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Oh no worries about not giving a long response. I get it. Truly. I am just glad you found the feedback helpful. I always worry about stepping over the line with IF things since they are a weird area where my MC is "unique" but also very much still the author's.
As for the question, what is the "aggressive" option exactly? I chose the "it wasn't tolerable option" for the mage discussion (is there another option in that section) or did you mean the church walking thing? Cause I wouldn't call the "I don't need to be coddled" option aggressive, just...proud, but I also haven't gone through all the options yet so I'll try it out!
I am also quite happy to have given you an idea! I just really love Saarah and honestly want to cry in their arms lol. Like nothing is better than breakdowns in front of family imho. Especially as...angsty as the Hound's family is.
For now, dear author, take some well earned rest. I may or may not be writing a little drabble with my Hound, if you are comfortable with it of course. Because I really did love the update as a whole. And you are a boss for getting it done. Hope you feel better eventually.
Ah, I think I understand which option you chose. Did you pick the middle one here, by chance?
Those are not directly correlated to what happens next, I just had fun writing them. If you'd like to have a more distrustful scene towards Arthur you can try the last one.
But yes, I do see the issue if you are playing a numb Hound, which isn't particularly fond of the marriage or Arthur in general. I think I saw that middle ground as more neutral towards Arthur, sometimes positive, so I may have to edit some small things.
In any case, thank you! And feel free to write anything you want. On the discord server we had many people writng scenarios for their Hounds and it was awesome
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i turned 57 today!😊 kurikive burfdae
#—kuritalk...#57 laps around the sun#I'll try to update mc if i have the chance!!#sorry ive been missing my daily updates#love u guys ❤️
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Chapter 7 + Ash Hangout Public Update is now live! 🎉
The Chapter 7 and Ash Hangout update is finally here 🔥😁 I'm sorry for the slight delay, I had something urgent to attend to today and I just got home and I just basically went straight to my computer to upload this update.
Finally, we are starting to get into the ROs' first hangout sessions. Of course, to start us off, we'll have Ash's hangout session 😁This update adds around 31K of new words, bringing the total word count so far to around 356,701K words!
Anyway, this update also brings quite a lot of changes in the coding, especially for the skip chapter function, so I'm going to strongly suggest you guys play with clean save, either from the beginning or using the skip chapter function.
I have recently added another skip-chapter checkpoint, which is Chapter 3 in addition to the already existing one on Chapter 6. There is also now an autosave function at the beginning of every chapter starting on Chapter 2, so you'll be able to replay any chapter you're currently reading and try out different options in that chapter.
Anyway, enough of the technicalities.
Here's what you can expect in this update:
The set up to the ROs' first hangout sessions
Ash's first hangout session
Go down the memory lane and see snippets of MC's most cherished memories.
Some more Viktor 😔
A mix of angst, wholesome, and even potential fluff 🤭
🔥🧡😉
Ash/Rin poly route is not yet ready for this hangout and it's still work-in-progress 🙏
New stuff added to previous chapters:
Added autosave/reload function for Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, and Chapter 5.
Added another skip-chapter point to Chapter 3, in addition to the already existing Chapter 6.
Also, little news that I'm going to make a post of tomorrow, I'm about to open both the Side Story and Spicy Side Story ideas and suggestions for this month on both Patreon and Ko-Fi, so if you're interested in supporting me while also getting some exclusive stuff, please do consider checking out my pages and subscribing 💖
I hope you guys enjoy the update! Oh, and also, feel free to send asks about the new update, but I'll probably hold off on answering them until a few days have passed to make sure a lot of readers already have the chance to check out the update and not accidentally spoil them 😊
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seventeen ao3 fic recs
other rec lists
pt. 2 (completed mid-length fics, <50k words)
pt. 3 (completed shorter fics, <10k words)
pt. 4 (incomplete fics)
so i recently got into reading svt fics and this is a compilation of a few of my favourites :) all recs here are completed (yay no cliffhangers)!
these are mostly minwon, but there are some other pairings as well and i'll be updating this as i go~
also props to anyone who writes!! both fics and in general bc writing is not easy and the creativity and flair that some of these authors have... simply unmatched
edit: i've split the original post into several shorter lists (according to fic length) so each post is a little more readable - links above, happy reading!
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all-time faves (last updated 9/5/2024)
as y'all can tell i love the longer fics bc they are j so immersive and memorable esp when the characters capture the essence and little quirks of svt so well sooo here goes
Catch the Stars (minwon, 150k words, completed)
this is often hailed as one of the top 3 minwon fics of all time and i wholeheartedly agree!! this might be my fave fic of all time - i really love the city boy x country boy trope, where the mcs form a connection in spite of their different backgrounds and life experiences hehe also random but some of the scenes reminded me of cmbyn (small town italy peachy summer vibes) lolol
Kalon (minwon, 200k words, completed)
my heart broke for wonwoo in this fic and it was absolutely worth the read :"") it's by the same author as catch the stars and her writing is just *chef's kiss* really loved how each conflict and setback was handled and built upon, and wonwoo's inner conflict due to his fear of relationships was really well-depicted and realistic, and the intimacy of them spending time together in the spectacle shop after hours was everything i could've asked for
Love Stuck (minwon, 200k words, completed)
don't usually read parent aus because i prefer stories where the mcs are closer in profile to the actual pair but this was very well-written!! loved how the author handled the struggles of single parent-child dynamics as well as the slow burn - each character was really fleshed out, the chapters didn't feel repetitive despite the fic being quite long and it was all in all a vv wholesome fic hehe
'til kingdom come (minwon, 160k words, completed)
this was a historical au and the writing was so poetic!! and exquisite!! not forgetting the tension and drama of it all, how the world-building was so intricately wrought out, the language so befitting of the period, the development of the entire war arc beyond the romance, each character so original yet still bearing hints that remain true to their persons, the chapters being well-paced, the epilogue that wrapped things up so beautifully... i can't even begin to fathom how long it took the author to come up with this gripping masterpiece askshdfjkdsf i'd give a million kudos if i could
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others (in order of descending word count)
the sun and the silver lining (minwon, 60k words, completed)
this one made my heart feel things :"") really loved this author's descriptions (the metaphors in this fic were unparalleled) and how they give nuance to the internal thoughts and feelings of the characters!! slight b99 vibes with policeofficer!wonwoo x paramedic!mingyu lolol
Like the Beginning (minwon, 55k words, completed)
this was heartbreak/comfort with a second-chance romance and slight hospital playlist vibes lol i relish in the pain of reading about wonwoo trying to go back to how things were, mingyu being torn between indulging him and wanting to keep his distance, that feeling of looking at someone you once loved only to realise that you never moved on in the first place ugh
in defense of the side character (minwon, 55k words, completed)
actor!mingyu x scriptwriter!wonwoo - super well-written and it even has art!! the scripts made it all the more realistic and i have a soft spot for fics on the entertainment industry bc the overall atmosphere is always a little different from the slice of life/school aus like there's this underlying tension of being under public scrutiny and the pressure of being public figures and i j love when the fics capture these nuances in the story hah
Ask me no questions (and I'll tell you no lies) (jicheol, 52k words, completed)
jicheol: island survival edition
Change of Ends (soonwoo, 52k, completed)
tennis!au - this might actually be my favourite soonwoo fic ever?? loved how their relationship was fleshed out over the years with the use of a non-linear narrative to sprinkle in memories from their past between their moments at present, and wonwoo was so sweet and loving here and it was such a refreshing take on his character bc he is usually the colder one. also, the level of detail for the sport was incredible and made the reading experience extra immersive so highly-recommend!!
