#turns out translators are bad at translating my words so I write the english version most by myself :(
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roachie141 · 8 months ago
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what is your favourite thing about roach ☝️
Thank you for asking :))) sorry for answering so late, I wasn’t in good headspace in the last few days.
I found it difficult to answer in English so i wrote it in Chinese and translated it into English.
我觉得小强这个角色最有意思的地方就是,这个角色大半的特点是由同人作者塑造出来的。不像幽灵和肥皂这些角色,幽灵有他的个人漫画,肥皂更是贯穿了整个老三部曲,而小强在原作中没有说过一句话,更是连脸都没有,原作透露的信息屈指可数。这里我也数一下原作中一些关于小强的小细节:
这小子跳跃能力有点问题(笑)虽然叫小强但是两次重要的跳跃都失手了呢😂
肥皂日记里肥皂对比了小强和年轻的自己,提到小强也写日记
贫民窟逃亡的时候按检视武器他会自己和自己玩石头剪刀布(好像是左手出布右手出剪子,他甚至会剪自己手(笑)
谢菲尔德拿走DSM的时候他抓住了谢菲尔德的手被甩开了
甚至后两点似乎是重制版才加上的,所以说小强是一个为了增加玩家代入感而几乎没有任何设定的角色,因此在同人创作时并没有什么ooc的说法,小强的同人作基本都是作者的hc,这也是我喜欢画小强的原因之一,不用想会不会ooc,因为这就是我心中的小强。不过小强的同人作也有很多相似之处,比如选择性缄默和蟑螂须。像选择性缄默这样的设定在现实中肯定是不可能存在于军队中的,但这是同人文,反而是一种很有趣的设定。实际上我一开始并没有注意到小强,我是在看幽灵的同人文的时候发现还有人写小强的,结果马上爱上了(笑)所以我会喜欢小强很大原因是因为优秀的同人作者。感觉有点跑题了哈哈,但是我很少思考这种问题,想到什么就写什么了
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I think my favourite thing about Roach is that many of his traits are created by writers and artists in the fandom. He’s not like Ghost or Soap. Ghost has his backstory comics. And Soap? dude has a full character arc throughout the whole trilogy (and his diary). But Roach, our bug boi, didn’t speak a word in the game and doesn’t even have a face. aaaand here are some CANON details I know about Roach fyi:
this boy has problem with jumping lol
soap compares roach to his younger self and mentions roach also writes diaries in soap’s diary
when escaping favela, if you press inspect weapon, he plays rock-paper-scissors with himself (left hand is paper and right hand is scissors, he even cut paper with scissors
when shepherd takes the dsm, roach grabs shepherd’s arm but get thrown off
You can see that there are not many things we can tell from the game, even the last two were added in the remastered version. So I think most fanfics and fanarts are their creator’s headcanon, and that is really interesting. This is one of the reasons I like drawing Roach. I don't have to worry about whether it's out of character, because this is my version of Roach. And things like selective mutism and antennas? COOL!! Characteristics like selective mutism wouldn't realistically exist in a military setting, but in fanfic, it's an interesting concept. I didn’t pay much attention to Roach at first tbh, I discovered fanfics about him when I looked for Ghost fics and immediately fell in love with this little bug lol
So, one of the main reasons I love Roach is because of the talented content creators in the fandom. I feel like I've gone off on a tangent, haha, but I rarely think about these kinds of questions; I just write whatever comes to mind.
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yeetushaitus · 2 months ago
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i will defend capcoms translation of aai2 to hell and back because ykw if it gets more eyes on this game then im all for it but theres just. ONE thing that gets me about the new translation dont know if i can explain this very well but whatever ill try
also HUGE HUGE spoilers for AAI2, PLEASE dont read if u havent played the full game
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ok so. i was just listening to a steamer play the collection in the background and at the end of the 2nd convo w simeon in ch2 i heard this
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and thn i backtracked and noticed that he kept calling knight by his first name
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i was like "huh did he always do that? swear he called him by his last name in the fan translation" and turns out he does
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the only reason i even remembered that was bc in the flashback convo in ch5 between knightley and simon, when simon calls him horace it REALLY stuck out because up until this point basically nobody has called knightley by his first name, not even his best friend
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imo his own best friend calling him by his last name kind of foreshadows the emotional distance simon feels towards knightley and just. dude this was SO intentional
and in case youre wondering, simon calls knightley by his last name, 内藤(naitou), in the japanese version too until the goodbye part where he calls him マノスケ(manosuke)
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usually manosuke is written out with kanji, but when he says it here its in katakana which is only used for loan words blah blah blah ok
if im wrong sue me but using katakana like this is either a sign of closeness, like how in japanese edgeworth calls kay ミクモくん(mikumo-kun) in katakana(also probabaly partly bc he doesnt speak formal japanese with like. anyone?? see this post) or emphasis like how capital letters are in english(obv its not a one to one comparison but whatever u get it)
my japanese isnt the best so. take this w a grain of salt BUT
basically. the use of katakana emphasizes his use of knightley's first name so this was TOTALLY an intentional thing(bc otherwise they wouldve just written it normally) that the localizers just i guess opted to ignore???? or maybe im just a crazy person whos watched like every lets play of this game ever and im reading too deep into it
tbf its a REALLY small detail in the grand scheme of things but with how carefully every detail that hints to simon's identity as the mastermind has been planted in this game, its kind of sad that a lot of players will miss out on this
ANYWAYS sorry it was 2am at the time of writing this and im so bad at explaining my feelings but. hopefully this made sense idk i dont write good but like im convinced this flashback and this line specifically is like at least half of the reason i love manosouta
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sumerianlanguage · 6 months ago
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Hello! I was wondering if you had any advice for writing a song in Sumerian? I have been writing lyrics for a bit and I have always been interested in ancient languages so I wanted to know how I should get started. I have some ideas swirling around in my mind as the music I have been writing is very soulful.
Hello! What an interesting question - I haven't done any songwriting in Sumerian myself, but I have practiced by translating modern songs into Sumerian, which I think gives a little insight. On my twitch stream we once translated Call Me Maybe by Carly Rae Jepsen - a song that is not written for easy translation, it turns out! But it taught me many things about the interaction between Sumerian phonology/grammar and lyrical composition.
One thing I've learned is that sentences in Sumerian often use fewer words but more syllables to convey the same information. "I'd trade my soul for a wish" is seven syllables, but it's nearly impossible to convey the same meaning in Sumerian in less than nine: Zinga ashta shu gabalan. So if you write music with a strict syllable plan, prepare to convey less information per line; or to convey the same amount of info, prepare to sing "faster" (i.e. cram more syllables into a line).
Another important issue is that Sumerian sentences always end with a verb. This makes rhyming a different experience than in English - rather than having two "impact nouns" rhyme at the end of the sentence, common in many music genres, you instead have to rhyme the verbs, and often the verb conjugations. (Here's a post about how this functions in Sumerian poetry - I've linked the in-tumblr version since the on-blog version seems to be rendering out of order, and will also reblog it after this post.) Creative liberty with concept structuring can help: "You took your time with the call / I took no time with the fall" is most easily translated by making call and fall function as verbs: Ullabi gu numaden / Annga ullabi shuben "You didn't call me quickly / But I fell quickly", still a slant rhyme but helped by the fact that the first and second person conjugations ("you called", "I fell") often look identical.
Note that we can't rhyme ullabi "quickly" with the second ullabi since they're adverbs and can't end the sentence or clause. Though in my translation of the chorus, I use namga "perhaps" as almost a final exclamation in order to pull it out of the sentence and slant-rhyme with annga "however": Uda muraten / tumidim, annga / shidngu murabban / gu hemaden, namga "I met you today / a wild act, however / I give my number to you. / Call out to me, perhaps!" (Another really useful word in translating pop music is gana "let's go!" or "yeah!", which is an interjection and thus can stand separate from any clause like this.)
