#gacha world rewrite

[dreamin-gacha]

More Gacha World Redesigns

Kuku

-Part of of the gardening club (joins cooking club after events of main game)

-Her boss battle would be in the garden

-Lower big tails and more black in her design

Cheery (Mei)

-A gymnast and also part of the health committee

-Gyaru

-Lighter hair and brown eyes for a softer look.

Frost

-Performer, mostly uses snow animals and snow magic

-A hint of light green to even out the white and blues I used

-One long ponytail rather than two short ones.

Nekohime (Princess Elena)

-More Lolita elements

-A higher hairstyles

-The Princess of gacha kingdom (lightvale kingdom)

Sylph

-More flowy clothes

-Hints of yellow, white, and pink

-Darker green hair and brown eyes.

[524caret]

this is honestly so true

what i really didn't like was her ending, implying that you can just . get rid of an """alter"""

also trying to label it as DID is shitty and my strict headcanon is that the summoner was misinformed since we never saw kuku herself acknowledge it

in my current au i've tried to find a way for the erosion of the """other self""" to not happen along with Kuku having to make amends with said """other self""" but honestly i think rewriting her from the inside out could be a neat concept, might see what i can do with that sometime

vague

didn’t want to rb the post that started this, no offense but it’s not smth I want on this blog orz ;;

first off, lemme just say that all headcanons of characters that promote diversity are valid and encouraged. they can be the AU versions where maybe Yes, that character has [thing], but the official franchise may not be like that.

some official characters may be misrepresenting and spreading misinformation of the traits theyre trying to put in media, which just makes the situation worse.

that being said, my only thing is (CANON) kuku wouldn’t have DID bc as a person who knows systems of all types (endo, traumagenic, quoi, median, etc), at the most she would have is BPD, and even that’s a stretch. by trying to make her into DID rep it’s enforcing the stereotype that all alters are malicious when in fact they’re more likely an attempt to cope. (the y/ndere trope is also offensive towards practically every personality disorder anyway) also trauma doesn’t happen from rejection, which is the main issue besides the “oohh gacha world fucked her up in mysterious ways”. 

considering alter-creating disorders already have stigma from every neurotypical-dominant piece of media, this is why I’m suspicious of everything that uses DID as an explanation (sometimes an excuse, which is worse) for immoral behaviour. this is exactly why new systems are so scared of realizing the truth, because they think that it’ll end up hurting someone or themselves, when in reality that’s not often the case if they have some sort of support.

there could be some evidence towards having psych/sis or BPD symptoms because those can cause impulsive decisions, delusions, RSD, and emotional volatility, but these mostly threaten/harm the self and not others (another reason why stereotypes and the y/ndere trope fuckin sucks), as with most dissociative disorders. if there’s actual hurt from being rejected that’s RSD (rejection sensitivity syndrome) and not a symptom/result of trauma and wouldn’t lead to DID. there’s a route in the GW canon that is taking with her and I Really Really don’t appreciate it and what it means for systems. 

tl;dr: she doesn’t have DID, OSDD-1a/b, etc. and it’d be offensive to attribute her behaviour to people who have these disorders. we’re all about representation and diversity, but I’d rather have none than negative stereotype. headcanon characters as what you want, but do it in an informed manner.

feel free to discuss this in the notes or DM me, but trying to find representation for systems/alters in a y/ndere character is misinformed at best. literally one of the first steps to telling the world ur company is ableist is by having a y/ndere character lmao

[jmtofp]

In response to this post:

I think it's because it has the best story progression and build up.

Everyone appreciates a story with rising action, climax, and resolution. You need the "lows" in order for the "highs" to stand out, and vice versa. A small problem some other chapters had was the use of too much "high", tense moments, which results in feeling like the player was just thrown into the climax of a story.

One thing Xkour also does with its "low"s is set up a growing sense of unease, teasing the player with mystery.

Xkour starts with a friendly tutorial into the game, the player feels welcomed as no imminent threat is found. However, that changes as the tutorial goes slightly haywire and with the newly learnt fact that dying actually has consequences. This unease steadily grows until the third quest where it reaches its peak. So, what does the summoner do? Flee this "peace" and "fun" to find out the dangerous truth behind it all. One exposition later, and we've reached the first climax and subsequent resolution. Beautiful.

