#mfackenthal reviews 7

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MFackenthal Reviews - #7

Hello loves!

 Another week or so has gone by since my last review post.  Okay, more like 3 weeks.  Dang, where does the time go?  

 Truly, if you’re reading this, I don’t deserve you.  But I can only thank all of you who are reading this, all of you who chat with me, who put up with my requests for more work, who post your amazing art and then are like “why the f didn’t she read it ASAP after she whined for me to post it yesterday?!?”, who understand that I want to use .gifs but I just don’t have the patience to find them, who accept me for who I am, who share their love of music with me, and those of you who don’t talk to me at all but who read what I write. Thank you!

 I found organizing by book was efficient – so I’m going to go that route again.  I’m also linking to masterlists whenever I can – and especially if I binged a bunch of a series.

 I’m fairly sure I read an unhealthy amount of fiction again … anyone want to take a guess at how many?  

A few quick reminders:

(1) If you want to find out what I specifically thought about each chapter, that can be found on my blog.  To more easily search my blog, search the phrase “mfackenthal reviews ________” and fill in the blank with the blog name.  IE “mfackenthal reviews maxattack-powell” to find the work I reblogged specifically by @maxattack-powell.

(2) In case it’s not obvious: I recommend ALL of these fics and ALL of these authors.  I cannot say enough about the fabulousness that is these authors

Endless Summer

 Girl Crush https://ooo-barff-ooo.tumblr.com/post/180025286162/masterlist-endless-summer-girl-crush-miniseries by @ooo-barff-ooo

Honestly, I could go on and on about how fantastic this mini-series is.  The author has such a command of the craft. The storyline is fuckin’ beautiful.  I cried. I laughed.  I cheered when things went well.  It’s a six part series.  I read it from start to finish because I couldn’t put it down.

 A Year and a Day https://endlessflame.tumblr.com/post/183182368860/a-year-and-a-day-jake-x-mc by @endlessflame

Flowers play a central role in this short but sweet one shot where Jake gets his happily-ever-after.

 TRR

 Godsend Parts 1 and 2 https://elles-choices.tumblr.com/post/180201737699/masterlist-tag-list by @elles-choices

I was almost late to work twice this week because I was binging this series.  Liam is just so dreamy and romantic as written by @elles-choices. So respectful, so in love.  Even Constantine is supportive of Liam and his true love. Awwww.  Plus, Drake is with a woman named Meg!  I’m still so incredulous that no one pointed this out to me.  Drake + Megs = dream!!!

 The Broken Bits https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/183293222860/the-broken-bits-chapter-one – by @likethetailofacomet

In @likethetailofacomet’s other work, she hinted at a back story for Bastien.  This is that story and more.  Life is changing in Cordonia and this means that Bastien is free of the responsibilities that defined who he is and created a wedge in the relationship with the love of his life.  Will he make his way back to this love?  “He’d better!” Is all I can say … and I’m sure @likethetailofacomet will not let me down! ;)

 Riley’s Coronation https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/183339310983/rileys-coronation by @whenyourheartskipsabeat

This is a delightful one shot that is full of heart, love, and laughter.  Riley and Liam have made it through and now they’re happy and Riley will be crowned today.  What does the morning of the coronation look like?  Check it out in this fic.

 A Royal Red Carpet Desire https://pixieferry.tumblr.com/post/183284776607/a-royal-red-carpet-desire by @pixieferry

If the title doesn’t tip you off, I have put this delightful crossover under TRR only because that was the first one listed.  In this delightful fluff, royalty meets Hollywood and lots of fan girling and a little jealousy is produced.  Read this and enjoy!

 Side by Side https://ownworldresident.tumblr.com/post/183186049814/side-by-side-masterlist by @ownworldresident

In this series, Riley and Liam are together, they have children, but Riley is not the Queen. Find out why and then fan girl all over @ownworldresident’s work with me as Claire and the Cordonia gang help Riley and Liam strengthen their relationship and help Riley own the fact that with or without the title, she is Queen.

 In the Garden https://lizeboredom.tumblr.com/post/183279440875/in-the-garden by @lizeboredom

It’s the day before Liam gets to finally marry Sammi.  He’s in the Garden and thinking about his mom.  This one-shot fic will put a smile on your face through sweetness and humor.

 All is Fair, A Twist in the Tale, No Regrets – I’m sorry, Secrets Unwind, and Can you Mend a Broken Heart  https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/182550912733/my-masterlist-the-royal-romance-summary by @whenyourheartskipsabeat

So …  I found an author that I liked and I binged a bunch of her masterlist.  Everything here is fun to read.  The creativity is astounding.  Which series is your favorite?

 Last-Minute Changes https://endlessflame.tumblr.com/post/183257353705/last-minute-changes-bastien-x-mc by @endlessflame

This author never ceases to surprise me with a clever idea.  In this short but sweet fic, Riley has to make some changes to the wedding … starting with the groom …

 Something Unexpected https://hopefulmoonobjectmasterlist.tumblr.com/post/182868864620/something-unexpected-master-list by @hopefulmoonobject and @ownworldresident

The boys are falling deeper and deeper in love with Alex and Nesha … but Liam and Leo still haven’t told these two beautiful ladies who they really are.  These ladies are equally as smitten with the boys and are each holding a little something back themselves.  Will “lies by omission” interrupt the bliss these two couples have found?  Come find out with me!

 The Road Less Traveled – What I never knew I always wanted https://ao719.tumblr.com/post/183227431521/the-road-less-traveled-what-i-never-knew-i by @ao719 Noelle and Liam have been through a lot. In the conclusion of this delightful series, all the walls have been torn down, Liam and Noelle are married, more kids are on the way and we get to see Liam enjoying the family he truly deserves.

 The Mark https://ownworldresident.tumblr.com/post/183200373794/the-mark-chapter-2-the-mark by @ownworldresident

Liam has finally met a woman who captivates his mind … and she’s back and trying to kill him.   Anna surprises herself, realizing how often her mind keeps going back to this one man … but back to work she must go.  Come see what happens when these two go head to head.

 Learning to Love Again https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/178641518985/master-list by @likethetailofacomet

Are you a Drake fan? If so, YOU MUST READ THIS SERIES!!!! Are you a Liam fan?  YOU MUST READ THIS SERIES!  Liam is a saint in this series.  Drake is passionate and emotional and, of course, a bit of his signature grumpy-pants. Congratulations in finishing this series @likethetailofacomet!

 One Handsome Devil Chapter 41 https://onehandsomedevil-trr.tumblr.com/post/183207825619/one-handsome-devil-trr-chapter-41-wine-and-dine by @onehandsomedevil-trr 41 chapters and still going strong!  This novel may not be short but it is delightful. Catch up!  In this latest chapter, Nicholas (Liam) sets his sights on another woman.  

 Finding the One: A Royal Mate https://hopefulmoonobjectmasterlist.tumblr.com/post/181412878280/finding-the-one-a-royal-mate by @hopefulmoonobject

Words cannot express how much I loved this whole series!  This author will have you fanning yourself because of the mouth on Liam, she will have you scared that main characters aren’t going to make it, she will have you screaming at the bad guys and cheering for the good.  Read it.

 You, the Lion https://ownworldresident.tumblr.com/post/183185718759/you-the-lion-masterlist by @ownworldresident

In this amazing series, the twists will surprise you, the romance is heightened, and the writing is superb. I found this late – but if you haven’t found it  yet – now’s the time.  Enjoy! I think I binged the whole series in 4 or 5 days.  If it weren’t for work, it would have taken much less time.

 Southern Charm https://traeumerinwitzhelden.tumblr.com/post/177525366533/masterlist by @traeumerinwitzhelden

In this freakin AMAZING crossover with Sawyer, Drake and MC – you will fall in love with both Drake and Sawyer.  Your heart will break for each of these characters.  You’ll laugh with each of them.  *Spoiler alert* Drake gets the girl and Sawyer meets a doctor named Meg. Happy Ending for all!

 Southern Charm Deleted Scene https://traeumerinwitzhelden.tumblr.com/post/183051748528/southern-charm-a-deleted-scene by @traeumerinwitzhelden

Drake gets a dog. Enough said.  If this doesn’t make you want to read this, nothing will.

 An Heir – Part 48 https://sawyeroakleyscowboyhat.tumblr.com/post/183008676284/an-heir-part-48 by @sawyeroakleyscowboyhat

Liam and Viktoria have been through a lot.  The happy couple is having a child.  Max is trying to convince the couple to name the baby after him.  Can’t blame him ;)

 The Way to Love Me http://the-everlasting-dream.tumblr.com/post/181772641780/an-after-careful-consultation-with-captain-of and http://the-everlasting-dream.tumblr.com/post/182890138825/the-way-to-love-me-part-22-drake by @the-everlasting-dream

Have you heard of the book, “The Five Love Languages”?  If not, you should go read it.  It won’t take long.  In this 2 part-er @the-everlasting-dream connects the love languages to Drake x Elizabeth. My heart melted with cuteness.

 Their First Valentine’s – Part 2 https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/182882058871/their-first-valentines-part-2-drake-x-mc-x by @drakewalkerwhipped

100% fluff and smut from my favorite thrupple.  Their love is #relationship goals.

 Break https://kennaxval.tumblr.com/post/182835619883/break-maxwell-x-oc by @kennaxval

In this cutest of fics, Maxwell’s cavalier use of words causes a deep wound.  This story will remind you to check in with the day-to-day even while you strive towards a bigger goal.  

 America’s Most Eligible

 In the Cards  http://choicesfanfic.com/content/the-devil-inside/ – series by @lizeboredom

Honestly, in game of choices AME is not my fav.  However, what @lizeboredom has done with this series is amazing!  In this series, our MC has a lot of character, a very difficult past, and an even more difficult love for a villain.  Who is playing who?  Can love shine through when everyone’s intent is to win a game?  I honestly don’t know, but I cannot wait to find out.  Oh, and don’t worry, there’s like a virus or something in @lizeboredom’s computer, which is why Minah’s name keeps coming out Myrah. The virus isn’t catching though.

 Desire and Decorum

 Diagnonses and Dalliances https://hellospunkiebrewster.tumblr.com/post/183298192012/diagnoses-and-dalliances-part-8 – by @hellospunkiebrewster

I am living for this slow burn!  We’re 8 chapters in and Ernest and Alex haven’t even met in person yet!  Ugh!  But they are in love and chat every day.  Sometimes they even talk through this amazing device called a telephone ;)  Our two love birds should be meeting soon – catch up and let’s cheer them on together!  Oh, and I cannot wait to see how Dr. Richard’s is going to get his comeuppance.  And please, please, please do not kill the father @hellospunkiebrewster!

 Flowers https://hellospunkiebrewster.tumblr.com/post/183189487767/2-flowers-sinclaire-x-mc-march-challenge by @hellospunkiebrewster

Ernest arrives in Bath and finds Emmeline at an inopportune time.  Their reactions and their conversation gave me all the feels!  You should read this beautiful one shot that had me holding my breath!

 A Garden You Never Get to See http://indescribablechoices.tumblr.com/post/183010819870/a-garden-you-never-get-to-see by @indescribablechoices

This series duo brought tears to my eyes.  The story is heartwarming and heart breaking.  Plus, anything that is inspired by the music of Hamilton is AWESOME in my book!

 A Courtesan of Rome

 The Other Woman https://wughhumans.tumblr.com/post/183323687328/via-the-other-woman-part-vii-warnings-swearing by @wughhumans

Holy crap this author makes me cheer for all the wrong things!  Anthony has never been hotter – or sweeter … but he’s married and cheating and the cheating is HOT and sexy and insatiable.  I’m not even sure what a happy ending would look like, but I am so on board to find out what comes next!

 Open Heart

 Friendly Distance https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/183266836133/pairing-dr-bryce-lahela-x-mc-dr-blake by @tmarie82

Dr. Bryce Lahela is more than just a pretty face and a tease.  He has some real depth.  If you’re like T and I and you’re not immediately sold on Dr. Lahela – it’s time to start to fall in love through this work.

 Admit http://mariamulroney.tumblr.com/post/183239718550/admit by @mariamulroney

When Dr. Bryce Lahela starts pulling away from Dr. Park – Dr. Park throws herself into her work and then into some drinks.  Will it be Dr. Ramsey or Dr. Lahela who helps Dr. Park make it home okay? Find the answer to this question and to why Dr. Lahela is pulling away in this delightful fic.

 Friends with Benefits http://angstymarshmallow.tumblr.com/post/183178965439/friends-with-benefits-bryce-x-mc by @angstymarshmallow

What are we going to do with Dr. Maci and Dr. Bryce?  They’re both on the same page and unable (unwilling?) to voice their feelings aloud. After reading this, please help me beg @angstymarshmallow for more!

 Perfect Match

 Realization https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/183178196593/pairing-damien-x-mc-camille-park-book-perfect by @tmarie82

Take a trip down memory lane as Damien recounts the moment he realized he was in love with Camille. See the moment when Damien becomes hopeful for a better future.  

 Real Memories https://kennaxval.tumblr.com/post/182903615473/real-memories-hayden-x-mc-nsfw by @kennaxval

Hayden is grappling with the knowledge that her memories aren’t real life experiences of her past. Kai helps her understand the importance of new memories.  

 Red Carpet Diaries

 Simply Between Us http://angstymarshmallow.tumblr.com/post/183135543979/simply-between-us-part-8-thomas-hunt-x-mc-nsw by @angstymarshmallow

I love Hunt.  I love how @angstymarshmallow writes Hunt.  I love real and flawed characters who can find love.  If you like characters with depth and strong writing – read this series! I’m not sure which was longer – the story itself or my comments.  Haha, the story is longer but boy did I write a lot in response!

 Ride or Die

 Defensive Driving https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/183134105193/defensive-driving-colt-x-mc by @walkerismychoice

When Logan is acting like an ass, Colt steps in and gives MC driving lessons. If you love a slow burn and some sexual tension – this is the fic for you!

 The Freshman

 Battles https://littlegreenmoo.tumblr.com/post/182680772730/chris-x-mc-one-more-drink-shes-mine-the by @littlegreenmoo

Chris and Rhea are going through a divorce and no one is actually handling that really well.  Their poor daughter is very stuck in the middle. The drama is high in this series – but I trust that @littlegreenmoo will help these two find their way back together … right @littlegreenmoo???

 The Freshman: Book 2-11d https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/183016527541/the-freshman-book-2-11d-nsfw by @maxattack-powell

I didn’t originally love Chris when I read The Freshman.  However, after reading this series I can’t imagine loving anyone else.  Learn the hidden depths of Chris, watch Chris and MC fall in love and then become #relationship goals, and learn why I LOVE ETHAN!!  I am the President of the Ethan Fan Club and not even the creator of Ethan can take that away from me!  Luv ya @maxattack-powell!

 The Quarterback https://elles-choices.tumblr.com/post/180201737699/masterlist-tag-list by @elles-choices

Our favorite quaterback is getting out of a very long but very toxic relationship with Becca, but Becca is having a very hard time letting go.  Laura and Chris have found each other, but will Becca’s schemes interfere?

 The Heist

 Golden https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/182860112388/pairing-barrett-carlisle-x-book-the-heist by @tmarie82

Barrett Carlisle likes to be in control at work and in the bedroom.  Find out who he likes to control in this delicious fic!

 If you’ve gotten to the end of this review – you are an amazing human being.

 This post represents over 220 fics.

 The talent in this fandom is beyond impressive and I am so thankful for all of you.

 Have a great night all!

[eadanga]

Falling in Love With You Part 7 (NSFW)

Summary: Chris is a rich guy trapped in an awful engagement. He meets MC a young medical student and falls for her. Can Chris get out of this engagement to be with the one her loves?

A/N: This series is for @maxattack-powell​ one of the winners of my 400 followers giveaway hope you enjoy this and thanks for participating.

Chris stood at his desk working on papers Baxter runs over to him he smiles “Hey there how’s it going?” Chris chuckles and ruffles his ears as he barks happily “Sounds like you’re just fine”. There is a knock on his door and he goes to answer it he sighs as he sees his father standing in the doorway “What?”

Frank steps around him and enters the apartment “This is your new place?”

“Yes it is”

“Are you trying to ruin this family’s reputation? What if the press saw you here? Are you trying to disgrace us? Chris it’s time for you to come home”

“That’s not your decision to make”

“Chris you are the heir to Powell industries it’s time you started acting like it”

“And it’s time you knew that I don’t care about that it’s time for you to stop telling me how to run my life!”

“Don’t test my patience Christopher now you listen-”

“No! You listen! I’m tired of you guys interfering all the time! It’s my life not yours! I will not live my life for the sake of the family reputation anymore and I won’t marry that bitch you call Scarlett! Even if we do make it down the aisle I won’t say I do”

“Chris how dare you?! You’ve never acted like this before?! Is it that girl you’ve been hanging around with? I knew she was a bad influence you will not see her again!”

“I’ll hang with whoever I want and she has nothing to do with this! Now get out!”

“You’re a disgrace” Frank walks out and slams the door

Chris rolls his eyes and rubs Baxter’s belly Well there goes my morning.

