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washeduprockstr Ā· 2 months ago
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Doodles Day 15. Clowning on my pierce
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itacandraw Ā· 2 years ago
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erabu-san Ā· 2 months ago
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Hello!!I want to start off with the fact that i ABSOLUTELY LOVE your art!!The way you draw characters is amazing,you draw them nearly the same as i hc them
I was scrolling through your blog (the art is beautiful please dont ever stop) and i saw some anons complaining and insulting you for drawing some characters (mainly characters from natlan and sumeru) with different shades of skin.While i dont know much about this topic i just wanted to share my opinion.
Sumeru is based off of middle east,the majority of which has tanned skin (but its very mixed from what i know!).Natlan is based off of a lot of places (which is honestly another sign of racism in my opinion)I myself am from Turkey which can count as both middle east AND Europe (even turkish people dont know what we count as).I have a lot of middle eastern friends as well (Iran,Iraq,Sauda Arabia,Syriaā€¦) and they are brown or tanned and one of them is white!
i saw a lot of people say that ā€œnot every character needs to be black/brownā€ and i answer this with not every character has to be white.White,brown,black,asian,native american and every other race exists and every race deserves to be respected.No race should be insulted for wanting representation.No race should be seen as outcasts either.Wether that be white or black,no one deserves to feel like they are not fine the way they are.
I myself hc Zhongli as pale as a ghost to indicate that he is a god (as being pale is associated with being a superior being in chinese culture).I hc Xiao as tanned due to him spending all his time,day and night,fighting monsters.I hc Neuvilette has slightly blue-ish skin bc hes the hydro sovereign.I hc as black bc i like him that way.I hc Alhaitham as brown and so many more characters.Nobody would want to play a game in which there is no diversity.Diversity helpes the characters feel more real and gives them character depth.Diversity helps make Teyvat feel more real,like Earth itself.
But anyways this is just my opinion,i would love to learn more and hear everyoneā€™s opinions.And if someone doesnt like your art they should just block you if they dont want to see itšŸ¤·ā€ā™€ļø Your art is amazing though so please dont mind those buffoons šŸ™
Sorry it this got too long or complicated.English isnt my first language and im still learning
And dont even get me started on the body shapes of the characters
Hii !! Thank you so much ! šŸ˜­šŸ˜­šŸ™
Yesss I completely agree with you !
And if I can be honest, I wasn't aware of this question of representation and diversity before Genshin Impact. Once, I saw a fanart with someone making a white character black, and in all of my ignorance, I was wondering why (a genuine question). So I asked my friend her thought (because I love hearing her opinions) and she makes me aware about representation in media, and issues they are facing to. And, wow, I learnt a lot ! Maybe it is a bit silly but, I always tend to focus on canon content, and all my HC was around interactions or their behaviour, and I never thought about their body appearance HC. And since I learnt that, my creativity developed a new skill ! So it is only recently I put HC on their physical appearance (like Sethos with dimples KKGEKDJS it ain't that much but it is fun, I guess HC on physical appearance is not my domain)
But it is thanks to Genshin, a game about exploring a whole world with diversity lore in each region, and what representation Hoyoverse used for making their game that I started to be into it. So yes, there is a lot of problem in genshin, making some rep worst. But without this, I wouldn't be able to learn more about SWANA culture with a thread I read on Dehya Nilou Tighnari Faruzan, Japan with Wanderer, Chinese with Yun Jin or recently on Hawai'i with Mualani and even on France United Kingdom with Emilie (i think I also read a thread about GaMing too...?). And what a surprise, I am close to France and UK but I never knew about Emilie's inspiration. Not only on character but also lore, and how some desert name in genshin is also part of culture (I don't remember where I read it tho !! Gosh i wish to reread it again).
I love genshin for its diversity whatever on region or lore but even on gameplay it offers us in our adventure. But I also agree on those who complain about character design ! Not only about representation, but about storytelling in character design (for example, you can't guess Xilonen is someone who forges ; her nails, accessories and hair would be on her way). And it happens that I receive some hate message (on tumblr and twitter. Mostly twitter) saying "this game is not for you, just leave" with some insults that I prefer to not share lol
I agree and also disagree. What do you mean this game is NOT for me ?? Searching our lost sibling, tragic lore, wholesome encounter, satisfying gameplay, vivid color landscape, with great characters, ALBEDO ??? Not for me ?! šŸ¤Ø My love for genshin is immense. But, I agree on the fact that.. yes. Indeed, I am not the target for genshin character design. I played a lot of gacha game, and it is mostly based on collectioning waifu with big boobs and big ass (you were a great game, Epic Seven...). When I look at hater's account on twitter, there is a pattern : throwaway account, account full of problematic opinion, or full of porn 2d woman with the basic hourglasses morphology big boobs big butt even on characters who are flat. It is undeniable that most of genshin characters are sexualised, and this, for sell them better. And, making them white is one of criteria to sell them better to those type of client šŸ™‚ā€ā†•ļø
I study sociology (i am a newbie tho, nothing deep) and I can extend this light analyse on what I learn : the success of Genshin, why there is such a contrast between Genshin players and their different profiles, the benefits Hoyoverse do and how difficult it is to satisfy all players (and so sacrifices are made, like characters design). It is all supposition tho BGKEJGJS but maybe if I do my last year of sociology and still into genshin, why not making my essay on it bahahaha
BACK TO THE TOPIC !!! (SORRY I HAD A LOT TO SAY) don't worry, since this anon hate, I tend to block everyone who try to argue or insult šŸ˜­ and just mostly shock how people are openly racist when they are behind a screen WOW lucky me I am not affected by those words ā˜ ļø and all of this just because I draw Kinich black skin or Xilonen with a bit more textured hair...? That's so crazy ! Anywaaaay diversity is great and it works also on creativity too !! World is boring if everything looks the same, and it is also the same in Genshin ! Imagine in 4 years, genshin only released mondstadt 1, mondstadt 2, mondstadt 3.... I believe the game would be dead sooner if it was the case bahaha
And thank you again for all your compliments about my art anon !! I love drawing so much, and it is my source of fun and happinness <3 There is in some drawings I thought "wow !!! I improve !!" And i am so happy when people notice it too! šŸ˜­šŸ™
Don't worry abt your english, mine isn't the best neither BAHTVZJHGJZGAA
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sea-you-in-paradise Ā· 2 years ago
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ā˜½ ā›§ Ā a r m i n Ā  a r l e r t ā€˜ s Ā  s l e e p i n g Ā  h a b i t s Ā  ā›§ ā˜¾Ā  |Ā NSFW EDITION
summary: arminā€™s nsfw bedtime/morning endeavors word count - 776 setting: canonverse implied, but can be applicable to modern au features: armin :))) genderneutral!reader (implied established relationship) warnings: NSFW (content specifications below the cut) !MINORS DO NOT INTERACT! note:Ā hereā€™s a link to his sfw sleeping habits :)
content warnings: (consensual) somnophilia, edging, maybe dacryphilia??, oral sex, slight manipulation, thigh fucking
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- armin doesnā€™t suffer from insomnia, simply because by the time he goes to bed, he is already practically sleepwalking, but sometimes he likes to go the extra mile to tire himself out and purposefully overexert himself fucking you
- if he still has a lot of energy, he likes to hit it from behind. the combination of his hips frantically slamming against your ass and the sound of both of your intermingled moans (which seem to slip out much louder after any exhausting day) is like his own personal nightcap. his harsh pace is always a stark contrast to the soft circles his thumbs draw on your hips, though his grip on them gets increasingly bruising as he approaches his climax
- if heā€™s already feeling pretty spent going into things, he likes it when you edge him. he wants to close his eyes, but he just canā€™t when youā€™re so close to letting him cum. thatā€™s how you get him. every. time. keeping him on the precipice of bliss until he is a whiny mess, his tears glistening in the candlelight. both his orgasm and his sleep will be fucking fantastic when youā€™re done with him
- nights when these happen back to back are really fun
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- in the mornings when armin doesnā€™t want to get up, but knows he has a little time, he will do anythingĀ to keep you in bed. it might start as some innocent cuddles, sometimes thatā€™s all it is, but sometimes itā€™s not
- a sweet morning kiss turns into a very heated morning kiss which leads to him interlocking your fingers and trailing kisses down your neck, and then your chest, and your stomach, and your thighs, until he gets to exactly where he made you need him
- he doesnā€™t really seem so tired when heā€™s eagerly watching you squirm and lace your fingers in his disheveled hair
- if you donā€™t get quite that far tho and you leave him hanging after just a few kisses, morning armin in all of his unfiltered glory will be soĀ fucking frustrated. not only are you going to tell him to get out of his warm bed with his pretty partner, but you also got him all worked up?! armin would look at you with his foe puppy dog eyes and sayĀ ā€œdid i do something wrong?ā€ knowing damn well you just donā€™t want him to be late. of course, if you explain this, heā€™ll just groan and blame it on you, even though heā€™s the one who started things.Ā ā€œbut i can be quick, i promise! itā€™s not like i can stop myself from gettingĀ hard when you touch me like that!ā€
- he will definitely apologize for this profusely later.. but heā€™ll probably do it again the following week
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- if armin wakes up before you, half the time itā€™s bc of his own neediness
- at the beginning of your relationship, he found this to be quite an issue because he felt too guilty to take care of the problem himself when you were sleeping right there, but he refused to leave the comfort of bed despite his horniness. so, he opted to lie there in a state of torture, positioning himself as far from you as possible until you woke up
- of course, when you actually talked about the situation, armin was both delighted and surprised to hear that you were more than fine with him touching himself beside you while you sleep. not only that, but you didnā€™t mind if he touched you too, so long as he didnā€™t actually enter you... at least, not yet
- the first time armin stroked his cock while lying no more than six inches from your sleeping form, he was careful not to be too loud despite the arousal coursing through his veins. now, heā€™s a lot more careless, but equally aroused
- when armin wakes up especially horny, he is desperate to fuck your thighs. heā€™ll nuzzle into you from behind, head tucked in a way that lets him smell your hair, and softly begin moving his hips, increasingly his rhythm until heā€™s biting his lip to keep from moaning right into your ear. if you start to wake up, heā€™s sorry, but he isnā€™t stopping, not unless you tell him to. he also figures that once youā€™re stirring, youā€™re basically awake, so he gets a lot sloppier with his movements and a bit more vocal. if you start giving him reactions, heā€™ll kiss your shoulder and stimulate you too until your first words of the day are moans of his name
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ganondoodle Ā· 7 months ago
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I just wanna say firstly that i adore your artwork and takes6on Zelda in general! Secondly, much as I wish you never had to deal with the frustrations of creating (especially when you tack on the stress of being on any kind of social platform), I'm glad you talk about your struggle. I've heard people talk about art block every day since I learned what Art was, but nobody ever mentioned "painting oneself into a corner". It's such an apt description that is so infuriatingly relatable that I had to stop eating to thank you for putting it into words. I really appreciate that you're willing to talk about your setbacks in a place like Tumblr, and still share your arts and thoughts. All the best from US of hellscape A, i hope you're doing well.
Thank you!
i used to call it artblock as well, its the most normalized term i guess; i randomly started calling it painting myself into a corner when i got stuck or frustrated on a painting bc welll, it sure feels like it, you painted the walls all around you and dont know how to get out now
it usually happens when i stop having fun and just draw what i want and instead keep subconsciously forcing myself into arbitrary rules; in my case its usually trying to be too perfect, i try to adhere to the sketch, i try to make every block of color have a perfectly clean edge, separate the drawing into way too many layers and am afraid to delete or erase anything, i tense up my whole body as frustration builds bc of impatience as this method of painting does not work for me at all and in the end lose motivation on it all and my nerves are stretched thin (i work best when i think as little as possible, just kinda loosely letting my hand do what it wants on few layers and no specific plan, after losing that its hard to get it back)
having those low moments with your art is normal as your skill grows, but even knowing so, and having gone through it countless times, it never stops making you feel like shit, and its especially frustrating when it happens when you just got enough time to work on stuff or have alot of ideas but you cant get it to work
(and funnily enough it also tends to happen after another work of mine got more attention than i thought .. even worse when it was just a sketch bc now i got the pressure on me to actually finish it and the fear of it doing worse once done looms over the whole thing- which doesnt mean i dont want people to interact with my wips, bc that also has an extremely demotivating factor to it bc it makes me think no one cares or it sucks and doesnt deserve the time i would need to spend on finishing it; also .. alot of my wips stay wips forever, which is fine, but like .. you cant always expect a finished tm version to happen)
i do find it a little funny you praise me for talking openly about it bc i am notoriously unable to shut up ever and only recently got better at NOT talking as much about it when i feel as shitty as this bc it doesnt really help anyone and gets annoying really fast xD (im also notoriously unable to not post absolutely everything bc i got no one to show it to and otherwise it will just collect dust on my harddrive so i might as well throw it out there no matter how much i might hate it, someone else might still enjoy it anyway)
and greetings back from the -not really much less of a hellscape- that is germany o/
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monstress Ā· 2 years ago
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hii. if u dont mind, could u please share that "change of attitude" towards journaling? i feel like i really need that.. since i myself changed my attitude towards drawing and have been much more productive and happy doing it this last year. however Writing About Myself its another beast completely.. hope u r having a nice day! šŸƒ
hope you're having a lovely day as well! anyways as i was typing this up, what starts as a small tidbit has gone off the rails so i suppose this is my blanket advice as a newbie in journaling:
the materials!
