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Blue fish people :)
They have brunch together every month
#guys I made a venn diagram of this#jrwi riptide#gillion tidestrider#undyne#undertale undyne#undertale#ocean queen lizzie#ldshadowlady
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right, y'all need to stop this now. there can only be a certain amount of this kinda man in media, surely? 🙈🙈🙈
#i don't even know how to quantify this selection except as them all being Starbait - and you all know it too 😳😳😳#like there's a SUPER funny Venn diagram to be made out of these guys#and for every trait one of them doesn't have. they share a different one with another#weird inappropriate sleazeballs with distinctly 60s/70s fashion sense#every single one a walking red flag and most conceived to be off-putting to the audience#and oh my god why is Augustus the only one with regular teeth 😭😭😭#what IS this!!!!!!!#vic diamond#rolando#swan#mad mod#austin powers#augustus st. cloud#thelma the unicorn#rolando helluva boss#phantom of the paradise#neil richards#austin powers international man of mystery#the venture brothers#helluva boss#potp#dcau#venture bros#starleskatalks
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ROBO! CHAOS!
they would be friends i think
#you guys don't understand#they have so much in common#i even made a venn diagram argh#tearing my hair out#i am so normal and sane about this#definitely not having tfbw and wordgirl crossover thoughts#tobey mccallister iii#tobey mccallister#professor chaos#butters south park#butters stotch
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there are already roughly a million posts like this already circulating, but man. just. sometimes you really do have to step away from something you're working on and come back to it later.
creative buds, please. please. no one is worse at taking my advice than i am, believe me, but seriously, if you've been feeling down or frustrated or stumped with something you've been working on lately, take this as your sign to maybe take a little break. a week, a month, whatever. you've been looking at it too long, you've read it too many times, you've erased that same line so many times you've lost count - you need to come back to it with a rested brain and fresh eyes.
however rough it feels to you now, i promise, promise, promise that it'll feel so much better after a little distance. <3
#queenie rambles#writing woes#full disclosure this is 100% about me finally sitting down and forcing myself to reread my own stuff lmfao#there was a lot of Other Stuff happening during the time but the last like. 5-6 chaps of like wringing blood made me SO anxious to post#no matter how many times i edited/reworked them i felt like they were hot fucking garbage#and every time i posted a chapter i was just like. consumed. with anxiety for hours/days after lmfao#now i'm rereading and i'm like aw shit. why was i nervous about this????#anyway. yeah. let your brain rest. sometimes you need that.#and to anyone who's in the middle of the venn diagram of 'tag reader' and 'like wringing blood reader' hey#thanks for never questioning my rampant misuse of commas and italics and the word fuck!!!!! y'all are the real heroes <3 heheh#and as soon as i finish rereading this you guys better strap in because...i have like...two chapters almost ready to go lmfaooo#FULL SPEED AHEAD FUCKERS
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He’s my little meow meow, my darling, my bbygirl (Patreon)
#Doodles#Commander Peepers#I'm soooooo normal about him you guys <3 So normal! <3 <3#*Looking back over the other Little Guys I've collected* Hmmmmmmm Evil Xisuma and Spamton and Sableye and Rick Diggins#I think there might be a theme here#Just casually making Venn Diagrams in my head - Evil X has the red/black - Spamton is trans - Sableye has Gremlin energy - Rick is too tired#And those are just the ones I can think of lol - if you look I did the same stretchy pose with EX when I was still drawing him lol#The Stretch Pose is how you can tell if I like a character lol - they stretchin'? I am infatuated <3#I mean I'm normal I'm totally normal lol#Also had to give him a bbygrl pose - I for the life of me cannot find it again but the reference is very strong in my mind's eye!#Not that I couldn't go for another one at some point lol ♪#Ugh the middle one lol - so that Word of God I mentioned in passing about female Watchdogs#I read it in passing as just a basic research of ''Oh here's what The Original Creator has to say alright neat''#Except that it Immediately made me itchy and I was like ''What. What brain this is not that big of a deal what are you doing''#And I was like ''No I'm being silly about this - just because I don't agree doesn't mean it's a big deal lol''#Except then I had stress dreams and woke up Weird the next day and the last time that happened I left a fandom#And the time before that I wrote 4 consecutive pages of 20-something panels in like 18 hours of consciousness - I have normal reactions lol#But I opted instead to vent to smol about it and she agreed with me so basically I'm just saying I'm correct lol /s#Personally Peepers doesn't strike me as misogynistic - he's very much an Equal Opportunity villain in my eyes!#And yeah I considered a lot of different angles around it but like - based on the text of WOY I just don't buy it#If it's not in the show it doesn't count! For all we know there might not even be any female Watchdogs! Lol#Would also lead to the equally-to-Spamton interesting question of How Does Trans Work in that kind of situation#I've definitely not already put a lot of thought into it don't look at me lol#Don't ask me to write an essay about both of those things I'll do it and where will that leave us lol#ANYway lol ♪ He's still the absolute funnest to draw in distress and discomfort <3 And kneeling! He makes me want to practice :D#I always feel like I can try again and do better! >:3c
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They're pink 🩷
They're the best sidekick 💪
They are a goblin 🐊
They say "Hey Boss" 🫡
They are an eldritch being 🥰
They are suicidal 😞
They like Women 💞
They are in a constant state of Gremlin Mode 🦝
I didn't say a name, but they popped into your head, didn't they?
