#Inside out fanfiction
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momokat · 5 months ago
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When one night Anxiety cannot sleep, Joy is happy to help. I was on Drawpile, doodling a scene from this fanfic:
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radiowendigo · 7 months ago
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Anxiety was dealing with multiple panic episodes lately. It wasn’t too uncommon for her. But, her employees noticed that she would grip onto her arms to the point it would take a huge amount of strength to help release herself. Anxiety had also been experiencing these same type of panic episodes during the night, which awakened some or all of the emotions.
Despite having been unavailable for many of them, Ennui has seen them all. She wasn't always sure what to say or do in these kinds of situations. She felt guilty because Anxiety had always been so encouraging, supportive, and nice to her. She wished she could do more for her beloved. What kind of friend was she?. Deep down, Ennui as well feared that the other emotions would sense her secret feelings for Anxiety and get leaked in some way. All she could do in those moments was sympathize with Anxiety and wish her negative thoughts would subside.
Ennui woke up first in the middle of the night, which was the first time she did during Anxiety’s recent episodes. She slowly removed her white face mask and heard muffled whimpers distant to where the console was. Ennui furrowed her eyebrows and quietly got out of bed, moving past the others so as not to wake them, and trailing the noises as it made her way to the console. Anxiety was kneeling down in front of the console, hyperventilating, hair messy, and once again, hugging herself, gripping onto her arms in a deadly grip. Ennui rushed to Anxiety and kneeled down to her level in front of her, and placed her hands on hers.
“Anxiety, breathe, mon ami. Slowly.” Ennui said gently but looked concerned.
“I-I-I’m trying!” Anxiety breathed in a frantic tone, triggering tears which slowly began spilling down her cheeks. Ennui shushed her and rubbed her hands in an upside down motion in attempt to soothe her.
“Breathe with me.”
Anxiety nodded rapidly and Ennui inhaled and exhaled deeply, her low voice giving Anxiety a pleasant tingling sensation. Her voice had always been one of her favourite things about her. It was just calming and reassuring to her. Anxiety tried to repeat her but struggled.
“Again.” Ennui said in an engorging tone. They did this excerise three more times and finally, Anxiety was breathing normally, but was still gripping her arms. Ennui did not let go her hands.
“Anxiety, please let go of your arms, mon douce, you’re hurting your pretty arms.”
More tears fell from Anxiety’s eyes and nodded slowly releasing them, while Ennui carefully tugged along with her. Finally, Anxiety released her arms making Ennui sigh out of relief. At this point she let go of Anxiety’s hands. Anxiety looked up at Ennui in her distressed state, shaking less.
“I-I’m sorry Ennui, I know I’ve been doing this a lot lately, I don’t know why, I feel so bad and I know I’m disturbing your sleep, and I know you need your rest for the morning, and that I should just find a way to handle it myself, and—-“
“Shhh, hush, mon cher. You don’t need to apologize. Viens ici dans mes bras.”
Ennui pulled Anxiety into her arms, resting Anxiety’s cheek on her chest, Anxiety enjoyed the soft material of her black shirt. Ennui wrapped her long arms around Anxiety and held her in a strong but comforting embrace. Anxiety cried softly now from the exhaustion of the situation. Ennui stroked through Anxiety’s messy strands with one hand in an attempt to comfort her more. After a while, Anxiety’s cries subsided and Ennui placed a gentle kiss on her forehead, which Anxiety noticed blushing furiously. But didn’t say anything not wanting to ruin the moment.
“Are you alright now, Anxiety?” Ennui asked softly.
Anxiety exhaled and looked up at the indigo emotion. Her eyes were fatigued, bangs had creeped out underneath them, and her cheeks were tear-stained but smiled.
“Yeah, I am. Thank you..” Anxiety replied weakly, looking down flustered.
Ennui smiled warmly and placed her hand on Anxiety’s right cheek and gently guided it back to her face.
“Of course. That’s what we’re here for, right? You are never a bother to us. It’s a part of who you are. But it’s how you deal with it what matters, and you are trying. I see it.”