But of course, the story isn't done. After the first resolution, we get another moment of "low"s getting "higher" as the guardian trials start, but similarly with that unease that something is wrong back at main and even here. This time, instead of reaching its peak when the exposition drops, the story suddenly goes into a relative "low" with the reveal that the threat, the creator, wasn't here all along. But of course, it almost immediately shifts back into a "high" once another similar truth is revealed. So then we have the big climax of the whole two chapters, and then the story somewhat manages with its resolution.

Another thing would be the story's relatability.

What I mean is that players can easily connect with the characters that appear since everyone is a player here. (Also, who doesn't like the idea of a VR parkour game?) So this connection makes the stakes hit harder.

The ultimate threat of this chapter is the imprisonment and brainwashing of the players. And I assume it's easier to understand the dread of being trapped forever as opposed to other fantastical threats.

The story also uses Cyto as a way to personalise the danger of being potentially stuck in a game forever. Something about feeling more for one person's story rather than a general populace's. Although that may be the case, the story kind of fails to deliver on his anguish and thus people, us, are going to rewrite that sh** because it's too good to give up on.

(Luna's emotional anguish with herself as a program rather than a real being was also a treat.)

Another neat thing about Xkour is that it's the only chapter to have a clear connection to Luni that isn't about the swords of corruption.

There are a plethora of other minor things about this story that compile up to make this my favourite two chapters in Gacha World, some of which may differ from individuals.

tldr:

The Xkour storyline applies story writing 101 (the hill) well enough and is quite relatable, allowing the player to easily get invested into the story.

Cyto is an underrated character with almost as much emotional baggage as DJ X, and that's something this small community likes to see.

(I say that with a straight face as I continue typing out my currently 2600 word count analysis on Vale in canon and her despair with being trapped under C!Kilios' rule.)

Goodness, I love Xkour.

[katsigian]

So the OC rewrites are going well. Necromancy is involved now. And some very questionable decisions made by said OCs that would get anyone else put in jail but instead just makes them more 𝓯𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓴𝔂

---+ Valen surprises everyone by just how far he'll go and how much pain he'll endure for love. Not even death can stop him (wink wink). Is it selfish of him? Kinda! He's just a good, ruthless, devoted guard dog but even dogs need to eat. And his meal of choice has to be alive, doesn't it?

---+ Vesper gains his cyberarm/arm prosthetic in a new and exciting way but might have forgotten the whole thing except for who his "attacker" was. Vengeance is best served wrongfully, I guess. Whether or not he goes too far depends on how similar he is to his dad and brother (spoiler: very similar)

---+ Reid may not have been Reid this entire time SIKE. Reid may actually be his middle name that he uses out in the world. But his first, and genuine, name may begin with K and end with allias. We're going elaborate with OC names now. If they don't sound like they belong in some sort of fantastical fantasy gacha game or mmo, then I don't want them

---+ I have so much fleshing out to do yet 😭 with no context or elaboration, these five OCs need richer backstories: Ilya, Caelus, Leto, Nox, Ashwyn. OK fine a little bit of elaboration - Caelus is a feisty little redhead and thinks that a bit of exhibitionism is hot. Teehee

[gacha-incels]

Any thoughts on Wuthering Waves?

People constantly glaze it and claim it's better than Genshin but recently it's gone into harem stuff.

people hype that game up as better than Genshin because the skimpy dressed female characters tits bounce when they breathe lol. I’m just exaggerating but whenever I see someone saying this it’s the same person saying the fanservice in Genshin is “dead” and they’re all “wearing burqas” which is insane, not to mention offensive of course, that game isn’t like FGO or Snowbreak tier but they have ugly skimpy gacha girl outfits. like come on. but I’ve seen this sentiment down to the exact language used by different people in a lot of places, gachagaming, wuwa & other popular gacha subreddits, instagram comments, YouTube comments, twitter. Enough & with enough frequency to make me consider that as a factor. personally I find the art direction bland and when I tried playing it I wished the fighting didn’t feel so floaty, but they obviously have extremely talented animators working on it, so I can see if you liked that type of combat it would be fun to play and a spectacle to watch. but I think the combat itself is more comparable to HI3 than Genshin. Anyway for real there’s QoL factors and aspects of it being a newly created game that will be better than Genshin, the models & NPCs having more detail, playstyle, the more realistic looking world etc, that people will also like a lot more. i think since the rumored (or confirmed now?) rewrite it was always going to lean hard on the “harem stuff.” they seem to pivot hard and change things majorly based on their main audience (Chinese male) reaction. this isn’t unusual for gacha of course but the extent that they change their own story and content kind of gave me pause when I read about it. like they released a male character on launch but literally cut his banner short for the sexy female character. if you watch the original CBT those girls the MC first meets are extremely wary of him, even pulling a gun on him. It wasn’t anything great but it created some interesting tension for the start of the game. the CN reaction was so extremely negative to this that it was completely changed to all the girls being polite and impressed with your skills. Now every female character is completely obsessed with the MC to an extreme degree, everything in their life actually happened because pre-amnesia MC was a super powerful leader, 10 close ups of the girl’s v-tuber face, 20 of her tits, etc, that’s usually how the character quests go. I saw CN fans have been extremely angry and complaining that Genshin’s MC is just a “camera” watching the story unfold before them, I guess this is WuWa’s answer to that lol. If you want to experience this watch someone play through that character Shorekeeper’s story. imo you could tell the direction this game would go just based on how they designed the female MC compared to the male MC. if this is the audience they want to keep and retain, we’ll see what happens in the coming years 🤔 I didn’t play PGR that much or follow their news so I’m not as familiar with what Kuro’s marketing and publishing style is

