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nine-blessed-hero · 3 months ago
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Only Shadows Walk Beside
Universe: TESIV: Oblivion CW: Angst, threatening a minor Words: 600 Context: Written for the TES Summer Fest prompt: Companion. Tagging: @tes-summer-fest, @jacqueswriteblrlibrary Also read on AO3
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On the hill above the Priory, Divine Crusader Lorinda Rue sits, hugging her knees, as twilight settles a shroud around her shoulders. Three of her knights gone. Her brothers, her comrades. Her friends. She repeats their names: Sir Areldur, Sir Brellin, Sir Geimund. Lorinda presses a face already puffy and eyes already red-rimmed into her knees. Dead, because she wasn't fast enough. Wasn't strong enough. Wasn't leader enough. They knew the risks, whispers a part of her. Did they? Did they? Brellin was so young-! Areldur, for all his faults, so pious and trusting. And Geimund, so skilled, looking for orders…
Lorinda had tried to say a few words about them. Standing over their freshly turned graves, the remaining knights and the new recruits clustered, expectant. But words had failed her; only a sob made it out. She fled. Mercifully no one had followed. Sir Thedret had been so excited on her return – stumbling, confused from the Undercroft. Had named her Divine Crusader to the other's cheers. Then she had learnt of their losses. Divine fuckup, another part of her whispers. Crusader of folly. Her hands ball into fists. No leader, she. This must not happen again. Never again.
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The Black Arrow stumbles from the bloodworks. The Basin of Renewal may have healed her physical hurts, but it does nothing for the hollowness of her 'victory' against the Grey Prince. The Raiment of Valor hangs heavy on her shoulders, Matron Andronicus's victory lap making it feel more like a millstone than a trophy. She wants nothing more than to go down to the lakeshore behind her house and strip it off, diving deep into the precious waters. A squeal sounds, somewhere behind her, to the right. Footsteps converge on her location. She reaches for an arrow, spinning– – to find a boy, yellow haired and dressed in green, bouncing on the balls of his feet. "By Azura, by Azura, by Azura!" he squeals, hands bunched by his chest, and looking fit to burst. "It's the Grand Champion! I can't believe it's you! Standing here! Next to me!" The Black Arrow drives her ammunition back into its quarrel. "What do you want?" The boy has a book and stick of graphite. If he just wants a signature… She thinks she could deal with that. "I saw your fight against the Gray Prince! You're the best! Can I…" He suddenly goes shy. "You want an autograph? Sure." "No! Well, I mean, yes, but…" "Spit it out." "Can I follow you around? I won't get in the way, I promise." Her head spins. "What?" "I could– Carry your weapon. Or shine your boots. Announce you to your enemies. Anything you need!" The boy is a bosmer, like Brellin. So young. Her guts churn. Never again. "Please? I just want to follow–" "No!" He stares at her with wide, shocked eyes. "Piss off!" she yells. He takes a step back, autograph book clutched like a shield. "I don't need some spineless, toadying little shit hanging around me." "Are…" His voice wavers, too much courage for his own good. "Are you sure?" "Fuck off. Go on, toerag, get gone!" He takes another step back. "But– I–" In a blur of movement, one of her arrows, with their special fletching, is nocked on her bowstring. Drawn back. Pointing at him. His trews darken at the crotch. "I said: Leave." He utters a wordless, fearful, anguished cry and flees. The Black Arrow relaxes her bowstring, replaces her arrow. Nausea fills her from head to toe. Crusader of folly. She grips at the deprecating moniker as hard as the bow in her bloodless hands. Never again.
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liebe-ist-musik · 1 year ago
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To Fanfiction or not to Fanfiction
Since I'm faced with the decision to write an original story or fan fiction for NaNoWriMo this year and can't decide, you'll get a survey :)
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zetadraconis11 · 2 months ago
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Writer Interview Game
Thank you, @gingerlegacy07 for the tag! Y'all should check her out! She's amazing and a great writer :]
When did you start writing?
Hm, I think I started writing ever since I was 9. It was at first just a little children's book. I've always liked drawing and writing, and coming up with crazy things, lol.
I loved taking Creative Writing class when I was 17, and that's when I also started writing my own original novel.
Writing fanfiction, I started about a year ago, with Hogwarts Legacy. I just had a couple ideas and decided to just give it a shot and write them. Now, I'm still writing HL fanfics and enjoying it so much :]
Are there different themes or genres you enjoy reading than what you write?
Ummm, I'm not sure. Maybe enemies to lovers as I personally don't think I can write that wonderful trope well. But I love to see it, like Zutara, lol.
Is there a writer you want to emulate or get compared to often?
No, as I write with my own style. I might be inspired by works of others sometimes, but I intend to make stories with my own take and my own way.
Can you tell me a bit about your writing space?
Well, if I write at my home, I usually do it at my desk! Per my name, I have some dragon stuff on my desk, lol, as well as a ceramic cup of pens and pencils and a lamp.
If I feel bored at my desk, I would move to the kitchen table or the living room, just to have a change of scenery. I also sometimes go to a coffee shop and camp there for a few hours while drinking mochas and such.
What's your most effective way to muster up a muse?
I often listen to songs and think of which pairs or characters fit them. And even when I watch a show or movie, I find myself wondering what characters from HL would be like in it, hahaha.
So honestly...the most effective way is just me lost in thought XD. I have one interesting thought, then I keep following that thought, and it just builds up in there. And my creativity has me start to write it.
Are there any recurring themes in your writing? Do they surprise you?
Family is huge in my writing. Whether it's blood family or - more frequently - found family. Also friends that are like family. And just being supportive and having healthy relationships. Wonderful happy love and fluff everywhere!
It doesn't surprise me, lol. I don't like sad endings or anything too depressing. I can't handle it, and I always want happy endings after many rough trials or trauma.
With Sebastian, I always have him redeemed when he's in a relationship with my MC Estelle. And she needed healing of her own too. And they just make each other so happy and they love each other so much. All the fluff for them and my other otps :]
What is your reason for writing?
It's mainly because I wanted to a certain story and didn't see it out there, so I decided to write it myself. In doing so, I hope that others enjoy the stories too.
Anyone that's seen the majority of my incorrect quotes or read some of my stories know I'm a huge shipper of Garrelda. I love them to bits, I'll forever captain that ship if need be, lol. So, when HL fics were still coming out, I didn't any (if at all) or Poppinis. I decided to give it a shot and write for those pairings, more of Poppinis at first. I loved Poppinis as a ship first before I fleshed out my take on Garrelda more.
In the end, I write stories that I randomly get inspired to write, and I just send them out there, not knowing if others wanted to read such a thing, lol
Is their any specific comment or type of comment you find particularly motivating?
Any positive comment showing love for the story just makes me so happy. Seeing them appreciate it always makes me smile. Those comments help me remember people do like what I write, and it's a nice reminder :]
How do you want to be thought about by your readers?
Eh, I don't know if there's anything I want to be thought about. But I guess a "provider" of Garrelda content, as I often write that pairing, especially with my recent on-going fic. Or just a "truly writing dragon", lol, as I keep sending out more stories for people to read in the HL fandom.
What do you feel is your greatest strength as a writer?
I think writing emotions and characters. I try to make the characters feel real, and I do my best in describing them so they're relatable to readers.
How do you feel about your own writing?
I feel like it's improving, which is great to see. But that makes me grimace about my first fics I wrote, as I know they can be a bit rough. But that's how it goes, and I do feel pretty proud of how far I've come, and I do like my writing more from time to time. I admittedly am still my worst critic, though.
And those are my answers! Thank you for whomever came up with this! :]
Np tags: @polarisgreenley, @mspegasus17, @ravenwind-75
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teecupangel · 1 year ago
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I've been seeing a bunch of 'Desmond reborn as someone' posts here, and I also saw that fanfiction where Desmond was reborn as Anne Bonny's son and I thought I might as well suggest one as well, with Desmond being reborn as Mary Read's child? Whether Mary lives or dies, I'm not sure.
