#the drafts for the first 4 chapters
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kys in a I have concert band at 6:30 and a full day of school + choir + rehearsals + I have to run and it’s currently 1:45 and I have insomnia
#but dw guys I’m writing my ff!#the drafts for the first 4 chapters#should be edited by the end of the months#then I’ll send it to my beta writers#I feel like I’m giving#I can do it with a broken heart#the caffeine from last week is still somehow in me#should I be trying to sleep?#yes#but will i?#no#yayyy#😀#eah#ever after high
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Crocodile's inability to truly get people to follow him is so interesting though, because in that way he's like the polar opposite of Luffy, who has the ability to draw people in and get them to follow him instead
And like it's not surprising Crocodile can't get anyone to be truly loyal to him (Daz Bones aside), since his primary method to get people to do as they're told is through (threats of) violence and money (if he has any). Like yes, that will get people to do as they're told, but you can't buy loyalty, you can't beat people into trusting you. And so, when shit hits the fan, who the fuck would stay for you, when you're like that
Of course, Crocodile is like that due to his trust issues, and god only knows what caused those trust issues. It's possible he was always like that, or past trauma caused him to become like that-- if it's the latter though, even if he was like more trusting of others once in the past, people still didn't stick with him in the end. The trust was one-sided
I think this also reflects in a really interesting way in Cross Guild actually, 'cause like. Despite being scared shitless, not even Buggy is willing to keep on taking Crocodile's shit. Even that clown has his limits before he starts a mutiny against Crocodile
And while Buggy hasn't really done anything to "earn" his current position in the world (like he hasn't Proven Himself in Combat, he's just Faked It Until He Made It), because he has treaten his underlings with basic kindness and respect, even if he's been lying through his teeth the whole time, that has been enough for Buggy to gain his followers' trust. And that's why Buggy's able to rile up people to follow him. While Crocodile can't.
Unironically makes me wonder what Daz sees in Crocodile that makes him want to follow Croc to literal hell and back
And I wonder what it really would take for Croc to be able to inspire people to follow him and be loyal to him, if it's even possible
#Moon posting#Sir Crocodile#OP Meta#OP Spoilers#To be fair Miss Goldenweek did try to break Croc out of jail#But her primary goal was to release the people in jail she already knew (like Miss Merry Christmas and Mr 4)#Where as she met Crocodile for the first time at that prison. They did not know each other#And when Croc refused to leave they just. Didn't seem to argue against that. Like they weren't going to follow him to Impel Down#I have additional thoughts but I'm saving those for another post lest this one become too long#Also that draft might change a lot based on what happens in the next two chapters#Debating if I wanna even post it before or after we see how shit goes and edit it accordingly
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i miss when i could post writing and have interactions w other writers, its so much harder to progress when I have no one to discuss ideas/topics/technique with :/
#i also want to fuckin! show my first chapter draft since im almost finished chapter 2 already#but i have no one to read it 4 meeee yayyy
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YAY the messy unreadable first draft of Lonely Bones ch3 is done!! All I have to do is edit so it'll be ready in *checks word count* .... three weeks.
#11k for a single chapter i am off my fucking nut#that's too many words put some back!!!#and when i say this is a messy first draft i mean it#not in that tee hee ooh i have a few typos oh dear! first draft way#I mean blank spaces where names should be#chunks of connective tissue missing#this character raises his eyebrow 17 times in the same paragraph messy draft#so. there is work to be done.#pray 4 me#mr. bees speaks#fic: oh lonely bones have you forgotten?