[wistie]

So me and my best friend/ wife @deathdestructiondoom decided to work on this project which is basically a rewrite (?) of the Gacha World plot

But art

The basics is the Gacha Summoner is named Lucas, a nod to Luni's real name, and basically Kenny wants to rewrite it but with better storyline and some more mature-ish themes. So we decided on her making the story and sketching the art while I line and render/ shade it

This is the first chapter in art form, hope you enjoy!

[makerofmadness]

alright are ya ready for round 3? Heck if I know but I'm posting the third one of these anyways. out of all of my AU dialogue exercises this is the one I feel is like, the most likely for me to just like Rewrite eventually but-

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Gacha Pre-Pull: Open up your eyes.

Gacha: This world reeks of deceit.

Wish: The truth shall be revealed.

Loading Screen:

Curious what I'm capable of...?

The puppet show is about to begin...

I know how to pull a few strings...

The curtain rises...

I still have a few tricks up my sleeve.

Skill: Dance, my marionettes!

Victory:

Closer to the truth...

Mhe... Encore.

Take a bow.

Defeat:

...the decisive curtain has fallen.

...a poor performance.

Like an unstrung marionette...

Knockout: None

Promotion:

Sit down, or get on the stage...

This staff? It can see right through you.

I, too, am on a string...

Someday, they will all learn... 

Once I have the power of Knowledge, this world will know the truth.

My heart knows the truth, and the eyes... see a world of falsehood.

Level Up:

Oh, I feel no different...

Will you laugh, too...?

The next act of the story begins.

I am quite the entertainment... heh.

Someday, I will shed the light of truth upon this world..

Ah, have your eyes opened up...?

Another string attaches...

This power could be of use...

Kingdom:

The world is so erroneous, don't you think?

There are strings pulling my own arms and legs...

Not all damage can be healed.

Join the performance, will you?

You'd make an excellent puppet...

Hello, again, blue bird...

The flowers... remind me of a bygone time.

The things I can make Cookies do and say...

I haven't seen this place in...

Oh, I'm happy, yes...

...my friends would be happier here...

Cookie Info:

Open up your eyes.

Ah, let us begin the show...

No Cookie believes the words of the Beast.

How I wish I could deceive myself... No, NO!

My kingdom...? It's... been lost to time...

It's been so long since I've been... stuck.

I am no longer a hero...

Once upon a time, this story went a little differently, don't you think...?

Am I crying...?

This world is made of lies.

[fairytale-poll]

ROUND 1B, MATCH 7 OUT OF 8!

Propaganda Under the Cut:

The Little Mermaid:

Not sure if SINoALICE characters have come up in fairytale brackets you've run before, but SINoALICE was an online gacha game where fairytale characters fought each other battle-royale style for the chance to resurrect their author and rewrite their story. The Little Mermaid's motivation for getting her story rewritten is that she recognizes that the reason her story is beloved is because it's a tragedy, and so she wants to rewrite her story to be even more tragic. It's such an interesting character motivation! Plus she has the cutest character design & outfits in the entire game.

Sorbet Shark Cookie:

They're a shark merperson who wanted to walk on land and join the pirates so much they made a deal with a dark mermaid to get legs and not scare them anymore. But despite being a pirate they still help others even if it would put them in danger. Also they're very cute, can only speak in bubbles when on land and can freely transform between seaform and landform.

