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duuuudeee i love your writing SO much !! just read the latest chapter for your yandere satosugu fic and im still in awe at how underrated you are !! your descriptions and pacing in general are sosososoo addicting, im about to binge all your stuff!!
ahh omg thank you!! i’m so very happy you’re enjoying it & this means so much to me 😭💜
#asks#those late summer nights#dark yandere content is unlocked at chap 10+ btw!!#i’m actually kind of nervous in posting it because it’s written to be disorienting for the reader#like sudden or jarring#but it wouldn’t be dead dove without some unease
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it’s just, it was all atmospheric shit. similar enough stuff, it blended together. i was falling asleep. and then sonic was there
#it was really sudden. like high fidelity barely crunched full sample jason griffith you’re too slow#jarring. it jarred me.#rambles
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Attention milgramblrgram prisoners!! *attaches you to my keychain* *attaches you to my keychain* *attaches you
Not that I need atonement for anything, but I've been doing a lot of angst for milgramblrgram -- I wanted to offer something sweet 🤲
@amugoffandoms @rainbowghostcat @lostxmelody @gunsli-01 @justzosiahere
@waivyjellyfish @luce-speaks @fayesdiary @purgemarchlockdown @kyanako5972
#milgramblrgram#this was so fun waaaahhhh#everyone came out so cute :3#btw if anyone has any design changes lmk#ive been using the same doodle/picrew references so dont be afraid to tell me im off lol#i know the plushies have a range of expressions but i didnt want anyone to be upset with a mad/sad/scared look#was inspired by kyanakos art of her holding the amane plush and i was thinking about the reverse#so anyway you all must imagine your fave(s) with a you plushie :3#i thought itd be fun seeing waivydoll in a different doll style but the sudden change in eyes is jarring.... shes Looking... 👁👁#im not sure how notts ears would work with the little felt cutout style they have -- i was kind of picturing them full of stuffing too :)#who knows if my milgramblrgramsona has glasses - i only remember to draw them like half the time asdfgh#it was easy to remember in Group Glasses Pic though 😅 rip to all of us blind milgrammers#my art#EDIT: now with a more accurate nott design! :D#i hadnt seen their sona art before and i still got a bit far from the other mlgbg art -- sorry for the bootleg plushie before 😂😂😂#😺✨️
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It's heckin' Sunday!! Please enjoy the latest chapter of The Red Room, alongside another amazing render by @connor-sent-by-cyberlife ! This one really got me in the feels ;w; I've been a bit extra busy with the holiday season, so please excuse the lull in my comment replies. I promise I appreciate each and every one more than all of you know, and I'll be sure to catch up as soon as I've gotten a moment to myself <3
The Red Room (138759 words) by rking200 Chapters: 16/18 Fandom: Detroit: Become Human (Video Game) Rating: Explicit Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply Relationships: Hank Anderson/Connor Characters: Hank Anderson, Connor (Detroit: Become Human), Original Chloe | RT600, Markus (Detroit: Become Human), Elijah Kamski Additional Tags: Alternate Universe - Human, Stalking, Vomiting, Suicidal Thoughts, Top Hank Anderson, Bottom Connor (Detroit: Become Human), Connor is a Mess (Detroit: Become Human), Hank Anderson is Bad at Feelings, Alcohol Abuse/Alcoholism, Missing Persons, Abduction, Manipulation, Death Threats, Mental Health Issues, Zlatko didn't do it, POV Alternating, Slow Burn, Sex at some point Summary: Connor Stern is a law school dropout who dreams of making it big in the music industry. He manages to get into a special apprenticeship program with the musical genius Elijah Kamski and, despite working two jobs and struggling to stay afloat, feels like his dream is finally within his grasp. When Hank Anderson stumbles into the lounge Connor performs at, The Red Room, he becomes entranced with him. As Hank falls in love with Connor's voice, he ends up entangled with conflicting emotions and delicate situations. Slowly, his nights are filled with Connor's songs and his closeness, even if he feels he doesn't deserve it. They reach several roadblocks along the way of getting closer, some more dangerous than others. A collaboration written alongside Connor-sent-by-Cyberlife for the Reverse Big Bang 2024, told with a POV alternating between Hank and Connor. Chapters added weekly.
