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liberty-or-death · 2 years ago

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Wei Wuxian's Name - The Meaning of Wuxian

C Fans think this is likely the poem behind his name. And after analysing this poem, I think this is also the inspiration behind his character. OMG MXTX YOU’RE A GENIUS 😍.

Before I start, please inform me if you want to use this meta. This analysis is solely mine in every shape and form. There is only 1 Chinese interpretation online and it’s done with Baidu’s MTL. And if I do allow you to use it, PLEASE link it back to me because there’s a very high chance that I will refine this. This is the only translation/meta that I’m particular about so please respect my wishes. 🙏

The term “Wuxian” comes from the Ming Dynasty poem “Living Alone 闲居” by the poet Xiu Ben 徐贲. Sadly, there isn’t much information about the context so I’ve tried to interpret this to the best that I can. There are so many aspects in mdzs/cql that are reflected in his poem.

谢事返丘壑，退耕理田园。

To retire to the hills, to return to farming and prepare the land.

谢事 - To retire and get rid of mundane things, or to die

丘壑 - Hills and ravines. A secluded place in the mountains. A metaphor for somewhere far away.

退耕 - To resign from government service and to return to farming OR to convert land that was used for farming back to other use.

兹心获遂初，稍得洒中悁。

His compassionate heart has attained his wish, and slowly loses itself to anxiety in wine.

兹心 - I think this is related to 慈悲心 which refers to the concept of Compassion in Mahayana Buddhisim. 慈 refers to giving others happiness.

遂初 - This means attained his wish. OR to leave a government post and return to seclusion

悁 - This refers to anger, anxiety and melancholy.

(T/N: 获 and 得 both means to gain, so the poet is emphasising what he has gained)

振策升崇巘，扬舲溯长川。

Whipping the horse (or urging) to ascend the lofty mountain, sailing against the river that never ends

振策 - This term also means to urge or to push someone forward

长川 - It either describes a river OR something that’s never ending.

(T/N: some websites use the word 巘 (mountain), but others use 褵 (a marriage veil). I don’t have enough info, so I’ve gone with the mountain translation.)

惊湍信汨汨，清溜自涓涓。

The water gurgles flows steadily and swiftly, the crystal clear water from the small stream trickled slowly naturally.

(T/N: 汨汨 and 涓涓 are both sounds of the water flowing. 汨汨 refers to gurgling, 涓涓 flows slowly)

新兰艳迟日，密竹曳丛烟。

The new orchid blooms in spring, the dense growth of bamboo gather as they sway like the mist.

迟日 - this could mean late, or spring

烟 - This likely refers to 烟云 (literally translated to mist and cloud), but it also refers to a hermit deep within a faraway mountain.

东馆朝燕坐，西林暮独还。

To meditate in the morning the temple in Chang an, to return from the temple alone at dusk

东馆 - This either refers to the Eastern Temple, or a temple nearby Chang an. The dictionary says it’s 豫中 ‘Yuzhong Temple’ (term was used specifically the Han Dynasty), but I can’t find which temple it is specifically. LOL

西林 - This term does refer to the Xilin temple on Mount Lu. But subsequently it was referred to temples in general. As this a more modern poetry (aka Ming Dynasty), I’ve opted to use ‘temple’ instead.

(T/N: there’s a dawn to dusk imagery in this line, from 朝 (morning) to 暮 (dusk))

朋旧固云旷，山水聊夤缘。

Old friends are resolute and vast as the clouds, and to sit beneath the mountain and rivers to chat about establishing connections.

云 - The imagery of ancient clouds in ancient poetry is uh, not exactly regarded as a good thing. It’s usually related to sadness, or something that’s fickle (ie. a cloud is fickle, it changes shape whenever it wants to, sometimes you see it, and sometimes you don’t.

夤缘 - this means to climb up, establish connections and building relationships)

(T/N: This whole line is interesting and filled with contradictions. 固 refers to something resolute, but 云旷 means vast as the clouds. Of which, clouds symbolise something that’s anything but resolute. And in the second part, 聊 usually refers to a causal chat or even gossip, but 夤缘 refers to using connections to climb higher.)

居喧暂云遣，习静久乃便。

the noise at where I'm at at has stopped for now, dissipating like the wind. And so, the quiet life has persisted for long time.

居 - there are various meanings to this. The most common meaning is to stay/current location so I’ve gone with that

便乃 - this means “hence” or “so”

已幸驻灵药，复能讽瑶编。

It’s already lucky that the magical drug has rooted itself here, and I can memorise the precious books repeatedly

驻 - This is a very interesting word because it’s usually used to mean to garrison or to come to a standstill. It isn’t usually

复 - Repeatedly

讽 - This word usually means to or to mock. But I think it’s used as 讽书 in this case, which is to memorise.

既无羡鱼志，外物非所迁。Even if there isn’t any wishful thinking, the things outside are inhospitable and ever changing

无 - This means no.

