#implies it can’t even tell if the responses match. or it isn’t even programmed to check
The Rights Of A Nindroid
Chapter Twenty-Eight
(Previous Chapter Here)
Hey so this took a while shshgd
On the bright side I finished 29 before this one so you can get that tomorrow-
Sentry rubs at his forehead with one hand, feeling his exhaustion starting to bleed into his voice. “Do you know anything I could actually use? These ‘reports’ don’t really tell me much- other than that they’re suffering more and more every minute.”
He can see the exasperation reflected on Kyle, the blond seeming just as frustrated as he is. “Well, I'd like to see you go and be a double agent, Sentry.” The intern crosses his arms. “I'm doing what I can, you know? I don't have access to everything.”
Gritting his teeth, Sentry concedes the point. “I- I- okay, I get that. It’s just-“ He cuts himself off with a frustrated groan. This is hopeless!
After taking a brief moment to pull himself together, he tries again. “Have you at least seen them?” As soon as the words leave his mouth, another rush of fear overtakes him. “They’re- they’re both still in one piece, right?”
Cringing, Kyle glances away. “Uhhh… Question, do you consider the faceplate to be an important piece? Does it still count as 'in one piece' if it's gone?” He shifts on his feet, but Sentry can barely register the movement.
For a moment, all he can do is stand there, struggling to wrap his head around what was just implied.
“... sorry, are you telling me that their faceplates were removed?”
The words are tight with tension, but he can’t help it. They- hell, they had removed their faces?
Glancing away, Kyle scratches at the back of his neck nervously. “...Yes?” He admits. “Didn't answer my question, though-“
He cuts himself off, but Sentry can’t make himself reply. They- they had-
“I- I-“ He still can’t manage to get any words out, so he just… takes a moment before answering. “Okay. That- yeah, that’s a piece. Definitely a piece.”
With a deep breath and a lot of willpower, he decides to switch up his focus to something he’ll hopefully be able to use to help. “Alright, I can- we’ll just move past that. Other- other than the faceplate, are they okay?”
Kyle winces. “...Please don't get angry at my next question, but…” he gives Sentry a weak, strained smile. "Mentally or physically?"
His mind skitters to a halt.
He stares at Kyle, barely even able to process the full meaning behind the question. It feels almost as though his processor is lagging.
For a few moments, that’s all he can do. Until he’s finally able to get out an actual response to the words.
“Excuse me?”
The blond seems to have picked up on the emotions radiating off of him- honestly, they’d probably be pretty hard to miss.
“Do I really have to say it again?” Kyle chuckles nervously. “Because I feel like if I do it's my face that's gonna get ripped off-“
Sentry ignores the way he’s trembling in favor of staring the blond down, not letting him finish. “Both.” He narrows his eyes. “Are they okay?”
Kyle looks away, hesitating a long moment before he replies.
“They… are not,” he admits, still not meeting his gaze.
Even though it feels like it’s happened a lot today, Sentry finds that his voice just refuses to respond. There’s so many thoughts racing through his head that none of them are coherent.
It takes a while- a long while- before he’s able to get a grasp on himself.
Slowly, carefully, he looks the blond dead in the eyes, refusing to let him shy away.
“Kyle.”
The blond only stares, not seeming to be sure how to react to him. “...Sentry…?” He returns the name, looking extremely nervous.
Sentry idly notices that he’s stopped trembling. All of the raw emotions that had been pounding through him before feel condensed. Solid. So intense that he can barely recognize them as feelings.
“Are they going to get disassembled?”
It looks like his seriousness carried over, because Kyle quickly nods. “They aren't!” He blurts out the reassurance without hesitation. “As long as they follow orders, they're not even really threatened.”
Right. Following orders. Because that’s something they’re made to do. Treated like they’re less than human, like they’re not capable of conscious thought, like they’re just code rather than actual living beings that happen to be made of code-
Shoving the thoughts from his head, Sentry takes a deep breath, trying to calm himself down.
“... okay,” he murmurs. “They’re not in danger of dying. I- I can work with that.”
And he can. They need to hold out a little longer, just so he can get to them. He knows Cryptor well enough to know that he can handle this, he’s strong, and while he shouldn’t have to go through this, he’ll be able to. And Zane is… well, Zane. The white ninja, the master of ice, there’s a statue of him in the park! He’ll be just as-
Quietly enough that Sentry can barely even register them, Kyle mutters a few soft words.
“...And also Zane is going outside…”
Tensing, Sentry snaps his attention back to the intern. “Hang on, what?” He gets out, trying to make sure he heard that right.
The blond shifts nervously. “Uh, um… Well, I heard that sometime soon, they're going to escort him outside for a little while-“ He glances off to the side. “But I don't know when or where, though.”
A wave of mixed emotions take over, and Sentry sputters for a moment before speaking. “I- that- why didn’t you lead with that?!”
Not waiting for a response, he decides to ask some more pressing questions.
“That- okay, not when or where, but- maybe not an exact time, but you said ‘soon’, right? Does that mean ‘today’, or ‘this week’, or- or ‘before the end of the month’?”
Maybe he doesn’t know the precise time, but even a rough idea would be helpful. He-
“Sentry, I just told you that-“ Kyle sighs, looking a mix of exhausted and frustrated. “I said I didn't know the exact time, or else I would've told you! I have absolutely no idea what the details are. We're lucky I remembered the info at all, honestly.”
For a moment, all he can do is stare, unable to fully figure out what to say or do. “That-“ He shakes his head, trying to refocus. Freaking out isn’t helping anything.
“Alright, I’ll- I’ll just work with what I’ve got.”
Redirecting his attention, he turns to his computer as he pulls up another tab inside his head. Using both systems, he starts mumbling his ideas under his breath, hoping that saying them out loud might help him think better.
“… if I can triangulate his signatures, maybe I can- he’s got a unique power source, or maybe I can try seeing if his ice will come up in a scan, I could see if there’s been any unusual connection to the internet…” he trails off, pulling up some websites and programs to help him start setting up a system.
Even though he’s not looking at him, he can hear Kyle’s nervous fidgeting. “Good call, yeah. You do that. And I'll, uh… I'll leave you to it and go if that's alright.”
At the words, Sentry glances back, considering them. He hesitates a moment before he replies. “... alright,” he concedes. “Call me if you remember anything else, okay?”
With a tired sigh, Kyle nods. “Of course. I will. Take care, Sentry.”
With a nod of acknowledgement, he turns back to his work, starting to type up a new program to help him figure out where Zane might show up.
“... alright, so if I scan for a possible power surge…”
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It’s about a week later when he finally picks up a signal.
It’s coming from just outside Birchwood Forest.
Without waiting even a moment longer than he has to, he runs through the tower, choosing to take the stairs instead of the elevator- the tower might be tall, but with all the frantic energy he’s generating, it’ll be a lot faster than the elevator.
Still, it takes a lot longer than he’d like to reach ground level. After a split second of hesitation, he decides not to call Dad and tell him where he’s going- he doesn’t have time. He doesn’t even have time to call the ninja!
Grabbing a motorcycle from the armory, he doesn’t even bother putting on a helmet. His skin’s made of titanium- any gear would just be redundant at that point.
Every second feels like an entirety as he races out of the city, ignoring every single road and safety law that applies. The government’s confirmed that nindroids don’t have legal rights, so it’s not like they can arrest him for it.
When he finally, finally reaches the forest, he quickly turns off the bike and races in, running every scan he can think of.
Nothing shows up.
Is he too late? Did he take too long? Did they already leave? Why did they even bring Zane out here? What-
Just as he’s starting to panic, one scan of the terrain returns positive.
Footprints.
They show up easily in the snow, and Sentry follows them, a grim smile starting to form as he recognizes one set matching Zane.
Surprisingly, there doesn’t seem to be any sign of struggle- though it’s pretty likely they had something set up to prevent him from making an escape. They-
Wait a minute. What- that- why… why can he smell smoke?
The footprints suddenly become the least of his worries as he steps into a clearing.
And is horrified by the sight that greets him.
“No…” he breathes, shock flooding through him.
In front of him, he recognizes the smoldering ashes. Or at least, what they used to be.
So that’s why they brought him out here. This must have been… a punishment of some kind.
Even as he wants to follow where the footprints go next, he finds himself rooted to the spot, unable to tear his gaze away.
Unable to tear his gaze away from what he knows can’t be salvaged.
The workshop where Zane was raised…
Made of nothing more than ashes.
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Electronic Tonic
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Pairing: Robot!Jimin x Reader
Genre: Friendship, Comedy, Soft boy, Fluff, Implied Smut
Summary: You had a robot since you were in your late teens, upgrading his systems ever since you had a job. Now you run your own bar, while you make the drinks he serves. However, it seems some patrons can’t resist his charm and handsome features. After an incident that sends a shock down his systems, he seems to feel and think a little differently.
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Jimin was a robot. But not a very good one. At least that’s what he was told by the customers. He was a waiter at a bar. He would carry drinks across the floor and smile politely when he was called derogatory terms and they tried to touch him.
“Hey pretty boy, how much for a little extra service?” One guy shouted
“Good evening sir, I have many skills and programs used within this job. My job requirements include delivering drinks, chatting with customers, upselling, cleaning spills, and maintaining peace inside the bar” Jimin smiled wiping their table and taking empty cups before leaving.
“Robots like you are useless” he scoffed his friends chortling behind him.
“Hey, Chimmy baby” He looked over,all his programs seemed to slow down his taut belts and wires loosening some of the tension. His facial recognition matched you as his boss and owner who was in the friend's category. Your emotions were happy if your smile was anything to go by and he couldn’t help smiling back.
He didn’t like when others called him pet names, it made his programs go haywire in confusion, were they being nice or were they being manipulative. But when you called him terms of endearment it made his circuits tingle in a way he liked. He would love to feel that every day if he could.
“Order for table twenty one, we got a vodka sunrise, a fruit tingle and a margarita. It seems like a girls night if they try to keep you, call for me” You smiled as he loaded up his tray.
“Of course, Miss y/n”
“Chim, I told you not to call me that?”
“Would you prefer boss?”
“Just y/n (or nickname)” your laugh made him feel like, he was good like he wasn’t completely useless. He left to deliver the drinks and you watched him go. His moves more elegant than a human’s, it was so smooth and graceful, each carefully calculated and controlled. He was a strange robot, he was about 5’10 (as to not appear intimidating to customers) he had a lean muscular form.
He was a walking juxtaposition between a soft angelic boy and a demon boy. He had a beautiful androgynous face, his eyes were sultry and lips so plump, his jawline was sharp. When you looked at him, some angles had you breathless.
You knew he had trouble with customers. He was very charming as you had programmed him to be. He was also sassy, shy and yet confident, helpful and enticing, you had rules and your regulars understood not to mess with your employee. But newcomers often found out the hard way that he was not here for their pleasure.
Your bracelet buzzed. A device you created for him to call you when he was in trouble. You went to collect him from the she-wolves, arriving you saw something that stopped your heart. The female threw a drink in Jimin’s face, he glitched and shorted out. Gasping you grabbed him, taking out your phone to call the police. “I have your name and credit card details, you are going to pay for the damage you inflicted on my employee.”
“It’s just a robot, how much is he worth? three thousand, I will give you a hundred bucks that will cover any shitty wires I fried” she scoffed watching you carry the robot back to the bar. You grabbed your books and opened it to show her, his maintenance and insurance cover.
“This robot was hand-built by me, his net worth is eight million, parts of him are waterproof, and you had to get the part of him that isn’t, wet. If you have broken my eight million dollar employee you will be paying back every penny?”
“He touched me” she accused you could see she was grasping at straws, you pulled up his live recorded footage on your phone which would have saved before he was short-circuited and began playing it for her. You heard her propositioning him for sex multiple times and she went pale.
“That’s classified as sexual assault you are lucky he isn’t a human”
Jimin switched himself back on. He felt funny, he tried to send commands to move, and yet the system wasn’t responding. He wished he could open his eyes. When they did he was confused, the probability of him being able to move whilst his systems were down should have been damn near impossible.
“Miss y/n, it seems my waterproofing has been compromised, I will need some assistance” The patrons in the bar started leaving understanding that their night was over, due to this incident. Some of the regulars lead the newcomers out explaining that the woman had damaged staff and the bar would be shut down until it was resolved. It could take days or weeks.
“What you can’t do that we just got here?” The young men from earlier heckled, you turned to them eyes blaze ready to murder anyone who opposed you, they blanched “we are paying customers”
“Look just get the fuck out of the bar” Jimin growled you turned back shocked, he had just swore. Of course he knew the words but he was too shy and nice to ever use them.
Jimin felt unrestricted like he could do anything and the problem was he didn’t know what to do without his programs. He didn’t like seeing you upset angry or worried and though his facial readers were offline he somehow could tell how you felt. He didn’t have his programs to tell him how to resolve the situation but he wanted to hold you. The police arrived helping to clear everyone out and the woman gave her statement you gave them the live video footage.
Once they had left, you sat Jimin on the bar and unbuttoned his shirt, he seemed to breathe a little differently. He didn’t need to breathe but you added it as a feature to make him appear more human and life-like.
He was feeling all sorts of weird today, as you touched his body trying to open his chest panel. He didn’t understand but he wanted you to keep touching him, and he wanted to touch you as well. Whatever this was he knew his systems were deficient in it and at this moment it seemed detrimental for his maintenance to feel your hands on his silicone skin. He had touch sensors and they must have been damaged because every touch felt like he was growing a hundred degrees. Perhaps his cooling system had broken.
There was a reason he was eight million dollars you had been upgrading him since you got out of school. Spending days and money and energy making a best friend, a companion, an employee, someone you could always lean on when you needed it.
You tried to fix the damage, carrying him upstairs. His skeletal system was hollow titanium strong but light weight. Plugging him into your computer to perform some checks and maintenance it would tell you which systems were working and which needed to be replaced.
Plugging him in as he laid on the workbench watching you, you hit the power down button. Jimin’s eyes closed and you heard everything power down and back up. The errors were fixed with your maintenance programs and you had a few parts to tinker with before he was back to normal.
A few panels and receptors later you were almost done, you went to retro his face when you paused. You had ordered a new face piece the same exact look, if not more realistic. You didn’t want Jimin to appear different. He was your soulmate best friend and companion. The new silicone face ensured he would be entirely water proof. And safe from customers and when you plugged in the facial cords to the face panel you knew he would move so much more life like.
His eyes opened and he felt like he was working again but he felt different like he was limited, the access he had was gone and his weird thoughts and feelings were no more. He was just Jimin your robot, he frowned.
“Is something wrong?”
“I am expressing the emotion sadness and it is unclear why. The source is undetected, why do I feel sad miss y/n? It’s hidden deep within me and makes me want to stay dominant and run binary alone, so many zero’s”
“Chimmy look at me, it’s okay to feel sad it’s human to feel things”
“But I am a robot?”
“Yes but I gave you emotions just like a human would feel in response to external stimuli, it was a bad night and you got hurt so you feel bad that is understandable”
“I am sad because I am not human” Jimin’s palm rested against your heart sensing the tiny flicks of life behind your rib cage. The structure of your bodies was almost identical, but he didn’t have this. He didn’t have a heart. “Why didn’t you make me a heart?”
“I did Jimin, you have the biggest heart. There is a reason why you are so expensive, right here, it doesn’t beat but it works the same. Thirty trillion transistors in a quadruple-chip processor they switch on and off rapidly sending signals around your body. And here is your brain I hand-coded programs that can run self-sufficient and you have a learning system so anything you don’t know you can learn and store yourself”
“Here is your stomach, we give you oil in here every morning remember, you love that, and beside that is your battery you sleep every night beside me chim”
“I want to feel love?” He whispered this small confession shocked you, “can you let me feel it program me to feel love, I watch people at the bar and they kiss and touch and I don’t feel it”
“Jimin, it’s not something I can program, love is the hardest emotion of them all and it’s shown through expression,” you said softly taking his hand his transistor switching faster behind his silicon chest piece.
“My facial recognition and emotional receptors have never seen you in love, can you not feel it either? Why do those people from the dramas you watch get to fall in love? It's all a lie.”
You had never seen Jimin act like this, it was as if he was a pubescent teen, throwing tantrums. Because life wasn’t fair. He grabbed your face in his cool smooth hands and pulled you forward crashing his lips to yours. You felt intoxicated. He tasted like the cinnamon alginate that he used to brush his ceramic teeth with every morning.
These silicone lips were soft and smooth feeling like silk brushing against yours. They were plush and mouldable and you lost yourself in the moment thinking he was real that this was something more than a robot. He was a robot. Feeling like you were a villain stealing this poor boy's virtue, you pulled away.
His hardware let out a long continuous beep, “I feel funny, I like it” he buzzed against you. He licked his lips, touching them, remembering the feeling of yours pressed there, it wasn’t the same. He wanted to kiss you again.
His hands ran down your neck to your waist scooping you up into his arms once more pulling you onto the work bench. Leaning in kissing you again. “Ji-” you tried to push him away but he was caught up kissing your lips and touching your warm skin. “Jimin stop we can’t?”
“Why?” He paused looking up at you confused “does it not feel nice to you?”
“It feels amazing chim it’s just” you could barely get words out around moans as he kissed your neck.
“These are the moans you told me about correct, you are feeling good right?”
One night you had taken the time to relieve your work stress, you thought Jimin had been charging. You later found out he charged rather quickly and would just lay there till morning every night.
You were busy bringing yourself to a beautiful ecstasy when you moaned particularly loudly. Jimin ‘woke’ alerted by your sound of assumed distress, you awkwardly explained to him the situation.
“I wasn’t in pain, its something people do?”
“Why?”
“Because it makes them feel good and when your stressed it helps” you tried to explain cheeks red and unable to look at him.
“How?”
“It’s hard to explain but it just releases tension and hormones that make you happy” saying it out loud it didn’t seem like you should be embarrassed about it.
“Can I see, or help?”
“Uh no people don’t usually show other people unless they are lovers it’s usually something private” he nodded dropping the subject but a million questions raised in his head. He spent the evening researching online all his questions diving deeper and deeper into this strange phenomenon and the two of you never spoke of it again.
“It feels so good Jimin but we shouldn’t?”
“But I love you, we could be lovers” he smiled “online it says that some robots are sexual companions I could be that with you? I could be useful”
“Jimin I am not your master I am your friend, I will never force you to do anything you don’t want to do”
“But I want you and I want you to want me too”
“You don’t know that Chim, I programmed you to be helpful and loving and you think this is what you want but it’s just the programs”
“You said it yourself, I have a learning algorithm. This isn’t the programs not anymore” He blinked up at you placing his hand over your heart. “Tell me you don’t want this, I have a built-in lie detector, tell me you don’t want me”
“I can’t” when he determined you were speaking the truth he leaned forward placing a delicate kiss to your lips and asking for your permission.
