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ghostlylulla-by · 2 months ago
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Normandy SR-2 Crew Informational Board - Ground Team Spec. Goto: u know when u get ur hot and cool friend a cute dress and then she turns around and goes to an exclusive nightclub in the most basic bitch outfit that the asari and humans wear constantly Lt.C. Shepard: I was going undercover, Kasumi Spec. Goto: i was talking about my good friend alison gunn The Normandy SR-2 had many upgrades compared to the SR-1. An internal chatroom is one of them.
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Fandom: Mass Effect - All Media Types
Relationships: Jeff "Joker" Moreau & Female Shepard, Karin Chakwas & Female Shepard, Female Shepard/Garrus Vakarian, Thane Krios/Female Shepard, Thane Krios/Garrus Vakarian, Thane Krios/Female Shepard/Garrus Vakarian, Female Shepard & Hannah Shepard, Garrus Vakarian & Tali'Zorah nar Rayya, Miranda Lawson & Female Shepard, Grunt & Female Shepard (Mass Effect), Legion & Female Shepard (Mass Effect)
Characters: Female Shepard (Mass Effect), Miranda Lawson, Garrus Vakarian, Jeff "Joker" Moreau, EDI (Mass Effect), Jacob Taylor, Karin Chakwas, Hannah Shepard, Mordin Solus, Grunt (Mass Effect), Thane Krios, Samara (Mass Effect), Tali'Zorah nar Rayya, Legion (Mass Effect), Kasumi Goto, Zaeed Massani, Jack | Subject Zero, Liara T'Soni, Kelly Chambers, the whole damn crew, other mentioned characters
Additional Tags: chatfic, this is silly, but still it was really fun to write, everyone is here guys, Spacer (Mass Effect), War Hero (Mass Effect), everyone is friends!!!, guys i love everyone so much, the entirety of mass effect 2 in chat logs, Paragrade Shepard, No Shepard Without Vakarian, thane/garrus/shepard is here but not the focus its mainly about friendship and silly times, Wordcount: 10.000-30.000, Not Beta Read, Shepard Is Grunt's Parent (Mass Effect), Humour
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moved-achilleusheart · 3 years ago
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haha sanford rambles go brr
Leaving it under the cut cause idk man the way he makes me feel is embarrassing  😰😰😰  [ /hj ] 
I cannot do shit rn, Sanford is the only thing on my brain to the point I can’t even explain just. him. It’s literally just him, that fucker. That fucking cutie I want to snuggle too. The mother fucker that right now is making me grab at the air and murmur dumb shit because I want to snuggle him. I love him so much, I just want to express it but i can’t without wanting to scream. It’s so hard to just AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA I’M LITERALLY GONNA START SCREAMING AND HUFFING AND JUST HOLDING HIM SO TIGHTLY PLEASE FUCK I’M NOT ABLE TO THINK STRAIGHT AAAAAAAAA
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LOOK. AT. HIM. LOOK AT HIM, THAT GUY SEE HIM I LOVE HIM SO MUCH FUCKING FUCK WHAT THE FUCK I HOPE YOU GET SMOTHERED BY ME AND MY LOVE FOR YOU GOOD SIR BECAUSE I CANNOT. I JUST. [ /lh ]
ugh. I can’t. I needed to get this off my chest otherwise I’m going to wake up my household with my desk banging because everyone knows I can’t handle or express my emotions properly. Maybe next time I’ll write a legit essay... haha jk,,, unless.... [ /hj ]
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oh-no-toshinori · 3 years ago
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#3 Pride Month Story
Hey all! Sorry for not posting one in a week or something like that. I wanted to post one every day, but apparently graduating and working is a lot more work than it should be. This story is based on polyamory. I'm not saying that this story is how poly-amorous relationships go, neither is it how they don't work out for those who are poly. This is merely what I've experienced from the peers around me. I'm not poly, so I won't be able to make this one too personal like I was able to accomplish with the Bisexual Story.
I struggled a lot to figure out which anime I wanted to showcase for this one. In the end, it came down to My Hero Academia. These stories are merely fan-based and none of them are accurate to the shows correlated with the story. I know that the sexualities in MHA are pretty clearly stated, so please do not take offense to any ships I have going for this one.
I will not be using an OC (original character) for this one. I will be using the characters that are within the anime. This will be written in the POV of Jirou Kyoka.
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My name's Jirou Kyoka. It's no secret that I like males and females, but what people don't really know about me is that I'm polyamorous. I've kept it a secret from my current U.A classmates for about a year now, but it's not exactly working out for me anymore. I'm dating one of my classmates, Kaminari Denki. If you're wondering, I didn't tell him that I'm interested in open relationships. It's a huge oops on my end, but I'm almost 100% certain that Denki is no stranger to polyamory. I know I have to tell him soon about myself. Things just might get out of hand if I don't tell him because. . .
I think I'm in love with Yao-Momo. It's a huge struggle to stop myself because I know there are people out there that aren't like me. Heck, Yao-Momo might even shut me down because of my sexualities for all I know, not just Kaminari.
Shit man, this is kind of terrifying. Then again, Yao-Momo hasn't pushed me away ever since I came out as bisexual, so who knows? Maybe she won't shut me out if I tell her another part of me?
But then again, how will Kaminari feel? Will he push me away? I know I still want to be with him, but I also want to be with Yao-Momo. If they don't want to be together, they don't have to be. This kind of relationship doesn't always have to be a throuple. Why is this confusing?
I take a deep breath in and look ahead of me. Walking to lunch with the swirling thoughts of concern and confusion has made me lose my appetite, but the show must go on. Can't work in Aizawa Sensei's class on an empty stomach.
I reach the cafeteria and gather my meal. I go to sit with Ashido, Kirishima, Bakugou, Sero, and my boyfriend Kaminari. I must've been visibly distraught because as soon as I made my appearance at the table, the entire crew forced their gazes onto me. I set my plate down next to Kaminari's before wiping the sticky cold sweat from my forehead. Well, that's disgusting.
"Jirou, you look like you've seen a ghost. Are you okay?" Ashido speaks up against the silence. Her face grew into a look of concern.
"Yeah, I'm just nervous today is all. I think I forgot my Anti-Depressants or something." Well, that's at least half of the story. I don't need them to know more. Wait, did I really forget mt Anti-Depressants? What the fuck I'm so fucked. Calm Down, Kyoka. It's just one day. ONE DAY! Why am I scared again? Oh, right. I have to confess something to my boyfriend as well as Yao-Momo. Cool.
"Girl, you look like you're buggin' over there."
"Kyoka, what's wrong?" Kaminari asks me as he gently presses his hand upon the middle of my back.
I've gotta admit. This is eating me ALIIIVE I tell you. "Hey, um, Denki, Do you think you could get Yao-Momo and meet me out in the hallway? I need to talk to the both of you." THAT MAKES IT SOUND LIKE HE'S CHEATING OH GOD.
"Uhm, okay?" He takes his confused self over to Yao-Momo's table to take her out into the hallway. While he's grabbing her, I tell the gang that everything is okay; Kaminari did nothing bad and I just needed to have a small talk with them about class half of that explanation being a lie to save my own ass.
Sero, Kiri and Ashido look at me in question, but shrug it off while Bakugou doesn't pay an ounce of attention to the conversation. . . which I'm thankful for. He would have told me to get the fuck out if I wanted to be a pussy, and that's the last thing I need right now.
I meet Denki and Yao-Momo in the hallway I've told them to meet me. I take in a deep breath, shake my hands, and wiggle my feet.
"What's going on here, Jirou?" Yao-Momo asks me, her motherly concern expressing itself like a warm summer day.
I take in a huge gulp of air and. . . .
"I'mpolyamorousandI'minlovewiththebothofyouandIcan'thelpitandIwasn'tgoingtosayanythingbecauseIfeellikeIwillbejudgedandlosemyrelationshipsthatIhavewiththebothofyou."
Denki's face goes completely blank while Momo's reaction is one of shock.
"Wait a minute, are you asking for a relationship between the three of us?" Momo asks. How the hell did she manage to understand me?!
"I- I don't really know what I'm asking! I love tthe both of you and I want to be with the both of you, but you two don't need to date if you don't want to!" The cold sweats come back harder this time. I wipe my face all over, as well as my neck, with the handkerchief from my breast pocket.
"Jirou, I'm glad you're coming clean to us, but-"
"A relationship with the both of you?! Maaaaan that sounds like a dream." Interrupts Denki as he goes off daydreaming about scenarios.
"I'm not on the same page as Kaminari." Announces the obsidian-eyed female. "For one; I don't want to be in an awkward situation in such a relationship, two; it's not for me, and three; I'm with Shoto now."
I look at her dead in the eye. I really panicked over nothing. How could I not know that she was dating Shoto? She's been oddly close to him for six months, there was no way for me to miss that. Yet. . . somehow I missed it.
"Jirou, I don't like girls either. So in any situation I wouldn't have told you yes. I'm as straight as they come. I don't agree with your lifestyle or your sexualities, but just know that I still like you as a person aside from that. I will be on my way to eating now. Thank you and goodbye." Momo storms back into the lunchroom she had just left.
That hurt like a bitch. Wow.
Denki walks up to me and hugs me tight for a long few moments. As he pulls away from me, he wipes my tears away. "Kyoka, I need you to know that I support you. If you want an open relationship, I'm on board, okay?"
I nod slowly before bursting into tears. Tell me why this hurt? I knew she wasn't going to go for it. . . then again I still fantasized about something that could have been. Maybe that's why this hurt.
Thank god for Kaminari Denki. If he weren't by my side, I don't know what I would have done.
"Thank you for being supportive." I sniffle. I take his hand into mine before we both walk into the cafeteria. My eyes were bloodshot and tear-stained while Denki had a solemn smile on his face. It was almost as if he was hurt by Momo as well.
I just hope this kind of pain doesn't happen too often because this actually kind of hurt, not gonna lie. . .
I'm not sure if i would ever trade Denki for the world. For him to be supportive and loving still means so much to me, and it only makes me love him all the more so.
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storywriting · 5 years ago
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On Coralians: An Infodump No One Asked For ✌
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Please enjoy this big old wall of text explaining both the canon and my headcanons about how Coralians work and what bearing these headcanons have on my portrayal. There’s also some tidbits borrowed from the wiki for those not familiar with the universe. Sections have headings for when you inevitably don’t want to read the whole thing.
What is a Coralian?
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Coralian is a catch-all term for any creature born of a plant-like intelligent alien life form called Scub Coral. The Scub Coral originally crashed into the Earth's atmosphere sometime in the 21st century. They survived a collision with an artificial satellite (named Eureka) and landed in the Pacific Ocean, fusing with the Ocean’s coral and eventually joining humans as a dominant species on planet Earth.
