistics, which I know because it was literally in my 6th grader's curriculum this past school year. So a registered dietician DEFINITELY had enough math to catch this problem, and should have, and Eating Well should be ashamed of itself.
SO. What can we learn from this?
Well, science communication is a skill set. Some people have worked very hard to develop that skill set and are excellent at it -- but lots of people do not have it, and even those who do can make mistakes. Many, many pop sci articles are not written by trained science communicators, or people with any education in how to read scientific articles, or people with good reading comprehension, even. It's very common for pop sci articles to have these sorts of errors in them. Therefore:
Always read pop sci articles with a skeptical eye. Ask yourself:
Do these numbers line up? Usually the math in pop sci articles is not very complex -- you can often do some basic arithmetic to make sure it even makes sense, as was the case here.
Does one part of the article seem to contradict another part of the article?
Do I feel confused about what exactly I'm being told? What's not clear about it?
Am I being told about HOW something works or WHY it works or both? Are those two things being conflated somehow?
Is there a link or way to find the original research? If not, my advice is to throw the whole article away. If yes, you can go check it out -- often just looking at the abstract or results section will be enough, and abstracts usually aren't paywalled even if the rest of the article is. You would be surprised how many times the abstract says "we found X" and the pop sci article says "the researchers found Y".
Could I explain this article to someone and have it make sense? If not, why not?
Is the article confusing correlation (these things happen together) with causation (one of these things causes the other)?
Pop sci articles, like other journalistic articles, are extremely subject to bias issues from the publication they're in. A lot of people tend to read pop sci articles as neutral, factual reporting, but they aren't! I mentioned EW's biases earlier -- the one I think is most relevant to how their article is written is a pervasive belief that if you just eat the right things in the right amounts you will be thin and healthy and stave off all kinds of problems. They close their article by mentioning that, although the study's authors are clear that this connection is unlikely to be causative, and that risk factors for low bone density and dementia have substantial overlap, readers should act like it might be causitive with diet and exercise choices that promote bone health. They were so excited to get to their point about fixing your diet that they didn't pay attention to the actual science they were reporting on. (Sidenote: actual scientific journal articles are supposed to be neutral, factual reporting. They also aren't actually that, but there are some measures in place around this to try to prevent the worst effects of bias.)
It's worth brushing up some basic math skills. You don't need to know a lot! Very basic information will help you better understand a lot of articles -- both ones that are accurate and well-written, and ones that are shoddy and should not have been published. I really like Larry Gonick's The Cartoon Guide to Statistics but if your grasp of percentages is shaky, it will be too advanced. A good option might be something like The I Hate Mathematics! Book, which is pretty old but really accessible, but there's probably some newer great ones out there that I just don't know about.
#science#pop sci#reading comprehension#how dare you say we piss on the poor#math#statistics#eating well#bad science communication#neurology#dementia#bone density
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Some people need to understand queer coding opens character identities and relationships up to a solid queer interpretation, but that doesnât equal âthis character 100% fits my headcanon and if you disagree youâre a [REDACTED]â
From a literary analysis perspective, as long as your interpretation is reasonably evidence-based itâs valid. As this is fandom, Iâd add âsincereâ to that since unlike an academic setting we get bad faith actors but thatâs it.
So, to have a valid âinterpretationâ you have to do the work in good faith, and you have to be able point at the text to support your interpretation. If you canât, or donât want to, thatâs a headcanon, and itâs totally fine.
âBut this character is a lesbian she likes a girl!â Thereâs more to queerness than straight and gay. You could reasonably interpret a girl who likes another girl as plenty of different things:
Lesbian
Bi
Ace/aro and something else
Straight and closeted trans
Straight and lover is closeted trans
And so on.
So when you have an interpretation, someone might tell you, âI think this other thing.â The polite way to handle this if you donât like it is to say âthatâs so cool we can see different things in the ambiguity of artâ. Maybe blocking each other if you dislike their interpretation that much.
Thatâs of course unless you both want a debate to further refine your understanding of the text or just like to argue or whatever. Which is fine! As long as itâs not overly bitter or whatever, itâs fun to discuss.
âSo how do I know which interpretation is more canon than another?â
See, thatâs the thing, you canât. Canon is kind of shaky in the first place. The canon is just whatâs written thatâs recognized as true/correct text, not the way to understand it (and not what the author says is true, some people take Word of God as canon because it allows the following of one concrete interpretation instead of acknowledging multiple, but strictly speaking it is not). You can only interpret the canon.
For example, 4-komas bonuses of serialized manga are usually non-canon because they are jokes and not meant to be taken seriously as a part of the storyâs text. Thatâs what canon actually is for, originally itâs to talk about which books are genuinely part of the Bible and which are to be deemed offshoots that shouldnât be taken as a Catholic Church-endorsed religious text.
