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starmo · 6 months ago

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hey! Big fan of your BTTF fics! I only recently got (back) into BTTF, but it seems you’ve been here for a few years, plus you’re an nsfw author in this fandom, so I was wondering if you might have some insight on why Mammett is practically the only ship with lots of nsfw material? The only straight ships I’ve seen is Marty/Lorraine or Marty/OC. Why no Marty/Jennifer, or George/Lorraine, or even Doc/Clara? I want some nsfw Marty/Jennifer so bad and can’t find it anywhere! Did it ever exist? Was it deleted? Hope you don’t mind the random horny. Just curious and want someone to ask/rant to, one BTTF fan to another :)

Hey there! Thanks for your inquiry! I am so glad to hear that you're a fan of my work! 😄

I actually haven't any clue as to why mammett recieves more attention from NSFW creators. Believe it or not, this surprisingly comes as a shock to me!

Though my allegiance is sworn to mammett (😂), I had been under the impression that it was the least popular of the ships typically associated w/ BTTF, on account of it's... divisiveness? For lack of a better term.

Though, if I were to reckon a guess as to why it's so beloved by degenerates (jk) like myself, I'd say it has just as much to do with the taboo nature of their relationship as hating mammett for it is!

Which is exactly why it doesn't surprise me that one of the only heteronormative ships from BTTF that recieves an abundance of attention is Lorraine x Marty.

Like mammett, Lorraine x Marty involves two individuals whose sexual/romantic relationship would be met with disapproval (because, y'know, incest), which just makes for a fun jaunt when it comes to writing smut fic. The juicier and more depraved, the better!

Aside from that, though there are many other reasons as to why I (and likely many others) are attached to Doc x Marty--I think a major contributing factor to the abundant creation of NSFW mammett fic is the fact that much of what we see of their on-screen interactions (of the physical variety, especially) is interlaced w/ homoerotic subtext, albeit (likely) unintentionally.

That and taking their age gap into account, and the time in which BTTF is set, when homosexuality was still HIGHLY frowned upon, it kind of makes for a deliciously provocative "torrid love affair" type deal.

And, I (personally) am also very much attracted to both Christopher Lloyd and Michael J Fox (hence why I've so many rarepairs involving their characters 😂) which only adds fuel to the "I want to see them bang" fire.

In summary, Doc and Marty tick off all the boxes for somebody like me (in both a "omg, my otp, I wanna cry, I love them so much!!" type way, and a "I want to see Doc absolutely DESTROY Marty" type way). I imagine people must feel similarly about ships like Lorraine x Marty, George x Marty, etc.

I guess the more canon-typical ships like Jennifer x Marty and Clara x Doc haven't as much allure to NSFW writers on account of the fact that they'e likely considered to be "vanilla"? Though I can only speculate on that.

As for your frustrations in this regard, I completely understand. Scouring the tags on ao3 or similar websites in search of at least just one fic involving a ship you're invested in, only to come up short, is one of the most infuriating things in the world.

I take similar issue w/ trans Marty vs cis Marty fics.

I am one of very few mammett fic writers who solely portray Marty as being trans, and that is largely due to the fact that as a trans man myself, I wanted to see more pre-op trans representation in smut fics; something which was virtually non-existent in the fandom prior to my contributions.

I also like to write smut fic for a wide variety of niche audiences; though some of the things I've written about and or plan to write about in the future aren't necessarily kinks of my own, I still want to offer something else to the fandom aside from the repetative "Doc and Marty have flowery prose gay sex in the garage" fics (not that there's anything wrong w/ those fics, but admittedly after reading about 6 or 7 of them I tend to go "but where's the pizazz??" ..."pizazz" being the nastiest shit you can conceive of, of course, lmao).

To this day one of my all-time favorite fics I've aided in the creation of is the one where Marty is a gas-station attendant and he and Doc end up banging by the dumpster in the back alleyway behind Marty's workplace.

Not only is it deliciously, viscerally filthy, but they (being Doc and Marty) are also still very much themselves; their affection and fondness for one another knows no bounds, and thus doesn't feel out of place even in a fic involving watersports, armpit licking and non-con kink.

Perhaps now that I know there is an audience for it, in the form of, at least, you, I could try my hand at writing some Jennifer x Marty or Clara x Doc fics!

I've only two WIPS as of right now that involve a Jennifer x Marty sex scene (sorta...); that being a fic in which Jennifer is present when an experiment involving some chemicals (of the horny variety) goes awry and Doc is in dire need of uh... relief--and a sequel fic to Nocturnal Emissions that immediately begins with Jennifer eating Marty out.

These are two fics that I hope to complete and upload at some point, but in the meantime, if you're curious (and/or would like to talk more about mammett/BTTF in general) feel free to DM me and I'd be more than happy to share what I've written for these fics w/ you! 😄

#mammett #bttf #back to the future #asks

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knickynoo · 1 year ago

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Back to the Future: The Animated Series, s02ep03 “A Friend In Deed” Review and Commentary

Previous episodes linked here.

In this episode: Lots of funny moments, another woman from the past falls in love with Marty, and I go on ramblings about Tiffany Tannen and my dislike of Cartoon Marty.

Season 2 of the animated series is really making use of green screens, huh? In episode one, Doc was stranded on an island, then he was in outer space in episode two, and now he's at the "Hill Valley Beach and Synchronized Swimming Center." He's wearing a funky outfit and using a metal detector to search for money in the sand.

Is this the first time we're seeing Doc in shorts?? I can't recall, but it might be.

He tells us that he's found 85¢ so far and that it's only cost him $200 in equipment to do so. Oh, Doc. You are one of a kind.

He leads us into a story of another situation that involved buried valuables. And instead of the story beginning like it typically does with, "It all started when my sons..." or "It all started when Marty...", this story begins with Biff. And that lets us know right off the bat that it's all downhill from here, lol.

Cue the cartoon!

We begin at the Tannen residence (always a treat to hear Tom Wilson's voice), where Biff has decided that what his family needs is a swimming pool. Yes, his family. And who do we meet? His son!

I've always been intrigued by what adult Biff's family situation was like. I know that an early draft of the film had George buying the peanut brittle from Biff's young daughter and that the BTTF card game and the Citizen Brown comics mention Biff's teenage daughter Tiffany Tannen. (She was also supposed to have a role in the video game, but her character was cut and "combined" with the alternate version of Jennifer.) This is the concept art for her.

There's also speculation that Tiff might be included in the "Continuum Conundrum" series from the IDW comics. In the story, which takes place in the months following Marty's return home after part III, there's mention of Jennifer's friend group, which includes someone named "Tiffany." Some fans headcanon that this is a referring to Tiff Tannen. I don't really have an opinion on the theory one way or another, but it would be SUPER interesting if one of Jennifer Parker's best friends in the Lone Pine Timeline is Biff's daughter.

I would LOVE to see fanfics that include her or even focus on her. There's so much potential! You could have her resemble what she was supposed to be in the game—all rough around the edges and 100% a Tannen—or completely rework her to be a genuinely nice person. Maybe she actively rejects the Tannen reputation. Maybe she's a sweet person, but people are wary of her and judge her based on her appearance or her name. Maybe she is friends with Jen and thinks Marty is a neat guy. So much someone can do.

I digress.

In typical Biff fashion, he's going to make his young son dig the hole for a pool while he sits around in a lounge chair. Father of the year. Also, we haven't seen a whole lot of Biff so far in this series, so I haven't had anything to say about him, but it's clear he's not the meek version of Biff we have at the end of the first film. Cartoon Biff acts very much like he was never taken down a notch or had anything happen to humble him. So...I wonder what the story is there.

(Side note to also mention that we haven't seen—or even heard of—George and Lorraine. Marty's just always at Doc's house, with no information on parents or siblings. I wouldn't be surprised if a young kid watching this in 1992 without having seen the movies simply thought that Marty was part of Doc's family.)

While digging, Little Biff (referred to as Junior) unearths a piece of paper. We don't know what it is, but Biff gets a smile on his face as he reads it, so it can't be good. We cut immediately to the Parker family ranch!

Jen's family owns a ranch! I love it!

Marty is there having lunch with Jen and her grandparents, but it is NOT going well. Because Cartoon Marty is nearly unrecognizable from his Movie Counterpart, he's being an immature, disrespectful doofus around Jen's relatives. He places a whoopee cushion on Jennifer's grandmother's seat, then puts a fake ice cube with a spider "frozen" in it into her drink. And he just sits there hysterically laughing even though nobody else thinks it's funny. Jennifer's grandfather in particular becomes angered by Marty's incessant pranking.

Grandpa Parker, considering pummeling Marty.

And I know I've mentioned many times about how much I dislike the choices made with Marty's character, but. Seriously, what happened here? WHO made these choices and why didn't Bob Gale stop them? This might as well have been a completely different character, that's how unlike Marty he is. He's self-centered a lot of the time. He's dishonest (there was a whole episode where he just piles on lie after lie). He's cocky and inconsiderate and ridiculously immature. He is NOT my Marty McFly.

