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writing is hard. English is hard. trying to remember the rules is hard. make it descriptive but not too descriptive, watch out for head hopping, remember the paragraph rule, careful of floating head syndrome, mindful of repeating the action or starting each paragraph with a characters name (i am so guilty of that one) , watch out for action over use and don’t even get me started on the grammar, spelling and punctuation rules. i am guilty of run on sentences and using the wrong word, mistaking it for another word.
…but please. what is emotional hopping???
i take English and writing classes outside of my job. i was told to watch out for emotional hopping because i am doing it a lot. i use the words strongly, clear, obviously and immediately to often too.
ghaaaaaa writing is hard!!!! it is either ‘you are not writing enough description!’ or ‘description over load. cut it down.’
oh and i am guilty of floating head syndrome too.
maybe i am just a bad writer.
#rambling#my thoughts are too much#my thoughts#writing is hard#yes I don’t care#I have sent all of my AdamsApple stories in to my teacher#this includes the sex scenes#she has read them all and either crossed things of or told me to cut parts down#sooooo teach gets to read them first sort off#that’s why I edit a lot later#apparently I’m too emotional when writing#what does that even mean
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from this concept:
I now have a very cool, very soft, and entirely hand-made 2017 Louie plush !!!!!!
Very silly tail ⬇️
He has a completely functional pull-apart jacket zipper !!!
Also completely functional: the pockets 😼
And here is also a closeup on the little phone
He is made up almost entirely of fleece, all hand-sewn. His shirt and some of his eyes are felt (also the scar on his foot). He's stuffed with polyfill . He's weighed down with lentils 😭 His pattern is made custom by me :) I'm not sure exactly how long he took, but I'd guess some amount of months. Maybe 2, but maybe only a few weeks of collective actual work days
He does also have a dog toy type squeaker in him
#DuckTales#DuckTales 2017#Dt17#Does this count as fanart#DuckTales fanart#Dt17 fanart#Louie duck#Dt17 Louie#Errrrrmmm#Sewing#Hand sewing#Plushies#Guys idk how to tag sewing projects#His beak was genuinely a NIGHTMARE to pattern. It took like 4 collective days of trying#It is also sewn on like. Crooked. So so sorry#Scar on his foot (as mentioned in the concept) is a reference to glomtales#Specifically the scene where he's trying to climb out of the window and dt87 bot shoots him w a laser#Absurd decision. Anyway I just think it's sort of fun to include things like that#I would've given him little freckles but I don't have a thread that'd make them subtle enough and I hate drawing details on#Btw I originally had a cute golden zipper w green fabric around it. It was closed-bottomed but I still wanted to use it bc it was all I had#Then I sewed it on and cut it too short. Had to make a surprise trip to joann's to get a new one#I love fabric stores they're so interesting 2 me#He's like 10 inches tall btw. Give or take a little#I DO PLAN TO MAKE DEWEY AND HUEY probably soon if I don't have any more fun projects to get to
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can you change the ending?
#continuation under the cut!#will be busy for a while so i wanted to post this before i go ia ;-;#also really wanted to make this interactive and include more scenes bc that would be so cool but no time no time at all#the plot twist would have been no matter what you chose the ending wouldn't change (evil laughter)#kidding kidding i'd be first to cry#dead poets society#dps#dps edit#anderperry#neil perry#todd anderson#my posts
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oh god I found a secret third version of the linguini incident. on tubi naturally. I know what I'm doing this evening.
#it's the worst movie ever and it's also my main comfort movie#like david bowie stars in it and it's not labyrinth so you know it's gonna be bad#(he's actually a perfectly good actor to be clear he just had utterly baffling taste in terms of what movies he got involved in)#this one is labelled 'director's cut'#we'll see which scenes it does and doesn't include#maybe this one has all of them + the extra sound design that's in one of the versions#I can tell it's a third version and not one of the other two#because this one has a modified opening with overlaid text giving exposition#which is promising actually because this movie sorely needs all the exposition it can get
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Hey, you. Ranma blogger. How's the new ranma anime. Your answer will not make me watch it but it might make me think about watching more often which is almost the same thing.
It seems to be very pretty if nothing else.