羡鱼 - Wishful thinking. This is where Wei Wuxian’s name comes from (MXTX uses 无羡 instead of 羡鱼). This term comes from the idiom “临渊羡鱼，不如退而结网” which literally means, “instead of standing by the water to dream about catching fish, you should go home to make a net to actually catch a fish.” (ie. instead of being envious about another person’s achievements, we should put in the effort) So yes, Wei Wuxian does mean “do not (无) think wishfully and covert over the achievement of others” (羡)

非所 - Inhospitable, where someone cannot live normally

迁 - this means ever changing.

MY ANALYSIS

SO I HAVE SO MUCH FEELS. I believe that MXTX based some parts of Wei Wuxian’s behaviour according to this poem. Allow me to do a line by line analysis.

1st line: “To retire to the hills, to return to farming and prepare the land” - is this why our boy has such a fascination with retiring from his “post” and returning to the simple life? It’s interesting that the terms in this poem repeatedly emphasises on ‘retiring from government.” You could say that wwx’s life, starting from the time that he was a Jiang Clan disciple, and to being a soldier was a form of a post. So the author sets up the stage of what he thinks to “retire” is. And the “hills and the mountains” suggest a secluded far away. IDK about you but it screamed Cloud Recesses to me.

2nd line: “His compassionate heart has attained his wish,” - AGAIN I could scream about this. I feel that Wei Wuxian does embody the concept of “慈悲” in the simple sense of the word. “慈” as in compassionate. He brings joy to people around him and cares for others around him. 悲 as in sadness; he feels the suffering around him and hence he tries to deliver people from it. This is obviously demonstrated when he tries to save the Wen Clan. This line also emphasises that retiring away from all things political is what he wants. And the second part “slowly loses itself to anxiety in wine”, sadly he does this ever so frequently in the novel and almost amplified in CQL.

Line 3 and 4: “Whipping the horse (a metaphor for quickly, almost urgently) to ascend the lofty mountain, sailing against the river that never ends” “The water gurgles flows steadily and swiftly, the crystal clear water from the small stream trickled slowly naturally.” - in Line 3, the first part “ascending the lofty mountain, almost urgently so” reminds me of how he attained his ghost cultivation so quickly over a span of 3 months. And “sailing against the river that never ends” sounds very much like how he was always moving against the criticism of the masses in his first and second life. The lines about the water gurgling and trickling feels that the tide was always against him, be it swiftly or in small trickles.”

Line 5: “The new orchid blooms in spring, the dense growth of bamboo gather as they sway in the mist.” - the imagery of the orchid sounds a shoutout to Jinling. And the dense bamboo dusting in the mist reminds me of the parts where they were in the cold pond. I’m not sure if the CQL directors were equally inspired by this. (I can’t remember if there were bamboos in Cloud Recesses novel wise. 😂😂)

Line 6: “To meditate in the morning the temple in Chang an, to return from the temple alone at dusk” - HMM I don’t have a clear inspiration for this line unfortunately. But it could be a reference to the days spend in Cloud Recesses. The Lan 蓝 was a Buddhism references so it totally fit the bill. (I’ve mentioned it before in Taming Wangxian but if you can’t remember it, well that’s okay, I am to bring it back here eventually)

Line 7: “Old friends are resolute and vast as the clouds, and to sit beneath the mountain and rivers to chat about establishing connections.” - again the comparison of friends with clouds. It does suggest that he has a lot of friends; friends who are as fickle as clouds who aren’t there when the time calls for it. And as for the ones who are “resolute”… well we know who they are. And as for “establishing connections”, this is a common theme in the novel. It actually reminded me of JGY, who was essentially trying to curry favour to promote himself politically.

Line 8-9: “the noise at where I am at has stopped for now, dissipating like the wind. And so, the quiet life has persisted for long time.” “It’s already lucky that the magical drug has rooted itself here, and I can memorise the precious books repeatedly” lmao does the magic drug refer to the incense burner haha 😂😂 the vibe of the last two lines remind me of the end of the novel, whereby the “noise” of society has faded and he’s back to the quiet life. And as for the books that he can read, I’m guessing that’s probably referring to the Lan Family’s library

Line 10: “Even if there isn’t any wishful thinking, the things outside are inhospitable and ever changing” this is WWX and the moral of the story I guess?

(There were about 60 different references and I'm too lazy to link them all lol. They were mostly dictionary links or other poems that used the words in a similar manner. If you want a reference for a particular phrase, please let me know. XD)

In case you missed it, I’ve also analysed Wei Ying previously.

