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Bottle episode idea: call to an escape room, a power cut means the team end up split apart and trapped in separate rooms.
Bobby and Ravi are stuck with a patient and Hen and Chim have to try and talk them through some sort of medical procedure through a weird escape room door.
Buck is convinced there is something strange going on so is hyperfocused on figuring out why they're stuck while Eddie is becoming increasingly exasperated as the only person in the room trying to actually get them out.
Also all the rooms are weirdly themed in very targeted ways, Bobby's is cruise ship themed for some reason, Hen and Chim's is that they've been kidnapped, Buck and Eddie's is like underwater themed??
#i just think its a fun premise#also i really really want a bottle ep#911 abc#9-1-1#9 1 1#eddie diaz#jwpyyy#buddie#911 show#evan buckley#911 season 8#s8 predictions#8b predictions#hen wilson#bobby nash#ravi panikkar#chimney han#tops
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feel like it deserves its own post but i also regularly get super emo thinking about how the colors all add up to link at the end of four swords. he was broken down into Exaggerated Pieces but in the end it was really him all along. every time they fought he was fighting with himself (including shadow), every time they made up it was him ending an internal argument, it's all him.
#i know people like to treat them as separate characters#and i kinda do in my own way . its complicated in my head#but i feel like the manga overall isnt just Fun but also Meaningful as a radical form of self reflection#i mean the Entire Premise of it is one of my favorite tropes. i used to be obsessed with the idea of Some Guy being turned into several#facets of themself. i think it's an idea that resonates with the dangers of compartmentalization & hiding yourself away#which reallyyyyyyyy colors (lol) the way i approach the four swords manga. and makes me particularly fascinated with shadow#i could talk forever and im getting away from the original post LOL. i will speak no more on the subject unless someone wants me to#or my lovely friends will get 3 billion notifications . sorry to those guys#fsa#m
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Im not even sticking around for the drama that stuff gives me heart diseases im just here to see where this guys gonna lead us and to make fun of him if it ends up bad and ignore it if it was good
#That one tweet the good sir made abt comparing the stories (potential) ending to onk's lifted one of my eyebrows now im intrigued#Ive always had issues with it since I started it lmao#its good at making people think unfortunately theres just 1 too many flaws in how it executes it now were here#Like i said if he really wanted this to nail the landing its should've just been a multiple choice video game / visual novel / whatever#Not only will we get to see the other routes we'll have more things to discuss with eachother#and the fandom is less likely to turn into a political argument twitter esque cesspool#Like i understand why a live big audience like this was chosen; The IRREVERSIBLE Community Voting nails the 'This is what you wanted'#idea home; where all participants who are interested are directly put in the chair of Jury & Judge & even though YOUR idea might seem good#not everyone would agree with it#Like its good on paper but seriously it wouldve worked better if it just focussed on 1 guy per viewing like idk disco Elysium or umineko or#any other well known well thought out ''Your actions & thoughts have consequences'' games#Like you put 10 (/11) characters in the spotlight & youre supposed to figure out everyones deal and judge them correctly#but we cant do that when theres 1. only 3 chances to change the direction of their development / get deeper insight#2. They dont even exist outside of the main attraction which are the mvs#3. They can just die unsatisfyingly without any conclusion to their arcs or explanations if the audience fucks it up badly#Like what are you gonna do when this story finishes? Make it a time loop to give the audience another chance to explore their characters?#Umineko no naku koro ni can be downloaded for free through umineko-project.org or purchased through steam or bought physically from a game-#nillas#vanili powder#i love having hatred in my heart I needed something else to make fun of after Mashima ended EZ like that#I can make fun of episode 8 but im too much of a coward to rlly point things out As Of Now so mlgrm going out in flames woukd be fun#im not saying it Should id love it if a miracle can occur and save its issues thats been there since the premise but yea. I dont think so.#anti milgram
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some bobbles (+ two unfinished things)
