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Thanks for the tag @courfee
1. Historical models of the solar system
2. Gunwale on sloop
3. Sloop anchoring system
4. Historical images from Kings Lynn
5. Birkenhead
6. Pirate glossary
7. Height you can jump into water and survive
8. Queen Anne pistol
9. Baroque dances
10. Parapets on estates
11. Terms of endearment in 1600s
12. Dinner parties in the 1600s
#tag game#idk who to tag#fanfiction#dude quiz me now on how to load and clean a queen anne flintlock#and about how anchors work#and historically accurate clothing#and dances#and dinner parties#and all the damn unspoken social rules they had back then#i could infodump for hours now#the valkyrie gains a flutter-mouse
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thinking about that theory where peter parker is the mcu's anchor being. and like. the possibilities of it. imagine learning your entire universe's anchor being, the person who pretty much controls the fate of the universe, is some guy who just doesn't exist??? not even dropped off the face of the earth, but there is no proof of this person even existing in the first place???? and maybe strange or the fantastic four or whoever feels responsible for/is tasked with finding and protecting this anchor being but that's kinda hard to do when you have Absolutely Nothing to go off of.
or alternatively, peter himself learning that the entire universe is basically relying on him staying alive, and he already has a lot on his shoulders but this??? having lost everything and everyone and now learning that the weight of the world is literally on his shoulders and fuck!!! he just wanted to be a friendly neighborhood spider-man but that's parker luck for you!!
and like. there's so many ways to take it and i haven't seen anyone considering this and guys. guys. consider it. take it and run with it or what have you. fuck it and throw doctor doom in the mix for the irondad girlies because surely that will be fun.
and i know i know the theory doesn't fully go hand in hand with the mcu cannon but. fuck the cannon. let me scream into the void about this. let me shove it in your faces and hope someone does something with it. let me have my silly where's waldo peter parker anchor being au.
#ela posts!#sorry about that!!#i spent so long just sitting on my couch and it got me thinking#i don't wanna hear how “this can't work” let me have fun!#mcu#anchor being#spider-man#peter parker#mcu au#spider-man au#marvel cinematic universe#marvel#marvel au#kinda?#ela word vomits!#peter parker anchor being#mcu anchor being#irondad#like... a dash of irondad mention#doctor strange#fantastic four#spider-son#irondad and spiderson#irondad and spider son#especially that theory that rdj doom is a tony variant like#doctor doom#peter parker whump#mcu fic idea#spider-man fic idea
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ships and the circumstances in which they do and don't work in
#thinking about. okay so i ship naezono right. I ship it a lot bc they'd break up#(in a nondangan au imo bc in canon maizono was willing to frame naegi for her murder to see her friends)#so the fact it came up in the second game !!! bc Naegi remembered Maizono !!!!! for saving him !!!!!!#truly a product of their circumstances ship. and i love it#(looks at naegi remembering maizono. looks at venti remembering bard. looks at hinata remembering komaeda. boy do I have a ship type)#anyway that is to say dr2 canon? hinata/nanami is so good and sweet#but it is also a product of their circumstances ship to me. a nanami supports hinata and hinata shows nanami another world ship#nanami bless her i love her is an emotional support anchor to hinata kinda ship#which serves her purpose honestly! fitting#but in terms of understanding hinata? no one does that as well as komaeda#and yet !!! dr2 canon bc they understand each other so well that's why they fall apart so badly after chapter 1#product of their circumstances *non*ship. they could be such a good ship except they're not because of their circumstances#except it also makes them better at understanding each other bc if it wasn't for that chapter 1 reveal. the ftes. hinata would also never#have known how deep komaeda's issues go. which is necessary bc hinata's issues go basically just as deep in order to become izuru#insane. what a relationship. they're so similar they fall apart so badly bc of their circumstances#yet dr2 is also a story about facing the future from the past. which means post canon if komaeda can get his issues sorted out#komahina would be such a deeper and more meaningful ship to hinata than nanami/hinata by virtue of komaeda understanding hinata#in ways nanami would struggle to. and yet it's not in canon bc canon happens !!!! making nanami the better canon ship for hinata#so yeah. wow. circumstances and how they shape relationships. (thinks also about animorphs how cassie/jake stopped working after the war#rachel/marco is a thing only non-war. tobias/rachel majorly worked ONLY because of the war)#dr talk#sure sure sure
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10. tell me about an insecurity you overcame.
