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Tell Me About This Time Loop, Again?
And so it begins... @inklings-challenge
Day 12
In Zo's mind, it never felt like the day was properly begun until Lyn woke up, looked around at the room they'd been staying in, frowned, and saidâ
Day 13
"Where are we? And why does it feel so... familiar?"
"Well you see," Zo replied, as he always did, peeking at the underside of the egg he was frying, "we're stuck in a time loop."
Day 14
"A time loop?" Lyn swung her feet over the side of the bed, seeming to realize for the first time that she was in one.
"Don't worry, it's clean." After confirming they were, indeed, in a time loop, one of the first things he had suggested was finding a comfortable place to set up camp. Somehow it had worked, and they had ended up there every time things reset. "And there doesn't seem to be anyone around, so I don't think we're stealing or trespassing."Â
Lyn raised an eyebrow.Â
Day 15
"Well, we might be, but no one minds. It's a ghost town. Everyone seems to have disappeared." And since it was a time loop, they never ran out of cooking gas. Or food supplies. That, at least, was convenient.Â
"Disappeared?" Lyn stood up, adjusting her shirt from how it had gotten scrunched up in the night. Despite her attempts to look bright-eyed and alert, he could see the sleepiness that still hung from her eyes.Â
Day 16
"Our best guess so far is that it's connected to the time loop." Zo flipped the eggs. If this all persisted, he could open up a fried-egg restaurant once they got out; he was getting an absurd amount of practice flipping eggs.
"That makes sense." Lyn padded over to the window, still barefoot, and pushed the shutters open. "Do we have any evidence, or is that just, well, a guess?"Â
Her gaze swept the view, which he knew without looking was nothing more than the empty lines of blocky, one-story buildings and the too-smooth black-top of the streets. The neighborhood was pressed together as if sheltering from the plains beyond the town, with such a veneer of newness covering it all that each house might have been churned out of a factory yesterday. They hadn't been, though, considering the subtle signs of wear and tear inside the houses.Â
"Eh, a bit of both. Something weird is clearly going on with the area, and we know time is affected, too, so it's a logical guess that the two are connected. Whether that means some psycho wiped the town out before setting up their experiment, or just that their timey-wimey dealybob messed up physics in general is still up for debate. Do you want toast?"
"Yes, please."
Day 17
"Good. We have to finish the bread before it goes stale." Zo left the 'in case we get to the next day' implicit.
"I'm surprised we still have butter. I thought it would have gone bad in your pack."
"It smells a bit odd, but so far we haven't been affected by it."
Day 18
"Okay, but how do you know we're in a time loop?" Lyn asked, setting the table.Â
They were in a ground-level studio apartment, so the dining room, kitchen, and bed were all in the same space. No couch, which Zo took to mean that the owner was either poor or a cheapskate. Either way, it was disappointing. Still, the carpet wasn't bad. He'd slept on worse.
"Because you've asked me that so many times I've lost track of the number," Zo said, "and you seem thoughtful every time, like you're not as surprised as you thought you'd be."Â
She nodded and set a fork down carefully, wearing the expression she always did just then, brows squeezing down over far-away eyes.
"In all fairness, though," Zo clarified, "I mostly lost track because I wasn't really counting, and then it seemed pointless to start. It's been over two weeks, though, I'm fairly certain."
Day 19
She smiled, and the tension in her brows eased a bit. "This all does feels familiar. Like, I don't remember the other days, but all of this feels like I should, somehow, know what happens next. But I don't."
"I do know," Zo replied, "and it's getting a bit tiresome."
"Fair."
Zo nodded, slotting toast into the toaster. "Very. Whoever owned this place pretty much only had eggs in their fridge. I'm not sure how many more days in a row I can eat those without losing my mind."
Lyn looked up sharply.
Day 20
"Relax," he said, waving his spatula, "they respawn every day, so I don't think it's even technically stealing. If it is, we can pay them back later. There's a fully-stocked but unmanned convenience store down the road, one which we have very nobly not taken anything from, every single day."
"Good," Lyn sighed. "After all, if we get out today, we wouldn't want to be rewarded by jail for petty theft." She tacked on a fierce look at the end of the sentence.
Zo shrugged, and let Lyn interpret the gesture as she would. "Eggs are almost done."
Day 21
"Good. I'm weirdly hungry. Also, thank you for breakfast."
"Don't mention it," Zo smiled. "It's nothing I haven't done many times before."
#teaser trailer I guess I did not get much done adfasd#I am definitely planning to finish this one#and it should actually be pretty short#but I still gotta do my other work at the same time so idk how fast I can get it do it#but anyway I'm having fun#inklingschallenge#inklings challenge 2024#team: tolkien#genre: time travel#theme: forgive#theme: patience#theme: comfort#story: unfinished#ocs#my ocs#writerblr#salt and light#rifters#original characters#zo#tamakin nozomu#lyn#evelyn vordur#scribe writes#scribe does inklings
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Reading loz/lu fics and it's just so interesting how wide the spectrum is of their personalities.
Sometimes it's got an in universe reason (different past (usually gender or species change), recent or ongoing traumatic events, a spectacularly bad first meeting), but sometimes (often) the characters are just... Weirdly angsty or peppy, there's no in between!
And I'm beginning to think less people have played more than one game than I thought XD.
Not that it's anyone's fault! One game is more than enough to be part of it all, and loz is exclusive to Nintendo consoles - and all the older stuff is frustratingly hard to get hold of. Heck, I'm still looking for wind waker, and that was really popular! And then you have to play it! They're not small games!!
But could people writing wild please ease off just a tiiiiiny bit so he can be a semi functional member of society pretty please XD? He's just as much a polite boy as any other member of the chain! He won't even run in shops! He can't attack npcs! He talks to every single person he's ever seen and remembers every single name. Yes, he's three quarters woodland creature with a hefty amount of trauma but he's also a fashionista who managed to avoid accidentally taking sides in a mayoral election and that's not easy!
#I have some actual gripes but that's just me being pedantic about something I know a lot about#loz#legend of zelda#tears of the kingdom#loz link#loz botw#loz totk#the legend of zelda#totk link#lu wild#Okay but please stop making his teleportation a point of interest to the chain they ALL can warp it's not even slightly special#And the slate/pad doesn't hold any items I'm begging you that's just fanon it's never been canon or been implied to be#Travelling across hyrule (on horseback) is about a week and a half following the paths at a walk. Rito to lurelin. It's not weeks on foot t#Hyrule Castle!!#This isn't a problem but like. Let link be petty brats to civilians occasionally. It's enrichment. They all have beef with some rando.#They're all extremely polite and let people get away with more than they maybe should but like. Adults starting smth with a 16yo.#Also wild has serious beef with ganon why does everyone write him so chill. Like botw sure but totk?? Absolutely not.#'wah my home is in ruins it's all my fault' it's been like that for yonks no one's even mad and hello?? Miles on miles on untouched#Landscapes?? Millenia of ruins indistinguishable from the recent stuff?? Link literally died he could not have done any more#How anyone can play botw/totk and not be BLISTERINGLY proud of hyrule I don't know#Okay but why does everyone (particularly legend omg) always bitterly blame hylia like loz has a dozen odd deities and hylia is the ONE who#Got cursed right alongside link. It's just... Idk but it seems like such a culturally Christian thing. All the focus on one who then gets#Blamed for everything in life going wrong. Not even Christian but specifically American Catholic. I don't know.#Hylia is the one deity we can pretty safely assume is neither omnipotent or omniscient lmao#In every time she has a voice (botk/ss) she pretty clearly mucks up or gets tricked and has regrets#In ss when she was zelda she hated every second of leading link around and even then it all hinged on link being completely willing!!#And then she got kidnapped anyway!#In totk (spoilers) she loses contact with one of her statues and asks link to check it out. Another statue gets POSESSED by ol triangle hea#And again link has to figure out the problem. Like even in her divine form she is so far from all knowing and all doing.#It's a lot of conflating with the concept of fate maybe?