I guess thatâs what gets people confused? That thereâs no actual truth to imagined worlds, only what happens in the eyes of the beholder when they interact with art?
Because thatâs what it means, canon often has nothing to do with whoâs âactually a lesbianâ short of them saying it directly. An onscreen wedding is said to âmake a couple canonâ precisely because thereâs only so many ways you can interpret a wedding, but all that means is that the text says theyâre together at a point in time. One way I can think of having a canon sexuality would be a canonical character sheet, or an omniscient narrator saying so, but everything less is basically an interpretation.
Note that interpretation obviousness can go from âthatâs a stretch but I like itâ, to âyou only need eyes to see itâ, theyâre both still interpreting. Even a character talking sexuality technically only makes canon that theyâre willing to say so, but thatâs when critical thinking comes in.
If you hear a character say âIâm a married lesbianâ and think âtheyâre just confusedâ with no evidence, you look like an idiot. You absolutely can argue which interpretation is more valid or likely by pointing out inconsistencies, stretched evidence, or that one interpretation has a higher volume of evidence/etc. This is how you avoid relativism and ânothing the text says mattersâ trolls.
Occamâs Razor is another way you might be tempted to try and determine whose thesis is stronger. This technique works through figuring out which interpretation requires the least amount of assumptions (saying something arbitrary is true as a basis) but it doesnât make anything canon, or more interesting, itâs not a concrete sign of superiority. Just means it has stronger fondations.
However⌠your interpretation being stronger, more popular, better worded etc. or you thinking someone elseâs is immoral, stupid, etc. doesnât give you license to be a bully, to call people names, to dox them, dig up dirt to make them look worse, and so on and so forth. Thinking youâre right and theyâre wrong does not make you above basic respect, politeness, or consequences. Youâre not better than everyone else.
As a child, I used to think I was always right because I was logical, and I clearly made logical sense so there was no way for there to be a logical reasoning that arrived at a different conclusion. (Newsflash: Child me was very wrong! Sometimes multiple things can be equally valid! And even if they were not equal, that didnât give me license to deride people publicly!)
Queer coding is by its nature interpretative. Coding is the author leaving hints about their characters by using a âcodeâ. Some hints, almost everyone in your section of fandom might have the exact same interpretation about. Some hints might be dead obvious. Some hints might leave you overjoyed. Some hints you might ignore because they make you uncomfortable.
Some people will disagree with you about how they interpret the coding, or might even just state that they believe people have a right to interpret the canon however they want, even in ways you donât like. That is normal. That is not a threat to your interpretation.
Donât be a petty cunt about it.
Essentially,

#literary analysis#hi3#phoebe rambles#the amount of people who decry the mere possibility of sushang not being a lesbian when she had a crush on a dude once#when they also ADAMANTLY refuse to acknowledge how queer coded the Seeleâs are with one another#stop putting your moral agenda in my literary analysis what are you. 12#honkai impact#honkai impact 3rd
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20 Questions for Fic Writers
I'll freely admit I wasn't tagged - and this may not be of interest to any of my followers - but I thought it looked like fun, so I'm giving it a try. I haven't done one of these fic writer asks in a bit, so it felt like it was time. :)
How many works do you have on AO3? I have 94 separate works on AO3, though a couple of those are collections of one shots, so it might seem like more. On ff.net I have an even 100, but way back in the day I wrote some fics for Criminal Minds and Castle before I found OuaT. (I was a big time propoent of Morgan and Garcia becoming a couple... ;P)
2. What's your total AO3 word count? Okay, short of trying to look at the count of each separate story and add up all 94 of them, I'm not sure how I locate this. Let's just say, it's a lot of words.
3. What fandoms do you write for? Now, pretty much solely for Once Upon a Time. In the past I have written fic about the Backstreet Boys (yes, I know, but what can I tell you?) Criminal MInds, CSI:NY, NCIS: Los Angeles, Moonlight, Castle, and a couple Lord of the Rings missing moment one shots.
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos? Hmmm.... let's see, shall we? My fic with the most kudos appears to be a one-shot I wrote for CS Neverland New Year: "Fight for me When it Matters' with 130 kudos, followed by a gift fic written for @teamhook, also a one-shot, called "Thick as Thieves (or Princesses)" with 123, then a three-shot birthday fic for @searchingwardrobes titled "One More" and a two-shot I wrote way back when season three was airing called "Under the Weather" - both of those have 86 kudos. Last is a two-shot birthday fic I wrote for @kmomof4, "The Weight of the Crown (is a Feather on the Waves)", with 85 kudos.