choosing the titular journal aka notebook:
soft vs hard cover - i didn't realize this is SUCH a deciding factor until much later. most people prefer soft covers since journals can get massive with use but it's very subjective. be tactile - if it just don't feel right in ur hands, it's not gonna be something u reach out for when u have free time.
size - the most common sizes are A5, A6 or regular aka travelers notebook. you have to think abt who you are as a writer. do u have a large handwriting that takes up pages and pages? do you like space or are you overwhelmed by a blank page? do you travel a lot and do u want something unobtrusive in your bag? choose something that will reasonable work as a part of your daily life.
paper texture - paper that is smooth to write in are a great source of pleasure. notebooks with 100gsm paper is a good benchmark.
price - pleaseeee do not break the bank to purchase a fancy notebook. an expensive notebook can become an unloved one. you'd be too stressed to ensure every entry is perfect and pretty enough and the notebook eventually becomes too intimidating for you to fill in. check out your local hypermarket or online stores for quality notebooks. moleskins are overrated--in my country, they are v v expensive so don't feel pressure to buy a certain stationary just bc you see them often on ig/tiktok like my journal cost me approximately RM10 (USD2.34) and my new one w 100gsm paper cost me RM17 (USD4) like affordable options are out there!
build a connection with your notebook - listen...this sounds strange but having an attachment with your journal and making it inviting as possible is a great source of motivation. personalize it: add stickers, doodle or paint the cover. get a fabric/pvc cover to keep it clean if you'd like (you can add lil papers/stickers on ur actual notebook cover before putting on the pvc cover! very cute and easy)
and your pens:
again: less is more! use any relatively cheap pens you like - be it for the ink or smoothness. if you want to journal a lot, expect to lose a few pens during traveling or just around the house lmao
for fans of darker inks like me, i use Uni-ball Signo Broad, M&G R3 retractable gel pen and my favorite: Faber Castell RX Gel Pen 0.38mm - which cost like RM1.49 (i dont wanna convert - it's change money in america)
final note: i don't use fountain pens so i'm afraid i'm not well-versed enough to advise in that department but i deeply respect (and a little in awe) of journallers who use them šŸ«”
the tenet!
purpose: what do u plan to use the notebook for? daily journal? art journal? planner? all three? it's your life! live deliciously! since i have a 9-5 job, i know i can't keep up with more than one journal so i've been using mines as a diary and i dump my daily activities/thoughts/reviews of all kinds of media i'm currently obsessed with and it fills up quick!
don't be too hard on yourself: if you missed a day or two of journalling, it's fine - take it back up. write down anything memorable you'd like in the past few days. if you come across a certain blank page your brain is blanking to fill, perhaps after a previous dark entry, skip the page. skip two pages if needed. don't be scared of blank pages. if it needs to be blank, let it be.
it doesn't have to only be words! add stickers, dried flowers, receipts, ticket stubs, other ephemera you collected in the day. be artful! go crazy on page decoration!!
if there's anything you take away from this post, it's this: if you truly want a journal that is used up quickly, do not have plans to share it on social media. personally, i find once you are in the mindset of sharing your journal for an audience's consumption, you get worried whether it's "aesthetic" enough or is it too boring or too ugly or too dark or that you don't upload regularly enough. social media can be inhibiting your creativity or motivation to journal like let your animal brain ruminate in private! stay free from the shackles of responsibility!
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maythearo Ā· 9 months ago
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Yeah! The g3!! I know it has certainly been a uhhhh controversial topic lol
Imo draculaura looks sooo cute
Certainly lolll
You know how it goes I'm gonna ramble again so I'll put the read more thing for the sake of scrolling past it šŸ˜­
Well I'll start off by saying that, in this era of reboots and mass adaptations of every mildly old franchsie ever, is kinda impossible to avoid negative reactions from the people who were fans of the first generation of such franchises, because it happens, when someone takes something you grew up with and changes it to a modern audience most people's reaction will be "what in the world that's not how it was back in my days" + the phenomenon of older generations not liking the stuff that comes all for younger generations and etc. And I mention all of this bcs this definetely affects how people's opinions on things such as design (of MH in this case) go, there's lots of strong biases in this conversation of reboots and all
And tbh I wasn't immune to that šŸ’€ at first I didn't like a lot of small decisions they made because I was used to the old one and "the og's always better" type of opinion, monster high was a big part of my childhood and probably a big boost to my interest in art! Which is what I live for baisically nowadays so ofc I felt strongly about it šŸ˜­ but when I came back after some time I realized, hey it's not that serious. I don't even remember specifically what those things I criticized were about, so that's an indicator of how much I actually cared, deep down lol. Like, pink Lagoona did not kill me, can you believe that? /s.
My opinion as of now, is that I think the g3 designs are really cute on their own!! I'm gonna stop myself from comparing it to the first gen because for the most part that's a waste of time and also a huge tangent from where I want to get šŸ˜­ recent reboots are a product of this era and they adapt accordingly. Sometimes they hit sometimes they miss, I think g3 mh is going well mostly!
(Talking about the concept designs and doll designs in this part) g3 takes from general modern fashion, clothing-wise the characters are not draaastically different from each other, they all just dress like how teenagers nowadays do but each got their own little motifs to their wardrobes. I don't think this "lack of difference" between each other's outfits is an enormous one nor is it inherently a bad thing because hey, if it looks good it looks good, and you can distinguish their clothings between one another just fine imo. In some cases I got some nickpicking in terms of "the pattern of this shirt is not working with these pants" or "whoa there's a lot going on with these colors" or "they really love to put bright pink lipstick on everyone huh" but it's rarely something I heavily dislike (only cases I can remember are that I wasn't a fan of was Heath šŸ’€ feels like halfway through the process of his design mattel said "no you can stop now he's good like that" nothing is happening with that look, it's crazy, what happened to my boy. And Twyla, that wasn't as bad a s Heath's, but it just didn't work for me)
I can't say anything about the quality of the material of the dolls themselves bcs I don't have any of the new ones but oh my god, I also think Draculaura is adorable šŸ˜« I think Venus dropped too recently and I'd buy her for sure!! The braided hair is everything and her fashion sense is probably one of my favorites so far? I also love Abbey's doll, and Frankie too especially that one line that they got a guitar? Instrument? Rockstar theme I think? (I'd cosplay that, no joke) from what I can see the designs are putting a lot more variety on drawing and sculpting different body types, features and details on the dolls and I think that's super fucking awesome! G1 also experimented with facial features and details on the body every once in a while but not as nicely done as now!
For the animated series I understand they had to tone it down to some extent because inserting all details the dolls and concept art had could lead to technical trouble (I think), so it isn't fair to compare them to one another. I'm just gonna ignore the animated series in terms of design for now, cause it's in the dolls and in illustration that a franchise like monster high work best anyway. I don't think much abt the cartoon tbh and I'm also not up to most episodes, idk who else dropped recently. But honorable mention, in the standards of the animated series my favorite designs are Deuce and Medusa for sure
That's long enough of a post so I'm gonna stop right hereeee, this was more of an overview of the g3 as a whole rather than ratings of each character, but yeah! I'm no longer a hater, I'm ok šŸ‘ (if you're one of the people who heard me extensively complain over g3 before in another social, honestly I don't even know what it could have been about but you know what, disconsider it, it's easier that way šŸ˜­) I may have more opinions about it but that's all I could remember for now. Also my brain is fried.
And I can always change my mind on this, so there's that! Someone get me a Venus and Frankie doll rn please and thank you
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yuukei-yikes Ā· 2 years ago
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Do you have any headcanons about Hibiya's relationships with the rest of the Dan after the series? I was always a little disappointed we didn't really get to see him interact much with anyone besides hiyori, konoha, and momo. I would have loved to see him properly integrated as a member of the group and hanging out with them šŸ„²
YESSSSS I'VE ACTUALLY BEEN MEANING TO DRAW HIBIYA HANGING OUT WITH EVERYONE SEPARATELY TO LIKE POINT OUT DYNAMICS but then i never did šŸ’” i still will at some point
hibiya is the mekakushi dan's little brother.
0. ayano's big sister radar goes off incredibly fast when meeting hibiya. she spoils the hell out of him because hibiya is largely independent and already has momo as a big sister for emotional stuff so when ayano's like WANT ME TO PATCH UP THE HOLE IN UR SHIRT hibiya's like what. i know how to do that myself. and ayano's like fine i will buy your love if i must. so she's always taking him shopping and asking if he needs anything new. he comes back every summer to the city with broken ass sandals and ayano's always sending him back with shiny new ones. he still rly enjoys having her around but he looks at her more in a motherly light than sisterly. he'd DIE before admitting it tho
1. srry to play the cooking card with kido again but. hibiya and kido cooking together :) i think kido is very impressed with hibiya's cooking and hibiya is SUPER used to being taken for granted so when they point it out to him he almost bursts into tears. i think hibiya is always looking for compliments from kido bc kido is super cool and The Leader and they kinda have a teacher's pet dynamic LMAOO hibiya is always asking kido if he can help with any chores so of course it works and he's kido's favorite student. if this was a class which is not. so he's just a rly helpful kid kido enjoys having around and hibiya loves that kido is really normal. also kidomomo. yeah. hibiya and his lesbian moms. also kido teaches hibiya how to bind. ratio
2. with seto... i remember reading this fic in ff/net back in the golden days of kagepro (so like. 10 years ago) that was like hibiya resenting seto bc he was still hurting abt hiyori and while everyone died with a loved one seto lost a DOG. i thought it was so funny bc it's so immature but seems so in character for hibiya. also in the novels when hibiya is unconscious he's taken to seto's room. i think hibiya thinks the whole dan act like fools (bc they ARE) but kind of respects and looks up to seto because hibiya is 12 and according to my intensely calculated family headcanons was raised in a toxic masculinity household so he sees this Buff Guy getting up at 5am everyday and holds more than one job for his family...he's like (nod nod nod) and he also really respects how seto refuses to use his eye power because of its. erm. unethical nature. hibiyas like UGH SETO IS SO COOL SUCH A MAN'S MAN. seto is mostly oblivious to this and always always always ruffles hibiyas hair. everyone does this but seto is the only one hibiya doesnt yell at
3. i think kano would go easy on hibiya cuz he's a kid but not entirely bc if kano isnt totally insufferable to everyone he knows at least once a day he gets sick and dies. i think kano tries to do the big sibling thing abt convincing the little brother of a total bullshit lie like basically his hobbie is gaslighting hibiya for fun. hibiya goes screaming for kido to make him stop lol. also kano's the one who's always saying shit like hibiya is 8 years old. even when hibiya's an adult kano's like how old are u again. u turned like 15 right
4. man mary tries acting SOOOO GROWN UP to hibiya she's like desperately trying to seem like a cool older sister but on purpose. with everyone else it's kind of natural but she is actively trying. momo bestie so also around a lot and sees how momo (hibiyas big sister #1) acts around him and tries doing the same and hibiya's like. this is pathetic. but still endearing and accepts it LOL he's also respectful of mary bc he's well aware of her role in their survival so he's like SIGHS okay
6. takane is everyone's demise because she introduces hibiya to smartphones and gaming. like hibiya rly wanted a smartphone right and then he makes all these friends and has to go back to the village so he takes an intensive course ran by takane abt how to use a phone. which is all good. but the thing is she is ALSO like ur so weird kid. here. play some amongus. this is how amongus hibiya can still win. everyone like vinnie hibiya cant be a fortnite kid bc he has no idea abt gaming he doesnt even have a phone WELL i got news for u buddy my fave character is takane and im also totally delusional. she is the reason hibiya is texting the gc in total typos asking if anyone wants to among us. and he's so thankful to her he expresses his gratitude thru sending her amongus and minecraft memes he finds around that she's seen a thousand times but it's rly endearing. also hibiya is shintaro coded so takane knows how to handle him sorry im so delusional abt their friendship (holds their chapter together from novel eight close to my chest)
7. eheheheheh. like i said. hibiya is shintaro coded like in canon both momo and takane say hibiya reminds them of shintaro like he's a little shin. and momo adopting hibiya means shintaro gets little brother by default too. his ass is always at HIS HOUSE!!!! i talked abt this in a post once abt how seeing hibiya and momo together makes shintaro want to try a little harder at being a big brother. i think they like each other and shintaro always lets hibiya sit in his room if momo is being too insane, and hibiya sometimes is like well shintaro's actually pretty normal!! (immediately sees him act a fool bc ofc he does) eugh. also shintaro helps hibiya with his summer hw, i think hibiya's a good student but appreciates the help and tells shintaro he thinks he'd make a rly good teacher and continues writing down on his hw all casually while shintaro has to act like he didn't get all choked up hearing that
9. i've talked abt the haruka and hibiya shitshow lol but again i love the idea of hibiya just totally refusing to acknowledge konoha's gone and keeps kicking and screaming abt it. bc if konoha is rly gone then it means he regrets everything bc he was so mean to it and its bc of it hiyori is alive (hiyori doesnt act this way bc she's well aware of it) and that SUCKS. so hibiya largely avoids haruka and isn't all that into how hiyori is really accepting of him and all. and haruka is also like. awkwardly trying to approach him because it's the least he can do in konoha's memory but hibiya's like hissing at him. eventually hibiya would accept it after a couple breakdowns. i think momo also punches some sense into him. i want hibiya to lash out at haruka and scream all sorts of things at him abt how it's not fair konoha is gone and like who even is he and just overall say all the things haruka is already super insecure about but then it ends on hibiya sobbing in his arms abt how much he misses konoha. and haruka can only hug him back and apologize :(
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kart0 Ā· 6 months ago
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Today was not a good day and my mood is terrible and I have no money and I am barely surviving
I have been planning on opening commissions because I really, really need money. All I have, literally, is $0,053. I am not joking. I have R$0,29 ( my currency ). That's all I have on my bank account. and I refuse to use credit bc I know myself and I don't want to owe money. I'm already owing $40 to my mom, bc I had to prepare for a con, which ended up being very bad and I made no profit whatsoever. I borrowed $100 from her and all money I got, I used to pay her back. And I still haven't paid it all.