A Mighty Stranger (minwon, 50k words, completed)
a fantasy minwon au for a change! really cool concept for a fic and there was so much effort and research that went into this bc the story spanned across different continents and time periods so i'd recommend this to those looking for smth diff
feel free to rec any fics based on what i've shared!! would really appreciate it thank you hehe
#seventeen#svt#ao3#ao3 fanfic#mingyu#wonwoo#meanie#minwon#seoksoon#hoshi#dokyeom#vernon#seungkwan#verkwan#fic recs#fanfiction#seokgyu#kim mingyu#jeon wonwoo#kwon soonyoung#lee dokyeom#chwe vernon#boo seungkwan#soonwoo
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Another anon's two-cents if you'd like,
I think it's okay and even good that it might be frustrating. It makes a ton of sense for a game about healing to have frustrating moments because healing itself not garunteed to be a smooth or even linear process which IS frustrating when you just want to heal and return to normalcy. It isnt throwing a wrench in the works fot the sake of padding the plot or weighing down the pacing, it feels natural and serves a narrative purpose, lending weight to the idea that healing is a long, sometimes complicated process that isn't always smooth sailing. so the narrative, if anything, is advanced when mc encounters a potentially frustrating wall or set back. And not only does it make for an understandable and relatable story, but if you want to give potientially frustrated players a way to vent that within the story itself it could turn a frustration with the story's mechanicals or pacing to a way to empathize with mc.
Giving mc the chance to experience and react to setbacks through hope, frustration, or dejection in these situations literally builds their character, and being able to interact with that character building process in different ways depending on our mood or the kind of character we want to play through choices, even if its just an emotional response, is a big part of what makes interactive fiction so compelling in the first place!
Sorry for the wall of text, either way I'll enjoy the story, Im already invested in mc and their new pack and looking forward to updates 🥰
Thank you so much for this very thoughtful ask, anon. I completely empathise and agree with everything you said.
It is why I have decided to go with this path, because as you said it fits the main theme of healing of the game, and healing is painful, frustrating and can bring one step forward and three steps back.
I'm going to try my best to both describe MC's emotions and give the players varied possible reactions to the setbacks MC will go through.
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Trying to Make Sense of Rafayel's Timeline
This has been updated here.
Spoilers for basically everything below, except for the endings of he Myths, as I do not have those yet.
First, so notes:
See outline for three possible options for the timing of the pinky promise/rescue.
As children, she rescued him when he was stranded on the beach and then Rafayel made a pinky promise with MC that “It's settled then. If you don't return I'll…I'll chase you to the ends of the Earth.” (Nightly Stroll and Main Story chapter 7)
Also 3 options for the slaughter of the Lemurians after Rafayel is deceived as a child.
As a boy, Rafayel sings the “Siren's Ballad” as an elegy for the slaughtered Lemurians as he sits on a coral reef alone surrounded by waves dyed red with their blood, watching ships sail away, carrying those who deceived him and slaughtered his people (Anecdote 3). (Could be that Rafayel trusted the wrong humans and revealed either the location of the Lemurians or that they were all vulnerable on Ebb Day) (Perhaps MC had an unwitting hand in this).
These two events may be back to back or occur at separate points in the timeline. Inclined to think the promise came first, then the deception, but could be that he was stranded because of the deception/slaughter, or these events occur separately.
Timeline:
On Earth, past life/lives:
First possible option for the pinky promise/rescue: Their first lives ever meeting each other, starting it all off.
First possible option for the deception/slaughter: Immediately after their first encounter with each other.
Rafayel and MC are lovers.
MC cursed to be a Sea Witch in the Abyssal Rift and has forgotten Rafayel and being human. He gives up a scale, some of his blood, and his song in a shell to set her free. The potion she makes with these is a bitter scent reminiscent of fermented aquatic plants. She turns human and remembers him. He gets her to shore and then he turns into foam. (When she regains her memories, the voices that play are of current day Rafayel, from his date Your Fragrance. Possibly just because she is remembering this in a dream, rather than those being the actual memories she recovered at the time.) (Fragrant Dream)
Second option for pinky promise/rescue and/or deception/slaughter: Reunited in some reincarnation between the initial life and the current one.