The orange emotion just stared at her in awe, and her smile grew wider.
“Thank you, Ennui. You really are the best.”
“Don’t mention it.”
Anxiety looked at Ennui’s hand that was resting on her cheek and put her right hand on top of hers, and kissed her palm. Revealing a shocked glance and gasp from Ennui. Her cheeks now forming a dark blush herself.
“But I will, ma chere.”
Ennui swiftly pulled her in her arms again embracing her. Anxiety wrapped her arms around Ennui as well and ran her fingers through her long hair. A couple minutes passed and Ennui looked down at Anxiety.
“Anxiety? Are you ready to try and go back to sleep?”
Anxiety yawned.
“Yeahh. I’m exhausted.”
“We should get some sleep. We have to get up in a couple hours.”
“Can I please sleep with you tonight? I don’t want this to end yet and I don’t want to be alone.” Anxiety asked a little desperate in the end.
“Oui, oui. Of course. Come, allons-y.” Ennui said in a caring tone, grabbing Anxiety’s hand. She led her to her bed, the others were still knocked out. Ennui climbed and scooted to her right side of her bed and laid down on her left side. Anxiety climbed afterwords and laid down next to Ennui, trying to give her space. This only made Ennui pull her closer, making Anxiety release a soft yelp and rested her head on her chest again. Ennui’s arms wrapped around Anxiety and used one to yank the cover over them.
Anxiety yawned, her eyes heavy. Ennui smiled softly and kissed her forehead and the crown of her head gently.
“Sleep now, chere. Everything will be okay. I will be here if you need me.”
Anxiety nodded and shut her eyes, soon breathing softly but not with fear, indicating she fell asleep. Ennui placed a final kiss on her forehead and rested her chin on Anxiety’s head.
“Bonne nuit, mon amour.” Ennui whispered lovingly.
Ennui closed her eyes and the two emotions slept in each others embrace until Riley woke up. No one understood why Anxiety and Ennui were sleeping on the same bed but decided not to bring it up. Joy thought it was very sweet and couldn’t stop talking about it for a bit during that morning.
(Been having inside out/inside out 2 brain rot for the past week. I can’t stop looking, watching reading, content about it. It’s genuinely an amazing franchise. Also anxiety and ennui have been on my mind lately, ennui’s my fav lmao. I see the chemistry between these two. I’m a little embarrassed (No pun intended) to share this and thought it was a bit out of character on ennui’s part but reading over it so much I didn’t think so much. ANYWAYS enjoy to my anxiety and ennui lovers!! ^ ^)
They’re the first two women I’ve ever written while writing LMAO
And I don’t think I need to say but if there’s gonna be any hate, leave ‼️
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notallrobots · 4 months ago
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I’d like to request a fic idea about Fear and Anxiety needing to retrieve a memory of a large bug scaring Riley in the car, from the subconscious but are chased by the manifestation of that fear (a car with bug features)
MY FIRST REQUEST IS DONE! I loved this prompt so much for some reason LOL! To the person who sent me this prompt: Please send feedback! (anonymous feedback / critique is fine! And a reminder to all requesters: please only send prompts if you’re willing to offer feedback on my completed work! I don’t want to fill requests for people that ghost me, especially since I have other requests from people who would definitely give feedback. :D Thank you!)
Contains swear words! And bug death! Yahoo! Thanks for requesting!
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1tsstargaze59 · 2 months ago
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Anxifear College AU Chapter 3🧡💜
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I still have no idea for a name for the fic- ILL THINK OF ONE I PROMISE ^^""""
Prepare to meet all the other emotions! Including Shame! 👀 Guess in the comments who's who, cuz I (hopefully) made it obvious enough XD /Mild family angst
Chapter 3 : Conversations
Anna-lee happily skipped on over to her department's teacher's lounge. Entering the room, she approached her supervisor, a woman with a small but thick build, thin rim round glasses, and a blue sweater. She placed the hair from her short black bob behind her right ear and turned to face her junior :
"He gave you a bouquet of lavender?" questioned Saddie, a little perplexed.