And I am. Desperate. I have to buy clothes ( haven't gotten new clothes since 2019 ) and I need new shoes ( I always ask for shoes on my birthday, bc I don't have money to get new ones by myself so I use my birthday as an excuse ) and I plan to save money to buy a new computer. I have a notebook that doesn't work, takes around 3 hours. THREE. FUCKING HOURS. to turn on and work properly. I've been meaning to switch to drawing on a pc because my ipad can only do so much ( and it does a lot, I love it, but it doesn't have a lot of options. I can't get clip paint studio on my ipad cuz it's a subscription and it is expensive. I have clip paint on my notebook tho, but it just doesn't work cuz it's too heavy, and I like working on big canvas )
Last year I was looking for a display drawing tablet ( I bought myself a Wacom intuos in 2017, but I couldn't adapt. I am not very coordinated. At that time i would prefer to draw traditionally, and if digital, on my phone with my FINGER. ) and my dad ended up gifting me one that I really loved ! I had been looking for good and cheap alternatives to wacoms, and I was so dedicated into finding one that I'd be able to afford and he ended up gifting me one !!!! I was over the moon !!!! It was pricey, so I got it as a birthday, and Christmas gift combined. My birthday is in August btw so it was toooootally fine. I don't usually get any Christmas gifts anyways. At least not expensive ones, I usually ask for underwear, or socks, or pajamas. Things I need.
I opened the display tablet and then it dawned on me. My notebook suuuuuuuucks. It will be such a hassle to work and just inconvenient. Why would I spend 3 hours turning it on when my ipad it's already there.
Ugh I am sorry I am getting so out of track, I just. I need to explain why, this matters so much to me.
The actual upsetting thing:
I will open comms, and I have been struggling to price my art because. I don't want to fail, and not get any customers cuz it's too expensive. But I can't work for free, lately I've been spending at least 2 hours on every bust I've drawn. And I know it's not the cleanest or sharpest artstyle out there. I keep doubting myself that no one is interested in my art, in me. I have some followers on Twitter, which is my main source of clients. But I barely get any interactions. If my art can barely get any comments or likes or fucking views, then most likely no one will see my commission post, and no one will buy one.
And to make things worse, I have a mutual who is super nice I really like her I think she's awesome and she has great art but she just announced she's planning to open comms too, soon. And I feel so fucking stupid. Everyone was commenting on that post saying "I can't wait" "ohhhh this will be good" "this is so exciting I will definitely comm you" and I got. Nothing.
It's my own fault. I'm the only one to blame. I don't interact a lot. I'm not a part of the community there. I don't have friends there. Even though I have double her followers, I don't have their trust, or their empathy. Maybe I'm just that unlikable. I'm not worth it.
And I feel like I could've done something about it. If I had been braver and posted my comms sheet sooner, before her post. If I tried harder to make friends there. If I posted more art. If I. If I just.
I don't know what to do, and I feel terrible about these thoughts. She deserves it ! She deserves more than I do. She's nicer and I'm just me. A prickly, bored, unfazed, egocentric narcissist who can only cry about themself. I feel such shame, and guilt, but I can't help it. I am a naturally envious, jealous, and putrid shell of a person.
I've been trying to be nicer but I don't have the energy to talk to them, and I feel too awkward. I feel so fucking lonely all the time and I need validation. I seek for love. I want to be seen and loved and cherished. I want them to look at me but I don't do my part. All I'm good is my art, and it's not even that fucking good. My worth is my posts. Gosh, I feel so stupid.
Why am I like this ?
I feel angry to myself that I can't be normal. I don't make friends I don't talk to anyone I don't make connections.
I don't post a lot and I am not that active.
The worst thing even is that I don't even have a job.
I don't want to charge too much, I don't want to get paid too little. I don't want to burn out and not be able to get more comms. I don't want to not get any comms at all.
This other artist is in the same fandom as I am ( haikyuu ) so we basically have the same clients. If I charge too high, they will compare our prices and choose hers. "Her art is better" "her art is worth more" "at least she will offer full bodies, when you only will offer headshots"
They will choose her, and I don't know what to do. I know we're in a crisis, economy is in shambles, and people just can't afford to support both artists. I know that ! I know that and I can't change my pricing because it's already cheap, for me. People always say to charge more but most people just don't want me. And my commissions always tend to look like shit because I am too afraid to upset people. I need to prove they did the right choice by commissioning me. I need them to know I did my best. I want them to be happy. But all I feel is that I'm failing !
I'm failing at everything, look where I am !
I DONT EVEN HAVE A FUCKING DOLLAR. I DONT HAVE 1 DOLLAR. One fucking dollar.
And I feel like I'm going crazy. How could I not ? I don't have a job, I will never get a job, I am barely surviving at college, I have no plans for the future, I am neurodivergent and no one will hire me, I don't work well with other people I am not friendly. I'm just.
I'm bad at being a person.
I don't know what to do. Yes I will be opening comms. And I'm considering lowering my prices. I don't blame this artist at all. It's not her fault, and I know that.
And I don't wish her any harm. I just. I feel envy. Why am I not her.
Why am I so bad at this ?
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yannysifgen Ā· 2 years ago
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Hiya! :-D I've been meaning to reach out w some questions and finally decided to commit!!! ;v;
Idk if it's stated anywhere, but I'm curious what inspired the concept of the game? And what made you choose Lucien as his name bc it fits him so well <3
I'm also really curious abt the original plot of Rosalind's Lie, how much of in-game lore do we get to see? Or is it only mentioned in passing here and there? Just the idea of a game's storyline (RL) inside another game's storyline (IITAOAYD) intrigues me a lot
Sorry for the long ask ;v;!
Hii!! Thanks so much for reaching out! If you think your ask is long then wait till you read this answer haha... But on that note it's totally fine, I absolutely love reading any and all ramblings because I'm a rambler myself (it's the adhd) and like to consume new knowledge, even if I can't actually retain all of it :') (btw I love Mychael and can't wait to see what you do with the rest of the game aaa)
Honestly, the idea just kinda came out of nowhere one day (my brain does that) because of the recent(?) boom in yandere games, I was thinking what kind of yandere I might make and just thought of a concept where mc might be isekai'd into the yan's garden and he kind of immediately gets attached because they're 'untainted' by the world and other people and wants to keep it that way.
I should mention that I'm a fan of isekai genre in general because it's such a self-indulgent escape from our boring mundane lives, a kind of fresh start that a lot of people wish they had access to. Ironically though, I prefer the isekais that are more focused on living a new life as opposed to getting op powers and making waves in the world
Back to the topic, didn't really think too seriously on it till I saw the yanjam announcement and decided why not. Then I decided to add the reincarnation/otome isekai tropes into the mix to make it more interesting, except that mc is themselves and not another character. So stories like "My next life as a Villainess: All roads lead to doom!" and "Death is the only ending for the Villainess" (I promise it's two different things) come to mind for inspirations.
The game will lightly parody these popular tropes, which is why if Lucien looks like every other 'Duke of the North' with his red eyes and black hair(but less buff as I'd like because drawing men is an ongoing struggle for me) then it's on purpose. His name....... well it's honestly embarrassing but it really just comes from angel/demon inspo while talking it out with a friend, since Dukes are mostly portrayed as 'monsters' in comparison to the angelic Prince or so, when in reality it's the other way around. So its kinda like Lucifer...Lucien... yeah, not very creative but I also wanted a name that could be turned into a cute nickname(Lucy) so I decided to roll with it.
Since I gave such a specific name like "Rosalind's Lie" for the og game, I do intend to flesh out the story at some point, though for now I only have rough concepts because I'm terrible at planning lore I'm so sorry. But that somehow didn't stop me from being ambitious with it because I'm weird like that. Anyways, Rosalind's Lie is named so because the titular character Rosalind kicks off her relationships with the eligible bachelors through lies. As for why, it's because she was born in the slums and orphaned at a young age, and had only herself to rely on to survive. Thanks to that she's very street-smart and cunning, and by chance she caught the attention of a kind Baron who decides to adopt her. He was nice enough, but not very smart or ambitious, which she felt was a waste, so she decides to make her own fortune in life and marry rich - she's really more like a villainess than a heroine lol but basically she encapsulates both roles. Her "lie" in Lucien's route is basically her nicking his brooch during a ball and pretending she found it and returns it to him, which prompts him to invite her for lunch or something as thanks. And then she plans various other small schemes because he's notoriously hard to get a hold of but eventually starts liking him for real.
I'm actually not sure how much of the og lore I'll involve in yanduke, other than mc occasionally making some callbacks when they're reminded of something, because mc is isekai'd before the plot of the game starts this time, which is ofc heavily derailed and non-existent by then thanks to our yan.
Sorry for the late reply, I actually had to knock around the old noggin to articulate an answer, but again, questions like these are always welcome because it actually helps me formulate some plot points too!
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pussyboys-blog Ā· 5 months ago
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Huhhh I'm so fucking tired in the past few months, it's because of me, it's because of the lack of sleep, I can't remember the last time I slept 8 hours the longest that I've been able to sleep was 6 hours a night but most of the time I sleep for 5 hours... It's ass, and once again it's because of me, it's not insomnia, I can sleep just fine, it's self inflicted,, I'm unable to get myself to sleep every night, at first it was just me doing my stuff, drawing, reading, and not wanting to fall asleep too early, to squeeze the last drop on entertainment out of my day, but it has started to change after a nother sleep paralysis, I've started to dread sleep and the darkness. I love sleeping in the pitch dark, but in the past few days I found myself staring at it to test something and sure enough, if I'm in the dark and open my eyes, my mind will make out to most horrendous and disturbing faces in there, it's just pitch dark, nothing else no shades no light just blackness and all the faces laughing at me, I'm scared of that, I'm scared of another sleep paralysis and yesterday was worse than usual
I was terribly afraid of everything in my room, I couldn't get my riled up mind to sleep until 5am, but eventually I fell asleep, but the most upsetting thing is that my father woke me up around 11:45 am, well yes sure that is quite late already and I know for a fact that I would have slept for way longer, but he woke me up from the best fucking sleep ever, he woke me up bc he wanted to have lunch (which this fucking man child is unable to have alone) he woke me up from my best sleep yet and had me eat food. Now I know I could have refused him he would have let me go, but he would have been upset and bitchy about it, in this household the best thing you could do is never anger him, let him have his way, otherwise he'll make this home into a living hell for not only you but for every other family members, so not like I can say no to him,, and honestly what he did here wasn't anything bad specially,
He woke me up because it was late already and had me eat something, but I feel like I have been robbed of this amazing sleep, of my 8 hours,, my limbs feel like falling off, and my brain buzzes with the leftover sleep that hes trying to process for me. I'm still tired for fucks sake, but I know that even if I lay in bed the rest of the day, I won't be able to sleep, my mind won't let me
Fuck it up
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malachitezmeyka Ā· 10 months ago
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Iā€™ve been so completely out of it all day bc of last nightā€™s revelation, itā€™s literally been the only thing I could think about, and the deeper I get in analysing my life experiences the more realisations I come to, and each one feels more horrific than the last.
Not horrific as in terrible, but as in it feels like whatever remains of my sense of self is completely falling apart. I thought I was bi for so long, didnā€™t even spend a single second questioning it. Never did I even think that I may be wrong, it seemingly made too much sense for me to be wrong. But the sense it made was the fact I was attracted to both male and female characters in animated shows, not real people.
I donā€™t think Iā€™ve ever had a crush on a real person before. Not on someone I knew irl, nor on some actor/celebrity, nor on someone I saw on tiktok or wherever. And itā€™s like, I can acknowledge someone is attractive, even that someone is beautiful or hot, but itā€™s never personal when I do. Pretty girls I see donā€™t linger in my mind at all. I canā€™t picture myself dating them or getting intimate or kissing them or anything. Itā€™s a purely aesthetic attraction with no feelings behind it. With animated/drawn characters itā€™s different, I can actually feel all the physical side-effects of looking at someone youā€™re romantically attracted to. But when the scale of a drawing slides too far towards realism, like with museum paintings or even that one Suiren portrait I drew once, the attraction fades again. Iā€™m just not and have never been attracted to real people.
At my old school the topic of which celebrities you found hot came up often and I never knew what to say. Naming the ones I knew were conventionally beautiful but I wasnā€™t personally attracted to felt like lying, so eventually I started naming people my mom found hot. Sheā€™d tell me which actors she had a crush on when we watched movies or shows together and I pretended to see her point. After a while I managed to convince myself that it wasnā€™t pretending and that I really agreed with her. I realise now it all boiled down to purely aesthetic attraction again, I had no genuine interest in them. And one could assume it was just my preference for women showing, but female celebrities faced the exact same treatment from me.