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leahsfiction · 7 months ago

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Du Fu - Gazing out over the plain

West, the snow-covered peak and garrisons of the three cities South, the shore of the clear river and Wanli bridge

My little brothers separated across the land, blown on the wind Distant and alone, my tears run to the ends of the earth

Only near retirement have I been gifted with frequent illness My insignificant self need not return to the exalted court

I ride out of the city when I strain my eyes looking out Tired of the world's dealings on these bleak days

野望

杜甫

西山白雪三城戍，南浦清江万里桥。海内风尘诸弟隔，天涯涕泪一身遥。惟将迟暮供多病，未有涓埃答圣朝。(惟通：唯) 跨马出郊时极目，不堪人事日萧条。

one of multiple poems about missing his brothers

looking through my draft notes trying to figure out why i chose "gifted with" for 供 -- i guess you could read it as "provided"? i guess i wanted a gentle spin on, like, being ill is your job now, and the imperial court is far away and hasn't been particularly glorious, so.

#gushiwensday #du fu #my translation #poetry

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garden-ghoul · 7 months ago

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Happy Gushiwensday Shabbes! Another Du Fu for you tonight, titled "Looking Out Over the Fields."

To the west, the snowy mountains, their three garrison cities, and the Green River's Ten Thousand Mile Bridge. Everything, everyone, is windblown dust. Separated from my brothers, at the edge of the world, pouring tears, distant from my own body. My twilight years have only brought me illness and a speck of dust can't hope to repay the Emperor's court. I ride out past the edge of the city, straining my eyes. These unbearable ends have left me only desolation.

Notes and original text under the cut.

野望

西山白雪三城戍，南浦清江万里桥。海内风尘诸弟隔，天涯涕泪一身遥。惟将迟暮供多病，未有涓埃答圣朝。跨马出郊时极目，不堪人事日萧条。

Baike tells us that this poem is about living during the An Lushan Rebellion, which lasted eight years and saw Du Fu among other officials taken prisoner. He had already been released by 761, when this poem was written, but the end of the war was still two years away, and it wasn't yet in the "cleanup phase"--I'm guessing that he wasn't sure when or how it would end. Here are my notes.

Fields --- or any open space. I feel it lends a kind of agoraphobic bleakness.

Ten Thousand Mile Bridge --- purportedly named for a quote that a long journey would begin at this bridge. I kept the literal translation because I think it resonates with the emphasis on distance and scattering in the first two couplets.

Everything, everyone --- literally "everything between the oceans." Switched to "everyone" to show that we're talking about Du Fu's friends here and added "everything" back in for emphasis.

windblown dust --- idiomatically refers to the hardships of travel or the vicissitudes of life. I really like this phrase. Here it evokes humans as insignificant and easily tossed about by the winds of history.

at the edge of the world, pouring tears --- could also be "pouring tears to the edge of the world." I chose the former to again emphasize his feeling of distance from those he cares about.

distant from my own body --- Laurence translated this as "all alone," since 一身 also means a single person. Probably more correct but I can't resist a little dissociation.

twilight years --- a very literal translation! 惟将 is literally "late evening."

speck of dust --- literally a "stream of dust." Idiomatically it means something beneath notice but obviously I wanted to keep the dust motif from the first half.

unbearable ends --- more literally unbearable human affairs or the state of the world. I couldn't figure out a more elegant way to convey the full meaning so I went for the most depressed word choice instead.

left me only desolation --- 日萧条 appears to mean days of bleakness, but Baike says 日 is a word for "self"?? Really not sure about this one.

#gushiwensday #du fu

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mouniassn · 4 months ago

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業到還時方恨多，福到用時方恨少

以下為一位有緣人分享：

最近母親身體欠佳，去醫院檢查，發現心臟瓣膜需要動手術。請示佛菩薩，開示出來：「一、請誠心持誦《金剛經）、《藥師經》、《地藏經》三經各108遍，待持誦完畢，來信專案迴向心臟瓣膜手術平安的福德資糧。二、此有業力干擾，前世，因利益衝突��用棍子打人致死，故遭此報。需先以最虔誠的懺悔心跟其懺悔，並誠心持誦《金剛經》、《藥師經》、《地藏經》三經各109遍，待持誦完畢，來信專案迴向解冤釋結。」

看到開示，救母心切，我心亂了。經文的數量比我預期的多，約好的手術時間是在月底，現在讀經迴向，根本來不及了！我馬上請教師兄姐，該如何處理比較妥當？我們唸經最快只可以迴向三經各108遍手術平安的福德資糧，開示的業力估計來不及誦經迴向了。我想到的是，讓母親向業主菩薩懺悔，讓其能給更多的時間，好讓我們唸經迴向給業主菩薩。但師兄姐給我的建議是：「業障要優先迴向。」我這才恍然大悟！

我看到開示的第一個念頭，首先想給母親補福德資糧，好讓手術能平安順利，卻忽略了業主菩薩的感受。有業力干擾，說明業主菩薩願意解冤釋結，我居然糊塗了！師兄姐說：「吉不擋凶。業主菩薩想干擾，隨時都可以，不管你有沒有福報！」所以，就算我給母親補了福德資糧，業主菩薩要干擾也擋不住。我愚癡啊！真誠的向業主菩薩懺悔！