#bonk.png#undescribed#exocolonist#i was a teenage exocolonist#iwatec#iwatex#anyway first thing bc its the shortest i dont think sol would actually id as anything n prefer to be unlabeled#bc of like. the timeloop stuff n every life kind of blending together BUT i think it'd be funny as hell if they were aro#n just never became aware of this bc their self reflection skills in regards to shit unrelated to the loop are That Bad#also im aro n like when characters are aro + love it when characters are kind of deranged about their friends#speaking of which madoka au! forever ago i drew the 🤝 meme with sol n homura n now im coming back to that#its not a 1 to 1 au straight up the commonalities begin n end at ''tammy & sol are kind of like madoka/homura''#stuff i got down for it in a sleep deprived haze were that sol nemmie n tangent were the only magical girls#n tammy hasnt been offered to become one nemmie n tangent arent aware that sol is a magical girl for a while#friendgroup at school is nemmie cal tammy n sol (tangent goes to a different school n is separate until she teams up with nemmie)#nemmie n tang team up bc somehow witch attacks keep being diverted from certain locations n grief seeds are disappearing#which is actually sol's doing theyre moving witches away from areas tammy will be n the grief seeds are to 1. discourage nem n tang from#fighting witches n 2. so sol can stockpile them basically bc they use timetravel a lot n need to keep their gem clean#the timeloop has progress (to an extent) its not a singular month looping its kind of like. video game save mechanics#like reloading the save u have before a bossfight n then if ur not adequately prepared reloading a save u have farther back#n then continuing on until u get stuck on a specific fight again yknow#theres more but moving on to the two unfinished things those are meant to be like a utdr au (specifically dr)#in a similar manner to the previous au of same premise n setting but different story bc theyre different characters#there's a lot less set for this au its entirely just playing in the sand n has nothing beyond vague role assignments#the first one that's like lineart in different colors is entirely scrapped bc i didnt like how it was turning out (meant to be darkworld fit#second one i struggled BADLY with marz oh my god this au is literally primarily for having fun with character designs but oh my god.#as it says there shes meant to be a modern art styled metal monster (got the metal idea from her dads' names n the modern art bc shesrefined#n sleek) but i had no actual idea how to convey that n i was trying to tackle it from a pixel art angle this time n i could notfigure it out#n then nomi nomi was super easy literally didnt even sketch them theyre a tiny pixie im sorry marz T-T#probably not gonna touch on this stuff again cause i was fixing on exo to avoid thinking about my bday but its happened so im fine now 👍
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There's always this thing among fans of longstanding video game franchises like the Legend of Zelda where people have to insist that the older title people didn't like was actually quite good, and it's been really funny to see people try to do this with Skyward Sword despite it aging like milk.
Any video you see trying to do a serious retrospective has to be like, "Yeah, the controls were bad, and the bosses were a bit repetitive, and most of the dungeons weren't that interesting, and the story was poorly paced, but it's really a good game!" like please. Please stop trying to force this.
#loz#skyward sword#legend of zelda#zelda#i actually don't even really dislike the game#i've barely played it because i kinda got bored with it right away#but i actually do respect what it was trying to go for#even though the OoT style of gameplay had gotten old like 5 years before its release#and the whole 'zelda timeline' shit the devs were forced to work with held it down quite a lot#it's just really funny how so many people defending the game end up just conceding that a lot of aspects of it were unforgivably bad#there's an alternate reality where skyward sword didn't have to abide by timeline bullshit or janky controls#where it could've just been a fun wii-era zelda game with an interesting and unique premise#i'd respect it if defenders actually took the stance 'i think the gameplay is great actually and everyone's wrong about this'#but i've only seen one or two videos taking that position#most others insist that all the glaring issues most people had with the game are actually just minor hindrances#and it's like nah man that's just the whole game
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Would you ever plan on doing an art stream sometime? Or perhaps a game stream? :)
I used to do art streams, but I've gotten rather shy with my process in the last few years ^^;... Maybe some day I'll do another art stream.
I often think about doing game streams actually, but I don't know how many people would want to watch me play the kinds of games I play. But maybe I'll try it out anyway at some point! If it's something people are interested in.