And one final tip: Keep your sentences simple! This is both because of the verb-final structure - Sumerian sentences don't "trail off" in the same way they do in English - and because English loves to use helping verbs, weird time-clauses, etc. that you rarely find in Sumerian. One long, languid English sentence is often best matched by several shorter, choppier Sumerian sentences. It's really hard to convey the combo of time-sequence and counterfactual in the phrase "before you came into my life, I missed you so bad", unless you're willing to spend a whole verse of the song to do so, so I ended up just simplifying it to Zae namtila ekur / Ngae namurashen "You entered my life / I wished for you a lot".
I hope that's helpful! Do check out my Sumerian music tag for more, including examples of actual ancient Sumerian lyrics (not to say "Call Me Maybe" isn't timeless and eternal in its own right). And let me know if you have further questions or any translation I can help with!
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dadvans · 8 months ago
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missing language.
if livejournal posts were still real. this would be it.
i started learning japanese when i was 11 years old, around early summer 2000, from my aunt from okinawa. she would practice with me in the gazebo when she and my uncle would come to visit for family reunions in the midwest, and would continue to buy me tapes, movies, CDs to start learning the language.
my school district was one of the lowest in the country growing up. we had a prestigious japanese immersion charter school, and after a disastrous middle school year, i ended up applying and being accepted. grades four to twelve. each year we were in different (sometimes abandoned or condemned) buildings up until halfway through my freshman year. despite occupying abandoned churches and gymnasiums, we had the highest test scores, and most exclusive college acceptance rates in oregon. it was either that good or that bad. we all hated each other the way family hates each other.
i won my division three years running for the oregon japanese speech contest through my ninth grade year.
i moved to japan two days after my sixteenth birthday. the year and a half that followed was not easy. i had a host family for a period of time that constantly kicked me out, starved me, and found other families for me to live with. i had another family where the host dad tried to molest me twice by taking me to remote locations. when i became fluent, really fluent, around the 6 to 8 month mark (long after i passed the JLPT 3 at the time, which is now closer to JLPT 2), after months of isolating myself in the computers at class to speak english to abroad friends for an hour a day, i told my japanese school friends, and they were horrified. they stepped up in ways i never knew. it wasn't usual for someone to be so forthcoming, and yet they all recognized it as an extreme circumstance, invited me into their inner circle. my home room teachers took notice and would take me out for lunch. my host family situation was codename ONI BABA, and even another family that eventually took me in would refer to her as such, when i asked if i could borrow her koto for a public concert (yeah, the one instrument it turns out i'm a prodigy at is okoto. Played my first concert at a local Obon festival within a week of starting. Talk to me about how Hana Kage is a fucking bitch. this version of 回転木馬 was what i was performing after a year. if you can find my old livejournal account, i guarantee there is a really terrible version recorded on my motorola razr still live).
by the time i was seventeen i was allowed to be on payroll to act as a translator for a month-long "jan-term" project with my mom in japan, where we took about 13 students across the main land. back at my american school i was writing all my essays in japanese, in the style i had been taught in japan (it was WILD to relearn how to rewrite english essays when living abroad-- that shit does NOT translate sometimes).
i went to college. i was immediately accepted into the higher ed programs my school provided. they were working toward offering a major, but only had a minor present. i signed on for level 300 with 8 other students.
the professor hated me. that is the nicest word for it. she would have typos on her quizzes. she would make fun of my hokkaido accent. but the worst part was when i was sexually assaulted by one of the other 8 students in the class, went to her during office hours to request that she not pair me with that student out of fear, and then she proceeded to exclusively pair me with that student on projects.
i was also learning i had a learning disability, but the student union health center refused to directly prescribe me medication for my disability, or refer my outwards--what happened instead was i was put on a prescription that had not been recommended outside of extreme epilepsy (carbamezapine), and when i expressed my fear that it was resurfacing suicidal tendencies, the doctor in charge doubled the dosage and encourage me to kill myself.
it was an ordeal. it was an ordeal that i documented. it was an ordeal that by spring 2008, i was accused of cheating on a test i got less than 30% on because i was so fucking out of it by a woman who would only partner me with a man who had sexually abused me. and when i confronted her about it on tape, with a medical transcript of what i had endured for the past year, i have a recording of her saying, "I don't need a piece of paper to tell me that you have problems."
Anyway, she went on sabbatical to adopt a kid the next year. Idiot sex pest remained in my classes, but god, he really sucked. I had to leave through most of my 400-level classes because I was working a lot. Most of my classes were essentially unpaid labor where we were translating books and providing subtitles for movies that were ready for American distribution. Half of my classmates my second year were born in Japan and spoke Japanese better than English but were able to cop out a foreign language credit, and they were honestly my favorite friends in the class, even if that's a steep fucking grading curve. Asshole teacher appeared once my spring semester, but knowing she took the year off, I actually completed my minor degree my sophomore year in early 2009.
And then I never really spoke Japanese again.
And it's hard. Whenever I'm introduced to media, I'm like, god, I forgot that. I remember that. I knew that, once upon a time. I remember conversations in English that weren't in English. And I remember when I was in my senior year of High School, I would be speaking Japanese and forget that I was speaking Japanese, that sometimes no one else except my teacher or friend who were equally fluent understood too. I miss that feeling. I feel shame, sometimes, at letting it go. I know I still have the pronunciation and local dialect, but it's hard to be reminded of how much I forgot.
When I started learning first, very close to when I was still fluent, Indonesian, and more recently, French, my backup language in my head has always been Japanese instead of English. My wife used to tell me I had a Japanese accent when I would try to speak French (fun fact: one of my friends in Japan was learning French and spoke zero English, and only then did I understand the horror of French phonetics), and it took me literally over a month of quietly practicing my R's in my car when I would get home from work for her to be like, oh you sound like a regular Anglo (read: white boy trying so hard and yet).
Whenever I get back into the mindset of becoming fluent in French (mandatory!), and restart the journey from where I left off these past years, I ache something fierce and weird for my Japanese. It is, surface level, a sense of failure. I couldn't hold onto you, I wouldn't have known how to try. There were obstacles. There were so many bad memories. And yet, sometimes I will be in bed with my wife, and she will be watching a Japanese show, and I will be like, "Did he really say that?" and she will say, "Oh God, I forgot that you knew Japanese."
Some things are bone deep and will probably never go away. I guess I'm still in mourning for the language that I lost as I continue to learn a new language. I want to be better, I know I can be better this time! And yet, I'm afraid that every step forward, I'll lose what I have of my second language identity. I have already lost so much.
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nekoannie-chan · 8 months ago
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Opportunity
Opportunity
Title: Opportunity.
Fandom: Marvel, Captain America.
Ship: Pre-serum!Steve Rogers X Reader.
Word count: 322 words.
Square: B2 “Pre-serum Steve.”
Rating: Teen.
Summary: You were looking for Steve to join the army.
Major Tags: Fluff.
Additional tags: This is my entry to @steverogersbingo Steve Rogers Bingo round 3. SB3090.
Links: Wattpad, Ao3, Spanish version.
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My native language is Spanish so I wanna improve my writing skills in English if you notice any mistakes, please let me know and I will correct them.
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You read the forms Steve had filled out in different places, then you saw the photographs, and finally Erskine.
“Are you sure about this, doctor? “you questioned, your voice sounding skeptical.
“He's the one we need to test the serum," Abraham confirmed.
“There are other candidates; I'm not sure he'll stand up to the experiment." You had too many doubts, the main one being the reason why the doctor wanted to send you to find Steve.
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You closed your bag after taking out the paper where Steve's address was written down. You turned to see the street sign; it seemed that you were close. You didn't know the place; maybe you should ask. You approached a lady who was arranging fruit.
“Excuse me, do you know how to get to this address?"
The woman gave you directions; you only had to walk two more streets. You looked for the number of Steve's flat and knocked on the door.
