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patiently waiting for the day people who say finn is a bad actor because of the mileven scenes where mike just seems to not be attracted to el in any way (so basically like 99% of mileven scenes) realise it's not finn who's a bad actor, it's mike
#my guy tries so hard to look and act interested#he's failing#but tbh how the fuck do some ppl think finn's a bad actor#that man is SPECTACULAR#he's acting like that because they TOLD HIM TO#mike is WRITTEN to act like that around el#it's SCRIPTED#MIKE'S GAY#stranger things#mike wheeler#anti milkvan#anti mlvn#finn wolfhard#stranger things s4#byler tumblr#stranger things 5#byler is endgame#byler endgame#byler#byler canon#will byers
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the tower, reversed (id in alt)
“You see Orion's mech tighten its grip on its gun and widen its stance as it braces itself. If you could see inside the cockpit, you’d see a very rare sight: Orion is visibly furious. Teeth bared, eyes wide, brow furrowed. He’s almost snarling, like a guardian dog protecting its flock. His hands grip onto the controls so tightly they’re almost shaking. It’s unclear whether he says this to will his mech further than he’s ever pushed it before, or if he’s saying this to the mech opposing his, but in his anger he almost roars out “COME ON, YOU SON OF A BITCH” and fucking unloads into the mech before him, a blaze of gunfire and spent casings as mech and human become one. Orion’s bullets rip into the mech, tearing it apart. He doesn’t stop until it lies inert before him, a pile of scrap still smoldering, where a mechanized chassis once stood. His mech slouches over, as if it had been holding its breath this entire time, and the adrenaline finally left its system.”
#guess who got to deal the final blow to the final boss <33333#anyways.#man. *man.*#fucking incredible campaign#i had this little script in my back pocket for EIGHT MONTHS before i got the perfect opportunity to use it#we were all going insane during and after this session#im STILL going insane#i have nothing but praise for vex's writing for this campaign#and nothing but praise for our gm pandora's writing as well#my art#my ocs#lancer rpg#lancerrpg#lancer ttrpg#in golden flame#in golden flame spoilers#(just bc i dont think it would necessarily be hard to suss out who he's killing here lmao)#igf spoilers
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to round out tonight's humphris-gamble spiral: the 2.14 exorcism as an almost prophetic play-by-play of 4.21, with both episodes featuring the dean-bobby familial unit bringing a monstrous sam back under control (meg, earlier in 2.14: 'meg? no. not anymore. i'm sam'). and the different parting glances between sam and bobby here. bobby's wary, assessing look in 2.14 vs. the 'what's become of you' face he's making in 4.21. sam's anxious smile in 2.14, seeking reassurance, vs. his look of worn down despair post-panic room in 4.21. a sam who still hopes that his monstrosity might be treated as something external to himself, a demon to be exorcised vs. a sam face-to-face with the barrel of a gun, knowing that he is The Monster in this story (dean in 4.21 later telling him, 'it's what you are').
#it's midnight and i'm in the sam's designated monstrosity pits. the sam outsider studies despair loop. god i need a drink#also!!!!! i'm probably adding nothing new under the sun but comparing those two eps side by side.......phew#s2: boy who thinks he might have a chance at being normal (in his family's world) if he works hard enough at beng a good hunter#and by the end of s4: man who realises there's no place for him in that world. he's been marked as monstrous from the start#like revisiting the early seasons after writing/editing mid-late show analysis and huh.#even after sam's powers and demon blood long stop being relevant. we're always revisiting this narrative dynamic#even when the show tries flipping the monstrosity script. it never changes!!#my meta#sam monstrosity studies#j.txt
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hey..... patreon people..... is the newest guy audio improv (with him rambling and going on rants) or scripted (they're doing an activity and we learn more information about him)
#redacted audio#redacted asmr#redacted guy#PLEASEEE I HOPE ITS SCRIPTED THIS TIME BC ID KILL FOR MORE INFO ON GUY#I LIKE HIM EITHER WAY BUT IDK MAN.. THE IMPROV AUDIOS DONT HIT AS HARD AS HIS (I ASSUME) SCRIPTED EARLY VIDEOS
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*grips Shen Qingqiu by the shoulders*
aren't you tired of being nice? Don't you want to crack under the pressure of the system and the robbed autonomy of being forced into a role you had no choice in but have to play anyways? don't you want to buckle under the realization that, to you, no matter what you do your life is going to end in a horrific death? Whether that be under Luo Binghe's hands or the System's?