See the boy on the left? Love the boy on the left. Fantastic little dude. Five out of five stars. See the boy on the right? Don't like him all that much. Many things wrong. Sad.

It bums me out that they took such a great, loveable guy and ripped all his great traits to shreds, leaving us with whatever it is Cartoon Marty's got going on. I don't even know. Guy's got issues.

Time to reel my focus back in. Just as Grandpa Parker seems poised to give Marty a serious talking to, Biff shows up wit the police. Marty asks Jennifer why her grandparents would invite Biff because, "He's a jerk with a bad sense of humor."

"Look who's talking," Jen's grandfather replies.

Go. Grandpa. Parker.

When Grandpa Parker orders Biff off his land, Biff informs him that it's HIS land. The piece of paper he found in his yard was a deed to the Parker property dated 1875 and signed by one of Jen's relatives, as well as Biff's great-great-granduncle.

Biff tells the Parkers that he's going to turn the ranch into a toxic waste dump and miniature golf course, which is both horrible and very funny. Quite in-character for Biff Tannen. As he prepares to order the house to be demolished, Jennifer calls to Marty for help, but he's taken off on his hoverboard. Assuming that he's doing it to run away from the trouble, Jennifer proclaims, "There's nothing worse than a chicken." The actual, literal chicken standing beside her gets very insulted and walks away, lol.

We then go to the Brown home, where Verne is impatiently waiting to eat. Jules is making him pancakes on a ridiculous specialized griddle he invented because Jules is extra like that.

Marty bursts into the kitchen, yelling that he needs to borrow the DeLorean to help Jen's family. Jules informs him that the car isn't there—Doc and Clara have taken it to go see Hamlet, performed by the original cast—but that he can use the train. Marty and the boys take off for 1875.

Once there, Marty immediately sets his sights on warning Jennifer's relatives about the ranch. However, he's interrupted before he can do so, on account of another woman spies Marty and immediately has a crush on him (naturally). I should have been keeping count of how many episodes include someone laying eyes on Marty and falling in love with him.

But wait. Wait. You NEED to know how the scene starts off. The woman walks straight up to Marty and goes, "Howdy, handsome!" followed immediately by this:

Verne: "Handsome? Get real."

Jules: "Get glasses!"

Had to stop it right there because I was laughing. Jules and Verne think Marty is ugly CONFIRMED.

Anyway, the woman ends up being Hepzibah Tannen, sister of Thaddeus Tannen (whose name was on the deed). And Hepzibah is head-over-heels for Marty. At one point, Marty ends up at her house, and Thaddeus is not thrilled to meet him. Before he can toss him out, Hepzibah picks Marty up, holds him close, and shouts at her brother, "Give me that! It's mine!"

Ridiculous.

Since his sister is so in love, Thaddeus agrees to let Marty join his gang. Thaddeus teaches Marty how to box and how to steal things from people (Marty immediately returns the items when Thaddeus isn't looking. +1 point for Cartoon Marty). Marty also continues his practical jokes by giving Thaddeus gum that turns your mouth black. Thaddeus isn't happy. This is necessary info to understand part of the next scene.

Back on the Parker ranch, where Jules and Verne have become farmhands, they come across these posters.

Several things to note here. 1. "DEAD OR UNALIVE" 2. Marty's gum gave Thaddeus a nickname. 3. Marty is only "sort of wanted" 4. Thaddeus evidently decked Marty for playing a prank on him.

Later on at the Tannen home, Thaddus suggests Marty and Hepzibah get married. This is followed by some very funny dialogue.

I'm definitely finding the humor to be better in the second season. I've laughed out loud several times since I started it.

The next day, Thaddeus and one of his other gang members go off to get Marty and Hepzibah a wedding present. Marty manages to sneak away from his "engagement picnic" to intercept Thaddeus, who is in the process of stealing the ranch from Mr. Parker. He has Mrs. Parker tied to the railroad tracks, and the only way he'll let her loose is if the deed to the ranch is signed over. This is his wedding present to his sister and Marty.

Which. Doesn't really make sense? I mean, it makes sense here, but then what motivated him to steal it originally, before Marty time traveled? Maybe Hepzibah had fallen for a different guy? Or Thaddeus simply wanted the ranch just because? Idk.

When Thaddeus goes to sign the deed, Marty lends him a pen (which is another prank, hehe. The pen has ink that eventually fades away.) Thaddeus then refuses to untie Mrs. Parker, so Marty refuses to go back home with him. Thaddeus leaves, Marty, Jules, and Verne save Mrs. Parker, and all is well. Marty assures the Parkers that their ranch is safe, and he hops on the time-train with the boys.

Marty returns to the present-day ranch, stops the bulldozer, and shows everyone the deed, which now has no signatures. Biff gets a citation for disturbing the peace, and Marty is back in Jennifer's good graces. The end!

Back at the beach, Real Doc digs up an antique fountain pen, accidentally squirts himself in the eye with the ink, and then leads us into the experiment portion of the show, where we're taught how to make invisible ink. We then return to Doc, who finds something else with his metal detector: the keys to the DeLorean that he'd lost the week prior. Yep. Doc had been searching the sand all that time for his car keys. Goofy guy.

Fun episode. I always enjoy when they're Marty, Jules, and Verne-centered, and this was a funny one as well. It was neat having an episode with so much Tom Wilson! (he voiced Biff and Thaddeus)

Wow, this post was a long one. I did go on a few side-tangents, haha. To those who read this whole thing: thanks for sticking with me. I'm so glad there are people who enjoy reading these silly episode commentary posts!

Join me next time to see Marty accidentally join the army in 1944.

#back to the future #bttf #bttf: the animated series

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bri-to-the-future · 2 years ago

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We all know the original screenplay for BTTF 2 where Biff gave the almanac to himself in 1967 instead of 1955, right? Well, I thought since everyone has been making such lovely stuck in the (insert time period here) AUs, it’d be nice if someone made a…

*drumroll*

Stuck in the 60s AU!

(All credit to PotatoLord’s Picrew!)

It’s just some vague ideas right now, but i love the concept and im definitely gonna flesh it out more once Spaceman from Pluto is finished!

Here’s what i’ve got so far…

80s Doc gets arrested in Hell Valley and insists that he’ll be fine and that Marty needs to go to the 60s and get the almanac

Marty is able to get it after some difficulty (same as in screenplay) and burns it, not willing to take it with him when Doc is at risk

He still gets stop by a police officer, still doesnt have a draft card or id to prove hes a minor, and still gets arrested

He asks Goldie to put out that his name is Marty Klein and that he’s been arrested, knowing that Doc from the 60s still lives in Hill Valley as an inventor

Doc shows up with bail for him and he looks way different than Marty expected. Also, apparently hes a chemistry professor at Hill Valley Community College, which is news to Marty

He gives him a lift to the barn where the Delorean is parked, Marty giving an extremely vague (at Doc’s insistence) explanation on why he’s there on the way, but when they get there they’re both horrified to find that the Delorean is absolutely totalled ((with no 80s Doc to scare the Peabodys away, they didn’t stop at just shooting Mr Fusion and went ham on the car, rendering it completely useless, but thankfully managing to leave the Flux Capacitor in tact))

Doc says he should be able to fix most of the damage but that it will take a while, a good few months at the very least but worst case scenario Marty could be there for a year or two, and there’s no way he’ll be able to fix the futuristic device on the back (Mr Fusion) so once it is fixed they’ll need a new plan to get the 1.21 gigawatts of power, especially since the lightning strike on the courthouse was an isolated incident in Hill Valley’s history

Marty is devastated and spends the first week or so just moping around Doc’s garage and keeping Newton company but after nine days of that Doc insists that some fresh air will do him some good and forces him to come to the college with him

He was right, of course, and Marty finally starts to lighten up and have fun with him again afterwards

After classes are done Doc finally gets Marty to go get some era appropriate clothes with him but when they see Lorraine trying to keep track of an entirely too small Dave and Linda while George looks at ties they immediately turn around and walk into a different store

They’re only able to keep that up for another few days before Marty’s court date comes (who knew his Mom was so anti-war??) and she comes to congratulate him on his innocent verdict after Doc shows the court his (forged) birth certificate proving he’s a minor

When she asks if he’s related to the Marty Klein she knew in high school he tells her they were cousins who were named after the same ancestor and that Doc is watching him for a while but he’s not sure how long

Marty figures out pretty quickly that Doc takes LSD and honestly he’s not sure what to think about that

One day he walks into the living room and Doc is sprawled on the couch with his jacket off for once, clearly tripping his ass off, but Marty spots these bizarre brown lines running the length of his arms that look like scars but were definitely never there in the 80s and honestly he’s a little too freaked out to care whether or not Doc is entirely coherent right now he needs to know what’s going on

“Doc, Doc, what the hell are those?” “What?” “On your arms, Doc, whats that brown stuff!?” And Doc has the gall to look fucking amused! “They’re Lichtenberg figures, Marty. Surely you’ve seen me with short sleeves in the future? The stretch all the way to my shoulders.” Marty is shocked. “Of course I’ve seen you with short sleeves, hell, you’ve had to take your whole shirt off cause of chemical spills, but I’ve never seen those before!” But then a look of realisation crosses Doc’s face. “Oh, of course! They were caused when I accidentally became part of the circuit when the plug came undone that night I sent you back to the future, it makes perfect sense you haven’t had a chance to see them yet.” “They were caused by WHAT!?!?”

