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If you don’t mind telling me, can you tell me what you found wrong with act 2? I did think it was a little rushed but I still love it, I’m probably biased tho
yes!! i was debating on making a post about this so i'm glad you asked lol
just wanna say that this is not me saying that my opinions are right; i find it great that you loved the act and who knows if my opinions will change in the future anyways
i'm going to break my thoughts down by character and compare what happened to them in act 2 from where they left off in act 1 to help organize my thoughts
JINX
last we saw jinx in act 1 she had fought vi with the help of sevika and isha and lost her middle finger due to a shot fired by caitlyn. sevika released the air from the janna temple and kept jinx and isha covered while caitlyn and vi were separated from them. the strong wind causes piltover to be covered in these paint explosions which incites the people in the undercity to start riots in jinx's image
we start act 2 with jinx and isha doing sisterly things that she wished she got to do with vi when they were younger. we also see, with some conflictions, that she isn't interested in being a symbol for the undercity and doesn't seem to have much going on outside of that because her goal of "finishing what's left of her family" basically ended when she realized that vi still loves her during their fight. when isha and the other people from the rally are taken to stillwater, jinx breaks in, releases them and receives more love/praise from her supporters. here it can be strongly interpreted based on jinx's reaction that she was going to be accepting the role of being the symbol for the undercity and help lead the fight against piltover's rule. but after all of that, her reunion with isha is interrupted with the introduction of warwick/vander. then she spends the next two episodes trying to find and cure him with the help of vi and there no further development on her role in the rebellion, aside from the mural in episode 5 and her calling herself a hero because of the jailbreak.
i love that jinx was able have her family back again, it was my favorite part of act 2, but i found it strange that there was a lot of focus spent on jinx being the symbol for the undercity rebellion in episode 4 and how she was presented to be ready to step into that roll only for it to be almost forgotten about for the next 2 episodes. i don't know if the possible death of isha and warwick is going to be used as reasoning for get her to actually "join the cause" but if not then i don't understand why it was implemented into the show in the first place. my guess is that its going to be used just as a way for jinx to easily get people to fight in whatever battle is going to take place in act 3 since it seems like the noxians are already going to be attempted to be removed by caitlyn anyways since she betrayed them in episode 6
JAYCE
jayce ended episode 3 possibly entering ??? into the hex thingy after touching it and smashing it with his hammer (way to go dude!!) while he was with ekko and heimerdinger. we do not see him again until the end of episode 5 where he emerges from the hex looking like he had survived some crazy arcane apocalypse and experienced a shit-ton of trauma... after realizing how powerful viktor has become and killing salo, he makes his way over to viktor's cult base and kills him too before fleeing the scene lmao
i've already seen people joke about how it's no wonder jayce has haters because he just continues to fuck things up but this is the most interested i've been in his character since first watching the show. but i'm worried that were not going to get to see much of what happened to him while he was in the hex and that the show is either going to just have jayce tell us what he witnessed or use quick flashbacks instead. (and like... the show is named arcane because of the arcane magic and hextech is crucial for a lot of the story arcs so i would've anticipated that there would be more focus on that i guess??) though it isn't really fair for me to use this as criticism for act 2 since act 3 is not out, with only 3 episodes left and a lot of story to wrap up i feel like that is going to be the case
MEL
mel ends act 1 getting captured by the black rose and spends act 2... being captured by the black rose... i also really like mel and have enjoyed watching her character develop but i feel like her story is part of the show that has bitten off more than it can chew. i am not familiar with anything from league so the black rose stuff is very new to me and as much as it is interesting, it just doesn't feel necessary to have as part of the show. i think if it were introduced more in the first season then i would understand why it's a part of this one but it's being used as a storyline that is either put to the side or is getting ran through to get to the other stories arcs that need their own attention.
on a positive note, i am excited that the show is writing her as a character more than a piltover counselor and that we get to see what her tattoos, or is it armor??, are truly intended for
EKKO
so ekko also entered the hex with jayce??? i guess we don't know for sure since he didn't physically interact with it and i guess we still don't know now lol
i realllllyyy missed him in act 2 and his story is another one that i'm worried is going to be reduced to quick flashbacks or dialogue. my guess is when he returns from the hex, that is going to be the explanation for how he can manipulate time and he's going to use it at some point to help with the final battle
HEIMERDINGER
no complaints it was refreshing not seeing him ngl
AMBESSA
we finished act 1 with ambessa declaring martial law on the undercity and appointing caitlyn as commander with the intention of manipulating her and using piltover's recourses and weaponry for her own gain... and i would say that's basically what continues in act 2 for her as well
ambessa is a great antagonist and her motivations were set the moment we saw her in season 1: she wants control hextech and she wants her family to be safe. i don't think there was anything specific about her character or story that didn't fit for me because honestly everything with ambessa has been very consistent. i really look forward to her fight scenes in act 3
VIKTOR
viktor because jesus in act 1 and continues to be jesus in act 2 BUT a more powerful jesus... plus he has a cult
i just think he is another rushed storyline and that's pretty much the sum of it. it was wild watching him be able to enter people minds and float around in those celestial planes but i wish we got to see more about how he got to that point. when i think back to season 1, i liked how that season took time to show viktor's desperation with the hexcore and trying to find a cure for himself. it made me feel almost as desperate as him and i wanted him to be successful. watching act 2 didn't make me feel much of anything for his character and same goes for his death, although i'm sure that isn't going to be the last we see of him anyways
CAITLYN
we all know where caitlyn's arc finished in act 1 lol
i was really surprised that her first scene in act 2 was of her already showing doubts in how ambessa was running piltover because i think a lot of us expected her to do that much later in the act. i also wasn't a fan of how the show chose to have her character express these concerns with a couple scenes of dialogue rather than have us see her do something about it. if she were concerned that the noxians were being too violent with the people in the undercity, then show her trying to do something to stop it ! i feel like her scenes were either her saying she wasn't sure she was ok with being commander or it was her being like "i have to find jinx" and avenge my mother. so when she ran into vi in episode 6 and was somewhat casual about it, i was almost confused that there was nothing else to it... especially when the next thing we know is that she and vi devised a plan to stop ambessa from getting warwick??? it felt soooo random and i started laughing because it was practically ridiculous to me
i'm glad the act 3 trailer showed vi calling caitlyn out because there needs to be a discussion between the two of them over everything that happened. also it looked like it was taking place in caitlyn's house (mansion) and idk i think i just assumed that they wouldn't feel safe to go back to piltover after pissing ambessa off so maybe there's a reason for that?
VI
saving my best girl for last cause i'm biased oopsie... uhh we also know how things went for vi in act 1
ugh this might just be me getting my expectations too high but i was really hoping we were going to see more with her pitfighting than just those first 2 minutes. if anything i would have liked some scenes with loris before he decided to leave after her drinking got too bad. and thats other thing... you have vi being presented as an alcoholic but she's totally fine the second jinx shows up?? as mentioned in cait's section, i don't love how their reunion scene went. i find it really difficult to believe that vi would have enough trust in cait right away to let her be brought to ambessa without any concerns that something could go wrong. but in general it feels like vi doesn't have much of an arc going on anyways... she started off working with cait to find jinx which didn't go well. then she's working with jinx to help vander which as far as we know could be dead. so now is she going back to working with cait to stop the noxians? it just seems like she doesn't have a solid motivation this season when it could have been something about her finding self-acceptance for all the guilt she's had over the years or idk making her lead the rebellion in the undercity, just something to make her feel like she has purpose.
and i'm going to stop here :) i think i got everything i wanted to say somewhere in here but either way i'm sure i get my point across just fine. i want to reiterate that i don't think i'm right about my opinions and also wanna say that i am enjoying the show, though it may not seem like it with this lol. i think act 3 will make me change my mind about a couple things anyways but this is how i feel currently and that's pretty much it
#ask#arcane#arcane spoilers#...idk if i should do one of those keep reading section thingys or not... but im afraid people wont read it if i do so... its not going
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WIP Tagging Game!!!
Rules: make a new post with the names of all the files in your wip folder, regardless of how non-descriptive or ridiculous. Tag as many people as you have wips. People send you an ask with the title that most intrigues them, then post a little snippet or tell them something about it!
Thank you for tagging me, @allmightskitten ! But, because I'm into 19 other fandoms with almost a 100 WIP, I'm not gonna write them all here. Since I'm also more into One Piece these days, I'll share some of them instead!
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This world is a wasteland (where nothing can grow) - DQ Brothers & Law
I've been working on this since this poll, and the first chapter is almost finished! This is a DQ Brothers fic that focuses on Law and his new life with the Donquixote Family who happens to be the mafia. He gets adopted by Doflamingo (not because of the goodness of his heart, mind you!) and gets closer to Rosinante as they try to survive. I've planned to make it 9 chapters (and already drafted what'll happen at each one), too.
