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bodycountgame · 2 years ago
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hey so previous anon again. So basically I really like this demo so far, I think it's a really cool premise, I really like the characters and overall think it's really well written. However I kinda have some concern about the way it seems who dies will be handled.
I know that you've said there's the possiblity of adding in the ability to swap a character you want to romance for a substitute victim, but I feel like that still isn't a great solution, as it means if someone gets unlucky and their choice of RO gets killed off early, they're pretty much locked out from taking things slow (or at least as slow as you can in a dating show murder mystery), and also means if you can't decide you might only have like one or two chapters to make that descision. Like for example if I know I want to romance [REDACTED] or am deciding between multiple people including them, I basically only have 1 day to decide if I want to romance them and start romancing.
So getting to my actual question. Have you considered giving the player more control over who dies? Either in like a direct "You find a body, it's [insert choice]" or a more indirect way, where like your actions determine who ends up in the wrong place at the wrong time. I realize it's probably a dumb question and the answer is yes, but I figured it probably couldn't hurt to ask.
(Also sorry if you've answered this here before, I tried looking but couldn't find anything, or if I misunderstood how something about the variable deaths would currently work.)
Also not part of my original question but something that has since popped up on reread. Would it be possible to add an option to skip the beach date in chapter 3? Like the way I'm playing my character, I feel like her response would be "I don't care if the show must go on, I literally just saw someone die, the only way your getting my there is by physically dragging me (though version of the date where you've been physically dragged along and are not happy about it would also work).
thanks for resending prev anon!
to answer your first question in the fewest possible words, yes i have considered it, but i don't think it's really feasible for me to achieve as a solo dev.
in order to have any victim be able to be one of many different characters, the amount of variation that would follow to account for who is and is not still present would be really enormous. body count is already a story that hinges on variation (at least, i think that's one of the cool things about it, others may feel differently lmao) and i just think that further complication would make it so incredibly challenging to actually complete. i've talked before about possibly going back when i have a completed first draft of the story to add in some amount of variation (i.e. one character that could be swapped in for any one death, most likely), but even that isn't a given.
as for your second question, there is already a way to skip the beach dates, but it depends in your choices in the conversation with avery. i could definitely reframe it so a sadder MC also has the option to stay behind, though - i think that would probably make sense for quite a few MCs. my main concern with avery just letting them go straight back to their room would i guess just be that the chapter would feel very short? idk - i'll definitely ruminate on it, though.
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blackstarchanx3new · 1 year ago
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FSR rambles...THE FIFTH ONE???
It dawned on me while I work on the 2nd flashback comic in a row I could talk about the scene between Blue and Green. I will probably have less interesting/insightful things to say about this chapter since it was mostly "Aftercare" for all the BS I put yall through with the Link chapter. X'D
I actually EXTENDED this scene from it's OG length not sure how obvious that is though. We all needed to heal. UwU Mostly me actually lmfao. I write obnoxiously fluffy shit after dark shit to make me feel better. X'D
IS IT TONAL WIPLASH!? MAYBE!? DO I CARE???? NOOOOOOO.
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Jumping into this page after the last one it gives the impression Blue talking yanked Green out of his thoughts about Link/the past few days leading up to Link pulling the sword.
Twice now someone has warded off Dark Link just by talking to the person he's affecting. Previous being Shadow not so elegantly yelling at Vio till he woke the hell up but he was way deeper in in than Green is here.
Onto the more pressing matter of this page though:
Green feels responsible for taking care of everyone and was worried about what Vio was going to go do once he left the house: Note, we SAW what Shadow and Vio were up too but Green has NO CLUE. If he knew I feel like he'd be more concerned about the freakin' panic attack oof.
Vio just said he was going for a walk and hasn't come back for presumably hours. Right after the split too and with someone who is DUBIOUS at best. The situation kinda just sucks.
Blue gets annoyed with Green's stubbornness offering to take his place in waiting for Vio. The millionth sign he cares about Vio a lot despite his previous ranting.
Dude just decides to concedes to sitting with Green cause it's easier than trying to get him to sleep. Despite him OBVIOUSLY needing it.
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Fair question to ask all things considered...
Not much to say story wise but art wise Blue is very cute and his super long side burns are one of my favorite things about him outside of his huge eyebrows. Yall will know weird eyebrows are a thing I enjoy drawing if you've seen my art for a long time. XD
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That hug went on a little too long lmao. Blue's kind of shy about physical affection and I think that's cute.
Blue doesn't wanna be Link, like at all. He must have also caught Vio staring at the sword's pedestal because he knows Vio had thoughts about placing it earlier and knew Green had paranoia about Vio putting the sword back while on the "Walk"
Blue's perceptive.
Green says the gayest thing he possibly could prompting one of my favorite lines from Blue in this entire comic "Why am I the only normal one???" He's projecting his own insecurities about being "weird" onto the Vio and Green.
He really wanted the split to be the key to solving all their/Link's problems. Unlucky for him it just makes 4 times more issues oop.
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Blue ain't an idiot. He can tell Green's not doing too well. UNLIKE VIO GREEN'S ACTUALLY HONEST RIGHT OFF THE BAT WITH HIS PROBLEMS/FEARS.
Blue decides he wants to be the 2nd most level headed character in this comic outside of Shadow Link.
Blue's a true bud.
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Blue how dare you capture Green's heart. X'D Vio and Green are both desperate for comfort. I find Green and Vio were the ones affected by Link's depression the most.
Vio harbors a LOT of regret and anxiety. Green feels overwhelming pressure to do what Link did before the split while being "Diet Link".
Vio's less good at dealing with and communicating emotions are hard for the purple boy. Green doesn't have this problem and is with someone who gets what he's going through right away while Shadow wasn't sure WHAT was the problem when Vio started to break down.
Green never gets to that point at least not here.
Green and Blue also don't have the utter BAGAGE Vio and Shadow do lmao so that probably helps.
Green and Vio got baggage together that will be unpacked later. ;)
Lol Green's confession is cute. Blue's a lot less comfortable saying stuff quite like that. Red's the MOST comfortable saying that kind of thing so maybe this scene is OOC but Green's insanely difficult to characterize so I'm doing whatever I want with him. X'D
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Blue hasn't been slick at all about his feelings towards Vio let's be real and Green calls him out.
Shadow Link pisses Blue off and I'm so giddy to show off more of WHY that is. (It's deeper than he's jealous which you can probably figure from his dialogue.)
Also just goes to show Link himself still harbored tough feelings around Shadow Link deeper than Vio's emotional baggage.
While Vio was in denial he was still alive despite the obvious fact he was there the whole time and the notion they could ever meet again, even HOPING they wouldn't, he still showed fondness towards Shadow and was happy to be around him.
Blue actively doesn't like Shadow and has been vocal about that fact. If Blue calling him a "Bitch" and a "Bastard" didn't make that clear enough.
Green you'll notice only at first mentions wanting Vio to come back but switches to mentioning them both in the next page. He also was the one who clarified Shadow was welcome to stay with them and was apart of their team. Showing a sort of neutral leaning on positive tone to Shadow's existence.
Red's relationship with Shadow is nonexistent at this point but will be explored later so I can't speak on it as of rn. Red hasn't had much of a role but I will point out I did like drawing him in the BG of these pages. XD He's still around just sleepy.
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Blue's ability to sense danger is such an interesting thing about him. Like, that's so useful I wish we got to see it more in the manga.
I appreciated Blue way more as a character after drawing these pages and it made me change how I wrote him in certain scenes in the script X'D
I want him to have just as much depth as Vio and Shadow, because while Vidow had a strong focus at the START the whole of the comic leans on: A sequel to FSA vibe.
We're left on a cliff hanger for what the hell Blue's afraid of...Vaati perhaps?
We'll see.
Blue being protective of Green was smth I thought would be cute, but Green also trusts his judgment.
Also smth that will be touched on btw and I'm sure yall have noticed is: Where the hell is Princess Zelda/what is she up too. Considering she got a letter from Link.
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vacantgodling · 11 months ago
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🐰 and 🐉 and you know who i want ;)
thank you for asking!!! i come providing the goods 🤌🏾 tho i am gonna rattle the Formula just a bit bc i have so many vampires in vdtrt (more than half the cast is vampires LMAO—) so i’m gonna talk about the main vampire kid squad (and by kids i mean 27 and younger)
🐭 Rat - is your character charming? do they have social suave or are they wallflowers?
i thought it would be funny to make a scale so i did:
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moonglend and marco are the two extremes. moonie LOATHES people, but is dragged into friend groups usually when she gets attached to one person and they introduce her to others. on her own tho? she blends into the back. she’s not charming unless you enjoy bitchy, scaley, vampire ladies who will bite your throat out in a not sexy way. (tho i’m sure many would try their luck so maybe she’s charming in her own way). marco on the other hand is a HUGE people person. you can’t help but like him; he’s exuberant and fun and funny most people find it easy to be around him.
darren is a true middle where he can be charming but he also can be a wallflower depending on how vibes, and vlad and demi are close to the middle as well just slightly off. vlad can be very charming when sufficiently motivated but he prefers to be by himself meanwhile demi boasts about hating people but he’s very good with others whether he wishes it or not.
awilda is a people person and she’s very charming. marco just ranks above her cuz he’s just. sunshine personified lowkey.
gabe is way too autistic to not be a wallflower and he’s doing his best to not draw attention to himself tm.
🐉 Dragon - is your character lucky? do they believe in luck or fate?
darren is extremely lucky and he’s kind of aware of it though he doesn’t believe in it in the way where you stake everything on your luck or something. he believes that it’s kind of just another cog in the wheel of life. he doesn’t think He had anything to do with it, he just moreso thinks that in the game of life so far he’s lucked out.
gabe doesn’t believe in luck or fate at all only believes in consequences of actions and strives to make choices that will better his odds later on in life.
vlad is too logical to believe in random luck; he’s more one to analyze the probability of luck and thinks that he himself is at a solid 30% lucky so he operates with that mindset quite a bit. he values understanding more than leaving things up to chance, but he can’t deny he does feel like finally meeting darren was fate.
awilda definitely is on the opposite end of this lot and wholeheartedly believes in fate. she doesn’t think anything happens just because; she thinks everything could have a purpose or meaning and she takes random “signs” quite seriously.
marco is quite similar to awilda but he definitely regards himself as unlucky bc his life has been rough. that’s why he tries to be so positive because even if he’s not lucky himself, maybe he can absorb the bad luck off of others, in a way so that they’ll be better.
demi has seen health miracles that shouldn’t be possible and so i think he’s a bit superstitious when it comes to fate and luck. he values understanding things like vlad, however, he won’t deny how nature is strange and things happen that don’t make sense. he doesn’t dwell on these things it’d drive him crazy.
moonie is similar to demi where she believes that nature is mysterious and things like fate and luck are hard to quantify so she believes in it but she also… doesn’t. lol. she doesn’t like thinking too deeply about things in general because it’s annoying to her 💀
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bisexualnathanyoung · 2 years ago
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Oops
Pairing: Nathan & Mel
Word Count: 917
Warnings: Just a little bit of violence and some sexual humor
So in my main big fic, I wrote Nathan grabbing her from behind, and she just kind of yelps, but Nathan isn’t necessarily known for being quiet, so in that moment I’m just going to assume she knew it was him right away. But I was like lmao what if-
Oh, also, this is before they were actually together.
You know when you’re doing a task, and you’re not even necessarily focused on the task, you’re so in your own head, and everything’s kind of blurred out?
 I was sweeping the floor, but I was also in a non-flashback kind of trance, thinking about everything I’d done and witnessed and had done to me to get me precisely where I was. Just your casual brain blast of dead bodies and abuse but also laughing with your friends and hugging your mum. 
When you’re performing a task that’s so fucking boring that your brain has no choice but to think of anything else, and if you’re unlucky, it’ll think of everything else. 
So I was bent over, smacking the wall with this fucking broom trying to get the dirt out from under this bench in the community centre, but my brain couldn’t have been less focused.
As I stood back up, I felt a pair of arms go around me, and I screamed, and threw my head and elbows back behind me. I undoubtedly smacked them with the broom as well as it stayed in my hands. Whoever had grabbed me let go; I stomped on their foot and ran. 
I was halfway down the corridor but not quite to the other door when I stopped. I realized my hands were glowing but hadn’t let off any sparks. I also realized I was still holding on to that broom.
My heart was still racing as my senses decided to come back. All I heard was Alisha laughing.
I slowly walked back over to where I was. I peeked around the corner. 
My hands stopped glowing when I saw Nathan curled up in the fetal position on the floor. 
… Oops…
I ran back in there. 
He threw his arms in front of his face as I approached him, “Ah! don’t hit me!” 
“I am a small woman that lives in a high crime area! What did you think was going to happen, tryin to grab me like that?” I said to him. 
“I don’t know,” he responded. When he moved his arms, I noticed his lip was bleeding. 
I sighed and sat down next to him, “I’m sorry.” 
He sat up, “what are those boots made of? Bricks?.. I mean,” he dusted off his shoulders, “I’m fine. I’m good. Not a scratch.” 
“Shit,” I said, “fuck. I could’ve broken your toe.” 
I pulled his shoe and sock, and he wiggled his toes. They were kind of red. 
“Nothing looks broken,” I said, “can you bend your toes? Does it hurt?” 
“Yeah, yeah,” he responded, “I’m fine.” 
I started to lift his shirt up to see if I’d hurt anything else. 
“Hey!” he said with a small jump, “you assault me and now you’re tryna get a look at the goods?” 
I let go of his shirt, “sorry. Should’ve asked. I’m just trying to make sure I didn’t hurt you.” 
A small smirk appeared on his face, “you never have to ask to take off my clothes, dear.” 
I rolled my eyes, but mainly ignored him while I lifted his shirt up again. 
I poked at his ribs, “does that hurt?” 
“A little,” he said and pouted. 
I sat back on my heels, “I’ll get you some ice.” 
“Maybe it’d help if you kissed it better?” he said with another pout. 
I sighed and shook my head, but then I leaned over and left two small kisses on each side of his rib cage. When I sat back up, he looked like he was trying to suppress a smile. He almost looked embarrassed. I didn’t know it was possible for him to be embarrassed. 
“I didn’t think you’d actually do it,” he said. 
I shrugged, “whatever helps.” 
“What about up here?” he asked and poked his lip out. 
“I ain’t tastin’ your blood,” I responded and stood up. 
“Oh, but I’d love to taste yours,” he responded with a smirk. 
I gave him a genuine look of disgust, “ew.” 
“You’d enjoy it,” he said before putting two fingers in front of his mouth and sticking his tongue between them and making a noise sounding something like an “ehg.” 
I blinked and kept my look of disgust, though turning from less disgust and more to disapproval. 
“Do you want a black eye to go with that busted lip?” I asked, sounding more sarcastic than hostile. 