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Honors From the King: A Short Story
The sword felt strange in Mia's hand. It fit perfectly in her grasp, but it still seemed impossible that it was hers. A few days ago it had made her into a hero, but in the confusion of the battle, she barely remembered making the lucky blow that felled the giant who had terrorized the Southern Forest for ten years.
Now she, an ordinary eleven-year-old from Iowa, was the hero of a fantastical realm, waiting to receive honors from the king himself.
Elbera bustled around Mia in the antechamber-turned-dressing room of the village hall. The elf womanâbarely taller than Miaâhad served almost as a mother to her since the strange wind had left her in the elfin village. "Now, my dear, as you're being honored for valor in battle, it's right for you to carry the sword, but you must never put the point toward the king. If you're nervous about it, you'd best sheathe it."
Mia sheathed the sword before Elbera finished the sentence.
Elbera continued, "Since you've slain a well-known terror, it's customary for the king to offer a boon. If he offers up to half his kingdom, don't take itâit's only a polite phrase. Best to ask for something usefulâperhaps a sum of gold to rebuild the bridge outside the village."
From what Mia had heard of the king, he'd do that anyway. No, if Mia was to get a boon, she would ask for only one thing.
She wanted to go home.
For nine long months, she'd been stuck in Athelor. The cheerful, dainty elves had been kind to herâsheltering, feeding and teaching her without complaintâbut they weren't her family. Her parents had to be frantic about her. And her six siblingsâwhat had they done when that strange summer wind took her away from them? An entire school year would be gone by now. If she stayed away much longer, she'd be so far behind, and it would be harder and harder to fit back into ordinary life.
The elves had been unable to provide any suggestions about how to get back home; they only told Mia to wait for the wind. But the elves had sung praises of King Edonniel's library, spoke with awe of his scholarly works about Athelor's history. If anyone knew how to get her home, the king would.
The door to the chamber opened, and a palace guard escorted Mia into sunlit wooden expanse of the main hall.
At the room's far end, the king stood among his guard. Though over fifty, he was tall and fit, with a reddish-gold beard and a noble bearing, resplendent in royal armor. He was like the good king in every fairy tale Mia had ever read, like her father, and she forgot to be afraid of him. The king was a great manâwarrior, poet, scholar, diplomatâbut Mia knew in an instant that he was kind enough to help a lost girl.
The assembled crowdâall the elves and talking beasts from the villageâcheered as Mia approached the king. Mia tried to ignore them, instead focusing on the kingâs kind face.
The king stared at her. He stood frozen for several moments, then stepped toward her. âMia?â
Mia stumbled to a stop. "Yes?" This seemed an informal greeting from a great king.
In a blink, Mia found herself in the king's arms, crushed in a warm embrace.
"I can't believe it." The king's deep voice sounded right next to her ear. "I thought I'd never see any of you again, not here."
Mia tried to push him away. King or not, this was too weird to put up with. "Any of who? What are you doing?"
The king pulled away and looked into her face, drinking her in. "I'm sorry. Of course you don't know me. Mia, Iâm Danny. Your brother."
*
In the privacy of Elberaâs good parlor, Mia sat alone with the king. Her brother. Her ten-year-old brother. Who she never in a million years would have connected with the great scholar, warrior, and king the elves, in their musical accents, called Edonniel.
She couldnât doubt that he was Danny. He remembered their parents, their farm, all their family, even the dinosaur village she and he had created two summers ago. With only a year and a day between their ages, they had often been mistaken for twins, but Mia had always reveled in her superior age. Until now.
Danny seemed so dignified; he made Elberaâs soft chair look like a throne. His eyes had wrinkles around them. His red-gold beard hung down to his chest. He sat so steady, so still, gazing at her like she was his long-lost childâinstead of the sister whose hair he pulled when she beat him at Mario Kart.
As Mia sat across from him on Elbera's other chair, the only thing she could think to say was, âYouâre older than me.â
The king guffawed. âIâm older than Dad. But youâyou donât look a day older than when I last saw you. How long have you been here?â
âNine months.â
âItâs been forty-eight years for me.â
Miaâs head spun at the idea. âHow?â
âThe wind that carried us into a different world carried us into different times. I landed on the shores of the Beryl Sea forty-eight years ago. Ever since I became king, Iâve made a study of Athelorian history, trying to find the rest of us.â
âUs?â Mia had been with her siblings when the wind had taken her, but sheâd assumed they were back home in Iowa. âHow many of us are in Athelor?â
âAll of us,â Danny said with surprise. âDidnât you know?â
Mia shook her head. âI couldnât see much.â
âAnd when you landed here alone, you had no reason to guess that we werenât all safely at home,â he said, understanding.
âIs anyone else here?â Mia asked, half-hoping another brother or sister would pop out from behind the furniture.
âI crossed paths with Thomas not long after I arrived, but youâre the only one Iâve met in person since. Everyone else, Iâve had to track down in history and legend.â
âYou met Thomas?â
âHe landed among the trolls of the northern mountains,â Danny explained. âBecame a master smithâthe greatest in Athelorian history. He forged that sword you carry. I have no idea how it got into the elvesâ hands; Iâll bet thereâs a story there.â
Danny never could stick to the point of a story. âWhere is he?â Mia asked in frustration.
âHe was a very old man when I met him,â Danny said. âA hundred and twenty-seven, by some counts. Some say his life was extended by working with the stones from the heart of the world.â
Was? Her little brother had been only six years old when sheâd last seen him. He couldnât beâ
Mia sank back into her chair, stricken.
Danny, caught up in his story, didnât seem to notice. âJane lived among the centaurs and elves of the Skyveil Plains seven-hundred years ago. Became a legendary warrior and explorer, defender of the weak. Beloved by all the beasts. First to step foot on the Daybreak Isles and meet the talking mice.â
Seven-hundred years?
âNow Ben,â Danny said with a laugh, âhas popped up all through history. Rarely seen for more than a day or two, but he always has some dramatic effect. Some scholars speculate heâs extraordinarily long-lived, but my theory is that time is playing with him in a different way than the rest of us.â
He said it all so calmly!
