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2023 reads // twitter thread
Tears in the Water
NA contemporary slice of life romance about a competitive swimmer with anxiety at a sports university
they start seriously questioning their gender when they make some new friends and start dating a trans volleyball player
queer friend groups, aspec characters
#Tears in the Water#aroaessidhe 2023 reads#trans books#nonbinary books#asexual books#i enjoyed this overall!#a good slice of life with lots of gender feelings#a few nitpicks:#there were a lot of like….jumping STRAIGHT into 3 paragraph dialogue about feelings about gender or sexuality or anxiety with no breaks#which like isn’t inherently bad I just think there could have been more of a lead up/build a lot of the times to make it feel more like a na#natural conversation#(the occasional word-vomit-monologue is fine but this was like. all the time)#re: the aroace side character; he’s ace and questioning if he’s aro and we mostly see that through the lens of negativity;#or he’s talking about his feelings as if it’s a negative thing to the MC and the MC is like telling him he’s probably aro and it’s valid#I guess there is an important space for aros who don’t want to be aro coming to terms with it (and he is happier about it by the end!)#i just don’t relate lmao i’ve never wanted to be allo. lmao.#i think something felt just slightly off about how it was written and discussed? maybe more the fact that it was through the MCs eyes more t#than anything#and also shoved into one chapter rather than. spaced out a bit idk#(also I don’t understand knowing you’re ace but not really knowing anything about being aro? but i guess that is also probably something#people experience irl)#(anyway; not a ‘this is bad representation’ criticism just a ‘could have been slightly better’ one)
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My DTYIS took so long, that by the time I posted it, I felt like it didn’t really fit my style or skill level anymore so I thought “why not do it again?” SO HERE WE ARE
Third times the charm✨😎
Me rambling about all the little details:
For this one took a lot of inspiration from the wrathful aspect of the Bodhisattva of wisdom Mahakala (I did a research project on him a while ago and the iconography stuck with me). He was mostly prayed to to protect troops during wars and battles so I thought it fit well with Wukong and his warform. The five jewel ornaments in Wukongs hair are reference to Mahakala’s five skulls, which also represent the five wisdom‘s. The skullcap and knife of course reference the spread of wisdom and destruction of ignorance.
For what Wukong’s outfit I thought since he doesn’t necessarily need armor, it would be fun to reference opera! I did have to change the colors tho from his opera outfit to better mesh with the color scheme.
And for the last bit- the ruyi bang. For my redesign, I included lotus buds that bloom when wukong reaches enlightenment. But I wanted to continue having the staff change with along with him- so in place of the lotus buds, I decided to put Dragon Pearl for the time spent at Ao Guangs palace. Dragon pearls are usually flaming, and that also reminds me of the Buddhist mani, wish granting jewels (which can also be flaming).
#cw eyestrain#I do love me so good eyestrain#overall super happy with this!!#ofc I could nitpick a few things but imma stay positive#me opening the file to work on it: gets flashbanged by the colors#when it still had a white background it was genuinely hard to look at#might have strained my eyes ngl#ba dum tss#anyway this gets a thumbs up from me UwU#my art#sun Wukong#jttw#journey to the west#Warform wukong
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Yet another progress video on the submas Stardew Valley mod I’ve been working on with the help of the wonderful @xdoctorsparklex ! (She wrote the script and I coded it in! Thank you so much!!)
This would be their introduction event! Along with their own individual heart events, we’ll also have a main plot featuring the twins revitalizing the abandoned train station and more! ^^
EDIT: The second introduction event has been posted here!
#submas#pokemon#stardew valley#sdv mods#ingo#emmet#nobori#kudari#subway to stardew#subway to stardew terminal station#thylak art#A few minor nitpicks that I need to fix#Like the inconsistency with the e in pokemon#But the whole event is like 6 minutes long and I've had enough with trying to record things perfectly#Sorry if I click too fast/slow/etc. I've read this dialogue so much it's burned into my mind#I have no idea how fast a normal person would read it#ALSO INGO REFUSES TO ALIGN IN THE CENTER OF THE TILE TO MATCH WITH EMMET AND I CAN'T DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT#So he gets an uncomfortable handshake with Morris
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Doing an overall cleanup for all the chapters tonight so if you see any weird notifs or updates that's probably me goin through it all lol!