“Nah,” he replied, “that’s a bit too kinky for my taste.” 
I ran my hand over my face, “I’m going to get the fucking ice.” 
“The fucking ice?” he said, “oh like when girls-”
“Shut up!” I cut him off. 
He grinned. I was beginning to think he was proud of himself every time he managed to rile me up a bit. 
I went and got the ice from the kitchen and came back. 
I handed him a bag of ice with a paper towel and another paper towel for his lip. 
“Thank yooooou,” he said. 
“You’re lucky I didn’t electrocute your arse,” I responded, not wanting to give in to the fact that I thought he was kind of adorable. 
“Specifically my arse?” he said, “alright, dominatrix.” I gave him another side-eye.
Kelly joined us in the main area after leaving the locker room. “The fuck’d happen to him?” She asked. 
“She did,” Nathan answered. 
“Oh, did he finally grab your arse like he thinks about every single day?” She asked me. 
“Those thoughts were private!” he butted in before I could answer. 
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set-phasers-to-whump · 3 years ago
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under pressure
prompt: crush injuries
whumpee: eddie diaz
fandom: 911
heyo! this fic is set post eddie begins but pre 4x13. anytime between then i guess but probably closer to eddie begins. also as a heads up no research whatsoever was done for this fic so who knows if this situation could even like, physically happen but whatever. we are making things up today!! anyways i hope you enjoy :)
They’ve just cleared the building when there’s a horrible sort of screeching noise from directly above him. Eddie looks up just in time to see a huge air-conditioning unit drop from the ceiling. 
It hits him square in the chest, and then he’s on the floor, flat on his back, and the weight of the AC unit is pressing down on him, making it nearly impossible to breathe. It hurts like all hell but he can’t exactly make any noise about it, because he can’t breathe. He starts to panic, just a little, but tells himself to hold it together, that everyone else has to have heard that noise, they’ll be here any second and they’ll get this thing off of him and it’ll be okay. 
Sure enough, within thirty seconds Buck and Bobby and Hen and Chim are all there, and Eddie looks up at their worried faces as they all start talking to him but he can’t actually focus on what any of them are saying. Even though they’re all here, even though he knows that means he’ll be okay, the panic is only increasing and the pressure on his chest is immense and he can’t breathe and he is trapped. 
It’s the trapped part that’s really getting to him. He’s never really stopped feeling trapped, not since the well, but the feeling is magnified a hundredfold now because he’s actually physically trapped again, and it’s not really the same at all except that it is except that everyone is here, Buck and Hen and Chim and Bobby, they’re all here and it’s going to be okay, they’re here, but it hurts and he’s trapped and he can’t breathe and -
“Eddie, Eddie, it’s okay, it’s going to be okay. Just listen to my voice, we’re going to get you out from under there.” He tries to focus on Bobby, on the steady reassurance in his voice, but he’s trapped and he can’t breathe and his vision is going dark around the edges and he knows that’s bad and he thinks he should maybe say something in case he’s dying, but he can’t breathe and can’t speak and it hurts and -
“Eddie. Listen to me.” It’s Buck this time. “We’re going to lift this off of you, okay? It’s gonna hurt, but it’ll be quick.”
He sort of nods, Buck’s voice cutting through some of the panic, and then there’s a flare of pain in his chest and a lot of noises and then the weight is just gone. The pressure remains for a moment, then dissipates, and he breathes. It hurts, but it’s at least possible. The trapped feeling lessens, starting to drop back down to its usual, manageable level. The panic, quickly as it had come on, begins to ebb away.
Eddie breathes, and breathes, as things (at least things in his head) get themselves back to normal. Hen and Chim begin to check him over, careful and professional. He knows his own diagnosis before either of them says a word - bruised ribs at the minimum, though from how he feels he’d sooner guess cracked, possibly broken. He’ll be bruised to hell and back, and breathing and talking and generally existing are going to be very painful for a few weeks, but he should be fine. He’s conscious and alert and apparently not showing any signs of internal injuries. 
“You’re still going to the hospital,” Hen says, immediately after she’s delivered the news about Eddie’s evident lack of internal bleeding, as well as the news about him likely having broken at least one of his ribs.
Eddie would try to fight her on this, except that he knows it’s procedure and he’s got her and Chim and Buck and Bobby all staring him down like they’re just daring him to say a word about being fine, and he’s too tired for an argument so he wheezes out a “sure,” and doesn’t even protest when they load him onto a stretcher and into the ambulance.
It’s him and Chim in the back of the ambulance, and Hen in the driver’s seat, and Chim is clipping a pulse monitor to Eddie’s finger - Eddie manages to give him a look that says, really?, and Chim just raises an eyebrow in response. They’re about to leave and then there’s a rap on the metal doors and Chim pushes them open and then there’s Buck, who clambers into the ambulance without a word. 
“Welcome aboard,” Chim says drily. “I wasn’t aware this had turned into a taxi service.”
Buck ignores him, pulls the doors shut behind him, and stands next to Eddie. Chim sighs, shrugs, and taps on the wall to alert Hen that they’re ready to go.
“I’m alright, Buck,” Eddie says, as he feels the ambulance beginning to move. His chest aches with every word, and he knows he doesn’t sound alright, and he’s pretty sure he doesn’t look alright either, but he can breathe and he’s not trapped anymore and sure, maybe he still feels like he is but that’s nothing new. He thinks there is probably always going to be that feeling surrounding him, the feeling of being underground and underwater and alone and so desperate to survive.
Buck looks at him like he sees right through him. “It’s okay if you’re not. Alright, I mean. We’re all here for you, you know.”
And Eddie does know this, but he doesn’t know what to do with it. With the fact that his team is here for him, with the fact that if he were to admit that he’s maybe not completely alright, that he feels constantly trapped by something, that most nights he wakes up choking on mud, on fear - that if he were to admit this they would rally around him, would help him, would care - it’s too much, the idea is too foreign, he can’t. Not now, not yet, anyway.
“I know,” is all he says, all he can say. “I know.”
aaaa thanks for reading! i know this was kinda short and not so sweet but yeah. also i did leave bobby to drive the truck back on his own which is almost certainly against protocol but again this is make believe time i don’t care. anyways i am not sure whether the actual physical setup this is actually possible re: an air conditioning unit falling and hitting someone in the chest, but again i don’t care. i’m simply too tired...luckily i have a break at school this week so hopefully i can recharge and get back to writing things more accurately and doing more research lmao. hope you have a great evening or whatever time of day!
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sevlgi · 4 years ago
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believe
requested: no
group: blackpink
pairing: jisoo x fem!reader
genre: fluff
contents: guardian angel!jisoo, near death instances, unlucky reader. [22/33].
warnings: none
synopsis: You’ve never believed in guardian angels, but that just might change when you’re saved from certain death 3 times in one week.
a/n: idk if I’ve ever seen anyone do a similar au... tell me if you have! also i’m actually hella proud of this one lmao
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Do guardian angels exist?
Well, that’s a subjective question, and there really isn’t a yes or no answer... But if yours does, they’re doing the shittiest job of the century.
The amount of times you’ve been hurt in the past, both physically and emotionally, is stupidly high. You’ve always had an aptitude for getting injured, stories of broken bones and gashes making up basically half of your entire life. Your friends and family pride themselves on having a fully loaded arsenal of embarrassing tales, practically making it a rite of passage to visit the hospital with you. And don’t even mention the heartbreaks- those just seem to follow you wherever you go.
When you move to a different city for what must be the 10th time, you vow that it’s going to be different, no matter how obvious it is that it won’t. You vow that there aren’t going to be any incidents that land you in the hospital, nor any relationships that just end in chaos.
Suffice to say, all of that goes haywire on your first day in town.
Without a car to drive you to work or any friends to hitchhike off of, you take the subway, line #224 to Solace Building. There just so happens to be a new girl group song you’re obsessed with, blasting on the highest possible volume in your earbuds, when you’re shoved from the back right into the subway tracks. “Fu-”
Time slows down as you start to fall, the dusty railways coming too close to your face for comfort before a warm hand wraps around yours, the socket of your arm straining to carry your entire weight as you’re jerked back sharply.
You collide with a warm body, soft curves lessening the impact and delicate, impossibly strong hands steadying you on either side of your waist. By all logic, you should’ve knocked your savior over, should be sprawled on the ground right now with dirty palms and a heat-flushed face. “Are you okay?”
When you step back sharply, you’re met with the sight of the most beautiful person you’ve ever seen in your life. Her heart-shaped smile and delicate features are framed with cascading brown hair, and she has ethereally flawless porcelain skin. She’s the kind of beautiful that makes the plainest outfit look designer, that could make you believe sea glass to be pure diamond. “Uh. Y-yeah. I’m good.”
“I’m glad,” she chuckles, smiling even wider and tucking a piece of hair behind her ear. Maybe she doesn’t realize the effect she has on you, humming as she dusts something invisible off your bag. “You should be more careful, Y/N, wouldn’t want someone as pretty as you being killed by a train.”
If it was anyone else, the words would sound creepy, especially with the added factor of the girl knowing your name. “How-- how do you know who I am?”
She juts her lips at the card hanging off your bag, your name written in big, bold letters. “Nametag. Y/N Y/L/N, employee in Solace Building?”
To hide the heat in your cheeks, you look to the floor and stutter out, “Well. Since you know my name, uh, isn’t it fitting that I know yours?”
It’s not nearly as smooth as you’d like it to be-- usually, the natural flirt in you would’ve made an appearance-- but the petite brunette extends a hand, tipped with gentle pink nails. “Jisoo. Kim Jisoo, if that’s helpful at all.”
Your next words are interrupted by your train arriving; when Jisoo doesn’t follow you on, you turn to look at her with your eyebrow quirked. “Are you...?”
“Not my train,” she smiles, shaking her head, even though it’s the only one arriving for hours where she stands. “Good to meet you, Y/N. Stay out of trouble!”
It’s an odd way to end a first meeting, but you don’t think much of it as you grab the nearest seat and pull out your phone to search her up. K-I-M J-I-S-O-O, you type, eyes scanning the screen fervently as the train starts.
Plenty of people show up-- after all, Kim Jisoo is not a rare name-- but none of the dozens of profiles you click through are the beautiful girl who saved your life. It’s too late when you look back out the window towards the station, the only thing you see becoming brick wall.
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The next time you almost die, you’re just walking to the coffee shop across from your apartment.
The activity should be safe, considering that not many people in the area own cars. At first, you think you are safe, crossing the silent street with no problem and receiving your usual order just fine; you’re on your way back to your lonely little apartment when you hear the screeching of car tires on the road.
“Watch out!” someone screams, but you’re frozen in the middle of the crosswalk. You forget how there wasn’t a single car in the street when you were crossing as you stare at the grill coming close. The car doesn’t stop or slow down, and you scrunch your eyes shut with your arms raised up, just waiting for the impact.
It never comes. When you hesitantly open your eyes again, you find a familiar figure standing in front of you, the force of her hand having knocked your coffee onto your blouse. The car bumper is pressing into her bare leg, which is miraculously clean of a scratch or bruise, but she doesn’t seem to notice as she turns to grin at you.
“Sorry, I ruined your coffee,” Jisoo frowns, her hand coming up to almost touch the steaming stain on your chest. You stare at her mutely, following obediently when she grabs your wrist and pulls you back to the coffee shop. “Can I buy you another one?” she offers, plucking a napkin off a street-side table.
“Kim Jisoo?” you say disbelievingly, not even feeling it as she dabs the coffee away. “You again?”
“Me again,” she confirms, pulling some more napkins out of her purse with a smile on her face. “I hope you’re not disappointed; after all, I just saved you from dying. Again.”
“No, that’s not...” Taking a deep breath, you smile too, wrapping your fingers around her hand to gently brush her off. “It’s okay. I’m glad to see you, actually-- I searched for your profile to thank you, but I couldn’t find anything.”
Jisoo shrugs, opening the door to the coffee shop for you. “Oh, I’m not really on social media. If you wanted my number, you could’ve just asked.”
You laugh lightly, tossing the crushed cup in your hand into the trash. Of course it’s odd that she isn’t on social media in the 21st century-- with her face, you’d expect Jisoo to be a major influencer. “Then I’ll ask for it. Later.”
“Of course. Order what you want, I owe you one after all that,” she offers, plucking a couple loose 20 dollar bills out of her purse.
Once again, you’re faced with another weird habit of hers, but you order anyway and thank her after she pays. Before you can say anything else, though, she gets a text and frowns at her phone. “Oh, sorry, I have to go. Catch you next time?”
“Sure,” you answer, forgetting to tell her that she still forgot to give you her number. You stand dumbly on the sidewalk and watch her go, taking a deep breath and looking both ways before you set off towards your apartment for the second time that day.
Maybe next time?
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The third, and hopefully last time, is the absolute weirdest of all. 
You seem to have a thing for being knocked into ditches-- this time, a group of teenagers barrels into you while you’re walking by the side of the only river in your entire city. You open your mouth to tell them off, but before you can, an especially hard shove from an stocky little boy pushes you right into the water.
Luckily, the fall isn’t high, so you don’t hit the water with much force, but the boats cruising along and the recently terrible weather stir the current strong enough to pull you right under. In the icy water, you feel your fingers let go of the phone in your hand, your lungs slowly being crushed by the pressure of your surroundings.
It’s hard to tell how much time passes while you’re in the water. From what your doctors have told you, trauma is difficult to remember clearly for a while, but you vaguely feel hands linking in front of your chest and forearms bracing under your armpits to drag you out of the water.
The heat of the summer sun warms the stone under your back and you can hear whispers sounding around you as you flop onto the floor. Hands push hard on your breastbone, once, twice-
After maybe 30 pushes, fingers pinch your nose, and soft lips meet yours. It feels more like a kiss than CPR, no air really being blown into your mouth, but nonetheless, you feel water leaving your lungs, and you open your eyes in shock, coughing out loud.
To your (somewhat) shock, it’s the same girl hovering over you. Jisoo’s skirt is wet at her knees where she kneels beside you, her hands still hovering over your chest. She must’ve been the one giving CPR, then. Sitting up, you hack violently until most of the water’s out of your lungs, the other girl waving away all of the spectators. “How’re you feeling?” she asks, once you’re alone on the sidewalk.
Your hands move faster than your brain, pulling her forward by the nape of her neck until you kiss again, something about her tasting familiar in a way you can’t quite place. “Who are you?” you breathe once you’ve pulled away, searching her warm eyes for an answer.
She smiles again, handing you your miraculously dry phone instead of answering. It should be waterlogged and dead, but nothing seems to make sense when concered with Kim Jisoo. “How about you take me for dinner or something before asking the serious questions? Soup should be good to warm you up.”