最後我跟母親商量，先向業主菩薩懺悔，求業障不干擾，這週儘快唸經迴向給開示出來的業力。有句話說：「書到用時方恨少，事非經過不知難。」現在的我們，是「經到用時方恨少」！這段時間會跟母親一起拼經文，努力突破自己的極限！

(分享完畢)

有緣人因母親的心臟瓣膜需要開刀，請示佛菩薩，同時收到要補福德資糧和有新業力干擾兩筆開示。這樣的開示其實很常見，一來，身體有狀況，正是業主菩薩下手干擾的好時機。二來，因果大清算時期，眾生業重福薄，面臨人生重大關卡，比如考試或開刀，常需額外再補足福德資糧。

為何要補福德資糧？這概念好比你有急用，臨時需用到一大筆錢，但你的帳戶存款偏偏沒有這筆錢，這時你只能拉下臉，跟人借錢周轉！然而，累積靈界的福德資糧不用求人，只需按照佛菩薩開示的經文數量唸誦，待專案迴向圓滿，自然有福德資糧存到你的靈界帳戶！

現代人的生活，各項措施都很便利。好比肚子餓了，懶得動手煮飯，能上餐館，或者叫外送；衣服髒了，直接丟給洗衣機洗；想出門，不用靠雙腳走路，能騎機車、開車，或者搭乘大眾交通工具。換句話說，只要捨得花錢，樣樣都有人幫忙做好，自己完全不需要動手。但花錢就是花費福報，生活太過便利或享受，就是花費福報。人活著連呼吸都需要福報，福報若一直這樣花卻不存，事到臨頭，需要補福德資糧便不奇怪了！

回到文章重點，同時有業力干擾和需要補福德資糧，該如何做？首先要明白，「神通不敵業力」，業力討報在靈界是合法的行為，三界共遵。換句話說，即使你有天大的福報，若業主菩薩想要你的命，不願和解，佛菩薩也無法阻止。所以，業主菩薩願意在有緣人的母親開刀前，現身被開示出來，真的要非常感恩業主菩薩大發慈悲，讓有緣人的母親能用唸經功德償還因果債。

因此，業力一定要先迴向，然後再補福德資糧。事在人為，先懺悔再努力唸經，即使明天要開刀了，但今天無法完成迴向，業主菩薩也會看在您確實非常努力唸經的份上，干擾的力道會輕一些。若您靈界還債信用良好，業主菩薩甚至不干擾，先讓您順利開完刀，後續再繼續誦經完成迴向。

開示的功德除了誦經迴向，也能用「轉功德」的方式進行。三經各一部，折抵新台幣三百元，捐款家扶中心，一樣能達到盡快迴向的需求，但總迴向前，懺悔取得原諒的步驟一樣不能少！補福德資糧同樣能用轉功德的方式比照辦理。但再次提醒，轉功德要評估自己的經濟能力，若經濟確實不允許，就不要一意孤行，硬要花錢轉功德。這時可加強懺悔，懇請業主菩薩高抬貴手，手術時先不要干擾，待手術完成，一定會努力誦經，完成迴向。

吉不擋凶，業到還時方恨多。平時養成誦經的習慣，並將經文數確實做好記錄，等到有新業力、或需要補福德資糧，這些平時的努力便能派上用場，輕鬆完成迴向，不必哀嘆「業到還時方恨多！」生活可以過就好，不要太注重個人的享受，這樣才能減少福報的流失。平時有餘力和餘錢，多助人、多做善事，將助人、做善事養成習慣，涓涓細流也能匯聚成汪洋，臨時需用到大筆福報擋災、擋厄，不必哀愁「福到用時方恨少」！

積德無需人見，行善自有天知。平時努力種下的善因，一定會在未來某個你需要的時刻，給你帶來意外的驚喜。因果業力是真實不虛的，行善定有善果，造惡定有惡果，世間的財富一樣都帶不走，唯有業報隨身。珍惜上天給我們得人身的機會，好好誦經消業，好好行善利益眾生。南無大願地藏王菩薩！

南無本師釋迦牟尼佛

南無藥師琉璃光如來

南無阿彌陀佛

南無大悲觀世音菩薩

南無大願地藏王菩薩

南無韋馱菩薩

南無伽藍菩薩

南無十方一切諸佛菩薩摩訶薩

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plasticdreams · 1 year ago

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lgbtqromance · 1 year ago

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泳部新生

清爽的早上，高校泳池里面，一群年轻的胴体正在挥动闪着日光的水，舞动着他们的臂膀，摆动着他们的双腿，在水中展现他们的青春活力。干净的磁砖地上，一个穿着高校服的男生低着头站在一个穿黑色三角形泳裤男生面前。