#hankcon#dbh fic#dbhrbb2024#chapter update#Okay so#Gavin might seem a bit...ooc in this chapter#at least for me and how i characterize him?#I struggled with portraying him how I did for a while#ultimately#there is a background-ish narrative going on that's fueling his ooc-ness#hopefully it's not too jarring to any gavin reed fans OTL#anyway awdhflk#please enjoy this chapter#I've taken a break from writing the very last chapter because of my schedule#but it should be finished relatively soon#so expect the chapter updates to stay consistent <3#as I go to post this chapter I have the sudden anxiety that I haven't edited it as well as I would have liked ;;
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i think a lot of what keeps a character sympathetic * honestly, is just letting them have good intentions and even better, a genuine lack of awareness. even if they're lying to themselves, and we know they're lying to themselves, they have to earnestly believe that they're not. they have to truly believe that what they're doing is right, even if we know it isn't, and that it's not self motivated, even when it often is.
take, for example, viren, claudia, and rayla. they both make massive mistakes (basically everything viren and claudia have ever done / rayla leaving callum the way they did) and most of those mistakes were self motivated. claudia bought her father's gaslighting because she wanted to believe in a world where her family could stay together, and then overruled viren's reservations about his ressurection when she brought him back; viren does many terrible things in arc 1, but is genuinely motivated by what he believes is ultimately better, long term, for the world at large even over his family, or that he knows better for his family in general, and having that lie stripped away is so much what s5 is about. for rayla, she's so selfless it rounds back into being selfish, where she had the security of knowing callum was safe while he worried over her for two years, leading to her deeply wounding him even when that was the last thing she wanted (and deeply hurting herself). they all thought they were genuinely doing the right thing, often putting themselves on the chopping block for their choices (claudia and rayla in particular) even as it just made everything worse.
but even when we see them being selfish, we know they're still genuinely motivated by their love for other people, and it's coming out in very misguided ways, we can still have sympathy, we can still understand. and that to me is great character writing
* obviously sympathy isn't the most important to feel towards a character, but it can certainly be helpful in having an audience be interested in, at the very least, understanding them even if we don't like them
#tdp#the dragon prince#why it ends why it always ends#mini meta#also one of the reasons i think catra fell flat bc#1) she always has awareness that what shadow weaver & the horde is doing is Terrible and just#does not Care and 2) she prioritizes her own selfish desires and ego over anyone who might care about her over & over again#with no 'oh but i love them i'm doing this for their own good' like no she's just ruining their lives and doing whatever she wants#which makes the switch in s5 jarring and way too sudden#spop critical#in the tags
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I'm wondering if we are going to get a time-skip next chapter, and if we are how long will it be. I feel like the biggest question is what will happen with the embers of OFA which I feel can be wrapped up in like a page or two whether it goes or stays. But I am curious who Izuku is narrating the story to and why. Considering we know Izuku is narrating from the future, the question remains is how far into the future. Because the narration is starting to sound more present with in recent chapters, but there was also that shot with the old hand and the cherry blooms' a while back that was hinted at being possibly Izuku?