Hand clasping in hers, you’re pulled to your feet with strength that doesn’t match her petite stature. You barely remember that you look like an almost-drowned rat, your lips purple with cold and your hair stringy with icy water. “Sure. Soup. But you need to answer me first.”
She exhales, hitching her bag higher up on her arm. “I’d say I’m your guardian angel, but you wouldn’t believe that, would you?”
“I wouldn’t,” you answer, eyes narrowing as you follow her down the street. “But maybe you can convince me. Over soup.”
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amethystcria · 4 years ago
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AFTER 291 - Revisiting Twice: Was Dabi listening the whole time?
Lmao I’m so mad I didn’t post this before the leaks because wow...I was right. 
Had to re-edit some parts here but here are the evidences I believed Hori left to implied that Dabi was in fact using Twice. Whether his death was plan or not is still to be decided but... Twice was bait.
I am of the unpopular opinion that both Dabi and Hawks are responsible for Twice’s death.
CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR 291
(FYI: This is rather long bc I haven’t done theories in awhile so I don’t know when to shut up and overdramatic as Dabi sometimes lol.)
It could be just a plot hole Horikoshi didn’t realize he left but it’s been simmering in my mind since all the foreshadowing of Dabi’s upcoming broadcast. And with Dabi admitting how he did think of killing Shoto, his brother, for his goals... This theory doesn’t seem so crazy now. 
Now that we know of the elaborate scheme Dabi has been planning for many years (and good for him!) coming to fruition at last! I have to wonder what role was Twice gonna have in his plan? Was Hawks apart of it too? Had they been playing their part this whole time? (Edit: With the leaks 291 the answer is yes.)
When the mansion got invaded it was so strange to me that while everyone was heading to battleground, Dabi, turned the other way. He was heading toward Twice. Why? How? We all knew that when the raid started Skeptic put the blame on Twice + Hawks and tried to find them. He couldn’t because Hawks had removed the mini cams by then. So how did Dabi know where Twice was located and that he was being targeted?
The only way Dabi would know is if he had been keeping tabs on Twice and Hawks. Becoming familiar enough with their habits and thinking to make the conclusion that Hawks would trap Twice in that specific room. We already know Dabi never trusted Hawks and yet he allowed him to get close to Twice. Why? Especially if he could guess that Twice had become Hawks intended target in his double agent agenda. Unless this is what he wanted...
Which is already pretty bad using an ally like this. If Dabi didn’t want Hawks to get Twice he would have mention it beforehand. He had to have wanted this. But hey let’s give Dabi the benefit of the doubt that maybe he allow this because he thought he had high possibility of avoiding the worst outcome: Twice’s death
But then that would mean Dabi was willing to risk Twice’s life in luring Hawks which is what I think he did. 
But did he really?
(I’ll be using the official viz’s translation for these lines quotes but the japanese raws to show there’s no differentiation between word usage in the images itself.)
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Chapter 265 Dabi: Looks like sentiment tripped you up after all, hero! Hawks: I could never allow mere sentiment to trip me up.
We know that when Dabi finally reached Twice’s location that he did not immediately come to his rescue. He waited for an opening and him throwing Hawks’s words back at him then always seem like an indication of his arrival time.
However in the following chapter, 266: Happy Life, Dabi retorts one of Hawks’ line again. It’s easy to miss since it’s only one word this time and not a whole sentence. I didn’t catch it until several rereads later.
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Dabi: He was just 'unlucky,' huh? Maybe by your screwed-up standards
Hawks: You've just been unlucky, but you can make a fresh start once you pay for your crimes.
We can see that Dabi is quoting a phrase in his thoughts. He is not saying this. And ordinarily this would be fine except when Hawks said this line to Twice, Dabi was nowhere near to hear this. We see at the end of chapter 264 that Dabi is still running up the stairs...
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Unless Hawks was yelling this line which I doubt. Or the time passage between these two panels are different somehow, again: press doubt, Dabi should have not been able to hear this line but he did. How? Either this is an overlook on Horikoshi’s part or Dabi somehow had bugged the room. Pretty wild of a guess especially when Hawks would have taken out any cameras I think...but if Dabi had been overhearing their conversation this whole time then it make sense why he had certain trail of thought passed his mind in this panel.
Panel Above Dabi: Twice. This isn't your fault. As always... scummy heroes are to blame.
Twice was despairing in this chapter blaming himself for once again falling for a trap. I always thought it was very nakama-like that Dabi could SOMEHOW sense Twice’s plead and reply to his soul. “This isn’t your fault” is the closest to an apologize from Dabi, because really isn’t his fault. It’s Dabi’s. And god if he had been listening this whole damn time no wonder he thought this when he did. Of course he could’ve also just heard Twice’s agony scream (sfx seen on the top)...
I could go on longer about how Dabi faked shock on Hawks escaping his hold, how his little show of comradery with Twice in combating Hawks was an act in itself. And his reaction toward Twice’s death, the word choice usages, the tone of it all was quite theatrical. Good show, Dabi!! 
It had to have been if it was being recorded. Gotta play the good ally, right?
I always did wonder why there was such a focus on his hand on these panels in the infamous black speech bubble chapter. It’s not like the other panels where the focus is there because of his burns. He had something in his grasp to hide.
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Chapter 291 Spoiler:
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It was one of Skeptic’s cameras. 
That makes me wonder something though. Was this when he cut off the film? And if so, why? If he knew Skeptic was gonna see it and the world why end the recording there after torturing Hawks? Y’know aside from obviously saying he doesn’t care about the league, etc.
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Are we really so sure that this bubble had his name? Or could there be something else? There’s a good chance this censor wasn't just a tease but indication of when the camera stop for a moment.
I gotta say if Dabi’s pre recording still going on then I fear for his next card drawn. What are the chances he recorded some students on the battlefield as well? Students who shouldn’t be there in the first place whose parents have no clue their child/ren are a participant of war. As far as they know they’re suppose to be on a field trip for their work study program. Oh man are hero society gonna have a field day if that’s reveal~
One thing for sure though. Twice was bait. Whether it went according to Dabi’s original plan can be up for debate(as in his death being the goal...since 291 SPOILER: Dabi’s pre-recording voice only mention Hawks killing Jeanist, not Twice) but Dabi was satisfied with the end result either way. R.I.P. TWICE You were such a swell guy but too easy to use. It happens. You had a good life.
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makeste · 5 years ago
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BnHA Chapter 266: Sad Naruto Flute Music
Previously on BnHA: Tamaki ate a horse; Dark Shadow punched Re-Destro through a wall; Gigantomachia didn’t want to wake up from his nap; Tokoyami climbed inside of Fatgum’s stomach like a little emo joey and mused about Hawks; Hawks was all “am I evil or no? history shall decide!” and sort of kind of maybe tried to kill Twice; and then Dabi showed up and set the two of them on fire before you could say “stop, drop, and roll.” All of this was a real chapter that really happened. Anyway but then Hawks saved Twice by pulling him out of the fire, which I totally didn’t notice during my first readthrough last week, so that’s nice. But then Dabi stepped on Hawks’s face and used his quirk again. So that was not so nice. We’re really having ourselves an arc, here.
Today on BnHA: Well you know the old saying. Save a man from burning and you feed him for a day, stab him while he’s running away and you feed him for life. Oh, the chapter? Right. Well Hawks is perfectly fine aside from getting a sexy scar for his troubles, which I’ll have you know I did predict. Twice however is not so fine, which, fun fact, I did not predict. If you’re just joining us. Yeah. I boofed it. Anyway so Hawks escapes Dabi using the power of mysterious main character logic, and then he stabs Twice, and Twice dies, very slowly and sadly and in Toga’s arms. That’s it that’s the chapter. You’ll love it. It’s full of feels. And death. Lol I’m in a mood right now I’m sorry guys. I’m gonna go write some healing Bakugou essays.
so as mentioned on the “previously” section above, Hawks saved Twice’s life! meanwhile Dabi apparently arrived in time to listen to Hawks’s “here I go... time to kill you... really gonna do it... here it comes...” speech for at least several seconds before he finally decided to make his grand entrance, as evidenced by him quoting Hawks’s “sentiment” line right back in his face before setting him on fire. so basically Hawks is still okay and villains gonna villain. this is my conclusion and 4 out of 5 dentists approve but you can form your own judgements as well and that’s fine!
(ETA: this is all your fault fifth dentist.)
anyway so before we begin, full disclosure, I was warned this chapter would make me cry. so that ominous pronouncement is gonna be weighing on my mind while we embark upon our weekly manga journey today, but alas such is life! at least life in March 2020. did we really expect any good news at this point. I want a refund on this whole year but apparently I should get in line
so here we go. someone is narrating and it’s not quite clear who
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but the “you’ve just been unlucky” part is a reference to what Hawks was telling Twice in chapter 264, so unless Dabi was listening in on that part too, I would think this would have to be Twice? even though Dabi’s the one whose face is so prominent here, all handsome and crazy
omg Hawks is holding on to his feather and using his tk to blast away while holding Twice
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what a fucking thing to do. is the fucking feather still on fire. and somehow he hasn’t instinctively let go of it?? THIS BOY I SWEAR TO GOD
and so he’s definitely going to have a scar there now it looks like! pretty sure this makes him an honorary Todoroki. aww
and also Twice seems to possibly be unconscious, so I guess that was Dabi’s narration?? you mean to tell me Dabi was basically sitting outside for like a full five minutes. were you fixing your hair. getting ready to livestream?? “hey there villain nation it’s me ya boi, so I’m here in the Hilton Gunga Heights and omg like a shitton of heroes have attacked us out of fucking nowhere, and now the number two hero is getting ready to fucking murder my bro Twice, and he hasn’t even noticed I’m here yet. shit is totally crazy, anyways before we go on just a reminder to click on the link below to check out our official league merch, and if you haven’t already, click on the button to like and subscribe, it really helps us out.” and then boom, just in time to save Twice from Mr. To Stab or Not to Stab
(ETA: now that we know it’s actually Twice what am I gonna do with all these Dabi social media jokes. huh?! Horikoshi you ruined everything!!)
oh this chapter is apparently called “Happy Life.” that’s fun I’m sure we’re going to have a really fun time here
(ETA: so fun the funnest.)
Dabi doesn’t really seem fazed though
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yeah he’s fucked we know don’t have to rub it in ffff
(ETA: Dabi. we underestimated him, Dabi.)
so Hawks is all “you nearly murdered your bro just fyi” and Dabi is all “smirk it’s fine cuz I knew you were going to save him cuz ~that’s ~what ~heroes ~do” wow you guys. I just realized that between Dabi and Hawks, this has the potential to be the single snarkiest fight we’ve ever had in this manga. my hype for this chapter just went up 10x
also even though I just summarized these last few panels I’m also going to post them so we can all shamelessly admire hot wounded Hawks
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hot damn. you were right, AFO. wounded heroes are the sexiest. I may be paraphrasing a bit
also two things, (1) looks like he called some of his feathers back (so then WHERE WERE THEY??), but it’s not much. and (2) he was wearing gloves this whole time that’s right I forgot. so maybe his hands are okay?? the hell are those made of, damn
oh my freaking lord
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this is one attractive chapter I’ll give it that. also raise your hand if you’re surprised that Dabi never actually trusted Hawks. yeah that’s what I thought
well shit looks like we’re finally getting some Hawks thoughts! unsurprisingly, they are all “I’m fucked”
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please note that while talking!Hawks is continuing to be all sassy, thinking!Hawks is busy tallying up Jin’s injuries. this is a good sign, maybe. I hope. lol
anyway but speaking of Jin, what is going on
oh lol he’s making a break for it
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this is so bad you guys. this is so so bad. if Twice lives that’s all well and good, but if he escapes, Hawks is 100% right about how dangerous he is. they could literally capture 90% of PLF in this raid and it would hardly even matter. also in the meantime the #2 hero is about to be roasted alive so that’s also not great for the hero side all things considered
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh no. I don’t like this. no no no
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why did we suddenly cut to outside and someone’s screaming (?) echoing from offscreen. I’m trying to think of not-terrible explanations for this and coming up short. uh
now we’re back to Hawks/Twice/Dabi, only I don’t see Hawks yet. but Twice is just barely dodging the flame blast, and meanwhile Dabi is all
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is he talking to Twice?
yep he’s talking to Twice
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that’s fine. that’s all I need. for Twice to “go wild” while my nine-year-old son is outside with his batteries all fried and innocently waiting for someone to lead him back to where his other child soldier friends are waiting for him. like. say what you will about Hawks and betrayal, but there was a fucking reason he was trying to take Twice out first
hmm but we’re getting this slow-motion panel now and FUCK ME I SWEAR TO GOD IF A FEATHER PIERCES HIS HEART OUT OF NOWHERE I’M GONNA LOSE IT
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WAIT WHAT
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EXCUSE ME BUT
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? ??????????
well you sure have been made to look the fool now, Dabi. thought you’d won just because you had Hawks cornered in a narrow room and you set him on fire while standing in between him and the only exit. rookie fucking mistake. you scrub. you clod. you halfwit. how could you let this happen. wow I can’t believe Dabi let Hawks escape unscathed except for a sexy scar and that’s the end of the chapter
LMAO
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oh my god. well good news everyone this chapter did indeed make me cry
(ETA: listen. I’m going to hell, I know. but it’s still funny as fuck.)
“he went outside with the blast... and flanked me?!” ...sure. sure let’s just go with that. seems reasonable
actually no, sorry, I literally went back two chapters to see if there was another way out of this room, and nope
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by the way that last panel is apparently from Dabi’s POV if I’m understanding this right. just standing behind Hawks waiting for youtube live to connect
but anyway. so no exit. meaning Dabi apparently torched a hole right through the wall and Hawks just sat there and was all “okay this hurts like a mother but if I wait it out a few more seconds I think I can... there we go!” you know, logic
so now there is a ton of action happening which I can’t quite understand, but also Dabi is shouting Hawks’s real name for some reason
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why do I feel like this is definitely the last page before somebody definitely fucking dies. shit. shit
oh thank god so far so good. and also, lol
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BECAUSE HE READ THE DATABOOK, HAWKS. that’s probably how he figured out you were a spy too. we’ve been had
oh snap?!
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don’t do this to me Horikoshi. don’t give me hope. don’t act like you’re gonna actually address this topic sometime before the heat death of the universe
AND HE’S OUT
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MY BABY OFF TO DESTROY PEOPLE. ;_; shitttt hahaha nervous laughter Ralph Wiggum sitting on the bus etc.