#Hi this is the most cursed thing my brain ever made#now you all have to live with it too#if i lose followers its because I deserve to#but this was the realizatiom I had at 2am last night#originally I was gonna make a venn diagram#and the only thing not in the middle was “hates weaboos” and “is a weaboo”#anyways im so sorry#tw suicide mention#nimona#pink guy#filthy frank
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Bo’s oc breakdown
#my friend said the bottom thing#and I love charts so I made a venn diagram about it#I actually have a milllion ocs but these ones are the ‘main ones’#the two genders#detestable#and some guy#I love my detestable horrible men#I should probably make an oc tag#rainbowpufflez’s oc tag
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it’s very endlessly funny to me that non-yankees fans view the yankees fan base the same way footy fans view the city fan base, full of fakes and fair weather fans, when the only yankees fans i have ever met in my 28 years as a fellow fan have been people that would cut off their legs to watch their team perform as well as they’re expected to. the actual core yankee fan base, the one that’s shows up to every home game and makes the post season environment so electric that players from other teams can’t help but to remark on it, are firebreathing freaks and new york natives and people who spent every day from birth watching all 160 some-odd games.
we can’t exactly help that our logo became synonymous with street wear fashion at some point down along the line but i can assure you those folks are not the ones that will be showing up to games in the coming weeks and have not been the ones at the stadium for the last however many years.
#personal#new york yankees#‘big series for guys who bought a hat they thought made them look cool’#shut up shut up shut up shut up#the Venn diagram of ‘person who bought a yankees hat because it’s cool’ and ‘person who cares about the Yankees’ is just 2 separate circles#this wasn’t meant to sound like an ‘avengers assemble’ ‘whovians get in the tardis’ type post#but it’s just insane how absolutely butthurt fans of teams get when the yankees do something 16 other teams have done in the past 15 years#it’s just very embarrassing for everyone involved#like i’m sorry we won with the power of friendship?? you can’t even point fingers at finances in this situation#the team with the highest payroll got eliminated last night#idk sorry folks i feel crazy about this situation#i’m the most annoying yankees fan I know and last year when we didn’t make the post season yknow what i did?#turned the tv off and hoped the diamondbacks did something cool
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what is it with brian murphy and freaky little creatures
#idk why gerard is the one who made me think of this and not. kugrash or riz#he’s also not really ‘little’#but like still#three way venn diagram. guy who was turned into an animal / freaky little creature / green? i guess?
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completed my amprule fan rite of passage (finished reading black butler)
#guys it's all so very bad. I made a venn diagram#It's all fun and games until a piece of media offers me a little guy with an emotional support butler#I say this yet I still don't like most butler archetype characters. none of them are fucked up enough for me to care amen#shout out to my dear friend keken for baiting me into it and letting me text them my live reaction.#If I didn't have anyone to yap about this i wouldve exploded into pieces#nile talks
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Hello there.
