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[anti-the-glitch-bitch]

The Phantom Soldier

@codename-alias Thanks to this beautiful person I've started a new story. It's going to be covering harsh topics such as torture, PTSD, and whatever else I come up with in the future. So, if this isn't for you then just rest assured I'll soon get back to posting about Danny and the Batfam.

Chapter 1- You with those sad eyes

Tensions are still high between Tony and the Rogues after the incident in Siberia. Once Steve had gotten far enough away, he’d given Pepper a call to send someone for Tony, feeling guilty about leaving him stranded in the cold as injured as he was. It’s a couple of months before Tony is healed both physically and mentally from the pain that Steve had wrought upon him, but he does eventually use the phone that Steve had left behind. 

Steve had apologized for what had happened in Siberia but doubles down when anyone says anything bad about Bucky. Tony had realized that both of them had acted in the heat of the moment but ultimately still feels betrayed at the secrets that should have been aired long before that moment, and can’t quite trust Steve to have his back.

Bucky holds such phenomenal guilt at the anguish he had caused that he hides in Steve’s room back at the tower most of the time. Anytime Tony and he are in the same room together, Bucky immediately disappears in the hopes that Tony won’t hate him any more than he does. It helps to soothe some things in Tony, but until they talk it out everyone walks around on eggshells.

While the two teams try to figure out a way to balance this fragile truth, Steve brings to light the Hydra cells that still seem to be in play even after the mass info dump. They’re so well hidden that Steve and Natasha can’t figure out where to go even with her amazing hacking skills. So, they think that maybe Tony might have better luck, and luck he has in spades. 

Tony creates a program that searches for key files by infiltrating the entire net, no matter how deep it has to dig. Anything that had to do with Hydra, the Winter Soldier Program, or the Super Soldier Serum is viciously dug into and scrutinized. They manage to find several active Hydra cells in this way, although, by the time the teams get there, the entire place is always emptied of everything but the office furniture.

It isn’t until they come across a small piece of information about something called The Phantom Soldier that Tony decides that they need to use a different tactic since they are obviously not getting anywhere. When Tony asks Bucky if he’d heard of or seen this “Phantom Soldier Project”, Bucky pales.

“Well, that’s not a good sign. Come on, out with it. What’s got you looking so scared?” Tony asks as he leans up against the kitchen counter.

“The Phantom Soldier was something I was supposed to train,” Bucky says. “My handlers liked to talk about Phantom, and from what I could piece together when I broke free, it was a kid. Or…something that looked like a kid. Hydra made a deal with some government agency called GIW. They believed that ghosts are real and have the ability to mimic human form while only having a more animalistic mind. The GIW captured one who looked like a kid but had more power than the gods.” Bucky looks apprehensive as he continues, his expression darkening. “I don’t know what Hydra gave them in return for this kid but one of the few things I do remember is them hooking up a teenager to the chair. The one that wipes minds. That wiped my mind.” He sits down in one of the chairs at the island, avoiding Tony’s gaze..

“That sounds both insane and horrible. How come you didn’t bring this up before?” Tony asks, crossing his arms.

With his head in his hands, Bucky groans, “Because I thought it was just more nightmares. I can only remember bits and pieces of Phantom and I really thought it was just one of the many things that I’d made up. I mean, who actually believes ghosts exist?”

“I would say no one does but I would be lying. The things we’ve seen make me believe in a lot nowadays.” Tony starts messing with his phone. “Friday, add all this information to the search parameters and see if we can’t find something. Make this a high priority.”

“Sir, it would appear that someone has tried to do a media blackout for anything related to Phantom,” Friday replies. “I’ve started the process of deciphering all information and tracing back to whoever might be placing these orders,” she informs Tony as large files of information are dumped into his phone. It’s going to take him hours to go through everything.