#🎙️serphiestalkshow#just proofreading and some tweaks + maybe a few changes and additions to dialogue#not any big changes! just small writer nitpicks lol
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Was listening to rabbit hole on repeat like an insane person and next thing I knew I doodled him
#my art#digital art#bittersweet sentence#na-hun bss#doodles#studio investigrave#< gonna use that for general tagging for everything on my blog actually#It was that and a mix of bubble pop electric and to my crush<3#also I used a new brush I made for this too if you cant tell :]#there's so little bss content on here which is kinda insane to me#especially of na-hun !!#I have a few nitpicks abt this but its ok bc doodles are doodles#I also um. did the sketch of this @ 2am last night so HSHCHSHF
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Ugh Johnny wouldn’t call you a bitch. And Y’all need to get help for your rape fantasies seriously
currently writing a soapgaz dubcon/noncon request where gaz takes your first kiss and doesn’t let you move away even when johnny is pulling your pants off and tongue fucking you 👍
#this ask is from a few days ago (when i got that nasty girl ask) so i’m 100% sure it’s from one of those blogs that was nitpicking#at this point i’m#putting a motion forth for anyone who gets asks like this to just answer with another dark fic headcanon etc#< that’s if you don’t just delete the asks. which i know i should. but i enjoy making them mad—#— by rubbing more dark fic in their face through the answers 👍
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my take on Edward and Lydia. The graphic novels pulling me back a little wont lie …
#taz balance#lydia edward taz#edward taz#lydia taz#whatever their tag is#idk about the accent colors but the skin tone hair is just always how i imagined them#i love the adaptation but theres a few choices i dislike like wonderland hvaing a clown theme instead of the gameshow feel#i like me a circus but the tv host personas just worked so much better for them also SORRY I hate the green skin so bad#i apologise to the green elf fans i cant stand it#also i have a vague memory of griffin saying they were dark elves that i probably made up but its just how ive always imagined them#also very minor nitpick wish the arc in the novel couldve had one more round so taako got to lose his beauty#its a minor nitpick just cause in the grand scheme of things its not very important and its brought up once#but that conversation with kravitz is so dear to me#tis whatever tho#is it obvious i like using tumblr tags a lot
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Right. So.
We need to Talk
I don't want any fights; I'm not here with the intention to start up fandom drama; From personal experience with a different fandom I won't elaborate on, that's the Last Thing I want to do
But
We need to address the Hall Monitoring for this Season
I understand from a vantage point that it's sometimes hard to understand the implications of a task and that CC's may interpret them in a slightly different way than intended. It's important to know when they succeed or fail a task, HOWEVER...!
We have to remember that they are also adults, that they're the ones making the entertainment here. We have to remember that the reason they're even doing this is because they want us viewers to have a good time and a good laugh. They're doing this for US
We gotta step back and remember that they are capable and can handle these kinds of situations themselves. It's not just the public stuff that we see uploaded that paints the whole picture here. They also have off camera interactions with each other during these sessions that don't come to light, and we, as the audience, have to TRUST them that they can keep themselves and each other accountable on these things.
They don't need 1K+ people daily on each life video to nitpick and/or clarify what they did differently than intended. They don't need 100+ people to say that they failed the task over and over, drowning the other 100+ comments talking about what their favorite part of the video was or how said video probably made their day. They Don't Need all of this Stress
They Don't Need Us Scrutinizing Every Move They Make In The Series
This series is amazing. The CC's are amazing. Please let's not stress them out with all of the constant nit-picking. They're people too. They have feelings as well. Let's try and remember the boundaries and respect them.
Thank you. If you read through this whole thing, at the least consider it. Also, don't yell or start fights with others doing the same thing, I'd like to keep "Start a Fandom War" uncrossed from my Life Accomplishments List/JK
#secret life smp#trafficblr#traffic smp#traffic series#trafficshipping#also like low-key#kinda worried that a few fans would try to take advantage of the nitpicking to try and give their fav cc a upper hand in winning this season#which would not bode well imo#the cc's can twist the rules just a bit as a treat#remember Dogwarts and the Boogey curse in Limited Life?
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The scene of Spice Up Your Life is going to live in my head rent free forever, and I am so glad villains are getting evil camp songs again in Doctor Who.
#doctor who#listen did the episode have few nitpicks? of course it did#but I had a GOOD TIME#and neil patrick harris was just so damn gooood#I HAVE MISSED VILLAINS LIKE THIS SO MUCH#GIVE ME MORE OF THESE VILLAINS#dw spoilers#the toymaker
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Me still being a little upset about the Karasuno v Nekoma match being turned into movie but crying too hard from how peak the movie is
#i was fr gigglin & kickin my feet and almost wanted to cry#haikyuu is one of the few series to have me on the verge of tears in public—i missed my boys so much and everything was so pretty#baby kenma and kuroo were such a delight omggggggg. nnnghngha#i can nitpick all i want but it'd be so wrong to dismiss the amount of love a group of people have for this series to be working on the fil#and it's clear as day how much love went into this movie's creation#i'm docking points for the censorship of daishou tho even tho i saw it coming—let him flip people off in peace#rambles#haikyuu#haikyuu movie#haikyuu the dumpster battle#anime
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guess who lost all self-control when entering a bookshop and bought the first 2 volumes of the orv manhwa??