#i like playing rimworld the most obviously#idk how fun that'd be to watch live though#i also like starcraft#the original binding of isaac is something i play from time to time as well#toontown (rewritten) though its so simple and monotonous after a while it'd just turn into like. a vlog.#i have sims and stardew and among us and stuff like that but is any of that exciting to watch?#idk. just ramblin.#it'd be fun to stream a strategy game at some point#but yeah streaming my art... ive just gotten really like...#idk maybe it was the huge wave of people trying their damnest to mimic my style#i think it made me feel like people only watched me stream to 'study' my technique to use#and not because they just wanted to watch or support me#so again. kinda shy on the premise.#bluh!!!!!!!
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Shivlina Noir AU -
After an attempted assassination of their patriarch, PI Karolina Novotney is hired to track down the missing heiress to the Roy empire -- what she finds, or rather, who, places her in the middle of a bloody and dangerous game with the most powerful family in New York
#shivlina#just a moodboard and a premise!#it was like. v fun to make someone go write this#this is t4t yeah#i love u tboy shiv mwah mwah mwah#succession#like....okay. s1 shiv dynamics of being the furthest from the family and its still for like. he wants a life of his own but also.#his life cant coexist with the family at all. and now its like you throw in murder and a conflicted karolina#think we've got something that i can rlly daydream about for a few weeks#my posts#moodboards
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Got really angry thinking about live action lion king last night cuz no like the only thing a live action version of an animated movie has going for it is the appeal of seeing what funny cartoon guy would look like as a real human but when it comes to talking animals it’s kinda fishy cuz animals aren’t all anthropomorphic in real life, they don’t talk and dance around in these human ways. You can easily have an actor do everything that Cinderella does, but you can’t exactly get a lion and have it do what Simba does. The only way we can have this fantasy of singing and dancing animals is if we ANIMATE IT. WHICH IS EXACTLY WHAT THEY DID FOR THIS SO CALLED “LIVE ACTION REMAKE” OF THE LION KING ITS JUST CGI ANIMATION THERES NOTHING LIVE ABOUT IT YOU JUST. YOU JUST MADE AN ANIMATED MOVIE BUT THIS TIME ITS UNINTERESTING TO WATCH BECAUSE YOU TOOK AWAY THE FUN PART
#the klock keeps ticking#like idk i was just thinking about when that movie came out i saw artists redrawing it to make it like live action but stylized good#so that its interesting and the characters have emotions but like hnnnghh#at that point its just the same thing as the 2d version but with more details and its like#this isnt live action in the slightest#its almost like. the premise of a live action version of the funny talking animals animated movie. is inherently stupid#because its impossible and not even fun#its different in movies like detective pikachu or sonic cuz at least theres human actors mixed in there so that actually makes it live ac#action and also they stylize the animal characters and make them cute and fun like they are in the source#but what is there to say about lion king like what the fuck am i looking at here
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I lowkey want to write something inspired by Harmony of Dissonance - as in, the actual game, not what came before or after it despite those being the main source of fanfic fuel
Once again I wish I could draw. Then I could just draw the Chapel of Dissonance because it's so pretty, no context, no justification, no anything, just appreciation for a very striking game <3
(but on the other hand, I'd like to think about Juste's personality...)
#it's just. i'm not sure what i could elaborate on#which is weird because i do think hod doesn't fully take advantage of its premise regarding maxim's inner personality#i have a buzzing desire and nothing more#i hate writing because i can't just paint a scene - nooooo i need to set it up and give it a conclusion :\#anyway hod is a fun game and now i kind of want to do self-imposed challenges with it
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i don’t like hunger games au at all, and i avoid reading not completed fics generally but can i say. Can i say that your hunger games fic is the only think i’ve been capable of thinking for the last days and it’ s only the first chapter? the snippet of the dinner scene —"will you love me if i come back a monster?" / "i will always love you anakin"— made me lose my breathe jesus christ. this fic is everything i ever asked — unhinged lovers for each other, anakin being that younger version of vader who bite onto obiwan and never will let him go, obiwan too addicted to loving and be loved by anakin to standing the thought of losing him, codependency relationship based on needs and possessiveness and crazy addiction they will die if it’s not for this love? the "marriage vows who sealed the death of twenty three kids" line ? i can’t breathe you’re a genius
ahh thank you for giving my hunger games au a chance even though it is both a hunger games au and a wip!! i think having a lot written on tumblr really helps because it gives such a good outline of what the fic will become and what the story will be for both characters - putting it on ao3 is really just fleshing it out and making it sing as a written work
i think what i always struggle with when it comes to aus of other media is the instinct i have to make them 1:1 aus, which is what i call aus where i'm subbing my ship in for the characters of the media, i.e. putting anakin in for katniss and obi-wan in for peeta and pressing play.