A shark cookie who wishes to live on land with the rest of cookiekind. He gains the ability to do so, but can only speak in bubbling noises. He naturally decides to become a pirate. He can also turn back into a shark man by jumping into the water. As for if this counts…he literally sings “Part of your World” as part of his story. When CRK had a Disney crossover with certain characters interacting, guess which cookie Ariel interacted with?

[travellereon]

Someone probably got to this before me, but I haven't seen it yet, so I'm making my own sassy lil rant post about it!

We know that Hoyoverse is extremely lore conscious. I mean, take a look at the intense rewrites they do for Rukkhadevata's erasure! All of the Sumeru quests come with two versions of any line that mentions her, and they're played depending on whether you have or have not completed the Archon Quest. In all 4 languages, the team built in a hidden trigger that swaps out dialogue, changes voicelines, alters item descriptions, and even renamed a basic inventory item purely for the sake of lore consistency. They didn't have to rename the mushroom! Nobody needed to know the mushroom was named after a deity who didn't exist anymore! The Genshin team did that just for the sake of their world building and lore.

So why are Lumine's flowers still in the opening cutscene?

Lesson time kids

The flowers in Lumine's hair are the Inteyvat, the national flower of Khaenri'ah. That has been established since the main quest chapter 'Memories of Inteyvat.' Both Aether and Lumine will remark on that fact when they encounter the flower in the quest, saying that she's had the flowers since they woke up.

Since they woke up!

Hoyoverse polishes the daylights out of this game to ensure lore remains consistent. Could this really be a mistake on their part? It's such a major moment in the game when your character realizes the significance of the flower itself that I have a hard time believing this is a simple mistake.

The flowers certainly don't appear to change between the opening and the start of the game, not from where I'm standing. If someone can prove me wrong about the flowers being the same, I welcome it. But they really do look exactly the way they do in game from where I'm sitting.

It would be tedious, but they could edit the flower out if they really needed to. Hell, if they still have the full files for the original video, they could remove the flowers from the model in that set and re-render it for an update. They hid an entire trigger to swap out a massive amount of voice lines, written dialogue, lore, and even a useable item's name just to trip it based on where you stand in the Archon Quest. Hoyoverse clearly have the manpower and dedication to change this detail if it doesn't fit with their lore.

Lore and characters are the two big things that separate Genshin from other gacha games. If this truly is a continuity error, a video made before they decided the significance of the flowers in Lumine's hair, why would they not change it?

I'll tell you why!

Because it ISN'T a continuity error!

There's more than the 500 year slumber that we've missed. The siblings were in this world before they were separated. It could be insignificant, but from what we know of Hoyoverse, I'm betting it's not completely so. It might just be an emotional memory that will pop up towards the climax of the story, but it could be even more! It could be days of their time in Teyvat that have a great impact on why the Lost Sibling ended up in Khaenri'ah, and why they view the Archons with such disdain despite knowing Celestia probably forced them to participate in the Cataclysm.

This could be a major lore detail hidden in plain sight.

Now watch Hoyoverse erase the flower in the 4.0 update because that's always my luck

[dreamin-gacha]

More Redesigns

Devil Akki

More of a punk school girl look. Added some brown and black into her color scheme because that was a lot of red.

Succubus Lilith

Burlesque like outfit and added red into her outfit.

More comfortable clothing and lots of white ribbons.

[lyss-sketchbox]

Yea personally I would not hold my breath dude.... They release a character's part 2 once in a blue moon, and it feels a little bit like they're spinning a wheel and throwing darts blindfolded to choose?? Like sure, archons make sense. But Venti doesn't have one. Then Yoimiya??? Cyno, could've chosen worse but STILL. But yeah uh. I definitely do believe they're not going to make sure everything is all neatly wrapped up by the end of 7.2 (which if they stick with the 5 act structure, would be when the khaenri'ah main story ends) if only bc they'll be releasing more stuff for the rest of 7.x versions.... To catch up they'd probably have to start sooner rather than later, releasing at Least 1 Character Part 2 per banner phase in order to catch up with all the characters we have and they continue to release.

Yeah. Yeah. Im coping ok. They clearly CAN make amazing stories (i personally think fontaines AQ is great not including the bloat). But they just dont because oop. Gacha game, gotta rope all these pretty handsome characters into the story somehow so people will roll for them.

Sigh.