I started reevaluating a lot of sexuality-related feelings and life moments. My dadā€™s SIL often laments how Iā€™m 17 and donā€™t have a boyfriend yet, and when I say I donā€™t want one she goes ā€œWhy? Itā€™s not like you have to sleep with him, wouldnā€™t it be nice to be gifted flowers and taken on dates and the like?ā€ I usually just shrug but my internal answer was always a resounding no. I once again thought I just liked girls more, but when I actually thought about what if dadā€™s SIL wasnā€™t homophobic and posed the question in a sapphic way, I realised that my answer wouldnā€™t change. I donā€™t want a partner of any gender or to be taken out on dates or anything like that.
It was here that things really started to go downhill for me last night bc then, once I realised I didnā€™t want a girlfriend, I turned my attention to the more sexual side of things. Itā€™s possible to be aromantic and allosexual, right? But Iā€™ve known for a while that a lot of sex-related things are a very big ick for me, penetration of any kind being on top of the list. Forget dicks and toys, I donā€™t want fingers or tongues inside me either, not have I ever used a tampon. But not everyone likes penetration, thatā€™s fine, there are other things. But the thought of someone lavishing my tits with affection just makes me way too hyper aware of them which triggers my dysphoria, and Iā€™ve always found kissing to be extremely gross, andā€¦ pretty much every sexual act I can think of causes some kind of rejection in me. Fantasies are fine, fics/writing are fine, even watching porn is fine for the most part (even then, I can only get off to it if I imagine 2d characters in place of the people), but the second I think of something actually being done to me? It makes my toes curl in a very much bad way.
Iā€™m by no means a completely non-sexual being, quite the opposite actually. Iā€™m horny a lot of the time and itā€™s completely normal for me to get off at least once almost every day, but again, itā€™s all only in fantasies (which never feature me, only characters). Iā€™m so averse to the idea of fucking or being fucked that I donā€™t even touch myself, ever. I accidentally discovered that rubbing my thighs together in a specific way feels good when I was younger and have just been doing that ever since. Iā€™ve tried using my hands but itā€™s just not pleasurable in any way. I really donā€™t want anything or anyone touching me, ever, at all. And itā€™s so weird to realise because it seems natural for someone with as high of a libido as mine to want to be fucked, right? But the mere thought disgusts me and causes insane anxiety to overtake my entire body, and idk if thereā€™s a clearer way for my mind to tell me that no, you donā€™t want any of that, trust me.
Thatā€™s another thing. Maybe Iā€™m just scared. I have debilitating anxiety, Iā€™m terrified of literally everything, of course that, added to my body image issues and complete inexperience in all manners romantic or sexual, would result in these types of feelings. Maybe I just havenā€™t met the right person yet who will awaken my attraction to real people and cause me to want a partner and romance and sex and whatever else. Maybe Iā€™ve convinced myself that Iā€™m too much of a mess for anyone to love me so itā€™s better to label myself as aroace before I get my heart broken. I donā€™t know. But writing it off on all that doesnā€™t feel right, and while Iā€™m not exactly the best judge of my own feelings, my gut is telling me that Iā€™m wrong. Itā€™s not anxiety and inexperience, itā€™s my very real borderline aromantic and asexual feelings finally being acknowledged.
I think back on my life. I thought I had serious crushes before, I even had a girlfriend for a few months, but that was all initiated by someone else. The other person showed interest first and I thought ā€œOkay, theyā€™re pretty enough, maybe I can do this, maybe I just need to get into it and the feelings will come laterā€. Nothing ever went anywhere beyond hand holding or brief hugs, and I was okay with that. I enjoyed spending time with them and lit up whenever they showed up and thought thatā€™s what loving someone felt like. But now that I have real friends that Iā€™m 100% sure Iā€™m not attracted to, I realised I feel the exact same way towards them. I just like being with people who want to spend time with me and who I share common interests with, and I like being paid attention to. Nothing romantic to it. When it comes to my good friends I always had a position of ā€œWell I donā€™t find them particularly attractive but if they were romantically interested in me then Iā€™d go for itā€ and thought that was a crush. Itā€™s no wonder anything vaguely romantic in my life ended before it could properly start. Really hard to be in love with or build a relationship with someone who clearly doesnā€™t feel romantically interested in you, even if theyā€™re trying very hard to be.
And thatā€™s the center of the whole issue. Thereā€™s nothing wrong with being aroace, nor with being wrong about the label you chose when you were 12. What makes be sob for hours is this feeling as if a knife was driven through my heart. All these years Iā€™ve been subconsciously lying to myself and I didnā€™t even know. I canā€™t blame myself for that, Iā€™m aware, I had no way of realising I was wrong because I never had any experience. But the pain and confusion and sense of being lost are still there, beyond all rationalisation. And all those times I said I wanted to be railed by a pretty girl and other similar things to that? Also not true. I said those things because it felt like what a horny queer girl should say. It wasnā€™t a conscious lie, I really believed it when I said it, it never even registered as false until now. Until I dug deep inside myself and realised I donā€™t want to be railed by anyone in any way ever. For the longest time I genuinely thought I wanted whatā€™s normal for queer allosexual women to want. Itā€™s hard coming to terms with that I really, really donā€™t. Iā€™ll definitely need some time to process everything properly,
Honestly, this revelation isnā€™t too surprising, all things considered. I once had a conversation with someone who talked about those younger years of every queer girl, staring at other girls in the changing rooms, wanting to date them, wanting to be a boy so itā€™d be possible before they knew gay people existed and becoming sneakier with their glances after they found out. And I really couldnā€™t relate to that. Iā€™ve never felt attracted enough to someone to experience any of that. Back then I thought I couldnā€™t relate bc I never had a sexuality crisis nor did I hide my sexuality from the other girls in my class, almost all of whom were queer too. Turns out I just genuinely donā€™t experience attraction like that. Or at least I think I donā€™t. I donā€™t know. Now that Iā€™ve got most of my thoughts regarding all this on ā€˜paperā€™, hopefully Iā€™ll have a clearer mind and can come to a more concrete conclusion. And for nowā€¦ letā€™s just put me very firmly in the ā€˜questioningā€™ box.
#maybe I am wrong. maybe it is my inexperience talking for me and once I lose my virginity Iā€™ll realise it feels good and start wanting it#but that most likely wonā€™t happen anytime soon. if ever#thatā€™s another point. in any other circumstance there would be no rush to figure it out#I could make it to college or whatever and maybe try dating around a little to see if it really does cause such an aversion in me#but I donā€™t have that time guaranteed#I donā€™t know how long I could go on for. I donā€™t know if Iā€™ll even reach my 18th birthday#what if I lose myself in my darkest thoughts and snap. give up. end it all#wouldnā€™t really matter what I identify as then. would it#but Iā€™m trying hard not to think about that#justā€¦ if I were to go. Iā€™d prefer to do it with at least some certainty gained in life#out of all possible things. sexuality feels like the most realistic one#Iā€™d like to know that about myself#but thatā€™s all hypothetical. Iā€™m not planning anything. Iā€™m too much of a coward to even be capable of it#for now. at least#and currently I justā€¦ feel so weird about all this#and how could I not? itā€™s like I said. my entire sense of self is falling apart#Iā€™m pulled in so many different directions. am I aroace or just scared or traumatised??#does it even matter? should it matter? why do I care so much?#the cognitive dissonance between saying I would consider immigrating to be railed by a hot girl#and then realising I donā€™t want to be railed at all withing like. an hour of each other#is driving me absolutely mad#who even am I anymore#I still enjoy reading smut. nothingā€™s changed. Iā€™ve just became acutely aware that idk what any of whatā€™s described would feel like#nor do I really want to find out#and all of the kinks Iā€™ve labelled as mine are actually just things I like reading about. not what I want to experience#god.. I almost wish I never stared thinking about this. life is hard enough already#I donā€™t want to feel like Iā€™ve been lying to myself for the last five years even if it wasnā€™t intentional#I donā€™t want to have to reassess my entire being#I was comfortable and confident in calling myself bi. but after today and last night that label just doesnā€™t fit anymore#I just feel so lostā€¦ fuck. I spent 2 hours typing all this out. I need a nap. and perhaps a long cry too
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breathplayed Ā· 1 year ago
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4, 6 & 8 šŸ’œ
below cut to save dashboards!!
(4) what is the plot bunny you've been carrying the longest? ooouuuuhhh..... so many............ So many............ i have full fic outlines from 2017 LOL but the most viable one is a jikook au where they're both vampire hunters + jimin is Turned + jungkook swears to hunt him and be the one to kill him bc it's "what he would have wanted" some good ole lovers to enemies bullshit Once Again. every year since 2018 i've thought it'd be a fun three-part fic i could post for halloween and have never gotten around to it. lately i keep thinking it'd be good for an original novel (hello lesbians <3) but then i would have to actually worldbuild and write well which is daunting......... so back to the drawing board every time...... Maybe Some Day
(6) do you have any kind of consistent writing schedule or just hoping for the best? šŸ’€ i always tell myself i will try to write a little bit every day, and there's been periods where that worked well enough for me, but tbh i write the best and most when i am daydreaming about a fic idea and get batshit possessed and fuel a Fixation. in those moments i am seized by insanity and sit down to write for about 4-6 hours straight in the dead of the night and manage several thousand words in one sitting. the record is 10k for DSD pt1 in like a day, and when i wrote the 90k fic that is WBIO in like 3 weeks off the high of not having any responsibilities in early lockdown (incl almost 20k in one sitting)
So kind of a mix.... When I have more free periods of the year i tell myself *trying* to stick to a schedule is good, like "ok i should go TRY to write at least a little every day, and if it doesn't work and im not feeling it today that's fine" but I can't lie, most of what I put out is the product of a feverish manic haze. Where i daydreamed too hard about a fic idea and accidentally came up with the whole plot and exact dialogue lines and need to bullet point it immediately before I forget it all. I am tormented by visions
(8) whatā€™s your relationship with constructive criticism and feedback like? do you seek it out? how well do you take it? Constructive criticism: not exactly a fan unless I ask for it lol, just bc I think it's kinda rude to offer constructive criticism unless it's asked for? So I already automatically feel a lil cornered. I spent a year as an art major bringing paintings in for concrit sessions, I can take it, but that feels like a facilitated environment where I knew I was opening myself up to hear things so I could improve..... however, I'm not super interested in 'improving' writing beyond naturally improving by doing it.... bc it's just a hobby if that makes sense? I'm also usually super aware of how/where one of my fics is weak (example: i Know my worldbuilding and side characters and settings are not the most fleshed out, that I usually only focus on the main pairing/conflict and let everything else be a cardboard cutout, RIP) and just didn't put the work in to improve it bc I want to have Fun doing this hobby and struggling with fixing weaknesses is not super fun. Yes i am very lazy but it's ok it's fanfiction posted for free not something I'm trying to publish ukno. I'm a perfectionist in other ways! It balances out
Important to note I define constructive criticism as like "it would have been better if you did x instead" and a lot of times in fanfiction that's just people's personal tastes. I do consider everything readers say to me! Like someone said they didn't think the side characters served any point in "folie Ć  trois" and it's just me inserting my faves, I Considered that opinion. There's been times I consider feedback and changed how I continued in a story, like in TLG people said they wanted more Jimin pov/motives and I said hmmm yeah that's valid I'll do more of that. In the aforementioned case for Folie, I considered it and decided (1) no, they're there for jk to see that Everyone is a lil fucked up and (2) it's my fic i can put my kpop girlies in it if i want lol. So sometimes 'concrit' is really just someone saying 'what you wrote wasn't to my personal taste' and not actually anything to do with the quality of the story/plot/style whatever itself.
Feedback overall tho, I do always want to hear from readers!!??! How a story made them feel especially. Tbh , TLDR, I think it really depends on the tone.... My relationship to it is on a case by case basis..... like I'm fine hearing that a character/plot frustrated someone, that they disagree with a character's actions, etc.... because that's Conflict in the story and I think good writing makes the reader Feel something..... it really just depends on what is being offered? if something is obviously mean spirited (which I have gotten) or offering concrit without asking like telling me "btw this would have read better if you didn't write like a possessed failed poet" i'm like ok well i have no plans on improving that. I am down to clarify any points of confusion on a scene/character/etc but I will not be improving. Lol
I hope that makes sense sorry I rambled as always. I took one of my adhd meds for the first time in weeks and now I am tachycardic and overexplaining myself worse than usual. Thank u for the ask <3
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castle-dominion Ā· 2 years ago
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c3x24 knockout. Wasn't the last episode in this storyline knockout too? No, knockdown.
Plot heavy episode, after all, it is the finale.
RC: Hey, guys, I could use a hand. *Esposito & Ryan applaud* Ryan wearing a sweater again. Weekly is v often. their faces drop when they mention him
The ring <3 Lol the "special" & the "usual" & the excellent choice madame. I love it. An hour ago today? Why they all cheering? Oh bc he's the cop. "He" was going to get around to me Ugh he gives him a minute & lays down politely, like this is honestly so respectful of a murder. He's have more blood probably. I remember looking like that. I am now remembering that. You know, for weeks, possibly even a month or several months I could smell blood. The first day, even the first week bc i was still healing, I thought that the smell of blood was just there for real. The bathroom must have smelled like metal; iron & copper; idk how my family didn't notice anything. Maybe it was all in my head now that I think about it. Then later I realized that it was just a hallucination. Sometimes I'd get a whiff of blood & it would remind me of that night, other times I would remember it & suddenly I could smell it. Again, in the earlier days I thought that maybe the smell was real & I just didn't notice it until I thought about it. Figuring out I was getting hallucinations shocked me. Did I just give myself ptsd? I wish I had a photo. I considered it but my phone was in the other room & I wasn't going to go get it. All that blood. Looking back, even tho I'm (sort of) clean now, I want that photo. I wanted a reference for murder scenes in my writing or in drawing, I wanted to see the progress of what I had done, now that I can't remember it as well I want to know what it really looked like & how far I actually got. I used to get nauseous every time I thought about it, even though I was fine with gore. Now all I have is the scar. You know, I used to make jokes when picking raspberries or cutting beets, I said it looked like a murder scene. During this time I realized how wrong I was. Anyway I wrote a fictional story basically transcribing my experiences, just so I'd have a record of it if my memory faded, it was already getting muddy when I wrote it. Now reading it I can barely see it. I remember it though. I remember it. At least I don't get blood olfactory hallucinations anymore. Back to the episode!