Okay, confession time!
My initial idea for A Pirate's Son was for Desmond to be reborn as Mary Read’s child instead of Anne Bonny’s but I changed it because Mary had a daughter and I was only ‘starting out’ writing Desmond so I was a bit hesitant to write Desmond being reborn as a woman (not anymore though XD).
So, for this one, let’s set up the background.
All we know is that Mary had a daughter but we don’t know what happened to the child so we’re going to assume that the child was sent to an orphanage.
So in this one, Desmond would be born not knowing who his mother was. All he’d know was that his mother had been a ‘wicked woman who deserved her fate’. (Historically, Mary’s child most probably died together with her when she died from fever as there are no records of an infant’s death)
We’re killing Mary (sorry, Mary TTATT) because we want Desmond to have an isolated childhood, wondering who his mother was.
Also, this would give Desmond motivation to seek out the Brotherhood as soon as he could because… well, there was no way he was going to stay in this orphanage that was obviously out to paint him as the son of a sinner and all that good stuff.
So he leaves as soon as he could and lives in the street, using Desmond Miles’ skills and what remains of his Bleed, pretending to be a boy.
No.
He was a boy.
Even if he was born as…
He was still a boy.
And Desmond would make his way to London as its the nearest city he knows has a Brotherhood (or, if it didn’t have one, he was planning on moving to the colonies and just annoying Achilles until he agrees to train him, Ratonhnhaké:ton-style) and the Brotherhood sees potential in him so they take him in.
It doesn’t take long for him to be initiated and soon, he’s climbing the ranks of the British Brotherhood (maybe we’ll have him be friends with a Frye who would later become the Frye’s twins ancestors?) and he’ll get Miko’s attention who takes him in as his successor, hoping he and Edward’s son would take over as the mentors after them.
This leads to him meeting Edward Kenway who freezes because…
‘Desmond’ (no last name) looks a lot like Mary Read.
Unorganized Notes:
Edward introduced Desmond as the son of a business associate (Miko) that he’s teaching to the Kenway family. Desmond is actually in the Kenway Mansion because they heard Templar activities around the area and Desmond has been ordered to find more.
Haytham thinks he’s super cool and likes it when Desmond teaches him swordsmanship. Desmond can’t say no because Haytham is so cute as a kid.
No one, not even Miko, know that Desmond was born a woman.
Until… Jenny asked him blankly because she felt like there was something ‘strange’ about Desmond and Desmond tells her the truth.
The fact that Edward believes Desmond is a man is the only reason why he keeps questioning if Desmond is Mary’s child since he heard she gave birth to a girl.
Desmond is the main reason why Jenny began to push Edward to let her be an Assassin, threatening to run away with Desmond if he doesn’t.
Edward mistakes this as Jenny and Desmond having a secret affair and he’s torn because (1) Jenny is his little girl and he wants to protect her, (2) he doesn’t want to lose her like he lost Caroline, and (3) Desmond is an Assassin so she’d never be completely safe.
But at the same time… if he could trust his daughter with anyone, it would be with Desmond.
Desmond and Jenny are not in any kind of relationship. They’re more like… older bullying sister (Jenny) and tired younger brother (Desmond).
That’s as far as I got.
The Kenway Tragedy doesn’t happen because Desmond was staying in the mansion when the attack happened but… well… Jenny’s definitely going to run away and go to the colonies to get trained by this Achilles person that Desmond had talked about once if her father does not approve of her choice and she’ll drag Desmond with her because she knows how much her father favors Desmond. The plan is to use Desmond as sorta like “you like the dog so I’m taking the dog when I leave” kind of scorched earth plan.
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imonthemoonitsmadeofcheese · 7 months ago
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hi I'm learning destiny lore the hard way and I've seen you in my notes, who's Eris Morn? What's her deal? This is an invitation to infodump you seem like the person to ask XD
Oh wow! I will answer your question, despite feeling unworthy to do so, but before I do, since you mentioned you're learning the lore, this is the Eris page from the Ishtar Collective website: https://www.ishtar-collective.net/categories/eris-morn It gives a list of main plot points for Eris up until just before the Season of the Witch and links to all Eris lore that exists in-game, going into far more detail than I can in one Tumblr post.
The Ishtar site pulls a large amount of its info from the D2 API and then supplements anything it can't get from there with human volutneer transcribers pulling from sources like the Destiny Lore Vault: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCqJlWJF0IucG7HXcEao78Cw .
If there is lore you can acess in-game, now or in the past, Ishtar has it and it is searchable via keywords. It is official lore, not someone's interpretation of it, and I cannot recommend it highly enough.
However, not everyone realizes that the Ishtar Collective also has a Discord: https://discord.gg/v8GsggCV
And that Discord is full of lore nerds who you can just go to and ask obscure lore questions and they will happily answer them (or sometimes get into adorkable near-academic-level debates over them, with citations as well as historical and philosophical references) because that's their definition of fun. They are, for the most part, genuinely lovely humans and I adore them all.
Everything I know about Destiny I learned from either playing the game or reading that website or asking those people.
Now, to answer your question, I'm going to give you a short quick answer and then a longer more in-depth answer afterwards.
The short quick answer is a quote from a story I wrote (A Dance with Vengeance) where I have the Drifter explaining where Eris got her eyes to an Eliksni character I made up:
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Please note: this is fanfiction. This conversation never happens in lore, and the closest we've gotten to Driferis in-game is a delightfully sweet hug buried in the lore tab for a sparrow vehicle, but the events the Drifter is narrating (with a bit of dramatic flourish) did happen to Eris in-game.
The longer answer:
Eris, a former Hunter (and Ahamkara wish-dragon slayer), is the sole surviving member of the First Crota Fireteam, a team of six guardians looking to avenge all the friends and loved ones who died in The Great Disaster (when humanity sent an army of guardians to try to reclaim the Moon from the Hive) and, in particular, to avenge the death of a badass Titan named Wei Ning (Eris' friend and lover of Eriana-3, the fireteam leader). Their goal was to kill Crota, the then-leader of the Hive forces on the Moon (Crota is the son of Oryx, who, himself is both a Hive god and the Taken King, brother to the other Hive gods, Savathun, Hive god of Lies, and Xivu Arath, Hive god of War).
Everyone on the First Crota Fireteam except for Eris died horribly and Eris was lost in the Hellmouth on the Moon for a century. Eris' ghost (Brya) killed itself to protect her and Eris no longer has access to Light-based guardian powers. She killed a Hive acolyte and took its eyes (cutting out her own) since she had wished on her bone to know the way out of the Hellmouth but could no longer see. (Ahamkara wish magic is always tricksy - they're basically wish-granting genies who always twist what you ask for into the worst possible outcome.)
Eris has a few titles: "The Forgotten Blade," "Bane of the Swarm," "Crota's Bane" and, more recently in Season of the Witch, "Hive god of Vengeance." She is our main point of contact on the Moon (the Shadowkeep DLC is fantastic and the Moon is awesome and creepy and one of my favourite places to go in-game - I could go on and on about my favourite spots there).
Eris has devoted the rest of her (now mortal) life to exterminating the Hive and has guided the Guardian (the player character) to do so through many adventures, notably the Crota's End raid (where we kill Crota and finally accomplish what her fireteam set out to do), the Kings Fall raid (where we kill Oryx), the Pit of Heresy dungeon, and the Scarlet Keep strike (where she has one of her infamous fantastic lines: "Do you feel it as I do, Guardian? A hatred as pure and potent as sunshine, soaking through your skin?"