#bnha#boku no hero academia#midoriya izuku#my hero academia#bnha spoilers#bnha spoiler#bnha manga spoilers#I always had a back up theory that Izuku narrating the story to Hisashi#tbh I don't really like time skips and i kind of hope Hori doesn't make a big one like I could get one when they are graduating#but not them as adults or something#Just because the ending seems to be heading into being quite open a time skip would be jarring not out of place but kind of sudden I guess?#or maybe it's just feels cliche
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I love your art so much I giggle kick my feet get so excited that I bash my head against my bedroom wall whenever I see it
TOO MUCH PRAISE
#anon ask#i keep like getting sudden burst of drawing energy#then i like hate it then i sort like it then i get art block#its all so jarring but i apriciate all the love
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i thnk taash was written so badly were not getting another nb character in a major game for a long time for fear that they'll be that fucking annoying
#1. why are we using modern terms all the sudden#dorian used 'company of men' rather than gay...like imagine if sera was calling herself a lesbian lmfao#they even came up with a whole gender concept for krem#2. can you fucking stop talking about your gender for 5 seconds 😭#like it coulda been a one and done conversation with how they set taashs character up but instead i got 60 hours of jarring gender banter#es please fire trick weekes 🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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genuinely i do not have anything against the anime adaptation of death note, i actually think it's quite good, but i wish there was more recognition that it is in fact an adaptation directed by a real human being (tetsuro araki/mochizuki saburo) who made creative decisions and explored themes which differed from those in the manga
#i feel like a lot of people have this idea that anime is just 'manga but it moves now'#but it's as much as an adaptation as the live action ones#like it adds in a lot of aesthetic christian iconography and removes some of the buddhist & shinto elements#light's death is completely different (& mikami never turns against him)#there is SO much added to L's death scene and the jarring suddenness of it is removed#light's characterization as a whole is much harsher & his behaviour is more erratic#i actually don't think these were bad decisions -- i think they worked well if you had read the manga first#(which you very possibly had bc it was ludicrously popular)#you got fun little twists and changes every week#but they are decisions#they were never an attempt to faithfully reproduce the original#i feel they're interesting in their own right idk fgjghf it does both the anime and the manga a disservice to treat them#like they're interchangeable
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i really dont like using my blog to vent or complain cause idk thats not what social media is about to me its just a space to be silly about the things i like. that being said. im just gonna do a mini vent in the tags abt smth that isnt even half as serious as im making it sound
#Listen. i found live action Zoro jarringly serious and edgy at times. Very juvenile. But its very telling to me that the ppl complaining-#-the loudest abt his characterization and scenes with luffy are the same zosan shippers constantly putting him down in their works#genuinely every other fic is filled to the brim with characters constantly talking down to him like a toddler and mocking him#and even telling Sanji shit like omg youre so brave for being in love with him it must be so difficult#and suddenly as a reader Im not rooting for the relationship im rooting for Zoro to get better friends#so like are you guys SURE opla zoro is this edgy oc or does it seem that way bc you flanderize him just as much in the opposite direction#taking his goofy scenes and exaggerating them to make him seem barely functional#when in the anime he IS competent and people trust him and find him very cool when he drops badass lines all of the sudden#sometimes he even actively tries to be cool and edgy. its not rare or unheard of. we were all there when he started posing in the wax#its the execution of these traits in the LA that seem juvenile and jarring and OOC but lets not pretend like the guy youd find-#-on ao3 is better written or accurate to animanga zoro at all. the criticism itself is valid but from some zosan guys it sounds silly#youll notice casual or non shipper fans tend to rlly like LA Zoro and thats because fanon can truly TRULY be a disease#i’ve had this opinion of fanon zoro for a while but just seeing him pitted against opla zoro really brought back my unhappiness with him#if i had to pick between the two of them…
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🎉for the ask game :) hehe — @milkstore
🎉 What leads you to consider a fic a success?
This may be a bit weird to say, but personal satisfaction. While I do write with others in mind, I write purely for myself. With things I put a lot of effort into, I usually have a point with writing the fic. On top of that, I have very high standards. When I am able to write a fic that properly fills the purpose I write it for on top of matching my standards, I consider the fic to be a success. Like I’ll be completely honest. The fic I consider to be the most successful on this blog has barely any notes in comparison to my other fics, including my short fics.
#interactions#ask game#about me#what’s most jarring is when fics i don’t consider to be successes do well#like i don’t put a high amount of effort into my short fics but like…..#some of them get a decent amount of notes#some even higher than my long fics#and it’s like ?????????????????#it’s like the opposite of that ‘why are you booing i’m right’#WHY ARE YOU CLAPPING IT’S SUBPAR#like that aether fic i recently posted…… does not deserve that many notes#the wording and play of events is awkward#it’s not original#the ending is sudden and bad#so like????#why???????#and let me state right now i do not expect the fics i consider to be ‘successes’ to do well and get a lot of notes#as it is what i want out of a fic is not what majority of the other people in the reader-insert community want#tbh i don’t really expect any of my fics to do well#so when really random ones i don’t put much effort into do well it’s like????#idk i don’t really get people
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Was listening to EPIC like hmmmm some of this feels off... only to realise they'd remastered/redone the first 2 sagas and I was in fact listening to entirely different god damn songs!