「森口君，你迟到了。」长田学长不高兴地说。

长田博启学长是水泳部的社长，身高一米七六，体重六十八。短短的小平头以及浓眉单眼皮，黝黑的皮肤搭上游泳练出来的肌肉，全身只有一件黑色的三角形泳裤，非常匀称好看。可惜是笑容不多，要不然一定更帅。

「学长，非常抱歉。今天早上我打工送报，所以来晚了点。」森口鞠躬90度地说。

「今天是第一天，你就迟到了。那以后晨练干脆不要来好了！」长田双手在胸前交叉，不看森口反而看着泳池说。

「长田学长！我保证以后不会再迟到了！」森口再一次鞠躬90度，坚定地说。

「剩下时间不多，你先去换衣服！」长田口气仍然没有缓和。

「非常谢谢你！学长。」森口再一次低头说谢，然后赶紧去更衣间换衣服。

今天是森口第一天参加水泳部的晨间练习，却因为早上送报纸而耽误了时间。森口在空无一人的更衣间换好泳裤后赶紧跑到泳池边向长田学长报到。

「城内！你过来一下！」长田学长叫了正在泳池边擦头发的城内学长。

城内南更学长身高一米八二，体重七十一，皮肤没有长田黝黑，但是身上的肌肉也是��有成就，不同于健身房??的效果，游泳练出来的肌肉有着一种特别的线条。泳帽拿下来后，略湿的长发有几根挂在脸前。带着一种亲和的笑容走过来说「长田，什么事情？」

「你带森口做一下暖身，顺便看一下，我要下去游几圈。」接着长田学长戴上泳帽蛙镜下水去了。

城内学长将毛巾披在肩膀上说「你是森口吧，你好我是城内，城内南更。」

「你好，城内学长，我是入社新生，森口俊，请多多指教。」森口再一次鞠躬90度地说。

城内学长亲切地问「OK，森口君，你先做一下暖身，你会游几式？」

森口紧张地站好说「我比较擅长自由式，蛙式也会，蝶式就不行了。」

城内学长拍拍森口的肩膀「哈哈，你不用这么紧张。蝶式没关系，以后还有时间慢慢练，嗯……那等一下你游一段，我先看一下好了。」

森口觉得城内学长比长田学长亲切多了，于是在城内学长的指导下，练习了二十几分钟。城内学长有耐心地说那边的肌肉要放松，换气的节奏要抓对，手划水的角度与入水的切面等等，虽然都是一些基本观念，但是对从小就自己乱游的森口俊来说，裨益良多。不过有些习惯也不是一朝一夕可以改过来的，所以森口的速度并没有因为这二十多分钟就改善。

二十米乘二十五米的泳池，初晨的阳光温柔地散落金色阳光在水波间。泳池里面陆陆续续有一些社员离开准备去上课，最后只剩下水泳部社长长田博启、二年生原滨阳据、城内南更和一年新生森口俊。

「南更！时间差不多了！」原滨阳据对着正在教森口的城内南更说。

原滨阳据学长身高一米七，体重六十六，算是比较壮一点的，长相性格，喜欢穿亮色的泳裤，是个爱现的活宝。

原滨学长跟城内学长和长田社长一样，都是二年生，今年下半年的竞泳比赛，他们都是水泳部的主力。三年级的学长们因为即将毕业，所以除了不打算升大学或短大的人还有过来练习外，其他人都比较少过来。其他一年生因为比森口准时练习，所以在十五分钟前就已经盥洗好离开了。

「森口君，时间差不多了，走吧，要不然第一堂就要迟到了。」城内对着还在练习自由式的森口俊说。

森口本来还想多练习一下，不过城内学长都这么说了，只好赶紧离开泳池与城内学长去更衣间。

城内学长拿了毛巾和盥洗用品对着森口说「走吧！」

森口疑问地指着另一边的门说「淋浴间不是在那一边吗？」

城内亲切地笑着说「今年水泳馆的仓库改成风吕场，是去年学长拿下全国高校冠军的功劳喔。走吧。」

森口有点尴尬，因为他不习惯跟别人一起洗澡，自从他发现他看到别人的老二就会有反应之后，他就不去大众浴池洗，也不去泡汤。刚刚更衣间因为有一间一间的隔间，而且那时候都没有人，所以才敢安心地换衣服。

城内学长大方地脱掉泳裤，一丛黑毛挂着一条普通大小的老二，在森口的面前垂着。森口牙一咬，只好硬着头皮脱掉泳裤，与城内学长裸裎相见。幸好城内学长走在前面，森口只看到城内学长结实的屁股和与泳裤相同形状范围的的白色区域。不过这样就让森口的老二开始充了一些血。

一进去风吕场，只看到里面有两个人正坐在墙边洗头，那两个人正是长田博启社长和原滨阳据学长。城内坐在他们旁边也开始弄湿头发。三个游泳健将优美曲线全裸地在森口的面前，森口已经不知如何是好了。