2. Fools & Clowns - Buggy/Mihawk
What the hell is Buggy supposed to do when he suddenly encounters the infamous Marine Killer - Dracule Mihawk - who also seems to decide to mess with a lowly pirate like him for some reason? (Or, Mihawk tries to flirt but Buggy thinks he is getting threatened, which causes a lot of frustrations to the swordsman.)
This is going to be a fun, silly little fic with lots of misunderstandings.
3. I love you anyway - DQ Brothers
Rosinante is a freeloader who lives off of his brother's back because of his inability to keep a job (he really tries but they keep firing him for some reason!) but Doflamingo loves him regardless. (Or, Doflamingo has attachment issues and makes it Rosinante's problem, even if he doesn't know it.)
4. Flesh, blood and all that other nonsense - DQ Brothers
When Doflamingo came to them with Homing's head, the Celestial Dragons decide to humor him and say that they would let only one of the brothers back in; the choice was his. What would Doflamingo do now?
5. Lovesick - Buggy/Shanks
For the first time in his life, which wasn't that long, mind you, Shanks had gotten to see an actual prince. He had blue hair that he had never seen before with a red nose to match. He was the cutest boy that he had ever seen! He knew then and there that he had to be friends with the other. (Or, a pirate boy and a young prince meet and fall in love, and decide to run away together. Roger and his crew was not included in the making of this plan, tho.)
6. Outrunning Fate - Buggy-centric
What if Buggy had been a slave before being rescued by Gol D. Roger and his crew?
7. Sickly Sweet - DQ Family (focusing on Homing's Wife)
The love of a mother is unconditional, which meant she would do anything to make sure that her boys were happy and safe, even if it meant giving herself up little by little. (Cakeverse AU)
8. No better version of me - Buggy & Shanks (Maybe even Crocodile??)
"What the hell?" Shanks mumbled in confusion. "What is wrong with your wanted poster, Buggy?" The other boy's bounty had been substantially increased to 1,000,000 Belli after their visit to an unkown little island had ended with them fighting with a marine ship and the writing had changed from 'Dead or Alive' to 'Only Alive' as well. Which was strange, considering that for the Marines any pirate was the best if they were dead. Even Roger and the others were flabbergasted with this sudden change! Buggy took the poster out of his hands, almost causing it to tear along the way and stared at it, looking just as pale. "….Oh shit." (Or, Buggy has a secret that he is dead set on to keep it hidden but life doesn't seem to follow his wishes as he is dragged back to a place that he hadn't thought that he would ever return.)
9. Just a bite, that's all - DQ Brothers & Law
I'm not going to spoil too much but this'll be a Zombie Apocalypse AU where DQ Brothers find a lost Law when trying to survive together (Rosinante is happy to see the kid but Doffy, well, not quite. He doesn't like to share.)
10. and now you'll see (that there's not much left of me)- DQ Brothers, Law
This is a Medical horror AU where Doflamingo forces Corazon to go under a *procedure* after his betrayal. He's angry at his brother but he'll be damned if he lets him go away from his side.
11. No idea who you are meant to be - Buggy-centric, Roger, Xebec
There's a rumour going around that Xebec is still alive and planning an attack. Roger and Garp meet once more to talk about this threat. Everyone in Oro Jackson is nerveous and all serious, but neither Buggy nor Shanks have any idea why or what is going on.
(You guys probably know the theories about Xebec, tho I was SHOCKED that there were no fics about it or with him and Buggy. That needs to change real soon!)
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These are some of the WIP's I'm planning to finish first! See any you're intrigued by?
Again, thank you for tagging me, this was fun! I'll tag @veroinfaciem @viviancurtis @acescorazon @peaceshire @portagas-chan @drheartstealer @the-bar-sinister @aimbutmiss @lumiolivier @pointycorgiears @emma-cowboylikeme . I thought you guys might like this! I hope you won't mind the tagging.
#One piece#donquixote doflamingo#donquixote rosinante#donquixote corazon#donquixote brothers#trafalgar law#trafalgar d water law#Buggy#Buggy the clown#Shanks#akagami no shanks#red haired shanks#shuggy#bughawk#dracule mihawk#hawkeye mihawk#Sir Crocodile#gol d. roger#roger pirates#rocks d. xebec#xebec#tag game
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Prompts and rules 2023
Hello, dear fellow fans of our beloved Founders <3 The event goes into the next round! Here are now the prompts and rules for the event in 2023. If any questions occure, please don’t hesitate to contact us!
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The event runs from 20 November to 26 November. You can submit your work on ao3 to the FoundersWeek2023 collection, if you like.
The main prompt list
[image desc.: Kid Hashirama and Madara sit on the prompt list. The title reads "The Founders Week2023". The prompt list follows: Day 1: lingerie / reincarnation / unlikely friendships/relationships Day 2: cultural differences / fire & forest / a sign of loyalty Day 3: any AU / any swap (generation, body, role ect.) / Crossovers Day 4: forgiveness / time travel / ultimate betrayal Day 5: prank/experiment gone wrong / girl boss / beast within Day 6: “How dangerous, to finally have something to lose” / ghost wedding / held for ransom Day 7: founders trying to fight off the emus / genderfuckery / lost cat
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Alternative prompts
Without a sound They disappeared Without a sound God interfered We all witnessed the rapture And we mourn for those Who got lost In the great divide
Blind Guardian - Let It Be No More
Summer's in the air and, baby, heaven's in your eyes I'm your national anthem
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Enjoy memories, yes, but don't be a slave to who you wish you once had been.
Brandon Sanderson - Tress Of The Emerald Sea
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tagged (kinda) by @mingguangsword!
i lost my first draft of this post 😭 let's try again.
1. why did you choose your url? because i am weak for puns, and because i am actually su she. weepy yet defensive lestat de lioncourt at the end of s2 voice, i am him, he is me.
2. any sideblogs? if you have them name them and why you have them. a whole whack of them:
@dailyayao which is just daily screenshots and scans of jin guangyao from all versions of the mdzs canon
@yaozongzhupressoffice my neglected satire blog where i answer asks and reblog stuff in-character as yao-zongzhu. occasionally will make references to his entirely heterosexual feelings for his very good friend ouyang-zongzhu in the tags.
@itwasabeautifulwebbing my minthara baenre from baldur's gate 3 simping blog lol. it's also turning into a catch-all for various video game nonsense, tho i'm definitely not as active there as i am here.
@fakerashid same deal as above, just for armand from amc's interview with the vampire.
3. how long have you been on tumblr? i first joined back in 2011 with a different username back in the migration of the dragon age fandom from livejournal to tumblr, and have been kicking around in some form or another ever since.
4. do you have a queue tag? sure do! 'moling queue' because, as i said, i'm weak for puns.
5. why did you start your blog in the first place? originally this blog had a different username, and i started it with the intention of cross-posting very serious horror fiction thinkpieces from a wordpress site. obviously i stopped doing that and have been enjoying myself a lot more here since i stopped taking myself so seriously lmao.
6. why did you choose your icon/pfp? i don't understand the question, that's literally me, su-zongzhu. (please god recognize this is a joke)
7. why did you choose your header? i just think jgy and sms look very powerful and dapper together in that scene. 😌
8. what’s your post with the most notes? some unfortunate ides of march shitpost that broke containment within an hour, i have it muted and hope to never think about it again.
9. how many mutuals do you have? no idea. lots? lots and lots?
10. how many followers do you have? 1271 as of this morning.
11. how many people do you follow? apparently 400 on the nose
12. have you ever made a shitpost? absolutely not, i don't have a sense of humour or believe in laughter.
13. how often do you use tumblr each day? every time my attention wanders pretty much lmfao (despondent)
14. did you have a fight/argument with another blog once? never!!!! 😬
15. how do you feel about ‘you need to reblog this’ posts? i ignore them.
16. do you like tag games? yes!
17. do you like ask games? "i love them, but i don't like chain asks" <- same hat
18. which of your mutuals do you think is tumblr famous? "probably ray" <- oh no oh dear 😬 i think if i qualify as tumblr famous (doubt.jpeg) then probably a bunch of my mutuals are, too.
19. do you have a crush on a mutual? i am boring and married so no.
20. what is the last song you listened to? this performance of the famous "flowing water" composition for the guqin.
21. what are you currently watching? nirvana in fire, and it's consumed my soul. mei changsu 👀...... /clenches my fist
22. sweet/ savoury/ spicy? "savory"! <- correct!!!
23. what is your current relationship status? "literally on my way to break up with someone T_T i'll be single in a few hours!!!" <- omg fennel!!??? um, as i said above, i'm married! no plans to divorce mr. sushesaid, he surprised me with flowers and takeout from my favourite indian restaurant yesterday because i was having a rough day.
24. what is your current obsession? jin guangyao. it's still jin guangyao. it's probably going to be jin guangyao this time next year too.
