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Alright folks, it’s that time again, I’m back on my Obey Me bullshit
This time though I’ve been thinking about Obey Me’s cannon story, and more specifically, how much I think it could be improved on. Now listen! I’m not saying Obey Me’s story is god awful or anything, I’m just saying that there are some issues, big and small, that I have noticed, repeatedly
And unfortunately for everyone, one thing that drives me more than anything else in this world, is spite. If I see something and think “Even I could do that better” my god I will do that fucking thing. Whether or not it’s actually better than the original is up to your own preferences obviously, but I like making art for myself and my brain
However, seeing as when I started writing a true “Obey Me Re-written” project I got as far as when you leave RAD after just being kidnapped and then lost steam, I knew I had to approach this differently. My current theory as to why that happened is because the way I write outlines is so bare bones it’s like if you story boarded a ten minute animation by fully illustrating one key frame for each minute. In other words, fucking badly
So here’s my new idea. I will be writing out main story beats for this re-written project as if I were making head cannon posts. This will get the ideas out into the world and help me plan shit out for if I ever decide to take a crack at properly writing the bitch. The story will still be written in second person, like everything I do, and each post should be about a chapter’s worth of story stuff
But yeah, for all the normal people that’s the end of this post. I hope you have a lovely day and that you’ll maybe wanna read the re-written posts as they come out? No pressure tho. However, for you sick fucks who actually care about the gripes I have with Obey Me’s story and what I intend to change then you can click that little Keep Reading thingy right below this text. But I warn you. It’s a doozy
Alright, first off let's address the obvious. Obey me is a free mobile game whose original language is Japanese. That might not sound like much but that one sentence explains three minor problems I have with Obey Me’s story, The pacing, The word choice, And the sanitization
The pacing is obvious, you unlock small bits of the story by playing the game and beating mini games. For the app to work the way it does the story has to be able to divide into these little chunks. But since I’m not confined by app structure my story will not have those odd chunks, allowing it to, hopefully, flow a little better
The word choice is a very nit picky thing that gets to me personally. Since the game has gone through a small game of telephone before us english only nerds can read the damn thing some things are just going to be lost or misused after translation. Since english is my first and only language I don’t have to deal with any of that in my version
And the sanitization! Again, Obey Me is a free mobile game, which means it needs to be advertiser friendly, which means The Avatar Of Lust is demoted to Avatar of Flirting and Vanity. My demons will cuss, fuck, and GASP…hold hands with y/n. Lol, seriously though, plot wise it’ll take a bit to get to fucking just because once you say fucking’s allowed you’re not getting out of bed for at least a week due to your demons swarming you, but I might write some stuff on the side that’s a little later in the time line for fun
Another small gripe I have is The Train Mystery. If you know, you know. That one will probably take some time but by Dia’s sweet ass I will make that a proper mystery
Also, not really a gripe but a change. Luke will not be in my story. He’s a cute kid, don’t get me wrong, but I’m a lusty bitch who wants a harem/poly story so no kids allowed. He’s off baking the whole time, he’s busy
A bigger issue I have with the story is that, no one has strong opinions on each other? Like, maybe for a lesson they do, but it’s never really brought up after that. And sometimes established opinions are tossed out the window to make the plot of the week happen. None of that, my boys have feelings about each other damn it! And if you’re wondering if any of those feelings will be slightly romantic or sexual. I’ll never tell :3 (Yes, the answer is yes)
Another big change I’m making is that the y/n will not be related to Lilith. They’re just a human with lataint magical abilities that only wake up in a big way once they start making pacts with demons. It’s not that them being kinda related squicks me out or anything, what did I just say above this paragraph? No, it’s just how fucking weird they handle it? Like, Obey Me can not decide if it wants the y/n to be exactly like Lilith and the brothers see them as her but like reincarnated or something, or if it wants to forget about Lilith entirely to side step the whole “You’re just like my dead sister, let’s make out about it” thing. Cowards
The final thing I will be changing (that I remember anyhow) is the lifeless y/n. Don’t get me wrong, the Obey Me y/n does have a few personality traits that stand out (Mainly being kind, chaotic, and a little dumb in some spots) but my y/n’s are characters in their own rights and this one will be no different (They have some anger problems :3)
But yeah, if you took the time to read all this, thank you! I can’t promise how quickly I’ll make re-written posts but I’m excited about the idea. Since I’ll be laying out all the story and character beats out so openly anyway feel free to ask even spoiler-esq questions if you’d like, I don’t expect any but the invitation is always there. I hope you have a wonderful day/night, bye bye :D
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...A theory or multiple theories are suddenly hitting me about Sol involving the effects of time traveling...But I won't share it because it'll be a mess...