It's been a while since I started freelancing for fun and profit, but the beginning of that journey is still a pretty big deal to me.
I'd previously worked at an agency for nearly three years, so I knew how to do client-based work, but I knew nothing about business development (or billing, or taxes, or client management, or admin).
And, for those I didn't know back in 2017, I started down that whole road in the first place after getting very unexpectedly and unceremoniously fired after like four months on the job. It was never clear exactly why, but I'd thought things had been going well, and that was a pretty gutting Thursday afternoon.
I'd also just gone through a job search, so I knew there weren't many positions available in the region that would be a fit—and that the most recent thing that had seemed to be a great fit had, uh, not been. (This was before remote/hybrid work was a real norm, even though my agency job had functionally been hybrid and taught me to work effectively as such.)
But when I'd gone through that previous job search, a couple of people I spoke with had mentioned maybe needing some freelance capacity down the road, and perhaps I should get in touch once I got settled in the job if I was interested. So I reached out to them, without mentioning the rest, thinking I could at least bridge the gap while I figured out what the fuck to do. Both had solid projects for me where I learned a bunch quickly, made some money, and was excited for more.
And then it just kind of made sense to keep seeing about those kinds of opportunities—both because I liked the client-based work and flexibility, but also because it quickly became apparent that it'd be harder for any one person or institution to fuck me over in the same way.
Plus, one of the people who needed a subcontractor turned out to be a great mentor and reference; I don't think I ever told him quite why I'd decided to go all-in on freelancing full-time, but I have thanked him repeatedly for some truly foundational early guidance as well as a couple of projects he helped set me up with. He's semi-retired now but I'm still using some of those templates!
Anyway, I networked my way into a couple of additional early projects and finished 2017 with about the same overall income for the year that I had had in my agency job for 2016. (Not the fuck-them one, the one I got laid off from because, well, that was a bad end-of-year for anyone working in Democratic politics, much like this one.)
And the rest is history: I've been self-employed for about 7.5 years now and, while the constant hustle and inconstant income/workload have their own challenges, I think I've landed in a pretty secure (emotionally/professionally) place about the whole enterprise.
#ask me ask me ask me#stpauligirl#about me meme#freelancing for fun and profit#having been let go from full-time work twice in six months i can say that the agency people were INFINITELY kinder#i wasn't the only one in that situation and they gave us nearly a month heads-up plus an extra month of health insurance#it turned out our boss had forgone his own income for a few months to pay the rest of us that year#and like they just ran out of money and work to do. it wasn't shocking tbh.#and it had already been apparent that what work there was wasn't using any of the skills for which i'd been hired#and i *did* get to keep my electronics. that 2014 laptop lasted me until early 2023!#so anyway if you have to nix someone's job that's the way to do it#i've mostly lost touch with those folks but i don't have a bad word to say about them#whereas the fuck-them situation had me with a sour taste in my mouth around an entire state for like a year#incidentally not that long ago someone i'd worked closely with for YEARS at my anchor client was networking#and mentioned being put in touch with [x] who apparently had been working at the fuck-them place at the same time as me#should he let [x] know we'd been working together? did i want to pass along a hello or anything?#i very quietly said 'please don't.' and after a pause and because i liked and trusted THIS guy added#'he fired me out of nowhere for unclear reasons so i'd really rather not be involved further.'#i mention this because the guy at the anchor client had no idea. by my design.#but also because i've worked really hard to be confident and good at what i actually do and how i do it.#anyway fuck them
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Slowly, yet painfully realizing that we're probably the exact type of person that random fandom guys would miscast as a father.