Season of the Witch is all about Eris becoming the Hive god of Vengeance to deal with Xivu Arath. If you've ever watched Full Metal Alchemist, the logistical problem with Xivu is the same: going to war with something that feeds off of violence and death just makes it stronger. Season of the Witch is still available (at the time I'm writing this) and there's some amazing scenes in there. I highly recommend playing through it but if you can't, here's an 8.5 minute video of the 3 main cutscenes including the ending [i.e. this is a spoiler if you haven't played it yet and still want to!]: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VVUWu-DqZvU
Eris' storyline in-game is all about recovery from trauma. Many of her quests are either helping her seek vengeance or helping her find peace (such as recovering mementos of her fireteam from various spots on the Moon). She is haunted (literally) by the ghosts of her past (here's 19 seconds of her yelling at them: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lcs1io-kvdg ) and her recovery from that has made her the unofficial trauma therapist for the Vanguard.
In Season of the Haunted (sadly no longer playable) she guides Zavala, Crow and Cabal Empress Caiatl through combatting and laying to rest their own nightmares-of-the-past-made-real. Here's a link to a 9 min video of the main cutscenes from that season (there's more content if you watch a full playthrough): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DWHphu-iT3w
Eris taught herself how to wield Hive magic from a combination of her century of wandering on the Moon and the journals of Toland the Shattered (one of the members of her fireteam who betrayed them to the Hive and is now a floating sparkle-ball who sometimes helps us and sometimes just insults us on the Moon).
Eris is the Vanguard's Hive expert and Darkness expert. She is also one of Ikora's Hidden (Ikora is the Vanguard spymaster and the Hidden are her network of spies.) One of Eris' main story elements is that most people don't trust her, and not without cause. Another D2 character, Elsie Bray, aka the Exo Stranger, has been living her own personal Groundhog Day time-loop hell where she has watched humanity fail over and over against the Witness and then goes back in time to try to stop it. In most of Elsie's time loops Eris succumbs to her trauma and the corrupting nature of the Darkness powers she wields, goes full Hive, and leads the forces of evil to wipe out humanity in what is referred to as "the Dark Timeline."
Eris is constantly dealing with accusations that she's crazy, that she's evil, that she's unstable, and every time it's proven she's not, but people still find her untrustworthy and it isolates her from most of humanity, noteworthy exceptions to this being Ikora, Queen Mara, the player character, and the Drifter.
I am (obviously) especially enamoured of the relationship between Eris and the Drifter, and their in-game banter is absolute top-tier (he flirts and Eris roasts him and it is glorious), but the very core of their relationship is built on comfort and understanding. He trusts her (something almost no one else does) and she gives him hope (which is genuinely impressive and beautiful because the Drifter's own backstory is brutal and bleak as fuck).
Throughout most of Eris' narrative in-game she is a recovering survivor, but in Beyond Light (the DLC where we get our not-ice magic Stasis powers) we get to see Eris not just psychologically and emotionally recovered, but also getting to be a badass in battle. This is, in my opinion, the best cutscene in the entire game: (it is 1 min an 35 seconds and far, far too short): https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IAD6E_vESJY
I love this cutscene not only because it is visually spectacular, but because Eris has, for most of her narrative, been an injured survivor needing the player character to fight in her place because she no longer can. But in Beyond Light she is now able to kick ass and, perhaps even more importantly, be a part of a fireteam again.
There's more but I'm going to stop there. Eris is badass and amazing and creepy and fantastic. She uses the weapons of the Hive against them. She uses her own traumatic experiences to heal others. Her dialogue lines are evocative and snarky and brooding and poetic. The voice acting for her is some of the best I've ever heard anywhere. Her character has a complex, empowering, healing, hopeful, and beautiful narrative. And I love her intensely for it.
Ideally, this has answered your question at least somewhat, but do feel free to ask me any follow up questions you have about this or anything. I maintain I am not an expert in D2 lore. I am a writer and I don't just have biases, I use them to make art. But I do love the game and while I am not an authority on anything, I have immersed myself in much of the lore with wild abandon and will happily point you to places where you can find more information where my own understanding is limited.
And with that, I leave you with another fantastic Eris quote that so many people have connected with and found beautiful but that also encapsulates "who is Eris Morn" pretty well on its own:
"Recovery is a spiral, not a circle. You may return to the same patterns, but you will break free." —Eris Morn
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ganeshpnf · 1 month ago
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heyyyyy! i see a lot of criticism on wottg lately and i think they are sooo right. what's your opinion on wottg?
Hmm I already shared a bit of my thoughts about it but who am I to hurt you? Im just gonna rant again and more detailed I guess XD
First of all, I was soo confused by how rushed it was. You can even tell it by the title names. The book felt like it was written in one night. The mistakes also proves it. Editor was asleep? I dont know. Rick is just too old? I dont know. The worst of all, Rick doesnt care enough to put efford anymore? I still dont know, but it sure feels like it. Leo is treated like he is fine and daisy, Clovis being Morpheus's son, weird huge typo mistakes...
Not to mention characters were so ooc. And no Im not talking about: Annabeth threw a party, thats so ooc. I think she was so in character for that one. In fact, that part was my favourite in the book. It was good to remember her rebellious side after show messed her up with her goody two shoes personality. The real issue was Annabeth's and Percy's dynamics felt like they had 0 development in pjo. Wdym that girl is suprised when Percy comforts her? I just read SOM and I can pull so many scenes of Percy comforting her. Wdym Annabeth is fucking surprised when Percy acts all smart? How old they are? 12? (I suggest reading @lilislegacy s criticism for this parts, it was more detailed and so right!)
Its so obvious that Rick wrote this book when he was working on the show and wanted to merge them both together, which is soo wrong in my opinion. Look I like show actors, they are fine with the tv show. But they are NOT the book characters, they are actors. Walker is not Percy Jackson, he is the actor of him in the show. Leah is not Annabeth Chase, she is the actor of her in the show. Aryan is not Grover, he is actor of him in the show. I think Rick and some fans tbh, dont understand this fact. I love them and they deserve to be shine in the big screen, but books should stay books. When we open the book, we should see the book characters, not them. Book canon and show canon should never be together. Because no, they are not the same and would never be. Rick spent this whole book on advertasing his tv show and it was too cringe. Olympus+? Really Rick?
One of the weird thing was also adding Chiron's injury. I was confused bcs like I was sure Percy rode on him before and I know he would notice this. Its just makes 0 sense.
Were they good stuff? Yes, trio's scenes in general werr adorable. Seeing old campers again also. But I want to add that Rick lost a big chance to make this book shine. Where is Jason? Even mention of him would be a big hit, imagine him in that party. I know even with these mistakes, this book would be a hit. Also so many fans wanted this Idk why he didn't go for it.
I like Rick, even though he makes me so angry with this kind of stuff. He gave me a perfect childhood with this characters. But that doesnt mean I have to agree with his every decision and support him no matter what. Idk if he is getting old or anything but this book was just a fanfiction. And not a good fanfiction because I know I see so many better written fanfictions. I hope he fixes his mistakes in the next book because I am still hopeful, even though I am a bit scared. I still want the next book soo bad. Wishing it would be more like Chalice you know :)
Oh and before I finish it, I am forever mad for him mixing Annabeth's lemon shampoo!!! I'm sorry but that was special to me. Apple shampoo? Wdym usual apple shampoo? Someone need to fix this typo mistakes!
Thank you for your ask anon :)
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judasiskariot · 3 months ago
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✨Writing Interview Tag Game✨
The 🖤judasiskariot❤ round - thank you lovely delightful @pinkberrytea for the tag 💕🌸
When did you start writing?
Already enjoyed writing creative essays at school. Wrote my first fanfiction (yugioh) as a teenie at an anime/fandom website. Got really into it, with writing fanfiction about a RPG I were playing/writing at the very same time.
Are there different themes or genres you enjoy reading than what you write?
Maybe I read more smut than writing it. Because it seems I always need to put up huge story before smut, so it makes sense, cause the ghost of dumb it is ooc comments are still in my head.
Is there a writer you want to emulate or get compared to often?
I guess not. Both ways (I just often say I am a film noir or Tolkien type cause I often get lost in description or heavy in inner monologue. We could be in Mordor....or only went down the hill, same length. So happens with me. (So gods no never ever would I say I can write like Tolkien!!!! I just mean by that, that I do not keep some things sharp and short when maybe needed, as I do prefer in real life)
I am a huge Dante Alighieri and Vergil fan, compare me to them and I will always love you 🤣🤣
I just feel like a bardic soul 💜📜🪶
Can you tell me a bit about your writing space?