****

MC places some food on the bed “Here you go mom I made you some soup”

“Thanks sweetie” She smiles “It’s nice to see you at home”

“Yeah I can take some days off since I earned that money for you”

“I was starting to worry about you. You were working so hard and been going to school I was afraid you’ll wear yourself out”

“Yeah I realize now I should have done that”

“No you shouldn’t” She grins “Now tell me all about this Chris guy you’ve been seeing”

“Oh” MC blushes “Well we’re just friends but I really like him but he’s supposed to marry someone else”

“Well you shouldn’t let that stop you if you want to be with him go ahead”

“Thanks mom I will you should get some rest”

“Thank you sweetheart”

MC left the room and went to the kitchen where she found Kevin in the kitchen “Hey lil bro I’m gonna head to bank watch mom for me will you?” “Ok”

“Don’t play video games all day”

“Yes mom”

MC rolls her eyes as he chuckles. She heads out to the bank and gets money the heads to the doctor’s office. The doctor smiles as she enters “Hello MC what can I do for you?”

“Just dropping off a payment for my mom”

“Payment?”

“Yeah earned enough to cover for the whole year”

“But I thought you already paid”

“What do you mean?”

“Didn’t you send your friend in here to pay for everything?”

“Friend? What friend?”

“A Chris Powell”

MC’s eyes went wide “Chris was here?”

“Yes he came in here two weeks ago and paid for everything he told me not to tell anyone but I thought you knew”

MC shook as she stood “Um thanks doctor” She quickly headed out and drove to Chris’s apartment.

****

Chris relaxed on the couch as he watched tv a knocking came on his door. He groaned I was just enjoying my day off He rolled off the couch and went to open the door his eyes widen in surprise as he saw MC standing there “MC”

“Hi Chris may I come in?”

He smiles “You don’t even have to ask” He stepped aside and let her in. They sat on the couch “You didn’t tell me you were coming” He smirks “So what brings you here today?”

“Well I just went to the doctor to pay for my mom’s medical bills and he told me you came in and paid for it”

“Ah told him not to say anything but yeah I did”

“Why did you do that?”

“Because I didn’t want you to keep worrying about all those bills. I mean you work long hours everyday and you have school it’s not healthy for you to be doing so many things at once eventually you’ll-”

“Wear myself out? My mom said the same thing this morning”

“And she’s right” He places a hand on her shoulder “I’m sorry I went behind your back but I knew you wouldn’t take the money and I only did it because I care about you”

“I understand Chris how did you find out where to pay?”

“I talked to your dad about it and he gave me all the information”

“Figures he knew that’s my dad for you”

Chris chuckles “He’s a great guy”

“Yeah and thank you Chris you’re the best”

“Anything I can do to help and that 50 grand you earned use it on yourself buy yourself something nice”

MC smiles “Ok I will”

Chris smiles “Good” He sighs “I hope your morning was better than mine”

“What happened?”

“My dad showed up here and was demanding I come home but I stood up to him”

“I’m glad you did”

“Yeah I’m still looking for ways to end this engagement but don’t worry I’ll get out of it”

“I’ll help in anyway I can”

Chris smiles “Thanks” He kisses her deeply his arms go around her waist. Then he pulls back with a smirk “One second MC”

He gets up and walks to the bedroom

****

MC smiles and blushes as she waits for him I wonder what’s he’s doing. He comes back a few minutes later and extends his hand “Let me show you something”

MC takes his hand and follow him to the bedroom. There were rose pedals scattered on the bed, soft music playing, and a bottle of wine with two glasses on the nightstand.

“Chris…”

“You did say you wanted it to be super romantic”

“And it is I love it”

“I’m glad” He kisses her deeply as his arms wrap around her waist. MC’s arms wrap around his neck as his hands move everywhere. She pulls away to lift up his shirt and her eyes marvel his chest

“I was always curious about what was under that shirt”

He smirks “Yeah? And what your review?”

“100 out of 100”

He chuckles as he kisses her again he pulls her shirt off and kisses down her neck as he mumbles “You’re so beautiful”

He lifts her up and carries her over to the bed. He unclasps her bra and suck on her nipples as she moans. He kisses down her body pulling off her jeans and underwear. His hand go up and down her clit “Fuck you’re so wet for me”

He kisses back up her body and whispers “Do you want me?”

“Mmm yes Chris”

“Tell me how much you want me”

“I want you so bad Chris I want you deep inside of me”

Chris grins the unbuckles his pants and pulls them off. He slowly enters her as she moans loudly

“Chris!”

“Damn you’re so tight”

He thrust into her slowly the begins to go faster as her moans get louder.

“Chris! Oh God you feel you good don’t stop”

“Wasn’t planning on it” He continues to thrust then growls “Come for me MC”

“Chris!”

She comes and he continues to thrust till he finds his release. He pulls out of her and rolls off her as they both breathe heavily. He smiles and wraps his arms around her “That was even better than my dreams”

“You’ve been dreaming about this?”

“Only every night”

MC laughs “Didn’t know you wanted me so badly”

“I want you more than anything” He kisses down her neck “I want you to be mine”

“Chris…”

“I don’t care about Scarlett or what my parents think I just care about you. I think I’ve fallen for you MC”

“Chris…I’ve fallen for you too”

Chris grins “I’m so happy to hear you say that” He holds her for a moment “Are you ok with this? Meeting in secret till I find a way out of this engagement?”

“As long as I get to see you I’m ok with it”

“Good cause I won’t marry her nor do I want to I’ll find a way to get away from her”

“I believe you will Chris but for now I just want to be in your arms”

Chris smiles as he tightens his arms around her and pulls her closer

****

Frank sits down crossing his arms as Barb looks at him stunned “What is wrong with our son?”

“It’s that girl he never acted like that till she come along”

“We have to get her away from him we can’t have her ruining his life”

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If Only:  Chapter 18

DISCLAIMER:  All characters belong to Pixelberry Studios, except characters unique to my story.  Those belong to me. ;)

PAIRINGS:  Liam x Riley (MC)

SUMMARY:  And they're off to Cordonia!  Riley and Liam have a heart to heart about what to expect when they arrive in Cordonia.

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11/25/2019 - It has been over a year since I updated If Only, and I feel absolutely sick about it.  I apologize for not updating as regularly as I should have.  I came back in May with the intent to keep writing and bring new stories to the fandom, but my world got rocked with a horrible family situation.  I went MIA initially because I had a family emergency come up in September of 2018.  My father was diagnosed with stage 4 esophageal cancer.  He became stable at the beginning of May which prompted me to feel a bit reinvigorated to write again.  We were thrown for a loop when he passed away suddenly and unexpectedly at the end of May after a brief period of stabilization. His kidneys shut down and he went into respiratory failure.  Ironically, the cancer may have weakened him, but it wasn't his cause of death.  I was a wreck.  I've slowly gone through the grieving process and wanted to try my hand at writing again.  I can't promise you I'll be consistent, but I'm going to try. Thank you all for the amazing support and thoughts.  Thank you for your sweet reviews.  I will be going through all of them. <3

Chapter 18

Riley was certain of one thing – she would always find herself awestruck at being able to fly on a private airplane.  She hadn’t traveled all that much before, but when she did, it was a pain.  The astronomical cost of airline tickets, the long lines, the long list of TSA security no-nos that she could never seem to grasp . . . all of it made the whole prospect of travelling more of a nuisance than anything else.  Traveling with Liam, on the other hand, had been nothing but a dream since the moment they got to the airport.  Liam once again took charge guiding her to where they needed to check in.  Things at the airport had gone just as smoothly as they had when they left Las Vegas.  Actually, it had gone even smoother than Las Vegas since they were flying out internationally and that terminal had not been nearly as crowded as the domestic terminals.  Liam once again breezed by as Riley trailed behind him, still unaccustomed to the life of private jet-setting.  She still found the entire thing to be a bit surreal.  What normally would have been a two hour process had only taken them twenty minutes.  Apparently, the life of royalty had some major perks.

A little over an hour later, Riley found herself sitting on the private plane that was scheduled to take them to Cordonia.  She stared absently out of the plane’s window as she contemplated how differently her life had ended up than what she had planned out over the years.  For one, she never, ever saw herself sitting on a private plane as they waited for the all clear for takeoff.  For another, she never thought she’d get married to a complete stranger on a whim – in Vegas, no less.  Then again, she also never thought she’d ever meet someone like Liam.  She bit her lip lightly as she watched him joke around with the flight crew.  Apparently, he knew all of them quite well.  They weren’t treating him like a prince, but rather an old friend who they were excited to see.  But that was the thing about Liam – despite his royal roots, he seemed like such an average, ordinary, everyday guy.  He was genuinely a good guy - somebody you could sit around and have hours of conversation with and never got bored.  She smiled and watched as he fawned over pictures of one of the flight attendant’s newborn grand-daughter.  He never fell short of amazing her.  She had always pictured herself winding up with some sort of science geek, who, like her, had spent years focusing on his education to land the perfect job.  Liam was completely different.  The connection they shared was one in a million.  The time they spent together alone in her apartment had further solidified that fact.  She’d have been foolish to let him slip away from her in Vegas, and if she had, she’d likely never find that sort of connection with someone else ever again.  Their relationship wasn’t something that you could just dismiss as being a spur of the moment, one-time fling.  He made her feel alive again, and she loved how he had forced her to reevaluate the life she was living, and helped her to see that none of it was what she wanted.  It felt as if they had known each other for years instead of only a few days.  There was just something about Liam that brought out her desire for an exciting new adventure.  For the first time in years, she didn’t have a plan, and it scared the shit out of her.  There was no denying the fact that she felt like she was swimming in the deep end of the pool without any sort of lifejacket.  But, for some reason, she was okay with that, because she knew she’d have Liam by her side to help keep her afloat.  

Riley’s smile grew as he chatted with a different flight attendant about their travel plans when they got to Cordonia.  He was going on and on about how he wanted to take her to their country house to show her the orchards of apple trees.  She looked around the bustling plane – apart from the three flight attendants she had seen, she had counted four more flight attendants and two pilots on their flight.  She shook her head in disbelief.  It was crazy to think that all nine members of the flight crew were aboard just for them.  It was hard to believe that this was her life now.  

Liam grasped one of the male attendants on the shoulder as he headed back over to where she was sitting.  “You look rather deep in thought,” he murmured as he sidled into the seat next to her.

She smiled softly.  “Just thinking about what a whirlwind this has all been.  I guess it’s just hard to believe that we won’t have to listen to crying babies or fighting for space for our carry-ons in the overhead compartment.”

“I admit, those are things I have never had to worry about when I traveled,” he smirked.  “But I can imagine those sorts of things would be rather inconvenient.”

“Exceptionally so,” she chuckled.  “You’re so amazing with people, Liam.  The way you talk to them and treat them with the utmost respect regardless of your status,” Riley looked at him in admiration.  “You’re just a genuine, sweet man,” she said, clasping her hand in his.

He looked at her adoration.  “I’ve known all of them for years – since I was old enough to travel with my father,” he smiled.  “They’re like another set of family members.  The older woman I was talking to?  Dolores?  She just welcomed her first granddaughter.  My father gave her some time off to spend with the new baby,” he explained.  “Being royal doesn’t make you any less human.  Having compassion and being respectful are just decent things to do,” he explained as he squeezed her hand back.

“Well, you don’t see a lot of that in New York,” Riley mused.  “And I’ll be honest, people can become a bit snooty when power goes to their head.  Trust me.”  She thought of the many rude people she encountered as she walked along the streets of New York City.  There was always some guy in a total rush with a cell phone pressed against his ear and a briefcase swinging from his hand pushing his way down the sidewalk trying to get the next available cab.  New York people were savage.

Liam chuckled at her observation.  “Quite true, love.  I assure you, that is just how I was raised.  I just couldn’t live with myself if I treated anyone with anything but the respect that they deserve.”

“You are one in a million, Liam Rys.” She smiled broadly, squeezing his hand tightly.

“As are you, Riley Rys,” he winked at her.  

She blushed as she changed the subject.  “So, do we have any layovers or are we landing straight in Cordonia?”

He shook his head.  “No stopovers, that’s not how private jets work, love.  The flight should take about eight hours tops,” he explained.  “We’ll be arriving in Cordonia at around 7:30 in the morning.”

“Wow, that early?” Riley asked.  

“The time difference will take a bit getting used to, especially since you’ve lived in New York your whole life,” he explained.  “The early arrival will be beneficial to us, I’m sure.  I doubt the press will have caught wind that we’re arriving that early.  It might give us enough time to get you to the palace without the mad rush of press on our tails,” he reasoned.

“The press?” She asked, her eyes widening.

Just as Liam was about to explain further, the pilot came over the loudspeaker announcing that they would be preparing for takeoff.  Riley inhaled deeply as she felt the power and speed of the plane push forward as it readied itself for take off.  She was momentarily distracted from the idea of the press and what exactly he meant about them being on their tails.

When they reached a comfortable elevation, the captain came over the loudspeaker again.

“Your Majesties, thank you for joining us this afternoon.  We expect the flight to take roughly eight hours, and we are expecting clear skies and smooth travel.  Should you need anything, please let any one of our staff attendants know and they will be glad to assist you with whatever you may need,” the voice boomed.

“Was he talking to me, too?” She asked, her eyes widening once more.

“Well, yes, love.  You are the future Queen of Cordonia.  It is only right that he address you as such,” he explained.

Riley knew that marrying Liam automatically meant that she was royalty, too, but having someone actually refer to her as one was crazy.  

“Your Majesties, would you like a beverage?  Wine?  Or champagne perhaps?” Dolores, the attendant Liam had been talking to earlier asked.

“Love?” Liam asked.

“Um, maybe just some water?” She asked quietly.

“Of course, Your Majesty.  Prince Liam?”

“I’m fine, Dolores,” he smiled brightly at the older woman.  “Maybe when we have our meals I’ll have a bit of scotch,” he added.

“Of course, Your Majesty,” she acquiesced as she poured Riley a glass of water.

“This is surreal,” she murmured, mostly to herself.

“Love, this is what you have to look forward to each time you travel,” he laughed.  “With our busy schedules, it only seems right that we travel as comfortable as possible.  After all, we don’t know when we’ll have a spare moment to ourselves again,” he said knowingly.

She nodded nervously, her hands fiddling about in her lap.  That’s actually what was worrying her.  What was life going to be like now that they were heading out of their Las Vegas and New York bubbles?  

Liam leaned over, clasping his hands around hers and smiled.  “You’re fine, love,” he murmured encouragingly.  “Now that I have you held captive in an airplane . . . ” he trailed off, eyeing her a bit nervously.

“What?” She asked; worry once again coursed through her body.

“Are you ready to talk about what you’ve signed up for?” He shot her a nervous smile.  He looked as if he were waiting for her to jump ship . . . or in this case, plane . . . any second.

She eyed him suspiciously, taking a large gulp of her cold water.  “You act as if I just signed up to go to war or something,” she chuckled anxiously.  “I know you don’t want to scare me, Liam, but I think I can handle whatever they’re going to throw my way,” she said.  Think being the operative word.  She talked a good game and tried her best to calm the quaking nerves inside of her, but in truth, she was absolutely petrified.  She had no clue how to be a princess . . . let alone a queen when that time inevitably arrived.  How on earth was she going to manage it all while still getting to know her new husband?

“I don’t mean to sound so cryptic,” he explained apologetically.  “I suppose I just wanted to prepare you for what might happen when we arrive,” he said vaguely.

“Are you expecting a grand welcome?” She arched an eyebrow.

“Well, possibly,” he admitted.

Her eyebrow arched a bit higher.  “Oh,” she said nervously.

“To be quite honest, I’m not sure what to expect.”  He ran his hand nervously over the back of his neck, and looked at her bashfully.  “Our early arrival does buy us some time as I mentioned, but I’m honestly not too sure what the Cordonian people have been told.  I’m not sure if they’ve publically announced the end of my engagement to Olivia,” he said uncertainly.  “In fact, I’m not sure if they even announced that we’ve gotten married.”

“And if they have?” Riley asked.

“If they have, then you can expect the press to be hounding us until they get a printable story,” he sighed.  “It’s the nature of the press, love.  They have a hunger for a scandal . . . the more prominent the person, the more desirable the story,” he said glumly.

“And being the heir to the Cordonian throne, any story about you would be explosive,” Riley said, understanding where he was going with his explanation.  The press wouldn’t let the story rest until they had every single detail about the end of his engagement to Olivia and their subsequent marriage in Vegas.  They were in for one hell of a welcome if that were the case.  She shook her head hesitantly.  The idea of being hounded by the press wasn’t something she was particularly looking forward to.  She had never paid attention to those sordid, trashy tabloids back home.  She had always thought that it was grossly negligent to publish half-facts and over-exaggerations.  This was the conversation that she had been worried about.  Up to this point, everything had been a vague and distant idea that she had formulated inside of her head, but as Cordonia loomed closer and closer in front of them, at some point they’d have to discuss the elephant in the room, and apparently, Liam had decided that “some point” was right then and there.

“I wish I could say that this will be easy, love . . . but it won’t.  I wish I could take the burden of the scrutiny of the press and the people and my family away so that you would never have to endure a single unpleasant moment.  But having lived this life in the limelight for as long as I have . . . I know that many will have . . . reservations,” he explained hesitantly.

“Reservations?” She asked, slightly confused.

“They may publish some untrue things about you . . . they may suspect we got pregnant out of wedlock, hence the quickie marriage . . . they may even publish some nasty, untrue remarks about your friends and family . . .” he trailed off.

She winced a little.  She had never really had a thick skin growing up.  She had always been sensitive, and she didn’t like to be teased or taunted.  The idea of having a whole nation scrutinize her every move, made her physically ill.  The idea of having someone critique how she acted, what she wore, who she spent time with . . . it all felt too much.  But to have that extend to her family and friends?  She couldn’t imagine dealing with that on top of everything else.