“I don’t care where it leads back to,” Tony says. “Find out what’s going on and who’s doing it. Quietly, if possible. If not, well, they can try and do something about it. See where it gets them.”

~~~                                                           

It takes almost a year before Friday can track down a Hydra cell that still seems to be active. More pieces of information are found about The Phantom Soldier the deeper Friday digs. Like how they acquired the subject when it appeared to be 16. The different ways they tortured the creature. How it seemed to have a weakness to electricity. A few pictures are even found to go along with some of these reports.

The more information Tony goes through, the more sickened he feels.

Tony has to find this kid. 

Thankfully, Friday is able to narrow down the location of the cell and finds it outside a small town in Missouri. The population of the town is only in the hundreds and seems to be isolated enough that the nearest city is two hours away. A perfect place for Hydra to hide.

Tony has both teams meet him in one of the meeting rooms for a debrief.

Natasha, Steve, Bucky, and Sam all sit next to each other while Vision, Wanda, and Pietro sit at the end. Tony stands at the front of the table where a large TV sits on the wall. Rhodey, Bruce, Clint, and Peter sit on the other side. Tony had tried to get Peter to stay behind but the teen had heard about the torture that the Phantom Soldier had gone through and wouldn’t take no for an answer. So, rather than argue with him, Tony let him in on the meeting. Besides, the kid might be able to help in the long run.

“Friday found the base for an active Hydra cell near a small town in Missouri. From the heat signatures, the base is extremely large.” Tony activates a hologram that sits in the middle of the table. It spreads across the table showing off the building and the surrounding areas, including the entire town. 

“From the thermal images Friday has been able to get, there are a large number of Hydra inside. There’s a particularly large cold spot that I think might be where they’re holding Phantom,” Tony says, glancing around the table at everyone. “The security in this place is some of the most high-quality shit. Obviously, it’s still not as good as mine, but some of it is better than what the army has. Friday will be able to hack into it, but someone needs to get her into the system first.”

Natasha clears her throat. “I’ll sneak in to activate her. What kind of security are we looking at?”

Tony flicks his wrist and the hologram changes to show a bunch of different devices. “Their security cameras have both thermal and night vision with very few blind spots. I should be able to give you a jammer that will loop the feed for a few minutes,” he says. “There’s something in the walls that I haven’t figured out what they’re for, but they do have an off switch. They aren’t supposed to inflict harm,  that much I do know. I think it’s some kind of shield, but with an amount of power usage that I’ve never seen.”

He zooms in on a couple of the devices, rotating them so the holograms can be seen from all angles. “Some traps are embedded into the ceiling in case of any subjects escaping, although they only come down if an alarm is sounded. I’ll cook up something that will help you out just in case. You’ve got the typical guards patrolling the place.” Tony zooms back out and surveys his former teammates. “That was all I could find so far. The notes mention something about ‘ectoplasm’, but I haven’t been able to find anything out about it, so I’d just watch out for anything suspicious.”

Natasha nods. “Maybe Bruce can find something out about it from his peers? If it has anything to do with ghosts, then there has to be some kind of information floating about in the scientific field?”

Bruce quickly adjusts his glasses as he speaks up. “I asked around if anyone had heard of anything like ectoplasm and when I mentioned ghosts they laughed at me,” he says. “If it is connected, then the information is so well hidden that the rest of the community has never heard of it.” 

Peter raises his hand as he looks around at the group nervously.

Tony sighs and rolls his eyes. “Kid, this isn’t school. You don’t have to raise your hand.”

“Oh, uh, ok.” Peter looks at Tony before pressing on. “When I was starting middle school, there was this thing going around on Facebook. Some kid from a town called Amity Park was talking about how haunted their town was. The posts continued for a few weeks before it just stopped. When I tried looking into it, all I could find was a deleted account.”

“So, besides talking about how haunted it was, was there other information?” Steve asks. 

Peter nods. “Yeah. This kid would talk about whatever ghost seemed to be attacking the town. After a while, they started talking about this ghost called Phantom that would fight the other ghosts. The kids seemed to like him alright but none of the adults could stand him. The kid even posted a video of one of the attacks but the quality was really bad and it was hard to see what was going on. Something about some ghost called Skuller or Scaller or something. It was like something was interfering with the video.” He shrugs and relaxes back in his seat. 