Tthe Scub Coral are capable of growing into an enormous size in the blink of an eye, which is one of the primary reasons humans fear them. Their tendency toward growth and expansion across the world causes tectonic shifts and disrupts the land regardless of the placement of things like cities and towns.  Their metabolic process produces a particulate matter called Trapar, much the same way plants release oxygen and humans exhale CO2. Trapar behaves like water or strong wind currents and is the basis for flight in both human technologies that use it as an energy source and in animals whose bodies have evolved to reflect it.
So They’re Like Corals but Also They’re...People? Sounds Dumb, Bro.
At this point I would like to emphasize something stated earlier: despite having a plant-like appearance, Scub Corals are an intelligent, conscious life form. Though they cannot speak in their natural form, Scub Corals are able to think and to reason, and every creature born of the Scub Coral has a connection to a central connected consciousness that encompasses all Coralians.
While most Scub Coral are plant-like in appearance, the Scub Coral eventually became capable of growing life forms that resemble types of fauna it has previously fused with. For example, the Scub creates dangerous fish-like creatures called anti-body Coralians to protect the control center of their consciousness from threat.
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In much the same way, humanoid Coralians were eventually grown in order to bridge the gap between the Scub Coral and humankind. The purpose of these humanoid Coralians is to be a blank slate that can learn to communicate with humans and be impressed upon by them. Eventually that humanoid Coralian will return to the Scub Coral to relay what they learned.
That’s how creatures like Eureka, Sakuya, and Gonzy came to exist.
It’s also worth noting that Archetypes, the exoskeletons that the cool giant robots are built upon in this universe, are actually alive. Archetypes are the first failed attempts of the scub coral to create a humanoid being.
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Traits of Coralians 
Hive Mind
So if these are all the same creature,  how is it that some are coral, some are kaijus, and some are people?  What do they all have in common? Well, for one, they all participate in the Coralian hive mind. In my portrayal, Eureka will have some level of awareness regarding will of her kind at all times.  She may not be actively thinking about it or asking about it, but it’s there.  Coralians do not want to be disconnected from their collective consciousness and humanoid Coralians in particular will become emotionally distressed if at any point that happens. Coralians need to exist in an interconnected group.
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It is implied on multiple occasions that Renton has inadvertently accessed  some portion of this collective consciousness in the mine, where he hears Eureka’s voice in his mind when she needs help. He also has conversations with her in his dreams that she later recalls the details of when he is awake.
I have a lot of headcanons about the future utility of this trait--mostly that Coralians can form unions of consciousness with humans, but since humans aren’t built for that it’s not very reliable or constant the way it seems to be between Coralians. You probably couldn’t have a full on conversation with your Coralian friend who is across town, but you’d have no problem calling vaguely out to one another if there was trouble. You couldn’t reliably spend an hour cheating on a test together inside your brains, but you could have the best improv game in town. Maybe you can’t communicate the grocery list without calling one another but you might get the vague sense that you need milk at home. Your coralian friend might be able to accompany you unprompted if you broke out into a spontaneous musical. It’s a great party trick but it doesn’t suffice as a main mode of communication the way it does between coralians.  In general your coralian friend will be extremely adept at picking up on what you’re thinking compared to most people, but only because this method of connection was their first language in a way that is not true for humans.
Eyes
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Not all Coralians need to be able to see, but those who have eyes all share the same distinctive eye type which differs from humans. Their eyes are invariably a purple color with a ring around the iris. These eyes are built to be able to see Trapar, a particulate matter that in large quantities is toxic to them. Naturally occurring Trapar is invisible to the human eye, but to a Coralian it takes on a luminescent greenish color that says STAY THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME. 
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Wings
Speaking of Trapar, Eureka’s wings are designed not to be flapped against air currents like those of birds or insects. Rather, they are designed like the bodies of skyfish to reflect trapar and glide on top of it.
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I honestly hc that she molts the outermost layer on those wings every month or so, the same way reflection film has to be changed on the ships and LFOs in order to keep flying on top of the trapar waves.
That's about everything I can think of right now but if you read this far and want to know any more feel free to ask any questions you might have. Otherwise expect more headcanons surrounding this stuff in the future probably.
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gargoyleofhumankindness · 5 years ago
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some initial thoughst on star wars rise of skywalker
- this movie is great 
- i really liked it 
- everytime they said rey is a palpatine i laughed for two reasons 
1. friendpatine 
2. i never considered that palpatine was his last name 
what is his first name 
its so funny to me that is last name is palpatine i would have assumed it was either first name pal last name patine or that palpatine was his first name i never even considered it was a family name thats so fucking funny to m e
- general, general. that is the gayest thing ever genuinely. saying comrade is gay saying general is next level gay respect for the boys 
- when rey got two lightsabers i was so stoked for some doube wielding and was low key disappointed to only get a cross defense but still cool i guess 
- so disappointed rey killed k*** r** only to instantly bring him back to life let the piece of shit die 
- and then he did so thats fine 
- leia’s jedi training made me so happy 
- rey calling leia master made me so happy 
- really good bants 
- really happy to see squad squad squas
- r2 calling cp his best friend made me cry 
- THE MOMENT WHERE ALL THE SHIPS COME IN AND THE MUSIC PLAYS
THAT MOMENT IS THE REASON STAR WARS EXISTS 
IT IS ALL THAT I HAVE EVER WANTED FROM STAR WAR
FUCKING PHENOMENAL MADE ME CRY MADE EVERY OTHER SIN OF THIS MOVIE DISAPPEAR I WOULD BE HAPPY TO JUST SEE THAT SCENE AND NOTHING ELSE FOR LIFE 
- when they fall into the sand pit all i thought was that photo set of ps where hermione avada kedvras harry and the end credits roll. what if that was jus tthe end of the movie 
- starting the movie with kylo is a fucking travesty 
- cutting to shenanigans and rey meditating with rocks and leia almost makes up for it 
- it felt like there were more female characters and i like that 
- the final scene at the farm honestly tears 
- when she says rey skywalker i punched the air so hard i have no investment in the whole who is rey’s parents the controversy of skywalker etc etc etc but i felt that moment was earned and awesome 
- chewies reaction to leai was my reaction also and made me sob hardddddd
- WHEN ALL THE JEDIS SPOKE TO REY THERE WERE FEMALE VOICES AND I HAVE DECIDED THAT INCLUDED ASHOKA THE BABE 
- bb8 making a friend 
- the shot of the two suns and bb8 was some cinematic beauty 
- when rey force jumped and chopped the wing off kylo’s buff tie fighter 
- kylo’s buff tie fighter is hilarious to me 
- rey burning it is excellent 
- rey wearing the helmet and flying the x wng big happy
- omg huge shout out to the yak things fucking here for them 
- also for the ex-storm trooper idk her name but icon 
- there were a lot of shots of trooper dead bodies, and on the death star all the empty helmets. i think its really good that they were showing the aftermath of the rebellion’s battles, bc the fact is you cheer when they blow up the death star and the destroyers but there are hundreds of people on those ships and we never see an acountability for that, its just lets go blow up the bad guys even tho a few months (years? what is time in the star war univeres) finn would have been on the ship, any number of those people had potential for good or where good and trapped in a system where this was their only option. i think showing the helmets really brought that into view for the first time and i think thats really valuable 
- hux being the spy and immedietly getting killed is fucking hilarious 
- leias sabre is so pretty i want one 
- storm troopers getting jet packs before poe gets one is a betrayal 
- who doesnt watn to see that pilot go fucking off with a jet pack 
- seeing the ewoks made me really happy also YUB YUB 
- goddamn it kylo why didnt you chuck the sabre in the first movie could have saved us all a lot of trouble 
- the knights of ren made me laugh every time they appeared 
- why where all their weapons so mediavial and shit 
- they were murdered in less than a minute they are clearly really shit 
- i mean no suprise but still fucking funny 
- skeevy still looks skeevy and with all the med stuff just made me think of davros in withces familiar low key was expecting pcap in a dalek to scoot in and start shooting exterminate 
- also i was haunted by calling skeevy lightening mcgee idk where that thought came from but every time he used lightening i would think lightening mcgee
- at the end of the day when you hear the music and the STAR WARS logo appears nothing else matters that is just something that brings me so much joy. we can complain and deep dive and metasise about these stupid movies but you cannot take away the feeling of the first beats of the theme and the opening credits that is something incredible and special and so many people have felt that in their lives and that is amazing
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oceanman · 5 years ago
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Fourr,, three, two,; fuck youu.
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Fuck this shit, I quit… —————————————————- this is a whole fucking submission from wolf
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crybabydx · 5 years ago
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sso basically a mom accidentally kills her son and herself in a car accident, her ghost witnesses her son’s and her body lying on the ground and death comes to her as a taxi cab driver, says there’s nothing anyone can do to save the boy, then offers her a ride. she falls asleep in the cab and he drops her off at the dock where she promises him she’ll be back. and then falls asleep on her friends boat where they set sail to sea in the bermuda triangle. this is where the loop resets itself. she has flashbacks in her dream of what happened to her before, when she washes up on shore after being thrown overboard, then she wakes up with no recollection of what happened, is confused, and doesnt’ realize she’s in a loop until after they board the cruise liner after the sailboat had capsized in the storm , and sees two copies of herself fighting each other, then like clockwork, the next group of their copies board the ship. she tries her hardest to change what she knows is supposed to happen (fate) to no avail. the fact that she’s willing to kill her friends to get the loop to stop shows how much she loved her son, how desperate she is for him back, also a feeling of guilt that she was a dick to her autistic son, and for possibly causing their deaths. the loop of them boarding the ship doesn’t restart until all of them are dead. so she thinks she needs to kill them all and then prevent the next group from coming onto the boat in the first place, so they can find another way to return to land. but she can’t do this, she can’t prevent this from happening no matter what she does, she’s tried many, many times. 
eventually she gets pushed over the ship by her own copy and washes up on shore, she runs back to her house and sees herself yelling and hitting her autistic son for accidentally spilling paint water when he sees this other copy of his mother outside the window looking in. she then goes to the shed gets a hammer and kills her, her son sees, reassures him it’s just a dream, puts the body in a bag in a trunk, they drive away, she hits a seagull, goes to throw the dead bird into the ocean but realizes there’s already seagulls there, indicating she’s still in the loop. she gets to her car, frantic, speeds away, crashes head on into a truck, and the loop starts over again with death coming to her. he takes her back to the dock so she can try to save her son again.
tthe only thing i dont’ understand is wh y did she have her keys with her on the cruise ship in the first place if the taxi drove her there intitally. 