Cue Marty having a guilt induced panic attack and Doc having no idea what to do because he’s still mid-trip but eventually getting the hang of it. Once Marty’s calmed down he decides he’s not gonna touch the stuff anymore, not when it impairs his ability to care for Marty (and even when he leaves, what if this had been one of his students?? No, best to leave the stuff behind for good)

Ofc this means once he does fix the Delorean his plan to power it is much less dangerous and terrifying. … its still similar though. Doc will still blow up the safety inhibitor at the power plant and Marty will still hook onto high powered wires, just at the power plant rather than over the grand fucking canyon (the plan is still a work in progress & i havent decided how long it will take Doc to fix the deloreon yet)

When Marty gets back to 85 (now back to perfectly normal Lone Pine Hill Valley, thankfully) the first thing he does is find Doc and give him a massive hug, which he returns just as enthusiastically

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dragonsarecool · 5 months ago

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June of Doom Day 16 - Stranded

A/N: Dying with the dinosaurs didn't sound like an ideal way to go. A short piece set during issue #4 of Who Is Marty McFly? (BTTF #16)

Marty wiped at his brow, ignoring the uncomfortable sensation of his sweat-slicked hair. Although he was used to warm summers in California, the current combination of the heat and extreme humidity was becoming unbearable. Those documentaries and textbooks lied…They made living with dinosaurs look so appealing…

A hair must've brushed against his cheek, reigniting the flames of pain that rippled through his flesh. He clutched at his face, swearing quietly to himself as the exposed wounds stung bitterly. While their escape through the raging river had washed away most of the blood, he couldn't help the feeling of contamination that came with swimming in a prehistoric river. God knows what sort of stuff was in that water, and now it's in my face…

"Come on, Marty! Not much further now!"

Marty wheezed brusquely in response. If he says that one more time…

The teenager gasped as he heaved his fatigued body over the next boulder, ignoring the irritating scraping of his sneakers against the ancient rock. His muscles were aching, his feet protesting with every step they took. Although he was desperate for a rest, he also understood why they couldn't let their guard down; the tiger-creature had proven that they were never truly safe in this hostile environment.

He was grateful when Doc decided they could afford to spare a few seconds to take a breather. "Doc, how the hell are we gonna get out of this one?!" He asked despairingly. "I-I mean, there is not a single

"Relax, Marty, it's all under control!" Doc brushed his sweaty locks aside, taking a moment to survey their surroundings. "I had to pick this spot because it'll still exist in 1985-"

"DOC!" Marty's patience snapped. His icy tone caused the scientist to jump in shock, though the teenager was oblivious among the fire dancing in his eyes. "Doc, for God's sake, how the hell do you expect us to get out of this?! Let alone get out of this alive?! What, are you gonna expect this Irving asshole to have a change of heart? After all he's done to us - after stealing your work and kidnapping me - you really think he's gonna just decide to be a good guy again?! What planet are you living on, Doc?! We are LOST!" Marty's voice broke as he roared. "We're completely and utterly screwed!"

Geez, where did all of that come from?

The young man stood silently for a few moments, stunned by his own outburst. "I-I'm sorry, Doc, I don't…I didn't-"

"It's alright, Marty," Doc's voice was oddly quiet. He placed a hand on Marty's shoulder and gave it a comforting pat. "…It's, uh, perfectly understandable given the current circumstances. And you are in pain, after all-"

"I-I know, Doc, but I shouldn't…I mean, you're helping me, a-and I go and scream at you for doing it-" The teenager broke off with a curse as his hand accidentally brushed against his wound. "It's just…H-How are you so convinced that he's gonna come back for us?"

"I do owe you an explanation for all of this, but we can ruminate on this later," Doc proposed boldly, wiping his brow. "Come on; the sooner we get moving, the sooner I can explain all of this to you."

Biting his tongue, Marty nodded quietly. "You're the doc, Doc."

I've had enough of this humidity anyway…

#bttf #back to the future #fanfiction #whump #juneofdoom #june of doom 2024

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daryfromthefuture · 1 year ago

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fic writer ask game!

tagged twice by both @knickynoo and @mythical-bookworm :D

1. how many works do you have on ao3?

60. what a nice round number lmao

2. what's your total ao3 word count?

396,318

3. what fandoms do you write for?

i'm a back to the future writer through and through!

4. what are your top 5 fics by kudos?

Until I Get Home

November

But It's Alright

The Me You Knew

Winter of '84

5. do you respond to comments? why or why not?

i usually do, simply because i love interaction between fics. besides, whenever someone takes their time to say that they liked my fic, to me, it's simply polite to respond and at the very least say "thank you".

6. what's the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?

it's a short oneshot titled "Yesterday", which is an alternative (angstier) take on the outcome of the duel in bttf part 3.

7. what's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?

honestly? "Until I Get Home". it was angsty overall, but the ending is super satisfying and happy, you can take my word for it.

8. do you get hate on fics?

not that i know of, no.

9. do you write smut? if so, what kind?

absolutely not.

10. do you write crossovers? what's the craziest you've ever written?

i'm not into crossovers, really. the only crossover i have on my ao3 is "The Weight Of Us", a fic taking elements from this year's "Oppenheimer" movie.

11. have you ever had your fic stolen?

the first chapter of my fic "14 Scraps Of Paper" was copy-pasted onto a wattpad book like one and a half years ago, but nothing has happened since.

12. have you ever had your fic translated?

technically, quite a few of my fics exist in two languages, because i personally write them in german and translate them. but no one has ever translated a fic into another language.

13. have you ever co-written a fic before?

i have, yep! quite a few of my ao3 fics are roleplays, meaning that two people (or sometimes more) have been invloved in writing it. "The Me You Knew" is also a collab work.

14. what's your all time favorite ship?

i am not a shipper lol. marty/jen is always great, but i'm not into ships in general.

15. what's a WIP you want to finish, but doubt you ever will?

i have no idea right now honestly

16. what are your writing strengths?

maybe dialogue? i think i'm also pretty decent at suspense

17. what are your writing weaknesses?

i tend to use the same words/phrases over and over again, specifically in english, because my vocabulary is still limited. i also hate describing things or settings.

18. thoughts on writing dialogue in another language for a fic?

i want and will do this in the future! it's specifically planned for my "Trinity"-threequel, but might happen befoore!

19. first fandom you wrote for?

i never published it, but i recently found a Super Mario fanfic from when i was like 9. it actually had a decent plot, i was surprised with myself lmao

20. favorite fic you've ever written?

this is HARD. but really, i adore "Most People Were Silent" in a way that i don't adore any of my other fics, because i allowed myself to play with original ideas and characters. the result was a super niche bttf fic, but i love it so much.

thanks for the tag! imma tag @bg-sparrow, @synthsays and whoever else wants to participate!

#tag game #fic writer asks #ask game #fanfic ask #bttf fic

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jowritesfanfiction · 1 year ago

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Hello!

Fanfic writer ask game: 3, 9, 17

Thanks for the ask!

3. What’s a fic idea that you have but haven’t written yet?

I have been rattling in my brain some fic of post-bttf trilogy centering around Jennifer because I feel bad I’ve hardly included her. But I just don’t have any good ideas.

I’ve also thought about writing some backstory fic about Dogberry and Verges from Much Ado About Nothing (woops other hobbies are getting mixed in) but it’s been kinda vague.

9. What’s your favorite line(s) or scene(s) that you have written?

Oh that’s tough! From the stuff I’ve written (because I will not be spoiling my wip), I would say: “Because failure isn’t a full stop. It lets you know you can keep going and keep learning.” from my fic Marty’s Road Test.

17. Are there any writers and/or stories that you consider an influence?

I would say The Catcher in the Rye by JD Salinger has probably influenced me. I enjoy the way he writes Holden’s inner monologue (maybe that says something about me but let’s just ignore that). I recently read several of Ernest Hemingway’s short stories and I really like the way he writes so that may become a future influence.

Some stories that have influenced me include: It’s A Wonderful Life, Back to the Future (duh), and Little Women. There are probably other stories that I forgot, but those have influenced what I put in my stories (especially certain themes) and my life in general.