Since you're taking a request, then maybe some poły relationship with Theo and Mattheo. Preferably male lub gn reader
Thanks and have a good day
aaaaaa a non-monogamous relationship with my two favorite boyos??? abso-fuckin-lutely!!!
polyamorous theodore nott & mattheo riddle x gn!reader headcanons
(lovely pictures from @demieyesore)
since it wasn’t specified if the boyos were dating each other as well or not, i made it ✨up to reader interpretation✨
❕gender-neutral reader❕
TWs: violence (it’s theo & mattheo, what do you expect?), brief sexual harassment/attempted sexual assault (?)
requests open (please for the love of god)
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general headcanons:
mattheo is little spoon and i will take no arguments
(he’s almost always in the middle <3)
if you call theo literally any pet name he will die on the spot
same if you call mattheo any variation of ‘pretty boy’ or ‘cutie’
(extra bonus points if you compliment something unrelated to his physical appearance, like how well he did on a test, or how perceptive he is. homeboy will have no idea how to respond. he’ll just be like 🧍♂️🥹👍🫶)
the poly thing actually only happened because there was a very aggressive love triangle thing going on and then they were like “wait this is dumb”
plus, it makes a bunch of the teachers uncomfy, + both of their fathers, so really it’s ideal
they r possessive as F U C K
they can share with each other, that’s it. no one else.
i dare anyone to try to bully or harass you
or actually, even just look at you
OR IF SOMEBODY TRIES TO ASK YOU OUT
someone call an ambulance for the poor fuck 💥🚑🚨🩹🪦💀
lil oneshot thing? idk man:
you go to one of enzo’s stupid parties without your boys
“i’ll be fine guys, promise”
y/n was, in fact, Not Fine™
someone tries to hit on you but just DOESNT TAKE NO FOR AN ANSWER
let's say it’s cormac mclaggen cause mf is creepy asf
(i know everyone makes him like ‘the bad guy’ but yk what if you don’t like it go write ur own headcanons. they’d probably be better anyways)
anywhore, cormac is like, getting a lil too close for comfort
just kind of haranguing you the whole night
offering drinks, complimenting how you’re dressed, telling you that your boyfriends are “so lucky to have someone as sexy as you”
🤮🤮
you are OBVIOUSLY uncomfortable
but shit hits the fan when he grabs your waist/hip area and tries to kiss you
✨surprise!✨
your mancandy was here the whole time 😌
(not cause they don’t trust you, they just don’t trust anybody else)
💥👊😡🩸🩹🔪🗡️💣
cormac: 🥊🦷😵💫🩸🩹🩼☠️⚰️🪦
(lowkey hot to watch em defend you but yk)
((y/n for literally no reason: 👁️🫦👁️)
(((if you tell mattheo you think it’s hot, he’ll just go 🥺🫶💋😚🫂)))
misc:
expounding further on my earlier mattheo x reader headcanons, a scientific study i’ve conducted has found that mattheo riddle is, in fact, a himbo
from the new partridge dictionary of slang and unconventional english, a himbo is “a man objectified by his good looks and presumed lack of intellectual qualities, a man who trades on this image, a gigolo”
objectified by his good looks? have you met tumblr? ✅
lack of intellectual qualities? well, he thinks violence solves everything and thinks with his dick instead of his brain so i’m gonna say yeah ✅
but let’s keep it going, shall we?
a himbo is also defined as the “human version of a golden retriever—beautiful, incredibly well-intentioned, and dumb.”
…yep
beautiful ✅ well-intentioned (in his own mind) ✅ & dumb (lovingly) ✅
additionally: buff 💪 ✅ & respects his romantic partner(s) ✅
“but hp-hcs,” you bemoan. “what does that make theo?”
well, my dear delusionists, theodore nott is a hunk—not quite a himbo, but close
hopefully this venn diagram i made of some of the himbos & himbo-adjacents in the hp world will help illustrate this for you
#harry potter#hp#fuck jkr#hp x male reader#x male reader#gay#theodore nott#x reader#hp x gn reader#theodore nott x reader#male reader#mlm#mattheo riddle x reader#x gender neutral reader#theo nott x reader#gender neutral reader#mattheo riddle#mattheo riddle x male reader#mattheoxreader#theo nott
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I made a joke the other day about the overlaps between all my favorite ghouls and how the Cooper-Desmond-Charon-Hancock Venn Diagram was forming sacred geometry in my mind.