#;little raven speaks#;raven om calamity#something something time paradoxes and time memories scrambled/rewritten etc lol
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I actually don't know you, I just came across your blog from my notes, so I have no prior info: in your description you said to talk to you about your comic - mind telling us a little bit about it? Whatever you want to share / are excited about / proud of etc! And again, I don't know anything about it so I'd love to hear truly anything :)
Hope your day is going nice, and if it isn't I hope it'll start to go nice from now on!
Hi ty for the ask thats rlly sweet :3
Rn I'm in my last year of art uni and I've been working on a small comic book for the past few months, tho im actually really shy to Post my art so thats y theres like nothing ab it anywhere yet. It a little romance story mainly focusing on a lesbian bar and a relationship between my ocs Robin and Vic! Its rlly slow paced but im trying to write it in a way that allows me to speak of workplace inequality, bar culture, butchfem culture, friendship and loss and community and being lonely and getting used to not being lonely anymore.
Tbh its been so hard to develop it since its like my first work that of this size (it has like 32 pages) and rn i have done 12 pages out of it that consists in the meetup of the two characters and the relationship building between them, and I gotta start thinkin from now How i want to post this up on the internet and where, cuz i rlly would want ppl to see it but idk what would b the best way to go ab it... so if someone that read till here has some tips or smth feel free to tell! I would love a little help on that part
Here s also a little illustration ive done for them two, it was mainly done just to get into the feeling and enviroment and atmosphere of the comic + a planner page ive done just to get their personalities and bodies familiar with myself! I really have come to really care ab these two ocs in the past 4 months or so in which ive developed them tru sketches and writing tbh so im rlly nervous and excited to share them here.
Im rambling now tho, more in tags, ty anon <3
#honestly ive been trying to set up a patreon but im sooo scared of actually posting my art somewhere for some reason#i feel like the only safe thing would b fanart to post but i hadnt had time for fanart in ages bcos of this comic + other assignments!#but alas my exams are around june tru july so i believe that i will post this comic fully around july or august!#i just have to think of the best way to do it#ive been thinkin of just postin it fully om patreon but idk if thats rlly the best idea#but its certainly a place where it allows me to post the sketches and plannings too so idk!#comic artists help me...#howljenky art#howljenky's#artists on tumblr#comic book#graphic novel#oh also im really excited ab this comic bcos even if its a modern storytelling#ive really been pulling strings to make it looks really fantasy-like tru architecture and enviroment#but also itll contain a sort of daydream scene where the characters r rewritten as being a prince and a knight#and yea i mean prince not princess bcos i really also want to play a bit with gender presentation in this!#vic is very feminine but i feel like she would play a lot with gender presentation if her environment would allow her to!#which it will later in the comic where she goes tru a bit if character development#anyways im rlly excited :3 i need to get over my fear of posting#and i put the phrase to talk with me ab my comic expecting nobody to really actually ask and now ive become shy...#but ty for asking nonetheless it feels great talkin ab it and i hope that till i post it in august or smth#i could mayhaps make a bit of an audience? i have like just a few followers tho so maybe not but its good to dream ab being supported KSKSK
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Good afternoon, Tsams community, may I present this Nexus drawing i made?
Robot gore warning mayhaps?- And Bright colors
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I still feel so, egh, about how Nexus's story ended up going, and I'm sad he had to die with his story messing him up, especially because he was such a sweet character, much better then OM, there could've of been an arc where the family worked together— helped Nexus in his New Moon era of life or a second chance during his grieving but instead we got insistence he was pure evil getting pushed at us
I've come to the realization of how much I relate to Nexus in a bunch of small ways, so I thought putting that little quote in there would be nice
Oh well, it's not like stuff can be rewritten now, decisions were made, and all that stuff
I just wanna draw things with funny colors
#artists on tumblr#illustration#digital artist#the sun and moon show#tsams#tsams nexus#tsams new moon#tsbs#the security breach show#Spotify
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New hints (and questions) about Nightbringer
Finally! We have some clues about NB, I'm so excited! We finally have an idea of what to expect. Yet I still have so many doubts. But that's only natural, we're still missing on so much information ;; I simply want to share my thoughts about Nightbringer at the moment.