#asks #fanfic ask game #bttf #i am asking everyone to please ignore the possible red flag of me liking the catcher in the rye #okay?#okay

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its-yours-truly · 5 months ago

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Made by @uwuthority <- get to know me

What is you middle name? -> Lynn

How old are you? -> 14

When is your birthday? -> July 7

What is your zodiac sign? -> Cancer

What is your favorite color? -> Green, Pink, Yellow, Blue.

What’s your lucky number? -> 17

Do you have any pets? -> Yes

Where are you from? -> Merica

How tall are you? -> 5' 3"

What shoe size are you? -> US 9

How many pairs of shoes do you own? -> 6

What was your last dream about? -> Uh me getting grounded

What talents do you have? -> Art, Singing, Writing.

Are you psychic in any way? -> I can see things in my dreams

Favorite song? -> I have a lot

Favorite movie? -> Top Gun, BTTF, GB, Sonic, or ROTTMNT

Who would be your ideal partner? -> .....Ben Schwartz is kinda-

Do you want children? -> Yes

Do you want a church wedding? -> Yes

Are you religious? -> Yes

Have you ever been to the hospital? -> Yes

Have you ever got in trouble with the law? -> No

Have you ever met any celebrities? -> Not any A-List

Baths or showers? -> Shower

What color socks are you wearing? -> None

Have you ever been famous? -> 300 YT subs?

Would you like to be a big celebrity? -> No

What type of music do you like? -> Indie

Have you ever been skinny dipping? -> No

How many pillows do you sleep with? -> 2

What position do you usually sleep in? -> Side

How big is your house? -> Medium

What do you typically have for breakfast? -> Toast

Have you ever fired a gun? -> No

Have you ever tried archery? -> No

Favorite clean word? -> Sheesh

Favorite swear word? -> Fuck

What’s the longest you’ve ever gone without sleep? -> 23H

Do you have any scars? -> Yes, from a door hinge

Have you ever had a secret admirer? -> I did lmfao

Are you a good liar? -> No

Are you a good judge of character? -> Eh...

Can you do any other accents other than your own? -> British

Do you have a strong accent? -> No

What is your favorite accent? -> Russian

What is your personality type? -> Bubbly

What is your most expensive piece of clothing? -> Rue21 Clothes

Can you curl your tongue? -> Yes

Are you an innie or an outie? -> Idk???

Left or right handed? -> Left

Are you scared of spiders? -> Yes

Favorite food? -> Mac and Cheese

Favorite foreign food? -> I want to try Sushi

Are you a clean or messy person? -> Messy

Most used phrased? -> N/A

Most used word? -> Chat

How long does it take for you to get ready? -> 20 min

Do you have much of an ego? -> Kinda

Do you suck or bite lollipops? -> Both

Do you talk to yourself? -> Yes

Do you sing to yourself? -> Yes

Are you a good singer? -> No

Biggest Fear? -> Holes/Small Organisms

Are you a gossip? -> Yes

Best dramatic movie you’ve seen? -> N/A

Do you like long or short hair? -> Long

Can you name all 50 states of America? -> No

Favorite school subject? -> History

Extrovert or Introvert? -> Ambivert

Have you ever been scuba diving? -> No

What makes you nervous? -> Being different

Are you scared of the dark? -> Yes

Do you correct people when they make mistakes? -> Yes

Are you ticklish? -> Yes

Have you ever started a rumor? -> No

Have you ever been in a position of authority? -> Yes

Have you ever drank underage? -> No

Have you ever done drugs? -> No

Who was your first real crush? -> Some boy in my 3rd grade class

How many piercings do you have? -> 1

Can you roll your Rs?“ -> No

How fast can you type? -> 80WPM

How fast can you run? -> 4 MPH

What color is your hair? -> Brown

What color is your eyes? -> Brownish gren

What are you allergic to? -> Bananas, Penicillin

Do you keep a journal? -> Yes

What do your parents do? -> Stay at home mom, welder

Do you like your age? -> No

What makes you angry? -> Politically Incorrect People

Do you like your own name? -> Yess

Have you already thought of baby names, and if so what are they?

Do you want a boy a girl for a child? -> Either or

What are you strengths? -> Uh Gaming/History

What are your weaknesses? -> Math

How did you get your name? -> I was just born

Were your ancestors royalty? -> No :(

Do you have any scars? -> My cheek

Color of your bedspread? -> Gray

Color of your room? -> Beige

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bttf-adder · 3 years ago

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Just woke up from a dream where I was on YouTube and found this short clip which was a non-canon BttF thing... it was like a TV ad or something, only it wasn't advertising anything. In this clip, Doc had decided he didn't like the way his parents raised him, so he had gone back in time and kidnapped his baby self and was going to raise him himself. And it was two Docs who were doing this (he had used more time travel to duplicate himself) -- one Doc was going to be the "dad" of baby Emmett, and the other was in a dress and was going to be the "mom".

Then I found a second clip which was in continuity with the first one, and it showed Doc actually treating his child self kind of badly/being tough on him or whatever. And in the dream, I started planning a fic where Marty tells Doc off for this. It was going to have this dialog in it:

Marty: You never treated me like this. Doc: You're not my child. Marty: Neither is he!

#bttf #weird dreams

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shanie-the-toyaddict · 3 years ago

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To anyone who is curious as to just how bad the post-show Buffyverse comics were, let me provide you with a list of spoilers from "Season 8" alone that should tell you all you need to know about why they need never be read.

Buffy has forcefully turned slayers into expendable clones of herself to thrown the forces of evil off her scent. Emphasis on the word "EXPENDABLE"

Dawn loses her virginity to a demon and now she's a giant.

OOPS! Now she's a Centaur. How the hell do these things happen?

Willow dumps Kennedy in favor of an astral plane magic deity who she spends most of her time fucking rather than contributing anything productive to the group (like restoring Dawn)

At one point when she does return to help the group, she is exceedingly manipulative, including using Kennedy for sex magic.

If that isn't enough, it's implied that Willow is no long human and, in a dark, apocalyptic future, she's fully evil again. When she gets to a point where she's losing her powers, she drags Buffy into her hellhole timeline under the guise of "changing the future by preventing it" and wanting to die. She promises Buffy that by returning to her own timeline after being in the future, the apocalypse future will never happen. Believing her, Buffy goes ahead and kills Future-Dark Willow and returns to the past "knowing" that the future is fine.... Spoiler alert. Future Willow was lying, the world still ended and Buffy killed Future Willow for real.

Xander hooks up with a slayer... who is killed IMMEDIATELY afterward, forcing him to bury yet another love interest. He swears he's done... at least until the next season when he decides to start dating DAWN. (Excuse me while I go VOMIT)

Harmony gets a reality TV show because clearly this timeline wasn't dark enough.

Giles disowns Buffy in favor of Faith. Somehow, this is the best plotline of the entire comics canon.

Dracula comes back and boy do he and Xander have some ish to work through.

WARREN IS BACK! He's back, he's dating Amy, and he's GOT NO FUGGIN SKIN!

Sidenote: Out of all the layers of bullshit in this saga, somehow this one is just downright unbelievable. Amy is far too much of a lesbian and Warren hates women. How the fuck did this happen and why are they still together by the end of Season 8?

Anyway, Angel is a god. And Evil.

OOP! Now Buffy is a god too.

They superpower sky fight Then they superpower sky fuck

Unfortunately, they can't seem to come to an agreement and Angel decides to make his point by MURDERING GILES.

Buffy's response is to say "FUCK EVERYTHING" and win the day by... *checks notes*... REMOVING ALL MAGIC FROM EXISTENCE thereby depowering herself, every member of her slayer army, depowering WILLOW (and forcefully ending her relationship with magic-deity-being), eradicating all magical creatures from the planet (spike survives by flying through a wormhole), oh and because somewhere along the way Buffy forgot how she got a sister, DAWN STARTS TO BTTF FADE FROM EXISTENCE AS WELL.

But... uh, destroying all magic also kills Warren off for good too so... uh... yay? I guess? In short. Don't read the comics. JUST DON'T. They are the absolute drizzling shit and JW clearly forgot his medication when crafting them. FUCK THE COMICS.

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bebepac · 4 years ago

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Six Sentence Sunday 1.24.2020

Eeeeep!!! Thanks @purpleyin for the awesome BTTF banners!!!!! So you will be seeing these for a bit. So here’s what I’ve got for you all. Writing has been slow this week with work and training my new person, and days have been long. But these are the projects I’ve been typing on a few sentences here and there on.

On each story I have put the link of the masterlist in the title, so if you’ve missed a chapter, you have the link to the masterlist to see what you’ve missed. I really believe I have the worst tags as they seem to go out horribly late if at all if you receive them.