at that point im like. why not just read the book if that's what i want to see, so that's something i like about this hunger games au because i'm just using the setting & the premise - anakin isn't meant to be a sub-in for katniss as the tribute and obi-wan isn't meant to be a sub in for peeta as the love interest or haymitch as the mentor and so i find writing it so much easier - i feel less constrained than i would if i was trying to make anakin feel like anakin skywalker from star wars, and also my own character for this fic and also katniss from this different media altogether
and yeah it's fun to make them fucked up and crazy about each other in new and different ways and so im so glad the first chapter has been posted and i can work on the second one now because damn that reaping is gonna be so fun
#asks#hunger games au#i do not mean to imply that 1:1 aus are bad or boring!!#i think there are plenty that i really like and i've even done some in the past#like monsieur and the monster is a 1:1 au of beauty and the beast where obi-wan is belle and anakin is the beast#and i struggled writing that more than i struggled writing the sleeping beauty au#where NO ONE is aurora and no one is prince phillip#its just a similar enough premise#but i have also talked with a lot of people who when they're writing aus of things they prefer 1:1 or as close to source material as possbl#me im jumping around im barely tied to the source material its all vibes for me#and thats what i find the most fun for writing#but there is nothing bad about the other way to be clear#i just see a universe and think man thats a hell of a universe right there#what other stories could take place in that universe#big day for people who read my tags lol heres some rambles
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would loooove to hear about the tina / jimmy jr. jealousy fic and also the chloise meetcute!
Haha of course, both great options
The Tina/Jimmy Jr Jealousy is on the spicier side, pretty short but still good practice for that sort of thing.
I remember wanting to explore a slightly older them, as well as digging into Jimmy's obvious jealousy. It's a really fun dynamic to write, and I'll post a snippet below for you (。•̀ᴗ-)✧
He didn't look at her, but his hand was tightly gripping hers.
"Oh. Oh, are you jealous?"
"Tsk, of course I am Tina. I can't help it, I just want you all to myself. You mean so much to me, but you seem interested in every other guy you see."
He pulled her closer.
"What do I have to do to get your attention?" He asked softly.
Tina blushed, her heartbeat racing as a comfortable heat settled in her stomach. He was only a few inches taller than her, but as he pulled her tight against him and leaned over, it was the perfect height to look up at him.
There was friction in the air as their eyes met, and Tina smirked as she glanced at his lips.
I don't think anyone will be surprised at what happens next
I think I've actually spoken on the Chlouise meetcute file before, but it's always so fun.
The tl;dr is that Zeke drags Louise to the gym, she ends up seeing Chloe from across the room and not recognizing her. Of course she thinks that she's really attractive, convinces Zeke to help find out if she's straight, Zeke recognizes her and hold it over Louise's head for a while. Louise eventually talks with Chloe and figures it out, but is still way too attracted to her. Cue cute little gym rivalry between them which eventually escalates and there is tension and someone inevitably asks someone out
Tragically, I've only really gotten around to writing bits of the first act, but even still I think it is such and interesting way to bring up some rivalry action for adults who used to know each other but not really. There are a few fun surprising character moments planned for both of them ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
#thank you so much for asking#this was a nice break to an otherwise tiresome work day#but i really really want to finish that Chlouise one#it will probably be the next longform fic i work on#although i need to finish bitterweet reunion And trouble maker first#but even still the potential in that scenario holds so much for me#unfortunatley ill likely never finish the tina jju jealousy bit#its a great little snippet but im not quite ready to share anything spicy with the world just yet#either way its fun to share the concept i think theres a lot of potential as an opening premise you know#writing stuff#fanfic#bob's burgers#wip#chlouise#tina x jimmy jr
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silly oc doodle..... ballroom yuri