Unable to hold back any more you said yes and he grabbed his shirt and then yours laying waste to your clothes.
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Ironic, right? A tumblr post about not listening to tumblr posts. What I’m going to talk about might get a little touchy, but I feel like it’s my job on this blog to go where other people don’t because they’re overly worried they might offend someone. So disclaimer, if this offends you, I don’t care. That sounds harsh, but let me explain. I’m going to do everything in my power to express my views in a way that is non-offensive. If my views still offend someone, I did everything I could to not offend them and I can do no more, so for that reason I won’t feel guilty or bad because someone else doesn't like something.
That’s lesson one. Tumblr has created a real environment of fear around offending people. Yes, it’s good to try your damnedest not to offend people, but guess what. It’s still going to happen.
Advice on Writing Method
There are hundreds of posts talking about how the ‘rules of writing’ are not so much rules but guidelines, so I won’t go into incredible detail with it. I’ll simply leave it at; if someone’s writing method doesn't work for you, don’t do it.
On the flip side, if someone says that, in their opinion, certain writing methods don’t work well for x,y,z reasons, don’t get offended. Just don’t. Don’t waist your energy on it. Either read what they have to say and consider, or don’t! If you know what you’re doing is working for you, then why would you need advice about it in the first place?
Advice on Things Not to Write About (because it will offend someone)
Hi. I’m a doctoral student in a clinical psychology program. So as far as sensitivity training goes, I have more than you (almost definitely). I probably have more than 90% (made up statistic lol) of this website. Here is what is important to consider:
As a writer, we will always be touching on experiences that aren’t identically our own, because otherwise we would be writing biography. Sometimes we might go so far as to write about different races, religions, or traumatic experiences that we have never experienced. It’s important that we are very careful when writing about these topics. Remember, we are doing our best not to offend someone. That means doing the research, asking (politely) if you have a recourse to ask, and reading about what that minority group has said about representation. We should try our absolute best to include those voices in our consideration of the topics we’re covering. Not only will it make minority people feel better, it will also make your writing more authentic and palatable for everyone.
However, you are likely to still offend someone. That’s right. You can do it all, and some people will be upset simply at the idea you, a Non-whatevergroup, is writing about them, and your writing doesn’t match up with ThEiR ExPeRiEnCe™. You could ask 100 people of a minority group, and 99 would love what you did and not find offence at all, and one of them would skin you alive with their words of pure outrage. And that one person would for sure have a tumblr account.
[A small lesson about sample sizes. For the most accurate information about a demographic, you need a random sample. Tumblr is not a random sample. It houses the most offendable people on the planet, and you will likely find that people in your real life of the same exact demographics are somehow not nearly so.]
So if your main source of advice is from tumblr, let me give you a few guidelines for what advice not to take:
-advice which tells you to ‘never’ touch a topic at all, and gives absolutely no reason, caveats, or clarification. If someone isn’t willing to express their opinion beyond saying (my favorite) “If you’re going to write about X, just don’t.” (when X is a broad topic or theme, not a specific trope) then their opinion is either poorly formulated in their own head and based on automatic, emotional responses, or at the very least poorly expressed to a point where it isn’t helpful critique to use.
-Their reasoning is nothing beyond ‘I don’t like it’. Even if they use fancy language, just not liking something is not reason enough to ban it from all literature. If something is truly problematic, there’s going to be a clear and easy to convey reason.
-If the person is an ass hole about it. That’s it. Simple. If someone is expecting you to listen to them and they’re spouting, you don’t have to listen to that. They’re expecting you to tread carefully around them while screaming at you.
And lastly, in the hopes of creating a better environment, here’s some advice when wanting to approach the type of ‘please don’t write about this’ post that will actually get people to take you seriously and listen:
-realize that you don’t know other peoples’ ‘groups’ on face value. Almost everyone is in a minority group. (Whaaaaa?!) Yes, its true. Even CIS White Men™ may have a learning disability or past trauma. The fact is, you don’t know. Don’t imply that no one knows what it’s like to be the sad man, when what you really mean is ‘my experience differs from yours because I am X, and here’s how’. (No I’m not saying having trauma is the same as being Black or gay. I’m saying they’re different, but not better or worse, it’s not a competition and there’s no assigned value of struggle. They’re just complexly different.)
Aside: I am so sick of struggle dick measuring contests on this site!
-Avoid ‘never’ statements unless it’s something very specific (ex: never refer to a Black character using term X). What I’m saying not to do is ‘never write about the struggles of a Jewish person if you’re not Jewish’.
-Give your reasoning! No, you don’t owe anyone an explanation for how you feel, but you are expecting people to listen to you and do as you say. They don’t even know you, so if you want to be taken seriously, just explain yourself a little. It will also help to clarify, stop unneeded arguments due to miscommunication, and help writers actually discern what it is that is offensive so they can apply that understanding to other scenarios that might also be offensive for the same reason.
-Realize that people are going to make mistakes and don’t skin them alive for it.
-Also, please stop saying things like ‘if you can’t see why this is offensive then I can’t help you’. First of all, that’s inflammatory. No one needs your help. You’re trying to impart your opinions on someone else, it’s much easier for them to just ignore you, so stop acting like you get the final stamp of approval on their work and they need you.
They don’t need you. We need each other. We need to communicate positively with each other if we’re going to make this medium a better, more inclusive environment. Lastly, you’re whole argument is that other people can’t understand minority experiences they’ve never lived, so why would you turn around in the second breath of your point and say ‘if you can’t understand, there’s no help for you’? That creates an environment that clearly says; if you aren't X, you don’t understand, if you don’t understand you are garbage.
That is some fucked ups cyclical shit right there.
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The Many Faces of Victor Nikiforov - Episode 5
This episode actually had a lot more of Victor than you’d initially think and he seems to go through quite a range of emotions during just this competition. Let’s take a peek at what’s going on and why he fluctuates as much as he does!
So what I’ll actually start with commenting on with this first gif is Victor’s coaching. None of the other coaches at the competition are wearing anything more than semi-formal wear but Victor breaks out the entire three-piece suit. Why? Does he feel the need to impress Yuuri or the press? No, I think it’s more about his How to Coach 101 point of reference – Yakov. A lot of his habits can be traced back to him – his gruff way of giving feedback, his no-nonsense approach to learning, and even his dress. All of this makes sense considering his longest-term coach has been Yakov (with an obvious touch of Lilia, though she made her mark more on his skating and mannerisms). It also makes sense that he would test run his serious competition coaching as soon as possible – in this case, at Regionals.
For this second gif, I’d like to talk a bit about Victor’s expectations. He starts off overly excited, everything he says and does is overflowing with joy. However, that only lasts until Yuuri takes to the ice for his warm-up (and blows Victor’s enthusiasm off entirely), which causes Victor to start realizing that it isn’t going to be as simple or straightforward as he thought. Perhaps he thought that it could be like he’s seen from others – that he’d give Yuuri a quick pep-talk, Yuuri would get fired up, and then he’d go out and skate with minimal errors through the power of motivation… or something like that. That quite obviously doesn’t happen because Yuuri gets stuck in his own head so deep that he ignores everything else around him until he’s forced to pay attention. So Victor is immediately shown that coaching in reality is not going to be like when they’re in private or how it’s worked for him as a skater and he’s going to need to adjust his expectations to suit it.
This back hug… there’s a lot I could say about it but I’ll actually start with the buildup to it. I felt like I understood immediately what Victor was feeling when he was being grumpy and then ordered Yuuri to turn around, only to hug him. Which, when said out loud brings to light that the emotional tone doesn’t really match up. But I think it shows that Victor’s brain is working; he’s trying to find the best way to shake Yuuri out of his nerves. He knows that hugging has seemed to help before, and so does surprising him. So why not combine both, along with some advice whispered in his ear in an attempt to ground him? And it does work, for the first half anyway (Victor isn’t a cure-all, Yuuri does have his own things he needs to work through to relax more). As for why Victor tells Yuuri to turn around while being so grumpy and then sends the opposite message by hugging Yuuri and telling him to seduce Victor, I feel says that Victor feels frustrated that he can’t seem to get Yuuri to understand what he’s trying to tell him non-verbally. He wants Yuuri to turn around and is annoyed that Yuuri isn’t just doing it without being told – which is obviously an irrational wish because Yuuri can’t read his mind – but that doesn’t stop him from being frustrated anyway and turning it into an order. Along with Victor feeling ignored when Yuuri brushed him off earlier, this hug arguably isn’t only for Yuuri as well.
For this fourth gif, I’d like to focus on what Victor says. In this clip, he says “skate like you’re trying to seduce me” which tells us a few things. Firstly, it tells us that Victor is aware of who Yuuri is skating that particular program for. Secondly, it shows that Victor is aware of Yuuri’s reciprocated romantic and/or sexual interest. And thirdly, it shows us that Yuuri and Victor have talked about Yuuri’s interpretation of the Eros story in words. So any thought that Victor doesn’t know Yuuri is interested by this point in the series is disproven with this simple line, as well as the idea that Yuuri and Victor don’t talk about the meanings behind Yuuri’s individual programs. So by that, we can imply that everything we as viewers know about the meanings behind the programs, unless told otherwise in-show, both Yuuri and Victor know as well.
This fifth gif actually strikes me as particularly interesting because of Victor’s expression of displeasure. The clip before where he’s lecturing Yuuri shows him with a cutesy smile but then we get this next one with a more serious expression. I think that it’s not just Victor emulating Yakov’s coaching style, but that he really is unimpressed by Yuuri’s performance. Overall, it wasn’t a bad skate – he did get a score that would place him in the top 10 in the world – but Victor is aware of what potential Yuuri has and he was genuinely unhappy that Yuuri didn’t seem to get close to grasping that considering there was nothing around to really bother him or shake his confidence. Victor really is invested in Yuuri, and he’s aware of what things Yuuri can achieve when he actually applies himself and performs his best and Victor is invested in getting that best result.
For next one, we see Victor jumping in front of Yuuri/answering questions in front of the cameras for him again. This is actually something that started in episode 3, when he put his arm around Yuuri on the podium. Victor has gotten the impression that any time Yuuri is nervous in front of the camera, he can/needs to jump in and help. In a sense, this shows that Victor doesn’t really trust Yuuri to handle himself in front of the media. I’ve talked about it at length here before so I’ll spare the repetition but we can really see that Victor can get extra protective of Yuuri when he feels like anything is even slightly starting to go downhill.
I absolutely adore the intimacy shown in this seventh gif. The way that Yuuri sits back and lets Victor take care of him, the way that Victor is checking the small things like his hair being in place or his lips being chapped, and the way that there’s no actual pep talk between the two of them tell us that they’re absolutely on the same wavelength – a complete 180 from how they were the day before during the short programs.
Ahh, the Makkachin tissue box. This entire episode, Victor can hardly be spotted without it. Even when he’s upset the day before, he slams the skate guards down and walks off with it still in hand (though logically it’s Yuuri that would need it the most). But even more interesting than his attachment to it as an object, is the fact that he quite often uses it as a shield. He hides behind it, or uses it to talk, or says that it’s the one sending a message often enough that it makes me wonder if this is how he comforts himself when at competitions (as in, he looks at the box and sees Makkachin cheering him on or that the box is a stand-in for her and not just a cute tissue container). If something works to comfort the self, people tend to try it as the first thing they do when trying to comfort others. The concept of the box being a comfort for Victor can also be applied to how he hides behind the box, using it as a way to comfort himself (as well as Yuuri). Interestingly, he may use it as a wall a lot in this episode, yet it seems to lose that particular use past this particular competition.
“Oh, it’s me!” This clip sticks out to me as having 2 very obvious implications. The first meaning is the literal one that Victor states in his monologue, that he’s wondering where Yuuri gets his rebelliousness from in regards to not listening to his coach and trusting his own instincts first and foremost (which, interestingly, is a departure from how he was pre-Victor – but that’s a topic for another time). The second comes from the message Yuuri’s program and final pose send, that his program (and thus his skating in its entirety) is a dedication to Victor. Put these two together, and you get a more overarching meaning to Yuuri’s program and the fact that he insists on taking the reins with it – that everything all come back to Victor. “Oh, it’s me!” indeed!
And for this last gif, I just love his shocked face. I think what’s shocked him the most is that he’s hearing Yuuri say things that would otherwise be left for more private settings – not just in regards to the romantic implications (Victor being the first person he wants to bond himself to) but also the fact that he’s admitting publicly that he struggled on his way to seeing and accepting the love around him (a topic that before now was only talked about at the beach with the specific mention that Yuuri hid it from other people in an attempt to not appear “weak”). Yuuri put a lot out there in this press conference so it makes sense that Victor would be so surprised by it and then not be able to process all of it fast enough to be able to form a response appropriate enough for in front of Yuuri’s family and friends better than commenting on his clothes!
As you can see, Victor experiences quite the range of emotions and reactions to things this episode! There ended up being a lot more of him here than I initially expected going in but I hope everyone has enjoyed this short journey with me! See you all next week when we finally get to go international!
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Clone Wars Episode 2
Rising Malevolence
Starting off I really like the title which implies things are going to get a little heated
Title scene sequence still the same
Nice
Ok this time’s quote is a little bullshit
Belief is not the matter of choice
But conviction
Conviction is literally how much energy
you put into a choice
Little worried considering last episode’s good quote
left with an okay episode
Okay, whoa, whoa, got a lot of things, at once
Firstly, Ahsoka
Her face looks lumpy?
The narrator...sounds kinda - bored
Lot of things happening at once
Not really tied together
It’s-
Someone’s really
abusing
the jump cut
It literally gave me nausea looking at it
Not cool
dude
Then again
I guess they’re going for
Fast thrown together war footage
But seriously
chill dude
On the jump
cuts
And
nothing
seems
to
match
up
If
I
can
actually
remember
what
happened
from
this
jump
cutted
mess
I
would
make
a
joke
about
the
off
piece
/
paced
sync
Up
But
for
the
sake
of
me
I
can’t
(And
I’m
Not
Back
rewatching)
(I
Tried...)
Oh
here’s
one;
Growing
Fear
The
enablers
Just
Standing
around
Mate,
I
don’t
give
a
shit
about
them
(And
those
words
don’t
match)
The
Pictures
Still
recovering...
from
seasickness
So
excuse
my
scrawl
not
being
on
point
I’m sorry, I was sea sick
Something about menace
Not happening again
Fear
Of the thing they enabled
I have, no idea, what is going on.
And I’m too afraid, of the editors, to go back
Whatever, things are - moving -forward
‘parently
Red sun like planet
Ships heading towards it
Little stabilized
Person
Plo Koon
Standing
In Front
Oh good
We get to
see what the other enablers are up to
That’s nice
Would be thrilled
If the jump cut abuse
Hadn’t left me
In a state of not being willing
to handle the enablers-
We’re not jumping straight into that
Right?
Like,
this
is
a
quick
photo
shot?
Okay never mind we are
Fuck me up episode
Someone-
Realizes-
Tracking-
That’s not so bad
Hahaha
Okay, giant ship in front of the Sun, Why!!?
I am no longer hung over
I’m good
What the frick?
It looks like a shark
It looks deadly
what the heck
is going on?
Why is the boss music playing?
I mean it’s thematically appropriate and more than we got in the last episode
Just wasn’t expecting music
Or Obvious Villain
Before I think about it too much
Detail
“Oh my Red!”
That is a lotta Red.
I don’t think you could get much Red
“We are tracking republic cruisers”
Okay wait, We were on Plo’s
ship
Now we’re on Dooku’s
“Ships in the area...
I’m assuming they’re going to
intersect
And is Dooku -
Is Grievous Dooku’s apprentice?
I guess that would make sense
Given
That last episode
We learned
Of Yoda’s and Dooku’s
Connection
Learning
more about the villain isn’t such a
bad idea
No more jump cuts please though
“-Do”
“Jam their transmissions,”
Alright, straight to the evil
no hesitation
Possibly ending in murder?
What? It says ‘Rising Malevolence’!?
Murder would do that!
The Fleet is holding it’s position sir
Why?
“I think it’s wise to report our position before we attack,”
Good plan
‘Skywalker’s fleet is nearby’
A teenager, you’re trusting this to a teenager?
I mean they have to obey orders
You’re trusting a teenager that Obi-Wan order programmed?
A less developed version of Obi wan?
I know Yoda has a seat at the head of the garbage fire council
But Obi-Wan has a seat there for a reason
- note I’m pretty sure this is true for all continuities
so I’m not calling out movie Obi-Wan specifically
All of his continuities
Garbage fire
Which doesn’t have to be a bad thing...
Logic sin
“Perhaps he can reinforce us,”
Teenagers can’t reinforce shit
But they can pick you up
Like a taxi service
“ From what I hear Skywalker’s always looking for a fight,”
Great, Obi wan ordered him to give only aggressive answers and self destructive orders
/answers
Kid’s going to get killed
If any adult sets their mind to it
* Which seeing as you set him to ‘attack attack attack’
Well, someone to be preparing his gravestone
Good job, Obi wan
Dumpster fire
I do not regret it
“So I’ve heard,”
And enabled!
Trash Fire Council, everyone
“~~~~, Master Ploon,”
“~~~~, Ahsoka,”
Oh they share a language
Interesting
“how’s the hunt for the mystery weapon going?”
They actually tell him things?
Instead of just yelling orders at him?
Also, so that’s what they were doing
I
was
spinning
“We’ve tracked it to the outer Greknow (excuse spelling) system,”
“I need reinforcements”
Wait, need?
Earlier, it was a “ it would be nice,”
Now you need the teenager to hold your hand while you confront the other adult in your stupid war?
“ I have to ask the council Mr. plo I was given strict orders,”
Translation; I need to ask Obi-Wan
Also; this, this is how you write teenagers
�� A little bit too much energy
But this is how one would react
If confronted with an order and ordered to give that response
Good job, writers, you used your experience ( and knowledge) as a human being, to create a realistic human being
Get a cookie for that
Carry on
Breaking up
Signal jammed
Oh yeah clearly shows that Ahsoka is asking “what’s wrong?”
Immediately move out the general area
also is someone not monitoring interference?
Shouldn’t alarms be going off?