原滨学长把头上的泡沫冲掉后，看到森口双手捂住老二还站在入口，有点疑问地说「南更，他是？」

长田和城内都往森口那边看过去，长田学长说「他是刚入社的新生，森口俊。」

城内学长挥一下手说「你还站在那边干嘛？快过来啊。」

森口遮遮掩掩地坐在城内的旁边，也开始洗头。幸好因为是坐着，所以旁边全裸学长们的老二并不能明显地看到。森口快速地洗完头，接着洗身体。

长田和原滨洗完身体之后就入池浸泡，原滨笑着说一些的事情「听说昨天华子正式进军艺能界了。」接着对城内笑着说「城内，你不是想追她吗？这样就没机会了？」

城内站起来笑着说「你自己晚上还不是拿着华子的照片打手枪！」

原滨站起来用浴池的水往城内泼了几下，然后笑着坐回浴池，继续与长田聊天。

森口转头过去，这个高度刚好看到城内学长的老二。那一条的颜色，那两丸的摺痕，黑毛的光泽和卷度，以及被包皮包住的头形，都是超逼真！超写实！超立体的在眼前。

就是这么近的距离！

虽然是普通大小，但是形状比例恰恰好。森口吞了一下口水，却又舍不得将目光移开。

城内没有坐下去，站着用小木盆将身体冲干净。森口越看越兴奋，老二已经渐渐涨起。幸好城内学长并没有看他，要不然还得了。

水顺着城内学长的老二一涓一涓地流下，黑毛被水弄得服贴老二，水滴在头的前端，在皮的边缘聚流，就像是城内学长正在流一样。森口真的受不了了，老二顶的特高，赶紧看��别的地方分散注意力，希望让老二赶紧退火。

城内将身体冲完后，就进去浴池里面。

原滨阳据学长对着森口说「森……森木……不对，是森口君吧，你怎么洗这个久啊？」

森口点了头说「是学长，冲完马上过来。」

原滨接着对长田说「博启，今年五个入部新生好像都没有强一点的。」

长田说「第一天，还不知道啦，等一个星期后再说吧。」

城内头靠在墙壁上说「原滨你还不是后来才被幸川学长训练出来的。」

森口冲完水，用毛巾遮住杠起的老二，动作不自然遮掩地走向浴池。

原滨笑着说「森口君，你在遮什么啊？把毛巾拿掉。」

森口犹豫地说「原滨学长，可是……。」

长田说「可是什么？怎么像女孩子一样扭捏。」

森口迟迟不肯将毛巾拿开，原滨学长一时兴起，跳出浴池一手将森口的毛巾扯开。「哇！晨间勃发！南更、博启你们看！森口他勃起了！」

城内有点惊讶地说「哇！真的耶！」

长田笑着说「森口君！一大早就这么有精神啊？」

森口不好意思地赶快用双手遮住。

城内也站了起来走向森口说「哈哈，森口君，你多久没打手枪了？」

森口尴尬地脸都红了，不过城内南更学长和原滨阳据学长全裸地站在森口的面前，却又让森口的老二消不了火。

原滨将森口的手弄开说「嘿嘿，森口君，我看看有多大？南更你帮我。」

森��不好意思地反抗，没想到亲切的城内学长也帮着原滨学长。森口的左手被原滨抓住，右手则被城内抓住。森口的双手再也包不住兴奋的老二，就这样直立立地在长田博启社长、城内南更学长和原滨阳据学长面前，朝气蓬勃地挺了起来。

原滨的手摸了森口的老二说「喔～还不小喔！」

城内一只手也摸了森口的蛋说「真的耶，嘿嘿，森口君看不出来喔。」

长田学长也从浴池出来，摸了森口的老二说「哪有我大啊，你们两个也太夸张了吧。」

原滨的手拉了长田的老二一下，笑着说「你不就这么大吗？」

森口的左右各站着亲和的城内南更学长和性格的原滨阳据学长两个裸男，面前则是小平头浓眉单眼皮，黝黑的长田学长，三个人不同的三条屌毫无芥蒂地在森口的眼前晃着，森口不知道该说些什么，龟头受不了刺激泌出了一些透明的汁液。