Steve was startled when he heard the knock on his door. He hoped it wasn't some debt collector; sometimes they wanted to trick him by telling him he had to pay his mother's outstanding bills, but he had taken care of that several years before, and now he was living debt-free.
When he opened the door, he was speechless. He wasn't expecting anyone, but he didn't think he was going to meet you either.
“Are you Steve Rogers? “you asked, although you knew that if it was him, you simply wanted to confirm it.
“It's me."
“You are to attend the army post on Monday, as indicated on the paper," you informed him.
“Did they accept me?“ Steve asked.
“Of course, and if all goes well, we can go for ice cream together afterwards," you proposed.
"But I can't eat ice cream."
“If you join the army, you can," you assured him.
Maybe it wasn't so bad working with Dr. Erskine after all.
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aromantic-enjolras · 5 months ago
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20 questions for 20 writers!
Thank you @pumpkinspice-prouvaire for the tag! Let me see what I can do with this...
1. How many works do you have on AO3?
Holy fu- Fourty-four??? When did that happen????
2. What’s your total AO3 word count?
122,025. One third of yours, pumpkin!
3. What fandoms do you write for?
Currently Les Mis and Jesus Christ Superstar. I used to write for Cats a few years ago, and I wrote Sherlock and Harry Potter once upon a time. I also wrote Stranger Things once, but that was a gift for @p-trichor and I don't think I will again (writing about characters from a show you've never watched is stressful!)
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Rumour Has It (Les Mis, ExR Prof AU). Good Enough To Eat (Stranger Things, vampire Steddie). Merlin (TV) according to Ao3 (Merlin, not technically a fic). Ne m'aime pas (Les Mis, aro!Enjolras). Sleepy Love (Harry Potter, Wolfstar). my beloathed, so happy it's almost out of the top 5
5. Do you respond to comments?
I try to!! I love getting comments, so I do like getting back to people. Though sometimes someone leaves a comment so elaborate and so kind I freeze at how to make a good enough response and I never do. So... @buffintruder I promise I cherish every single one of your comments please don't be hurt if I don't answer!!!
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Uuuuuh.... I guess depends on your definition. If we're going for implications, it would be "A Kiss With a Betrayal (Is Better Than None)". Nothing that bad happens, but it's the setup of Judas' betrayal of Jesus, and shit gets daaark after that. If you go with actual sad ending, "I Wanna Ruin Our Friendship" would have to take it. Enjolras cries so much in that one.
7. What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
"Curiosity Trapped the Cat", probably. It's just so cute!
8. Do you get hate on fics?
Not anymore, thankfully! When I was a fandom youngster I got a very angry comment on a Jily (Harry Potter) fic from someone who was enraged Lily didn't end up with Snape, and someone who ripped me a new one for using a word that turned out to be perfectly neutral in my native language and a slur in English.
9. Do you write smut? If so, what kind?
I do! Not often, but I have a PWP on Ao3, actually. For some reason I only do it as a collaborative effort, though: the Courfjolras PWP on Ao3 is a joint fic with @pumpkinspice-prouvaire and I have two Courfjoltaire WIPs with @shamedumpster (called "In the Middle (While you two get along)" and "Skip the awkward (come undone)" ^^).
10. Do you write crossovers?
Same as pumpkin here. I don't do crossovers, but I do love myself a good AU!
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I know of!
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Does it count if I was the one doing it? My first fic, the Jily one I was saying, I wrote in my native language and then translated to English. The two versions are on ff.net!
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Yep! Apart from the aforementioned Courfjolras PWP, I wrote a cute fluffy ExR with @pumpkinspice-prouvaire for the Ace!Enjolras series. Also depending on how you see it the Jesus Christ Superstar is a joint effort with @shamedumpster, even if we are writing separately each bit.
14. What’s your all-time favorite ship?
Why don't you ask me to choose a favourite child? Might be easier!
15. What’s a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will?
A rockstar AU where Courf is an aromantic Bowie stand-in and Marius is his main guitarist and fuckbuddy who gets too invested. I love it, but it's a longfic and I'm not good at sticking to those. (And also it's a Sad Ending rarepair fic. Who is going to read it?)
16. What are your writing strengths?
I think I'm good at keeping people in their POVs and not slipping into omniscient narrators. Descriptions, too.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
I get stuck on logistics. Sometimes you just have to handwave shit, you know? People don't need to know when they put the cup down or the position of every guard.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic?
As someone who is always reading in a language that isn't mine, if I can read an entire fic in English, you can read two sentences in another language and their translation if it works for the character. My caveat to that is in Les Mis fics: do not suddenly have characters say five words in French if they're already all French. It just breaks the illusion that they were speaking French the whole time.
19. First fandom you wrote for?
And posted? Harry Potter. In general? Percival Christopher Wren's "Beau Geste". I hated the ending so much I wrote an entire Fix-It ending.
20. Favorite fic you’ve written?
"Still Crazy After All These Years", a Courferre second chance romance fic I wrote last year. It's a little more involved than I usually do, with a non-linear narrative and a non-linear writing process, and I think it turned out really well. I feel like the nuance of the situation was pretty well done, too.
Tagging @buffintruder, @quillsand, @shamedumpster and @enjolraspermettendo!
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fish-spaghetti · 1 year ago
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Zevlor x female Dark urge
Word count: 1484
Some stuff that is worth knowing before reading:
This is my very first fanfiction in English and English is not my first language. I tried my best to avoid crazy typos and insane grammatical errors but there may still be some. (And I am very bad at writing)
I am very sorry for creating ooc
I have absolutely no clue how to use tumblr
I named my dark urge as Tav because why not(shrug). And then probably some bugs showed up and the name of my character became the dark urge again. Funny thing is, this actually happened after she realized she is a Bhaalspawn.
I didn’t mean to create her as an idiot, it was an accident and I messed up the stats so she turned to someone who has int 8… thought it will be fun to explain this as “she forgot everything”
Not a “happy ending”
I am so so so sorry
Right, there you go:
Zevlor remembers her, even after all these years.
He's grown old, to the point where he has to squint to see things clearly and needs to hear things repeated three or four times to understand. No longer agile and swift like before, he relies on a cane to move slowly. He forgets many things – a cascade of memories slipping through the sieve of time. Names of people he had once known became elusive, faces blurred into the fog of forgetfulness. Even when he was walking down the familiar streets, midway through, a sudden lapse of memory would cloak him, leaving him standing there, questioning why he started the journey in the first place.
But he still remembers her—the way she looked and her smile. He even remembers to help her clean the armor and gloves hanging in the room every morning. And that blade, her favorite, named "Phalar Aluve." He put it next to the armor, still remembering the translated version of the drow inscription on the blade.
"I pulled it out. Hard. Pulled it out," she said back then, her sentences disjointed, as if it was a new language she started learning recently.
Zevlor remembers how she used gestures to help him understand what she was talking about. A young man, perhaps named Gale, used to kindly help her complete her sentences and pat her shoulder to comfort her when she got frustrated by her inability to articulate clearly.
After all these years, he still remembers her—her eyes, her messy hair, and the day tears fell from her eyes as she looked at him.
"I love you," she whispered gently, and with that, she jumped out of the window and disappeared into the night.
All that has vanished, leaving only a set of armor she loved but couldn't wear, the gloves he gave her, and that damn blade.
Zevlor, with a rag in hand, gently wiped the armor. Would things be different now if he hadn't told her about the things related to the Paladin? He clenched the rag and shook his head.
He remembers their first encounter. She and her companions helped them when the goblins attacked. Afterwards, she threw a punch at the human boy whose name he had forgotten. An interesting young Tiefling, he thought, introducing himself and expressing gratitude to her and her companions.
She looked at him blankly, glanced at her companions, and shook her head, "No name. Don't remember. Gone." She pointed to her head, "Gone. Memory.Everything."