5. Do you respond to comments? I should do better at that than I do. I love and treasure every single comment. They make the hard work feel completely worthwhile. I do try to answer as many as I can, but since most people have migrated to AO3, I don't do as well as I did on ff.net. For some reason I have a harder time following the comment and response page interface on that site than I did on the other one. (I know, I in the very small minority there, but to each her own, I guess?)
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending? Honestly, you've probably not going to find my angstiest fics on AO3. They're old enough that I'm not sure I have ever moved them over from ff.net. I wrote a Lord of the Rings fic once "What Went Unspoken" (mostly missing moments that fleshed out Boromir's character and motivations, etc. before going to join the Fellowship) that is certainly bittersweet rather than fully happy at the end. I also wrote a post-episode fic for the short-lived, but AWESOME, show Moonlight "Forever Waiting" that was melancholy for sure.
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending? That's honestly hard to answer! I enjoy the angst - and especially love the hurt/comfort - but I usually have my stories end happily by the time they have finished. Particularly when writing for our pirate and princess, I figure they've already been through so much that they deserve their happy ending (beginning).
8. Do you get hate on fics? I have been pretty lucky in that regard. Way back when I first starting writing and posting OuaT/CS stories, I did occasionally get comments that thought I was including Snow and Charming enough, or that I was having Killian do things for Emma that the commenter thought her parents would or should instead, but other than those gripes, I've largely had kind and thoughtful commenters by and large.
9. Do you write smut? To my mind, I don't technically write much smut. I do occasionally attempt a love scene, but I don't feel like it's something I am especially gifted at writing. If something of mine is labeled "M" it probably means somewhere it gets about as close to smut as I'm able to do. (How's that for an uncertain sort of answer?)
10. Do you write crossovers? I haven't played with crossover in fic writing a lot - though I've read some AMAZING ones along the way. I do have one fic from way back in the first CSSNS event @cssns18 that mixed up Moonlight and OuaT, which I was pretty proud of: "Tasting Forever". And I have a long-delayed idea to do a Timeless x OuaT crossover, but it feels awfully ambitious to plot out, and I have a lot of current WIPS that I feel deserve to be finished up first.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen? I don't think so?
12.Have you ever had a fic translated? Not that I know
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before? I have co-written a couple of fics with my writer friends @whimsicallyenchantedrose, @jrob64, and @kmomof4, which was lots of fun! And I also wrote a Revolutionary War era au fic with @jrob64 and @sotangledupinit, which was also an exciting new challenge.
"Cave Cruises, Cabin Capers, and Cracked Craniums", "Destination Dream Weddings, Driving Disasters, and Dented Derrieres", and "Freed to Love"
14. What's your all-time favorite ship? That's difficult to answer as well, because I tend to love each of my chosen ships in a special way and for their own specific reason. It's probably CaptainSwan (I mean, I spend a lot of time thinking about them, even though the show has been over for nearly a decade!) Still, if Graham had lived, I think Gremma could have given them a run for their money! I also loved and adored Dr. Quinn and Sully and Pacey and Joey on Dawson's Creek (probably my first two ships before I really even knew what shipping was), Morgan and Garcia on Criminal Minds, and Wyatt and Lucy on Timeless.
15. What's a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will? I am not putting anything here. I fully intend to finish all of the fics that I have started. Sometimes it takes me entirely too long to do so, but I won't leave it unfinished forever.
16. What are your writing strengths? I like to think I'm pretty good at setting a scene or creating atmosphere/mood. And I feel like I'm decent at writing dialogue that feels real and true to the characters.
17. What are your writing weaknesses? I am terrible at coming up with titles! I mean, it's a genuine struggle over what to call the thing ever. single. time. Also, as previously mentioned, I'm awkward at the smut. And I can do action/fighting scenes (sort of) but it takes me a bit of struggle, and then I'm still doubting if it works even when I finally call it "done".
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic? It would be cool to have a character who is from another place be able to speak dialogue in that language. I don't speak a second language, however, so while it would be neat, I'm not able to do it. I have referred to my friend who speaks and teaches French for a few phrases and endearments from time to time. though!
19. First fandom you wrote for? The first fandom I wrote for was probably little stories I wrote for my college friends and I starring the Backstreet Boys, and also Dawson's Creek fanfic.
20. Favorite fic you've written? Oh goodness, I don't know! Truly, I"m not being difficult, thanks hard to say. Some I'm really proud of because I tried something new for me and felt like I accomplished it. Some I just really liked the way they turned out, and so on. But often the ones that get the most comments and love, are not the ones I expect to do so.
I have probably tried to answer this question before, and I might have even said something completely different the last time around, but for the sake of trying to answer, I'll go with "Villian's Happy Ending" a sort of 3b spec fic I wrote between the two halves of OuaT's third season. It's never gotten a ton of feedback, but I was always really pleased with it. Or a tie between "The Case of the Heart in Armour" and "For All Life and For All Time". Both of them are set in the Victorian era (which I ADORE!) and have OuaT characters mashed up with some supernatural elements and themes and characters from traditional British lit. Both were challenging and a bit darker than I had written previously, and I felt like the stretch was worth the effort.