i don't regret it, they're so pretty! and it feels nice to have a physical copy
#i wanted to wait for the novel translation but we still have no info...#the french translation is actually really good! correct name order and all#i have a few nitpicks but i'm very pleased overall#orv#omniscient reader's viewpoint#omniscient reader
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Glad to see everyone losing their minds over the tfone trailer on here because Instagram was making me lose hope.
#tfone#transformers#im excited!!#i have a few nitpicks but I'm def gonna go see it#i can understand if they wanted to play it safe a little
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The fandom: *collectively losing their mind over Kento Nanami this episode*
Me:
#jujutsu kaisen#jujutsu kaisen anime spoilers#haruta shigemo#the poor guy did NOT have a good time lmao#but he absolutely killed it (pun intended)#the ep wa so good... they reall did the manga justice#i only have a few teeny tiny nitpicks but i'll address them later in an ask i have yet to answer (i'm so sorry)#and really it's just me being an annoying manga fan#anyway. haruta <3
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on today's episode of "hey fuckass did you know that fic authors can see the fucking bookmarks you make for their fics"
#mine#me: 'hey on a whim lets look at the bookmarks on spider's thread and see if anyone's- oh.'#the inspo for that fic is like a few smoldering embers anyway & that lowkey feels like pouring a bucket of fucking water on it#bitch this isnt goodreads you don't need to tear a fic apart & nitpick it if you didn't vibe with it#you could just. idk. leave it the fuck alone and not SHIT on it#also just#''Jasper (like from SU?) doesn’t seem like a great bard bc he isnt saying anything interesting' my brother in christ his mouth was sewn shu#like. what do you THINK HE'S GOING TO SAY#they don't have fics of their own (just... hp fic bookmarks (some of which are equally critical)#which. just kinda shows even more how invalid their opinion is.#but. can't address them or anything but if youre seeing this fuck you#fic: the silence of the spider's thread#the witcher
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Some people think I go too easy on Ian's writing for Sonic. They think I'm biased. Well, no more! Here it is. Here's my big complaint with Ian's writing. Time for me to really tear into this motherfucker!!! Are you ready!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think he's been playing up Tails liking mint candy too much
It was kind of a cute detail when it first started popping up, like oh hey here's this obscure trivia factoid that's been mostly forgotten. Tails can have his favorite snack, like how Sonic famously loves chili dogs. Sure! Let's bring that back. But now it feels like there's a quota that has to be met for every Tails appearance. He always has to mention liking mint candy, or mint flavored things. Same with Knuckles and grapes. They're always bringing these up now! It's like we get it! We remember the trivia factoid! They can eat more than one thing, you know!
I'm being partially facetious, but this is kind of a pet peeve of mine. People have been half-joking for years about how you can never let a character say they like a food because the fandom will make that their entire personality, and I've always just found that mildly annoying. I also just think at times Ian can be a little too eager to put the Sonic minutia he knows on display as a fan, even after 17+ years of working on the franchise as a professional. Which tends to be fine 99% of the time - Amy's tarot reading finally coming back is great, for example - but sometimes it's like okay, reign it in a little buddy, you don't gotta prove your Sonic nerd credentials at this point
#also I don't know who wrote the Twitter takeovers but like. Tails mentions liking mint there too#and then a day later the IDW special drops and he mentions bringing mint candy a few pages in and it's like okay I GET IT you like MINT!!#oh but the Tails 30th Anniversary Special was really good other than this stupid nitpick about one line lol
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literally what a day i am still shaking
#i didn’t realize how scary it would be to teach for the first time😭#like i feel like my social anxiety has gotten so much better over the last few years but this was like.#social anxiety on Crack#i did do really well like i think you’d barely even be able to tell i was nervous#just bc when i’m scared i kind of disassociate and go on auto-pilot so i usually seem fine#but like. i have been replaying every second of it in my brain all day nitpicking for places i messed up#and this one guy made a Comment when i walked in which did not help#genuinely overall it went so well and everyone was so nice#but still. SCARY😭#luckily (?) i will be teaching 4 days a week for the next 2 years.#so i will have plenty of time to get used to it lmao#it’s weird bc i tutor so often but turns out small groups of Children online#is very different than a full class of 18-19 year olds😭#anyway. hopefully i will get Less nervous bc i would hate to feel like this every day
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