What happened next? If he remembers correctly, it seems that one of her companions suddenly suggested giving her a name. “We can’t keep calling you Tiefling all the time, right? ” But she couldn’t think of any name herself, she couldn’t even speak fluently. So they wrote down several names they came up with and let her choose. Zevlor helped with the name picking, he read those names for her, in case she forgot how to read, and added one to the list.
"Tav," she pointed to one of the options written on paper, then pointed to herself, "Tav."
She laughed happily, repeatedly saying her new name.
She used to have a lute, a gift from Alfira, she claimed. Her brain was like it had been pierced by countless holes, rendering her unable to articulate words and remember her name and her past. However, she still knows how to use a blade, cast spells, and even remember how to play the lute. She even performed a duet with Alfira and was shocked when she realized what she was doing.
Unfortunately, Halsin didn't bring the lute to him, saying Alfira wanted to keep it to commemorate the hero who saved her several times. Zevlor didn't say anything, just nodded in acceptance.
And her staff, she said it’s called the Spellsparkler and she loved it very much. She was an excellent sorceress, even Rolan agreed.
The staff went to Rolan. He said he was there with her before her final battle. He refused to give more details on what happened, just sighed and told Zevlor that she was no longer herself that day.
"She did it for us. She became a mindflayer." Rolan showed Zevlor the staff, "She gave me this staff before they left."
Zevlor felt jealous, jealous that he wasn't there as her ally. If he had been there, she wouldn't have disappeared like this. Even if the one sitting across from him now is a mindflayer, it is still better than the cold armor and other lifeless items.
He missed the time spent with her, the celebration at their camp where she sat next to him humming tunes, and her tail swayed to the music. He advised her to go chat with others and enjoy the rare moments of happiness.
"Tav.” She pointed to herself, “Wants to be with you."
He tried to continue persuading but was interrupted, "Zevlor, what is a Paladin?"
He explained it was about upholding justice and righteousness, to become a beacon of hope in dark times.
"What about Tav? Can Tav become a Paladin?"
"Perhaps?" he smiled.
After that, Alfira took her away to play a duet together. People gathered together and enjoyed the music. Rolan even joined, clapping and laughing on the side. He remembers how good it was to see their smiles.
Maybe it was that moment, or perhaps some other strange moment, Zevlor couldn't say, but he knew he developed some affection for her.
He had once thought he might not see her again. He got trapped in that nightmare, the sounds he heard were not just the screams and cries of people, and what he saw wasn’t just helpless civilians hiding behind him while watching everything burn. There was also her. She stood amidst the sea of flames, her eyes emotionless.
"You should have saved me," she screamed, and the fire ate her alive. Zevlor couldn't wake up from this nightmare. Desperation and agony enveloped him; he knew he was trapped in a dream but couldn't wake up. He saw his deceived self kneeling, begging everyone to surrender. And he saw the people he protected suffered. They looked at him with anger and hatred, calling him a traitor and a coward. But awakening came too late; he was already immobilized, helplessly watching all those tragic events they could have avoided. In despair, he immersed himself in the lies woven by the absolute. Beautiful illusions, where everyone survived and started new lives, and he once again became a Paladin. And there she stood by his side.
But he woke up again. It was her.
Once again, she saved him, after the Grove, she saved him again.
He thought she would blame him, or maybe she would slap him, or curse him as a damned traitor.
"But Zevlor, in my heart, you are a Paladin. Does oath matter that much?" She could now articulate complete sentences, walked up to him, placed her hand on his shoulder, and whispered, "It's not your fault, not your fault."
"It's not your fault," she gently touched his horn, "Go find them, I'll handle the rest. Trust me."
After that, Zevlor saw them a few times, but he didn't dare to approach them, only observing them in disguise.
"If only I wasn't a coward," he thought, cleaning the sword hilt with the rag.
There were many things left unsaid, but even if he dared to speak them now, she wouldn’t be able to hear. Every day, he repeats those words – words meant for her – to the belongings she left for him.
"Paladins uphold justice and righteousness, and have to become the beacons of hope in dark times." she repeated what he said that day, holding his hand against her face, "I can't be a Paladin. I am a Bhaalspawn, I did many unforgivable and cruel things before I lost my memory."
"No, you are Tav. The past you isn't the present you."
"But I can't erase what I've done." Her tone was calm, "But I have a chance to make amends, to end everything like a Paladin."
"I love you," tears rolled down her cheeks.
He wanted to follow her, but at the moment of leaving, he was hit by a sleep spell.
And then at that harbor, Halsin appeared with her belongings.
"Is this the place?"
"Yes."
"She killed herself."
"Yes."
"Why..."
"She turned into a mindflayer."
Halsin handed him the package, "Maybe you'd want this. Inside is her favorite sword, 'Phalar Aluve.'"
"I know this sword."
"Yes, and the armor she liked but couldn't wear. She said if she became a Paladin one day, she wanted to wear it. And... your gloves. She took them out every night before sleeping, saying it helped her sleep."
Zevlor remembered the sound of the waves and the mournful cries of seagulls.
He patted the armor gently and stood up with the help of a cane.
"I love you."
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silveredfeathers · 1 year ago
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So am I supposed to put a pinned post up or is it just optional?
Because I'm not sure what to put here but I see a lot of others with one... I live in Alola currently, I'm originally from Kanto, though I see Johto as my home region.
I mean I can put my trainer card post on this to make it easier to find so here's the link to that: LINK
I'm married to @trainerlynda and am dating @timetravelerpyrite.
Note to other Silvers: I AM NOT OLD
I made a website.
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//CURRENT ARC: N/A
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//Ooc and character info below the cut.
RULES:
- Anon Hate is IC only and I'll delete anything that goes too far.
- Please provide English translations if sending asks with other languages.
- Please don't make me add rules on purpose.
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Here's a list of ask games you can use if you want to throw an ask at Silver or me:
Headcanons (Writer)
Invasive Questions (Muse)
Pokemon Headcanons (Writer, please say it's for the ask game)
Never Have I Ever (Muse)
TM41: Torment! (Muse)
Memories (OOC Muse, don't send checkmark asks please)
Reporter (Muse, please say it's for the ask game so I can respond the right way.
Evil Team Propaganda can be sent Silv's way.
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CHARACTER INFO:
I'm going to add more info to this and make it fancy later.
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Rather specific tags:
#Wormholes Suck - Lore relating to Silver and Touya's past.
#Lore Crumbs & #Vague Lore Crumbs - For the most part, as it says on the tin, the post mentions something that happened before the blog due to my Silver being developed before I made the blog.
#Silver's Asks - Ask posts. This also goes for any tag that has the word asks in it (ie. #Magic Anon Asks).
#Chimera's Curse - Stuff relating to the "official" reveal of Silver being a hybrid to rotumblr.
#Mew out of the bag - [ARC] In which Gio was turned into part Mewtwo. The link is a masterlist of important posts.
#Fool's Faller - [ARC] Silver and Lyn first meet Pyrite in person here!
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This is a blog meant to represent my version of Silver, which means he strays from canon a little bit... Okay alota bit. This blog may also cover some serious things, but also participates in the general tumblr chaos. He will only be shipped with characters my BF writes, for comfort reasons.
He is 36 years old, his birthday being 12/24/1988, which makes him 11 during the events of the Gold/Silver games. He's married to @trainerlynda and dating @timetravelerpyrite. A bunch of dimension hopping related shenanigans and other such things that have happened to him. He is also transmasc and bi. If, for some reason, you don't like that, please just block me and leave.
He is a hybrid of Ho-oh, Lugia, and Silvally, due to Kenichi's (He is Lynda's halve of the universe's Giovanni's twin brother yes I know that's probably confusing-) scientists messing with him.
Silver's Boxes (Pokemon List)
Artwork with this Silver in it:
His current pfp, drawn by me
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Reference sheet, drawn by me
In between form and concept drawing of the full form drawn by me
Silver and Puppy, drawn by @/yewwantstobattle
Silver helping his wife calm down after some shit happened, drawn by me
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WRITER INFO:
I am 21 and am kinda new here. Please let me know in private if I end up talking to someone bad, I likely genuinely didn't know since that info is scattered pretty much everywhere.