GODDAMN IT HORIKOSHI
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I don’t want Twice to kill anyone but it doesn’t mean I want him to die either! just!! can’t I have it both ways?? please stop with this I can’t take it also what is Spinner doing. and also YAY GIRAN SIGHTING hot damn the sex appeal of this chapter is fast approaching critical levels
GOD FUCKING DAMMIT FUCK
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fuck me. [eyes post from last week] the real announcer jinx was the metas we made along the way
well we’re cutting away again!! because of course we are!! Horikoshi won’t show violence unless it’s a dog exploding or a little boy accidentally murdering his entire family
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[taps megaphone] this thing on. all right then. [clears throat] NO ONE WANTS THIS
FOR FUCK’S SAKE
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“I KNOW YOU’RE ALL DYING TO SEE WHAT’S GOING TO HAPPEN, SO HERE, LET’S CUT TO A RANDOM PAGE OF TOGA AND COMPRESS BEING CAPTURED BY A MAN WITH HUNGRY HUNGRY HIPPO ARMS”
oh damn but are they really captured though??
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forgive me for being skeptical. not to doubt you, Hungry Hungry Hippo Man. I’m sure you’re absolutely right and your sentence cut off at the end there because you remembered that they changed their name to Pliff, and not because you’re being stabbed or burned or impaled or whatever the fuck
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HE LIVED BITCH
yes he totally lived and this definitely isn’t so that he can get one final scene with Toga before he suddenly keels over and dies. shit. at this point it’s fucking inevitable. you had to go and drag his girlfriend into this. I’m so sad you guys I can’t even deal with these emotions I’m just gonna stubbornly joke about stupid shit until I figure out what the fuck else to do
OH MY GOD!!!!???
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HE DIED BITCH!?!??
he’s already dead he’s already fucking dead fucking shit
ohhhhhh it’s pouring down sads now
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my bird son really went and fucking killed the sweetest little dumpling in the manga. I wrote like 5 thousands essays defending you, Hawks. we gonna have to get you a damn good lawyer now
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why is sad flute music from the Naruto OST playing
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he’s not gonna need it where he’s going Toga. because they already have plenty of handkerchiefs on the farm. and lots of room for him to run around and play with other villains too
lmao fuck
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I really did this to myself, why did I actually start playing Sadness and Sorrow fuck my life. real actual tears
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and it SEEMS TO ME, YOU LIVED YOUR LIFE, LIKE A CANDLE IN THE WIND~~~
[sad makeste noises]
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AND I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO KNOW YOU
BUT I WAS JUST A KID~~
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your candle burned out long before
your legend ever did.
[mellow keyboard tones]
welp. ... 2020 ladies and gentlemen
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mochuelovelli · 4 years ago
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Fix-It AU for the Moonvasion Arc!
I would like to preface this by saying that this is gonna seem real fanfic-y and for that I am sorry. I want to bullet point some ways to change some aspects of S2 from Whatever Happened to Donald Duck?! onwards.
Whatever Happened to Donald Duck?!:
The segment that shows the McDuck/Duck family tree has Donald Crossed out not because he is captured but Lunaris PLANNED to kill him before going to Earth once he would basically tortured him for information
Donald is tripped by Lunaris which makes him land on Penumbra, allowing him to sneak the device under his hat as it falls off without Lunaris noticing. After Lunaris explains his plan he throws Donald and the scene transpires as normal, save for Don attaching the clamp to Lunaris and finding the remote. 
Lunaris still ends up getting the upper hand and punching Don away but he reveals the remote and presses it. Only for it to, of course, get broken on impact and the rest of the scene transpires normally.
[Here is the biggest change]The rocket DOES end up exploding. It makes it to Earth's atmosphere but of course the bullet hits one of Scrooge's satellite and rickashays back to the moon again. Upon realizing he is going to crash, Donald jumps out but just in time as the blast from the pod knocks him semi-conscious.
Last shot is him falling toward a crater and shows Donald gaining conscious only for him to see he is falling into the moonmite's mouth but doesn't reach beyond making a groan and the scene cuts to black with the jaw snapping sound (alternatively it can just cut to black as he falls)
The Jones Scene ends with Scrooge saying the same line about not paying Donald bills. Only he also adds once closing the door, "Fallacious tightwad, I ain't payin' for some leeching city counselor. I'll find that lad a proper therapist when he gets back. One that doesn't have an arachnoid infestation." *cue spider coming to crawl on Scrooge's face before he chucks it off*
Webby's line is cut down to "Well I guess there really wasn't some big mystery to solve." But the kids' lines stay the same frome there on.
Scrooge gets only Donald screaming "Uncle Scrooge!" before the audio cuts to audio to one of Mrs. Crackshell-Cabera's novelas due to the satellite being damaged(does that make sense? No but neither do moonpeople). You could probably make a suggestive joke here about cruises and Scrooge's line can stay the same. The camera pans up as the line is delivered still but it is just a shot where the moon is in focus. That or it's the satellite falling instead.
Happy Birthday, Doofus Drake! until Moonvasion:
(know it would be a pain in the ass, but I think it be cool to edit the intro to remove/replace Donald during the time he isn't shown in an ep. Though I guess they don't change the intro until season 3 so yeah. Mainly wanted to give the illusion that he is "missing" to scare anyone under 8 that "oh no maybe he is GONE gone just to be a prick
The Golden Armory of Cornelius Coot!
Trim down the Bigtime C plot like a LOT. Maybe end that original scene with Ma Beagle by having Bigtime lean on something (statue, standing on some "moss") and fall down to the caves. 
The cart scene with Bigtime still happens but that cut back from Launchpad and Della doesn't happen until after Della yells at Launchpad when she is flying. (So not the scene where Louie is kicking rocks)
Maybe cut the scenes where Bigtime is bragging about "finding a name for himself" and just have one scene where he ties up the boys and saves his family but they argue and waste time til Della and Webby come back. The end where Ma says BT is welcome back is cut as well, she just says it and then complains about the popcorn
After the scene with LP, Della and Webby, the camera pans up to the sky so a transition to the moon happens. Transition zooms out to reveal Penumbra looking at the Earth with her spear, before she turns upon hearing the moonmite screech and readys herself.
The moonmite is then shown crawling up from a hole at first by itself before Donald's torse is revealed, his hair is a bit longer and feathers are ruffled. Penumbra stands down and looks a bit more open before asking "Did anyone see you?" 
Donald just says no before hopping off, of course falling along with the equipment he brought. The shot is focused on Penumbra looking towards Donald's silhouette as he gets up.
She then asks "How's the leg?" To which the camera cuts back to Donald and we see him in full view, his model is similar to when he is on the island only way less beard and his hair isn't quite as long yet. But the most notably difference is that his right leg from the knee down is now a golden prosthesis. Don responds with "Fine, thanks for making it for me."
Penumbra turns back as Donald is shown to clumsily put the equipment on a nearby table and says "I couldn't have forgiven myself if I let Della's brother die." Donald nearly falls over again before she turns to face him and asks if he is ready to which he nods before they turn and the camera reveals the broken Spear of Selene. Penumbra's voice is heard then saying "Then Let's get you home." Before the ep ends.
The Richest Duck in the World!:
Everything is the same except when Penumbra calls, She says "This is LT. Penumbra calling for her friend Della Duck!-" [Della's Line] "All of your defense satellite just went down for some reason. Della-" Familiar quacking can be heard and Della even questions it before Donald's voice comes on. "Della!" "Donald!" Della parrots as she grabs the SATCOM box. "There's going to be an invasion! He's coming for the kids!" Episode ends the same from here.
[I'll make a second post l8r since I planned this to come out before 10 and it's already almost 1130 so yeah. Literally all these changes are basically to set up a bit of a stronger connection between Della and Donald (as well as giving Donald more screen time) by having the twins mirror each other a bit more. I personally headcanon that like Donald, Della is unlucky as well but in a different way. Where Donald has bad luck everyday of his life which mostly comes in the form of physical harm (secondly it would be emotional harm), Della's bad luck comes in the form where she is just as "lucky" as the rest of her family (maybe discounting Louie) but while she enjoyed 20ish years of adventuring relatively unscathed, she then crashes on the moon after a freak storm happens and is stuck there for over a decade. To me, her struggles on the moon in Whatever Happened to Della Duck?! And The Golden Spear! really showcases her bad luck, almost as if the universe decided to throw the biggest karma bomb at her all at once. But just like her brother she is fuelled with determination and love for her family in order to survive anything, she just has to do it all by herself (another thing which is worse for her bc she doesn't have them) at that point. And it isn't a one and done thing, it's something permit as she now is literally 11 years behind on parenting and the show continues to show her stuggle with that. By having Donald lose his leg and have a journey back to his family that's quicker than Della's (along with having company from nearly the beginning) it parallels that unluckiness the Duck twins have. It also can serve as a plot for future eps (well fake eps lmao). 
Ik that this au wouldn't have been possible as Disney would be really anal about having one of their mascots have a total design change. Unless they really wanted to milk having characters with prosthetics for park days or whatever, maybe it wouldn't be THAT big of a deal aside from some fluff articles. I realize though, it might overshadow Della's trauma so ideally I would hope to figure out or map out an ep where it would be addressed along with some other family issues.] 
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gamerwoo · 5 years ago
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Luhan: Deception
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Characters: Luhan x female reader
Genre/warnings: incubus au, technically guardian angel au??, angst, sorta fluffy??, kinda religious themes, suggestive themes, masturbation, mention of guns, blood, almost dying a few times lmao
Word count: 6,206
Summary: Being in the right place at the right time -- well, depending on how you look at it -- has caused Luhan much more trouble than he was looking for. You’re now convinced he’s your guardian angel despite the fact he’s really the complete opposite, but he’s willing to go along with it if it means getting what he wants.
a/n: this is part of a collab with 11 other writers and we all wrote different exo members as....incubuses? incubi? lmao anyway, so if you wanna read the others, you can find them on the masterlist!!
12 Days of Lust Masterlist
‘Too angelic-looking’. That’s what Luhan was always told whenever he was summoned by some stupid human with some sort of high sex-drive or ‘a need for thrill’. He couldn’t possibly be an incubus because he looked too ‘doll-like’ and ‘innocent’. To humans, he looked like he belonged in Heaven rather than Hell.
However, once he got them in bed, it changed. The way he moved his hips, the way his fingers and tongue could make anybody turn into a whimpering, babbling mess of ecstasy -- that was truly sinister. It was something only an incubus could achieve. He had years and years and years of practice, and he used that well. Whether he was summoned by some lonely human or wandering into the dreams of a poor, unsuspecting victim, Luhan was definitely kept busy.
He did have a weakness, though -- but maybe most, if not all, incubi could attest to the same weakness. He loved humans who were innocent. Those who were inexperienced and easily flustered. He assumed people saw him how he saw the innocent humans. Whenever he got the opportunity to fuck one, he always took it and savored it.
Which was why he went along with this stupid, stupid lie.
Luhan definitely wasn’t the type of person to believe in fate, and you honestly weren’t, either. But he had been in the right place at the right time three times. He had saved your life three whole times now. That couldn’t be a coincidence, could it? It had to mean something -- to you, anyway. To Luhan, he found it to be an inconvenience. Having to deal with pathetic humans in any capacity other than using them for his own pleasure was annoying and a nuisance, and the fact that you now saw him as something other than a random stranger you’d seen once or twice made his blood boil. At least, at first.
The first time you had run into Luhan, it was during something you never thought you’d have to witness. The bank you went to was being robbed. You were there to get a new debit card since yours was broken, and Luhan was there because his ‘pet’ -- as he semi-affectionately referred to his humans most of the time. But some crazy man with a gun ran in, and chaos broke out. He started shooting, wanting people to drop onto the floor while the tellers gave him the money. The women at the front desk were panicking, the patrons were panicking, and you were left frozen in place from fear.
“Get down!” somebody hissed as they threw their body on top of yours just as the man pointed the gun at you since you weren’t listening to his directions.
They managed to wrap one arm around your middle and catch themselves before the two of you hit the ground. But they kept their body on top of yours.
You would later learn after the man was apprehended and the weight was off of you that she stranger who saved you was Luhan. He politely held out a hand to help you to your feet, apologizing for throwing himself at you like that despite the fact he had whispered in your ear that you were “out of your fucking mind” for not moving -- which he wasn’t completely wrong about. But he didn’t introduce himself and he didn’t ask for your name, either. He only asked if you were okay before he went about his business, and you just assumed it was pure luck that somebody was there to save you.
Only a few weeks later would you run into the same stranger yet again. Only this time, you wouldn’t be too worked up from adrenaline, so you could actually get a good look at his face. After tugging you back toward the sidewalk after you walked out into traffic while you were on your phone, you gasped and looked up at that beautiful, oddly familiar face. His almost white hair almost looked like it was glowing as you stared at him in awe -- but it might’ve just been the sun bouncing off of it -- and his dark eyes looked back at you without any emotion. Just like the first time you’d run into him.
“Of course it’s you,” he deadpanned, though you could see the hint of a smirk on his face as one corner of his mouth just barely twitched upwards. “You’re quite the klutz, apparently.”
Despite being a demon, Luhan had to blend in with people when he was mingling with the humans. So it was only natural for him to try to save you despite the fact he didn’t really care if you lived or died. It wasn’t like it would have any impact on him, anyway. 
But to you, he was some sort of savior. The fact this was the second time he’d saved your life, plus the fact the way the sunlight hit his beautiful face made you think he could be some sort of guardian angel. But that couldn’t be real, right? Those couldn’t possibly exist. ...Right?
“You’re lucky I’m around when you do stupid things, huh?” he teased as he helped straighten you out before simply walking across the street just as the walk signal lit.
And all you could do was dumbly stare after him.
But the third time was when you made your move. You actually bothered to say something to him.
“W-wait!” you managed to speak up as he was about to walk away after casually saving your life for a third time.
You were positive he had to be some sort of guardian angel at that point.
Luhan, on the other hand, was positive natural selection was coming for you soon.
Despite that, he spun around on his heels to look at you, still showing no emotion on his angelic face.
“I need to thank you somehow,” you insisted, playing nervously with your fingers. “You’ve saved me like, a bunch of times already. Can I buy you a coffee or something? Dinner? I dunno, whatever you want.”
Luhan definitely had an idea of what you could give him. His latest human was completely useless to him now, and with how thick-skulled you already seemed, he was sure he could get you to do exactly what he wanted. But he figured maybe wining and dining you first would help.
“Dinner sounds lovely,” he decided with the first actual smile you’d seen from him.
But an hour and a half later, he had gotten himself into a situation he never would’ve imagined. He was no closer to sleeping with you. In fact, he might’ve been further from it. You kept saying nonsense about fate and how you didn’t believe in it but there was no way you and him running into each other over and over was a coincidence. He just wanted to tell you it was unlucky timing.
However, despite the rubbish spewing from your mouth during dinner, Luhan couldn’t help but take a liking to you. He had decided you would definitely become his next pet because you were just the type of human he liked. You told him straight away that you didn’t drink despite the fact you were of age to do so. He figured maybe you were trying to be sober or something, but you explained you were raised to think it was bad to drink and get drunk. That definitely piqued his interest. You were still trying to be a good girl, apparently. But then he started to learn more about you. He asked the typical questions he might ask for small talk, like about your job or your family or any partner you might have.