Liam continued.  “Olivia was a well-liked Duchess, and although the marriage was arranged, I’d imagine that many may not take kindly to the broken engagement . . . and our subsequent union,” he reasoned.  

“Like Bertrand,” she arched a questioning eyebrow.

“Yes, like Bertrand.  Some of the people of Cordonia are traditionalists.  They may not be so welcoming to the fact that I have married someone not of the country.  Not of Europe for that matter,” he explained.  “But I have no doubt that once they get to know you . . . the you I fell in love with . . . all of their reservations will disappear,” he said optimistically.

“I hope so,” she said meekly.  “I know it’s going to be tough . . . I just don’t want people to hate me, you know?”

“They won’t hate you, love,” he chuckled.  “How would they hate the most amazing girl I’ve ever met?”

Riley sighed, leaning closer into him.  “You were engaged, Liam.  To a woman you have had a friendship with for most of your life.  Are you telling me that she’ll warmly open her arms and welcome me to the palace?”

Liam grimaced in reply.  “Well, obviously not.  Olivia will prove to be a difficulty.  Of that, I’m quite sure.”

“And your parents?”  Riley added.  “You got into quite the tiff with your father before we left.”

“As did you,” he reminded her.  “My father and stepmother will come around.  Once they realize that Cordonia’s future will not be in any jeopardy and that the monarchy will continue, they will warm to the idea of our marriage.  It will take time, love.”

She nodded.  She sucked in a long breath.  She needed to be strong.  As long as she had Liam by her side, she knew they’d be able to overcome whatever difficulties that were headed their way.

“We’re going to get through all of this together, Riley.  I will never forget how much you’re giving up for me . . . for us,” he said passionately.

She leaned in for a soft kiss.  Liam deepened the kiss before pulling himself away.  “I have such a hard time controlling myself around you,” he said breathily.

“Let me distract you.  Tell me about Cordonia.  Not about the press or the bad stuff we might encounter,” she shook her head.  “If I’m moving to a brand new country, I should know everything there is about it.  The internet wasn’t too helpful.  I guess it’s so small that not a lot of people actually know a whole lot about it,” she frowned.

He nodded.  “It is small, but I assure you it has a rich history.  A history that you and I are now a part of,” he smiled.  “I’ll happily answer any questions you’d like about Cordonia, but I think that the best way to get to know our beautiful country is to experience it first hand in person,” he said.

“I’m looking forward to seeing everything,” she agreed. After a brief moment, she asked another question. “So, can I get a job when we get there?  Or is that sort of not allowed.  I just don’t want people thinking I’m some sort of gold-digger.  Your friends already accused me of being a crown-chaser, and I don’t want people thinking that I don’t want to work . . . because I kind of do?  I mean, I don’t really know what I could do considering I have a degree in Biology   . . . and I’m a medical school drop out . . . but there has to be something right?” she rambled out

Liam stared at her as if she had three heads.  She supposed it was a silly question.  Did royalty work?  She tried to think back on the lives of various royal figures - did Princess Diana have a job? What about Princess Eugenie?  How about Duchess Kate?  Surely an independent woman such as Duchess Megan Markle kept a job?  She frowned, she was being ridiculous.  Of course they didn’t have jobs.  They were too busy jet setting alongside their husbands.  She frowned at the thought.  She had never seen herself as being a woman who relied on a man to do all of the hard work.  She hadn’t liked when Liam’s friends had thought of her as being a crown-chaser, and she certainly didn’t want the rest of the public thinking the same thing.  Shouldn’t she be able to prove that she’s way more than just some woman that Liam met in Las Vegas?  She wanted to contribute in someway . . . even if she didn’t know exactly how she could contribute.

“You don’t have to work, love.  I told you that.  You will want for nothing the moment you set foot inside the palace,” he assured her.

“That’s such a strange concept,” she frowned.  “Not working . . .I mean, I went to college, got my degree, held quite a few jobs over the years, and now I just . . . do nothing?” she pursed her lips.  “I don’t want people to think that I married you for anything other than love,” she said softly.

“Being Queen is a job in itself Riley,” he explained.  “You’ll be expected to plan social functions, attend political meetings, coordinate various social programs, meet with different international figures . . . although the compensation process might be quite different than what you’re used to, you will very much have a job in Cordonia,” He rationalized.  

She nodded, although she still had a hard time wrapping her head around the whole concept.  “So the whole social functions thing . . . is that like party planning?”

“Oh, love.  It is far more than just a party.  Why don’t I give you a brief history of Cordonia and some perspective on the monarchy and perhaps then you’ll understand a bit more about how important the social season is to the Cordonian people?”

She nodded eagerly, sitting up in her chair.  “I’d like that a lot actually.  I feel like I’m jumping out of a plane without a parachute when it comes to knowing anything about Cordonia.  I really don’t want my first impression with your family to be me clueless about the country I’m now a resident of,” she gave a nervous chuckle.

A few hours later, Liam had recounted a not-so-brief history of everything about Cordonia.  Riley had no idea how Liam was able to remember all of it.  She guessed having grown up there gave him an upper hand, but still.  He was able to recount every single monarch and every single duchy that.  He could even rattle off population stats that all sounded like a bunch of mumble jumble to her.

“Lords and Ladies . . . palaces  . . . waltzes . . . balls . . . court . . . my head is spinning, Liam,” she frowned.  She needed some aspirin, or maybe a stiff drink.  She hadn’t expected her Cordonia 101 class with Liam to be easy, but she had hoped that she’d be able to at least glean some information to help her survive her first few days there.  Instead, she felt like she had nothing but information overload.  She couldn’t tell you who anyone was or what city was what because all of the names and places started to merge with one another after a while.

“I know it’s a lot to take in, but you’re doing remarkably well,” he said encouragingly.  “Hopefully some of the notes you took will help,” he smiled.

Yes, she had taken notes, but she had no clue what was important and what wasn’t.  She hadn’t even known Cordonia even existed before meeting Liam.  Now, she suddenly needed to know everything there was to know about the tiny country.  How on earth was she going to remember everything?  

“Trust me, love.  In time, all of this information will become second nature,” Liam beamed at her.

She snorted.  She didn’t want to tell him that she was more of a math and sciences sort of girl as opposed to being a history buff.  She couldn’t imagine a time when all of these Cordonian factoids would become second nature.

“Here.  Let’s test some of your knowledge now.  I’ll give you an easy one,” he said excitedly.  “What is the capital of Cordonia?” Liam asked expectedly.

Riley licked her lips nervously.  Her eyes scanned the notes in front of her, but she could barely make out half of her short hand.  She paused, uncertainly.  “Valtoria,” she half-asked.

“Correct,” he smiled at her proudly as he rubbed his thumb back and forth over her hand.  “You don’t give yourself enough credit.  You’ll have Cordonian culture down in no time.”

She smiled tightly in response.  She hoped he was right.  She had been taking notes off and on during their discussion, but she didn’t really know how it would help her if she got ambushed by the press.  It’s not like she could pull out a set of flash cards when she was getting interviewed.  She didn’t think that’d earn her any brownie points with the Cordonian public.  

Liam continued to quiz her on questions during the last few hours of the flight, and Riley admittedly was starting to remember some of the major things that Liam had taught her, but she still felt that all of the information she had just gained were whirling inside of her head like a tornado.  She had never wanted to excel at something so much in her life.  She felt like she was back in school, trying to cram in as much information as possible.  She just hoped it stuck.

“What if I mess up?” She asked worriedly.  “It took me years to even learn all the capitols of the fifty states,” she frowned.  “And even then I still managed to goof up every now and then,” she said, her voice laced with a bit of panic.

“Riley, love, you’re a natural at this.  You may not be Cordonian by birth, but we will have you be a star pupil on Cordonian history in no time,” he said encouragingly.  “Like I said, you’re already doing so well.”

“I don’t know how I’ll remember all of this,” she said faintly.  “There’s a reason why I went to medical school.  Liberal arts wasn’t exactly my strong suit,” she joked.

“I’ll be there to guide you, and my friends, once they get to know you, will be more than happy to provide you with some help along the way.  I happen to know that Bertrand majored in history at our university,” he said.  “I’d be happy to talk to him about perhaps giving you some private lessons on Cordonian culture,” he offered.  “He’d actually be well-suited to help you adjust to court life.”

“Bertrand  . . . yeah, I don’t think he’ll be very much inclined to help me considering he wanted to have our marriage annulled,” she sighed.  “He also seemed to think that I would be the demise of Cordonia.”

“Well, yes, remember, Bertrand is a traditionalist.  His duty to country comes before all else.  But regardless, he’s still my friend, and as such, he’ll want me to be happy.  If I ask him to help you adjust to court life, he will do it.  Begrudgingly at first, but after he sees how well suited you are as my wife, he’ll come around.”

Riley sighed.  What an optimist.  As much as she wanted to believe that Bertrand would help her, she believed that he’d probably eagerly wait for the moment for her to fall flat on her face.  She was about to ask Liam a few more questions about Cordonia when she felt a slight rumble under her feet.  She felt the plane begin to descend, and looked at Liam a bit concerned.  “What was that?” She asked in alarm.

“We’re getting closer,” he explained as his eyes peered out the window.  “It looks like we’re descending a bit to prepare for landing,” he reasoned.  His eyes grew a bit brighter as he stared out the window.  “Well, Mrs. Rys . . . if you look out to your left you’ll catch your first glimpse of your new home,” Liam beamed proudly.

Riley leaned against the window, her eyes gazing out into the distance below her.  She could just make out the aerial view of the country.  A million thoughts ran through her mind.  They were here.  They were finally here.   Riley gazed out at the shimmering blue ocean below her.  Cordonia’s coastline was breathtaking.  The little information she found on Google did nothing to prepare her for the sheer beauty of the country below her.  

She turned to Liam in awe, and he greeted her gaze with a beaming smile.  All it took for her worries to wane was a single look at Liam.  She knew this move would be hard, and she knew that she would be faced with a lot of scrutiny, and although she still had reservations about what would be like as an outsider, she knew that as long as Liam stood by her side, she’d somehow manage to pull through all of this.  

“That’s our country,” he said, leaning over her, pressing a soft kiss on the temple of her forehead.

“Our?” She whispered, still a bit overwhelmed about the reality of finally being in Cordonia.  She turned to face him, his eyes fixed on her in admiration.

“Yes, love.  The moment you said yes . . . the moment you signed those papers . . . this became all of yours,” he said proudly.

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The Non-Royal Romance part seven

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The emerald green mountains come into view as I watch the world outside my SUV. Our 6 hour trip to the applewood manor is finally over. The car is dead quiet, as Maxwell took his ride with his brother, and it's only the driver, Drake, and I. Drake hasn't spoken to me since what happened, and I’m too nervous to try to talk to him, as I don't want to push it. I glance over at his distinct profile, staring forward, a distance look on his face. My stomach swoops. How can he be so hot? I bite my lip as my eyes scan over his sharp features...damn. His dark eyes fly to the review mirror, catching me. I widen my eyes and look away quickly. I stare out the window for a couple minutes, my heartbeat quick. I knaw on my thumb lightly in nervousness, and in pure reflex, glance back, to see Drake still staring at me, a strange look on his face. I jump and clench my jaw at myself, covering my face with my hand and looking outside the window. Stupid. 

While looking out the window, I notice Drake in the side mirror, looking down, trying to suppress his smirk. My stomach flutters and I smile slightly. Interesting. Our black SUV finally pulls into the large manor adorned with apple trees, along with many other cars and vans. I look around curiously. Before I can ask whats going on, Drake gets out and opens my door for me. I smile and step down, grasping onto his shoulder for support for a millisecond. I force myself to let go of him and walk forward, the chill mountain air flushing my cheeks. I stand there for a bit, admiring the countryside and mountains and as I turn around, I see Drake talking with a familiar security detail. I can’t see the other guys face but Drake looks troubled. Drake nods to the man, glancing back at me, his expression deep in thought. He snaps back to the man and nods, running his hands through his hair. The man says something again making Drake clench his jaw slightly, before walking away, not a glance back.

My heart drops and I walk over to the man. “Excuse me, um where is Mr. Walker going?” I ask, my heart pounding. The man smiles. “His duties have been relieved, your highness. I am Silverman, I worked with you for about one night, then my wife went into labor, but I’m back now,” he says with a friendly smile. I feel like I’ve been hit by a truck. Tears spring to my eyes which I blink away quickly, putting on a fake smile. “Oh that’s lovely, it’s great to have you. How is your son or daughter?” I ask, trying to hide my quivering voice. He grins with that new parent glow and starts going off about his son and his wife. I smile politely, even though it feels like I’m dying inside. I look around, hoping to spot Drake, but to no avail.

“Excuse me, Silverman, would you mind if I went into my room? I feel a bit carsick,” I say, and he nods quickly. “Of course, your bags are on their way, so we can head over now,” Silverman explains and I nod, heading into the decadent manor. We go through the maze of vaulted hallways but about halfway there, Silverman stops. He frowns, listening into his earpiece. “Sorry what? I’ll try to be there-“ he starts but I cut him off. “Please go, Silverman, I will be fine, it’s just that door there and I’ve been here a million times. Don’t worry about me,” I say and Silverman gives me a thumbs up and rushes downstairs.

As soon as he is out of sight, I walk over to the wall of the hallway and lean up against it for support. I sigh and try to force myself to not cry. Is this the end of seeing Drake every day? At all? I don’t know if I can’t handle that. I already feel like a piece of my life is missing. A single tear falls from my eye, and I wipe it away quickly, taking a shaky breath. Grow up. He’s just my bodyguard. My former-bodyguard. I stand up straight and force myself to go into my room.

—-

After laying down for a bit and taking a short nap, I feel a lot better. I try to reassure myself that they will keep Drake around even if he isn’t my bodyguard. I will hopefully still see him. I just need to figure out what I will do when the coronation ball comes. I stretch my arms above my head, cringing at my sore body. Long car drives suck. Maybe a trip down to the sauna would do my sore muscles some good.

Luckily, Silverman isn’t back yet, so I can sneak down to the gym/sauna without supervision. I dodge a couple security details on my way, really wanting some peace and quiet. The gym is practically empty, which is nice. While walking through to get to the sauna, I stop in my tracks. Jesus Christ.

Drake is shirtless, doing pull-ups on a bar, his ripped torso drenched in sweat. I watch for a moment, in shock at what is happening right now. I notice how his muscles flex and unflex as they pull up and down. This man is making me so damn thirsty. How is a girl supposed to survive? He drops down, panting. He turns and sits down, drinking from his bottle and freezes in place when he sees me. My mouth opens and closes like a fish. He raises his eyebrows at me in confusion. “What are you doing here?” He asks, his voice rough and out of breath.

I clear my throat, trying to ignore how his voice could sound like that after a different activity, hoping my blush isn’t too noticeable. “I um- was gonna- go in t-the sauna,” I manage to choke out, earning a chuckle from him. “Hey um- it sucks about Silverman coming back,” I say quietly. Drake's face turns solemn and he nods, looking down. “Yeah, it’s how it works though. I won’t miss your crazy ass that’s for sure,” he says, making me scoff in surprise. “I- that’s not fair!” I object, laughing. Drake laughs too, and I admire that for a second. It’s nice to be able to talk to him like friends.

“Well, what’s gonna happen now? Where do you go?” I ask, and Drake clears his throat. “I will still be part of the security detail, so I will be traveling with you, but not by your side 24/7,” Drake explains. Before I can even filter my thought I mumble out a “shame,” quietly, but loud enough for Drake to hear. He stares at me for a minute, his eyes intense. “I- should get going... ya know, can’t keep that sauna waiting... I guess,” I say pathetically, moving towards the wooden door. Drake just nods, and I rush into the room. I slam the door behind me, leaning up against it, cringing at my lack of conversational skills. I can't help the grin forming on my face. 

So he will stay.

-- the next day, the foxhunt!--

The next day is busy, the rush of the preparations for the foxhunt reaching full capacity. Silverman escorts me down to the stables to collect my horse, Mac. I haven't been able to ride him since the season started, so once I get into the stable, I run over to him excitedly. He looks up in surprise, so I slow down to not spook him and let him smell my hand. Once the recognition settles in, Mac snorts excitedly, rubbing his face against me, making me laugh. “It’s good to see you too buddy,” I giggle, petting his chestnut snout. Silverman stands far from me, near the entrance of the barn quietly, looking around. It reminds me of when Drake first became my bodyguard. He was so guarded and closed up. He still is, but I got to know him better and better, and now it might be over. 

I just want to be near him, close to him all the time. I want to kiss him. I want to be able to call him mine. I feel like we have that destiny, like its bound to happen, but I can't help the realistic side of me that knows for a fact my mother would never allow that and I have no idea if he feels the same. I hear a commotion near the barn door, and see Maxwell arguing with Silverman. “Hey, sorry man! No suitors are allowed to bother your highness without her permission,” Says Silverman, and Maxwell scoffs. “Hey Silverman, it's okay, he's just a friend, com over you idiot,” I say, making Maxwell walk past my bodyguard, an ‘I told you so’ look on his face. 

“Hey what happened to that Drake guy?” Maxwell asks as he reaches me. I sigh. “He got replaced by Silverman because technically he was filling in for him, but now Silverman’s back,” I say, pressing my lips together to stop myself from getting emotional again. Sympathy flashes across Maxwell’s face. I smile, “But hey, it doesn't matter! It will help me pick my suitor without any distractions!” I say a bit too cheerfully. Maxwell’s face doesn't change, and he pulls me into a hug. “I’m sorry Al,” He says quietly, and I nod into his shoulder. “Yeah, but I have always looked forward to the foxhunt, so let's get going!” I say, pulling from the hug. “Excuse me miss, it's about time for you to ride,” Silverman calls, and I nod, hoisting myself onto Mac. 