there’s some time gaps i don’t fully understand like where does the story really start, with the car accident? if that’s what happened in the first place? they die, she tries to go back and save them. on the cruise ship they told a story about sisyphus, who was a greek mythological character who was granted one more day in the living world to do some unfinished business , to meet him back but instead he ran away with his wife and when he reached his natural death, his punishment , essentially in hell, was to push a rock up a mountain only to have it fall once he reaches the top. stuck in a loop, he was to keep doing this until he got the rock to the top. that’s how the story goes. in the movie, death does give her another chance when he tells her i’ll keep the meter running , and she promises that she will come back, although she never intends on it, she does. she tries to drive away in the car with her son, but she gets in an accident, death comes back to her, and she tries again. i can’t figure out if she herself is causing the loop to repeat itself, like she’s in some sort of pergatory, having unfinsihed business as a ghost, unable to accept fate/reality/ the fact that she died and so did he. 
or if she’s forced to go through this over and over again, like the greek myth. perhaps she is alive on the sailboat before they get capsized. hm, maybe that’s how she actually dies, and the cruise ship liner is her ghost’s way of finding her way back to earth . it would make sense that the cruise ship is not real life, despite all the gory carnage that ensues on it. 
i think this is what happened:
according to the movie, the captain of the sailboat asked her, the mother, to join them on a sailboat ride with a couple of high school friends. they encounter a storm in the bermuda triangle that capsizes the ship, in reality, i think this is how she actually dies in real life. the cruise liner that passes them while theyre capsized and waiting for help is literally a ghost ship, there’s no one on it, but there is fresh food available as if there were people just there. it’s from like the 30′s and is super old timey looking, it even had a record player that played during the moments she realized she was in a loop.
aeolus is the name of the ship in the movie. in greek mythology, aeolus is the wind god. in homer’s odyssey,  “ Aeolus gave Odysseus a closed bag that contained all winds, but for the gentle West Wind that would take him home. However, Odysseus' companions, thinking the bag contained riches, opened the bag and the winds escaped, blowing the ship in all directions and thus extending their voyage back home.”  the cruise ship is essentially the wind god , who caused the storm in the first place, killing her (thus preventing her return to home) and her friends. them boarding the cruise ship symoblizes their journey in to the afterlife, possibly hell, considering it’s in a terrible time loop, with no conflict resoultion, as in the story of syphisus, where his punishment in the afterlife was to endure the same loop for eternity. 
the story of sysphus was mentioned twice in the movie, as well as imagery of the cruise ships symbol. sysphus cheated death twice, first by tricking death by trapping him in the chains that were meant to chain him, then by lying to queen of underworld when he died of natural causes, who granted him one last day among the living to finish his unfinished business, but to promise to return. he never did so his punishment was to push the rock up the hill for eternity. 
the loop that began on the cruise liner does not stop even though she fell overboard, washed up on shore, and ran back to the house. she’s still in the loop, as indicated by the pile of seagulls on the shore that she disposes of after it hits her car and it dies. she tries to escape the loop, by driving away, until she gets into the accident. her ghost observes their bodies and death comes to her and asks if she needs a ride. i think death does allow her to reenter the living world again for a day, if she comes back to him. although she never intends on doing so. like the syphsis story.. so i suppose then that she was allowed to the living world once, but only once. and she fucked it up somehow, either she killed them on accident again, or she got caught by death, which i suppose is the same thing. now her punishment is to endure this loop for eternity. she definitely cheated death. i’m now aware that sysphus cheated death twice. perhaps she has done the same, or possibly more times.
i think she accidentally died in the boat, her afterlife on the cruise ship is in purgatory “a state after death according to Roman Catholic belief in which the souls of people who die are made pure through suffering before going to heaven. : a place or state of suffering,  Purgatory is place for souls destined for glory but who are not prepared for the beatific vision or being in the eternal presence of God.  “. she endures purgatory on cruise ship, tries her hardest to change and do the right thing, to be a better mother when she witnesses her self being an ass to her son. i’m not sure if she’s stuck in the loop for eternity, or if she chooses to do so, in a way to prepare her soul for heaven, because she still feels unable to accept death. she has unfinished business, so she stays until she feels like she’s ready to ascend basically, she chooses to go through hell time after time again. unless she has to endure it for being an a hole to her son while they were alive. 
“Purgatory is a choice made by a soul who sees the attachment to sin that he still possesses. “ she feels guilty for being a bad mother, so she chooses to remain in pergatory as a ghost on earth. oh my god, i’ve finally figured it out. she goes back to the house as a ghost, fuck, that’s why the doorbell rings and when she answers no one is there. perhaps she is reliving a loop she created for herself or, until she feels shes served penance for her sins.
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mustlovelance · 7 years ago
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alright overall thoughts before i rewatch:
i liked it a lot more than s2
LANCE WAS SO GOOD IN IT. SO MUCH QUALITY. SUCH A GOOD BOY. SO GRACIOUS. PERFECT AMOUNT OF REASONABLE LANGST. like he was a dick at first, but i’m kinda glad he was? he needed to just. accept the situation and make the best of it, which he did. 
lance is beautiful
lance is cute
lance is lovely
uhhhh i kinda ship vld allurance now oops. did u notice lance didn’t once flirt with her? so of course this is the season in which i ship them, duh. it reminds me a lot of 80′s allurance/golion kurofala now, which means i’m doomed and please tell me more people ship it now?? (i will elaborate why they’re all so similar now later.) 
poor keith?? i feel. bad. because he looked so bad for a lot of it. his leadership could be compared to a dumpster fire. but like–who can blame him? he didn’t want to lead, at all, and he’d just lost the most important person in his life again. i didn’t expect much better from him tbh. but then. yeah. it’s bad. 
throk is hilarious. 
galra ladies were hot. if wanting to marry zethrid means i’m a furry, then so be it. please throw me across the room, zethrid. 
can we fucking discuss how often keith looked at lance with that SOFT, FOND EXPRESSION and that SOFT, FOND VOICE?? i kept thinking i was IMAGINING things but HOLY SHIT. GUYS??? 
listen, allura should’ve been able to pilot red or black. that part was complete and utter BS and led to all my other issues with this season pretty much. 
i just felt really weird about the lion bonds this season. like, the lions just picked someone and that was that. none of it even made sense. i didn’t feel like the lions cared much, not like they did in seasons 1 and 2. it was very…empty and soulless and made me feel really bad. this is by far my biggest issue with this season. by far. 
like wtf @ blue?? why did she reject lance like that? i’m sure that was a large contribution to him telling keith later that he felt like he should just leave. blue didn’t even fight to keep him. she just shut him out and let him figure out what he was supposed to do by himself. what the fuck. the blue i thought i knew from seasons 1 and 2 would not encourage lance to think he doesn’t even deserve to be a paladin. like i’m so ticked at her i’m actually less upset about him losing her. she was being terrible anyway?? which is literally not how i expected to feel, at all.
“i wanted to stay with you” SO FUCKING COMMUNICATE WITH HIM AND MAKE SURE LANCE KNOWS THAT YOU LOVE HIM AND YOU BELIEVE IN HIM, JESUS CHRIST. WHA TTHE FUCK.
also like?? where was red being protective of keith? or blue being fond of lance? or anything? the closest we got to emotions was when allura flirted with blue. 
co-leadership keith&lance actually happened?? i thought that was just wishful thinking but?? 
SVEN!!!! SVEN!!!!!!!! SVEEEEEEEEEN!!!!!! THAT WHOLE EPISODE WAS BY FAR THE BEST IN THE SERIES TBH. SVEN. HIS ACCENT. OH MY GOD. MY MAN. WHERE IS YOUR ROMELLE. I LITERALLY CRIED THROUGH MOST OF THAT EPISODE. TEARS AS I SCREENCAPPED EVERY INSTANCE OF HIS BEAUTIFUL FACE. 
“YOOHOO!” “DOGPILE!!!” literally who wouldn’t die for this beautiful perfect man. 
“TAKE ME TO THE SPACE HOSPITAL” FUCKING RIGHT. anyone who thought sven was going to die is clearly unfamiliar with the fact that he is, like all norwegians, immortal. 
so uhhh that shiro is 100% obviously a clone. i hadn’t even looked up what the experiment name meant and i knew he was a clone. his hair is way too long, for starters–that would take years. furthermore, why the fuck did they just let him go? however, he’s clearly a sleeper agent clone; even he questions the circumstances of his escape. also keith definitely knows he’s not shiro which is why he’s :( about it. 
interesting that what you’re supposed to assume, on the surface, is that black chose keith over shiro. in actuality, black is cluing us in on the fact that this isn’t shiro. so what’s gonna happen when keith saves the real shiro again?  
listen. i don’t know what else to tell you. keith is in love with lance. literally there were so many fond looks in this season, and it was only 7 episodes. listen. he’s in love. the boy is madly in love. it’s adorable. 
BUT his adoration of lance is blinding him to how seriously lance is considering his place in the team. to keith, obviously lance belongs there!! like duuuuh! so it must just be lance being his ridiculous self again, rather than mentioning something that truly does bother him. 
TBH if shiro was able to pilot black, i wouldn’t have been surprised if lance tried to remove himself from the equation in some way. there’s no way that allura wouldn’t let lance have blue back, and there’s no way that keith would let him leave, so lance would take it upon himself one way or the other. like he said, this is war, and he honestly thinks he’s not good enough. (THANKS, BLUE.) 
however, allura flirting with blue? A++++ perfect scene bye. 
where’s my allura/zethrid fanfiction guys
alfor was adorable and sad. 
ZARKON WAS CUTE AT SEVERAL POINTS?? WHAT???? “I MUST GO NOW.” OK BOY. 
the origin of the paladins in general was depressing as FUCK. 
BABY ALLURA!!!! 
so yeah waaaay better than s2. but like, what the actual fuck @ the blue lion. 
i hit my image upload limit earlier, but i’ve got a ton more to upload tomorrow so, GET READY. 
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thatlittledandere · 7 years ago
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Akoya for the character thing!
Oooh I don’t talk about Akoya a lot!! i don’t think about him a lot either but um irrelevant
do I like them:
- I’m kind of neutral towards Akoya but I like Boueibu characters by default so I guess I do? 
5 good qualities:
- BEAUTIFUL
- smart - I don’t know about Akoya’s grades but he’s in the student council and Kinshiro has very high standards so he’s got to be and, um, I had other points that I can’t remember atm but he’s smart!!
- also socially intelligent! From having that pleasant, sophisticated aura, to trying to sweet-talk Io to his favor (it didn’t work bc it’s Io but Akoya knew what to do and probably would have gotten through to someone else) to convincing Kinshiro and Ibushi that they need a treasurer, to riling Ryuu up enough to raise him from the dead back on his feet in that idol battle, to successfully diverting Protag-chan’s attention from Ibushi to himself in the game, Akoya knows his way around people
- uuuuhhhh. i can do better i swear
- Oh!! Yeah this is more about the actor but dear jesus christ I love Akoya’s voice!! It’s soothing, intriguing and suspicious all at the same time and so soft and I just love soft things
- Akoya is also surprisingly sensible, at least in the manga :D
3 bad qualities:
- You could say the “social intelligence” doubles as being manipulative;; different sides of the same coin and all that
- Way too superficial, looks actually do matter to Akoya and while a healthy appreciation to aesthetics is a good thing, he takes it too far.