Desk is always occupied. Also is there gym, man sleeping medieval storage cave (The Manc Ave, right Terry and Korvo? 😉Dig old bicks)
Hardly wifi connection in there. I have no stationary pc, only cheap small laptop (it is hard to be a bard xD) so writing on the couch.
I have reading and writing candles (my luxury; even I should not)
Love to write in my bard poetry book outside in the nature 🌳🏞️🏕️☀️
What's your most effective way to muster up a muse?
🤷‍♀️
Are there any recurring themes in your writing? Do they surprise you?
DRAMA OVER BLOODY DRAMA
I am the drama queen.
Love some angst and emotional damage; make it harder than it needs to be.
But also horror, gore, love and smut.
Never surprised.
and dumb sassy joking; could write forever funny crosstalks like chat. Would anyone read that? Than I would write all my ideas, ALL! So efficient and quickly. Sooo...I get lost in my Tolkien surroundings 😅🙈
maybe i write more cheesy and theatrically than I thought 🤔
What is your reason for writing?
SOMEONE HAS TO DO IT, RIGHT?🤷‍♀️
😄
No. I am not skilled in any other divine arts and I guess that's the only thing I can call on. I like it. I always liked it. I can create something, that's nice. And I've written so much RPG and FF as a teenager, I messed it up and I hate that I didn't do it for over 10 years now. Why abandon the thing you were good at, had fun with, made progress while practicing? So that all progress seems lost and you have to start from zero?
I'm glad I've started making progress again, maintaining what I once set out to do, and learning to be better.
Is there any specific comment or type of comment you find particularly motivating?
I'm incredibly happy with every single comment, even if it's just a smiley.
" You really did read my thing? How great is that!?!?" 😍🤩
But comments with a specific part or a line that they liked or whatever, their specific thoughts on certain parts are incredible. As a writer, I need feedback to know if I'm doing well and if I'm on the right track. Do others know what I wanted to say? Does it come out right? Otherwise I cannot improve.
If someone shares their exact first thoughts, what they thought about certain passages while reading, then the work pays off. 😍😍🤤🤤
How do you want to be thought about by your readers?
As someome whose writig is good? 😅🤷‍♀️🙈 someone they can talk to. some nerdie partner in crime.
What do you feel is your greatest strength as a writer?
I have no clue. No one told me. I guess maybe having drama ideas and writing the inner struggles of characters.
How do you feel about your own writing?
Also here not much confidence in my own writing.
I got the two beasts in me: GOD YES! BEST WRITING EVER. THIS IS SO GOOD! THEY HAVE TO LOVE IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR REACTON TO THIS!🤩
Reread it: what da fuck is this?! 😠 I thought this was good?! I have no clue where I wanted to go with that 🤷‍♀️
BUT I can also be proud, reread it and think "I did this. I created that myself. It may be not the best, just small and silly and cliché, but I created it myself!" Be proud, all of you writers!! 👏🏻🫵🏻💪🏻 We are forgotten so often.
Do people criticize paintings for being ooc? Well..I guess assholes being assholes in every aspect of life 😅😆
When you write, are you influenced by what others might enjoy reading, or do you write purely for yourself, or a mix of both?
I do it cause I want to. But of course the external motivation is important. Lack of comments and feedback makes you quit, mean people make you quit. You post cause you want to share your joy with others, hope they enjoy it too. When they do not, it can be bitter.
But still for me I guess. But non the less, I pick up things I think others will like (but not troping or so, writing things I dislike myself cause they are gaining online likes and so on; not in that way never) When I know a certain mutual/friend is reading the thing, I put easter eggs/insiders in it, they should get; things I think they might like and makes them smile. If someone would request some things they would like to happen/read, I would totally pick it up when possible. Shared happyness is happyness doubled.
thanks for the tag lovely
All my muts, please keep tagging me. I just keep forget doing it, when I can't do it right away.
And spinning head prevents me from that. I see what nonsense I write in the DMs and in every lil post a huge amount of spelling mistakes; I can't do it better at the moment; so embarrassing🙈
I've had a hectic time, sorry, but I love things like that and always smile when I get tagged😃😘 (and sometimes I'm a little unsure about telling something about myself. The urge to disappear completely one day and the next day I urge to overshare. Plus bad experiences with some folks😅🙈 )
I tag @nihil-ism @damadisangue
@sorceresssundries
@mercymaker
maybe you guys want to ramble a lil bit
[check out their works (if you like 😘)]
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lunarleonardo · 5 months ago
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HOW DO U WRITE SM FOR EACH CHAPTER? /GQ
Ive been struggling to make my chapters 2k words and kinda need some tips 😭
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Ah, words. I'm not sure how to explain it, but I'll try my best :"3
When it comes to writing a chapter, this is what's important to me: getting into character.
Words come from action, explanation, dialogue, exposition and setting. Words define a story, in a sense. And if you're writing from a certain character's point of view like I do, you're going to be writing all of those previous things from that view. I think about what details important to the reader the character would notice. I think about the small things a character notices, and what they don't. I think about how that character would perceive others, and what goes through their head during every interaction or event. Word count is often lost on me when I start writing (assuming I don't get stuck lol) because I'm telling the story through that character's eyes.
Another few things that might help is planning ahead. For some chapters I was a little lost on, I always thought about what I needed to have happen to reach from point A to point B. I try to write with an ending in mind, as well as what major "scenes" I wanted to write and how to get there. Think about what's going to happen in that chapter, and think about how and when you want your chapter to end. Sometimes when you start writing, the little things will come naturally :)
Also, taking inspiration may help. I've loved writing since I was in grade school, and my writing style has grown because I read more and more books. Wings of Fire is a big inspiration for my writing... love those silly dragon books... and then I found out about ao3 through steven universe fanfiction and look where we are now xD Basically, read lots and understand HOW that story is written. That's what I did anyway (⁠^⁠~⁠^⁠;⁠)⁠ゞ
I'm not sure how helpful this is, but in short, my chapter lengths mostly come down to planning ahead. The rest tends to follow from there. It may not work for everyone, because everyone has their own writing flow and that's completely okay! What matters is that you're having fun while you're writing :) hope this helps a little lol,, explaining how my brain works is not my strong suit xD
Happy writing~! ♫
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destinygoldenstar · 14 days ago
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🍀Our Unexpected Savior🍀 - Total Drama Viewer Reacts to Disventure Camp Season 2 Episode 5 “You Are A Monster”
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Idk why Lake lost her hair. It wasn't explained. But you know what? She deserves stylish hairdos of whatever she wants.
You want to dye your hair blue and defect from your parents? Do it.
Lake is one of those characters that deserves the world, honestly.
I got nothing better to do, I'm honestly pretty tired. Tired of Yul.
But I'll power through because why not? We're already here and y'all enjoy my content.
So let's get into Episode 5.
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Oh.
Okay so this is cool. This wasn't here before.
Bear with me as I read this:
"Disventure Camp uses references from different reality TV shows in its format, parodying them in this animated series."
Total Drama also does this. But this is a valid way of wording it, because at the end of the day, 'Parody of Reality TV' is NOT a character or a property that Fresh TV owns. It is an IDEA. A story idea. A creative decision to have that idea be its format.
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Legally, story ideas cannot be protected under copyright.
Characters can be. Story IPs can be. But not its ideas.
If ideas WERE protected under copyright, then stories would stop being made, because every story idea that comes to human mind that CAN be done, HAS been done.
The day ideas get copyrighted is the day I die.
"All the characters and stories shown in the series are the legal property of Odd Nation Cartoons and its collaborators, for which Odd Nation Cartoons has the right to profit from them and use them as it sees fit."
They are using completely original characters for their show, and their own completely unique setting.
I know the Beta originated as Total Drama Fanfiction, but that's also why they remade Season 1, so that this could be dropped in favor of it being their own show.