Future Plans

Just the Way You Are: Chapter 5

The Book: CROSSOVER: Perfect Match x TRR

Pairings: Hayden x Kai / TRR MC is single

Status: Still in the Writing Process

Dr. McGovern laughed.

“Was she pretty?”

“Yes, but…..”

“Liam, has it been that long that you are mistaking simple attraction for a legitimate medical side effect?”

“I mean...... I’ve been the sick kid for so long. I guess you’re right.”

“Sounds like you need to get to know your lady friend a little better Liam.”

“I really want to.”

“Well you’re healthy now, there’s nothing stopping you.”

Liam texted Riley, but she didn’t respond.

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Going Away Bash Beaumont Style

University Student Ellie: Chapter 3

The Book: TRH and Beyond

Pairings: Liam x Riley / Ellie x OC (Nic Karahalios)

Status: Still in the writing process

“We’ll send a car around for them in the morning yeah?”

“Probably not too early,” Maxwell said.

The music was already thumping. They glanced at Ellie, she had already converted her dress from its long flowing gown to the short party cocktail dress. She was dancing in her bare feet with Nic laughing.

“They’ll be fine,” Taylor smiled at Riley.

“It’s the last party all the kids will be together at.”

“Then we’ll allow them to have a good time then Riley. We’re the old protective parents now.”

“Let the Cool Uncle handle it,” Maxwell smiling at them.

“We’ll have a private party tonight, I promise. Just us, My Queen, and I’ve got the perfect attire for it.”

She knew full well what his attire consisted of. NOTHING. Naked Liam was planning on making an appearance.

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The Purge

Mia's 🌎 World : Chapter 9

The Book: CROSSOVER: TRR x The Freshman

Pairings: (TRR MC x M!OC?) / Chris x Emily

Status: Still in the writing process

Chris ran with Mia at her pace. When he could tell she was really starting to get tired he added walking intervals.

"You're doing really great Mia."

"I'm running like a turtle."

"You're still running, and you're challenging yourself, and that's all that matters."

"This is barely a warmup for you I'm sure.

A huge smile crossed Chris's face.

"I will get a second workout in for sure."

They were about to lap Emily again. He jogged up to her smacking her behind. "Cuz my baby got back!"

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Here We Grow!

Epilogue: Fast Foward

The Book TRH

Pairing: Liam x Riley

Status: Still in the writing process

Liberty pulled Ellie’s hair.

“Stop it Libby!!! Make her stop!!! Mom!!!”

She said it again. Ellie called her Mom.

“Liberty Wren Rys!!!! You better stop that, I mean it.”

"I'm sorry Mommy." Libby’s voice was apologetic.

They piled in their extended cab SUV. Each child had a gift for Lily and Violet they put in the back of the trunk.

“When did I just become ‘Mom’ to Ellie Liam?”

“I haven’t been ‘Daddy’ for a while now Riley. She’s ten. She’ll be eleven on her next birthday in a few weeks. She’s growing up. She even has a little boyfriend.”

“She does not!!!!”

“She does! Nic is…..”

“Nic is just her friend!!! They grew up together, like siblings.”

He shook his head at Riley smiling.

“You really don’t see it between them do you?”

“See what?”

“Watch them closely, the next time you see them together.”

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Tagging: @queenjilian @dcbbw @khoicesbyk @shewillreadyou @jessiembruno @bbrandy2002 @indiacater @janezillow @gkittylove99 @gabesmommie1130 @mom2000aggie @zoehanji @kingliam2019 @queenwalton @cordonia-gothqueen @enamouredbytruth @texaskitten30 @glaimtruelovealways @marshmallowsandfire @marshmallowsaremyfavorite @hopefulmoonobject @hopelessromanticmonie @batgirlassociationofgothamcity @furiousherringoperatortoad @lovablegranny @iam-the-kind-and-thoughtful @iaminlovewithtrr @ladyangel70 @twinkleallnight @kat-tia801 @caseyvalentineramsey @theroyalheirshadowhunter @sweatyrysconnoisseur @amandablink @gibbles82 @schnitzelbutterfingers @secretwolfdreamertree @secretaryunpaid @kimmiedoo5 @sevenfuckslefttogive @anjanettexcordonia @jared2612 @burnsoslow @axwalker

#six sentence sunday #cfwc sunday six #fast forward #mia's world #just the way you are #university student ellie #trr fanfic #trr fandom #trh fanfic #trh fandom #crossovers #liam and riley #jaiden and mia #chris and emily #hayden and kai #perfect match fanfic #perfect match fandom

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Back to the Future: The Animated Series, s01ep09 "Solar Sailors" Review and Commentary

Previous episodes linked HERE

In this episode: Doc and Clara take a relaxing anniversary cruise to Mars but instead end up facing the terrifying reality of being lost adrift in the outer reaches of space until their eventual deaths. But like. In a fun kids' cartoon way.

I know that the point of this entire cartoon is to focus on the cartoon (duh), but the live-action segments with Real Doc are entirely too short. I want more time with him. He is my favorite wild-eyed scientist, and we should have been able to see his absolutely crazed face more often.

I will also use this opportunity to express how much I would have liked if Michael J. Fox had been able to appear in at least one of these segments. Like. Even if it had just been thirty seconds of screentime. It would've been really fun to have seen him as college-aged Marty, barging in on Doc's weird little science show for a few moments.

Moving on.

Real Doc talks about the time he went to space and leads us into the cartoon, where we see Jules and Verne surprising their parents with anniversary gifts. Verne gives them a drawing, and it's adorable.

Jules presents them with the "J.E.B. Cross-Time Headliner," which is equipped with a flux capacitor and allows someone to type in any date and get the newspaper headlines from that time.

Little interesting side-note: The cartoon establishes Doc and Clara's wedding anniversary as December 15th. From reading the wiki for this episode, though, I learned that the BTTF card game (released in 2010) places Doc and Clara's wedding on September 15th instead. Given the absolute whirlwind that Doc and Clara's relationship is in Part III, I think the September date is more fitting. They definitely flew off to safety on the hoverboard, took a second to collect themselves, and then went, "Wow, that was wild; hope Marty made it back home. Let's get married!!"

Jules demonstrates that the machine can pull headlines from the future and types in December 15, 2091, which shows this:

And this is how we learn that the McFly family will own a space cruise company in the future. Also, this newspaper costs $85.

After Clara mentions how nice it would be to take a "second honeymoon" to Mars, Jules hands them two tickets. (he then reveals he used time travel + Doc's credit card to buy the tickets, lol) Doc and Clara leave that same night in the time machine, announcing to the boys that they'll be back in two minutes. As soon as they leave, though, Jules's machine prints out a new headline. This one is from the following day, December 16th, and reads, "McFly Solar Sailship Lost in Space!" Uh oh.

Happy anniversary, Doc and Clara! You are lost forever in the vastness of outer space.

It's up to Jules and Verne to travel to the future and prevent their parents from boarding the ship (named the "MSC Marty", btw). 2091 Hill Valley is super futuristic and shiny, and pretty much everything is run by robots. Unfortunately, Jules and Verne get diverted upon their arrival, so they're unable to keep Doc and Clara from boarding the ship. We then hear an announcement from the captain, Marta McFly, who is Marty and Jennfer's great-granddaughter.

This may be a good place to mention how much I dislike the trend of Marty's relatives having names that are so similar to his. I will give Marty Jr. a pass since that's a common thing for a father and son to do the senior/junior thing, but I honestly don't even like Marlene's name. Marty and Jen could have been more creative than that. (I even like to headcanon that they end up giving her a different name in the "better" version of 2015 that ends up happening for the McFly family—that's how much I dislike the "every relative after Marty is named after him" thing) But I digress...

We learn that the person in charge of ship maintenance is Ziff Tannen, and he is not happy about the fact that, "McFlys have been kicking Tannens around for centuries," and wants his revenge. I think it's funny that these two families just cannot escape each other no matter how hard they try. Of all the people in the world, the Tannens and McFlys are just entwined together no matter the time period or location. The only thing is that the dynamic switches based on if it's pre or post-George punching Biff in 1955. But there's nothing they can do to fully break whatever bizarre ties bind them to each other. Good stuff.

Anyway, Ziff is so bent on making the McFlys pay that he sabotages the ship—dooming ALL OF THESE innocent people to certain death in outer space.

Jules and Verne are unable to get anyone to believe their warnings, and the ship launches. Farewell, Doc and Clara. We will miss you dearly. Considering that Clara is living 100+ years out of her proper time period and that Doc's parents are deceased and he doesn't have any siblings, I can only assume they have it in their wills that, in the event of their untimely demise, Marty gets custody of Jules and Verne. Or perhaps Einstein does. Honestly, with the way Marty's character is in this series, Jules and Verne might be better off being raised by a dog.

In order to gain access to the building where the sailships are being launched, Jules and Verne sneak in with a group of kids who are on a school field trip to tour the McFly Museum of Aeronautics. The McFly family has really built a successful empire for themselves, haven't they?