Current life, on Earth:
2024 Rafayel born March 6th (or so he claims).
2026 MC born.
Rafayel was given a Whale Call by Lemurian adults when he was a child. He never had a chance to use it and buried it in a Lemurian city under the sea. (Was this in this life or a previous one?)
Third option for pinky promise/rescue and/or deception/slaughter: This timeline when they are children, likely before the Deepspace Tunnel and Chronorift Catastrophe in 2034
Rafayel's only living family on Earth is his Aunt Talia, also Lemurian. There are some other surviving Lemurians as well who are being hunted, tortured, and harvested for their scales and blood. (Anecdote 3)
2034 Ruins of Lemuria were revealed near Linkon the same year that the Deepspace Tunnel appeared and the Chronorift Catastrophe occurred. MC (age 8) now has protocore shards in her heart, is adopted by Granny, and has little memory before this event (perhaps this is when she forgets Rafayel).
Rafayel is an Opera Singer in Verona going by the moniker “Mo”, hunting down and killing people, possibly as revenge for the destruction of Lemuria and slaughter of his people. He is in touch with Talia. He also recently attended a Seamoon Ceremony for another Lemurian, K, who dies and is returned to the sea (after having his scales and blood taken). It is suggested that Rafayel is trying to accomplish something to save the Lemurians, saying, “Not every Lemurian survivor can wait.” It appears the longer he takes to accomplish his goal, the more of the Lemurians die in the meanwhile. (Anecdote 3)
He is not painting.
He is being investigated by a private detective named Louis.
Rafayel remembers the dying cries of his people.
Rafayel leaves Verona and moves to Linkon city. He has a picture of MC in his pocket. (Anecdote 3)
Rafayel uses a private investigator to find out MC is attending Linkon University. He takes a position as a special lecturer there. He sees MC again, talking to some of her classmates. He is confused that she doesn’t seem to know anything about Lemuria. (Anecdote 2)
Rafayel begins painting again.
Rafayel does not tolerate the PI getting too close to MC or taking pictures of her.
Describes his feelings for MC as akin to a spice, painful and addictive.
Indicates he is prepared to be with her for the rest of his life, but also wants to “settle the score”.
Rafayel believes she is being surrounded by dangerous entities, some of whom may possibly be trying to use her to trap him. This is part of why he doesn’t approach her at this time. He decides he can afford to take his time and make his moves carefully.
Rafayel hires Thomas to be his agent. (Anecdote 1)
2048 MC (age 22) begins work as a Deepspace Hunter. MC and Rafayel are reunited, though MC does not remember Rafayel. Rafayel’s home is called Mo Art Studio.
Rafayel acquires a red Flamula from Lemuria the first time he reintroduces himself to MC. She gives it to him to take home.
When Rafayel attempts to abandon MC to drowning, there is a tail mark that appears above his heart, and he turns around and goes back to her. (Possibly an indication of the bond they forged when he saved her with his scale or made a vow with her).
Lemuria is described as being gone for thousands of years, yet Lemurians are still alive now. (Possibly they had gone into hiding and were revealed when Rafayel was deceived.) (Rafayel described himself as “a lost pearl that washed up on the beach” in Ebb and Flow.)
In “Nightly Stroll” date, Rafayel makes MC vow never to make him wait again, a vow that is blessed by a little blue fish, an Emissary of the Ocean.
In “Your Fragrance” date, Rafayel asks MC who gave her the catnip-like perfume (he says it smells familiar), suggesting she is working with someone, using underhanded methods to trap him.
(This smell has a similar description to the perfume he gives her later that gives her the dream, as well as the smell of the potion that turns her human. “Bitter like fermented plants”.)
“Are you trying to run away again? I'm not going anywhere. You're going to lock me up again. You're with them, I just know it. Don't think I'm unaware of what you're about to do. I won't fall for it again. Not this time.”
(Order of events: Your Fragrance > Dangerously Close > Fragrant Dream)
In “Ebb and Flow” date, he reveals himself as a Lemurian to MC on Ebb Day. She promises to never hurt him.
This vulnerability suggests he has a remarkable amount of trust in MC, despite his bitterness at her forgetting him.
Rafayel asks MC what she would do if this was all a trap he set up to kill her. This is what is happening in Rafayel’s myth story. Does Rafayel in this time period somehow know about that or is this just foreshadowing?
In “Whalefall Lament” date, Rafayel takes MC to underwater ruins of Lemuria to dig up the Whale Call he buried there as a child. He describes his childhood as boring and closely guarded. He made many escape attempts when he was young, and was given the Whale Call as a means of protection, but he never had the opportunity to use it, as his escape attempts did not succeed again after this.
Philos (estimated 30,000 years after Earth’s destruction):
Myth takes place on Philos, likely sometime between Xavier and MC meeting for the first time (Xavier’s Anecdote 3) and Xavier's myth story. The oceans have been missing for 30,000 years (possibly because Earth was destroyed and Philos was made with a fake core holding separate tectonic plates together).
Rafayel was bound to MC when the oceans still existed by giving her one of his scales (see Fragrant Dream for when this may have occurred).
MC's heart keeps the people of Philos immortal (See Xavier’s Myth for the connection between MC’s heart, the people’s immortality, and Philos’ core) and she was “born from the depths of the earth”. MC remembers living on the Island of Songs in a hut by herself, surrounded by the ocean. (Was this in her first life or some subsequent life on Earth?)
Could Hat Island and the Island of Songs be the same place?
MC is gifted Rafayel when they are young and sets him free. Rafayel later implies he was only caught because he wanted to be.
Rafayel and MC are reunited as adults when she is attempting to escape the palace. They meet several times and grow close, though Rafayel is plotting with Amund.
Rafayel is mentioned as the second most important person to princess MC. The first visits her often. Who is this? Xavier? The King?
There are other Lemurians on Philos with Rafayel, including Amund. They are killing human nobles, with the belief that by doing so, it will help restore The oceans and Lemurian.
Rafayel is referred to as the God of the Sea in the myth and it is implied that his heart has been stolen by MC. Possibly not literal.