- I get nightmares from this pants+boots combo
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favourite episode/etc:
Aah… I haven’t thought about it… But I’d say Akoya is at his best in the manga where he gets the heavy role of the tsukkomi.
otp:
don’t doxx me for this I ship akoio;;; seriously nobody ever talks about it but I know there must be others out there.. where are you…
I really want to do something with the ship too, the amount of fanworks is way too low, but I have round zero ideas hlep
brotp:
Ok I haven’t really given this serious thought either but I really like the idea of Akoya and Kinshiro being good close friends!!
ot3:
Don’t have any. The obvious ones would be akoioryuu and… tthe student council ot3 what do people call it… but idk I just don’t really feel either of those. Akoya x Io x Me but then I get dumped for being a dumb shit and not presentable for the upper class k
notp:
I wouldn’t go as far as calling anything notp. I don’t even have any ships I particularly dislike, mostly I’m just indifferent… but I’ll name Akorima because it got more popular than anticipated and I don’t like it when my logic fails and maybe kinako and akoryuu because idk I just prefer those platonic
(a serious request to yall (this sound ridiculous but I’m serious) if I ever call something a notp remind me that I’m not allowed to have those. Just a dm or an ask saying “ur not allowed to have notps” is enough.)
best quote:
uuuhhhhhh I’m very sorry but I haven’t been able to stop thinking about “Why does a man of your caliber associate with that bunch?” idk maybe I just like it when Io gets praised
head canon:
The only Akoya headcanon I came up with myself was the transgirl idea from the very beginning of 2015 I have since mostly abandoned but I adopt headcanons so… what do I have in my arsenal… I remember someone once having this headcanon that Akoya hates being treated like a lady and I like that one
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sayakuro-remade · 8 years ago
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do uh ruby rose for u i wanna see how we're both each other
My favorite person from my canon: ummm i can’t choose just one!!! i loved so many ppl!!! 
My least favorite person from my canon: ohh hmm probably tthat uh scorpion guy 
How tall I was: very small!! 4'11!!!! in my canon 
Some of my physical traits: tiny little baby with short black hair an red highlights 
Some of my personality traits: excitable loving innocent child!! who loved to fix things and was down to kill (bad guys) anytime!!! 
The phrase/word/sound I said the most: hmm probably a very excited scream or something 
My crush/partner (if I had one): oh boy ok i dated weiss and maybe penny?? even if i didn’t date penny i know i liked her and uhh i liked pyrrha and emerald before uh yknow
My best friend (if I had one): yang and blake andd jaune and NORA OMG YEAH NORA aand ren too!!!!!!! 
The most attractive person/people from my canon: fuck oh my god emerald 
The cutest possible ship from my canon: umm probably the bees…
The worst possible ship from my canon: rosewick or whatever the fuck it is
Who I’ve found so far: so many ppl omg!! uh blake and yang and weiss and idk if they’re from my canon but i know a penny andd a pyrrha!!!!! yay!!! 
Who I really want to find: like so many other ppl!! ren and nora and jaune and qrow and ahh!!!! 
Who I really don’t want to find: umm the scorpion guy again aa i don’t rlly mind other bad guys as long as they’re sorry or something but yyeahh
Who I wish died: tthe scorpion dude i should learn what his name is 
Who I wish hadn’t died: oh boyyy uhh my mom, pyrrha, penny….
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sixteenthbuny · 8 years ago
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Fanfiction Questions
Fandom Questions
1. What was the first fandom you got involved in? warrior cats
2. What is your latest fandom? Doctor Who
3. What is the best fandom you’ve ever been involved in? BBC Sherlock
4. Do you regret getting involved in any fandoms? no??? but wc is tough to cope with tbh-
5. Which fandoms have your written fanfiction for? YGO, Assassin’s Creed, Warrior Cats, Naruto, Bleach, Noragami, D. Gray-Man, Supernatural, BBC Sherlock, Doctor Who, Avengers, Hobbit? etc.
6. List your OTP from each fandom you’ve been involved in. YamiYugi, Yullen, Destiel, Sam/Gabriel, Tony/Gabriel, Johnlock, Sheriarty, MinaKushi, NaruSasu, TenRose, human!Smaug/Bilbo (LMAO), KakaObi, KakaNaru, Desmond/Altair
7. List your NoTPs from each fandom you’ve been in. i’ve only felt the NoTP for Sherlolly tbh-
8. How did you get involved in your latest fandom? BBC One
9. What are the best things about your current fandom? the amount of debates on tjlc and theories tbh, it get hilarious and ridiculous, and mofftiss is probably having as much fun as i am watching everyone
10. Is there a fandom you read fic from but don’t write in? no, not really
Ship Questions for your Current Fandom
11. Who is your current OTP? Johnlock, Sheriarty
12. Who is your current OT3? don’t got one but i’d read a good threeway anyday
13. Any NoTPs? SHERLOLLY
14. Go on, who are your BroTPs? tbh, Sherstrade
15. Is there an obscure ship which you love? LMAO MYSTRADE-
16. Are their any popular ships in your fandom which you dislike? S H ERLOCLLY
17. Who was your first OTP and are they still your favourite? Johnlock, and i love them because their chemistry echoes from hell and back in all 200+ SH adaptations
18. What ship have you written the most about? ObiKaka
19. Is there a ship which you wished you could get behind, but you just don’t feel them? i don’t think so
20. Any ships which you surprised yourself by liking? Sheriarty, Mystrade, human!Smaug/Bilbo and Twelara
Author Questions
21. What was the first fanfic you ever wrote? oh god.. idk? warrior cats, definitely :) such old times, i miss those days
22. Is there anything you regret writing? um yuri licking a knife fic lmao
23. Name a fic you’ve written that you’re especially fond of & explain why you like it. i’ve got a few, and one of them is “sherlock in the vignette” because it fits my short attention span and it allowed me to cover a female-genderqueer!Sherlock falling in love with a male!John because i don’t see those often. it’s also tragic in some ways and it gave me stress-free flexibility to allow johnlock biological child happen without any scientific probability complications that fucks me over like it has been for the past four years lmao.
24. What fic do you desperately need to rewrite or edit? Live in the Moment. a plotty naruto mess fic..
25. What’s your most popular fanfic? um. probably Disturbed w/ 44k reads, 120+ favs and 100+ follows, and Ephemeral with ~10k reads, 130+ favs and 190+ follows (both on ff.net)
26. How do you come up with your fanfic titles? sometimes they embody the main plot point or the whole point of the story or a simple characteristic or they’re just punny and random
27. What do you hate more: Coming up with titles or writing summaries? SU MMARIAES SKSJNXBFK
28. If someone were to draw a piece of fanart for your story, which story would it be and what would the picture be of? um.. i’m not sure; either Disturbed, Ephemeral or The One Who Is Bound; they were liked and they would probably be something action-based, or a character?
29. Do you have a beta reader? Why/Why not? no, i usually am the beta reader and i am my own beta reader
30. What inspires you to write? my muse and thoughts and fascination with the concept of fandom
31. What’s the nicest thing someone has ever said about your writing? “it’s brilliant, i love it, you do amazing with your plots and word choices,” kind of complements. they’re really nice and i feel really appreciated and loved when people say those things to me
32. Do you listen to music when you write or does music inspire you? If so, which band or genre of music does it for you? i always listen to music. it’s like an addiction tbh, and i listen to varying things from chilltrap to epic steampunk mixes. doesn’t inspire me for sHIT tho lmaoo
33. Do you write oneshots, multi-chapter fics or huuuuuge epics? all of them on a good muse :) but mostly huge epics because i do not have chapter tolerance
34. What’s the word count on your longest fic? um ??? 50k? or 80k. somewhere in between, but i’ve written up to 100k words before dividing it into two stories that never made it because the decision may or may not have been a bit premature asdjkijhahn
35. Do you write drabbles? If so, what do you normally write them about? no, i usually try but they tend to fail
36. What’s your favourite genre to write? angst, hurt/comfort, family, romance, action, adventure, drama and suspense
37. First person or third person - what do you write in and why? third person present or pst tense, depending on the story. i don’t do first pov unless i’m r e a l l y feeling it lol
38. Do you use established canon characters or do you create OCs? i don’t use ocs as often but they have come across my stories multiple times
39. What is you greatest strength as a writer? i’m not sure. my craftiness for a plot, i guess.
40. What do you struggle the most with in your writing? staying with it. so basically what everyone else suffers from LOL
Fanfiction Questions
41. List and link to 5 fanfics you are currently reading: The Loss of Flesh and Soul on AO3 (Sherlock/Silence of the Lambs) http://archiveofourown.org/works/387339 and that is literally it :(
42. List and link to 5 fanfiction authors who are amazing: @vitruvianwatson tammy hybrid (already tagged) @blackkatmagic @highfunctioninggaybaby i haven’t really got anyone else on my tumblr that i read.. not off the top of my head at least, but they're all so much fun to follow and read!
43. Is there anyone in your fandom who really inspires you? Sherlock and Minato tbh, their minds, priorities and moralities are inspiring
44. What ship do you feel needs more attention? um mystrade lmao especially in canon
45. What is your all time favourite fanfic shit, i’m not sure. i’ve got a lot, but i really like reverse and backslide :) they were so original and golden for me, thanks to kat for blessing fanfiction.net with that lol
46. If someone was to read one of your fanfics, which fic would you recommend to them and why? probably Disturbed, The One Who is Bound, The One Who is Free and maybe Son of Pseudo Gods ??? only two of them are finished tho
47. Archive Of Our Own, Fanfiction.net or Tumblr - where do you prefer to post and why? all three of them, everyone’s stories on here are fantastical whenever i run into them and i need some more on my timeline
48. Do you leave reviews when you read fanfiction? Why/Why not? yes, sometimes. it depends on the amounts of reviews already received/types of criticism. and my energy to actually write one beyond saying (contextually) “I LOVE IT I NEED MORE AAAAA”
49. Do you care if people comment/reblog your writing? Why/why not? DEFINITELY! i would recommend everyone at least give some feedback or love, especially to new authors. criticism is vv important :^)
50. How did you get into reading and/or writing fanfiction? i started by writing my own at the age of 8 thinking “omggggg no one else has EVER DONE THIS! I WILL BE THE FIRST!” and then discovering many other authors..