Maxwell gets on his horse, and so does Silverman, and the three of us ride over to the scheduled disembarkment area. All the suitors are on their horses waiting. I notice Liam, sitting dignified on a grey speckled horse conversing with another suitor. Oliver sits on a sleek black horse, picking at his nails distractedly. A group of security details on horses leads the trail, including Drake, who is laughing at a fellow security woman, who seems to be struggling deeply with staying on her horse. Huh. She’s pretty. Maxwell and I follow them, the suitors trailing behind us. Silverman is beside us, so I decide not to talk too freely with Max. “Hey Silvermann, why are there so many security personnel here?” I ask, and he nods in understanding. “Oh! Yeah, it must be confusing to see so many of us. We always have this many people, but a big chunk of them work in tech, like surveillance, and communications, but at this altitude with all these mountains, it's difficult to get a good signal, so we have everyone on foot with us, just in case.” He explains and I nod. “huh,” I say, looking forward at the trail in front of us. I notice the woman from before glancing back at me, and then quickly looking forward. Weird. 

“Hey Alana, how are you doing today?” a voice from next to me asks, and I look over in surprise to see Liam grinning (as always) at me. I glance back to see Maxwell giving me a thumbs up. I think I know who his favorite suitor is. “Liam! I’m doing well, how has suitor life been treating you?” I ask, and he chuckles. “Honestly I was not expecting to be spending more time with the suitors than with you.” He says cynically, making me laugh. “I am sorry, Liam, I know it can be tough to get time with me, and I'm sorry about that, I can't always control it,” I say apologetically, and he shakes his head. “No need to apologize, I am just glad that we are getting to talk now,” He grins, making me smile in return. He really is a charmer. 

- Drake’s POV - 

The long trail of horses finally reaches the small village for the feast, to everyone’s relief. Most nobles aren't used to riding for so long. All the suitors start to grab food, somewhere music begins to play, and the horses get hitched. {author’s note: the horses aren’t getting married, its when they are tied to a wooden pole lol} 

I stand by the sidelines, even further from Alana than before. I knew this day had to come, but It doesn't make it any easier. To not be the number one person protecting her frustrates me. Don't get me wrong, Silverman is a great bodyguard, but it was MY job. To protect her. To know what is going and how she was doing. Even if we didn't talk, I was still near her, in her presence. It may be good for me though. I can get over her. Honestly, I was always worried I would slip up and finally push her up against a wall and kiss her like I always wanted, and now that I'm forced to be apart from her, it eliminates that possibility. Good plan. Just distance myself, even more, watch her be happy, choose her future husband, and suck it up because I never had a chance to begin with.  “Hey numbnuts,” someone says, making me jump. “Jesus Mage, not funny,” I scold, and she laughs, nudging my shoulder. “I don't know if I should be happy that you aren't always in my ear or annoyed because you are here in person,” I say, making her gasp mockingly. “Drake I am offended,” She says, a smirk pulling at her mouth. 

I roll my eyes with a scoff, looking out at the feast again. “God, just because you aren't around her 24/7, doesn't mean you have to be an ass,” Mage says, a trace of ice in her voice. I sigh. “Hey, sorry I just-” “miss her?” Mage finishes for me, a knowing look on her face. I clench my jaw and nod.”Well suck it up buttercup, because she is on her way over here,” Mage says with a smirk, And I widen my eyes at her, glancing over to see Alana walking over, a curious look on her face. shit. My heart instantly starts to race, every second she gets closer, my pulse goes faster. “Hey Drake, who is this?” She asks, her voice an unfamiliar tone, as she looks Mage over. “I’m Mage, the person always jabbering in his ear, so nice to finally meet you, your highness,” Mage says, her hand out for a shake. Alana looks at her for a moment, and her strange look melts into genuine kindness as she smiles, shaking her hand. “Oh! I kind of always wondered who he was talking to,” She says, glancing at me for a second. Someone calls Alana, and she looks over, then looks back. “Hey so nice to see you both, but I better be going,” She says, with a smile before walking away. 

I watch her leave, my heart finally slowing down. I take a breath I didn't know I was holding. Mage suddenly squeals, jostling my shoulder. I look at her concerned. “Oh my god! Did you see her face? She was totally jealous! HA! I knew it!” She exclaims, making me sputter in shock. “W-What? Jealous?” I ask, and Mage nods excitedly. “I knew she liked you back! OH, she was staring daggers at me, Drake!” She says, clearly pleased with herself. “I don't think that was jealously..” I trail off, but mage shakes her head. “Drake, I am a woman, I know jealousy when I see it.” Mage insists, and I look over to Alana who is conversing with her mother, nodding and talking. “She probably wasn't expecting me to be so nice....” Mage’s talking fades away as I notice Liam joining Alana’s conversation. He smiles down at her, resting his hand on her waist respectfully making me want to rip him off her, then I realize its not my job anymore. Alana awkwardly looks away from Liam, making eye contact with me. The world fades away and all I can focus on is the way she is looking at me. All of a sudden, all these moments flash through my mind, when we met for the first time, her smile after she kissed me on the cheek, when she fell into my arms on the boat, her expression when she asked me to apply her sunscreen, her lame excuse when she held my hand during the blizzard, her blaringly obvious blush when she caught me working out, and it suddenly hits me. She has feelings for me too. She breaks the eye contact, turning and joining the conversation again, her cheeks pink. 

I blink in shock. Well, shit, that complicates my plan. 

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Hey guys! Sorry, I took so long, I had a busy couple months and tiktok is an addicting app! But I'm back babey! I hope you guys liked this chapter! I can't wait for the next one it's going to be so good! Love you all <3

[mfackenthal]

Hello loves!  If you’re still following me, may I just say thank you for your patience.  I know it has been too long since I have created one of my review posts.  I can only apologize.  I love you all, but I needed a break.  So I was gone for a while.  When I came back – the fandom had changed.  Mostly, people just changed their names, actually.  But it took me a while to find everyone.  And, of course, new people had joined the fandom – or at least I was introduced to people – so they’re new to me.  

I’m going to organize this by book instead of by love interest because some authors are keeping the pairings a secret and I don’t want to ruin their surprise.

I don’t think I’m back up to reading 80 fics a week … but I do think I’ve read quite a few (too many?) fics this week.  Let’s find out how many, shall we?

A few quick reminders:

(1) If you want to find out what I specifically thought about each chapter, that can be found on my blog.  To more easily search my blog, search the phrase “mfackenthal reviews ________” and fill in the blank with the blog name.  IE “mfackenthal reviews maxattack-powell” to find the work I reblogged specifically by @maxattack-powell.

(2) In case it’s not obvious: I recommend ALL of these fics and ALL of these authors.  I cannot say enough about the fabulousness that is these authors. 

The Royal Romance

Second Wedding (http://mrswalkers-blog.tumblr.com/post/182240871361/book-the-royal-romance-summary-riley-looks) by @mrswalkers-blog Riley is about to walk down the aisle for a second time.  How did she get here?  This short story will help you reflect on your own relationships while warming you heart.

The Road Less Traveled (https://ao719.tumblr.com/post/182583348931/the-road-less-traveled-masterlist-summary-6) by @ao719 This delightful series will also warm you heart with its innocence and anticipation.  It’s made even more delightful by the fact that you get a chapter every day. 

Queen of My Heart (https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/173032059318/queen-of-my-heart-master-list) by @walkerismychoice This is not a new series by any means – but it’s not over either.  I got caught up because it’s an amazing series and I love it!  If you don’t know it already, this is a retelling of the story that has captured our heart but in a universe in which Liam is making his decision on reality TV.  Madeleine is still the villain and she’s about to get her comeuppance – or so I hope!  Catch up and see what happens next with me!

The Not So Royal Romance series (https://strangerofbraidwood.tumblr.com/post/182742931095/the-not-so-royal-romance-collection) by @strangerofbraidwood  What happens with Olivia and Hana after the events of the story as we know it?  Find out in this intriguing series.

 Something Unexpected (https://hopefulmoonobject.tumblr.com/post/182769220258/something-unexpected) series by @hopefulmoonobject This series follows Liam and Leo as they have fallen in love with two foreigners who don’t yet know they are dating the most powerful men in all of Cordonia.  Will this end in true love?  Or with the “lies by omission” become a problem?  I honestly don’t know yet and can’t wait to find out!  When these couples are romantic – they’re adorable. When they’re feisty, I love that too!

One Handsome Devil (https://onehandsomedevil-trr.tumblr.com/post/182558278027/one-handsome-devil-a-novel-by-katherine) by @onehandsomedevil-trr  Liam is named Nicholas in this series that is starting to hint at more turmoil to come – with Olivia.

Secrets Unwind (https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/182550912733/the-royal-romance) by @whenyourheartskipsabeat  Liam lost Riley.  He has found her.  Everything seems to be falling in to place.  We know it won’t last – but the ride is exquisite!  Come join me in reading this series!

Learning to Love Again (https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/178641518985/master-list) by @likethetailofacomet  If you follow me then you know that I binged this whole series this week.  That’s right – all 46 chapters of it!  This series GAVE ME LIFE!  It’s a beautiful telling of the story of Drake, Liam, and Claire (MC) where Liam is immediately supportive of Drake and Claire – like supportive before Drake can even really make a move. The characters in this story are pure, beautiful, supportive, strong, and loving.  I have fallen in love with Liam and with Bastien in this story – and I know with certainty that this wasn’t the author’s intention – but I also know she fully supports falling in love with these characters.  Of course, if you’re a Drake fan (as I am) this series will make you happy also.  It’s not a love triangle and yet I still felt so much of that drama that I love in these stories. This series is drama at it’s BEST.  The drama doesn’t come from misunderstandings but from the plot. It’s not over – but it will be soon.  So catch up!

Going deep into the ruins of Bastien and Annabelle (https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/178641518985/master-list) by @likethetailofacomet  A little of how Bastien met the love of his life, Annabelle.  Come meet the woman who captures Bastien’s heart.

My Girl (https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/182792805128/pairing-drake-x-mc-emma-warner-walker-book-the) by @tmarie82  Drake and Emma are married, with children, and celebrating Valentine’s Day.  Sit back and enjoy some cuteness in this fluffy fic.

One Night Stand (https://kennaxval.tumblr.com/post/182792808423/one-night-stand-olivia-x-drake-nsfw) by @kennaxval  Olivia puts Drake in his place, saves Drake and others from a car accident, and gets a little something from Drake in the process.  As it turns out, Drake is a lucky guy.

Their First Valentine’s (Part 1) (https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/182818195966/their-first-valentines-part-1-drake-x-mc-x) by @drakewalkerwhipped  If you haven’t met everyone’s favorite poly couple – you really should look them up as written by @drakewalkerwhipped.  This trio is so supportive of each other, so loving, so tender.  I call them #relationshipgoals.  It’s their first Valentine’s Day where they’re not in hiding and they’ve essentially got the kinks worked out.  This chapter is essentially fluff with a little heat – promising much more heat in whatever comes next.

Brave For You (series) (https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/178641518985/master-list) by @likethetailofacomet As I understand it, this was written and helped inspire Learning to Love Again because fans demanded a story where Drake lives.  In this trilogy, Drake does not.  Riley has to learn to live without him.  

Perfect Match

Missing You (https://queerchoicesblog.tumblr.com/post/182657763715/missing-you-pm-alana-x-fmc) by @queerchoicesblog  Long distance relationships are hard, but sometimes the little things you do in such a relationship have deep meaning.  Read about how Alana might be in such a relationship.

The Elementalists

When I Taste Tequila (https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/182626500588/when-i-taste-tequila) by @walkerismychoice  A delightful A/U with Beckett.  His nerdiness shines and gets our MC to drop her defenses.  Kissing ensues and leaves you wanting more.  If you like The Elementalists and you like Gray’s Anatomy – you should read this fic.

Complicated Series (https://darley1101.tumblr.com/post/182575228193/complicated-part-3-it-couple) by @darley1101  In this series, Beckett and Tatiana (MC) start “dating” (quotes are important).  They date for show. But will they fall in love for real?  This series has a great story crossover, it delves into some difficult situations around bullying, and we’ve just learned that Beckett also has a “real girlfriend.”  I need more @darley1101!!!!  Quit writing the rest and give me more of this ;) 

A Courtesan in Rome

The Words that Went Unsaid (https://wughhumans.tumblr.com/post/182673414478/the-words-that-went-unsaid-marc-antony-x-mc) by @wughhumans  Anthony has enemies and that has disastrous consequences.  I don’t want to say more as it will give it away … so I’ll just say it’s not a fluffy read but it’s worth it and I can’t wait for more!

Warrior (https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/182744621008/pairing-mystery-pairing-mc-arin-book-a) by @tmarie82  A dark fic that gave us what many of us really wanted …

The Death of a Monster (https://wughhumans.tumblr.com/post/182774319428/the-death-of-a-monster-lysandra) by @wughhumans  Obviously, many people would like to see Legate Aquila die.  Here’s another fic to show how that could happen.  This one is even darker, more graphic, but amazingly well written!

The Heist: Monaco

Stress (https://mysteli.tumblr.com/post/182707625378/stress-fabien-x-mc) by @mysteli  A bit of an AU – but really just an extension of the story – if the MC took a little break from the masquerade party to join Fabien in the getaway car.  Learn a little more about Fabien in this hot fic!

America’s Most Eligible

Bad As Me (http://choicesfanfic.com/content/bad-as-me/) by @lizeboredom  I’m still shook by the fact that the MC in this story is not named Minah.  They’re all supposed to be named Minah!  (If you don’t know what I mean – read ALL of @lizeboredom’s work!) Despite the author being drunk when she wrote this fic and named her character the wrong name – this is a hot story about a much tougher Minah (Myrah) who is flirting with danger when she flirts with Vince.

Desire and Decorum

Only the First of Many (https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/182799720138/only-the-first-of-many-ernest-sinclaire-x-mc) by @walkerismychoice  As the author says – this is a retelling of the diamond scene from book 2 chapter 9 but from Ernest’s POV.  This is a sweet, hot, tender, and a beautiful rendition.  If you didn’t buy that chapter – this is a great way to read it. If you did – this is an even better way to relive it.

Red Carpet Diaries

Simply Between Us Series (http://angstymarshmallow.tumblr.com/post/182229096884/simply-between-us-part-6-thomas-hunt-x-mc) by @angstymarshmallow  Hunt and Tatum are just about to say “I love you” when Priya storms back in to Hunt’s life.  Is he truly over her?  What will Hunt do when he’s not the most mature one in his relationship with Tatum?  Come read this beautiful written story of love, heart ache, angst, poor decisions, traffic, and (I hope) love conquering all! 

Bloodbound

Against the Rules (http://choicesbyjade.tumblr.com/post/178304360927/bloodbound-fanfiction) by @choicesbyjade  Adrian is flirting with his own rules.  This drives both Samantha (MC) and himself to some sexual acts.  Will there be consequences?  Read to find out!

Artwork Drake by @maxattack-powell

https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/182780797714/he-wanted-to-surprise-you-when-you-woke-up-did

Adrian by @maxattack-powell

https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/182815538556/he-says-youre-all-the-sunshine-he-needs

Oh shit!  I read 89 fics this week!  Granted 46 of them were one series, but I still!  I commented and reblogged 89 fics.  I guess I have to say – I’m back baby!

But seriously – I probably will not be able to maintain this pace.  I have to actually read a book next week.  LOL 

Also, this time around if I read a series – I didn’t include a link to each chapter – I included a link to a masterlist.  I included the masterlist link as often as I could.  If I couldn’t find one, I linked to the last chapter.

I hope you found something you hadn’t read yet.  This community is amazingly talented. 

If you know someone I should be reading – send them my way!  I’m always looking for new authors to highlight while I continue to read everyone I’ve already learned to love.  I’m still behind and catching up with many who I have highlighted in the past – but hit me up if there is something you want me to read ASAP.

So much love to all of you!

~MFack~

PS. Even though she’s not here anymore, big thanks to @drivenbyfantasy for creating the graphic.  

PPS. Last, but not least, on the off chance that I missed a fic that you know I reblogged, my apologies! It was unintentional and is not a reflection on you, but upon my inability to maintain my own blog.  Also, if a link or a tag doesn’t work - I am sorry!

[mfackenthal]

Top Post Tag: Scroll through your top posts. List the first, the last, your personal favorite, and the post that you're surprised was so popular. Tag five people

Nonny,

Hello!  I’m going to be honest ... I don’t really know how to do the thing you’re asking me to do ... though with the help of @maxattack-powell, I was able to figure out my top 3 posts on mobile ... those are:

1. MFackenthal Reviews - Minipost - Open Heart - June 2019

There’s no real surprise that this would be a top post.  I posted it right around the time that Open Heart was ending and many of us were thirsty for more Ethan or Bryce (sorry to those who were looking for the other LIs).

2.  The MFackenthal Show and Cordonian’s Gone Wild!

Also, no surprise that this one is a fan favorite.  It helps that @cordoniansgonewild has their own fan club who loved seeing them on the show.  This show was such a blast to create and produce.  These ladies are truly each wonderful people! 

3.  MFackenthal Interviews Liam (from Cordonian’s Gone Wild)

Related to #2, this again isn’t much of a surprise ... Add to that the fact that Liam is a fandom favorite ... Add to that the fact that @ao719 and I made Liam look and act damn fine (#notsohumblebrag) ... all of this adds up to a very popular post!