Rafayel believes revenge is meaningless. Only wants to restore the oceans and Lemuria.
MC can use a Lemurian Beacon to summon Rafayel.
Rafayel and Amund take MC to the Island of Songs (now no longer an island), and she recognizes it. Rafayel has to decide whether to believe the legends and cut out MC’s heart in an effort to restore the oceans and Lemuria. Rafayel had previously indicated that the heart must be given willingly. (Don’t have the final 2 chapters of the Myth yet to know how this plays out).
On another note, I am now just sitting here thinking about how both Xavier and Rafayel have loved her for over 30,000 years. And Xavier has been alive through that whole time, possibly watching her die over and over again. *sobs*
Please let me know your thoughts, questions, corrections, insights, what have you. I'm sure i missed stuff or made mistakes. This will likely be updated when I can finish the myths.
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Hollowed Minds Progress Update 1/02/24
Hi! I hope you're all having a good year so far! I planned to post this last night but I was too anxious over having to return to work lmfao (with the holidays being over and all). Anyway, I know it's been a year since my last update; believe me, I'm upset about it, too, and I'm trying to make up for that.
To be completely honest, aside from my health, one thing that's been stopping me from progressing steadily was my attempts at improving the way I write. I was struggling to find my own style the entire year, experimenting over and over (sometimes without rest, like an idiot), and I know that probably sounds stupid, but writing as a craft is so special to me that I want to be better at it.
It did backfire, though. A lot. Mostly because I couldn't maintain a balance between this and irl stuff.
The thing is, I plan to write trad novels and short stories in the future. I plan to go back to writing screenplays, too. I don't think I'll ever stop making IFs, but there are things I want to write about that I can never do through this medium (and the same is true vice versa). This is also why I tend to keep editing HM while trying to push through with newer updates; this is the only way I can learn more about what I wish to do in the future. This is my chance to practice and experiment, before I get anything published and make the kind of impression I aim to make.
And I think I finally found the style I love to use the most this time.
I feel ready now to post progress updates regularly at least every two weeks (this one doesn't count). I was ashamed of my slow progress for quite a while, but I know I can start moving forward again. I'm also just eager to show you the story I've always wanted to share, and that'd never happen unless I push myself so :').
You're free to ask for progress in case I miss doing this btw, just. don't be an ass about it lmao. And feel free to send asks as well!
So far, this is what I'm trying to improve for the posted demo:
conciseness
strengthening the settings and the descriptions involving them
revising a few dialogues that do not fit the characters at all
readability and making some details clearer
overall pacing of ch2's first part
the nightmare scenes
reassessment of which variations would be most important to the plot and MC's characterization.
everything else I cannot think of right now
I think I'll dedicate a week or two into finishing whatever needs to be cleaned up so there'll be less game-breaking bugs that might happen for the new content. But after that 👀
That's all for tonight!
P.S. recently bought a lampshade and damn. this is definitely much better for my eyes when I write.
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Hello everyone! The next update isn't close to being finished yet, since as usual I keep adding in new stuff, but before I respond to the asks for Roselyna's Matchmaking Service, I thought I'd update/recap everyone on all the big changes and new stuff that's coming:
New Nickname Changes/Options
MC's Pet Backstory
More Details about MC's Dad
Revamped Twin Fight Scene
New Secret About Julie & Maggie
JM's Mansion Sleepover Branch
Ancestry and Heritage Passives
Character Class, Trait, and Stat Adjustments
New Locket Stat and Intimidation Stat Rework
Missing Choices
Read below for more details:
New Nickname Changes/Options
You will now be able to change MC & Twin's nicknames anytime once you unlock the diary!
In addition, you will now also be able to choose/change the nickname you use for each F6E member (even if you aren't bestfriends), and change what you call Maggie/MC's Dad/Julie/Robert via the diary.
Speaking of nicknames, Wayne's diary entry will now mention that his middle name (and Mary's maiden name) is Hart! Of course, it's very much on brand for him to say that that's his middle name. 😄
MC's Pet Backstory
MC's pet will now have a prosthetic (I'm thinking one of their hind legs).
Okay, it's not an actual backstory, but this opens up new backstory opportunities (you'll know if you read IAC), about why Julie and Robert adopted them in the first place.
More Details about MC's Dad
In the next update, I will be updating the prologue to mention the job of MC's Dad, along with finally giving the option to choose where MC's Dad is from (if your MC is Half-Filipino).
Revamped Twin Fight Scene
I haven't actually played through DDWCaPH! since I finished Chapter 2, and when I finally did last month, I noticed a ton of typos, confusing lines, and awkward scenes, which I'll be working to address.
The twin fight scene in Chapter 1 is definitely a big offender, so I'll try to rewrite it so it has a bit more build up.
New Secret About Julie & Maggie
The last conversation you have with Paddy in Chapter 5 will have new details about Julie's laptop. Technically I've already kinda spoiled this secret before in one of the older versions, but here's a related hint featuring a new choice in Chapter 3:
I've also changed a few details in the conversation about how Tita Josie met Kuya Popoy, but you're not supposed to know that secret until Chapter 6 in the new branch. 😉 Speaking of...
JM's Mansion Sleepover Branch
Since I'll be skipping the Investigation Branch for now, I figured adding this branch is a good middle ground. It also lets me move the unfinished party conversation with Tita Steph/Yaya Connie/Kuya Popoy to that branch instead, since the party scene is overloaded already. Plus, it's also the only chance you'll have to visit his mansion.
Anyway, it looks like the majority want to have the sleepover at JM's instead! (Although I have a hunch that some of you are just more interested in having the chance to talk to B again 😛) I had a bit of trouble adapting some of the Chapter 6 scenes I've planned, but I figured it out eventually.
Ancestry and Heritage Passives
You will now be able to select your MC's Ancestry Trait regardless of your chosen favorite genre! You can check out this post for details about all the new passives.