Wow it's been four months? Yeah he has an employer. idek who that employer is. Wait if she was 16 & it's been 12 years then she's only 28... alexis is 17 & if he had her at minimum 18 that would be 35 minimum. Well that fits the half plus seven rule. She's 28? 21x2=42 which sounds just as accurate for castle tbh. Yeah cool. Tho tbh the half plus seven rule does fall apart the more you age since people's brains still go thru development phases even tho the most & biggest were from ages -1 to 25.
He technically isn't hal lockwood hence why they called him john doe. OH NO FLASHBANGS. Those things are not good. Even the guys breaking him out would have been affected, even if they covered their ears & closed their eyes. (You only have two hands, two would have to be for your ears & so all you can do is close ur eyes & even so it is bright & loud & there is a physical boom. She asks "where" but how does the lady know what she means? Where is it safe? Where did they go? Where are you hurt? Poor helicopter guy. was he piloting?
Just like, check ur inbox? Can't be real names, must be code. That's why espt made that face! Just like my Mumma! She has her emergency radio license or smth like that. She's the one who taught me the nato phoenetic alphabet. Having seen this. His face when the third cop is mentioned. they were just talking abt street justice cops & monty is saying they should take him out rn rn.
JE: He says he wouldnā€™t have even known anybody had used it if it werenā€™t for the bullet holes. XD Does she know or is she speculating? No ofc she is not, but she is ok enough & ok enough to work.
Jim Beckett! & This will be the scene from the deleted scenes in the previous episode. You're so right Mr Beckett. Her life is def worth more than her mom's death. I love Jim sm. Here is his quote btw: What happens when she finds him? Iā€™ve already lost my wife over this. Iā€™ve already lost ā€“ (he stops) No, look. It took me years, but Iā€™ve made my peace with that. But Katie? She wonā€™t listen to me. And she wonā€™t back down. Not unless someone can convince her that her life is worth more than her motherā€™s death.
& wow both her parents are lawyers, she was even considering becoming a lawyer. No wonder she's so pretty & educated.
Didn't sleep at all or slept a little bit? No, not Ryker!
He gon be dead. Yep he dead.
That's why the wound is so bad, GSWs are so much worse in the exit wound Death fist 4 poster (btw I like how ryan takes off his tie & stuff when he wears his vest, unbuttons a bit)
See? If u treat someone with respect then they respect u too. Aw that's actually kinda sweet. Crushing on Beckett.
Ok our theory is currently that the third cop is the employer, the one holding lockwood's leash Ok that's valid you've been angry over johanna's death for twelve years but also ryan was frickin tortured by this guy I think he wants him around as much as u do, esp since he's also mad on your behalf (tho ig she could also be mad on his behalf then...)
I like ryan's elbow patches. (Suit tie & jeans) What was that little look from ryan? Keep in mind I've seen this before, when I say this: {RM is encouraging them to find the third cop, claiming that the 3c must have the money to hire dick coonan to clean up the mess} Yeah they've been here all day & between the four of them a six pack isn't too much. It's late. They deserve it. JE walking in with a case of beer behind his back: Sir. Uh, I know we're still officially on duty, but RM: Authorized KR: SlƔinte (health in Gaeilge; pronounced slAn-chuh)* RC: Nice work. Ooh, those are cold. These are really cold. KR : Yeah, we keep them in evidence, refrigerated storage. (they just keep booze in refrigerated evidence storage??) RC: Isn't that where you keep the-- JE: Don't worry about it. RC: (*Irish Gaelic is pronounced (in English) 'gay-lik'. The (Scottish) Gaelic name for (Scottish) Gaelic is GƠidhlig, pronounced 'gaa-lik', not to be confused with the Irish (Gaelic) name for Irish (Gaelic), which is written Gaeilge and pronounced 'gail-gyuh'.) (clipping)
Beer: *casually reveals smth* Calls him a dirtbag SOB, {like my dude, y r u sending em out to find that info?} ((We get to see the meeting in a future season!)) Love. Everyone knows they love each other.
That rubber tree plant The kiss was for a disguise & frozen in each other's arms was for wamrth & bc friends can do that too! She's right tho, it IS her life. (just like the s8 premier) It is the end of s3 so it has been 3 years now? (maybe 2.5 bc the first season was short?) You deserve to be happy, but in that tone? Ooh How over? He is not going to abandon you.
Man's angry! Martha <3 <3 I can see how he might feel it is his fault even tho he's not the one trying to kill everyone. He drug it back up. (could clip but I won't)
I love when she calls him by his first name, it is so intense & personal, he is her second dad. He supports her so much so well. He really is good for her, helping her laugh, bringing in outside ideas... Hug her. acab lol But seriously hug her. You are her dad.
Old guys, probably retired they say. Miami! Wow ryan's cheekbones in this lighting... KR says he DOESN'T believe a "badge" is behind this. (Metonymy) {keep this detail in mind} (But then ryan is the first to crack abt you know who)
Oh no he's the third cop isn't he? {yeah he is} lol order off the menu (so roy made a deal with The Big Bad Guy to protect beckett) He would SO be found out B'y god's got nothing to do with this
What about the son? The way u hold someone intimately lets you put a thumb over their lips & kiss them That's an old timey gun. I like it. Another old timey gun.
Wow it's already been all day! Nothing eventful happened all day... At least miami dade got back to them this evening. Going out w/o telling her? I mean ok.
Big sad.
Bro's still wearing an nypd sweatshirt? Tight is a good word. Some rookie? Young enough to not be retired yet Could he have maybe misremembered the name if there were 40 others he needed to know the names of too & it's been 10 years? Montague maybe? He looks so baby *gulp* Rips up the photo, tbh that's rude
[JE is walking out into the alley] KR Hey! You know it's him. (He looks like he's about to cry.) Montgomery's our third cop. He's the one who altered those records. JE How can you even say that? How can you even think that?! Montgomery brought us on to Homicide! What do we got? A picture!?! KR (whispered/strained) Think about it. (Nromal but strained) Why else did he want us to take Lockwood out? Because Lockwood leads us to him! (Hun he told u to go after the third cop.) He's been lying to us. (Espt also looks like he might cry.) He's been lying to us the whole time. [JE shakes his head, mouthing what I think is "I'm out" & turns around to start walking away.] KR Hey! [Ryan grabs Espt's shoulder] JE Get off me! [Espt punches Ryan & turns around again. They fight. KR grabs him from the back & pushes him into the wall/truck/whatever that thing is. Espt pushes around & gets Ryan pinned to the truck with his hands on his shirt. & not in a sexy way. JE is yelling, holding KR's face & has his fist next to his head.] KR Go ahead! Go ahead! [JE throws Ryan's head to the side as he lets him go. They both lean against the wall, breathing heavily. They both look emotionally ruined.] KR Beckett.
AAAAAAGHHDSKJFSDHJ THIS IS MAKING ME INSANE & then they just don't talk about it.
Please don't let him be the one to kill her Girl set ur phone to vibrate, u'r a cop, this stuff can be dangerous. Why cock the gun? You can't put your family thru going to jail but this happens? (So babe you uh, don't they have ballistics for all nypd guns? when they pull the slug?)
A second chance <3 Who is the "he" They might have come even if Beckett didn't show up, as long as he said he got her there. Then again, they were probs watching. He is her dad so much Good on him to bring in Castle (of all people, he brought castle, even after kicking castle out) Oof this is where I stand They probs saw three figures there & probs even know he means to kill them. Castle is great he just picked her up like that! She was flailing & kicking & he just did what the captain said! Beauty!
(so lockwood has a bunch of people here too? Lockwood is not The Only One y'all) So there are four ppl there. Didn't they kill the two guys with Lockwood during the previous relevant episode? KB & RC came in to save JE & KR & they ended up shooting two of lockwood's people? Now lockwood has four more. Shoot from the hip... RM: You got that ass-backwards, boy, you can't hide from me.
love how they brought back the ass backwards line How did he shoot all of them so fast? Also with a gun like that wouldn't he have to cock it every time? Or maybe not, it was old fashioned, not old. It probably has the mechanism set so that the back thingy & the trigger are attached to pull back too. lockwood got shot, he's back up & running now? Love the music btw. Noooo not behindy! I saw to that. You're done, Lockwood, we both are. & that's why he had a sixshot & a second gun! ...Which was just up his sleeve like that & definitely dangerous
How did u know that was the last shot? What if lockwood was still alive (again) & now he's coming to kill you? At least she is wearing short heels Check his pulse maybe?
Lol acab. I'd just as well watch the Helena music video.
Is this beckett's apatment? I can't tell. Family. Doesn't include his legal family tho apparently. & you have accepted castle back? You know it's weird, Espt & Ryan are like Becket's little brothers (& big brothers) sometimes, they give Castle the cold shoulder in defense of Beckett; other times they are brothers with Castle, they have said "mom & dad [are] fighting" as if caskett is a relationship & those two are the kids, sometimes the captain is the dad. It's just so good to me. So good. Found family is lowkey cliche but I love it still. (But this means u can't tell alexis, martha, lanie, jim, or anyone, bc they are extended "family" not immediate "family" right?)
Who's the guy behind Espt there? Also why didn't Esposito shave?? I feel like Castle should be wearing a hat, just to fit in. Not a hat like theirs, but some sort of trilby maybe. Tbh I really like seeing the pigs in their blankets. Not only because I like fancy stuff (I say wearing the same dirty jeanjacket with holes in it like some crustpunk) but also bc I like seeing them in hats, speaking as a hat wearer myself. & who's the guy behind Ryan?
Crying quietly, šŸ‘Œ love it You don't necessarily owe it to him, you owe it to his family, you owe it to them to get the pension & access to the widows+orphans fund & w/e.
I like how they let Castle carry the casket even tho he is not a cop. Ok my man definitely needs a hat, he really looks out of place. Aw the poor family. yk acab even tho he be dead. I mean best wishes to him & the families+friends. Like tbh big acab moments. A huge funeral for him? Ok how many ppl there actually knew him personally? How much of this is just because he was a fellow enforcer of the law? How much of it is REAL & how much of it enforces an institution where brotherhood takes priority? Btw did they teach castle how to do the proper stepping for the fancy parts of walking around & turning the way they do? I thought Royce did that. KB: You might find someone to stand with you *looks over to Rick* How did rick actually see that tho? I'm glad he didn't jump in front of a bullet, it hit her first. ALSO LANIE BEING HELP BACK BY ESPOSITO Girl that's not how you save someone. U might want to put pressure on the wound or wear gloves if u have any (like airplanes) & do NOT put your hands on the grass like that
Ok cool. Now I'm actually going to watch season one bc I never had the chance to liveblog that.
Ok now I've also gathered all my clips from s3 yay
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writingonsaturn Ā· 3 years ago
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Better Unsaid
a/n okay this has been all over the place!! it was originally going to be a blurb and darker and closer to smutty (so keep your eyes out for that??? lol), but then I made it softer and the concept got away from me and it got soooo much longer than expected lmao and i still dont love where it ended so maybe part 2?? i have the idea i just dont know lolĀ 
summary: Reader is a princess and Anakin has been her guard during the most public season for the past two years (not the most logical thing but just go with it lol, it gets explained better in the fic) and after a near death experience the two are conveniently forced into a....
ONE BED TROPE ONE BED TROPE *cough cough* ONE BED TROPE WITH ONE PERSON HAVING TO WAKE UP THE OTHER BC THEYRE HAVING A NIGHTMARE,, :)))))))
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His smugness is the only thing about him I can consider ā€˜uglyā€™. And because I am so desperate to not have feeling for Anakin, the Jedi who has been assigned to protect me through coronation season (which lasts for most of winter), for the last two coronation seasons, I hold onto my distaste for that side of him. Which is why I suppress my laugh as he waits for my reaction with that confident smile.Ā 
ā€œCome on, that was funny.ā€Ā 
Rolling my eyes, I let myself sit on my bed. I canā€™t tell if heā€™s actually funny or if my evening has been so boring that his sense of humor has started to become appealing to me due to comparison. In short, the suitor I was forced to spend an entire evening with lacked personality so much Iā€™m starting to find Anakin funny.
