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are you going to tell us your thoughts on the unraveled excerpt or not
well now i have to don't i (though i did reblog a couple of other people's posts with thoughts). this was not supposed to be this long, but as i was going along i had several thoughts, sorry. spoilers for virtually every aspect of the excerpt under the cut (but minor spoilers overall, if you ask me):
"kingdom of lumenaria" was definitely written by ai. who edits these. i know that has zilch to do with the actual excerpt but i need to say it
keefe snuggling the tree was cute. strieefe shippers this is not a safe space for you
he's obviously in a forest somewhere, which is interesting to me. i guess i didn't imagine him living rogue. i envisioned him being in the forbidden cities the entire time. maybe not having the best time of it, but i didn't expect him to be living off the land, as they say. it just doesn't fit kotlc's vibe. so that was interesting. whether i like or don't like that is something i'll only be able to say with more context, but it's different for sure
my first thought when he saw the animal prints was that this was the scene where he meets the fox, but on a reread i saw that he said the prints "did not look [] tiny", and fox prints are relatively tiny. he might've seen a bear instead
the fact that he's super, super cold but does not once think about regulating his body temperature, something he himself said was incredibly useful in flashback, points to the fact that he's too physically or mentally drained to use it or even think about using it. so i'm curious about whatever scene came directly before this
he does think about levitation, though. so. clearly he has enough energy for that
"otherwise he'd go splat!" was the second worst line in this excerpt. the second i saw it i went. ah. why is that exclamation point there . . .
he seems to be worried about people finding him, which to me seems like a worry he'd only have toward the beginning of the book. i'd wager that this scene happens during the days he spends back-to-back light-leaping, as mentioned in stellarlune
i need dex to make keefe a panic switch. i need it to be teal. for. reasons
"he should be totally untraceable" keep believing that buddy
keefe pouring energy into trying to block an unblockable person from getting into his head is. weird. to me. you see him try to block her and then immediately after you get a monologue about how she's unblockable. weird waste of words, if you ask me
oh, boy, here comes the sokeefe
i thought it wouldn't be bad because for a while all he talks about is how he likes speaking to her telepathically. so i was like. oh, okay, i can handle this. this is cute. i get why this is the scene the marketing pushed. it gives fans a crumb of the story, while also remaining so vague about the actual plot that it won't spoil anything major
but then he started talking about the letter . . . it all goes downhill from there
i have a pet peeve for the way everyone around sophie claims she's "oblivious", which i don't believe to be the case at all. i genuinely don't think she's oblivious, which i've talked about. and even if it was a valid argument, i hate that it gets brought up so. much. and almost always feels like it's shaming sophie. can we leave it alone. so this point i was rolling my eyes
keefe thinking about sophie peeing through her leggings was! not! it! thank you, shannon! i did not! need that! this was the worst line in the excerpt. but also i wasn't surprised. idk what you all expected from keefe "king of cringy potty humor" sencen
speaking of middle names. i did briefly wonder before reading this excerpt whether the revelation would be made in it, because it isn't really plot-relevant (unless it is? idk) but also enough of a revelation to get people talking and hyped. but i was wrong
the weird sophitz bashing was. sigh. i've talked about this before, but jealousy isn't a character flaw to me, it's only the actions a character takes because of their jealousy that determines whether or not it's a character flaw. so this isn't really something that's objectively wrong with keefe, but it does grate on me all the same
it's annoying to me that keefe is convinced fitz is the one in the wrong and the reason sophitz broke down, though. i've talked about this before, but i would put roughly 90% of the blame of sophitz falling apart on sophie. it was mostly her fault. so the fact that keefe thinks that fitz needs to do all the groveling, when, realistically speaking, sophie should have to do a shit ton of it too, makes me go. sigh. typical keefe