First, I'd like to mention the objective facts we know about the game:
We're our good old sheep MC.
We've travelled to the past, and we need to "reforge our bonds and pacts with the seven brothers"
Honestly, I'm happy the game is not just a prequel and we get to keep our MC. Still, time traveling is a choice. So, knowing this, what personally intrigues me the most are the questions that have arised from the possibilities when it comes to going to the past and meeting the demons there.
I'll try to point out my main questions and theorize a bit, but this is only with the little info we've been given.
We've travelled by Barbatos' magic, so at least he and Diavolo should know we're going to the past. Right?
Do the brothers know? The lines "Don't worry, you'll be fine. After all, we are..." and then "My love for you trascends time" (in Japanese, "No matter how many times we meet you, we'll fall in love with you") seem to be from the brothers POV. The first line gives me the impression they know what our mission is and are basically wishing us good luck and trusting in us, for us to... "save" them, maybe? There has to be a reason we're doing all of this.
About that, why are we doing this? Are we being sent with us knowing what's going on? Or we just wake up and surprise! You're in the past! (double isekai lmao) I hope it's some kind of "mission" we are well aware of.
How will time traveling be explained this time? (In case it will be explained because let's face it, we know OM is not the most rigorous when it comes to it, lol) The brothers will meet us in the past, so are we going to be presenting as ourselves? Or as some random human? You know, like we pretended to be a random angel in the Celestial Realm? After all is done, will they remember the events from the past? Will they know it was us? You know, as in sheep MC? Are their memories going to be "rewritten" and, once we're back, they'll know what happened and know MC loved them in the present and the past? I just... I just don't know. (But I kinda like the latter, it sounds romantic)
All of their lines in the webpage show some kind of emotion related to their fall, in their own way. But at least something that is common to all of them is pain. About each of them:
Lucifer seems to feel guilty or responsible for their fall; Mammon seems accepting of his (and their) fate, Leviathan seems terrified of his fate; Satan, being a new entity, is annoyed by his existence in this reality and his new brothers; Asmodeus is in denial; Beelzebub's one is intriguing, because it points to a secret more then his feelings regarding the fall, but I'd say there's something about the fall or the war he knows and feels guilty about hiding; and Belphegor is thinking about punishment and consequences of their actions, could it be indifference? or a quiet fear?
What kind of dynamics will we have with these recently turned demons? Are we going to have our beloved, dangerous interactions such as the ones we got on Halloween 2021? Or early lessons? (I really, really hope so)
But more than anything, regarding the reasons of our travelling... What happened that needs us to travel and bond with them in their past selves? Are they in some kind of danger? Did some kind of event trigger a reaction from them, becoming distant with us (ahhh yes, angst) and we need to unravel their past? I like the idea of MC getting to know their backstories and ending up with this idea of "I'll love him even after all he's done as a demon".
And that's why I like this concept of "My love for you trascends time" because it can be both ways. They'll love us no matter in what time or form we meet, but also they trust us to keep loving them even though it's a difficult, dangerous love.
And yes, the Japanese one is slightly different but I also like how that one is only directed from the demons to us. Even if it's in an alternative universe, the past, not knowing us, our bond and connection is so strong it's certain they'll fall in love with us.
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Man, I'm getting the feels from this teaser. I can't wait to see what kind of angst, tragic backstories and dramatic romance we'll get to experience.
And by the way! On March 24th, the song from the opening will be released, "Devil's Way". From the unofficial lyrics I've seen, they do mention the little sheep and to not be afraid, so I wonder what kind of information we'll get from the full lyrics 🕺
Peace out.
#obey me nightbringer#obey me#obey me shall we date#shall we date#this doesn't count as an analysis so i dont know what tag should i give it#obey me headcanon#obey me headcanons#obey me hcs#winter analyzes
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Pesterquest Rewritten - Karkat Vantas
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A little under a month since the last No Commentary version went up, here's Karkat's PQR route!!!!
This route officially marks the start of Act 2 of PQR -- meaning the first half of the trolls. Act 1 was the prologue through to the Joey intermission.
Hyped for y'all to see it!!!!!!!!!!!!