"Ya! Do you know where I could put them? I wasn't exactly prepared with a vase- it's not every day someone gifts you flowers!" Anne laughed nervously.
"He gave you flowers! Anne, that's wonderful. What's his name again?"
"Fred," affirmed Anne, "he's a good friend. He got sick and couldn't come in to work today so he- send me flowers?" She laughed again, "He's so funny, I wonder how he comes up with these gags!"
Saddie leaned in, analyzing the look in Anna's eyes, "Has he been... complimenting you?"
"Huh? Ya, why?"
"Let me see that note," asked Saddie, opening her hand for Anne to pass over the little sheet of paper. After carefully reading it, her eyes opened wide, and she blurted out, "Anna-Lee, he's been flirting with you!"
"What???" Enid yelled back at her, "Are you telling me my brother is flirting with my teacher???"
"Don't say it like that! You make it sound like it's a bad thing," Daphne replied, checking herself out on her phone, "They're both teachers. What's the harm? I think they're cute; I like teasing M. Frederick about it, right Vivi?" Her sister smiled and nodded furiously as she gobbled down her lunch.
Enid sighed deeply, wiping her long face with her hand, her dark eyeshadow mysteriously left intact.
"I can't believe it; how did I not notice? I mean, looking back, it's so obvious!" Anna paced around the office, the sound of her shoes tapping against the wooden floor followed by the sound of a clean slap between her hand and her forehead, "I feel so stupid-"
"Don't be so hard on yourself, sweetie," Saddie reassured her as she sat back down on her chair, "You don't need an excuse to misinterpret situations."
"Misinterpret? Who the heck misinterprets giving someone FLOWERS???" She dropped all her weight into her chair, causing it to roll back slowly.
She chuckled, "Why are you so upset? Isn't this good news?"
"Good news? This is TERRIFYING news! I've never had someone hit on me before!" She brought her hands to her cheeks and squeezed her face.
"Never?"
"Well, yes, but mostly from people I've been in a relationship with, and even then, I was the one who initiated my past relationships! I was NOT prepared for THIS; how could this happen to me? Well, I honestly didn't even consider this was a possibility- but still!"
"You're overthinking things dear, is there something now that's troubling you?"
"Well, it could get really awkward for me since I still, O tu sais, LIVE WITH HIM?? Could you IMAGINE he takes her home and it's just like 'oh, hi! It's me, your HISTORY TEACHER'!!!" The yelling knocked the air out of Enid's lungs, her head dropped to the table as soon as her rant was over.
"OK, that's fair, that does sound really awkward," Daphne responded, opening her setting powder container, "is that all you're worried about, or?"
"That's it? You're acting too calm about this, even for my liking," she sighed again, she who does not tend to care about things, now yelling at her best friend, "I'm thankful for my brother, but I am NOT playing third wheel to any of his romances; I'm not his child."
"I'm sorry, it's just hard to take you seriously when I already got a solution planned!" She smiled, a perfect white smile, before closing her makeup container.
Her droopy eyes peaked up with a glimmer of hope, "You do?"
"I propose we go see my husband. He's a terribly shy guy, I'm sure he has some wise words for you. Besides, the library is a quiet, pensive place; it'll help clear your mind dear," Saddie leaned over her desk to pat Anna-Lee's hand.
Anne smiled meekly.
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"Hey Freddie! Welcome back; you feeling better?" greeted Joy, sitting at the teacher's lounge table of the math department.
"He's fine! He had me deliver flowers to little miss carrot top!" Angrily yelled Antonio from behind his desk.
"You-" she gasped dramatically, "You had Anthony do you a FAVOR!? That's a new one!" She laughed hysterically.
Fred sat beside her, a smug grin plastered on his face, "Hey, miracles can happen. Thanks, Anthony. I owe you one!"
"You owe me 40 bucks!"
They laughed at their elder's frustration.
"So~ how's the courting going?"
"Joy, you know I hate it when-"
"Ok, I'm sorry, you're right. Let me try that again : romance isn't really my thing, but I sure do like watching it go down, so spill!"