“Oh, I’ve… I-I don’t date,” you admitted sheepishly.
Luhan raised an eyebrow as he sipped his wine, “Oh? Why is that?”
“I’m just really shy,” you laughed nervously as you tucked a piece of hair behind your ear. “I don’t do any of that kind of stuff.”
“Would you want to?” he wondered. “You don’t have to answer if it’s too personal.”
But he wanted you to answer.
“It’s okay,” you assured him. “I think I would when I meet the right person.”
Did you think he was the right person? You were talking about coincidences and fate, so were you trying to hint at the fact that you thought meeting him was fate? That you were meant to be together?
Of course not. No, that would be too easy for him.
“I-I want to admit something…” you told him sheepishly as you leaned in slightly across the table. “You’ve saved my life three times now, and… Okay, I know this will sound crazy, but I feel like you’re like my guardian angel or something.”
That was Luhan’s opening, and he so stupidly took it.
“What would you say if I told you I am your guardian angel?” he asked quietly with a smirk.
You were naive enough to believe it, but Luhan was stupid enough to get himself into this stupid situation in the first place. So now he had to go along with this dumb lie just to get possibly one of the most innocent humans he’d ever met to be his new pet. And while he definitely didn’t want to have to act like some prim and proper angel, he knew that pounding you into the mattress would make everything worth it. So he would carry on with the stupid facade to gain your trust so he could use you for his own desires.
-
[day five]
It became routine for Luhan to check up on you. Well, he told you he was checking up on you. That was supposed to be his job as a guardian angel, but he was just doing it to get close to you. It was half-boring just hanging around like you did mundane things like washing dishes and doing laundry. However, it was also somewhat fun because he could just sit there and imagine all the things he could do to you in your house. He could lift you up onto the counter and take you there, or how he could easily push your head into the cushions of your couch when you’d bend over to place your folded laundry in a pile before carrying it off to your room.
“Luhan?” your voice broke him from his current daydream of sprawling you out on your counter.
The reality was that you were simply cutting up vegetables.
“Hmm?” he spoke up, eyes meeting yours as you looked back at him curiously.
“Isn’t it bad for people to know about their guardian angels?” you repeated your question. “In stories and stuff, they’re always supposed to be kept a secret. You won’t get in trouble, will you?”
‘I can do whatever the fuck I want,’ he thought to himself.
“No,” was what he replied with instead. “As long as you don’t go running off telling anybody, I’m fine.”
It wasn’t necessarily a lie. He knew how everything like that worked -- between the rules of his own kind, and the ones above. It was just common knowledge for all of them. He knew the angels knew of his rules, as well. Though, his rules were much more lenient. He could get away with far more than any angel could, such as sex. Angels weren’t allowed to even so much as think about something like that, but any demon or fallen angel could fuck anybody as often as they pleased.
Everybody may have pinned Luhan as an angel at first glance, but man, he was thankful he wasn’t one. How boring that life must be.
“What’s it like where you’re from?” you wondered as you looked back down at the vegetables you were prepping for dinner.
‘Where I’m from,’ he snorted to himself.
He noticed you never directly said the names of the places. He wasn’t really sure if you were religious so he figured maybe you just didn’t believe or something. Or maybe it felt too cliche to you to say. Or maybe you were just scared or nervous to say the names out loud. But still, he thought it was kind of funny. Maybe even a little bit cute.
Luhan had obviously never been to Heaven, so he wasn’t aware of what things were like there. He imagined everything was white and gold and pristine. He imagined everybody was prim and proper and perfect, and that somebody could have their wings ripped just for not standing up straight enough. He had a lot of ideas of what Heaven was like, but he wasn’t positive about any of them.
Then again, it wasn’t like you would know the difference between the truth and a lie.
“All of the angels wear white, and we stick to the rules closely,” he explained, trying to not sound like just the mere thought of having to abide by such stupid rules made him want to gag. “Only when we’re trying to fit in with the humans can we wear ‘human’ clothing. If we walked around in white all the time, we’d look odd, wouldn’t we?”
You looked over his current outfit, noticing the only light thing about him was his hair. Come to think of it, you never saw him in white. But he was usually hanging out in the human world with you, so that made sense to you. So you shrugged it off and went back to cooking.
-
[day thirteen]
Something Luhan could do was enter your dreams. He didn’t do it too often because he was worried you might start suspecting something, but he did do it every once in a while. The first time, not much happened. He laid on the bed with you and just talked to you. He wanted to do more, but he didn’t want you getting suspicious of him. He figured your curious and imaginative mind would assume he had some sort of angel power that could get him into your dreams, so he had to be softer with you -- at least for now. While you never mentioned your dreams about him, it was safe to assume you didn’t think he had any sort of power. But still, better safe than getting thrown back to square one.
You had come home from work looking especially stressed, so he figured this was the perfect opportunity. Your subconscious would probably come up with something to calm you down, so it would make the most sense for him to force himself into your dream to be that something.
“_____?” you heard his soft voice ask.
You were curled up under the covers, crying to yourself because you felt so overwhelmed. In your dream, there was a lot more going on than just whatever was bothering you at work, but you still ended up locking yourself in your room and sobbing. But hearing your guardian angel’s soft voice, you moved the covers from your head and looked over to see him standing by your closed door.
He frowned seeing your bloodshot and tear-stained eyes, “What’s wrong?”
“Everything,” you sniffled.
He walked over to you and climbed into your bed beside you. He got himself under the blankets and held his arms out for you, silently telling you that you could curl up against him instead of being alone in a sad little ball.
Something you did note despite being in a dream was that Luhan was dressed completely in black. He was wearing a fitted black t-shirt under a black leather jacket, black jeans that were ripped at the knee and looked a little dirty and worn, and even had black socks on his feet. But his hair was still the same beautiful blonde that made him look like a perfect porcelain doll.
As you rolled over and snuggled up to him instead, burying your face in the middle of his torso and letting your tears soak into his shirt, he began to stroke your hair back.
“Do you want to talk about it?” he wondered.
“I doubt talking will help,” you mumbled, your words almost lost in his stomach.
He chuckled at how you sounded like a pouting child, holding you closer to him, “Okay, then how about a distraction?”
“Like what?”
You could’ve written it off as your own subconscious for the reason Luhan began softly singing your favorite song. It was one you often listened to to boost your mood, and you typically found yourself humming it from time to time. However, Luhan knew that it was your favorite, and he knew that him singing it in his beautiful voice that you found so angelic would make you feel safer and happier.
And the fact that you nuzzled closer to him only proved that as an almost evil smirk tugged on the corners of his lips, his soft voice filling your ears.
When you woke and saw Luhan before you left for work, you didn’t say anything about your dream. However, he did note that you hugged him tightly before you left.
-
[day twenty-four]
“A guy?” Luhan all but growled, seeming absolutely appalled that you had just mentioned that you were going out with a guy tonight.
You nodded with a small ‘mhmm’ as you carried on with fixing your makeup in the bathroom mirror, “One of the customers from work.”
“You’ve been miserable because of work, _____!” he reminded you.
You paused putting on setting powder to look at Luhan in the mirror, “Why do you seem so upset?”
“I’m not, you can date whoever you want,” he insisted, which was true. He wasn’t here to make any deep, meaningful, emotional connections with you or anything. It’s just that it would be so much harder to get closer to you if you had a boyfriend you were going to dedicate your free time to. “I just… I mean, I’m your guardian angel, right? I’m supposed to worry about you.”
“Do you get like, bad feelings about things I do?” you wondered, still not completely sure of everything he was capable of.
“Yeah,” he nodded, knowing he could use this to his advantage. “I have a bad feeling about this guy, _____. I don’t want you to come home upset. What if he just wants to get in bed with you? You’re too innocent for that.”
“Am not!” you huffed, looking even more innocent and only proving his point.
He chuckled, “You’re still a virgin, _____.”
“Yeah, but that doesn’t mean I’m innocent! I...d-do stuff…”
“You’re blushing and you haven’t even said anything dirty.”
“Shouldn’t you not be talking about this? You’re an angel,” you mumbled, just wanting to end the conversation.
As you focused back on your makeup, you missed the way that Luhan’s eyes raked over your body, imagining pushing your face up against the mirror as he fucked you into the counter from behind and turned innocent little you into a filthy, babbling mess.
If he could make sure your date was awful, he was sure he could do it.
-
He returned that night when he was sure you were home. The first thing he heard other than silence was sniffling coming from the couch. So he wandered into the living room with his hands in the front pockets of his jeans.
“_____?” he called out for you softly. “How’d the date go?”
Hearing him bring up your date only made you cry harder, burying your face in a throw pillow as you curled your knees to your chest. Luhan walked around the couch to see you sobbing into a pillow that you were basically hugging to your face, your cries muffled by it. He sat down beside you, an evil smirk on his face that you didn’t see as he gently touched your back.
“What happened?” he wondered softly, the concern in his voice contradicting how pleased he looked with himself.
“Y-you were right, Luhan,” you sniffed as you pulled the pillow away from your face and stared down at your knees. “All h-he wanted...w-was...was…”
He softly hushed you as he brushed the hair from your face before cupping your cheek and wiping away tears with his thumb, “I’m so sorry, _____. I wasn’t hoping to be right, I just wanted to keep you safe from being hurt.”
You met his eyes, yours full of heartbreak. But you saw sadness in his as he looked back at you.
“I-I’m s-sorry I didn’t listen…” you whimpered.
He shook his head, pulling you into his chest, “Don’t be sorry. It’s not your fault and I could never be mad at you, anyway.”
As soon as your face was pressed into his chest, you cried harder, clinging to his shirt like your life depended on it. Your body shook with sobs as your tears soaked into his shirt. You really didn’t think that guy would’ve just wanted to have sex with you. When you met him, he seemed so sweet and polite and so opposite of how he was on your date. Was it all just a facade?
No, it was all Luhan’s doing.
“I should’ve stayed home with you,” you cried, your words being muffled by Luhan’s chest.
“It’s okay, you’re home with me now,” he cooed. “I’ll always be here for you, _____. You know that, don’t you? I only exist to protect you and keep you safe and happy. I won’t ever hurt you.”
He smirked to himself as he felt your arms wrap around his waist and hug him tighter. Your body melted into his, finding comfort in his embrace, which was exactly what he was going for.
You trusted him. He was your guardian angel, after all.
“I know,” he heard you whimper.
-
[day twenty-five]
It was risky, but it made sense. Luhan had to think of how your subconscious would work, and this made sense. If he entered your dream and tried to make a move now, it wouldn’t be too out there. You saw him as somebody you could trust, and since he was around everyday, it made sense for you to think of him often. On top of that, if things didn’t work out, he could easily just blame the dream on what had happened with that guy you went on a date with. You wouldn’t suspect a thing, he was sure of it. But the best case scenario was that you just indulge in your little dream he was going to give you.
Again, you were laying in bed. But this time, you were much less...covered. You were wearing only a thin t-shirt and some panties that Luhan could see from the way you were curled up into a ball. He bit his lip as he sauntered into the room, seeing that you were awake and staring — more like glaring — at the wall across the room from him. 
“What’re you thinking about?” he wondered in a soft tone. 
“Why are men disgusting?” you grumbled, letting out a sigh as you stayed in your position. “Like, he was so nice to me just to sleep with me! That’s fucked up, right?”
‘Oh, sweetheart, if only you knew the half of it.’
“Of course it is,” he feigned sympathy as he sat down on the bed and you felt it dip behind you. You felt one of his hands begin to rub your outer thigh softly, and the way your heart started to race at the touch was...odd. “Your virginity is precious to you and you should lose it to somebody you know well and trust, anyway. Somebody who would never use you.”
‘Somebody like…’ you couldn’t even finish your thought. You felt dirty just putting the two together. But you did trust Luhan more than anybody, and who would know you better than your own guardian angel?
‘But he’s an angel,’ you told yourself, ‘that’s wrong. You can’t do that with him.’
You shook the thought from your head as you rolled over and sat up against the headboard, sitting beside Luhan. You could feel him looking at you, his fingertips still lingering on your skin, but you couldn’t look at him.
“You look conflicted,” he murmured, his lips much closer to your ear than you thought, and his soft voice sent a shiver through you. “Tell me what you’re thinking about.”
“N-n-nothing,” you told him, feeling your cheeks heat up. There was no way you could tell him the idea you had. “I’m still just thinking about what happened.”
But Luhan was pretty sure he had an idea of what you’d thought of. He smirked as his fingertips trailed higher, and his eyes darkened seeing the way your thighs pressed together.
“Did you maybe think that...I would take it from you?” he asked with an innocent tone to his voice. 
“N-no!” you insisted much to quickly to be convincing.
“Is that what you would want, _____?” he cooed as his hand pushed your shirt up until he was touching the waistband of your panties. “Would you trust me with that?”
Your eyes were glued on his hand as it trailed across your underwear and down between your legs. You absolutely knew you shouldn’t be dreaming this, but feeling his slender fingers brush over your clothed clit and hearing his soft voice so close was already getting you worked up. Would it really be so bad if you just dreamed of Luhan like this? You wouldn’t have to tell him…
‘He’s an angel, _____!’ you reminded yourself, ‘Of course it’s still bad!’
“Luhan, I—“
You wanted to tell him to stop or you wanted to dream of something else but he began rubbing slow circles into your clit, drawing a quiet whimper from your lips. Luhan chuckled as your cheeks tinted pink and you slapped a hand over your mouth. 
“You sound so cute, baby,” he teased, leaning in closer. “I wonder what other noises I can get you to make…”
His lips were mere inches from yours, and you were frozen in place. You wanted to back away but you also wanted to lean in. You wanted so much more but you knew you should stop. And yet, your words were stuck in your throat. 
His index finger hooked into your panties, pushing them to the side, and that was when you suddenly found your voice and your muscles. 
“Stop!” you cried as you shoved away from him. You scrambled off the bed and looked at his shocked expression, suddenly feeling awful. “I-I’m sorry. I just… I know this must be a dream because you’re an angel and you can’t do things like this, and I shouldn’t be dreaming of things like this with you and— Why am I even explaining this? It’s not real and you’re not real.”
“Exactly, none of this is real,” he nodded as he crawled across the bed toward you, “so it wouldn’t make a difference if we kept going, right?”
“I-I can’t,” you shook your head, stepping back until your back hit the wall. “It would be too much on my conscience. I couldn’t ever look him in the eye again.” 
“But don’t you want to keep going?” his voice was sultry like the look he was giving you, one of his hands reaching out to grab your waist. “Don’t you want—“
You gasped, your eyes flying open as your alarm went off. You quickly sat up and shut it off before your eyes scanned the room. Nobody was there, but the blankets were off your body, and your pajama bottoms were gone when you were sure you put them on. You figured you must’ve gotten too hot in the middle of the night. 