Meanwhile, in outer space, the passengers of the MSC Marty sailship are enjoying their trip, blissfully unaware of the impending catastrophe. Doc and Clara are riding around on hover scooters and come across an area of the ship where a concert is being held, and they're shocked to see the main act: Marty!

Except it isn't actually Marty, which Doc and Clara discover when they follow him backstage and he rips off his face.

Doc and Clara, understandably, react with utter terror.

But, yes, the guy is merely a Marty McFly impersonator. Marty evidently became a successful enough musician that he has people who are hired to pretend to be him in concerts. (side note: this 10 second scene of "Marty" is the only appearance he makes in this episode)

Things start going haywire then as the sabotaged sails malfunction, sending the ship floating toward the "outer edge of the solar system." Doc and Clara immediately decide to do what they can to help the situation, all the while Jules and Verne are still on Earth trying to get anybody to take their warnings seriously. After breaking their way into the control room and finding out that a Tannen works there, Jules delivers what is perhaps my favorite line.

It's just such a fun and clever "Jules" twist on the idiom: "bet dollars to donuts." He is very much Doc's son.

Ziff is so outraged at the accusation that he accidentally drops a piece of evidence in front of several other crew members—his copy of a magazine titled "Sabotage Weekly." And honestly, this moment alone makes me reconsider this show's reputation for being terrible. I mean, come on. He's reading a magazine called SABOTAGE WEEKLY! This is top-tier comedy! And to add even more delight to the scene, Ziff attempts to flee the scene via jetpack, but he puts it on the wrong way and catapults himself out of the building and straight into prison. Who's cell does he end up crashing into? His grandfather Griff's!!

"You blew it, didn't you, butthead?" Griff disappointedly asks his grandson.

A worker at the control center takes a look at the damaged ship via video feed and forlornly informs the boys that there's nothing she can do. Jules is undeterred by this, though, and formulates a plan to rescue his parents and all the people aboard the ship.

We return to Doc and Clara, who have donned spacesuits and are outside the ship trying to repair it themselves, to no avail. At the realization that it isn't working, Clara notes that she can't believe they will never see their boys again, and Doc cries so much that he fills up his entire suit with tears.

This is. Such a fun children's cartoon.

Thankfully, the agony doesn't last long because Jules and Verne soon come to the rescue, having borrowed the space center's first ship, the MSC Jennifer. They use it to tow the MSC Marty safely back to Earth, and all is well. End of cartoon portion. Back to Real Doc! He greets us with a very silly joke and cracks himself up.

I'm thinking that Doc is probably very proficient at Dad-jokes around his children and that he stands there laughing uncontrollably while his family just stares at him. Anyway, he explains that this is because space is a vacuum, which leads us into an experiment that creates a vacuum in a jar—using fire to suck a small balloon inside of it. And that's about it!

This was a fun one to write about, even though I feel like this post is super lengthy. I'm glad that a lot of you are still enjoying these!

Join me next time to see Marty pose as a ghost in 1845 London in order to break Clara out of prison.

#back to the future #bttf: the animated series

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sour-n-salty-citrus · 3 years ago

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That 'aw, geez' in that live action thing was the weakest aw geez I've ever heard in my life

Ajdhskdjsksj get his ass

Ok but yeah I'm sorry. Like- Christopher Lloyd does such a great job as Doc from what I've seen (and, ok- don't hurt me for this but I've never actually watched the full BTTF movies akdjaks I've only seen snippets here and there BUT) because he's so like- goofy and cartoonish in his acting as the character. It's so full of life and energy, and idk if these two can bounce off each other in the same way. Morty especially is so full of jittery, anxious wide-eyed (at least at the start lol) energy and idk if this actor can convey that (I'm going mainly off his character in IT tbh, which may be a little unfair. Honestly, if they had to cast one of those kids, I could have seen the kid who played Eddie working. Something about being short and screamy and indignant... Then again, I have no idea what he looks like now haha, I'm just imagining my own perfect fancast at this point lol)

#RaM #im hoping i can look back on this and be like 'oh yeah he did a great job as morty actually'#i probably wont tho :')

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forkanna · 3 years ago

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CHAPTER WARNINGS: roleplay, making out, ass grabbing, trampling, high heel fetish, through-the-clothes orgasm.

CHAPTER THREE

Now that they had established a new game was beginning, the excitable ginger was tearing through her closet to create an 80s look with what she had. Which was plenty; it was her favourite decade, after all – even moreso now that she had visited it in person. She had a black faux-leather miniskirt that she seldom wore, and found a tight red top that went with it fairly well. There were fishnets from some Halloween or other she could add.

As she hastily undid her braids and put her hair up in a side ponytail, she thought about how different Elsa seemed now. A good-different; she was completely at peace with their relationship being unconventional, whereas she never had been before. That was great, right? Now she just needed to figure out why – but she wasn't going to let that spoil tonight. All in due time. For the moment, she focused on laying on make-up so thick that it made her look a little like a 'pro'. But that was the look back in the 80s, right? Really paint it on like you were trying to create a whole new face.

A Tori-face.

The shoes were still in Elsa's closet, but when she pushed open the door to fetch them she discovered her mother had been kind enough to leave them outside Anna's door. So thoughtful. It meant that when Anna saw Elsa for the first time, standing in the living room, they were both completely made up to resemble how they had first met as potential lovers, not as family.

And wow she looked different. A good different. A different that had heat and memories shooting through her because Elsa was dressed to the fucking nines. Not only did the cutoffs and pink crop top still look spectacular on her figure, but her hair was fluffed up, styled as it had been during the dance. It wasn't permed, and it wouldn't last, but as a temporary measure it was perfect. And that was without the bright red lipstick and heavy mascara. She looked really…

Hot. The word was "hot" – of the smoking��variety.

It seemed that Anna had given her the same reaction, too. Elsa sat on the couch, arms limp at her side as she stared, wide-eyed. Her eyes roved up and down, lingering just a little longer than considered proper at Anna's chest.

"Hey, Baines," Anna tried, knowing it probably sounded ridiculous. But she wanted to try this for Elsa's sake; put her at ease. All aspects of their relationship staying to their own lanes. Not that she would keep pushing to go past kissing if Elsa stopped her cold, but who knew? Maybe this would let her get there all on her own.

"Hey, Tori," Elsa replied, pursing her lips to prevent her smile from turning into a shyly bemused grin. "You look rad."

"And you look totally awesome." Her eyes zoomed to Elsa's thighs again, which were a little thicker than in 1985 but she found that didn't bother her in the slightest. In fact, she was a little into it. "Like my shoes?"

Biting one of her painted lips, Elsa gazed down Anna's calves to the hot pink heels. A sound like a strangled whine made it through her throat, but she cut it off as quickly as she could.

"Really? Wow, that's one reaction to have, I guess." The teasing kind of came naturally to her now that she was in another skin. Now she was Tori, and not just herself, not her mother's daughter for the night. "Want me to step on you with these?"

There came a brief gagging noise of shock. Then Elsa pretended to scoff. "No way, barf me out! D-don't be so freaky."

"Okay, fine," Anna giggled, leaving that one alone for now as she sat next to Elsa. "Do you want some… dinner? Maybe a pizza? I think I can get my mom to loan us money for it."

"Nah I'm not really hungry," came the reply. Anna pursed her lips, leaning forward. "That's cool though. Your mom sounds amazing."

"You have no idea," Anna murmured, watching with delight as Elsa's breath came a little shallower and her face heated up. "But it's too bad you're not hungry."

"O-oh? Why's that?"

The question made Anna's smirk turn positively lecherous. "Because I'm famished."

And then she swung a leg over Elsa's lap, seating herself firmly before kissing her with as much strength as she could muster. Elsa threw herself into he contact, and Anna almost had to pull back because it was so much. Apparently, this had been all it would take to unleash Elsa's inner sexual beast. She wasn't out of control, but she was finally pressing her hands into Anna's back as they made out, giving herself over to the tastes and sensations. Imagining herself back in 1985, with the first girl she'd ever loved. Maybe the only girl.

After a while, when they had been grinding and kissing and resisting anything more, Elsa pulled back and gazed up into her eyes. "You… are either some kind of siren, or a devil. I'm not really sure."

"What's that, Elsa?" she teased. "You sounded like an old person just now."

"What I meant was… Tori, you skank," she laughed, and they both grinned and pressed their foreheads together. "Mmm… how did I get so lucky to have the raddest, baddest girl in Dell Valley on my lap?"

Anna resisted the temptation to say 'You made me' and instead whispered, "Fate intervened. We might have been separated by time and space if it didn't. But look: we get to hang out with each other."

"We do." A light kiss on her lips. "Mm, so sweet… but what about your girl back home?" It was an honest question, slipped in with the playing.