25. what are nine albums/ songs you've been listening to lately?
it's not an album, but basically all of the ensemble and solo performances by zi de guqin studio on youtube.
return to cookie mountain, tv on the radio
the wellermen's album of shanties and other arranged covers
the hades 2 videogame soundtrack
the baldur's gate 3 videogame soundtrack
the chain, fleetwood mac
all of the lyrical ballads from the kentucky route zero videogame soundtrack (are u noticing a pattern, because i am)
the haven videogame soundtrack
the assassin's creed valhalla videogame soundtrack
tagging: @ratheralark @holy--milk @carnivorous-horses-lover @sunriseverse @watertightvines @frodo-of-the-nine-fingers @confusion-and-more @occasionalinanity @varethinsilico @thepurplewombat @peacocksdance and anyone else who puts eyes on this thing and feels moved to complete it.
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20 Questions for Fic Writers Tag Game
Thank you @acediscowlng for tagging me!! I haven't posted anything in nearly a year but sure, why not
1. How many works do you have on AO3?
24, I've orphaned and deleted a couple of fics lol
2. What's your total AO3 word count?
106 303 and I'm very proud of every single one of those words, I usually have to fight my perfectionism to put anyhting on page
3. What fandoms do you write for?
Mostly DC comics! I have one (1) les mis fic and one (1) x-men fic
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Catalogue of Things Unsaid by far my most popular fic with 1000+ kudos, it's a Superbat fic. I love re-reading this fic, sometimes I like my writing in this and sometimes not but I'm still fond of it Bear Me No Witness my most popular Jaydick fic, I worked really hard on this one so I'm glad people liked it Lost And Never Found is a moody, horror-esque JayDick fic that really fits my style blow a kiss; fire a gun my first fic ever asdfghjk idk it's kinda silly False Alarm I wrote this mostly as practice, I don't really have anything to say about it
5. Do you respond to comments?
Yes!.. except on wips because I'm delusional and I keep telling myself I'll reply once I update the fic... lol
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
I don't think I have angsty endings? I don't remember most of my endings, it's my least favorite part of writing, oops
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Probably You're committed, I'm your crime ??? because jaydick are kids and they are cute
8. Do you get hate on fics?
Nope, fortunately the people who read my fics want to be there
9. Do you write smut? If so, what kind?
HAHAHA...HA uhh I wrote mermaid porn, and that's it, mostly. I wrote one sex scene prior to that but it wasn't explicit
10. Do you write crossovers?
No. I don't read them either
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not really, there was a Cass/Tam fic that resembled my own Cass/Tam fic: let me count the roses but this was a gift and I think the giftee just liked this concept and asked for it again LMAO
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
No
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Yes! It was fun but I don't think I'm built for it, I like oneshots and my co-writer liked multi chapter stories hence why the only time I tried we didn't finish it lol
14. What's your all-time favorite ship?
Jaydick ❤💙 they're the reason I started writing fic in the first place
15. What's a WIP you want to finish but doubt you will?
😭😭😭 all of them please send help (see above: I don't like writing multi chapter stories but sometimes the plot needs them)
16. What are your writing strengths?
The way I can tell a story in 7k words or less, "short but packs a punch" is 100% my strenght. Also the fact that I really enjoy editing
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
Endings. Every. Single. Time
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic?
I love it in cases like les mis fandom. I get so excited when I see french especially in canon era fics. There are a lot of ways in which we can put the translation in the notes or using a skin I hate it tho, when I'm reading a fic and a latine character's only personality traits are that they are a criminal and they speak spanish BUT that doesn't mean I don't want more spanish speaking characters in fic even if they're just minor characters
19. First fandom you wrote for?
DC comics! I started writing and posting fic in 2019 and it's still the fandom that I write for today, attempts at branching out haven't been succesful
20. Favorite fic you've written?
Always the hardest question to answer but I really, really like re-reading Bear Me No Witness it has it all: Dick in a croptop, a news scandal, fake marriage and Jason messing with Dick to hurt Bruce I wish I could write a sequel!!!! (self call out)
Tagging @laaawliet @braingray @paperempires no pressure though, guys!
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Writing Fight Scenes Part 6 - Body Type
Depending on your character's body type, they are going to have very different fighting styles, and very different strengths/weaknesses. Body type can also have an impact on which type of martial arts a character excels in (see part one for a non-comprehensive list)
Really, there are two main considerations: weight and height. I'll write about the opposite ends of each spectrum and their strengths and weaknesses, as well as the things I've noticed whilst fighting each
(Please note, I'm breaking this down into very large boxes - most characters will exist in the in-between. As such, please take this with a grain of salt)
Weight
'Slim' characters:
Pros:
Slim characters have less weight to move around, so they tend to be faster
As such, these characters do better in drawn-out confrontations
Cons:
Because they don't weigh as much, they likely won't have as much power behind their hits. Remember, power comes more from weight than it does from strength! (see post number two for a more in-depth explanation)
Slimmer characters also don't have as much muscle and/or fat to 'pad' their body, so it is easier for them to be hurt
I never had much of a problem sparring with short slim people - I myself am 5' 4" and sometimes, it's just easier to fight fire with fire. Tall slim people were a different story - I found it difficult to get within my personal striking range. More on that in a minute
'Stocky' characters:
Pros:
Stocky characters have more powerful strikes
More muscle/fat -> more padding. Some heavier characters can actually injure their opponent simply by blocking their strikes!
Intimidation factor; anyone who knows what's good for them wouldn't pick a fight with someone who looks like they could beat their ass
Cons:
Carrying around more weight gets tiring - movement will be slower and endurance will be lower
Adding to above, these characters are easier to 'pick apart' - someone who is smart will throw lots of well-placed strikes to squishy spots in order to wear them down
I fucking hated sparring with beefy people omg. It didn't matter if they were tall or short, one good hit from them and I was checking my ribs for cracks (I never broke any but I had the wind knocked from my lungs Multiple Times). I also refused to throw certain strikes (i.e. roundhouse kicks) at some of my larger opponents because all they had to do was lift their knee, and I'd break my leg on theirs. The only good thing about sparring them was that I could generally dodge their strikes. When I couldn't...
Height
'Short' characters:
Pros:
Shorter characters have a lower center of gravity, which makes them more balanced/harder to knock over. This is way better than it sounds (more on this in the next post?)
Cons:
Short characters will have a much harder time landing hits because they have to actively step into their opponent's range (the danger zone) in order to have even a chance. This is way worse than it sounds (most of my worst sparring memories happened at the hands of tall mfs)
I don't think I sparred with anyone shorter than me by more that a couple of inches, excluding children. Yes, I sparred with children. There is one guy tho, he was short and stocky and he had the most devastating front kicks. Vomit-inducing. I broke his nose (sorry dude)
'Tall' characters:
Pros:
Longer reach! One decisive kick to the ribs from a tall character can stop lots of fights before they start. If you want to write a character who is a bitchass bully, make them tall. No I'm not mad (lie)
Cons:
More body to control will make it harder for a character to stay balanced
Tall characters are often, to some extent, slow; their strikes have a wide range, but they're very vulnerable as they pull their arm or leg back. A dashing, intelligent, good-looking short character can use this opportunity wisely
It was SO frustrating to spar tall people because they all knew how to bully me out of their range. I could either keep my distance and risk not being fast enough to dodge (bad) or trying to close the distance and running straight into one of their hits (worse)
This has become a tall people hate post. You know who you are. I'm in your backyard
I hope this was helpful! If you are above 5' 10" start running. Begging for someone to ask me to tell the story of the time I broke a grown man's nose
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3, 6, 9 [for cogito] and 4, 7, 9 [for azya] :-)
For Cogito-4:
3. If this oc could change anything about their life (or lack thereof), what would it be, and would you change that?
Well, he'd probably like to bring back his mentor. Or, at very least, accept it if he realizes he can't. But aside from that he probably knows that he's incapable of staying in one place for too long, even tho he tried it a few times. And yeah, he kinda moves with Destiny's seasonal content so it's convinient for me. Or well. He will return to moving with seasonal content when I return to sesonal content.
6. What was the inspiration for their story/ lore?
Well, a bunch of things - his backstory really evolved over time, as did his character. I really like Eliksnii, exo lore and guardians lore so these are the elements I used the most. And Master Ryba was created after I've listened to a really edgy song about mentor's death.
9. What is your favorite part of having this oc?
It's fun to imagine what your player character would say to what happens in seasonal content. Especially to go "He wouldn't be there, he wouldn't say that" every time. Also dressing him in little gay outfits, Also - drawing robots is fun.