#we speak#internet teenagers keep coming to us as like the only authority figure on hand who will treat them like people#and we're like... please... we don't want to be an authority figure... why do all of your parents suck so hard...#like we're willing to offer ourself as an anchor as well as we can because we've Been there and know how it feels#but like damn. who the fuck let your families suck this bad. how on earth have situations managed to produce enough of you#that we end up being cast as The Only Adult On Hand Willing To Listen And Talk Through Things MULTIPLE TIMES#and perhaps more importantly why are we the only person in random fandom discords who is willing to treat teenagers like People#weren't the rest of you also teenagers at some point??? don't you like remember how it feels like to not have agency for shit???#experiencing the “only person in the room who's willing to take a position” thing#despite there being like multiple other people in the room who should be WAY more qualified for this#how does this keep happening and more importantly why are we the only guy in the area who is doing anything to help#just to stress this point#we are trying our hardest to NOT be an authority figure because historically it ends terrible for us due to The Mental Health Issue#but somehow we are continually running into situations where we're the only guy willing to come up to plate#the syndromes. the issues. we are so fucking glad that this particular wave is coming now instead of A Few Years Ago#something something progress but also we dislike that we have to be the one handling these situations#because we shouldn't be considered a primary point of stability in anyone's life and the fact that we ARE a stable point to anyone is uhh#weird to think about. who let this happen. we're not old enough to be a parent#and we also find it very alarming that there are so many of you out there who are severely lacking in support#someone needs to work out a childcare arrangement system that doesn't suck because the current one really isn't doing it#while we're at it we can start overhauling the culture that landed us in being the only person willing to listen to people like ever#and maybe make it so we don't have to be a primary support because people are sufficiently supported already
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ideas beginning to solidify for post veilguard fic things
#veilguard spoilers#datv spoilers#da:v spoilers#dragon age spoilers#mostly flashes of scenes#as well as a sense of rythym for some of it#specifically I have this idea of Ellana and Solas cuddling in post-coital bliss#and wisps forming from their presence#they’re curious so Ellana discovered they’re there because they tickle her face and get caught in her hair#and solas just looks at her in wonder#there’s also one where they’re all naked and cuddly#and solas just gets slammed with regret looking at her residual limb#and as they’re sitting there the fade reforms around them into the prison at haven#so then they’re working through his guilt about fully being willing to kill her to retrieve the anchor#and she has to go ‘please do not feel guilty about shit you did not actually do also everyone here wanted me dead you’re not special’#except softer than that#also the required ‘Ellana wipes the blood off his face in the aftermath’ for right after they enter the prison#they don’t have sex for a whiiiiiiiile though I think#it’s too new and raw and they both need to figure out how to Be together#before clothes start coming off#but the tensionnnnnnnnnnn#they’ve both waited 10 years and want it but they don’t want to push and honestly aren’t ready yet#but they’re here they’re holding each other and god it would be so easy to just fall into each other#do some therapy first though
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I’m supposed to be working on my outline right now.
Instead I am figuring out Prosaic Wonders Joel’s Patreon tiers & how many people are subbed to each one.
THIS IS NOT AT ALL PLOT RELEVANT.
I HAVE NO IDEA HOW THIS WOULD COME UP.
WHY AM I DOING THIS.