You got up, turned on the light, and got changed before leaving your bedroom. As you went to the kitchen to start a pot of coffee, Luhan appeared on the counter. You gasped and jumped back, feeling your cheeks heat up. You knew he didn’t know about your dream but you were still embarrassed and averted your eyes. 
Luhan was grumpy this morning because his plan failed, but seeing how flustered you were now made him smirk. He at least was a step closer now. 
“How was your night?” he asked
“Fine,” you replied quietly as you stepped back toward the coffee maker. 
“Did you sleep well?” he wondered. “Dream of anything?”
Your eyes widened as you softly cleared your throat and tried to hide the blush that was deepening on your face behind your hair, “U-um, no. Dreamless night again.”
Luhan sat back, licking his lips, “Thats good.”
-
[day thirty-one]
Just because Luhan was around didn’t mean you were any less clumsy. More often than not, Luhan spent his time catching you before you fell on your face or keeping you from chopping off your finger while making dinner. 
But Luhan wasn’t with you 24 hours a day. You figured he must’ve had other responsibilities as an angel, so you didn’t expect him to always be around you. But when he wasn’t around, there wasn’t somebody there to keep you from maiming yourself. 
Like now. 
But with his perfect -- or shitty -- timing, Luhan appeared in your apartment not too much longer after your little incident. Since the living room was empty, he turned to go down the short hallway to your bedroom to find you. However, he stopped when he saw you on the floor with blood dripping from the side of your forehead.
“Oh fuck, _____!” he gasped as he got down beside you, holding your head as he examined where you’d hit your head off the corner of the wall. “What the hell did you do?!”
“I mopped the floor and I slipped,” you replied as if this was a normal occurrence.
“You’re bleeding!”
Luhan could’ve gotten up and gone to get a towel or something to clean the blood off of your skin, but he was kind of panicking a little. It wasn’t that he cared, he just didn’t expect to come into your place and see you on the floor with your head bleeding onto your shirt. So he did the first thing he thought to do: take off his shirt and dab at your wound with it to mop up the blood.
Despite the sting you felt, all you could focus on was Luhan’s bare torso. After the dream you had about him, you just...didn’t feel the same about him. You still liked him around and trusted him, but now you felt more intensely about him in a few ways. And having him shirtless in front of you and just a couple inches away, it was all you could think about.
“You’re gonna have to mop the floor again,” he chuckled. “On the bright side, it doesn’t seem bad enough to go to a hospital.”
Your eyes glued to his body, all you could do was hum in response.
-
[day thirty-four]
You really tried to control yourself. You didn’t want to be weird toward Luhan and you didn’t want to even make yourself feel dirty, but it was so difficult to not think about. Your dream about him was already bad enough, but now seeing him shirtless and so close to you while he took care of your head was…
Let’s just say, you were definitely in trouble. 
Your imagination ran wild more often than not and you were afraid that Luhan was catching on. You had to do something about it because it was really suspicious how you found it hard to look him in the eyes. So you figured maybe it would be better to just...get your feelings out in a certain way. Maybe if you let yourself think about him, you could move past this weird feeling. 
So you did. 
While Luhan’s big plan was to make you trust him and lust after him, he didn’t think something as simple as taking his shirt off would help him with that. He didn’t even think anything had changed that day, but he was in for a big surprise when he appeared in your living room that day, realizing it was empty and figuring you were in your room.
“She better not have hit her—“
His grumbling was cut off by a soft moan of his name. He froze, eyes wide as he strained his ears to listen for more sounds. He could hear the wet sounds of your fingers pumping in and out of your heat, the way your bed moved a little as you rocked your hips against your own hand, and every quiet moan and mewl you made. A smirk slowly formed on his face as he strolled up to your bedroom door, realizing now was his chance. He took off his jacket and dropped it carelessly in the hallway as he approached your door, silently opening it and peeking in to watch you. 
Your eyes were closed as you fingered yourself, imagining your dream with Luhan from the other night had gone father. You imagined your fingers were his as you pumped them faster, chasing your orgasm with flushed cheeks and quiet whimpers of his name. Your back arched just a little off the bed, and you—
Somebody grabbed your wrist and pulled your fingers out of yourself. You gasped, your eyes flying open to see Luhan smirking down at you as he brought your fingers to his lips and sucked them into his mouth, tasting your arousal and moaning quietly.
“L-Luhan?” you asked in a quiet, shaky voice. 
“Mm,” he removed your fingers from his mouth and leaned down, his face inches from yours. “Don’t be embarrassed, sweetheart. I just want to join you. You’re so cute when you get yourself all worked up like that.”
You really didn’t want to tell him no. You wanted to pull him down on top of you right there, but you were too concerned about him. He was an angel. Wasn’t this against the rules? Wouldn’t he get in trouble? Then you’d never see him again. 
“But what about—“
“Don’t worry about anything,” he shushed you softly as he crawled onto the bed, causing you to lean back farther and farther until he was above you. “I won’t get in trouble, I promise. My rules aren’t quite what you think.”
Finally, he pressed his lips to yours in a searing kiss that made your heart race. You weren’t really sure what to do with your hands — yes, you had kissed other people before but this was Luhan — but you found them pressing against his shoulders and pushing him off of you.
“Luhan, I can’t,” you insisted, unable to meet his eyes. “I want to, I swear I do, but what if you get in trouble?”
“What if I can make you a promise, then, hm?” he purred as he tilted your chin up with his finger, forcing you to look up at him. “A deal, kind of.”
This was it. All it would take was the deal. It didn’t even matter if he took you right here if there was a deal involved. He could take you back with him if he wanted to and keep you as long as he pleased, making you wait as long as you made him wait. He could do anything with you and to you if you said yes.
He could drop his stupid charade if you said yes.
“A deal?” you asked in a quiet voice. “Like what?”
“If you give into this feeling you have for me, I can assure you that nothing bad will happen to me. There will be no repercussions for me for these actions. Sound good?” he asked, a soft smile on his face as he tilted his head slightly to one side.
You hesitated, thinking it over. Though, you couldn’t see any reason why Luhan of all people would lie.
“...Promise?”
“I promise.”
Slowly, you finally nodded, “Then...yes.”
“Perfect,” Luhan’s voice was just short of a growl, a smile spreading across his face. It would’ve seemed like any other smile if his eyes hadn’t suddenly gone pitch black, causing your eyes to widen as you sucked in a breath. But because it was Luhan, you didn’t scream or try to get away. You just stared at him with a small hint of fear in your eyes. He was a little surprised, but he remembered how you’d felt about him. “Of course you won’t run away from me. You trust me, don’t you?”
You nodded slowly. You didn’t know what was going on, but you trusted Luhan.
He smirked, a hand stroking your hair back softly before his fingers gripped your hair roughly, making you let out a sharp gasp.
“Of course you do. Because you’re a naive little human. You’ve given all your trust to a demon who’s lied to you for over a month now.”
“D-demon?” the words barely fell passed your lips in a quiet squeak.
He nodded with a hum that almost sounded happy, “And now, because you’ve said yes to our ‘promise’, you’ve given me your soul. But don’t worry, _____, we’ll have a lot of fun.”
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mydollcave · 4 years ago
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Rainbow High Sunny review
so i got my first rh doll and i have a few things to say
first of all i can confirm things other people have said, which are 1. the ridiculous amount of product in her hair (it was rock solid lmao) i got most of it out with hot water and a little bit of soap but now that it’s dry again i think it needs a second rinse. 2. limited poseabilty despite double-jointed knees. i might try my hand at carving out the knee and elbow joints.... she is also quite difficult to pose but idk if i just happened to get one with relatively stiff joints. and they might loosen up a bit with use. 3. she was so difficult to get out of the box lmao it’s more frustrating than exciting. i mean it might have been easier to just rip the box apart but if you’re like me and want to preserve the box as much as possible it’s quite difficult.
more issues with the hair...
first of all i’m tempted to just take the buns out and try styling them myself or just make regular pigtails if i can’t do it lol. the buns on mine came out of the box uneven and i just know it’s gonna bug me every time i look at her. plus there’s a few loose hairs that i wanna get rid of which is probably a lot easier.
but what bugs me the most is that Sunny has these longer pieces between the bangs and the long strands that are so thing and were just plastered together with the long strands. i think it’s a nice concept but if the execution is like this it would’ve been better to just not include them tbh. i can probably fix it by cutting a bit away from the long strands but other people and especially kids might not be able to. (don’t mind the bangs, they came out the box fine, it was me who made them look like this shdfjs i still need to style them properly)
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other than that the hair feels soft and high quality and is a beautiful shade of yellow.
clothes lots and lot of loose threads that i still need to cut away with tiny scissors but i think all the different materials and textures are such a delight. biggest issue i have tho is that the sleeve on her jacket wasn’t sewn together properly. i hope i just got unlucky and that this isn’t a wide-spread problem in all the dolls.
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one other thing i have to note - both of her jackets are such a struggle to put over her hands. they get caught in the fabric and threads and i know if i was a kid and asked my mom for help she would give up after 5 minutes and my dolls would just never wear jackets. i have a feeling that in the future the clothes might become less intricate to make playing with them ea i just realized while writing this that i could try and remove the hands like monster high dolls. what am i, a rookie......
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.....well. in my defense there was no information anywhere that this was possible and i think it’s a risky move to hope that parents and kids will figure this out by themselves before they accidentally rip the fabric. come to think of it, back in the day i saw a lot of reviews of parents complaining that it’s impossible to get some clothes over monster high hands, even though every dolls came with a manual.
anyway let’s move on to the face small screening issue with slightly smudged lashes but it’s not really noticable if you don’t get in super close. overall i’m not a huge fan of the makeup, it almost looks... clownish, for lack of a better word. that might just be personal taste tho. i just find that the pink tones clash a little with the rest of the doll. the eyes are much greener than i expected. in some fotos they looked more yellow or even blue, both of which i would have preferred. if i’m feeling really adventurous i might try and plop them out to repaint them brown (and paint the lips a more neutral/brown shade while i’m at it)
so what’s my conclusion?
i feel like i was pretty harsh here but she was quite expensive (a little over €30 which seems to be the standard for them) so i’d say it’s justified lol. overall i do like her a lot. the clothes are super cute which is what i want from a fashion doll. and i’m planning to get more of them. i don’t have a lot of confidence that they’ll be able to uphold this level of intricacy in the clothes and i wouldn’t be surprised if future releases are a small step down, if only to save production costs.
i just wish there wasn’t so much work involved in making her presentable (washing the hair more than once, possibly restyling, cutting...) i imagine that could be very frustrating for kids. if a brand wants dolls to have complicated hairstyles they need to make sure that they come out of the box well styled.
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the-writer-ofthe-fandoms · 5 years ago
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Bad Luck (Michael Myers)
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Pairing: Michael Myers x Reader Words: 1k Warning(s): Its myers, there is violence, wounds, death A/N: So this is loosely based on a dream I had, where i was just falling a lot and myers would step in if someone tried to attack me lmao. It ended much different (i straight up died to something wasss good) lmao. I hope you enjoyyyyy~
Bad luck seemed to follow you everywhere. Your family had given you the nickname of “anti-luck charm” due to how unlucky you are. Even with your move to a couple of months ago to Haddonfield, luck seemed to void you still. You don’t remember your car ever breaking down that much when you drove to Haddonfield for the move. It was also bad luck it seems your house was right across from the infamous Myers house that was supposedly haunted by the killer.
You made the best of what little luck you had. You were given a nice job a 2 minute drive away with a family who owns a hardware store, who also were nice enough to help you with repairs in your house when needed. You also made a few good friends who keep band aids on the ready for your sake.  Life seemed to be a bit easier on you, you felt… except for a possible stalker.
It was a nasty, paranoid feeling you started getting a week or two after moving. You felt watched constantly, whenever you left for work and whenever you came back, whenever you were out with friends, or just when you are outside at all. So of course, even with some luck in Haddonfield there was always bad luck following you.
You were walking home from work after volunteering for the closing shift. Your coworker Nancy’s babysitter canceled last minute the day before and you figured it wouldn’t be too bad to cover her shift. But as stated before, you were referred the anti-luck charm, so of course you biffed it hard after tripping on that damn pesky air. You pushed yourself off the ground, palms sweaty and scrape and knees cut and weak, making you wince.
“Looks like you took a bad fall there.” You hear a voice approach you. A guy you saw once or twice at your work hopped out of his already started car and sped walked his way to you.
“Yeah I am fine.” You groan, red flags going off immediately when he touched you to help you to your feet. “Thanks.” You go to walk away but the man kept his grip on you.
“Now that isn’t a proper thank you.” He chuckled, trying to sound light hearted but it definitely didn’t come off that way.
You ripped your arm from his grasp, “And in my honest opinion, doing the bare minimum doesn’t need anything more.” You wanted to step away, but the second that sentence left your lips you were shoved to the ground; the back of your head hit the asphalt hard. You eyes squeezed shut due to the pain that pulsed through your skull, fear sunk in your chest.
You felt hands grab your ankles and you felt any exposed skin your body being dragged against the rough asphalt. You attempted to kick yourself out of your grasp but his grip was almost like iron. The most your kicks did were making him stumble and your screams seemed to fall flat to anyone in their homes.
You were getting close to the fuckers car when a dark shadow moved around his car in a rush, with such a terrifying posture. Suddenly, you hear the man shriek and you feel you ankles drop to the ground. In pure shock, you saw your attacker rise off the ground by the neck by another man in a ghostly white mask. You then witnessed your savior plunge a large kitchen knife in your attackers gut, twisting the knife each way before letting him drop.
You weren’t sure how to react. You were being attacked and dragged to a car and then suddenly saved by someone who fits the description of Michael Myers. Your mouth was agape at the sight of Myers, your heart raced like crazy. You slowly tried to get up, but the road burn and head injury made it much more difficult. You  struggling to stand up must of caught Michaels attention, his head snapped to where you were now sitting up.
“Please…” You spoke, voice extremely hoarse as you stared up at his daunting figure. Your wide, frightful eyes darted between his mask and bloodied knife, wondering if you were going to be spared or killed. He just stared, or that is what it seemed like he was doing.
Michael then moved forward, and that sudden movement made you just passes out from pain and extreme stress.
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You had a strange dream. You remember feeling like you were floating for a while, almost like you were cradled. It was a nice feeling, and you felt warm while in this dream. Although there was a moment were you felt like you dropped, but only for a second and you remember landing on something soft. The rest of the dream was a fuzzy memory.
Your eyes cracked open slowly, your legs feeling heavy as rocks when you tried to move them. A groan rolled out of your mouth as you sat up, taking note of your scraped hands and road burned for arms. You remembered quite vividly of what occurred last night, making you shivered.