#ocs#ok so im gonna ramble/complain in the tags for a bit bc i love to complain its mostly not even gonna be relevant to the ocs but anyway ok#yknow that diagram abt art skills thats like ability to see/ability to draw#im at the BAD PART OF IT RN#i wanna draw fanart so bad but then i get annoyed bc the fanart doesnt look as good as the source material GHRG which is a totally#unreasonable thing to think bc source material is drawn by Professionals but you know how it is. Art Hard etc etc complain etc etc#need to do more studies etc etc#i wanna be able to draw really good so i can draw the things i love!!!!! even if its hard and tedious i wanna practise!!!! i love art!!!!!!#dont think about whats easy think about whats fun - bokuto koutarou etc#anyway everyday i am sad i have to sit in front of a desk for 8 hours instead of practising drawing :( i wanna table at a con this year....#but is there even time.....#ANYWAY this is somewhat relevant bc in an effort to be less hard on myself mayhaps i will try draw more oc things so i dont feel pressure#(self imposed)#to make it perfect kjskjkd#or at least not as much#and hopefully get over my brain's tendency to Compare Everything#i have like 3 vague sets of ocs (one less vague than the others ive posted one of the characters from that on my main art blog before sjdks#these two are from the next less vague set there is a plot premise and some side characters too. shdks#i thought abt them a couple months ago but then i watched strictly ballroom w sophie n i was reminded of them again#anyway im not good at coming up w fully fleshed out stories i just like to doodle ppl n think of random connected scenarios sometimes sdjk#i did a mini free online life drawing course in the break n i tried to apply what i learnt here.... i will keep practising when i can.....#well. if u read all the way to the end. hello :) KJASKA#im going to shower....
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you can see marvel become more and more soulless via a mcu spidey marathon
#<3#homecoming is GOOD!!! its GOOD!!!#its a fresh and modern take on spider-man and its fun oky#and the little interactiosn he has with people is soooo good and cool#and he’s so. he’s good okay#and then far from home is also good#its a good movie#i think it could be improved in a lot of ways. mainly with comparisons of tony to ben#and peter being like. ohhh this is just like uncle ben. why do my fathers always do that#and then they couldve tied that in with happy and may’s thing#that would’ve been nice#would’ve given it more substance i feel#i think its an interesting premise. with peter feeling inadequate as a superhero#thats relatable and i believe its a necessary road to go down when ur keeping him as a high school student#i did Like no way home#but its so#its not a movie its a compilation of moments to look at and go ‘oh thats cool’#WHICH SUCKS!!!!!#how dare they do my boy like that#its a cash grab#with the circumstances surrounding it with marvel and sony its a contract
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re last post tags actually ill allow a jason and bao team up but only if theyre both allowed to change their main aliases 👍
#bao making friends and protecting the narrows as he moves on from his tragedy can be very interesting and fun!#but my expectations in dc writers is. low. like I'll still read it because thats my shithead nephew but its that frustration of knowing#and seeing a premise for art that could be wonderful and then getting a too glossy too boring product instead#and jason's is just because i think red hood is stupid and that his character is boring and spinning his wheels in the same 3 plots#that he just keeps going through again and again. like let him actually be interesting again and put him in new situations PLEASE.#ransom note
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oh my god my writing is flowing this thing has a plot now
#it has a plot!!! do you guys see this shit!#I was trying to make this work before by shooting everything at the wall like#'what if he had a pet turtle'#what if she was gay#what if the crabs were bioluminescent#when all I needed was to actually make them all dicks and make the story more of a story#like. what do I mean with that. I had a premise but it wasn't working so I had to really sit down and question basic things#'why does he not just escape?' (he needs to take care of an old dying man and also he's completely given up)#'why would these guys not kill them all and be done with it?' (because it's a crime and possibly an act of war) (also its expensive)#'what is the actual ambition of this guy. why does he want to be the head of the local council?'#the last one if fun because the answer is they get really good quality tunics and he refuses to do physical labor ever again#so head of council means he never needs to work (or so he thinks)#anyway#wow I might actually finish this!!!!