Wanted to watch the newest episode before i replied just in case i hated it 😭
UMMMM.... hmmm. It is very pretty i agree. I am constantly flip flopping from hating to loving it ngl. When it's good its incredible and when it's bad i don't even wanna look at it 💀
I think the first episode was perfect, kuno's intro was okay, ryoga's intro was ass and i'll never forgive them for what they did to the scene where akane carries ranma home from tofu's, kodachi's was good, the ice skating arc was fantastic (outside of akane's weird lips that totally took me out of the moment....), and so far the shampoo arc is superior to the original
I think the pacing sucks ass for the first half and then it gets a lot better but they really needed an extra 5ish episodes to slow the fuck down. Like i could not tell you what dr tofu's personality is in the remake, he was barely there. We hardly spent any time on the fact akane's a tomboy to the point i've had new fans tell me "nooo don't call her that she's perfect the way she is!" (its... not an insult 😭)
I think the characterizations are way better, i think the animation is gorgeous, it's literally just the pacing that pisses me off sometimes lmao. I suppose i agree it's better than the original but like.... i think i'd want to flip between the original and the remake in a rewatch just to slow things the fuck down and not lose the moments the original had that i think made the show better
Also as much as everyone says the remake is "more faithful to the manga" it really has a lot of new scenes lmaoooo i'm not complaining i think they've all been great changes/additions but i do think it's funny. I've never been a manga purist
I guess my answer is..... it's very good. If it got anime of the year i'd desperately point at frieren and dungeon meshi but i'd understand. But 12 episodes is not enough time to let them truly shine and because of that i don't think it could replace what the original anime is to me, only supplement it
You'd probably like it if you watched it but if you've seen the old anime you'll also understand what i mean abt the lack of time to just breathe and get to know who these people are and why we should care about them. Like ranma is fully on board w being in love w akane from the start and while akane deserves that i don't think we have enough scenes of them just.... hanging out without any stakes to really get a handle on what it is ranma likes abt her so much other than Cute Girl Who Punches Hard and akane is so much more than that 😭
#also it should be noted i am in the minority here. most people (including old fans) LOVE the remake and think it leaves the og in the dust#i simply think it feels like a tiktok reel sometimes and i hate that w all my heart#i know the story is long as hell and i'm asking for it to be even longer#but like... i like the characters??? 😭 i don't wanna rush???#i want to see blorbo from my show!!! stop cutting blorbo down to get to the next action scene!!!
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when the slowburn makes the ship extra cute~~~
#kimikawaii this week for sure!!!!!! (has been saying that since july)#ik the nghy payoff will be ✨sweet✨ but it’s kinda funny how hw are slowburning nagisa’s role in the series as a whole#mans has a grand total of 3 songs to date and only 1 has a cv ver#place your bets what do you think will come first? nghy duet or ariken duet#t h o u g h. ariken is also kind of a slowburn but we all knew they’d get together since ijiwaru release (shoutout to the og miku ver)#some say that ariken is still not canon in the novels to this very day#can’t believe we got arisa’s future career aspirations reveal before ariken canon in the novels smh#but i digress!!!!!!!!!!!! nagisa needs more action and attention!!!!!!#he did have kind of a ‘the bus came back’ moment with the izumo collab but we never saw his face again after that#(full cast merch doesnt count bc p. much everyone’s included in them except for the school nurse and kako)#so. all im saying is: slowburn nghy by all means. just dont slowburn nagisa’s character arc aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa#now that mona mania has cooled off (to a degree) and chizusweep has mellowed out (somewhat) it’s shiranami’s time to shine!!!!!!!!#y. yeah. ik it’s harder to market him bc he’s a literal average (albeit handsome) joe but that’s part of his charm!!!!!#i mean!!!!! he can cook!!!!! he stans ft4!!!!! he’s devoted to the girl he loves!!!!!! he’s a dreamboat!!!! what more could you ask for?