城内手套住森口的老二说「喔～开始流汁了～长田你真的有比森口大吗？」

长田骄傲地说「当然有！」接着二话不说开始套弄起老二。

长田肌肉用力地收缩，水珠在他黝黑的肌肤上闪闪动人。

原滨笑着说「森口君你也要加油喔～」接着看了城内一下，城内开始帮森口套弄。森口原本已经涨大的老二，在城内学长的手使劲下，又往前杠了一些。

森口不敢反抗，也不想反抗，就这样享受城内学长的服务。不到一分钟，长田博启的老二已经完全勃起，紫红色的龟头圆圆地露出来。

原滨和城内从没看过长田勃起的SIZE，同声惊呼「哇！果然不小！」

长田骄傲地说「当然，我之前量过，有二十公分。」

城内手离开森口的老二，抓了长田的老二，果然可以两手满把握，难怪长田这么骄傲。

原滨笑着说「没想到平常不起眼的小家伙，膨胀系数这么大啊？」原滨的手也跟着过去抓了长田的二十公分硬老二。城内抓下面，原滨套上面，才将长田的老二完全套住。

原滨手又回去套住森口的老二说「呵呵，森口君，你的虽然不小，不过还是博启的比较大！」

「当然……是长田学长比较大。喔～」森口又感觉到原滨的手套弄着自己的老二。

「你们两个会觉得他大，一定是～嘿嘿，你们比他小。」长田轻视地说。

原滨笑着说「虽然没有你们两个大，但是比你们粗！」接着原滨开始套弄自己的老二。性格的脸上，有着卖力的表情，两眼紧闭俊唇微张。

城内也笑着说「哇！那我可不能输你们。」接着手离开长田的老二，改握自己的老二尽力地套着。

森口看着三个学长，老二直挺挺地在自己的面前，眼睛猛盯着三个学长的老二，也跟着打起手枪来。

四个水泳部的高校生在这间水泳部专属的风吕场里面，卖力地让自己的老二冲向最高点。

森口撑不住，龟头突然爆涨，「喔～喔～喔～喔～」吼声回荡在风吕场里面。抛物线地射了一道白色精液出来

「喔～啊～～」森口射完后有点累地坐在地上，手仍然将剩下的精液挤出来。

原滨笑着说「森口君这么快就射啦，怎么这么没用。」

森口不知道该怎么回答，只好傻笑。

原滨不怀好意地笑着说「你这么没用，我要惩罚你一下。」接着说完站在森口的面前，握着老二对着森口说「帮我吹吧。」

森口看着原滨学长的粗老二，舌头微微地往前伸了一点，但是又不好意思抬头说「原滨学长……我……。」

原滨笑着说「学弟本来就要帮学长服务啊～」接着不等森口同意，就按住森口的头，另一手握着粗圆的老二塞进森口的嘴里。

森口舌头不自主地舔着原滨的老二，嘴巴卖力地吸吮，城内和长田看了都不敢相信地笑了起来。

原滨看森口已经主动地服务，手也离开森口的头，开始搓弄自己坚立的两粒乳头，闭上双眼抬着头，嘴巴吼着舒服的声音「喔～哦～啊～～森口君～喔～」

城内和长田被森口帮原滨吹老二的样子弄得色心大动，也站在原滨旁边，握着自己的老二在森口的脸上拍打。

森口看见城内的硬老二也顺便吸了一口，看见长田的长老二也舔了几下，然后又回头吹原滨的粗老二。三个学长的三条老二各有各的风味，不同的形状、不同的硬度、不同的颜色、和不同的长度。城内学长的老二比较弯，还有点往右边偏。不过这都难不倒森口，森口疯狂地轮流吹着、含着、吸着、舔着学长们的老二，这是森口从来没有过的经验，当然，原滨、城内和长田也从来没有过。

森口有时候含着一条屌，有时同时吹着两��，最后干脆大胆地将三条男根都塞进嘴巴里面。城内笑着摸着原滨的胸部，原滨一手摸着长田的乳头，一手捏着城内的屁股，长田一手搭着原滨的肩膀，一手按着森口的头。森口后来根本分不出来哪一条屌是哪一位学长的。

「喔～啊～喔～喔～」三个人的呻吟声和森口的吸吮声音混在一块。

「啊啊啊啊～～喔～～」城内一阵低吼之后，全身的肌肉弓在一起，射了森口满脸都是。森口混着城内的精液，继续舔着原滨和长田两位学长的，浓厚的腥味充斥在嘴巴里面，原滨学长和长田学长的老二又争先恐后地在嘴巴里面进出，这种感觉，真是～真是爽翻了。

城内在森口的后面蹲下来，前胸贴着森口的后背，手往前伸去套弄森口的老二，亲切地说「你又硬了喔，谢谢你刚才弄得我很爽，我帮你再打出来吧～」接着手开始套着森口的老二。森口嘴巴含着两条屌，自己的屌又被城内学长握着。而且屁股还可以感觉到城内学长软软的那一条，背上全是城内学长的胸膛体热。森口很快地又杠了起来。

原滨看到城内蹲在森口后面的姿势，淫笑着「嘿嘿。」接着过去跟城内说「我来帮他好了。」城内不疑有他，就让给原滨。不过原滨一蹲下，并没有去帮森口套老二，反而手指往森口的小穴伸进去。