I tried to actually MAKE the diagram (thanks ADHD) and then promptly got mad and gave up (thanks ADHD). BUT ANYWAYS. Here are my Ghoul Thoughts™ as a bulleted list, instead:
[Spoilers below the break, kinda sorta. Probably overkill but I wanna be nice]
Cooper + Desmond:
Nasty awful Pre-War bastards
"Listen princess, if you want to survive you gotta be an absolute cunt like me"
Cooper + Hancock:
Smooth talker
DRUGS
Cooper + Charon:
Dragging around some squishy Vault Dweller and 110% over it
Shotgun gore
Charon + Desmond:
Ambiguous backstory involving heinous science shit
"Please stop saying words at me"
Charon + Hancock:
Companion 💗
"Hang on let me kill this guy real quick, anyways Hi"
Hancock + Desmond:
Immaculate drip
Filthy mouth
All:
Ruined my brain chemistry YAY
Anyways. Yeah. I love them all. And I love how Cooper has just a little bit of everything I already enjoyed about my video game faves. Well done, Fallout TV Show People, your did it ⭐️
#fallout spoilers#fallout tv series#fallout tv spoilers#fallout ghoul#fallout 3#fallout#charon fallout#fallout 4#john hancock#desmond lockheart#fallout on prime#fo3#fo4
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‘If he's a friend of yours, I'm sure there's something in there I'll like.’
Oh, Stede.
Unfortunately, what Stede means here, and what meaning Ed might give is somewhat different. Stede thinks Jack must have some of Ed’s good qualities in order for Ed to be his friend. However, Ed thinks Stede must see a similarity between Ed and Jack, meaning Stede might accept the ‘Jack’ parts of Ed he believes are a large section of his make-up.
Ed reasons: if Stede can like Jack, it stands that Stede must like Ed. Because they’re ‘the same’. And when Ed suggests Stede and Jack have a lot in common, and if Stede agrees, then Ed and Stede must also have a lot in common. And that’s a good thing.
Because Ed, whether consciously or not, is using Jack as a proxy or cipher to see if Stede will accept all of who he thinks he is. Further to this, if Stede can also see himself in Jack, then that’s more wonderful, because then Stede can see himself in Ed too. And maybe…maybe…that means Ed’s not so bad after all, because Stede’s a pretty stand-up guy.
I can almost see the three-circle Venn diagram in Ed’s head…
But Stede tells Ed he doesn’t like who he is around Jack. And if Ed and Jack are pretty much the same man - ‘This is me’ - Ed needs to leave because Stede cannot accept who Ed truly is.
And more terribly, Stede and Ed are not alike after all.
And of course all of this is a load of bollocks because Ed isn’t like Jack at all; not anymore, not likely ever. Whatever his soul is made of, his and Stede’s are the same. They certainly don’t need Jack as a personality litmus test.
But Ed has to go all around the houses to figure this out such is his distorted self-image. And Stede gets caught in the identity crossfire.
I love though that Ed doesn’t give a backwards glance at the man he allegedly had ‘dalliances’ with, who saved his life, who is ‘practically the same man’, when a canon-ball takes him out. The rejection of Jack, and all thoughts of affinity, is absolute once it comes. The scales fall entirely from Ed’s eyes.
It’s as if before, Ed saw himself through a glass, darkly And now he’s winking into a clear mirror Because, finally, Ed’s starting to get it…
The Venn Diagram is, in fact, two different but equally aligned circles.
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Im back with more biodiversity rambling!!!
Went for a simpler style to doodle these guys out a little faster bc i have MANY thoughts always (warning this may or may not be coherent, i apologize in advance)
IMPOARTANT NOTE: the only thing even remotely canon here is the Forest and Reef Na'vi (debatable bc they are still my own interpretations), everything else is just my own musings and personal need for more variation among Na'vi.
In previous posts i think i mentioned the insane venn diagram that lives in my head of forever overlapping and endless combos of Na'vi yadayadayada, this is (LOOSLY) that.
SO, if you have seen my initial post (here) some of these guys might be familiar, but since then, i added Wetlands, Highlands, Glacier and Ash? people! And I have Thoughts ™️
Now I'm gonna hold off on Ash? people for the most part here, mostly because i am a creature that likes at least some level of "Canon Compliance" and we really won't know anything about them until the next film, so i have yet to form any solid headcanons. That being said, I do have a couple quick things:
The name 'Ash People' leads me to think that their generally building lives/evolving around volcanic areas, grey/darker skin tones from evolving around ash?
Thicker/rough skin (volcanic rocks are sharp!) and less fur/fluff on their tails.
Wetlands I imagine as clans that have evolved as a combo or River and Reef, but also Plains, as wetlands (at least as I understand them, i know that there's more to them than this but I am simplifying here) are effectively big wet fields.