And yeah they really just be throwing darts at who gets a 2nd story quest. I wouldnt mind if it was like.... important and lore relevant and all but Yoi? Look atleast cyno's 2nd SQ gave us some more lore about the temple of silence and king dehsret lore. Cool. But wtf does yoimiyas SQ add? That she is kind to kids, playful, and likes to help children keep their innocence for as long as they can? Thats all in her.... first.... SQ. Its literally the same thing but repainted in Sumeru but stretched out.

Justice for venti. Shouldve been his SQ and it shouldve covered him and istaroth or his old friend.

I genuinely dont think that all characters deserve a 2nd SQ. Some maybe because of their heavy involvement with the world's lore but that's it. If they have rolls to play elsewhere. Like.... albedo????? His whole clone and durin thing potentially destroying mondstadt??? More about Gold??? More about Klee and her mom??? Idk man some of those are alot more important than 'yoi plays with kids part 2'.

I am bracing myself for the shoehorned characters, the bloat, the stretching out, and for the genshin community to kidnap genshin's story to rewrite on their own whenever that shitshow drops.

Also i very much think they should voice atleast the MAIN WORLD QUEST FOR EACH AREA. Because clearly theyre important and often times ALOT MORE IMPACTFUL THAN CHARACTER SQ. Like dude i was HOOKED into the narzissenkreuz plot i was WAITING for updates for it to continue. They have better writing and better lore in general i think they deserve it.

[northerngoshawk]

🌵- What did you start with first for your WIP? Worldbuilding, character, or plot?

ooh good question! while most of these had been intertwined with each other as im writing, i'd have to say plot wins out, since it's the very reason why i'm writing this to begin with.

for context, i had recently gotten into a gacha game (yeah ik, the HORRORS 😱) called Wuthering Waves, the setting of which takes place in a post-apocalyptic world called Solaris-3, where most of humanity had been wiped out by something called the Lament. the storyline follows an amnesiac protagonist as they navigate this new world they've found themselves in, which is hinted to hold connections to their past.

now, the reason why im writing this WIP is because of... spite. because while the final product that they put out was okay (i was there more for the gameplay than the story lol), it was definitely really boring and confusing at the beginning. it got better towards the end, but def didn't make a great first impression. the characters were kinda bland and everyone was really nice to the protagonist for some reason? which really didn't make sense cuz this was a post-apocalyptic world?? and people would be far more distrustful of a random stranger that showed up and was actually really powerful??? but whatever i guess.

and then i found out what the beta storyline was like.

and boy oh boy, i got pissed.

because the storyline there?? actually made sense???? the characters are all introduced in such a natural manner, the characters actually felt like, yanno, characters with motivations and personality instead of sucking up to the protagonist the entire time, and best of all, the characters actually didn't trust the protagonist right from the get-go.

and you wanna know the reason why we didn't have this?? it's because a certain fanbase (and im not gonna name who*) complained about the characters not trusting the protagonist from the start!

almost nothing from the beta storyline remained - a story that rumor has it took 2 years to develop - and everything had been changed within 9 months. now, don't get me wrong, i love it when developers listen to player feedback... when it comes to the game itself. but im sure every writer has come to learn that when it comes to storytelling, only the writer knows where they want it to go. not the fans, and never the fans.

so yeah. the very reason why i am writing this story is to rewrite the plot. because the beta version deserved justice, and i am so, so sad im not living in the timeline where we got that version instead 😭

writing shop talk ask meme

*no ykw im def gonna name them, it was the chinese fanbase

[st4rzl1k3c0nf3t1]

I have a silly thing!

au yappings

what if mal was in world tour?

I thought of this on a whim.

but now? it's starting to become a genuinely well thought out au.

it's centric on mal and noah, mainly being written in their povs.

however, in later chapters it may be shown through alejandros pov momentarily.

this is the main au I post about

here's some gacha confessionals I made a month or 2 ago for funsies!!!

and then 2nd confessional

I'm currently in the process of writing a base fanfiction for this, which will all be posted on here in a bunch of separate posts once it's finished.

however, I'm going through a severe motivation loss and writers block on top of that, so it may take a while for the fanfiction to be finished. I estimate it to take about a month. the fanfiction will end after noah is eliminated in I See London... , as Mal is going to be eliminated in Jamaica Me Sweat. you can imagine how long it's going to take me to write out 13 whole episodes. please be patient with me. I also tend to do entire separate projects simultaneously, so that can extend the wait time aswell.