#Outline is up to ~13000 words#Probably about half done?#I have a feeling this fic is gonna be chonky#No idea how chonky.#But probably at least small chonk.#Just got distracted again by figuring out what model of iPod would be sold in 2018#The fic is technically set in 2018.#I guess.#It’s kinda time ambiguous but because of how my brain works I needed an anchor point to go off of.#Anyway.#I keep getting off task because I feel compelled to figure out minute details for ~*~character building~*~#LIke. I need to know what Joel’s custom ringtone for Lizzie on his phone is.#Will this ever come up? Probs not.#Do I however Need To Know? Yes I very very much do.#It’s /important/ to Joel so I need to know.#Retail Hell Joel spent /forever/ agonizing over this decision I ought to know what he decided#Okay time to watch Joel’s new SOS. For research.#verdant rambles#Retail Purgatory AU
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I was just going to write something silly and little and now I have 10 tabs open about ships and navigation. I've written 2 sentences
#girl help. idk how marine navigation works#how do u know where u ARE#YES i know about astrolabes and sextants and dead reckoning but like. how do u KNOW#like. astrolabes can get u lattitude??? but wh. i mean. i guess thats better than nothing??? but??#what if u lose track of time or speed or heading for an hour?? u just die???#i guess thats what a compass and an astrolabe is for but still?????????#guy who just found out navigation in antiquity was probably hard. clown behavior#i may be. stupid#dont get me STARTED on ship schematics#i get fore and aft sails are easier to manage than square sails especially with a skeleton crew. but like#those are usually used for small boats?? or like a sloop is a good type of rig for what i want but thats so SMALL#i need a ship that is meant to crew like 10ish people min. but CAN be operated. badly. by very very few#and then do small ships even have a below deck??? whadda hell#i dont know. anythinf#this started as 'what side is the anchor on for this type of ship'#the answer is the bow btw. if u were wondering#idk if the anchor ALWAYS goes at the bow bcause thats where it was on the ships i helped out on last summer. but those were TINY tiny#anyhway. i didnt claim to know things#what the fuck is a gaff rig
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#actual professionals#who make more money in a year than i may in my life#will look at you and say you dont Want a diagnosis#its admission that they dont understand or give an actual shit#some people simply have not suffered in such ways#and live like they never will#and that its because of some invisible virtue#so they think they can preach someone into being normal#like them#a phenomena i would think doctors would be taught about but#whatever#my favourite sentiment @ able bodied / mentally stable people is#that they should enjoy it while they lasts#and that i hope for them they find more kindness in their times of need#than they have offered to others#and actually saying that to someone is super fun cause#its like youre reminding them theyre mortal LOL#ok i accidentally put a poll in and i cant delete it so#thats why theres a poll#hi @ people who suffer#nothing will do you more good than being an ass about it#the best wording you can make use of is how your daily life is affected#your work life. your daily life. your ability to self care.#theres medical words for everything that makes your life suck#and they know it#but you have to insist its ruining your fucking life#because these people rarely see you at your worst#so hold the worst times in your HEART like an anchor#and dont let down until they understand you are SUFFERING#this is abt everything btw- medical and social issues alike. paint your picture say your words
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If you catch me doodling potential Morovich designs on the margins of my notes tomorrow during lecture, then no you did not.
#transmission from the captain#(i have a piece planned but i need to conceptualize everyone on gravity since i already have blue space)#(i've been trying to think about the morovich and chu yan dynamic too...by virtue of being captains they likely talk a lot)#(not exactly sure how to characterize morovich so far but looking back at the group vote...)#(what struck me with him was the familial language he used like referring to deterrence as a cradle)#(then he also referred to earth as a mother)#(not sure what to make of those yet because familial motifs are a thing throughout the trilogy but definitely something to think about)#(then one of the things that defined gravity prior to capture was the “spiritual anchor” of metaphorical parents)#(gravity gets compared to a child lost from their parents but blue space was deemed parentless wild children)#(that does give me something to work with at least but not sure how to integrate that into my characterization just yet)#(also. finally. art for the pinned will be soon. hopefully)
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Top 10 Ways Your Brain Tricks You Every Day (Cognitive Biases Explained!)