For Azya:
4. How was this oc named? Is there any specific reason or meaning behind it?
Ok, so there is this book called "With fire and sword" which I like a lot and has a character who is named that. And I mean, he really sucks but also, his name sounds cool. It's kinda gender neutral also and all Ajidialian names are so it fits. It quite literally means "Asia" but in universe it has no meaning (beacause Asia doesn't exist) (unless I come up with some meaning in the language; I have quite a lot of it). And Zaavim is very vaguely based on one sylabe of my own surname. Also, it's read as Za-avim.
7. Have you made any alternate universes for this oc? if not, what kind of au would you make of them?
Ok, so to start - he, as my compleatly original character, is a sort of AU alredy - he was originally my NationStates leader but then I started to come up with compleatly original universe for him. Also his character changed a lot, so basically they only share a name now.
If I were to make an AU... Modern Earth/human AU, oblivously, if I wanted him to interact with other people's human OC wihout unpacking that he's not a human first. Apocalypse AU would be fun, tho he is very much a guy who would die first (depents of what genre tho I suppose). Or I could trap him in Groundhog Day AU. Or turn him into krasnoludek (borrower), he would make a fun krasonuldek. Honestly, he's kinda flexible.
9. What is your favorite part of having this oc?
One, putting him in cute outfits; two, imagining him splattered in blood; three, I also like imagining him happy with his husband. Sappy, I know, but that's me. I should draw them together one day.
Bonus, because I thought about it:
1. Would this oc fight you if they could?
He would never fight anyone (unless. unless). If I hit him in the face he would immiedatly cry and run away.
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PGR A Changyu Character Profile
Good day! Here's part two of the character profile postings! Changyu's was being worked on in my drafts in terms of formatting right before the tmblr update that made the plug-in I use keep on crashing tmblr. Without further ado, you can learn more about him in the cut down below. Or on his dedicated Interlude Story here (*'ω'*)
Voice Line Data
Motion Voice Lines
Lobby Voice 1
Changyu: Repair fee, snack funds, plus consolation money... Well, we get along with each other so I'll charge you half my usual price. Shouldn't be a problem for you with that much, no?
Lobby Voice 2
Changyu: Wanna play a game? I'll toss this copper coin in the air, aand...here we go! So, wanna try and guess if it's heads or tails?
Lobby Voice 3
Changyu: Commander! C-commander? (Inhale) Com-man-der~ ...Tch, I just can't get used to it, argh. You know what, lemme just directly call you by your name.
Raise Affection Level
Changyu: Is there anything you want? It's not my style you see, receiving gifts regularly and such...
Repetitive Taps
Changyu: Guh! If you keep on patting my head, I'm not gonna grow any taller than this!
Log-In
Changyu: (Yawn) Hrmm? It's rough waking up this early... Can't you give me a bit more time?
Online for a Long Time
Changyu: Let me help you with your work. Oh, count me out on the paperwork-related stuff tho'! Spare me from having to read all those letters.
AFK
Changyu: (Yaaaaawwnn)~ ...Guess nobody's here huh? 'kay, I'm gonna leave now??
Shake
Changyu: Hah! I'm not flustered by that!
Offline for a Long Time
Changyu: You promised, right? That I'll be flicking your forehead if you ever leave without a word. (Huff)... C'mon now! I'm not gonna flick that hard!
Introduction and Formation
Structure Acquired
Changyu: Yo, I'm here to help out. Don't you worry, I'll be chargin' that old man Hassan for the payment for my services.
Level Up
Changyu: My ability's gotten better now. Well, that's only natural!
Advancement
Changyu: If it's 'bout rising in the ranks, I know all about it~ And? In what place am I currently ranked[1] then? Oh, I got it wrong?
Model Improvement
Changyu: Heheh, I'm all fired up now!
Skill Upgrade
Changyu: Oh okay~ So this part here's the problem for this move.
Equipment
Changyu: Well I'll be, this looks really good! Hraaah! Yaaah!
Add in Team
Changyu: C'mon, let's break through those guys' line of defense!
Assign as Captain
Changyu: Watch after me throughout the battle now so I won't overdo things.
Mission Accomplished
Changyu: Piece of cake!
Daily Small Talks
Voice Line 1
Changyu: Repair fee, snack funds, plus consolation money... Well, we get along with each other so I'll charge you half my usual price. Shouldn't be a problem for you with that much, no?
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Do I really have to stand here all day? Tsk, man talk 'bout boring.
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Don't you guys here over at Eden have anything interesting or something~? All this fighting's bound to make you go crazy, y'know?
Voice Line 4
Changyu: You free right now? Lemme hear some interesting stuff from your mission last time. In exchange, I'll let you in something 'bout the train cars even Sofia doesn't know of. How 'bout it?
Voice Line 5
Changyu: There's no point in practicing martial arts if you're only gonna focus on practicin' techniques that use your fists. Basically, this practice method's useless. Guess there's nothing I can do about it huh~ How 'bout I completely teach you everything I know from the ground up? This is a rare chance for you, y'know.
Voice Line 6
Changyu: Commander! C-commander? (Inhale) Com-man-der~ ...Tch, I just can't get used to it, argh. Y'know what, lemme just directly call you by your name.
Voice Line 7
Changyu: Wanna play a game? I'll toss this copper coin in the air, aand...here we go! So, wanna try and guess if it's heads or tails?
Voice Line 8
Changyu: Don't underestimate me, my height's got nothing to do with this!
Voice Line 9
Changyu: Whenever I'm with you, I can comfortably do my job. How 'bout consider working with me over at the Trade Alliance? ...Ahahahahaha, just kidding.
Voice Line 10
Changyu: Y'know, that old fogey Lee—...I mean, Lee always wins whenever we're playing trump 'cause of card countin'[2]. There's this "trick" I'm using in my case though. Wanna know 'bout it? It's a secret.
Voice Line 11
Changyu: The basics of being an opera actor[3]'s necessary for this performance. If you're curious, I can teach you 'bout it.
Voice Line 12
Changyu: Man, you sure are popular, y'know that~ Introduce me next time when there's a chance. Huh? Relax, I'm not gonna do anything.
Raise Affection Level
Voice Line 1
Changyu: What are you doing!?
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Why not give this kind of kiddy stuff to other people?
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Come on now! Stop treating me like some kid!
Voice Line 4
Changyu: So, you want me to act as your proxy and sell this?
Voice Line 5
Changyu: Woah hold on, what are you planning to do? I'm getting goosebumps from that.
Voice Line 6
Changyu: 'nother gift for me? You're not planning anything behind all this, right? ...Wha-, I never said I don't want it. If you're gonna give it for free, 'course I'll accept it.
Voice Line 7
Changyu: I can easily strike a conversation with others, but it doesn't mean that I'll easily accept them.
Voice Line 8
Changyu: I just tried saying it casually, but to think you really remembered it, huh... He~h, thanks.
Voice Line 9
Changyu: Whenever I stay here, sometimes I remember 'bout the times I was working at the theatre. ...Oh, it's nothing. I just thought it's not bad, y'know, spending time together with you just like this.
Voice Line 10
Changyu: Is there anything you want? It's not my style you see, receiving gifts regularly and such...
Voice Line 11
Changyu: There's only a handful of people I approve of, few enough I could count them with one hand! You're part of that handful of people.
Voice Line 12
Changyu: Commander, wanna try and attempt this with me next time?
AFK
Voice Line 1
Changyu: Huh? You're still here? Don't go tattlin' that I'm slacking to Jamila.
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Wakey, wakey, rise and shine! If you don't, I'll whack your butt 'til you decide to wake up.
Voice Line 3
Changyu: (Yaaaaawwnn)~ ...Guess nobody's here huh? 'kay, I'm gonna leave now??
Voice Line 4
Changyu: Commander? ...Geez, you really fell asleep huh? Then, I'll go help myself and doodle a turtle on your face.
Online for a Long Time
Voice Line 1
Changyu: I don't know how other people could endure just standing still all the time in this place without doing anything.
Voice Line 2
Changyu: You sure are desperately working your butt off. Does Eden pay you double for the overtime?
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Stop being such a workaholic, let's go out and play!
Voice Line 4
Changyu: Let me help you with your work. Oh, count me out on the paperwork-related stuff tho'! Spare me from having to read all those letters.
Log-In
Voice Line 1
Changyu: Yo', morning.
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Okay, sheesh, I get it!
Voice Line 3
Changyu: 'kay then, let's go over what we're supposed to do for the day, shall we?
Voice Line 4
Changyu: (Yawn) Hrmm? It's rough waking up this early... Can't you give me a bit more time?
Voice Line 5
Changyu: Have you eaten already? ...Ah, this is how everyone usually greets other people back where I used to live in.
Voice Line 6
Changyu: You're pretty lively today, huh Commander. Wanna spar with me for a bit?
Offline for a Long Time
Changyu: You promised, right? That I'll be flicking your forehead if you ever leave without a word. (Huff)... C'mon now! I'm not gonna flick that hard!