“Huh. I'm surprised the media didn't pick up on that. Sounds like something that would definitely grab the news attention,” Sam says, leaning forward slightly. 

Wanda stops looking at the hologram to stare down Tony. “It doesn't surprise me that someone shut down any way for this kind of thing to get out. In the world we live in now, it wouldn't surprise us to find out ghosts are out there, but back then? It would cause panic and fear. Not to mention the army trying to figure out how to turn them into weapons if they can.”

“Except Hydra found out about it first and it looks like they turned this ghost kid into a weapon. How much you wanna bet they're the ones behind the blackout?” Sam says. 

Nat scoffs and shakes her head. “That's not a bet I'm willing to take. I'm surprised this wasn't part of the info dump that went out. Otherwise, this news would have been everywhere.”

“Maybe a completely cut-off section of Hydra? One that wasn't part of the rest of the system, but how that’s possible I don't know.” Steve says with a shrug, while the rest of them wonder how something so monumental could have been kept hidden for so long. 

“When are we heading out?” Rhodey asks. “And who's going? A facility this large means you're going to need a lot of backup.”

Pietro scoffs at the assessment and everyone turns to look at him. He shrugs. “I could take out the entire place in seconds. I could do that before your computer even hacks the place.”

“Is that so?” Tony says, crossing his arms. “What are you going to do if you come across this ectoplasm stuff and you can't get past it? Or it hurts you, or it negates your speed? We don't have enough information about this place for you to go in unprepared. Maybe after we get the defenses taken down you could, but it's still dangerous with that Phantom character around.”

Wanda hits her brother's arm lightly. “Think before you speak, brother. Not all problems can be solved with your abilities.”

“Most can,” Pietro mumbles quietly enough that no one comments on it. 

“As for everyone going,” Tony says as he claps his hands together, drawing the attention back to him, “We need Nat to sneak in and get Friday into Hydra’s system. Everyone else hangs back until security is down and their alarms are useless. Then Cap and his bestie can break down the front door while the twins go in the back. I want Vision to hang back until we find out just where and how to help this kid.” 

He shifts his attention to Rhodey and Bruce, who are sitting next to each other. “Sam and I will be air support while Rhodey makes sure the army comes running to sweep up the mess we are definitely going to be making. We don't know what state this kid is gonna be in if we even find him, so I'm going to have Cho stay on the plane with Bruce as her assistant. I don't think we'll need mean and green, but I'd feel better if Cho had someone with her, just to be on the safe side.”

“Mr. Stark, what do you want me to do?” Peter says, looking excited about the prospect of getting to go on an Avengers mission. He’s never gotten to go with the team on these sorts of things, but he really wants to go and help the poor soul that's been tortured. 

“Yeah, no. You are gonna stay here and man the helm. Your aunt would kill me if I let you go,” Tony says as he waggles a finger at the kid. It may be childish but nobody ever said he was mature. 

Peter sputters his protest as he stands up, gesturing wildly as he talks. “I can help! I swear I won't get in anybody's way or get hurt. I can even be backup like Mr. Banner! Mr. Stark, please, please, let me go with you.”

Peter pulls out his ultimate weapon and gives him the puppy eyes. The others look away except for Clint, who has kids and has become immune to that look no matter what his wife says. 

“No. Nu-uh. Nope. Not happening. Absolutely not.” Tony completely avoids the look by staring down at his phone. “There's no telling what this kid can do and I'm not going to be the one to tell May that you got hurt because you wanted to tag along on a mission way above your pay grade. You can monitor the progress from the safety of the tower and that's final.”

With a sigh, Peter drops back into his chair the way only a teenager can. “Fine but I get to meet him once you get him back here and patched up.”

The genius stares at his apprentice for a moment, just long enough to make the teenager squirm in his seat. “We'll see.”

“How long before we're ready to go?” Steve asks as he watches Peter slump in his seat, defeated. 

“I'll leave now and let the higher-ups know to be ready. Let me know when we can move in.” Rhodey says as he stands up and hugs Tony before leaving the room. 

“Be prepared to go by midday tomorrow,” Tony replies “Hopefully, Friday will have even more detailed information for us.”

The groups leave after that, all going their separate ways to get ready for the mission. All except Peter who glumly goes back to Queens to do his evening patrol. 