Have you ever wondered why you sometimes make choices that don’t quite make sense, or why you’re so sure about something even when the evidence isn’t fully there? Well, get ready for a super cool adventure into the secret world of your brain! Your brain is amazing, a true superstar that helps you learn, think, and explore. But just like even the best superheroes sometimes have a tiny weakness,…
#anchoring effect defined#avoid brain tricks#bandwagon effect psychology#brain illusions#brain power lessons#brain science for kids#common cognitive biases#confirmation bias explained#critical thinking for kids#critical thinking tips for students#decision-making errors#easy to understand cognitive biases#endowment effect explained#everyday brain errors#examples of cognitive biases#framing effect in daily life#funny brain tricks#hindsight bias explained#how the mind works#how to spot biases#how your mind plays tricks#human behavior#human psychology basics.#improve thinking skills#in-group bias#learning about biases#make smarter choices#mental shortcuts#mental traps#mind games
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NSFW— minors do not interact
cw— creampie
thinking abt Caleb’s big dick </3
you want to blame it on him, say it’s his fault and swear that he does it on purpose. but you know he’s not. he can’t help it that he’s so deliciously hung.
somehow he manages to tuck it into his pants in just the right way that leaves you wondering, but behind closed doors when the day is said and done it’s like he sets it loose. he walks around in his boxers or a baggy pair of pj pants, ones that barely contain the sizable bulge that tents under his waistband.
he’s not trying to seduce you but it works all the same.
you almost feel bad when he catches you ogling him. those pretty purple puppy dog eyes gaze down at you with a sinful innocence that makes you huff.
it’s thick and heavy. so so heavy it makes you drool just thinking about the feeling of it in your hands. it stands tall and proud and so pathetically hard for you. it’s pretty. so pretty in the way it seems to challenge you when it twitches and bobs for your attention.
he knows it’s big but he doesn’t know it’s big. he’s just been hauling it around with him all this time not knowing how full it’d make you. how you cry and push your palm against his abs as he humps in and out of you.
“too much too much!” you’d slur into the sheets and he wouldn’t know what to do. is his dick not supposed to be this big?? is he hurting you?? is it normal to feel every twitch and clench of your pussy from all sides like he is right now?? because it’s making him lose his damn mind.
“are you okay? d-does it hurt?” his voice is light but rough as if it was ripped from his diaphragm. the fingers that hold your waist tighten and dip into your skin as he forces himself to slow down.
you pant absentmindedly in response. your core burns violently in the best way possible. Caleb hits every spot all at once and each thrust stretches you out so good. his cock head kisses your g spot so firmly yet so tender, sending you spiraling into a filthy mess. he’s not even going as hard as you told him to and you’re about to cum all over him anyway.
“pips.” he calls. the bed dips beside your head as he leans over you, pressing a loving kiss to your temple and nuzzling into your cheek with his nose. your cunt hasn’t stopped trying to suck him in and he whines and whimpers into your neck in feeble resistance.
“i’m here. just—Caleb, you’re so biggg.” you drawl. “you give it to me so good can’t take it.”
he pulls away to look at you and his lips part to speak but the sexiest moan rips from his throat to interrupt him as you rut your hips back into him. his girthy length slides and catches on all the right ridges and you cry in ecstasy.
the coil in his abdomen suddenly snaps and he’s pumping the fattest of loads right into your womb and you feel it in your throat, the addicting heat swirls in your stomach and the gift keeps giving. it starts to spurt and leak, leaving a milky ring around the base of him, some spilling out to stain the sheets. ‘i’m sorry i’m sorry i’m sorry’ his lips brush the shell of your ear as he chants and his chest presses into your back to anchor you.
all you can hear is the deafening squelching of his seed getting fucked into you and his pitchy wails of your name.