i don't like keefe's mental image of sophie. i'll have more thoughts about this in the part two rant, but it feels incredibly dumbed down and feels like he sees her as a lot less mature and strong than she really is, and makes her seem more weak and silly. fin touches on that a little bit in this post, if you want more details. but the weirdly infantilized mental image of sophie continues in this excerpt. you can see that when he pictures fitz and sophie kissing, she bites her lip and idk that feels incredibly stereotypically like. adorable and soft and immature and cute. if that makes sense
the monologue about how sophie deserved to choose whoever she wanted without keefe shoving himself into her face is another symptom of shannon's immense capacity to show and not tell how sweet and perfect keefe is. i talked about this a lot in my rant, but keefe's actions portray him as pretty much the exact opposite of what he says here. he puts down fitz, he bolsters his own relationship with sophie, he assumes sophie will end up with him one day anyway, and so on. so to see that continue here, and to know that sokeefe stans will undoubtedly use this as evidence to continue to be delusional about their favorite guy, was. not fun for me
"he understood foster's feelings even better than she did" had me banging my head into the wall. tied with the peeing line for worst line in the excerpt. i hate this. it's inherently invalidating, and i despise the head-heart theory as a concept in general. probably this also ties into my hatred for sophie's "obliviousness"; i just don't like this idea that it's possible to know someone's emotions better than. they know their own emotions. to even say that is something that's just supremely, immensely invalidating, in and of itself. this post, also by fin, comes to mind. he explains it much better than i am right now. but anyway. thanks for taking sophie's agency to know what she's feeling away from her i guess. sure. make keefe the expert on sophie. this will end well
and then he continues to monologue about sophitz. which is like. i get he's jealous. but this is over the top
the line about how he hadn't been able to hang out with humans for long before he snapped intrigues me. maybe that's the scene before this one. idk
"not this pathetic angst" i hope shannon listens to that for the rest of the book
#kotlc#kotlc keefe#anti keefe sencen#kotlc sokeefe#anti sokeefe#kotlc unraveled#unraveled#unraveled excerpt#askks#anon
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DABI GIVE ME A CHANCE 😭
https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZP81vWNJt/
Haha, he's an edgy boy for sure XD
If he ever needs someone to blow off steam with, I'd volunteer ;)
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Most hurtable celeb?
Definitely Emma Watson, I have vivid fantasies of her choking on my strap.
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So you know the beach oc challenge? I uh thought it was one of those things where you build off the previous drawing and create a chain of characters in the same image having fun… anyways, is it okay if I add my characters to your drawing and reblog it under your original one?
Yes :3
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saw you have a yandere oc... can we hear more about them?? im interested ehehe
Yes! I can’t get into alot yet, as I’m actually making a game with him(don’t want to spoil too much, ya know?), you’ll be able to see/learn more once I make a blog for it(and the game is released).
His name is Maevis! He’s trans, and uses he/it pronouns!
He calls Mc “Sweetpea”.
He actually doesn’t make excuses for his behaviour, and even hates the fact he acts that way: He knows it’s wrong, he knows he’s being creepy, and he honestly wishes he could be normal.
It doesn’t hide the fact it hurts people from Mc, and it usually listens for some form of confirmation from them before doing so.
Probably leaves Mc little notes around their house mentioning how the “problem” is gone now, so they don’t need to worry anymore :)
He’s been obsessed with Mc for a very long time.
Definitely has @ least 1 sketchbook filled to the brim with drawings of them.
Is relatively normal otherwise.
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MY NOSE BREATHING WONT BE COMFORTABLE AND CONSISTENT ENOUGH😭😭😭😭
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USE SALINE SPRAY
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GREY TURN THE BOOP ON!!! GREYYY!!!!!! TURN! THE! BOOP! ON!!!!!