ā€œYouā€™re much more entertaining than this eveningā€™s suitor.ā€Ā 
Anakinā€™s expression shifts slightly, his assured grin dropping slightly.Ā ā€œAnother miss?ā€Ā 
ā€œYou have no idea.ā€ I relax slightly, taking a moment to be glad that I completed my fatherā€™s request and now I can just enjoy the time I have with Anakin.Ā ā€œI know my fatherā€™s desperate to make sure my marriage is useful for our people and that he worries about this selection process because he always thought my mother would be here to help, but sometimes I wish he wouldnā€™t rush it so much. It feels like all he wants me for is to marry me off in exchange of finance or weaponry or something diplomatic.ā€Ā 
ā€œYouā€™re more than that.ā€ His response is so soft I think I might have missed it if I needed it less. I curse myself for feeling so validated by him. His words shouldnā€™t mean anything to me. After all, he could easily just be saying that because agreeing with my father will just make me more unpleasant to be around.Ā 
I smile politely while avoiding his eyes. I keep my hands on either side of me, fighting the urge to fidget.Ā ā€œThank you, Anakin.ā€ My words sound weak in my own ears, so Iā€™m sure he notices my shift in mood.Ā ā€œIā€™m tired today, I think Iā€™m going to go to bed early.ā€ Normally, Iā€™d be able to shrug off these kinds of things, but the beginning of Coronation Season makes me irritable. The anniversary of my motherā€™s death hits me harder each year.Ā 
ā€œY/n.ā€ My name comes out so velvety I canā€™t find it in myself to interrupt him.Ā ā€œYou are more than someone meant to be used as some kind of royal currency, and I mean that as more than just a...friend.ā€Ā 
I let his last word linger. Weā€™ve tried so many titles that never seem to fit right. Heā€™s the chosen one, one of the most powerful Jedi to exist, and the Jedi assigned to protect me each Coronation Season because thatā€™s when my mother was assassinated. Heā€™s my guard, but weā€™ve spent too many nights laughing together and talking about everything and anything. And I guess now heā€™s my friend, even though sometimes when he looks at me in a certain way or sits too close to me or reaches for my hand to guide me somewhere I canā€™t breathe right.Ā 
ā€œAnakin, you know I love when youā€™re here, even though sometimes you drive me insane. And I appreciate your kindness, but your words canā€™t change the truth. Thatā€™s how my father sees me and heā€™s not exactly wrong. Iā€™m not a son, I havenā€™t been raised to lead an army or lead much, and--ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™ve seen you in meeting after meeting, convention after convention. Iā€™ve witnessed the way you handle real problems and I know how you care about your people. Youā€™d make a great leader, you donā€™t need a husband to be valuable.ā€Ā 
My chest swells, feelings I never let myself think about mixing with thoughts of Anakin that Iā€™ve spent so long trying to avoid.Ā ā€œThat settles it, youā€™re my favorite person.ā€Ā 
He grins, the look warm enough to melt the odd lump in my throat. I fight down a smile as he steps forward. ā€œAnd I wasnā€™t before?ā€Ā 
ā€œI take it back--your headā€™s big enough without the additional praise.ā€Ā 
Rolling my eyes, I lean back slightly in order to recreate the distance he so easily destroyed.Ā ā€œAnd I thought you had finally warmed up to me, princess.ā€Ā 
The use of my title makes me skeptical. The last time Anakin used it was when he was trying to ease me so that Iā€™d walk around the palace garden so he had an excuse to do the same. It was beyond late and I was half asleep, but he had os much energy he was desperate and just needed to do one more thing. I felt bad that his schedule revolved so heavily around mine (and when he softens his eyes and says please, Iā€™m left incapable of saying the wordĀ ā€˜noā€™) so I agreed.Ā 
ā€œWhat do you want?ā€Ā 
Anakin dramatically clutches a hand over his heart. He throws his head back slightly as if heā€™s just taken a fatal blow.Ā ā€œWhen did you turn so cynical? Iā€™ve been back for three days and Iā€™m starting to believe youā€™re a different person now.ā€Ā 
Yeah...heā€™s definitely getting ready to ask for something thatā€™s more trouble than itā€™s worth. Then again, everything with him seems to be worth it in some capacity. Even if itā€™s just that one smile he gets when heā€™s truly content and doesnā€™t think anyoneā€™s looking.Ā 
ā€œMhm,ā€ I mumble, still fighting a grin,Ā ā€œso youā€™re not going to ask me anything?ā€Ā 
His lips part slightly as he exhales. I watch the way his eyes narrow at my victorious expression.Ā ā€œI donā€™t have anything to ask of you, but I do have a small request. A request so small you wonā€™t have to do anything but say yes.ā€
Suspicious. Too easy.Ā ā€œYouā€™re unbelievable.ā€Ā 
ā€œYou just said I was your favorite person. Remember that.ā€Ā 
Iā€™m too tired for his coyness. Iā€™d rather him make his ridiculous request now so that I can be in bed within the hour. Though I canā€™t pretend I donā€™t normally feel better after letting him drag me along on whateverĀ ā€˜adventureā€™ he just needed to complete while also not letting me out of his sight. I used to tell him that I wouldnā€™t tell anyone if I wasnā€™t under supervision for an hour or two a day, but he dismissed the idea immediately. Thatā€™s been the cornerstone of everything.Ā 
ā€œWhat is it?ā€Ā 
He sighs once, tilting his head slightly. The way his eyes soften tells me heā€™s already won at least half the battle.Ā ā€œThey still havenā€™t caught the attempted--ā€ Anakin pauses, something behind his eyes darkening. I know what heā€™s remembering. Last night, an assassin had gotten closer than they ever had. I had almost been shot in the garden, Anakin had barely pushed me to the ground in time. A fact heā€™s been beating himself up for since, especially considering that no one has been able to find my attempted killer yet.Ā ā€œThey were so close to you. They were within palace limits and they disappeared like they never existed. Whoā€™s to say they donā€™t work here and are waiting for the next moment youā€™re exposed? Whoā€™s to say they arenā€™t here tonight, waiting for me to retire for the night?ā€Ā 
I didnā€™t realize how my near death experience had been so personal to him. He, like everyone else, was beyond frantic after it happened. But my father put an end to verbal worry before it could truly begin. He said the best thing we could do was act like everything was fine as the assailant was searched for. Anakin hadnā€™t been particularly cheery after my father instructed the guards to focus their search on known enemies instead of prioritizing venting the staff closest to me. I comforted him as best as I could, but he didnā€™t feel like speaking about it and I had to worry about the suitor meeting my father wouldnā€™t let me cancel.Ā 
ā€œAnakin, youā€™re right next door to me.ā€ I have to fight the urge to reach for him.Ā ā€œI was fine because of you, and I will be fine because of you.ā€Ā 
He sighs once, his expression not easing.Ā ā€œAnd if the person is silent? The attacker could easily work in the palace, but no one wanted to direct the search inwards.ā€ His words are more strained than Iā€™ve ever heard them be.Ā ā€œI think itā€™d be smart for me to stay in here. I know youā€™ve refused having a guard stay in your room or outside your door, but...ā€ Anakin sighs.Ā ā€œYour safety would be more assured.ā€Ā 
Him staying in my room? The only line Iā€™ve ever been allowed to draw, and Iā€™m actually considering letting that go. If he seemed even slightly less sad, I wouldnā€™t even consider it. Itā€™s not a good idea. Iā€™m already too attached to him.Ā ā€œAnakin--ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™d feel more assured.ā€Ā 
Damn him. Stupid, extremely sweet Anakin who makes saying no to him impossible. I stretch my arm forward, letting my hand squeezes his forearm gently.Ā ā€œThereā€™s no reason to not feel assured.ā€ He doesnā€™t ease, the cloudiness behind his eyes remains stubborn.Ā ā€œYouā€™re still worried.ā€ No reaction, the haze thatā€™s taken him isnā€™t letting go.Ā ā€œFine--but tell no one or my father is going to take to posting guards at my door every night.ā€Ā 
...I guess there are worse ways to spend a night. Which is kind of a problem since Iā€™m trying to...enjoy Anakin less. Ugh, I even sound dumb in my head.Ā ā€œI promise, princess.ā€Ā 
Ugh, heā€™s adorable.Ā ā€œYouā€™re intolerable.ā€ I stand from he foot of my bed and pull back the covers on my bed. He doesnā€™t reply, something dark still playing for him. I watch him move to face the door. Wait--is he doing what I think heā€™s doing?Ā ā€œNo, youā€™re not going to stand there all night. You need sleep.ā€ He has the audacity to give me an annoyed look.Ā ā€œI already didnā€™t want to do this so now you have to listen to my conditions.ā€Ā 
He raises an eyebrow, his lips pressing together oddly. Heā€™s trying to gauge something from my expression, perhaps heā€™s looking for buttons to press to get his way. I guess I look as stubborn as I feel because instead of arguing he just sits on the floor. What? I watch him cautiously, trying to figure out if this is some weird argument trick.Ā 
ā€œWhat are you doing?ā€Ā 
ā€œWhat you asked.ā€
And just like that Iā€™ve put myself in a position that I will no doubt regret terribly the second common sense returns to me. Thereā€™s no way to deny that Anakin and I are closer than we probably should be. Weā€™ve felt like friends first since the day we first met. I canā€™t think of any reason to not offer to let him sleep in my bed except those stupid budding feelings I refuse to label.Ā 
Itā€™s not like I actually like him. I canā€™t--Iā€™m going to be married to some nobleman and heā€™s prohibited from ever forming attachments. Iā€™m not even sure if weā€™re allowed to be friends. Having actual feelings for him would be so, so pointless. It would just lead to heartache and the ruining of the one genuine relationship I have. Iā€™m just a tiny bit confused right now because heā€™s objectively really attractive and heā€™s always there for me. Always there to make a joke after a particularly rough meeting. Always there to offer me a supportive smile. Always there to humble me when I teeter on acting like my father.Ā 
Anyoneā€™s heart would flutter at that, so it doesnā€™t mean anything. And if it does, I need to squash any budding feelings now before I mess things up. Which is why I should keep him at armā€™s length until I get it together. But is that fair to him? And what if doing that is making things worse? What if itā€™s just reinforcing the idea of having feelings?Ā 
This is ridiculous. Iā€™m going to get over this if it kills me. Itā€™s just a bed and itā€™s only sleeping. Iā€™m meant to be able to lead an entire union and I canā€™t sleep next to someone and act normal?ā€Ā ā€œYou donā€™t have to sleep on the floor.ā€Ā 
The second the words leave my mouth I regret it all. Whatā€™s wrong with me? Did I seriously think Iā€™d be okay?