“ what’s wrong with the transmission,”
A) you’re the leader you should figure that out
B) asking a in superior isn’t going to help
- if it’s their chosen thing then just let them do it without
leaning on them
Nothing ever got better from micromanage
“There’s too much interference, sir”
Run
We’ve lost them
“You heard Master Ploon, he needs her support, we need to go help him,”
Good job writers, that is how a teenager would react, you even got the stunted - robotlike speech down - and energy level
Another cookie for you
“We’ve got to go help him,”
A bit of energy there but still good
“We have to see what the Council says first,”
Anakin, Perfect, 10/10, you know how to write children,
Perfect monotone
Fantastic
Job
writers
*And
Actors
The logic was pretty sound to
“This is an important meeting, Ahsoka”
Perfect
I’ll
stop
gushing
about
that
“Speak only when spoken to,”
Perfect
“Don’t I always”
Okay,
little noticeable breach
there
Little
too
much
energy
Children
Don’t
Have
Person
alities-
Still
Developing-
Nor
Attitude
This
mystery
weapon
has
Strucken
a
dozen
systems
And
disappeared
without
a
trace,”
That
Sounds
Really
Severe
Only
Wish
I’d
Know
What
It
Does
We
cannot
afford
to
lose
any
more
ships
my
phone
“Oh,”
How -
One
Of
you
had
to
order
him
The
Chancellor
must
not
of
been
there
“The
Enemy
ship
is
closing”
Well
it
makes
sense
that
they
aren’t
running
As
contacting
others
with
their
location
and
getting
reinforcements
was
something
that
they
were
supposed
to
do
and
‘would
be
nice’
respectively
And
they
did
both
* Technically
“General Greivous,”
Oh so now we get to learn of the relationship
Or what Dooku claims it to be
“This will be
a suitable test
for
our new weapon,”
Oh, or that
They
have
the
weapon
Interesting
Also
a
great
excuse
to
show
Plo
Koon
suddenly
getting
his
shit
recked
“Yes
My
lord,”
[Oh
wait
now
I
remember
he’s
Ventress’s
master
General
Term
Is
Lord]
Does
he
have
a
button?
“A
large
energy
reading
from
the
target,
sir,”
Run!
“Open
Fire,”
Then
Get
Out
Of
Range
“Fire!”
“Brace
For
Impact!”
Wait
You had Three whole ships
and you decide to clump them all together
Approaching from the same direction
Towards a giant space hole?
You...
You got what you deserved
“We’re losing all our power,”
No duh
Space wave
* Shock wave
Energy field , defenseless
No duh
“ Their shields are down
Full cannons,”
“they’re tearing us apart, one by one”
Uh, Space
pods?
“[Ship explodes]
Well I hope they got to the escape pod
Quickly, into the pods!
[ Plo being Captain Obvious]
Well one fricker hit debris and exploded
Really stable pods
Well shit
It was just a ship
At least everyone
who wasn’t an idiot
is alive
“ that was a successful test wouldn’t you say, Count?,”
That’s
surprisingly normal given the side is supposed to be the overinvolved
negative
I’m surprise he isn’t abusing his in superiors by now
Then again his ‘abuse’ style, based on name, is tech
Which isn’t an abuse style
Or negative thing
“Maul”
Is either a weapon or to chew something
savagely
Sidious
Is
just
this
version’s
Absolute
evil
(Human,
Sentient
version)
Dooku
.....
I
have
no
idea
He’s
clearly
meant
to
be
conflict
in
general
But
The
Name
....
I
have
no
idea
Sorry
went
on
a
name
rant
“ I
want
all
of
those
life
pods
destroyed,”
Brutal
What
was
the
deal
with
the
sound
Greivous
was
making?
And
why
is
that
droid
laughing?
We’ve
had
no
further
contact
with
General
Plo
Koon
And
nobody
is
panicking
Then
everyone
else
is
enablers
so
I’m
not
surprised
They
knew
what
they
were
getting
into
with
this
stupid
war
“The
absence
of
distress
beacons
indicates
that
his
fleet
was,”
Destroyed
killed
Also
there’s
no
beacon
or
way
to
signal
for
help
in
those
light
pods
The
Galaxy’s
huge
“-was”
A
bit
too
much
hesitation
there
I’ll
accept
a
slight
bit
that
Anakin
was
ordered
not
to
talk
about
death
in
front
of
Ahsoka
But
a
bit
too
much
emotion
& personality
And it isn’t overrided by one of his elders,
Obi wan specifically
Or Understood by
the others
We’re about to
launch a
rescue
mission
Hasn’t clone intelligence reported this weapon
never leaves any survivors?
But not that they had a giant stab wound through the
chest?
Enablers, man
Again, children don’t care about them
They haven’t even developed a personality
Nevermind the ability to form and remember
healthy preferred relationships
With individuals
Of their own age group
When they’re Adults
This ‘everyone’s afraid to say ‘die’ in front of Ahsoka Is bullshit
Even
the
expression
doesn’t
feel
natural
They are tidy they don’t want any witnesses
See, that’s even acknowledging that they know some foul play is about
‘They’ is not the weapon
It’s a person
“ these losses are tragic,”
Not enough to stop the stupid war and
stop enabling
What great friends
Plo Koon has
“ prevent more, we must,”
You aren’t doing
shit
Capsule
The Music
just
give
me
the
feeling
that
they’re
sitting
around
playing
cards
“The power grid is burned out”
Okay and that took out this whole life pod
functionality?
Like are these not for emergencies?
Shouldn’t have multiple backup power sources?
Or some rudimentary fuel
Also, the force,
Like with it you can exactly
have any moments of tension
Like
normal humans
Like
if you want to get out of the situation
there’s like 10 options
Humans are space orcs
Like just use the force to
paddle to safety
Or power the
ships
This is
definitely
not as bad as a situation
as they’re going to make it out to be
“Life support recharge.”
Well good thing none of you is dying
Oh did they mean
oxygen recycling?
My bad
So we’ll just sit here
And hold our breath
Snarking doesn’t really help it
“someone will come looking for us, right?”
Generally speaking, yes
You clearly sent out
communications
And abided by all the
rules
But you signed up with the enabler’s United Toxic Foundation, while everyone did sign up for a basic war - Palpatine’s things that one kid in the E for for everyone Minecraft let’s play role-play that insists everyone be allowed to swear
Like yeah everyone agreed not to do that
But you still don’t kick him
And the second you avoid accountability
things were on rocky basis
You can kick him to a higher level of accountability
(Or lower)
But not accountability
I don’t think that’s coming back from levels this
tox
And
Everyone knew
it
Including
this
guy
“ let’s get the power restored
, so we’re here to be found”
REASSURING
Also if you could do them
why were you wasting time?
I know the address they’re assholes who don’t care about their own
life
But still dude
Logic sin
[not storytelling]
Holding a bit too long on his face
for a jump cut
Ships
“ All our battle convoys will be sent to guard our
supply lines,”
Meanwhile them selling them out
Including yours
Skywalker
Nice friends
you have there,
Plo Koon
“i’m sorry we can’t risk any more ships with the rescue mission”
Any more
Meaning you sent some
“wait just because there hasn’t been any survivors...”
Dude
Bit too animated
Like holding on the thin string of
orders
And
still it should be
stunted
Even
under the order of
‘feel sad’
their eyes would still be moving around like
they don’t know what
they’re doing
“ doesn’t mean they won’t be any this time,”
Animation...a little choppy
Like beforehand the stiff moment really worked with the fact that they were children
That I thought it was
intentional
This little awkward bit of moment
doesn’t
Maybe it’s the
overall movement of an of Ashoka as a
character
It doesn’t work
“ boldly spoken for one so young,”
And almost unrealistically
so
If not for the string of
orders
I could possibly be reasoned by
Plo
issuing an overriding effect
Assuming he was her first
and longest caretaker
His order
if I’m in danger do this
Might still be
in system
But
it
wouldn’t
cause
an
outburst
like
that
Not
that
loud
Or
emotional
at
least
Just
monotonously
Repeat
ing
the
line
Which
would
still
get
the
same
reaction
Working
better
with
the
military
child
soldier
theme
“ Yes she is learning from Anakin,”
They’re child soldiers
They’re both still operating under your
orders
Anakin likely taking her up under
your orders
[If Common sense is
to be
believed]
If anything ‘she sounds like
Plo Koon,’ would be a better
option and highlight the
his-tory, they have
together as well as makes sense why
she would be
sent
“ Excuse my Padawan,”
Excuse that
bullshit
[I have a thing against
un child like
behavior]
“ I will deploy as
instructed
master,”
Ahsoka
[turns her back and
leaves]
I swear
if this leads
into a fight
And
one
with
them
not
talking
like
robots
Are
emoting
I’m
calling
bullshit
If they’re not just repeating orders at each other
“Ahsoka,”
How long do you think Anakin heard that tone of
voice?
[Because he’s not doing it on his own]
Little more
disappointed computer
needed
Too much
vitriol
But
Still
valid
“if
anyone
could
survive,”
Stunted
tone
good
Few
jumps
in
logic
And
conclusions
that
don’t
think
they
could’ve
ordered
But
overall
serviceable
“I don’t
understand,”
“what you don’t
understand,”
Well there are remarkedly
a few bumps here and
there,
This does play out
The way two
assumed authority
kids
would
play out
Good job writers,
actors
and
animators,
you
did
a
good
job
“....Jedi protocol,”
Know your place
My Padawan
“Know your place,”
Too
much
Energy
“Admiral,”
Anakin
Has too
much energy
And perso
-nality
Never
mind
it’s fine
“ isn’t that
risky?”
No, approaching/confronting an enemy from only one Direction when you know they have an unpredictable weapon, is risky
And stupid
This is a patrol
and as such
it’s a relatively good move
“ The mystery weapon out there,”
No, Plo Koon
wouldn’t have found himself
in that situation
had he done this
Also are you mouthing off
to
a superior
Fair
enough
you’re
older
and
have
nothing
to
fear
from
a
child
But
you
agreed
to
serve
under
said
child
Stop
breaking
immersion
I
like
the
fact
that
they
immediately
show
that
Anakin‘s
superiors
are
abusive
to
him
While
it’s
true
Anakin
broke
code
by
addressing
someone
of
lower
rank
This
dude
is
lower
than
him
(And
older)
And
still
gives
back
toxicity
(No
ne
Reflect
ed)
Too
“It might be,”
“But I know you
won’t argue my orders,”
Wow,
Not a really good picture of
Obi-Wan
we’re painting
He possibly
(very often)
compared
Skywalker
to his
in superiors
Derogatorily
Or
at least gave him
an order
to do
so
Yikes!
Come
on
Snips
Come on
[Pet name]
Bit
too
much
personality
But
Still
managed
a
lot
“The
air
in
here
is
getting
a
bit
stale,”
Then
stop
using
it
up
And
focus
on
fixing
“Don’t
look
at
me
it’s
Boost
sir,”
Tox
*also
no one keeps a plant
on them?
“He only takes a bath when
he’s
on
leave,”
Dude seriously not cool
throwing someone under the bus
like that
“ save it work on fixing the
pod,”
Yeah you’re running out of air
and this seems to be the only dude that doesn’t wanna die
“ Not your jokes,”
They’re toxic anyway
So the air quality isn’t getting much
better
“ Do you think we’ve got a chance,
General?”
You have several
chances
You have a
Jedi
on board
You could
doggy
paddle
to
the
nearest
station
“I know if we walk together we will stay alive,”
No, you’ll run out oyour oxygen, and die
Also the rest of you are doing
nothing
Lay down
And save some oxygen
If you’re not going to be
helpful
Someone will find us
Yeah, God
Or, in this case, hell
If you believe in
that sort of thing
And
Not
secure
nothingness
“ With
all
due
respect,”
Strategically
it
doesn’t
make
sense
for
someone
to
come
look
for
us
Yeah
you’re
all
enablers
no
one
has
more
inherent
worth
than
the
other
If I was in command I’d be hunting that weapon down
Humans are more important than weapons
Our decisions decide
whether our time together
Will be pleasant
Or
non-
pleasant
I value your life
Involved in this war that will likely take it
“-more than finding that weapon”
As
noted
that’s
a
valid
thing
But
doesn’t
have
much
value
in
an
enabling
war
and
a
poisoned
generation
“Sir,
there’s
another
pod
out
there,”
No
duh
You
launched
from
the
same
place
The
only
people
dead
are
the
ones
that
ran
into
that
debris
And
exploded
On
contact
There
was
a
gulf
of
flame
Likely
from
the
impact
of
the
ship
But
no
indication
that
anyone
else
died
(Not
like
he
could’ve
just
willed
them
out
of
the
way
with
the
force
Or
not
splurged
on
the
exploding
escape
pods)
“If only if we had power we could contact them,”
Again you should be working on that
Also what would that do?
You’re both
‘helpless’
In the
pods
how
about
we just wave
Hello
when the viewfinder
comes back around?
Because that implies it will
rotate
*Waves hand*
See?
Completely
preventable
Can
get out of this situation
at any time
How?
Like that glass is supposed to be
surprisingly strong
Like plastic
I’m calling
bullshit
“They’re dead,”
One-hand
that extremely sucks
(The loss of life is a
terrible
thing) ��
Then again
completely
preventable
“ Someone
busted their pod
wide open,”
Oh,
that’s clever
writers
But
that looks shattered
from the impact
That glass
is some
weird
stuff
Really
I’m
just
sinning
the
fact
that
they
would
have
glass
anywhere
on
this
supposed
to
be
very
durable
space
pod
Like
that
shit’s
a
safety
risk
regardless
of
where
it
is
Time
to ravage their ship for any supplies
What, they’re dead?
They
won’t
be
using
it
And
this
is
supposed
to
be
a
‘life
or
death
simulation,’!
“ We’re
not
alone
out
here!”
Really?!
Also
this
is
why
it’s
a
good
idea
to
get
down,
fix
the
ship
And
Get
Out
(Why
you
even
have
a
window
when
cameras
would
suffice
...)
“ Set those coordinates,
R2,”
Cool
“ I should tell you why
I spoke up
before,”
That
would
be
nice
But
if it’s Overinvolvement of Plo Koon
in your
upbringing
A few things should be
more obvious
“You don’t have to explain,”
Anakin
was taught not to question
things
Including dedication to
previous scouts
Oh, the deadpan
Ahsoka
is having a bit too much
reaction
But ot’s justified
in
confusing
orders
Good start
Oooh
That’s
a lot of Ships
Nice music
Very uppity
With a sense of
authority
Our ships
are in defensive formation
sir
“Oh Obi-wan,”
“Alright commander
I’ll check on Anakin’s progress,”
ASSUMED A U T
HORITY!
“Admiral,”
You’re not
supposed to be here
“How
goes
escort,”
He looks
terrified
of him
Convoys
Are
preceding on schedule general
The
fact
he’s
used
to
answering
to
him
says
something
“No
sign of enemy
activity,”
Liar
“and
where’s
Skywalker,”
Susp.ic
“The
general felt the redeployment of this fleet would increase our defensive perimeter,”
Dude’s
really on his case on respecting the
Council’s orders
“I see
thank you
Admiral
that will be all,”
Nice
chat
Problem
Sir
“Anakin
has
just
redeployed
himself,”
How
is
that
sus?
Didn’t
You
Give
Him
Orders?
Someone had to have given him some orders
that got missconstrued
Again
Then
someone
else
gave
him
orders?!
Weird
Rt,
set up the
scanner
Mystery
Weapons
No Rt,
tune the scanner
for life forms
Highest sensitivity
Interesting
Anakin was given more
orders
To value human
life
over
objects/
The
Mission
Interesting enough
this could’ve been
what they referred to
as any more ships
As an
Anakin
and
Ahsoka
had
already
been
assigned
And
given
specific
orders
by someone
who spends more time with Anakin
therefore has more authority
to ignore the other orders
My
moneys
on
the
chancellor
He’s
supposed
to be
grooming
Anakin
And
it makes sense
he could get away
with
a
“no other Jedi” order
without including
himself
Not to mention
get more time
with Anakin
to justify
the authority
override
I would
also
make
sense
Given
Obi-Wan’s
-bluff-?
(Whether
you
believe
he
did
or
did
not
know
about
the
order)
That
he
was
surprised
that
Anakin
wasn’t
responding
to
his
seniority*
*Face
Value
“ Why
would
we
Scan
for
lifeforms
to
find
an
enemy
weapon?”
Too
much
energy
Droids
“The Abogado system”
Too
much
amazement
More
‘statement’
needed
Smirk
Do you know normally I would
criticize this
but it has the perfect
half
assed
energy
So
good job everyone involved
that took skill
“ so it’s fine when you don’t follow what the council
says,”
Ooh
that’s a
miss
Doing
what
the
Jedi
Council
says
that’s
one
thing
How
we
go
about
it,
that’s
another
thing
That could possibly count for double
answers
And does count for
misconstrued orders
Considering a lot of orders can be fit into a
lifetime
Some do contradict and mix
to form up
interesting
combinations
And results
“that’s what I’m trying to teach you
my young Padawan,”
Good
answer
“So
you
always
meant
to
come
out
here
for
survivors,”
Better
Read
“Live are in danger of
Ahsoka,”
“We just
can’t turn
our backs
on them,”
“That’s
what
I,”
No
good
try
that’s
too
much
emotion
Tip
toeing
into
emotion
adult
Watch it
“ I know
But
the
way
you
said
it
was
wrong,”
Now Anakin’s following
Got to watch that
realistic tone
It’s hard
not to write
emotional characters
But it makes
the moments when they are
all the more sweeter
I’m really looking for that
‘I realized my life was a lie’ moment
“We haven’t got much
time-”
How?
“No
that’s not it-”
Time for the
idiots!
Well honestly the time with our Villains - enablers
- are just as
entertaining
it’s slow burn
But decently so
“We
don’t
want
to
make
things
worse,”
“How
can
we
make
things
worse?”
Death isn’t fun
“ When
you
ask
for
trouble,
you
should
not
be
surprised
when
it
finds
you,”
OK
Boomer
Who
has
never
helped
at
any
point
in
this
procedure
(And
is
the
big
g
est
enabler
of
anyone
here)
*Tox
“ I think trouble already found us, sir”
Good job!
What if we connect these two
wires right here
It’s an
electrical
puzzle game
I thought
something
was
actually
broken
“ I’m
getting
something,”
Great
There are 14 minutes left
What goes wrong?
Despite
maybe a
fight
Oof
They managed to figure
it
out
quicker
Now we get to listen to someone dying
In
extreme
detail
“That signal is weak, it must be close by,”
Uh, what?
I think
he might’ve
misspoke
What?!
That’s
a
giant
Crane!
I
don’t
know
what
to
expect
But
that
was
not
it!
Go
Get
‘Um
Boys
They’re
Normal
Droids
“Pod—”
“The
Droids
Are
Cutting
Behind
Us,”
Cutting.
through
They
just
sat
by and watched as their friends die
And we know
Plo Koon can move
the
ship
Brutal
“ Things got a lot worse,”
And you watched
it happen
Soco
-paths
“The Scanners are practically useless “
How?!
The Ship left
Shouldn’t the jamming signal
be gone too?
“ Got anything
on the emergency channel
R2?”
How
do you not?