But now to the harder questions ... which one is my personal favorite?  Ugh!  I think I have a tie ... 

1.  Part 1 of “The Royal Treatment” will always have a special place in my heart.  I wrote it with @whenyourheartskipsabeat and her encouragement will forever leave me changed for the better.  Because it was truly the first time I dipped my toe into fanfic, the support I received from this community was truly beautiful.  I felt so seen and loved because so many of you were so excited that I was finally claiming the label of “writer.”  All of your words of support will mean more to me than these simple words can ever express.

2.  Deleted Scene: Voicemail after Chapter 14 is probably what I am most proud of.  The emotions this piece still stirs up in me, I want to cry, I want to scream ... it captures the essence of Ethan in that moment ... it feels like a conversation, but you know it’s technology with the dog as witness. 

As for the surprisingly successful post ... I have to say I’m most surprised at how much support I get for doing The MFackenthal Show.  I first started it simply as a way to highlight different authors (and as giveaways for my follower count).  When I realized I didn’t care to pay attention to my follower count and I just opened it up to whoever - I couldn’t believe how many people wanted to be on the show!  Getting to know people in this fandom is truly a blast!  I have 10 more shows lined up - so sorry for all of those who have done their part and are just waiting for me to do mine! 

Thank you, Nonny, for asking me to do this!  It was a lot of fun. 

I’d like to ask the following 5 people to do the same:

1. @maxattack-powell

2.  @ao719

3.  @whenyourheartskipsabeat

4.  @msjpuddleduck

5.  @sawyeroakleyscowboyhat

6. @kennaxval

7.  @lilyofchoices

8. @lizeboredom

9. @laniquelovewrites

10. @thefirstcourtesan

Oops ... I’m obviously not good at counting to 5 ...

~Megs~

[mfackenthal]

MFackenthal Reviews - TRR

@likethetailofacomet

https://likethetailofacomet.tumblr.com/post/178641518985/master-list

The Broken Bits: Series: Bastien is retiring.  Can he now be with the love of his life?  Will Drake and Claire help him find his love

@whenyourheartskipsabeat

Masterlist: https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/184314862013/welcome-to-my-world-this-is-my-masterlist-im-an

Fate Intertwined https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/184440749378/heres-chapter-5-a-little-earlier-than-expected: In this series, Liam meets the love of his life before Leo abdicates.  When his life is upended, will he be able to have his happily-ever-after?  Come find out and see Drake come through from Liam time and time again.

All is Fair https://whenyourheartskipsabeat.tumblr.com/post/184416458418/an-hi-everyone-ive-decided-this-is-the-last: Come see how this series ended.  Does Liam get a happily-ever-after?

A Twist in the Tale: Liam announces his truth to everyone FINALLY!

@elles-choices

Sweethearts (Chapter 6) https://elles-choices.tumblr.com/post/184437012524/sweethearts-chapter-6-trr-liam-x-mc:  Liam was an idiot as a teenager.  He was still the man we love at his core, but he cared too much about public opinion. This cost him the love of his life. Can he win her back or will life keep them apart? 

@speedyoperarascalparty

We’re Enough Part 3: Love and Support: https://speedyoperarascalparty.tumblr.com/post/184414641108/were-enough-part-3-love-and-support: Drake and Pam are having trouble getting pregnant and their squad rallies around them.  A reminder that you are enough.  It’s beautiful and you should read it.

Truth and Lies https://speedyoperarascalparty.tumblr.com/post/184147063743/truths-and-lies: Drake and Anitah think their significant others are cheating on them – with each other!  Come see their shenanigans.

Born Into Darkness https://speedyoperarascalparty.tumblr.com/post/183782629393/born-into-darkness-chapter-6-the-arrangement: A dark but beautiful fic about Madelaine and why she is who she is. 

@ownworldresident

The Mark: chapter 7: The Cause: https://ownworldresident.tumblr.com/post/184411903004/the-mark-chapter-7-the-cause: Liam has in custody the woman who tried to kill him.  He is very attracted to this woman.  This woman has answers that he needs.  The cabinet wants to know Liam is safe and wants answers.  How will Liam handle the pressure?

Side by Side: Chapter 13 Honesty https://ownworldresident.tumblr.com/post/183867841064/side-by-side-chapter-13-honesty: A cliffhanger of an episode … Liam and Rayne really need to talk … but what about?  Catch up and whine for more with me.

@debramcg1106

Tell Me What you Want https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/184399673239/tell-me-what-you-want: Come learn why Liam cries wolf and almost gets Drake in trouble. 

@umccall71

Good Goodbye https://umccall71.tumblr.com/post/184360631927/charactersprince-liam-x-mc-lady: Olivia’s best friend from college comes to visit.  Liam is already smitten.  So is Saige. Come see the sweet innocence before the upcoming storm.

@silviasutton1989

TTK Chapter 21 part 1 “Mad” https://silviasutton1989.tumblr.com/post/184377878383/ttk-ch-21-part-1-mad: Liam loves Olivia but also believes she tried to kill him.  Come enjoy the drama of it all!

@boneandfur

Fluffernutter (N*FW): https://boneandfur.tumblr.com/post/184356704459/fluffernutter-nfw: let’s just say if there’s an innuendo around PB&J, it’s in use in this delighful fic

@ao719

The Return Series: https://ao719.tumblr.com/post/178163456921/masterlist-series-fate-liam-x-mc: This series is especially for those who don’t really love Riley. Come fall in love with someone who is truly right for Liam. Your heart will break, but I also promise a happy ending.

@lolablackwrites

Guarded Hearts Series https://lolablackwrites.tumblr.com/fanficmasterlist: Alice (MC) meets and falls in love with Bastien first.  Will Bastien be able to compete against the rest of the TRR crew? Get ready for love, romance, drama, and so much more!

@choicesbyjade

Late Night Confessions https://choicesbyjade.tumblr.com/post/184155061657/late-night-confessions: When Olivia finds Drake outside looking at the stars, admissions are made.

Blue https://choicesbyjade.tumblr.com/post/183969202906/blue: Leo struggles in a marriage with a too-distant wife.  A letter from Hana is just so sweet.

@hopefulmoonobject and @ownworldresident

Something Unexpected Series Latest chapter: https://hopefulmoonobject.tumblr.com/post/184334049983/something-unexpected Liam still hasn’t admitted to the woman he loves that he is the King.  She’s about to meet his friends.  Check out how the initial meeting goes.

@bobasheebaby

Hankering for Chee-zee Bread https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/184279860713/pairing-liam-x-bailey-x-drake-athena-x: If you know what Chee-zee bread is, then you know why it’s wanted.  If you don’t – come learn about it. 

Want You to Want Me – Falling for You Chapter 4 https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/183942041018/want-you-to-want-me-nsw-falling-for-you: This is Olivia with Bastien … a pairing I never would have thought about but @bobasheebaby made me fall in love with. Sigh.

@fluffy-marshmallow-heart

Drake’s Diary ch. 28 – Coney Island: https://fluffy-marshmallow-heart.tumblr.com/post/184271285666/drakes-diary-ch28-coney-island: It’s exactly what you think it is and if you love Drake, you need to read it.  If you don’t love Drake – come find out why the rest of us do.

@tornbetween2loves

My Heart Torn Apart https://tornbetween2loves.tumblr.com/post/177628304621/my-heart-torn-apart: Why choose between Drake and Liam when you can have them both?  And why is watching them together soooo hot?

@hopefulmoonobject

Secrets: What’s Done In the Dark: https://hopefulmoonobject.tumblr.com/post/184224102983/what-is-done-in-the-dark: Leo’s mother has left behind clues to the truth of his past.  Can Leo find and handle the truth?  Will it lead to a more grown up/mature Leo if he does?

@larryssunflower

The Line https://larryssunflower.tumblr.com/post/183904047398/the-line-drake-x-mc-part-one-characters: Drake owns a bar.  Liam is a father of a 6 year old, but I don’t think he knows that yet … read this and beg for more with me.

@laniquelovewrites

Lessons in Driving: https://laniquelovewrites.tumblr.com/post/180664067478/lessons-in-driving I may have had a small influence in this fic and so every once in a while I go back and read it because it’s amazing and I love it.  Read it and laugh at Maxwell with me!

@theroyalweisme

Duties of a Prince – Chapter 34: https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/183658887923/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-34-leo-x-liam-x-mc  Haha, remember when you called this a little AU @theroyalweisme?  34 chapters later … find out just how awesome I am (Megan) and come see Sab and Leo “pretend” to be in love.

@captain-kingliamsqueen

Falling Deeper in Love Series: https://captain-kingliamsqueen.tumblr.com/post/183574728626/falling-deeper-in-love-until-we-meet-again: King Liam meets a fashion designer who can fulfill more of his needs than just his need for a tux.  

[mfackenthal]

Posting Schedule

Hello loves!

This post is mostly for myself ... but it’s also worth sharing, I think.  Here’s the order of what should be posting on MFackenthal in the next week or so ...

1.  Chapter 1 of “The Story of Ethan and Megs.” 

2.  The next episode of “The MFackenthal Show” with Guest Stars @leelee10898 @ao719 @speedyoperarascalparty and @cocomaxley.

3.  The next installment of MFackenthal Reviews

The plan from then on is go back and forth for a while between posting chapters of “The Story of Ethan and Megs” (it’s outlined for 7 chapters) and “The Mfackenthal Show.”  I’ll throw in a review post whenever I get the itch.

You’ll notice that I don’t have dates attached to these things because I just can’t quite predict when anything will be ready for publication.

But this is the plan.

Thanks to all of you for your love and support!

Love,

~Megs~

[mfackenthal]

MFackenthal Reviews: The Full Listing

A/N:  I once told myself I would write these weekly - ha!  Maybe I’ll shoot for something more like monthly ... no matter how often I write them, please use these to find a new author to love today - don’t forget to tell the authors that you love their work!

The First Ever Review Post - Posted June 1, 2018

The Second Review Post - Posted - June 8, 2018

The Third Review Post - Posted June 16, 2018

The 4th Edition - Posted June 29, 2018

The 5th Edition - Posted July 17, 2018

The Sixth Review Post - Posted Feb. 16, 2019

MFackenthal Reviews #7 - Posted March 10, 2019

MFackenthal Reviews #8 - Posted April 27, 2019

MFackenthal Reviews #9 - Posted June 9, 2019

MFackenthal Reviews #10 - Posted July 27, 2019

If there’s someone’s work you think I should be reading - your own, a besties - let me know!  I love recommendations!

[mfackenthal]

Hello! Could you recommend me some blogs that write about Desire and Decorum to fill the void in my heart while I'm waiting for book 3?

Well, hello Nonny!

I’m so sorry for my delayed response.  I don’t know when you sent this ask ... but as I do a bunch of reviews, I can certainly help you find some D&D fanfic authors. 

Check out this post: https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/184487936092/mfackenthal-reviews-rcdddame-bloodbound

There are four amazing authors who are writing for D&D featured in that post.

This previous review also covers a few authors, there may be some overlap between the author lists here: https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/183352565182/mfackenthal-reviews-7

I hope you find something you haven’t read yet!

Thank you so much for stopping by!

Who’s your main LI in D&D, Nonny?

~Megs~

[mfackenthal]

MFackenthal’s A Week In Reviews - 5th edition!

It’s time for another MFackenthal’s A Week in Reviews!  It’s been over two weeks since I published the last one.  I meant to get this out on Friday ... but life happened.  Thank you for your patience.  And, please, let me take a moment to say thank you to all of you for your support of me and this blog. 

I’m always working to find new authors - so if there’s anyone’s work (your own or someone else’s) that you want me to review - please send it to me. 

Also, as you can tell, I’m not always caught up with everyone’s work - I’m waaaay behind.  I don’t know that I’ll ever catch up.  ha!  But I’ll keep reading and reviewing because I’m still loving this!

Weekly reminders:

(1) This list does not include headcanon posts, ABC posts or any post that wasn’t a fic.  This also only includes reblogs and not work I “liked” but wasn’t able to provide commentary on.  

(2) If you want to find out what I specifically thought about each chapter, that can be found on my blog.  To more easily search my blog, search the phrase “mfackenthal reviews ________” and fill in the blank with the blog name.  IE “mfackenthal reviews maxattack-powell” to find the work I reblogged specifically by @maxattack-powell.

(3) In case it’s not obvious: I recommend ALL of these fics and ALL of these authors.  I cannot say enough about the fabulousness that is these authors. 

(4) The list is loosely organized by love interest and partially on the order in which I read the fics.  As some of these stories are poly or love triangles, some are just listed by whichever love interest I decided it was “safest” (meaning not a spoiler) to feature.  

If the “read more” works then you’ll find the full list under the cut.

Leo X MC

Duties of a Prince by @theroyalweisme

This used to posted under Liam x MC, but things have changed my friends.  This fabulous author is showing us a side of Leo that isn’t always explored.  His tender side.  It also shows us a Leo that wants to be the best leader for Cordonia. Are we starting to also see a Leo that is in love?  This are really starting to heat up in these chapters – so if you haven’t caught up, now is the time to do so.  PLUS, you get to meet an amazing gal named Megan and what can I say – us Megan’s have to stick together!

Chapter 23 https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/175402169594/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-23-leo-x-liam-x-mc

Chapter 24 https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/175538310602/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-24-leo-x-liam-x-mc

Chapter 25 https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/175638779065/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-25-leo-x-liam-x-mc Chapter 26 https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/175776966796/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-26-leo-x-liam-x-mc Chapter 27 https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/175878953321/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-27-leo-x-liam-x-mc

Liam X MC

Through the Storm (TTS) by @choicesfanatic86 If you’ve been following my reviews, you all know that I’m addicted to this series.  Riley is pregnant and back in Cordonia.  Will Liam be able to woo her?  (Will anyone be able to convince him not to use the phrase “woo her”?  Or do I secretly love to hate that he uses that phrase?)

TTS: Part 44 https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/175472185988/tts-part-44-liam-x-mc

TTS: Part 45 https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/175506848705/tts-part-45-liam-x-mc

TTS: Part 46 https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/175709814351/tts-part-46-liam-x-mc The Miserable Year series by @laniquelove This is an AMAZING series about Liam and Freya and the worst year of their life.  It’s the very definition of Murphy’s law.  These last chapters had me laughing and crying.  I should have seen the end coming, but I didn’t.  I’m so glad I didn’t, and I LOVED EVERY MINUTE of this series.  Do yourself a favor – read it! November https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175078125226/november

November Pt. 2 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175116324643/november-pt-2

November Pt. 3 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175142597553/november-pt-3

December https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175241506274/december

December Pt. 2 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175274987237/december-pt2

December Pt. 3 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175308164628/december-pt3

December Pt. 4 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175375291431/december-pt4

December Pt. 5 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175475073027/december-pt5 December Pt. 7 https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175509639261/december-pt7 January…Again? https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/175511173848/januaryagain Happy 4th of July by @kinkykingliam Liam brings a little 4th of July spirit to Cordonia for his love Riley. Happy 4th of July! https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/175540769902/happy-4th-of-july-liam-x-riley-mc-nsfw-just The Consequence of Secrets-Part 13A-The Road Trip by @blackcatkita Liam and Drake are still estranged. However, Liam and Jennifer (MC) seem to be on the same page again.  Learn more about Liam’s childhood in this chapter of The Consequence of Secrets. https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/175575744258/the-consequence-of-secrets-part-13a-the-road To (Secretly) Love You – series by @choicesbyjade What really happened right after MC’s original scandal?  I kinda forgot that Leo was around for that.  @choicesbyjade did not forget.  This Liam has a backbone and I love it! Ready https://choicesbyjade.tumblr.com/post/175500295712/ready Welcome to My Dark Side https://choicesbyjade.tumblr.com/post/175581505816/welcome-to-my-dark-side-liam-x-madeleine What Almost Was by @bobasheebaby Come meet and fall in love with Perceval. Of course, will MC fall in love with him?  Or will she still chose Liam or Drake?

Fallout https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/174986371291/fallout-drabble-pairing-liam-x-madeline-word Just Friends https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/175039925260/just-friends-nsfw-pairing-athena-x-drake-word Image Above All (Drabble) https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/175027752388/image-above-all-drabble-characters-perceval To Tell Her the Truth https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/175049491998/to-tell-her-the-truth-pairing-perceval-liam

Broken Fairytales Part 1 by @darley1101 Someone is trying to assassinate Cordonia’s leaders.  Follow Olivia as she survives the attack.  Things will not go as scripted by PB. https://darley1101.tumblr.com/post/174124139583/broken-fairytales-part-1 You Have Never Loved Me (AU) Part 5 by @kawairinrin Liam reaches out to Annie (MC) to try to explain what he has said and done and why.  Will she listen? Will the instant fame be a good thing for Annie?  Or will it cause her more difficulty? https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/175629722612/you-have-never-loved-me-au-liam-x-mc-part-5 The Heir series by @thatcatlady0716 Liam and Kendra (MC) share a passionate night when they meet, but Kendra doesn’t go to Cordonia.  Kendra gives birth to Liam’s child.  When Liam returns to the states and looks Kendra up, will she be able to tell him that he fathers a child?  What will his response be?