51. Rant or Gush about one thing you love or hate in the world of fanfiction! Go!
SH I P AWARS A RE OVE R. L E TTHE M BE O VER
and the lack of recognition is kind of ridiculous. i’m talking like professional recognition because i have read fucking. fanficjtions that harare better than actual fucking bookks fjosbfknd
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qrhymes · 8 years ago
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Gintama 2017 Ep. 4-6 – Why the three Ominous Stars work so well?
I love Gintama, it is one of my favorite shows of all time. I’ve follow the series since 2011 and I have found myself both surprised and fascinated time after for this roller coaster of emotions that is Gintama. Sorachi is a Genius, who has created some of the best moments, characters and arcs that I have ever seen in fiction…And holy shit he is still reminding us of that fact even after thirteen years of publication.
All of us lost our shit when Tthe Shogun Assassination arc got to its climax and how forget that time when us, manga readers, believed that the Author Gorilla actually killed Kondo (Anime only watchers won’t know but Kondo was professed dead in the wiki during the first weeks of Farewell) and just in the last episode of the anime, Holy shit the Joui 4 (Minus Kurokono)
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(...its just too beautiful....)
And now we have the current arc of the manga and…boy oh boy it has been intense, but I’m digressing.
There is a lot to talk about the manga and the anime but for now I wanna focus in the recent events of the anime and how it’s recent mini-arc and why, despite its fillerish nature (In the grant scheme of the Rakuyou), work so damn well.
And I’ll be honest with you guys; it’s not rocket science, Sorachi simple and plain gives to his fights, his characters, and the overall meaning of the fights a lot of weight and emotional stakes.
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(...Sniff:..)
A fight can be more than just a spectacle of two (or more) character beating the living shit out each other; can be an opportunity to flesh out a character, to develop it, explore different ideas or themes.  And this is exactly what these three fights are.
First of all Shoukaku, Hankai and Batou (Kudos tou you if you remembered his names without checking the wiki) aren’t what you would call memorable, each one has a good design and the three have enough personality and quirks to be interesting for their respective battle but in the large scale of Gintama antagonist there are in the very bottom, so what make these fights so damn good and memorable are not their antagonist but his protagonist and what means each battle for Katsura, Sakamoto and Gintoki.
So, let’s go in order and let’s start with Katsura.
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Katsura vs Shoukaku it’s probably the one that feels the most “familiar” with Katsura pulling a “YOU SHALL NOT PASS” and then having a one o one, pretty simple…and then we have this.
I would say that I’m impressing, after all it’s a damn clever move that takes probably the most well know catchphrase of the series and gives it this heavy emotional baggage that dates back to his childhood, that it’s also a symbol of his friendship with Gintoki and Takasugi and shows total new meaning to his personality and to a quirk that was to this point just a funny line but now, it’s a statement about the past, friendship and about himself, but this is something that Sorachi has accustomed us.
You know when a funny gag about shooting a bazooka to a Mayo addict got transform in this complex about envy and jealously.
Or that other moment when you are laughing of Gintoki singing the Doraemon theme because he is terrified of ghost, and then you remember that he grown up in battlefield and is deeply hurtful about the people that he kill in his past (Oh oh, much better, why not created a literal manifestation of Gintoki past’s ghosts in Utsuro….Oh Sorachi you are undoubtedly a sadist)
This is how Sorachi plays his game but it’s not less meaning full just for that, the battle has a nice rhythm to It and in the same light that the GinTaka fight in Assassination, has a great understanding of how and when using the flashback without affect (too much) the battle in the present.
So the verdict; Katsura, you are pretty good.
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The Hankai battle is a different kind of breed, not only is less of a fight but also its focus is in three character instead of on…and one of them is Nobu Nobu…no fuck no, this asshole kill Shou-chan he doesn’t deserves any kind of redemption or laughs that aren’t at the expense of his person…and…holy shit Sorachi you did it again.
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The power of a Joke it’s enormous you know? how much humanity gives to any type of character the pure ability of crack a joke or been part of a more casual joke. Nobu Nobu doesn’t get redeems or has a free pass for his actions, more ever it’s the contrary, he needs to leave for the lives that he has ended. It was a message that was give it well enough, subtle enough and again the light tone did wonders to give some sort of humanity to this asshole that just a few chapters ago was a anthropomorphic blank to hated.
But the undisputed MVP of this battle is the Loud Fellow himself, Sakamoto Tatsuma.
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We already knew about his perspective about what means been a leader, this charismatic and smart badass who’s charming personality draw this bunch of people without a place to his cause.
And the contrast between him and Nobu Nobu it’s great and funny, and then you throw Mutsu as the representation of those who follows leaders like Sakamoto (At least when they are in a ship…and talking about ship, I ship them so hard) and then you have then fighting Hankai in reactor and…
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It’s awesome But the real emotional pay off of this fight would come in a form that I think nobody expected.
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Sakamoto injury is meaningful and poetic in the same grade, this career ending injury that would prevent him to participle in the final battle of his comrades and that it would also drive him away from his old friends but that also would allow him to follow his dream and inadvertently make the greater good, as Gintoki one say “Fighting the fight that we can’t”. It was one of these emotional punches to the gut that which are so synonymous with Gintama and makes this battle my favorite of three because of its final twist.
You three are indeed pretty good too.
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And then we move to the final battle of the three Gintoki vs Batou.
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This is arguably my least favorite of the three, been shorter and less deep-felt that the previous two, but it’s still has a lot to say.
First of all, I love the sideways between the Hankai fight and the Batou fight, it’s a nice touche that Batou and Gintoki have a little history together and of course seen Gintoki and Takasugi pissed off for Sakamoto injury it’s just so sweet.
For the fight itself, it’s a primal example of Sorachi’s ability to mix action and comedy
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Bakuyasha is pure gold comedy, Sorachi is a master in the art of defying expectatives and he continues to prove it
I will never forget you, Monday Elizabeth
For the rest of the fight and what means overall is another well-made introspection of Gintoki’s character.
Gintoki always has been this awesome character with a lot of mystery and layers added to his persona and every arc has been this hint to resolve the enigma that is Gintoki, the issue here is that most of this got resolve in Assassination and with the posterior entrance of in Farewell we get this transition of just trying to understand this guy to seeing face this literal manifestation of the ghost from his past, this is the reason that this fight falls a little more flat that the others…but nevertheless it’s still a great fight, a character piece of a character that a lot of us just love and every new inside to him is welcome.
Some my final verdict
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Pretty good.
These three fights were a mere sub-arc in Rakuyou  arc, but they overflow with the reasons of why all of us love Gintama, the characters, comedy, the action, the human drama, the feels, etc.
It’s a perfect piece of all that is good with the series and great story overall.
So, thank you Sorachi, for giving me so wonderful watching experience and I salute you Author Gorilla
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because Sir, you’re definitely pretty good.
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PD: If you didn’t notice yet I also love Ocelot, he is also Pretty Good
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January 18th, 2018 CTP Archive
The archive for the Comic Tea Party chat that occurred on January 18th, 2018, from 5PM - 7PM PST.  The chat focused on Chronicles of Fenaur by CalimonGraal.
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✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
Good day everyone~! This week’s Comic Tea Party is now officially beginning. Today we are discussing Chronicles of Fenaur by CalimonGraal~! (http://chronicles.fenauriverse.moe/) For those new to CTP, discussions about the comic are freeform, so please feel free to bring up whatever you wish. However, every 30 minutes I will be dropping in a discussion question to help those who would like a prompt. These questions are totally OPTIONAL to answer so pay them no mind if you wish~! Remember, constructive criticism is allowed, but the primary focus here is to have fun and appreciate the amazing comics that the community makes~! Each chat a top comment will be picked and featured on an ad for this chat, so let’s have a great discussion~!
With that said, let us begin with this first question~!
QUESTION 1. What is your favorite scene in the comic so far and why?
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
The nightmare fuel
all of it
plus the naked boys
snuffysam
the scene where tai is shirtless
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
So far, the moment when Dezar sent everyone to the other world and Jamie was sent to the basement, I think it was a very well done sequence of things on and on
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
right outta the gate with that, ok well mine so far is the same as braves
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
brave is brave
tthe nightmare fuel doesn't phase her
dawgofdawgness
I gotta read this
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
psh
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I'm skimming for a bit just for some refresher
snuffysam
that scene was pretty wild. just imagine walking out of a basement and seeing everything just gone
including your family
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip fam
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
and the entire neighborhood around you
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
not only that but the houses were taken out directly
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
yeah jamie's face was particularly great in that moment of coming to see the destruction
Nattosoup
That is a really good scene, but I have to admit, my favorite is the opening, if only for Jamie's great expressions
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
oh hey Natto!
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Hm, I really liked the dinner scene the best. http://chronicles.fenauriverse.moe/comic/57 I feel like the depth of the situation she's in kinda hit her while realizing she doesn't have to be alone
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
she held it togather rather well considering everything that happened
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
More comics need dinner scenes
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
The scene with the space ship was funny tho
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yeah that was great
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
"What does this button do?" OOPS
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
It's all been a relatively short amount of time so I imagine just.. .the sheer feeling of being overwhelmed is what's keeping her from being a sobbing puddle
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
"how do i work ship"
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
"how to ship" "how to space"
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
how to ship by jamie step 1, you don't
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Ginley is so adorable
I like how she's so thoughtful of Jamie
mama ginley
Nattosoup
I second that @Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
she seems like such a sweetie
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ginley is adorable, a little blue bean
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
aren't most of the characters in this comic adorable one way or antoher
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I like Tai cause I like kinda cold guys
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
tried to be realistic on how one would feel being swung into such a situation loool
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
yis
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i like that panel of ginley being like "im actually 53 years old" that is too perfect of an expression
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I know deep inside Tai is a cinnamon roll
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
maybe he is a cinnamon roll
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
cinnamon boys
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
yes that
she's 53
XD
MathTans the Pun Prince
Made it. ^.^ Yes, I liked the flying of the ship too.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
95% of him being a cinammon roll that got fucked up so bad hes cold to everyone now(edited)
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
lol
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
hi math~!
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
also ello Math
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Kope is so interesed in doing tests at Jamie tho o_o I don't trust him
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
its funny he's cold even tho his element is fire /shot
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
they just need to put tai into the microwave. thats how you deal with cold cinnammon rolls
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
No Rebel
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Ginley is my fav so far.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
That'll kill it(edited)
MathTans the Pun Prince
I'm looking forward to the tests. Could be inkblot tests.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
you madman
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Kopheru needs moar tests. But I wonder what kind of tests
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
KABO
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rebel no, when you microwave baked goods you need to put in a bowl of water too(edited)
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Yes
Give the cinnamon roll water too
he's thirsty
snuffysam
i know i am
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
math tests @Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
maybe he'll do some blood test and such
Unless he wants to find out something else
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Math tests? But what's he testing? ;3
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
o-or Kophe is not that nice......