Fresh TV HATES Total Drama Fanfiction of any kind, especially if its animated. It's not like Fanganronpas, when it comes to those, Spike leaves creators alone despite them stealing Danganronpa's story premise and SOMETIMES characters. Unless I'm stupid and they DO do that. Bu Fresh? Yeah they're more ruthless. If you make something animated that contains Total Drama's premise or characters, IT WILL BE STRUCK WITH THE BAN HAMMER.
I'm not saying Fresh is wrong though. Just that they're ruthless about it. There are cases I've heard of where they were in the right to sue people for stealing content.
I used to watch Total Drama on a site that I won't name, and the site was taken down about two years ago because Fresh went after it for uploading their show.
"The Odd Nation Cartoons team has taken legal advice on the issue of copyright, reaching the conclusion that Disventure Camp does not infringe the rights of any other intellectual property or any YouTube policy."
GOOD FOR THEM.
GOOD FOR ODD NATIONS FOR STANDING UP FOR THEMSELVES AND COMING TO TERMS WITH A CONCLUSION WHERE EVERYBODY WINS.
Back then, a lot of indie companies like this were forced to take the Ls if they got sued for anything, because they didn't have the financial or influential ground to stand their ground. So the fact that these guys went out of their way to defend themselves when they got sued and came to an agreement and conclusion that allows them to save their project: PROPS.
I have to give credit where credit is due. Y'all are gems.
I may not like everything you do writing wise, but you standing your ground is worth my respect.
So yeah, that's the start of the episode. I just thought this was interesting.
Oh Lake remembering Rosa's words, d'awww...
She's in your heart girlie.
I know she's still here, but she's still in your heart.❤️
"Do you think I need a normal life?"
Gee, I dunno Lake, are you human?
"Oh... well, what's considered normal nowadays, right?"
Facts.
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He still has the black eye XD
I LOVE that he kept that.
I LOVE SEEING A MARK OF SUFFERING ON YUL'S FACE :)
"We managed to kick out the circus freak, but I doubt that strategy will ever work again."
Yeah, it's almost like you did not think this plan through.
What a great villain... /s
"You know, some medical emergency, it should be enough to get Aiden kicked off the show."
OH SO YOU WANT TO KILL SOMEONE?!
Wow. You keep IMPRESSING me on how despicable and disgusting you are.
(I SAY THAT LIKE I DIDN'T ENCOURAGE KILLING CONTESTANTS IN ANOTHER POST. I AM A DAMN HYPOCRITE.)
(That post, especially those portions, were designed NOT to be taken too seriously, btw. I don't actually endorse murder.)
"Do you really think the bald headed girl would be a problem for us?"
Lake, kick Yul's ass.
"Wait, are you saying you're going to poison Aiden to get him out of the game?"
"Uh, what did I just say? Do I need to spell it out word for word?"
"Lying? Sure. Manipulate? Whenever you want. But poison someone? That is way too much."
Well well well, good for James for having some moral decency.
Remember kids, poisoning somebody is ALWAYS WRONG. No matter the motive, YOU SHOULD NEVER POISON PEOPLE.
...unless heir name is Yul Kim. Then it's okay.
Imagine if James turns this on him and kills Yul.
GOD THAT'LL BE EPIC AND REDEEM JAMES.
"Attention campers, an immunity totem has been hidden somewhere in the camp!"
An idol is back?
T h e i d o l s a r e b a c k . . . ?
How lovely 😀
I'm so happy 😁
Alright, I'm going to the psychiatrist. BRB.
"Thanks for coming with me, Rosa."
"Oh, it's nothing. I really like you."
"I really like that you dragged me out of my team, Riya."
"Hunter Tess and Ally have an alliance, despite their... confusing relationship."
"I think that dude is Aro, what do you think? And the girls should kiss?"
"Well, whatever happens, I'll be on your side."
Rosa willingly being in the minority alliance on this team just because she doesn't want her to be lonely. Love it.
"I messed things up with Lake, but I won't make that mistake with Riya. I will help her, support her, and respect her every decision, like I should have with Lake."
Girl, no, you were right to call her out. Don't blame yourself.
Rosa really does seem to have a relationship complex the more I'm seeing it. She's always trying to be a people pleaser and take care of everyone, to the point where she's apparently done it with guys multiple times. She also had to grow up very fast to be a mother at such a young age.
So is this like "If I do something wrong or make a mistake that makes someone upset, I should be the one that takes the entire blame and I'm the screw up."
She is putting all of her own morals first over everything.
I love that out her, but it is an actual flaw if you're, you know, only judging yourself based on how other people see you.
"Hey Tess, since Hunter didn't want to talk, we should talk to each other."
"You know, since one of my options aren't open, I'll take another one."
"Well I never said I was in love with him."
Really? I thought you said you liked the kiss.
"If you felt that way too, I really wouldn't mind."
About who? Hunter, ooooorrrr...
And it cuts away before she can explain it.
"How hard can it be to find a stupid piece of wood?"
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GEE, I DUNNO MAN, IT'S NOT LIKE YOU'RE IN A FOREST OF TREES THAT ARE MADE OF WOOD.
"In a forest?"
Yeah. EXACTLY.
"Oh? What do we have here?"
Oh no. Don't find the idol. DO NOT FIND THE IDOL. I SWEAR TO GOD.
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What is that?
I know it's a mushroom, why is it that color and what is it doing in these woods?
I've never seen a mushroom that color before. Only brown and white ones.
"You had a couple of hours to find the totem, and just minutes before the challenge started, it was finally found."
Wait what?
We didn't see who had it?
Are they keeping it a secret on who found it?
So it's Simon Says.
"Easy. My fans support me unconditionally."
XD
"Nobody will cancel me if I kill someone, right?"
"Give me the perfume that Connor gave you."
Oh come on.
I hate this challenge. Hate it.
"How can I make everyone hate me in less than ten minutes?"
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Oh goddammit.
WHAT IS THIS CHALLENGE? THIS IS JUST FLAT OUT CRUEL AND UNREWARDING.
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She went and did it!
She really said "I WANTED TO DO THAT FOR YEARS!!"
Ally probably has even more of those at home.
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The side eye Tess is giving XD
"Hunter, carry Tess as princess until Aiden returns."
XD
Yeah Hunter, treat her like a QUEEN.
"I don't see what the appeal in this is."
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WHAT THE...
UUUUUUUUHHHHHH, WHAT?!
HOW ARE YOU DOING THAT?!
YOU'RE ALIVE?!?!?
HOW ARE YOU ALIVE?!?!
"Tess, I order you to throw your pills into the fire."
Okay, NO.
NO NO NO NO NO NO.
SHE'S DIAGNOSED. SHE NEEDS THIS OR SHE COULD DIE.
THERE'S GOTTA BE SOME LAW THAT PREVENTS KRYSTAL FROM BEING ALLOWED TO DO THIS, RIGHT?!
God I HATE THIS.
She just has no reaction doing it too.
CAN WE GET AN F FOR TESS?
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SHE'S USING YUL AS A STOOL XD
OKAY ALL IS FORGIVEN.
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Okay now I'm actually kinda liking this. This is fun.
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OKAY THAT DOLL HAS GOTTA BE A DEMON.
THERE'S NO OTHER POSSIBILITY.
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NO DUDE YOU CAN'T JUST DO THAT TO A GUY.
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"Lake, I order you to remove your wig."
I mean, everyone already knows it's a wig...
Still sucks.
"Why are you so mean?"
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Awwww, HONEY.
"Do you really enjoy making fun of us? Making us suffer?"
"Yes."
"Well I feel sorry for you. Only someone miserable needs to hurt others to feel better. And the puppet was wrong. You are not like your father, YOU ARE WORSE. YOU ARE A MONSTER."
"SHUT UP ALREADY."
OH GOD THAT LINE DELIVERY.
That actually got me...
Good for Lake though.
"How do you feel with everything that happened today?"