Okay, so, it said to tag five people, but please don't feel pressured if you'd rather not do this. I'd love to see your answers if you do it though! Tagging: @kmomof4 @jrob64 @whimsicallyenchantedrose @spartanguard @searchingwardrobes
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- What Andreas RĂśnnberg Says About The "Allegations" When Confronted
[TW, mentions of overdosing, mentions of self harm, mentions of grooming, drugs, and a long ass post lmao]
PS, If you don't care about this stuff, I mean like.... don't read it? go focus on the game or community. This is for the people who want Andreas' approval on the situation. Don't like it ? Don't read it
This prob gonna flop but I don't care honestly, i had in my drafts since November đ. I've been holding this for a sec but its probably one of the final things I'll be making about Andreas because i dont want this blog to be ALLLL about him at all. A little summary is im explaining how the evidence he sends to people trying to "disprove the allegations" has a bunch of plotholes. My friend didn't know what to do with this stuff so I took it into my own hands.
2-3 months ago, Andreas [u/andreas_ronnberg] wrote somebody I know on reddit after he kept calling him out on a thread Andreas 100% corrupted by making his fans who downvote anyone who dare to say they had a negative view of him or look deeper into the grooming situation. He used this long, copy-pasted reply at the beginning of the chat to "disprove" the "allegations" and say they're false and/or twisted around. So technically, this is Andreas' side of everything for anyone who wanted to see both sides, although I'm not sugar coating anything and I'm pointing out his flaws here, my blog, my rules. Plus Andreas blocked me but if he sees this from an alt since he's so crazed about his reputation that'll be funny.
Okay, so first of all, this copy-pasted paragraph is written really weirdly but I'll list it first since its funny as fuck, "The rumors are made by an obsessed manipulative fanGIRL who now identifies as NONBINARY and their TRANSGENDER boyfriend" LOL. He misgendered Sani right then and there while saying he was trying to be "respectful" and then made a PS saying that he mentioned their genders because they hate being misgendered. I dunno about you, but I feel like he DEFINITELY did that on purpose. Also, Sani isn't a "fangirl" of this man, if he used past tense before they were nonbinary it would make sense but using fangirl in general is just odd. but it's whatever and not the main thing we are focusing on there.
I had to split his words here cause it's long but I won't have to much


He shows some of his.... "proof" here and uses his nephews and nieces to guilt even though he did this to himself and what goes on the internet stays.
This shows the people he mentioned about (his "harassers") and another a police report
The first screenshots doesn't matter because it's just saying "fuck you, we claim the characters now" which just made his feelings hurt for a grown man, but this police report one is interesting.

(also I have no clue how this considered his only proof of strong harassment with Sani because there is worse than meanie hastags, especially when he uploaded someone's barely censored nudes... but hm sure sani is more "fragile" đš

The top notification says "Notification of your decision," and the rest say, "Copy of your police report", you see, this would be believable for me if it actually had a name attached to it.... even though this is the supposed police report against the Sani, Sani would literally say to you nothing is happening right now, not even in court. Not only that, but this (again) shows no proof it was against the victim and could be just an entirely random person he's reporting. If you think about it, if something was happening in court and he was winning due to everything being quote on quote, "misinformation, false rumors, manipulated content, and irrelevant stuff taken out of context." He wouldn't have been privately dming people out the blue saying he's innocent, might as well be very formal and public about it if he ACTUALLY was though.
Finally, he doesn't meet court standards anyway. If they look into him deeper, they'd see his history of drug use (which is especially serious with Swedish laws) and the revenge porn he willingly uploaded on his server.
REGARDING THE OVERDOSE
You see, his idea of this is weird. He and his wife blame his aspergers and the overdose of his medication on all this and say it's okay. Firstly, I don't even know what the aspergers has to do with this, it gives bad representation on people with autism in my opinion because overdosing on something and sexting a "friend" while you have a wife doesn't mean your autism forced you to do it. His analogy is strange too, it's similar to - If you hit a person while drunk driving, ITS OK ! You were under the influence of drugs and if you accidentally killed that person or seriously hospitalized them, you deserve no jail time because it was definitely not you at the time ! And totally not your fault!!
You see where I'm getting? If you hospitalize someone even if you were under the influence, you will and should face consequences either way. It was your choice to overdose. It was their choice to get drunk. Therefore, I do not feel as much sympathy for him on his side, he chose to go the wrong way and messed up a friendship himself, this is not the other person's fault and entirely understandable if they wanted to break the friendship up over it.