Follows and likes are from @zoranaroleplayhub and sometimes @messyzoranablog. Asks are primarily in anon.
Any art that I post will be credited accordingly. If it is not labeled, then it's my own work or official.
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OTHER THINGS:
Ho-oh and Lugia Feather Properties - A headcanon post about the abilities different feathers Lugia and Ho-oh have, since the Silver and Rainbow Wings have their own special thing going on with them. It's in the format of old explorer journal pages. These headcanons will sometimes be referenced by Silver and are here for ease of finding.
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bobafett · 8 months ago
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stealing this because the boops made me realize how much i miss tag games.
How many works do you have on AO3? A grand total of 14. I am not a prolific writer.
What’s your total AO3 word count? 63,880. Please see above answer.
What fandoms do you write for? Batman and Star Wars. I have a little bit of Supernatural fic posted on an alt account, and I've been turning over an idea for an OW fic in my head for a while, but it takes me a long time to figure out how to write in a fandom in a way that still captures the "vibes" of the source material (which is always one of my goals). So I rarely branch out.
What are your top 5 fics by kudos? New Cornerstone (suitless!Vader AU from a million years ago), Brothers in Arms (Jon starts to get an inkling that his best friend has perhaps not had a normal childhood), Setting the Bone (Selina Kyle: reluctant parental figure), In This Twilight (Damian and Jason brotherly bonding, first batfam fic I ever wrote), and Try to Sweep the Darkness Out (batfam Christmas special that I've almost orphaned 10 times because I hate the writing choices I made in it so much). None of the fics I'm actually proud of are on this list. Tragic.
Do you respond to comments? Irregularly and unpredictably! I will if I feel like I have something to say and it catches me in the right mood.
What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending? Uh, that would be High Water Mark since it starts with a scene of Cody contemplating suicide and ends with the instant right before Order 66 kicks in.
What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending? Probably Problem Solving since it's the only fic I've ever written where I was actually trying to be light hearted.
Do you get hate on fics? Never, thankfully.
Do you write smut? If so, what kind? If I thought I could do it successfully, I would. But I'm not, so I don't.
Do you write crossovers? What’s the craziest one you’ve written? Basically never. There is a Doctor Who/Sherlock fic buried on my old FF.net account. There's also a Super Smash Bros fic on there that I wrote in 2009, which I suppose also counts.
Have you ever had a fic stolen? I can't imagine why anyone would.
Have you ever had a fic translated? Nope.
Have you ever co-written a fic before? No, and I never would. I'm too much of a control freak about my writing. Writing, say, shared universe stuff might be fun, but actually co-authoring something would drive me nuts.
What’s your all time favorite ship? What a question. I come back to Jaime/Brienne a lot for reading, but I don't think I'd ever write it. I write a ton of BatCat, but rarely read it because I'm particular. I like Lois/Clark, but I almost never write OR read it. I'm honestly not very ship motivated. Most of the time I filter for a ship because I'm in the mood for its attendant tropes, and if the writing is good, you can sell me on just about anything.
What’s a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will? Hmngh. New Cornerstone again. There's 20k of an expanded version of it on my hard drive that I haven't added to since probably 2017. There's something very fun about suitless!Vader as a character because he's such a sparking, destructive livewire of a person, but also I'm experienced enough now to realize how difficult doing justice to that premise is. Also, I'd have to rewatch TCW to get Ahsoka's voice down, and I just don't got time for that shit.
What are your writing strengths? Description and sense of place. Also pretty good at dialogue.
What are your writing weaknesses? Fucking. Long fic. Plot in general. I'm horrifically bad at it.
Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic? I'm usually inclined to keep all my dialogue in English, but it would depend on the context and the effect I was going for.
First fandom you wrote for? Purposefully? Inuyasha. Without having any idea what fanfic was? I created an Artemis Fowl fairy OC and stuck her in Indiana Jones when I was 10 years old.
Favorite fic you’ve written? They Don't Sing Songs For Me. No contest. It's perfectly captures what I think is the ideal form of fanfic: two characters who have absolutely no business interacting with each other building a compelling relationship dynamic over the course of 9k words.
I will be tagging @panharmonium, @apostatefrog, @dead-ghost-walking, @ryehouses, @yellowocaballero, @lazuliquetzal. Also anyone else who wants to. I will bring back tag games by force of will, so help me God.
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spacecadetomoly · 2 years ago
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Matsuno Family Diary! Part 5: Valentine’s Day with Choromatsu! Get ready for Chocolate and Body Horror! (Unofficial English Translation)
The following is an unofficial English translation of an official short story released online for members of the official Osomatsu-san fan club. If you want to read the original Japanese version of the story or enjoy the other things the fan club offers its members please consider joining: https://osomatsusan-fc.com/
In the room of the Matsuno family sextuplets there is a notebook hidden away behind a bookshelf. This notebook exists so that the brothers may, should they so choose, express the deep feelings and profound thoughts which weigh upon their hearts and minds so heavily that they can no longer be contained.
It seems that today someone’s hand is once again turning the pages….
February 15th 2022, Choromatsu
My name is Choromatsu Matsuno. No, the one who used to be Choromatsu…
Now that I think about it, the day before, February 14th, that was the last day we were human…
First, it was Karamatsu.
Suddenly, he started emitting a sweet smell, and then his body twisted and melted. From his mouth, he uttered incomprehensible words “Ai Rabu Yoo, Yoo Rabu Mee”*
Next to go was Jyushimatsu, then Todomatsu, followed by Osomatsu. The last remaining holdout aside from myself, Ichimatsu, ran out of energy two hours ago.
I am writing this diary alone now.
My brothers, who have become chocolate monsters, have merged into one being. There’s no way of knowing which body parts belong to who anymore. Even now they continue to spit out words of love from their misshapen mouths.
How did we end up like this? I’ve developed my own theory: Perhaps… because we didn’t receive chocolates from anyone on Valentine's Day, the love within us became corrupted and turned into an enormous amount of negative energy, mutating our bodies into the very same chocolate we so desperately craved.
I too…probably won't make it. My hands are shaking. My eyes are getting misty. I want to write one last thing down. In order to not produce any more sad monsters like us….
As an adult, unless you have a boyfriend or girlfriend, you don't get many chances to receive chocolate. We NEETs have even less so. So, all the virgin NEETs in Japan, please take action sooner.
Get a job immediately. It doesn't matter if it's a part-time job or whatever, just work in a place with a lot of girls. If there's a girl who likes holidays and events, she might say, "Let's all prepare chocolates and distribute them to everyone at work." If there are no girls like that at your job, get down on your knees outside. Then a kind person who feels sorry for you might give you some chocolate. If that doesn't work, make your own chocolates and get amnesia right away. If you have no memory, you might be able to delude yourself into believing the chocolates are from someone else. If that doesn't work disown your mother, then you could count any chocolates you receive from your mom as being from someone who isn’t a family member. If that doesn't work either then create a country where you are the king, and once you’re a king you can make Valentine's Day disappear! !
You don't want to do any of those things? Too bad, I’m afraid this is non-negotiable. I used to pretend that the custom of giving chocolates to each other on Valentine's Day was just a scam made up by confectioners. My brothers were the same way, and look where that got us.
We’ve all become monsters, and there’s no going back. If this is how it was going to end up, I should have been honest sooner. I should have been honest with everyone. If I had just asked for chocolate…
It's too late now.
If there are people reading this diary, I want you to do whatever you can to get chocolate.
If you can just get a single piece of chocolate, just one piece from anyone in any way, you won't turn into a monster…
P.S. The erotic book was not taken by me.
Translator’s Notes:
*I think what he’s trying to say here is “I love you, you love me”, Valentine’s Day-induced eldritch madness makes it challenging to articulate.