Don't you want to realize that no matter all the good you have done and the lives you have changed and saved, you're still standing at the ledge of a cliff with a sword to your disciple's chest?
Shouldn't it be you at the edge instead? Balancing on the crumbling dirt's end of death on either side, and you can either walk into it or be forced?
don't you want to go apeshit?
#I AM SO NORMAL YOU GUYS I PROMISE *visibly foaming at the mouth and gritting my teeth so hard you can hear them crack*#svsss#scum villain#shen yuan#shen qingqiu#scum villain self saving system#HI YES I MAY NOT HAVE READ THE NOVEL AND ONLY BEEN HERE FOR A WEEK BUT I AM. OBSESSED. FIXATED IF YOU WILL#luo binghe standing at the edge of the endless abyss and he sees something snap in his shizun's eyes like metal creaking under#the pressure of the deep sea. or like heat rising too quickly. the steady slow snap of someone hanging on by a thread.#i dont think i've fully understood sqq's characterization howEVER. i think i've got enough of his character down to try and twist it the wa#i think could happen. forgive me if this isnt in character or anything ajhf#anyways i love isekai anything and i think the system could slowly drive someone who didnt ask to be here insane#SY adjusts rather quickly from what i've heard but what if he DIDN'T. what if it wasnt fine what if he was trying his best and it was#taking its toll because apparently trying his best just wasnt enough. his stubborn refusal to view the people around him as people#but as characters following a script is very frustrating to me but also it works in my favor for this. look at the best way to break him is#*stares at SQQ* i think he should go apeshit. as a treat. skin a man alive SQQ. bite someone. rip out their throat.#i know thats prolly not his character but what if it COULD be. what if it IS. people are so nuanced and niche and can change at the turn#of a dime and SQQ has been forced into an unfavorable position and frankly traumatic experience. he could change or he could not and#isnt that FASCINATING? to erode or to stand tall. are you copper or are you a canyon. will you change colors and stay the same or will you#crumble and shear and become something new? when facing the elements when facing the inevitable what will you become?
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I know usually you get questions about your art, but what about your writing?
I'm trying to write my own story kind of, but I don't know if I'm getting my writing across in the way I want it to, so how do you do it?
Also I love champion au auguuhiuuahhhauuug uhahhhh
hooo boy well first i'm so glad you like my writing!! i still feel relatively new to it so it’s incredibly motivating to hear its coming across well 🥹 ...and by extension i mayyy not be the best person to ask for advice lmao but uhh lets see
usually when there's a certain mood i want to convey, i reread fics or rewatch parts of a show i like that also has that same tone and pay extra attention to the dialogue, the pacing etc. that way i have a good frame of reference of how to get the words and the emotion i want (bc yknow. i'm feeling it when gathering references), and then i'll write and rewrite my way to that emotion. kinda like working backwards ig because knowing what tone you want vs feeling it yourself are different things and two ends of the process
oh that reminds me of this tip! it lives in my head rent-free and it talks about writing around pain specifically but i think it applies to anything in writing. is the character happy? sad? confused? then try writing how they're like that without using that word at all- in their actions, behaviour, using the environment…it's always show don't tell babyy (especially important in writing for a comic that for workload's sake cannot be too long, every single word/action has to count towards something)
also, whenever i'm rereading what i've written i try to pretend i know absolutely nothing or come back to it after a long break, and if the next line of dialogue is too predictable then it gets revised. same with presenting an obstacle in the narrative, i have to feel the stakes myself like i'm one of the characters instead of being an omnipresent force watching the story unfold in front of me if that makes sense. imo if the author isn't immersed themselves then neither would the audience be.
and just trust yourself! have fun! if you find yourself overthinking then it’s probably time for a break! there’s plenty of time to get it right :)
#might be preaching to the choir but hope something in there was useful!!#fun fact the last comic script took 3 entire rewrites over a few months to get down haha#not counting small edits like phrasing#the final is also 3 times the length of the original......words are so hard man#much respect to fic writers i have no idea how you do that#asks
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There are only two episodes left in The Boys S4, but having seen the leaks and with what we got, I have some opinions.
My conspiracy theory is that they got too many cooks in the kitchen (writers in the writer’s room)—plus the writer’s strike and pandemic happening during this time—and it’s starting to make sense how they dropped the ball with this season.