I hear his soft exhale,Ā ā€œIā€™ll be fine. Iā€™ve slept in worse places than on your marble floor.ā€Ā 
His voice sounds so weighted I canā€™t help but feel bad for not noticing that heā€™s still bothered. Whether heā€™s upset about his near miss or the fact that my father didnā€™t take his advice, I donā€™t know. But somethingā€™s wrong. The easy thing to do would be to just let him sleep it off. The smart thing to do would be to leave him alone until tomorrow.Ā 
I think of all the times that Iā€™ve been upset and Anakin had refused to let me go to sleep angry or sad or overwhelmed.Ā ā€œI know, but itā€™s really not a big deal. Itā€™s not like we donā€™t know each other. I mean, last Coronation Season you buttoned me into more gowns than my handmaid. And I owe you for saving me from one of the worst suitors Iā€™ve ever had.ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™m starting to think we need to develop some kind of signal.ā€Ā 
The tiny bit of lightness thatā€™s returned to his voice makes all of my internal struggle feel worth it.Ā ā€œYou always seem to know.ā€Ā 
ā€œThatā€™s because when youā€™re reaching your limit, that one line appears between your eyebrows.ā€
I didnā€™t realize I had such a tell. I try to remember the way that the suitor drawled on and on about how amazing he was and how he couldnā€™t wait for the day he had a bride to bear his children and plan (tedious) social events. My hand moves to my forehead, trying to feel the crease Anakin mentioned. Can everyone tell when Iā€™m growing tired? Am I that transparent?Ā 
Anakinā€™s slight laugh steals my attention. Heā€™s facing me again, his elbow holding his head up on the foot of my bed.Ā ā€œWhat are you doing?ā€Ā 
ā€œI donā€™t--I donā€™t think i get a crease between my eyebrows when Iā€™m irritated.ā€Ā 
I hear him stand. I donā€™t realize heā€™s approaching me until heā€™s so close I could touch him without even needing. to stretch.Ā ā€œNo, when youā€™re irritated you raise your eyebrows slightly, because thatā€™s when youā€™re at your most sarcastic.ā€Ā 
ā€œReally?ā€Ā 
The corner of his mouth tugs upwards.Ā ā€œJust like that.ā€ I force myself to keep my expression blank.Ā ā€œWhen youā€™re reaching your limit, your eyebrows crease here.ā€ His finger taps the space between my brows so gently I almost donā€™t realize what heā€™s doing.Ā ā€œAnd when youā€™re trying not to laugh--which is often, because you refuse to admit that Iā€™m funny--you press your lips together in a way that forms a dimple here.ā€ The knuckle of his pointer finger brushes against the bottom of my cheek.Ā 
I bite my tongue to fight the warmth spreading across my face.Ā ā€œI didnā€™t realize i was so transparent.ā€
ā€œI canā€™t always tell what youā€™re thinking.ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™ll take it.ā€ Maybe if I was less tired, Iā€™d argue a little more.Ā ā€œYou know youā€™re not that difficult to read either.ā€Ā 
ā€œReally?ā€Ā 
ā€œYes, I can tell when youā€™re just being stubborn for the sake of it. I can see it in your eyes and youā€™re doing it right now.ā€Ā 
His expression harshens slightly before softening.Ā ā€œY/n--ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™m not wrong.ā€Ā 
He sighs once, stepping back. I watch him pace around my bed before taking a seat on the edge of my other side of the bed.Ā ā€œAre you happy now?ā€Ā 
ā€œHappy that I won? Absolutely.ā€Ā 
Anakin halfheartedly glares at me.Ā ā€œCareful, add a crown and a robe that trails down a throne and Iā€™d feel like I was speaking to your father.ā€Ā 
ā€œCareful, another side comment like that and Iā€™ll ā€˜accidentallyā€™ kick you off the bed in the middle of the night.ā€Ā 
ā€œNot if I kick you off the bed first.ā€Ā 
I trace a thoughtless pattern on the fabric of my bedsheets.Ā ā€œWhat are you? Twelve?ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™m older than you.ā€Ā 
ā€œBarely.ā€ I continue the thoughtless pattern tracing as I fight the sleep from my eyes.Ā ā€œYour comebacks are usually more creative than that.ā€Ā 
He exhales, relaxing slightly as he rests his back against a pillow.Ā ā€œIā€™m tired, like you claimed to be.ā€ His eyes flutter slightly, a bit of his exhaustion showing.Ā ā€œGo to sleep.ā€Ā 
I should. Iā€™m too old to think I can put off a tomorrow I donā€™t want by just staying up. This is stupid. Iā€™m too old to think I can put off the anniversary of my motherā€™s death by going to bed. She had been taken from us on castle grounds, killed by a revolutionist who viewed my mother as a class traitor. I still remember the way she slumped to the ground, her blood staining the snow beneath her. I remember the way the guards were so busy chasing her killer no one thought to keep me away from the body.Ā 
ā€œY/n?ā€Ā 
I scratch the back of my arm in hopes of banishing my thoughts.Ā ā€œYes?ā€Ā 
ā€œYouā€™re being quiet.ā€Ā 
ā€œYou said to go to sleep, that tends to be a quiet thing.ā€Ā 
I can feel his eyes on me.Ā ā€œSince when do you listen to me?ā€ Not trusting myself to actually reply, I only offer him a hum of acknowledgement.Ā ā€œI know youā€™re not half asleep.ā€Ā 
Folding my hands on my lap, I avoid his gaze.Ā ā€œItā€™s tomorrow.ā€Ā 
I donā€™t know why I trust him to understand my vague response, but I do. His silence stretches over us like a thin blanket on a cold night. Maybe he doesnā€™t understand what Iā€™m implying. I can always correct him tomorrow, when my eyelids are no longer as heavy as my heart. The more seconds that pass in total silence, the more I think that maybe heā€™s fallen asleep.Ā 
I wouldnā€™t be surprised, Anakin has seemed tired recently, like some additional weight he wonā€™t share with anyone has been thrust onto his shoulders. A small part of me rolls in guilt. I need to be a better friend, just because Iā€™m suddenly a little too aware of him doesnā€™t mean I can shrug him off and ignore him.Ā 
My hand almost flinches away from the feeling of something surprisingly warm touching my pinky. When I realize that itā€™s just Anakin and that the contact was probably accidental, I force myself to ease. Itā€™s not like weā€™ve never touched before, I donā€™t understand why Iā€™m making it weird. Sitting in my bed in the dark doesnā€™t change anything. His hand turns slightly, pressing into mine a little more assuredly. Biting my tongue, I turn my hand slightly, exposing my palm. And just like that, our fingers intertwine.Ā 
ā€œShe would have been proud of you.ā€ His voice comes out so low I barely register the words.Ā 
The words shouldnā€™t mean much to me--he never knew my mother and has no way to know what she wanted me to be.--and yet I find comfort in them. I smile, turning my head towards him.Ā ā€œYou didnā€™t even know her.ā€Ā 
He rolls his eyes slightly, relaxing further before squeezing my hand once.Ā ā€œWho wouldnā€™t be proud of you? Youā€™re kind and smart and decent to be around when youā€™re not telling me what to do.ā€Ā 
My heart swells in my chest so much Iā€™m surprised it doesnā€™t burst. Could he be cuter?Ā ā€œYeah...now Iā€™m sure youā€™re my favorite person.ā€Ā 
ā€œNow youā€™re sure?ā€Ā 
The smugness in his voice has me rolling my eyes.Ā ā€œDonā€™t make me regret saying that.ā€Ā 
ā€œMaybe in the morning,ā€ he says easily,Ā ā€œnow go to sleep. Thereā€™s nothing worse than escorting you from meeting to meeting while youā€™re tired.ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™m not that bad.ā€ Even in this darkness, I can make out the way he raises an eyebrow.Ā ā€œShut up--Iā€™m going to sleep, but not because of you.ā€Ā 
He lets out a slight huff.Ā ā€œYouā€™re impossible.ā€Ā 
The desire to respond to his comment is not enough for me to win the fight against the weight of my eyelids. The moment my eyes shut, I feel powerless to anything that isnā€™t sleep. I let myself fall into a weightless sleep, my only tether being the Anakinā€™s fingers around mine.Ā 
--
A distant noise yanks me from my sleep. Iā€™m too drowsy to do anything but register the sound. I hear another similar...whine? cry? I canā€™t tell and Iā€™m too asleep to figure it out. I almost fall asleep again, but a third distressed sound keeps me from it. I wipe my eyes lazily with the back of my hand as I try to sit up.Ā 
Squinting, I make out a figure on my bed. It takes me a moment to remember Anakin and how I fell asleep. Our hands are still together and no light is peering through my window so it canā€™t be that long since I fell asleep. Another disgruntled sound carries itself throughout the room. I shift slightly, leaning over Anakin cautiously.Ā 
Golden brown curls are beginning to stick to his forehead and his eyebrows are drawn together sharply. Heā€™s having a nightmare.Ā  I shift even further forward before cautiously placing a hand on his shoulder before squeezing him gently.Ā 
ā€œAnakin,ā€ I whisper,Ā ā€œitā€™s not--itā€™s not real.ā€ His eyebrows draw together even more harshly. I shake him a little more stubbornly.Ā ā€œAnakin, wake up--youā€™re having a ni--ā€
Ā My forearm is grabbed so suddenly I barely register it before I feel my back shoved into my mattress. I blink twice. His dark eyes are frantic and the look on his face is far from the gentle, easygoing expression Iā€™m used to. Heā€™s breathing deeply, his chest rising and falling from above me. I swallow a slight panic and something I donā€™t understand as I try to keep my eyes on his face and my thoughts away from how close he is. Anakin pries his fingers from my forearm one by one until only his palm is touching me.Ā 
ā€œY/n, I--ā€Ā 
ā€œItā€™s okay.ā€ Honestly, Iā€™m more worried about his uneven breathing than the way he grabbed me. I canā€™t imagine everything heā€™s been through or how justified his nightmares are. Anakin moves his hand away from me. I donā€™t sit up until heā€™s off of me and sitting with his back against my headboard.Ā ā€œItā€™s okay--I just--you were having a nightmare and I thought I should wake you.ā€ He doesnā€™t react. I turn my body further, keeping my back straight. Anakin doesnā€™t move, and the longer he stays still, the more I feel like I should say something else.Ā ā€œDo you want talk about it? Or do--do you want to talk about something else? Or go to sleep? Or get some water? Or--ā€ The far off look behind his eyes silences me. I scoot forward slightly.Ā ā€œYouā€™re okay, Anakin, I promise.ā€Ā 
His head turns at that, his eyes searching mine for something I donā€™t understand.Ā ā€œI thought...ā€ He cuts himself off by swallowing once.Ā 
I shift a little more, trying to find anything normal in his expression.Ā ā€œThought what?ā€Ā 
Anakinā€™s hand is on my arm so quickly I donā€™t even register his movement. I let his fingers press into my skin. Heā€™s holding onto me like Iā€™m a figment of a dream and heā€™s beginning to wake up.Ā ā€œI thought Iā€™d failed.ā€ He exhales, the sound heavy.Ā ā€œFailed you and that youā€™d--IĀ  thought I had lost you.ā€Ā 
A lump rises in my throat, thick and unmoving. Cautiously, I place my hand over the one still gripping my shoulder like a lifeline.Ā ā€œYou didnā€™t. Nothing happened, it was just a dream.ā€Ā 
His gaze falls to the ground before he repeats the last of my words.Ā ā€œJust a dream.ā€ Thereā€™s a hollowness to his voice I donā€™t understand.Ā 
I exhale, carefully running my thumb over his knuckles.Ā ā€œYes.ā€Ā He doesnā€™t say anything but his expression hardens again. I let us sit there like that for a long minute.Ā ā€œI promise.ā€Ā 
ā€œYou canā€™t promise things like that.ā€
I sigh, unsure of where to go from here.Ā ā€œBad dreams are only bad dreams.ā€ He doesnā€™t reply.Ā ā€œI think you should try to get some more sleep.ā€Ā 
Anakin is unresponsive. I shift back, but before I can transition from almost being on top of him to just sitting next to him, he pulls on my arm to keep in place.Ā ā€œI donā€™t know what Iā€™d do if something happened to you.ā€Ā 
ā€œNothingā€™s going to happen to me.ā€Ā 
ā€œYou almost died today, y/n. I was right there and if I had been a second later--ā€Ā 
ā€œBut you werenā€™t.ā€ He doesnā€™t ease.Ā ā€œYou were there and I was fine. Donā€™t torment yourself over what could have been. Youā€™ll drive yourself crazy.ā€Ā 
ā€œIf anything ever happened to y--ā€Ā 
ā€œItā€™s not going to,ā€ I whisper, ignoring the way his hold on my arm tightens even further,Ā ā€œEspecially this time a year when I have a pretty good gau--ā€Ā 
He tilts his head slightly, eyebrows drawing together and a ghost of a smile on his lips.Ā ā€œPretty good? Really?ā€Ā 
ā€œSomeone needs to watch your ego, chosen one.ā€Ā This time when he tries for a smile, the look has some strength behind it. Relief pools in my stomach.Ā ā€œNow get some sleep, tomorrowā€™s a busy day and when youā€™re sleepy youā€™re beyond irritable.ā€Ā Ā 
Anakin lets me pull away enough to lay down, but he doesnā€™t follow. Not for a long second. When he does, his movements are impossibly rigid. I watch him out of the corner of my eye as carefully as I can manage.Ā 
ā€œY/n?ā€Ā 
I regret turning my head immediately. I didnā€™t realize how close he was. It would take no effort from me to make our lips meet. Wait--why am I thinking of that? Iā€™m not allowed to think of stuff like that...especially not about him.Ā 
ā€œYes?ā€
He lets out a breath before moving his hand. I donā€™t understand his hesitation until I feel his hand cupping my cheek gently.Ā ā€œWhat if next time Iā€™m not enough? What if next time I lose you because Iā€™m not strong enough?ā€Ā 
I never thought my death would be such a personal thing to him. Sure, I knew that we had some kind of bond, some kind of friendship, and that my death would bring sadness. But I never imagined Iā€™d matter enough to him that thoughts of my death would be frightening enough to slip into his subconscious and become a thing of nightmares.Ā 
ā€œYou are enough. Nothing is going to happen to me and if it does itā€™s not going to be because of you.ā€Ā Anakinā€™s lips press together in a way that implies serious uncertainty. His thumb brushes across my cheek so unexpectedly I almost ask him what heā€™s doing. The intensity behind his eyes is enough to burn me.Ā ā€œWas your dream really that bad?ā€Ā 
He lets out an uncertain breath as his eyebrows draw together. I donā€™t miss the way his jaw clenches.Ā ā€œItā€™s more than the dream. I...y/n, princess,ā€ he tacts on, a hint of humor returning to him,Ā ā€œyouā€™re more than a mission to me.ā€Ā 
The admission is so soft I canā€™t help but smile.Ā ā€œI know, Anakin, weā€™re--ā€Ā 
ā€œYouā€™re more than a friend to me.ā€ I donā€™t know if my blood freezes in my veins or if my lungs donā€™t contract when they should or if my heart literally skips a beat, but I know something in me completely stops at his words.Ā ā€œI--ā€Ā 
ā€œDonā€™t say it.ā€ I donā€™t know how I managed to cut him off so sharply and Iā€™m a little disappointed when I do, but itā€™s the right thing to do. Thought of the code thatā€™s so important to him have clouded half the immense shock and joy swelling in my chest.Ā ā€œWhat youā€™re trying to say...I um, I want to say the same.ā€ I try to drop my gaze but he tilts my head up slightly with his hand.Ā ā€œBut we shouldnā€™t, you know that.ā€Ā 
"You want to us to pretend that nothingā€™s different? You want me to escort you from meetings with one suitor to the next every Coronation Season until youā€™re married off?ā€Ā 
ā€œNo, Iā€™m not saying that. The point is that Iā€™m not saying anything.ā€ His eyebrows draw together in uncertainty.Ā ā€œIsnā€™t it enough for now, for both of us to just know? If we say it...that could mean bad things for you. And I donā€™t want to be a bad thing for you.ā€Ā 
ā€œYou could never be.ā€
Itā€™d be so easy to believe him. To believe him and to let him say what I never imagined Iā€™d be able to hear and damn the consequences of tomorrow.Ā ā€œCan we just refrain from verbally saying anything until youā€™re sure?ā€Ā 
ā€œIā€™m sure right now. Iā€™ve been sure since the first time we ever walked in the garden together. The night after the first Coronation Ball I escorted you to.ā€Ā 
I remember that night well. The way he hadnā€™t scolded me for needing air or taking off my uncomfortably high heels to walk in the grass.Ā ā€œIf you mean it, you wonā€™t say it yet. I refuse to get in the way of what youā€™re meant for.ā€
His thumb runs my cheek entirely, stopping at the corner of my mouth.Ā ā€œAre you capable of not disagreeing with me?ā€Ā 
Rolling my eyes slightly, I place my hand over his.Ā ā€œProbably not.ā€Ā 
Anakin exhales, his playful irritation clear in the sound.Ā ā€œYouā€™re impossible when youā€™re tired.ā€Ā 
ā€œI am not tired.ā€Ā 
ā€œI can see the sleep in your eyes.ā€Ā 
ā€œI can see it in yours too.ā€Ā 
He pauses, eyebrows drawn together cautiously.Ā ā€œIā€™ll go to sleep if you do.ā€
He must be more tired than I thought if heā€™s compromising with me so quickly.Ā ā€œDeal.ā€Ā 
Neither of us close our eyes for a long second, we just watch each other with wide eyes. It still doesnā€™t feel like heā€™s eased, but heā€™s come back to me so much more than he was earlier. Iā€™ll make sure to check how heā€™s feeling in the morning. The first morning after weā€™ve...I donā€™t know.Ā 
Iā€™m trying really hard not to get excited because anything thatā€™s been not said could be taken back so easily. Thatā€™s the point--but itā€™s hard not to let my heart get ahead of my rationality. Iā€™ll just take the good for what it is for now and tomorrow we can figure out the rest. Even though heā€™s not allowed to form attachments and my father really wants to marry me off to foreign royalty.