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
"math" tests?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i wonder what kind of tests indeed
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ko needs to know eveyones limits and what not
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
quadratic equations
MathTans the Pun Prince
Eh heh, testing the math skills. Need to be able to triangulate where the villain is.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
pecs tests
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
best intro
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
the kind of tests thatll make tai peak around the corner and glare with his cinnamon roll intensity
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ko's face, pure fuck off right there
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
loooooooool
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
maybe those are the tests. jamie knows the secret and must die now in a freak lab accident
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
GASP
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I wonder who's the passive tho
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
oh boy
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
ships
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
So, if Jamie's doing math tests and she's like, some incarnation of the protector of fenaur or whatnot
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Mhaaarz, she0s 54!
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
me when I see any of Cali's cahracters
snuffysam
we at the rampant shipping part of the chat already?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
but brave, fish girl loli
MathTans the Pun Prince
First task is to define "Fenaur".
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
ALLL ABOARD
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
does this make her a derivative? So... If there's math tests... Are we calculating an instantaneous rate of change?
bad bad bad bad bad
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
sam, when it comes to cali's works shipping happens very often
MathTans the Pun Prince
Jamie's had everything already change for her.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
jk brave
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
i know
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
but they are adorable together
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
yus
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
they are
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
dammit who's the other sam in here
snuffysam
...me?
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
oh
hi I'm also sam
snuffysam
cool hi
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yeah them
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
loooool
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
huh
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
will the real same please stand up
sam*
/shot
snuffysam
i mean this isn't my real name so i guess kabo
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
XD
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yes jamie you're ordinary
MathTans the Pun Prince
Anyone ship Jamie with the ship?
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Kophe: "I imagined you more..... unordinary" Jamie: "whut"
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Jamie needed nekomimi
snuffysam
she's got a dang moon on her head
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
"i thought you would have four ears" "who the heck would have the need of four ears "
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
When you can't hear enough?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
all the hearing
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
that is true
she does have a strange moon birthmark
:V
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
jamie shouldve really invested into sailor moon cosplaying
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i think i had some sort of sailor moon-esque poster in her bedroom
MathTans the Pun Prince
"No, no, I'm sailor mercury, don't be fooled by the birthmark."
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
or i had the thought of doing that but didn't Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I like how Kophee said he'll run tests on her non-chalantly
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i don't remember
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Oh, yeah, there it is http://chronicles.fenauriverse.moe/comic/5
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
sailor darkmoon, some one get on that
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
He just wants to make sure Jamie doesn't have blue blood
MathTans the Pun Prince
Yeah, it was nice to see her room and some normal stuff before the weirdness kicked in. Didn't happen too fast.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
>tests
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
feels
MathTans the Pun Prince
Until, y'know, it all happened.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
ooohhhh boy
Dat birthmark
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Ohh I see Sailor Moon now
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ha
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
theres zage and krubby cameos
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
AAHHH
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
huh
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
omg
zage
where's yo hair?
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
the frog was kopheru's spy camera the whole time
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Captain Reference is dying over here
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
dun dun dun
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
does that count as cheating on Tai
lol
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
that would depend on the rules of their established relationship
did they agree not to see others
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
they're currently very close friends actually
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
so thus its not cheating
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Jamie has chance
brb I'm gonna grab something to eat
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
who knows, maybe future characters for jamie
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
yes
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
or does she have a chance
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I ship kophee and jamie
tai so jelly
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
heehee
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Kopheru's running tests to see if Jamie is going to get in the way of him and Tai
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Can i brush his ears
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
so is it a super alien lie detector test
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
so much shipping fodder in this comic, and not much has really happened
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
yes
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
gonna strap her up being like "Do you think Tai is attractive?"
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Cali make the ships happen
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
a ship already happened
jamie drove it
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
HA
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
there can be mroe than one
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
LOL
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i don't think they can fit more than one giant ship at the base
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
jamie didnt drive it tho. kopheru did with science
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
oh yeah
joke failed
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
inb4 kopheru is the ultimate antagonist who has been pulling the strings all along
MathTans the Pun Prince
It was on autopilot. That was a nice touch.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
how could you call this pretty face evil
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
I WANNA HUG HIM
MathTans the Pun Prince
"I flew the ship!" "It was set to come here."
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
cali, you draw many evil pretty faces
we can call that evil too easily
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
yes
yes
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
inb4 ginley was also in on it. never trust the nice ones
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
gasp
both mamas of the group being evil
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
NO, BLUE BEAN WOULD NEVER
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
how can it be so
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
plot twist
everyone is evil
MathTans the Pun Prince
Was there a cast page somewhere? I's so bad with remembering who's who. >.<
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
everyone is evil? Makes sense. fenaur is hell :'3
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
http://chronicles.fenauriverse.moe/characters
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
;3
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yep
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
thank Cali
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
its not entirely finished but ye
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
what, Ginley being evil?!
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
man character description goes here is a very detailed descrip, cali
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
the face of evil
MathTans the Pun Prince
Thx Cali. (Oh right, that Ginley.)
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I think Kopheru is evil
snuffysam
hot take of the century: dezar is evil
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
always the evil scientist huh
MathTans the Pun Prince
Because of the monocle?
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
he has all the evil traits
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
oh hey this character profile for tai spoils kai
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
wrong face lmao
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
might wanna fix that cali
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i purposely put that there lol
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
to be fair idk how much of a spoiler kai is tho XD
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yeah
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
oh that
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
he's actually coming up real soon
MathTans the Pun Prince
Who was the one who sent Jamie off in the ship again?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
Kinna
a guardian
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
oh rly
MathTans the Pun Prince
Right. Very suspicious.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
sub god pretty much
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
Kinna the vague is her official name /shot
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
the good sub god
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Kinna looks kind of similar to Zage's species
does that mean Zage's species are closer to God in a way? or descendants?
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
QUESTION 2. After some moping around, Jamie resolves to train and save her parents. Do you think she’s truly emotionally sound or is she hiding everything and doomed to have a breakdown? Will she pick up on the training or will she find out she’s ill-suited? What sort of training will she even experience? Do you think she will succeed in saving her parents or will it end in failure? Speaking of all this, what role will the guardian Darzak have in Jamie’s failure or success?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
i think that might be a coincedence
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Dat face shape
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
woops sorry rebel lol
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Hmmm
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
well jamie is definlty going to need to get stronger, honestly she shoundlt go out there in her current shape, its not enought for what shes going up against
snuffysam
I think she'll have several breakdowns in the future. Doesn't mean she won'
t get stronger
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
many breakdowns, yes
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Jamie's doomed to have a breakdown before Darzak shows up and gives her a "you have the power" speech. But Jamie's gonna have a looong road ahead of her before she can go after Dezar, I think
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I think Jamie is truly emotional about the entire thing happening, she's going to train and all but, honestly, I think she'll fail somehow. But i have the feeling it won't be completely her fault that she might fail
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Also, Jamie's mom? totally gonna die, based on the hair style alone. XD
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Jamie is bottling up currently, so the breakdowns will go against her
lool true
Nattosoup
whoa, gosh, that's a lotta questions hidden in one question! 1. Given the fact that she's 16, she's probably not really prepared to emotionally handle all this- it really is a lot at once. Having a breakdown sooner is probably better than later, because then people will better know how to help her. I hope for her sake she's naturally suited to her training, since she's already juggling so much, it would at least be one thing that wasn't a struggle. 3. I think she will eventually succeed in saving her parents, but of course the hero's journey has lots and ups and downs, so I assume there'll be a couple false tries in there, or maybe a couple failures while she builds up her skills and her strength.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
poor mom
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Yea
MathTans the Pun Prince
She hasn't broken down yet, though it's been a bit close, she's just needed processing time. I think the trouble might come if she's given too much time, to actually realize how dire things are.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
she might be... I figured a training will trigger some kind of trauma within her
MathTans the Pun Prince
Maybe juggling is part of her training, Natto.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
heehee
when does the breakdown hppen
Nattosoup
I'm sure it'd be useful bonus training, and then maybe she can juggle knives
MathTans the Pun Prince
That's a good intimidation tactic. Don't mess with the girl who can juggle knives.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
lol
What else cna she juggle
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
idk if id trust the warriors to be able to help her, natto. if only because while theyve tried to make her feel welcome, i dont think they themselves have a good grasp or understanding on what shes going through. cause they arent the aliens, she is and she's solo in that endeavor at the moment
so if she does breakdown i dont fully trust them to be the ones to pull her out or help that much
but thats not bad, just means she gotta find that inner strength
MathTans the Pun Prince
Interesting point. They can't even give her ice cream or anything, they have weird foods.
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
You know, maybe Jamie'll throw everything into a battle, before realizing it's all futile and having her breakdown. She does something terrible, that she can't take back... Aaaaaaaand then Ginley forgives her. :'3
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yus, they don't know the feeling of being stuck on an alien planet lol
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
yay they're friends now! :3
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Ginley is best
:'3
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
F R I E N D S
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Mama Ginley loves her adopted children
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Yup, they won't be able to become a good emotional support for Jamie for when she gets the breakdown
also they kinda treat her as DarkMoon
not as Jamie
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
everyone else is grump to jamie's failure but ginley is like lets snuggle and have hot cocoa poor child
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
did someone say
hot cocoa
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yes
you can clearly see that(edited)
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
yeah thats a great point brave. theyre seeing her more as her past incarnation i think
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
They don't understand she's another person this life, that will give troubles
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Ginley is the most accomodating one
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ginley is best mom
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
yis
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
best tiny mama
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
topmom
MathTans the Pun Prince
Agree, good point. Wonder if Jamie should read up on her past incarnation? Would that help or make it worse?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
worse
snuffysam
well for starters, something bad must have happened for a new incarnation to even be required
so that won't be fun to read
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I suppose The Fenaur warriors have very high expectations of her
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yeah
snuffysam
second, i doubt trying to be someone she isn't would be helpful in any way
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
they might think Jamie can fight and all
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
i can imagine they'd have very high expectaions
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
when they realize she can't do anything of that, they might change, get upset and stuff like that
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
poor jamie
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I can see Tai flipping about it
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
-_-
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
or just get crushed by the realality of that
MathTans the Pun Prince
True, true... I guess I was wondering if it would help to not reinvent the wheel or whatever. But Jamie doesn't need extra trauma.
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
"WE ARE DOOMED! She doesn't have all her powers as DarkMoon! What will we do when they come after us?!"
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
yeah i am interested at least to see if they comment on it when the training starts. are like man i miss darkmoon
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
"I was promised DarkMoon, not this"(edited)
MathTans the Pun Prince
"....but you;re cool too1"
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Tai would be harsh for sure
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
the harshest
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Ginley would try to still have some hope in Jamie becoming Darkmoon
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
what is Light Moon
or Light Sun
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
where did you get that?