I'm on it
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gee i fucking wonder why trans girls would dislike being called "guys". a real head scratcher on this one. hope we get an answer soon
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7,8,9,10 (have/want tattoos+piercings?)
i don't have any tattoos and kinda wanna keep it that way? Idk, I might want one in the future
I have one pierced ear and that's the only piercing I want :)
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we've seen Pico can we see a Darnell or Nene maybe? 👉👈
idk can you
#i need to stop giving everybody piercings#someones gonna complain#my art#fnf#ty for the askk ^^#friday night funkin#picos school#fnf fanart#picos school fanart#newgrounds#newgrounds fanart#friday night funkin fanart#darnell fnf#nene fnf#darnell newgrounds#nene newgrounds#answered asks
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i hope we see demo and aristotle spend time together again
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#we all know aristotle just left medic after he passed out#tf2#tf2 demoman#birds#tf2 aristotle#medic's birds#tf2 archimedes#though he isn't in here#had to go on my computer just to put all the pictures in here-#ignore the fact that i did NOT want to draw hands#it took so long to answer this askk
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What lesbian couple is that in your banner
That's Jimmy and Chantal, my favorite yuri 💕
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I know I’m asking for a long shot… but… is it possible to see Clover’s body be put to rest? No more corpse control? Breaks my heart seeing the poor baby be controlled by Flowey. (Yes I know he being a little Shish as usual but still X…D)
A reset can fix alot! The timeline does have to be brought back to normal eventually after all
#undertale yellow#clover uty#corpse possession#the gray flower field was made purely for thematic purposes#no lore just funsies#only now realized I didnt add clovers hat in the last one#PAINN#ALSO THANKU FOR THE ASKK
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Dad’s best friend James whispering ”lemme taste it baby” in your ear knowing your parents are asleep in the next room
Hhnnghhhh
you know what hell yeah, don't mind if i do...😮💨
Your heart slams so hard against your chest, you swear you can see it shift the thin material of your camisole with every beat.
Your breathing shallow, your chin tucked, eyes locked onto where James’s hand splays against your belly. So big. His hand is so big compared to yours. You wrap your fingers uselessly around his wrist and are shocked at the sight of your fingers not even remotely close to touching.
You don’t need the visual of your hands together to be affected by your difference in size; his burly body pressed tightly up against the line of your back makes that glaringly obvious. It matters though. It all adds up and swirls together into a ball of arousal that sinks from your belly and down into your panties. The very panties that James toys with, the very cotton that he rubs his fingers over.
You're vibrating where you stand, held captive against him, heart threatening to beat its way out of your chest. Even the smell of him adds to the weight of arousal in your belly. He smells like experience, like a musk that comes only with age, with years under one's belt.
You get wet when you get a whiff of him, when he pulls you in for a hug and tucks you into his shoulder as he asks you how school is.
“C’mon,” James whispers against the shell of your ear, draping himself over your backside where you stand in your darkened kitchen. “Lemme taste it, baby.”
Fuck.
Your next inhale stutters in your lungs, shakes its way into a whimper that scratches against the front of your throat. You shake your head on instinct, that instinctual response you’re supposed to give when your dad’s best friend wants to put his mouth on you in the middle of the night.
The hand that rests on your belly moves up to cup the front of your throat, the heat of James’ breaths feeling like scorching fire on your neck.
With the delicate fabric of your sleep shorts and his own pajama pants, it’s terribly easy to feel James’ erection dig into your lower back.
He holds your jaw as he whispers his next words into your ear.
“You know I’ll treat you right; I always do. I always treat her right.”
He does.
He always does.
James makes you feel things no one has ever made you feel, pulls a different kind of pleasure out of your body that you try and chase with others. It’s always useless though; no one can make you feel the way James does.
He puts your body and mind under a spell when he gets his hands on you.
His fingers rub over your clit, on top of your panties, swirling with expertise and the perfect amount of pressure. He doesn’t bother with attempts to cover up your mouth, to muffle your noises. With your parents just upstairs, you wouldn’t dare make a noise that would indicate James secretly followed you downstairs when you left your bedroom to get a glass of water. You aren’t scared enough to quiet your breathing though, your gasping, the heft of your breaths.