Return of the King https://thatcatlady0716.tumblr.com/post/173777168641/return-of-the-king Lie in the bed you made https://thatcatlady0716.tumblr.com/post/174933205471/lie-in-the-bed-you-made Almost: Chapter 4 by @choicesfanatic86 Liam and Riley have a past – one from before his engagement night.  Drake is slowly dragging the past back out … y’know, so us readers can know what is going on too! https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/175641234118/almost-chapter-4-liam-x-mc My Immortal by @queencatherynerhys A continuation of a TRR AU where Liam ends up marrying Madeleine and Catheryne (MC) stays to watch.  Come read this beautiful but heart breaking rendition of MC’s emotional state. https://queencatherynerhys.tumblr.com/post/175658982491/my-immortal Good Grades by @kawairinrin Liam is a professor and Riley helps him with grading.  Come see why I’d take class with Professor Rhys. http://kawairinrin.tumblr.com/post/175816077241/good-grades-liam-x-mc-nsfw-this-is-complete-a With A Heavy Heart by @captain-kingliamsqueen Set when Riley was accused and Madeleine thought she had won … will love be enough to keep Riley around despite how poorly Madeleine treats her? https://captain-kingliamsqueen.tumblr.com/post/175839022176/with-a-heavy-heart We the People by @kinkykingliam If you missed the last chapter of “We the People” you have to catch up!  We’ve moved forward in time and people are making decisions I was not prepared for.  I want to hate it cause I’m so mad at Em, but I love it! The Surprise https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/175312996967/we-the-people-the-surprise The B*tch is Back https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/175589101457/we-the-people-the-btch-is-back Torn https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/175895578172/we-the-people-torn Drake x MC

Epithymia by @choiceswreckedme Liam has broken all of his own rules and cheated on Charlie (MC) with Madeleine.  Charlie is away from Cordonia with Olivia and Leo.  She realizes that she loves Drake.  Drake comes to find her.  This is where the chapters pick up this week.  I cannot wait to see where things head next …

Epithymia – Chapter 13 https://choiceswreckedme.tumblr.com/post/175513130885/epithymia-chapter-13

Epithymia – Chapter 14, Pt. 1 https://choiceswreckedme.tumblr.com/post/175617236925/epithymia-chapter-14-pt-1 German Lessons by @tmarie82 Is it any surprise that MC gets a little commanding over the subject of German? (tee hee hee – that’s what she said!) https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/175437143703/german-lessons-pairing-drake-x-mc-emma The True Kings by @silviasutton1989 It seems someone was out to assassinate King Liam.  In a botched attempt, one of them grabs a noble woman and makes a run for it. Who is taken?  How will the group rally? Is Cordonia’s leadership council compromised?  

The True Kings Ch. 1 “The 1st Victim” https://silviasutton1989.tumblr.com/post/175283692598/the-true-kings-ch-1-the-1st-victim

“Cherry” 1.2 of the True Kings https://silviasutton1989.tumblr.com/post/175358761478/cherry-12-of-the-true-kings

The True Kings Ch. 2 “Run” https://silviasutton1989.tumblr.com/post/175486703213/the-true-kings-ch-2-run-nsfw

The True Kings Ch. 3 “Suspect” https://silviasutton1989.tumblr.com/post/175589530233/the-true-kings-ch-3-suspect Queen of My Heart Chapter by @walkerismychoice This fabulous retelling of TRR if TRR had been a reality TV show continues.  Riley tells Liam what she thinks is going on, see the crew go camping, and enjoy the suspense of the next plot line with me!

Queen of My Heart Chapter 24 https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/175599950158/queen-of-my-heart-chapter-24 Queen of My Heart Chapter 25 https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/175748982813/queen-of-my-heart-chapter-25 Queen of My Heart Chapter 26 https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/175827206013/queen-of-my-heart-chapter-26 Wake Up Call by @the-everlasting-dream Drake and MC battle out who can be more stubborn.  Drake helps MC wake up in the morning.  Oh, if we could all be this lucky … http://the-everlasting-dream.tumblr.com/post/175638755282/wake-up-call-drake-x-mc-nsfw All’s Fair in Love and War by @tmarie82 Fics where the whole TRR gang is together are my favorite!  They’re like episodes of Friends where the whole gang never leaves the apartment. In this story, the whole gang is playing paintball.  It’s a battle of the sexes.  It’s not a spoiler when I say, we all know the women are going to win – come see how that happens! https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/175674836753/alls-fair-in-love-and-war-characters-the-entire Supposed to Be by @drakewalkerwhipped This seriously amazing series has made me weep, it’s made me laugh, I’ve fallen in love with Liam, Drake and Jaela while simultaneously being pissed with all three of them.  No matter the drama, though, the love these characters has for each other runs deep.  Their acceptance of each other is beautiful, if also heart-wrenching.  Here are chapters 18 – 22.  

Goodbye (supposed to be part 18) https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/174949843936/goodbye-drake-x-mc-x-liam Squeeze (supposed to be part 19) https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/175180615931/squeeze-drake-x-mc-x-liam It’s Over (supposed to be part 20) https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/175412581751/its-over-drake-x-mc-x-liam Loved (supposed to be part 21) https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/175654072351/loved-drake-x-mc-x-liam Here (supposed to be part 22) https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/175889519376/here-drake-x-mc-x-liam-nsfw

Insatiable by @tmarie82 In case you worried that marriage or pregnancy might change our favorite couple and keep them from sneaking away from the party – read this fic and confirm for yourself that this is not true. https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/175820387423/insatiable-pairing-drake-x-mc-emma

Drake X Liam

Forever by @debramcg1106 This series hooked me immediately!  This is a love letter written to Drake.  Come see how MC fits into the love story of Drake and Liam.  Then, when you’re done, come whine to the author with me about how we need an epilogue! Forever https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/174467758764/forever Forever (Part 2) https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/174891205744/forever-part-2 Forever (Part 3) https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/174981062834/forever-part-3 Forever (Part 4) https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/175177760254/forever-part-4-nsfw Forever (Part 5) https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/175422424854/forever-part-5-nsfw Forever (Part 6) https://debramcg1106.tumblr.com/post/175493331209/forever-part-6

Drake x MC x Liam You Can Wait by @drakewalkerwhipped Come see how when you’re in a poly relationship – the definition of “torture” may be ever so slightly different … https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/174308392841/you-can-wait-drake-x-mc-x-liam-nsfw Cuffed (Part 2) by @drakewalkerwhipped In this poly fic, it’s Drake that is the focus. His wants and needs are displayed for all to see – but don’t worry, he’s serviced. Be sure to read to the end because Drake’s admission will melt your heart. https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/175359362276/cuffed-part-2-drake-x-jaela-x-liam-nsfw

Olivia x MC Frozen (The Scarlet Queen Prologue) by @olivia-nevrakis Here’s an AU where Olivia plays the role of Liam.  Can she handle the pressure?  Who will she choose? https://olivia-nevrakis.tumblr.com/post/175407475382/frozen-olivia-x-mcthe-scarlet-queen-prologue Bastien x MC More than This – series by @honeylightningambition Bastien and Tavvy have decided to take a trip together.  This means singing in the car, lots of time together, and (spoiler) will they have to share a very large suite together?  Come see how our favorite couple fares when secrets are revealed and feelings are shared. More than This, Part 15 https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/175969775557/more-than-this-part-fifteen More than This, Part 16 https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/175970112517/more-than-this-part-sixteen More than This, Part 17 https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/175970548927/more-than-this-part-seventeen

More than This, Part 18 https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/175970952907/more-than-this-part-eighteen

Chris x MC

Light a Candle for Me Part 3: “This is the worst of humanity.” By @drivenbyfantasy The next chapter of this amazing series will make you smile and it will make you cry.  The kindness of individuals will warm your heart.  The reality of war will be heartbreaking. https://drivenbyfantasy.tumblr.com/post/175456630891/light-a-candle-for-me-part-3-this-is-the-worst

Boston – Girls Like You (2-8c) by @maxattack-powell Chris has taken MC to Boston to help get her mind off of how stupid James is being. Come hang out with Ethan (my favorite) and text with Ryan.  See how well Chris and MC take care of each other. Oh!  And meet MC’s ex – Peter! https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/175569787221/boston-girls-like-you-2-8c-nsfw

Writer’s Retreat (AU), Part 12 by @lolablackwrites (see a greater explanation in the section of Zig x MC) MC spends the day at the fair with Chris. Things are sweet. https://lolablackwrites.tumblr.com/post/175600631360/writers-retreat-au-part-12-chris-x-mc

Crashed (the Junior AU) Part 3 by @flynnomalleys Chris is depressed because of his injuries in the accident.  The gang goes out to blow some steam.  Harsh words are exchanged.  True colors are revealed.  Jenny (MC) makes some questionable decisions but ends up on the right side.  Will she survive the night? https://flynnomalleys.tumblr.com/post/173361480687/crashed-the-junior-au-part-3 Reunited Part 1 by @eadanga Chris and MC broke up after dating for 4 years.  Everything seems amicable.  What will happen with Chris returns?  Does MC even want to see Chris? https://eadanga.tumblr.com/post/174837673554/reunited-part-1 The Hartfield Athletic Trainer: Wrap it Up by @maxattack-powell Chris has been hard core flirting with the athletic trainer, who definitely returns his feelings.  What comes next?  Find out in this “mad-libs” style fic. https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/175764071801/the-hartfeld-athletic-trainer-wrap-it-up Close Encounters Ch. 9/10/11 by @kinkykingliam I don’t know how @kinkykingliam keeps all of her stories straight.  In this AU, Chris and MC have reunited quickly and it seemed like there would be no problems at all with the ex, Jeremy … and then Jeremy comes back … https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/174629943212/close-encounters-chris-powell-au-ch-91011 The Boy Next Door – Chapter 4 – Moving Past It by @kinkykingliam Chris and MC never dated in college. Chris went pro and MC married another man.  One child and one divorce later, MC isn’t really thinking about dating anyone else. She’s just trying to make things work with the father.  Will things change when Chris ends up buying the house next door? https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/175868556292/the-boy-next-door-chris-powell-au-chapter-4 The Bond (AU: Chris x MC x Zig) by @maxattack-powell Chris and MC share an apartment.  Zig is over quite often.  Learn more about where things stand in the first chapter of this mini-series. https://maxattack-powell.tumblr.com/post/175949148558/the-bond-au-chris-x-mc-x-zig James x MC

Never Mess With a Lioness and her Pride by @keltic-moon Things seem to go so well when Sam (MC) is able to bring people together to bring Nathan down.  Sam has a history though.  Will it be returning? http://keltic-moon.tumblr.com/post/175519183462/never-mess-with-a-lioness-and-her-pride Zig x MC

Writer’s Retreat (AU) by @lolablackwrites James has allowed/stashed Charlotte (MC) away in a cabin while he gets married and goes on his honeymoon.  Sure, he’s an ass for doing so, but it’s working out well for Charlotte.  She’s enjoying time with both Chris and Zig.  Here are the most recent Zig chapters. Writer’s Retreat (AU), Part 10 https://lolablackwrites.tumblr.com/post/175264702225/writers-retreat-au-part-10-zig-x-mc-nsfw

Writer’s Retreat (AU), Part 11 https://lolablackwrites.tumblr.com/post/175461591925/writers-retreat-au-part-11-zig-x-mc-nsfw

Damien x MC Part 1 by @clarissafics A delightful retelling of Perfect Match. One where Maya (MC) isn’t easily swooning over Hayden and is a bit more aware of her feelings for Damien. https://clarissafics.tumblr.com/post/175504149863/part-1 Mismatched, Ch 1 – Welcome to Kindergarten! By @kinkykingliam Hayden and Kaia (MC) have a child named Gemma. It’s Gemma’s first day of school. Does Damien still love Kaia? https://kinkykingliam.tumblr.com/post/174788458582/mismatched-ch1-welcome-to-kindergarten-its Everything (Damien One-Shot) by @drakewalkerwhipped Kai blows up Eros … will Damien make it out in time? https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/174647355736/everything-damien-one-shot Not a Date by @lizeboredom Come fall in love with Damien all over again. Or for the first time.  If that doesn’t get you to read it, maybe this will: come discover what Damien has in his wallet that makes him blush. http://choicesfanfic.com/content/not-a-date/ Seth x MC

Defining Moments, Part 1 by @mrswalkerwrites See why Seth and Willa (MC) are such a good pair.  Enjoy their dorky banter.  Watch Willa blurt out what she is thinking and Seth simply state what he is feeling. This fic is bound to put a smile on your face.   https://mrswalkerwrites.tumblr.com/post/175446597793/defining-moments-part-1-seth-x-mc-pg

Kenna x Val The Queens of Stormholt: Trials and Tribulations Chapter 17/23 The King of Cordonia by @kennaxval Love is the rallying cry of the victorious in this amazing chapter of the Queens of Stormholt.  Come see how Liam reacts to being pulled into the past. https://kennaxval.tumblr.com/post/175066418972/the-queens-of-stormholt-trials-and-tribulations As always, I hope you find something new to read on the list this week!

Have a GREAT week all!

end notes:

(1) Big thanks to @drivenbyfantasy for creating the graphic.  

(2) I reblogged 88 fics since my last post. Eek!  I’m slowing down!  Haha!  In my defense, I also read three full books. So like an additional 600 pages outside of tumblr-land.

Yes, I have an addiction to your work.  No, I don’t know how I keep up with this.

(3) Last, but not least, on the off chance that I missed a fic that you know I reblogged, my apologies! It was unintentional and is not a reflection on you, but upon my inability to maintain my own blog.  Also, if a link or a tag doesn’t work – my apologies if the error is on my part.  My last review worked on mobile but not the desktop … don’t know how I was able to make that happen …

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MFackenthal: A Week in Reviews

Welcome all to the first ever “MFackenthal: A Week in Reviews” - the post where I list everything I have read this week and provide a short description to entice you to read them too.  This is where we learn that I spend too much time on tumblr.  As this is my first post like this – if you have suggestions for how I should do this post in the future – please let me know.  I consider this blog always to be a “work in progress” and I welcome ideas for how best to organize things so to be better for you my dear readers!

What follows is a list of the fics I reviewed this week.  Quick note: This list does not include headcanon posts, ABC posts or any post that wasn’t directly related to a story or storyline.  This also only includes reblogs and not work I “liked” but wasn’t able to provide commentary on.

This means that if you want to find out what I specifically thought about each chapter, that can be found on my blog.  To more easily search my blog, search the phrase “mfackenthal reviews ________” and fill in the blank with the blog name.  IE “mfackenthal reviews maxattack-powell” to find the work I reblogged specifically by @maxattack-powell.

In case it’s not obvious: I recommend ALL of these fics and ALL of these authors.  I cannot say enough about the fabulousness that is these authors. 

The list is organized by love interest.

If the “read more” works then you’ll find the full list under the cut.

Maxwell:

1.  Maxwell gets an education – MC can thank Adelaide later … 

Wild Thoughts by @pbchoicesobsessed

Liam:

2. Does Liam even know what love is?  Catch up with me – I think parts 7 and maybe even 8 are out now.  I’ll be reading those this week for sure!

You Have Never Loved Me Part 4 by @kawairinrin

You Have Never Loved Me Part 5 by @kawairinrin

You Have Never Loved Me Part 6 by @kawairinrin

3. When a couple isn’t on the same page about children … when does separate pages turn into different books altogether?  When mistakes are made how do we come back from that?  I cannot wait to see where this series goes next!

An Heir (Part 16) by @viktoriapetit

An Heir (Part 18) by @viktoriapetit

An Heir (Part 19) by @viktoriapetit

An Heir (Part 20) by @viktoriapetit

4. Honestly – I live and breathe for this series!  I am currently so pissed at Liam. 

TSS: Part 35 by @choicesfanatic86

TSS: Part 36 by @choicesfanatic86

TSS: Part 37 (1/2) by @choicesfanatic86

TSS: Part 37 (2/2) by @choicesfanatic86

5. If I’m pissed at Liam in the TSS series, I am head-over-heals in love with him in this series.  If this was the Liam of the books, Drake would not stand a chance.  

If only: Chapter 9 by @choicesfanatic86

If Only: Chapter 10 by @choicesfanatic86

6. This story is about Liam and MC, but damn if I didn’t fall in love with Drake in this one. 

Terrible Love – Chapter 15 by @confessionsofabrokegirl

Terrible Love – Epilogue by @confessionsofabrokegirl

7. The conversation you didn’t know you needed MC to have with Liam.  It’s so beautiful! 

Wait by @mrswalkerwrites

8. If MC is gonna be the mistress – she should have some fun – and she does!  It’s not all fun though ...

The King’s Mistress by @captainkingliam

The King’s Mistress – The Duchy – Pt. 3 by @captainkingliam

9.  All the Scandals that the King gets to see … 

Arrangements by @hellospunkiebrewster

10.  I’m still mourning the loss of the corgi.  This story in three parts is sad, it’s angsty, it’s going to set us up for so much more drama.  

When Three Became Two by @laniquelove

When They Give Up by @laniquelove

When They’ve Had Enough by @laniquelove

11. Husband and wife swap lives. Let’s just say she does a better job at being him than the reverse.  A very humorous read.  

Freaky Friday – Part 1 by @xxrainbowprincessxx

Freaky Friday – Part 2 by @xxrainbowprincessxx

12. If you haven’t started this series yet, it’s time to do so.  Then start whining for more with me! Find out what happens with MC leaves, Liam is hurt, Olivia gets a little too much power, and Cordonia moves towards democratization ...

We the People Ch. 6 – A Dinner Party by @captainkingliam

Drake:

13. I am absolutely in love with this series.  In the AU, everyone is working at an elementary school.  I need more ASAP @larryssunflower!