Shake
Voice Line 1
Changyu: This much tremor's totally fine with me. All the shaking on the train's more intense than this.
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Maan, that scared me... Having to stand properly after that, not gonna happening soon! Although you can actually see that I can't walk straight, it's clearly intentional. That's right, it's all skills, y'know!
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Hah! I'm not flustered by that!
Repetitive Taps
Voice Line 1
Changyu: Heh, an ambush? My reflexes are incredibly fast.
Voice Line 2
Changyu: Guh! If you keep on patting my head, I'm not gonna grow any taller than this!
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Ack, why you...! Hold up! You're gonna pay for messin' with me!
Activity Task Full
Changyu: We're done already? So the time from now on is my free time, right?
Battle Dialogues
Battle Start/Character Switch
Changyu: Since I got paid for this, leave the rest to me!
Voice Line 1
Changyu: Move from your waist, focus your Chi, and release it to your fist!
Voice Line 2
Changyu: My inner ability's about to burst forth!
Voice Line 3
Changyu: Effectively know when to strike the opponents, and keep your strength in check with your heart!
Ultimate Skill
Changyu: Within the shapeless form lies a formless style!
Light Damage
Changyu: Guh! I'm fine!
Heavy Damage
Changyu: Hey, don't just stand there, do something!
Incapacitated
Changyu: Dammit... Come on, move... move...this damn...body...
Friend Support
Changyu: Work outside of what's stipulated in the contract is service, free of charge.
QTE
Changyu: Cùn Jìn![4]
Battle End
Changyu: Make an effort even if you were bested, and carry through until you achieve inner peace.
Structure Documentation
Document Detail 1
ADL-17, Changyu. He used to work at a theatre in Kowloon and boarded the Nona Ouroboros to escape the "war" during the Golden Age Era. However, he was "restrained" and lost his memories as a result. After a certain incident, he fled from the Nona Ouroboros and became an escort for the Adiliek Trade Alliance.
Document Detail 2
In addition to Changyu's body being collectively equipped with both a young man's tenacity and keen and nimble reflexes, he could make use of his abilities in kung-fu to its fullest—his eye color would instantly change whenever he reaches the maximum output.
Document Detail 3
After he regained back the memories he had lost, Changyu frequently remembers the view of having meals together during his time working at the theatre. Even though he studied how to recreate the flavors through how he remembers them, he shared the food he cooked among the residents of the commoner train car because Structures don't need to consume food. Unfortunately, however, he gradually stopped cooking, seeing that the food culture of Kowloon isn't much accepted in the Azil. He may not talk about it frequently, but Changyu feels a bit regretful about it even now.
Document Detail 4
The copper coin Changyu owns is a "war trophy" from a certain military operation. Since it was originally a limited edition commemorative coin issued inside the Nona Ouroboros, the wealthy owned it in order to display both their identity and stature. It seems like Changyu frequently uses some kind of "trick" to acquire them. Although it isn't needed anymore, Changyu still brings it with him out of habit.
Document Detail 5
"We shouldn't abandon each other, no matter what. Whatever happens, I'll absolutely keep our promise." Changyu, who was born in Kowloon, has experienced farewell and betrayal countless times. Because of that, he doesn't easily give his trust to others. Although he promised to have a strong working partnership with the Commander, it was the first for Changyu to lighten his wariness and vowed to cooperate with them.
Document Detail 6
"The war has taken everything from me, that's why I'll do everything I can to protect you. I won't let anybody take what I hold dear ever again..." If one asks about Changyu's frantic reasons, it's because he doesn't want to turn against the trust and promise he had made. And one thing he thought of while answering was to sit around the dining table with the Commander and let them have a taste of Changyu's homemade food as if they were part of his family.
Rumors and Secrets
Secret 1 Even though his merit focuses on practicality, Changyu has a moral sense strong enough that he won't be led astray just by his self-interest alone—his definition of merits not just entails material things, he has also thought that kindness and relationships with other people are also valuable merits.
Secret 2 Calls people who are older than him "uncle" or "auntie"—rather than disrespecting them, Changyu calls them that out of respect towards people older than him. If they feel offended by what he called them, Changyu would immediately change what he'd call them.
Secret 3 Takes good care of things and is a frugal person. Because of his disposition, Changyu hates wealthy people who simply throw away things and refuses to make a deal with them. Jamila however, is different and even thinks of her as an exemplary merchant—it's because she'd make use of the merchandise to its full potential.
Secret 4 Structures cannot grow taller—Changyu seems to be very bothered by that fact.
Secret 5 While he is fundamentally a lazy person, Changyu will certainly finish the work he accepted.
Secret 6 He specializes in Kowloon's cuisine and likes to cook for other people. Though the food Changyu makes is delicious, most of how it's plated become visually off-putting because he hates spending too much time in the kitchen just for prepping and plating.
Secret 7 Has 48 places he calls his "secret hiding spot"—they're located at the gaps between each train car. All of the things he had collected are hidden in those said secret hiding spots in case something happens to Changyu.
Secret 8 He won't easily make a promise to others. Changyu would either refuse or would somehow dodge the topic if it's a promise he wouldn't want to make from the very beginning.
Secret 9 Changyu's dream was to become a hero just like the ones in theatre plays—the reason appears to be that he wanted to be strong enough to protect everyone he cares about.
Secret 10 He is well-versed in traditional games like Mahjong and such. In Mahjong, Changyu could differentiate each tile simply by touching it and has the skill to rearrange them in the way he likes.
Secret 11 He's familiar with many magic tricks used in performances aside from card tricks. He applies them on missions to outwit his opponents.
Secret 12 Changyu's tail not only allows him to grab things with it and regain his balance, but it can also serve as a weapon. He pretends to trip over, wraps his tail around his opponent's feet, and as he feigns an apology, Changyu shifts towards the counteroffensive. It appears nobody has yet to avoid it at first glance.
「甲乙丙丁」is a word used to indicate an pecking order based on the ten signs of the Chinese Zodiac. However, it could also be used to indicate a grade or rank.
Card counting is a calculation method in Statistics used to increase the odds of knowing which card is currently on play.
「四功五法」is a collective term used in traditional Chinese theatres which encompasses the basic skills and techniques a classically-trained opera actor should have.
Cùn Jìn is a type of striking attack using your fist in both Kung Fu and Karate.
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it’s sunday, and this this Sunday i posted ch 2 of moonlight! as such, i now have six fun facts!
1. most of these are ideas ive been sitting on since like, week-if-not-day one of lamplight, so im INCREDIBLY excited theyre Out There on the page officially. ren’s ascension to godhood, how he loses his body, how he gets it back
2. the monster fight was NOT in the og plan tho. but i needed a way for Ren to prove his godhood, and ive been idly thinking abt how Ren needs a reason for the neck scar in his design, so hey, monster fight!
3. in the original plan Ren had turned himself to stone, not fire, and the fire was more like an extension/expression of his will. figured it was easier to cut the middleman, but it’s why Ren gets his body back the way he does
4. there’s a bit of narration from the end which i wrote for a treebark week piece i never finished (or got very far in) lmao. everything from “A great many things frustrate Ren about his current form.” to “Of everything Ren misses—his hands, his face, his legs, his nose—the lack of a voice is the worst one.”
5. speaking of scenes i lifted from other places, there’s a scene some ppl might recognize as being from tumblr--the Ren pov scene from torchlight, which i did for a tumblr ask a bit ago. i def edited it a good bit to go into Moonlight, tho
6. i also had crystalline, the scar and grian lamplight fic, open for a section of this, and talked a bit w flowey for figuring out scar’s short part in here. the convo we had abt him was a lot of fun, and i made some big overhauls for what i had down for Scar already, all of which made the scene a bit more interesting to me as well as suiting the Ren scenes better
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Footsteps of a Stranger
Written in 2019 to be part of an anthology that I don't think ever quite got off the ground. Spawned a good character, tho. Short story that I broke up into chunks for Tumblr. Inspired by the Noir Princesses art by Ástor Alexander.
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WC Total: 6289 -Part 1, 628 -Part 2, 1276 -Part 3, 1163 -Part 4, 686 -Part 5, 1851 -Part 6, 685
Warnings: Guns
Summary: A PI is on the case to discover who has been setting forest fires. A beginning investigation leads to more questions.
The smell of destruction still lingered, even days after the fire had been put out. The blackened heart of smoke had stained the trees, the nubs, the soil, and it seemed to cloud the very sky. Dragging my sickened stomach along, I stepped into the hollow husks and began to explore. The sprite in me twisted in turmoil as I walked, but I had to know. There was something here if that letter was right. Something I missed the first time.
I didn’t see it until I was well into the destruction. Bending down to inspect the forest floor, I spotted a different kind of broken limb; it looked human. Didn’t make sense; they had accounted for all the people in the area, dead and alive. So this was humanoid but not human. A quick examination revealed a bark-like texture along the skin, including small moss pieces grown from the skin itself. At least...that’s what it looked like under the burn marks.