âNora?â Mia dared to ask about their oldest sister.
Dannyâs gaze turned dreamy, his voice hushed and reverent. âThe legendary Queen Eleanor, present at the waking of the world.â
Danny was talking about Noraâbossy Nora!âlike he was in awe of her.
Her sisterâall her siblingsâhad become legends. They werenât waiting for her at home. They were long dead, had been dead ever since sheâd arrived, which meant they were gone forever, and there was no way homeâ
Mia burst into tears.
Danny reacted about like how sheâd have expected him to react. He sprang up from his seat and hovered awkwardly over her chair. âMia? Whatâs wrong?â
Through tears, despair, and frustration, Mia blubbered something that included the words, âTheyâre all dead!â
âDead?â Danny asked. âWho said they were dead?â
Mia wiped her tears on her sleeve and glared up at him. âYou did! You said Thomas was ancient, and Jane lived seven-hundred years ago, and Noraâs as old as the entire world!â
âThat doesnât mean theyâre dead.â
âIâm not stupid! No one can live that long, not even here!â
Danny crouched down next to her chair. He placed both hands on her shoulders and looked straight into her eyes. âMia, look at me. Iâm telling you: theyâre not dead.â
Before his fatherly gazeâeven with the beard, he looked a lot like DadâMiaâs sobs became mere sniffles. âThen where are they?â
âTheyâre home. Safe. I promise. The same wind that brought us here brought them back home after their adventures were over.â
Just like the elves had said. But when Mia had thought sheâd have to wait to go home, sheâd thought it would be a few years at most, notâ
âYou said Thomas was more than a hundred years old.â
Danny said, âIâve done a lot of reading about people like us. Weâre not the only people whoâve come here from Earthâor gone home. The stories all say the same thing. No matter how long we spend here, the wind takes us back home to a time only minutes after we left, and weâll be just the same age we were then. Reunited from across history, as young we ever were. A foretaste of heaven.â
His voice had gone dreamy again. The elves had said he was a poet.
Mia dried her face and sat up straight. âWeâll all be together? At our normal ages? Like we never left?â
âExactly.â
âYou and me and Thomas and Ben and Nora andââ Mia realized something. âYou never said where Claire was.â
âSheâs the only one I havenât found in history yet. That means her storyâs probably still in the future. Maybe weâll run into her someday.â
That did sound exciting, but Mia didnât like the idea of waiting decades like Daniel had.
âHow long do you think it will be? Before we go home?â
Danny stood and walked toward his chair. âI canât say. Whenever the wind blow lately, I get the strangest feeling that I wonât be here longâmaybe five years.â
Five yearsâhalf her lifeânot long?
âFor you,â Danny continued as he sat down, âI canât say. But I have a feeling that your adventures are just beginning.â
âI donât want more adventures,â Mia said, as another tear dripped. âI want to go home.â
âI know,â Danny said, his voice husky with sympathy. âThe first year is the hardest, and youâre so young.â
The idea of DannyâDanny!âtreating her like a little kid! âIâm older than you!â Looking into his very-much-not-a-kid face, she amended, âWell, I should be.â
âYou will be again, one day. But until then...â Danny leaned forward, his hands on his knees, and suddenly sounded more like an American kid than he had all day. âThis sounds so weird, but if you like, I can adopt you. You can live in the palace under my protection, and I can show you everything about Athelor. Maybe name you my heir if you like the whole royalty thing.â
He was planning a whole life for her. Plotting out a future. Here. Even without the weirdness of Danny acting like her dad, it was too much.
Danny noticed her hesitation. âYou donât have to, if you donât want to. I know weâre all called here for different purposes, and I donât want to keep you from your intended mission.â
âI thought the giant was my mission.â Mia had constructed such a tidy taleâand now it was unraveling. âI came here, I slayed the giant. The story should be over. I should get to go home.â
âIt will always be waiting for you. Until then, you have Athelor.â
âAthelor isnât home!â
âIt can be,â Danny said. âItâs been a good home to me. It can be a better one, now that youâre here.â
Mia suddenly realized how old her little brother was. How long heâd been waiting, searching for his family through books. And now she was here, after all this time.
Maybe that was her mission. To help this great king while he was here caring for the people of Athelor.
âI guess I can try,â Mia said. Even if she had to stay a long timeâwell, Danny had managed to do some amazing things, and she couldnât let her little brother outshine her. âWhen we do get back home, I donât want you to have a better story than me.â
Danny grinnedâand for just a second, he looked a little like the kid she remembered. âMia,â he said, âI think youâre going to be fit for legend.â
#the bookshelf progresses#portal fantasy#this is my long-winded way of saying that the narnia pastiches are sleeping on the time travel potential inherent in the premise#this feels like some half-baked bare-bones thing that should never leave my hard drive#just sit in my writing folder for whenever i feel like reading some silly unfinished idea#but i have a prompt to fill so here it is#also after writing poetry all month writing fiction is hard#believe it or not: writing something that's about 50 words of one voice speaking is much easier#than writing something about 20 times as long involving characters moving and interacting
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2024 reads / storygraph
The West Passage
medieval fantasy set in a giant crumbling palace of traditions with forgotten origin, ruled by giant eldritch Ladies
when winter weather comes in the middle of summer, and a beast below the palace begins to rise, two teens from Grey who have suddenly gained a lot of responsibilities set out on separate journeys to the other towers to find a way to stop it, and meet all sorts of strange people and creatures along the way
world where pronouns/names are based on peopleâs roles
tons of cool medieval-style chapter illustrations by the author
#the west passage#aroaessidhe 2024 reads#ooooh this is really interesting!!!#itâs like. you take those weird medieval illustrations and add some eldritch horrors and some alice-in-wonderland weirdness#and turn it into a strange fable-like adventure#it took me a little to get into it - I wasnât sure about the writing style or characters initially- but it grew on me!#Thereâs very little detail about the world in the beginning but once I got a bit more into it and was like oh thereâs just#weird and quirky little guys scattered all over this.#I was having trouble envisioning things and looked up the author half way through to find his art for it!#(I listened to the audiobook so was unaware there are also illustrations in the book) - that definitely refined my understanding of the vib#I didnât actually have a look at all the chapter illustrations in the book til after and oh my god - obsessed#Thereâs so many of them and theyâre perfect. I also enjoy the chapter titles.#And I think itâs one of those books that (for me) could teeter on the edge of like or dislike depending on surface level elements#and it went in the right direction đ#thereâs a tiny bit of romance (or: a relationship that has a romantic element) but not very much. and it is queer#also the worldbuilding kinda reminded me of keys to the kingdom (vaguely)#but like if the House was less populated and ur just following a random denizen who knows nothing travelling around. i should reread kttk#I know it means Ladies like Saints. but also every time my mind reads it as *sleasey man voice* ladiesss#oh also moment of appreciation for kuri huang cover art too
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me after attempting to get back into sims and realizing i had a lot more to do than play the game