(AND SPECIAL THANKS TO BBPANZU FOR LETTING US USE 2BEEP2MEOW!!!!!!!)
(KUDOS TO LUKE AND OM FOR HELPING WITH WRITING EQUIUS TOO)
#pesterquest rewritten#homestuck#mspa reader#fansim#pqr#hom3stuck#pesterquest#mspar#karkat vantas#homestuck karkat#trolls#homestuck trolls#Youtube
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I'm back already I-
But please hear me out.
I was writing another chapter for my fanfic in Wattpad yesterday (It's basically the OG OM! game rewritten, but with more scenes, more logic(?), more insight on the bonds between characters and added HCs.) I'm currently doing Lesson 1!
For this I watch gameplays bcs of course I'm too lazy to play all over again and I haven't even finished the game myself-
Anyways, while watching, Lucifer mentions tasks. In-game, he already knows that the tasks are dance battles. And well I didn't like that.
What if Lucifer didn't know about dance battles? What if he had set up much different tasks, aiding to 'polish MC's soul', which was said to be MC's task?
That's exactly what I did.
But I don't plan on mentioning what the actual tasks are (bcs my imagination ran out yesterday and I already published the chapter)
What do you think the actual tasks could have been?
PS: Have fun next week! Relax and enjoy your days off!
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Don't worry about your ask box frequency, it's all good! I get people who go months between asks and then there are people who go minutes between asks lol.
Anyway, I have to commend anyone who has the patience to do a canon story rewrite like that. Just thinking about it makes me want to take a nap. It was difficult for me when I was writing Arrie's story, too. Because I felt like I had to incorporate him into the existing story, but I didn't want to rewrite the whole thing. So I kinda glossed over most of it lol. Like here are some extra scenes and there's like one that I redid, but for the most part I just skipped over that stuff.
So all that is to say that I'm impressed with your dedication to such a project! It's probably way better than canon, too!
Let's see, so tasks that could potentially polish MC's soul in place of the dance battles?
I mean it's hard to say what exactly is needed to polish MC's soul, you know? The game doesn't give us the mechanics of that particular situation.
Initially, I would think it would have more to do with the Celestial Realm than anything...
But perhaps it's more about just... not doing things that could tarnish the soul (such as the sins) and then possibly doing things like good deeds to polish it?
It happens naturally any time MC does something nice for someone, which is probably all the time considering how nice the generic OM MC is.
But if you had to have like... have actual tasks? Maybe it's just stuff like organizing Lucifer's paperwork for him or making sure that Beel always has a snack handy so he doesn't rampage. Helping Mammon with his debt, talking Levi out of his self hatred, etc etc. Like I think the tasks would be related to each of the brothers in some way.
Or you could go more like... magic-centered and say that MC has to do something like various spells to polish their soul in a more literal sense.
I kinda like the idea of tricking the system lol. Like hang on, we can just use magic and now it's like MC has the shiniest soul ever! Why do I feel like Solomon would help with this if you wanted to do it that way?
And thank you, I am definitely looking forward to my days off! I'm hoping to get plenty of writing done too~
#I've already reorganized all my wips which were all over the dang place#and I'm hoping to get my long story separated out how I need it so I can start posting it too#obey me#obey me shall we date#om#obey me!#omswd#📻 anon#misc answers
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Welcome, welcome!
I'm Helena, Decay, or Phantomato which ever one ya'll prefer to call me! Sometimes I write and ramble, and my blog is based around the characters Helena and Helena META! Though my current obsession is all versions of ANY Yautjas from Predator/AvP(Especially Wolf) except AP, batfamily, Justice League, and Lapis Lazuli from Houseki no Kuni. LGBTQ blinkies by Shortcakeem0ji :3
The things I write can be taken as platonic or romantic unless explicitly stated that they're platonic! I won't write smut though.
So I thought I'd put this here, but here is my Twst acc!
Also, here is my Azur Lane account the server I'm in is Amagi
Here is my Fate/Grand Order friend code!