I liked the idea of how if River Na'vi developed 'armor' due to swimming in constantly moving water with lots of rocks/fish/debree/etc, that Wetlands might be similar, but not quite on the same level.
Comparatively, Wetlands have no claws, and a thinner more paddle-like tail, more similar to Reef Na'vi.
Highlands I see as Plains Na'vi that evolved for colder biomes, so they keep the builds, maybe in general larger on average, closer coloring to Plains Na'vi and the longer tails, fur and claws of Mountain Na'vi.
Lastly Glacier Na'vi is the Mountain + Reef combo to create the giant spotted seal people of my dreams. I did not show it well here, but I think both Mountain and Glacier hold more fat in their bodies than other Na'vi, as well as Reef Na'vi being physically larger as well. That combo probably makes Glacier Na'vi massive (like 12-14 ft tall). Living in significantly colder climates, they need to be able to hold more heat in their bodies too, so they are physically much larger all around.
All of these are still just loose and I continue to be vague about a lot of it bc biodiversity and cultures that evolved around a given biome are two separate things to me. I like that these can be used as like umbrellas that the actual clan cultures can be born under, but not 'rules' or anything.
(I do have at least 1 (possibly 2) fan clan situations cooking in my noggin that i am slowly working on, but that's also something i want to be very conscientious about as I build it out.)
Anyways! Thanks for reading if you made it this far! Let me know your thoughts, I love talking about this sort of thing, hearing people's feedback and building off of it!!
#atwow#avatar the way of water#avatar way of water#atwow fanart#james cameron avatar#froglet rambles#navi biodiversity#navi morphology#navi avatar#froglet doodles#avatar frontiers of pandora#afop
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dead cells show real..... i can only watch episode 1 because i'm painfully monolingual and would like to understand what people are saying. however i'm glad to see that the funny corpse guy appears to be in-character <3
my old venn diagram i made based on the game trailers still holds up yayyyy
#ghost town... 2!#dead cells#dead cells immortalis#secret 3rd type of ass is of course “incorrigible” and encapsulates the entire chart btw. this also holds up and i'm happy about it :)#also on the topic of characterization i would like to say#“he would not fucking say that (because he can't speak but if he could then yeah i guess that's pretty on point)”
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I love your writing. It's amazing! If you haven't done so already, I'd like to hear your advice or tips on sentence flow and how to transition between character thoughts and whatnot (just flow in general) because I feel like that's what I struggle with when it comes to writing for me.
I am assuming that you mean transitioning from dialogue/commentary to exposition paragraphs? that's what I'll go with pls tell me if I'm wrong!!!
lemme write an example:
'she'd never seen such a magnificent flower before - the petals were a silvery velvet that glistened in the dawn sunlight. It reminded her of her mother's skirts. A sense of warm nostalgia swept over her at the memory of the flowing fabric that swayed around Mother's ankles.
the rest of the field contained similarly beautiful flora, varying in size from thimble to elephant ear.'
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The pink is a character opinion/thought, and the white is the exposition and objective description. when a paragraph is narrated by a character, it reads best to mix them together. When you chunk it like this:
'she'd never seen such a magnificent flower before. It reminded her of her mother's skirts. A sense of warm nostalgia swept over her at the memory of the flowing fabric that swayed around Mother's ankles.
the petals were a silvery velvet that glistened in the dawn sunlight. the rest of the field contained similarly beautiful flora, varying in size from thimble to elephant ear.'
and the expo/narration are kept separate, it's harder to visualize the connection between observation and the reactive thought.
tip 1: keep similar sentences together.
In the above example, I grouped the character's observation of the flower together with the actual description of it.
After, I grouped the memory of the mother's skirts with the emotion.
Finally, the next paragraph was still describing the foliage (aka tying in the initial description), though removed from the narration and still progresses throughout the scene.
does that make sense?
no?
lemme try again guys I got this.
When you transition from 'thought' to 'sight', it might look a little daunting. you'd think "gee I just spent an entire page describing an intense traumatic mental spiral. how do I transition to writing about the room they're in?"
Pick the similar attributes. The middle of the Venn diagram. Okay, character is having a panic attack. It's intense, it's descriptive, there's a lot of inner dialogue. Now, we have to describe the aftermath in relation to the state of the bedroom.
pull them out slowly. If a character is deep in reverie, describe the room how it feels to them. This is a slow transition out of 'me my mine everything about my opinion' description, to 'this is how it is cold turkey' description (plot development).