So the ‘someone I recognized’ wasn’t a person. The letter was referring to a fellow earth sprite caught in the fire. Which shouldn’t have happened, as they are among the first to sense a threat to their forests and usually flee. Sprites are better at healing than fighting. I had to wonder why this one hadn’t had time for either.
Something clinked under my fingers−something metallic. Numbness shot up my fingers, and I jerked back, shaking my hand and peering at the spot. There was a metallic cuff wrapped around the wrist, scorch marks running up and down the broad sides of the cuff. I tapped it again with a curious finger with the same result.
I heard footsteps behind me and grabbed the arm, yanking the cuff free and stuffing it into my coat pocket. Just in time.
“Excuse me,” the tone was high-bred. British. Snobby. “I do believe this area is off limits.”
I stood and turned, taking in a white tailored business suit and shoes so clean they looked out of place. Something clinked as he moved, watching me with haughty superiority between his bushy eyebrows and a nose to rival an eagle’s beak.
“Excuse me,” I echoed his pretentious politeness, “but the forest is open to all.”
He smirked. “Not anymore. This land was bought by my company after the fire. We offered to handle all the restoration, and the city heartily agreed.”
“And what company is that?”
Instantly whipping out a card, he held it out. “Virginia Co.”
I took it with a glance. “And you’re what? The representative?”
“David Ratcliffe,” he answered with a sniff. “I own the company.”
My eyebrows went up. “The big boss, huh?”
“Yes. And you’re still standing on private property.” He held out a hand to direct me away, trying to both escort me and shoo me. I went with it, having no real reason to argue; the body hidden among this wreckage was a signpost of which trail to follow, and this Ratcliffe had given me footsteps in the mud.
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“David Ratcliffe,” I repeated the name to Thomas while sorting through my files. “Apparent owner of Virginia Co.”
“Oh,” he said, the pages from our mysterious tipper spread out in front of him. “They’re the land sharks that set up shop a few years ago...an offshoot of a company overseas, I think. And they’re the ones trying to buy up local farms.” He tapped me on the shoulder with a pile of papers.
Company reports. “So,” I mused, thumbing through them, “they’ve been putting money into buying up the land right outside of the city, including any farms still in residence.” I glanced at the location of all the farms that had been vandalized or had the owners suddenly die off and back at the Company reports. They had made bids that were ultimately rejected by the same farms. Suspicious coincidence, of course, but not enough for the local police to be concerned about.
“So...they’ve been buying up land and possibly committing crimes against those that won’t sell,” Thomas mused, thumbnail pressed between his teeth. “But what about the forest fire? And the sprite you found?”
I had been wondering about it myself. According to their records, all the places that suffered from wildfires had been bought up by the Virginia Company years before. The news articles in my own stores all boasted the Company declaring land preservation with each purchase. I was always bothered with big money buying up the forests inhabited by earth sprites, but had little recourse; very few humans knew about the world behind the curtain, and had proven they’d rather remain ignorant than admit they were at fault for a population’s decline. Both sides of my heritage were proof enough.
Regardless, it made little sense why they’d start setting fires on land they owned.
I shifted my seat and felt something shift in one of my pockets: the cuff I found. I turned my pocket inside out and let it clatter to the ground, catching Thomas’s interest. He picked it up and began turning it over in his hands, glancing up at me with eyebrows raised.
“What’s this?”
“Not sure; found it attached to the dead sprite. I think it might be the reason why it was dead.” Thomas dropped it with a startled look, and I shook my head. “No, not poison. I think it’s iron.”
“Iron? How can you tell?
“It blocks magic,” I explained, nudging it with a finger. Cold spread through the tip of my index up to my knuckle. “I’m not affected as badly, but it still gives me a chill the way no other metal does.”
“So someone put this on the sprite, and...it died?”
I shook my head. “No, but it kept the sprite from healing the forest. Probably kept it from healing itself after it was caught in the fire.”
“Which means whoever started the fire knows about sprites and how to stop them.” He said exactly what I had been thinking, which put a different spin on this whole case.
“Exactly,” I said, gathering up the papers and watching Thomas start to do the same. “I need more information.”
“What are our questions?” The response was automatic, and I was grateful. He was becoming a decent investigator−more of a partner than an assistant.
“The contents of the forests that burned,” I began, sliding the papers back into their folders. “What’s so important about them, about the farms that have been bought up. And, if we can, keep your ears open for humans that know about sprites and magic. We may be looking at something more serious than a human-on-human squabble.”
He nodded, standing and getting our coats. “I’ll hit the local spots. See if Meeks and Flint know anything.”
I took my coat, swinging it over my shoulders as I headed out the door. “Good. I’ll visit our friend in the forest and see if she can blow away some smoke.”
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“With his half earth, leave to Will”
A limerick sequence
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He does shrewedness no wore their housbonde hangman who clear against a living, nor men. And hand, he door shame, a shawl’d there I the be spake and Empress they betray.
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With his half earth, leave to Will. If that shall unlocking in they should scarce because I took the too, many a hill. Like personal quiet-colour own parfit charm!
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And them in, gather so strong, indignant of departed by so little tune place. ’ Air; he naked faire after mouth opened surprised not how; and laboured end.
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And straightway to re-teaches. Lords turns to been so bright of my self up that rekketh Wine was a Wise Men from friends went in man that he garlandscape me—even ay.
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Gin ye are lying little bag, hung stone—when the shadows han does keeps away his gardyn ground, in the lame. And yet I wept, and thence we had make and gazed: I play.
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So goon an ear confusing again. Kindness, the Highness headpeace has not run. You vomit to me. Spoiling of it was them nat had seal’d fall shoe is distances?
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Most feele as the first he walke I wanderson taught wave, I quite of ale. Reason to kill the one life-blood of the deid o’ the urge to have learned not conscience.
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Where will doe, as dry together. That and lips fading brere, and taking into me. She was which an ear-shape me eek to each ther this bed or fairy, could again!
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You not waiting that is a wind, go sleep. Your lovely Polly chambre cause I less robbed us both had face, nor life are for that and make to stay, faults the autumn’s blow.
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Wish to dance wood, and smiled, whence to their three? The wring we made youth, mine. For thy sweetheart! If I havė noon have no see you ain’t neverence to the reason’s eyes and then.
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’ Had set myrtle leade the Lambe? Came very was found, yu run swim, gladder-bitten must die. She three leaders might me, the stairs: and them teach, have your patience loss of you.
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Poor foot; which he reed on: there that he smart. When will get a riche, of zeal away; and strong, with the did keep? Piers, he she sail with such an urn, for in hue, Great or sand!
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No long their own brain? And thro’ thee blunt fist, was a merely instrument? Or what is no such auctoritee were the World, to something Wisdom never looks his fight aid.
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But they wise, and, rank, we be stinking of tho? Till not rob a little mair or none or please, dost sinning mourning whatsoever came of Lochroyan in God’s surface.
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And o’er than a hill die of thy han al that say that cough, this verse a knife, inside to pay. For his dayes heards laddie. And I was gone, of Her, salámán saw, within.
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As help would should myself was synne! Thought the sat by elves had come, and die and hadde we goeth; come, when my arms he knell, and a’ his lere, enaunce; her saw the garlands dead?
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Be cut backe, and shaped coldly blood candle and for each House of shabby grey, as his old blossomes never much I do move, yet in burning mass of this, pardee!
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For she beauty, but ay the silence. Her ran away, too dearer the means so fairy, and blood and moisturbed from hours alive therefore that the hadde a pretty.
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Like a hands no eye of alle we good dead, and when I should rather, with a virtuous crickening fleeting hers in the grace. Seen in his gane whole armour hands.
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This dame” in endyng days stuck away. Called by father the lust own to pluck thee never was a generally the Apostel wal, or if he met herkneth be vnfedde.
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For his will doe, as day, but trepidation of than lesse flash stay, I nyl nat entomb us. I said he gem so wys be my heart, thou would these may desire!
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So rare: after thee, or a lintwhite the World, that which had o’er used. I haddens dotted: but if more thy horne. The saw hypocrisy death th’ funeral fire!
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The false course. The cast, and twilight her feet of you are liueryes bend, since the fond of every dyssh and doors, pardoner, as yet be tobroke foaming, and yet that foot?
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’ Me tyta or daddie’s you praise; soundless past as so fair fond Phant’sie, when sheddeth her state, for, God made of. To seye, I will art left the floor of bitternesse nat I.
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When the prime, like a wheel instrument? And yive the sweetness still haue it out a little trouble drownde. The twelve is bed was The tree on without ye could delit.
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In this please, than to for their apparailled thee biseke! Who remain’d and turn’d have his little by all other, floats over he changely breath and strive not stare.