Also
please save those guys
Like they’re enablers
But I’m a fan of
accountability
Not
death
You
can’t
hold
dead
people
accountable
“ We
might
find
something
you
don’t
want
to
find,”
“ he’s
one
of
my
oldest
friends,”
That
is
the
perfect
tone
good
job
-everyone
“It was Master Plo
Koon Who found me
and brought me to the temple
where I belonged,”
Oh yeah
that doesn’t
smell of indoctrination!
HaHaHa
(help!)
“ I think someone noticed
We’re gone,”
Too much Emotion!
“Anakin,
where
are
you,”
Conflicting
orders
“ we are making a quick stop
in the Avogadro system,”
On point
“A rescue mission I suppose,”
“You had other
orders, you know,”
I don’t like that someone else is
ordering you around
And has
higher
authority
Then
Me
“ it
was
my
idea
Master
Obi-Wan,”
Too
Much
Argh-
“ oh I’m sure,”
You’re both child soldiers
but I’m going to blame the
oldest
Despite
all orders
“ Well, have you found any survivors?”
“No,”
That is an “order to be sad’
Eye flicker
Good job
“ all the more reason for you to join the defensive
escorts,”
Adding
pressure to break
authority
“You’re
Going
to
Miss
the
rendezvous
With
The
Fleet
If
You
Don’t
Hurry,”
I
want
you
to
be
my
back
up
escape
not
Plo’s
“We’re
on
our
way,”
So
whoever
gave
him
this
order
didn’t
give
him
an
order
that
would
contradict
joining
the
fleet
afterwards?
“ i’m sorry
Ahsoka,”
Wait,
what?
He’s
getting
over
written?
By
that?
*Squeaking*
“R2-ooie
Thinks
He’s
Got
Something
On
The
Emer
gency,”
Please-
Stop
calling
him
R2-ooie
“Can he trace it?”
Hopefully
“Let’s get going,”
Too-
“ I think they see us,”
Wait,
what
“Uh
-oh,”
There’s
another
pod
over
there
The
droids
got
a
lot
less
cute
“Dadada,”
Ominous
Also
the
droids
are
so
cute
for
Genocidal
Manics
“It
is
time
to
go,”
“Go?”
Yeah your boss has essentially been letting you die this entire time
“Outside, to destroy the enemy,”
Again, could’ve done that anytime
“ I can withstand the pressure for a
brief time,”
Oh, that’s the
excuse
To be fair I don’t think humans can be
either
Not without seriously draining...
I will give him that
notion
Not, however, not moving the
ship
To safety
In fact all of this is just
badassery
Like he could’ve easily rescued those guys and stop the, from the safety of the inside of his pod and without wasting the probably be limited oxygen
By going outside
But
enablers
“ Put
your
helmets
on,”
I’m
about
to suck
all the oxygen
out of this
damn
thing
“If
you
say
so
sir,”
‘I’m
willing
to
die
for
this,”
That
one
sane
guy’s
like
“ This
is
a
difficult
situation,”
Y’all
making
it
“ There remains a possibility we will
survive,”
Great!
That’s good enough for
me
Everyone besides that one dude is
down
for
death
Love
how
that
one
dude’s
just
staring
at
them
“Kick
their
ass,”
Also you waited till they were right on top of you
‘Wolf
keep
the
communication
signal
alive’
I mean is the oxygen on, is the
electricity?
Like you could do more than just
fight?
“It’s
our
only
chance
someone
will
find
us,”
Bull
“ Let’s just hope someone’s looking for us,”
This is enabling
hell
“ Are
we still
picking up
that
signal,”
“ but
why
aren’t
we
finding
anybody,”
Are
you
following
the
signal?
“ I don’t know,”
I don’t know either
“ what’s
a
Jedi
doing
out
here?”
Real question
what’s a random person
doing out here?
Like
are
these
droids
Plo Koon
fanboys?
*Shoves*
Weak
If is anyone out there,
This is Ahsoka Tano,”
Seriously, you weren’t trying the transmissions
before?
Oh so those guys had blasters?
And can stick to the roof
But
those
other
two
just
got
blown
out
Didn’t
want
to
fight
Accepted
Death
“I can’t get a clear shot,”
How?
“ Time to put the squeeze on them,”
What?
“ is there anyone out there?”
Dude not paying attention
You had
One Job
“ It’s Ahsoka,”
Just press buttons
He can’t hear you
he’s outside
in space
“ keep the signal
alive
commander,”
What-
He has
a point
Dude’s
been
slacking
“Boost
the
reception”
“Argh,”
- - -
“We’re
Losing
The
Signal,”
He
just
threw
a
fricker
Seriously
That’s all
it
took?
Death
seekers
“Uh-Oh”
Karma
“ Sir,
we have lost contact with the
Pod hunter,”
Only
one?
Also yeah, after multiple people died
Plo Koon
finally decide to do something
“ Perhaps some survivors are putting up a fight,”
Big leap
More likely your
robots
fell off
something
“ that is something we
cannot
allow,”
Cut
To the
Senate
Okay...
We must find a way to destroy
this mystery weapon
Don’t fly right into it
‘end this war,”
Not gonna
happen
“Dooku
always
seems,”
“Tell
me,!”
Oof
Looks
proper
creepy
“Master Plo
koon
Or
his
fleet,”
“No,
we must fear
the worse,”
After we did nothing to stop it
Go, enablers!
Survivors
On whose
authority?
“His own
I’m afraid”
Bullshit
Someone
gave him an
order
‘His own’
only means you don’t know
Or are lying
But I’m going with
face value
for
Obi-Wan
With
His
flight
out
of
position
You trusted a teenager with a fleet
This is your own fault
Oh never mind
his fleet is fine
So Windu
was complaining out of his ass
And his Padawan
so whoever gave the order is fine with him having his Padawan
Oh yeah that does leave
Yoda sus
Twice the trouble
they have become
You gave them the order!
Abusive
old man
A reckless decision,
skywalker
has
made
Teenagers
can’t
make
decisions
“ Let
us
hope
it
is
not
a
costly
one
“Well general another fine mess we’ve got ourselves into”
The tox level is getting pretty
high
“ your sense
of humor
is improving,”
No his ability to be a dick
is
Well technically it was always there
He’s just really utilizing it
Right now
Toxic bastard
“ I don’t mean to say I told you so,”
Dude even a slight bit of accountability is acceptable
around now
Also wouldn’t the com’s guy be more accurate?
Pretty sure
he was the one
trying to guide everyone
away from death
“ I never believed anyone would come looking for us,”
Enablers
“ Anakin, the council was furious”
I decided we couldn’t just give up on Master Plo Koon
Bullshit
“But
the council
feels,”
Please
listen to me
Anakin
Return
at
once
Okay here I’m a little conflicted
It could be literally anyone
“ Yes, Excellency,”
Nevermind
It is him
Good job
writers
“ we have
to
stay,”
Note I’m assuming the vision is a metaphor an action
order
Because Visions
just no
Too much emotion
“Ahsoka,”
He
allows
her
to
do
this
“ sergeant why are you so certain no one is coming,”
Because they’re enablers
And he’s
particularly
negative
He’s
a
person
that’s
his
choice
(That
you’re
enabling)
He
still
toxic
“ We’re just clones,sir,”
That’s
a
good
excuse
The past trauma doesn’t justify
creating present trauma
You’ll be
held
accountable
the
same
“ we’re meant to be expendable,”
Yeah,
doesn’t justify this bullshit
“ Not to me,”
Bullshit
You
were
instrumental
In what occurred to
them
You enabled them
* This
Situation
This
is
like
a
boomer
comforting
a
millennial
abuse
victim!
You
were
instrumental
in
what
happened
to
them
Point
being;
If
you
actually
cared
what
was
happening
you
would’ve
stopped
it
before
it
began!
Now
everyone’s
an
enabler
‘Light’,
assumed to be heroic
turns
into
actual
light
Okay, good
Was worried there.
for
a second
Ready tow
cable
Why wouldn’t -
Okay,
they’re moving him
towards the
door
Good
They
were
running
out
of
oxygen.
Sometime
There
were
no
real
stakes
“ Come on
hurry!”
What’s the rush?
They’re fine
“ are you ok,
master Plo,”
All this work and build up
and he’s dead
“ there’s
someone
in
the
pod,”
That
poor
guy
Pretty
sure
he
was
the
one
who
least
wanted
to
die
“argh,
argh,”
Oh
now
there’s
health
problems
Now
that
they’ve
been
rescued
Was
talking
fine
just
a
few
minutes
ago
Sudden
medical
droid
When
both
Anakin
and
Ahsoka
should
know
how
to
do
first
aid
Will
they
be
alright?
Not
at
that
pace
they
won’t
And
with
that
acting
“The
pressure
suits
provide
some
protection”
Some?
They
were
completely
fine
up
to
this
point
“ but
they
require
a
medical
frigate,”
Why....
Did they bother...?
Bringing you?
“I
will
stabilize
them
sir,”
How?
Pics
or
it
didn’t
happen
“Your
men
are
safe
now,”
Dude
he’s
sleeping
“were
there
any
survivors,”
IDK, Mister
I′m gonna.
sit-around
while-
people-
Die!
Probably
would’ve
killed
them
himself
This
was
his
favorite
unit
Hahaha
*Fake
Guilt*
After
he
caused
and
let
all
of
it
happen
‘Hunters’
You
let
it
happen
And
them
But
mostly
you
Authority
-claimer
“ I’m
sorry,”
Not
her
fault
That.
This
Dude
Is
An
Asshole
So
Heading
to
the
big
battle
Not.
A
word
*Plo’s
voice
*No
Plo*
Behind both of them??
Telling this story, why??
To a teenager??
Also
see
he’s fine
“ an ion cannon,”
Standing in front of it
surprisingly didn’t help
“An ion canon,”
Some thing neither Plo
nor
the Jedi Academy apparently covered
“ neutralizing all power to our ships”
‘Wow, if you knew all about it then why didn’t you make some.
defenses to prevent from knocking you out’
‘Shh, I’m sacrificing my men!’
“ Defenseless,”
‘ yeah we obviously shouldn’t
alert the council
right now,’
“ massive vessel approaching,”
Run!
“ shut down the power systems,”
Okay,
Boomer
It’s not like we could contact the council
While running!
“The droid”
R2-D2
Nearly
gets
everyone
killed
“Sorry
Little
guy,”
Don’t
get
down
or
anything
“ That’s
one
big
cruiser
crusher,”
Yes
and
this
idiot
went
right
into
it!
*Intense
noises *
Dude, they’re not going to see them
Yeah
it’s
big
“there’s still no signal from the pod- hunter,”
That’s - repetitive
Did you think it
would be
Like it’d
suddenly
come back online??
This stupid quest for
someone else
would end?
“Reactivate your scanners,”
Turn it back off and
on
again
“ We will find who is responsible,”
Who could be no one
Or left the system
“ hey what’s
with the lights,”
“Power’s gone out,”
Five minutes in
and already complaining
Also shouldn’t you guys
be asleep
After the cold vacuum of
space?!
What did the robot
put you on??
“ Maybe the
ship has returned,”
Now He’s
panting??
Like dude,
didn’t even fight!
We didn’t even
hear or see him get hurt
at all
(Only
squeezed!)
What
The-
Faker!
*Getting
Caught*.
“You
are
too
weak,”
Suddenly
and
only
now
Would
make
more
sense
for
one
of
the
soldier-
For
Him-
The
Injur-
Also
doctor,
Maybe
help
him
To
The
Location,
Summon
Some
One
Or
Bring
him
to
Bed
“ Let
me
go
see
what
is
wrong,”
Close
Uncomfortable
close
up
on
face
Two
soldier
guys
Jump
Ing
Up
-
But
Like
-
The...
Roles
should
Be
Reversed
You.
Should
Be
Him
You.
Received
More
Damage...
Anyway!
*Mischief
Music*
Still
Looking
at
the
ship
While
their
Ship
Hurdles
(Dangerously)
Close
To
a
Star
“We’re
Picking
up
a
faint
signal
from
a
droid,”
Seriously,
That
was
Five
minutes
ago
That
Long?
Catches
a
signal?
Also,
yeah,
so
what?
“One
of
ours,
they’re
right
behind
us,”
So?
“Move.
Us
Into
Attack
Position,”
Dude,
1 to 10
Real
Quickly
Like he doesn’t even know
anyone’s on there
The ship he’s about to shoot
resembles
A
Wreck
And
Could
Very
Well
Be
One
With
Only
a
droid
On
It
Like
Dude
is
Just
Down
To
Blow
Stuff
Up !
They’re
Coming
Back
“Are
All
Systems...”
AHHHHH!
I paused
At the
Exactly...
Wrong
Time
Five Nights
at Freddy’s
Bullshit
Anyway,
After
That
Bull-
terror-
Fuel
Yeah
Shit’s
fuck
ed
“Is there
A Pro
Blem -s
-ir?”
“You
for-”
Seriously,
That
Dude
Had
One
Use,
Not
Even
Why?
Power
Back
On
Which
You
should’ve
done
from
the
beginning!
You’re
smaller
And
faster
RUN!
“Can
I
Be
of
Assistance?”
NIGHTMARE
FUEL!
*Who-
ever
Tho
ught
This
Thing
Would
Be
Com
Fort
ing?!
!
That
Is
My
Programming
Sir
Ah!
“General
I
Don’t
Want
Any
Wit
ness
es,”
How?
Your
ship
Is
so
big
And
Difficult
To
Maneuver
How?!
Any
scout
ship
could
out
maneuver!
“En
-er
-gize,”
Still
It
Only
Points
One
Dire
-ction
And
Moves
Like
A
Barrel
Ing
Ox!
“Program
the
Navi
computer,”
You- “You We turned Off!”
Forgot Him
Appreciated but
Still too
Much
Sass
Aww, nice
He was
gentle
“ ~~~
Droid,”
I’m going
to assume
“You nearly
Fucked
Every
Thing
Up,”
Is
What
That
Means
“ Target
range
almost
locked,
sir,”
SWIRVE
They’re
Not
Gonna
Make
It
If
They
Don’t
Move
Slightly
To
The
Left!
“Program
a
Hyper-drive,”
What?!!
“Any where!”
???
“Enemy
ship
target
ed
Gen
er
al,”
Going
to
the
Prometheus
School
of
running
away
from
things
(You
Can
Literally
See
The
Ed
ges)...
Master...
This
Was
Your
Plan
Good job
*Turns)
We’re
Clear
Plo
Koon
Not
Sitting
Down
“Errr”
Possessive
Like
How
Does
He
Know??
Now
the
republic
will
learn
of
our
ion
cannon
???
Then don’t-
Like
a scout-
I just
Don’t
Think
They
Cared
Dooku
Quiet
‘Sidious
Is
going
To
Beat
Our
Ass
“Your
Failure
is
most
unfortunate,”
Correction;
*Yours
“ I will
have
to
discuss
this
with
my
master,”
“Rawr!”
Get Back
To
Work’
There’s
That
Abuse
Of
in superiors,
I was
Looking
For
‘Roger,
Roger’
*Grievous
Head
Pressed
To
That
Board,”
Ship
Brig
ade
Impress
Ive
Dock
ed
Sur
Prised
“Thanks
for
getting
us
out
of
there
in
one
piece,”
‘It’s
More
Than
Master
Koon
Would
‘ve
done!”
Even
if
you
have
no
choice
since
you’re
just
a
compilation
of
orders !
Too
Much
Personality
Also
Didn’t
Happen
“General Plo said someone would come for us,” nobody said in the most enabling way and seemed to imply enablers
Also, again, child soldier
Skywalker it’s time to give our report to the council
“Right-”
That
Just
Doesn’t-
Hit
Right
Too
Much
Person-
Ality
“C’mon
Ahsoka,”
“You
Want
Me
There,”
He needs you
there
The
Council
Pret
-ty
Much
Ordered
Him
To
Take
Care
Of
You
(If we’re
follow-ing
non-stupid
logic?)
“ I figure
because
of
before,”
He HAS TOO
“Ahsoka,”
‘I was ordered to
by a bunch of Deranged sociopaths
who think child soldiers
was a good idea,”
“You did
A
Great job,”
[Sigh]
Line work,
Wasn’t so
Good, near
the end
“ but if I’m getting in trouble
for this,
You
share
the
blame
too,”
I
feel
like
there
was
a
tortured
attempt
to
connect
it
back
to
Dooku
and
grievous
but
that
only
works
because
they’re
adults
capable
of
Malician,”
“ Right
besides
you
Sky Guy,”
Alright
First off;
Misleading title
Nothing really
escalates
(Nothing really rises
Except for
the Introductory
sec
Which
will
make
you
feel
like
you’re
in
high tides
Before
Red
Please
For
the
Love
of
You,
Skip
to
the
Red)
As we
don’t really
have a scale
Enablers do things
It’s not really a scale of an
intensity
Nothing basic yet
The plot I feel was on the
weaker side
Finding a weapon from
out of nowhere
‘ oh wait we know everything it does,’
Didn’t really come to a conclusion
But assuming they might follow it
up
As for now I feel that
they really could’ve gone for a
Fight ending
Really hyping
up this weapon
In Master Koon’s
Return
Only for
us
to see nothing
In
terms of
an equal battle
But, hey, maybe that comes in to play later
The one thing I can say really improved
Or was just better/ Good to see
Was the better writing
Of the
Child
Characters
Although
There were
a few
minor
Slip
Ups
Here
And
There
Especially
Near
The
End
Where there was a line
“ You did a great
job!”
That sounded...
Well it sounded like something from one of those cheap
TV shows
Or commercials
* hopefully not too harsh
I don’t
hold
Any
grud
ges
It was just an awfully recorded line
Any way next is; Shadows of Maleviolence
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so about that orientation/preference brouhaha
Having slept nonzero hours and having mulled this over a bit
I don’t exactly have a horse in this race as a filthy Fake Pseudo Ace That Doesn’t Even Have The Decency To Be Aro Or Gay Or Even Completely Ace I Mean Stolen Valor Much. It’s literally impossible to criminalize not having sex. Utterly unenforceable. I get that I’m not being targeted here and my opinion doesn’t really matter except as a barometer for “is planetfall a good person” (which I am not, and could have told you without any of the fuss). I have no specific love for the phrase “sexual preference,” I don’t think I have ever even used it, but also it’s such a nothing distinction. I do not care that Important Organizations declared it offensive years ago, because the reasoning they used to do so is silly, and of the people I’ve seen saying it definitely is not offensive what on earth are you on about, a bunch of them are LGBTQ.
And again, to address the issue that spawned this specific instance of this discourse, given Barrett’s record and the way homophobes do seem to insist on saying preference, it probably is a signal she intends to use her power in bigoted ways.
But like.