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okay so like this is going to be EXTREMELY long but its not hostile at all (and i'm the guy who did those tags, that was my main blog and this is my dangan sideblog) im just saying Why i left those tags and What i think of v3
and im saying all this because i like v3, i really do! i just wish it was better!
im gonna touch on the localization stuff first: they changed some of kokichi's lines that sort of, removed his more "soft" moments (for lack of a better word) and gave him depth?
like, there was this one time in one of the trials where kaito calls him naive, and ouma just insults him back and laughs at him or whatever
but in the original, kaito called him iirc "pure?" and ouma says something along the lines of "no one's ever referred to me like that before..." with the implication being he's more stunned, possibly even touched, that someone referred to him with such an "innocent" term
but thats nothing compared to gonta. the localization and honestly the game itself did gonta so goddamn dirty. in the og, he doesnt have tarzan speak!! he spoke in the third person yeah, but so did a few other characters- it gives a sort of, childish connotation in japanese, but the tarzan speak thing in the eng localization completely undermines his character and makes him look way dumber than he actually is, making him seem like he has little to no agency in the story
did you know that gonta actually KNEW that ouma's plan was to get everyone to have a motive video viewing party? and that he was only mad at ouma for lying and saying that he liked bugs, and he was In On It wrt the motive video viewing party?
yeah you literally cant know this unless you go do gonta's free time event when they're in gonta's lab scheming together. why was this CRUCIAL bit of information for character motivations sequestered like this. why did they do that. why. there is so much goddamn discourse over wether or not ouma manipulated gonta and if this scene was like, a little easier to get to, i wouldnt have to get it beamed into my eyeballs so much that i put a fucking manifesto as my blog title and bio
it looks crazy but ive been driven crazy. ive been here since 2016, since before this blog existed. i predate v3. help me
anyway thats JUST the localization issues and that one scene being hard to access. but i'll get on with the rest of it
and i just want to say: in a vaccum, v3 is quite good! it's not a godawful game, the characters are entertaining, it definitely has a good skeleton
but like, to see exactly why i think this game is not up to par- play v3 and sdr2 in tandem. spend one night on v3, one night on sdr2, the next on v3, or switch every few hours, however it appeals to you. but play them side-by-side
You Will Notice. Some Things.
FOR ONE: the days in sdr2 are just... longer. there's more stuff in them, more story. there's a lot that's missing from v3 and as such it feels empty
no one mourns the dead. shuichi mourns kaede but that's it for the whole game, until chapter 6 where he says that it's been horrible watching his friends die every week
in sdr2, here's how it worked in a story structure sense: the investigation itself was for mourning the victim, the trial was the Fun Part where nobody is mourned, really, and the focus is on finding the blackened, and the post-trial epilogue and is when we mourned the blackened
in v3.... the victims..... aren't mourned.
at all.
the blackends are, at the end of the trials, but only at the end of the trials.
in sdr2, hiyoko makes a memorial for mahiru using her photos. soda and nakomaru tie komaeda up because he manipulated teruteru into killing. byakuya was like, the main character of chapter 1 and had a prominent role before he was killed, meaning we saw a lot of him and ergo got close to him and mourned him. hajime was disturbed seeing his body. fuyuhiko talks about peko and how much he misses her. hajime mourns, he talks about the dead....
all of that is missing in v3
they're dead, and then they're gone.
rantaro as the first dead was a character with a lot of potential (WE WILL GET TO RANTARO.) but he didn't really have a prominent role at all. he was just another face in the crowd, until he wasn't. the only reason you'd mourn his death is if he was your favorite- byakuya in sdr2 was not my favorite (fuyuhiko my beloved and komaeda my beloved) but i still felt something when he died simply because of how prominent he was!
kaede as the protagonist, yeah her death had weight
we didnt get to know ryoma at all, or kirumi. or tenko or angie. et cetera
SPEAKING OF THE CHARACTERS.
so, broadly, there are two categories a character can fall in: active and reactive characters
active characters act on their own, without outside stimuli. reactive characters will just do nothing but go about their daily lives until something spurs them into action
all of sdr2's characters are on some level active.
most of v3's characters are reactive. you do not want this in a mystery game.