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Helena's interests
I like games such as Azur Lane(obv), Destiny and Destiny 2, YuGiOh duel links, Minecraft, Terraria, Stardew Valley, Fate/Grand Order, and Twisted Wonderland
My current anime list consists of That Time I Got Reincarnated As A Slime, Slime Diaries, Land of the Lustrous, YuGiOh, Azur Lane: Slow Ahead!, Umamusume: Pretty Derby, Takt Op. Destiny, Wonder Egg Priority, The Fate series, and Bofuri
My favorite shows are Helluva Boss, Hazbin Hotel, Steven Universe, FBI, SWAT, 911, 911: Lone Star, Kitchen Nightmares, Master Chef, and the first few seasons of Red vs Blue
My favorite movies are Twister, Patriots Day, both TMNT bayverse movies, Dunkirk, Unstoppable, and many more, can't name them all :3
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Helena's writing. Most of my stuff will now also be posted to my Ao3, DecayingHelena, though it's mainly just going to be the James Ironwood stuff
For That He Is Thankful (Rewritten)
Do you fear me? (Rewritten)
Memories of Tempesta(AL x TWST)
Floral Fever(OM)
Floral Fever 2(OM)
Ice cream (Rewritten)
"They called me what?"
"I love you."
Kiss(James Ironwood x reader)(Rewritten)
"Shall we dance?"(Ironwitch)(Rewritten)
A strange craft(RWBY AU)
New hopes(RWBY AU)
James Ironwood headcanons
Unwind with me(RWBY au) (James Ironwood x reader)
James Ironwood headcanons 2
Love and Bad Luck(Ironqrow)
The world of yesterday(Ironwitch)
New Light(RWBY au)
James Ironwood headcanons 3
Valentine's Day(James Ironwood x reader)
The one thing he wished for(James Ironwood x reader)
Ironwitch headcanons
Ironwitch headcanons part 2
Project Personality: Penny Polendina post
Ironwitch headcanons part 3
"Pillows don't talk."(Leona Kingscholar x reader)
Fry Thief
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Helena's rambling
Yuu protecting Malleus(What made me write For That He Is Thankful.)
Aggressive love towards Malleus
Helena's thoughts on Self aware TWST
Helena's thoughts on Self aware TWST 2
Rollo, the twink baguette
Chaotic Yugi Mutou
Helena watches Land of the Lustrous
Silly little twst idea
Silly little twst idea pt2
Silly space idea :3
Aggressive love towards James Ironwood
James Ironwood with a new outfit
Recoil
Helena's obsession with Ironwood
Helena's idea on HnK! James Ironwood
Helena's RWBY tier list
James Ironwood but with Destiny 2 weapons
Helena's back problems
Helena's Hunter
Helena's favorite James Ironwood moments
Helena making fun of their favorite boi
Helena speaks in memes
No sleep Tumblr
Multiships my beloved
Helena's RWDE rant
Helena's nicknames
Helena finding a new obsession
"You brought this upon me."
Cú Chulainns as out of context Discord convos
Cú Chulainns as out of context Discord convos
Cú: Either always kissing death or always going overkill
Nero has no chill
Helena's screentime
Helena condones murder
Clowning on both Europe and America
Helena gets reminded of Malleus
Outta context Discord continues
Outta context Discord: Crime edition
Weather sickness
Outta context Discord: Darkside of the internet
Outta context Discord: We're fucking dumb
Pissing off my bestie on Discord
Helena's thoughts on a Ironwood scene
Helena
Out of context Discord: AvP edition
Out of context Discord: AvP edition part 2
Helena's thoughts on Arthur Curry
Fried Fish
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My rants are tagged under "Helena Rants", it's mainly some personal issues so if you don't wanna see that then feel free to block that tag
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Hoi Tumblr.
Als je vóór november 2022 lid bent geworden van Tumblr en voornamelijk het web gebruikt om je berichten te plaatsen, zou je bekend moeten zijn met onze twee berichteditors: de oude berichteditor en de nieuwe berichteditor (de oudgedienden noemen deze de ‘bèta-berichteditor’).
Hieronder zie je de oude berichteditor
En dit is de nieuwe berichteditor
Vanaf 15 mei wordt de oude berichteditor stapsgewijs uitgefaseerd. Alle nieuwe berichten die je via het web opstelt, zullen gebruikmaken van de nieuwe berichteditor. Deze wijziging zal naar verwachting rond 15 juli afgerond zijn.
Deze wijziging heeft alleen gevolgen voor accounts die vóór november 2022 zijn aangemaakt. Nieuwe accounts maken standaard al gebruik van de nieuwe webeditor.