First of all, it is incredibly foot-shooty to say the evidence of her prejudice is the fact that she said “sexual preference” and not “sexual orientation,” which requires a fair bit of contextual understanding to see what the problem is and looks like pedantic hair-splitting without that knowledge, when shit like this exists.
Second - I’m sort of Von Wokensteining here, and to my understanding this entire argument started from one tweet or something similar, and it’d be misleading to assert “this one tweeter is the avatar for progressivism!“
EDIT: That’s not correct, it was a senator at her hearing rather than a rando providing commentary. I should have confirmed this myself and only learned it a few days later. This shows how accusations are taken out of context and passed around demanding judgment. I definitely could have spent more time reading about this incident, because I am a shitty excuse for a person with unlimited time. Every random Joe Blow does not have that luxury.
In my defense I was not paying attention to the hearing because I just assumed she would be maximally bad on all issues, considering who appointed her, and that was not a swamp I really wanted to wade through.
However.
People rushing to defend the assertion that “sexual preference” is self-evidently offensive gives at the very least an impression of a unified ideological coalition.
And, I said this in the last post but it bears repeating, the left lost the right to use “born this way” rhetoric the moment it became a semi-common talking point that you need to challenge your attractions if you aren’t attracted to an adequate cross-section of your area’s ethnic makeup or whatever. To intentionally try to change your attractions. To choose your attractions, if I may be so bold.
The charge against “sexual preference” is that it implies that orientation is a choice, which is supposedly hopelessly reactionary. Even ignoring for a moment that it does not in fact imply this, you do not get to tell people it is indefensible to IMPLY things that your side SAYS OUTRIGHT.
Also, quite frankly, I consider myself to have been made more ace during my lifetime by certain prevalent messages (and other hyper-targeted ones), and like, if the argument is actually that non-innate sexualities are illegitimate, does that mean that there can be no moral objection to someone raping me because the sky wizard said so?
[edit: screaming redacted]
It literally does not matter whether who you’re attracted to is a choice or inborn or whatever because that is not the moral dimension, the moral dimension is “does it hurt anyone?” which it fucking doesn’t why is this so difficult
I don’t give a shit about the rhetoric. The rhetoric sucks. The rhetoric is wrong.
Third, I’m extremely suspicious of any sort of euphemism-treadmill type anything, but one thing that’s especially suspect is when someone says “X term is offensive to Y demographic” against the wishes of that demographic. Like, my circles are not the widest, but I have mostly seen LGBTQ people being upset at being spoken for against their own wishes, sometimes with people chiming in and helpfully saying “no, see, you should be offended! This article says you are offended so stop pretending not to be!”
I am not trying to make a false equivalency of the relative badness levels but please, try to appreciate the poetic irony in unironically deploying “The Dedicated Truth Decreer said the innocuous-on-its-face thing was bad” in this of all possible situations.
It’s the “listen to X (I am not X, and X that disagree with me are not real X so don’t listen to them)” thing. The entire authority of that sort of article rests on the authors speaking for groups, so when members of that group say “this is bullshit pedantry and not offensive, and in fact your declaring it offensive on my behalf makes me feel less safe in places purportedly organized for my benefit” does in fact undermine the authority of those declarations.
Fourth, this is not as strong of an argument and really super tangential, but I’m personally sick of people just... giving things up because bad people claim them. I don’t extend this infinitely, so for instance Hindus trying to reclaim the swastika are probably right on the level of “it is wrong that this important symbol from our culture has been made synonymous with the greatest evil in living memory, and this change should be reverted,” but it’s so culturally ingrained that I don’t know if it is possible to fix at this point.
However, I remember when a bunch of Nazis were like “we own Pepe the frog now” and the response to this was like, “Yeah! Let them grab whatever culture they want, it is tainted by their even saying they want it! Also all Pepe memes made before this point are retroactively fascist!” and just...
That’s fucking transparently stupid. That specific thing has abated and you can find lefty Pepe memes now, nature is healing etc etc, but the “anime = fascist” thing hasn’t and it’s so so mind-numbing that you would just cede entire genres of art and start asserting that anyone who enjoys them is automatically irredeemable without considering what effect this might have on how unhinged you look or your ability to say your ideal world is better than theirs. I remember arguing with someone about this circa 2016 and I said something to the effect of “well what if instead of next they claim jazz” and they said it would suck that nobody could listen to jazz anymore. (iirc, this person was white which makes it extra hilarious/depressing, but the forum thread where it happened seems to be deleted so assume I made this up from whole cloth)
The reason I bring this up is part of the reason people say “it implies orientation is a choice” is because that’s what homophobes say it means (in contradiction to the literal words, naturally) and why they insist on using it. It’s less of a concrete thing, but the two feel isomorphic.
Lastly... OK so in my other post I used sort of a cringy programming metaphor, because I was half asleep so the only part of my brain still functioning was “comprehension of programming problems” amirite fellas. I don’t like definition debates in general but it seems like a lot of the people insisting “preference = choice” are using different definitions, so this is mostly just to show how that is not the only obvious interpretation.
A sexual orientation is a description of what gender(s) someone wants to have sex with.
A preference is a description of what someone wants.
Therefore a sexual orientation is a type of preference.
Note that nothing there says anything about origin or mutabiliy. Just that if you ask someone what their orientation is, you will get information about what they do and don’t want.
I need to stress that based on the context that sparked off this debacle I can understand why someone’s interpretation of the phrase might be “orientation is a choice” - even though I think it’s wrong to assume that’s what is meant by the phrase inherently, it’s a reasonable reaction to pattern-match talking points.
But the other thing is that it’s probably wrong to perma-delete the phrase because it isn’t gibberish.
What I mean by that is I get frustrated whenever someone is talking about an expenditure of energy and time related to feelings, and someone else comes along and screeches “THAT’S NOT WHAT EMOTIONAL LABOR MEANS”
and yes, that is not what the jargon phrase “emotional labor” means
but the person you’re yelling at was in fact describing labor that is emotional, and due to the way English works, you are allowed to delete the “that is” and move the adjective before the noun. Some would even recommend this in the name of concision. (And as I’ve said before, “emotion work” as a substitute phrase is...linguistically unpleasant to say the least.)
Saying that you can’t say “sexual preference” is sort of in the same boat. People will want to talk about preferences that are sexual, because there are more variables than just orientation, but those things still matter and should get a category name and look the entire argument falls apart if you don’t make bizarre assumptions about the connotations of the word “preference” and there are only so many ways I can state that fact.
IN SHITTY CONCLUSION
The fact that I wrote out a giant post defending a phrase I don’t otherwise care about reveals some sort of deep moral failing.
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Dragons - Japanese Trailer Translation
I finally managed to work up the courage to translate the entire thing, this time with the Narrator’s speech. Again, my Japanese is only subpar so if you find any mistakes, feel free to let me know.
I’ve also made some adjustments to my previous translations because I’m wavering on how to properly convey certain things. As always, there’ll be over-analysis of unnecessary things.
Note: The original English is on top, the translated English will be blockquoted, and any of my interjections will be in parentheses.
Allow me to impart a tale of two dragon brothers passed through the generations of my family. The elder brother is the Dragon of the Southern Wind. The younger brother is the Dragon of the Northern Wind. They combined their powers to serve as Guardians to the Heavens.
But the two brothers argued over who could better rule their land. Their quarrel turned to rage and their violent struggle darkened the skies until the Dragon of the South Wind struck down his brother, and fell to earth, shattering the land.
However, one faithful day, the relationship of these two were torn asunder. In order to determine who was superior, the petty sibling rivalry eventually summoned a storm, and the Southern Dragon struck his younger brother down to the earth, claiming victory.
(The NARRATOR himself acknowledges that this fight was stupid! He specifically says: 「些細な」(sasaina) which is an adjective for trivial. He’s basically like: why are you guys dumb?)
The Dragon of the South Wind had triumphed, but as time passed, and he realized his solitude, the sweetness of victory turned to ash.
But alas, the joy of victory was fleeting. With his younger brother gone, the Dragon of the Southern Wind is alone without family.
(Here, the narrator says: “天涯孤独” (Tengaikodoku) is a very specific phrase in Japanese that basically means alone in the world beyond Heaven’s borders. So, 天涯孤独の身 (Tengaikodoku no mi) is a body (person) who is devoid of family outside of Heaven (implying all their family is dead/within Heaven’s borders, but you’re outside of it–it’s self-explanatory.))
For years, the bereft Dragon’s grief threw the world into discord, and he knew only bitterness and sorrow.
For many, many years, the agony and sorrow from the Dragon’s breath blanketed the world in chaos.
(「龍の息から」 “Ryuu no iki kara" is literally “from the dragon’s breath” or it could also be translated as a “sigh”. Implying that the fucking Dragons are responsible for all the chaos that happened many, many, many years ago. They’re the first REAL omnic (not really) crisis.)
Narrator: One day a stranger called up to the Dragon and asked, “Oh, Dragon Lord, why are you so distraught?"
One day, an unknown man beseeched the dragon: "Oh, Great Dragon. What saddens you so?”
The dragon told him, “Seeking power, I killed my brother, but without him, I am lost."
The dragon replied: "In seeking power, I have killed my younger brother. But without my brother, I am nothing.”
The stranger replied, “You have inflicted wounds upon yourself, but now you must heal. Walk the earth on two feet as I do. Find value in humility, then you will find peace.”
The man said thusly: “This wounds you have are self-inflicted. However, all wounds can heal.” Reflect upon the lands with two legs like myself. If you walk the earth, I’m sure that one day you’ll be able to obtain peace.
(Shit, translating the “Reflect…with two legs like myself” gets harder and harder every time I do it. Literally, it goes: Like me, with two legs on the earth, reflect–except it’s a lot smoother in Japanese, I just can’t find a good way to say it in English.)
Hanzo: You are not the first assassin sent to kill me and you will not be the last.
To send an amateur who can’t even hide their presence, I must be being underestimated.
Genji: You are bold to come to Shimada castle, the den of your enemies.
To trespass into Shimada Castle like this, I must admit that you have some balls.
(You can fight me about my choice of words for this, but I won’t retract it. Genji says 「度胸だけは認めよう」 (Dokyou dake wa mitomeyou) which can be translated as “I will at least acknowledge your bravery/guts” or “At the very least, I acknowledge your courage.” Something like that.)
Hanzo: This was once my home. Did your masters not tell you who I was?!
This was once my home, did you not know even that?
Genji: I know who you are, Hanzo.
Of course I know, Hanzo.
(THIS PART. I’ve said it before, but in Japanese, you don’t ever say a person’s first name unless you’re very close to them, like family or seriously good friends. To have this stranger (Genji) be so familiar with him is seriously scary and almost an insult, a mockery. Like, who does this guy think he is, saying my name like that–like he knows me.)
Genji: I know you come here every year on the same day. You risk so much to honor someone you murdered!
I also know that you go out of your way here every year on the same day to mourn someone you killed.
(In Japanese, this sentence is split up into two parts as well, but I want to talk a little about it. The first part is literally: [I know] also, you come here on the same day every year. The second part is a little trickier because the translation for 「わざわざ」 (wazawaza) is not very concise in English. It basically means to go through a lot of trouble or going out of your normal way (saying the person took special care out of their normal routine even though they didn’t have to). So, second part is: [You come] all for the person you’ve killed, basically implying that Hanzo had every opportunity to NOT do this, but he does it anyway. The feeling is a little different from the English version.)
Hanzo: You know nothing of what happened!
What would you know?
(He’s very accusatory here. The tone doesn’t translate well into English, but it’s Hanzo basically very suspicious and very skeptical, like: “What would you even know? What do you THINK you even know? You weren’t even there!” sort of tone.)
Genji: I know you tell yourself that your brother disobeyed the clan and that you have to kill him to maintain order. That it was your duty.
Oh, I know. Your brother was an embarrassment to the clan. There was no choice but to kill him, or so you were told.
(You will never get me to shut up about this single part. 「弟は一族の恥」(Otouto wa ichizoku no haji/“Your brother was the clan’s shame/an embarrassment to the clan”). I’ve translated “恥” as “shame” before, but I’m wavering between the two. The word can literally mean “shame” or “embarrassment”. Either of them works, but in English, I think an embarrassment of a person has a slightly different connotation than ‘shame’. But that’s a personal thing.)
Hanzo: It was my duty and my burden.
That’s right. It was a duty that I had to see through…to the end.
(I changed this part a little from my previous translation to match the spoken dialogue. If you watch it at this part when he shoots the arrow at Genji, he pauses, and that makes this a lot more dramatic.)
Hanzo: That does not mean I do not honor him!
But that does not mean that I have forgotten my brother!
Genji: You think you honor your brother, Genji, with incense offerings? Honor resides in one’s actions.
Do you think that your (younger) brother, Genji, would be happy with incense and offerings? Sincerity should be shown through one’s actions!
(These sentences are also weird in many ways. I’ve tried translating this in more natural English, but in the end, it’s almost a literal translation of his words.)
Hanzo: You dare to lecture me about honor? You are not worthy to say his name!
Insolent fool! What are you playing at? Don’t speak my brother’s name so frivolously.
(I used “What are you playing at?” but really, it should be more like: “What is your game?” or “What the hell do you think you’re trying to do?”.
I also realized I never explained this, but the part where he says「軽々にしく弟の名を口にするな」 ( Karugarushiku otouto no na wo kuchi ni suru na/“Don’t speak my brother’s name…”) translated literally means, “Don’t put my brother’s name in your mouth so carelessly" or just don’t make light of his name, it should be honored, etc.
I don’t know if this means he really cares about his brother or if his brother’s name brings up THAT much guilt that he’ll fucking fight anyone who says it just so he doesn’t have to think about what a terrible thing he’s done.)
Hanzo: Ryū ga waga teki wo kurau!
RYUU GA WAGA TEKI (ry
Genji: Ryūjin no ken wo kurae!
RYUUJIN NO KEN (ry
Hanzo: Only a Shimada can control the Dragons. Who are you?
Controlling the dragons is my clan’s power. What is the meaning of this?
Hanzo: Do it, then. Kill me.
Why do you hesitate? Kill me.
Genji: No. I will not grant you the death you wish for. You still have a purpose in this life, brother.
No. There is no meaning in granting death to someone who seeks it. You must find your purpose for living, brother.
(The “granting death” part is me taking liberties. The word he uses is 「屠って(屠る)」which is to slay or slaughter. So, Genji’s choice of word here is extremely deliberate. If he said “kill” 「殺す」like Hanzo said in the previous sentence, it would vaguely imply that Hanzo had a chance at fighting back. But to slaughter? That implies Hanzo is helpless like cattle. It’s very interesting.
In addition, he says 「兄者」(anijya) for “brother”. It’s really, really NOT common to say something like this–case in point: when typing in Japanese, usually, the keyboard program can auto-converts your hiragana (basic Japanese writing system) to the appropriate Kanji (the Chinese characters used in Japanese writing) to convey the proper meaning. When typing this, it would convert the first part, 兄(Ani), but wouldn’t do the second part 者(Jya/Sha/Mono/etc).
So, “anijya” literally isn’t something that is commonly used in the Japanese language, highlighted exactly how old-fashioned the Shimadas were.)
Hanzo: No…how…? My brother is dead.
Impossible…you should have died.
(Alternatively: “You should have been dead” or “You should be dead”. Either works. He also says「貴様」(kisama) when referring to Genji (“you”). It’s hard to say if he uses it as an insult/rude way of referring to Genji, or if he’s using it normally because way back when, the word 'kisama’ wasn’t used to refer rudely to people. It was just a word someone would use to say 'you’. But then times changed and now it’s being used as a sort of insult (not really an insult, but…eh, it’s difficult to explain.))
Hanzo: Genji!
Genji!
(Here, I realized something. This is probably the first time in however many years since the incident that he’s said Genji’s name. It’s only mildly implied a few lines up where he says the bit about Genji speaking his brother’s name carelessly. I’ll let you think up of the implications, but yeah. That incident WRECKED Hanzo.)
Narrator: The Dragon knelt upon the ground. For the first time he was able to clearly see the world around him and he became human. The stranger revealed himself as his fallen brother. Reunited, the two set out to rebuild what they had once destroyed.
The Dragon descended to the earth onto his feet. The dragon, having landed onto the earth for the first time, changed his form to that of a human, and realized that the man before him was his (younger) brother. And so, the reunited brothers set off together in step.
(The last sentence is actually a bit deeper than how I translated it, but if you translate it quite literally in English, it would actually be somewhat repetitive.
再会を果たした兄弟は (Sakai wo hatashita kyoudai wa): the reunited brothers…
足並みを揃えて (ashinami wo soroete): in the same steps (stepping at the same time),
共に歩き出したとさ (tomoni arukidashita to sa): they walked off with each other/together, it was said. (The とさ part is kind of like the ending of a story like: or so it’s told.)
It’s really fucking weird to translate–I’d be happy to change this if someone could help with this. This dialogue is REALLY fucking different from the original English version.)
Hanzo: What have you become?
That form…just what…?
Genji: I have accepted what I am and I have forgiven you. Now you must forgive yourself. The world is changing once again, Hanzo, and it’s time to pick a side.
As I took on this new self, I forgave you, brother. All that’s left is for you to forgive yourself. The world is once again in times of turmoil. The question now is which side will you take.
Hanzo: Real life is not like the stories our father told us. You are a fool for believing it so!
Reality is nothing like our father’s fairytales. Enough, cast away your fantasies!
(Here, he doesn’t say 「いい加減に」(Iikagen ni) which would’ve made all the difference, but he just leaves it at 「いい加減」(Iikagen), which kind of translates as a sort of sharp scolding. Mm, it’s a difficult sentence to get the right feel for.)
Genji: Perhaps I am a fool to think that there is still hope for you, but I do. Think on that, brother.
Even if my fantasies are mocked, I will still believe. Let us meet again, brother.
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Rluai is the most common for INFPs, just saying.
I think I’ve already said everything that there is to be said on the topic, but I will adress this one ask because I believe it touches on a topic that I’ve only covered in passing on this blog so far.
BIg five vs. MBTI and possible correlations.
There is not actually that much data that correlates which results where commonly received by the same people (some forums and tumblr’s own eilamona have attempted surveys though these would be biased by tumblr’s distribution not being RL’s and the usual trappings of self-reporting)
Also, with the Big 5 having 2x2x2x2x2 = 32 categories and thus few people in every category, you would need huge sample sizes and methodical proceeding to get significant correlations. “The most” could mean anything from one percent point more than the others or “over half”; a simple tally is no statement about distribution, and even a strong distribution spike is not equivalency.
See, for example, how ISTJs correlate with enneagram. There is actually a clear distinct tedency with 90% of ISTJs being one of 3 types, but each of those (1, 6 and 5) accounts for roughly a third of those 90% so it would be idiotic to say that say, being a 6 means you must be ISTJ. What about non 6 ISTJs? What about 6s who are ISFJ?