HOWEVER... after this is done, me and my partner are planning on collaborating for an all stars rewrite, which will be centric on alejandro and noah.

any form of support would be amazing, and yes, fanart/edits related to the au are perfectly fine!!!

this is genuinely a passion project for me, and I hope you guys are right here with me as I work through it.

thank you for reading.

[rainy-s-other-corner]

I want to talk about my Epi-verse projects (still planning to change the name). And I want to just talk more about my three main girls for this project.

This project was created when I was in college in the app Episode Interactive (hence the name Epi-verse). I only created two stories for this universe but I had planned on more stories. But for now, let's talk about the first two.

The first story was called Nine Lives to Spare. It was all over the place but it's pretty much about a girl, Melissa Crescent, getting a crescent moon necklace that gives her magical powers. Some of you may say that this sounds somewhat similar to Miraculous Ladybug...it does but except for one thing. The necklace is cursed with the power to give the wearer nine lives and to be haunted by a ghost named Ava. She goes on a quest to find someone to help her figure out her powers...while someone is hunting her down because of her necklace. I never finished the story but it was decided that this would connect to the next story of the project. Also, if you're wondering where Dove is...she was not in the original story and it wasn't until I started rewriting the story that she was introduced as Melissa's sister.

The second story...was pretty a Jem and the Holograms inspired story with magic. The story, called Passionate Fire, follows Ayden, her brothers, Henry and Scott, as they transform to their alter egos, Moon, Midnight, and Nightmare, to perform as The Night Crew. And they did this by using Ayden magical sun necklace, it's special ability being some sort of shape shifting or glamour magic. It didn't go very far.

Note: I made this universe when I was 19. I even thought up of our stories to go into this world.

I would love to work on these projects again. But I have no idea if I want to make them as a comic or a gacha video (I did try with Passionate Fire but it was only one episode) or a novel. This middle child project is a frustrating one.

And here's some photos of them in Episode Interactive's best art style!

They came a long way from this to their gacha club designs.

[thewanderingshadow1-1]

Gacha Lore sucks

I mean the Lore of Lunime games, like Gacha World, Gachaverse, etc.

You can tell from previous posts that I have a strange hyper fixation for Gacha games. Not really the playthrough, nor the videos, but its lore. That goddamn lore.

Not that I like it. Oooh, no no no no... no. I despise it with every. Fiber. Of. My. Body. But at the same time, I quite of understand why did it fail.

Imagine having a good story that you want to write. You have big plans for it, and you decide to put it in a game. But the game is fairly short, to say the least, so you have to rush the story. Results? A complete piece of shit.

(not that I'm saying that this is what happened, but I would rather believe this story than that the reality is just a garbage story created to sell games)

Here's the thing: I LOVE the concept. But... Not really in a normal way. Not saying that it is very good by itself, but it has potential. So much that I can almost touch it. And it shines brightly, like a supernova. But they turned it into a black hole of a story.

So, instead, why not just rewrite it? And let me tell you: there's SO MUCH lore that can be added, and develop the characters better, and add some new ones, and many many backstories, and-

That's what I've been doing... As a hobby. Of course, I have other projects going on (and high school), so it isn't really the focus for now.

...

BUT

I was able to write a fairly amount of lore, which I may or may not post here (I'm more inclined to post), just as a sneak peak for [another] big project. I promised myself it would be done, so I can't die until it's finished

Anyways, this is more of a vent, or something... I don't know, still learning to use this website for a while.

[argienhutcherson]

I remembered that I'm a Gacha Kid so.....THE BABIES YEAHHH

And I'm going to rewrite my AU of Jesse being evil, but here are the designs (I have to redesign Jesse since his color is orange as it is complementary to blue)

But basically the new context is that Jesse and Leslie didn't become friends but they play together because Leslie's parents believe they are friends and Jesse doesn't want to be at his home, And they decided to divide Terabithia into two warring towns over the dispute of their kings to rule all of Terabithia. The town of Leslie being the pure imagination of an ideal and colorful world demonstrating how imaginative she is, And the people of Jesse being in a kind of dictatorship and it is quite dark as it represents how he unloads the anger he feels towards his father and his classmates (because of the bullying, I hate you Scott, I don't know how I remember your name), I also want to highlight that the inhabitants on Jesse's side have static instead of faces, representing his possible schizophrenia (because I still stand by Jesse and Travis being the same).

I also clarify that out of respect for the original work, Jesse will be called by his second name, which is Oliver