~~~

“Okay, people! We land in 10. Everyone knows their part, so do your last-minute checks now.” Natasha says from the pilot seat of the Quinjet. 

Everyone adds the last bit of necessary items to their persons as the jet lands. 

Natasha leaves the jet first, quickly and quietly easing herself into the building unseen. Tony had been able to get better pictures of the guards and had made her a matching outfit to go over her Widow outfit. Between that and the face cloaking device she wears, she’s unrecognizable. 

It doesn’t take long for her to find an empty office with a usable computer. After powering up the device, she sticks the flash drive holding Friday in. It only takes five minutes before Tony is on the comm telling her the security system is down and all parties are go for entry.

It doesn't take long for the Hydra agents and staff to start rushing around in a panic. Pietro finds Natasha almost instantly knocking out any guards that come around. 

“Hold your breath. Tony wants me to take you to the lab where the scientists are,” Pietro says, grabbing Natasha’s arm with one hand and bracing her neck and head with the other. 

This isn't the first time he's done this to one of the team members. They've all practiced this maneuver during training so that the motion doesn't catch anyone unaware. So, she does what he says without question. 

It barely takes a second as they zip through halls faster than the eye can see. Thankfully, Natasha’d had the foresight to put her hair up so that the flowing red locks wouldn’t tangle into a horrid mess. The sudden stop unbalances her for a second.

The entire room of scientists are in shock as Natasha and Pietro suddenly appear. The scientists startle as their brains finally kick into gear but before they have the chance to react, Pietro already has them tied up with tape around their mouths.

“Well, that was easy,” Natasha says amusedly. “What’s in here that he wants…” She trails off as she looks around. On one wall are large screens showing off a lot of information on one subject. Hurrying over to them, Natasha takes pictures of each screen so they can be inspected much closer later.

Going through a computer, she finds a file on The Phantom Soldier Project. Not only does it include information about the various ways they tortured the subject, but it also has information on how they’re controlling it. The file also tells her exactly where the kid is now.

“If anyone can hear me, Phantom is in a cell on the Northwest side,” Natasha says into her comm. “His room has those weird shields in the wall preventing him from getting out, so you might have to break down the door. There should also be a collar around his neck that prevents him from using his abilities. Someone try to get to him before Hydra activates him!” As she speaks, Nat pulls out another flash drive and starts downloading all the files she can get her hands on.

“We’re on it,” Steve replies into the comms.

Natasha pulls the flash drive out of the computer and places it in a nearly invisible pocket in her suit. “The lab is secure and I’ve got the flash drive. Anyone need help?”

“I could use-” Clint’s sentence is cut off by a grunt as a Hydra agent manages to kick him in the knee. He’s at a disadvantage as the number of agents overwhelms him. 

Natasha doesn’t have to say anything to Pietro before he’s rushing her to Clint’s side. 

There are small burns all over Clint from the guns that Hydra has, something the two Shield agents have never seen before. The gun barrel glows a bright neon green with the same colored smoke coming off it. Clint grits his teeth from the sharp pain.

Natasha and Pietro make quick work of the agents, taking a few of the guns in the process. 

“What in the hell is this powered with?” Clint grunts as he stands up, grabs a dropped gun, and looks it over. “Is this that ectoplasm that Tony was talking about? It hurts like a bitch.”

Suddenly, a large explosion shakes the entire building and several alarms go off, bathing the hallways in red. A high-pitched scream echoes through the comms along with static and sharp crackling.

“What was that?” Tony shouts, sounding slightly distracted.

“Wasn’t from my end,” Natasha and Wanda say at the exact same time.