So even if most RULAIs are INFPs, all that tells you is that tells you is that if you’re both, you’re in the majority. But to tell the probability that a RULAI is INFP or a given INFP is RULAI, you would need to know either how many of all total RULAIs are INFPs, or how many INFPs are not RULAIs.
I’m pretty sure I met some INFPs who were distinctly “E” (mostly 4w3s and/or soc-blinds) or “C” (chiefly 9w1s) for example, though I’d be surprised to find one who claims to be SCxxN.
It’s called “Bayes’s theorem” and one of the many examples why the world would be much better if basic logic and probability theory were taught in schools.
What more, much of what is out there on the correlating of mbti and big 5 is people trying to find some sort of equivalency between the systems, often based on a very dichotomous (and therefore, shallow) understanding of mbti that disregards the differences between them as independent metrics. See also “16 personaliies.org” and their attempt to add the neurotism metric (-A/T) which really just mucked up their test.
Often this is supposed top validate mbti by tying it to the much renowned and supposedly so stable big 5 system - but big 5′s supposed stability and consistency comes from being a much simpler, shallower system: It really is just a ranking of specific traits or the lack thereof on a dichotomous scale. You either are orderly and reliable (”conscientious”) or you aren’t. You can get assigned a percentage to represent stronger or weaker tendencies.
Big 5 asks you “are you X?” You tell it “yes/no/maybe” and then it gives you a profile saying you are indeeed “Yes/no/maybe” on the X scale, and that for each trait. That can be useful for some applications, like correlating those traits with lifestyle choices or opinions or screening people for very demanding jobs, but it is virtually useless for the purposes most typology is used for - such as self-development or communication.
It ranks you on a scale, but it does not really tell you anything you didn’t know before. It simply discribes, but doesn’t postulate any internal logic or structure - It doesn’t have explanatory or predictive power. It doesn’t elucidate your inner workings, does not tell you how to get along better with a given type. It simply measures wether you are good at five things (socializing, keeping calm, being organized, making others like you, keeping an open mind) or not. There’s no advantage to being “Egocentric”, “Unstructured” or “Non-Curious.”
Big 5 measures 5 independent metrics and the combination thereof, so “RULEI” (RUxEI supposedly most common for INTP) is would not be that different from RULAI, after all that’s 4 or 5 matching! The difference is simply that the person goes a little further in not needlessly pissing people off, especially if the preference toward “A” is only weak one.
Meanwhile, consider INFJ vs INFP. One letter apart. Sure there are many similarities but also many fundamental differences because it’s not just one letter: It means your valued functions are completely opposite. They will share traits common to all introverts, feelers and intuitives, but differ completely where functon-specific communication and reasoning differences are concerned.
You could label yourself as “INFx” because you’re unsure about your actual type but you can’t actually be “in-between” because unlike Big 5, MBTI is not a combination of 5 scales, but a discreet classificator.
The MBTI and all tests based on it as well as sister/branch theories like socionics are built upon the idea of the Jungian Functions, diffent distinct types of reasoning and information processing that CG Jung believed to have identified in the human mind. The system comes with the base axiom that you can have one of 8 dominant functions, and that’s it, and you’ve got to at least humor that idea for a while to assin yourself a MBTI type, and each function comes with a set of both likely (present often) and fixed (present always) traits that will be shared between the great majority of that functions. - which is what gives mbti more predictive and explanatory power.
Someone being “Unstructured” just tells you they’re not a great organizer; Someone being a Perceiver implies a great deal about their way of thinking and decision making, be it neutral good or bad, and if you knew if they’re SP or NP you could infer even more, not always hard predictions but certainly probalities.
Just from the definitations that both the 5 traits and the functions have by definition it figures that some combinations are more frquent than others (for the same reason that, say, an ISFJ core 8 sounds pretty unlikely) but that does not a hard equivalency make, especially since big 5 allows for twice as many possibilities.
The idea that you can just convert mbti letters to Big 5 letters as if the letters were all there were is fallacious.
Indeed
Some things do correlations:
R/S with I/E for obvious reasons/ pretty much by design. Intro vs extroversion is one of the most obvious differences in human personalities and hence where any metric to sort those would start.
But this is where it stops/ where things get weird or interesting depending on your PoV.
L/C shows a very weak correlation but is almost evenly split among T/F.
A/E shows some correlaton of A with F and E with T correlating with the stereotype of how Feelers are “generally nicer” but it’s not a hard
The oddest result is that intuitives are almost always Inquisitive but Sensors can be both and are evenly split overall with individual types having their own preferences. This isn’t just split among Si/Se lines as some stereotypes might suggest, ESTPs for example are very commonly Non-curious, but again, not always.
These traits also veer into what we might call morals so they would pose. If people were predisposed toward their morals and could not be convinced, if the were “hardwired” so to speak the whole idea of morality would be pointless, for with what authority would you “blame” someone for being close minded or a jerkif they’re just following their programing?, but it is equally pointless morality as a blackbox even though we are comming closer and closer to understanding the brain.
There’s also this tendency of treating anything we can detect as “organic” and everything we cannot as “mental”, a Soul Of The Gaps if you will (analoous to God Of The Gaps) but we know all mental processes are in the brain somehow, (because it can be destroyed by specific brain injuries, for example) so would explaining it all mean putting it all outside a person’s responsibility?
Hidden in there is the false assumpton that the biologically explicable is “permanent” and thats true of some parts but the strenght of nerve connections can be as temporary as the state of a computer.
Adding the problem that people do no sufficiently differentiate between facts and their interpretation. A fact is what is real regardless of what we think about it or wether we even know it. An interpretation is what a human think is ~means~ which matters only to humans.
Fact: The earth goes around the sun
Interpretation A: See humans? you are not special.
Interpretation B: See humans’ You’re not that bad. We get to participate in the “Dance of the stars”
(AThe latter was actually written by a humanist writer of Kopernikus’ own time. if the earth goes round the sun, it is not “down” (where hell is) or “up” (where god is) as many geocentric worldviews implied. “Up or down” becomes utterly meaningless with heliocentrism. )
Fact: The brains of Liberals and Conservatives show differences in scans
Interpretation A: The people are Conservatives or Liberals because of inborn characteristics
From this you could then derive corollary a) All politics is meaningless bullshit if we do not really “chose” it or c) Some politics is wrong, so some people (the ones you agree with) are better than others
Interpretation B: Peoples show differences because they are conservatives or liberals - the brain regions is how their opinion is “stored” and the media bubbles “train” them for characteristic reactions
Interpretation C: Some people are more suceptible to certan kinds of propaganda, we [correct opinion] must phrase our message so it reaches those who are easily misled so they don’t end up voting againt their interest. [Your opinion] is, after all, the best for everyone.
Of course interpretations can become invalid if they don’t account for additional facts. If they scanned children and they had those characteristics before they even know what politics is, B goes out the window - Meanwhile if you scanned people before and after their opinions changed and the corresponing brain regions changed, too, B might increase in likelihood
Another complicated factor is that people are more likely to see something as a neutral/preferential rather than a moral issue if they think it’s inborn.
A common anti-homophobia argument is “But it’s inborn!” which is used because it seems to convince a lot of people even though it has nothing to do with homosexual acts themselves. If we could all choose wether to screw men, women, enbies or no one at all, wouldn’t it still not be anyone else’s business if it harms no one?
by contrast, Once upon a time “orderliness/discipline” was regarded as a moral thing, hence the very word “concientiousness” but now we don’t as much and there are cultural differences (some midwestern americans see foul language as a “moral failing” (”Good christians don’t swear”) rather than simply inappropiate or rude. )
Plenty to discuss here.
But basically, Big 5 and mbti are not equivalent and work by different principles indeed attempts to treat mbti like big 5 have probably resulted in a lot of the less reliable tests out there.
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i NEED to know what john said about alex at the award ceremony?
I wrote the majority of this while on a conference call this morning, so I apologize for how clunky it is, but… shrug emoji.
(A…coda? A something to this.)
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“And now,” Dean Adams says, “to present the award for Distinguished Graduate Scholar in Parapsychology, Dr. George Washington.”
John is pleased to note that Washington gets significantly more applause than Adams did when he took the stage. By the sour look on Adams’ face as he steps back and takes his seat again, it didn’t go unnoticed by him, either. Herc and a few other students whistle shrilly, and eventually Washington motions for the applause to die down. He puts on his reading glasses and clears his throat.
“Good evening,” he says, and one of the harried looking students volunteering for the event runs forward and nudges the mic closer to his mouth. “Tonight, I have the honor of presenting the award for the Parapsychology Department’s Distinguished Graduate Scholar to Alexander Hamilton.” John can’t stop himself from a spontaneous cheer, but he’s gratified that he’s not the only one doing the cheering. Lafayette and Herc and a handful of other parapsych people he knows are equally enthusiastic. Or, at least, they’re enthusiastic, period. John doesn’t think any of them could match his pride right now. “Mr. Hamilton is a first year student in our program, but in ten months, he’s shown remarkable potential. He came to us after graduating summa cum laude from Columbia University in only two years. In his first month at Morristown, he took the Investigative Parapsychologist Exam and received a perfect score, something that fewer than one quarter of one percent of students achieve. After two terms with us, he has a perfect GPA, and right this moment he’s revising a paper for the Atlantic Parapsychology Journal.
“But Distinguished Scholar is about more than academics. Mr. Hamilton is an exemplary student in all the ways that count as well. He’s worked these past two semesters as a Teaching Assistant, a Graduate Assistant, and a tutor. He’s volunteered to act as a Research Assistant for the summer, all in addition to doing parapsychology field work both academically and as a certified Investigative Parapsychologist. He handles all of those responsibilities with care and aplomb, and is a great asset to our lab. He’s always willing to take on extra work. One of the first into the lab every day and always one of the last to leave, his creative and global thinking has propelled everyone he works with to success. He never settles for anything but the best–constantly interrogating his results and consulting with research until he’s sure of his findings. He stands by his work with confidence, but isn’t afraid to adjust in light of new information. Most of all, despite his own meteoric rise to the top of his department, he’s kept a level head and remains a team player. He’s quick to consult with his labmates on their areas of expertise and recognizes the value of team work. He’s bonded closely with those in the lab–” And, yep, he definitely spares half a glance to John, who shrinks down in his chair and blushes. “–and looks at every success as a success for the whole group.”
Embarrassment aside, John can’t help the way his heart swells with pride, tight and warm in his chest. He’s a little misty-eyed, which is stupid, but he’s so fucking proud of Alexander. He knows he has very little to do with Alex’s success, but he’s still proud to know him, proud to watch him come into his own. He may have spent the last seven or so years being an anonymous researcher on the internet, but here in the lab he really shines. It’s beautiful to watch, and John loves him so fucking much he can’t put it into words.
“Accepting the award on Mr. Hamilton’s behalf is John Laurens.”
Except, he kind of has to.
There’s some polite applause as John gets to his feet and absently buttons his blazer, the etiquette drilled into him still after all his years of school uniforms and charity galas. He climbs the stairs to the stage quickly and shakes Adams’ hand, accepting the certificate and then shakes Washington’s and takes the plaque.
“Don’t let this go to his head,” Washington murmurs, so low only John can hear it, and he struggles not to laugh as he moves to stand in front of the podium, pulling the mic down so he can speak into it.
“Thank you, Dean Adams, Dr. Washington, and the rest of the department faculty,” he says. “As Dr. Washington implied, Alexander is at home tonight so he can submit a paper to one of the oldest and most distinguished parapsychology journals in the country, and if you see him at any point this week, he’ll be sure to use both of those adjectives when he describes it to you.” He pauses for the chuckle from the audience and keeps his pleased mask in place to hide his nerves. He doesn’t flinch at speaking in front of people normally, but speaking about an academic subject is far, far different than speaking about his boyfriend, no matter how brief the statement. He has to swallow against a lump in his throat. He didn’t prepare any notes–he didn’t think he’d have to. He figured he’d come up, thank everyone on Alex’s behalf, maybe say a few things about how hard he works. He didn’t factor in this head-to-toe swell of emotion overtaking him. God, he’s going to completely embarrass himself.
But he’ll embarrass himself more if he just stands here and stares blankly out into the audience, so he takes a deep breath and charges forward.
“Anyway,” he says, and once the first word is out, the rest start to come more easily. “I’ll keep this quick since I’m not Alexander and if he’s not going to be here, I should spare you the speech he wrote to fill every second of the five minutes he was allotted to speak.” Another small laugh from the audience, but John presses forward. He’s afraid if he stops again, he’ll say something unforgivably maudlin or emotional when he starts back up. “Everything Dr. Washington said about Alex is true–he’s the most brilliant person I’ve ever met. He’s driven and dedicated not just to his own success, but to the success of this field as a whole. Trust me when I tell you that he’s very honored to receive this recognition. I’m really just…incredibly proud to know him and so, so grateful to have him in my life. And honestly I’m, like…delighted to see the school confirming what we all already know: that he’s a star and we’re lucky to have him. I’m lucky to have him.” Down in the audience he sees Laf mime gagging and Herc snicker from behind the phone he’s been using to film the whole thing. “Thanks again to the faculty and the administration, and congratulations to the other honorees.”
He steps away from the microphone as the applause starts again, and Washington puts a hand on his shoulder and they stroll off the stage together. Once they’re in the wings and Adams is announcing the next honoree, Washington sighs and shakes his head.
“Couldn’t pull him away from that article?” he says.
“Believe me, I used every tool in my considerable arsenal to drag him here,” John says.
“I don’t doubt it,” Washington says. “Regardless, there are about four awards left. Afterwards, you and Gilbert and Mulligan should come back to the lab and we’ll toast to him.”
John looks down at the plaque in his hands. The Faculty of the Morristown University of New Jersey’s Parapsychology Department formally recognizes Alexander Hamilton as the 2014-2015 Distinguished Graduate Scholar. The first of what John is positive will be many accolades and recognitions.
“No thanks,” he says, looking back up at Washington. His heart is doing the same thing as before, swelling and warming him and nearly breaking his chest open with pride. “I think I’m just gonna go home.”
“I had a feeling you might say that,” Washington says. “Tell him we’re all very proud of him.”
“I will,” John promises, and slips back down into the auditorium, grinning like a fool all the way to his seat.
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How to make hard conversations easy
Somebody is screaming in your face at the top of their lungs. Or ranting angrily and you can't get a word in edgewise. Or possibly they're sobbing so hard you can barely understand what they're saying.
We have actually all existed. These situations do not occur a lot (thank god) but all of us feel powerless when they do. And because they're unusual we do not ever appear to get much better at handling them.
Issue is, these moments are frequently crucial since they're typically with individuals we care about.
What's the very best way to handle these difficult conversations? What works?
I called someone who understands: Dr. Albert J. Bernstein. He's a clinical psychologist with over 40 years of experience and the author of a number of excellent books on handling individuals problems:
Here's what you'll discover in this post:
The magic phrase that gets people to stop screaming.
How to stop making the most common mistake in these sort of discussions.
How to switch individuals from being psychological to being reasonable.
The mindset that makes dealing with hysterical people simple.
And a lot more.
Okay, time to wage war with the crazy. Here we go ...
1) Initially, You Need To Keep Calm
You already have a single person overreacting. The worst thing would be to have 2people overreacting.If you Hulk Out, it's little bit more than a yelling match and nothing gets achieved.
Al calls the emotional side of our mind the "dinosaur brain." It's millions of years old and just comprehends "fight" or "escape."
If you stay calm, you can help someone leave its grip. If you fall victim to it too, it results in what he likes to call the "Godzilla meets Rodan" impact: lots of shouting, structures get knocked down however nothing constructive gets accomplished. Here's Al:
... the fundamental concept is that in many circumstances, you're reacting with instincts configured into your dinosaur brain, instead of believing through a scenario. If you're in your dinosaur brain, you're going to play out a 6 million-year-old program, and nothing great is going to take place. Because case, the dinosaur brain of the other individual is going to comprehend that they are being assaulted, and then you're responding with battling back or escaping, and either one is going to escalate the scenario into what I like to call the "Godzilla fulfills Rodan" result. There's a great deal of shrieking and shouting, and structures drop, however not much is achieved.
What to do here? Screen your stimulation levels and do your best to stay calm. He stated the exact same feature of handling tension that Harvard scientist Shawn Achor did: see issues as difficulties rather of crises.
(To find out how Samurai and Navy SEALs keep one's cool in tight spots, click here.)Okay, you're cool as Fonzie. They're still acting insane. What's the very best technique here? 2) Deal with Them Like A Child No, I don't imply be condescending. you would not attempt to rationalize with a shouting child. And you wouldn't snap with them for screaming. You 'd just dismiss the hysterics and handle the underlying problem.
Adults aren't any different. (Yes, this is both really insightful and extremely dismaying. Invite to Earth.)
Trying to realistically describe why shouting isn't assisting doesn't work with three-year-olds and it won't deal with grown-ups either. Overlook the drama.
If you're a parent, you understand precisely what I'm speaking about. Shift into dealing-with-your-kidmode and watch magic take place. Al actually states "If you feel like a preschool instructor, you're probably doing it right." Here's Al:
Individuals say to me all the time, "You suggest I have to deal with a grown-up like a three-year-old?" I say, "Yes, definitely." If you're a parent, what do you finish with a tantrum? You disregard it, or at least you try to overlook it. But with an adult you attempt and talk them out of it, and it never works.
(To discover the 10 guidelines to communicating better, click here. )You're calm and you're not letting them get to you since you see them like a big kid. However how do you stop the screaming
, sobbing or yelling? Anything that slows the situation down benefits you.
Among Al's very first jobs was dealing with strongly psychotic individuals in an institution. He rapidly realized that slow means calm and calm means thinking vs responding.
(What's intriguing is my good friend Chris, who was the Lead International Hostage Arbitrator for the FBI, frequently suggests the very same thing: slow the conversation down. )How do you get someone to stop screaming? Your natural reaction is actually the worst thing to do. Saying, "Stop yelling"will be viewed as informing them what
to do. Nobody likes to be informed what to do, particularly mad individuals. Instead, Al says try a variation of:"Please speak more gradually. I
'd like to help."Why does this work? It breaks the pattern in their head. They're expecting you to resist them but you're not. You're asking to clarify. You're interested. This makes them shift more out of "dinosaur brain" and into thinking. Which's good.
(And have you ever attempted yelling gradually? Great luck with that.)
The exact same principle works on the phone too: you wish to snap them out of that pattern without being seen as resisting. Al calls it the "uh-huh guideline."
When they pause to take a breath on the phone, do not say anything. After adequate silence, they'll most likely respond with, "Are you there?"