"Well… we talked about it, and I think she's okay with me exploring a little." She felt slightly guilty; she needed to discuss this with Punz again, and explain it was still happening. But at least they hadn't not talked about it. "As long as I always come back to her, that is. Not thrilled about it but she gets that it's not anything against her, or me trying to say she's less important."

"If you're sure…" Elsa hesitated. There was no such hesitation in Anna's voice or her face when she responded, leaning down to nuzzle against Elsa.

"Absolutely. We had to discuss… y'know, stuff. And while this wasn't a for sure thing, it was pretty high up the list… now, do you wanna talk, or do you wanna smooch?"

Without further preamble, she kissed Elsa again – and this time, Elsa kissed back. Not just with her lips. Now she allowed herself to run her hands through Anna's hair, too. To press back. To give. Anna wasn't complaining. Quite the opposite. She was enjoying it, far more than she ever thought she would. Of course, she remembered how it felt when Elsa pleasured her. She even remembered how it felt when Elsa kissed her that morning a few weeks back. But she was still unprepared for how it would feel when she was in control.

And, by the way Elsa was squirming beneath her, humming into her mouth, it was pretty obvious that she felt similarly. "You're so… bad," Elsa finally gasped out. Anna chuckled.

"Good-bad or bad-bad?" she asked, despite not needing clarification. It was pretty obvious which one she was. Still, it was fun to tease, so she leaned forward so their lips why just barely touching. "Hmm? Which one is it?"

"Good! You're so good, Tori!"

Oh God. Elsa probably didn't mean to make that sound as hot as she did, but the intention changed little. Anna let out a throaty groan, eyes squeezing shut as she ground her hips into Elsa's already-rolling ones. They should stop. They should really stop. Barely ten minutes and it was getting out of hand.

"You're good, too," Anna breathed a minute later, when their mouths broke apart. "Mmm… and you look good. Do you know how much I like your ass in these shorts?"

That did seem to surprise her a little. Elsa drew back, blinking up at her daughter and smiling very faintly. "You do? I mean… I was kidding when I said you… well."

"What? Never realised you had one of the hottest asses imaginable? Come on." But when Elsa only blinked at her more, she reached down and gripped those cheeks as hard as she could, two huge fistfuls of flesh. "This is like, the raddest."

A loud gasp of desire flowed up from her as the fingertips dug into denim-covered muscles. "Tori! Nnhhh… oh, you're so bad…" Then she licked her lips and gazed up into her eyes. "You really like this that much?"

"Oooh, yeah. That okay?"

"Yeah, Tori. Is it okay that I don't mind you doing that as much as I thought I would?"

"Fine with me," Anna giggled as she leaned down to kiss her neck. "In fact… can I get a good look?"

At this point, Elsa did balk. "Well… I don't think that falls under the category of 'just kissing', you know."

"Not a nude look, Elsa. Just want to enjoy the view. See those shorts work for you."

"I still think this is stretching it."

But then she got up from the couch and paced away, purposefully moving her hips as much as possible. Giving Anna a little more of a show than she did in the clothing store. There was a groan of pure appreciation from the couch, and when she turned around, Anna's eyes followed as she bit her lip.

"Like what you see?" she said, the words coming out as no more than a shy murmur. Anna's eyes found hers, and she gave a slow nod.

"You have no idea what you do to me, Elsa," she said earnestly. There was still heat in her words but it was different. The love she obviously felt had infected her tone, and there was no getting around it.

"Did you want to… touch?" Elsa asked. She couldn't hold Anna's gaze, and it was obvious this was stretching the limits of her comfort zone. Anna noticed; of course she did.

"I would love to, but I can think of a couple of better things to do. That is, if you wanna wiggle that gorgeous ass back on over here."

Suddenly, Elsa's brief bout of nervousness vanished, and she let out a little squeak. Before, of course, doing exactly what Anna had asked. She didn't have a chance to sit down before Anna had moved, though. Lifting one dainty foot, she pressed it just below Elsa's stomach. She gasped, and Anna gave a wicked little grin.

"You know…" she said, "my mom always hated when I put shoes on the couch. Can't get in trouble now, can we?" She leaned forward a little, still grinning. "Kinda fun to take a walk on the wild side, huh?"

For a moment, Elsa didn't seem to be sure of what to say. Then she purred, "I thought you were just going to step on me with those hot pink heels of yours. The way you threatened to do."

That intrigued Anna. Maybe Elsa was just playing, or maybe she really wanted to try that. So for a moment, she ground the heel down a little harder against the union of her shorts, prompting a loud moan. Clearly, this was doing a lot for her, even if it was only because of the stimulation itself.

"I think," she began to whisper as she noticed Elsa bucking against the heel, "that you wanted me to threaten you with this."

"Ohhhh, Tori," she began to pant as they both worked on Elsa's orgasm together. Because it seemed that would be happening soon: if one of them didn't call a halt to everything that was transpiring, it wouldn't take all that long. And Elsa was the most likely to do that.

But she didn't. A minute slipped by, and still they were working the sole of the pink heel up and down against the shorts. Something was so scandalous about this that Anna felt herself flushing, even beyond how turned on it was making her to watch her mother come undone this way. She wanted more: she wanted to tear her clothes off, devour every inch of her. Let Elsa do the same when she was done. But for now, this was incredible and glorious.

One of the little "AH!" noises clued her in that the end was near. She was tempted to switch up her tactic… see what else she could do for Elsa. But this was already far beyond what they had agreed upon, and she felt guilty enough as it was.

So instead she just pushed a little harder, and said, "You look so fucking hot."

Elsa whimpered, her hands holding Anna's foot against her. Her eyes had slipped shut and she seemed completely unaware of the world.

It gave Anna an idea, and as surreptitiously as she could, she began taking off the other shoe. Was it her foot? Or the shoe, and the memories associated with it? Either way, Anna was starting to feel quite grateful that Elsa had kept these, even though they had been used to corner her initially. It took her a little longer to remove the shoe than she hoped, mostly because Elsa's movements were becoming more erratic, and her gasping was very distracting.

But finally it was free and caressing up and down Elsa's leg. The eyes that had been shut widened immediately, and they even looked a little fearful. Elsa was too far gone to do anything about it, especially when the shoeless foot joined the one being ridden.

"Ngh!" Elsa said, hands coming to hold Anna's bare sole. Anna almost couldn't keep the grin from her face – though the heat in her own center made it a little easier than it otherwise would have been.

"You like that?" she asked softly. Elsa didn't seem able to speak because all she gave was a shaky nod and another moan. It still spurred Anna on. "C'mon, baby, you can let it happen. Let my sexy feet take you there."

Well that sounded awkward. She wasn't used to dirty talk – if this could even be considered that dirty. She had never tried on Jennifer, and never needed it with Elsa in the past. But it seemed like the thing to be doing to help her finish.

"Tori… ohhhh, yes… AH!" It didn't take much longer. Seemed that using her lower extremities instead of lips or hands was just the kind of loophole that Elsa needed to feel a little less ashamed of their encounter. Either that, or she really did have a thing and this pushed her past her reservations.

At that point, they came to the same conclusion. The climax was spectacular, and Anna had never seen anything more erotic. Except perhaps for Jennifer doing the same; that was pretty on par. Over and over, she bucked into the hard sole of the shoe as she rode it out, panting hard and relinquishing all hope of keeping her voice down or pretending this wasn't something she had been waiting for over the past thirty years.

Once weak and lying down on the couch, sucking in breath after breath, Anna turned and crouched over her, pressing her lips into a hot chin, a bottom lip. Elsa leaned up for her, and they met for a brief few seconds. Then Anna pulled back to smile down at her.

"Somebody likes those shoes a LOT."

"Ohhh, Tori," she whispered again. Then she chuckled. "Well… maybe I do. But it wasn't the shoes as much as it was the woman in them." Another brief kiss. "I'll probably feel awful about this in the morning, but right now? I'm happy."

"Me, too, Elsa." Another kiss. Then she smirked and wriggled backward until she was hovering over Elsa's hips. "Mmm… something smells delicious down here."

Anna laid little kisses on Elsa's stomach, but she didn't stray any closer to the source of the scent. Elsa seemed to be too tired to protest… or perhaps she just didn't care anymore. That bore investigation.

But Elsa reached down for Anna's face when it seemed she would try and move lower down. She didn't need to speak to remind her daughter of the rules they had put in place. Anna just rolled her eyes and returned to nuzzle Elsa's belly.

"Above the waist," she said, kissing deep red marks into the pale skin. "I know."

"Are- are you sure Jen- your girlfriend is okay with this?" Elsa asked. It seemed she'd given up trying to completely stop Anna's persistent advances.

"Pinky swear," Anna grinned. "Or… pinky-toe swear…?"

Elsa groaned, throwing her head back. Anna took it as a sign to get back to work. "Anna… what we just did is not normal. You know that, right?"