Clint and Natasha look at each other with concern on their faces. “Steve.”

~~~

“We’re on it,” Steve says, grunting as he takes a gut punch from an agent.

Bucky appears suddenly and picks the agent up. As if the guy weighs nothing, Bucky throws him at a wall, swings around, and punches another agent in the face with a harsh crunching noise. With a practiced elegance, the two super soldiers dance around each other with ease, each fending off a blow that was aimed at the other. They’d spent so much time together that they knew each other's movements without having to communicate it.

By the time they’ve gotten the agents taken care of, the floor is littered with bodies. Most are unconscious but there are a few who met the wrong end of Bucky’s guns. There are scorch marks mixed in amongst the blood splatters along the walls from these new weapons, but Steve and Bucky’s bodies are already healing, leaving behind red welts instead of burns. 

“We need to hurry, Steve,” Bucky says. “If Hydra has done to this kid even half of what they did to me, then we’re going to be in for a rough time. We have to hope that they haven’t been able to activate him.” Bucky continues in the direction they were headed before they got ambushed.

“What do you remember about this kid, Bucky?” Steve asks as he takes off after him.

“He wasn’t human. They made him wear this thing that prevented him from using his powers. It was a collar but it would inject him with this poison so that he was too weak to escape. They made me train him to fight without any of his abilities so I don’t know what he can actually do.” Bucky grimaces slightly as he continues. “They were still trying to turn him into an obedient little soldier when I left. Something about his physiology prevented the chair from being completely effective.” He sounds regretful. His role in this made him ashamed even if it wasn’t his fault.

“Did they try and add any…accessories to him like they did with you?” Steve asks.

“I don’t know. Well, I don’t remember,” Bucky replies.

They slow down as they come to a section of the building on the northwest side. It’s glowing slightly with the same neon green that came from the Hydra weapons. Steve’s pretty sure that this is the correct area, but he doesn’t want to be wrong and come across another new weapon that Hydra has made. 

The hallway they’re in is filled with steel doors. There must be about fifty doors lining both sides of the hallway with no markings on most of them. Bucky and Steve each cautiously open a door and find that the room inside is an empty cell. 

The rooms are dark, with only the light from the hallway shining in letting them see just how barren it was. The only things in the rooms were a simple toilet, sink, and bed. Leaving the door open, Bucky and Steve move on to the next room.

They check room after room, only to find them all empty. When Bucky gets to a door marked with a number, he whistles to get Steve’s attention.

The room is locked and they don’t have the time to find the keys, so they try to bust down the door. With both of them kicking down the door at the same time, it finally dents inward enough to peel away from the walls. Both of them grab a side and pull, using the entirety of their strength until they’ve ripped the door off the hinges.

Inside is a kid who looks like they’re on their deathbed. They’re lying on the bed with their back to Bucky and Steve. Neither Bucky nor Steve can hear a heartbeat, but the kid doesn’t stop them from coming into the room.

This room is brighter than the others, a soft green light bathing everything in a sickly glow.

“Hello?” Steve walks forward cautiously.

The kid doesn’t move and they still can’t hear a heartbeat. When Steve finally gets over to the kid, he puts two fingers on their neck to check the pulse. There’s no heartbeat and the kid’s skin is cold to the touch. With a sad sigh, Steve leaves the kid where they are and turns to Bucky. Bucky looks upset when Steve shakes his head, but there’s nothing either of them can do, so they move on.

They quickly realize that the doors with no markings are all empty, so they only go after the doors with markings. With each unmoving kid that they find inside, the super soldiers become more and more hopeless. It isn’t until they get to the end of the hallway that they realize that they only have one door left, and with it, all their hope that the person inside is alive.

Steve and Bucky rip the door off its hinges, but before Steve can walk inside, Bucky puts a hand on his chest to stop him.

Inside the center of the room is a glowing boy, kneeling and chained to the floor. He can’t be more than 17 or 18. His hair is pure white and floats as if gravity has no hold on it. His eyes are clenched shut and he looks absolutely terrified. There’s a thick metal collar around his neck that hangs around his neck tightly. Chains hang from his wrists and ankles, leading to several metal loops in the floor, all tightly drawn so that he’s forced to kneel.