"You know... I feel good."
Props to Lake 👏
Lake just won a TON of points for me.
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AAAAAWWWW
The height difference XD
But AAAAAAWWW
Lake all day, honestly. LAKE ALL DAY.
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Aw, he saved one! What a gentleman!
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OH MY GOD BLESS THIS MAN'S HEART❤️
HE SAVED SOME OF HER PILLS, AWWWW
HUNTER YOU JUST WON SO MANY POINTS FOR ME.
BLESS YOUR HEART.
"Listen, I know I've been a little distant and made you guys worry about me. I apologize for that."
"Well... are you ready to bring it up?"
"Yes. I'm ready."
"I'm aromantic."
NO AND IT CUTS AWAY GOSH DARN IT.
I WANT TO SEE HIM COME OUT.
"Hello friend, can we sit here?"
NO.
"Enough!"
YEAH TELL HIM OFF.
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OH MY GOD GET OFF HIM.
"Don't say such toxic things."
YOU CAN FUCK OFF YUL.
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NO JAMES IS ACTUALLY DOING IT?!
WHERE WAS THE "I DRAW THE LINE WITH POISON" THING YOU SAID?
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"Lying? Sure. Manipulate? Whenever you want. But poison someone? That is way too much."
"I can't wait to see his reaction."
The reaction of him DYING? Yeah, OKAY. YOU SICK BASTARD.
So how is this gonna play out if Aiden is dead?
WAIT...
WAIT A DAMN MINUTE
OH MY GOD IS HE POISONED?!
OH MY GOD PLEASE. PLEASE LET ME BE RIGHT. OH MY GOD.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD YEEESS!!!!!
MY PRAYERS GOT ANSWERED!!!!
YOU STUPID SHIT! YOU GRABBED THE WRONG PLATE!!
I am watching a dude vomit and suffer and I am GRINNING EAR TO EAR AND CHEERING FOR IT.
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"Oh, it must be the mushroom he ate in the woods."
And James is gonna play it off as though he did nothing XD
"James! What did you do?!"
"I did what Golden wanted!"
"You were supposed to give the mushroom to Aiden, not me, idiot!"
SO JAMES REALLY JUST WENT OUT OF HIS WAY TO KILL THIS GUY. OH MY GOD XD
"I don't poison people. I draw the line there. UNLESS HIS NAME IS YUL, THEN I'LL GLADLY DO IT."
OH GOD HE'S COLLAPSED... this is actually very serious...
"Now that he mentions it, the cameras caught Yul holding a mushroom when they were looking for the totem."
AND THEY SOMEHOW DIDN'T SEE JAMES WAS WITH HIM OR THEIR TALK.
OH MY GOD XD
"Yul is out of the game anyway. He had three votes."
XD
AINT NO WAY.
SO YUL WOULD HAVE BEEN OUT NO MATTER WHAT. BUT JAMES DECIDED THAT WASN'T ENOUGH AND DECIDED TO KILL HIM.
OH MY GOD. XD
THANK YOU! THANK YOU TOTAL DRAMA GODS FOR SAVING ME!!!
THANK YOU FOR ELIMINATING YUL EARLY IN THE SEASON!!
THIS IS REDEEMING A WHOLE LOT FOR ME.
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They're ACTUALLY sending him to the hospital. Holy shit...
I don't really care cause it's Yul. But DAMN.
A CONTESTANT ACTUALLY KILLED SOMEONE.
"So Yul was planning to poison me, but you decided to poison him."
"My guy, so are one sick bastard."
"Make no mistake, I only did it to get rid of Yul."
Honestly, JAMES IS REDEEMED.
JAMES IS COMPLEELY REDEEMED OF EVERYTHING HE HAS DONE IN THE PAST.
JAMES IS THE BEST CHARACTER OF ALL TIME.
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HE IS THE BEST THING TO EVER HAPPEN TO HUMANITY.
TO THINK I EVER DISSED YOU IN THE PAST.
FORGIVE ME.
"Poisoning someone is too much... unless that someone is Yul."
HE USED THE SAME LOGIC. THAT'S HOW YOU KNOW HE DID THIS FOR ME.
JAMES DID THIS FOR ME.
"Don't mention it, Golden. It was a well fought battle, but I did it for honor and for a better spot on your list."
HALLELUJAH, I FEEL A GREAT SENSE OF RELIEF.
I thought I would have to put up with Yul ALL SEASON.
BUT THIS WAS A GREAT TWIST THAT I AM VERY HAPPY ABOUT.
Holy gosh, I feel so relieved. GOD I HATED HIS CHARACTER SO MUCH.
Did James go too far? Probably. But you know what? He earned points from ME.
As did Hunter. As did Lake.
I GET TO BREATHE NEXT EPISODE. YAY!
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ravenonice · 7 months ago
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Well. The ice ado news suck. I knew it wasn't gonna happen for a few years now I guess...but at least there was this glimmer of hope. And I suppose in the grand scheme of things this is such a silly thing to be genuinely upset about...(over sharing ahead) but yoi was released in literally the hardest time of my life, literally a week after I lost my dad. And it brought me joy and probably helped me to not completely lose my mind. It has been my comfort show ever since.
I rarely get this attached to media. I couldn't tell you my favorite book or favorite movie because those things are so fleeting and I love something else very quickly...but even though my engagement with it differed throughout the years, it always remained a part of me and I always came back to it when I needed it.
I'm not even that into anime anymore as I was as a teenager but I do pay my crunchyroll subscription even if it's just so I can watch yoi whenever i need it...I should get the blue ray honestly it's weird that I never did xD
I think my fondest memory of the yoi fandom was when I went to Frankfurt book fair in 2017 and cosplayed Yuuri. I had ordered his Japan jacket but it took too long to arrive, I was devestated, I was outright panicing. But what could I do? I had to improvise. I got some blue boxers, a white shirt and the ugliest blue tie I could find at tk maxx and went as drunk banquet Yuuri! And I had a BLAST! I think that was by far my most successful cosplay ever and I wish I could share it with you but my sd card broke and I don't have the photos anymore :'( I had so many Viktor cosplayers come up to me, roleplay a little, tell me that they wanted to burn my tie xD It was fun! I even made katsudon piroschki to share with everyone! I also had a hard time leaving bc I got stopped for photos so many times! So if anyone who was at that fair all that time ago remembers me and still has photos, please send them my way <3
So I guess what that teaches me is that I can make the best out of a bad situation :') Well. We just gotta write even more fanfiction now I guess <3
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podlaskazazula · 11 months ago
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Unpopular ship and opinion: After books end, when Ciri took Yen and Geralt away, both Triss and Dandelion ended up alive and they both lost someone close. Triss lost her best friend and her unhappy crush, she also believed that she lost Ciri too. Dandelion lost his best friend. I really want to write fanfiction about them traumabonding, even if I still preffer DandelionxPriscilla and TrissxEskel xD
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enixamyram · 6 months ago
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Feeling bored and still obsessed with The Hunger Games and Hazbin Hotel/Helluva Boss so decided to do one of these. Let's share some of the best moments from it!
Day One:
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You just know Fizz made some sex puns and that's why Striker gave up.
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Boo Vortex!
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Is it weird I could totally see this alliance happening?
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Unexpected... Now the real question is, would Vox be proud or horrified? XD
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Tavia! No!!!!
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And thus, a new rarepair was created! Go Fanfiction Writers and FanArt Creators! Go and make the fandom even more delightfully weird!
Day Two:
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Alastor's loss really hit him hard. Either that or he misses his snuggle buddy.
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Yeah that works for me!
Day Three:
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Which is more shocking, Striker showing compassion or sweet Pentious killing sweet Molly?! 0o0
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I haven't shown it, but Verosika has, like, constantly spared people. Of course, in this case we're grateful!
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Sad for Mimzy but Angel forcing Valentino to do his dirty work for him... Somewhat satisfying. (Also, guess Val repaid Verosika since he's one of the people she spared before.)
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One is very OOC... The other is not.