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Ginley will be like no you're being too harsh on Moonie
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
its also a bit difficult for them cause they're not used to her being a human instead of the thing she was before
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Jamie: STOP CALLING ME DARKMOON runs away to the forest
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip jamie
MathTans the Pun Prince
We humans are confusing creatures.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yep
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Jamie will get mad being compared to whoever her previoius reincarnation is
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
as anyone would
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
lol
was her previous incarnation Light Sun?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
no, it was darkmoon(edited)
snuffysam
pretty sure it was dark moon yeah
thats pretty explicitly said
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i cant wait to meet darzak and darzak is also like "man i miss the real dark moon"
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Darzak appears and be like who is this wimpy girl
snuffysam
the real dark moon had great one-liners! she was fun at parties!
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
loooooooool
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
and wasn't human
now they got jamie
its almost like a hand-me-down super person
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
or maybe darzak will be best dad. be like "nah its okay dark moon actually sucked. i mean dark moon is dead so...."
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
lmao
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
oh dear, won't that suck XD
"Your fate's basically gonna be the same, but it's okay kiddo. You'll be born again"
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
and again and again
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
ooh Kabo
MathTans the Pun Prince
Did DarkMoon have to go through training?
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
and again and again and again and again and again and again
what about LightSun
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
probably mat
there is no light sun
thats not a thing
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
it was a joke
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
you kept bringing it up i couldn't tell
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
inb4 it becomes a future character
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
darkmoon might've been easier to train than jamie
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I mean everyone has to go to training
<.<
MathTans the Pun Prince
Wondering if results will be inevitably compared.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
>.>
MathTans the Pun Prince
"Your pulse is too fast. Calm down."
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
"but i can't calm myself"
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I suppose Darkmoon is like this cool person who can do things effortless(edited)
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
very cool
with glasses
sunglasses
snuffysam
i mean, how long has it been since they had to train someone new? presumably dark moon was at least 40 before she died, right?
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
for extra darkness
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
probably older
they age very slow
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
to be fair tho is it ever explicitly stated they trained dark moon
MathTans the Pun Prince
DarkMoon used to wear sunglasses at night.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
fair point rebel
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
maybe dark moon trained them
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
i used to do that too
never too dark for me
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
Darkmoon didn't live for very long
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
>level 88
holy ship
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
gasp
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip moonie
MathTans the Pun Prince
Napples is shocked at this line of questioning.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
lol
RIP moon
snuffysam
compared to the rest of them who are in their 50s? or like... she was a teenager or something
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
had to open my massive fenauriverse Timeline to remember when she died lmao
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip
MathTans the Pun Prince
Right, sometimes I forget their age.
Ooooh, massive timeline exists, cool.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
she also didn't particularly
have an age
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
what
how does something not have an age
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
she was mentally a teenager
yes
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
no, how
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
sips soda in spoiler land who knows delta, who knows
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
REBEL DON'T YOU TEASE THIS
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
SODA
SHARE
MathTans the Pun Prince
"How old was she?" "She was... old enough."
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
SHARE THE SODA
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
she only lived for 2 years
MathTans the Pun Prince
But they were a long 2 years.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
rip soda girl
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
but she was very important to them
thus the trying to welcome her back into the fenaur warriors
(edited)
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
actually gonna say, surprised their memories are still so attached just because id assume she was gone for as old as jamie is. and 16 years is a long time
snuffysam
well then, jamie is like 8x as powerful, right? given how much longer she managed to survive
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
QUESTION 3. Though we’ve met the Fenaur warriors, we’ve yet to learn a lot about them in the course of the story. How do you think the warriors formed and for what purpose? Why do you think the group is so small and/or was the group larger in the past? How do they know Jamie’s past incarnation? Lastly, which warrior are you most intrigued to learn more about?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
considering Jamie was on earth not on fenaur for those 16 years lol
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
I'm gonna take my leave for a bit
if I don't come back, thanks for having this CTP! (edited)
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
mmmm yes fenaur warriors
snuffysam
if there weren't more members in the past, kai's personality would be a bit silly
MathTans the Pun Prince
The group is small because having powers is at a premium, maybe. It all comes down to a few people.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
yes
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Darkmoon trained them
:V
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
probably they were a smaller group originally
snuffysam
didn't the group lose a few people, and that's why kai is so grumpy? so if some people were lost, there must have been more people in the past
MathTans the Pun Prince
They went into the forest and remain lost to this day.
snuffysam
they're dead, jim
well i suppose one of them got better
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
there were more people in the past
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
they're all ded aren't they
O_O
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
probably
MathTans the Pun Prince
They're pining for the fjords.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
or just left
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
dead
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
welp
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
"Tai is the leader of the Fenaur Warriors, who attempted to retire years ago but the deaths of the new leader and another member made him take the role once more. "
snuffysam
@MathTans the Pun Prince well, I suppose I'd better get a replacement then!
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
that is from tai's chara profile
MathTans the Pun Prince
Extended vacations.
snuffysam
<brings jamie>
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
Tai's grumpy cause he tried to retire as leader before
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
"i'm too old for this shit" - probably tai in the future
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Tai goes to retire
next leader dies
Tai returns to service
rinse and repeat
snuffysam
maybe dark moon was supposed to be the new leader?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
i can see that
snuffysam
she was pretty young, but she seems well respected among the warriors
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
well to be fair dark moon is connected to the creator so you have to respect someone like that
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
too bad about the sudden case of death
MathTans the Pun Prince
Is Tai getting paid extra then? Hm, are any of them getting paid, or do they do this out of the goodness of their hearts? (And the chance to experiement on people. I like Kopheru.)
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
they're not getting paid lol
God King of Mecha, Time
how do they get food then
snuffysam
they got a house though, so thats nice
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
voluntary work
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
barter, stealing, growing it themselves?
snuffysam
do they have to pay rent?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
probably hunting and might have a greenhouse somewhere in the base
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
thats how they keep losing members. cannibalism
MathTans the Pun Prince
O.o
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
I came back to cannibalism
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
perfect timing brave
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
looooooool
MathTans the Pun Prince
They keep eating cannibis?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yes thats how they stayed sane for so long
smoking pot
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
so that's how they make magic
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
no wonder they don't get any work done then mat(edited)
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
LOL
MathTans the Pun Prince
It's what's in the greenhouse.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
i have a picture of them when they formed the fenaur warriors
if you want to see
snuffysam
yes
please
MathTans the Pun Prince
Hopefully they get paid in rewards or the being able to look young or praise from citizens.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
internet still being semi-slow rip
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip ko, freshly lost eye
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
ginley so adorable hugs ginley
snuffysam
or he just preferred the bandage look
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
ginley is always adorable
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Kophe looks so young
MathTans the Pun Prince
Oh my. o.o I don't think I even realized Kopheru couldn't take off the eyepiece due to vision issues.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yeah he replaced the lost eye with a bionic eye
which is what the eyepiece is
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
robo eye, best eye
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
it's so he can scan the others bodies for anything
MathTans the Pun Prince
Learning things by studying The Borg.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
like parasites and hidden injuries and etc
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
but thats no fun
if your gonna have a have robo eye you gotta trick that shit out(edited)
MathTans the Pun Prince
Though that's a handy skill, the scanning.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
needs more lasers
MathTans the Pun Prince
Add X-Ray vision. For looking at people in their underthings.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
mat plz
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i hope it really creeps jamie out at some point. shes like "how did you know i was injured" and kopheru just says straight faced "oh i scanned you"
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
gasp
Kophee would never do that
<.<
>.>
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
also notice joah has actual arms
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
O_O
omg
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yep, no robo arms yet
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
also ginley so adorbs
is it ginley?
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
yes
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
oh no
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
he had to relearn how to control his earth powers with his robo arms
MathTans the Pun Prince
I guess the event that decimated the group also had consequences for them.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
earth metal bending
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rip rehab for powers
yes mharz, metal bending his arms
snuffysam
so dark moon definitely wasn't a founding member, given that she's not here. nor was the other person that was lost.
MathTans the Pun Prince
Relearning powers is a skill Jamie could make use of.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
they joined later yes
it was after a big war
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
big war you say, thats never good
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
that may or may not have costed joah's arms
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
welp, got cool robo arms out of it
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
omg ginley was so cute and little
>late to the party
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
the pain probably knocked him out
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
tiny 13 year old ginley
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
seems a little young for war service
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
cause when i form warriors, i always pick the 13 year olds
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
she never grew since that age
height limit reached
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
hey, in Ginley's defense, I haven't grown since I was 13 either XD
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
omg cuties
yeah i'm back
snuffysam
'sup
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
nothin much
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
XD
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
ginley's race are that small anyway
so she's technically adult height
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
yis
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
lmao
snuffysam
that's a good question though. how were the warriors chosen? was ginley just insanely talented at that age?
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
yeah i was about to say her species is just super tiny
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
a race of water beans, yes we need more
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Imagine them suddenly emerging from the waters
all looking like ginley
MathTans the Pun Prince
I wonder if we will meet others of their races?
Or see pictures in books?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
they weren't chosen
they banded together themselves
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
so they each went "fuck all this bad shit, lets kill it and bring good shit"
that right?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yus basically
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
just gonna put out a reminder, fenaur is a shit hole planet. so umm everybody at risk for dying anyway
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
cool
MathTans the Pun Prince
They were trapped in a greenhouse on the same day. Decided to have a club.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
LOL math
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
math?
MathTans the Pun Prince
Fenaur still technologically superior to us though.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
In MY comics?
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I'm curious why Ginley split and became a fenaur warrior
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
will say that they banded together in response to "The Dark Apocalypse"
which was a huge disaster that occured
many years ago
snuffysam
thats a pretty big name to drop lol
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
its the reason why the planet looks the way it is
MathTans the Pun Prince
All were very upset that it didn't turn out like "The Happy Apocalypse". False advertising.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
LOL
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
PFT
MathTans the Pun Prince
"There were supposed to be unicorns." "Whelp, nope."
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
what would a happy apocalypse even look like
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
everyone die will smoking weed
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
MLP
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
rainbows killing everything rebel
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
ah well that sounds pleasant. as long as someone is screaming "Taste the rainbow, motherfucker."
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
people explode into bubbles
snuffysam
the rivers will run red with cherries
MathTans the Pun Prince
I think that's what the Morgan Freeman voiceover says, Rebel.
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
every person exploding comes out confetti from inside
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
killer rainbow
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
but anyway, yes, the dark apocalypse. very bad thing. made planet bad
rolls around in spoilerland cali halp why do i know things
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
not fun times
MathTans the Pun Prince
I wonder if "dark moon" and "dark apocalypse" is coincidence.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Rebel knows everything
O_O
snuffysam
explains why we haven't seen many other people on this planet yet, at least
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
but there are
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
and ginley is with the fenaur warriors cus she was found by joah
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
of-screen
O_O
MathTans the Pun Prince
Theory: Everyone else is actually invisible.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
oooh
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
fenaur is not heavily populated you could say
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
rat boy found her huh
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
cali do you think one of your maps would be a spoiler?