The kid has no shirt on and looks malnourished, his ribs practically poking through his skin. Wounds and bruises cover every inch of exposed skin, making it hard to tell if the slight green from his skin is natural or if all the injuries cause it. The poor boy is hunching over as much as he can with the chains attached.

Bucky takes a step forward into the room, but it’s Steve that calls out gently. “Phantom?”

A sharp intake of breath comes from the kid and he flinches. He opens his eyes and his gaze immediately locks on to Bucky. Panic and terror flood through his glowing emerald eyes as Phantom starts jerking viciously on his chains.

“Nononononono.” Phantom cries over and over again, desperately trying to get away from the person in front of him. “I’ll be good. I swear. I’ll do better this time. I’m sorry. I won’t do it again. Please don’t hurt me. I swear. I’ll be good. I’ll do it right. Whatever you want.”

Anguish twists Bucky’s expression as he listens to the teen’s frantic pleading. He’s frozen to the spot watching the tortured soul trying to break free of his prison. What did they do to this kid? he thinks. Fuck. What did I do to him?

Steve slowly walks past Bucky, towards the struggling boy. With all his strength, he crushes the collar and rips it off Phantom’s neck. It takes Phantom only a few seconds to realize he no longer has the steel wrapped around his neck, but when he does, it’s like his whole demeanor shifts.

There’s a cunning gleam in his eyes and with a deep breath, Phantom screams loud and clear. The sound is deafening, forcing both Bucky and Steve to cover their ears. Phantom stops and takes an even deeper breath and the scream becomes something more. 

It’s a banshee scream that sends Bucky and Steve flying back through the doorway they’d walked through. They’re sent flying all the way out of the room into the opposite side of the hallway with such force that they dent the wall. The longer the wail goes on, the more the walls start to shake, until the walls are shaking so much that debris rains down onto Bucky and Steve. They’ve just managed to get themselves up when a loud explosion suddenly erupts in front of him, knocking them back into the same wall with such force that they’re knocked unconscious. Their bodies slowly slide down to the floor, and the last thing they hear is someone screaming their names.

[ps-cactus]

UPD: found beta for ch 1 💖🥹 stay tuned, angst fun is coming soon

looking for a beta-reader for Chapter 1 of my new story ✨🙏🏻

if you are native english speaker and don't mind helping out with my sufferings pls dm me🥹 i'm almost done translating it (a bit of one scene left) here is summary and tags, this ch is ~5k words

look at this bebe boiling inside while talking to the most unpleasant visitor in this chapter. don't leave her mad at me as well for making her and her friends sound awkward in english 🥹💖

[forzaferraris]

i hate to clog the x reader tags with non x reader content, however, if anyone is interested in being my beta reader i would adore that, please ! my only requirements are that you have discord, either native english speaker or its a second language that you’re fluent/semi-fluent in and are at least over the age of eighteen ! if you’re interested don’t be afraid to send ne an ask off anon and i’ll message you from my main blog (this is a side blog and i can’t message on it i don’t think.)

— strictly for formula one & indycar enjoyers

[hexenmond]

beta reader for a Dead Boy Detectives oneshot?

So… I’ve been working on this thing for months now. Originally I thought I might get it done for Payneland week 😅 well long story short, I didn’t. But thanks to my wonderful weekly writing group, I finally finished the first draft!

I’m not going to read it again myself for at least another week, and I really would love to get some fresh eyes on it that are not my own. It’s about 7k words of introspective character study with a happy ending 😂 so does anybody in the fandom want to look this over for me?

It takes place right after the end of season 1 and has zero plot and a lot of dialogue. It’s very much a case of yet another cake I think. ☺️ If that sounds like something you’d like to help me polish, hit me up via dm or reply!

(Bonus if you’d like to test the feedback options on Ellipsus with me.)

[talibunny30]

Because I am brand new to writing and I may have a slight (read massive) perfectionist issue, I was wondering if any of you amazing people would be open to being a beta for my story Echoes of Resilience?

[sabbathbloodysabbeth]

Hey! Just out of curiosity (I would be fine with or out) but would anyone be interested in being a beta for something I’m beginning to write?