I like this one, it's spooky! And I'm a sucker for when forms of media that are usually comedic do something spooky, hence why I rewatch all of the Simpsons Treehouse of Horror episodes every year in October.
Up Next: Ichimatsu is a cat.
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bilbosmom-belladonna · 8 months ago
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20 Questions for Writers
Thanks for the tag @lyntergalactic (like ten years ago, sorryyyy) and @spiritofthenortheners 💜💜💜
I played this back in December-ish, so some stuff hasn't changed but I'm happy to do it again!
1. How many works do you have on AO3? 16! Which is twice as many as I had last time I played this, woohoo!
2. What's your total AO3 word count? 254,307
3. What fandoms do you write for? So far, a couple different versions of Star Wars (mostly TCW) and also Stranger Things
Click to see the rest so I don't take over your dash!
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Maybe 10% Better (Stranger Things, Steddie)
Trying to Escape What You Can't Let Go (TCW, genfic)
Less Talk More Rokk (Stranger Things, Steddie)
Plans (Star Wars: Rebels, Kalluzeb)
TIED FOR FIFTH: A Flimsi Excuse (TCW, QuinFox) and Built on Bones and Middens (TCW, QuinFox)
5. Do you respond to comments? Hell yeah!
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending? A Mandalorian Comes Riding (TCW, Jangobi) is a pretty rough one.
7. What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending? Most of them Let's say Picture (Im)perfect (TCW, Waxer/Boil)
8. Do you get hate on fics? Not yet? 😬
9. Do you write smut? If so, what kind? I do! I really love to write smut that's fun and full of banter and a little bit of push-and-pull.
10. Do you write crossovers? Nah, not my thing
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen? Nope
12. Have you ever had a fic translated? Not yet, but I'm open to the idea!
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before? No, I don't know if I'd ever want to subject anyone to that 🤣
14. What’s your all time favorite ship? I am a ship slut not the sort to get locked down, but Destiel held my singular attention for several years in a row.
15. What’s a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will? As I think I said last time, a Foxiyo fic that I accidentally outlined to death. I think if I let it breathe I may resurrect it one day.
16. What are your writing strengths? Dialogue, I think, but I may be biased because I also think that's the most fun to write.
17. What are your writing weaknesses? I think I often get too caught up in what a character is doing and don't spend enough time on what they're thinking and feeling.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic? I've done a bit of Mando'a but I think it should just be a smattering, if at all. Otherwise, just write it in English and say that it's in [whatever language]. Like in Hunt for Red October where they zoom in on that guy's face and then zoom back out and everyone is just speaking English with bad Russian accents.
19. First fandom you wrote for? Star Wars: Rebels
20. Favorite fic you’ve written? At the moment I'll say Built on Bones and Middens, the QuinFox mystery fic I wrote for the 2023 Clone Bang. It's my longest fic to date and I'm really pleased with how it turned out!
No pressure tags: @whiskygoldwings @hellsbelle8675
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bad4amficideas · 2 years ago
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you are GIVING us stuff todsy man!!! can we get some more hcs (if possible) of Two-face, Riddler and Poisin Ivy? you can choose who to do if three is too much for you ☺
I'm posting random drafts. incomplete. And so. English with translator. I suppect this maybe even double posted. Uhm. Sorry for the inconvenience.
I've writing pre Two-Face in my previous post so here only Two-Face version.
Poison Ivy
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Although she doesn't show it, of all the maniacs throwing drugs at her, Bats feels cautiously (paranoidly) intimidated by Ivy (lots of sex pollen fics in their previous life and little time for sex in this life if that's they cares about it). Already in case their costume is fully masked and therefore with filters (Spoiler and Black Bat Type) but every time they faces Ivy they does not allow themselves to be touched afterwards and they decontaminates before changing.
But in the face of Ivy, Bats treats her exactly the same as Joker, Penguin or Black Mask of course. Which Ivy doesn't know if it offends her greatly or pleases her because you already know "the hammer of justice is unisex"
The fact that Bats is not seduced by pheromones does not mean that Ivy does not flirt, it helps to make the robins furious (and if they are hooked on top of that, lust-hate is a bomb that clouds their thoughts)
Batfam hated that Ivy would "go over to the neutral-good side". You can't imagine how much she comes to visit.
Ivy in her villainous days sent messages in the language of flowers to Bats. Complex messages of the type that not only the color but the number of flowers and certain positions or pairs count. I think I already said out there that Bats is "Dandelion" (affectionate).
Deep down all villains want attention because what's the point of leaving clues if not???
It means a lot to her that your relationship has been formed without drugs or seduction.
Two Face
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Bats' problems with Two-Face come when his "bad" personality stands out, obviously.
That being said, EVERYONE would rather have them stand out or be completely shut down than hear them BOTH argue about whether or not to kill Bats. They are like the angel and the demon of Kronk. And it's your turn to be Kronk. A very confused one.
I don't know why, but I imagine it half burnt, meat, red. And apart from the bicolor suits, using gray suits and red shirts. Don't ask. The villains of this Bats I think lean towards red.
Two-Face enjoys kidnapping Y/N Wayne and attempting psychological torture (I remind you that this side does NOT know that Y/N is Bats, the good guy does)
He never gets it so he ends up being like a kid who yells for your attention (and hits you, too). If you try to be patient and bring out his friendly side, he will make fun of you, as Harvey pleas for you (a bit Overreacting, gotta tell you, he ain't dumb, Harvey). If you don't get upset for once, however, he'll get mad because he'll think you don't care for him. Figures.
I personally think you prefer the Batman-Two Face relationship (OMG I turned this into Ladybug dinamics, kill me). Harvey will stay relatively low so as not to give you away, and your relationship is a totally different one as self-respecting opponents, although between us Two-Face is sadomasochistic everything Harvey hated getting bullied as a kid.
He likes to speak in absolutes. You spend your time speaking in gray. You are both stubborn as mules, no one wants to hear you argue when you are in a intellectual streak (everyone thanks Two-Face and his coin that there are not many of these situations), the minions (it takes me hours to remember this word, damn it) prefer to force the situation and hope for the best. Don't eat their heads, just break them.
Riddler
If you're waiting for Batman 2022!Riddler, stop reading now, sorry (I haven't seen The Batman YET, I don't like how Pattison plays Bruce, Batman is good though)
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You always try to sneak him a job to rehabilitate him. It does not work. Actively the one you try to rehabilitate the most.
In Earth-1T8 he has also created an Oracle-style cyber identity. You even have him in the soup. Between hacks and crashes he and Barbara have made your Batcomputer have mazes and minotaurs at the back doors.
Literally, if he is very bored sometimes he hacks all the satellites in the world to change a letter to a symbol or some extremely irritating nonsense (this is how he starts and works his way up to destroying the world economy if he is not listened to. Listen to him)
So you have your "unwritten rules" of "hey Bats, BaTs, BATS I have one new" "I'm coming Ed, don't kill/cause the death of anyone" "OK"
If he didn't put lives on the line to get attention and increase the difficulty of his puzzles, which is fucking stressful, you'd consider him a friend.
Everybody knows. Still Harley beat him in "frienemy n1". There is a disagreement between the two of them about that and whether or not Harley is still a villain although they get along pretty well.
Riddler is the first on fall -intellectually- in love with you. And he knows your secret identity. And he strongly suspects that you are 1. a rejuvenated any of your parents (this one saw Detective Conan), 2. a time traveler (almost!). 3. Clairvoyant or telepathic. He really leans towards the second option. What is terrifying.
And he kindly takes your identity into account when he programs his riddles. Another of the unwritten rules, there are things that ARE RESPECTED.
Have you ever told him, more seriously than jokingly, why don't you meet in a cafeteria to talk instead of meeting like this. The most critical hit, always leaves him baffled.
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squadron-of-damned · 1 year ago
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what is cithare i have never heard but i am intrigued
-karmaicperfection
hi! okay so.
Cithare is a Minecraft plugin- Actually more context.