"Though we were calling me 'Tori' tonight?" But she knew it was true, and that Elsa had a point. So she crawled up to settle their bodies against each other. "Alright. Is this a little better? Just this?"

Nodding, she reached up to run her fingers through Anna's side-ponytail with a vague smile. "Sorry. I know… you're probably a little disappointed at how this turned out. But I'm not."

"Why would I be disappointed? I finally got to pay you back for how good you made me feel thirty years ago. And I've wanted to. Even then, I would have if some big idiot hadn't interrupted us."

"Well… I'm tempted to say that would have been better, because we were on even standings. But I think… if you paid me back for it, I would never have been able to let myself marry Kristoff. Or bear his children. I would have done everything I could to hunt you down."

At that, Anna's grin finally turned a little shy again, for the first time in nearly an hour. "Really?"

"Yes." Then she nuzzled up into Anna's neck. "But… for now, Tori, I'm just happy we both turned out as well as we did, considering. So… thank you."

"Thank me? For going back in time and fucking everything up?"

"For doing everything you could with what you knew. It was… an admirable effort? That sounds like I'm saying you failed, but I don't mean that; I just mean that I'm happy with my life, and I think that's because of how much you showed you cared about me back then. Nobody else ever had. My parents tried, but they could never seem to listen to me, and… and it sounds like I continued that trend in the other timeline. Can you possibly forgive me?"

"Oh…" Anna's whimper was sweet and full of affection. She leaned down to better cuddle into Elsa, just enjoying their shared body heat. "In my eyes, you've never done anything that needed forgiving, Elsa. But, like… if it's something you need, then of course I forgive you!"

Elsa's returning snuggle was grateful, full of love and appreciation. Anna didn't want their 'special night' to come to a close on a down-note. If she only had one night to spend like this in the foreseeable future, then she wanted to appreciate all of it. All of Elsa.

"Hey, why don't I order a pizza or something? And you could grab a shower, or… or whatever, and we can just chill?"

But, to Anna's surprise, Elsa shook her head. "Can we just stay like this?" she asked, and… well, that honestly sounded like something Anna would say. Perhaps it was the orgasm, or perhaps Elsa had come to the same conclusion as Anna. Either way, Anna wasn't about to complain. Instead she just smiled, and embraced Elsa tighter.

"Love you," she breathed quietly.

"Love you, too." Lips pressed into her cheek, and she smiled wider. "Can't believe you got me off with your shoe."

"Hey, you were into it! And I can't, either… I mean, it was fun, but I was kinda hoping to go down on you. Bring it full circle or whatever."

"Sorry," Elsa chuckled good-naturedly. "Really don't know what came over you."

"Came over ME?! You're the one who got off to it!"

Tutting loudly, she pushed Anna back to shoot her a 'disapproving mother' look that made Anna snort. "Really? You can't believe that you stroking me through my shorts with any body part, let alone with something Tori wore to the dance, would make me extremely hot? Hmm, normally you're sharper than that."

Anna grinned toothily. "Oh I know," she said. "I just wanted to hear you say it."

"You just- Hey!" Elsa gave Anna's shoulder a light slap. But there was a smile on her face that matched Anna's, and it wasn't long before they were both cuddling each other once more.

They lay there together for some time – it was impossible to keep track. It was nice. It was incredibly comfortable. Anna never wanted to leave because, even if she ignored all the sexual stuff, there had been a really long period in her life where the only thing she wanted was a mother to hold her. Then Elsa spoke and Anna couldn't help groaning in lament at losing this sacred moment.

"Okay now I really do need to go take a shower," she said, laughing when Anna made a noise and pressed her face in further.

"Noooo…." she whined. "Don't wanna move…."

"Cmon, Tori," she chided. "You want me to be comfortable, don't you? It's like a swamp down there." Anna stilled for a moment, before mumbling something. Once more Elsa chuckled, stroking her hair. "What was that?"

Looking up, Anna cleared her throat. "I um…I could clean you up," she offered, face burning.

There was a pause. Not a brief one, either; it was apparent that Elsa was truly mulling over the idea. Then she finally leaned up to kiss her cheek very tenderly.

"No, Anna. That does sound… wonderful, but I already feel a bit guilty for just what we've done so far. But I guarantee you that I'll never forget you offering."

"Aww," Anna pouted, though she remained on top of Elsa. "But it smells so good…" Still, she finished up with, "Can we at least cuddle a little longer before you go shower off?"

Rolling her eyes, Elsa sighed, "Fine, fine. I have to admit I don't much feel like moving either. Ten more minutes."

"Good. I can do ten minutes."

~ o ~

So they did. Anna stayed laying on top of her mother for another ten, which turned into fifteen before they agreed to get up and do something else. Reluctant as she was to let Elsa go, fearing that they would never get this chance again – or at least not for several months – she was at least glad she could do that one thing for her.

Then Elsa went for a shower. Anna tried the doorknob, thinking she would be sneaky and tease her through the curtain a little, but it was locked; she even heard Elsa call out "Ah, ah, ah!" at the sound of the knob rattling, and felt faintly embarrassed that she got caught.

After that, Anna had her shower. In turn, she left the door unlocked intentionally to see if Elsa would try the same, and was unreasonably disheartened when she refrained. That feeling completely vanished when she stepped into the kitchen, wearing her threadbare pyjamas and still tousling her hair, and spied Elsa.

Or, the creature Elsa had turned into.

Honestly, Anna hadn't thought she spent too long in the shower. Twenty minutes, give or take. Those twenty minutes were more than enough for Elsa to give herself a complete makeover. She wore a dress Anna had never seen before, fancy and sophisticated. It fit her so well it was like Elsa was half the age she was.

Although, that could have been the hair and makeup, too. Instead of the faux-perm, Elsa had tamed her hair, likely using a curling iron to create gentle waves. It framed her face and rolled over her shoulders. It lightened up her whole face, which was coated in a conservative amount of makeup. Enough to remove the harshest of lines; a rouge to colour her cheeks and a dazzling blue eyeshadow reminiscent of the 80s without being as all-in 'Baines' as before.

"Well?" Elsa asked with a smirk. "Are you getting dressed? Can't go out looking like that."

"Go… out?" Anna echoed numbly.

"Of course! A nice meal to end a nice day?"

"Oh… I thought we were just going to bed early or something," Anna admitted with a slight blush. "You know, after the whole… like… turning down pizza…"

At that, her mother laughed a little and patted Anna's side. "You're right, I should have said something. And… I know we can't exactly go as 'dates', since everyone knows us in Dell Valley. But I still want to take you out."

"Well… sure, yeah! I just… well, I feel silly dressed like this when you're dressed like that. But it won't take me long! Be right back!"

So Anna went tearing back to her room and changed out of her PJs and into a nice blouse and a skirt in record time; she didn't have many actual 'dresses' as such, so it was the best she could do. She was just looking at her damp hair when Elsa appeared.

"Want me to do your braids? Or something special?"

"Just braids are cool," she said. After all, she would be putting them in braids when she went to bed, anyway – and anything else would take too long.

They seated themselves on the bed and Elsa brushed through her hair before she began to braid it in a French braid; a little different than she had first insinuated. "Always did think you had such lovely hair… first as Tori, and then you when you were little. Then both of you, when I realised you were the same person."

"I had to have gotten it from somewhere," Anna said, smiling even though Elsa couldn't see it. Hopefully she could hear it instead. "Though I can't believe I got the ginger gene when no one else seems to have it at all. You sure I don't have some mystery sperm donor dad?"

"Stop! No!"

"Well… okay, but I'll hold you to that."

They were both quiet for a moment. "I think it suits you perfectly," Elsa said eventually as her nimble fingers made quick work of Anna's hair, and soon she was finished. Still, they sat there for a little while longer.

"I kinda wish I didn't have so many freckles, though," Anna admitted. "The hair's okay, but when the colour invades my face…"

"Aww, sweetheart," Elsa began, circling her arms around Anna and pulling her back against her for an improvised embrace. Anna relished in the feel of Elsa's soft breasts at her back. "I wouldn't change a single thing about you. Never."

Honestly, Anna could have stayed in her arms like that forever. But, they had plans – if not an actual reservation – so reluctantly, she pulled herself away.

"We better go," she said, twisting around to face Elsa as she got to her feet. "Otherwise we'll miss dinner. Although…" She bit her bottom lip as Elsa slid to the edge of the bed. One delicate eyebrow raised in the direction of the redhead, and Anna shrugged her shoulders. "I mean, I might miss dinner, but I got all the dessert I need right here."

It was pretty obvious to what she was referring, and a blush steadily grew on Elsa's cheeks. "You… are… impossible to deal with. Impossible!"

It made Anna laugh, before leaning forward to grab her mother's hands and tug her up. "C'mon! Let's go show you off to the world!"

To Be Continued…

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