"Well, I don't wanna push any further than I already have... I think I've made my intentions clear, and I fear if I flirt anymore, it'll creep her out..."
"Oh, thank the lord," sighed Anthony in relief.
"Anthony!" she yelled at him.
“It's ok Joy, he doesn’t mean it that way.”
“Yes, this childish behavior is simply a pain to watch,” he grumbled, frustratedly tapping away at his keyboard, ”I, for one, think he should be upfront about how he feels.”
Joy stared at Antonio with her mouth agape, “I… agree! You should keep being honest and clear about your feelings.”
“Thank you.”
“About what?” she whispered.
“For caring about me.”
“Of course sweetie,” Saddie reassured her.
She took Anna into the library and behind the counter, where she sat her down to speak with a tall older man. He was rounded and soft in appearance, betraying his size. He seemed like a gentle giant. His pink cheeks matched well with his pink cardigan. Anna felt a weight lift off her chest when in their presence. 
“Anna, this is Emmet; my husband,” Saddie clarified, squeezing his right hand, “Barry, this is Anna-lee, she’s a friend of mine from the History department.” 
Emmet waved a small shy hand at Anna. It made her smile. She explained to him everything that’s happened so far; her uncertainty about her feelings towards Fred. He listened to every word without a peep, his eyes trying to maintain eye contact, but always darting back to Saddie, his face flushing with more pink. When she was done, he looked pensive, staring down at the table. Then, he looked up, a glimmer sparkling in his eyes. 
“What about the chess club?” asked Joy, “Did you think of inviting her?”
“The chess club?” Fred lifted his finger up to his chin, passing near the door, “No... I talked to her about it, though; I thought that if she wanted to see me more often, she’d take initiative, you know?”
“That’s fair,” she remarked, “Dead end there then.”
“Book delivery,” a small raspy voice shot Fred from behind. He yelped like a young girl and jumped forward, looking behind him to find the slim dark figure of a young woman, “For the math department?”
Joy laughed, “Shay! Be careful; you trying to give Fred a heart attack?” 
Taking deep breaths, he took the pen and clipboard Shay had in her hands and signed off on the delivery, shivering from head to toe.
“Thank you,” said the young lady, taking her items back, “and sorry for scaring you, M. Fitzgerald.”
“It’s… ok! I’m very jumpy anyway, dear,” his shivering making it hard to hold onto this many heavy books, “and thank you for your service!”
After waving goodbye with a timid smile, Shay rolled her cart down the hall to the elevator, down to the ground floor and into the library. She went behind the counter and placed her clipboard back onto it’s hook on the wall and left to find her uncle, her expression dulled. She found him sitting at a table, accompanied by her aunt and a strange woman. Her ginger locks tied up in an unusual, incomprehensible manner; she had giant round glasses and a remarkable overbite. At first, she stayed out of the conversation, listening in curiously, as she had done with the two math teachers before, as she had done for too many conversations before. Then, she understood who the lady was.
“Ok, but how do I spend more time with him? I’m so busy, I practically spend all my time in between work and home!”
“What about the chess club?” Shay whispered behind them; making the lady jump in her seat. Her aunt and uncle turned to her, and Saddie smiled. 
“Anna-lee, this is Shay.”
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The leaflet Daphne had handed her had a bold red title : Seeking roommates? Reach out! Enid made a sour face and looked up at her once more.
"What do you say? This could solve a lot of our issues, you living with your brother, me paying the whole rent; we can kill two birds with one stone!"
"Aren't you rooming with your sister? No offense, Vivi," she clarified.
Vivienne shook her head in response, "None taken. I wanted to prove I can room on my own like Daph, despite her insistence on rooming together."
"Ugh!" Daphne rolled her eyes, "Quit acting all grown-up, you're 18! Anyway, as you can see, I got rejected!" She turned to her sister, vindictive, and smiled painfully, "So I got an open spot in my apartment. What do you say?"
"... I'll think about it; thank you for the offer," she said with a hoarse tone.