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miscellaneous, mostly doodles i did while suffering an art block lol
#eddsworld au#eddsworld vtm au#art#mod art#first chapter draft is done btw! chapter two next week =w=#regarding pic 4: you know how it's a trope at this point to draw tord as hatsune miku. yeah. it's this but hagane miku instead#also some utsu album cover redraws
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The Tower Interior in Resident Evil: Revelations 2 (2015)
#crimson's gifs: resident evil#Resident Evil#RE#Resident Evil Revelations 2#Resident Evil: Revelations 2#RE: Revelations 2#RE Revelations 2#RE REV2#RE: REV2#Claire Redfield#Moira Burton#Claire Episode 4#These Gifs have been in the fucking trenches of my drafts since before I made a single REV2 set recently. They are finally free.#Why did I decide to do Claire 4 first ik its the shortest chapter but ive had 2 gifs of moira and the whole scenery gifs stuck here for AGE
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Unfortunate body, Unfortunate soul.
Elle had witnessed abominations, darkspawn, giants, and all sorts of creatures ready to mangle her within their jaws, but this admittedly, was a first.
The ground beneath her shook, Red Lyrium dust plumed from above, and the foul-smelling liquid slapped against the tile at her feet. A horrific screeching and throttling noise signaled from somewhere else. It almost sounded like gears turning and twisting. She glanced down at her crossbow.
Arrows weren’t going to save her today. She was prepared to face anomalies with a heartbeat, flesh and blood. Not Red Lyrium Spirits inhabiting skeletons.
It dove for her, a wild thing, a wrathful soul swelling as it flew, and time dilated and snagged within her reach. Like a meandering run through a woven fabric, she tugged the thread through, time rippling on either side, gathering along the edges of her prolonged moment. For all she needed was just a couple more to save herself.
Elle lifted her hand, snapping her fingers a hair’s distance from slow chattering teeth. Time’s normal stream snatched into order with alarming speed as bones disintegrated within a burst of flame. An immolation so quick, the spirit had no chance to escape, trapped within the flare.
She should have brought her staff she thought, as she chided her grave mistake.
They surged in like a swell of a hurricane, and the small tunnel choked on their fury. For this chamber was not designed with an army of souls in mind. A rageful afterthought plunging through archway and door alike, their wrath sundered the walls and the bones of this place groaned. Snapping jaws, like gulping fish, bone over bone, body over body, they clamored to enter all at once.
Elle sucked in a gasp of stale air and pushed out a phlegethon, incinerating the horde that strangled the doorway. But more replaced the charred remains, another surge screamed and seethed.
She realized she wouldn’t be leaving the way she entered. In fact, she would be lucky to leave this place in one piece, if at all.
Elle called upon the very stone, pulling it around her fist, a stony glove that cloaked up to her very elbow and she launched it at the masses, cleaving into their unfortunate skulls. But this place seemed to have an endless supply of dead soldiers at the ready.
#dragon age fanfic#dragon age 4#dragon age the veilgaurd#writing my rook#lord of fortune rook#rook origin#rook#mini sequel#darksolas#solasfic#ghilan'nain#venom of the gods#mage rook#spell blade#red lyrium#rough draft#y'all my first chapter is 38 pages long#why did I choose this life
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Guess who just wrote down 3.5k in one sitting and finished the climax of their book
#theres literally only one chapter left before I finish the first draft#and thats the resolution chapter#for context i usually write about 500 words a day#this is insane#writers on tumblr#writeblr#i wrote it down badly. very badly. but i wrote it. and it took me 4 months. but i wrote it. are you proud of me.
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it looks like things are moving faster for deltarune ch3-4 (gets scared)
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Even though she hated this city, she held this place close to heart. Was it because she thought it was pretty? She looked up at the sky. Her mind travelled far as she daydreamed. This rush of nostalgia washed over her. What if it could be, what it could be.