Day Four:
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Two rather clumsy deaths from two very powerful women. Ladies, you shall be missed.
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It's the dream team!
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Sneaky Mox.
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Hey, Val already spared her once. She shouldn't have pushed her luck (also should have killed him back when she had the chance).
Day Five:
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Cold, Husk.
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Yeah, still feels totally in character.
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Why do all my favs die by clumsy?! Also, poor Pentious.
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Poor guy probably heard Millie was still in it and couldn't bare for them to be the finale two :(
Day Six:
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Damn, that feels like such an anti-climatic ending! XD
Aw well. We lost a lot of good people - and many bad ones - but in the end:
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sweetestpopcorn · 2 years ago
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Since i read the blacks and the greens, i don't like other fanfiction, your fanfic is so good, and your writing is pretty great i love the details and everything. You make me love daemyra 💕 they are soulmates. like harwin, laena? i don't know them 🙈.
i also like your opinions and ideas, so please can you share some headcanons about viserys ii the mvp
Hi there sweet Anon,
Awww 🥰 that is too kind! Thank you so much for your beyond lovely words!!!!! They really touched my heart.
So some headcanons about Viserys... I will give some but a lot is just things I already used in my fanfiction. In any case, I will start from hcs I used both from my fic but I also think were true in canon and then I will give some canon-only headcanons X'D
Both:
This is actually semi-canon imho -> Viserys II was extremely similar to Daemon to the point he had almost nothing from Rhaenyra except his mouth that was also slightly petulant. Don't take my word for it btw XD Daemon and Viserys II by Simon and Amok (respectively) - look me in the eye and tell me that Viserys II doesn't look like an older Daemon, I f_cking dare y'all!
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He had curly hair as a child, perfect silver-gold ringlets but as it grew he lost the curls and it just became wavy. This is also semi-canon btw based on how Douglas drew Viserys II in Fire and Blood 🥰
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He had Daemon's pale lilac eyes and his nose was also more aquiline, again like Daemon's, and less perfect than Rhaenyra's.
He was Rhaenyra's easiest pregnancy and birth.
Like his mama - and this is canon - he was very precocious. By age 4 he could read and write.
Like Daemon he had a talent for music and singing. He was also a very good dancer.
Like all of his siblings he learned High-Valyrian before he learned the Common Tongue. He was also the first to learn how to speak and the youngest saying his first words.
He was King Viserys's favourite grandson because he had been named for him.
He wore a lot of rings like Rhaenyra, and as he grew he too started to turn them around when he was nervous.
When he was a young child, he would tug at his ringlets when he was nervous and try to hide behind them.
His favourite colours were purple and maroon -> like Rhaenyra's.
He could always tell when someone was lying (he got that from Daemon) and he was good at pressing and questioning people.
Him and Aegon would often sleep on the same bed.
People would joke that they were as close as Daemon and Rhaenyra, and that if one of them was a girl they would have married.
Though Viserys was younger than Aegon, he was usually the one who led the plays and came up with ideas.
Him and Aegon liked to call Daemon "uncle" as a joke.
Like Rhaenyra he loved sweets and good food.
He had a very good sense of humour and could make anyone laugh.
People would often comment he was as charming as his mother. Canon only:
He had a special bond with Jace because they were they were the only ones who had curly hair. Jace used to joke that only Viserys knew his pain.
He would reminisce about his parents with Aegon III. They only spoke about them with each other and no one else.
Daena and Rhaena made him uncomfortable because of how much they looked like Rhaenyra, especially their eyes that were a bright purple like his mother's had been.
When Dark Sister was recovered, Viserys II would carry her.
His brother Aegon's death made him even more stern. He would seldom smile afterwards.
In a moment of pure rage he compared Aegon IV to his uncle Aegon II, allowing only that Aegon IV was more handsome and could at least pretend to be charming. Aegon IV never forgave him since he regarded himself as another Prince Daemon.
He had no patience for Aemon and Naerys's piety as he himself was not a fervent follower of the Seven and distrusted most septons.
I think this is quite a lot XD so I will leave it at that. Hope you like it, Anon <3 and thank you again.
PS: I am super late with the update but I will pick that up today.
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veyette · 16 days ago
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Hi veyette!! How are you?? Haven't seen you in a while! I'm going around leaving a few asks to people hehe rn
What duo or character from the dsmp do you think gets underused for stories?? Like what person deserves to have bigger roles in stories and get appreciated more??
I wish you a lovely day :D!
Hi ! Yes indeed it's been a while, glad to know you're well :D Congrats on the dsmpfairytale art and the Dreblr Gen Big Bang, it was really good works (if a reader likes c!rivalsduo and zombie apocalypse, go for it !) (It isn't shameless promotion if it's the truth)
Nice quick answers :
C!antfrost -> everyone forgets that poor guy and his relation with the Egg and c!Bbh and the prison (for the character)
C!sapnap and c!tommy's duo -> a lot of untapped in potential especially knowing how powerful c!sapnap can be and how much of a hold on c!dream he can have
C!hbomb should appear in more stories and be appreciated more for his hilarious apparitions
I typed way more though ahah and then realized it was getting long and needlessly complicated so you can just stop at my quick answers if you want.
I typed a whole text about why c!sapnap should be used more, but if you want an honnest opinion about which characters are underused as a whole in dsmp fanfictions you'll need to scroll down x)
-> I'd say maybe c!Sapnap is criminally underused, as well as any duo with him ? He is often put in fanfictions but few fics concentrate on him when his character has so much potential considering all the links he has with almost every character :
c!Karlnapity's fiance which impacted both the time travel and Las Nevadas
c!stagedduo (both c!dream and c!punz being close friends of his especially when you take in the fact they fought the first few times together)
c!skephalo's "son" and connection to the Egg lore if he so wanted
XD itself and the book of death
a physically strong character with relatively straight morales (enough that c!technoblade and c!dream would have to count on fighting him)
A turn-back time story with him would go crazy for exemple because we know he feels enough of a sense of responsibilities at the end of the dsmp to try to involve himself and put his strength to use.
C!sapnap biggest weakness has always been I believe the fact he doesn't think very far and he is easily redirected by people even slightly more cunning : by going back into the past, he gets rid of the disadvantage of constantly lagging behind others's thoughts and can plan in advance (could want to protect c!Karl, keep c!quackity close, check for c!george (may even recognize XD when he starts involving himself), can protect L'Manberg better during Doomsday and intervene for c!tommy (still lost on what c!sapnap would plan to do with c!dream if he came back in time because he isn't as bull headed than c!sam in that regard, but he is also very hurt and betrayed and believing c!dream can't change), involve himself early in the Egg saga to keep c!skephalo away...)
As I said, a lot of connections that could explored in various and interesting ways, especially taking into account how simple and yet complex c!sapnap is. He doesn't think very far as I said, focused on the present, can be easily misdirected (a lot of people around him just speak half-truth to him) and is himself quite the problem makers : but sometimes he can be very aware of problems and know where the problem is (also more importantly : when he decides to solve the problem, he does). He is motivated, always willing to go farther and to act on what he thinks
So yes, c!sapnap is very interesting and should be explored in fanfiction more
BUT AS A WHOLE :
I don't think there's any character which is underused in dsmp stories (sorry!).
The DSMP is built around several people, sure, so when fanartists (writers included) write their POV/AU, the character chosen gets to shine and the others usually are used as props to help them in the same way they helped in the DSMP.
But the thing is, for me, people rarely helped each others out ?
(Be it due to selfishness, unawareness or powerlessness, often a mix of 3 - a reason why I also love dsmp : irl too you need to express when you need help, people can't read your mind and will have their own stuff to care about)
More often than not, people being very present in each other stories is things added by fanartists are conversations and actions they wish the characters had had because it didn't actually happen : admission of hurt and people going into defense mode for the poor guy, some character finally exploding and going all Villain to get his revenge, feelings of love and affection being declared and then hugging it out (SFW version)...