My boyfriend's older brother is a software engineer whose life goes like (in his words) "I Came, I Saw, I Became An Adminstrator"- No more context.
Somewhen around second half of the 19th century a cook from a local castle carved several sculptures right into the sandstone rocks that are scattered through the local woods. While they are not the most famous of the set, the most prominent two in this story are the Chapel of Mary Magdalene and the Harper. (This is enough information you need to find out where I live, by the way).
Both my boyfriend and his older brother and several of our common friends are members of the local Scouts chapter.[1] They organise an annual mostly-Scout LARP-esque battle in the local woods with the lore being an alternate reality where the Harper statue (rock-carving?) is instead a zitherist and the capital of a fantasy kingdom this battle is fought over is Cithare (because Zithere looks weird). The Harper (Cithare) and Chapel of Mary Magdalene are important landmarks both for the game and orientation
If my memory serves right, the managed to do it precisely once before the Big Covid Lockdown came and stabbed the biggest pitchfork related to gathering a hundred or so kids together imaginable to mankind into it.
At which point my salty beanpole's brother and our friend and this friend's friend/ex-classmate said: "Hey, almost everyone we know has some version of Minecraft, at least a cracked one. It can't be that hard for a software engineer and two studying software engineers to write a plugin for Minecraft that would simulate score points for capturing points and killing members of opposing teams."
[1] I was part of the Scouts for, like, three weeks, that was until my mother heard the kids pledging loyalty and promised to unquestioningly obey the superiors.
At first it was one slightly altered map, duct-taped together code to keep track of score, and around a dozen of Scouts who were allowed to stay out of the bad past 10 PM. Currently it is a Discord server of 100 members, developing team of 12 people (activity varying). For now and the foreseeable future it is strictly CZ/SK and invite-only.
The plugin itself supports English (in which it is written), Czech (translated by yours truly and salty beanpole boyfriend) and Pirate Speak (translated by me, helped a bottle of gin and Alestorm for moral support and authenticity). The entire plugin is a dedication to the founding dev team being huge nerds who applied as much of Team Fortress and DOTA possible to Minecraft.
Currently the Cithare plugin has two alternating maps:
The original one, expanded and built upon, with 4 static capture points (called flags) and 4 travelling points (they remain in place, but only 1 of them is active at the time, switching activity through the game.) There are several points of interest
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Chapel of Mary Magdalene: the south-situated world spawn
Cithare: The capital of the kingdom in the middle, a static capture point. It is build indeed like a city, originally meant from rooftop-chase and parkour combat, usually just TNTed to oblivion
The Crossroad: A static capture point in the east, previously in a barren plain. Since it in the first five minutes turned into a crater with obisdian platfrom around the flag (beacon), it is now overgrown with trees which make it mroe interesting of a fight.
The Last Watch: A static capture point, a tower in the north. Current meta-game: Sniper's nest, unless Skydiver is allowed, then you need a blast-resistant sniper.
The Scarp: A static capture point in an underground cave in the west. Current meta: Either put water above the flag and waterfall down or slap a teleporter down there.
The Sunken Temple: An underwater travelling capture point in the central southwest sea. Current meta: Gladiator dominance.
The old sunken temple: The previous spot where the aforementioned travelling flag was, in the southeastern sea. Currently hosts the Carp, a miniboss, the killing of which grants a custom achievement.
The Fairy Rings: A travelling capture point on an island between two rivers in central southeast.
Grannny's House: A travelling flag on a floating island to northeast. It is inaccessible by other means than putting down blocks and climbing them or flying. Inside is a hostile witch named Granny. Granny's house is notably made of nether and twisted nether blocks with a crater on the ground below it. It has been moved. though I don't remember where the original location was
The Secret Sanctum: An underground travelling flag to northwest. My pride and joy, because this is when I joined in on the project. Guys were like: "People don't visit Zamar because is in the middle of hellish nowhere. Let's make a new one, and let's make it an underground dungeon labyrinth where people get lost." And I was like "Hey, I'm a DM, you need an underground labyrinth? I'll do it." And then I did it. And then everyone and their dog complained that they get lost in the labyrinth. and since above it was an irrigated field, they waterfalled down. So in the next patch I removed the irrigation and added new entrances. The Secret Sanctum is great.
The Ruins of Zamar: A permanently inactive travelling flag in the south in the ruins of an old city. Zamar is the Ancient Kingdom on the corpse of which Cithare was founded.
The Pirate Ship: A ship west of Cithare City in the sea, sevres as the spawn for the Pirate team.
Four elemental shrines which currently do nothing scattered through the far ends of the map, and the Altar on the mountain in the middle, close to Cithare, wher eplayers can sacrifice essences.
Then as a "big reveal" we added the Air map with which I helped a lot more.
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It features the same flags, because they are tried and trusty, with some changes:
Cithare flag is now indeed in the middle of the town, the place is more densely built over, so indeed there is town combat.
The Mines have replaced the Cliff, they are a large chasm. (The renaming was because "Watch" and "Scarp" in Czech sound similar and in voice-chat people got misnavigated because of that)
Rather than one big Altar for four essences, there are now four tiny altars for one essence.
The Mysterious Sanctum is much bigger and better navigable (in my opinion) than the Secret Sanctum, and also it is well lit. It has tons of loot, but most of it is well hidden. (Secret Cithare lore: Honey blocks in Sanctum.)
Zamar is now imitating the Deep Dark biome (I lovingly call it Shallow Dark), yes that includes the Warden, I think there is an achievement but not sure. There are ominous messages, though.
The Last Watch tower is not as tall, but it has dungeons.
There is an Airship rather than Granny's House.
The Fairy Rings are situated on a glaze terracota mushroom cap as an island rather than on a normal island.
The Glen has replaced the Crossroad, it is surrounded on all sides. Because of the Glen location we actually chose this seed for the map.
Speaking of, the entire map was generated in 1.18 Minecraft, so it is rather more vertical (hence the name Air. The original map, is known as Water, because it has a lot of seas). As such it features a lot of bridges and three flightpaths, as in you hop on a phantom and fly around the map as if it was a bus!
At the beginning of the game you get picked into a team. Players who are odd or come late end up in the Pirate team which doesn't aim for winning, it's supposed to sow chaos and help the losing team, they also cannot capture flags. After getting into a team you pick one of 15 (17) classes. Regular teams pick regular classes, Pirate team picks Pirate classes. Anyone can roll a class randomly with a 5 % chance of getting a class they dont' have access to (Pirates for regular classes, regular teams for pirate classes)
Footman - usually banned from play, meant to be granted to beginning players. Generates low bounty (score awarded for killing) unless it scores more than 3 kills in succession. Can't do anything interesting
King - Must be played in King's draft, only 1 per team possible. High bounty, can teleport teammates to themselves, shares food de/buffs with nearby teammates, has golden armour
General - High bounty, can buff teammates with a warhorn, has a summonable horse
Warrior - no interesting skills. Starts with better armour and weapons. "normal mode" class
Marksman - Can track a tag (knows who controls it) and can foretell weather. Can ender-pearl teleport and then teleport back to the original place. Starts with a bow. Sniper.
Scout - Can turn invisible, can masquarede as another player, can capture a flag with an arrow
Gladiator - Has a riptide trident, cobwebs and an enchanted golden apple, gains more score for killing successful players. Doesn't start with a pickaxe, can't use axe as a weapon, cannot use an elytra. Gladiator has been the subject of the most patch-fixes, getting and losing a shield, because of this class the weather is very customised and so forth.
Engineer - Has a portal Gun for placing two-way teleporters (only 1 pair can be active, teleporting has a cooldown) and a remote TNT detonator.
Quartermaster - funnily enough this one has existed, then it got deleted, after over a year it was made anew. Currently has a pocket ender chest through which they can put items to they teammates' spawn-chests, and permanent night vision.