#the boys#the boys tv#the boys amazon#the boys season 4#the boys season four#S1-3 is like a sharp honed blade (with occasional misses) whereas S4 swings a lot but misses their target#I like a handful of things (Antony Starr and Karl Urban are CARRYING the season for me)#God; Antony’s back must hurt from carrying the show so hard (give the man an Emmy)#but there are so many more moments in the show that falls flat for me#my interest in the secondary cast is virtually nonexistent (and this is coming from a person who likes them all)#I do not care about Joe; I do not care about the Frenchie & Colin B-plot; I do not care about Annie’s randomly thrown in abortion (???)#there’s a lotta wasted character moments and unnecessary fluff they should’ve cut out to laser focus in on the main plot#the character moments do not hit as hard as the writers hoped they did (it feels like they just threw random darts & hoped they hit)#this season feels like a waste of time :/ which is unfortunate#I like edgy dark humor & satire as the next guy—but it’s gotta advance the plot or be used for a purpose other than shock value#it doesn’t help that you get the sense a couple script decisions is a result of Kripke wanting to work with ppl he wants to work with again#which—fair enough; it’s his show—he can do whatever he wants#but I get a weird feeling when he throws in celebrity cameos & their B-plots instead laserfocusing on the main characters#I hope they tighten the story in the final season 5#they focused too much on the wrong things and not on the right things (seriously?? not showing Butcher taking the V??? making it offscreen?)#and the tentacles instead of making Butcher’s powers ironically parallel the very man he hates :/#the obvious Venom symbiote parody is not as funny or cool as you think it is (when you had a VERY cool premise before)
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I mean, first time getting my name called in any draft, so it was a real special one for me. Honestly, I thought I was gonna cry a little bit, but I'm just super stoked.
[Max Miller on Luca Cagnoni’s progress] The biggest thing - and he talked about it when he was introduced - is he worked on his defensive game. Lucas Sbisa was the coach that was tasked with overseeing his development and talking with him and through him, the biggest thing that I heard from Luca's camp was that [Sbisa] was not afraid to be honest with him and tell him, maybe not necessarily like 'You messed up here,' but in a way where it was good coaching. Where it was firm, but it applauded success and the biggest thing you saw from him was that when the defensive game really started to excel, that's where the offensive numbers came through even when he wasn't focusing directly on offense.
29/06/2023 - The San Jose Sharks draft Luca Cagnoni 123rd overall || 26/03/2024 Sharks Prospects Rack Up Awards For Super Seasons || 4/07/2024 - Cagnoni attends his second Sharks development camp
Back then a lot of it was having the bigger-sized defensemen and they didn’t like the way that I played so offensive. But I feel like that has just been a staple of my game. People were always doubting me because of my size and the way I play, but I mean that’s just been a huge part of my life, always playing with a chip on my shoulder every game and just showing every team wrong that ‘You passed up on something.’
#LUCA BE UPON YE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#found tinyyyy little clips of him in the scrim announcement video hehehe :^)#and now you get some of his draft day footage because . well. i have seen that interview and man. man. that first bit. OUGH#sharkudablr you WILL become as terribly endeared and invested as i am so help me godf...#guys. guys he's really good okay :( everyone thinks he wont make it cause hes small but he's working SO hard.#also youtube video transcripts by me <3#sharks lb#san jose sharks#luca cagnoni#nhledit#puck!gif#p!gif:sharks#hockeyedit#puck!script
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2 am sillies
#i dont think wally would grasp the concept of characters really...#this man cannot recognize an apple for the pie how would he understand this#sally starts talking about a character idea for her play - hard cut to wally sprinting to the bus station#scribble salad#welcome home#welcome home puppet show#welcome home fanart#i have no idea what kind of awareness wally has/had#but i like to think that he got to read the show scripts if there were any#and he'd get upset at certain dialogue choices#excuse you show writers he knows what his friends would say and its Not That
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i think the reason writing saf comic scripts with curtwen turns 3 pages into 20 is because i have a vague idea for a small comic but as i write it down i have to backtrack and go "owen would manipulate curt here" "curt would not tell owen how he feels" "they would not communicate that clearly" "neither of them would want to bring this up because they both know, deep-down that it would lead to the discovery that their relationship is just not meant to work" so instead of a little page comic where they banter over something it turns into a fucking odyssey of lying, attempted murder, regret and repeat
#shocker it's hard to write about a relationship that fundamentally doesnt work#if you could see all the comic scripts i have lying around...#man#there was one i really wanted to do but 1. it was long 2. it was kind of heavy 3. idk how the fandom feels about curt being a shitty guy#not like owen where he has 1000 mental illnesses but just like an ordinarily shitty guy#he's a super self centered stubborn asshole who's proficient in ruining his relationships and pushing people away bc he hates himself#but i feel that kind of gets pushed aside bc owen is just so. owen.#spies are forever#owen carvour#agent curt mega#saf#tin can bros#szolposting
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If Franky isn't the one making Sanuso's wedding rings then what's the point
#i think they'd ask him right away and he'd start crying#like crying SO hard while he starts working#i am in a sanuso wedding mood#just thinking about luffy saying he wants to officiate it bc he's the captain and nami writing a script for him to follow and he's like???#'this is so boring nami can i just say what i think'#and his speech looks like something a 5 y/o would write but it's actually pretty beautiful and it ends with 'and now u kiss bc i want cake'#nami and robin as braidsmaids would kill me but ZORO??????? ZORO AS USOPP'S BEST MAN???? I COULD GO INTO HEAVY DETAIL-#anyway i'll shut up but i love them#one piece#black leg sanji#usopp#sanuso#franky one piece
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Now, let's all say it together,
Fuck you Neil Gaiman.