Character Class, Trait, and Stat Adjustments
Character Class Buffs
Class Bonuses will be increased from 5/10/20% to 10/20/30% to make them more impactful. Class Passives will now also give +25/50/100% EXP from successful stat checks of the same stat as the Class Bonus (since the coding for it is already there).
Vocabulary Trait Changes
Someone pointed out that it's weird that inputting a custom swear word always censors it, so now I'm making it so that only the 🐤[Young at Heart] and 🐣[Child at Heart] Traits will censor your input and most of the swear words.
In addition, the above traits will now grant bonus EXP when increasing your Naive Personality, while the other two vocabulary traits 🦅[Mini-Adult] / 🦆[Childhood Graduate] will grant bonus EXP when increasing your Precocious Personality to make them a bit more immersive.
Gender Traits
As mentioned in the last poll, I was considering including the gender-related options (specifically Trans/Non-binary/Genderfluid/Questioning) to the list of Traits.
The majority seemed in agreement, so I'll go ahead with the change (unless someone has a good argument against it). I think adding it to the list of traits better communicates to the player that it's not just a cosmetic choice that gets forgotten.
Other Trait Adjustments
The 🥇[Top 5] and 🥈[Top 10] Trait Requirements have been lowered significantly (and now takes MC's Knowledge Stat into consideration). To make the EXP Penalty make more sense, it now only applies to EXP gained from Knowledge Stat checks.
This also applies to the 😎[Self-Confident] EXP Penalty (it now only applies to EXP gained from Charm Stat checks).
There are a bunch of other Trait adjustments, but these are the biggest ones.
New Locket Stat and Intimidation Stat Rework
Now that you've discovered one of your locket's powers, I've decided to add a new main stat alongside your HP. This will function like mana or energy in other games, and if you've read IAC, you probably have an idea of what this will be used for in the future. 😉
Your maximum HP will now also be increased to 1,000, and each point of Vigor will now increase it by 10. This was done to make chip damage (like being whacked with a stuffed toy) less threatening.
The Intimidation Stat will now be based on your Vigor Stat, and is increased by 50% of both of your Cold and Composed Personality Stats. Certain Traits/Passives will still increase/decrease Intimidation, but this makes the stat less dependent on your personality stats.
For example: A Tall MC with 30 Vigor, 70% Cold, and 50% Composed will have an Intimidation Stat of 54.
Missing Choices
This includes:
Valentine's Entry in Roselyna's Diary
Karaoke party scene with Paddy, Wayne, and Roselyna
Pinoy Henyo party scene with Lily, JM, Yaya Connie, Kuya Popoy, and Mayari
Sari-sari Store Trinket
Chapter 3 Bike Choice (This was already coded actually, I just forgot to make it selectable 😅)
The 3rd Phone Game (Honestly I procrastinated doing this one because I wanted to make the name different according to your favorite genre. Yup.)
I'm also aware that the background music isn't playing, so I'll try to fix that as well (no idea how that happened)
That's not everything in the next update, but yup, that's why it's taking so long again.
Feel free to ask me questions about the next update! I'm still currently deep in the coding mines, so apologies if it takes me a while to respond to the asks for Roselyna's Matchmaking Service!
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Hiii shinyy!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES SMMM! ESPECIALLY THE TWISTED WONDERLAND ONES! THE DAMNATION AU SCARABIA AND POMIOFORE CHAPTERS WERE AAMZAING I ABSOLUTELY LOVED EM! I am new here and the first ever stories I have read from you was the damnation au but I have been reading your other stories as well and I absolutely enjoy them with all my heart. The impostor au was soooo!!! So I was wondering i am have currently finished reading the "you're my favorite" stories and I was wondering if you were going to finish it. I AM NOT PRESSURING OR ANYTHING!!! If you don't want to finish it it's fine since it's your story and you can do whatever you want. But I love it and was just wondering if there was going to be any more updated. Ik you're currently working on the damnation au ignihide and diasomnia versions so ik you're busy. BUT ANYWAYS!!! I love your stories they're unlike any other story I AHVE ever read. When I started reading I was prepared to be cringed out a bit since most Yandere stories cringe me out but since it was twst I stayed and I am sure glad I did. I was OVER THE MOON when the damnation au was updated. I love how real the mc's are and not just some yn pick mes. You write the characters so well I'm just shocked how well your writing skills are. No matter how much I reread your stories it entertains me all the time. I love your writing and I don't want you to push yourself too hard. Anyways. Thank you and have a good day!!!! 💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
Thank you, anon. I'm happy that the series and posts I've made have been entertaining to read. As for "you're my favorite," I do plan to finish it eventually, so please refer to other posts as I've answered this many times before. But thank you for asking respectfully, I really appreciate it. Just be sure to check if you or others are wondering if I'll continue certain series or not, because chances are, I've already answered before.
Anyways, I'm really glad that my work was not cringe! You're the second reader to say so, and you have no idea how much of a relief that is. Hooray for no cringe! I try to hold myself to a bit of a standard, usually I'll read a work before I publish it and ask myself, 'if I was a reader, would I enjoy this and would this be cringe?' It's different though when I look at something I wrote a year ago, but I digress.
One of my hopes through writing the damnation MCs, was that maybe it would inspire others who write as well to create MCs with actual personality! It's a hard thing to do, I won't lie. Your focus lies with the other characters, and you aren't really thinking about the MC all too much. However, it is refreshing to see an MC every once in a while that isn't naive or as you said a pick-me.
I think for now I'll go back and see what I've wrote for the you're my favorite little series, and we'll see if I'm up to writing for that today.
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Hello!
I've recently found your TF fics, and they are *mwah*
Absolutely gorgeous, love what you've done with the characterisation and the plot, especially when you say when a character *cough Megs cough* just... comes in. I'm just giggling, kicking my feet, twirling my hair.
I also have a question. Or two, if you don't mind my asking.