Also, he changes it up.... first, he says the overdose was caused by Sani because their blog post about him, but now it was an "AcCidEnTaL" overdose?... hm.. conflicting... if Sani caused it and you overdosed because they made that post, that's not an accident.


Anyways, on more to Andreas' side


Here he mentions Yulia (Yulia is a woman who was involved in Andreas shenanigans he claims was "the overdose" incident. Andreas knew Yulia since she was 12 (he said it himself over voice messages in their direct messages in the exposing Andreas v3 doc).
Here is the screenshot he provided, saying Yulia doesn't want to be involved.

It's very funny how he says Sani takes things out of context but uhm we have this....
(POV from Yulia's end)

"Owe? No, I don't owe you anything, I already said what you wanted me to say, I said that I wanted her to stop it, and I'm not a victim as she positioned me to"
Wow, Andreas. You MADE her say that so you look better and tried to make her delete an archive that wasn't even hers?... such proof, man. Now you see, Yulia doesn't really consider herself as a victim and this is why i havent mentioned her as one specifically although, either way Andreas has said horrible things to her still and taken her out of context to look better. Yulia doesn't care about him anymore but shared her story for the safety of anyone else this could happen to.
He says the things with Sani are completely fake because there aren't voice messages tied to their chats so theres no physical identity to "prove" it if it was real, and he likes to take advantage of that.
Also his self harming; He shared photos of himself on a trip to the mental hospital on his public server, and Yulia had proof of his self-harm photos he directly sent her as well as his crazed voice messages. He had no way out of the proof Yulia had and saying it was fake at the time would not work, especially since AI and other programs could not replicate photos like they do today, obviously.

He's right. He didn't cheat on his wife.... he attempted to. Luckily he has a wife that says to 'understand him' and have him get help although, clearly something hasn't been working if he still isn't living up to her expectations if he's privately dming people about the situation falsely and not apologizing to Sani at the very LEAST for sharing nudes on his server but whatever.
[Also, no one here in the screenshots are a 'fan', just more of his egotistical mumbling]
Either way, if he cheated on his wife or not, thats not really my business and kinda up to her in my opinion, although you see she sees a lot in Andreas. It's such a shame not even one promise she said would work couldn't be kept though due to his ego and delued takes on everything. If this actually worked Andreas might as well just should have owned up to it and apologize to Sani, that's all he could have done instead of tormenting his self through all this but that's his choice...
You see, if Andreas was serious about this, then he would come out publicly and not oddly DM people saying "FAKE FAKE FAKE" like anyone else would. If it's all just misinformation and taken out of context screenshots, then you would have come out about this now publicly and not hide it from your beloved community of people who admire you dearly right? or at least your defenders? I cannot say your whole community myself. But sure make your wife do it for you!

AND HERE ENDS THE ANDREAS PROOF SAGA !
After build ups of DMs, Andreas eventually stopped replying and gave up. No, I do not encourage sending hateful dms to Andreas or anyone else involved. This is to spread awareness about how Andreas ACTUALLY is. Yes, you can like his games all you want and play them, completely fine. Support him, though, and that's breaking the ice, but it's ultimately up to you.
Final note, if you, yes, you Andreas defenders, ever find this and would like to say this is "fake" or "manipulated" as well, I'd like you, in return, give me solid proof that it is first :) I do not accept text-based evidence such as
"This evidence seems fake" ,
"I thought Andreas said/debunked ....",
"Andreas said to ignore this because its old and ..."
I will need your 100% certainty (even though i know im not getting it teehee), as well as you to look into both sides of the story equally before you share an opinion because if you don't, THATS how you spread actual misinformation. Ya' supposed hardcore Cry of Fear fans gotta realize you can't call everyone a harasser or obsessed for having a voice against a popular opinion or vision of someone. No one sane is or wants to stalk this man but his actual parasocial fans. We're just calling him out and forever will cause just because something is old doesn't mean it shouldn't be remembered or not taken seriously still Lol. Don't feel bad for an infanilzed 30 year old man.
Rant over
#andreas rĂśnnberg#awareness#afraid of monsters#cry of fear#team psykskallar#SoundCloud#andreas groomberg
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Thank You!

I want to thank you guys so much for 100 (technically 104, haha) followers! â¤ď¸
As a thank you, Iâll accept any request commented under this post! It can be a SMAU, headcanon, drabble, or one-shot, and anyone can comment! Any genre works for me as well like angst, fluff, and smut (if youâre 18+). Just let me know what the prompt is and which Jujutsu Kaisen guy(s) you want me to do it on and Iâll make it! If youâd like to remain anonymous, you can also use my ask box! Just make sure to indicate that youâre requesting something in response to this post specifically.