Alchemist - has a store-mode in which they can buy alchemical reagents and/or potions. They gain weaknesses opposite to resistances. They get store-coins by eating honey and spider eyes
Mage - Swiss army knife of classes, has 4 spells. They may pick a specialisation which buffs 1 spell and gives passive abilities. The spells are: healing, confusing player's looks and names for enemy players, AOE fire dmaage, and targeted lighting strikes.
Skyriver - Usually banned, has a sturdy elytra, can drop a lit TNT.
Pirate - Pirate class, has a portal gun (pirated), Pocket Boat (AKA PokéBoat ) and Dolphin's Grace in water. Parallels the Warrior/Engineer class
Rogue Inquisitor - Pirate class. Anti-mage. Is immune to all Mage's spells, has Witchhammer - a book-weapon that sets target on fire. Parallels the Warrior/Mage class
Arbalist - Pirate Class. Has a rocket-launcher crossbow (Arrrbow). Parallels the Marksman class
Shapeshifter - Can turn into a skeleton (infinity bow), dolphin (water breath, dolphin's grace), chicken (slow falling), zombie (resistance 1), spider (night vision), creeper (self-detonation) or enderman (infinite ender pearl). Parallels the Scout class)
Raider - has a very fast horse and can debuff everyone around with war horn. Parallels the General class.
Currently there are no games (strictly speaking Test Sessions) planned, because it's the summer holidays.
If you are interested in the maps, they are downloadable: Water Air
(Look at the Sanctums, I am very proud of them :3)
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appatary8523 · 9 months ago
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As some of you already know, im writing a fanfic. I didn't planed it at first, it was just a small snippet, just an excuse to make some of my favorite characters kiss each other because nobody writes about it (?). It was some silly silly stuff, but it got out of my hands when I started going back, wondering why X character would do that and adding a bit more here and there. I hadn't realized when how much long it was until I planned on posting it on Ao3. After pasting it on Word I noticed first part I wrote was almost 30 pages long? I've never written anything longer than few pages, so, dealing with this long story is astounding for me.
Of course, I outlined the whole thing because I was scared of going forward with no direction, but the farther I get the more complicated everything gets. I start writing something, I have no idea what to do so I skip to another part, and then another and now I'm left with 4 parts loosely conected (?. The source material drops bits of information now and then and don't want to ignore it but I know my story will divert sooner or later. And there are things that have no explanation and I have to come up with answers, but I have no imagination to give a good answer.
The source material is not the only changing thing, it also happens with the story I "planned". It has changed so much already (because of course it was just a silly small text and now it isn't), but I think it's for better but still, changing one thing involves changing a lot, and I don't like the idea of not being able to change the past at certain pont (?).
Plus, the translation. Oh my God. When I'm translating I overthink everything. You know I'm not an English native speaker and my knowledge is quite limited, so, of course, I have to stop and double check every phrase or if there's an idiom for what I wrote. I also change a lot of things because I'm analizing the story a bit more and I notice flaws I didn't paid attention to when writing the Spanish version. And, OF COURSE I wanted a smut scene and that makes it way worse because I don't know how to write half of the things happening, good thing is already translated what one and I think it didn't turned out as bad as I thought? Idk. It's so time consuming but it has helped me to stay busy, also to practice, since I haven't been practicing my English (?). I just wish I had this dedication to work on my tituation project, but I guess that'll never happen lol.
I used to respect writers, and know I respect them even more. I don't know how they deal with words. Mad respect for real
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oyanachi · 1 year ago
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French sub translator here (and agender), though I've never worked for Amazon Prime (and thank you, no thank you). I was curious as to how the dub was handled (and dub is most of the time related one way or another to subs).
Two things:
- When working for streaming platforms, we usually don't have the best conditions to work on our translations (that is, for example, short deadlines). Although, once again, I've never done anything for AP, but I bet it's not that different no matter the platform. So, less time, unfortunately less care in our work, or fewer sleeping hours (so easier to make mistakes).
- about the neopronouns specifically, and believe me, I'd like to be free to use at least a "iel" when I'm in front of a nb character, or just even when we don't know who the line is referred to. And I know a lot of queer translators, or just translators who'd like to be more accurate to the original version. But actually, a translator is not that free. We have guidelines, and i mean guidlines about French, really. (Obviously, we also have terminology for names and such) Made by upper people, sometimes foreign producers (yeah, it happens), made by years of practice, made by observation. Even if neutral is used in French, it's not considered broadly enough to be considered an option by our guidelines. My checker would correct every little neopronouns if I ever tried to put one. (Not because they are against it necessarily, but because they have to according to the broad agreement on how a proper translation should be done) Another example, not with pronouns this time but a word: "sibling". Writing "frère et sœur" is so long! (And we have to keep subs short for viewers' reading comfort, it doesn't really work as close captions). But sometimes, we don't even know what gender, if any gender at all, is involved. I'm craving oh so bad to use "adèlphe", but it's not used enough to be considered an option, unfortunately.
But that doesn't mean it's not evolving! It is! But slowly. No one is arguing us anymore when we put a feminine version of any job (and that's a huge steps) and for nb character we rely on the langage épicène (which I have no f idea how it's translated in English XD), which is a huge word to say we rely on any words that doesn't change between masculine and feminine, or words who doesn't have gender instead (like "personne").
Sorry, that turned out pretty long! But in short, a lot of translators would like too, but are meant to follow guidelines that evolve more slowly than one would think. There's no enby erasure made on purpose. That, I can guarantee you. French users have to keep going on using our language, to keep writing it so that one day it would definitely be considered enough broad to be used in a translation.
Sub and dub translations are the last place where the language is updated, very few times the other way around. (Imo)
(Ps: I won't talk about the bad influence of l'AcaDéMIe frAnçAIse, or else it would take hours. I recommend watching Linguisticae on the matter, on why they're still here, useless and still effective, like a cancer)
(Ps2: I wrote it in English because I believe it shouldn't be that different for other gendered languages)
I watched go2 in English with English subtitles the first time, because I'm fluent enough. But then I watched it with French subtitles with some of my French friends. And that made me very upset.
Because although in English they use they/them pronouns for Muriel and Beelzebub, in French they replaced them by the translation for she/her.
I get that we have no equivalent in French for they/them. But we have a set of neopronouns that is becoming quite used and known and they could have used those instead of the pronouns of the actresses and erasing all this representation. It makes me so angry and it feels so wrong.
:( oh noo
Write to French Amazon? (...put up the barricades? :)))
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nekoannie-chan · 6 months ago
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Kites
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Title: Kites.
Fandom: Marvel, Fantastic Four.
Ship: Sue Storm & Johnny Storm.
Word count: 241 words.
Square: 4 “Kite flying.”
Rating: Teen.
Summary: Sue wanna fly some kites with his brother like when they were children.
Major Tags: Fluff.
Additional tags: This is my entry to @marvelrarepairbingo, @marvelrarepairs Marvel Rare Mini Event Spring Fling 2024. SFW Spring Fling Bingo Card #3.
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Sue was looking for some things in the boxes they had in the attic, she smiled when she found the old kites that she and Johnny used to fly when they were kids or just wanted to get out of trouble.
She couldn't remember the last time they had flown them, plus the situation that all the superheroes were going through right now was too stressful, so maybe it was time for them to make some space for themselves and get back to the activity they enjoyed so much.
He didn't tell Johnny where they were going, he simply asked him to come along. The confusion was evident on his brother's face when they came to a large open field.
“What are we doing here? “Johnny questioned.
“We're going to have a beautiful brotherly moment, just like when we were little. "
“Don't even think I'll let you turn me into your makeup test model again, you've never been good at that," Johnny warned.
All that makeup always looked bad and Johnny looked awful, sometimes it was even too much work to remove all that makeup.
“No, we'll just do something quieter," she replied, pulling out the kites.
“We're too old for that, aren't we? “Johnny's eyebrow rose.
“And so, you're the life of the party? Go fly your kite," Sue ordered.
A few minutes later they were both laughing as they flew the kites, just like in the old days.
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