In the tags for Leaking Spark and Why the Caged Bird Sings, it's stated as a 'Soundwave/Reader'. Does this refer to Butterfly, or Lightshow?
I'm just a little confused on that part, as Butterfly is definitely on for Knockout, and as seen in the latest chapters of Why the Caged Bird Sings, Soundwave really misses Lightshow (breaks my heart every time we see Sounders in a wreck). BUT, in the tags for Leaking Spark, there's 'Eventual Soundwave x Reader'.
So, I'd like to know, what's your plan on that? Or is that a 'lil spoilery? Would you mind giving us a 'lil peak into your plans?
Thanks for reading my questions, hope you have a great day <3
yes hello i LOVE answering questions (even if it's sometimes "teehee spoilers but i can tell u dis instead ;D" is my only non-spoilery answer I can give) about my absolute obsessions. Eeeeeeee!
Easy one to answer, first:
In the tags for Leaking Spark and Why the Caged Bird Sings, it's stated as a 'Soundwave/Reader'. Does this refer to Butterfly, or Lightshow?
In LS and WTCBS, it refers to Butterfly.
If that ever changes, I'll update tags and/or update some kind of notice at the chapter in question so it's not unexpected.
I honestly haven't decided yet if we'll have Lightshow as a total other POV like Soundwave for example has been, or if Meta Readers will get to be a Reader POV for both Butterfly and Lightshow. Do you by chance have a preference? XD
I currently lean towards keeping the "Reader POV" restricted to one character per story series (Gladiators of Kaon is technicaly a prequel to Leaking Spark, but Leaking Spark isn't neccessarily the *only* possible timeline outcome for GOK's origins ;D no i'm not planning a multiverse with my own fics what who me never i'm not THAT insane ha ha ha, I mean....)
Other question time!
SO.
I hesitate to confirm *exactly* what the final relationships will look like any time someone asks, because... I don't actually know. There are *so* many moving parts and little details and honestly even a slight interaction can have lasting ripple effects that change the story farther down the line in ways I never could have predicted or expected until I get to that point.
Case in point: Leaking Spark actually exists (and GOK, too, but for slightly different reasons than LS) purely because Knockout was *supposed* to get to be the MC's bestie ride-or-die friend in Star of the Show.... and instead he ended up scaring the ever loving SHIT out of poor Clara and yeah That's Not Happening (at least not anytime soon lmfao).
But I wanted to write a friendly(ier) version of Knockout, so we got Leaking Spark with him being our teaser pony introduction who eventually leads us to Soundwave. (and that mech is a slow burn romance with cryo-frozen molassas)
So... Rather, I know what *qualities* certain relationships will absolutely have, as it keeps me grounded and centered in writing, but that doesn't necessarily mean that character won't *also* end up with someone else before then, or in addition to (poly romance is something I have given up trying not to let creep into my TF fics They Are Very Determined I Guess??? I HAVE NEVER HAD THIS ISSUE BEFORE I AM GENUINELY CONFUSED BUT I LIKE IT APPARENTLY SO????).
So, I'll tell you what I *do* know is for certain;
[mild spoilers below. Topic: relationship outcomes]
-Soundwave is going to end up in a lasting, meaningful, permanent (insofar as they decide it is :P) romantic relationship with Butterfly. He gets his squishy soft Sparked lover. He also gets a not-so-squishy but just-as-soft-Sparked Lightshow... either as a friend or as a romantic partner as well, I genuinely don't know how those two will reconnect but it's gonna be CUTE. AS. FUCK. -Knockout is going to marry/Conjux/get hitched with his gay bae Breakdown and I can pretend TFP never had budget cuts for voice actors and politics that inspired Breakdown's gruesome death and end in TFP it Never Happened Here Okay? (sobbing weeping crying i'm okay I swear). He'll remain friends with Butterfly, and his romantic fling with her is honestly going to be *so fucking good for him* as a learning experience. In short, we're his Practice Girlfriend so he finally fucking treats his husband right. Dammit KO u HAVE HIM RIGHT THERE REEEEE--
-Megatron is gonna end up with Lightshow. So hard. He never stopped agonizingly crushing on her that mech is in LOVE. Obssessive possibly unhealthy love. You know. In that way Megatron does with Literally Everything In His Life, taking things to The Extreme. Lightshow's gonna be good for him is all I'm gonna say there heehee
-Lightshow IS THE ONE I HONESTLY HAVE NO FUCKING CLUE WHAT SHE'LL DO REALLY SHE MIGHT BE SOME KINDA LOVE GODDESS OR SOMETHING IDK BUT I CAN EASILY IMAGINE HER IN A POLY RELATIONSHIP WITH LITERALLY ANYONE SHE LIKES AAAAAAH HELP????
Lightshow's unofficial job in the Decepticon Army: sex therapy
-Lightshow and Butterfly are going to get along very well and that's all I'll say about those two ;)
#Dat Answers#Dat Rambles#Leaking Spark#Why The Caged Bird Sings#Gladiators of Kaon#Knockout#Lightshow#Megatron#x Reader#Transformers#Macaddams#Author rambles#Author asks#fanfic#d.a.t.#Also don't ask me what my plans for Starscream are#I don't actually know#I thought I did#then I looked at Megatron#and then I looked at Starscream#and then I looked at Lightshow#and then I looked at [REDACTED]#and i realized that Oh My Gods it's going to be chaos just like Transformers Canon intended#Let's just say it will be Very On Brand For Starscream
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So I'm curious about trying your IF, but the amount of skills has me wary. It's been a while since I've played an IF where stats aren't just for flavour, so I'd like to ask a few questions.
When we're trying to get Willow out of the lake we get to set three skills. Our primary strong skill, a secondary strong, if weaker, skill, and a third that's just average/negative.
That means I should most likely focus on picking choices that correspond with the primary skill, right? In order to make sure my MC isn't cartwheeling their way to the hospital asap lol
What about the personality stats? Are they flavour stats or will they lead to success/failure skill checks as well?
Thanks for answering!