When a fanartist pick a character, they create links and actions from characters that never did in the lore, involving them more ! So by definition, no character feels "left out", even if you'd wish an artist focused more on the help other characters could have given, had they been chosen by the author to give that help
I just said to give c!sapnap a bigger role but the thing is : c!sapnap doesn't notice things around him and when he does, doesn't really know how to help. Unless the author gives him a reason too, he won't ever involve himself with the Egg business, he won't repair his relation with c!quackity, he won't be able to help c!karl and won't notice what's wrong with c!george.
I could do this for a lot of dsmp characters : if they didn't help in the lore, unless the author wish to, they have no reason to do it in fiction and as such can't, by definition, be underused.
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snexy-the-snail · 8 months ago
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Man it's been a while since I've been in this askbox. Shame.
Anyway, I'm looking at you with my big ol eyes I know nothing about PJO but I am incredibly invested in this thing you have going on here so... Triton and/or Percy vibes, perhaps?
Okay but like in your defense I have weird hours and peace out constantly XD 
Having said that- this is legit the first ‘fandom’ I was in, I’m talking about writing little fiction in my notebooks, reading fanfiction Obsessively like I mean to the point where my parents had to turn the internet off (did not stop me) I legit lost my shit when I realized that I could roleplay these characters instead of creating people- it was great. 
Also!!! Yes, long time!!!! It’s good to be back and see you <3 
BUT!!! YESS Vibes!! 
Percy straight up cannot get used to this whole thing at first, mostly because half the time like I’ve mentioned he gets yoinked when he’s sleeping because Triton’s solves the whole nightmare situation (sure technically Percy just needs to be near a God but plot) So when it’s done when he’s conscious he straight up cannot sit still. He doesn't know if he should curl up or stretch out, when he can move, if he should move, what conversations he should have etc. 
This only gets more awkward when Triton starts being more affectionate because Percy has no idea why at first. Like yes,, he had a vague sense of what’s happening when he’s asleep but not to the point where he realizes that Triton’s tucking him away.  
It’s not until a little royal diplomat party that he’s way over his head in that it comes out what’s been happening during his visits to Atlantis. Percy’s just stressed to the nines because Mers keeps coming up to him to fawn over him and of course thanks to being human they’re all towering over him. Triton suggests tucking Percy away and after a bit and reluctance he agrees.
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theroundbartable · 10 months ago
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Can I ask your top 10 fav fics ever (from any fandom, if you don't mind)?
Also, just curious, is there a story behind your name "theroundbartable "?
Haha^^
10 fics will be hard for me to do, since I'm very bad with names and I don't really.... Save any. I read, like, comment and move on.
Let's start with my name first. That's easier. Theroundbartable was a joke I made a couple years ago and I had it as the headline of my blog for a while when I was still Changelink23.
I'm not sure where it came from anymore... But I think it was kind of the basis for "connecting the dots". Which is a fanfiction I wrote that is about Gwaine and the knights making up stories about Merthur. It was their game to guess what Merlin was up to and gossip about Arthur's pining. And collectively, they'd make up the entire series on accident.
My idea then was that the knights gather in a bar, got really drunk and basically play DnD with the BBC Merlin storyline. So, the knights of the round table, but at a bar. And maybe that table was round. And maybe it was their regular seat and they called it the round bar table.
After Changelink outdid its purpose and I got really deep into the Merlin concepts, I decided my name should fit the theme. And what else am I doing here with you guys, other than exchange ideas about Merlin while half sounding on drugs? It's my idea of being part of this fandom, I think. All of us sitting at the round bar table and having fun with the series together.
Now, fanfics:
1. Dirty laundry by Gybslythe (Voltron)
It's just... It has sentimental value for me. The author put down the story because they were bullied, sadly. I just felt at home in that fanfiction because the places seemed so familiar to me and I caught the feeling. I could compare it with me visitung my godmother as a child and the described places were just the best moments of my entire childhood. Also the writing style is SOOO good! I mimicked it for a mock exam and that was my best English Exam during my A-levels.
2. Sadly I don't know the actual name of this one :/
Funnily enough, it was a Gravity falls fanfiction... And a Bill cipher x reader one at that, which is WILD that I ever read it. The Reader thing really repulses me. Lol. The thing is, it was very non intimate and the world building blew my mind. It started off with Bill realizing his existence and step by step, he'd give his knowledge to the one human that interested him and therefore lost his power. The reader, however, grew with the knowledge and in the end, wakes up as the entity Bill had been. Just, suddenly knowing she existed, no memories of ever being human. It was so well done and pulled at my philosophical brain, I built "Wired" off of it.
3. Not a story but a series...
Anything by CaffeinatedFlumadiddle. This is the series that made my Merlin writings what they are. I read these and they brought me SOOO much joy! I used to write really depressive stuff. Still do. But after reading these, I wanted to bring that joy, too. I really dug into my humor after that and it really changed how I see stories and even myself and became the foundation of what I focus on in dialogues.
4. From the grave to the cradle by larcluce
I admit it, I'm a bit biased for this one because I'm so proud of larluce for posting their first story after wanting ME to write it. As if I could have done it justice. It's so good for a first work and yeah... I'm very proud of them.
5. My soul has your claim, my soul is in flames
(Voltron) i'm currently reading that due to my online friend's suggestion and it's just... Maybe it's because I'm currently obsessed with it but it really is just that good. It's everything I want from a voltron fanfic :) obliviousness, pining, misunderstandings, and reassurance and Lance's death reveal. Like... Yeah. I'm a sucker for this story.
...
There are probably a lot more on my list but I'm REALLY bad at remembering stuff XD I remember when I stumble on them. I just listed the ones that are at the top of my head. Sorry it's not a full ten :/ I actually write more than I read too. When I start reading, my mind gets ideas and then I have to write them down and I somehow rarely finish fics over 100k words.
BuT wRiTinG tHEm iS fInE.
By the way, I haven't read "like the cycle of the year" yet. It's been on my list for a while but I haven't gotten around to it. I know it's a fandom favorite. But maybe that's what's putting me off. It'll probably make me feel inadequate after reading it and comparing it to my stuff and then I'll feel bad about my writing. Which would by both oddly motivating and off putting, lol.
As a little bonus, I'll just say what I'm currently working on/planning to work on for now.
1. second chances (Drarry)
I've been writing on that one for over a year. Which is the longest I ever spend on a fic and also the longest fic I've ever worked on in total and also the one I most edited. I'm writing it for my girlfriend. I feel like I'm getting closer to the end and I will post it once it's finished.
Jkr sucks, by the way. She'd probably hate the story which satisfies me greatly.
It's a time travel au, obviously, in which Drarry was a muggle therapist after the war. The magical world doesn't respond well to the idea of therapy but that's not Draco's concern even though it should be. He just wants to atone for his sins. Being thrown back in time gives him that chance... But it also awakens deep traumatic issues while he struggles to help the good side and betray his parents and friends in the meantime. It's very analytical of his character and he suffers a lot and it's a lot of fun to do.
2. Karak'nirir- the goddess of creation (Voltron)
A Lance centric Voltron fanfic in which he is gifted the power of a goddess. I'm trying to get back into world building and well... I just really love Lance XD
3. The clockroom (BBC Merlin)
... It's on hiatus... Again. It's so hard to find the time to work on it. But I will... At some point. Probably. I hate unfinished business.
4. ... I'll probably focus on the Merthur marriage concept next. In which Arthur tries to raise Merlin's status and has Merlin learn magic in order to defeat Emrys. Cause then Merlin would be druid king and they can get married XD i want to apply some stuff I'm currently learning through "my soul has your claim" and maybe that will change how I write in the long run, too.
5. .... I should be working on a book that's publishable. Maybe feedback from professional book sellers will help me improve my work also.
By the way... Having 4 wips kills my brain. I hate it. One fic at a time. That's how I work best. It's too much for me. I'm dying. I have no ideas how other people do it.
Anyway.
Thank you for the question, anon ^^ I hope I answered it well enough XD
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