#hi everyone#Iâm going around hugging you all#okay now that we are gathered here today#i will simply acknowledge that i have been gone for a very long time and then also acknowledge that maybe it was for the best#i relied on sims to be my only creative activity even if i tried to write a book at the same time#and also. i prioritized sims over real life responsibilities. thatâs just a deadly combination lol#but I recently noticed I just replaced sims with Netflix. with YouTube. with anything that gave me quick dopamine#literally became addicted in a sense. still am but Iâve been cut cold turkey from most everything#I get off work and go. okay Iâve done the dishes and the laundryâŠâŠ..I could read or write or bakeâŠ.#I try to write and sometimes i get a good hour#then I read for a few hours and then get tired of it#and I made cookies Tuesday so Iâm waiting for those to be gone before baking again#Iâm just so pitiful that I feel BORED and donât know what to do#so I saidâŠ.. okay what if I do sims for an hour.#I downloaded some new cc Tuesday and tried to play yesterday#yâall âŠâŠâŠâŠâŠâŠ.. I canât find the energy anymore to set up elaborate scenes and pose my sims and plan posts#I said wow⊠this is boring without my intervention and fake story#I said wowâŠâŠ.. all this for what? for tumblr? yes I created cool things and provided joy. but is that inherintly important compared to my#own joy? my own everyday activities I should be doing?#yâall I do not leave the house unless we got out to eat or shop or travel to our parents#.. I have little desire to. Iâm trying to find that desire#but my husband is busy with grad school and work and I donât want to do anything by myself#Iâve found myself in one heck of a slump#I didnât want to be human for awhile. just had no desires no interests no ambitions#I was slacking off SO HARD at work. I just had no drive to do well#Iâm still working on it. Iâm still trying to get caught up. Iâm still trying to force myself to move every day.#but I am struggling yâall. and I can tell you that sims⊠sims isnât helping rn but I want it to so bad. I want to get back into it#I didnât mean to disappear on everyone. I got married and then life got busy and then I fell into this hole of nothing#I didnât even WANT to crawl my way out. but my husband has helped a lot. I feel like such a child!!!!#I reached max tags. đ bye love you all. till next time
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A rummage sale
Opens Friday, October 6th at 2pm, Closes Friday, October 13th at 11:59pm
CLOSED
How humorous it is to say that I, a traveler like me who can never stay in one place for long, would be holding such an event. It is an event that is typically reserved for those who stay put and collect, to then find themselves overcrowded with bobbles and trinkets to find the need to regift them - for a price of course.
But it appears that my little shop has been around for a year now, and I suppose that due to that homely nature I find with keeping it, I too have turned into those creatures that make it a habit to sell their old belonging.
After all, a year's worth of clutter must be dealt with, even for a peddler such as myself. And I have always found that it is better to give things no longer needed away than to sell them; generosity is in my nature after all.
So please, dear traveler, have a look around at all the trinkets, charms, and books you see upon my shelves and see if one catches your eye or even heart.
After all, trash can become a treasure in the right hands
Please Choose What Calls to You
Personal Reading of Your Palm:
If you are a little weary of venturing into all that is unique around you, perhaps I can be your guide. Allow me to look upon your palam and direct you where your heart is asking to go and the fate that will befall you should you listen. (matchup + how you meet)
Enchanted and Alluring Charm:
It caught your eye didn't it, from the moment you walked in you could not take your eyes off of it. I am more than willing to allow you the chance to claim it as your own, if you so wish to treasure it (moodboard and/or matching outfits)
Intriguing Book of Old:
I see you have found a bit of my collection of literature, one that has taken many years over many landscapes to curate. Though I do find it rather sad to part with such old friends, I can see they would be far more beloved by a traveler like yourself. So please sit, and stay a moment longer, after all, I would want you to love the story you are about to be bonded to (fairytale matchup with drabble) (none left)
I so hope you will find a treasure amongst my things, traveler
#i do hope you'll stop by#and should you need any clarification#my door is always open for questions - at no extra cost đ#(mainly just pick a fandom and I shall do the rest)#(though if you're not sure my travelers navigation has what I have an easier time writing for)#(under 'rules of purchase)#but yeah anything you want I'll write!#đź.the peddler deems this important#đź.the peddler's one year event
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I wish there was more steddie time travel fics. Where steddie travels back all the way to season one. Maybe both or one of them. Actually both because the comedic potential. Like Steve and Eddie trying to change things and save the day. And anyone who sees them sneaking around thinks they are in a secret gay relationship. Nancy has this whole theory that her boyfriend is gay and sneaking off with Eddie Munson. Reason why he's being distant and hiding things. And on one hand she's not wrong, because steddie has so much unresolved sexual tension that one is oblivious to and the other is to afriad to admit to. But on the other hand is she way way off.
okay tbh, as great as that would be, i don't think everyone would immediately jump to the gay thing. if this is during steve's kingly days, he's got enough sway and popularity that people would bend over backwards to prove he's a Normal Straight American Boy.
what i think would be more likely, considering he throws those parties and is a good athlete, people would assume he's either developing an addiction on something OR taking steroids. nancy would be SO worried about it because omg steve, do you know what drugs do to your brain? how are you going to get into college if you keep doing that stuff??
meanwhile, steve is touched by her concern and also like...just going along with it? What is he supposed to do? That explanation makes WAY more sense than the whole Upside Down nonsense that they're trying to prevent. So now you've got Steve--who can do a mean kegstand but has literally never even considered doing anything harder than that because DUH the hard stuff would fuck up his body and he's an ATHLETE--trying to pretend he's got to get his Drugs so he has to cancel his plans with Nancy and go see Eddie RIGHT NOW. Because of Drugs. No other reason.
But we all know Nancy is a stubborn bastard (affectionate), so she'd definitely use her investigative skills to find out more. She'd track down this Eddie Munson guy and give him a piece of her mind. Now, this Nancy is still pretty mild and is lacking guns because the UD stuff hasn't hit her yet, but Eddie remembers with crystal clarity his Nancy and her weapons proficiency and reacts to past Nancy accordingly. As in, he immediately apologizes for anything and everything and promises not to do it again, please don't hurt him.
Now Nancy is confused as to why this big bad leather and chain wearing drug dealer is practically cowering before her. She starts to suspect other stuff is going on because the pieces aren't adding up. Eventually she figures out what's happening and joins Steve and Eddie because while they're both creative and skilled in their own ways, they're not really that great at the actual investigating bit of the plan-making process.
It's only then, when she's spending more time with the two of them together, does she start to catch on to the way Eddie looks at Steve. She remembers the rumors that go around about Eddie, so she's not too surprised because Steve is stupid hot and really good in bed, like, so good, the things that boy could do with his tongue will stay with her always. What does catch her off guard is the way Steve reacts whenever Eddie does something that edges around flirty (but still has plausible deniability). He doesn't get disgusted, he gets confused and ruminates over it. It's curious (though if nancy were honest to herself, she'd admit that she's never really understood all the romance stuff and it's never particularly appealed to her). If there were more time, she'd probably study them more.