Dit heeft geen gevolgen voor het plaatsen van berichten vanuit de app, aangezien de app bijna vier jaar geleden al naar de nieuwe functie gemigreerd is. Als je berichten met de app maakt, gebruik je deze editor al!
Dit heeft geen invloed op wat je in een bericht kunt opnemen, alleen hoe je dat kunt doen. Alle verschillende mediatypen zijn nog steeds beschikbaar; je gebruikt alleen de contentblokken in de nieuwe webeditor in plaats van de knop bovenaan het dashboard voor het type bericht dat je wilt maken. Met de nieuwe editor kun je bijvoorbeeld gemakkelijk (en tijdens het schrijven!) beslissen om je tekstbericht te wijzigen in een bericht met een foto van je hagedis. Klik gewoon op het rode afbeeldingsicoontje, selecteer een afbeelding en voilà. Je hagedis zal de harten van de gebruikers stelen.
Als je je berichten liever met de oude editor op het web plaatst, lees dan gauw verder.
Hoe kun je je het beste op deze wijziging voorbereiden?
Zodra de overgang naar de nieuwe editor is afgerond, is het niet meer mogelijk om de oude editor te gebruiken. Je zult echter voorlopig nog wel berichten kunnen bewerken als deze met de oude editor zijn gemaakt. Hier volgen enkele tips om je op weg te helpen:
We nodigen je uit om de nieuwe editor vóór de volledige omschakeling uit te proberen en er vertrouwd mee te raken. Dit is ook een kans voor jou om ons op de hoogte te brengen van eventuele problemen die je tegenkomt, zodat we de editor verder kunnen verfijnen.
Geef ons je feedback, vooral als je van de oude naar de nieuwe editor overstapt. We komen graag meer te weten over je ervaring: welke workflows die je in de oude editor prettig vindt, zou je graag in de nieuwe zien?
Als je een blogsjabloon gebruikt, zorg er dan voor dat deze compatibel is met berichten die via de nieuwe editor zijn gemaakt. Is dat nog niet het geval, zorg er dan voor dat je je sjabloon aanpast.
Voor gebruikers die gespecialiseerd zijn in het bewerken van reblogs, heeft @rpschtuff een geweldig bericht geschreven waarin in detail (en in het Engels) wordt uitgelegd hoe je dit met de nieuwe webeditor doet.
Voor XKitters: XKit Rewritten is speciaal ontworpen om compatibel te zijn met de nieuwe editor. Je zult dus deze specifieke versie moeten gebruiken bij het maken van je berichten.
Dat was het voor nu. Heb je vragen over de nieuwe berichteditor? Aarzel dan niet om contact op te nemen met ons ondersteuningsteam. Voor andere opmerkingen stuur je een kort bericht naar de blog @wip.
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tom lehrer's the folk song army has so fundamentally rewritten my brain about slant rhymes yknow "...and it don't even gotta rhyme. excuse me, rhine" i'm sat here singing weezer's pink triangle like "I'm dumb she's a lesbium I thought I had found the ome"
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Parts taken out or rewritten
chapter 14
"And when she’d see something after that one incident with almost becoming tigerdillo food at four winters old, she’d go ask Sister Tsering to come with her.
"Om ah hum vajra guru parma siddhi hum" Alterted, apparently using Benza is more common??
"Tashi thinks of their wisdom as some of the young children ask her to play with them."
"This new thing. The thing her denseness missed." Added
"(How often had Tashi pulled back over the years because she couldn’t see?)" added
#a love in the eye of the hurricane#oc fanfiction#fanfic edit#writing process#ALITEOTH#chapter edits#Scrapped fic parts#chapter edits/scrapped fic parts#posted on ao3#ao3fic
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more small thoughts on om! plot feat.diavolo
another thing ive been thinking abt is how there was little buildup to diavolo’s confession other than the running gag that he keeps getting interrupted. since by that point we hadnt had many moments alone with him and most of what we could gleam from his personality was through events i just felt like it was so abrupt when he actually confessed-
and that confession.... after telling us his sad backstory was probably the worst time for that! like i love diavolo he’s a fun character but in the context of the plot up until then we really didn’t know too much about/ have a lot of moments with him TT_TT
i get with so many charas there arent many chances for 1-on-1 (which is what card stories are for yaddah yaddah) but i wouldve liked more build up... he’s someone who feels very far away so i wanted to make better friends with him before hand ‘w’);
though what do i know, maybe there was enough buildup and i just like taking things slow ^^)~~
#the response to him being yes or no... i feel like not yet works as an option too#om spoilers#text.#of course in my head the game is continuosly being rewritten
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I think that's what bothers me most about this situation too...