That same damn feeling of being watched washed over you. You take a look out your window, fully expecting nothing to be there and it was just your nerves. But in the window of the decrepit Myers house, you saw a mask. A white mask you vividly remember that went along with a dark blue jumpsuit.
Your heart pounded as you continued to stare at Myers. So, this was your stalker now savior. Oddly enough, you didn’t feel all too scared. He could have killed you last night. The state you were in made you it the perfect killing opportunity, but he didn’t. You were in immediate danger and he seemingly saved your life. You were actually grateful towards him, in a strange way.
You gave him a wave before you decided it was time to get up and get ready to go to the doctors.  Despite your bad luck, it seemed you had a white-masked guardian watching over your unlucky ass.
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wilay14 · 6 years ago
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Adventures in Seoul
I think I have always made clear how much I like f(x), particularly Krystal (don’t get me wrong, I still do), but recently my feelings have started to shift. This happened ever since I got the chance to meet Luna, almost 3 weeks ago.
Coincidentally, she was performing in the reprise of the musical adaptation of Gone With the Wind, playing the role of Scarlett O’Hara. I remembered watching the movie a long time ago, and figured that even without knowing enough Korean, I’d still be able to follow the story... So after much pondering and pretty much almost giving up on going to watch Luna perform, I managed to book a ticket to see her last performance on July 25th.
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A lot happened and I was about 10 min late tp the show, so I had to wait outside for a bit before they let me in. Spent the first half of the play on a seat located in the last row. Luckily, the theater was built in a way that even being in that spot, it was still possible to view the stage quite well, so it wasn’t too bad.
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After the show, which was quite entertaining, considering I couldn’t understand much of what was being said, I was about to head back to where I’m staying (my “home” for the time being, I guess?) when I spotted a group of about 20 people from afar.
It was pretty late already, but I decided to stick around in hopes I could at least catch a glimpse of Luna and maybe even take a photo OF her (not WITH her cause I am unworthy lmao).
Anyway, we probably waited for about 20-30 min before she came out, and she just started taking selfies with the people who asked for one. I haven’t had the chance to meet that many celebrities, but I know there are people who won’t even acknowledge their fans, so I was pleasantly surprised.
Then, she just walked right into the center of the mini mob we had formed, and started talking with us almost as if we had known each other since forever; as well as saying hi to the fans she managed to recognize. Among the presents she got from some of them, there were several bouquets and expensive-looking cakes and desserts. She seemed pleased. She was also signing autographs for everyone.
The whole 30 minutes we were there, in the heat, surrounded by what sounded hundreds of cicadas being as noisy as ever, I couldn’t stop trembling. It felt like a dream, or maybe even a hallucination.
I hadn’t prepared anything for her to sign -hell, I wasn’t even planning to wait for her-, and I just so happened to have  marker with me. I originally wanted her to sign my passport, and after googling if it was okay to do that only to find out it could get me in trouble, I took the next best thing I had with me at the time; the envelope where my ticket was given to me the day before. A fan from either Taiwan or China told me to move forward if I wanted an autograph. She was carrying a big camera, so I figured she must be one of the few fansites left supporting only Luna. She was nice, but I didn’t even get to ask for her name.
I still kept my passport out to show her how to spell my name, and for her to see where I came from (Mexico). She seemed surprised, and spoke to me in English (basic stuff, cause I’ll later come to realized she’d always said it’s not something she’s good at).
I still wonder if she could notice my legs about to give in due to nervousness. I also wonder how many times she’s seen that before haha.
Anyway, I found my entry permit inside my passport and circled my name, to show it to her so she could sign my envelope -right after our less than memorable conversation-; I only managed to point at the circled word, while she doubtingly asked me in Korean “this one?” to which I just nervously nodded, almost embarrassed.
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I was so close to her it honestly still doesn’t feel real. I managed to snap a few shots of her with my shitty phone, thoughn most of them look super LQ or blurry haha.
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Anyway, she stayed with us for about 30 minutes, even though her manager had arrived a while ago and was waiting for her to wrap it up so they could leave. Her family was already in the car. She also talked about her upcoming SMTOWN performance, only I didn’t understand it at the time lol. I completely forgot her birthday was coming up soon.
Fast-forward to a couple weeks later, I see the announcement about the application period and guidelines for her birthday party. I apply to BOTH of them and, being the unlucky fuck I am, don’t get selected for either one. I was bummed, but had made up my mind to at least go to the SM building, cause they had mentioned there was a slight possibility of getting in if people canceled last minute.
I got there like 2 hours before it started and, sure enough, people were starting to arrived; waiting until after 5 was nerve-wracking, to say the least.
My Korean is barely starting to pick up, so I can’t have conversations with people. Then again, being one of the more evident foreigners present, they quickly identified me and knew I had no “invitation”. She arrived probably about 20 min before it started, I recognized the van from last time.
Anyway, by the time the selected people had entered, only a girl and I were left. She had been selected, but forgot to bring a copy of Free Somebody with her; without it she wasn’t allowed inside either. She noticed I had brought mine with me, and desperately tried to buy it off from me. I didn’t bulge cause she didn’t have any cash with her at that moment, but I was pretty close to telling her to just take it; I just felt bad because she was about to cry.
Then another girl arrived and a staff member came out and told us to wait a little after 5, and MAYBE they could let us in. Spoiler Alert: they did.
I was number 102/100 haha.
They rushed us inside and quickly sat us at the back, and gave us each a balloon with the Free Somebody logo on it. I was almost next to the camera with which they recorded the video uploaded on f(x)’s official FB page and instagram account. There was a smaller camera too, so I suspect Luna was also recording for her Youtube Channel.
It was a fun party, and I was able to confirm once again how charming Luna’s personality is. I guess this is why they used to call her Vitamin. She kept saying “sorry” with a perfect accent as a comedic relief whenever she did/say anything dumb.
We also got to see the birthday messages from Victoria, Amber and Krystal. Luna started tearing up and her manager had to bring her tissues. She suggested to him we should all record a message for the 3 of them, telling them we love them, and so we did. There wasn’t a lot of space for the manager to set the right angle, so there’s a chance I’m not even featured in it.
We sang happy birthday and she answered some questions. Then there was a lottery among the selected people where they got signed balloons and polaroids with her.
When it was over, roughly an hour or so later, she said she had a surprise for us; she had taken the time to handwrite and sign 100 cards for the attendees. I was given one even though I wasn’t supposed to get anything. I’m glad I did. This marks the second autograph I get from her.
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She is a gift that keeps on giving. She’s also super talented and overall such a nice, awesome person; she does hands-on charity work whenever her schedule allows her to. She supports Animal Rights as well as Female Rights; she’s done campaigning for both in the past. 
I really wish more people could see that. I really wish more people could support her, especially her music, which as of lately, is all self-composed and just SO GOOD. 
She deserves the world, and she’s been working her ass off for it. She’s being criticized for an infinity of things. She’s been through a lot since debuting, and finally she’s able to do what she likes most, which is singing/performing. I’m just so glad I became a MeU, and I’ll keep supporting her as much as I’m able to, for as long as I can. 
Please give Luna -Park Sunyoung- a chance to captivate you the way she has done with me, all in the span of these past few weeks.
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jeonghan-support-group · 7 years ago
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It’s Just a Crush // Vernon
High school!Vernon au Fluff Imagine // 2333 Words
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How long you had been sitting there, secretly checking your phone and texting your best friend, while trying to make it believable that you were paying attention to the complicated calculus symbols and equations written on the board, was something you didn’t know. You might have guessed thirty minutes or so, but you hadn’t been checking the time enough to know for sure. Your best friend, Y/B/F/N, was currently sitting two buildings over in their literature class doing the exact same thing as you; trying not to caught while you focused on more “important” matters than solving for the function of 3, or what Shakespeare’s words really meant.
From: Y/B/F/N
Okay, seriously Y/N, you need to talk to him.
From: Y/B/F/N
iTS SUCH A PERFECT OPPORTUNITY! HES RIGHT THERE!!
Looking up as you held the phone underneath your desk, you let your eyes fall on him. He, too, wasn’t paying much attention to the board (well nobody really was paying attention), choosing to fling pieces of his eraser at the unlucky victim- who today seemed to be a very annoyed Minghao. A small eraser piece fell into the collar of Minghao’s shirt, causing him to turn around quickly, facing Vernon and reaching up into his shirt to try and find the eraser piece while shooting daggers at Vernon, who was visibly trying to stifle his laugh, covering his mouth by the crook of his elbow and trying to stay as quiet as possible. You couldn’t help but smile slightly at the situation, turning your attention back to your phone as you typed your response quickly before once again shoving it underneath your leg in a quick attempt to conceal it from your teacher, Mr. Thompson’s, eyes.
To: Y/B/F/N
What if he completely ignores me..? Or doesn’t even know who I am? What if I like trip and mess up in front of him? So many things could go wrong, I can’t talk to him.
You could still hear Minghao fidgeting around to try and find the eraser, and you could just barely hear Vernon’s small giggles. His group sat surrounding him, all very uninterested. I mean, really though; how exciting could calculus get? Vernon’s entire group wasn’t in this class. Hell, that would almost be half of a class itself, and all those boys in one classroom together would be insane. No- five of his group members were, in fact, a grade older in 12th grade, and you had no clue what classes they were in. You didn’t exactly have many older friends, you mainly just stuck to Y/B/F/N and tried to ignore the stupidity and idiocy that went on around you both. Y/B/F/N however, had two of Vernon’s friends in their class, Dokyeom and Seungkwan, and all Y/B/F/N had been complaining about this period- all year, to be completely honest, was the fact that the pair of boys were so incredibly loud and quite possibly the most distracting pair ever. Not to mention, the teacher had even been dumb enough to seat them directly beside each other.
In your class, thankfully, the small group of boys that belonged to that particular friend group- they called themselves seventeen (no one really understood why; there were only thirteen of them)- consisted of four generally quiet, sometimes mischievous but for the most part respectful boys: Wonwoo, Woozi, Vernon, and Minghao. You had no idea where the rest of his group was during this particular period. Some were in a few of your later classes, but as for now, you had not a clue.
Vernon and his group sat opposite the room from you, tucked away in the small back corner where they were less noticeable by the teacher.
Your phone buzzed underneath your thigh, and you fished it out once again to check the message you had received from Y/B/F/N.
From: Y/B/F/N
Literally nothing could go wrong, Y/N. You’ve been crushing on him for so long, take your opportunity!
Your eyes shifted once again to Vernon, focusing on the way his eyes crinkled as he smiled and laughed, and the way his cheeks were slightly tinted red from trying to hold in as much laughter as he could. It had been what? Five months now since you first developed a crush on Vernon? And you still had yet to talk to him. It wasn’t like you were deliberately not speaking to him, you were just scared. You had never really been good at talking to boys- you were a shy person. You hadn’t noticed how you had zoned out on his face, staring at him while your thoughts took over, however as soon as he glanced in your general direction, and your brain registered that you had been staring like a creep, your head shot back to face your desk, hair falling around your face and thankfully shielding anyone from seeing your red cheeks that were gradually growing hotter and hotter by the second.
To: Y/B/F/N
Omg I think Vernon totally just caught me staring at him!!!
Your teacher pulled away from the blackboard, announcing that he was going to try and find some new chalk as his was almost completely gone, leaving Y/E/N (your enemy’s name/ anyone that you dislike/ insert a bitchy name here lmao) in charge of the class while he was momentarily gone. You didn’t pay much attention to his words, focused on texting Y/B/F/N, and you certainly didn’t notice the way that as soon as Mr. Thompson has left, there was a new presence behind you that wasn’t there before.
Now, Y/E/N was definitely someone that got on your nerves constantly. Whether it was the fact that she always seemed to be flirting with someone from Vernon’s friend group, including Vernon himself a couple of times, or that she was head cheerleader and school captain, you hated the way she constantly demanded attention and felt entitled to so much. You especially hated the way she always felt the need to be in everyone’s business, including yours.
To: Y/B/F/N
God, why am I like this? I like him so much.
“Texting in class?” You heard a loud voice behind you, not only making you jump, but the rest of the class too, who had been sitting in boredom. Your head shot back, and there she stood in all her glory- Y/E/N. “Sir left me in charge, and I-“ she reached over and plucked your phone right out of your hands, “don’t think this is allowed at the moment.”
You shot up from your seat, immediately trying to grab for your phone, but she moved away quickly, avoiding your grabby hands and focusing her attention on the phone. You could see the way her glossed, pink lips twitched into a satisfied smirk as her eyes skimmed the conversation.
“Y/B/F/N? Y/B/F/Fullname? That’s who you’re texting?” She asked, eyes darting up to meet yours, and you could practically see the fire in her eyes. God, she was so happy from this. By now, the whole class was watching the scene unfold. Was watching you try and battle Y/E/N for your phone, as she began to read the conversation out loud.
“Give it back, Y/E/N!”
“You’ve been crushing on him for so long, take your opportunity!” Y/E/N read out loud as she moved further away. You didn’t know why this girl was one of the most popular people in the school- doing shit like this was supposed to drive people away, not make them like you. Y/E/N had been doing stuff like this to people ever since you could remember, and you had no idea why.
“Oh my god, I think Vernon totally just caught me staring at him... I like him so much!” As the words finally spilled out of her mouth, she started laughing, looking up at you and tossing your phone back onto your desk. The entire class began to let out small giggles, to which Y/E/N encouraged. You felt absolutely mortified as you sank down in your seat, sparing a glance at Vernon. His face was red and he looked completely uncomfortable as both Minghao and Wonwoo were slightly nudging his elbows and winking at him. Your eyes found your desk once again, and your hair created a curtain around you like before, thankfully shielding everyone from seeing the hot, angry tears that threatened to spill from your eyes. You refused to cry in class. You could cry about this later when you were with Y/B/F/N, but now you could not cry.
Your teacher entered the class, making the laughter subside and die down before returning to the class with his new chalk. You, like before, could not focus. But this time, instead of your phone distracting you, it was the itching feeling of discomfort of literally everyone knowing what you weren’t planning on making public for a while.
When the bell rang, you thanked every god for ending the class, grabbing your bag and bolting from your class. You had no doubt that this would spread quickly, your suspicions being confirmed by the smirks people gave you as you walked down the hallways, and the laughter that arised as you entered your next classes.
By the time the day was over, you were completely ready to go home and cry out all of your feelings while eating ice cream and watching movies with Y/B/F/N. You met with them by your locker, sighing as you shoved your books in and grabbed what you needed before zipping your backpack and finally turning to face Y/B/F/N.
“This will die down eventually, Y/N,” Y/B/F/N said, shutting your locker as you both began to walk out of school together. “It’s just a crush, people forget.”
“I hope.” You sighed, slinging your bag over your shoulder and crossing your arms over your chest. The two of you had almost made it to the gate before you heard a voice calling out to you.