But there are more important things happening, so she's going to leave them to deal with that mess on their own.
#stranger things#nancy wheeler#eddie munson#steve harrington#steddie#trensu tells stories#trensu replies#this definitely got away from me#also i actually don't read a lot of time travel fics#or time loop fics#i wouldn't say i actively avoid them but they're usually the last thing i pick if i have other options#idk why#because there are really good ones that i've loved#but the concept itself never piques my interest THAT much#anyway#i think your idea is really fun and you should definitely write it up if you're so inclined#(did i take this opportunity to push my aro!nancy agenda? yes i did bc she screams aro to me and there's distressingly little fic with that
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Spiderwebs #30: Preparation
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It was a lot like planning for a vacation, but more stressful. For Heather, at least. Her packing had the frantic, frenzied pace of a burrowing shrew. She came up with a list of things to bring: clothes, food, money, a weaponâbetter safe than sorry, she told himâcoats, water, more food? Toothbrushes, soap, sedativesâshe wouldnât offer an explanation for this oneâbuy gas, gloves, boots, and so on.
Jackie certainly wasnât taking this any more seriously than a vacation. He hadnât gone outside in a while, and besides that, he hadnât left the vicinity of Heather's house for several months now. He found himself curious as to what itâd be like. Had the world changed at all while he was gone? No longer was he privy to the knowledge free men took for granted. News never reached his secluded life. He wouldn't know if there was high water coming or if the Swedes landed on the sun.
Like Heather, he also packed a few things. Nothing impressive. A new book from Heatherâs shelfâsomething by Oscar Wilde about a portraitâalongside his clothes, a pencil and paper, the dollar bill he'd taken from Matthew, and one of Heatherâs old backpacks to carry it all.Â
On the second day, she also handed him a heavy, black wool coat. It went a few inches below his hips, and was studded by brass buttons all along the front.Â
âI think it looks good,â she offered.
It did look very intimidating in the mirror. He pulled the coat off and shrugged. Petty things like vanity no longer appealed to him. There was no time for such luxuries. He could remember being invested in his appearance, long ago. He missed being able to care about stupid things. He missed buying his own clothes. Heatherâs fashion sense was okay, but it wasnât the same.
There was also the matter of the cop, with his warning of returning in two weeks or so. Evidence was key, and they needed it gone. With a gallon of gasoline and an old firepit in the yard, Heather burned the tapes, the cassette recorder, the polaroids of Jackieâs open chest and exposed organs, hell, even the ropes. It all went up in flames, went black and curled around the edges, until there was only a pile of ash and char. She cleaned the blood off her tools and gutted the house of stains from the inside-out.Â
The third day arrived with a flurry of snow outside. The intensity of the sun was wholly unfamiliar to Jackie, and it took a minute for his eyes to adjust. They shoved their luggage into the back of the car. Jackie was happy to learn that he could sit in the front.
âWhat?â she said when he let out a sigh of relief. âDid you think Iâd keep you in the trunk?â
He laughed at this, but it was an uneasy smile he wore. It was hard to tell with her. What sorts of things she found ridiculous, and what lines she wasnât opposed to crossing.Â
Still, things were generally okay. He was safe. He was out of the silence, out of the isolation, and he felt okay. He felt happy. Before this, his happiness was brief and based on whatever small luxury could distract him. Maybe a painkiller, maybe a break from the tests. But his happiness now was more of a pervading contentment. It was a constant, heavy high in his heart, felt in the far edges of his soul.
Although he had found it redundant, Heather had an idea with strings of thread. Before they left, she taped up a string near the front door, and also to the hallwayâs entrance. This, she informed him, would reveal if anybody had come in and searched the house. The thread would snap easily when someone walked through it. It wasnât clear what the benefit of this knowledge was, if she would go to jail either way, but it seemed to calm Heather down a bit.
The wind scratched at Jackieâs face when he stuck his head out the window. The flecks of falling snow pierced his skin. The cold stung his eyes, making them water. He didnât care. The feeling of movement and freedom was exhilarating. Heather started the car with a jerk of the gear shift. And off they went, out of the house, into whatever lay behind the highways and empty roads.
He rolled the window up after a while, then turned to her. âHow long are we leaving for?â
âThree weeks.â Her grip on the steering wheel was tight enough to nearly bruise. âLonger, if we need to.â
âWhere are we going?â
âI donât know. Stop asking me questions, Iâm going to be sick.â
Indeed, her expression had not shifted from dull panic. There were dark circles under her eyes. Something played on the radio, but the melody was too quiet to recognize. She turned it off with a small, barely noticeable frown.Â
Jackie left the subject alone and leaned his face against the window. This was the best day of his life, he thought.Â
The sky was starting to turn black. They left the house late, to draw as little suspicion as possible. Streetlights shone like catâs eyes on the sides of the road, streaky and long with motion. He thought he saw a few people, passing by, their faces blurry and indistinct. There were trees, pines with bristling needles, bare birches, old oaks. Snow stained the sidewalks in shades of dirty white. There were one or two other cars, but not many. Maybe it was a holiday. Maybe it was Christmas.
âWhatâs the date?â he asked.
âI told you, stop askingââ The tension eased from her shoulders, but only slightly. âSorry. Iâm tired. Iâll tell you tomorrow.â
Well, he could wait. He was good at waiting. Jackie wondered how long he had been waiting, locked down thereâit could have been weeks or years, and he would never know. But that was behind him, now. That was in the past. He could file it away with all his other bad memories. There was no point in dwelling on it. He had lived, and he would continue to live, and that was all. It was nothing to worry about.
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#whump#whump writing#my writing#Spiderwebs toyybox#this one's just a short plot-relevant chapter#Road trip yay!!!#best part of a road trip is listening to a FIRE MIXTAPE!!!! đ„đ„đ„đŻđŻđŻ unfortunately Heather is a LOSER!!!!!!!!! đ„đ„đ„#There's no music but at least Jackie can stare silently out of a window for 5 hours#Look the bar is really low at this point he's having the time of his life#Since the gang will be out and about I should mention I don't live in Washington State so I am using a map#This trip would technically only be half an hour#but Heather takes a bunch of detours because she doesn't know anything about travelling (or where she's going for that matter)#so it's going to be a long drive after all...
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I had a thought in October about what if, in the TUE episode, Danny returning to his time was more complicated than just finding Vlad.
I made a gif out of a little sketch story thing I've made based on that thought (it's part one, out of... two? three? I haven't finished it yet so I'm not sure. But I thought this was a good place to stop for the gif.)
The story starts during the episode, right after the older Vlad removes the fused time medallion. The basic thought is that Danny doesn't make it to Vlad soon enough (plus I have some fun with an idea that the medallions have different models).
(The only way I know to start the gif over is to refresh the page. Oh, but first try clicking on the gif.)
Under the cut are the still pictures, as well as a written version. (...I 've spent too much time on this.)
Here's the still pictures.
And here's a written form. (...I'm not good at only giving the words with basic description. It was nearly unreadable that way. So I tried storyifying it. Just a little bit. It includes actions that are implied in the images but not specifically shown.)