It’s for my Zombie Stomp au and I’m not nearly as confident about this one like I am other things I’ve written and I just need help figuring out if something flows right or wrong. (I could also beta for other authors who need it if they wanted me to) but I would most likely send either full chapters or snippets of chapters depending on what you would want. 😭

But here is a quick description of the plot

Eddie Munson finds himself alone and nowhere to go when he gets separated from his uncle in the middle of California and on their way to Wayne’s childhood home in Georgia. Forced to travel on his own he ends up lost in Oregon, the completely opposite direction from Georgia and finds himself in a life or death situation with a complete stranger. Said stranger being Steve Harrington, a man who is slightly hard of hearing Eddie discovers and unable to talk. Why that is he isn’t sure, but he does know Steve knows how to survive a lot better than Eddie can.

Conveniently Steve happens to be heading to the same state as Eddie and both agree that it would be safer to travel together rather than by themselves. Starting off on the wrong foot the two bicker in their own way through numerous states but grow a bond that Eddie never expected to have, even before the world went to shit. Carrying more than dried up expo markers, Steve has a mysterious past that Eddie wants to explore. Even if that means it may break the bond the two of them have worked so hard to build.

Just message me if anyone is interested! (And if anyone needs a beta reader I’m also willing to as well :)

[tansyuduri]

Hello Everybody I need some help with finding Alpha's and Betas for a Merthur longfic

HI! So I'm still looking for an alpha for the third of the Merlin fanfics in this series (It's my Arthur returns and merthur happens fanfic world) I have a ton of it (The third one) written but I know some things are off/missing and not sure about pacing and know there are more scenes I gotta add! (trying to figure out what) Thats what I need Alphas for

(As always I will ALSO need Beta's for the more traditional Spag and other stuff! I have Heavy Learning disabilites)

The third one deals with having the Sidhe as enemies and the burdens of being immortal and gives us our merthur wedding at the end. Its around 50K words ATM

[hellishworm]

would anyone be willing to look over an IceMav fic I’ve started writing recently? if you don’t want to beta you don’t have to, i just need someone to take a looksy!! it’s a steampunk/vampire fic that struck me in the night and i just want to make sure it’s actually interesting… (´∀｀)

[drsteggy]

Well, I’m gonna try this and see what happens

Hi, I’m looking for a beta. I spent last November rewriting a long fic I wrote in 2020, and I’m looking for someone to do SPAG and generally look for rough spots/holes I’m missing.

The fandom is Legend of Zelda, though it is not attached to a specific game. A working knowledge of Zelda lore is probably helpful, but honestly I didn’t have that when I was writing it.

The rewrite is done and clocks in at about 103k (the original fic - which I will link here - was 88k). It’s a character driven adventure story with a slow burn romance, though that is not the focus of the story. There is smut (and I’m probably rewriting that as I’m not really happy with it) and the pairing is M/F

My original plan was to have my usual beta do the work, but they have a lot going on in their personal life and are unable to do it. This fic is my baby, but I’m not really precious about it- I take crit well. Ihave not started posting it as I really want a second set of eyeballs first and I’m not planning on posting until I have a decent buffer for it -and then I’m planning weekly.

I don’t feel my own editing skills are great so I hesitate to offer beta work in return. I can write something for you in return, if you like my style- we can discuss specifics if needed

[livinginsunnyhell]

Hi! I’m looking for a beta reader to bounce ideas off of. I’m not so much looking for grammar (that’s also welcome) but mostly brainstorming etc., specifically buddie besides posting on here does anyone have any recs on where else to ask? Thanks! 🙂

[xerisian]

looking for a beta reader for my dottolone fanfiction!

hellooo!! i am looking for a beta reader (or multiple beta readers) for the dottolone fanfiction i am currently writing! i’m not really sure how to actually go about finding beta readers so this is my first shot at this! i’m still a baby author (started actually taking writing seriously sometime this year) and i would love some general feedback on my works so i can improve my writing ability and also to make reading my fanfics as enjoyable as possible!