in sdr2, everyone was talking about escaping, all the time. in v3 they all give up after the first chapter
in sdr2, everyone tried to stay united no matter what happened because they all understood that this was an extreme circumstance, and that the real enemy was monokuma. fucking- fuyuhiko committed a proxy murder, basically, and he was still welcome in the group! because they understood that he was under extreme emotion and that not only his talent played a part in his reaction, but they were all trapped and cornered and being psychologically tormented and that thats why he did what he did! like, there was tension at first.... and fuyuhiko attempted seppuku.... but he was accepted and at least hajime did try, even if hiyoko was still angry at him
in v3 monokuma just straight up joins in the fifth trial and the characters just Let Him? he's supposed to be their enemy!
in sdr2, every character had a purpose. some of those purposes were pretty weak, yeah, but they were like... there. teruteru as the Funny Pervert got old fast, and that's probably why he died really early on, and they did manage to give him like, actual pathos. akane as the Funny Comic Relief Food One got oldddd but she's kind of the weakest out of the characters that survive. soda also, but at least he did stuff like make the transmitter in chapter 3 or fix the elevator in chapter 4, so he wasn't just the Funny Simp One, he did stuff
like, let me ask this: from a story perspective, i.e. their impact on how the plot moved forward, disregarding trials because everyone speaks in those....
what did himiko do. or tenko. tenko straight up didnt do ANYTHING for the greater plot. what did kirumi do? or ryoma? did we really feel the betrayal of tsumugi being the mastermind? we didn't know her!! what did angie do outside of chapter 3, and even then, the student council thing is over before it starts (because v3 days have less ssssssssstuff in them) korekiyo is just There until he reveals that he's fucking his sister and then dies.
none of these motherfuckers are active characters. no one is trying to escape, everyone is playing along. shuichi isn't even very active and he's our PROTAGONIST! he just kind of.... takes it
and that wouldve been interesting, to see someone who just takes it up the ass slowly blossom into being more confident, not letting monokuma railroad him in trials PERCHANCE. and i know shuichi did do that, he got more confident, but he still doesn't even TRY to escape, he's never suspicious of the flashback lights, always assumes ouma's malice is the real thing and everything else is the lie (when really, it was the other way goddamn round)
and like. he's the ULTIMATE DETECTIVE! HE SHOULD BE DOING THIS SHIT!!
the only truly active characters, that actually act on their own and Do Stuff that impacts the plot outside of dying and killing someone...
are kokichi and rantaro.
and rantaro dies in chapter one.
this is, in clinical terms, not good.
chapters 4 and 5 are REALLY good, because ouma does shit and actually impacts the plot and it makes the other characters also be active for once
but the whole rest of the game is like, ouma is doing everything to try and figure everything out, and everyone else is just kind of going thru the motions and treating him with komaeda level ostricization when, at that point in the game, he'd done nothing to warrant it
and at the end of chapter 4, when gonta says that he doesn't want anyone to be mad at kokichi and wants everyone to get along, the whole cast writes him off as a naive idiot and completely disregards his final wishes, which makes sense narratively, but not even shuichi, the ultimate. detective. stops and thinks that maybe something is a bit wrong here
rantaro is just a whole ball of wasted potential sorry. he was the second most interesting character in the game, puzzling things out on his own and doing his best to survive. he was cool and mysterious and smart and he's the first to die and i dont CARE if monokuma ~lampshaded~ it later and was mad at tsumugi for killing him so early, it just means that they KNEW it was a shit idea and then did it anyway!
like. i really like rantaro's secrets being unveiled posthumously. but he shouldve at least died in chapter two, so we got some more time with him. or at least was extremely prominent in chapter one, like byakuya was. but neither happened and what we ended up with was the one active character trying to escape getting fucking shot putted before he has the chance to do literally anything
and maybe it wouldve worked if everyone wasnt so egregiously reactive? the trick with kaede was cool but the game was so focused on that that they forgot to mourn rantaro or like give the audience enough time with him to care when he died. and maybe the "died first, important later" thing COULD have worked if he wasnt one of two active characters!!!!