After looking into why, good for them! 1000%! Love the new versions! But also... does anyone have good quality mp3s of the original albums...? 🥺👉👈 please hit me up. I wanna still be able to listen to the og versions too
#and like cool cool they definitely fit the story better!! and the mastering is better!!#however ;v; i was attatched to some of those line deliveries ;v; and had several OC animatics based around said og line deliveries#so the sudden loss of those tracks (being taken off spotify and YouTube from what i can tell) was Jarring#also a good solid reminder to always download music i like#there are still versions on youtube but i am dubious to their quality compared to say a download of the albums when they were on youtube#sooo 🥺👉👈#epic the musical#troy saga#cyclops saga
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Me: man I wish a girl would like me and wanna date me
Me when a girl says she likes me and wants to date me: oh no thanks actually I think I'll explode instead
#Tbf she said it in a very manipulative context lmfao but the sheer whiplash from the sudden disgust I felt was jarring#Like damn I cannot date anyone bc I am that bad at Feelings
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The way that Stede treated Izzy during episode 3 were some of the ONLY times I could stand seeing Izzy on screen so far this season because it finally felt like someone who recognized him and was treating him rationally tbh
I adore this show and the people who worked on it, but ffs, it feels like they all enjoyed Con too much and the Izzy-Enjoyers Fanon of his character last season and jumped the gun on his redemption arc.
I'm going to go through and explain this more, but I just wanted to put that out there first while I lay out why Stede's expressions and reactions make so much more sense coming out of season 1's events.
#Cae Has Lots of Feelings About Our Flag Means Death#I love you Jim#But Izzy was everyone's least favorite guy pre-mutiny attempt#And the crew didn't like him much even after#So why is he 'our dick' and a member of our family all of a sudden?#'Life used to mean something on this ship.'#Sure. I'll give you that. But Izzy was the guy who continuously refused to participate in that 'life that meant something' back then.#And though Ed is contributing the lion's share of abuse in S2 - it's so weird to just forgive him when no apologies have been made#Idk. I know I'm not an Izzy-Enjoyer so it's not catered to me.#I know some people are excited this is how it's working out.#Good for them.#But I really really wish we could have seen more animosity between them as he came to realize he fucked up.#As the crew came to realize he realized he fucked up and he's in a bad position too.#But we just skipped right over to 'We can give him therapy and hold his hand while he cries and save his life against our captain's orders'#It's tbh jarring and I think I'm just going to have to try and divorce Izzy S2 from Izzy S1 in my mind if I'm going to have any peace#Our Flag Means Death#OFMD#Our Flag Means Death Season 2 Spoilers#Our Flag Means Death Spoilers#OFMD Spoilers#OFMDS2#OFMD s2 spoilers#Izzy Hands#Israel Hands#Stede Bonnet#The Gentleman Pirate#Jim OFMD#Jim Jimenez#Izzy Critical
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#mmmmm i might need to find a new psychiatrist#having depression and terrible anxiety aside#i feel like i have bpd and the symptoms are getting real bad#like these extreme highs are interesting but the sudden switch to the lowest of lows is jarring#and right now im at a low and it's.....fucking hell#。゚・ ✘ 𝚒 𝚠𝚊𝚗𝚗𝚊 𝚋𝚎 𝚜𝚘𝚖𝚎𝚋𝚘𝚍𝚢'𝚜 𝚋𝚞𝚍𝚍𝚢 ( ooc )#sorry guys i just whew....im not okay
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i like keeping seb's read of jo having a crush on kidman but as a complete misread of the situation. jo was just very pleased to have someone with a similar to-the-point work style as him, especially since he was so resistant to her in the first place. her paperwork was always so well done.
#ooc.#in my personal tew lore it was also gay/lesbian solidarity seb was missing but that isn't universal#the crush thing is so funny it comes out of nowhere. he hardly even talks to kidman in game.#i just think his flip from not wanting her around to realizing he likes her was sudden and jarring#hence the misread#anyway. 20mins left on my friday.... soon...#tbd //#i'm just rambling to ramble
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