#but. i do have to say that nghy developments have been kinda awkwardly handled as a whole… esp with heroine ikusei#i think nagisa should’ve been introduced in heroiku or something… since he was planned from the start of hiyori’s development…#maybe they were trying to pull a ‘2nd love wins’ kinda parallel with kthn? but the ascana retcon made everything awkward huh…#i think it could’ve worked out in the mv-verse. like if they’d placed heroika+sukiuso after the fight+make up in herotaru#so the timeline would go smoothly from heroiku -> herotaru -> heroika#with hiyo realising that she’d be better off focusing on work and track after the asuka debacle + chizu fight#like a ‘forget romance!!! i gotta work hard and run hard!!! omg wait nagisa wdym you love me???’ kinda thing#but the [redacted] anime p much cut + pasted the asuka arc with the nagisa visit and. hm.#is this just an excuse to blame the clumsy handling of the nghy arc on the [redacted] anime? m… maybe…?#but it all still could’ve kinda worked out if they’d shifted the timelines around a little. y’know. since sukiuso mv has nagisa visit in oct#idk i think having hiyo learn how to doll herself up from lxl for her first crush (asuka)#and then using what she learned to yassify herself to meet up with nagisa would’ve been neater?#like a ‘hey look nagisa :) i applied what i learned from my pals :)’ kinda thing#or maybe chizu and juri could’ve helped her with the nagisa dressup scene post-herotaru fight… but i digress!!!!!!#hmmmmmmmmmm… well. this has gone way off topic… anyways nghy canon and cute that’s all byeeee#the dude from gamushara
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Gayass fox
#sonic prime#sonine#nine the fox#miles nine prower#nine sonic prime#sonic the hedgehog#sonic prime s3#sonic prime season 3#sonic prime s3 spoilers#sonic prime season 3 spoilers#The fox and his smirks man#Not to mention all the times he looks at or thinks about Sonic and does that soft smile#There are so many scenes that live in my head rent free I couldn't include in this post#Nine's smiles and 'f-friend?' when Sonic calls him a true friend#And the amount of smiles those two share I also couldn't include#Ough and the scene where Sonic gives Nine a high five the first time#And that high five gif I had to cut down. I originally wanted to include their reactions of the chaos council entering the room cause it#makes them look like they were caught in the act#I love this fox so much🥺💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
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why do youtubers feel so comfortable cutting clips from other people's videos?? without asking and without crediting or linking the original videos and now a watermark with their channel name is lingering over a clip that I recorded and uploaded I find it especially rude when somebody has 68 thousand subscribers and they take a clip from a person who has 300 subscribers... and the viewers on these big channels think that the uploader recorded everything themselves because they even watermark it with their own channel name if you want to make a video that shows multiple scenes from a video game, record those scenes yourself, don't just download another person's vid and cut the part you want into your video... I also had to record it or you know... maybe ask permission and credit the original uploader and link their video or their channel
#I am so fucking tempted to comment on the video telling them they should have asked for permission#but I know they would probably just brush it off or delete my comment entirely#or their audience would attack me because it's just a short clip they included#the watermark is truly the cherry on top. wants to protect their own vid that is cut together from other people's vids#(I assume... because if they took my clip they probably took others as well)#but they think it's fine to take another person's clip if that uploader is a small channel and doesn't have a watermark?#bg3#bg3 mine#youtube#video#annoying#my post#my posts#baldur's gate 3#text post#textposts#this isn't the first time it happened either#but at least the other person bothered to name the channels he took the clip from.not that it makes it much better when he should have aske#and it's not like anyone is going to look up the channel when the original video is not linked instead it's just a short name on screen#but now I almost appreciate that person... at least he didn't try to pretend to his audience that he recorded all of the scenes himself
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would you ever consider writing a part 2 to lost in translation ,it was amazing!
lost in translation is one of my longest fics to date, and it was honestly cut up MUUUCH more than what was published (~30k words with at least four more scenes pre-confession lol). i have some writing that explores what it's like when they start dating but it's not as developed! tl;dr a part two isn't super likely, but drabbles/one-shots set in the same verse might be ´・ᴗ・` thank you for reading and enjoying!