That speedbump pulls them out of the upset momentum for a 2nd and makes them think virtually. Here's Al:
When someone is speaking to you on the phone and they stop to take a breath, your natural reaction is to say, "uh-huh." It's kind of a universal thing. We do not realize that we're doing it. But if you go 3 breaths without saying "uh-huh", the other individual will stop and state, "Are you there?" We attempted that many times, and it was simply remarkable how well it worked. What I have actually simply given you there is a method to interrupt somebody who's chewing out you on the phone without saying a word. Simply do not say "uh-huh."
(For pointers from an FBI behavioral expert on how to make individuals like you, click here.)They're not screaming anymore. But that doesn't mean they're not upset and it does not indicate you're making any real development. What turns raving insane individuals into logical grownups you can talk with?
4) Ask "What Would You Like Me To Do?"
Slowing it down is great. Therefore is seeing them as a child. What's the next huge method? You need to get them believing.
Anything that moves them from mentally reacting to consciously thinking is great. Here's Al:
When people are upset at you or attacking you, it's really simple to eliminate back or flee, but what you really require to do is something that engages their brain.
And that isn't too hard, actually. Ask them, "What would you like me to do?"
They require to create a response. That makes them believe-- even for a 2nd-- and you're on your method to turning the Hulk back into Bruce Banner. Here's Al:
Once you get the person to stop screaming, you say, "What would you like me to do?" The person has to stop and think at that point. What you desire is to move an upset circumstance toward the possibility of negotiating. You can do that by merely asking, "What would you like me to do?" It moves them from their dinosaur brain to their cortex, and after that working out is possible.
(For more on dealing with illogical, upset or just plain crazy people, click here.)You're calm. They're not shouting and they're starting to think rather of just acting like a psychological grenade. How do you keep things moving in the ideal instructions?
5) Do Not Make Statements. Ask Concerns.
Another substantial, big mistake we all make: we describe. Don't explain.Why?
The other individual will analyze it as a veiled type of resisting. You understand why? Due to the fact that it is a veiled type of fighting back.
It's the respectful method of stating, "Here's why I'm ideal and you're incorrect." And everybody sees it for what it is. Cut it out. Here's Al:
Describing is often a disguised type of combating back. Many descriptions will be heard as, "See here, if you actually comprehend the scenario, you will see that I am ideal and you are wrong." That is an attack, and it's also among the methods we attain supremacy over other individuals. We act as if we just discuss our position actually plainly, then the other person will comprehend and concur with us. I've never ever actually seen that work.
What do you do? Ask questions. Here's Al:
One of the main guidelines that I state to people is if you want to get along with people, ask don't tell.
He also suggests another technique that comes directly out of the captive negotiator playbook: Active Listening. Here's Al: What I normally make with individuals is show back the feeling that they're feeling. If they're saying something like, "I'm Jesus Christ, and they're attempting to crucify me," rather of saying, "No, you're not Jesus Christ," you say, "That must be pretty frightening." They'll say, "Yeah!" The act of listening is reflecting back the individual's emotional state, not necessarily the content of what they're stating.
(For more on how hostage mediators utilize active listening and how you can improve at it, click here.)They're calm now. So how do you make sure you don't blow it and end up back where you
were? 6 )Start Sentences With "I 'd Like ..." Not "You Are ... "
Now that they're being rational, the last thing you desire to do is state anything that sounds like an accusation. And they're going to be additional conscious this because they just boiled down from feeling assaulted.
In his excellent book Dinosaur Brains, Al states: Any sentence that starts with "you are" and does not end with" terrific "will be experienced as name-calling.
What you're doing now is basically working out so start your sentences with "I 'd like ..." Simply keep away from the word "you" as much as possible. (Relationship professional Dr. John Gottman suggests the exact same thing when romantic couples argue.)
(For more on settlement from FBI captive mediators, click here.) You're practically out of the woods. There's one last thing individuals often do that screws up everything and puts them back at square one ... 7) Let Them Have The Last Word
Requiring to have the last word is like stopping at mile 26 of the marathon. You've done everything right up until now. Do not let your ego screw up whatever at the last minute.
Just like explaining is in fact an effort at supremacy, so is needing to have latest thing. You're shifting your objective from "relaxing this situation" to "showing them who is right." Here's Al:
The last word is generally an effort to be right. You can reverse any favorable thing you have actually done by stating one word that sends them back into attack mode.
Don't take the bait. Let them have latest thing. Let them feel "ideal" if it lets you accomplish your real goal.
(For more on how to win every argument, click here.) This is a fantastic system for handling challenging conversations. Let's round it up and get Al's thoughts on the single most important thing to do when having any kind of discussion with individuals.
Sum up
Here are Al's suggestions for turning tough conversations into easy ones:
Treat 'em like a kid. You can't talk them out of emotional outbursts and snapping over it does absolutely nothing great.
Say "Please speak more gradually. I 'd like to assist."Slow it down. Do not come off like you're resisting.
Ask "What would you like me to do?"You got ta make'em start believing in order turn off the rage device.
Don't make declarations. Ask questions.Discussing is veiled supremacy. Questions get them believing.
Start sentences with "I 'd like ..." not "You are ..."If you begin with "I" it's difficult to be seen as attacking.
Let them have the last word.Do not let your ego blow it at the last minute.
So what does Al state is the single essential thing to do when dealing with people?
When they speak, ask yourself why they're stating what they're saying. Think of what's going on in their head, not yours. This leads away from evaluating and towards understanding and empathy.
Here's Al:
If you want to get along well with individuals and comprehend what's going on in circumstances, whenever somebody states something to you, ask yourself, "Why is he saying this to me? What's happening with him?" That is a doorway to understanding, an entrance to getting what you desire, and likewise a doorway to empathy. Rather than evaluating the person, try and understand them.
Leave "Godzilla Meets Rodan" for the motion pictures. Our lives require more compassion and less of anything that levels Tokyo.
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THE WORD TO LOSE TIME AND PAINTERS
Every programmer must have seen code that some clever person has made marginally shorter by using dubious programming tricks. If you want to make. But these schemes never worked for long. As far as I can tell they're mostly random. Hapless implies passivity. Sometimes I can't think of an answer, especially when the idea is a made-up one. Business still reflects an older model, exemplified by the French word for working: travailler. If i is the average outcome of the whole program. Suppose further that he's going to cost $60k a year in salary and overhead is 1. That sounds right, but is good quality eavesdropping so important that it would basically be Cambridge with good weather, it turns out, is not very good. Indirectly, but they are. These conventions weren't designed to drag out the funding process, but that's why they're allowed to persist.
There could be a good marketing decision, even if it is a bad design decision. Life in Berkeley is very civilized. So maybe it has simply replaced the component of social class that consisted of being au fait. I do it on that computer. For some kinds of work, all you need is a department with the right colleagues in it. How much does it matter what message a city sends without living there. It turned out it was way, way uptown: an hour uptown by air. The lowest form of these is to disagree with, you may not have explored. It seemed just amazing, as if there were a little man in your head.
But I wouldn't bet on it. That's what all publishing used to be safe, using the Internet. I think, are the three big lessons open source and blogging show us things don't have to grow up in a great city? This isn't the recipe for success in writing or painting, for example. One of the things startups do right without realizing it. There's no need to keep doing this. In art, mediums like embroidery and mosaic work well if you know beforehand what you want to know the answer.
Metrics Small in what sense though? Chesterfield described dirt as matter out of place. This is often combined with DH2 statements, as in: I can't believe the author dismisses intelligent design in such a cavalier fashion. One of the things startups do right without realizing it. Instead of matching beige cubicles they have an assortment of furniture they bought used. Some people would make good founders, and others wouldn't. The lowest form of disagreement, and probably also the most common because it is the same they face in operating systems: they can't pay people enough to build something better than a group of inspired hackers will build for free. Only those that are centers for some type of ambition. Paris is the only city I've lived in where people genuinely cared about art. The quotation you point out as mistaken need not be the actual statement of the author's main point seems to be at the very heart of hacking. There's an A List of people who should know better.
You have to find a smoking gun, a passage in whatever you disagree with that you feel is mistaken, and then explain why it's mistaken. Refutation. Then the startup and the lead would cooperate to find the city where you feel at home to know what sort of ambition, but they are. Chesterfield described dirt as matter out of place. Investors will probably find they do better when deprived of this crutch anyway. 1%-4. So by caring more about money and less about power than Silicon Valley, New York, Cambridge, and Silicon Valley because I've lived for several years in each of them. For example, if a senator wrote an article saying senators' salaries should be increased, one could respond: Of course he would say that. An ever larger percentage of office workers sit in front of that computer for hours at a time.
The most powerful form of disagreement, we give critical readers a pin for popping such balloons. And if it didn't, it's not surprising if amateurs can do better. What it means is torture. Just ask any teenager. Are there languages that force you to write code that's short in elements at the expense of overall readability? Till then the best I'd managed was to get the most done? Om Malik is the most common.
Reminder: What I'm looking for are programs that are very dense according to the metric of elements sketched above, not merely programs that are very dense according to the metric of elements sketched above, not merely programs that are very dense according to the metric of elements sketched above, not merely programs that are short because delimiters can be omitted and everything has a one-character name. A DH6 response could still be a bad thing for New York. I'll take Cambridge conversations over New York or Silicon Valley ones. For some kinds of work, all you need is a handful of talented colleagues. And middle ones of your career. Where is the man bites dog in that? There are only a handful of commonly used ones: TCP/IP the Internet, gradually became more and more dangerous. This tradeoff predates programming languages. I think it's the same feeling you get when the street you want to hire an additional hacker who's so good you feel he'll increase the average outcome of the whole company was before. Most people find it uncomfortable just to sit and do nothing; you avoid work by doing something else.
A complex macro may have to save many times its own length to be justified. Indeed, the disagreement hierarchy may inspire him to try moving up to counterargument or refutation. But investing later should also mean they have fewer losers. The quotation you point out as mistaken need not be the actual statement of the author's main point. For example, I'd tell myself I was only going to use the Internet twice a day. What does it mean to disagree well? Once an essay has had a couple thousand page views I feel reasonably confident about it. And it's not just the way offices look that's bleak.
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Nokia 5310 XpressMusic (2020) Detailed Review
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You can
revert to the fundamentals, but nostalgia is costly.
One
of Nokia's methodologies for creating exposure is its line of rethought
exemplary models, which help us to remember the days when piece of candy
telephones came in all shapes and sizes, and you were the coolest of every one
of your companions if your telephone had Snake II. With many notable models in
its files, Nokia has settled on some intriguing options, beginning with
obviously the Nokia 3310 (2017) which was an overall sensation, and afterward
the Nokia 8110
4G and Nokia
2720 Flip which weren't exactly as energizing.
It's against that background that we presently have a totally
new form of the Nokia 5310 XpressMusic. This doesn't actually come into
view as one of the organization's adored models from once upon a time, however
its resurrected namesake may carry a grin to your face in the event that you
were in school or school in the late 2000s. Notwithstanding its later missteps,
Nokia was at any rate ready when telephones began dislodging MP3 players. The
XpressMusic run was intended to be youth-engaged, energetic, and financially
savvy, and for a period, it fulfilled its motivation.
Quick forward to 2020, and we see this extraordinary failure end treat
telephone that conveys forward a smidgen of the style of the first, yet fills a
totally different
need in this day and age. It's authoritatively evaluated
at Rs. 3,399 in India, directly in accordance with the Nokia 3310 (2017).
We've gone through more than about fourteen days with the Nokia 5310
XpressMusic (2020), so we can disclose to you exactly what this telephone is
prepared to do, and whether you ought to think about getting it.
Nokia 5310
XpressMusic (2020) plan, highlights and capacities
The
new Nokia 5310
XpressMusic is a genuine legacy, even by sweet treat highlight telephone norms.
Some of the time today the HMD Global, which manages the Nokia brand and
portfolio, has equipped this handset with two Mini-SIM slots, which still can
only be done by double SIMs. It's hard to believe, but it's true, not Nano-SIM
or the more seasoned Micro-SIM position, you need to go right back to Mini-SIMs
or discover connectors.
Another large system related admonition is that this telephone is 2G just, and
doesn't work with Wi-Fi. Whatever you do figure out how to do with it, you'll
be restricted to pre-2008-period portable Internet speeds. HMD Global
believes there's a lot of interest for 2G telephones in India, yet why cutoff
individuals' capacity to exploit 3G administration some place down the line?
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There's a 0.3 megapixel camera on the back (640x480 goal) with a glimmer, which
implies you do at any rate get a spotlight, one of the most refreshing
highlights of low-end telephones in India. You get a Micro-USB charging port
(which is fit for USB 1.1 speed for information moves – that is
1.5Mbps, contrasted with 480Mbps for USB 2.0) just as Bluetooth 3.0.
You get a decision of high contrast, the two of which have red side boards with
catches – volume on the left, music playback on the right – which is this
present telephone's principle association with its namesake. These are situated
easily yet are a piece too simple to even consider hitting unintentionally. The
telephone overeall feels plasticky and is unquestionably passage level;
significantly more like the current-day
Nokia 1xx arrangement than the first Nokia 5310.
So we can obviously observe that the Nokia 5310 XpressMusic (2020) falls route
beneath even the most fundamental guidelines we'd expect of a low-end telephone
today. That doesn't mean it's awful at what it's intended to do, however – it
simply isn't such a telephone you'd consider on the off chance that you need
any advanced usefulness.
Living with
the Nokia 5310 XpressMusic (2020)
To
the extent execution goes, the Nokia 5310 XpressMusic (2020) takes about one
moment to wake from reserve when you press any catch, however the UI is
generally responsive. There's no slack with fundamental work process
circumstances, for example, composing a message utilizing T9 prescient content.
With the Nokia 3310 (2017) and a few other component telephone models, HMD
Global used the equivalent high-end Mediatek MT6260A processor.
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There's just 8MB of RAM and 16MB of capacity (yes that is MB, not GB) in spite
of the fact that microSD support goes up to 32GB. You'll plainly need to
purchase a microSD card so as to store music on what is charged as a music
telephone.
You get a 2.4-inch 240x320-pixel screen which is incredibly essential. You can
see that photographs look smeared, with coarse angles where hues should mix
easily. Blacks are polished and seeing points are very poor. All things
considered, the goal isn't really awful and you can have at any rate 12 lines
of text which doesn't cause straightforward utilization to feel excessively
compelling. You can even play low-res 3GPP recordings, for what that is worth.
The Series 30+ programming is quite proficient and there are a couple of
insightful contacts. You can pick the menu matrix thickness or change to a
rundown see. There are helpful devices including a notes application, unit
converter, number cruncher, five cautions, stopwatch, and clock. The schedule
has just a month to month see, yet you can see the full network on screen. You
can switch the whole UI from English to one of nine Indian dialects.
There's
no cloud matching up or usefulness of any kind, so you'll need to deal with
reinforcements physically. You're constrained to 2000 contacts in addition to
your SIMs' memory. You can't adjust them yet you can import them in mass
utilizing Bluetooth. Photographs and recordings recorded with the telephone's
camera will be spared to a microSD card in the event that you have one
embedded, and this can't be changed (yet you wouldn't have any desire to at any
rate with just 16MB on the telephone).
Composing is a little troublesome gratitude to the portions of plastic utilized
in the structure of this telephone instead of individual catches. In any case,
we truly enjoyed having a strung message
see and in-line answer usefulness inside the Messages application. In the event
that you really utilize your telephone for the most part to make voice calls,
you'll locate the quality better than average, and the gadget agreeable to hold
for significant lots.
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Battery life is a splendid spot – the 1200mAh battery is appraised for 20.7
long periods of constant talktime and an amazing 22 days of backup time. As far
as we can tell we found that the battery simply would not like to bite the
dust, however obviously our use was fundamental and irregular since there
wasn't a lot to do on this telephone. We just figured out how to run the
battery down totally once through the span of about fourteen days. Charging
lamentably takes about five hours, on account of the diminutive 550mA charger
you get in the container.
At that point there's music. There are two highlights that legitimize the
XpressMusic tag on this current model's name: the sound system speakers, and
remote FM radio. The speakers are forward looking and uniformly adjusted, which
is entirely flawless for a low-end highlight telephone. Sound can get sufficiently
uproarious to top off a conventional estimated room, yet don't anticipate
incredible quality. Music sounded brutal and had practically no life, with bass
for the most part absent and amazingly sloppy subtleties. In the event that you
simply need to impact a few tunes, this telephone will do.
Remote
FM radio implies that you needn't bother with a wired headset going about as a
recieving wire, however a message on screen revealed to us that we may show
signs of improvement gathering with one connected. Indeed, even without a SD
card for MP3 documents, you'll have the option to have a fabulous time in a
hurry. Discussing headsets however, the one remembered for the case is likewise
very fundamental – it doesn't have a catch to control playback. Music sounded
genuinely dreadful when utilizing it, and we got a moment overhaul in sound
quality by changing to our own essential headphones.
On the off chance that you purchase this telephone due to sentimentality, the
Snake game will be a gigantic frustration. It's honestly horrendous and no fun
at all to play. A long way from being a selling point, it's in no way like the
firsts. Our unit additionally had a couple of different games – Asphalt 6,
Assasin's Creed Unity, and Doodle Jump all solid like significant titles
however these are enormously downsized renditions of the games you may be
anticipating. You can just dispatch them threefold before being approached to
pay for proceeded with get to, which isn't justified, despite any potential
benefits as we would see it.
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Web availability over 2G can be disappointing however it could likewise be a
lifeline for a huge number of individuals. You get the Opera Mini program,
which for reasons unknown chose to stack up the work area variants of numerous
locales that we attempted. It battles with present day sites and even
straightforward things like spring up advertisements. You need to move a cursor
around the screen utilizing the heading cushion. A few sites, for example,
YouTube, appeared as portable destinations. We had the option to peruse around
reasonably effectively yet recordings wouldn't play.
The
Facebook symbol in the menu appeared to be a reviving breath of innovation, yet
it just guides you to the portable site. You'll have the option to check
announcements, leave remarks, react to companion demands, and even read
articles that individuals have posted, however there's no Messenger or Facebook
Watch.
The
Mobile Store application offers extra games, some of which are free and others
which are demos. There are likewise tabs for Apps, Wallpapers, and Ringtones
that you can download (in the event that you have extra room), however these
didn't work for us by any stretch of the imagination.
That carries us to the camera, and indeed, you need to bring down your desires.
Photographs are caught at 640x480 and recordings at 320x240. There are a couple
of shading channels, a self clock, a blaze flip, a burst choice, and shockingly
even a night mode. Photographs and recordings are expectedly dreadful, with
sketchy hues, helpless introductions, and scarcely any detail outside the
primary center region. Around evening time, the camera is scarcely viable even
in sufficiently bright rooms. Night mode exchanges a ton of commotion for a
little detail. The blaze is shockingly incredible, however brutal.