(Obviously, it has to follow my boundaries so please donât request something mean đĽ˛)
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Itâs so hard to imagine a hundred people enjoying what I write and wanting to keep up with it. Iâve only been posting on tumblr for a couple months but reading and writing here is one of my favorite things to do every day and Iâm so glad that Iâm able to share this place with people who enjoy JJK as much as I do.
I started this blog because I was having a really hard time writing in my real life for school and work so turned to fanfiction since it was what led me to want to write in the first place. A couple months later, and Iâve written more than I have in the past year (and thatâs not even mentioning how much the quality of my work has gone up)! Writing has become inspiring again and I have this blog to thank for that.
This is really dragging on lol but thank you to everyone who followed, liked, reblogged, and commented on my posts. It means so much more than you know. If youâre reading this far, I hope my blog continues to be a safe space for others and I hope you all stick around for a while đŤś
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STAR TREK UPDATE TIME. the update is, we have finally started enterprise. here are things i knew about enterprise before starting:
set 100 years before tos (i was close, it's more like slightly under 100 years after first contact and a hundred and change before tos)
hoshi sato apparently dies on tarsus iv
INSANELY sexy chemistry between t'pol and trip tucker every gifset i have ever seen is bananas but they have a love triangle with archer, who is a bitch
they have some kind of baby in an au or something
MIRRORVERSE
vt'pol pon farr episode
lots of sexism everybody is mean to t'pol bc nobody likes vulcans
riker cameo at the end and everybody hated that and also a bunch of people die in badly written ways in the finale
theme song controversial.
prior to starting this i was like this is sttill technically kinda 90s trek it's got the riker cameo like 2001 isn't so far from the 90s and immediately we got hit with the theme song and the weird sexism and MAN what a downgrade from voyager. this is post 9/11 trek baby. we are in a different world now. i will miss ds9 and voyager so much
i was...honestly kind of bored by this. it wasn't as bad as the tng pilot but nowhere near as good as the voyager or ds9 pilots, the latter of which is high art. i did not find myself especially endeared to anyone except poor hoshi sato, who did not ask for this and reltably jumps at her shadow at every opportunity. i know it isn't t'pol's fault she's writen that way, and i feel certain i will be very endeared to her by the end, but in this episode she just kind of annoyed me.
as for the men, no one really stood out to be except trip and archer (i'm not even sure of everybody else's name yet, except dr phlox, whose freaky smile did make me scream aloud). as stated, archer is a bitch. he is mean and yells for no reason because of like...daddy issues that don't feel like they have any real weight. i don't like his acting and he has evoked no emotional response from me except annoyance. i like trip a little better! while i'm not losing my mind over him or anything he is fun, and i do like that even though his accent is fake (said "can't" instead of "cain't"), he did remember to change the end of "thursday" to "thursdee." that is how we say it yeah
the time period we're in did seem neat to me at first (you have to appreciate them not having gotten the transporter working on people yet and warp 4 still being fancy to them lol), but i don't really understand why the vulcans have been the boss of these guys for 90 years or whatever, have they just been saying "space is dangerous don't go" for that long and all of humanity listened? i think narratively they exist to be rules, and the rules exist to be bucked by captain archer, because he's an AMERICAN, DAMMIT. post 9/11. i get there's no federation or whatever yet, this is the wild west, but jesus fucking christ. also i hate that cochrane came up with the fucking speech. fuck that guy! rapey ass tos episode. anyway speaking on the time period i also liked the gravity thing. very fun
but like...the dinner where she was cutting her breadstick and talking about human barbarism for eating animals?? what even was that. we've had this philosophical discussion in trek a thousand times already. we KNOW humans aren't going to become brutes because this is a prequel. nothing in here was meaty enough (sorry) to justify retreading those points.
i did like this new race of bend shapeshifting guys. like, i miss odo, but also, whatever they've got going on was really fun. and the language barrier with the klingon at the end DURING the fight was also entertaining. i did also wind up liking the extremely gregarious scene with the decontaminating gel or whatever...at first i was very annoyed (you can see her nipples! give this woman some dignity! they could have done this separately!) but 1. trip was a perfect gentleman and 2. when she was like "turn around" i knew in my heart she could give him the strap.
other than that, very little to be compelled by, but at least i don't hate anybody except archer and the fucking subtitles. the subtitles on this were so so so so so SO bad. straight up disappeared at one point. i hate paramount plus so much <3
TONIGHT: ent's "fight or flight" and "strange new world."
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Magic Between the Moon & Sky: Rayllum Oneshot Series - A 5 Year Anniversary
Today marks the five year anniversary of MBTMSâ release. (Technically itâs tomorrow for Ao3, but FFN I posted there first). A oneshot collection that is yet to be finished, I know, but one that I treasure deeply. I may have fallen out of my love for TDP in certain elements, but the writing and what I started with in regards to Rayllum was something else.