From then on, the leaflet was placed in her pocket. During her next class, it rolled around. On her way home, it crumpled in on itself. Once Enid walked into their condo and placed her hand in her pocket, she found it had become a shriveled mess. She opened it carefully : Seeking roommates? Reach out! The bold red lettering was a wet slap to the face. She threw it out the door furiously, but not before her brother could catch it. 
“Hey! Lâche ça tout de suite, it’s not yours!” she yelled at him.
“Woh hey, calm down, Ellie; I thought you knew better than to litter,” Fred crossed the doorstep into their apartment and removed his shoes, “and mine? Of course not, but it’s not yours either since I just saw you throw it away,” he handed the piece of paper over to her. 
Enid froze for a while, staring at the paper with distress. Fred looked at her before directing his gaze towards the leaflet, “... Do you.. want to leave?”
“I…” she didn’t know what to say.
He swallowed, “You don’t have to stay, Ellie, I’d never force you; you know that, right?”
“But, what about my studies?”
“I’d still help you pay for them.”
“Still?”
“Yes, really… I want what’s best for you.”
Her eyes looked up at him; he was sincere. He meant every word, but the shine in his eyes... Enid felt guilty, “I want to be with her, Fred, mais… I don’t want you to be sad, because of me.”
“I won’t be; I’ll be sad, but I'd never blame you. You deserve to choose what you want to do in life.”
Enid’s blank stare was highlighted by a single teardrop, streaking down her cheek. He extended his hand to wipe it off and forced a smile on his face, “If you need to go Ellie, don’t be scared. I will remain the annoying thorn on your side forever; we’re family, remember?” He pulled her into an embrace.
Ellie chuckled and hugged him back, feeling his arms tremble, “Ya… I know home isn’t a place.”
Chapters: 1 - 2 - 3 - 4 - 5 - 6
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Hey! Thanks for reading! I know that last scene probably left you with many questions, so I’ll be happy to answer the general ones, since I know I don’t want to address them in this fic:
Fred and Enid have a complicated family history, but mainly know that they were separated, Enid was placed in the child care system since her birth. Recently, Fred lost their mother to an illness. She admitted to Fred that he had a sister on her deathbed, and this helped him cope with her passing. He felt less lonely knowing he still had a living family member, and he reconnected with her right before she left child protective services on her 18th birthday. They have lived together ever since. Enid is currently 25, do the math XD Damn that story is sad- Sorry guys, I like complicated relationships it seems XD I wanted to include this scene though, as it demonstrates their bond and how important it is for Fred to find company for himself, to rebuild that family bond he feels like is lacking in his life. If there are any other questions about any other character, send an ask my way! I’ll be happy to answer! ^^ Know that we won’t be hearing much about them from this point onward; they are mostly background characters. 
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Doodle reward for scrolling to the end! ^^💖
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cloudy-osc · 6 months ago
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"Ever since she was little riley would always talk about these...friends in her head. We didnt know what they were of course. She even draw them on many diffrent occasions. As she got older she rarely ever brought it up untill recently how ever...she brought it up to bree and grace but they were just as confused as we are heh...why do you ask?"
Joy said to her orange companion who had a tense look of her face
"i-its just" she started "for some reason i keep worrying-no riley keeps worrying about this...i just dont understand why"
She fiddled with her sleeves before speaking up again
"you said she draw them right?"
"want me to show you?"
anxiety nodded as joy summoned the memory. Riley was no older then 4 at the time and she was coloring with her tonge sticking out like always. anxiety would have thought it was cute if the drawings wereint so...familiar? They looked familiar. Like shes seen these before...
She looked back at joy who had a smile of her face. She looked back then back at joy. Then again and again and again and again and-
"wait what!?"
"huh? anxiety whats the matter?"
"t-those drawings...there of you guys!"
Joy looked at anxiety puzzled. She looked back. That couldint be them...right
"whaat? I dout that. Its a coincidence at best"
"but joy-"
"besides Riley doseint know we exist"
"but joy!- ack!?"
anxietys worrying was cut short by a pillow to the head by ennui
"can you shut up im trying to sleep"
"oh! Ennui just the emotion i needed! Help me convince here!"
she said running and pushing ennui to the control pannel. She scoffed in return looking up at the memory playing
"and what exactly am i looking at anxiety."