#( cut scenes include: a concert + an eavesdropping @ reader's apt + a horror movie & platonic cuddling... )#( ... terrible miscomm at a party + the original confession is set at a gose filming at jeju LOL )#( i culled it because i was pressed for time but i like to think it survived without all the unnecessary fluff )#( and dragging ! )#୨ৎ you've got mail .ᐟ
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i agree that theres zionist propaganda in the knuckles show and that it should be called out. but am i the only one who thinks that one big post about it going around (the one that sjust a bunch of screenshots with no elaboration or anything and has like 15k notes) is not doing the best job at accurately conveying whats going on in the scene or what the problem is when it comes to the content of the show itself. at least not to people who dont know what happens already. like im not accusing the op of trying to confuse people on purpose or anything its just that like i said the post doesnt really present the scene accurately and is missing a lot of context and the post in question is probably the only thing a lot of people are seeing about this when its not a very good source of information
#like for example. the scene where israel is mentioned is wade's mom being praised and portrayed as cool and badass#for knowing/teaching idf fighting technique. which . yeah. thats very questionable#but the post completely cuts all that out and just takes the screenshot of israel being mentioned and nothing else ?#even though including full context of that moment would have helped prove the point a lot better than just showing that one screenshot?#and then they placed the israel mention next to a completely separate unrelated conversation that happened a few minutes before that#making it look like its all one convo. its just presented very weirdly in general and probably confusing a lot of people on whatsgoing on#also while we're on the subject: i know i talked about the show a little bit after watching it (pirated)#without mentioning this stuff. this wasnt because i was ignoring it on purpose its because i genuinely didnt notice it at first#theres only one direct israel namedrop in the show and i didnt notice it until it was pointed out to me after id seen it#because i was watching without subtitles and didnt pick up on it . i cannot stress enough that i wasnt ignoring it on purpose#ok thats all
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Con O'Neill as Joe Brierley in Ordinary Lies (2016) ↳ Episode 2x01, Joe - Version 2, Part 1
(Remaining screenshots below cut)
Version 1 Version 2, Part 2 Version 2, Best Stand-Alone Shots
#con o'neill#ordinary lies (2016)#joe brierley#joel fry#still one of my favorites that con has been in#but I didn't realize that the version I'd found to make version 1 was missing scenes#version 1 is missing about 10 minutes of scenes#all the scenes with joe being a good dad were cut from the first version I found too#so I remade my compilation to include the new scenes#and the higher quality copy as well
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Prefacing this by saying I'm a gentile and would be interest in hearing Jewish fans' thoughts on this
I was thinking about that moment in Spiderverse where Peter gets married and I was wondering why more adapted versions of Magneto don't reference him being Jewish in multiple ways and not SOLELY on his trauma as a Holocaust victim. It's a core part of his character but it's also the only time him being Jewish is ever referenced in these adaptations, and I'm wondering if the writers of these versions of him just don't feel like bringing up that he's Jewish in any other way aside from his internment in the Holocaust.
#im not saying he has to constantly be doing stereotypical Jewish things but#ok imagine if Storm being Kenyan was only ever referenced in one specific way and nowhere else#i feel like if you can cut a single scene out and suddenly theres no indication that Erik is Jewish#or if you covered up his number tattoo and theres no other way that the audience can infer hes Jewish#then maybe you should include it in multiple ways#like in the comics even if you for whatever reason never saw a panel of Kitty with her star of david necklace#she still talks about celebrating Passover and Hanukkah with her folks and shes still portrayed as Jewish in multiple ways#a lot of Magneto adaptations either dont bring it up at all or they only bring it up when showing his past#again im not jewish but its just a stray thought i had. if im out of line feel free to hmu in dms or something
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am i the only one who feels like alex(the world ender guy) was kind of a missed oportunity in vide noir? like, he was set up by johnnie to be a badass gang leader just for him to never even appear in the end, we just got a close up to his face scar
i feel like buck's encounter with the psychic would've been way more powerful if it was alex instead. its implied that johnnie and moonbeam had a relationship ig, but its barely even hinted at, and he never even mentions her. but with johnnie and alex, johnnie actually mentions him and speaks highly of his brother, and says alex will help buck if he sees the red cloth that belonged to johnnie
the fact that all that build up led to buck not even TALKING to alex kinda irks me. imagine how much better the payoff would be if alex had received the cloth instead of moonbeam? if we had seen his reaction to johnnie's death? if he would've helped buck like johnnie said he would? if we saw what johnnie implied alex would do to the guys who black brained his brother? idk man i think we were robbed
im new to the fanbase, so im gonna be very embarassed if this is a topic that already came up here LOLL but i still wanted to get it off my chest💀sry if this ask is messy, i suck at writing down my thoughts lmao
