#li dailin and hart have really specific values that are harder to relate to
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JP:What happens if i microwave a raw egg in its shell?
Leon:I don’t know. Go find out.
JP:Good idea, alright.
(one minute later)
JP:It explodes!
#immortal soul incorrect quotes#incorrect quotes#eternal return incorrect quotes#jpblacksurvival#leonblacksurvival#ice cream cola#i'm watching the plessi vod where he reads through yuki's pass#i have to ask:why is the dialogue really bad but only sometimes#dialogue in the FIRST ONE was okay. dialogue in the manhwa was good#dialogue in mediocre ending? really really bad. dialogue in apocalypse? pretty bad#i physically shrivel up at li dailin's dialogue. feels like a caricature of drunk people#yeah alcoholics are often self deprecating but not in this specific way ya feel me?#it's always a little off because of translations but i feel like dailin shouldn't be insufferable when dialogue never got this bad#the sheer amount of times she repeats that she's drunk and unwilling to do things implies it isn't the translation#there's a big difference between her dialogue and the sort of slightly off sentences that come from mistranslation#i think the ones that have worse dialogue are the ones that are tougher to put oneself in the shoes of#li dailin and hart have really specific values that are harder to relate to#isol aya sissela chiara and shoichi's dialogues all ranged from perfectly passable to pretty okay#still i feel like if the dialogue was literally just proofread i'd have enjoyed this pass#one takeaway i've got is that if i write dialogue for dailin a small quirk i should keep in mind is nicknames over names
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