hi! maybe a fluffy lukadrien tickle fight?
There it is, I hope u like it 💛
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Switches: Luka Couffaine and Adrien Agreste
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Ships: Lukadrien (just if u want)
Warnings: This is a tickle fic, if you don’t like it, just scroll down
This fanfic is originally in Portuguese, my English is translated using an automatic translator, if there are any big errors you can tell me so I can fix them
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Luka was sitting in a chair preparing for the rehearsal of the band he and his friends formed.
His guitar was on his lap, he was playing a little melody
No other friends had arrived yet
Luka liked to be alone and play his songs
But then he lost his tune and got scared
Someone had squeezed his sides, he jumped
When he looked back, he saw that Adrien had arrived
“Hey! Don’t scare me like that!” Luka said laughing
“I’m sorry, you were so focused that I couldn’t resist.”
Adrien reached out his hands and shook Luka again.
“Ehehei! Stohohohop!” The boy said getting up
“It’s okay, it’s okay, I’m sorry”
The two sat on the bed, Luka picked up his guitar again
“Do you want to hear the new song I’m writing?”
“Of course” Adrien smiled
Luka started playing
Adrien stood a little behind the boy and smiled, with a plan in mind.
He attacked Luka with his hands, which made the boy go out of tune and play the wrong notes.
“Ahahadrien!”
“Keep playing Luka, it won’t bother you”
Luka tried to close his arms at his sides but that didn't stop the tickling.
The blue haired boy kept playing his guitar
His laugh was low and he didn't complain much, but Adrien wanted more
He attacked a point that would probably be more sensitive, the upper ribs.
Indeed, Luka let out an exclamation and put his guitar to the side, so he could free his hands and try to defend himself.
“Your laugh is low, isn’t it?” Adrien said when he saw that Luka started laughing more and turned to him
“I’m nohohot thahahat ticklihihihihish”
Adrien laughed “really?”
He decided to move on to a better point, how about the armpits?
When he played there, Luka started laughing, Adrien was surprised to hear him laughing so loud.
“ENOHOHOHOHOUGH”
“Not very sensitive, right?”
Luka covered his face and Adrien stopped
“Let’s go quickly, the others will arrive soon”
The blonde said getting up
“Absolutely not, you won’t run away from me.”
Luka pulled Adrien into his bed again
The guitarist squeezed the other's sides while scratching his belly
“NOHOHOHOHO”
“You wanted to disturb me, now you will suffer”
“SOHOHOHOHORRYHY”
Luka smiled, unlike him, Adrien's laugh was very loud and he let out some screams
“Let me think… maybe I’ll forgive you” he placed both hands on the blonde’s stomach, which made him scream “will I forgive you?”
“YEHEHEHEHES PLEHEHEASHE”
Luka raised his hands “alright” he smiled
They both heard footsteps on the ceiling, the others had arrived
Luka grabbed his guitar and ran ahead, Adrien followed.
During the rehearsal, Adrien certainly poked Luka several times while he was playing, to irritate him.
And Luka could only think about getting revenge for that later
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Thanks for reading 💛💛
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This thought's still cooking, but I think Tomas (Thomas?) Astruc's a good case study on both why being too attached to your character concepts and self-inserts are bad for writing.
I'm not going to really touch on whether or not Chloe deserved a redemption arc, but I do feel confident in saying that Tomas's disdain for her character (and people who found her enjoyable/redeemable) did have a noticeable negative impact on the writing and theme. He couldn't stand the fact that not everyone despised her (and some gasp! liked her), and so turned her into the most grating character possible... to the detriment of literally everything else.
The same could be said for Marinette, though that also ties into my second point. Marinette isn't Tomas's self-insert, she's his self-insert's daughter. Because she's his fictional child, she can never really have any kind of deep flaws - and any deep flaws she does have you're totally imagining and making up! Derision is the prime example for this. Her behavior towards Adrien can't be creepy, that's his daughter original character! So he writes an entire episode that's, imao, kinda demeaning to explain away this "supposed" character flaw.
Had he been more detached from his writing, I think he could have seen these things coming from a mile away. But because he's so deeply entrenched in his own concept, he sort of blinds himself, and when he can't deny them anymore, he has to prove that he's right by handwaving them away.
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