No I gotta agree on that. Like I LOVED seeing Moonbeam and getting know her as her and having all this new information about her (her being part of the World Enders is still wild to me and I love it) and it’s a good scene and all, but I’m still confused as to why they built up Alex so much, especially since this is the first time we’re hearing about him, and he never even got the chance to speak. If it were Dale I’d be a bit more understanding as we know him already (tho not by much cause I would have loved to see more of Dale). But it’s Alex, whose not only the leader of the World Enders but also Johnnie’s (and Dale’s) brother. I would’ve have loved to, you know, actually meet the guy. Especially with how much build up he got. And I GET IT Lord Huron’s lore is meant to be weird and vague and hard to pin down but like. Didn’t need to tease me like that come on
The only reason I could think of was maybe they needed to get Buck on his own again? Like having this the beginning of a war between the World Enders and Z’Oieasu shown or having Buck work with them consistently might have thrown off the tone. It is supposed to be Buck’s story and his own descent into madness. The whole album has this isolated vibe to me, like being alone in a city of people Hard to get that when there’s other people around, especially a group as lively as the world enders. Or maybe they just wanted to include Moonbeam back into the story again lol
GOD I would have loved to see Moonbeam’s scene with Buck done with Alex. I can only imagine how that scene would’ve played out and his reaction to Johnnie’s death. Contrasting Buck’s scene with Johnnie with Alex’s own personality, the possible dynamics, the anger and grief that could arise…..ough
#thanks anon now you’ve given me the urge to write that scene. how am I supposed to do a character that doesn’t even have A SINGLE LINE /lh#I’m already struggling to characterize Dale how am I supposed to do Alex. why would you do this to me /lh#seriously tho I wish we got more of Alex. or anything or Alex tbh#I wanna know more about him#Alex Redmayne who are you…..#it’s also possible they were originally going to include a scene with him but it got cut/changed for whatever reason#tho honestly I think moonbeam was always gonna come back into the story in some sense due to the song#my own personal theory (thanks to the clip in POTU) is that Buck and Moonbeam were supposed to have something going on but it got cut#mostly cause the dynamic in the clip is way different from the one they’ve got in the movie#but idk I’m glad they didn’t force a romance at least. imo they didn’t really have romantic chemistry in that second scene. at all#whether that’s due to rewrites or just a decision to cut it I don’t know. I don’t think it would’ve fit the story anyway#i could be wrong tho so take my theorizing with a grain of salt#however it is very funny that one character with a love song that has all the hallmark’s of Buck’s writing isn’t probably done by him lol#esp since he’s got chemistry with the other characters. women hate him ghosts want him /j#dani speaks#ask#asks#lord huron
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I need you to see me
+ extra under the cut
#web weave#You can tell I had a normal one tonight#all I care about is parent and child relationships for ummmm no particular reason mind ur business#all jokes aside I really miss my dad and it’s been messing with me#extra I didn’t end up including after the cut#also a scene from supernatural again#yo#spn#Aftersun#Dean Winchester#Mary Winchester#fun home#ships that pass in the night#needing your parent to really see you
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How does somebody whose only shipped lesbian ships before become so obsessed with Erehisu?
Y'see, anon, it's a little something called "bisexuality"
#i actually watched aot becuz of yumihisu but then i read the manga and i slapped my head and said#'shit why did they cut off so many scenes of them together'#them being erehisu#and then ymir fritz dropped and THEN i listened to that Linked Horizon song where a baby wailed at the end#then im like yooooooo fcuking hell theyre future parents to this poor girl omggggg#honestly i stumbled into erehisu by my own becuz after reading the uprising arc in the manga i felt like i had to do the ship justice#just cuz how overlooked it was and how i realized that they probably had the better chemistry#the more i looked into their characterizations and parallels to each other#like them being burdened putting up a fake facade just for others and having to come to terms to it#as well as the way their family shaped them (carla frieda and freckled ymir are the goats)#it wasnt much back then BUT THEN i read apple and lamp theory#and its soooooooo fucking beautiful it just seared into my mind forever.#Enemies To Humanity is something so unbelievable yet fascinating to me as a dynamic but it all clicked the moment i put it in its context#i dont support whatever the fuck the alt-right part of the fandom has of it thats another ball game#i ship erehisu in the way i percieve it to be the most fitting to the mature themes of the story#its not the first 'straight' ship i liked but it IS the first ship where i think it's ultimately superior to others including the wlw ships#thats why im so obsessed with them
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puri
#niou masaharu#prince of tennis#tenipuri#puri#i wanted to make a compilation of all his 'puri's#realized the original run of the anime cut most of them out and he doesn't use any in any of his main matches which is weird#i know the anime butchered his first match but jeeze i forgot how dirty they did his character#still trying to hunt down the Best Games ova#original video i included some context for the scenes but it was too long for tumblr and youtube kept flagging the newer clips#a very short puri version#video
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