FUCK
YOU
SO
HARD
NEIL
GAIMAN
#more like neil rapeman#good omens 2#good omens 3#good omens#crowley#aziraphel#azicrow#ineffable husbands#FUCK ME SIDEWAYS WITH A FAN#MY GOD#JUST FUCK OFF NEIL#GIVE US THE THRID SEASON AND NOT THE CRUSTY ASS 90 SHITASS MINUTE SHITASS MOVIE FUCK OFF#FUCK#OOFFFFF#I CANT BELIEVE HES RUINING EVERYTHING#MEN#TypiCAL#FUCK YOU NEIL GAIMAN#I HATE YOU#I HATE YOU SO MUCH#YOU'RE THE BIGGEST PIECE OF SHIT FOR SO MANY FUCKEN REASONS MY LORD#help#hes not the only god forsaken artist in Hollywood#get someone on the case and finish that fucking script for fuck's sake my fucking god#it aint that hard i fucking promise#they already did two#they can fucking do three#MY GOD I HATE THIS MAN#MY MISANDRY IS KICKING SO HARD RN#AAAAAA
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one one hand, I kinda see why all the other classes would make their jack ace and al jeannes their class leader. like, if you were a univeil student, I can see the student logic of going, "yeah this guy knows how to put on a good performance, let's make him the leader!"
but in hindsight... that's such a bad decision?? like, imagine as the lead performer, you have to be in charge of both the performance and the class. that's too much responsibility! instead of focusing on delivering on stage, you now have to split your attention with everyone else's roles. not even takarazuka does this. the top star and kumichou are usually not the same person. so I would assume that's also how the tamasaka troupe works. univeil students what are you doing lmao
I think one of the reasons why quartz works is because neji isn't the lead performer. he writes, he directs, he acts, he dances, he sings, but he's not the main lead. by taking on responsibility for the backstage work (except for props/tech/etc.), fumi/kai/kisa/whoever can focus on their own craft as performers.
like. how is kaido leading onyx while also being the jack ace? how is he getting and working on feedback? I could say the same for tsukasa, but at least tsukasa has minorikawa doing a lot of the heavy lifting. amber is kind of a special case, I guess, because they all want chui to be the stage. but honestly if chui was a better leader, amber wouldn't have to be this way lmao. like, chui is great but he's holding amber back, sorry to say. they could do so much more than this
(hm I guess the teachers in other classes are more hands-on and provide more guidance and support than enishi, so they can get away with lead performers being class leaders)
I was thinking about this because I was imagining what kisa's year two in univeil would be like. the next class leaders are gonna be mitsuki, sugachi, and minorikawa, right? and all three of them tend to step back to let other people shine or to play support, so I actually think they're very logical choices for the next class leaders. plus that would probably be the year chui would try to like. make friends and human connections. so I'm just imagining that year two would be quite healing for univeil, especially since in year one they are all still kinda hung up on tsuki being univeil's treasure. you can have other treasures!! love tsuki, but he isn't the only golden boy here!!