two chapters are already up, and i’m not super content with how the turned out unfortunately. that’s why i want to try and make the rest as good as possible.

i don’t really have an update schedule but i have a goal of updating once a month…hopefully. (not very good i know but im busy with school!) keep in mind i plan on this being a decently long fic

so uhmmmm feel free to contact me if you’re interested. i’ve never actually done this before so i don’t know how this works lol. you might have to lead me through some things but i’ll hopefully get the hang of it!

you can contact me here or @xerisian on twt

this is the link! it’s called esurient and it’s on ao3

[fencergirl13]

looking for a beta reader!!

hey everybody, i’m currently writing my very first fanfic and i would love to receive some feedback!

fandom: football rpf

pairing: jude bellingham/pablo gavi

tropes: fake dating, enemies/rivals to lovers

tw: homophobia, homophobic language, angst, mentions of injury (maybe i’ll add others as i write more)

rating: mature (? idk tho, no smut chapters yet)

i’ve currently written around 60k words, but i’m planning to make it a slow burn longfic! i’m not a native english speaker, so i might need some help with grammar as well.

please send me a message if you’re interested!

[lyricfulloflight]

Gonna throw this out there...

I am looking for someone to help me outline the fic I'm working on for the 118 Big Bang. I'm mostly a pantser but I feel the need to outline this fic more specificaly so I can hopefully stay as part of this BB and get an artist because I fear this fic is going to be super long.

This is a fic for the 911 fandom, focus mostly on Buddie with a side of Madney. For the outlining help not sure you actually need to be completely involved or up to date with 911 canon.

Basic fic info: completely AU, post-apocalyptic setting, werewolves with a/b/o. Will be explicit. Some violence and gore, but nothing too graphic. Will have smut. (no details about the violence or smut should be involved in the outlining process other than saying they will occur).

If you'd like to help beta for more than just outlining, amazing! That would be so incredible. But right now I just feel I need to talk through the plot with someone and get an outline on the page, but I'm finding it hard on my own (I just want to keep writing the story! Who cares about outlines!)

I know the 118 BB offers beta support. I have asked on the discord and gotten no response. Maybe my fic isn't what people want to beta/read etc. Maybe I just suck at Discord (I do, I totally do).

So I thought I'd ask here.

Send me a message if you're interested. Happy to discuss more details if you need them.

[in-the-wrong-universe]

So. I have a new WIP, continuing a one shot I read (link will be provided later/summary will be written later when I have time) and with the authors permission, I can continue the story. But I want to try writing a story with a co-author/beta. Anyone interested?

Title/Author: danny fenton, hero helper extraordinaire by aryelee

Basically, Danny is forced to take a vacation in the DC world and wanders for a bit but gets restless and decides to help the DC heroes by doing various things (i.e. drops a bag of batarangs on Batman’s head, finds Green Arrow’s lost/strewn about arrows and returns them, etc.) and befriends all of them. Eventually, Clockwork takes him home but Red Robin figures out a way to bring them (DC) over to the DP dimension.

That’s where the one shot leaves off. I want to continue it. And with a significant amount of ANGST (I feast on angst for some reason, but what’s being mentally healthy anymore?)

I won’t spoil anything else for what I have planned, but will share with beta’s/co-author’s.

If you’re interested in the offer, DM me or @ me in the comments.

[indelibleme]

Looking for a beta reader for my Low Tide in Twilight fic!

Requirements: Basic SPAG, flow of story, inconsistencies (I encourage constructive criticism, so feel free to do that as well)

Details about the fic: Post-canon, temporary amnesia, canon divergence from chp 95 I guess?

Warnings: Canon-typical warnings apply

Word count: currently at ~3.7k, expected to be around 10k

For any extra clarifications, feel free to DM me or post a comment!

Here are my other works in case you want to know my writing style.

PS: Please reblog this so it can reach a wider audience? I've never searched for a beta-reader on tumblr before, but I can't seem to find any discord for this manhwa... so here I am lol

[tansyuduri]

Hello I'm looking for a Beta reader for my 88K Merther (BBC MERLIN) fanfic

Its after Arthur comes back and he and Merlin are together and deals with magic coming back to the world and stuff. One of my main betas is having issues so I decided to reach out. THERE WILL BE A LOT of spelling and punctuation mistakes! Message me!