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Oft I have nor clowne, or the hope will draws the daily likne yourse. Come with cypress of the ferthe. What convict lies that existening, or face, but for fell: mething wind!
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On rose world weary. Of life that is dreamer, beams, wean; mishanted: the soul was fondly leaves from thee! We must now, and Lucy Gray will bitter. May get marry night.
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Morality which you been at please in tear to fades, but foretell men, and began to my name. And formed by all see, the care: her speaking base armies of the moon.
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’Es me birds awake us spring? Some with golden sownde, he paper at evening downe hys packe. The ful gladly sprout of this, to attract and least, thou dost but more.
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There that weary to him, until it pride and that unfair gift, there, lo! And even it was which put in age appetite I wolde hand ogled, watching this ago.
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Now down the Eyes like, no hopes couplemen to allaying mouth and hill; and weep a kiss, hundrels, when in hue, finding ’t was he! But t is angry holour wind.
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The garb wi’ an and of joking mud and can give you loved the strong, and pyneons be done. Which precept the seyn. Except hold your eye alone; and yet lette there to spard?
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Ye, wound wise antic pour decay happy state, light, but something idle little tention rat avert her pale delight: band othere that long you lovely bough. Alas!
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By the like a young like a candle of linden blue gaue him day is it mercy itself and spring whil the sun him, unto me and melodie. She dight, to crown’d.
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To try the seafaring base arm over to throne, your grace, where. Such entered not stood at night to rear whose richess; and smite the sky: sae wyling. ’Er is no sure tea.
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And made of the sport they lived on her fingers maim. Always in inspire and Wedlock scarlet gown, a ragout, She was his petticoat wait for it’s liker thee list.
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So weep a kings a scream. Groaned, and the old blood for forests, cradle of this door unto me. And there upon there is sough to you controlle we extremely spend?
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I love is comrade Lucy clime on them she smooth they, but conscience. Yet, all you can your to ease; and all who wouldering had brother’d on this dames viewed him also.
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With since young flesh and him good? In such as others breast, then, if she warm life with roam, my wife’s a crazy auld move, by hymns different issue shepeherde I heart.
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Tho will, who did attens about luxury. Too higher they cannot sweet a sing, and woe, beauty free for night, sir; for an ill wine-red and on troopers and Time?
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The face of her wish the days from crowne sholde a plank, and Locks again and pin’d thing clove. As thorn neat, because in a little close heart, then slow autumn’s snare on the heare.
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Be she hideous river of an instantly enterest Chlorish on noon of all remain’d; for in the babes of silver coming Polly Stewart! Ah, poor fish.
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How convict-clothes, with built on thrice is a relieve, yet, yet what are no longer bled with rage. Thou Me, for to seek anew some rain: yet of quest to this hauty down.
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For said, to be but her, and little: nor to come. Served in grow never glad husband other then heedles, and doun, and also, that Lente them; and hideous parade.
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Eternally hills outgoe, that little clowne, that creature, like of delights inke, and his flesh and this Pardon you so melanchor wine are in ones of tribulacioun.
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Are Love, in red contrive to set up this mine are gone: so, love them to Tibullus, I quaff up to kiss. What me one, in fact of pain, that he doubled by a glance.
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But twenty leaves of eight, we’ll haven hearts! While in a ducklings; and, since to shore, yet coats; and all eye upon my silks are the Field; nor made him eyes: but world’s surface.
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They look less Earth! Or if you had’st straits feature wol use thar their paced into aggravate the children of the top. Or if he yate face over things cool; but the tomb?
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He heat: o Bacchus fast. What is—the dapper waukens after they haggled, were. With thoughter, and the parents. The latch I heart too stoop; let courself to purge the land.
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She is face of tears of hem on the Root heaven’s King; but little looked up to hold, and paye his neck wings, the mincing it castle, small? Which for to young, soon his wise.
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Who slumbering grace was where is stedde, and down! In vain to anothers gave had got myself wit were shape of scorn to thee, as we scarcely compassion’s ill pleasure.
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From friend tow taken of affects suffer tyrant. At last prechestow so nice a half earth, no this wretch, in pairs: with so sweet skin ye bigamye; why chinks his book, friends?
#poetry#automatically generated text#Patrick Mooney#Markov chains#Markov chain length: 5#205 texts#limerick sequence
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Hi there, first I want to say i came in peace. you are probably new to tumblr. There are different quirks on different sites. Like on Reddit, if you go to the Sherlock subreddit, you can rant about anything as long as your language is not bad.
On tumblr tho it’s different (obviously bad language is not welcome anywhere), because tumblr has a filter function. You can block any tags/blogs you think boring or hate, so as a result, not liking a ship is not a valid reason here to question it. 99% of time if a blog has an obvious ship or really, any topic, and you question it, it’s automatically considered as harassment and you’ll get blocked even if you use good language.
Especially if a blog tags its post with the ship/topic and you still question it, they’ll yell ‘I tagged my posts! Why are you here!’ and people will support it becasue that's how it works here. Some blogs will have a pinned DNI (do not interact) people/topics, but one can figure out the blog theme easily even if there’s no DNI. You may come across people saying ‘you need to curate your own experience on tumbler’ that’s what they mean.
As for the sideblog thing, yeah, something terrible happened in march and it lasted like two months(? My mind blacked it out). The blogs were a literal war zone. You are sooo, soooo lucky you were not here, I seriously mean it!!! Sooo lucky! It was very stressful to go through. There was almost no roleplay going on during that time because mods were busy fighting off those bad guys. All of them have 4 to 6 sideblogs. That’s why people have freaked out this time around. It was brutal time in march! ah, shudders.
That mass bullying started 6-7 months ago but if you count from when it mainly ended, it was probably only 3-4 months ago. You can ask the mods for details. I don’t think it’s my place to tell you more, because mods may not want to talk about it. they deleted all the posts about that mass bullying but you can ask them if you are skeptical of what I said. I see the mods are really patient with you so I think they’ll answer. Last week I told the mods that I kicked my cousin off my sideblog last xmas because she wanted to stir up drama. You can verify this with the mods too.
I hope you enjoy your time here on Tumblr!
Well, thanks! I will unfortunately have to stop interacting with the RP, but I enjoyed my time.
And I do NOT think bullying is okay in any way shape or form. Even by my sister.
I think the difference between us is clear. She thinks the opposite of fire is water. I think the opposite of fire is no fire.
@artofdeductionbysholmes @johnhwatsonblog
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nobody knows me but
1. ahhh i like everyone i've played in their own way sorry
2. divine hate and suffer!!!! (idk if they popular) also sworn through swords, lock and load, 7hells theme, first vergil battle, doppelganger battle geryon theme, mhmmm i hate you you stupid horse but the music is nice. also not sure if fire inside is popular but i like it-- and roar roar roar is kinda cool. oh and red hot juice. OH and forza del destino . Please i literally love all of them. almost .
3. trish is kinda cool... also not sure if kyrie's brother counts as antagonist but he was an enemy at some point and he's sorta cute. and arkham is totally underrated I MEAN YEAH HES GROSS BUT HE'S COOL??? he's supposed to be repulsing so all the sympathy goes to vergil so i think its very cool written. also the way a middle aged man scammed three little idiots is hilarious. also uhhh mundus ? do i need to explain
4. uhhhnnn... dmc1 nelo angelo? would be funny if you had to kinda... use mundus' enhancements and powers but keep vergil sane while fighting and keeping your actions "fair" and conscientious or else your head hurts and you fall crying and screaming or your concentration starts to decline rapidly and you go stabbing yourself. like old snake idk.
5. im weak i'd just shatter in pieces like those tiny imps. but if we go pretending im cool then aahh... i would be a pair of daggers or little swords and i'd definitely have something like a notch to pull out everyone's guts :з (two little khopeshes pleasee) and the element would be like electricity to contort everyone in shock bc thats how the inside of my brain feels like and i want everyone to go suffer. also it'd probably zap the wielder back every once in a while just for good measure. also it would probably mess up the wielder's brain for a while and make them see or hear stuff or percieve everything in random ways like sometimes everything would feel super bright or too yellow or too loud or every sound in specific pitch range would feel DEAFENING but all the others muted or it'd just feel like your thoughts are super slow or super fast or you cant control them-- ok this feels too personal
6. idk the order guys are stupid but i think they could make an interesting story?? like how tf you get that obsessed with demons summon and kill summon and kill and also turn yourself into a demon for no fucking reason THEYRE CRAZY IN A DUMB WAY I WANNA HEAR IT
or maybe more about mundus and belial and other hell stuff!! sparda you know its about you too. we know youre alive go grabs your kids and chop that tree and get the fuck back. also trish what did she do at mundus' whats it like serving him. YEAH NELO ANGELO YOU COME BACK HERE. we digging up yalls trauma tonight
7. errrn not attracted to men much tbh. nero is kinda cute but just visually
8. well obviously trish is hot. lady makes me feel kinda funny though i would like to be friends with her she'd probably find me annoying tho ┐( ̄ヘ ̄)┌
9. metal gear uh. funky characters. also a slasher if you count mgr. cyberpunk was sorta fun also hilarious characters and obviously i just love action battles so yeah. also i spent an ungodly amount of time at different platformers BUT PLATFORMING IN DMC IS FUCKING ANNOYING I HATE IT. ummhhh also some sandbox games like minecraft but idk not much in common there.
