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yandere-daydreams · 2 months ago
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Do you have any tips for being like, less straight to point when writing? I feel whenever I write I’m being super descriptive and taking my time talking about stuff and then I read it back ands it like
“The sky was a cool blue. I like when the sky is blue”
Like I was reading one of your fics and thought “damn, this bitch like the Tolkien of yandere fanfiction, writing the most beautifully paragraphs known to mankind for gojo”
You won’t gotta tell me I know that you do commissions and stuff so that’s like, your income lmao
wait this is actually something i think about on the reg,,, you really have to come at with the assumption that, if you're writing in first or third person limited, your readers will know to assume that whatever's being said is automatically from your pov character's perspective and therefore aligns with their mentality. that frees you up to get really creative with adjectives and physical descriptions that inform the audience about the character's feelings (i.e. "the sky was a cheerful and idyllic blue" for a character who lies sunny days or "the sky was an agitating and eye-bleeding blue" for a character who doesn't). alternatively, you could also link new stimulus to the physical reaction it causes in the character, for example "the sky was blue. i found myself smiling absentmindedly as i went about my day." the latter is pretty easy to overuse, but also leaves a stronger impression with readers.
it's also very important to be very, very mindful with how you're pacing the distribution of information, too. i personally try to limit myself to one new piece of information per paragraph, just to give my readers time to adjust to a character's eyes being blue before letting them know that his mom is also super dead, but in general, just don't feel the need to get all of your exposition off your chest as soon as it's brought up. intrigue is hot, and the deliberate with-holding of clarification makes it hotter. plus, if it can't be shown by the events of the story and doesn't come up in a character's natural monologue/dialogue, there's a good chance it wasn't that important to begin with. there's no need to talk about how dead a character's mom is at all if he's going to her funeral, like, three pages later.
tldr; use more adjectives and don't tell your readers shit. they'll figure it out on their own if they know what's good for them.
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frankensteinposm0 · 2 months ago
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“And I don’t want the world to see me, 'cause I don't think that they'd understand” ♡
17yo Style in my AU will always be something very important to me.
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electric-plants · 1 year ago
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cyno: dating you has been immensely beneficial to me
alhaitham: wow such romantic phrasing. i’m swooning.
cyno: i mean it, you’re very distracting for me so i’ve been improving my focusing skills while trying to keep my mind off of you at work
alhaitham: no one else would find this romantic
cyno: i wasn’t trying to be romantic, i was expressing my sincere appreciation for your impact in improving skills vital to my job
alhaitham: regardless of your intentions, i am, unfortunately, finding this to be extremely romantic
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finemealprompt · 1 year ago
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DP x DC Prompt #50
When Danny came to Gotham, he hadn't been planning on being a vigilante, he swears! And, technically, he wasn't a vigilante. He was a villain. Sort of. He was Catwoman's sidekick. Her partner in crime, quite literally.
But hey, it hadn't taken a lot of convincing from Catwoman to start stealing things from a bunch of rich dudes. Danny hates rich fruit loops.
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mardyart · 2 years ago
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some baldur’s gate babes and my tav
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ato-dato · 2 years ago
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What's your favorite headcanon of ineffable husbands??
I do love the idea of Crowley having terrible eyesight but never telling anyone about it, to be honest.
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mroddmod · 1 year ago
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voltron in 2024 lets goooooo 🔥🔥
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Everyone, we need to talk about Denny Wilson. The most recent episode showcased him in such a big way, and I just want us to acknowledge that. That kid is brave, but even more, he is kind, and he is curious. He is the perfect sum of both of his mothers’ primary traits, and he does not get enough recognition for all the good he brings to the narrative. On top of being one of The Kids, he really shows us how Hen and Karen have succeeded as parents. He is relentlessly welcoming to each of the fosters kids in the Wilsons’ care, both protective and sweet about them, and clearly has his mothers’ hearts when it comes to those foster kids being taken away or back to their families. And he loves his family so much that he spent much of the time when he was pinned by that car worrying about everyone he loves. He’s got that inner strength where, even while he’s suffering and dying!!!! briefly, he’s still present enough to worry about the sister he saved and the moms he’s worrying (understatement, really). And while I know he’s not perfect, no kid ever is, he really showed how much of a ray of light he is last night, and I need to see more of him when he’s not in angsty and life-threatening situations!!!
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minnows-wc-blog · 6 months ago
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MOONMOON 4 LIFE
[ID: A small cartoonishly drawn Moonpaw is gazing happily at the moonpool, a bright swirl of colors and stars in the vague shape of a heart, while blushing. Moonpaw is a heavily mottled black and beige cat with corrosponding yellow and blue eyes. Above Moonpaw and the Moonpool is the text: “You’re the brightest star I see tonight!” The text is multi colored with a white glowing affect behind it. The background of the entire piece is a dark purple-blue with faded pink sparkles. “Camp” might be a dull work to describe the image.]
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jazzzzzzhands · 2 years ago
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Inktober 2023 Year 8 Day 28: Taste
More Chef Wally!! His hair is so much fun! So glossy!! Looks like liquorice :9
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otiksimr · 2 years ago
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Akarat siblings.
Shout out to siblings who look nothing alike.
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confused-canid · 1 day ago
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No because people actually piss me off like WDYM
"If scientists brought back Dire Wolves (wrong), what else could they bring back *insert picture of a T rex or other carnivorous prehistoric reptile*"
YOU MEAN THE THINGS WE HAVE EVEN LESS DNA OF??? THE ROCKS???? THE ROCKS THAT FILLED IN WHERE THE BONES WERE??? WITH THE FOSSILS???????? YOU THINK THEY CAN USE THE DNA FROM ROCKS??????????
SHHSHEGDUFHDHSGDJJFJC
PEOPLE PMO 💔
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kithtaehyung · 8 months ago
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The way I would fight this clearly dangerous man.
"There's showers in every bedroom"
And??? Did I ask?????? Why don't you go show yourself to one???!
(Throwing apples because I did in fact go to that orchard lmao)
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THIS DAMN MAN ISTG… literally who asked him?? i wanna fight his ass so bad lmfaooooo
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im forcing batman to take me out of artblock.
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this batmans alittle... well hes funnier then the joker
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dspd · 9 months ago
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An archivist, it said.
AN ARCHIVIST, IT SAID!
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