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Within Vlad's cave, in the future, Danny Phantom asks, "It didnât work?"
Several feet away from him, the older Vlad stares down at the time medallionâstill in the palm of the gauntlet he'd used to pull it out of Danny.
The medallion has a central piece with an entwined letter 'C' and 'W'. Above this, in fine print, are the words 'Back' and 'Forward', with corresponding arrows pointing counterclockwise and clockwise. And, below the C/W logo, are the words '10yr model'.
"âŠPerhaps something had happenedâŠ" Vlad says, "causing you to no longer be recognized by your time."
"But Sam and Tucker made it back just fine!" Danny says in confusion.
However, Danny doesn't give Vlad time to come up with any theories. "My future self is in the past, trying to force this future to happen. I need to get back to my time before itâs too late."
Vlad gives Danny a pitying look. "My boy, it may already be too late."
"No. I canât accept that." Danny walks over to Vlad, raising one hand, palm up. "Here, let me see the medallion." Vlad drops the medallion into Danny's awaiting palm.
Danny looks at the back side of the medallion, saying, "If he was able to use one to go to my time, then I can, too."
The back of the medallion is undesigned smooth metal, but it's engraved with instructions. It reads, "Time anchor and travel device combination. Single use. Up to ten years forward or back. Simply remove to return to own time." And, beneath that, "Please recycle."
Danny puts the medallion around his neck and twists the front face counterclockwise, saying to himself, "I better turn it as far as it will go."
Before he even lets go of the medallion's face, a swirling bubble encompasses him, and then the bubble fades away.
Danny turns to look at the scenery. He's still in the caveâhe sees the same cave formationsâbut, while there used to be a large, desk-like computer console and some lab equipment, now there's only a blank cave wall, and no sign of Vlad. "I guess it worked," he says. Then he flies through the cave.
A while later, after flying all the way to Amity Park, Danny hovers in the air, over the place the Nasty Burger used to be. Now there is only a large scorchmark, and a bewildered-looking version of Danny Fenton sitting in the middle of it.
"Oh no, I didnât get here in time."
Danny has gone exactly ten years into the past, along the timeline he had started from. (In the corresponding sketch, this information is given by a narration rectangle that reads, "Exactly 10 yrs earlier in original timeline." ...Although that's not exactly true because it was exactly ten years when he first appeared in the cave, and it took time to get from Wisconsin to Amity Park. But the point is that Danny hadn't traveled far enough back in time to reach the intersection of the two timelines.)
Danny flies away, saying, "There must be a way to go farther back!"
The version of Danny Fenton left sitting on the scorched ground thinks, "Maybe I should move in with Vlad."
Some time later, Danny is flying through the Ghost Zone.
"I have no idea what the outside of Clockworkâs lair looks like. Iâll just need to trust Iâll know it when I see it."
Around him are floating doors and swirling patterns, as well as some kind of gear-themed castle that Danny has already passed (it's Clockwork's lair).
Danny turns his head. He doesn't notice the Fenton Boomerang approaching from the other side.
The Boomerang hits him in the back of the head.
"Ow!" Danny grabs the Boomerang and rubs his head. He scolds it like a disobedient pet, saying, "I look away for one second."
"Look," Danny orders, and uses his other hand to reach into his pocket, pulling out Jazz's note and unfolding it with a jerk of his wrist, "I already have one."
He throws the Boomerang. "Go find past meâor the me in the future? Whatever."
The note slips out of his hand.
"No!" He spins around, reaching for it.
"What are you doing way out here, Baby Pop?"
Danny pauses on hearing the voice.
He turns toward the voice and sees a maliciously grinning Ember McClain. "Ember? I donât have time for this!"
"Well, you better make time. How about some killer volume?" Ember strums her guitar, and a spiral of energy shoots toward Danny.
"I seriously donât have time! But you want volume? Fine! Howâs thiiis?!" He transitions into his Ghostly Wail.
The Wail overpowers Ember's attack and blasts her through the air. She's pushed onto a chunk of floating ground.
The Wail ends, and Ember looks up in surprise and fear. There's a thin stream of ectoplasm leaking from the corner of her mouth. She puts a hand to her mouth and pulls it back to see ectoplasm on her palm.
Then she glares up at Danny. She coughs, and hoarsely says, "I wonât forget this."
Danny's just as horrified as she was. Wide-eyed, he subconsciously leans back, but also reaches a hand toward her in concern. "Wait, I didnât mean toâŠ"
But then he drops his hand and looks away, his expression hardening. "Never mind. Once I return to the right time, this will never have happened."
Assuming Jazz's note is a lost cause by now, he flies off, leaving Ember on the chunk of rock.
An unknown time later, Danny is in the Ghost Zone, hovering in place. He now has Jazz's headband tied to his belt, and he reaches a hand toward it, and rubs the material between his fingers. He says, "Jazz⊠Everyone⊠Iâll find my way back to you."
The camera moves upward until Danny's shoulder and half of his head is visible. His hair is a little longer now, and the shoulder part of his outfit is different. He continues, "No matter how long it takes."
#danny phantom#dp#danny fenton#the ultimate enemy#ember mclain#future!vlad#blood#what if#asj post#asj art#asj writing#I had considered adding a scene where Danny takes off the medallion and still nothing happens and he tosses it and flies off.#(Because Danny no longer belongs to a certain time to jump back to.)#And then Clockwork appears from a time portal and asks himself why no one ever recycles these.#...But then adding that scene would've taken longer.#I couldn't decide which art style to use (series style or other style). So I'd mixed them. The simplest of both.#The Booomerang being in this timeline doesn't make sense#unless each timeline's Danny has a different ecto-signature and the Booomerang can travel between dimensions. Could've found a door portal.#...It depends on your headcanon. Probably canon that everything leads to each other (except the start and end which doesn't quite fit).#Although this au still has looping. ...So it should be canon time travel... except I'm going with a more clear linear thing.#I'm... probably using Back to the Future theory when I think about it.#...I could draw a diagram. (but mainly the Booomerang can move between divergent timelines. Jazz couldn't have sent that note originally.)#(I mean unless there was no 'originally' in the episode and Dan had created himself over and over until Clockwork had broken the loop.#...but that's harder to make sense than a dimension-hopping gadget. It does sound like a time travel short-story I'd read once though.)#Me (to myself): This is supposed to be a tragic angsty story. So stop adding jokes to it!#Also me: Oh here's another place I can add a joke.#My computer's messed up so Photoshop isn't working right but I can still use it to edit.#When I'd typed on top of my handwriting it kept leaving out letters. Especially for double letters (like 'leter'). Because it's slow.#I think I've found and fixed all of them now.#I'm bored and have hit the tag limit. can I go ahead and post this now? ...will anyone see it this early in the day?