#arterna#starteam comic#st: maya#MORE OLD ART WEEEE#almost 4 years old!?!?!? damn#I had made 2 illustrations for the first draft of a first chapter i wrote for star team this was one of the scenes i most vividly imagined#i really wanna go back to working on star team but complications#once the art block is over i should make new banger art for star team
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By the Bullet - Chapter 2
#caliber's writing#AHHHHM#ITS UP#very happy to have chapter 2 out#chap 3 is well under way (currently on beta stage) and i've already started the first draft of chap 4 so!#hopefully things can pick back up#but lately i've been having focusing issues#+ life just being a nusiance so#we shall see!#enjoy!#ghost x soap#soap x ghost#soapghost#simon ghost riley#ghost#cod ghost#cod soap#john soap mactavish
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flashback is far too long but i had fun writing it. i was just being myself and being real
#its in chapter 4 i had no business writing it now but sometimes you just Gotta#but i can post it in all its overwritten glory on here then cut it down when i actually get to that part#actually i am going to do that fr because i would like to be more chill about sharing things and the idea#that i am sharing a specific version rather than the Best (best by what standards? thats another question) version#like let me share the earnest version!! the one that came straight from my heart!! with all its extra flesh#not that i think its weaker its just earnest! pure first exploration of an idea#thats how we see first drafts over here
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Ok, when my assignment grind ends (3 relatively major ones due within the next 6-8 days) I'll need something to work on during my spare.
#taag talks#don't think too hard into the stardew thing I watched youtube got inspired and now I'm 3/4 done#I'm trying to write an actual fight scene for chapter 1 of Arcburn but I am struggling#F Muzzles Squad part 1 is on my ao3 already and the crossover is stress relief and my origins because a crossover was my first real fanfic#anyway the tags are a free space to rant about my assignment stress#two (2!) are due on the same day one of which's rough draft is due for Friday#I got a presentation to do for one and a recorded presentation for another#I'm not fully done my research on one of the assignments while being the quickest to complete is also the most pain in the ass#A test on Tuesday a guest speaker on Wednesday along with my presentation and Thursday the other two assignments are due#I can get it all done it's just a pain in the ass and I am a sucker for clarification questions
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I'm doing it yall... I'm getting back to writing again! I'm preparing to write a fanfic that isn't any of the 3 ongoing fics I already have, I'm so sorry.
#aria rants#i also havent forgotten the whump thing i got going on for my ocs im gonna polish up the drafts and get those posted too#to finally get the masterlist of that posted and also so i can be done with it officially#i swear ill get to updating my 3 fics i just gotta prioritize this new one first for now#cuz its the fic ill be posting for OMORI's anniversary#am getting to the planning stages and so far i think itll have 5 chapters#also itll be based on the bad end night series (it got 4 songs in it so 4 chapters + 5th is the epilogue)#based? loosely based? which one? i dont know. mim was pretty closely based on the two songs i pick for it#well... the core of it. theres a magic mirror.#not sure bout the one im makin rn cuz theres notable changes sooooo loosely based???? ahhh wtv its based on it either way
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too tired to write, too tired to edit, too tired to read, but not too tired to draw!! saw some anime screenshot redraws going around and that got me thinking of this iconic scene:
which i combined with a little moment the sorabelle fic to create…
a new disastrous wip!! nothing like having a stack of wip illustrations to go with your wip stories, right??
haha! ha. right? this is normal. everything is normal. everything is fiiiinneee
#kind of a pain because sora is taller than genzo#also she looks. just a little different#BUT for all the bad luck i’ve had today#this seems okay so far#i finished that other bell-mere sketch btw#so at least SOMETHING is finished#just have to polish off the end of the first draft of ch.3#then write chapter 4#then do some heavy edits#BUT then it’ll be done sorry i’ll shut up now#gensart#one piece fanart#bellemere#bell mère#one piece original character#one piece oc#fanfiction fanart#wip rambles#current wip#wip wednesday#digital sketch
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My horrible bastard brain: haha what if you tried to make the line "time for your medicine" poignant
Me: bet
Me, 80k worth of words later: this was a mistake (tm)
#i am so close to being done with the rough draft#this is so much fucking longer than i intended#and also the fic has other genesises#is that how you pluralize that word#anyway i got inspired and wrote a lot today and am trying to figure if i need one more chapter or just the epilogue#either way this monster will be done soom#funny this fic was started the day i went in for my hormone consult i wrote thr first bit on the train and in the waiting room#and now im 4 weeks in to taking them#strange times#i am going to destroy my voice reading this one aloud for editing tho oh my god
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