"those drawings! They look familiar right?"
"...hm"
*she pulled out her phone takeing a photo of joy.*
"hmmm...looks similar to joy"
"exactly!!" anxiety yelled before looking ar joy
"see what i mean?"
"...i mean i guess it looks kinda like me" joy started "but its not possible Riley doseint know what we look like let alone if we even exist!"
"can you two just sleep on it or something. Ugh C'est trop tard for this nonsense"
anxiety sighed as she nodded
"exactly wee-wees right!"
"dont call me that"
"you just need to sleep on it. Youll forget about it by morning!"
It wasint that simple bit anxiety couldint argue. Joy then rushed the newer ones to bed as she went back to dream duty
"theres no way that real...right?"
But it got worse from then on.
(OK END NOTES! this is for an au i made a bit ago that i want to explore more. Ill write more soon but for now this is all i got. I may turn this into an ask blog or series or something like that but for now this is all you get. I hope you enjoyed! Feel fres to ask questions :>)
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zenmom · 4 months ago
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It was at that moment…That moment I discovered…
INSIDE OUT 2 Fanfics! YEEEEEEEE!
I had to search through AO3 past the not so great and really off-putting fanfics and found this one! I have yet to find more of those IO2 fanfics like it.
In this fanfic, Anxiety and the rest of the emotions had drawn out Riley’s mind map and almost all the areas are charted. The only place left uncharted is the Subconscious, a terrifying place where all of Riley’s greatest fears are kept, and Fear offered to go with Anxiety to that place.
Update: found more!
I swear my Imagination Land is failing as of late… and My Anxiety is freaking out over that because she was used to my reading turning the words into a movie that she and the others would watch.
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nervefear-scaredypants · 3 months ago
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Inside Out fanfiction announcement
I'm working on part 1 of my Inside Out fanfiction, the fanfiction is called "Natural Disaster".
Description of the fanfiction: It's been a fine day in San Francisco until a tornado forms from a thunderstorm. The Andersen family have to get evacuated from a tornado.
Stay tuned when part 1 releases!
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The first sign of Riley growing up was a cigarette
Ayy, new fic!
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grayalloy · 6 months ago
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Made an Inside Out fic because brainrot
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jellystarsdrops · 3 months ago
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question for inside out fanfic writers — what are some ways/tips to write both the emotions and riley?
I'm currently working on a fic and i want to do like switches between riley and the emotions point of view but how would I do it in a way that makes sense, it's kinda confusing.... ( Ĭ ^ Ĭ )
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momokat · 4 months ago
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More Drawpile doodles. This time I was reading this very short fic:
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schmedterlingfreud · 5 days ago
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Hai mai provato a scrivere fanfictions di Inside Out?
Onestamente no, non ci ho mai né pensato né provato; soprattutto per il fatto che non mi è mai nemmeno capitato di leggerne, ahah.
Inside Out è comunque un film che ho adorato e che ho visto un bel po' di volte -- sia l'uno sia il due. Uno dei migliori della Pixar, secondo me! Magari, è proprio perché lo ritengo già perfetto e bellissimo nel suo insieme che non sento il bisogno di "approfondirlo" ulteriormente elaborandoci dietro qualche fanfiction.
Ma mai dire mai! Magari un giorno mi colpirà un'ispirazione improvvisa e allora avrò anch'io occasione di condividere qualche storiella. :)
p.s. Se tu o qualcun altro avesse qualche bella fanfiction di Inside Out da consigliare, sono tutta orecchi! ( ˶ˆ꒳ˆ˵ )
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dogdaysareover365 · 6 months ago
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@julybreakbingo - sick fic
Fade Away
Author hasn’t seen inside out two yet
fandom: inside out
rating: teen audiences and up
content warnings under
tw: major character death, cancer, sad ending, open ending, medical inaccuracies
summary: Something is majorly wrong with Riley. There isn't much her emotions can do.