TRR AU – Teachers (part three) by @larryssunflower

14. It’s built into the title – this is Everything You Ever Wanted. It’s funny.  It’s creative.  Read it.

Secrets – Part 12 of “Everything You Ever Wanted” by @lizeboredom

Foreign Affairs – Part 13 of “Everything You Ever Wanted”  by @lizeboredom

14.  This is another series that I live and breathe for.  Catch up and learn one more reason why I hate Constantine!

Queen of My Heart – Chapter 19 by @walkerismychoice

Queen of My Heart – Chapter 20 by @walkerismychoice

15.  I live for the snarky teasing that Drake provides as written by @tmarie82.

Fireside Games (Part 1) by @tmarie82

16.  Did I mention that I love Drake and snark?  Drake gets the last word in this fic … 

Idle Threats by @lizeboredom

17. An AU where Drake met MC first and while he was in college … I can’t wait to see where this goes!

Bonfire by @traeumerinwitzhelden  

18.  When Drake is fluffy my heart melts. 

3 AM by @drakewalkerwhipped

19. A Poly story where Savannah is less than supportive.

Ours Forever by @bobasheebaby

Conflict by @bobasheebaby

The Blow Up by @bobasheebaby

Bastien:

20. A slow burn that is anything but slow.  Check this series out and you may never see Bastien quite the same way again … 

More Than This – Part Seven by @honeylightningambition

More Than This – Part Eight by @honeylightningambition

Leo:

21. Liam and Leo fall for the same girl ... so far only one of them has admitted it ... Catch up on this series and cheer Leo on with me. 

Duties of a Prince – Chapter 17 by @theroyalweisme

22.  Catch up on this series and help me decide if I want the father to be Liam or Leo … 

The Waterfall, part 7 of The Other Brother Series by @captainkingliam

The Test, part 8 of The Other Brother Series by @captainkingliam

Original Characters:

23. Okay – if I had to choose a favorite of the week – this would be my favorite.  Of course, this piece was written for me and makes me character in the world of A Prince of the Sea as written by @captainkingliam.  This references the only fic I have ever written and may be the only fic I ever write.  (We’ll see.)  I still claim what I wrote was more support than fic.  You can read it here: The Case of the Maligned Prince. Luca sends me my favorite flowers.  I love you, @captainkingliam!

The Case of the Maligned Prince – Luca Tribute by @captainkingliam

24. I love Luca!  This is the series about Luca.  I’m the president of a fanclub about Luca and his siblings. Obviously, I’m invested in this story and think you should be too.  In case you don’t know, Luca is the oldest son of Riley and Liam and this story is about his social season.

A Prince of the Sea – Chapter 9 by @captainkingliam

A Prince of the Sea – Chapter 10 by @captainkingliam

A Prince of the Sea – Chapter 11 by @captainkingliam

Damien:

 25. I know these were listed about but it’s a crossover.  So I’ll simply repeat what I said above: It’s built into the title – this is Everything You Ever Wanted. It’s funny.  It’s creative.  Read it. 

Secrets – Part 12 of “Everything you Ever Wanted” by @lizeboredom

Foreign Affairs – Part 13 by @lizeboredom

26. Damien gets played by MC.  Win win really.

Tell Me You’re Mine by @mrsnazario1223

27.  Romantic comedy meets realism in this beautiful fic. 

The Moment by @mrswalkerwrites

Chris:

28. When MC feels guilty for spending time with Nathan … 

Wake Me From This Nightmare by @darley1101

29. If you love Chris and haven’t yet found the better more thorough recount of The Freshman as written by @maxattack-powell, then today is your day!  This chapter highlights the way Chris and MC support each other.  I love it.  You’ll also get just a little time with another OC who I love: Ethan. 

The Freshman 2-8a: The Hospital by @maxattack-powell

30. Chris struggles with the “no strings attached” line he has given MC … 

Caught During the Storm: Part 3 … Out Came the Sun … by @emerald-bijou

Seth:

31.  When one Minah is mad at Seth … he finds comfort with a different Minah.

Lucky by @lizeboredom

Kenna x Val

32.  Chapter 2 of 23 about the Queens of Stormholt.  I’m a bit behind on reviewing this work, but I think we’re up to chapter 9.  I’ll be reviewing this week, if I can.  Catch up with me.  If you read The Crown and The Flame – or even if you didn’t.  It’s time for us to revisit it through this series. 

The Queens of Stormholt: Chapter 2 by @kennaxval

note: Another big thanks to @drivenbyfantasy for creating the graphic.  She and many others (notably: @maxattack-powell, @captainkingliam, @theroyalweisme, @trianiasti, @queencatherynerhys, @tmarie82, and @lizeboredom) helped me think through what this post would look like each week.  Thank you to all of you for your help and to any of you who read this!

One final note:  I reblogged 56 fics this week.

Yes, I have a problem. No, I don’t (yet) want help.

Last, but not least, on the off chance that I missed a fic that you know I reblogged, my apologies! It was unintentional and is not a reflection on you, but upon my inability to maintain my own blog.  Also, if a link or a tag doesn’t work - I am sorry! My excuse:  56 links. 

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TTS:  Part 33 In Liam’s Eyes (1/2)

DISCLAIMER:  All characters belong to Pixelberry Studios, except characters unique to my story.  Those belong to me. ;)

PAIRINGS:  Riley (MC) x OC, Riley (MC) x Liam, Liam x Riley (MC) x OC, Olivia x Drake, Bertrand x Savannah, Maxwell x OC

SUMMARY:  Liam learns of Riley’s accident, and is having a difficulty time coping.

If you are new to the series and would like to catch up by reading previous parts, please check out my master fan fiction listing.  CATCH UP HERE

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5/20/18 - This had to be split into two parts.  Please note that you will not need to read this part in order to figure out what happens in part 34.  It would help though since this part (the part 2 of this part) gives you a little sneak peak at what’s to come. ;)  Part 2 will be posted 7:00 pm HST. :)

As always thank you for the awesome feedback.  SO blessed and lucky to have ya’ll reading my fics!

PART 33 - In Liam’s Eyes (Part 1)

Liam hadn’t been in the mood for a party, but Olivia was one of his dearest friends.  She’d also been working extraordinarily hard on a new initiative that could bolster the small country’s tourism.  So when she approached him about possibly providing the venue for her upcoming birthday celebration that Drake would be hosting, he didn’t have the heart to tell her no.  She deserved this celebration, and he was happy enough to oblige, although he did find it curious why it was her asking him instead of Drake.  

Even though he could think of a handful of ways he could better be spending his evening, he didn’t want to disappoint her, and it did provide a healthy diversion from the multitude of other thoughts on his mind.  He’d spent most evenings lately locked in his study, sipping scotch and working on bills that needed his review and approval.  He enjoyed keeping busy.  Busy was good because busy meant less time to think.  He wasn’t a big fan of thinking lately.  It had gotten him into far too much trouble.

He watched from his balcony as handfuls of Cordonia’s most elite nobles wandered into the palace; Liam wondered if his presence would be greatly missed at the celebration.  He considered doing a once around the room then sneaking back into his study so that at least Olivia couldn’t fault him for not showing up.  But he thought better of it when he realized that regardless, these people were in his home, and it would be hard to explain away the fact that he wasn’t present at least for a majority of the night.  He sighed, leaving his study to head toward the main ballroom.

As he walked leisurely around the room, greeting the various nobles, his eyes wandered to Maxwell who was escorting Lady Andy in from one of the side doors.  They made their way toward the appetizer table, and appeared to make themselves quite comfortable.  It was amazing that Maxwell had found himself a woman who could handle all of his antics, more so, that she enjoyed his little quirks more than anything.  As he walked over, he heard Andy laugh sweetly, smiling brightly.  So much of her personality reminded him of Riley.  He wondered if I was a requirement to be funny in order to live in New York.  Both girls had similar personalities and similar mannerisms, and it absolutely killed him when he was around her.  She reminded him so much of Riley.  He liked Andy, he truly did, but every time he saw her, his heart hurt just a bit more because it was a constant reminder that Riley was gone.  For good.  All because of him.  Liam composed himself.  He couldn’t think about this now.  It was over and done with.  He had made his decision, and he would stand by it.  He was the country’s monarch.  He couldn’t bother himself with such trivial concerns.  He cleared his throat, making his presence known to the distracted couple.

“Lady Andy, Lord Maxwell,” he bowed his head in greeting.  “How wonderful of both of you to join us this evening.  Lady Olivia will be pleased to see you,” he grasped Maxwell’s hand firmly.  “Lady Andy, you look quite lovely this evening.”

She blushed, mumbling a quiet thank you.  She still didn’t seem to be very comfortable at court.   She had a hard time blending in with the other nobles, and he wondered if that’s what Riley felt like at times, that he was too blind to see it.

“Where’s the guest of honor?” Andy asked, pulling a card out from her handbag.  “We wanted to give this to her before it gets forgotten,” she smiled lightly.

“I’m fairly certain she’s in the kitchens yelling at the caterer,” Liam mused. “Nothing has been going quite right for her today, unfortunately.”

“The birthday girl is worrying about planning snafus at her party?” Maxwell raised his eyebrows.  “I thought Drake was the one planning things.”

Liam stifled a quiet laugh.  “Do you really think that Lady Olivia would entrust her birthday celebration to our dear friend, Drake?  He barely tolerates the court events we host.  Did you really think that he’d be amiable to planning an event  . . . for the ever particular Lady Olivia?”

“Of course not,” Maxwell shrugged. “I figured he’d at least be helping today, though.”

Liam shook his head.  Maxwell, ever the optimist; it’s why they were such good friends.  He needed Maxwell’s positivity in his life.  “I’m sure he’s with her in the kitchens.  His hand likely glued to a bottle of whiskey,” Liam chuckled.

Andy snickered a little, as if there were some private joke he wasn’t included in.  Her eyes lit up much like Riley’s did when she laughed.  His lighthearted mood started to take a nosedive.  “Well, I better be off.  Olivia should be back soon to make the formal announcements of dinner.   I’ll let her know to come and find you as soon  I see her,” he waved goodbye, intending to grab a drink to numb his mind a bit, however, as soon as he left their presence, he had gotten caught up with discussion with an ambassador on the country’s new trade agreements.

That seemed to be the trend throughout the evening.  Liam bounced from one person to another, and really had no opportunity to make a break for his study.  He had found himself caught up with one of the local dukes on his new education initiative that he had hoped to implement by the following school term.  The duke was making a passionate bid for some additional programs, and Liam was listening intently to his suggestions, until Olivia’s voice pierced through the room’s sound system.

“Is this thing on?” She said rather loudly, her voice bouncing off the ceiling.  “Thank you everyone for deciding to spend your evening celebrating my birthday,” Olivia smiled brightly, holding a large champagne flute in her hand.  “Dinner will be served promptly in around thirty minutes, and then we will be graced with the wonderful performance of . . . “

Liam’s attention waned in and out of Olivia’s speech.  It was all the same.  Every party, every ball.  It followed the same structure, there was nothing really different or special about it.  His attention shifted back to the duke, who continued to speak despite Olivia’s loud voice.  He tried to pay attention, but found his gaze wandering to Andy and Maxwell in the corner of the ballroom.  They were seated at a table with Savannah and Bertrand.  Both couples were quite taken with one another.  It was amazing how a few years could change so much.  He remembered, before he became king, they had all been single and lived relatively carefree lifestyles.  It was amazing to see everyone settling down, making lives for themselves.  He was particularly surprised at how drastic Maxwell���s life had changed over the last couple of months.  He had always known that Maxwell, with his effervescent charm, did well when it came to landing women, keeping them, on the other hand, was an entirely different matter.  He’d had his fair share of fleeting romances, but they were always with women who could never seem to last beyond a few weeks.  It usually ended in him getting bored and driving the poor girl insane with his antics.  Andy was different.  Andy was a keeper.

As happy as he was for his friends, he couldn’t help but feel a bit jealous.  He wanted what they had.  He thought he had found it, but unfortunately, it seemed like once again, love just wasn’t a part of the hand that life had dealt him.  Perhaps he was better off anyway.  Love was always a distraction.  He always found it difficult to balance what he knew he needed to do and what he wanted.  He could never invest his time equally.  That’s why he had lost Riley the first time.  He was torn between what he knew should happen and what he wanted.  So what if the monarchy died with him?  Perhaps one of Leo’s children would fare better as the country’s monarch one day.  That is if they even wanted it.  He best knew the sacrifices he made for the monarchy, for his country, and for his people.

His thoughts were interrupted by a shrill cry.  The duke was still yammering away, unfazed by the cry that just broke through the ballroom.  He swallowed thickly, his eyes wandering across the room, hoping that nothing was gravely wrong.  His eyes drifted to the corner, where Andy had been sobbing loudly.

His heart dropped to his stomach.  Something was wrong.  He could see it written on Andy’s face.

“If you’ll excuse me,” he cut the duke off, rushing to the corner table, not caring if he offended the man.

“Tiger Lilly? What is it?” Maxwell arose from his chair, grasping her shoulder tightly.

“It’s Riley!  Something’s wrong,” she said frantically, fiddling with the buttons on her phone, trying to dial a number.  “I can’t get through,” she sobbed.

At the mention of Riley’s name, Liam could have sworn that his heart had stopped for a moment.  The ballroom started to get hazy, and the voices around him were echoing inside of his head.  What happened to her?  “What’s wrong?” he asked carefully.  “Did she try calling you?”

She shook her head hysterically.  “N-no,” she stammered.  “It was just a voicemail.  Alicia said they were at the hospital,” she said through her hyperventilation.  

He licked his lips, trying to place the name she mentioned.  He’d heard it before, but he couldn’t remember what the relationship was.  But that didn’t matter right now.  All that mattered is they figured out what was going on with Riley and go from there.

Bertrand walked over to a crying Andy, a displeased look on her face.  “You’re making a scene, it might be prudent to continue this discussion outside,” he said sternly.

“B-but, it’s Riley.”

His face softened at the mention of Riley’s name.  “Lady Riley?  What’s wrong?”

“I-I don’t know.”

“Andy, just breathe for a moment,” Liam looked at her, grasping her hand.  “Take a few deep breaths, and let’s start at the beginning.  What did the voicemail say?”

“That there had been an accident,” she inhaled deeply, “and that she was at New York Presbyterian with Andy.  She said she was unconscious.”

Liam took a sharp intake of breath.  He tried not to let it show, but he was winded.  The fact that she was involved in some sort of accident was worrisome enough, but to hear that she was unconscious, that was even worse.

“Unconscious?” Maxwell gasped.  “As in . . . a coma?”

Liam’s heart crumbled.  Of course Maxwell would jump to the most outrageous conclusion, but then again, what if he was right?  What if she was in a coma?  Oh Lord, he’d been so awful to her.  He’d said such horrible things to her because he was hurt and jealous, and now he didn’t even know if she was alright.

“Call the hospital,” Bertrand ordered.  “If you can’t get through to her dingbat friend, go to the source.  Now, Andy.”

She nodded, taken aback by his gruff tone.  Her hands trembled as she searched for the hospital’s number.

“Hello? Yes . . . yes I need to check on the status of a patient.  Her name is Riley Lawson.  I’m not sure what happened, I just got a voicemail saying she was at New York Presbyterian,” her eyes met Liam’s, as she tried to hold herself together.  “No, no not from the hospital, from her assistant.  I – uh – I’m assuming sometime today?  I just got the message, and it doesn’t really give me too much information.  I’d imagine she’d be in the emergency room?”

“What are they saying?” Bertrand demanded, his face grim.

Andy didn’t answer, she was too focused on the phone call.  “We made each other our emergency contacts in case something happened.  It might be on record?  Oh, well I can’t really do that as I’m in Europe right now,” she mumbled.  “There has to be something else I can do?  I can do like a video chat.  Oh, you don’t have that sort of capabilities.  I – I don’t know anyone else who can go down . . . I guess I’ll just have to keep trying to her phone, maybe her assistant will answer,” she sighed, tears running down her cheeks.  “Can you at least tell me if she’s there? You can’t?”  She gasped, the sobs starting again.  “No, I understand.  I understand.”

Andy looked at the three men surrounding her, shaking her heads.  “They couldn’t help me.  Something about me having to show identification to prove who I am,” she sighed.  “I shouldn’t have stayed.  I should have been with her, then none of this would have happened.”

“Andy, don’t say that,” Maxwell hugged her tightly.  “We don’t even know what happened yet,” he tried to reason with her.

“What do you mean they won’t release any information from you?” Bertrand fumed.

“That’s what the girl I spoke with said,” Andy shrugged.

“Did you ask to speak to a manager?”  He asked in annoyance.

“Obviously, I didn’t Bertrand,” she sniffled.

“Unacceptable.  Give me the number,” he had his hand out waiting for her phone.

“Bertrand, perhaps this isn’t the best course of action.  Perhaps there’s another way.  I’m sure I can make some calls to the American embassy, see if they are able to procure the information we are looking for,” Liam tried to rationalize things.

Bertrand held his finger up toward Liam, shaking his head.  “Yes, my name is Bertrand Beaumont.  An acquaintance of mine called earlier regarding a Riley Lawson.  We wish to know her medical status.  Yes well she is a member of my family.  What’s it matter that we don’t have the same last name?” He narrowed his eyes at the phone.  “She’s a sister,” he said firmly.  “Well, I can’t come down to the facility because I’m currently in Europe,” he explained tersely.

“Her social security number?  How in the bloody hell would I know that?  No, this is unacceptable.   I would like to speak to your superior officer.  That will not do.  Let me speak to an administrator then.  No I don’t know what time it is there.  As your thick head does not seem to be comprehending, let me speak clearly and slowly.  I.  Am.  In.  Europe.  It is impossible for me to come down,” he yelled into the phone.  “Hello?  Hello?”  He threw the phone back to Andy.  “They hung up on me,” he said angrily.