Hey there!! First off, thanks for your interest in the story! If you end up giving it a run through I hope you enjoy c:
Answers under the cut~
Full disclosure, but stats are something I'm slightly in the process of revamping. Next update there will probably be two strong skills, three average skills, and one weak skill. They also won't be numerical skills that raise and fall as much as trait-like skills that are fairly static. There might be some chances to improve skills throughout the story, but it's a system I'm still working out on my end!
Ultimately though, yes, you'll want to pick options that match with your MC's skills to keep them safe and avoid failure (unless you want failure lol, I'm a big believer in failure opening up new things rather than limiting the player when possible).
In the current demo there are only a small handful of skill checks currently. There may be more added in the future, but at the moment they're minimal.
To make things a little more accessible for players who don't enjoy worrying about stats, though, there will be a mode that shows you which choices change personality stats, as well as which skills are being tested with which choice. It isn't currently implemented but likely is a project I'll dig into before the next update.
Folks over on the forum have also asked for a 'god mode' with stat checks that are automatically passed. That one I haven't decided on adding yet, but we'll see.
And as for personality stats, they won't ever be tested for checks or anything! They're exclusively for flavor and character building c:
I hope this all helps!
#asks#thanks for the questions!!#the skill system is likely going to continue to be adjusted#throughout the life of the wip#until i finally find something that feels right#for both me and all of you!!
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Update: requests closed!
🌈 Ikemen mlm and wlw requests OPEN!🌈
It's still pride month, the temperature just reached 38° at my place and I have the afternoon off, so while I'm stuck indoors let's try doing a different round of requests this time!
I'm joining the fun of Different Universe, Same Love 2 CCC hosted by @queengiuliettafirstlady and me, and I think of writing ficlets (200-500 words) for all 13 AUs of the list!
MLM - Character x Character ; WLW - MC X Genderbend!Character
^ Please only request for one of these two categories!
Ikemen Revolution and Ikemen Vampire only.
Character ship examples: Comte x Leonardo; Arthur x Theo; Napoleon x Jean... Ray x Fenrir; Lancelot x Ray; Sirius x Harr; Dalim x Seth... You can send every two characters that you ship together, no matter how niche your ship is. This is your chance. The only rule is don't request incest!
Genderbend characters will be paired with the canon MCs only!
NSFW is allowed. (MDNI)
Refresh this post (not a reblog of it, because those are not updating the changes made in the original post) before sending your requests to check the availability! Once a prompt is taken, I'll cross it out.
AU prompts:
Bodyguard AU Genderbent!Oliver x MC
Mafia AU Napoleon x Wellington
Angels and Demons AU Theo x Shakespeare
Pirate/Mermaid AU Napoleon x Jean
Social Media AU Genderbent!Fenrir x MC
Coffee shop AU Edgar x Zero
Flower shop AU Genderbent! Seth x MC
Celebrity AU Genderbent!Zero x MC
Bookstore AU Isaac x Arthur
Forbidden love AU Jonah x Lancelot
Soulmates AU Napoleon x Jean
Office AU Leonardo x Comte
Circus/Magic AU - Napoleon x Genderbent!MC
FREE PROMPT - TEACHER AU Harr x Sirius
Dialogue prompts: Add one to your request if you want to. These can be used more than once, I won't cross out anything.
"Him? Are you kidding me? He's not even my type!"
"We didn't even exchange numbers! I'm such a fool."
"We should have never met."
"Ah, it's you again! Do you come here often?"
"I'll be waiting at our spot. Make sure no one sees you."
"Promise me we will always have each other."
"Maybe we'll meet again someday."
Happy Pride, everyone! I'm excited to see what comes into my inbox! ❤🧡💛💚💙💜
#ikemen revolution#ikerev#ikemen vampire#ikevamp#ikemen#ikemen series#cybird#otome#different universe same love ccc#ikeseries
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i'm atrocious at doing regular status updates on this blog, but you'll be happy to know that i have been working on the chapter 3 rewrite
for those who are newer to this blog—or just as a reminder to those who have been around a while—like 98% of chapter 3 will be rewritten when compared to the choicescript version. the original antagonist motivation hasn't changed, but the introduction to the situation was too coincidental for my liking, so the rewrite will put the MC more at the center of what's going on and also make Sungjae's involvement make a lot more sense later down the line
there are a lot of reasons why it's been taking so long, but one of the major ones is that i'm just a better twine coder now than i was when i started moving Ninelives into twine. i'm encountering a lot of issues with the way i've coded certain things, and i'm having to go back and fix things that were just... coded stupidly
also there's a very high chance that, at some point, i will move the whole game onto to a different template, because the one that i've been using, while very lovely, has given me a lot of problems trying to get it to switch to portrait mode for mobile readers (i've mentioned this before, but it bears reminding)
the massive changes to chapter 3 will majorly affect a couple of scenes that take place after, but large chunks of chapters 4 and 5 will remain the same as what they were in the original choicescript, so chapter 3 is really the big hurdle right now (as it has been for a while)
so i promise, it's coming eventually, i just won't promise when or how much—but i think i'll do an update before the chapter is finished, just to give y'all something
also, it's the first chapter you'll get to properly meet our lovely ???, so that will be exciting ✌🏾🧡
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Wel done with the update and the story in general. You are doing so great to the point I'm just subconsciously waiting for the penny to drop and my MC to spiral into darkness again. So thanks for the anxiety 😒
I laughed so much at the one ask about the ROs getting into a different bed with someone other than MC and just blaming Aurelio for everything 🤣🤣
Soooo if it's okay for me to ask: at a similar event/ party how the ROs would react if they left MC to go get them drinks and came back to find some very flirty drunk noble trying to get into MCs pants?
PS you deserve all the praise. I know it's hard to accept at times but take the honesty and love. Especially from us rando strangers. We have literally no reason to lie to you. You are doing a great job... unfortunately I can't give you alot of 👏 but I'll do some lovesss.
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We appreciate all your hard work!!