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1tsstargaze59 · 1 month ago
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Let's do this! I couldn't do a reaction, because my first reading was THIS MORNING ON THE WAY TO COLLEGE ON THE METRO 💀 So instead, I'll leave a little review here ^^
‼️NOTE : THIS IS MY OPINION, NOT GOSPEL! TY FOR YOUR UNDERSTANDING‼️ALSO SPOILERS FOR THE FIC AHEAD LOL
Overall : It was a fun read! Quite thrilling, you can feel the tension of a spy at work from the straight forward writing. I recommend y'all to give this fic a read when you have a 15-30 mins of free time and if you like the AU ofc.
Critiques : I'd add more descriptions for the locations because it was hard to imagine the space and, thus, the actions, which is sorta important for action scenes! It can also contribute to the ambiance and the feelings, the vibes~ You could also describe Miss April more to enhance her presence!
Here's a few sentences that seemed off to me? Like, the syntax is off:
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It should be smtg like "Guess he doesn't like your seggo mitts all over it? Says I should get rid of it at any cost. I don't know— but at least we get to have some fun, eh?" Having your mitts on smtg and getting rid of smtg at any cost are two separate ideas, they don't fit well in one sentence lol
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It should be "No need to tell me twice." OR "You don't have to tell me twice." Not both simultaneously- that just sounds off /lh XD
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This should be "To be honest/Frankly (your choice), she’s had enough 'comedy' for one day." That's how the saying goes hehe
This part seems to forget show don't tell, it breaks the fourth wall imo. For Sol to be pointing this out makes more sense than for Verte to be like "LORE DUMP!!" XD I do like their dynamic tho, it's super fun ^^✨️
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Now, a really random nitpick XD because the weirdest things set off alarms in my head???
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It's "glass shards-y" ... I told you it's a nitpick XD
To leave on a good note, compliments! 🥰✨️
April has great presence in her dialogue! Overall, you have great dialogue writing ^^ (I'm awful at it, show me your ways-) Bughaw, Bughaw~ qvq💕 10/10 great support character, no criticism for her, I love her TvT💙 You writing style fits the Spy AU very well, I approve! ^^b
Anyway, I'll draw smtg for the fic later, for now, I just have these sketches of a Flustercringe fankid I'm working on
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OK BYE!!! ^^✨️
-Stargaze~☆
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LOG: THE BRIEFCASE BIT [SITE . AO3]
Once Agent Verte had secured her mission objective, she was set to return to HQ without a hitch. Unfortunately, there's someone else who wants that briefcase off her hands - someone that Verte wished she didn't have to face with her ill-fitting spy shoes.
What's this? A Spy AU fic??! That's RRRIGHT baby!! This is actually what I intended to post on my birthday, but I was like yannooo what. I think a group poster is more fitting to do first.
This has actually been a WIP since September that I've been slowly chipping away at. I intended this to be a self-contained oneshot to test my action writing skills but. Well. Somehow it turned into a 4k beast. Sorry. Still self-contained though! Expect future stuff to have this sorta vibe. I might play around with different formats though.
I added some context on ao3 as well: this happens before series A113 officially becomes a thing. Joyce isn't part of the League yet, and Verte and Bughaw are the only spies present. So basically it's one of those day-in-the-life stuff for Agent Verte.
The website version has some funky formatting in it that I can't do on AO3 (well more like.. I just don't want to do it on AO3 LOL) ! I might add a feature on the website to change fonts if that's something you guys would need.
Anyways hope you guys have fun!! I've got more stuff in the works but I think I'll take it easy for a little while. Ha. hah. *explodes
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outromoony · 7 months ago
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Riley thinks she has anxiety now? Just wait until she stumbles upon a 100k+ word, mutual pining, slow-burn fanfiction. She'll be clutching her pillow and screaming into the void by chapter three.
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cloudy-osc · 2 months ago
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I want to write an angui fanfic SO BAD. PLEASE GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS BECAUSE I DONT HAVE ANY PLOT IDEAS 😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏
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