Tomorrow. This can begin to be solved tomorrow. My eyes shut and I let myself roll fully onto my back. The second Iā€™m comfortably settled, I feel Anakin shift against the bed. Iā€™m too tired to open my eyes until I feel a weight placed against my chest.Ā 
I open my eyes on instinct, less surprised than I should be when I see Anakinā€™s head resting against my chest. Before I can speak, I feel his arm rest against my side.Ā ā€œAnakin,ā€ I breathe, my hand moving to smooth his hair out of his face the way Iā€™ve wanted to for so long.Ā ā€œWhat did we just talk about?ā€Ā 
ā€œYou said not to say anything,ā€ he mumbles comfortably,Ā ā€œIā€™m not saying anything.ā€Ā ...It is kind of the ideal compromise. Especially since Iā€™m too tired to find reason and he feels so warm.Ā ā€œI can feel you overthinking. Go back to smoothing my hair before I have to rise and stand at your door so that your handmaid comes to wake you. Something tells me sheā€™d be glad for the excuse to get rid of me.ā€Ā 
That might be the most dramatic thing Iā€™ve ever heard him say. Selma is the most patient woman in the palace.Ā ā€œSelma would never report anything involving me, I canā€™t believe you donā€™t like her. Sheā€™s the sweetest woman Iā€™ve ever met.ā€Ā Ā 
ā€œSheā€™s the one that doesnā€™t like me,ā€ he says,Ā ā€œshe always watches me like sheā€™s trying to figure out if Iā€™m planning on stealing you away.ā€Ā 
Too tired to fight my smile, I go back to smoothing his hair out with my fingers. After a moment, he lets out an exhale that relaxes his entire body.Ā ā€œGoodnight, princess.ā€Ā 
ā€œGoodnight.ā€ The word is barely a mumble as I feel sleep tug against me for the second time tonight.Ā 
Itā€™s strange, but my excitement doesnā€™t diminish my tiredness, it just makes the prospect of rest feel so much fuller. Safer. Because thereā€™s so much to sort out and grieve but itā€™s okay, because we have the time and everything feels okay because Anakin is here, right beneath my fingertips.Ā 
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playing vices
ā€œA/n a blurb bc ive been working on my novel and ive missed writing for Kirigan :))
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I am a fool that has played into her vices enough to make them addictions. That must have been Kirigan's plan. He knows that I don't agree with his methods. He is also much too aware of the fact that I am beyond attached to him. He plays into that fact often, lulling me to him whenever he feels that my conscious is in danger of driving a wedge between us.
Which is why I have become accustomed to falling asleep while running my fingers along his skin as he whispers things much sweeter than anything he would say while fully awake.
But now it's late and he's not here. I sit up, kicking the comforter off of me slightly. It seems Aleksander has been more and more absent these days. When he's not with me, the odds that he's doing something that hurts people are high. His absence is also starting to make me feel like he's losing interest in me. It would make sense considering the fact that he looked twice at me in any capacity has never seemed logical.
Maybe that's why we've never indicated commitment to each other. I don't know what commitment would be with him. He seems to grand to be considered a 'boyfriend', but there's something more than friendly about how he holds onto me. I've never cared for labels until I started feeling displaced.
"You're still awake."
I press my lips together, trying to seem a little calmer. "Couldn't sleep."
"Troubling thoughts?" The question is more weighted than it should be. Everything with him is.Ā 
ā€œHas anyone ever called you dramatic?ā€Ā 
His lips quirk upwards, hinting at a smile. Warmth pools in my stomach, the way it always does when he lets me see the slight glimmer of light thatā€™s still in him. Sometimes I think he only shows me this softness when he feels that I may pull away. It may be rooted in manipulative intent, but I know that itā€™s real.Ā 
ā€œOnly you would have the gall,ā€ he says, voice low yet not dark.Ā 
Kiriganā€™s easiness coaxes a smile from my lips. A small one, but I can feel the way the crack in my tension feeds his confidence. He takes pride in slipping past the walls I only try to create when cautious or irritated. Today Iā€™m both but I need to pretend like Iā€™m neither. The more resistance he senses, the more forward and effective his advances become.Ā 
I keep my expression neutral. Iā€™m sure Alina could get away with calling him that. I wish she was more unlikable. It would be easier to hide my irritation if I could blame that displaced feeling in my chest on two people. But of course Alina is wonderful, beautiful, and his equal.
Whatever. Itā€™s not like weā€™re really anything. Every time I see him I wait for his betrayal. Thereā€™s nothing worth using me for, and somehow that makes me feel worse. He should have never looked at me twice let alone encourage whatever strange relationship weā€™ve created.Ā 
My silence seems to displease him because he approaches my bedside easily in quick yet patient strides. Now that heā€™s close enough to touch I feel some of the ice I managed to solidify melt.Ā 
Kirigan lifts a hand and places it on my knee easily. I stiffen instinctually, he runs his thumb over my skin to fight my resistance.Ā ā€œWhoā€™s upset you?ā€Ā 
I breathe, forcing myself to ease.Ā ā€œNo one has.ā€ I donā€™t have to meet his gaze to know he doesnā€™t believe me. Thatā€™s the core source of our attachment, we can read each other with less than a look.Ā ā€œIā€™m just getting a headache,ā€ not a full lie,Ā ā€œIā€™ll feel better after some sleep.ā€ He squeezes my knee slightly, a soft way of asking me for more.Ā ā€œI donā€™t think Iā€™ll be good company tonight.ā€Ā 
His hand leaves my knee, fingertips barely grazing my thigh as he moves his hand to hold beneath my chin. I still as he turns my head so that I have no choice but to meet his gaze.Ā ā€œYou donā€™t need to be good company when what I want is your presence.ā€Ā 
I press my lips together to avoid melting into the promising pools of warmth that make up his irises. He spent all day with Alina, took Zoyaā€™s side in an argument I had with her earlier this week, and now he comes to me late at night. He seems to only want to acknowledge me when weā€™re alone, and itā€™s not like I want more than that. I just donā€™t know how long my heart will be able to teeter the line between nothing and something. Iā€™m a fool for having let it go on this long.Ā 
The only problem is that his steady stare is chasing away all of my rationality. ā€œIā€™m sure youā€™ll be able to find someone more in the mood to offer their presence.ā€Ā 
My curtness leaves something behind his expression dull, the hint of a smile that was growing on him has now vanished. I am met with a stoic disposition I have never had directed at me.Ā 
ā€œTheyā€™re not you,ā€ he counters, voice edged by something I donā€™t understand.Ā 
Thatā€™s the point. Theyā€™re not me--Iā€™m average. I canā€™t offer power and my relationship experience is basic at best. I donā€™t want to have this argument, not when Iā€™m basically fighting for him to let me go when thatā€™s not what I want.Ā 
Iā€™m making it easier. If it hurts this much when I was only on the cusp of something, imagine the pain Iā€™l feel if I let it continue. I turn my head away so that heā€™s no longer holding my chin. ā€œNot a bad thing.ā€Ā 
ā€œTo me it is.ā€ He doesnā€™t hesitate, my chest swells. His thumb brushes against my cheek, soft and comforting.Ā ā€œIā€™m tired,ā€ he says this like itā€™s a confession. His admission hangs in the air for a long moment, as heavy and weighted as my heart.Ā ā€œIf youā€™re angry, wait until morning.ā€Ā 
Something in my heart cracks. ā€œIā€™m not angry.ā€ My gaze drops, my thoughts struggling to come together.Ā ā€œIā€™ll be nicer to deal with in the morning.ā€Ā 
ā€œY/n,ā€ his tone twists from distant to warning,Ā ā€œthe last time you asked me to leave was when you discovered something you didnā€™t like.ā€Ā 
I almost wince at the way heā€™s worded it. When I found out what his real plans were, I told myself I had to leave. He skirted past all of my reservations and walls, twisting my doubt away through coddling whispers and shy brushes of fingers.
ā€œThis isnā€™t like that.ā€ Not a lie.Ā 
He exhales slowly, the sound dangerously sharp.Ā ā€œThen what is it?ā€Ā 
ā€œWhy did you come here so late?ā€ The question leaves me too sharply. Iā€™m exposing too much but I canā€™t help it.Ā ā€œIf you donā€™t want to answer, thatā€™s fine.ā€ My voice is flat.Ā ā€œIā€™m sure Alina will be happy to fill me in.ā€ I canā€™t bring myself to take in his reaction.Ā ā€œAnd if she canā€™t, Iā€™m sure Zoya will be able to.ā€Ā 
Heā€™s silent for a long second.Ā ā€œUnwarranted jealousy doesnā€™t suit you.ā€Ā 
His confidence sparks something angry within me.Ā Ā ā€œI am not jealous.ā€ The most blatant lie of the night, but I donā€™t care. I turn my head to glare at him,Ā ā€œand donā€™t just tact onĀ ā€˜unwarrantedā€™ before something thatā€™s true just because itā€™s easier for it not to be.ā€Ā 
I watch his expression cautiously until the slightest tilt of his lips adds to my anger. Heā€™s enjoying this or he did this intentionally or both.Ā ā€œDarling,ā€ he hums, voice soft,Ā ā€œyou are the only person that makes me feel peace.ā€Ā 
My stomach flutters, the sensation threatening to break my weak resolve.Ā ā€œI am not particularly powerful,ā€ I breathe, voice stiff,Ā ā€œor particularly...ā€ How do I explain this all to him?Ā ā€œAnything.ā€ Heā€™s everything, and I am nothing but average.Ā ā€œIā€™m average at best, thereā€™s no reason for you to want anything to do with me, and thatā€™s fine--but donā€™t lie and pretend that thatā€™s not true.ā€Ā 
The sentence is barely out fo my mouth before I feel myself pulled towards him by the collar of my nightgown. His lips are on mine before I can question where this is going. I kiss him back too quickly, but any effort I expend is returned fervently.
He pushes me back slightly as quickly as he yanked me forward. He doesnā€™t explain. I donā€™t ask him to. I should demand an answer and shove him away from me or pull him back towards me. But I do nothing. I just stare at him as he stares at me.Ā 
When the weight of the silence threatens to break something in me, I force myself to speak,Ā ā€œKirigan--ā€
ā€œAleksander.ā€ The name is soft and so fragile I worry it will shatter in the air before it can fully reach me.Ā ā€œYou know thereā€™s much Iā€™m not ready to say, but that,ā€ he exhales, the sound so sad I want to reach for him, ā€œthat is the one name I have not given to myself and I want you to have it.ā€ Something conflicted crosses his features.Ā ā€œI would never give that to someone average.ā€Ā 
Emotion swells in my chest, heavy yet not painful.Ā ā€œAleksander.ā€ Iā€™m not sure if Iā€™m trying to call to him or if Iā€™m just trying to feel his name--his true name--on my lips.Ā 
His eyes widen, something unbearable behind them. He moves the hand holding the collar of my nightgown to my cheek. I lean into the contact like a fool as his eyes flutter shut. ā€œSay it again.ā€Ā 
I donā€™t hesitate,Ā ā€œAleksander.ā€ I lift my hand, fingers hesitant to find their place on his cheek.Ā ā€œAleksander.ā€
He sighs into both the contact and the name.Ā ā€œYouā€™re the first thing Iā€™ve allowed myself to want,ā€ his eyes open, but I cannot bring myself to meet his gaze,Ā ā€œI should make you feel like it.ā€
Something about the way he says that is sad.Ā ā€œI think that if itā€™s fair to say you were a little distant, itā€™s just as fair to say that I was a little jealous.ā€Ā 
Aleksander smiles, but it doesnā€™t quite reach his eyes.Ā ā€œIā€™m tired,ā€ he admits,Ā ā€œIā€™ll enjoy my victory in the morning.ā€Ā 
I roll my eyes, but scoot over to give him a place by my side regardless.Ā ā€œIā€™m not sure you won, I think it was more of a draw.ā€Ā 
He takes the space I offer quickly, never letting the contact between us disappear as he settles himself against my pillow. I let him pull me towards him.Ā ā€œThis feels like a victory.ā€Ā 
I try to ignore the warmth in my chest.Ā ā€œYouā€™re lucky Iā€™m tired enough to find that endearing.ā€Ā 
I relax as his fingers trace shapes Iā€™ll never know about onto my back.Ā ā€œI agree.ā€Ā 
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