James sucks a set of kisses onto the sensitive skin of your neck, taking a moment to rub his cock against your backside, exhaling slowly into his kisses.
“C’mon, pretty girl. I missed you, missed her. Lemme talk to her, lemme personally tell her how much I’ve missed her.”
He squeezes his hand over your mound, squeezes at a handful of your pussy over from under your shorts, and his grip on your neck tightens when your knees buckle, when your breaths threaten to spill into moans.
“That’s it,” he coos when he feels your body give into him before your brain makes the decision. “Fuck, it’s gonna be so good. You’ve spent all day makin’ me hungry. I’ll make it extra dirty for you.”
You can already feel his tongue on you, his mouth a phantom touch from the memory of your last time together. Even though it’s been months, you still hold a vivid memory of how it feels to have his mouth on your pussy. That’s how good he is. The way he eats at you as if he’s starving, the way he kisses at your pussy as if he’s kissing your mouth. He doesn’t eat you out with just his tongue like the boys at school do; he uses his entire mouth.
It’s his enthusiastic hunger that pushes you over the edge every time, unabashed and eager, vocal and insistent.
When he slides your shorts down your legs, you don’t object. In fact, you find yourself spreading your legs once they’re on the floor around your ankles.
When he peels himself off of your backside and pushes gently at your back, you move like water to drape yourself over the countertop in front of you.
“That’s my girl,” he praises, voice hushed as he peels your panties down over your ass. “You’re always ready for me, aren’t you?”
You don’t bother answering his rhetorical question. Instead, you close your eyes and revel in the feel of his big, strong hands on your ass, on the weight of his middle smushed against it too.
He's gained a bit of weight since you last saw him, hasn't lost an ounce of confidence though.
That too leaves your panties soaked.
When you expect to feel his mouth on you, you’re surprised to feel him press his hips forward into the curve of your ass, the impressive girth of him momentarily stalling your breathing. He rubs and presses his cock against you rhythmically, fucking you, and it forces you to immediately wish for the other thing James is really really good at.
“You’re gonna show me how much you missed my cock next. Aren’t you, pretty girl?”
Your mouth is immediately flooded with saliva.
Where you pride yourself in your willpower and the strength of your boundaries, you don’t stand a chance when it comes to James.
He sometimes likes to call you a slut because of it.
He’s quiet as he settles to his knees, the only indication you receive being his warm breath ghosting over your ass, the inside of your thighs. When you hear him inhale deeply, when you feel the slightest bump of his nose on your pussy, your eyes threaten to roll back into your skull.
You spread your legs further, tipping your ass back just as you were taught.
You bite the inside of your cheek when he presses a noisy, sucking kiss to your swollen clit.
His groan is barely detectable over the pounding of your heartbeat in your ears. “Yeah— lemme taste it, baby…”
#askK#just raw! no tags no wordcount nothing!#just raw dad's best friend lmao#reader insert#female reader#reader x bucky barnes#dad's best friend#dad's best friend bucky#fem reader#howdoyousleep#my writing
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AsaKiku Week Day 4: Modern AU / Gakuen AU / Islandol AU
Islandol (Island + Idol) AU is most likely the most popular setting for these two (in the JP fandom at least!) They even have their own virtual concerts set up by fans, it's so cool! I recommend giving this and this a listen to see how perfectly their voices fit together~ @asakikuweek2024
#mochimosaics#asakiku#asakikuweek2024#arthur kirkland#kiku honda#aph japan#aph england#hws japan#hetalia#axis powers ヘタリア#Everytime i listen to their hetalian jet duet I CRY!!#especially at the interlude#I'm so behind on ASKK week!! Sorry;;;#I'll catch up though please forgive me#hws england
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(i lounge around in your inbox)
I have 0 problem w/ this, lounge as long as you’d like uwu (this cat image is cute, I’m yoinking it for obvious purposes)
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