Hello,
MC's mental health is also primarily in the hands of the player, so if they snap that's all on you lol.
And thank you for your kind words, it means a lot. 🥺
Now onto your ask,
Cassandra: Yeesh, the audacity. Cass is a pretty well known and respected young noblewoman, on top of that her dad has a very high ranking and culturally respected job. The metaphorical or literal balls on the fucker who is trying to swoop her man/woman IN PUBLIC. Nah, strap in because she is going to cause a scene. Will not lose her composure but will raise her voice so everyone in the room can hear her clearly. She will brag this hoe, with class.
Valeria: She would not even have a chance to throw hands because her family is always present at local town parties and her brothers would have stepped in already if they saw someone bother their little sister's man/woman when they already turned them down (Lord help them if her brothers saw mutual flirting).
Tomas: He will either start throwing punches immediately and beat the dude to an inch of his life or if it's a woman, he will grab her by the collar and throw her off MC and leave.
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Ludovica: It's a coin flip honestly depending on her mental state on that day, she could either feel very insecure and tear up as she asks MC to leave with her or she will be stone cold and verbally decimate them with immense passive aggressiveness.
yk writing this makes me realize I should probably include a mental stat for Vica that shows if MC pushes her to be 100% dependent on them which makes her a complete crybaby or if she gets a backbone.
Aurelio: Cool as a cucumber as he's confidante there exists literally nobody who can compete with him but won't let anybody harass someone at one of his parties, much less his own love. Will warn them once to stop and if it continues will have them escorted out.
Elio: Stands besides MC with a resting bitch face and forces his way into the conversation while making snide comments every 2 seconds until he annoys the noble to leave.
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Lesgooo, new chapter update. Let's All collectively thank our chicken wing boy for saving y/n. And the Oscar's goes toooooo:
Y/N for her 10/10 acting.
I wonder how old jing yuan is in your au cuz for everyone to forget about sunday, he must be old af. Does the concept of long life species exist or jy is just...jy.
Puttibg on my theorist hat again,I bet sunday didn't fully become an aeon but like the penacony arc, dhil and jy stopped him. What are the chances that dhil and blade are trying to revive sunday? Given that sunday also recommended that y/n get close with blade, that's very sus. Hmm...I wonder if jing yuan currently cares for y/n or just a 'meh'. I think he does but I'm literally coping sooo hard rn.
It's so awkward how in Game jy and sunday are literally match made in heaven, but they're at each other's necks in your au.
Can I ask where u got the inspiration for the au cuz it's bery bery creative?
I'm very much looking forward to see jing yuan's redemption arc. Currently blade and dhil is very very sussy. In the earlier lives I kinda thought it was silly of blade to threaten mc witch stealing the keys. Like bitchass mf, where's your proof??? Fight me betch.
My anger issues would prolly be the reason I would die if I got isekaid. Do you think you could survive as y/n?
And Natlan has me sobbing rn, I know for sure they're gonna bring capi back cuz he has so much potential to bring in money. At least we have a body to simp at.
Cute. <3
Keep up the slay work and don't forget to take breaks and stay hydratedddd
-Mei
XD 10/10 acting skills!!!!!
How old is jing yuan? 🫣 hmm, I wonder about that. I guess one could say time has been ... tampered with 👀
So many thoughts XD
Did jy and dhil defeat sunday together? Or was it just jy while dhil was elsewhere? Where was Blade during all of this? What is the importance of the keys? Is jy the only one who knows about sunday? So many questions...
So how about this one before we get ahead of ourselves... why did sunday only tell y/n to get close to blade and not dhil or even boothill for that matter? Since Sunday wants to help y/n to be able to "get home"
🤭 I bet jy cares for y/n, but I guess you all won't know for sure until I write it lol. Though, of course, there will always be the question on whether or not jy is faking or not...
XD originally I started this fic before Sunday became a playable character so I had no idea at the time that him and jy would work so well together! The main reason why I had them at each other's throats was simply because Sunday fits the part so well. Two characters who are hard to read or be able to tell what they are thinking. And considering the penacony story quest and what was going on with Sunday, i saw a perfect opportunity!
Because at the beginning Sunday wasn't going to be in this fic at all. In fact, there wouldn't be any time travel to begin with. How story involved into such? Well, I got writer's block and decided to take the fic in a new direction. :)
I hope jy has a redemption arc too, but he is the emperor...
I think i can survive up to a point in this story. I'll probably be caught my moze or end up boring jing yuan since I would never be able to outsmart him lol. So if sunday didn't exist in the au as someone who could change the past... then I would say I would give myself a solid month before I end up dying.
DEFINITELY! they can't let capitano just die! I know for sure he'll be back someday!! (And be playable)
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Found your tumblr accidentally but found youre the author of my favouritie fic and oh my god,,
I havent read fanfiction in YEARS but very recently started again and.. Chance encounter made me FEEL. Idk if this is mad to say but even as a male reader i was able to relate to the mc so easy and was giggling and kicking my feet at every silly little thing oml..
You made me fall for this version of Ian BADLY.
GIRL IM AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER- Absolutely zero pressure to rush though take your sweet time please!!!
Just wanted to tell you to keep it up because when i say your fic was living in my head 24/ goddamn 7 for at LEAST a week straight,, im not even exaggerating.
Definitely gonna check out some of your other works 🙏🙏
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omgggg hello 🥺🥺🥺🥺
I'm so glad you found me!!! Gaaahh thank you so much for loving Chance Encounter! trust me when I say that I'll be kicking and giggling when I'm writing it (I'm doing it now reading your message! lol)
I've made it my goal to finish that series as soon as possible. I'm trying to finish until the final chapter before I start releasing the updates again because I don't want to leave everyone hanging between chapters for too long (also bc I have another series for Ian to write soon *coughs*)
Thank you for your patience! I hope you'll get to enjoy some of my other works before we can continue Chance Encounter!
Oh, and welcome to my blog!!!
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