#mine musings#liveblogging jj#jack jeanne#year two would be so interesting. do you think sugachi would try to be a vessel for kasai. or what if dante gets a lead role#i think mitsuki would delegate smartly like he would get sou to work on the scripts with him bc sou clearly has the talent for it#and also bc i think that's mitsuki's preferred leadership style. he's not like neji who could do 1000 things at once#use those observation powers to the fullest mitsu!!#also i think at some point otori will get a lead role. he would mellow out by year two and being jack ace for one play is his reward#they'll get a first year in quartz who's good at dancing bc that's what quartz needs and quartz is like#favored by the narrative to always be balanced with skill sets#minorikawa... oh man i feel sorry for him lmao but he'll pull through. he can do it. mare-chan will try very very hard#chui attempts to make friends/rivals for real this time and i feel like sugachi would be the first to be okay with that#minorin and mitsu would be a bit 🤨 but that's okay. chui please make friends
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have you... Ever drawn VBS personality swapped (specifically an and Toya + Kohane and Akito) :3
i've been planning to actually! i honestly have been planning to make a longer-ish comic / 4komas for them about this prompt for the longest time. i just haven't had the time to do it lately 😵💫
#maybe once i'm free i could start working on it#i just. need to come up with a good script and ''plot''#being a one man hard worker is hard#ask
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New Scotland Yard: Point of Impact (1.1, LWT, 1972)
"I thought they'd lumber you with it."
"Did you, why?"
"It's a touchy one, isn't it?"
"There's a policeman involved."
"Yeah, unpleasant."
"Always."
"You were bound to get it."
"Thank you."
"Would've never happened at all if it hadn't been for that blasted Law and Order Brigade turning up on the scene, bloody reactionaries."
"Look, spare me the catchphrases, will you? I don't understand what half of them mean, I don't suppose the people who bandy them about do either."
"Well, I happen to know what a reactionary is."
"Good. You must explain it to me in great detail. Some other time."
#new scotland yard#point of interest#lwt#1972#classic tv#tony wharmby#don houghton#john woodvine#john carlisle#bryan marshall#barry warren#claire warren#shirley cain#brian rawlinson#norman jones#basil henson#mel martin#nicholas young#recently trawling a certain You based Tube‚ i stumbled across a user who has uploaded great swathes of old telly‚ to my delight. a lot of#it I've already seen or even own‚ but finding NSY was huge: I've wanted to watch this for a while but the discs are frustratingly hard to#come by at a reasonable price since Network (rip in our hearts forever) went under. so i guess this is my viewing for the near future‚#before a copyright strike inevitably gets them pulled (and i don't think it's every episode that's available either). the series starts#promisingly‚ eschewing a safe and steady introduction for an altogether more challenging issue based ep; a man has died during a scuffle#between socialist protesters and rightwing counter protesters‚ apparently killed by a police officer. our leads must investigate whilst#balancing the difficult tightrope of public opinion‚ avoiding either a whitewash or an unjust persecution. it's heavy‚ polemical stuff but#the script works hard to maintain balance and present nuance‚ with idealists and extremists on either side (and Woodvine's senior copper#stubbornly sticking his feet in the center). it's still copaganda of course‚ but intelligently done nonetheless#we don't learn a great deal about our two leads at this point‚ but their relationship certainly seems spiky (Carlisle is given to making#leaps of deduction and announcing moral absolutes where Woodvine is almost frustratingly impartial to the extreme). plus nice to see#familiar faces like Marshall‚ Jones and Warren among the supporting cast. a very promising opener
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so i'm finally reading through the terror scripts and i think this was designed to cause me physical pain.
crozier was supposed to be drinking to schubert..... god
#it's honest to god so interesting to see what was cut and what was rearranged#but the uh. the descriptions of the emotions that were not to be spoken?#the internal thought processes that can't be precisely conveyed without words?#i am Dying. this is Killing Me.#fucking *schubert*. god.#'it is not romantic or charismatic. it is hard to watch.' SEND HELP#the terror#i wish i had more coherent thoughts but like. jesus christ.#schubert also had some truly wretched parts of his life.#he wasn't able to marry women of higher classes than him. this was bc of a law that prohibited it but he was still restrained by his financ#*finances#a thing that sophia specifically points out to crozier in the show#aside from that there isn't much that i know off the top of my head#but his 'winterreise' is truly depressing. and 'die schone mullerin' isn't much better#actually die schone mullerin might be very apt for this.#the narrative follows a man falling in love with a woman that is beyond his grasp. and eventually ends in him fantasizing about his death.#uh. presumably the singer drowns in a brook at the end.#so! yeah! that one line in the script is making me lose my mind.#i am gonna keep reading them but i also think i will be a very sad puddle by the end of it#forgive the tag rambling. schubert isn't a main focus of mine#but i know a bit about him and a good bit about his music. it's. painful. also schubert died very young. like 31 years old young.#but anyway i guess i will find the damndest of parallels everywhere.
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