People bring up og OM events as if they are not now being rewritten or stuff. og OM is the past to us now if you're a og OM player.
At least it is for me. It's not future events. It's past. So Sol is just doing a complete 180 on his means of trying to be better, and just saying "fuck that" to the bond he built with og Asmo.
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REWRITING and REDESIGNING
♡♡♡ Omniel ♡♡♡
For Reference, the following are my earlier posts of her:
I Had a foken Mary Sue OC
Omniel Got A Voice Now
Aight so there are 3 charas one must know of:
Om, a high rank Ethereal
Niel, a normal cat villager
Omniel, the combination of the two
Niel and Om are different figures
Om is an ancient narcissistic Ethereal from archaic plane and is good friends with the Ethereal that is possessing the cursed idol in my AU, hence the heartless and the power hungry behavior. Om loves the feeling of being dependent on so it uses the fact that it can revive critters to have many followers.
Niel is just a humble villager that's neckdeep into a religion that praises Om and she got no choice but be the host. Host usually dies when they reach 40s, and when they do, there's like a lottery of names and the candidates are female children of the village. That year, the lottery picked Niel, who was 12 at the time, and she was chosen to be Om's host. She is now 19 and tasked on a quest to go travel outside the village and recruit more followers.
Omniel happens when Om overpowers Niel's mind and convince her that things would be better if she let Om be in control.
(Ah yes, definitely is not like how Venom, Flowey!Sans, Bipper, Darcy, Possessed!Hunter works. This is totally unique and original--)
#htf#htf oc#happy tree friends#happy tree friends oc#htf omniel#htf oc bio#oc redesign#oc rewritten#htf oc ref sheet#ask omniel#htf om#htf niel#ask om#ask niel
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Thanks to the rebalancing I’m now almost halfway into season 2 and man the game is so weird when you like only 1 or 2 characters romantically
And if it’s your OC’s name in there who you’ve written to be in a relationship with a specific character already? Even weirder. I’m sorry Mammon but Dolasach doesn’t like you like that and honestly neither do you agdkshaksha it’s so wEIRD to see him FLIRT witH HER, and that goes triple for Lucifer
I usually like roleplaying as an OC whenever I play like… literally any game that has you create a player character, so here’s to a whole season of rejecting every romantic advance that isn’t from Satan :> but this does highlight for me how the options for if you want to just keep it platonic are so… odd… in this game? And flat out mean half the time.
#dont get me wrong tho this whiplash makes playing the main story fun in its own way#BUT#if youre like me and youve pretty much rewritten all of om in your mind for your OC it’s even weirder#than if you just werent interested romantically in some characters#im very much feeling the ‘canon is a mere outline for my personal fanon’ thing while go through season 2#also man shooting down mammon left and right#they do a really good job of making him frustrated and disappointed that youre rejecting his efforts#meanwhile if you dont kiss lucifer up in the ferris wheel hes like lets go again since i didnt get to seduce you#im like 😬 because ugh my guy dola doesnt see you like that either audjshdjahis#neither do you!!!#dolasach#i guess since i talk about her?
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I just realised I have very little context on this blog about...carce and how the world there is set up. So I’m stealing this old post from my patreon discord lmao
The sunken cities are a fun little bubble of air in between two oceans and carce is just one of ten islands within that little pocket.. carce is the only island that’s owned by the humans on the surface due to a pact with giant insect ppl who live in the Hives, tho there are settlements of humans that arrived there before it was industrialised and turned into what is essentially a prison island
Tobias was born on the surface, but due to a series of unfortunate events ended up taken down to the sunken cities & incarcerated at the age of 10.
#[.tobias.]#ooc#MAYBE TBD IF I GET SELF CONSCIOUS BC THIS IS A BOOK IVE BEEN WORKIN OM FOR LIKE#TEN YRS.. tobias was born when i was 12 so i just realised technically aasb is 10 now#obviously its changed a lot and been rewritten over that time lmao im not working on one ten yr long manuscript#but 4 anyone interested...i offer this
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