Example:
(panic attack, oh my god we're dying the world is ending I can't breathe help aahhh)
he shivered. The floorboards had grown cold since the episode started. A cool breeze slithered through the room, chilling him further. leftover adrenaline raised gooseflesh on his arms.
This is entirely objective. no opinion was inserted, but there was the stimulus and physical reaction to the surroundings. this still draws in the character-focused analysis without getting stuck in his head.
2. great sentences think alike. I sometimes feel that my transitions are chunky and not very smooth. Pick common themes to tie them together. "Oh okay, her skirt is blue, it's blue like cornflowers, cornflowers were anna's favorite, now i'm thinking of anna, she'd love it here. where is here? here is in a farmhouse kitchen with...." boom. I made a domino effect from the starting description (blue skirt) to the final destination/scene progression (farmhouse desc).
3. know when you've beat the dead horse. If you've been circling the drain over one thought or milked all the setting adjectives possible for one area, move on. when a scene/dialogue is sufficiently described, the readers are ready for a break.
does that help a little bit?
there was a second part to the request, right? sentence flow? cool beans.
Sentence flow is actually a really cool concept that if you master, you can add so much depth to your writing (i'll def make a part 2 post, stay tuned!).
If you structure a sentence really long and fast without the punctuation and it's just going and going and going oh no-
you start to feel anxious, right? when's it gonna end? what's the kicker? the tension is building and building....
Sentences are short. thin, staccato. not a lot of meat. no meat, maybe. just. bare. bones.
punching, intense, hard thoughts. a shocking discovery, your character doesn't have the processing capacity to think eloquently.
maybe they disobey grammar rules. fuck grammar rules. don't actually tho because you guys lowkey suck at grammar and i'm angry. no don't point out my bad punctuation i'm the teacher here.
point is, the flow of the sentence dictates the reaction. Shakespeare uses this with meter. when the meter is disrupted, it means something bad has happened. In Romeo and Juliet, every time a lie is told, the meter shifts out of iambic pentameter. it's like a 'heads up, something's wrong' to the audience.
USE THIS!!
also - read your story out loud. writers have a tendency to write how they talk. I am a comma fiend because I go off on so many anecdotes I pause all the time while I talk. When I read it out loud and take the necessary pauses though, I want to vomit.
If it's smut I can see how this might be hard for you, but another good idea is to hit hard the grammar rules. If there's a bunch of commas - read the sentence and enunciate the commas. that's how it will read to your audience.
common problems with sentence flow.
feeling long and heavy. if you're describing the action and you feel like you're being swamped in adverbs, take a look at your passive and active voice. passive: "The ball was kicked by Anna." active: "Anna kicked the ball." if your sentences are long and dragged down with adverbs, you're probably really passive.
too much information, not enough words. Thesaurus!! if you've been puzzling over a paragraph and it turns out all you needed were some synonyms, pull out a thesaurus! and a dictionary because remember: similar is not the same. just because a word has similar meanings doesn't mean there aren't special addendums to each.
lost in the sauce. where are we? what's happening? who are you? i'm hungry. too many succulent words! your sentences so big backed they out-backed Outback. long, frivolous words and ten-mile high stacks of adjectives only work sometimes and infrequently. otherwise you spend so much time describing the thing, we forget what the thing actually is.
losing the motivator. why are you writing this sentence/paragraph? what purpose is it supposed to be serving? keep that in mind so you don't lose track and if you do, it'll be easier to get back on it.
repetitive meter. the sentences follow the same pattern, like this one. almost like they're in a loop, circling forever. there's no escaping, you'll like read this till you die.
did you see the pattern? it starts to make you dizzy after a while, doesn't it? This is a common problem and fairly easy to break out of. Just chop up the sentences and glue them together.
*ahem* like so:
The sentences follow the same pattern, like this one. Almost like they're circling in a loop forever. There's no escaping. You'll read like this till you die.
same words, with some added/subtracted punctuation. If that doesn't work, rearrange the order, add in some new verbs or adjectives, maybe add a few filler sentences to space the pattern out.
that's all folks, i hope that answered your question, if not feel free to say so! I'm not offended.
xox keep writing!
#writing help#fiction writing#writing tips#writing advice#how to write#writing community#on writing#creative writing#exposition#sentence flow#writing prompt#dialogue prompt#writing ideas#writblr#requests#anon ask#thanks anon!
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