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@jonmartinweek Day 6: Time Travel
Out of Time
Jon refuses to focus on the push of the knife into his chest. The pain is almost unremarkable compared to the overwhelming pulling sensation as all the Fears begin to draw away. He knows Annabelleâs web is pulling him away too â the slick-smooth edges of the tape wrap around him and cut in everywhere as they snap taut and try to pull him backwards. But none of it matters. He doesnât want to be aware of any of it. He wants to see nothing, know nothing, but Martinâs face pressed close to his; their foreheads touching, their mingled tears falling onto Jonâs cheeks, Martinâs bright blue eyes shining with a searing combination of terror and love andâ
Everything stops.
There is a knock at the door.
Jon sits bolt upright, gasping for breath in the wake of the sudden shock to his system that is the abrupt absence of all pain. Before he can take in anything about his surroundings, he is already reaching, trying to find Martin. His hands come up empty, grabbing at nothing but blankets and bedsheets. Jon is in a bed, in a bedroom that looks distantly familiar, and Martin is not with him.
What happened? Where is he? Jon tries to Know, but there is nothing. Reaching for the Eye feels like the mental equivalent of miscounting the steps in a staircase and overbalancing as your foot falls through the empty space with unnecessary weight and purpose. He canât feel the Eye at all. The door in his mind isn't closed, it's gone.
'Jon, are you awake yet?' a voice calls from somewhere outside of the room. There is someone at the door, knocking.
Read the rest on Ao3!
#jonmartin week 2023#i apologise for the tag if i'm too late!!#this fic took a lot longer to finish than i was expecting#i've got one more fic that i should post in the next 24 hours then i'm done for this year#anyway normal tag time#my posts#my fic#my writing#tma#the magnus archives#magpod#magnus pod#jmart#jonmartin#teaholding#time travel#tma time travel#tma time travel au
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Pleeeeease tell me about the time travel jonsasha fic. I'm assuming it's jon who goes back in time? From where, end of s5? đđđ Is it preestablished js, or canon compliant until the time travel? Are they going to try to kill elias......
Alright. So. This answer doesn't need to have context but I'm going to provide anyway, so buckle up for several paragraphs of rambling. Under a cut for length.
Anyway so last year I made this post. It's not required reading but it is relevant. Basically, in my first six months(?) or so in the fandom, when I was big into jm, I read a buncha time travel fix-its. I've sorta moved away from them (heads up this fic will NOT be a fix-it) but at the time I really enjoyed them.
(To clarify, nothing wrong with liking time travel fix-its or not wanting to touch the implications. Time travel identity theft isn't real and we're all here to have a good time. If that's your jam you do you)
Now. The Thing With Time-Travel Fix-Its is that there's going to be a past version and a future version of your intrepid time-travelers and you're going to have to Deal With That, and a common method of Dealing With That is the time travelers waking up in their past bodies. Pretty normal, not unusual, dodges some complicated tangles re: having two versions of certain characters floating around, a perfectly understandable choice that nontheless carries Implications.
Namely: what does it mean to take the place of your past self? For you? For them? For the person they could be? For the people around you (who may as well be interacting with a stranger)? Is that really you? Are you really them? Could overwriting your past self count as murder/identity theft/Bad?
And I thought about it. And I thought about it. And I thought about it. And then I got super into jonsasha dual archivists AUs.
Okay. Context over. We can (finally) talk about the fic.
So, I am a simple creature and Jon is my darling beloved. So I didn't want to just kill him off before the fic even begins (although. hmmm. tempting, actually). But i did need him replaced by s5 Jon. So. What if he was just... displaced? Shoved out of his own body by an imposter? A ghost invisible to all? Alone? Afraid? Watching his friends interacting with an unknown but possibly malicious entity? And thus, the Time Travel Nonsense AU was born!
So there's no outline and it hasn't had a lot of Rotation Time in awhile, but I do have a series of loosely connected Ideas down so you can have those.
Something else is living in S1 Jon's body. He doesn't know what it is, or what's happening to him. He can't really interact with his surroundings, either. Can't be seen, can't speak to anyone, can't do anything but watch. Even the thing puppeting his body doesn't seem to know he's there. And it behaves... strangely. It has some of his mannerisms, and it acts like him, but a little to the left. It's uncanny, watching something that is him-but-not-him like that... and it's lonely.
(S5 Jon is going to be an "it" because S1 Jon is perceiving S5 Jon as a monster/creature (although I do believe in it/its Jon supremacy, to be clear)).
He tries to figure things out on his own. Tries to signal for help. Tries to take his body back. Tries to speak to the new occupant. Nothing.
The fic initially opens with a transcript of his statement regarding the experience. It's technically for everyone but it's addressed to Sasha specifically. I don't know what happens with it after though.
At some point, he does manage to make contact with Elias. It's So Weird how only his boss can see him, but it's something at least. Especially because he's so goddamned lonely.
He's a ghost at his own job and in his own house. He hasn't spoken to anyone in weeks. The others think his replacement is behaving a little oddly but seem to be getting along better with it than they ever did with him. It's revealing things about him as if it was him. It feels horribly invasive, and lonely, and frightening, and awful. His only source of comfort is Elias, and they start a sort of weird situationship sorta thing. It's a good thing Elias is so helpful and trustworthy huh?
Maybe Sasha finds the tape. Maybe she just thinks Jon is acting Weird. Either way, she gets to snooping and is drawn closer to the Eye.
Elias, meanwhile, is trying to get Jon marked, and closer to being the Archivist, and back in his body, AND trying to figure out what it was that replaced Jon. Jon is trying to do the last two. Idk what s5 Jon is doing. Maybe finding ways to break whatever binding will cause Elias' death to hurt other institute employees?
Anyway, after a certain point, Sasha is connected enough to the Eye (and Looking hard enough) that she can see S1 Jon, and they start working together too. Maybe they try to keep it secret from Elias? Idk.
S1 Jon will get his body back, and S5 Jon is eldritch enough to probably not need one.
Ok honestly by this point things are reaaaaally vague if I'm being real. So, lightning round:
The JE situationship breaks off due to Elias'... everything really (I mean, once its revealed that he's evil and sinister and stuff).
Jonsasha's misadventures trying to get Jon's body back result in them racking up marks.
Sooooo much of this is me being enamoured w/ outsider PoV... time travel but from the perspective of someone who ain't travelling. Another important aspect is S5 Jon trying desperately to fix things but failing because the whole project is Doomed and he is being sabotaged from the start by an invisible force (himself).
Also S1 Jon accidentally making things worse for himself because all the information available and his general situation push him to do so.
Sasha survives the Not!Them (obviously) (how? good question!!)
Jon and Sasha have a weird complicated Thing. Their research into S5 Jon sort of separates her from the others and they kinda become drawn into their relationship and stuff. Also from the whole "same master same monster" situation they got going on.
There's going to be a short tape transcript of Jon telling Sasha about his situationship with Elias. Idk if I'llbe able to indicate it over audio transcript but they are both sitting on the floor or cot or whatever and Jon's head is on her lap.
Jonsasha are t4t and autism4autism.
I have a really specific image in my head of them running out the institute's front doors while holding hands, very near the end of the fic.