I donât mean to be all, âI was there when it was writtenâ but I joined this fandom in its season one days, when it was REAL small here on Tumblr. Which meant smaller ship circles too. Iâm glad to have witnessed the fandom blossom and grow, and by that extension, Rayllum itself too.
I know many of my readers probably assume I wonât be returning to MBTMS, but youâre kinda wrong. I swear Iâm not one of those 100 oneshot fics that stop halfway (no fault to them of course, sometimes passion runs out)! I legitimately have more than a dozen oneshots planned out. But, Iâm also biding my time. Iâve learned with fic writing, that writing what I love is just as crucial as being passionate about it. I'm not currently into TDP but I still enjoy the oneshot concepts i thought up for my fics, so I'll probably only work from those.
I mean, I can probably just grind out the last oneshots and meet the 100 quota, but they wouldnât be good. Or maybe, they would be to some of you, but they wouldnât be something I could be proud of. Least of all, I wouldnât have fun writing it. So yeah, I do believe I know my limits and the extent of my creativity.
But the main reason at the end of the day, as to why I wonât drop this fic, is because it has quite literally spawned some of my best writing. âLoyalty & Lightâ, âThe Most Undoing Thingâ, my Taang oneshots, âLegends of Avatar: The Untold Storyâ, theyâve all had great prose that Iâm proud of. Some not so much, but thatâs growth.
âMagic Between the Moon & Skyâ houses many different styles and concepts I could never explore with most of my fandoms. Iâve written a modern college AU grounded in the slowest of burns, Iâve written childhood AUs diving into the naivety and hilariousness of a kid's mind, and Iâve written an emotionally powerful (as readers have said) Soulmate AU even though I donât like Soulmate AUs. And I have many more mind, but Iâve also managed to explore the canon and interpret my own ideas from before we learned anything of the lore.
Some were at the requests of fans, others were because I wanted to try and get my feet wet. Much like Callum and Rayla themselves, this fic was a great avenue for me to explore my abilities as a writer and try new things. And in the end, Iâm proud of that. And I cannot wait to see what I do next.
Thank you all, for an amazing five years of patience and love. Again, no idea when I'll return to this fic but I'll get around to it.
Until next post,
- Bleh
#magic between the moon & sky#MBTMS#tdp#the dragon prince#rayllum#tdp fanfic#oneshot#tdp callum#tdp rayla#thank you!
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My brain is going whirr whirr whirr so hereâs a random lesson/unhinged rant on romanization. What is romanization? It means using the letters of the Latin alphabet (in this case I really mean the English alphabet) to represent a different script. Obviously Iâll be talking here about how we represent the Thai script (which I know is technically an abugida not an alphabet, donât @ me). The way I see it, thereâs two basic reasons to do this.
To make the word more pronounceable/memorable/understandable for people who speak languages that use the Latin alphabet. For example youâre a learner who doesnât know the Thai alphabet 100% yet and you want to make notes on a word you just learned. Or youâre putting up signs for tourists, where it doesnât really matter if they can pronounce the name of the place properly as long as it matches whatâs in their guidebook.
Technical limitations. For example, someone from a country with a different writing system has to fill out their name in a form that only accepts latin letters. Or maybe you want to message a friend in Thai over in-game chat but it doesnât support Thai. Or maybe you could theoretically be typing in Thai but you have a US keyboard so itâs just easier to turn to romanization instead.
One thing relevant to me, and probably anyone reading this is the romanization of character names. I see it as a combo of 1 and 2. Obviously the audience needs a memorable way to think of the character and also it would be bizarre to randomly switch into Thai in the middle of the English subs, if the software even lets you do that.
There are two basic categories of romanization. Transcription is where you use the Roman alphabet to represent the sounds of thai, and transliteration where you basically just substitute English letters for Thai ones. The big difference between the two is going to be with ending consonants, since there are different pronunciation rules for initial consonants than for when that letter is the final consonant of a syllable.
THERE IS NO STANDARD SYSTEM FOR ROMANIZING THAI
Okay, well there is the Royal Thai General System of Transcription (RTGS), and it is official, but even the government doesnât use it consistently and also I hate it, which is what really matters. Itâs terrible for English-speaking learners because a lot of choices are misleading. Think of all the people who cannot pronounce âPhuketâ because in English âphâ is âfâ but in RTGS itâs an aspirated âpâ (so to me just a normal âpâ). This would be okay though if you gained a basic familiarity with how RTGS worked, or just looked up a chart or something. Much worse is the fact that the combination of letters âchâ are used to represent two completely different sounds in Thai. Part of me wishes translators would always use RTGS so we could have consistent subs, but then I remember itâs terrible and most Thais do not use it for their names in reality. The good thing about RTGS is that since it doesnât use any diacritic markers or other non-Latin characters itâs useful when technical limitations are the issue.