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I don't think so?
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
QUESTION 4. Throughout the story others reveal that Jamie is the true target, as her connection to Fenaur’s creator makes her the hope of the planet. However, little else is revealed about the enemy Dezar’s motivations. Why is destroying the hope of planet Fenaur important to Dezar? Is Dezar working alone or is he just a puppet for someone else? Is going after Jamie personal or is it “business?” Is destroying Jamie indeed the true goal or is there something else planned for her? Is Dezar telling the truth that the parents and everyone can go free if Jamie cooperates? What other theories do you have about the antagonist(s)?
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I doubt Dezar would let them go
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Because Dezar's a jerk
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
sits in spoiler land no idea rebel
MathTans the Pun Prince
I figured Dezar would come up. I think it's a "business" thing. Maybe Dezar wants everyone to leave the planet, start over somewhere else, but others don't. So needs to destroy the hope, so they can move on.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
by the look on his face, he seems reluctant in kidnapping them
so yeah I think it's a business thingy
snuffysam
i guess dezar wants to conquer what little population there is left, and he needs to destroy everyone's hope to do that?
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i guess the map wouldnt be a spoiler since it is just posted on the site.
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Considering Dezar appears on Psychteria, we can think he doesn't work alone, better say, he works for someone else. So either it concerns him or not, he'll go after Jamie. I don't really think... rather, Dezar might want to believe that's what will happen to the parents and rest of ppl in there
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
which map though
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
the one you have on your site
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
psychteria's or CoF's
oh
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
since psychteria's is close enough
snuffysam
this one? http://fenauriverse.moe/world-info/
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
yes
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar got lonely. Wanted some house guests. Once Jamie shows up for tea time, he won't need her parents or all the rest to chat with any more.
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
as you can see there is much desolation thus not a huge population
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I'm baffled where Dezar took the buildings(edited)
snuffysam
lol why is the warriors base in literally the worst place?
if you're in End Land maybe consider moving
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
CoF is really the story of dezar's quest for a pleasant tea time XD
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
TEA
MathTans the Pun Prince
Mharz: Good point. Could he be able to miniaturalize things?
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
they wouldn't expect a force group in the worst place ever!
just strategy
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
cus the people was in some kind of prison
but where did he hide the houses
O_O
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
he hid them in his backyard(edited)
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
PFT
all stacked up
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
there was also pets that got caught up in the transportation laser lol
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
Dezar wanted a new house but didn't want to buy one
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
don't see them
Queen Brave ✨Hikari✨ shinybean
so like this he has plenty houses to choose from
MathTans the Pun Prince
looks at map peers a bit suspiciously at Tombs
Dezar wanted to be in real estate when he was young.
Dezar is also possibly good at stalking.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
<.<
snuffysam
here's a question- why does dezar specifically want to kidnap jamie? after all, if he wanted to kill her (to kill the hope), he would have used a destroy laser rather than a transportation laser...
MathTans the Pun Prince
Given how Jamie was found.
snuffysam
does he need her energy or something like that?
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
It might be cus there's a chance Darkmoon will get reincarnated to another person?
MathTans the Pun Prince
Maybe it can only be done at certain days of the year to work.
SirDelta God King of Mecha, Time
well she is connected to kinna, so who knows what they could do with that power
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
also yes brave its possible he's working for someone
🎵Tenor🎶
-Slides in like a bat out of hell-
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
it might be better to keep her alive instead of endlessly looking for the reincarnation
over and over
O_O
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
HI TENOR
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
ya know in retrospect its a good thing dezar didnt succeed cause now jamie has darzak which means two creator connected powers for the price of one
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
ARE YOU JOINING US
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
hi tenor~!
🎵Tenor🎶
YES
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
yaaay
🎵Tenor🎶
SORRY WAS AWAY SICK :(
-SCROLLS UP TO GET QUESTIONS-
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
aww
rebel should pin the questions
<.<
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar is working for Kinna. It's all a massive plot.
snuffysam
not like it's a hard rule to follow the questions
everyone is secretly working for everyone else, and nobody realizes it
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yus
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
it's not but at least it's a guide for a convo
it's true we tend to stray from the questions
🎵Tenor🎶
Q1: Favorite scene: Honestly love the introduction of the warriors. It's overwhelming yet still informative and really helps seeing everything through Jamie's eyes at the moment, the poor thing :<<< Really helped that "Well shit now what" feeling I'm sure she's got at this point in the story
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i can start pinning them if ppl really want but as snuffysam says the questions are just sort of prompts and not hard guidelines
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar and Kinna ship.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
gasp
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
omg
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i like that point, tenor. i did enjoy that it was overwhelming in a way that capture jamie's feelings nods
🎵Tenor🎶
Q2: I do believe the reaction is a reaction based on not knowing your options. She's young, this seems the only answer there is to do. Do I believe there's a future breakdown? Oh many. :D Because while this might be the only thing keeping her from snapping now doesn't mean it's not gunna get worse for the poor thing. Personally I hope it's a case of the training does have bumps just because I'd like to see the warriors have way more an influence on her. She's new to this - the warriors have been doing this shit for years, so I'd love to see that natural reflection in the story. On the parents: OH DON'T GET ME STARTED I'M STILL PISSED AT MOM LET'R ROT /shot.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
so much feels
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
gasp a tenor
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Dezar kills her family, Jamie goes unleash super power(edited)
🎵Tenor🎶
gaep a me
gasp*
And yeah I know while the questions are just a guideline it also saves a lot more time and gives me something to contribute instead of trying to catch up to nearly 2 hours of content and just dumbly nodding my head.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
Jamie turns to adult
🎵Tenor🎶
Which I imagine might be worse for those with social anxiety ;)
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
ill start pinning the questions for future chats then
MathTans the Pun Prince
Jamie was her own mother the whole time.
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
assumingiremember
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
rip
Math that's not possible
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
likes the idea of Jamie using moves learned from being trained by the warriors
🎵Tenor🎶
3. Common denominator of "Well shit now what" is how they formed I bet /shot. Okay no seriously, typically in war scenerios you become associates through combat not because you want to, but because you need to. I'm not sure yet how to think about her past mostly because I want to imagine they've all been around forever and just "UGH THIS WAITING SHIT IS DULL". Most Intrigued Warrior: Snake baby whose name I can't spell /sorry Cali OTL. BUT FAVORITES ARE MOM AND DAD WARRIORS SUCH CUTES. :D
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
snake baby the coma boy?
🎵Tenor🎶
IDK if he counts as a warrior.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
not yet at least
🎵Tenor🎶
Then I'm counting him /shot
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
being they just found him in a coma
looooool
🎵Tenor🎶
Your talks here really have me curious about him
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
also you can call him just Shou
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
:0
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
oh rly
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
he's in the thanksgiving wallpaper
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
DAT HAIR
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
ooooh
MathTans the Pun Prince
Cali, out of curiosity, do you find it difficult writing a sort of prequel comic? Or is it all the same to you?
🎵Tenor🎶
Q4: I have no idea on Dezar's motives other than: Dude you destroyed/moved an entire city and missed the basement levels bruh, IDK what little you knew of Earth architecture to make sure there was no possible way to miss CONSIDERING THE RADIUS OTHERWISE but- But no based on that I don't think destroying her is either A: The goal, or B: Dezar is being ordered to but doesn't want to so does the absolute "bare minimum" to make it seem like he's doing his job
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
its more difficult since i'm rewriting what was essentially my very first story lmao
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
im sorry tenor but that last bit makes me picture dezar as a minimum wage employee working at like target stocking shelves at a pace of one item per minute
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
LOL
aw if i had my tablet pen i'd draw him in a store uniform stocking shelves
🎵Tenor🎶
Rebel: I mean. He's got the expression of someone who's 500% done with the world's shit
if that's not a retail worker IDk what is /shotshotshot
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
and he more or less has the same expression in psychteria
MathTans the Pun Prince
Ahhh, interesting.
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
which is decades later than CoF
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
so weve established dezar is the min wage employee
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Lol
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar kidnapped the people to have some customers?
🎵Tenor🎶
Boss said to raise sales
he's paid by commission
sooo /shot
MathTans the Pun Prince
"You can go if Jamie buys all the goods."
🎵Tenor🎶
xDDD
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Wait, is Dezar still... in the situation he's in from Hunter?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
he's not in that business yet
lol
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
:'3
welp
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
CoF came before HoF
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
I feel like I remember there being a timeline floatin' around somewhere
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i like how kabo phrased that "in the situation" so delicate XD
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
so it was waaay after that?
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar eventually leaves retail work, gets into real estate. Sells buildings with no basements.
🎵Tenor🎶
WHEEZE
I mean, what else ya gunna do with all that?
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
HoF takes place 9 years before Psychteria
lol
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
Dezar becomes a real estate mogul
then is locked in a laboratory of one of the people he sold land to
🎵Tenor🎶
oh god a sales person with that look.
MathTans the Pun Prince
Jamie needs to stop him before he gives people subprime mortgages.
🎵Tenor🎶
Intimidation factor to his stats
"You will buy this house"
Kabocha, Marquess of ✨Sparkle✨
It's a deal to die for
🎵Tenor🎶
Literally
snuffysam
the date is listed underneath the comics on the main site. CoF is 39 years before HoF, HoF is 8 years before psychteria
or at least their start dates are that far apart
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
yeah
MathTans the Pun Prince
I wonder if we'll see more cutaways to what the antagonists are doing.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Yeah indeed
MathTans the Pun Prince
Is interesting.
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
on snap two mins left
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
was having trouble trying to count ty sam lmao
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
XD
snuffysam
lol np
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
dezar got so many years of min wage employment left
Deity Cali of 💤SPEEDS🎨
so imagine how old the fenaur warriors must be
in psychteria
lool
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
ancient
🎵Tenor🎶
xDD
If Mom's not like 80% robot by that point I'll be saaed.
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
they're great grandparents
MathTans the Pun Prince
Dezar seems to be getting paid more than the Fenaur Warriors though. Might explain why the fighting.
🎵Tenor🎶
LOL
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
i wonder if i have that hypothetical old lady ginley doodle somewhere XD
🎵Tenor🎶
The FWs are the union workers
They're all on strike
Lady Mharz of ✨Pretty Women✨
I wonder if Jamie's mom knows something
she seem to know something
O_O
🎵Tenor🎶
Which is why Dezar's pissed he's picking up all their damn work
Superjusting of ✨Time🕑&Space☄✨
Of course
MathTans the Pun Prince
Mharz: Good point. Knew to get Jamie in the basement. Maybe there was a prophecy.
✨🐱 RebelVampire 🐱✨
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