They do run off somewhere (maybe Scotland still idk) and they do read the 160 statement. Together <3.
And yeah that's everything. Got vague and floaty near the end there but to answer your questions: yes, yes, canon-compliant until time travel, and maybe at some point idk.
#i'm not gonna lie my brain feels kinda slippery and odd#i think i had one too many emotions this afternoon if i'm being honest.#anyway this is a bit messy lol#this one's been with me for like a year lol#possibly longer#cause i know it was floating around in the brainspace before that post i made#anyway sorry for subjecting the jonsashaa tag to my ramblings#i think i can avoid tagging je? i know i prolly should but i /reaaaally/ don't want this clogging their tag cause it's endgame js#and not super about je#anyway yeah here's the#time travel nonsense au#also the opening statement is giving me some serious trouble so i might need to skip ahead to some scenes?#orrrrrr write an outline maybe#anyway yeah jonsasha rights and all that#jonsasha#asks#oh and actually thank you for the ask!! i love talking about my beloved blorbos and my writing projects#blanket permission for anyone to send whatever asks they have about those to me forever and ever#anyway i should go make dinner lol#goodnight tristate area#(also i feel like i'm maybe forgetting something...? probably its fine idk)
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I want to make "Shadowstruck" an Inklings Challenge story so bad, and there's no way I'll be able to finish even part of it in time.
#adventures in writing#[beating myself with a stick] work on the time travel story work on the time travel story work on the time travel story!#i have a draft!#all i need to do is fill in holes!#but no!#my brain insists that i need to have something *else* too#shadowstruck is stealing all my attention#and if i don't write it now i may not return to it again for months#i don't have time to do it justice#but a ridiculously short deadline may be the only way i break past the internal editor and finish any portion of it at all#but there is no way i could even write a scene that stands alone enough to make sense as an unfinished piece#and hits one of the themes#i'm greedy for story ideas this year#setting my expectations *way* too high#i want to write a whole *bunch* of ideas so maybe one of them will be satisfying as this year's entry#when i should just focus on making my one main story something i'm pleased with#i need to shut down the part of my brain telling me to write shadowstruck or one of the other secondary world ideas fighting for attention#and just go back to the time travel story#and only *if* i can complete that *maybe* write something else#it's not inklings challenge deadline day unless it contains a stressful self-imposed writing marathon
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one of these days i need to sit down and write out the lore i've thought up for kuroba's youkai au bc i went a lil wild with it.
#it also acts as a precursor for their denki mystery au so i really should have it written down somewhere#quick crash course in the tags let's go :#it's set in medieval japan and starts in what later becomes akatsuka village in denki mystery#kuroba ( they're named kuroha in the au bc that loan word wouldn't exist at the time ) is living as an apothecary in akatsuka village#they're accused of being a katawaguruma in disguise after one of the village encountered one with their face the night before#they're almost executed by the villagers in a pine grove when karamatsu comes to their rescue#( the kodama are pretty fond of kuroha & were making a huge fuss about the situation so he decided to help )#kuroha wants to track down that youkai w/ their face & clear their name so kara offers to help them#he tells them that he's just curious about humans and doesn't want to pass up the chance to learn more through them#but he's clearly got ulterior motives for going along with them#so they end up traveling together to track down the rest of the brothers and figure out what's the deal w/ that katawaguruma#( and learn the truth behind how the sextuplets became youkai in the first place )#THAT'S THE SET UP!! i have a lot of more plot details thought out but it'd be too much for the tags#someone bully me into writing this out ( and finish designing kuroba's youkai au look )#okay i need a nap after work see ya'll in a sec đ#mj rambles
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thinking about the sonic 2 premiere i went to alone, at like 3pm (it was def early afternoon but not sure when) with just like 5 other people in the room (moms with kids) and how everyone left before the credits ended and i was sitting there Gripping the fuck out of the seat in front of me after the whole movie and then seeing post creds shadow i yelled (quietly) (sorry to the staff guy coming in to clean) it was the best movie experience ive ever had cant believe its been almost 2 years now
also the very next day i went to see it again with a friend to show him what the fuck i just saw and also make sure what i saw was actually real and not a daydream
#what i wish fnaf was like#rewatched the movie so many times most of it doesnt feel good anymore and i cringe hard at some spots#but it has amazing scenes still. ofc all the stob ones (which killed me in the cinema) but also the super sonic ending ate#the tails scenes were kinda ass and the humans are so so#i liked the wedding scene when i first saw it but i do agree it was too long. it should be about furry aliens and not random ppl#unless its stone#also toms actor i forgot your name but youre not all that im sorry. the gag reel of him dancing i could do without it thx#i hope jim comes back one last time and they work with shadow somehow but there should also be a big threat#thinking about chaos would be cool. im also expecting chaos emeralds collecting#if its meant to be a trilogy and then a wrap up they need to go out with a bang#buut i feel like they could do more mini series after like knuckles (if it ever sees the light of day) or make spinoffs#a shadow spinoff of him looking for his past would literally write itself honestly#they could do less of the humans and not focus on robotnik and stuff maybe even do some portal traveling off earth
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shout out to this is how you lose the time war for being the only piece of media to never let me down <3
#have You thought about time traveling lesbian assassins today? you should#nyxtalks#genuinely tihylttw is the one piece of media i would recommend to everyone ive ever met.#like i recognise angela isnt going to be for everyone. ive got my issues with it and its for sure like. a certain taste#but these guys? oh my god please read it#its some of the most beautiful writing ive ever read and im enamoured with the universe they created in so few words#honestly nothing i could say would do it justice i love this book so fucking much#its gay. they commit crimes. they write love letters. its perfect#(if anyone wants to read it i have a link <3 a pirates life for me and all that)
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reread adventures of john blake after maybe six years... it is always unfortunate when something does not live up to how cool you thought it was when you were younger.
#the captain's library#it still has Great Potential but I have much more of an appreciation for the Craft of the graphic novel now than I did in 2017#dear mr philip pullman maybe this one just should have been a Regular novel.#and of course I mean no insult to fred fordham#but [hands to mouth] YOUR PANELING IS UNINTERESTING AND YOUR CHARACTER DESIGN PHILOSOPHY IS INDISTINCT#like. I know he is pulling from the bd and golden age comic tradition more than modern graphic novels but Even So#you've got to make your characters' body language and design suitably distinct that they read well even at a distance!#which is something that many of those illustrators do Very Very well!#I would be SO incredibly a fan of this if it was done in say a corto maltese style with those sharp inks and powerful spotblacks...#despite coming from very different backgrounds and times most of the ship's crew are built on a very similar plan#and also we don't spend enough time with them to develop the fact that they are Interestingly time travelers!#look I Really like the idea of a time-hopping ghost ship picking up its crew across the centuries out of people lost at sea#but also if you do that I want to see how a roman engineer and a man from 1880s china and one of nelson's foremast jacks INTERACT#let us spend time with them! let us look at what the dynamic IS on the mary alice! because they all have such potential!#anyway ENOUGH WHINGING. I should simply write my own book.
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