“Y/N! Y/N, wait up!”
As you turned around, you could see a boy running towards you, and as he got closer, you could make out that it was Vernon. Oh boy, just the person you wanted to see.
He slowed down as he reached you, and when he was a couple of feet away, he slowed to a walking pace. “I’m so sorry about today,” he breathed, holding his hand in his other awkwardly as if he wasn’t quite sure what to say.
“Why are you apologizing? You did nothing wrong...” You spoke in a low voice, obviously nervous and still embarrassed from the previous events that had occurred. Y/B/F/N stood off to the side, letting you speak to Vernon but listening intently to the conversation.
“Yeah, but what Y/E/N did to you was not okay... I’m really sorry about that, I don’t know why she always does stuff like that to people.” His eyes were honest and sincere, and although he was slightly blushing from speaking to you- because he now knew that you liked him- he was happy he took this chance to speak to you.
“Thanks...” You muttered awkwardly, not exactly knowing what to say or what to do. This was such an unexpected situation, and you were completely unprepared. “I’m sorry that you had to be dragged into all of this.”
Vernon chuckled, using his hand in a sweeping motion to signify that it was no worry, “Don’t be sorry, I’m actually so flattered!”
Your heart dropped as those words left his mouth, and your eyes met his in a state of shock and surprise. “Really?” You stuttered slightly.
Vernon nodded his head, grinning wonderfully and gracing you with smiling eyes. He just seemed so kind. “Of course! You seem pretty cool, I’d love to get to know you better as the year progresses!”
It was a small sentence, a simple sentence, but it was so kind. It made you appreciate Vernon so much in your still shocked state from the turn of events. You were convinced that you would have gone home in a sour mood, but now you were sure that you were going home and throwing a fucking party. A huge ‘Fuck You, Y/E/N’ Party.
You blushed and looked at the ground, feeling a huge smile begin to take over your face. He called you cool. Chwe Vernon called you, Y/N cool. Oh how the gods have spoken.
Vernon reached over, grabbing right below your elbow, your upper forearm, and squeezing slightly. This action alone caused you to meet his kind, warm eyes as he continued to look back at you. His hand let go of your arm, falling to his side as he straightened. He still wore a bright smile on his face as he said, “I’ll definitely be sure to say hi to you in the hallway now, Y/N.”
The only thing that your mind could think to do in that moment was let out a small giggle- a giggle- and a quiet “cool” as he took a step back. He gave one last wink before turning away, yelling a quick “See you around, Y/N!” over his shoulder as he jogged his way back to his group, leaving you standing there in absolute and utter shock.
“Well, you finally talked to him,” Y/B/F/N giggled, taking in your surprised and disoriented figure before tugging your arm and pulling you along, away from the school.
And the next day, when you made your way to your locker in the morning, you heard a loud “Good morning, Y/N!” Sure enough, when you looked over, it was Chwe Vernon waving enthusiastically at you from his group, some of whom, turned also and gave you a small smile.
But the icing on top of cake, the absolute best part of that morning (although your crush saying good morning was a close second) was the look of confusion and surprise that completely washed over Y/E/N’s face as she witnessed everything unfold.
“What the fuck..?” You could hear her mutter as you passed, feeling triumphant and confident that you had won.
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I’m writing this at like 3 in the morning lmao -H
<3
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disastrousxdebby · 4 years ago
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03.07.2021
01. Quick! Think of something pink, what is it? Something pink and quick ... errm... I guess the shirt my little sister brought the other evening. x'D My mother really wanted me to buy the pink shirt too but, I am not too fond of pink anymore. My mother says pink looks amazing on me though.. 0.-
02. How many siblings do you have? I have one sister and five brothers. <3 I love my entire family.
03. Favorite beverage on a hot summer day? Iced Water or Iced Mtn Dew... or even Iced Tea.
04. How long was your longest romantic relationship? The longest romantic relationship that I have been in ... wow... it's been forever and a day to be honest but, I believe 3 1/2 to 4 years. I tend to end up with people who are not good news sadly. I am more then willing to stay with others but, they usually find "better" and I am left alone. So yeah.. x'D I mean, I have been single now for more than three years. I am a bit hurt because there was a dude in my inbox and he was cute and I started liking him (he claimed to have liked me) and he was so quick to stop talking to me too trying to tell me "It's your loss" um, no... I have been single for a very long time and I am content with being single by choice. I guess he just couldn't understand that everything he was doing was quite new and odd to me again... the whole ~randomly calling me out of no where and asking me if I wanted coffee dropped off to my work place and stuff~ I was completely lost and didn't know what to say because as I tried to explain to him, usually it's me having to ask a guy if they can call me or if it's alright for me to call them. I have been around a lot of iffy guys and I'm sorry if I actually do find a good guy and I still act like they are iffy... it's really NOT my fault after everything I have been through and had to deal with. If you really want me, you are going to understand it's going to take a bit of time to get through to me and really show me that you are not the enemy I see you as because of how shxtty I have been treated. I'm just guarded and the right man will be able to see through it and find me. I really am worth it. I want someone who is sincere though.
05. Last place you traveled for vacation? I have not been on vacation for a very long time but, the last place I went was to Canada. I really liked the black stone beach... I went to when I was there... it was pretty.
06. Your at your local coffe shop; what are you ordering? More or less a large coffee with cream, sweet and low and it has to be light and sweet with hazlenut flavoring in it.
07. With a 45 minute drive; I’m at the beach, how about you? Probably somewhere in Middletown... maybe like the mall or something but, I think it only takes 30 min to get there.
08. Ever order a lobster for yourself at a restaurant? Not really, I think my ex was the one who ordered the one time we were at a restaurant that had sea food. Most of the time I am at a chinese restaurant or steakhouse and order steak or beef.
09. Favorite snack at the movie theater? Usually the popcorn!!
10. Childhood memory: When I had to go outside and I used to pack a backpack with stationary stuff and books and I would go down by the lake or sit in the woods and read, write and draw by myself. <3 Good ol times. ^_^
11. How many marshmallows do you think you can fit in your mouth at once? I have no odd freaking clue to be honest. x'D lmfao
12. Last meal you prepared? I cooked sausage, peppers and onions for a birthday party my family held... for dinner. =-D I love to cook but, rarely ever have time to do so.
13. Do you think the number 13 is unlucky? Nope. Actually, the number 13 is one of my favorite numbers. ^_^''
14. Would you like a “do-over” if possible? I don't think so. Things happen for a reason I feel.
15. How many cousins do you have? I have so many cousins... too many to count to be honest.
16. Name a girl band: I have no odd clue lmao.
17. Last concert you went too? I have never went to a concert. Honestly. I listen to loud music in my room though and dance and sing to that when I am alone or with my children. Haha. x'D If that counts for anything.
18. Last item you bought that was over $100? Errmm... I think that the last expensive item I brought was the monster truck for my little men who are my everything that was way over $100.00.
19. Look to the left, what do you see? My closet.
20. Favorite cologne/perfume scent: Cherry, Sweet Orange, Eucalyptus, Vanilla, Cherry Blossom, Jasmine... anything that smells fantastic really.
21. Britney Spears deserves her freedom? Of course, everyone deserves freedom.
22. Have you had Apple Jacks cereal? Yeah, I am not a big fan of it though.
23. Do you believe in ghosts? Of course.
24. How many pillows do you have on your bed? I think about six.
25. Name one fear: The dark.
26. Have you ever been to New York City? Yes, I have.
27. Would you audition for a reality tv show if the opportunity presented itself? I eh, don't think so really to be honest.
28. Most famous person from your town/state? I don't really know.
29. Ideal birthday dessert? Anything sweet ... cookies or cake. Haha.
30. Do you know what reiki is? I don't think so to be honest.
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honey-yoongles · 7 years ago
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Written BTS ship for btsismy6thkink
Written ship YEEEAAAAS (sorry it’s long)
Hello… it is I, one of your favourite people in the world, I am here for a ship. Also I do apologise for this being unnecessarily long, and disclaimer to you can ship me with whom ever it doesn’t need to be my bias I won’t get mad, but I might get wrecked😂
I mean you know what I look like, but if anybody else reading my ship doesn’t then this is for their curiosity. Brown, collarbone length hair also newly with bangs; blue eyes, kinda chubby but I mean I don’t mind I look cute anyway and I’m 174(coincidentally making me shorter than all the members. I don’t know if this is necessary but I have 3 marks on my body proving how unlucky and clumsy I truly am, scar at my eye(a kid threw a shovel from a decent height, thanks for that you fucking twat), scar on my finger (tried to open a can of dog food but cutting myself in the process), burn on my foot(I spilled boiling water on it while making noodles).
I’ve been struggling with mental illness since I was like 10, I used to have undiagnosed anxiety and depression causing me an inability to talk to people and easily be embarrassed and it then proceeding to my brain driving me to the edge because I couldn’t take it. I’ve been able to control it though, sure I’ve had meltdowns and suicidal thought but it got better for a while… not going to lie it’s gotten worse again but hey, I’m not planning on quitting now.
Okay, so personality traits are + INFJ (advocate, that’s what the internet tells me) + Kind, even to people who don’t deserve it. + Forgiving + Weird + Happy, even with my mental illnesses I am happy. + Funny, like yeah but dark humour + Always hungry + Stubborn(so stubborn I taught myself to ride a bike, I didn’t speak in front of my parents when I was a baby only to myself when I was alone and I taught myself English bc my teacher wasn’t good at it) + Caring + Helpful + Positive
My dream job would be a writer, but frankly I will settle for teacher as the only person who believes I could write is dead and I’m not about to have people make fun of it. I am that one huge tea drinker who doesn’t known when I should stop, I LOVE books with a passion, I want to own every book I read and that’s just how it is. I love makeup which is just a way of expressing myself. I don’t have a huge support system but I got one person I would trust with my life and frankly to whom ever you ship me with they better be alright with third wheeling.
I love horror movies, like sign me the fuck up honestly I could watch them all day, they don’t scare me. However i am jumpy, literally if I drop something and then the sound reaches my ears I jump( lets just keep the anxiety thing in mind, because that is why). I have a little baby(bunny) but her name is literally baby. I love her with all my being because she is my squishy and she shall me mine(get that reference?? Sorry). Also got a dog but I mean we all know I love him. Actually I’m just a giant animal person. One more thing before I lead into boyfriend material things, I have a dirty mind, literally I can make everything you say dirty.
As for S/O, I would be supportive as fuck, kiss them any time of the day not caring about the place, probably jealous but not to the ‘crazy’ mark, the girlfriend who would let them pick the food and not actually complain bc I mean it when I say I don’t care, I don’t lie so I would tell him everything even I he did something wrong I would leave him to guess what he did. In return I would like trust and loyalty, that’s literally all I need… okay maybe like sex but I mean, we knew that at this point.
THATS IT I DONT KNOW WHAT MORE TO WRITE 
@btsismy6thkink ~
Hello to you, my in fact favourite person in the world right after min yoongi ofc lmAO IM SORRy
You asked, and I will deliver! Do not apologize for the length of your submission, it’s not like the one I send you was any better!(≧y≦*) Also we can’t have you being wrecked! Therefor I didn’t have to think twice about whom to ship you with. (^v^)
I would encourage everyone to go and check out her blog, as I personally find her writing very good! (She writes great reactions, fan-fictions as well as ships, and she’s the reason I started doing them as well!)
Once again, thank you for your submission, I hope that you like your ship and the description I put together for you as well! *hand kiss*(*^3^)♡
Disclaimer: This written ship will be longer and more detailed than of what I usually do. I got carried away, so this is a one-time thing only!
I ship you with: Kim Namjoon
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The first time he ever laid his eyes on you, he got hooked. He found you super cute, standing alongside and having a conversation with a girl he imagined was your best friend. You hadn’t noticed him yet, you were caught up in the gossip between you and your friend, laughing and taking sips from your drink every now and then. He admired you from afar: the way your hair framed your face perfectly, your fashionable outfit and the cutest smile, which he frankly caught himself smiling along with as well. Because he was so intrigued by you, he didn’t notice that your friend had left you alone at your table. This was his opportunity, he would think to himself, as he walked across the room taking the seat your friend had just left. Puzzled by his sudden appearance, you would let out a small sigh trying not to seem interested, when in fact you were the exact opposite. Namjoon would leave the impression of being rather introverted and shy from the first glance you’d send him, but you quickly realized that he was actually such a social butterfly. The two of you would have an hour long conversation about god knows what; he even offered to buy you a drink which you kindly refused at first, but accepted the offer the second time.
Once he got to know you better, Namjoon would admire your kind, positive yet peculiar personality. Every remark from you brought a smile on his lips, causing him to usually flash his dimples that you adored so much. Being just as unlucky and clumsy as you, the two of you would always look out for each other. Once he knew about your past issues and struggles with anxiety and depression, Namjoon would be all over you. He is the worrying kind, and would want to check up on you every minute if possible. He would at times go overboard, but you knew he did it because he cared so deeply for you.
It was no secret that Namjoon was crazy for you at this point, and it didn’t take more than a month before the two of you were officially a couple. Namjoon had written hundred of love songs about other girls and his past relationships, but when it came to you, he was simply just lost for words. You were the kind of girl who deserved the world, and yet he felt like it was impossible for him to put it into words. It was however almost certain that he would manage to write you something personal in the end.
Let us not forget about the shared interests that the two of you have as well. He loved that you had a passion for reading and collecting books, and would always ask you after you finish a piece whether or not you would recommend it for him to read. When you both had the time, he would invite you to different bookstores, buying you whatever book you showed the slightest interest in. On other occasions, Namjoon loved to take you out for either lunch or dinner. He would always suggest going to fancy places with menus on different languages that none of you understood, and although you usually didn’t care where the two of you went and what you had to eat, there would still be times where you would go against his crazy ideas, suggesting something a bit more simple. Another thing that he loved when the two of you were together, was your way of showing affection towards him. The fact that you didn’t care about what other people thought about the two of you, as well as you taking his hand while walking and randomly stealing kisses in the open.
Already after the first day of your relationship, Namjoon had invited you over to their house. He had no doubts about introducing you to the rest of the boys, because he just knew how well you would get along with them. Your positive and kind charisma would attract Taehyung and Hoseok in an instant, and they would quickly become some of your best friends. The fact that you were so good with animals as well, made them invite you over to their place rather often. They didn’t really want to admit it, but you sometimes only accepted their invite to come over just to spend time with both Yeontan and Mickey, and occasionally Holly as well, rather than hanging out with them. Seokjin would also introduce you to Eomuk and Odeng, and allow you to hold and feed them, and watch them climb around in their cage all day. After a while you would also come to befriend Yoongi, who was rather distant to begin with. Once you got to know him though, he was way more open and social when you were around the house. 
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