“Guys, Olivia wants you to quiet down.  You’re disrupting the cello performance.  She’s kind of freaking out that there seems to be some sort of incident with ‘my people’, as she put it, so what’s going on?”

“It’s Riley,” Maxwell murmured.  “She’s in a coma,” he said sadly.

“What?  Lawson?” Drake exclaimed, his eyes scanning over everyone’s fear-stricken faces.  “It’s bad, isn’t it?”

“Maxwell,” Liam shook his head.  “We don’t know anything yet,” he explained.  Andy received a voicemail, but it didn’t reveal as much information as we would hope.”

“I need to go to New York,” Andy sniffled.  “I need to get back there and find out how she is.  I’m just wasting time being here.  I need to know she’s okay,” she looked at Maxwell pleadingly.

Liam cleared his throat.  “We’ll get you on the first flight to New York.  Anything you need, it will be at your disposal.  I assure you, we will make sure you’re on that flight within the hour,” he said firmly.  “Maxwell, take her home, help her get packed.  Then take her to the airport.  The plane will be waiting when she gets there,” Liam said calmly.

Andy and Maxwell left the ballroom.  Bertrand followed shortly after retrieving Savannah from their table.  Liam excused himself to his study, his phone already pressed to his ear making the arrangements for Andy to utilize his private plane.  For a moment, he wanted to go himself.  He thought about packing a quick bag and heading to the airport and fly to New York with Andy by his side, but then he realized, she probably wouldn’t want him there.  He’d said such horrible things to her.  She probably didn’t want to ever look at him again.  Drake was right.  As soon as she left, he should have called her to apologize.  He should have stopped her from leaving . . . but he was too embarrassed.  To prideful.  He didn’t want to admit that he was wrong.  He knew deep down that she wouldn’t betray him, but with Paul being back, and learning about their shared kiss, he just couldn’t fathom losing her again.  He wasn’t going to let her be the one to break him.  He was going to break her first.  He was going to make sure she didn’t have the chance to shatter his heart again.  And look where it got him.  Broken and alone anyway.  As much as he wanted to make amends and pretend as if the outburst had happened, he just couldn’t.  No, he lost the right to love her and care about her the moment he kicked her out of the palace.  And for what?  To lick the wounds of his injured ego?  To ensure he kept his pride.  It hardly seemed worth it now, considering she was in the hospital.

He poured himself a glass of scotch, filling it up much more than he typically did.  He needed something extra strong to numb the pain tonight.  He gazed out the window, much like he did the night he told her to leave, overcome with emotion, he allowed a single tear to fall down his cheek.

A knock at the door, startled him.  He wiped the stray tear away, composing himself.  He sniffled, as he said, “Come in.”

Drake marched in, looking distraught.  A glass of whiskey in his hand.

“Seems like we had the same idea,” Liam said, raising his glass.

“You doing okay?” Drake asked him, rubbing his free hand behind his neck.  “I can’t believe this is happening,” he murmured, sitting in the chair across from the window.  

“Has Olivia calmed down?” Liam asked, not wanting to focus on the issue at hand.

“After I explained to her that something happened to Riley, she cooled it,” he sighed.  “I knew this party was a bad idea,” he shrugged.  “I got a text from Maxwell.  Andy’s flight took off about ten minutes ago,” he said quietly.

“Good,” he whispered, taking a long sip from his scotch.  He continued to gaze out the window, not able to meet Drake’s eyes.

“What are you thinking about?”  Drake asked, watching him carefully.

“Her.  Always her,” he said quietly.

“I’m sure she’s fine, Liam,” Drake leaned forward.

“And if she isn’t?” He said darkly, his mouth formed into a thin line.

Drake sat silent.   “She has to be,” he shrugged.  “Come on, Liam.  She’s Lawson.  She’s a bad ass.  We won’t know anything until Andy gets back to New York.  Quick thinking on the private plane, by the way.  Getting through commercial would have taken three times as long,” Drake reasoned.

“Yes, well.  It’s the least I can do considering . . .” he let the thought trail off, knowing Drake would know what he was referring to.

“Yeah, you uh . . . didn’t want to go with her?” Drake hummed out.

Liam shook his head slowly.  “It wouldn’t have been right,” he said.  “Considering what happened before she left,” he reasoned.

Drake watched him sadly.  He could see the despair in Liam’s eyes.  “So uh, I was supposed to give you something . . . I didn’t know when the right time would be,” he shrugged, reaching into the pocket of his jeans.  “I’ve been hanging onto it for a while . . . sorry it got a bit messed up since I’ve had it so long . . . I was uh . . . waiting to see if you were ready to read it . . . It’s from Lawson,” he rambled.

Liam’s eyes turned away from the window, meeting Drake’s gaze.  “What is it?”

“I’m not sure, exactly.  She told me not to open it, and for fear of her wrath, I listened.  Seemed pretty important though . . . she wanted me to give it to you when you were ready.”

He nodded, motioning to the desk. “Just leave it on my desk,” he said quietly.

“You’re not going to open it?” Drake asked.

“Later,” Liam murmured.  “Go be with Olivia, Drake.  Don’t take a single day for granted, otherwise, you’ll end up like this,” he raised his glass, his eyes red from a mixture of tiredness and heartache.

Drake shook his head, looking at the sadness in his eyes.  “It’s never too late you know,” Drake murmured as he got up and started to walk towards the study’s door.

“I’m already late, Drake.  She’s in the goddamn hospital,” he sighed raising his glass once more before downing the rest of the contents.  He let the amber liquid burn his throat.  When he heard the door click shut, he allowed himself to give into the overwhelming tears that threatened to fall since Andy got that damn voicemail.

[mfackenthal]

MFackenthal: A Week In Reviews

Welcome to the second installment of “MFackenthal: A Week in Reviews” – the post where I list everything I have read this week and provide a short description to entice you to read them too.

A few reminders:

(1) This list does not include headcanon posts, ABC posts or any post that wasn’t directly related to a story or storyline.  This also only includes reblogs and not work I “liked” but wasn’t able to provide commentary on.  

(2) If you want to find out what I specifically thought about each chapter, that can be found on my blog.  To more easily search my blog, search the phrase “mfackenthal reviews ________” and fill in the blank with the blog name.  IE “mfackenthal reviews maxattack-powell” to find the work I reblogged specifically by @maxattack-powell.

(3) In case it’s not obvious: I recommend ALL of these fics and ALL of these authors.  I cannot say enough about the fabulousness that is these authors. 

(4)  I know that including the permalinks isn’t very pretty, but it is so much faster than me copying and pasting the link into the title.  If this is truly bothersome, please let me know.

The list is loosely organized by love interest.  As some of these stories are poly or love triangles, some are just listed by whichever love interest I decided it was safest to feature.  

If the “read more” works then you’ll find the full list under the cut.

Liam

1. In this series Riley returns to Cordonia after having had to return to New York single … last week I told you I was frustrated with Liam … I’m a little less frustrated with Liam in this series this week.  I cannot wait for the rest of the conversation that the author hints we’ll be getting soon!

TTS: Part 38 by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174486571363/tts-part-38-liam-x-mc

TTS: Part 39 by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174601175230/tts-part-39-liam-x-mc

2.  A one-shot about when Liam gets jealous.

Green-Eyed by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174497410523/green-eyed-liam-x-mc

3.  A pregnant Riley returned to New York.  Later Liam meets his son Levi and returns to Cordonia.

Achlys – Part VI of Himeros by @madaraism

http://madaraism.tumblr.com/post/174507175212/achlys-part-vi-of-himeros

4.  A great series that I caught up on this week.  Riley never went to Cordonia with Maxwell in this AU, but ends up with the gang right before Liam’s marriage to Olivia.  Surprisingly, I find I really like Olivia in this version of the story … catch up and see if you agree with me.  

One Night in the City – Part 2 – The Waitress by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173294641864/one-night-in-the-city-trr-au-part-2-the

Part 6 – Restless @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173450548209/one-night-in-the-city-trr-au-part-6-restless

Part 7 – Going Home by @ladynonsense

https://mfackenthal.tumblr.com/post/174537509422/onitc-trr-au-part-7-going-home

Part 8 – The Wedding by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173485360489/onitc-trr-au-part-8-the-wedding-nsfw

Part 9 – Safe @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173547631594/onitc-trr-au-part-9-safe

Part 10 – Complicated by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173640169529/onitc-trr-au-part-10-complicated-nsfw

Part 11 – Honesty by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173827428539/onitc-trr-au-part-11-honesty-nsfw

Part 12 – Aftermath by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173853693529/onitc-trr-au-part-12-aftermath

Part 13 – Secrets by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/173901319469/onitc-trr-au-part-13-secrets

Part 14 – I Do by @ladynonsense

https://ladynonsense.tumblr.com/post/174338201709/onitc-trr-au-part-14-i-do

5.  An AU co-written by @pbchoicesobsessed and @boneandfur – truly, that should be enough said to make you want to read this.  It’s historical and it’s our favorite TRR crew. 

A World Apart – Chapter One by @a--world--apart--fic

https://a--world--apart--fic.tumblr.com/post/174556388607/a-world-apart-chapter-one

6.  In this story, Riley has married Liam in Vegas, but she doesn’t quite remember the wedding night. She remembers a little more in each chapter. 

If Only – Chapter 11 by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174570834873/if-only-chapter-11-liam-x-mc-nsfw

Chapter 12 by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174603368656/if-only-chapter-12-liam-x-mc

7.  Things are really starting to get angsty in this series where Riley has to be Liams mistress.

The King’s Mistress – Earl Rainer Albrecht – Part 4 by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174571771582/the-kings-mistress-earl-rainer-albrecht-pt-4

8.  A very sexy fic where Freya tries to win an argument and things don’t quite go her way …

Turning Tables by @laniquelove

https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/174568711520/turning-tables

9.  Catch up on this series where MC didn’t marry Liam and after some time Liam is no longer King. 

We the People – Chapter 9: It’s Always During Dinner by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174540131632/we-the-people-ch-9-its-always-during-dinner

Chapter 10: Nailah by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174597544122/we-the-people-ch-10-nailah

Chapter 11: iHop by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174672767787/we-the-people-ch-11-ihop

10.  Liam and Freya have a wonderful family, a beautiful life together, but will secrets coming to light lead to divorce? 

January by @laniquelove

https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/174601902669/january

February by @laniquelove

https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/174638202393/february

March by @laniquelove

https://laniquelove.tumblr.com/post/174666650108/march

11. And speaking of secrets, you should catch up on this series about what could have happened if Drake never told Liam of his love for MC.

The Consequences of Secrets – Part 1: The Confession by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173182421977/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-confession-1

Part 2: The Aftermath by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173207689227/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-aftermath-2

Part 3: The Library by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173249512762/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-library-3

Part 4: The King by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173279015142/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-king-part-4

Part 7: The Getaway by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173659098172/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-getaway-part-7

Part 8: The Commoner by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/173799039968/the-consequence-of-secrets-the-commoner-part-8

Part 9: The Council by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/174039954932/the-consequence-of-secrets-part-9-the-council

Part 10: The Island by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/174337544140/the-consequence-of-secrets-part-10-the-island

Part 11A: The Last Straw by @blackcatkita

https://blackcatkita.tumblr.com/post/174612387192/the-consequence-of-secrets-part-11a-the-last

12.  Meet Percy – A Rival for Liam.  Right now, I’m #team Percy.  Come find out why!

Flirting with Disaster by @bobasheebaby

https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/174595511339/flirting-with-disaster-pairing-athena-x-duke

The Start of Something New by @bobasheebaby

https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/174638473256/the-start-of-something-new-pairing-athena-x

Confrontation by @bobasheebaby

https://bobasheebaby.tumblr.com/post/174661603666/confrontation-nsfw-pairing-athena-x-liam-word

13.  And the winner for the MFackenthal reviews favorite for the week is:

Blackouts and Bad Decisions by @hellospunkiebrewster

https://hellospunkiebrewster.tumblr.com/post/174669407497/blackouts-and-bad-decisions

Read this when you need a good laugh.  I was walking down the street when I read this and people were looking at my funny because I could not control my loud laughter.  I loved this piece!

Leo

14.  When Liam is disappointing, can Leo step up to the plate?

The Other Brother Series – Part 9 – The Accident by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174499919982/leo-x-riley-other-brother-series-the-accident

The Other Brother Series – Part 10 – It’s Just Us by @captainkingliam

https://captainkingliam.tumblr.com/post/174502585217/leo-x-riley-other-brother-series-its-just-us

15.  If you haven’t started this series yet – stop what you’re doing and catch up now.  If you have, chapter 18 came out this week.  If you like dogs, you’ll fall in love with one named Killer in this series.

Duties of a Prince – Chapter 18 by @theroyalweisme

https://theroyalweisme.tumblr.com/post/174496352100/duties-of-a-prince-chapter-18-leo-x-liam-x-mc

16.  A beautiful, angst filled story for those of us who are #team leo

Rewrite the Stars by @xxrainbowprincessxx

https://xxrainbowprincessxx.tumblr.com/post/174534619238/rewrite-the-stars-isabella-x-leo

Drake

17.  Every week this series touches my soul in deep ways.  This isn’t a series of the light hearted, but every week it is a beautiful story of what it means to really accept what we see as flaws in those around us.

Okay – Part 17 of Supposed to be by @drakewalkerwhipped

https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/174505501346/okay-drake-x-mc-x-liam

18.  A new series by the amazing @choicesfanatic86.  Riley chooses Drake.  What happens next?

Never Forgotten: Prologue by @choicesfanatic86

https://choicesfanatic86.tumblr.com/post/174147674676/never-forgotten-prologue

19.  The TRR gang are teachers in this delightful AU.  Last week, I was mad at Liam.  This week, come see what happens during an awkward double date.

Teachers (part 4) by @larryssunflower

https://larryssunflower.tumblr.com/post/174502050263/trr-au-teachers-part-four-read-past-parts

20.  Come check out this crossover series with the amazing poly relationship Drake x MC x Liam and a “fourth” edition of Damien.  I can’t wait to see where you go from here @drakewalkerwhipped

Caught by @drakewalkerwhipped

https://drakewalkerwhipped.tumblr.com/post/174545025306/caught-drake-x-mc-x-liam-nsfw

21.  If you haven’t started this series where Liam’s social season becomes an actual reality TV show – you have to start now!  Liam finally gets his one-on-one date with Riley this week.

Queen of My Heart Chapter 21 by @walkerismychoice

https://walkerismychoice.tumblr.com/post/174568396568/queen-of-my-heart-chapter-21

Dante

22.  @i-dream-so-i-write wrote her last fic for her OC “competition for Liam” Dante.  It’s beautiful and moving and you should read it.

The Path Least Expected: Home is Where the Heart Is by @i-dream-so-i-write

http://choicesfanfic.com/content/the-path-least-expected-home-is-where-the-heart-is/

23.  She also posted her masterlist of all of her work with Dante.  I read it all this week to make sure that I hadn’t missed even one single moment of Dante.  I have fallen in love with Dante and you should to.  Read it all here:

The Path Least Expected: Masterlist by @i-dream-so-i-write

https://i-dream-so-i-write.tumblr.com/post/174647725491/the-path-least-expected-a-the-royal-romance-au

Damien

24.  Tell me what toppings you think are on this pizza after reading this story of Damien and Minah.

Pizza Delivery by @lizeboredom

https://lizeboredom.tumblr.com/post/174515928045/pizza-delivery-nsfw

25.  This is Dramien at its HOTEST! 

Just a Friend Part ½ by @mrsnazario1223

https://www.tumblr.com/dashboard/blog/mrsnazario1223/174436205027

26.  @tmarie82 is so good at writing Damien as strong with a side of vulnerable. 

All Yours by @tmarie82

https://tmarie82.tumblr.com/post/174534415868/all-yours-pairing-damien-x-mc-camille-park

27.  If you haven’t read this series by @lizeboredom yet – you are in for a treat!  It’s a TRR/PM crossover and the title says it all.  In this chapter we get Rena’s (Alena) point of view.

Part 14 of Everything You Ever Wanted: Llorando by @lizeboredom

https://lizeboredom.tumblr.com/post/174447927020/llorando

Thomas Hunt

28.  There’s a fine line between love and hate.  When two very strong personalities get together, where is that line? Find out in this fic.

I Hate You by @lizeboredom

https://lizeboredom.tumblr.com/post/174583177305/i-hate-you-nsfw

The Sophomore

29.  In this AMAZING series by @littleredroseonthevalley, our MC in the Freshman made some decisions that seemed very uncharacteristic.  Year’s later, she’s connecting with her college roommates – though, we’re not sure why. Check out the latest installment in this mystery series!

Confrontation – Abbie & Tyler by @littleredroseonthevalley

https://littleredroseonthevalley.tumblr.com/post/174668643847/confrontation-abbie-tyler

I hope you find something new on this list! 

Have a GREAT week all!

end notes:

(1) Big thanks to @drivenbyfantasy for creating the graphic.  

(2) I reblogged 55 fics this week.

Yes, I have an addiction to you work.  No, I don’t know how I keep up with this.

(3) Last, but not least, on the off chance that I missed a fic that you know I reblogged, my apologies! It was unintentional and is not a reflection on you, but upon my inability to maintain my own blog.  Also, if a link or a tag doesn’t work - I am sorry! My excuse:  55 links.