#has to be screenplay

[scarlct-vvitch]

ok i am screaming into the void - i need someone who i can bounce ideas off of/who can help me edit a screenplay and i just know one of u is secretly harboring skills (and i would help u back !!!!) pls a girl needs help

[fairycosmos]

every media would be infinitely improved by including a well written fat woman in it

[snuize]

Goodnight everyone, tonight id like to leave you with the knowledge that Dans middle name is Elston

[hawktims]

developing a hyperfixation for pacific rim in 2023 is actually painful bcs 80% of the fandom is dead but also it's been fun being in my own little bubble as i discover all of the content that's been accumulating for the past 10 years

[youregonnabeokay-kid]

SO. i was able to figure out the general structure of the script JLH leaked.

[explanation under the cut]

in order for all this to make sense, the first thing you need to know is that in north america all screenplays (scripts) are written in the same format

knowing this, we can deduce the general structure of the scene and even the length of some of the words

first we need to address the big question everyone's been asking:

are they talking about Bobby or Eddie?

screenplays are always typed in courier font, and in courier the capital letters B and E are identical at their left sides.

so while i enjoy people trying to figure out if the blurry letter in line 24 is a B or an E, the answer is it could honestly be either

where we really need to look is line one. the screengrab is blurry so i've outlined the word "going" and circled the area we should pay attention to

at first, the last letter of the prior word looks like an undistinguishable blob, but there is actually one key thing we can discern from it: the letter can't be y, it doesn't hang low enough

there is a chance that the word is not a name and is "he" which would not rule out Bobby or Eddie. however, that would mean the conversation goes on for at least 14 lines without mentioning "him" by name which is (heavily) frowned against in screenwriting. so chances are they're talking about Eddie

also, with what we know about the characters it's most likely Eddie. can you really see Bobby not talking to Buck because of... well, anything? and we already know that Eddie has a difficult time communicating. so i've decided to go with him for this script but haven't 100 per cent ruled Bobby out

moving on to the actual script itself, anything not highlighted in red is something i'm confident is either the exact wording or something similar. the red sections are the parts that i'm less confident in or know are incorrect somehow

Maddie's first dialogue block is the part i had the most trouble with. with context from the following conversation i figured that she probably asked something along the lines of when [Eddie] will be back at work. the main issue with this section is that the top line is actually six letters shorter than what i have written. this also means that the word that follows "going" has to be at least eight letters long. i tried messing around with the dialogue a bit but couldn't come up with something that would fit the appropriate letter count so for now i just wrote a line similar to what i think the actual line probably is

line six has to be either 12 or 13 spaces long and the first word has to be at least four letters long so i used "really soon" as a place holder, but i'm not completely confident in it

for line eight i initially had "Oh, that's good." but the line was one space short so i changed the "Oh" to "Hey" instead. i don't feel too poorly about this one but it still doesn't feel right to me. if the actual script says "Hey" i wouldn't be surprised if JLH changes it to something else or forgoes the exclamation completely

the final line is just a rough guess of what it could be. i'm not sure how formal the 911 writers are with action lines so i just took a random guess. some writers are extremely formal with action lines while others are more comedic with it (Neil Gaiman is a great example of this). i'm guessing the 911 writers are more the former but i honestly have no clue

[spnscripthunt-inactive]

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[aq2003]

i was the target demographic of "fan who would hate this season the most". my critrole tastes were specifically aligned and designed in a lab to hate nearly every single creative decision and change that was made

[vaxxman]

I've been reading the emesis blue screenplay whenever I have a bit of free time, and it's so interesting to see the small changes they've made to some scenes.

But also, the knowledge that Fritz was supposed to have visions of being mistreated in prison in that one scene when he has a panic attack at scout's house makes me go hhhhhh

[solovelyanddry]

Imagine watching an adaptation of The Yellow Wallpaper where the husband was proven to be correct in his treatment of the narrator and you will begin to understand my problems with Poor Things (2023) as an adaptation (and, frankly, as a film).

[vonlipvig]

messi the dog swaying the oscar voters at the luncheon for that #ANATOMYSWEEP

[vamprisms]

they just couldn't make a movie like i now pronounce you chuck and larry in this day and age

[bluvlet]

currently being attacked on all sides by uni work but lately i have been thinking of a trolley problem role swap au

[thefabelmans2022]

i fear it's not obvious enough from this blog that i am An SNL Stan. like for real.

[screenplaytestingground]

After this week's official announcement of the casting of Yerin Ha as the season 4 love interest Sophie Baek, I have adjusted my sesaon 4 screenplays to reflect how viewers would experience the scripts for the upcoming season.

Eight episodes telling the story of Benedict and Sophie's season.

Enjoy!

Episode 1 Summary:

In the first episode of season 4 the Bridgertons are preparing to head back to Mayfair after a summer season at Aubrey Hall. Kate and Anthony have returned from India with their now toddler son (Edmund). The Bridgerton family awaits the return of Eloise from Scotland, and Gregory prepares to head to Eaton for another semester. Penelope will struggle to write her first edition of Whistledown for the season, as gossip seems to fall to a hush in her now-famous presence. Violet and Kate host the Bridgerton Masquerade Ball, where an uninvited guest will change the course of Benedict's life.

[bizlybebo]

guys. i have a confession. i actually think pd would go so hard as a live action tv show. i’m being so real rn

[cowboygideon]

I've been watching a lot of mockumentaries recently and I'm wondering where the superhero team mockumentary is? everyone loves how deadpool breaks the 4th wall in his movies, it's one of the funniest components, so why not capitalize on that? thinking...