Most materials for learners will use some form of transcription, but this will vary wildly. I had my own personal system at one point, but didnât end up using it much because I stopped taking notes and switched to listening only. However, now I'm all about the Thai alphabet.
There are downsides to transcription. One is that many sounds in Thai simply do not exist in English, so any attempt to transcribe fundamentally won't allow an English speaker to intuitively pronounce it correctly. Another is that the pronunciation of the same word can vary, which youâll see a lot with any word containing âรâ. Formally (or sarcastically), this will be a rolled âr,â but normally people pronounce it âlâ (if itâs pronounced at all, in consonant clusters people just drop it and they also tend to drop actual âlâ sounds in clusters). So of course it makes sense to be written âr,â but itâs not going to sound like that most of the time, so is that really transcription at all? Also our own letters donât actually correspond to specific sounds in English, so English is a fundamentally terrible language to try to transliterate things into?
The advantage of transcription, where you just swap a Thai letter for an English one, is that itâs very easy for someone who is Thai. They can just spell the word in Thai in their head and make the substitution, no worries about how it actually sounds. I donât mind transcription at this point, since I am starting to get the hang of final consonants, and in some cases it helps me guess at the Thai spelling of the word. Buttttt itâs not actually that helpful for that since there are lots of cases where multiple Thai letters make the same sound.
Whatever youâre doing, you have to wrestle with the fact that Thai has tones, so if youâre not representing the tones somehow, you definitely wonât be able to pronounce a word properly based on its romanization. And if youâre using romanization for reason 2, technicla limitations, it may be literally impossible to represent tones. RTGS doesnât bother with tones. Or vowel length. So thatâs great.
If you want to actually learn to pronounce a word in Thai and donât know the Thai script, your best bet is IPA. The International Phonetic Alphabet is a standard way to represent sounds, so itâs super usefulâŚif you know IPA. Or if you want to look through some charts and listen to some audio files to learn how to pronounce one specific thing. Itâs not useful for resolving technical limitations because it uses lots of symbols not in the Latin alphabet. And unless you want to be a polyglot, why waste time learning IPA when you could just learn the Thai script? Also it doesnât do tones.
Hereâs a website where you can plug in any thai text and get a transcription, including in IPA. There are many options. If you do it with a characterâs name, you can try those options and itâs totally possible none of those will match what you see in the subs because the actual human is using transliteration/their own random system that is not one of the things listed/there's a canon romanization of the character's name. But also because sometimes it's just wrong. Have fun.
For more resources on pronouncing Thai I recommend Stuart Jay Raj. His way of talking about things takes some getting used to, but his âindic compassâ is actually pretty useful. If you set it to show Thai, you can click on a letter to hear it and see how itâs supposed to be made in the mouth. I also like his video on vowels.
For more on Thai names, see @recentadultburnoutâs posts on Thai name meanings.
Because Iâm currently obsessed with Century of Love, the rest of this is using the two actors, Daou and Offroad, as examples:
Did you know that Daouâs name had two syllables? My mind was blown when I heard it.
Thai: ŕ¸ŕšŕ¸˛ŕ¸Ťŕšŕ¸ŕ¸šŕš IPA: taĚË ĘuĚË RTGS: tau The way I would write it for myself: dta-oo
Absolutely no way I was getting that from reading 'Daou.' That first letter is an unaspirated, unvocalized alveolar consonant, and I know what that means because despite not being great at IPA, I am pretty obsessed with how in the mouth sounds are made. Basically itâs like âdâ or âtâ without actually being either of them. ŕ¸ŕšŕ¸˛ is the first syllable and ญŕšŕ¸ŕ¸šŕš is the second, but this is not a reading lesson, let's move on.
Offroadâs name is literally the English word âoff-roadâ like a jeep. In Thai script itâs ŕ¸ŕ¸ŕ¸ŕšŕ¸Łŕ¸ (not just his name, also when discussing motor vehicles). The site gets this one 'wrong,' putting an 'f' when that's not what 'ŕ¸' does as a final consonant, but closer to actual English word, so I used charts for this.
Thai: ŕ¸ŕ¸ŕ¸ŕšŕ¸Łŕ¸ IPA: ĘÉĚËp roĚËt RTGS: oprot
Thereâs no âfâ ending sound in Thai, and consonants are always unvoiced and unreleased. If you read my Wat/Wad post, I said 'ŕ¸' as a final consonant makes a âtâ sound, but I really meant itâs the weird âdtâ sound. So lots of people pronounce his name something more like âawploadt.â I kept thinking people were calling him âuploadâ until I actually thought it through.
Feel free to send your burning questions about pronunciation/spelling, though Iâm definitely not advanced enough to be confident recording myself saying anything.
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