no wonder he’s so big. he’s just so full of creamy white love for you can you feel it? you’ll take it all for him right? :(
#I’m a victim of big dick virgin Caleb propaganda#something about whiny nerdy dick sends me into heat#love and deepspace#lads#lads caleb#love and deepspace caleb#lnds caleb#caleb x reader#caleb love and deepspace#caleb x reader smut#caleb x mc#caleb smut
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#horoscopes are for the laughs bc I always focus on the people in front of me#at the end of the day idc what’s ur sign#actually two of the people I get along best @ work are two scorpios#but in general I dislike them or I’m v indifferent#these two are sweethearts tho#but sometimes it makes sense to dislike certain people#if I fuck heavy w you who cares lmfao#Virgo’s are fine so I’m surprised to see them in the disliked list#they’re quiet af#some are loud and love to party but these folks are always criticizing someone#alwayssss#that’s how I spot them#or kissing peoples asses and spreading gossip around#that’s Virgo energy lmao#many I’ve met are like this#or are just so quiet it feels awkward af to go up and talk to them#I talk to everyone#in high school college primary school I had and now I still have different friend groups and sometimes u go and hug everyone#and there’s 10 people#or 15 and everyone���s so different and I love to see people who are like me - they make everyone come together in beautiful ways lmao#I’m the anchor hahahaha#the last 5 sags I’ve met have been literal TODDLERS#bros and sistas in their 20s and 30s#I almost cringed#everyone has good things about them but cmon now 😂
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having a phobia is genuinely exhausting and I want to throttle everyone who's ever been annoying to me about it
#da#Couldn't get in my car bc there was a huge spider in front of the door#And like massive amounts of scared brain juice getting fired over something extremely commonplace and not harmful is very draining#Then people are all. But did u know they're more afraid of you than you are of them?? They're just sweet little bbies 😢🥺 u can't hate bugs#Actually I can and I can also hit you with a pipe when my day is derailed by One stinkbug#I Know they are Natural. I Know they are Important. I Know they're usually Harmless. Does that change Anything about my reaction?#No! Because you cannot reason your way out of a phobia!#That's how it fucking works. You dumbass. <- pls imagine that in a news anchor voice
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✨ HOW TO ACTUALLY START A BOOK

(no ✨vibes✨, just structure, stakes, and first-sentence sweat)
hello writer friends 💌 so you opened a doc. you sat down. you cracked your knuckles. maybe you even made a playlist or moodboard. and then… you stared at the blinking cursor like it personally insulted your entire bloodline.
here’s your intervention. this post is for when you want to write chapter one, but all you have is aesthetic, maybe a plot bunny, maybe a world idea, maybe nothing at all. here’s how to actually start a book, from structure to sentence one.
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🌶️ STEP 1: THE SPICE BASE ~ “WHAT’S CHANGING?”
start with this question:
what changes in the protagonist’s life in the first 5–10 pages?
doesn’t have to be earth-shattering. they could get a letter, lose a job, run late, break a rule, wake up hungover in the wrong house. what matters is disruption. the opening of your book should mark a shift. if their day starts normal, it shouldn’t end that way.
🏁 opening chapters are about motion. forward movement. tension. momentum. if nothing is changing, your story isn’t starting, you’re just doing a prequel.
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⚙️ STEP 2: THE CRUNCHY BITS - CHOOSE AN ENTRY POINT
there are 3 classic places to start a novel. each one works if you’re intentional:
The Day Everything Changes most popular. you drop us in right before or during the inciting incident. clean, fast, efficient.
pro: immediate stakes con: harder to sneak in worldbuilding or character grounding
The Calm Before the Storm starts slightly earlier. show the character’s “normal” life, then break it. useful if the change won’t make sense without context.
pro: space to introduce your character’s routine/flaws con: risky if it drags or feels like setup
The Aftermath drop us in after the big event and fill in gaps as we go. works well for thrillers, mysteries, or emotionally heavy plots.
pro: instant drama con: requires precision to avoid confusion
📝 pick one. commit. don’t blend them or you’ll write three intros at once and cry.
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🧠 STEP 3: CHARACTER FIRST, ALWAYS
readers don’t care about your setting, your magic system, or your cool mafia politics unless they’re anchored in someone.
in the first scene, we need to know:
what this person wants
what’s bothering them (externally or internally)
one trait they lead with (bold, anxious, calculating, naive, etc.)
that’s it. just one want, one tension, one vibe. no bios. no monologues. no “they weren’t like other girls” essays. put them in a situation and show how they act.