森口反射性地抖了一下，原滨笑着说「深呼吸，不要紧张～」

城内不解地说「原滨你要干嘛？」

原滨笑着不答，握着自己的粗老二，硬生生地塞进森口的洞中。

「哇！！啊～～学长！！！」森口痛的大叫，长田赶快将老二抽离森口的嘴巴。

原滨享受着森口的紧闭和温热，不断地摆动臀部，让粗老二在森口鲜嫩的小穴中来回。

长田看着原滨爽快的样子，也跃跃欲试。城内的老二也微微充血起来。

原滨在森口的耳边说「森口君，爽不爽啊？」

「学……学长……好……好痛啊～～啊～～」森口呻吟着。

「那我抽出来好不好啊？」原滨接着说。

「原滨……学长……不……不要啊～再用……用力一点。」

城内和长田没有想到森口也是陶醉在被干的滋味下，两人相视而笑，立刻将老二往森口的嘴巴凑过去。森口含着长田学长的长屌和城内学长有点软的屌，软硬不同，大小相异，但是森口都没有偏心，依然尽心尽力地吸舔着。屁股灼热的感觉，受到原滨学长一阵又一阵的推送，原滨学长粗老二在体内的饱足感不断地在刺激着森口穴中的末稍神经。

「喔！森口！你……好紧……喔～～～」原滨抱着森口的腰，死命地摆动臀部，让粗屌抽插森口的洞「喔！喔！喔！喔！」原滨立刻抽出老二，浓浓的精液直喷森口的背部。原滨射完之后，趴在森口的背上，剧烈地喘气。

长田早就等很久了，马上把原滨推开，挺着二十公分的- ，结结实实地塞进森口的屁眼。

「喔～～啊～～～」森口感觉到长田的长屌正在进入，刚才中断的那一种快感又再度涌上「喔～长田学长～～」

城内的屌依然地干着森口的嘴，也同时硬了起来，让森口的声音又再一次模糊。原滨则站在城内的后面，双手伸到前面城内的胸膛，笑着摸城内的乳头。

「啊～～～喔～～～真的很紧～～～森口君～～」长田一开始慢慢地深入森口的洞口，享受里面的湿润热度。一手按着森口的背，一手揽着森口的腰，让二十公分的老二完全地进入森口里面。

原滨的老二又在城内的两臀股间不安分了起来。城内手往后抓住原滨的老二，笑着说「又硬啦？」

原滨的老二被城内抓住，也跟着到森口的前面，再一次塞进森口的嘴巴里面。森口舔着原滨的龟头，却有一种苦苦的味道，但是森口也没有多想，一手套着城内的弯弯老二，另一方面尽力地舌头舔着原滨的老二。

「嗯～～喔～～喔喔喔喔喔！！」长田皱着眉头，豪快地将老二抽出，精液狂射在森口的屁股周围。

城内已经等很久了，马上将森口直接推倒，左手押着森口的右腿，右手抬起森口的左腿，猴急地握着弯老二猛干森口的小穴。长田和原滨两人则跪在森口头的两边，将带有苦味的老二轮流操森口的嘴巴。森口的手一下子摸着长田学长的丸，一下子摸着原滨学长的丸。舌头在两个圆润的龟头来回穿梭。

城内闭着眼睛，狂抽猛送「喔～～嘶～～～啊～～」

森口一边享受着小穴传来的快感，一边舔着两屌，呻吟着「嗯～嗯～嗯！嗯啊～～！」

跪在森口头两边的原滨按着对面的长田，嘴巴微张伸出舌头。长田笑了一下，也伸出舌头。两人的舌头开始绕着打转，一下子长田的舌头伸进原滨的嘴中，又一下子换成原滨的舌头绕进长田的嘴里。

城内看到原滨和长田舌头正在嬉闹，也笑了一下，头凑过去，让自己的舌头也加入游戏中。四个水泳部的男孩，森口躺在风吕场的地上，嘴巴含着长田和原滨的屌，两脚大开，屁股享用城内弯屌猛操。

原滨、长田和城内则在森口的身体上方，用舌头互相作弄对方。而原滨和长田的老二则在森口的嘴中进出，城内的老二则加速度地在往森口的密洞挺进。

「嗯！！！啊！喔喔～～」城内来不及拔出来「啊～喔～」吼了几声，全数的精液都激射在森口的体内。

同一时间，原滨和长田的马眼也都再一次喷出精液，「喔！喔！喔！」「啊～喔！啊～～」一起颜射在森口的脸上。

三个水泳部的学长射完之后，亲切的城内紧握着森口的老二，快速用力的套送，「喔喔喔喔～～」森口的精液如火箭升空一样，往上直喷。

城内将森口拉起来，四人相视而笑开始将身??体重新洗干净。

城内拍了森口的肩膀说「森口君，今天谢谢你啰。」

森口不好意思地说「我应该要谢谢三位学长才是。」

原滨嘿嘿地笑着「博启，看来以后新生入部都要这样才对，呵呵。」

长田想了一下，笑着说「听起来好像不错喔。」

说完后，四人在风吕场里哈哈地大笑起来。

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kachoushi · 2 years ago

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