(most of them are active in chapter 5 ill give them that. but like.... just 5)
and after all this.... the ending. the idea of the ending is kind of good. but the same people that made the ending made the rest of the fucking game and that does not bode well
the ending is.... how do i put this..... imagine a 26 year old that still proudly identifies as an "antishipper." imagine the extremely myopic view this person would have on the relationship between fiction and reality
now imagine this person was in charge of writing a game.
that's what the ending is like.
in the game, the narrative is that "danganronpa" was a video game that got so popular that it turned into an irl reality show, which is the exact kind of myopic "WELL, YOU LIKE THE BAD THING IN FICTION, SO YOU'D CHEER FOR IT IRL, RIGHT? RIGHT??? ITS TOTALLY THE SAME THING!!!" view your bog standard antishipper would have. it's just not very good, imo
in sdr2, they pulled off the "its all fake~!" thing a LOT better, the two endings are strikingly similar and yeah just play them in tandem and you might see what im talking about, because i loved v3 (still do!) but when i played it and sdr2 in tandem i realized ah..... sdr2 is way better in quality....
i like the ambiguous ending in v3, it ties to the "truth and lies" thing nicely, but its like.... again, the same people that wrote that wrote the rest of the game
and there are some hints that it's televised in some way (the characters refer to the blood as "red," monokuma refers to it as "pink," i.e. the pink blood is a tv censor and the characters are seeing the true red) but not really anything else
and it feels less like a "keeping things ambiguous" thing and more like a "they forgot to put details in their game" thing
which i wouldnt think if it were not for the fact that sdr2 is extremely detailed (they remember mealtimes and remember to write in hajime's narration that everyone is eating, which pays off WELL in chapter 4 with the funhouse) and v3 forgot that their characters have to do stuff
also the Things in the v3 chapters just dont have as much weight to them like in sdr2? everyone was talking abt twilight syndrome murder case, the despair disease split everyone up (and soda got to use his talent by making that transmitter) (THATS ANOTHER THING no one in v3 uses their talents for the most part or acknowledges others' talents), the funhouse was a multi-day ordeal, and everyone was involved in chapter 5's Stopping The Rival and the leadup to the now-standard Chapter Five Extremely Cruel And Unusual Rival Death
the magic show in v3's second chapter was kind of being prepped in the background and shuichi had nothing to do with it, and its only purpose was a distraction. the motive videos were kind of there and only useful for the insect meet and greet and then the trial itself. the student council in chapter 3 wasn't around for long and didn't do anything, we only spent a day in chapter 4's virtural world as opposed to the three in sdr2, chapter 5 was good tho chapter 5 can stay. kaito being missing and shuichi being despondent over the secret of the outside world was good and had weight bc we spent a good chunk of chapter 4 hanging out w kaito and seeing him be cute and stuff. we were invested and now he's gone!
and also smaller details like blackends in sdr2 being suspicious before/during the trials, there were actual clues that something was wrong (teruteru lying about the meat skewers, peko being wet, mikan being hot when laying on hajime (i.e. feverish,) we SAW gundham in the room with the alarm clock; there were enough clues to put it together before it was revealed in the trial
i love v3 and i'm so upset about it because i love v3 and i love danganronpa- i sunk a lot of time into this game and the ending seemed spiteful that i even like the game. it was seemingly a critique on fan culture but written by someone with the most condescending, myopic lens on what fan culture actually is
v3's commentary on fan culture was written by the same person who wrote hifumi yamada as the ultimate fanfic writer and it shows
anyway u h . i am very sorry for leaving a fucking THESIS on your innocent question about my tags. but that's why i think that
I have come to realize that, to me, one of the worst crimes a piece of fiction can commit is being mean-spirited. Just about anything else can be good in certain circumstances. But a mean-spirited work diminishes anyone who encounters it.
#SORRY AGAIN 4 THE DISSERTATION ;A;#lyrelies#im rewriting v3 as like a fun little project for Me#im not saying its gonna be 'better' than v3 itself#im just doing it for funsies#taking a spin on it#the premise is that rantaro and kaede both survive and forn a duo#kaede and shuichi represent trust and truth respectively#while rantaro and kokichi represent distrust and lies respectively#i thought itd be fun bc the rival never has like A Buddy#give em a little buddy for enrichment#rantaro is gonna KIND OF be The Komaeda#but if komaeda was like. just as weird but way better at masking#which i think makes him more unsettling#because you can never be sure that he's got Something Up With Him#but you always kind of wonder....#anyway im going off topic#but yeagh
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