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⛓️ STEP 4: OPEN WITH FRICTION
first scenes should create questions, not answer them.
there should be tension between:
what the character wants vs. what they’re getting
what’s happening vs. what they expected
what’s being said vs. what’s being felt
you don’t need a gunshot or a car crash (unless you want one). you need conflict. tension = momentum = readers keep reading.
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✏️ STEP 5: WRITE THE FIRST SENTENCE - THEN IGNORE IT
okay. now you write it.
no pressure. you’re not tattooing it on your soul. this isn’t the final line on the final page. you just need something.
tricks that work:
start in the middle of an action
start with a contradiction
start with something unexpected, funny, or sharp
start with a small lie or a weird detail
💬 examples:
“The body was exactly where she’d left it - rude.” “He was already two hours late to his own kidnapping.” “There was blood on the welcome mat. Again.” “They said don’t open the door. She opened it anyway.”
once you’ve got it? keep going. don’t revise yet. don’t edit. just build momentum.
you can come back and make it ✨iconic✨ later.
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📦 BONUS: WHAT NOT TO DO IN YOUR OPENING
don’t start with a dream
don’t info-dump lore in paragraph one
don’t give me three pages of your OC making toast
don’t try to sound like a Victorian cryptid unless it’s on purpose
don’t introduce 7 named characters in one scene
don’t start with a quote unless you are 800% sure it slaps
be weird. be sharp. be specific. aim for interest, not perfection.
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🏁 TL;DR (but make it ✨useful✨)
something in your MC’s life should change immediately
pick a structural entry point and stick to it
give us a person, not a setting
friction = good
first lines are disposable, just make them interesting
and if you needed a sign to just start the damn book, this is it.
💌 love, -rin t.
P.S. I made a free mini eBook about the 5 biggest mistakes writers make in the first 10 pages 👀 you can grab it here for FREE:
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There’s just something extremely touching about watching Izutsumi work through a wide range of emotions when she sees Marcille cry for the first time.
She’s sleeping on Marcille’s lap when it happens—something she hadn’t willingly done since her human consciousness was subdued in the Golden Country.

Izutsumi was initially very embarrassed when she remembered showing Marcille such unbridled affection when her monster (cat) side had full control in Melini. But now, shortly after, she did it again without any fuss, seemingly over this embarrassment.
But when she notices Marcille crying—not crying expressive tears over a situation with low stakes, but tears of real sorrow and loss—Izutsumi physically recoils.


She reacts with the childlike fear and panic that one feels when someone they heavily rely on and trust (like a parent or teacher) shows vulnerability, doubt, or weakness. She lashes out, trying to use words of reproach to get Marcille to stop crying. Or, in childlike terms, to try to force Marcille’s pain go away.
When that doesn’t work, we see her physically struggle as she tries to sit by and wait it out. But Izutsumi can’t do it.


Marcille’s pain causes her so much intense distress that Izutsumi immediately offers physical affection as a response—something she has not done for anyone up to this point.

When Senshi told the party about his traumatic backstory, Izutsumi did not touch him. She did support him, tried to offer words of comfort, but she did not embrace him like the others did. Maybe she didn’t know how; maybe she didn’t have a proper example on what comforting someone looked like. But she saw all three of them reach for Senshi, she saw them hold him in their arms, and anchor him as he cried.
This is the first time another party member has cried out of sadness since that moment. It’s possible that she saw how the others helped Senshi, and maybe, subconsciously, she saw that it worked. That it made him feel better.



She is clearly unused to it, and has her own rollercoaster of emotions as Marcille gratefully accepts the comfort Izutsumi is offering her. But it helps. It helps Marcille immediately, and Izutsumi knows this.

These acts of vulnerability are foreign to her, and thus make her feel uncomfortable, but she lets Marcille lean on her afterwards anyway. She wanted Marcille to be okay, wanted it so badly, that she accidentally overcame an emotional obstacle she never even knew she had.
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