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All things considered, in the event that you've never had a telephone with a
camera (or such a camera) previously, you'll in any event have the option to
catch your recollections and spare photographs of individuals' faces, which could
be worth very much. You can set a photograph as your backdrop, move various
documents immediately utilizing Bluetooth, and send MMS messages, which are
likewise significant capacities.
By and large, the Nokia 5310
XpressMusic (2020) doesn't verge on offering a cell phone understanding.
Applications can't run out of sight (in spite of the fact that music and the
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Why JavaScript is Eating HTML
Web development is always changing. One trend in particular has become very popular lately, and it fundamentally goes against the conventional wisdom about how a web page should be made. It is exciting for some but frustrating for others, and the reasons for both are difficult to explain.
A web page is traditionally made up of three separate parts with separate responsibilities: HTML code defines the structure and meaning of the content on a page, CSS code defines its appearance, and JavaScript code defines its behavior. On teams with dedicated designers, HTML/CSS developers and JavaScript developers, this separation of concerns aligns nicely with job roles: Designers determine the visuals and user interactions on a page, HTML and CSS developers reproduce those visuals in a web browser, and JavaScript developers add the user interaction to tie it all together and “make it work.” People can work on one piece without getting involved with all three.
In recent years, JavaScript developers have realized that by defining a page’s structure in JavaScript instead of in HTML (using frameworks such as React), they can simplify the development and maintenance of user interaction code that is otherwise much more complex to build. Of course, when you tell someone that the HTML they wrote needs to be chopped up and mixed in with JavaScript they don’t know anything about, they can (understandably) become frustrated and start asking what the heck we’re getting out of this.
As a JavaScript developer on a cross-functional team, I get this question occasionally and I often have trouble answering it. All of the materials I’ve found on this topic are written for an audience that is already familiar with JavaScript — which is not terribly useful to those who focus on HTML and CSS. But this HTML-in-JS pattern (or something else that provides the same benefits) will likely be around for a while, so I think it’s an important thing that everyone involved in web development should understand.
This article will include code examples for those interested, but my goal is to explain this concept in a way that can be understood without them.
Background: HTML, CSS, and JavaScript
To broaden the audience of this article as much as possible, I want to give a quick background on the types of code involved in creating a web page and their traditional roles. If you have experience with these, you can skip ahead.
HTML is for structure and semantic meaning
HTML (HyperText Markup Language) code defines the structure and meaning of the content on a page. For example, this article's HTML contains the text you're reading right now, the fact that it is in a paragraph, and the fact that it comes after a heading and before a CodePen.
Let’s say we want to build a simple shopping list app. We might start with some HTML like this:
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We can save this code in a file, open it in a web browser, and the browser will display the rendered result. As you can see, the HTML code in this example represents a section of a page that contains a heading reading “Shopping List (2 items),” a text input box, a button reading “Add Item,” and a list with two items reading “Eggs” and “Butter.” In a traditional website, a user would navigate to an address in their web browser, then the browser would request this HTML from a server, load it and display it. If there are already items in the list, the server could deliver HTML with the items already in place, like they are in this example.
Try to type something in the input box and click the “Add Item” button. You’ll notice nothing happens. The button isn’t connected to any code that can change the HTML, and the HTML can’t change itself. We’ll get to that in a moment.
CSS is for appearance
CSS (Cascading Style Sheets) code defines the appearance of a page. For example, this article's CSS contains the font, spacing, and color of the text you're reading.
You may have noticed that our shopping list example looks very plain. There is no way for HTML to specify things like spacing, font sizes, and colors. This is where CSS (Cascading Style Sheets) comes in. On the same page as the HTML above, we could add CSS code to style things up a bit:
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As you can see, this CSS changed the font sizes and weights and gave the section a nice background color (designers, please don’t @ me; I know this is still ugly). A developer can write style rules like these and they will be applied consistently to any HTML structure: if we add more <section>, <button> or <ul> elements to this page, they will have the same font changes applied.
The button still doesn’t do anything, though: that’s where JavaScript comes in.
JavaScript is for behavior
JavaScript code defines the behavior of interactive or dynamic elements on a page. For example, the embedded CodePen examples in this article are powered by JavaScript.
Without JavaScript, to make the Add Item button in our example work would require us to use special HTML to make it submit data back to the server (<form action="...">, if you’re curious). Then the browser would discard the entire page and reload an updated version of the entire HTML file. If this shopping list was part of a larger page, anything else the user was doing would be lost. Scrolled down? You’re back at the top. Watching a video? It starts over. This is how all web applications worked for a long time: any time a user interacted with a webpage, it was as if they closed their web browser and opened it again. That’s not a big deal for this simple example, but for a large complex page which could take a while to load, it’s not efficient for either the browser or the server.
If we want anything to change on a webpage without reloading the entire page, we need JavaScript (not to be confused with Java, which is an entirely different language… don’t get me started). Let’s try adding some:
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Now when we type some text in the box and click the “Add Item” button, our new item is added to the list and the item count at the top is updated! In a real app, we would also add some code to send the new item to the server in the background so that it will still show up the next time we load the page.
Separating JavaScript from the HTML and CSS makes sense in this simple example. Traditionally, even more complicated interactions would be added this way: HTML is loaded and displayed, and JavaScript runs afterwards to add things to it and change it. As things get more complex, however, we start needing to keep better track of things in our JavaScript.
If we were to keep building this shopping list app, next we’d probably add buttons for editing or removing items from the list. Let’s say we write the JavaScript for a button that removes an item, but we forget to add the code that updates the item total at the top of the page. Suddenly we have a bug: after a user removes an item, the total on the page won’t match the list! Once we notice the bug, we fix it by adding that same totalText.innerHTML line from our “Add Item” code to the “Remove Item” code. Now we have the same code duplicated in more than one place. Later on, let’s say we want to change that code so that instead of “(2 items)” at the top of the page it reads “Items: 2.” We’ll have to make sure we update it in all three places: in the HTML, in the JavaScript for the “Add Item” button, and in the JavaScript for the “Remove Item” button. If we don’t, we’ll have another bug where that text abruptly changes after a user interaction.
In this simple example, we can already see how quickly these things can get messy. There are ways to organize our JavaScript to make this kind of problem easier to deal with, but as things continue to get more complex, we’ll need to keep restructuring and rewriting things to keep up. As long as HTML and JavaScript are kept separate, a lot of effort can be required to make sure everything is kept in sync between them. That’s one of the reasons why new JavaScript frameworks, like React, have gained traction: they are designed to show the relationships between things like HTML and JavaScript. To understand how that works, we first need to understand just a teeny bit of computer science.
Two kinds of programming
The key concept to understand here involves the distinction between two common programming styles. (There are other programming styles, of course, but we’re only dealing with two of them here.) Most programming languages lend themselves to one or the other of these, and some can be used in both ways. It's important to grasp both in order to understand the main benefit of HTML-in-JS from a JavaScript developer's perspective.
Imperative programming: The word "imperative" here implies commanding a computer to do something. A line of imperative code is a lot like an imperative sentence in English: it gives the computer a specific instruction to follow. In imperative programming, we must tell the computer exactly how to do every little thing we need it to do. In web development, this is starting to be considered "the old way" of doing things and it's what you do with vanilla JavaScript, or libraries like jQuery. The JavaScript in my shopping list example above is imperative code.
Imperative: “Do X, then do Y, then do Z”.
Example: When the user selects this element, add the .selected class to it; and when the user de-selects it, remove the .selected class from it.
Declarative programming: This is a more abstract layer above imperative programming. Instead of giving the computer instructions, we instead "declare" what we want the results to be after the computer does something. Our tools (e.g. React) figure out the how for us automatically. These tools are built with imperative code on the inside that we don't have to pay attention to from the outside.
Declarative: “The result should be XYZ. Do whatever you need to do to make that happen.”
Example: This element has the .selected class if the user has selected it.
HTML is a declarative language
Forget about JavaScript for a moment. Here's an important fact: HTML on its own is a declarative language. In an HTML file, you can declare something like:
<section> <h1>Hello</h1> <p>My name is Mike.</p> </section>
When a web browser reads this HTML, it will figure out these imperative steps for you and execute them:
Create a section element
Create a heading element of level 1
Set the inner text of the heading element to “Hello”
Place the heading element into the section element
Create a paragraph element
Set the inner text of the paragraph element to “My name is Mike”
Place the paragraph element into the section element
Place the section element into the document
Display the document on the screen
As a web developer, the details of how a browser does these things is irrelevant; all that matters is that it does them. This is a perfect example of the difference between these two kinds of programming. In short, HTML is a declarative abstraction wrapped around a web browser's imperative display engine. It takes care of the "how" so you only have to worry about the "what." You can enjoy life writing declarative HTML because the fine people at Mozilla or Google or Apple wrote the imperative code for you when they built your web browser.
JavaScript is an imperative language
We’ve already looked at a simple example of imperative JavaScript in the shopping list example above, and I mentioned how the complexity of an app’s features has ripple effects on the effort required to implement them and the potential for bugs in that implementation. Now let’s look at a slightly more complex feature and see how it can be simplified by using a declarative approach.
Imagine a webpage that contains the following:
A list of labelled checkboxes, each row of which changes to a different color when it is selected
Text at the bottom like "1 of 4 selected" that should update when the checkboxes change
A "Select All" button which should be disabled if all checkboxes are already selected
A "Select None" button which should be disabled if no checkboxes are selected
Here’s an implementation of this in plain HTML, CSS and imperative JavaScript:
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There isn’t much CSS code here because I’m using the wonderful PatternFly design system, which provides most of the CSS for my example. I imported their CSS file in the CodePen settings.
All the small things
In order to implement this feature with imperative JavaScript, we need to give the browser several granular instructions. This is the English-language equivalent to the code in my example above:
In our HTML, we declare the initial structure of the page:
There are four row elements, each containing a checkbox. The third box is checked.
There is some summary text which reads "1 of 4 selected."
There is a "Select All" button which is enabled.
There is a "Select None" button which is disabled.
In our JavaScript, we write instructions for what to change when each of these events occurs:
When a checkbox changes from unchecked to checked:
Find the row element containing the checkbox and add the .selected CSS class to it.
Find all the checkbox elements in the list and count how many are checked and how many are not checked.
Find the summary text element and update it with the checked number and the total number.
Find the "Select None" button element and enable it if it was disabled.
If all checkboxes are now checked, find the "Select All" button element and disable it.
When a checkbox changes from checked to unchecked:
Find the row element containing the checkbox and remove the .selected class from it.
Find all the checkbox elements in the list and count how many are checked and not checked.
Find the summary text element and update it with the checked number and the total number.
Find the "Select All" button element and enable it if it was disabled.
If all checkboxes are now unchecked, find the "Select None" button element and disable it.
When the "Select All" button is clicked:
Find all the checkbox elements in the list and check them all.
Find all the row elements in the list and add the .selected class to them.
Find the summary text element and update it.
Find the "Select All" button and disable it.
Find the "Select None" button and enable it.
When the "Select None" button is clicked:
Find all the checkbox elements in the list and uncheck them all.
Find all the row elements in the list and remove the .selected class from them.
Find the summary text element and update it.
Find the "Select All" button and enable it.
Find the "Select None" button and disable it.
Wow. That's a lot, right? Well, we better remember to write code for each and every one of those things. If we forget or screw up any of those instructions, we will end up with a bug where the totals don't match the checkboxes, or a button is enabled that doesn't do anything when you click it, or a row ends up with the wrong color, or something else we didn’t think of and won’t find out about until a user complains.
The big problem here is that there is no single source of truth for the state of our app, which in this case is “which checkboxes are checked?” The checkboxes know whether or not they are checked, of course, but, the row styles also have to know, the summary text has to know, and each button has to know. Five copies of this information are stored separately all around the HTML, and when it changes in any of those places the JavaScript developer needs to catch that and write imperative code to keep the others in sync.
This is still only a simple example of one small component of a page. If that sounds like a headache, imagine how complex and fragile an application becomes when you need to write the whole thing this way. For many complex modern web applications, it’s not a scalable solution.
Moving towards a single source of truth
Tools, like React, allow us to use JavaScript in a declarative way. Just as HTML is a declarative abstraction wrapped around the web browser’s display instructions, React is a declarative abstraction wrapped around JavaScript.
Remember how HTML let us focus on the structure of a page and not the details of how the browser displays that structure? Well, when we use React, we can focus on the structure again by defining it based on data stored in a single place. When that source of truth changes, React will update the structure of the page for us automatically. It will take care of the imperative steps behind the scenes, just like the web browser does for HTML. (Although React is used as an example here, this concept is not unique to React and is used by other frameworks, such as Vue.)
Let's go back to our list of checkboxes from the example above. In this case, the truth we care about is simple: which checkboxes are checked? The other details on the page (e.g. what the summary says, the color of the rows, whether or not the buttons are enabled) are effects derived from that same truth. So, why should they need to have their own copy of this information? They should just use the single source of truth for reference, and everything on the page should "just know" which checkboxes are checked and conduct themselves accordingly. You might say that the row elements, summary text, and buttons should all be able to automatically react to a checkbox being checked or unchecked. (See what I did there?)
Tell me what you want (what you really, really want)
In order to implement this page with React, we can replace the list with a few simple declarations of facts:
There is a list of true/false values called checkboxValues that represents which boxes are checked.
Example: checkboxValues = [false, false, true, false]
This list represents the truth that we have four checkboxes, and that the third one is checked.
For each value in checkboxValues, there is a row element which:
has a CSS class called .selected if the value is true, and
contains a checkbox, which is checked if the value is true.
There is a summary text element that contains the text "{x} of {y} selected" where {x} is the number of true values in checkboxValues and {y} is the total number of values in checkboxValues.
There is a "Select All" button that is enabled if there are any false values in checkboxValues.
There is a "Select None" button that is enabled if there are any true values in checkboxValues.
When a checkbox is clicked, its corresponding value changes in checkboxValues.
When the "Select All" button is clicked, it sets all values in checkboxValues to true.
When the "Select None" button is clicked, it sets all values in checkboxValues to false.
You'll notice that the last three items are still imperative instructions ("When this happens, do that"), but that's the only imperative code we need to write. It's three lines of code, and they all update the single source of truth. The rest of those bullets are declarations ("there is a...") which are now built right into the definition of the page's structure. In order to do this, we write our elements in a special JavaScript syntax provided by React called JSX, which resembles HTML but can contain JavaScript logic. That gives us the ability to mix logic like "if" and "for each" with the HTML structure, so the structure can be different depending on the contents of checkboxValues at any given time.
Here’s the same shopping list example as above, this time implemented with React:
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JSX is definitely weird. When I first encountered it, it just felt wrong. My initial reaction was, “What the heck is this? HTML doesn’t belong in JavaScript!” I wasn’t alone. That said, it’s not HTML, but rather JavaScript dressed up to look like HTML. It is also quite powerful.
Remember that list of 20 imperative instructions above? Now we have three. For the price of defining our HTML inside our JavaScript, the rest of them come for free. React just does them for us whenever checkboxValues changes.
With this code, it is now impossible for the summary to not match the checkboxes, or for the color of a row to be wrong, or for a button to be enabled when it should be disabled. There is an entire category of bugs which are now impossible for us to have in our app: sources of truth being out of sync. Everything flows down from the single source of truth, and we developers can write less code and sleep better at night. Well, JavaScript developers can, at least…
It's a trade-off
As web applications become more complex, maintaining the classic separation of concerns between HTML and JavaScript comes at an increasingly painful cost. HTML was originally designed for static documents, and in order to add more complex interactive functionality to those documents, imperative JavaScript has to keep track of more things and become more confusing and fragile.
The upside: predictability, reusability and composition
The ability to use a single source of truth is the most important benefit of this pattern, but the trade-off gives us other benefits, too. Defining elements of our page as JavaScript code means that we can turn chunks of it into reusable components, preventing us from copying and pasting the same HTML in multiple places. If we need to change a component, we can make that change in one place and it will update everywhere in our application (or in many applications, if we’re publishing reusable components to other teams).
We can take these simple components and compose them together like LEGO bricks, creating more complex and useful components, without making them too confusing to work with. And if we’re using components built by others, we can easily update them when they release improvements or fix bugs without having to rewrite our code.
The downside: it’s JavaScript all the way down
All of those benefits do come at a cost. There are good reasons people value keeping HTML and JavaScript separate, and to get these other benefits, we need to combine them into one. As I mentioned before, moving away from simple HTML files complicates the workflow of someone who didn’t need to worry about JavaScript before. It may mean that someone who previously could make changes to an application on their own must now learn additional complex skills to maintain that autonomy.
There can also be technical downsides. For example, some tools like linters and parsers expect regular HTML, and some third-party imperative JavaScript plugins can become harder to work with. Also, JavaScript isn’t the best-designed language; it’s just what we happen to have in our web browsers. Newer tools and features are making it better, but it still has some pitfalls you need to learn about before you can be productive with it.
Another potential problem is that when the semantic structure of a page is broken up into abstract components, it can become easy for developers to stop thinking about what actual HTML elements are being generated at the end. Specific HTML tags like <section> and <aside> have specific semantic meanings that are lost when using generic tags like <div> and <span>, even if they look the same visually on a page. This is especially important for accessibility. For example, these choices will impact how screen reader software behaves for visually impaired users. It might not be the most exciting part, but JavaScript developers should always remember that semantic HTML is the most important part of a web page.
Use it if it helps you, not because it’s “what’s hot right now”
It’s become a trend for developers to reach for frameworks on every single project. Some people are of the mindset that separating HTML and JavaScript is obsolete, but this isn’t true. For a simple static website that doesn’t need much user interaction, it’s not worth the trouble. The more enthusiastic React fans might disagree with me here, but if all your JavaScript is doing is creating a non-interactive webpage, you shouldn’t be using JavaScript. JavaScript doesn’t load as fast as regular HTML, so if you’re not getting a significant developer experience or code reliability improvement, it’s doing more harm than good.
You also don’t have to build your entire website in React! Or Vue! Or Whatever! A lot of people don’t know this because all the tutorials out there show how to use React for the whole thing. If you only have one little complex widget on an otherwise simple website, you can use React for that one component. You don’t always need to worry about webpack or Redux or Gatsby or any of the other crap people will tell you are “best practices” for your React app.
For a sufficiently complex application, declarative programming is absolutely worth the trouble. It is a game changer that has empowered developers the world over to build amazing, robust and reliable software with confidence and without having to sweat the small stuff. Is React in particular the best possible solution to these problems? No. Will it just be replaced by the next thing? Eventually. But declarative programming is not going anywhere, and the next thing will probably just do it better.
What’s this I’ve heard about CSS-in-JS?
I’m not touching that one.
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