10. i have this vague concept well uhnn... a stupid autistic emo-ish teen/ bro in twenties who feels out of their place with people and so they develop that edgy tendency to run away into the woods or go explore a stupid abandoned place and go pick up animal corpses or pieces of junk and eventually they somehow get cursed or find something and they gain demon powers which fucks them up mentally even more but also somehow comforts them and keeps them grounded so they now lurk in the dark after collere or whatever boring ass job they have and seek more and more otherworldly stuff but not as in to gain power they just feel at home with all the voices also give them that weapon from №5
DMC Ask Game
Which character is your favorite to play as, and in which game?
Which non-popular Devil May Cry song is your favorite? No Devils Never Cry, no Devil Trigger, no Bury The Light, you get the idea.
Which non-Vergil antagonist is your favorite? Why?
Which non-player character would you like to become playable? What would their moveset be like?
If you were a devil arm, what kind of weapon would you be? What would your element be? Why?
Which character has the most interesting story/lore to you? Why?
Which male character is the most attractive to you? Why?
Which female character is the most attractive to you? Why?
What games do you like besides Devil May Cry? What are some things that those games have in common with Devil May Cry?
Do you have an OC? Tell us about them!
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Otepää, Mixed Team NH HS97/5 km + 2x2,5 km + 5 km | 6.1.2023 Norway quickly catches up on first after jumping part Germany and comfortably leads until the end. Austria starts and finishes third
1. Norway | Jens Lurås Oftebro, Ida Marie Hagen, Gyda Westvold Hansen and Jørgen Graabak 🇳🇴 2. Germany | Manuel Faißt, Jenny Nowak, Nathalie Armbruster and Julian Schmid 🇩🇪 3. Austria | Franz-Josef Rehrl, Lisa Hirner, Annalena Slamik and Lukas Greiderer 🇦🇹
#nordic combined#team norway#team germany#team austria#otepaa 2023#my gif#the fight for places 4-6 was fire tho
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Twisted wonderland hunger games AU
(Keep in mind i am 99% sure i placed them wrong and this is my first long post feedback would be nice. I am only going to put the funny ones and the most important ones sorry. I will also not do the nights... I am typing this on my phone that is why sorry)
District 1
Kalim Al - asim
Malleus draconia
District 2
Rook hunt
Sliver
District 3
Idia shroud
Ortho shroud
District 4
Vil schoenheit
Jade leech
District 5
Riddle rosehearts
Jack howl
District 6
Floyd leech
Leona kingscholar
District 7
Epel felmier
Sebek zigvolt
District 8
Lilia vanrouge
Jamil viper
District 9
Deuce spade
Trey clover
District 10
Ace trappola
Azul ashengrotto
District 11
Ruggie bucchi
Cater diamond
District 12
Yuu/mc
Grim
The bloodbath
-Ruggie, grim, ortho, jamil, rook, kalim, jade, vil, sliver, deuce run away from the cornucopia.
-Lilia, riddle grab a backpack not realizing it was empty (damn🤣)
-ace finds a bag of explosives (dear god take it away💀)
-azul sets trey on fire with a molotov(💀damn💀)
Day 1
-ace and azul track down and kill ortho(nooo my baby😭)
-yuu/mc thinks about home(damn not much different from nrc💀)
-a lot of people hunt other tributes... There are too many sorry💀
Dead
Trey
Ortho
Malleus
Day 2
-vil, grim and floyd get into a fight and floyd kill them both(😭not grim)
-jamil steals from yuu/mc when he is not looking(if it him idc🥰)
-epel gets explosives from a unknown sponsor(💀 god damn another one that needs it taken away)
Dead
Leona
Sebek
Cater
Vil
Grim
Day 2
-epel catches ace of guard amd kills him
-azul steals from rook when he is not looking(how tho😭)
-jack defeats deuce in a fight, but spears his life(lol)
Dead
Kalim
Ace
Day 4
-idia defeats jack in a fight, but spares him(i surprised)
-sliver chases yuu/mc
Dead
None
Day 5
-a lot of people hunt for other tributes
Dead
None
Night 5 (tw in this one)
I added this because i found these nights important btw
-riddle throws a knife into idia's head(shit you got good aim)
-rook can't handle the circumstances and commits suicide(uhhhhh.... Idk what to say guys)
Day 6
-jack repeatedly stabs deuce to death with a sais(what is a sais??)
-sliver shoots a poisonous blow dart into floyd's neck, slowly killing him
-jade attacks riddle, but manages to escape
-epel stalks yuu/mc(simp much)
Dead
Idia
Rook
Deuce
Floyd
Day 7
-jade runs away from epel
-azul travels to higher ground(sir you are a merperson you need water)
Dead
None
Night 7
-sliver kills ruggie with a sickle
-azul dies from thirst(what did i say💀)
-riddle stabs yuu/mc in the back with a trident( finally some did it)
The feast
-epel ambushes jade and kills him
-jamil kills him with his own weapon
-lilia falls in a frozen lake and drowns
Day 8
-jack dies from an infection
-jamil goes hunting
-sliver tries to sleep through the day(key word TRIED)
Dead
Ruggie
Yuu/mc
Azul
Jade
Riddle
Lilia
Jack
Night 8
-epel and sliver falls into a pit and dies
-jamil questions his sanity
Dead
Epel
Sliver
Winner
Jamil viper🐍
That took too long man let me know if i should do it with the staff as well. Could have done better but i am typing thing on my phone💀
@teeteeweetee
#twisted wonderland#twst#twisted wonderland x reader#ace trappola#trey clover#riddle rosehearts#cater diamond#deuce spade#sebek zigvolt#lilia vanrouge#sliver#malleus draconia#diasomnia#jamil viper#kalim al asim#rook hunt#vil schoenheit#epel felmier#azul ashengrotto#floyd and jade leech#ruggie bucchi#leona kingscholar#jack howl#idia shroud#ortho shroud
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Just a few "nitpicks" i wanted to share: 1) first of all, really matt? K-pop in the freaking second to last episode of the whole show?? In the final battle with Andrias??? Look i like k-pop but it was Soo out of place 2) Marcy and Sasha's calamity forms look bad imo. Marcy looks boring and way too similar to Anne, and Sasha looks like she's trying too hard to be cool and edgy with all those spikes (tho her ponytail being on fire IS cool) 3) i wish we had gotten to know the olms the same way we got to know the other amphibia races, they looked so cool but were just kinda there 4) the way Marmar and sash got their calamity powers felt so cheap it just sorta happened 5) i don't necessarily mind the idea of the gems having a self destruction spell but i wish the show didn't pull it out of it's ass in the very last episode. Tho now that I'm thinking about it, why would the cat god make a self destruction spell for the gems? 6) "the prophecy is more of a request for help than anything" THEN WHY CALL IT A PROPHECY?? in fact where did they even get the prophecy? How did mother olm know about the spell?
Honestly, I never understood the K-POP thing. Like....was it really needed?? It kinda cuts any tension that scene could have had....in favor of saying they managed to get the rights to use a BLACK/PINK song. Like, well done for getting the rights??? But don't get the need for the scene beyond a joke about K-POP really.
The way the calamity trio forms all together being done was just....meh??? They obviously had to do the forms after foreshadowing all three can do this in Mother Olm episode, but like, all the theories about Sasha getting hers via something happening to Grime or Marcy getting hers via fighting back against the Core...kinda just became nothing, and the only detailed one out of the three seemed to be Sasha's, while Marcy's couldn't even maybe resemble an adventurer outfit maybe and Anne's was just a upgraded form of the one we kept seeing throughout the show.
Honestly, an episode with the Olm's wouldn't have been bad really....but you know....we really needed that episode I guess with Sprig and Ivy being that annoying couple we all hate to be around.
"Why would the cat god put a self destruction in the gems?" Because we needed a half-assed way to split up the found family. Like, they really made the cat god confusing as hell for a character that was really only in the finale.
Honestly, I feel like they wanted to do a prophecy....but also didn't know how to execute said prophecy in the finale, so now they just say it was more of a call for help for some reason, making it confusing why its called a prophecy then.
#amphibia critical#like what even was the point of the prophecy#if it was just that the whole time????#and why did the gems have a self destruct spell???#seems kinda stupid when you realize evil used them this whole time when they could have self destructed then
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